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Bhai juhi aise nhi mr skti bhai usko vapas leke aao story me aur rekha didi ki entry bhi ho gyi aur wo bhi itne khatarnak tarike se aur remaa ki powers bhi aa gyi gajab
thanks bhai.. bhai juhi ka agge kuch alag soch rakha hai.. jaise rema ka socha tha..

aise hi sath bane rehna bhai...
 
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Action vale update ke liye der to lagegi hi koi bat nahi kal tak wait kar lege
Juhi ke vapas jinda hone ki khusi me aaj jada daru pi li lagta he :DD:
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bhai... me khushi hone par toh pita hi hu. gam me double peta hu.. :daru:

bhai action update or etne sare characters ke bech balance bana kar rakhna.. behad mushkil hota hai...

next update ajj rat ko..
 
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bhai kahe etna garma rehe ho... :D apko nirash nai karuga agge.. but jo story ka plot mangta hai.. us hisab se likhna padhta hai... or mane apse kaha tha.. es story ki har ladki .. uska ik khas maksad hai.. us hisab se likh reha hu.. ant me.. en sab ke karan hi.. ravi ki jeet hogi.. ik antim fight.. jo 20 se jayda updates ki hogi..

aise hi sath bane rehna bhai...
Ok intazar hai:mad:
 

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update-43

Abh Agge..

Ravi , joker ki bat sun chonk sa gya , uski badi behan mar chuki hai , par kaise , or uski maa ne use kuch bataya tak nai ,

"t..tt..tum , zuth bol rehe ho , meri behan mar nai sakti..." ravi ne thoda nam akhon se bola ,

"ahahahahaaahaa , rekha , voh , voh , mar chuki hai , or jante ho , uski mout , tumare karan hui thi , voh tume pyar karti thi , shadi nai karna chahti thi , es liye shadi ke din voh ghar chod kar chali gai , voh church me ik nun ban gai , dhere dhere use tumse nafrat hone lagi , phir uske sath kuch aisa hua , ke abh voh ik shetain hai , ahahahaha , tum sab ki mout hai , voh.." joker ne thoda ghambir hoker haste hue bola ,

"ohhh , meri behan , me kyu tume samaz na paya , me tume rokuga , or pehle jaisi kar dunga , par pehle , es manhos joker ko khatam karuga..." ravi ne man hi man sochte hue bola ,

"ahahaha , kya soch rehe ho , yahi na , ke tum , muze , muze , mar sakte ho , or phir , rekha ko bacha loge , kitna boring sapna hai , raviii , na toh tum muze mar sakte ho , na hi kaal , ahahahaha , muze tumari behan komal hi mar sakti hai..." joker ne ravi ke karib jate hue bola ,

"tume kya bhagwan se vardan mila hai , tume me hi maruga , or rehi bat rekha dedi ki , unko bacha lunga me..." ravi ne bhi joker ke karib hoker bola , abh dono ik dusre ke behad karib the , dono ki akhen ik dusre par jami hui thi ,

"vardan nai , tumari behan ko khud se banda hua hai mane , ik aisa rahasmayi mantra , jisse meri atma , tumari behan se jud gai , abh , tumari behan komal hi muze mar sakti hai , or voh yaha hai nai , ahahahaa.." joker ne behad ghambir hoker bola ,

"aahhhhh .." ravi ne joker ke moh par ik jordar punch jadte hue chila kar bola ,

punch lagte hi joker ik tarf ho gya , lekin phir chehra sidha kar muskrane laga ,

"aahhhh..." ravi ne jor se chilate hue ik jordar punch joker ke pet me jad diya , phir ravi ruka nai , voh joker ko marta gya ,

"ahahahahahhaaa , tumari , tumari sari takat fazol hai , tum , tum , mera kuch nai bhigad sakte , ahahahahhaa..." joker ne beintha haste hue bola ,


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"aaaaaaaaa..." ravi ne thoda piche hat , bhag kar ik kick joker ke pet me jad di , kick lagte hi joker piche dewar se ja takraya , uske hontho par ik byank muskan thi ,



"th...thak ...gye...tum..." joker ne apne lal hontho ko hath se saf karte hue bola ,

ravi thoda piche hua , or phir pori takat ikjut kar , joker ki traf bhaga , ravi ke pore badan se agg ki tez lapte nikal rehi thi ,



"aja , aja , comon , mar de muze , aja , fast , fast , kill meee , kill me..." joker ne beintha haste hue bola ,

"aaaaaaaaa..." ravi jor se chilata hua joker ki traf aya , ravi ne karib ate hi apne kande ka jordar war joker ke pet me kar diya , joker , ravi ka kanda lagte hi , piche dewar se ja takraya , un dono ki takat voh pathar ki dewar seh na payi , or tut kar bhikar gai ,

"dhaadaaaammmm..." ik tez awaz pore flat me gunj gai , ravi or joker dewar ke malbe me dabe hue the ,

"bossss.." lara jor se chilayi or apni talwar nikal ravi ki traf bhagi ,

abhi voh ravi ke pas pahunch pati , kaya or shaya ne uska rasta rok liya , voh dono behad byank lag rehi thi , unki raftar hawa se bhi tez thi ,

phir kaya or shaya hawa se bhi tez flat me bhagne lagi , voh kisi ko dikh bhi nai rehi thi ,

"aaaaieeeeeeesshhhh ..." ik dard bhari chekh lara ke hontho se nikal gai , kyu ki kaya or shaya ne bhagte hue , uske chehre par nakhuna ka war kar diya tha , lara ke left or right dono gaal , unke lambe nakhuno se chil chuke the ,

"aaahhhhh , uffff ..." lara phir se dard se siskar uthi , jab kaya or shaya ne uske badan ke har hisse ko ghyal karna suru kar diya ,

" busss , bahut huaa khellnaaa..." lara gusse me pagal hoti hui boli , abh ki bar , jaise hi kaya or shaya use marne ayi , lara ne palak japakte hi , unko gardan se pakad liya , abh dono ki gardan lara ne pakad rakhi thi , unke pair hawa me jule rehe the ,

"orr , khelna haiiii..." lara ne muskrate hue bola , or un dono ki gardan ko or jor se kas diya , voh dono dard se chatpatane lagi ,

