Non-Erotic Daur Rishton Ki

[Asad91]

Hello friends,

Hi hope you all are good, yeah meri 1st story, mein kafi time se stories parh rah hon, har bar yeahi sochta ho ke jo writers hai aun ko kya satisfaction or happiness milti hai stories likh ke or mera dil karta hai ke mein bhi yeah hi experience karo, isi wajah se mein yeah story likhne ja raha ho mein koi writer nahi ho as a professional I am an Engineer and I’m doing 9-5 job 6 days in a week; ab ate hain story ki taraf ke ky story mein likh raha hon.

 

[Abhishek Kumar98]

Start karo bhai

 

[Asad91]

Update 1

Yeah, story pori tarah se kalpanik hai iska reality se koi taluq nahi hai, agar kisi ki bahvnao ko kisi tarah se tehas pouchti hai toh mein mazrat chahatah hon.

Yeah, kahani based hai ese rishton pe jo haqiqat ko dosron ki nazron se dekhtein hai or unki khudkii rishton ki daur dagmaga jati hai, yeah kahani hai ese rishton ki jo daur ko mazbot rakhne keliye anjane mein daur ko kamzor kardetein hai.

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Ek ladki raat kein waqat railway station pe baithi apne guzre kuch wakat pehle ki gathna pe ansu baha rahi thi, uske barabar mein hi ek ladka beth ke use hosla de raha tha guzri toh uspe bhi wohi gathna thi tota to andar se ladka bhi tha magar ladka tha mazboot toh banna tha, mazboot toh ladki bhi thi lekin aaj uska koi khas usse door hogaya tha, ladka agye ane wale waqt keliye khud ko mazboot rakhawah tha kyun ke agye uski or us ladki ka future taye karna tha.

Ladka: dekho please tum khud ko mazboot banao, humaye apne agye ka bhi sohna hai.

Ladki: aap khud bataien mein kya karun sab kuch khatam hogaya hai, ab hum kya karenge.

Ladka: kya mein bhi khatam ho….

Ladke ke mouh pe hath rakhte hoe….

Ladki: please ese mat bolo mera ab tumare ilawa koi or hai bhi toh nahi, jo hai sab peche rahgaye.

Ladka: toh please ab rona band karo ab humein age ka sohna hai ke kese agye barhe, kese apni zindagi ki or rishton ki daur ko mazboot banaye.

Ladka: wese ek bat kahna chaunga tum rote hoye pori bandarya dikhti ho hahahahaha.

Ladki: youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu, tum bohat gande ho.

Ladki uske kandhe mein marte hoe bolti hai or rote hoe bhi uske chehre pe muskhurat ajati hai.

Ladki: rajveer ek bat batao ab hum kya karenge agye.

Rajveer: Nita abhi toh kuch nahi pata, philhal hum delhi jarahe hai waha jake kuch sochtein hai.


Ajke liye itna hi miltye hai agye or dekhte kaun hai or kya hota hai Rajveer or nita kesath.

Shubh Ratri.

 

[Asad91]

Update 2.

Nita: Rajveer Please mujhe chor kar mat jana, mere paas hi rehna mujhe bohat ghabrahat horahi hai.

Rajveer: Nitu tum kyun fiqar karti ho, mein idhar hi hon or doctor ne kaha hai na sab thik hojayega.

Doctor room mein enter hoti hai, or rajveer ko bahar wait karnekeliye kehti hai.

Nita or Rajveer iswakt canada ke ek hospital mein hai or nita abhi ek bache ko paida karne wali hai.

(Aaj us raat ko 3 saal bitgaye hai jab woh railway station pe the, in 3 saalon mein kya hoa oh hum agaye dekhenge)

(Or ek baat abse mein Rajveer ko RV likhunga)

RV iswaqt labor room ke bahar tension mein idhar se udhar tehal raha hai or uski ankhoon mein thori nami hai, Iske pass iswaqt iska eklota dost or sathi Ajit bhi khara hai.

Ajit: Bhai kyun tension leraha hai sab thik hoga or jald hi mein chacha banjaunga, doctor ne kaha hai na sab normal hai.

RV: bhai tujhe pata hai na 3 months pehle doctor ne kaha tha criticals ayengi, or toh janta hai mera nitu ke ilawa or koi nahi hai.

Ajit RV ko gale lagata hai or itni der mein labor room se bache ki ronye ki awaz ati hai jisye sunke RV ki khushi ka koi thikana nahi hota.

Thori der mein labor room ka gate khulta hai or doctor bahar ati hai or uske hatoon mein ek baby hota hai.

