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Juhi...... to jaan hai story ki, komal aur seema ke baad mera sabse favorite... character.....
Iss story mai seema se bhi aage....
Komal ke baad agar Ravi ko sabse jyada kisi ne pyaar kiya hai to wo juhi hai.....
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Abh Agge...

Ravi jamuna nagar ki traf ja reha tha , jo utar disha ki traf tha , ravi full speed par gadi doada reha tha , kyu ki vaha pahunchne me kam se kam dedh ghanta lag jata , or ravi ke pas wakht behad kam tha ,

"uff pata nai yeh kiska plan hoga , kash ke muze pata chal jata , asli mastermind kon hai .." ravi ne akhen band kar man hi man bola ,

par ravi ko kuch na dikha , han , rehman ulla or aslam khan ke chehre dikh gye , ik bat toh ravi jan gya tha , rehman ulla or aslam khan dono hi kisi tesre ke kehne par yeh sab kar rehe hain , lekin voh tesra admi kon tha , jiske bare me locket kuch nai dikha reha tha ,

"ohh no , kaise bhul gya me..." ravi ne man hi man khud ko khoste hue bola ,

achank hospital se ravi ko yad a gya tha , use kal dr.anju se milna tha , anju kal pora din ghar par uska intzar karti rehi hogi ,

"uff anju ko mana lunga , par uski jaan ko bhi khatra hoga , muze jalad se jalad un logu ko rokna hoga..." ravi ne man hi man yeh socha or gadi or tez speed par doada di ,

ravi abhi gadi chala hi reha tha ke uska phone baj utha , ravi ne number dekha toh rema ka call tha , ravi ne phone utha liya ,

"hlo sexy , kya bat hai.." ravi ne muskra kar bola ,

"bhyia , muze apko kuch batana hai , meri bat dyan se sunna , maa ke bare me , bhyia
maa...." rema abhi bata hi rehi thi ke uska phone uske hatho se nikal hawa me uddne laga ,

"han rema bolo me sun reha hu , rema , rema , uff yeh ladki bhi na..." ravi bahut der tak bolta reha , phir usne socha sham ko rema se bat kar lega , ravi ne phone cut kar diya ,

vahi dusri traf

Rema ka phone uddta hua dewar se takra jamen par gir gya , phone ki battery nikal kar door ja giri , abh phone switch off ho chuka tha ,

rema room se bahar bhagne lagi , par .."khaddaaakkkkk.." ki awaz karta room ka darvaja band ho gya ,

"naiii , naiii , bhyiaaaa bachaooo , bhyiaaa..." rema ne dar se kampte piche hatte hue rote hue bola , uski awaz abh bahar koi nai sun reha tha ,


rema phir dhadddddd dhadddddd darvaje ko hath pair marne lagi , par na toh darvaja khul reha tha or na hi uska lock kam kar reha tha ,

"thapppppp thapppppp thapppppp , shurti dediiiiii , rimiiiiiii , saimaaa dediiiiiii , plssssssss , darvajaaaaa khollllooo ..." rema dar se chekhte chilate rote hue gate par hath marte hue boli ,

"khiiiiiiiiikhiiiiiiiiiiii , ahhaaaahhhaaahaa..." ek tez byank , dil ko kampa dene wali , hasne ki awaz rema ko apne piche sunai dene lagi , rema toh dar se kampte hue pasine se bheg gai thi ,

"remmaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa..." ik bahut hi dhemi awaz , jaise koi apni sansu me hi bola ho , rema ko sunai di , rema or bhi dar gai ,

"bhyiaaaaa bachaoooo...thapppppppp thappppppp , plssssss bachaaa thapppppp thappppppoo loooo , plsssss..." rema darvaje par jor jor se hath marti rote hue boli ,

"remaaaaa , khiiiiiiiikhiiiiiiiiii , meriiiiiiiiiii bachiiiiiiiiiiiiieee , koiiiiiiiii tumariiiiiiiii awazzzzzz naiiiiiiiiii sunnnnn payeggaaaaa , aaaaahahaaahahaaaa..." behad byank awaz me koi bahut jor se hasta hua bola , uski awaz aisi lag rehi thi , jaise ik nai balki 3 ya 4 auratin ik sath bol rehi ho , rema or bhi dar gai ,

rema ki halat behad buri thi , uska pora jism pasine se bhega hua tha , uska khubsurat chehra pasine se bhega hua tha , mathe se pasine ki boonde , tapp tappp girti ja rehi thi , uske gulabi honth , uske hath , pair , balki pora sharir kampkampa reha tha ,

"remaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ..." ik behad dil ko kampa dene wali awaz , rema ko sunai di ,

rema ne dar se tharr tharr kampte hue piche palat kar dekha , uske room me abh halka halka andhera chaaa gya tha , ik tube jal rehi thi , jiski roshni behad halki thi ,

rema ne pore room me charo traf dar se kampte hue dekha , par koi nai tha , etna sanata tha ke ghadi ki tikkk tikkk tikkkk , ki awaz bhi behad shorr karti hui sunai de rehi thiiii ,

"kk....kkk...konnnnnn ...haiiiiiiiiii..." rema ne apne mathe ka pasina saf karte hue hakla kar pucha ,

achank room ki uperi chat par , ik kone par rema ko kisi ki parchai dikhai di , jaise vaha koi tha , achank se rema etna tez chekhi ke aisa laga jaise uska gala ander se fattt gya ho ,

"aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa..." ek bahut lambi chekh rema ke hontho se nikal gai , rema ki pith darvaje par lagi hui thi , pora badan aise kamp reha tha , jaise baraf ka pahad us par gira diya gya ho ,

kyu ki samne manzar hi kuch aisa tha , chat ke ik kone par , ik behad byank , dil ko kampa dene wali , ik aurat bethi , kisi chamgadad ki trah use dekh rehi thi ,

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uski akhon ka rang safad or halka halka lal tha , uske baal bhikre hue the , jaise salo se dhoye na gye ho , hawa me uddte behad byank lag rehe the , chehre ka mass galaa hua tha , uske honth pore khule hue the , ander se uske nokile dant , kisi tez chaku ki trah chamak rehe the ,

uske hatho ka mass , sada hua tha or sirf hath ki haddyian hi dikh rehi thi , gardan se niche , uska badan jaise tha hi nai , uske safad kapde agge se , gale , sade hue the , jaise voh sadyion bad kisi kabar se nikali ho , uski gardan ke niche mass ka koi namonishan tak nai tha ,


"aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa , bhyiaaaaaaaaaa bachaaaaooooooooo..." rema uske khofnak roop ko dekh gala fadte hue chekh padhi ,

"khiiiiiikhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiikhiiiiiiiiii , tumeeeee badiiiiiiiiiiiiii jaldiiiiiiiiiiii haiiiiiiiiiiii , sonaaaaaaa ko bataneeeeeeee kiiiiiiiiiii , khiiiiiiiikhiiiiiiiiiiii , jaaaaaa bataaaaaa deeeeeeee , bhagggggggg jaaaaaa , aaaahahaaaahaahaaaaahuuuuuuuhuuuu..." voh atma behad byank awaz me boli , uske moh se kale rang ka khoon jaisa kuch girrrr reha tha , uske kale khoon me behad badbudar kede reng reng kar bahar ko nikal rehe the , uske dant etne gande or uski jebh , jo jagah jagah se fati hui thi , or jebh ke uper chote chote gande kede rengte hue bahar gir jamen par gir rehe the ,


" maaaaaaaaaaaaaa bachaaaaoooo..." rema aisa khofnak manzar dekh roh kampa dene wali awaz me chekhi , or achank se darvaja " tiiiiiiiiieeeeeeeennnnnnnnnnnnn..." ki awaz karta khul gya ,

rema bahar ko bhagne lagi , voh bhagti ja rehi thi , use kuch dikhai nai de reha tha , charo traf ghor andhera tha , voh hafti hui bhag rehi thi , lekin use aisa lag reha tha , ke voh ghar me kisi room tak nai pahunch pa rehi thi ,

"koiii orr roomm kyuuu naaiii aaa rehaaa..." rema ne bhagte bhagte hafte hue ik dam se rukte hue khud se hi bola ,

or achank halki halki roshni ho gai , jab rema ne as-pas dar se kampte hue dekha , uski byank chekh nikal gai ,

"aaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnaaa , bhyiaaaaaaaa , yehhh , kahaaaa aaaa gaiiiiiii meeeee..." or rema dar se kampte hue vahi jamen par girkar behosh ho gaiiiii ,

vahi dusri traf

ravi jamuna nagar pahunch chuka tha , es bat se bekhabar , ke uski , rema , abh kis halat me hai , or uski jaan ko behad khatra bana hua hai ,

ravi ne akhen band kar us admi ka pata pucha , locket ne usi wakht blue roshni me chamakte hue , ravi ko us admi ka pata bata diya ,

ravi gadi me beth vaha se jaldi jaldi us admi ke pas jane laga , abhi dhupehar ka 1 baj reha tha , adha din hi bacha tha , masom logu ki jindgi bachane ke liye ,

tabhi achank ravi ke saar me tez dard uthne laga , ravi ne ik dam se break laga gadi rok li , locket behad tez lal roshni me chamak reha tha ,

"bhyiaaaaaa remaa kooo bachaaaa loooo..." achank ik awaz , jaise koi behad dhemi awaz me apni sansu me hi bola ho , ravi ko sunai di ,

"aaaaaaaaaaaa , konnnnn haiiiiiiiii , ahhhhh , shhhhhhhh , meraaaa saarrr..." ravi ne dard se kahrahte hue apna saar dono hatho me daba liya ,

"komallllllll , apkiiiiii komallllll , bhyiaaaaa jaldiiiiiii remaaa koooo bachaaaooo.." phir se komal ki behad dhemi awaz sunaiii diii , ravi apna saar hatho me pakad jor se chekh padhaa "ahhhhhhhhh , shhhhh , komalllllll..."

locket behad tez lal roshni me chamak utha , etna tez ke uski roshni pori car me phail gai , ravi ne etni tez roshni se bachte apni akhen band kar li , or dekhte hi dekhte voh roshni ravi ki band akhon me ghusne lagi ,

"aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaashhhhhhhaaa..." ravi us roshni ke tezz ko sehan na karte hue dard se kampta chila utha , us roshni ka tezzz ravi ki akhon ko jala reha tha , or sath hi uske chehre ko bhi ,

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dhere dhere voh roshni ravi ki akhon me ghusti gai ..."aaaaaaaaaannnnnaaaaaa , komallllllllllllll , aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ..." ravi ki akhon me voh roshni dhere dhere ghusti ja rehi thi , ravi ki akhon se khoon ki patli dhar behne lagi thi , uske dant nokile hote ja rehe the , hontho se bhi khoon behne laga tha , ravi ko etna tez dard ho reha tha , ke voh dard sehan na kar pate hue pagalu ki trah chilla reha tha , hath pair patak reha tha ,

dhere dhere pori car me phali roshni ravi ki akhon me sama gai , ravi ko etna tez dard hua ke voh "komaalllllllllllllllllllllllllll..." pori jaan laga chilata hua chekh padha , uski awaz etni uchi thi ,
"tiiiishhhhhhaaaaainnnnnn... ki awaz karte gadi ke sare mirror tut kar chakna chorr ho gye , ravi behosh ho gya , uska phone baj reha tha , par voh gehri nend me so chuka tha ,

locket ki roshni abh khatam ho chuki thi , abh voh ik aam locket jaise tha , jaise usme koi takat hi na bachi ho , abh ravi vaisa ban chuka tha , jaisi pehle komal thi , kya voh komal ki trah ban chuka tha ,