"mere sath khel kamini..." maya ne lara ke piche khade hoker uske kanu me bola ,

lara ne dono ki gardan chod di , kaya or shaya jamen par gir gai , lara ne apni talwar pakad ghum kar jordar war , maya par kiya , lekin maya vaha thi hi nai , varna uski gardan dhad se alag ho jati ,

"ohuuu , kaha gaiiii..." lara ne gusse me chila kar bola ,



par tabhi ik agg ka gola uske seene se a takraya , lara us agg ke gole ke lagte hi , udd kar door farsh par ja giri , yeh magic kaal ne kiya tha ,

vahi dusri traf ravi or joker us malbe me se uth rehe the , ravi ne uthte hi joker ko saar ke baalo se pakad khada kiya or uski akhon ko me dekh bola ,

"tumara khel khatam , baby ki mout ki kemat chukane ke liye tyar ho jaaa..." ravi ne gusse se pagal hote hue bola ,

"ahahaa ahuuu ahuuuu (khaste hue) , tume lagta hai , me haar gya hu , nai , nai , yeh bus veham hai tumara , jante ho , cards game me ikka toh hota hi hai , par queen bhi hoti hai , or meri queen , ahahahhuuuu , tum khud hi dekh looo..." joker ne behad ghambir hoker beintha haste hue bola ,

"raviii , ese kaid karna hoga , ese mar nai sakte .." kaal ne behad shant awaz me bola , par sab seema ko bhul gye the , jo abhi bhi sofe par bethi hui thi ,

"muze , ahahahaaa , muze , kaid karuge tum , meri queen aisa karne nai degi , ravi tumne komal ke pyar me , ik anchaha dushman bana liya , or tum ik bat nai jante , dushman ka dushman , dost hota hai , ahahahahahaa..." joker ne ravi ki akhon me ghur kar dekhte hue bola ,

"ohhh , kyaa bakwas laga rakhi hai , kiski bat kar rehe ho tum.." ravi ne joker ki gardan ko dono hathion me pakad kas kar dabate hue bola ,

"ahahahahuuu , t..tt...tume...p..pata haii...mm..me...kk...kiskii...bat ...karrr...rehaaa...huuuu...ahahahaaa..." joker ne ladkhadati juban se bola , kyu ki ravi ne uski gardan dono hathion me daba rakhi thi ,

"ravii , eski bation me mat anna , ese pakad kar rakho , me mayajaal rachuga , tain ki ese kaid kiya ja sake..." kaal ne behad khofnak awaz me bola , uski badan se lal rosni nikalne lagi thi , voh ik mayajaal rach reha tha , jis me joker ko kaid kiya ja sake ,

"ahahahahahahaa , ravii , tum komal se pyar karte ho , voh bardasht nai kar payi , abh voh tumse badla legi , tumne use thukra kar komal ko apna liya , sochu , ahahahahaaa , socho , use kitna bura laga hoga , voh , voh behad shaktishali haiii , miluge use..." joker ne haste hue akhir me ghambir hoker bola ,

"ehh tu chup kar ja , varna teri gardan ukhad dungaaa..." ravi ne joker ki bation se tang akar gusse me bola ,

"ringgg , han vahi , pata nai usne tumme kya dekha , tumare pyar me pagal ho chuki hai , lekin tum komal ko chahte ho , ahahahahahahuu , es bat se voh etni gussa ho gai hai , ke koi use rok nai sakta , tum bhi nai , abh voh tumse badla legiii , lekin tum use chu bhi nai pauge..." joker ne haste hue bola ,

"apni fazol ki bakwas band karrr , ruhi kabhi kuch galat nai karegi..." ravi ne ruhi ko yad kar bola ,

"ahahahahahaa , ruhi , kya yeh nam hai ring ka , ohhh , jante ho , mane usse ik deal ki hai , voh mere liye komal ko khatam karegi , or me use voh dunga jo me sadyion se pana chahta hu , abh komal maregi or sath me tu bhi , ahahahahaa , ring ki takat ka koi ant nai , use mita pana namumkin hai , tum bhi use rok nai pauge , ahahahahahhaa.." joker ne behad ghambir hoker haste hue bola ,

vahi dusri traf tabhi seema ik dam se uth khadi hui , uski akhon ka rang behad lal ho gya , badan safad padh gya ,

"ahhhuunn , ahhuunn , raviiiiiii..." voh jor jor se hafti hui ravi ka nam lekar chilati hui boli ,

ravi , joker ko chod seema ki traf dekhne laga , joker beintha hasne laga , kaal akhen band kiye mayajaal rach reha tha , maya , kaya or shaya bhi seema ki chekh se kamp si gai thi ,

"seemaaa , kya huaaa.." ravi ne seema ke karib pahunch kar bola ,

seema ke pairo se ik lal roshni nikal rehi thi , jo dhere dhere uske pore badan ko cover kar rehi thi ,



"ahhhhnnnn , mee seemaaaa naiiii huuuuu..." seema jor se chekhte hue boli , or ravi ke seene par dono hathion se dhaka jad diya , seema ke hath lagte hi ravi piche ki traf uddta hua diwar se ja takraya ,

seema ke badan se agg ki lapte uthne lagi , akhon pori safad ho gai , aisa lag reha tha , jaise voh agg me jal rehi ho ,



"meeee huuu malikaaaaa suhanaaaaaa..." seema gusse me chila kar boli , uske badan ke as-pas bus agg hi agg thi , seema ka pora badan aisa ho gya , jaise agg se hi bana ho , voh ik fire devil ban chuki thi , pora badan agg se lathpath tha , uske badan ka tez etna tha , ke kaya , shaya or maya , us tez ko sehan na kar pate hue , dard se chekhti hui , jamen par gir chuki thi , seema ke es roop ko dekh , ravi chonk sa gya tha , use samaz nai a reha tha , voh kya kare......



vahi dusri traf....

rema apni behano ke sath ghar ke hall me bethi hui thi , uske chehre par chinta ke bhav the , par vahi rimi , saima or shurti , muskrate hue ik dusre se batian kar rehi thi ,

"shayyiaaannnnnn..." ik behad dhemi awaz rema ko sunai di , jaise koi hawa se bhi tez unke samne se gujra ho , rema use mehsus kar pa rehi thi ,

par baki tino ko kuch bhi mehsus nai ho reha tha , rema shant hoker apne kanu ko mehsus karne lagi , use har cheez jo kisi or koi sunai na de , bus use sunai de rehi thi ,

tabhi rema ko dewar ke pas kuch dikhai diya , kisi ki parchai thi , rema thoda dar gai , use dar tha , kahi voh atma phir se toh nai a gai ,