(Doctor english mein bolegi but mein hindi mein likhunga)

Doctor: Mr. Rajveer congratulations apko beta hoa hai.

RV: Doctor my wife Nita kesi hai, woh thik toh haina.

Doctor Bete ko RV ko dete hoye batati hai.

Doctor: your wife is totaly fine, hum thori der mein usse ward mein shift kardeinge.

Thori der mein hi nita ko ward mein shift kya jata hai, Rv or ajit room mein enter hote hai.

Ajit: bhabhi congratulations bete keliye.

Nita: thanks bhaisab, or neelum or meri gudiya kaha hai.

Ajit: bhabhi ji apko pata hai apki gudiya abhi abhi school jana shuru hoi hai, neelum uske ane ka hi wait karrahi, mein abhi jake undono ko lekar ata hon.

Ajit phir chala jata hai apne ghar.

RV: Nitu aaj mein bohat khush ho, aaj humari family pori hogai hai, aaj mujhe ek baap hone ka ahsas horaha, mujhe apne baba ki bhi yad arahi hai, baap kya hota hai mujhe undar se ehsas horaha hai.

RV nitu ke pass beth kar yeah sab bol raha hita or uski ankhe naam hoti hai, uski ankhoon se ansoo behrahe hote hai, yeah khushi or gham ke milye jule ansoo hai (ab aap yeah kahenge ke ansoo toh ek hi hote hai magar esa nahi hota apke ansoo ka pani mein chemicals apke emotions ke hisab se hote hai).

RV jab nita ki taraf dekhta hai toh usko bohat gabrahat hoti hai, nita eskawqt bohat rorahi rahi thi rone ki wajah se uski hickiya bandh gayi thi.

RV uthta hai or nita ke forhead pe kiss karta hai or bolta hai.

RV: nitu kya hoa tum ese kyun rorahi hon please apna rona band karo nahi toh mein bhi rodunga or humara beta bhi rone shuro kardega.

Nita: hichki lete hoye R....V mu...jhe bhi sab ki yad arahi hai kash sab hotye toh kitna acha hota.

RV: please nitu mujhe maaf kardo sab meri wajah se hoa, kash mein itna kamzoor nahi hota, tum dekhna mein apne bete ko bohat strong banonga, please rona band karo, or wese bhi tum rote hoye bilkul bandariya lagti ho aaj bhi.

Nita ke chehrye pe muskurahat ajati hai.

Nita: (nakli gussa dikhatye hoye) youuuuuuuuuu... Tum bohat borye ho.

Itni der mein inke sahabzade rona shuru kardete hai.

Rv: lo maa ko chup karaya toh sahabzade kami pori karne agaye aab inko kaun chup karye.

Nita: ise bhook lagi hai isliye roraha or khabardar meri rajkumar ko kuch bhi bola toh, eah bolke nita hasne lagti hai or sath mein RV bhi.

Ese hi batein hoti rehti hai sath mein doctor bhi maa or bete ka checkup kar chali jati hai or Ajit bhi apne family ke sath hospital ajata hai.

Neelum: Nitu bohat bohat mubarak ho, mere shehzade ko toh dikhao kesa hai.

Nita: didi kaha rehgai thi mein apse naraz hon.

Neelum: Are nitu yeah teri gudiya ka hi wait karrahi thi eske atye hi foran agayi.

Nita: kaha meri gudiya isko bhi toh apne bhai se milao.

Gudiya ahista ahista ati hai or nita ke sath beth jati hai or apne chote bhai ko dekhti hai.

Gudiya: massi yeah kitna chota hai iske hath bhi itne chotye hai.

Nita: gudiya yeah abhi aya hai na yeah ahista ahista bada hogana, abhi hume iska khayal rakhna hai, aap rakhugi na apne bhai ka khayal.

Gudiya: Ha massi mein humesha iska khayal rakhungi, or iske sath khalungi bhi.

Neelum: kya naam socha hai humare sahahzade ka.

Nita RV ko dekhti or pouchti hai.

Nita: aap bataye kya rakhe mujhe toh vikram pasand hai aap kya kehte ho.

RV: meri jaan ki pasand ko hum thukra sakte hai kya.

Nita sharma jati hai or ajit ko dekhte hoe RV ko gusse se dekhti hai, RV ghabrate hoye.

RV: ha toh final hogaya hai Vikram Pratap Singh.

Gudiya: are baba itna bada naam, mein toh apne bhai ko Vicky bolungi.

Sab gudiya ki bat pe hasdete hai....