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vahi dusri traf

anu preshani me lab me ehder ohder ghum rehi thi , voh ravi ko bar bar phone kar rehi thi , par kuch jawab nai mil reha tha ,

"ufff yehh , ravi phone kyu nai utha reha , kitni bar try kar chuki hu..." anu ne behad preshani me bola ,

"kyaa , ravi kisi musibat me toh nai fas gya , ohhh godd .." kat ne behad udasi me bola , uska chehra mayus ho chuka tha , use ravi ki behad chinta ho rehi thi , use ravi se ik lagav sa ho chuka tha ,

"kuchh nai hoga usee , kya pata voh apna mobile gadi me hi bhul gya hoo , thodi der wait karlo..." baby ne dono ko samazate hue bola , kyu ki voh janti thi , ravi ik vampire hai , use kuch nai ho sakta ,

vahi dusri traf

biman shah ke flat ke samne do black gadyian khadi thi , kon aya tha usse milne ,

"aaahaahaahaaa , kaisi ho tum donooo .." biman shah ne apne pas bethi do vadeshi ladkyion se bat karte haste hue kaha ,

yeh ladkyian bhi behad buri thi , ik lab scientist thi , or dusri behad khukar killer ,

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scientist ladki ka nam tha Eliza beth , umar 29 saal , behad chalak , kabhi yeh world ki best lab ki scientist thi , lekin eski jindgi me kuch aisa hua , ke esne burai ka rasta apna liya , world ke kai desh , kai jasus agency's, ese dund rehi thi , esne apne desh me hazaro logu ko mout ke ghat utar diya tha , camrenyia desh , sabse jayda esko talash kar reha tha ,

par biman shah ne ese paiso ke dam par kharid liya tha , kyu ki use , "Growth" farmule ko thoda change karna tha , or yahi ladki es behad bure kam me uski madad kar sakti thi ,

dusri ladki ka nam Lara Selvin tha , umar 30 saal , yeh ik Ninja thi , yeh bhi camrenyia desh ki Elizabeth ke sath hi kam karti thi , yeh hamesha nakab pehan kar rakhti thi , black kapde pehanti thi , or toh or , ladne me esse koi mukabla nai kar sakta tha , ninja ki har taknek esne sikhi hui thi ,

Eliza ke sath milkar esne pore desh me khoraham macha diya tha , yeh world ki most wanted ladkyian thi , enko dunia ki bahut sari language me bat karni ati thi , jab se yeh dono khofyia agencyoin ki list me top par ayi thi , tab se yeh dunia me alag alag bhas banakar apne bure kamo ko anjam de rehi thi ,

"Elizabeth kaisi ho tum , kaisa laga yeh shehar..." biman shah ne muskrate hue bola ,

"hmm , kuch khas nai , muze dugni kemat chahyie , etne gande or ghatiya shehar me kam karne ke liye , yuukkkkkk .." Eliza ne bura sa moh bana kar bola , vaise voh thi behad khubsurat , ik kanch ka chashma uski khubsurati ko or bada deta tha , naram gulabi honth , voh sach me apsara thi ,

"huuu , me janta hu , tum jaisi khubsurati ki malika ko yeh ganda , badbudar shehar pasand nai ayega , par muze tumari jarurat hai , tum hi mera kam kar sakti hoo.." biman shah ne apni vine ke chote chote sip bharte hue bola ,

"muze kya karna hai.." lara jo bahut kam bolti thi , bus apne kam ke wakht hi ,

"Lara tume , es shehar ki scientific lab se Dr. L.K.Batra ka new experiment chura kar lana hai , jiska nam hai "Growth" ..." biman shah ne Lara ki akhon me dekh kar bola , kyu ki uske pore badan me se , uski akhen hi dikhai de rehi thi ,

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"bahut khoon bahega phir toh..." lara ne apni talwar nikalte hue biman shah ki akhon me dekh kar bola ,

"ahhheehhaaaaahaaa , koi bat nai , jo bhi tumare raste me aye , mar do use , kisi par bhi reham mat karna , khoon ki nadyian baha do , muze bus voh experiment chahyie , khali hath mat lotna..." biman shah ne beintha haste hue bola , uski hassi me ik veshipan tha ,

"tumm jaoo abhii or ready ho jaoo , 4 baje tume nikalna hai..." biman shah ne dono ki traf dekh kar bola ,

voh dono chali gai or biman shah kuch sochne laga , uska sadyion purana sapna , abh pora hone ki kagar par tha , par kya voh ravi ko rok sakta tha ,


vahi dusri traf...

koi 1 ghante bad ravi ko hosh aya , usne apna chehra uper kiya , abhi bhi ravi ko tez jalan apni akhon par ho rehi thi , uska saar dard se fata ja reha tha , pora badan jal reha tha ,

"ohhhh mera badannnn , shhhhh , etna dardddd , ahhhhhh , ufffff , ohhh komallllll , meriiii komalllll , etni buriii halatttttt meee , komalllll ..." ravi ne akhen band kar apne sharir ka dard bardasht karte hue bola , par jaise hi usne apni akhen band ki , uski akhon ke samne komal use dikhai dene lagi , veraan si jagah par , uska khubsurat jism agg me jal reha tha ,

jab ravi akhen band kiye use dekh reha tha , tab komal bhi use dekh rehi thi , locket ki sari takat ravi me sama chuki thi , abh voh bejan locket tha ,

"komalllllll .." ravi ne dard bhari awaz me bola ,

"bhyiaaaa , aaahhhhhsssshhiiiiii , bhyiaa kaisee hooo appp..." komal ne khamoshi se apne man ki awaz me bola , uske man ki awaz apne bhai ke kanu tak pahunch rehi thi ,

"komallllll , kyu kiya tumneee aisaaa , kyuuuu , kitnaa chahaaa maneee tumeee , parr tumneee meree pyarrr ka mazakkk banaaa diyaaaa .." ravi ne rote hue bola , uski akhon se khoon beh reha tha ,

"bhyiaaa , muzeee bachaaa looo , bhyiaaa bahuttt darddd hooo rehaaa haiiii , ahhhhh meee marrrr jaugiiiiiii..." komal ne agg ki tapash bardasht na kar pate hue bola ,

"mee bhiii tohhh marrr rehaaa huu , Marnaaa tohhh sabkooo haiiiii , meee maruuuu yaaaa naaa maruuuu , lekinnn komallll tumneeee hiiiii maraaa thaaaa , jiss dinnn tumneee muzeee chodaaa thaaa , usiiii dinnn seee meee marnaaa chahtaaaa thaaa , mee tumeee bachaugaaa , parrrr tumneee apnee app se vadaaa kiyaaa thaaaa , agarrrr meee tumareeee samneee ayaaa , tummm apniiii jaannn dee dogiiiiii..." ravi ne beintha dard me bola , uske yu rone se uski akhon se lagatar khoon behta ja reha tha ,

"bhyiaaaa , aa...aa..aapkiiiiii...jaa...nnn , ba...chaneee keeee liyeee kiyaaa thaaaa , iiii loveeee uuuuu bhyiaaaa , ahhhhhhshhhhhhh , bhyiaaaa..." komal ne beintha dard me kahrahte hue bola , kyu ki jaise jaise voh apni shakti ka istemal kar ravi se bat kar rehi thi , vaise vaise agni uske badan ko or bhi jalakar dard de rehi thiii ,

"me ayugaaa komalllll , bahuttt jaladddd ayugaa , meraaa intzarrr karnaaa..." ravi ne etna bol apni akhen khol li , uff usse komal ki voh dard bhari halat dekhi nai ja rehi thi ,

"komall , meri jaan , kyu kiya tumne voh sab , mere liye kyu apni jaan jokhim me dal di , kya diya tume jindgi bhar , na toh pyar de saka , or na tume bacha saka , me kisi liyak nai hu , muze maf kar denaaa , komalll , me tume kabhi samaz hi nai paya , tumare chehre ki har muskan zuthi thi , kitna dard tha tumari akhon me , kyu nai samaz paya tume , kyuuu , me mar kyu na gya , agar me mar jata , tab tume yeh dard toh na sehna padhta , komalllll , kaise vapis layu tume , han , pita ji se puchna hoga , unke pas jarur koi rasta hoga...." abhi ravi khud se batian karta ro reha tha ke tabhi uska phone baj utha , ravi ne abhi phone nai uthaya tha ,

"abhh un logu ko aisi mout dunga ke jindgi bhar yad rakhege , abh muze meri takat ka ehsas ho gya hai , abh kisi masom ki jaan nai jayegi , abh hogi jang ki suruat burai or sachai ke bech , or me jetuga bhi , jindgi bhar harta raha hu , abh nai , bahut ho gya , bahut dikha liya apna bholapan , abh wakht hai devil banne ka , bure logu ko bura bankar maruga , jokerrrrrrrrrrrr meee aa rehaaaaa huuuuuuu..." ravi ne etna bol apni gadi mod kar phir se Aravti nagar ki traf doada di ,



to be counited....
Kya kahene hai janab bahot sahi ab yeh 2 nayi choriya aa gayi dekho kya gul khilati hai lekin rema ka kya huwa bhai ji next update mein bata dena aur sab se main finally ravi ki galatfehmii dur ho gayi komal ke liye mast update padh ke maza aa gaya As Always Super Update Bro
 
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Abh Agge...

Rema us veeran or sunsan jagah par behosh padhi hui thi , us jagah par door door tak insano ka koi vajood tak nai tha ,

rema ko ik ghante bad hosh aya , usne apna saar , apne hatho se dabate hue , jab uth kar apni akhon ko thoda sa khol , as-pas nazar dudai toh , uski sanse , uske halak se tez tez ander bahar hone lagi ,

"bhyiaaaaaaaaa , bhyiaaaaaaa ..." rema dar se kampti rote hue jor jor se chilane lagi , lekin uski awaz koi jaise sun hi nai reha tha ,

rema khadi hui , or as-pas dekhne lagi , voh ik jungle me khadi thi , jungle ke bade bade pedh , jo andhere me nahaye hue the , voh pedh bilkul sukhe hue the , unka rang ik dam kala tha , ik bhi pedh aisa nai tha , jis par koi patta , ya koi hariyali ka chin mazod ho , aisa lag reha tha , jaise pora jungle sukha hua tha ,

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un sukhe , andhere se nahaye pedu par , chamgadad ulte latke rema ko ghur ghur kar dekh rehe the ,

etna hi nai , rema jis jamen par khadi thi , uski mitti bhi kali thi ,

"yyy...yyehhhh...mm...mm..me....kk...kk..kaha....aaaa...g...gg...gaiiiii..." rema ne dar se thar thar kampte hue haklate hue bola , uski awaz bhi uske badan ke sath kamp rehi thi ,

rema dhere dhere agge chalne lagi , es khofnak jagah par chalte hue , uski tange kampkampa rehi thi , ika ik rema ki jordar chekh nikal gai ,

"aaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnhhhhhh..." rema etni jor se chilayi ke jaise uski awaz pore jungle me gunj gai ho ,

rema ki chekh ka karan tha , chamgadado ka ik zund , jo ik pedh se uddkar , uske behad karib se gujra tha , or rema darkar chekh padhi thi ,

"bb..bhyiaaaaa , bacha lo ..." rema thar thar kampte hue bahut dhere se boli , uski akhon se asnu beh nikale the ,

dhere dhere us jungle me ik dhuaa sa phailne laga tha , abh rema ko kuch bhi saf dikhai nai de reha tha , rema agge badh hi rehi thi , ke voh kisi cheez se takra kar niche gir gai ,