"ufff bhyia pata nai kab ayege..." rimi ne thoda gusse me bola , toh shurti or saima bus hass padhi ,

"ohh ho , badi betab ho rehi hai , kya bat hai , kuch plan-vlan toh nai kar rakha tum dono ne..." saima muskrate hue boli , toh rimi ne nazarian zuka li ,

"hmm , hoga koi plan , uff , tabhi toh etni betab ho rehi hai..." shurti bhi rimi ko chedte hue boli ,

rema toh jaise vaha thi hi nai , voh khamoshi se pore ghar ko mehsus karne ki kossih kar rehi thi , use pata tha , ghar me koi or bhi hai ,

"areee , rema , remaaa..." shurti ne rema ko pehle dhere phir jor se awaz dete hue bola , ik dam se tez awaz sun rema chonk gai , uske chehre par dar ke bhav umad aye the ,

"kyaaa huaaa tume , etni dar kyu rehi ho.." shurti ne rema ke dar se lathpath chehre ko ghur kar dekhte hue bola ,

"voh , voh , kuch nai dedii , bus aise hi.. " rema ne apne man ki halat ko chupate hue bola ,

"acha , kon kon , coffee piyega , hath khade karoo.." rimi khushi me muskrati sofe se uthte hue boli ,

"me , me , me bhi .." phir tino ik sath bol padhi ,

"just wait 5 mints..." rimi etna bol muskrate hue kitchen ki traf chali gai , shurti or saima batian karne lagi , par rema phir se kuch ajeeb sa mehsus karne lagi ,

rimi kitchen me ayi , or freezer se dudh nikal use garam karne lagi , rimi hontho par muskan liye coffee bana rehi thi , tabhi ,

"khhhhiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnn..." awaz karta kitchen ka darvaja apne app band ho gya , rimi ne chonk kar darvaje ki traf dekha , phir muskra kar boli ,

"dediii , me darne wali nai hu..." rimi muskra kar boli ,

"kadaaakkkkk kaddaaakkkkkkkkk..." darvaje ka handle jor jor se hilne laga ,

"ufff , tum tino ko samaz nai ata..." rimi abh thoda gusse me darvaje ki traf badhi , par tabhi kitchen me ghor andhera ho gya ..."ufff , light ko kya hua..." rimi andhere se preshan hote hue boli ,

par tabhi ik dam se roshni ho gai , rimi ne kitchen me as-pas dekhte hue jor se chekh mar di , kyu ki kitchen me har traf khoon ke dhag padhe hue the , aisa lag reha tha , jaise yeh kitchen salo se veran padha hua ho ,



"yeh , yeh , kitchennn koo kyaa huaaa..." rimi ne dar se kampte hue bola , tabhi dudh ubalne laga , lekin jaise hi rimi ne dekha voh dudh nai khoon tha , jo abh ubal kar dibbe se bahar a reha tha ,

"aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa..." rimi dar se kampte hue chekh uthi , or kitchen se bahar bhagne lagi , par kitchen ka darvaja khul hi nai reha tha ,



tabhi rimi ko kisi ka hath apne kande par mehsus hua , rimi dar se or kampne lagi , uski himet nai ho rehi thi , piche palat kar dekhne ki , tabhi kisi ki awaz sunai di ,

"rimi , jaldi karo , or darvaja kyu band kar rakha hai..." bahar khadi shurti ne chila kar bola ,

or tabhi ik dam se room me roshni phail gai , sab kuch pehle jaisa ho gya , darvaja bhi apne app khul gya , shurti jaise hi ander ayi , rimi rote hue uske gale lag gai , shurti ko kuch samaz nai a reha tha ,

"kya hua rimi tu ro kyu rehi hai..." shurti ne pyar se rimi ke baal sehla kar bola ,

"dd...de..di...mm..mane...kk..kuch..ajeeb dekha.." rimi ne rote hue bola , phir shurti , rimi ko bahar le ayi ,

shurti ne rema or saima ko bhi rimi ki halat ke bare me bata diya , or kisi ne yaken kiya ho ya na , par rema ko pora vishwas tha , rimi par ,

abhi charo bethi kuch soch hi rehi thi , ke unko corridor par koi khada dikhai diya , charo ki sanse tez chalne lagi , or mathe par dar ka pasina...

to be counited...

 

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Bhai kya jabardast update diya he. Lekin ik achi khasi incest story ko kyu horror banane par tule hue ho. Aur update bhi raat ko 10 baje dete ho. Bhai chahte kya ho ki raat bahr dar ke mare jagta rahu. Joker ne khud ko komal se joda hua he. Seema malika suhana he. Bhai kaho to ek vodka ki bottel bhijwa du. Kuch to raham karo mujh par.
Waiting 4 next update
 
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update-43

Abh Agge..

Ravi , joker ki bat sun chonk sa gya , uski badi behan mar chuki hai , par kaise , or uski maa ne use kuch bataya tak nai ,

"t..tt..tum , zuth bol rehe ho , meri behan mar nai sakti..." ravi ne thoda nam akhon se bola ,

"ahahahahaaahaa , rekha , voh , voh , mar chuki hai , or jante ho , uski mout , tumare karan hui thi , voh tume pyar karti thi , shadi nai karna chahti thi , es liye shadi ke din voh ghar chod kar chali gai , voh church me ik nun ban gai , dhere dhere use tumse nafrat hone lagi , phir uske sath kuch aisa hua , ke abh voh ik shetain hai , ahahahaha , tum sab ki mout hai , voh.." joker ne thoda ghambir hoker haste hue bola ,

"ohhh , meri behan , me kyu tume samaz na paya , me tume rokuga , or pehle jaisi kar dunga , par pehle , es manhos joker ko khatam karuga..." ravi ne man hi man sochte hue bola ,

"ahahaha , kya soch rehe ho , yahi na , ke tum , muze , muze , mar sakte ho , or phir , rekha ko bacha loge , kitna boring sapna hai , raviii , na toh tum muze mar sakte ho , na hi kaal , ahahahaha , muze tumari behan komal hi mar sakti hai..." joker ne ravi ke karib jate hue bola ,