"aaaieeeeee maaaaaa..." rema dard se kahrahti hui boli , uske girne se , uska ghutna shil gya tha , or vaha se khoon behne laga tha ,

"ufff aieeeeeeesiiiiiii..." rema ne apne jakhmi ghutne se uthte dard ko bardasht karte hue bola , par jaise hi rema ne us cheez ko dekha , jisse takra kar voh giri thi , uski akhen khuli ki khuli reh gai , uske moh se ik jordar chekh nikal gai ,

kyu ki vaha jamen par kuch bhi nai tha , yaha tak voh kali mitti se sani jamen bilkul saf thi ,

"aaaahhhahhahhhuuuuuuhhaaa..." ik behad byank chekhne ki awaz rema ko sunai di ,

"aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa..." rema jor se chekhti hui vaha se uthi or bhagne lagi , uska badan kamp reha tha , dar ka pora parbhav uske chehre par mehsus ho reha tha ,

"kk...ka...ha....fass ..gaaiiiii....mmm..eee.." rema ne behad haklate hue bola , voh kafi der se bhag rehi thi , lekin ghum phir kar rema vahi usi pedh ke samne a jati , yaha voh girkar behosh hui thi ,

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voh pedh tha bhi bahut bada , or uska rang pora kala tha , rema bar bar ghum kar usi jagah par vapis a rehi thi , ika ik rema ruk gai ,

uski sanse tez chal rehi thi , abh usse or chala nai ja reha tha ,

"ye...h...mm...me...i...kkk...hiiii...jagah...par..vapis....ahhhh...kyu...a ...jati...huuu..." rema ne tez tez hafte hue ruk kar khud se hi bola ,

"reemmmaaaaaaa..." ik bahut dhemi awaz rema ko sunai di , rema ne as-pas nazar dali par koi nai tha , sirf ghor andhera or bade bade sukhe daravne pedh hi dikh rehe the ,

"kk....kk...kon...hh...ha...iiii..." rema ne hakla kar bola , use abh thand lagne lagi thi , kyu ki abh safad sa dhuaa bahut jayda badh chuka tha ,

"remmaaaaaaaaaaa....meeeriiiiiii...bachiiiiii.." ik behad dhemi awaz , jaise koi apni sansu me hi bola ho , rema ko apne piche sunai di ,

rema ik dam se palat gai , par vaha kuch nai tha , jab rema vapis palti , toh voh jor se chekhti hui kuch kadam piche hat gai ,

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rema ki akhon ke samne ik bahut bada , ik ladki ka chehra tha , jo muskra rehi thi , uski akhon ka rang safad tha , uske galo or mathe par chot ka nishan tha ,

"aaaannnnhhhhhhhhh .." rema uska byank chehra dekh jor jor se chekhne lagi , voh dhere dhere piche hat rehi thi , akhir rema ki pith ik pedh se takra gai ,

"ahhhahahaaaahaaa , remaaaaaa ...tummm...mereee...sonaaaa...koooo....kyaaaaa...bataooogiiiiiiii....khiiiiikhiiiiiiii...." seema ne behad byank awaz me bola , uski akhon me ik vheshipan tha ,

"mm...meeee....kkk...kissiiii...kk...koo...kk...kkuccchhhhh....naaaiiii...kahugggiiiiii...plssssss....ch...chodddd...dddooo...muzeeee..." rema ne beintha rote hue hakla kar bola ,

"ahhaaahhhhaaahuuu.....bhagggg...jaaooo..." seema byank awaz me haste hue vaha se gyab ho gai ,

rema vahi pedh se pith tikaye thar thar kampte hue dari sehmi khadi rehi , kuch wakht beta , tab rema rone lagi , usi pedh ke niche beth kar ,

"bhyiaaa , kaha hoo , muze bachaooo , me marrr jaugiiii..." rema beintha chekhte hue rote hue boli , uska atamvishwas kam ho reha tha , uska dil kar reha tha , es dar se acha , voh khudkhushi kar le ,

vahi dusri traf...

ravi behad tez raftar se gadi chala reha tha , abhi 3 baj rehe the , use jalad se jalad , joker ko rokna tha ,

ravi abhi gadi chala hi reha tha ke uska phone baj utha , ravi ne number dekha toh phone anu ka tha , ravi ne phone utha liya ,

"hlo , anu.."

"han , ravi kaha ho tum , phone kyu nai utha rehe..." anu ne thoda nam akhon se bola ,

"anu , muze sab pata chal gya hai , yeh kam kiska hai , abhi kisi hospital me bamb nai rakha gya , tum tino , jalad se jalad govt hospital ko khali karva do , biman shah usi hospital ko bamb se uddane wala hai , jaldi karo.." ravi ne behad ghambir hoker bola ,

"kyaaa , ham abhi nikalti hain , tum kaha ho.." anu ne chonkte hue bola ,

"anu me shehar ke main scientific lab ki traf ja reha hu , enka plan ik formula churane ka hai , tum logo ki jaan bachao me unko rokta hu.." ravi ne etna bol phone cut kar diya ,

anu ne phone cut kiya toh baby or kat uski traf dekhne lagi , voh ravi ke bare me puchna chah rehi thi ,

"baby , kat , ravi ne bola hai , shehar ke govt hospital ko khali karva do , vaha bamb rakha jayega..." anu ne tezi se bolte hue kaha ,

"ohh , par eske piche kon hai , ravi ne kuch bataya.." baby ne thoda chinta me pucha ,

"han , biman shah.." abhi anu bol hi rehi thi ke kat chila padhi ,

"kyaaaaaa , voh , voh , toh mar chuka hai , mm...meriii akhon ke samne..." kat ne behad ghabrate hue bola ,

"impossible , ravi kyu zuth bolega.." anu ne ravi ki trafdari karte hue bola ,

"anu , kat thik bol rehi hai , biman shah mar chuka hai , uska case bhi chala tha , par mastani begam ne us case ko daba diya , un sab ne milkar biman shah ko mara tha.." baby ne kat ki traf dekh kar bola ,

"par ravi , uffff , par ravi ne muze biman shah hi bola tha.." anu ne chonkte hue bola ,

"ohh chodo en bation ko , hame jo kam ravi ne diya hai vahi karte hain .." baby ne dono ko samazate hue bola ,

voh tino bahar jane lagi , phir tino lift ke ander ghus gai , tab kat ne es khamoshi ko toda ,

"anu , ravi khud kaha hai , usne kuch bataya.." kat ne ravi ki chinta me bola ,

"kat , ravi , es shehar ki main scientific lab ki traf gya hai , usne bataya ke biman shah , ik formula churane wala hai , voh use rokne ja reha hai..." anu ne ground floor par pahunch kar bola ,

"ohh , yeh bat hai..." kat ne behad udas awaz me bola ,

"uff , ravi akela kyu gya vaha par , kahi uski jaan ko khatra na ho , muze vaha jana hoga , me use kuch nai hone dungi .." baby ne man hi man ravi ke bare me sochte hue bola ,

"baby kya soch rehi ho , jaldi ayo na.." anu or kat jo bahar gadi ke pas pahunch uska intzar kar rehi thi , usko awaz dete hue boli ,

"anu , kat , tum dono jao , me yahi ruk kar , hospital par nazar rakhti hu , kya pata ravi ki bat galat ho , me yahi se tume sab bata dungi , tum dono jao.." baby ne anu or kat se zuth bolte hue kaha ,

"hmm , yeh thik hai , chalo kat.." anu ne gadi start karte hue bola , kat vapis palat kar baby ke pas a gai or boli ,

"pata nai kyu , dil me kuch ajeeb sa mehsus ho reha hai , dil karta hai , tume yu chod kar na jau.." kat ne behad udasi me bola ,

"uff , ohh , meri jaan , me tumare sath hu , or hamesha rahugi , tum jao anu ke sath.." baby ne kat ke hontho ko chum kar bola ,

"tum kahi akele mat jana , muze phone kar dena , me jalad hi milugi , ufff , par , par , ohh , me chalti hu ..." kat ne kas kar baby ko apne gale laga bola , phir voh baby ke hontho ko chum vapis gadi ki traf chali gai ,

kat gadi me beth gai , lekin voh baby ki traf lagatar dekhe ja rehi thi , uski akhon me ik gehri udasi thi , use kuch ajeeb sa mehsus ho reha tha , pata nai yeh ravi ke liye tha ya baby ke liye ,

anu or kat vaha se chali gai , baby ne akhon me aye asnu saf karte hue bola.." sorryyyy , katttt , muzeee maff karrr denaaa.." baby khud se rote hue boli , or phir road se ik texi me beth , us lab ki traf jane lagi , yaha ravi ja reha tha ,

vahi dusri traf...

ravi us lab ke samne pahunch chuka tha , abhi 4 baj rehe the , or ravi ko intzar tha , jo yaha anne wala tha , us formule ko churane ke liye ,

karib 1 ghanta or beet chuka tha , par abhi tak koi nai aya tha , ravi gadi me betha intzar kar reha tha , phir ravi ik dam se vaha se gyab ho gya ,

ravi ne jab apni akhen kholi , voh us scientist ke room me tha , yaha behad chemicals padhe hue the , voh lab thi , yaha par hi voh formula ho sakta tha ,

lekin es lab ki halat dekh aisa mehsus nai ho reha tha , ke kisi ne yaha se kuch churaya ho ,

"hmm , abhi tak koi nai aya , matlab voh anne wala hai , par kon hoga.." ravi ne khud se hi bola , phir use ik awaz sunai di ,

"muze dund rehe ho..." ik behad dhemi awaz ravi ko sunai di , yeh awaz ik ladki ki thi ,

ravi ne piche palat kar dekha , ik ladki black dress pehne , hath me takwar liye khadi hui thi , uska chehra ik black nakab se dhaka hua tha ,



"voh formula kaha hai , jo tumne churaya hai..." ravi ne behad gusse me bola ,

"hehe , mera nam bhi nai pucha , sidha formula , kya bat hai , etna attitude , kis bat ka..." Lara ne ravi ki akhon me ghur kar bola ,

"hhaaaaa , formula kaha hai , jaldi bataoooo , varna jaan se marrr dungaaaaa.." ravi ne etni jor se chila kar bola ke kanch ki kai cheezo tut kar chakna churr ho gai , lara chonkte hue ravi ko dekhne lagi ,

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"hmm , vah , me tumari takat dekh , behad khush hui , hehe , formula toh abh me boss ko hi dungi , or tume bhi..." lara ne apni talwar ko jebh se chatte hue bola ,

"biman shahhhhh , use bhi khatam kar dungaaa , meri komalllll ko rulayaaaa thaaa usneeee , formulaaaaa doooo..." ravi gusse me chekhta hua bola ,

"ok , ok , deti hu , par pehle boss se bat toh kar lo , voh kya hai na , ham dono ki batian voh sun rehe the , ufff , jaldi bat karo , hehe , tumara koi chahne wala , kya pata khatre me ho , hehe..." Lara ne haste hue bola , phir lara ne apna mobile ravi ki traf fenk diya , ravi ne phone kan par laga liya ,

"Ohh ravi , toh tumse mulakat ho hi gai , tum muze mar nai sakte , seema agle 5 mint me marne wali hai , hahaha..." joker ne beintha haste hue bola

"eehhhhhhhhhhhhh , agarrrrr meriiii seeemaaaa kooo kuchhhh huaaa tohhhh marrrr dungaaa sabkoooo..." ravi ne apni pori jaan se chekhte hue bola ,