"tume kya bhagwan se vardan mila hai , tume me hi maruga , or rehi bat rekha dedi ki , unko bacha lunga me..." ravi ne bhi joker ke karib hoker bola , abh dono ik dusre ke behad karib the , dono ki akhen ik dusre par jami hui thi ,

"vardan nai , tumari behan ko khud se banda hua hai mane , ik aisa rahasmayi mantra , jisse meri atma , tumari behan se jud gai , abh , tumari behan komal hi muze mar sakti hai , or voh yaha hai nai , ahahahaa.." joker ne behad ghambir hoker bola ,

"aahhhhh .." ravi ne joker ke moh par ik jordar punch jadte hue chila kar bola ,

punch lagte hi joker ik tarf ho gya , lekin phir chehra sidha kar muskrane laga ,

"aahhhh..." ravi ne jor se chilate hue ik jordar punch joker ke pet me jad diya , phir ravi ruka nai , voh joker ko marta gya ,

"ahahahahahhaaa , tumari , tumari sari takat fazol hai , tum , tum , mera kuch nai bhigad sakte , ahahahahhaa..." joker ne beintha haste hue bola ,


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"aaaaaaaaa..." ravi ne thoda piche hat , bhag kar ik kick joker ke pet me jad di , kick lagte hi joker piche dewar se ja takraya , uske hontho par ik byank muskan thi ,



"th...thak ...gye...tum..." joker ne apne lal hontho ko hath se saf karte hue bola ,

ravi thoda piche hua , or phir pori takat ikjut kar , joker ki traf bhaga , ravi ke pore badan se agg ki tez lapte nikal rehi thi ,



"aja , aja , comon , mar de muze , aja , fast , fast , kill meee , kill me..." joker ne beintha haste hue bola ,

"aaaaaaaaa..." ravi jor se chilata hua joker ki traf aya , ravi ne karib ate hi apne kande ka jordar war joker ke pet me kar diya , joker , ravi ka kanda lagte hi , piche dewar se ja takraya , un dono ki takat voh pathar ki dewar seh na payi , or tut kar bhikar gai ,

"dhaadaaaammmm..." ik tez awaz pore flat me gunj gai , ravi or joker dewar ke malbe me dabe hue the ,

"bossss.." lara jor se chilayi or apni talwar nikal ravi ki traf bhagi ,

abhi voh ravi ke pas pahunch pati , kaya or shaya ne uska rasta rok liya , voh dono behad byank lag rehi thi , unki raftar hawa se bhi tez thi ,

phir kaya or shaya hawa se bhi tez flat me bhagne lagi , voh kisi ko dikh bhi nai rehi thi ,

"aaaaieeeeeeesshhhh ..." ik dard bhari chekh lara ke hontho se nikal gai , kyu ki kaya or shaya ne bhagte hue , uske chehre par nakhuna ka war kar diya tha , lara ke left or right dono gaal , unke lambe nakhuno se chil chuke the ,

"aaahhhhh , uffff ..." lara phir se dard se siskar uthi , jab kaya or shaya ne uske badan ke har hisse ko ghyal karna suru kar diya ,

" busss , bahut huaa khellnaaa..." lara gusse me pagal hoti hui boli , abh ki bar , jaise hi kaya or shaya use marne ayi , lara ne palak japakte hi , unko gardan se pakad liya , abh dono ki gardan lara ne pakad rakhi thi , unke pair hawa me jule rehe the ,

"orr , khelna haiiii..." lara ne muskrate hue bola , or un dono ki gardan ko or jor se kas diya , voh dono dard se chatpatane lagi ,

"mere sath khel kamini..." maya ne lara ke piche khade hoker uske kanu me bola ,

lara ne dono ki gardan chod di , kaya or shaya jamen par gir gai , lara ne apni talwar pakad ghum kar jordar war , maya par kiya , lekin maya vaha thi hi nai , varna uski gardan dhad se alag ho jati ,

"ohuuu , kaha gaiiii..." lara ne gusse me chila kar bola ,



par tabhi ik agg ka gola uske seene se a takraya , lara us agg ke gole ke lagte hi , udd kar door farsh par ja giri , yeh magic kaal ne kiya tha ,

vahi dusri traf ravi or joker us malbe me se uth rehe the , ravi ne uthte hi joker ko saar ke baalo se pakad khada kiya or uski akhon ko me dekh bola ,

"tumara khel khatam , baby ki mout ki kemat chukane ke liye tyar ho jaaa..." ravi ne gusse se pagal hote hue bola ,

"ahahaa ahuuu ahuuuu (khaste hue) , tume lagta hai , me haar gya hu , nai , nai , yeh bus veham hai tumara , jante ho , cards game me ikka toh hota hi hai , par queen bhi hoti hai , or meri queen , ahahahhuuuu , tum khud hi dekh looo..." joker ne behad ghambir hoker beintha haste hue bola ,

"raviii , ese kaid karna hoga , ese mar nai sakte .." kaal ne behad shant awaz me bola , par sab seema ko bhul gye the , jo abhi bhi sofe par bethi hui thi ,

"muze , ahahahaaa , muze , kaid karuge tum , meri queen aisa karne nai degi , ravi tumne komal ke pyar me , ik anchaha dushman bana liya , or tum ik bat nai jante , dushman ka dushman , dost hota hai , ahahahahahaa..." joker ne ravi ki akhon me ghur kar dekhte hue bola ,

"ohhh , kyaa bakwas laga rakhi hai , kiski bat kar rehe ho tum.." ravi ne joker ki gardan ko dono hathion me pakad kas kar dabate hue bola ,

"ahahahahuuu , t..tt...tume...p..pata haii...mm..me...kk...kiskii...bat ...karrr...rehaaa...huuuu...ahahahaaa..." joker ne ladkhadati juban se bola , kyu ki ravi ne uski gardan dono hathion me daba rakhi thi ,

"ravii , eski bation me mat anna , ese pakad kar rakho , me mayajaal rachuga , tain ki ese kaid kiya ja sake..." kaal ne behad khofnak awaz me bola , uski badan se lal rosni nikalne lagi thi , voh ik mayajaal rach reha tha , jis me joker ko kaid kiya ja sake ,

"ahahahahahahaa , ravii , tum komal se pyar karte ho , voh bardasht nai kar payi , abh voh tumse badla legi , tumne use thukra kar komal ko apna liya , sochu , ahahahahaaa , socho , use kitna bura laga hoga , voh , voh behad shaktishali haiii , miluge use..." joker ne haste hue akhir me ghambir hoker bola ,