"ahhahahahhaaa , raviiiiiiii , meee marrrr naiii saktaaaa , ohhhuuuuuu ahahahahhhaaa , ikkk batt orr , batt karoo seemaa seee.. " joker ne beintha haste hue bola ,

"hlo , ss...ssonaaaa....m..mm...muzeee...bb...bacha ...ll...loo...pp...pl...sss..." seema ne behad rote hue bola ,

"seemu , tum daro mat , me abhi ata hu , tum darna mat ..." ravi abhi bol hi reha tha ke phone cut ho gya , ravi ne mobile vapis lara ki traf fenk diya ,

"hmm , toh chale meri jaan..." lara muskrate hue boli ,

"aaaaaaa , ik bar seema ko bacha lu , uske bad , teri gardan , apne enhi hatho se ukhad dunga..." ravi ne behad gusse me bola ,

"hehe , etna asan na hoga , chalo abh.." Lara ne thoda gusse me bola or phir dono vaha se bahar ki traf chal padhe , ravi ne dekha lab ke sare gards behosh padhe hue the ,

"ahhh , tumne sabko mar diya , jalim kahi ki.." ravi ne apne agge chal rehi lara ko gusse se bola ,

"mare nai hai , bus behosh hue hain , muze machar marna pasand nai , me toh sher ka shikar karti hu ..." lara ne apni kali akhen matka kar bola ,

ravi phir kuch na bola , dono lab se bahar a gye , bahar akar lara apni gadi me beth gai or ravi bhi uske sath , jab dono vaha se nikal rehe the , tabhi baby ne dono ko dekh liya tha , voh bhi khamoshi se dono ka picha karne lagi ,

"uff , yeh seema vaha kaise pahunch gai , or , or , muze seema mehsus bhi toh ho rehi hai , jo mane mehsus kiya , seema kitna ro rehi hai voh , ufff , es joker ko jaan se mar dunga , pehle seema ko bachana hoga.." ravi ne man hi man sochte hue gusse me bola ,

"kya soch rehe ho , yahi na , ke tumari seema vaha kaise pahunch gai , hmm , tumari takat kitni hai , me sab janti hu.." lara ne muskrate hue bola ,

"ehhhhhaa , shuttt upppp , apnaaa moh band rakhoo , varnaa yahi mar dunga.." ravi ne behad gusse me bola ,

"me koi aam ladki nai hu , jo tum muze mar doge , me ik magical ninja hu , es dunia ki iklauti magical ninja , tume kya lagta hai , boss ne muze aise hi kam par rakh liya , me jitna dikhti hu , utni hu nai , kisi ko marna , matlab machar marna , behad asan , hehe.." lara ne pehle gusse me or phir muskra kar bola , usne abhi bhi nakab pehan rakha tha , uska chehra ravi dekh nai pa reha tha ,

"shhhh , kaha fas gya me , tum ninja ho ya nai , muze esse koi matlab nai , par me etna janta hu , tumari mout mere hatho likhi hai..." ravi ne behad gusse me bola ,

"hehe , yeh khawab mat dekho , kyu ki jalad hi tumari jindgi badalne wali hai.." Lara ne ravi ko akh mar bola ,

phir na toh lara kuch boli or na hi ravi , aise hi wakht nikalta gya , or samne a gai , biman shah ki building , yaha seema kaid thi , ya koi khel tha , joker ka...

to be counited...
Aakhir samna hone wala hai ab biman shah urf joker aur ravi ufr the vampire ka dekhne wali baat hai mast update the bhai
 
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Abh Agge...

Ravi ne gadi se utarte hi building ki traf dekha , yeh vahi building thi , yaha se ravi ki es khofnak dunia me chalne kì suruat hui thi ,

yahi se baby or kat , ravi ki jindgi me ayi thi ,
ajj ravi phir se vahi khada tha , lekin yeh antim ladai thi , voh janta tha , es ladai ke bad , ya toh voh jinda rehega ya phir yeh log ,

"kya soch rehe ho , mere piche ayo.." Lara thoda gusse me boli or tez tez chalne lagi ,

"pata nai bc , yeh biman shah esi ladkyian lata ķaha se hai , yeh toh hai bee , behad takatwar , uff , pata nai kya hoga mera..." ravi ne khud se hi bola or lara ke piche piche chal padha ,

ravi ne building ke ander ghus kar dekha , koi admi nai tha , ik dam sunsan , charo traf shanti thi , lekin halka halka andhera tha ,

phir lara or ravi lift se us flat tak pahunch gye , yaha biman shah abh rehta tha , dono us flat ke ander ghus gye ,

flat ke ander ate hi ravi ne charo traf dekha , par vaha koi nai tha , na seema or na hi biman shah ,

"yaha toh koi nai hai..." ravi ne behad gusse me bola ,

"hehe , etni jaldi kya hai , abhi ayege boss.." lara ne voh formula jo chote se bag me tha , use ik table par rakhte hue bola ,

ravi vahi khada use dekhta reha , tabhi charo traf halka andhera ho gya , or ravi ne samne ki traf dekha , voh thoda chonk gya ,

uski akhon ke samne ik khidki ki dusri traf joker khada tha , voh behad khamoshi se ravi ko ghur kar dekh reha tha ,



kuch der voh vahi khada reha , or phir achank se gyab ho gya , ravi janta tha , yeh bus darane ki ik chal hai , ravi vaise hi shant khada reha ,

phir ika ik room me andhera ho gya , or tabhi , achank se ik dam se joker uske samne a gya ,



uski akhen lal roshni me chamak rehi thi , or dant behad byank or nokile lag rehe the , jaise abhi ravi ke jism ko noch noch kar fad denge ,

ravi vaise hi shant reha , voh dara nai tha , kyu ki abh uske pas beintha takat thi , es liye joker ki koi bhi mindgame use dara nai pa rehi thi ,

"jokerrrrr , semaaa kahaa haiii ..." ravi ne behad gusse me bola , uski akhen bhi lal roshni me chamak uthi , joker thoda vichlit sa ho gya or phir biman shah ke roop me a gya , or phir sofe par jaker beth gya ,

"mane puchaaa , seema kaha haiii..." ravi ne ik bar or gusse me chila kar bola ,

"ahahaaahaaahaaha .." biman shah hasne laga , uski hassi jaise ravi ke gusse ka mazak udda rehi thi ,

"ehhh , sale , bol seema kaha hai , varnaaa.." ravi ne uski traf badte hue gusse se bola ,

"ruko , seema , umm , seema , behad kamal ki cheez , lajawab , tum jante ho , jab se mane use dekha tha , tabhi se use pana chahta tha , or mane use pa liya.." biman shah ne muskrate hue bola , jaise voh ravi ko or gussa dilana chahta ho ,

"bhok mat kutte , yeh bata seema kaha hai.." ravi ne beintha gusse me bola , uska man kar reha tha , biman shah ke chehre ko abhi noch dale ,

"seemaaa , baharrr ayoo meriii jaannnn , ahahahahauuuuuaaaaa..." biman shah ne seema ko awaz dene ke bad beintha haste hue bola ,


longfellow the arrow and the song

biman shah ke awaz dete hi seema ik room se bahar ayi , or ravi ke sath bethne ki bajaye , biman shah ke sath beth gai ,

"are mere sona aya hai , chale sona ghar , tume bhuk lagi hogi..." seema ne apni akhon ka rang lal karte hue bola , or ika ik uske chehre ka rang badal gya , abh voh behad byank lag rehi thi ,



"tum...tum , seema nai hooo..." ravi ne gusse me chekh kar uthte hue bola ,

"yeh seema hi hai ravi , varna tumara locket tume sach dikha deta , kashh , ke yeh locket me pehan sakta , par , par , tumari behan ne ese tumare liye hi banaya hai .." biman shah ne muskrate hue bola ,

"meriii , komallllll , ka nam bhi mat lenaaa.." ravi ne beintha gusse me chekh kar bola ,

"ahahahahaaa , komal , umm , ravi , voh tume nai chahti thi , voh ik matlabi ladki thi , bhul jao use , ham sath milkar es dunia par raz kar sakte hain , kya hai komal , ik jism or mass ka sharir , es dunia me sabhi ladkyian komal hi hain , bus uska nam hi toh hai komal , tum mere sath..." biman shah abhi bol hi reha tha ke ravi bech me hi bol padha ,

"meri komal mass ka sharir nai hai , or na hi voh ik naam hai , jo muze acha lagta hai , voh meri atma ka ik hissa hai , meri ardhagni hai voh , mera adha sharir , voh mere liye , har pal agg me jal rehi hai , or tum kehte ho , voh muzse pyar nai karti , haha , ik bat sun lo , pehle me tume maruga , or phir us dyana ko , lekin usse bhi pehle , me apni komal ko vapis layuga , ajj tum dekhte jana , dimag bus tum logo ke pas nai hai , mere pas bhi hai..." ravi ne behad ghambir hoker bola ,

"komall , ik badchalan ladki thi , apne hi bhai se pyar , shhhhhhhiiii , voh bevkuf ladki , use etna samazya , haweli me , par sali , mani hi nai , me bhyia se pyar karti hu , bhyia se pyar karti hu , chilati gai , chilati gai , ufff , tum jante ho , meri mout tumari behan ke hatho likhi hai , toh , tum hi batao , me use vapis anne dunga , ahhahahuuuuaa , nai raviii , komal kaid rehegi , na voh jee payegi , na mar payegi , dard me tadafegi , royegi , chilayegi , tume yad karegi , lekin , lekin , kabhi vapis na a payegi , ahahahehahahuuu..." biman shah ne behad ghambir hoker haste hue bola ,

"me tumare pore samrajaye ka vinash kar dunga , komal or mere bech koi aya toh use mout ki nend sula dunga , chahe voh mera apna hi kyu na ho , komal ayegi , jarur ayegi , na tum rok pauge , or na hi koi or , koi muze nai rok sakta , na kisi ka pyar , na kisi ke asnu , or na kisi ki mout , kyu ki yaha swal meri komal ka hai , me tume challenge karta hu , tum muze rokte rehna , me chalta rahuga , jitne mayajaal rachne hai , rach lo , chahe etni hazaro seema or paida kar lo , lekin meri akhon me kisi ke liye koi pyar nai , meri akhon me bus komal hai , meri akhri manzil , or tumari mout..." ravi ne behad gusse or gam me bola ,

"hmm , ajj se tumari or meri jung suru , ajj se abhi se , me tumare pariwar ko etna dard dunga , ke tum komal ko lane ka sochna toh door , uska nam tak yad karte kampuge..."

"hmm , muze manzor hai , par tumne , meri seema ko kiya kya hai..." ravi ne gusse me chila kar bola ,

"mane kuch nai kiya , jo kiya , khud seema ne hi kiya , us amritmayi kund me kudne ke bad , muze nai pata kya hua , jo janti hai , yahi janti hai ..." biman shah ne seema ki traf dekh ghambir hoker bola ,

"amritmayi kund , kya bakwas kar rehe ho tum.." ravi ne chonkte hue bola , use kuch pata nai tha ,

"ahahahahaaa , tume kya pata hoga , tume kuch pata nai hai , seema tum hi bata do.." biman shah ne haste hue bola ,

"sona tum kya bol rehe ho , aisa kuch bhi nai hai , sona ham ghar chalte hain , muze dar lag reha hai..." seema ne thoda ghambir hoker bola ,

"me yahi puch reha hu ke tum kon ho , tum seema nai ho , yeh bat me samaz chuka hu , par tum ho kon , or meri seema kaha hai..." ravi ne behad gusse me seema ki traf dekh kar bola ,

"ahahahahaaahuuu , yeh seema hi hai , par mere kabje me hai , yeh vahi karegi jo me kahuga , or tume bhi vahi karna hoga jo me kahuga ..." biman shah ne ravi ki akhon me akhen dal bola ,

"pehle muze meri vahi seema vapis chahyie , lekin tum kya chahte ho muzse.." ravi ne biman shah ki traf dekh kar bola ,

"muze , muze , kuch khas nai , bus voh map dedo , jo tum usdin chura kar bhage the , or bad me , zarne me gir gye the , abh batao voh map kab doge.." biman shah ne muskra kar bola , use apna maksad pora hota hua nazar a reha tha ,

"hmm , toh yeh bat hai , sab samaz gya , yeh tumara plan hai , seema ko kaid karke , uske jaisi yeh shetian ladki mere samne betha di , tain ki muzse map le sako , par tumara sapna , bus sapna hi rehega..." ravi ne muskrate hue bola ,

"khiiiikhiiiiii , abhi tumne mera plan dekha hi kaha hai , mere pas kuch aisa hai , jise tum dekh loge toh , toh , ahhahahahaa , toh , tum khud muzse bhekh manguge , or khud muze voh map doge..." biman shah ne apni vheshi hassi haste hue bola ,

biman shah ka etna kehna hi tha ke room me andhera chaa gya , jab roshni hui tab Lara , baby ko pakade khadi thi ,

"raviiiii..." baby ne behad ghabra kar bola ,

"ufff , ohhh , baby tum yaha kyu ayi , mane kya bola tha anu se , tumne suna nai tha..." ravi ne baby ki traf dekh behad gusse me bola ,

"raviii , me tume kaise chod deti , me bhi ladugi tumare sath..." baby ne thoda nam akhon se bola ,

"laraaa..." biman shah ne lara ki traf dekh kar bola , lara , baby ko vahi chod , biman shah ke piche khadi ho gai ,

"hmm , toh abh bolo ravi , voh map kaha hai , us jagah ka naksha muze bana kar do , varna baby ko mar dunga..."

"baby ko , agar kisi ne baby ko chua bhi , toh me use aisi mout dunga , jaisi tumne kabhi sochi bhi na ho.."

"hame tum mar sakte ho , par use nai.." biman shah ne muskrate hue bola ,

tabhi ravi ne dekha baby ke piche ik aurat ki parchai thi , dhere dhere voh parchai , ik jism me badal gai , ik aurat ke jism me ,



"rekhaaaaaa dediiiii..." ravi ne chonk kar bola , kyu ki baby ke piche rekha khadi hui thi , par es halat me , par kaise ,

ravi ki akhen khuli ki khuli reh gai , kyu ki uski badi behan rekha , uff voh etni khofnak thi ke use dekhte hi ravi ka ander tak kamp gya ,

vahi dusri traf....

Rema karib 1 ghanta usi pedh ke niche bethi rehi , use kuch samaz nai a reha tha voh kya kare , kis traf jaye ,

"ufff , kaha fas gai me , bhyiaaa bachaoooo , plsss..." rema ne apni akhon se behte asnu saf karte chila kar bola ,

rema phir himet juta uthi , or uth kar chalne lagi , dhere dhere wakht katta gya , or ika ik rema ki akhen khuli ki khuli reh gai ,

kyu ki charo traf roshni khil uthi thi , aisa mehsus ho reha tha , jaise rat ke bad ik nayi subah khili ho ,

rema ko behad khushi mehsus hui , akhir andhera khatam ho gya tha , din ki roshni me jungle behad hara bhara lag reha tha ,

"shukar hai bhagwan ka , uff , voh khambakht andhera toh gyab hua..." rema ne hontho par muskan late dil hi dil bola ,

phir rema jungle me agge badne lagi , tabhi uski nazar door khadi ik aurat par gai ,



"uff , yeh kon hai , dikhne me toh budia lag rehi hai , ense puchu ya rehne du , puch hi leti hu , or koi hai bhi toh nai..." rema ne kuch der apne man se bat ki or phir us budia ki traf chal padhi ,



voh budia bhi apne mathe par hath rakhe use hi dekh rehi thi , jaise uski nazar kamzor ho ,

rema abh us budia ke pas pahunch gai , rema ne us budia ko uper se niche tak dekha , voh budia dikhne me thodi ajeeb lag rehi thi , safad mass , jo umar dhalne ke sath , dhalka hua tha , uski badi si nak , lambe lambe safad baal , uski umar jaise hazaro saal thi ,

"b...beti..kk...kon...hh...ho...tt..tum..." us budia ne ladkhadati awaz me bola ,

"maa ji , mera nam rema hai , me es jungle me fas gai hu , muze ghar jana hai , pls , muze koi rasta batao..." rema ne thoda nam akhon se bola ,

"khiiikhiiiii , r...remaaa , betiiiiiii , t..tum...nn...naiiii...jj..jaa...ss...saktiii...hh....hoo.." us budia ne muskrate hue bola , uski akhon me ik ajeeb kassih thi , voh bar bar rema ke badan ko uper se niche tak ghur ghur kar dekh rehi thi , uski akhon me ik chamak thi , kuch pane ki ,

"naiiii , muze jana hai , me apne bhai ke bina nai jee sakti , me jaugi , mera bhai , mera intzar kar reha hoga , mera pyara bhaiii , pls , app batao na muze , kaise ghar jau me..." rema ne thoda gusse me bola ,

"umm , shhhh , ik rasta haiii , agar tum yeh seb (apple) kha lo toh , lao kha lo.." us budia ne apne hath me pakada lal rang ka seb rema ki traf bada kar bola ,

"mm..me , muze bhuk nai haiii..." rema ne muskrate hue bola ,

"khiiikhiiiii , toh rema , tum ghar nai ja sakti , yeh ik mayavi dunia hai , tum yahi rahogi , hamesha ke liye..." us budia ne haste hue bola , uske hasne se uske moh se ganda sa lislisa pani beh reha tha , jise dekh , rema ko ulti anne ko ho rehi thi ,



"mm...me ghar jaugi , apka shukriya , abh me chalti hu..." rema ne dono hath jod kar bola , or phir agge badne lagi ,

"remmaaaaaaahhhh..." ik behad dhemi awaz sun rema ruk gai ,

lekin jaise hi rema ne piche palat kar dekha , "aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa , bhyiaaaaaa..." uski dil ko kampa dene wali chekh nikal gai ,

uski akhon ke samne ik chudail khadi thi , yeh vahi budia thi jo apne asli roop me a chuki thi , uska badan pora hara tha , pore badan par ghas uggi hui thi , nakhun behad bade bade or tikhe the ,



uska badan par pedhu ki trah dhaliyan uggi hui thi , uff uska badan etna darvana or byank tha ke rema ki sanse uske halak me hi kahi kho gai thi ,

"ahhhhh bachaoooo , bachaoooo..." rema jor jor se chilati hui vaha se bhagne lagi , voh diyan bhi uske piche piche anne lagi , uska moh khula hua tha , akhen bilkul safad thi ,



rema bhagti ja rehi thi , par us chudail se picha nai chuda pa rehi thi , use samaz nai a reha tha voh kya kare , kyu ki voh jeena chahti thi , apne bhai ke sath ,

"uff kaise bachu es chudail se..." rema ne bhagte bhagte khud se he bola ,

rema bhagti bhagti piche palati toh abh vaha koi nai tha , jungle me dhup etni tez thi ke rema ka pora badan pasine se lathpath ho chuka tha , use behad pyass lagi thi , par pani toh jaise tha hi nai ,

rema agge badti gai , use bhuk bhi lagi thi , akhir kuch der chalne ke bad , use pani girne ki awaz sunai di , tab rema ne dekha , voh ik pahad ki choti par khadi thi , or uski akhon ke samne , ik pani ka zarna , pahad se niche gir reha tha ,

"uff , paniii.." rema khush hote hue apne app se hi boli , or bhag kar us jarne ke pas chali gai , rema ghutno ke bal beth niche zuk gai , or pani pene lagi ,

"remaaaaaahhh..." ik behad dhemi awaz rema ko sunai di , rema ne jaldi se uth kar piche dekha , toh uski sanse tham si gai ,

"kk...kkk...komalllllllll...d...dd...dediiii..." rema ne apne gulabi hontho se kampte hue bola ,

"ahhhhhhhhhhhh..." rema ki tez chekh nikal gai or voh zarne me gir gai , abh vaha kuch nai tha , charo traf shanti thi , or zarne ka pani , uske girne ki awaz sunai de rehi thi ,

vahi dusri traf....

"thappppp thappppppp , remaaa , darvaja kholooo..." yeh shurti thi , jo lagatar rema ke room ka darvaje hatho se peet peet kar use awaz de rehi thi ,

"ahhhhhh , meraaa sarrr , ufff ..." rema apne bed se uthi or apna saar pakade , room ke darvaje ke pas pahunch gai , rema ne darvaja khola toh shurti ander ghuste hi us par baras padhi ,

"remaa , sham hone wali hai , or tu subah se room me band bethi hai , kya kar rehi thi..." shurti ne room me charo traf nazar dodate hue bola ,

"ufff , me room me thi , par , ohh , lekin me toh , ufff , kuch samaz nai a reha ..." rema ne man hi man sochte hue bola , use kuch samaz nai a reha tha ke voh apne room me kaise a gai , us khofnak jungle se....

"hloo , kya soch rehi ho , mane kya pucha tumse..." shurti ne rema ke chehre ke samne chutki bajate hue bola ,

"dediii , maa kaha hai..." rema ne shurti ke swal ka jawab dene ki bajaye apna swal kar diya ,

"muze nai pata..." shurti ne rema se nazarian chura kar bola , rema ke hontho par ik muskan doad gai , use pata tha , shurti abh bhi seema se nazar hai...

Rema muskrate hue boli ,

"dediii , me janti hu app maa se naraz ho , par , acha chodo , dedii , voh me so gai thi ..." rema ne shurti ko seema ke bare me kuch na batate hue bola , voh nai chahti thi , shurti ki jaan ko koi khatra ho ,

"etna kon sota hai , uff , acha abh mat so jana , jao or fresh hoker bahar ayo.." shurti etna bol vaha se chali gai ,

rema jaldi se apne room me vapis ghus gai , rema ne room ka darvaja ander se lock kiya , or washroom ki traf bhag gai , rema ne apne kapde jaldi jaldi utar diye ,

rema ne washroom me lage bade se mirror me khud ko dekha , uff uski chekh nikal gai ,



use apna hi chehra behad byank lag reha tha , uski akhen pele (yellow) rang ki thi , or dant kisi kate ki trah tikhe , uske danto me mass or khoon laga hua tha , jaise abhi abhi usne kacha mass noch khaya ho ,

rema jab chekh kar ruki or usne kampte hue dhere dhere apni akhen kholi , sab kuch normal tha , uska asli chehra use dikhai de reha tha , lekin uski akhen abh badal chuki thi , uski akhon ka rang abh kala padh chuka tha , rema uper ki traf chehra kar jor se chilayi , voh behad byank lag rehi thi , lekin rema ko hua kya tha.....



kuch der bad rema shant ho gai , abh voh shant apni akhen khole chat ki traf ghur rehi thi , phir rema ne apna chehra niche kiya or samne ki traf dekhne lagi ,



rema apne gaalo par hath rakhe khud ko mehsus karne lagi , uski unglyian adhi kali thi , or akhon ka rang bhi kala padh chuka tha , yeh kya tha , uski takat jagne ki suruat , ya phir seema ki koi nayi chaal...

to be counited...