"ehh tu chup kar ja , varna teri gardan ukhad dungaaa..." ravi ne joker ki bation se tang akar gusse me bola ,

"ringgg , han vahi , pata nai usne tumme kya dekha , tumare pyar me pagal ho chuki hai , lekin tum komal ko chahte ho , ahahahahahahuu , es bat se voh etni gussa ho gai hai , ke koi use rok nai sakta , tum bhi nai , abh voh tumse badla legiii , lekin tum use chu bhi nai pauge..." joker ne haste hue bola ,

"apni fazol ki bakwas band karrr , ruhi kabhi kuch galat nai karegi..." ravi ne ruhi ko yad kar bola ,

"ahahahahahaa , ruhi , kya yeh nam hai ring ka , ohhh , jante ho , mane usse ik deal ki hai , voh mere liye komal ko khatam karegi , or me use voh dunga jo me sadyion se pana chahta hu , abh komal maregi or sath me tu bhi , ahahahahaa , ring ki takat ka koi ant nai , use mita pana namumkin hai , tum bhi use rok nai pauge , ahahahahahhaa.." joker ne behad ghambir hoker haste hue bola ,

vahi dusri traf tabhi seema ik dam se uth khadi hui , uski akhon ka rang behad lal ho gya , badan safad padh gya ,

"ahhhuunn , ahhuunn , raviiiiiii..." voh jor jor se hafti hui ravi ka nam lekar chilati hui boli ,

ravi , joker ko chod seema ki traf dekhne laga , joker beintha hasne laga , kaal akhen band kiye mayajaal rach reha tha , maya , kaya or shaya bhi seema ki chekh se kamp si gai thi ,

"seemaaa , kya huaaa.." ravi ne seema ke karib pahunch kar bola ,

seema ke pairo se ik lal roshni nikal rehi thi , jo dhere dhere uske pore badan ko cover kar rehi thi ,



"ahhhhnnnn , mee seemaaaa naiiii huuuuu..." seema jor se chekhte hue boli , or ravi ke seene par dono hathion se dhaka jad diya , seema ke hath lagte hi ravi piche ki traf uddta hua diwar se ja takraya ,

seema ke badan se agg ki lapte uthne lagi , akhon pori safad ho gai , aisa lag reha tha , jaise voh agg me jal rehi ho ,



"meeee huuu malikaaaaa suhanaaaaaa..." seema gusse me chila kar boli , uske badan ke as-pas bus agg hi agg thi , seema ka pora badan aisa ho gya , jaise agg se hi bana ho , voh ik fire devil ban chuki thi , pora badan agg se lathpath tha , uske badan ka tez etna tha , ke kaya , shaya or maya , us tez ko sehan na kar pate hue , dard se chekhti hui , jamen par gir chuki thi , seema ke es roop ko dekh , ravi chonk sa gya tha , use samaz nai a reha tha , voh kya kare......



vahi dusri traf....

rema apni behano ke sath ghar ke hall me bethi hui thi , uske chehre par chinta ke bhav the , par vahi rimi , saima or shurti , muskrate hue ik dusre se batian kar rehi thi ,

"shayyiaaannnnnn..." ik behad dhemi awaz rema ko sunai di , jaise koi hawa se bhi tez unke samne se gujra ho , rema use mehsus kar pa rehi thi ,

par baki tino ko kuch bhi mehsus nai ho reha tha , rema shant hoker apne kanu ko mehsus karne lagi , use har cheez jo kisi or koi sunai na de , bus use sunai de rehi thi ,

tabhi rema ko dewar ke pas kuch dikhai diya , kisi ki parchai thi , rema thoda dar gai , use dar tha , kahi voh atma phir se toh nai a gai ,

"ufff bhyia pata nai kab ayege..." rimi ne thoda gusse me bola , toh shurti or saima bus hass padhi ,

"ohh ho , badi betab ho rehi hai , kya bat hai , kuch plan-vlan toh nai kar rakha tum dono ne..." saima muskrate hue boli , toh rimi ne nazarian zuka li ,

"hmm , hoga koi plan , uff , tabhi toh etni betab ho rehi hai..." shurti bhi rimi ko chedte hue boli ,

rema toh jaise vaha thi hi nai , voh khamoshi se pore ghar ko mehsus karne ki kossih kar rehi thi , use pata tha , ghar me koi or bhi hai ,

"areee , rema , remaaa..." shurti ne rema ko pehle dhere phir jor se awaz dete hue bola , ik dam se tez awaz sun rema chonk gai , uske chehre par dar ke bhav umad aye the ,

"kyaaa huaaa tume , etni dar kyu rehi ho.." shurti ne rema ke dar se lathpath chehre ko ghur kar dekhte hue bola ,

"voh , voh , kuch nai dedii , bus aise hi.. " rema ne apne man ki halat ko chupate hue bola ,

"acha , kon kon , coffee piyega , hath khade karoo.." rimi khushi me muskrati sofe se uthte hue boli ,

"me , me , me bhi .." phir tino ik sath bol padhi ,

"just wait 5 mints..." rimi etna bol muskrate hue kitchen ki traf chali gai , shurti or saima batian karne lagi , par rema phir se kuch ajeeb sa mehsus karne lagi ,

rimi kitchen me ayi , or freezer se dudh nikal use garam karne lagi , rimi hontho par muskan liye coffee bana rehi thi , tabhi ,

"khhhhiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnn..." awaz karta kitchen ka darvaja apne app band ho gya , rimi ne chonk kar darvaje ki traf dekha , phir muskra kar boli ,

"dediii , me darne wali nai hu..." rimi muskra kar boli ,

"kadaaakkkkk kaddaaakkkkkkkkk..." darvaje ka handle jor jor se hilne laga ,

"ufff , tum tino ko samaz nai ata..." rimi abh thoda gusse me darvaje ki traf badhi , par tabhi kitchen me ghor andhera ho gya ..."ufff , light ko kya hua..." rimi andhere se preshan hote hue boli ,

par tabhi ik dam se roshni ho gai , rimi ne kitchen me as-pas dekhte hue jor se chekh mar di , kyu ki kitchen me har traf khoon ke dhag padhe hue the , aisa lag reha tha , jaise yeh kitchen salo se veran padha hua ho ,