Bahot sr sawal khatam ho gaye jaise rekha kaha gayi toh woh mill gayi lekin yeh kya woh bhi dayan ban gayi hai dusra woh jungle mein kon budhhi thi kahi ravi ki maa toh nahi hai aur yeh rema ki power aane wali haj ya ab rema bhi jaane wali hai dekhna hai abhi tak ka best update hai maza aa gaya padh kar As Always Super Update Bro
 
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Abh Agge...

Rema kuch der vaise hi khud ko mehsus karti rehi , use apne ander kuch ajeeb sa mehsus ho reha tha , jaise uske ander kuch tha ,

"ufff , mera saar dard kar reha hai , ohh shhhh , kya karu..." rema apne saar ko dono hatho me kas kar dabate hue khud se hi boli ,

rema ki akhon ka rang vaisa hi kala tha , jo or bhi gehra hota ja reha tha , rema bina nahaye hi washroom se bahar a gai , voh dhere dhere agge badh bed par let gai , use abh dundla dundla sa hi dikh reha tha ,

rema ne apni akhen band kar li , abh use kuch rahat si mehsus ho rehi thi ,

"remaaaaahhhh..." ik behad dhemi awaz ne rema ki soch par viram laga diya , rema ne akhen khol as-pas dekha , par kuch nai tha ,

"ahhhhh , meraa sarrr..." rema tez dard se kahrahti hui apna saar pakad kar uth bethi ,

"remaahhhh..." phir se ik dhemi awaz rema ko sunai di , rema ne phir se chehra ehder ohder kar dekha , par use kuch dikhai na diya ,

"ufffff , kon haiii ..." rema ne akhen band kar chila kar bola , jaise hi rema ne akhen band ki , use kuch dikhai dene laga ,

ik behad sunsan or veran jagah , charo traf agg hi agg , us agg ki uchi uchi lapto ke bech , use ik ladki dikhai di , uff yeh komal thi , jo agg me jal rehi thi , apne hi mayajaal me fasi hui ,

"ohh komalll dediiiiii , app es halat mee..." rema ne akhon me asnu bharte hue bola , voh komal ki chavi ko saf dekh pa rehi thi ,

"remaaaahhhhh , bhyiaa kaa sathhh denaaa.." komal ne agg me jalte hue apne man me hi bola , uske man ki awaz rema saf sun pa rehi thi ,

"dediiii , me bhyia ka khyal rakhugiii , parrr , dediii , appp bhi aa jaooo , plsss.." rema ne rote hue bola , usse apni behan ki yeh halat dekhi nai ja rehi thi ,

"remaahhhh , me n..naaii.. aa..s...ss...saktiiii.." komal ne dard me kahrahte hue bola , or ika ik agg ki lapte tez ho gai or komal us dard me chekhne lagi , rema se komal ki yeh halat or dekhi na gai , usne apni akhen khol li ,

rema kuch der roti rehi , or phir uth kar room se bahar chali gai , abh rema , voh rema nai rehi thi , voh badal chuki thi ,

vahi dusri traf...

ravi akhen fade us khofnak aurat ko ghure ja reha tha , voh aurat or koi nai , uski behan rekha thi ,

"aahahahahaaa , ravi , yeh hai , mera hukam ka ikka , abh tum ese mar nai sakte , kyu ki , yeh tumari behan hai , lekin yeh tume mar sakti hai , kyu ki yeh ik shetain hai..." biman shah ne haste hue thoda ghambir hoker bola ,

ravi sofe se uth khada hua , or rekha ki traf badne laga , barso bad , apni behan se mil reha tha , voh bhi es halat me ,

jo pyar ravi ne rema ko diya tha , vahi pyar usne apni badi behan rekha ko bhi diya tha , par ghar chodne ke bad , takriban 9 saalo bad , ajj voh rekha ko dekh reha tha ,

yaha ravi ki akhon me pyar or nami thi , vahi rekha ki akhon me , bus veshipan tha , uska jism etna byank tha , ke ravi apni hi behan se nazarian nai mila pa reha tha ,

baby abhi samne ki traf dekh rehi thi , usne abhi piche palat kar nai dekha tha , voh bus ravi ke chehre ko dekh rehi thi , uski himet nai ho rehi thi ke voh piche palat jaye ,

"rekha dediiii..." ravi ne behad pyar me bola ,

rekha ne vaise hi khamoshi se ravi ko ghur kar dekha , or phir palak japakte hi baby ke karib pahunch gai ,

"rukoo dediii..." ravi chila kar bola , par tabhi rekha ne apna ik hath baby ke kande par rakh diya , phir voh jor se chekhi , uski veshi byank dant , dikhne lage , jinko dekh ravi bhi kamp sa gya ,

baby bhi kisi ka hath apne kande par mehsus kar , ander tak kamp gai , uski akhen or khul gai or gulabi honth kampne lage ,

"dediii , rukooo , baby koo chodd doo , apka gussa muz par haiiii , muzeee marr doo.." ravi ne rekha ki traf badte hue bola ,

par tabhi rekha ik bar or jor se chilayi , uski byank chekh sun , room me mazod sabhi log dar se kamp sa gye ,

baby ne himet juta jaise hi piche palat kar dekha , rekha ka byank roop dekh , baby toh jaise sun si padh gai , rekha jeti jagti , shetian ki murat thi ,

"aaaaaaaaaannnnhhhhhhhhh..." baby akhen band kar dar se kampte hue jor se chekhi , uski chekh etni tez thi ke lag reha tha jaise uska gala fat gya ho ,

rekha ne baby ko gardan se pakad uper utha liya , baby ke pair abh hawa me zul rehe the , uski gardan ko rekha ne hath me kas rakha tha ,

"naii dediii..." ravi gusse se chilata hua rekha ki traf bhaga ,

rekha , baby ko uper uthaye hi , ravi ki traf dekh jor se chekhi , or baby ko hath se uper uthaye hi , ik traf ko fenk diya , baby uddti hui kanch ki khidki se ja takrai , pori kanch or lakadi ki voh khidki tut kar chakna chur ho gai , baby besudh hoker dewar ke sath hi niche gir gai ,

ravi ik dam se rekha ke samne khada tha , un dono ke bech bahut kam fasla tha , rekha apni vheshi nazarion se ravi ki akhon me dekh rehi thi ,

"chali jaoo , varnaaa , apko mar dunga mee.." ravi ne hath ki muthyion ko kas kar bola ,

"yeehiaaaannnnnnnnnnnnnn..." rekha jor se chekhi or ravi ko sath leker gyab ho gai , vaha se gyab hote hi dono ik andhere se nahaye jungle me pahunch gye ,

ravi sidha us jungle me jamen par ja gira , or uth kar as-pas dekhne laga , kyu ki rekha vaha nai thi ,

"dedii , samne ayoo..." ravi ne chila kar behad gusse me bola , or tabhi rekha uske samne a gai , andhere me uska roop or bhi khofnak lag reha tha ,

phir rekha ne bijli se bhi tez uddte hue , ravi ko gardan se pakad liya , or utha kar , door fenk diya , ravi uddta hua , ik pedh se ja takraya ,

ravi ki pith us pedh se lagte hi , pedh bhi jad se ukhad kar , ravi ke sath hi gir padha ,

"ahhhhh , shhh..." ravi dard se kahrahta hua khada ho gya , lekin abh vaha koi nai tha , us khofnak jungle me abh shanti thi ,

ravi ne apni akhen band ki , phir jab usne apni akhon ko khola toh , voh lal roshni me chamak rehi thi , or uska pora badan agg me jal reha tha ,

"rekhaa dediiiiii , samne ayooo..." ravi ne behad gusse me bola , uska badan abh behad lal ho chuka tha , pora badan agg ki tez lapto me nahaya hua tha ,

tabhi rekha phir se ravi ke samne a gai , ik ajeeb bat thi , voh abh tak kuch nai boli thi , bus khamosh thi ,

ravi gusse me pagal hua , rekha ki traf bhaga , or uske pas jaker , udd kar , ik jordar punch rekha ke chehre par kar diya , punch jadte hi ravi jamen par ik ghutne ke bal beth gya ,

ravi ne piche palat kar dekha , tab voh herian reh gya , kyu ki rekha par uske punch ka koi asar nai hua tha ,

"ufff dedii , etni takatwar , ohhh , kya karuuu..." ravi ne vapis uthte hue khud se hi bola ,

"yaaaeeiiiinnnnnnnnnnnn..." rekha ik bar or jor se chekhte hue ravi ke pas ayi ,

"ahhhhhhhhhh..." ravi ne gusse me kuch punch rekha ke chehre par jad diye , par rekha ko kuch asar na hua , phir rekha ne ravi ki gardan ko dono hatho me pakad use uper utha liya , or vaha se gyab ho gai ,

"ahhhh shhhhh..." ravi vapis usi flat me farsh par a gira ,

"ahahahahaaa , dekh li takat , yeh mera maksad pora karegi , jo komal na kar payi..." biman shah ne haste hue bola ,

ravi jamen se utha or ghutno ke bal bethte hue bola ,

"mm...me , akela nai huuu..." ravi ne dard se kahrahte hue muskra kar bola , or tabhi room me ik bar andhera chaa gya , jab dubara halki roshni hui , tab biman shah ki akhen khuli ki khuli reh gai ,

"pitaaa jiii ..." ravi ne lagdate hue kaal ke karib pahunch kar bola ,

rekha , kaal ko dekh vaha se gyab ho gai , jaise vaha thi hi nai , abh vaha bus joker , or lara hi bache the ,
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"me bhi ayi hu , ravi..." ik aurat ne andhere se bahar ate hue bola ,

"maya ..." ravi thoda ghambir hoker bola , ravi ko vishwas nai ho reha tha ke maya uski madad ke liye ayegi , kyu ki maya , kabhi haweli se bahar nai nikalti thi ,

"hmm , ravi , anna padha , tum jaisa insan nai dekha mane , etna pyar karne wala , or tumari behan komal , ufff , us jaisi ladki , sadyion tak nai dekhi mane , me toh kya , mere sath koi or bhi aya hai..." maya ne ghambir hoker muskra kar bola ,

tabhi maya ke piche se do ladkyian or samne a gai , yeh kaya or shaya thi , jinse ravi haweli me mila tha , abh voh bhi ravi ki madad karne ayi thi ,

"kaya , shaya , tum dono.." ravi herian sa hota hua bola , kyu ki en dono ko kaal ne haweli me kaid kar rakha tha ,

ravi behad khush tha , akhir uska plan kam kar gya tha , joker ko ulza kar , kaal ko vaha lana tha ,

jab tak ravi ne biman shah ko ulza rakha tha , tab tak kaal ne apni shakti se , ik mayajaal rach diya tha , abh biman shah es building se bahar nai ja sakta tha ,

"ahahahaaahaa , kaal , tumse milkar acha laga , tum ajj bhi vaise hi ho , jaise pehle the , kuch nai badla wakht ne , na tume or na muze , par , par , ik bat yeh hai , me badal chuka hu , or tum muze rok nai sakte..." biman shah ne apne asli roop me ate hue bola , abh voh joker ban chuka tha ,

"joker , tumne apni mariyda ko toda hai , ham insano se door rehte hain , tume eski saza milegi..." kaal ne behad gusse me bola ,

"ohh , mane apni mariyada ko toda , toh tumne konsa palan kiya hai , tumne , tumne us komal ko marne nai diya , use vampire bana diya , kyu , insan ka janam hi marne ke liye hota hai , par tumne , us bhagwan ke banaye nizam ko tod dala , phir tum kaise sahi hue..." joker ne behad ghambir hoker bola ,

"komal , voh meri beti hai , voh insan nai thi , agar voh marti , tab voh rekha jaisi shetian ban jati , use vampire bana , ik nayi jindgi di , jaise tume di thi , komal ne apni us nayi jindgi ko apne jeene ka jariya bana liya , usne apne bhai me , apni pori dunia dekh li , par tumari bhuk badti gai , tume es dunia par adhikar karna tha , abh tum batao , tum or komal , kaise ik ho sakte ho..." kaal ne behad shant hoker bola ,

"ahahahahaahaa , komal tumari beti hai , ravi tumara beta hai , es liye en dono ko tumne ik nayi jindgi di , par ik hai , jise mane nayi jindgi di , rekha , nam hai uska..." joker ne haste hue bola ,

"sale , me tuze jaan se mar dunga , bol , meri behan ke sath kya kiya tune..." ravi ne beintha gusse me bola ,

"ravi shant ho jao , abhi swal rekha ka nai , es joker ka hai , ese rokna jaruri hai..." kaal ne behad shant awaz me bola ,

"muze , ahahahahahaa , muze , rokne se pehle , ravi , agar tum apne ghar par nazar dal lete , kyu ki , jante ho rekha kaha gai hai , nai jante , me bata deta hu , voh tumare ghar gai hai..." joker ne beintha haste hue bola ,

"kyaaaa , pita ji muze ghar jana hoga , meri behane insan hai , rekha dedi , unko mar degi..." ravi ne kaal ki traf dekh kar bola ,

"nai , abh tum nai ja sakte , agar mane mayajaal toda , toh joker bhag jayega , tum nai ja sakte..." kaal ne thoda ghambir hoker bola ,

"par pita ji , rekha dedi bhi toh gai na , me kyu nai ja sakta , meri behane masom hain , insan hai voh , agar rekha dedi ka byank roop unhonu dekh liya , nai nai , muze jana hoga..." ravi ne apni akhen band karte hue bola ,

"ruko sona , pita ji thik bol rehe hain , tum nai ja sakte..." seema ne sofe se uthte hue bola ,

"pita ji , app eski bation me mat anna , yeh seema nai hai .." ravi ne kaal ki traf dekh kar bola ,

"ravi , me janta hu , jo kuch ho reha hai , seema kya hai , yeh bad me dekh lenge , pehle joker se nipat lete hain..." kaal ne apni akhon ka rang lal karte hue bola , jise dekh joker bhi kamp sa gya .... kya kaal sach me etna takatwar tha...

"ahhhhh rr...raviiii..." baby ne apne khoon se lathpath chehre ko dono hatho me dabaye dard se kahrahte hue bola ,

ravi bhag kar baby ke pas chala gya , ravi ne ghutno ke bal bethte hue , baby ka saar apni jangu par rakh liya ,

"ahhhhh.. rr...raviii...t..tt..tumari...jj..juhi...kk..ka...aa...antim....w...wakh...tt...aa..gyaa...bb..babuu." baby ne akhon me asnu bharte hue bola ,

"ehhh juhi , aisa mat bol , me , me , tume kuch nai hone dunga , me bacha lunga tuze , me kaise , kaise , bhul gya tuze..." ravi ne beintha chekhte rote hue bola ,

"ummm , sssssshhh , b..bbabu..k..kk...kat...kkaa...kk...khyal...r..rakhnaaaaa..." baby ne etna bol apni akhen band kar li , ravi jor se chilata hua , uske chehre ko chumne laga , lekin baby , voh toh ja chuki thi ,

"juhii , juhii , tum meri atma ka voh hissa hai , jise koi muzse alag nai kar sakta , juhiiii , utho juhiiiiii , me marr jaugaaa , uthooo , juhiiiiiiiiiii , dekh , muze tera hath chahyie , muze khelna hai esse , uthna juhiiii , me pagal ho jaugaaa , juhiiiiii , ehhh , juhi meri jaan , mane mara tha , teri nisha ko , mar muze , marrr , aree martiii kyuuu naiii , juhiiii plsss , muze chod kar mat jaaa , pehle komal chali gai , abh tumm...juhiiiiiiii " ravi ne sadme me jate hue rote hue bola , voh pagal ho chuka tha , use kuch hosh nai tha , sab bus usi ko dekh rehe the , joker udas tha ,

"bechariii , ufff , ravi tum ho eske katil , tumne mara hai juhi ko , tumne , ahahahahahaaauuuuu ..." joker ne beintha haste hue bola ,

"rekhaaa dediiii , me tuze aisi mout dunga , tu yad rakhegi muze , meri masom juhi ko mar diya , muze mar deti..." ravi ne beintha gusse me bola ,

"ahahahaaahaaa , rekha ko kaise maroge , voh toh pehle hi mar chuki hai , ahahahaahahahuu..." joker ne beintha haste hue bola , jab ki ravi chonkte hue use dekh reha tha , uske kadmo me bejan baby ka jism padha hua tha....


to be counited....[ ik bar baby ki pori jindgi ko yad kar lena... kuch ajeeb sa feel hoga.. jaise baby sach me thi.. voh koi character na hoker ik.. jinda ladki thi.. OR han kal rat ko update ayega.. )









Baby ko kyu mar diya yrr :cry:
 
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Jabardast update diya he. Rekha ne to ravi ki haalt kharab kar di ya fir use ravi ne uljhaya hua tha kaal ko bulane ke liye. Lekin ye kya gajab kar diya aapne bhai baby/juhi ko maae diya. Ye mera favorite character thi komal ke baad aur ye aapko pata he fir bhi maar diya. Galat baat he bahut galat baat he. Aapne sahi kaha tha ki update mat padhna warna dukh hoga. Kasam se bhai dil jal raha he.
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Prince Charlee

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Nice update bhai. To Rekha mar chuki hai aur ab joker ki ghulam hai. Aur kaal ne mayajal banaya hai joker ko rokne ke liye lekin kya woh kamyab ho pate he ke nahi yah to next update me hi pata chale ga.
Reema ko bhi komal ke bare me pata chal gya hai aur Rekha bhi ghar ki taraf aa rahi hai dekhte hai dono behno me se kis ka palda bhari rahta hai.
Baby ka aisa ko scene yaad nahi hai lekin phir bhi lagta hai ke abhi us ka end nahi hua aur wo bhi wapis aye gi nahi to hamari bichari kat ka kya ho ga???
 
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update-42

Abh Agge...

Rema kuch der vaise hi khud ko mehsus karti rehi , use apne ander kuch ajeeb sa mehsus ho reha tha , jaise uske ander kuch tha ,

"ufff , mera saar dard kar reha hai , ohh shhhh , kya karu..." rema apne saar ko dono hatho me kas kar dabate hue khud se hi boli ,

rema ki akhon ka rang vaisa hi kala tha , jo or bhi gehra hota ja reha tha , rema bina nahaye hi washroom se bahar a gai , voh dhere dhere agge badh bed par let gai , use abh dundla dundla sa hi dikh reha tha ,

rema ne apni akhen band kar li , abh use kuch rahat si mehsus ho rehi thi ,

"remaaaaahhhh..." ik behad dhemi awaz ne rema ki soch par viram laga diya , rema ne akhen khol as-pas dekha , par kuch nai tha ,

"ahhhhh , meraa sarrr..." rema tez dard se kahrahti hui apna saar pakad kar uth bethi ,

"remaahhhh..." phir se ik dhemi awaz rema ko sunai di , rema ne phir se chehra ehder ohder kar dekha , par use kuch dikhai na diya ,

"ufffff , kon haiii ..." rema ne akhen band kar chila kar bola , jaise hi rema ne akhen band ki , use kuch dikhai dene laga ,

ik behad sunsan or veran jagah , charo traf agg hi agg , us agg ki uchi uchi lapto ke bech , use ik ladki dikhai di , uff yeh komal thi , jo agg me jal rehi thi , apne hi mayajaal me fasi hui ,

"ohh komalll dediiiiii , app es halat mee..." rema ne akhon me asnu bharte hue bola , voh komal ki chavi ko saf dekh pa rehi thi ,

"remaaaahhhhh , bhyiaa kaa sathhh denaaa.." komal ne agg me jalte hue apne man me hi bola , uske man ki awaz rema saf sun pa rehi thi ,

"dediiii , me bhyia ka khyal rakhugiii , parrr , dediii , appp bhi aa jaooo , plsss.." rema ne rote hue bola , usse apni behan ki yeh halat dekhi nai ja rehi thi ,

"remaahhhh , me n..naaii.. aa..s...ss...saktiiii.." komal ne dard me kahrahte hue bola , or ika ik agg ki lapte tez ho gai or komal us dard me chekhne lagi , rema se komal ki yeh halat or dekhi na gai , usne apni akhen khol li ,

rema kuch der roti rehi , or phir uth kar room se bahar chali gai , abh rema , voh rema nai rehi thi , voh badal chuki thi ,

vahi dusri traf...

ravi akhen fade us khofnak aurat ko ghure ja reha tha , voh aurat or koi nai , uski behan rekha thi ,

"aahahahahaaa , ravi , yeh hai , mera hukam ka ikka , abh tum ese mar nai sakte , kyu ki , yeh tumari behan hai , lekin yeh tume mar sakti hai , kyu ki yeh ik shetain hai..." biman shah ne haste hue thoda ghambir hoker bola ,

ravi sofe se uth khada hua , or rekha ki traf badne laga , barso bad , apni behan se mil reha tha , voh bhi es halat me ,

jo pyar ravi ne rema ko diya tha , vahi pyar usne apni badi behan rekha ko bhi diya tha , par ghar chodne ke bad , takriban 9 saalo bad , ajj voh rekha ko dekh reha tha ,

yaha ravi ki akhon me pyar or nami thi , vahi rekha ki akhon me , bus veshipan tha , uska jism etna byank tha , ke ravi apni hi behan se nazarian nai mila pa reha tha ,

baby abhi samne ki traf dekh rehi thi , usne abhi piche palat kar nai dekha tha , voh bus ravi ke chehre ko dekh rehi thi , uski himet nai ho rehi thi ke voh piche palat jaye ,

"rekha dediiii..." ravi ne behad pyar me bola ,

rekha ne vaise hi khamoshi se ravi ko ghur kar dekha , or phir palak japakte hi baby ke karib pahunch gai ,

"rukoo dediii..." ravi chila kar bola , par tabhi rekha ne apna ik hath baby ke kande par rakh diya , phir voh jor se chekhi , uski veshi byank dant , dikhne lage , jinko dekh ravi bhi kamp sa gya ,

baby bhi kisi ka hath apne kande par mehsus kar , ander tak kamp gai , uski akhen or khul gai or gulabi honth kampne lage ,

"dediii , rukooo , baby koo chodd doo , apka gussa muz par haiiii , muzeee marr doo.." ravi ne rekha ki traf badte hue bola ,

par tabhi rekha ik bar or jor se chilayi , uski byank chekh sun , room me mazod sabhi log dar se kamp sa gye ,

baby ne himet juta jaise hi piche palat kar dekha , rekha ka byank roop dekh , baby toh jaise sun si padh gai , rekha jeti jagti , shetian ki murat thi ,