"yeh , yeh , kitchennn koo kyaa huaaa..." rimi ne dar se kampte hue bola , tabhi dudh ubalne laga , lekin jaise hi rimi ne dekha voh dudh nai khoon tha , jo abh ubal kar dibbe se bahar a reha tha ,

"aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa..." rimi dar se kampte hue chekh uthi , or kitchen se bahar bhagne lagi , par kitchen ka darvaja khul hi nai reha tha ,



tabhi rimi ko kisi ka hath apne kande par mehsus hua , rimi dar se or kampne lagi , uski himet nai ho rehi thi , piche palat kar dekhne ki , tabhi kisi ki awaz sunai di ,

"rimi , jaldi karo , or darvaja kyu band kar rakha hai..." bahar khadi shurti ne chila kar bola ,

or tabhi ik dam se room me roshni phail gai , sab kuch pehle jaisa ho gya , darvaja bhi apne app khul gya , shurti jaise hi ander ayi , rimi rote hue uske gale lag gai , shurti ko kuch samaz nai a reha tha ,

"kya hua rimi tu ro kyu rehi hai..." shurti ne pyar se rimi ke baal sehla kar bola ,

"dd...de..di...mm..mane...kk..kuch..ajeeb dekha.." rimi ne rote hue bola , phir shurti , rimi ko bahar le ayi ,

shurti ne rema or saima ko bhi rimi ki halat ke bare me bata diya , or kisi ne yaken kiya ho ya na , par rema ko pora vishwas tha , rimi par ,

abhi charo bethi kuch soch hi rehi thi , ke unko corridor par koi khada dikhai diya , charo ki sanse tez chalne lagi , or mathe par dar ka pasina...

to be counited...

Jabardast update hai bhai. ....... main to pehlei samaj geya tha ki joker ke qeen seema/ring hoga......ring to Ravi ko jhut bola bhai ki woh ruhi hai jabki woh sheitan malika shuhana hai........aab dekhte hai ki malika shuhana ravi ko kese maregi....jan se to mar nhi payegi..... kyu ki komal ki locket uska gale me joh hai. ........ sheitan jitna bhi shaktishali ho liken akhir me uska ant hota hai. dekhte hai ki malika shuhana hi main villain hai ki nhi.....or wapis aane ka time ho geya hai lagta hai.....aur ghar me joh parchai hai woh to rekha ki hai....dekhte hai rema keche uske sath ladega or jitega bhi..

.. bhai kaal update aayega kya
 
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Abh Agge..

Ravi , joker ki bat sun chonk sa gya , uski badi behan mar chuki hai , par kaise , or uski maa ne use kuch bataya tak nai ,

"t..tt..tum , zuth bol rehe ho , meri behan mar nai sakti..." ravi ne thoda nam akhon se bola ,

"ahahahahaaahaa , rekha , voh , voh , mar chuki hai , or jante ho , uski mout , tumare karan hui thi , voh tume pyar karti thi , shadi nai karna chahti thi , es liye shadi ke din voh ghar chod kar chali gai , voh church me ik nun ban gai , dhere dhere use tumse nafrat hone lagi , phir uske sath kuch aisa hua , ke abh voh ik shetain hai , ahahahaha , tum sab ki mout hai , voh.." joker ne thoda ghambir hoker haste hue bola ,

"ohhh , meri behan , me kyu tume samaz na paya , me tume rokuga , or pehle jaisi kar dunga , par pehle , es manhos joker ko khatam karuga..." ravi ne man hi man sochte hue bola ,

"ahahaha , kya soch rehe ho , yahi na , ke tum , muze , muze , mar sakte ho , or phir , rekha ko bacha loge , kitna boring sapna hai , raviii , na toh tum muze mar sakte ho , na hi kaal , ahahahaha , muze tumari behan komal hi mar sakti hai..." joker ne ravi ke karib jate hue bola ,

"tume kya bhagwan se vardan mila hai , tume me hi maruga , or rehi bat rekha dedi ki , unko bacha lunga me..." ravi ne bhi joker ke karib hoker bola , abh dono ik dusre ke behad karib the , dono ki akhen ik dusre par jami hui thi ,

"vardan nai , tumari behan ko khud se banda hua hai mane , ik aisa rahasmayi mantra , jisse meri atma , tumari behan se jud gai , abh , tumari behan komal hi muze mar sakti hai , or voh yaha hai nai , ahahahaa.." joker ne behad ghambir hoker bola ,

"aahhhhh .." ravi ne joker ke moh par ik jordar punch jadte hue chila kar bola ,

punch lagte hi joker ik tarf ho gya , lekin phir chehra sidha kar muskrane laga ,

"aahhhh..." ravi ne jor se chilate hue ik jordar punch joker ke pet me jad diya , phir ravi ruka nai , voh joker ko marta gya ,

"ahahahahahhaaa , tumari , tumari sari takat fazol hai , tum , tum , mera kuch nai bhigad sakte , ahahahahhaa..." joker ne beintha haste hue bola ,


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"aaaaaaaaa..." ravi ne thoda piche hat , bhag kar ik kick joker ke pet me jad di , kick lagte hi joker piche dewar se ja takraya , uske hontho par ik byank muskan thi ,



"th...thak ...gye...tum..." joker ne apne lal hontho ko hath se saf karte hue bola ,

ravi thoda piche hua , or phir pori takat ikjut kar , joker ki traf bhaga , ravi ke pore badan se agg ki tez lapte nikal rehi thi ,



"aja , aja , comon , mar de muze , aja , fast , fast , kill meee , kill me..." joker ne beintha haste hue bola ,

"aaaaaaaaa..." ravi jor se chilata hua joker ki traf aya , ravi ne karib ate hi apne kande ka jordar war joker ke pet me kar diya , joker , ravi ka kanda lagte hi , piche dewar se ja takraya , un dono ki takat voh pathar ki dewar seh na payi , or tut kar bhikar gai ,

"dhaadaaaammmm..." ik tez awaz pore flat me gunj gai , ravi or joker dewar ke malbe me dabe hue the ,

"bossss.." lara jor se chilayi or apni talwar nikal ravi ki traf bhagi ,

abhi voh ravi ke pas pahunch pati , kaya or shaya ne uska rasta rok liya , voh dono behad byank lag rehi thi , unki raftar hawa se bhi tez thi ,

phir kaya or shaya hawa se bhi tez flat me bhagne lagi , voh kisi ko dikh bhi nai rehi thi ,

"aaaaieeeeeeesshhhh ..." ik dard bhari chekh lara ke hontho se nikal gai , kyu ki kaya or shaya ne bhagte hue , uske chehre par nakhuna ka war kar diya tha , lara ke left or right dono gaal , unke lambe nakhuno se chil chuke the ,

"aaahhhhh , uffff ..." lara phir se dard se siskar uthi , jab kaya or shaya ne uske badan ke har hisse ko ghyal karna suru kar diya ,

" busss , bahut huaa khellnaaa..." lara gusse me pagal hoti hui boli , abh ki bar , jaise hi kaya or shaya use marne ayi , lara ne palak japakte hi , unko gardan se pakad liya , abh dono ki gardan lara ne pakad rakhi thi , unke pair hawa me jule rehe the ,

"orr , khelna haiiii..." lara ne muskrate hue bola , or un dono ki gardan ko or jor se kas diya , voh dono dard se chatpatane lagi ,

"mere sath khel kamini..." maya ne lara ke piche khade hoker uske kanu me bola ,

lara ne dono ki gardan chod di , kaya or shaya jamen par gir gai , lara ne apni talwar pakad ghum kar jordar war , maya par kiya , lekin maya vaha thi hi nai , varna uski gardan dhad se alag ho jati ,

"ohuuu , kaha gaiiii..." lara ne gusse me chila kar bola ,



par tabhi ik agg ka gola uske seene se a takraya , lara us agg ke gole ke lagte hi , udd kar door farsh par ja giri , yeh magic kaal ne kiya tha ,

vahi dusri traf ravi or joker us malbe me se uth rehe the , ravi ne uthte hi joker ko saar ke baalo se pakad khada kiya or uski akhon ko me dekh bola ,

"tumara khel khatam , baby ki mout ki kemat chukane ke liye tyar ho jaaa..." ravi ne gusse se pagal hote hue bola ,

"ahahaa ahuuu ahuuuu (khaste hue) , tume lagta hai , me haar gya hu , nai , nai , yeh bus veham hai tumara , jante ho , cards game me ikka toh hota hi hai , par queen bhi hoti hai , or meri queen , ahahahhuuuu , tum khud hi dekh looo..." joker ne behad ghambir hoker beintha haste hue bola ,

"raviii , ese kaid karna hoga , ese mar nai sakte .." kaal ne behad shant awaz me bola , par sab seema ko bhul gye the , jo abhi bhi sofe par bethi hui thi ,

"muze , ahahahaaa , muze , kaid karuge tum , meri queen aisa karne nai degi , ravi tumne komal ke pyar me , ik anchaha dushman bana liya , or tum ik bat nai jante , dushman ka dushman , dost hota hai , ahahahahahaa..." joker ne ravi ki akhon me ghur kar dekhte hue bola ,

"ohhh , kyaa bakwas laga rakhi hai , kiski bat kar rehe ho tum.." ravi ne joker ki gardan ko dono hathion me pakad kas kar dabate hue bola ,

"ahahahahuuu , t..tt...tume...p..pata haii...mm..me...kk...kiskii...bat ...karrr...rehaaa...huuuu...ahahahaaa..." joker ne ladkhadati juban se bola , kyu ki ravi ne uski gardan dono hathion me daba rakhi thi ,

"ravii , eski bation me mat anna , ese pakad kar rakho , me mayajaal rachuga , tain ki ese kaid kiya ja sake..." kaal ne behad khofnak awaz me bola , uski badan se lal rosni nikalne lagi thi , voh ik mayajaal rach reha tha , jis me joker ko kaid kiya ja sake ,

"ahahahahahahaa , ravii , tum komal se pyar karte ho , voh bardasht nai kar payi , abh voh tumse badla legi , tumne use thukra kar komal ko apna liya , sochu , ahahahahaaa , socho , use kitna bura laga hoga , voh , voh behad shaktishali haiii , miluge use..." joker ne haste hue akhir me ghambir hoker bola ,

"ehh tu chup kar ja , varna teri gardan ukhad dungaaa..." ravi ne joker ki bation se tang akar gusse me bola ,

"ringgg , han vahi , pata nai usne tumme kya dekha , tumare pyar me pagal ho chuki hai , lekin tum komal ko chahte ho , ahahahahahahuu , es bat se voh etni gussa ho gai hai , ke koi use rok nai sakta , tum bhi nai , abh voh tumse badla legiii , lekin tum use chu bhi nai pauge..." joker ne haste hue bola ,

"apni fazol ki bakwas band karrr , ruhi kabhi kuch galat nai karegi..." ravi ne ruhi ko yad kar bola ,

"ahahahahahaa , ruhi , kya yeh nam hai ring ka , ohhh , jante ho , mane usse ik deal ki hai , voh mere liye komal ko khatam karegi , or me use voh dunga jo me sadyion se pana chahta hu , abh komal maregi or sath me tu bhi , ahahahahaa , ring ki takat ka koi ant nai , use mita pana namumkin hai , tum bhi use rok nai pauge , ahahahahahhaa.." joker ne behad ghambir hoker haste hue bola ,

vahi dusri traf tabhi seema ik dam se uth khadi hui , uski akhon ka rang behad lal ho gya , badan safad padh gya ,

"ahhhuunn , ahhuunn , raviiiiiii..." voh jor jor se hafti hui ravi ka nam lekar chilati hui boli ,

ravi , joker ko chod seema ki traf dekhne laga , joker beintha hasne laga , kaal akhen band kiye mayajaal rach reha tha , maya , kaya or shaya bhi seema ki chekh se kamp si gai thi ,

"seemaaa , kya huaaa.." ravi ne seema ke karib pahunch kar bola ,

seema ke pairo se ik lal roshni nikal rehi thi , jo dhere dhere uske pore badan ko cover kar rehi thi ,



"ahhhhnnnn , mee seemaaaa naiiii huuuuu..." seema jor se chekhte hue boli , or ravi ke seene par dono hathion se dhaka jad diya , seema ke hath lagte hi ravi piche ki traf uddta hua diwar se ja takraya ,

seema ke badan se agg ki lapte uthne lagi , akhon pori safad ho gai , aisa lag reha tha , jaise voh agg me jal rehi ho ,