"aaaaaaaaaannnnhhhhhhhhh..." baby akhen band kar dar se kampte hue jor se chekhi , uski chekh etni tez thi ke lag reha tha jaise uska gala fat gya ho ,

rekha ne baby ko gardan se pakad uper utha liya , baby ke pair abh hawa me zul rehe the , uski gardan ko rekha ne hath me kas rakha tha ,

"naii dediii..." ravi gusse se chilata hua rekha ki traf bhaga ,

rekha , baby ko uper uthaye hi , ravi ki traf dekh jor se chekhi , or baby ko hath se uper uthaye hi , ik traf ko fenk diya , baby uddti hui kanch ki khidki se ja takrai , pori kanch or lakadi ki voh khidki tut kar chakna chur ho gai , baby besudh hoker dewar ke sath hi niche gir gai ,

ravi ik dam se rekha ke samne khada tha , un dono ke bech bahut kam fasla tha , rekha apni vheshi nazarion se ravi ki akhon me dekh rehi thi ,

"chali jaoo , varnaaa , apko mar dunga mee.." ravi ne hath ki muthyion ko kas kar bola ,

"yeehiaaaannnnnnnnnnnnnn..." rekha jor se chekhi or ravi ko sath leker gyab ho gai , vaha se gyab hote hi dono ik andhere se nahaye jungle me pahunch gye ,

ravi sidha us jungle me jamen par ja gira , or uth kar as-pas dekhne laga , kyu ki rekha vaha nai thi ,

"dedii , samne ayoo..." ravi ne chila kar behad gusse me bola , or tabhi rekha uske samne a gai , andhere me uska roop or bhi khofnak lag reha tha ,

phir rekha ne bijli se bhi tez uddte hue , ravi ko gardan se pakad liya , or utha kar , door fenk diya , ravi uddta hua , ik pedh se ja takraya ,

ravi ki pith us pedh se lagte hi , pedh bhi jad se ukhad kar , ravi ke sath hi gir padha ,

"ahhhhh , shhh..." ravi dard se kahrahta hua khada ho gya , lekin abh vaha koi nai tha , us khofnak jungle me abh shanti thi ,

ravi ne apni akhen band ki , phir jab usne apni akhon ko khola toh , voh lal roshni me chamak rehi thi , or uska pora badan agg me jal reha tha ,

"rekhaa dediiiiii , samne ayooo..." ravi ne behad gusse me bola , uska badan abh behad lal ho chuka tha , pora badan agg ki tez lapto me nahaya hua tha ,

tabhi rekha phir se ravi ke samne a gai , ik ajeeb bat thi , voh abh tak kuch nai boli thi , bus khamosh thi ,

ravi gusse me pagal hua , rekha ki traf bhaga , or uske pas jaker , udd kar , ik jordar punch rekha ke chehre par kar diya , punch jadte hi ravi jamen par ik ghutne ke bal beth gya ,

ravi ne piche palat kar dekha , tab voh herian reh gya , kyu ki rekha par uske punch ka koi asar nai hua tha ,

"ufff dedii , etni takatwar , ohhh , kya karuuu..." ravi ne vapis uthte hue khud se hi bola ,

"yaaaeeiiiinnnnnnnnnnnn..." rekha ik bar or jor se chekhte hue ravi ke pas ayi ,

"ahhhhhhhhhh..." ravi ne gusse me kuch punch rekha ke chehre par jad diye , par rekha ko kuch asar na hua , phir rekha ne ravi ki gardan ko dono hatho me pakad use uper utha liya , or vaha se gyab ho gai ,

"ahhhh shhhhh..." ravi vapis usi flat me farsh par a gira ,

"ahahahahaaa , dekh li takat , yeh mera maksad pora karegi , jo komal na kar payi..." biman shah ne haste hue bola ,

ravi jamen se utha or ghutno ke bal bethte hue bola ,

"mm...me , akela nai huuu..." ravi ne dard se kahrahte hue muskra kar bola , or tabhi room me ik bar andhera chaa gya , jab dubara halki roshni hui , tab biman shah ki akhen khuli ki khuli reh gai ,

"pitaaa jiii ..." ravi ne lagdate hue kaal ke karib pahunch kar bola ,

rekha , kaal ko dekh vaha se gyab ho gai , jaise vaha thi hi nai , abh vaha bus joker , or lara hi bache the ,
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"me bhi ayi hu , ravi..." ik aurat ne andhere se bahar ate hue bola ,

"maya ..." ravi thoda ghambir hoker bola , ravi ko vishwas nai ho reha tha ke maya uski madad ke liye ayegi , kyu ki maya , kabhi haweli se bahar nai nikalti thi ,

"hmm , ravi , anna padha , tum jaisa insan nai dekha mane , etna pyar karne wala , or tumari behan komal , ufff , us jaisi ladki , sadyion tak nai dekhi mane , me toh kya , mere sath koi or bhi aya hai..." maya ne ghambir hoker muskra kar bola ,

tabhi maya ke piche se do ladkyian or samne a gai , yeh kaya or shaya thi , jinse ravi haweli me mila tha , abh voh bhi ravi ki madad karne ayi thi ,

"kaya , shaya , tum dono.." ravi herian sa hota hua bola , kyu ki en dono ko kaal ne haweli me kaid kar rakha tha ,

ravi behad khush tha , akhir uska plan kam kar gya tha , joker ko ulza kar , kaal ko vaha lana tha ,

jab tak ravi ne biman shah ko ulza rakha tha , tab tak kaal ne apni shakti se , ik mayajaal rach diya tha , abh biman shah es building se bahar nai ja sakta tha ,

"ahahahaaahaa , kaal , tumse milkar acha laga , tum ajj bhi vaise hi ho , jaise pehle the , kuch nai badla wakht ne , na tume or na muze , par , par , ik bat yeh hai , me badal chuka hu , or tum muze rok nai sakte..." biman shah ne apne asli roop me ate hue bola , abh voh joker ban chuka tha ,

"joker , tumne apni mariyda ko toda hai , ham insano se door rehte hain , tume eski saza milegi..." kaal ne behad gusse me bola ,

"ohh , mane apni mariyada ko toda , toh tumne konsa palan kiya hai , tumne , tumne us komal ko marne nai diya , use vampire bana diya , kyu , insan ka janam hi marne ke liye hota hai , par tumne , us bhagwan ke banaye nizam ko tod dala , phir tum kaise sahi hue..." joker ne behad ghambir hoker bola ,

"komal , voh meri beti hai , voh insan nai thi , agar voh marti , tab voh rekha jaisi shetian ban jati , use vampire bana , ik nayi jindgi di , jaise tume di thi , komal ne apni us nayi jindgi ko apne jeene ka jariya bana liya , usne apne bhai me , apni pori dunia dekh li , par tumari bhuk badti gai , tume es dunia par adhikar karna tha , abh tum batao , tum or komal , kaise ik ho sakte ho..." kaal ne behad shant hoker bola ,

"ahahahahaahaa , komal tumari beti hai , ravi tumara beta hai , es liye en dono ko tumne ik nayi jindgi di , par ik hai , jise mane nayi jindgi di , rekha , nam hai uska..." joker ne haste hue bola ,

"sale , me tuze jaan se mar dunga , bol , meri behan ke sath kya kiya tune..." ravi ne beintha gusse me bola ,

"ravi shant ho jao , abhi swal rekha ka nai , es joker ka hai , ese rokna jaruri hai..." kaal ne behad shant awaz me bola ,

"muze , ahahahahahaa , muze , rokne se pehle , ravi , agar tum apne ghar par nazar dal lete , kyu ki , jante ho rekha kaha gai hai , nai jante , me bata deta hu , voh tumare ghar gai hai..." joker ne beintha haste hue bola ,

"kyaaaa , pita ji muze ghar jana hoga , meri behane insan hai , rekha dedi , unko mar degi..." ravi ne kaal ki traf dekh kar bola ,

"nai , abh tum nai ja sakte , agar mane mayajaal toda , toh joker bhag jayega , tum nai ja sakte..." kaal ne thoda ghambir hoker bola ,

"par pita ji , rekha dedi bhi toh gai na , me kyu nai ja sakta , meri behane masom hain , insan hai voh , agar rekha dedi ka byank roop unhonu dekh liya , nai nai , muze jana hoga..." ravi ne apni akhen band karte hue bola ,

"ruko sona , pita ji thik bol rehe hain , tum nai ja sakte..." seema ne sofe se uthte hue bola ,

"pita ji , app eski bation me mat anna , yeh seema nai hai .." ravi ne kaal ki traf dekh kar bola ,

"ravi , me janta hu , jo kuch ho reha hai , seema kya hai , yeh bad me dekh lenge , pehle joker se nipat lete hain..." kaal ne apni akhon ka rang lal karte hue bola , jise dekh joker bhi kamp sa gya .... kya kaal sach me etna takatwar tha...

"ahhhhh rr...raviiii..." baby ne apne khoon se lathpath chehre ko dono hatho me dabaye dard se kahrahte hue bola ,

ravi bhag kar baby ke pas chala gya , ravi ne ghutno ke bal bethte hue , baby ka saar apni jangu par rakh liya ,

"ahhhhh.. rr...raviii...t..tt..tumari...jj..juhi...kk..ka...aa...antim....w...wakh...tt...aa..gyaa...bb..babuu." baby ne akhon me asnu bharte hue bola ,

"ehhh juhi , aisa mat bol , me , me , tume kuch nai hone dunga , me bacha lunga tuze , me kaise , kaise , bhul gya tuze..." ravi ne beintha chekhte rote hue bola ,

"ummm , sssssshhh , b..bbabu..k..kk...kat...kkaa...kk...khyal...r..rakhnaaaaa..." baby ne etna bol apni akhen band kar li , ravi jor se chilata hua , uske chehre ko chumne laga , lekin baby , voh toh ja chuki thi ,

"juhii , juhii , tum meri atma ka voh hissa hai , jise koi muzse alag nai kar sakta , juhiiii , utho juhiiiiii , me marr jaugaaa , uthooo , juhiiiiiiiiiii , dekh , muze tera hath chahyie , muze khelna hai esse , uthna juhiiii , me pagal ho jaugaaa , juhiiiiii , ehhh , juhi meri jaan , mane mara tha , teri nisha ko , mar muze , marrr , aree martiii kyuuu naiii , juhiiii plsss , muze chod kar mat jaaa , pehle komal chali gai , abh tumm...juhiiiiiiii " ravi ne sadme me jate hue rote hue bola , voh pagal ho chuka tha , use kuch hosh nai tha , sab bus usi ko dekh rehe the , joker udas tha ,

"bechariii , ufff , ravi tum ho eske katil , tumne mara hai juhi ko , tumne , ahahahahahaaauuuuu ..." joker ne beintha haste hue bola ,

"rekhaaa dediiii , me tuze aisi mout dunga , tu yad rakhegi muze , meri masom juhi ko mar diya , muze mar deti..." ravi ne beintha gusse me bola ,

"ahahahaaahaaa , rekha ko kaise maroge , voh toh pehle hi mar chuki hai , ahahahaahahahuu..." joker ne beintha haste hue bola , jab ki ravi chonkte hue use dekh reha tha , uske kadmo me bejan baby ka jism padha hua tha....


to be counited....[ ik bar baby ki pori jindgi ko yad kar lena... kuch ajeeb sa feel hoga.. jaise baby sach me thi.. voh koi character na hoker ik.. jinda ladki thi.. OR han kal rat ko update ayega.. )









Nice update
Rekha kaafi takatwar hai ravi tohh kuchh nhi uske samne
Ravi ki baaki behno ko ab rema bachayegi rekha se?
But sad part baby ko mar diya rekha ne kya uska role yahi tk tha?
 
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