"meeee huuu malikaaaaa suhanaaaaaa..." seema gusse me chila kar boli , uske badan ke as-pas bus agg hi agg thi , seema ka pora badan aisa ho gya , jaise agg se hi bana ho , voh ik fire devil ban chuki thi , pora badan agg se lathpath tha , uske badan ka tez etna tha , ke kaya , shaya or maya , us tez ko sehan na kar pate hue , dard se chekhti hui , jamen par gir chuki thi , seema ke es roop ko dekh , ravi chonk sa gya tha , use samaz nai a reha tha , voh kya kare......



vahi dusri traf....

rema apni behano ke sath ghar ke hall me bethi hui thi , uske chehre par chinta ke bhav the , par vahi rimi , saima or shurti , muskrate hue ik dusre se batian kar rehi thi ,

"shayyiaaannnnnn..." ik behad dhemi awaz rema ko sunai di , jaise koi hawa se bhi tez unke samne se gujra ho , rema use mehsus kar pa rehi thi ,

par baki tino ko kuch bhi mehsus nai ho reha tha , rema shant hoker apne kanu ko mehsus karne lagi , use har cheez jo kisi or koi sunai na de , bus use sunai de rehi thi ,

tabhi rema ko dewar ke pas kuch dikhai diya , kisi ki parchai thi , rema thoda dar gai , use dar tha , kahi voh atma phir se toh nai a gai ,

"ufff bhyia pata nai kab ayege..." rimi ne thoda gusse me bola , toh shurti or saima bus hass padhi ,

"ohh ho , badi betab ho rehi hai , kya bat hai , kuch plan-vlan toh nai kar rakha tum dono ne..." saima muskrate hue boli , toh rimi ne nazarian zuka li ,

"hmm , hoga koi plan , uff , tabhi toh etni betab ho rehi hai..." shurti bhi rimi ko chedte hue boli ,

rema toh jaise vaha thi hi nai , voh khamoshi se pore ghar ko mehsus karne ki kossih kar rehi thi , use pata tha , ghar me koi or bhi hai ,

"areee , rema , remaaa..." shurti ne rema ko pehle dhere phir jor se awaz dete hue bola , ik dam se tez awaz sun rema chonk gai , uske chehre par dar ke bhav umad aye the ,

"kyaaa huaaa tume , etni dar kyu rehi ho.." shurti ne rema ke dar se lathpath chehre ko ghur kar dekhte hue bola ,

"voh , voh , kuch nai dedii , bus aise hi.. " rema ne apne man ki halat ko chupate hue bola ,

"acha , kon kon , coffee piyega , hath khade karoo.." rimi khushi me muskrati sofe se uthte hue boli ,

"me , me , me bhi .." phir tino ik sath bol padhi ,

"just wait 5 mints..." rimi etna bol muskrate hue kitchen ki traf chali gai , shurti or saima batian karne lagi , par rema phir se kuch ajeeb sa mehsus karne lagi ,

rimi kitchen me ayi , or freezer se dudh nikal use garam karne lagi , rimi hontho par muskan liye coffee bana rehi thi , tabhi ,

"khhhhiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnn..." awaz karta kitchen ka darvaja apne app band ho gya , rimi ne chonk kar darvaje ki traf dekha , phir muskra kar boli ,

"dediii , me darne wali nai hu..." rimi muskra kar boli ,

"kadaaakkkkk kaddaaakkkkkkkkk..." darvaje ka handle jor jor se hilne laga ,

"ufff , tum tino ko samaz nai ata..." rimi abh thoda gusse me darvaje ki traf badhi , par tabhi kitchen me ghor andhera ho gya ..."ufff , light ko kya hua..." rimi andhere se preshan hote hue boli ,

par tabhi ik dam se roshni ho gai , rimi ne kitchen me as-pas dekhte hue jor se chekh mar di , kyu ki kitchen me har traf khoon ke dhag padhe hue the , aisa lag reha tha , jaise yeh kitchen salo se veran padha hua ho ,



"yeh , yeh , kitchennn koo kyaa huaaa..." rimi ne dar se kampte hue bola , tabhi dudh ubalne laga , lekin jaise hi rimi ne dekha voh dudh nai khoon tha , jo abh ubal kar dibbe se bahar a reha tha ,

"aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa..." rimi dar se kampte hue chekh uthi , or kitchen se bahar bhagne lagi , par kitchen ka darvaja khul hi nai reha tha ,



tabhi rimi ko kisi ka hath apne kande par mehsus hua , rimi dar se or kampne lagi , uski himet nai ho rehi thi , piche palat kar dekhne ki , tabhi kisi ki awaz sunai di ,

"rimi , jaldi karo , or darvaja kyu band kar rakha hai..." bahar khadi shurti ne chila kar bola ,

or tabhi ik dam se room me roshni phail gai , sab kuch pehle jaisa ho gya , darvaja bhi apne app khul gya , shurti jaise hi ander ayi , rimi rote hue uske gale lag gai , shurti ko kuch samaz nai a reha tha ,

"kya hua rimi tu ro kyu rehi hai..." shurti ne pyar se rimi ke baal sehla kar bola ,

"dd...de..di...mm..mane...kk..kuch..ajeeb dekha.." rimi ne rote hue bola , phir shurti , rimi ko bahar le ayi ,

shurti ne rema or saima ko bhi rimi ki halat ke bare me bata diya , or kisi ne yaken kiya ho ya na , par rema ko pora vishwas tha , rimi par ,

abhi charo bethi kuch soch hi rehi thi , ke unko corridor par koi khada dikhai diya , charo ki sanse tez chalne lagi , or mathe par dar ka pasina...

to be counited...

Jabardast update hai bhai. ....... main to pehlei samaj geya tha ki joker ke qeen seema/ring hoga......ring to Ravi ko jhut bola bhai ki woh ruhi hai jabki woh sheitan malika shuhana hai........aab dekhte hai ki malika shuhana ravi ko kese maregi....jan se to mar nhi payegi..... kyu ki komal ki locket uska gale me joh hai. ........ sheitan jitna bhi shaktishali ho liken akhir me uska ant hota hai. dekhte hai ki malika shuhana hi main villain hai ki nhi.....or wapis aane ka time ho geya hai lagta hai.....aur ghar me joh parchai hai woh to rekha ki hai....dekhte hai rema keche uske sath ladega or jitega bhi..

.. bhai kaal update aayega kya
 
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