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Introduction

Rajveer Pratap Singh: Hero ke Father.

Nita Rajveer Singh: Hero ki Mother.

Vikram Pratap Singh: Hero or one and only son of Rajveer & Nita singh.

Ajit Sharma: Freind of Rajveer, Dost kam Bhai

Neelum Sharma: wife of Ajit.

Anjali Sharma: Daughter of Ajit and Neelum, sab isko gudiya bolate hai.

Aryaan: Friend of hero, iske maa baap ek accident mein chal base or yeah orphanage mein hi pala bada hoa hai tab tak jab iski maulakat apne hero se nahi hogai phir Vikram ne ise apne sath hi rakhliya.

 

[Abhishek Kumar98]

Nice start

 

[Asad91]

Update 3

Hamara Hero is waqt apni sukoon ki neendon mein soya hoa tha, duniya se befiqar ose jagti duniya ki koi fiqar hi nahi thi, or bhala kya fiqar hogi bechara abhi 11 saal ka hi toh hai, usne toh abhi asli duniya dekhi hi nahi.

Tabhi hero ke room ka gate open hota hai subah ke 6 baj rahe the, gate se ek sundar aurat andar ati hai or apne hero ke sote hoye chehere ko dekhti hai, use bohat sukoon milta hai woh uper wale se pratna karti hai ke kabhi bhi iski ankhoon mein ansoon na aye, kabhi isko koi dukh na hon, lekin kismat toh iski pehle hi likhi ja chuki hai, or yeah toh waqt hi batayega ka iska is duniya mein kya kariye hai kya yeah rishton ki daur ko mazboot kareiga yah use tor dega, kher yeah toh hum bad mein dekhenge.

Filhal oh aurat agye uske bed ke sirhane beth kar uske forhead pe kiss karti hai or use bare pyar se jagati hai.

Aurat: chalo beta utho 6 bajgaye hai apne uthna nahi hai, running bhi karni hai.

Vikram: kya mom aap bhi sukoon se sone nahi deti kyun mujhe ek saal se bhagarahi hon, zyada bhagaogi toh apko lekar bhag jaonga phir dad ka kya hoga kuch toh socho, bewajah roz subah bhagwati hon itna zyada.

(Yes yeah aurat apne hero ki maa Nita hai)

Mom: (uske sir pe halki sa thappad marte hoye) badmaash, kuch bhi kahlein tere sath agar bhagungi toh tere dad ko bhi lekar bhagungi, or tujhe kitni bar bola hai subah subah toh maa boldiya kar.

Vikram: yar mom maa kuch old fashion hai Mom new lagta hai.

Mom: chor sab chal jaldi uth nahi toh dad ko awaz don.

Vikram: kyun subah subah class lagwarahe hon, dad ko nashte se phele unko tang mat karon nahi toh mein hang hojaunga.
Or vikram apni mom ke gal pe kiss karte hoye uthta hai.

Vikram: kisi din akele lekar bhag jaunga, itna bol ke woh bathroom mein ghus jata hai, or nita kitchen mein nashte ki tayari mein chali jati hai.

Vikram fresh hoke niche ata hai or sidha ghar ke bahar ake khara hojata hai jaha uske instructor khare hote hai gimmy.

Gimmy: hello my boy aaj se tumahari exercise bhi start honi hai or tumhe kal se diet bhi start karni hai.

Vikram: but sir kheriyat aaj se exercise kyun.

Gimmy: because tum ek saal se running karrahe ho, tum ab fast ho ab tumhe strong banana hai iskeliye tumhe exercise karni paregi.
Abhi tumhari age kam hai isliye tumhe light exercise hi karni hai mein tumhe kuch steps batunga jiski tumhe daily practice karni hai, mein har bar ki tarah month mein kisi bhi din surparise visit karunga, pehle tumhe running karni hai 30 minutes or phir tumhe exercise karni hai samjhe.

Phir gimmy vikram ko running karata hai or phir exercise ke steps sikhata hai. Phir ek ghante baad woh chalajata hai.( Ek baat clear kardum gimmy daily nahi ata usko rakha as a tutor hai woh sirf sikhata hai or monthly ek do surprised visit karta hai check karne keliye ke vikram sahi karraha hai ke nahi, yeah sab vikram ke dad ke kehne pe horaha, vikram ke dad vikram ko strong banana chate hai, lekin apne bete se bohat pyar bhi karte hai isliye inhone istaraha ki working start ki jisse ahista ahista vikram strong bhi bane or use koi takleef bhi na hon, akhir baap jo hai, baap hota hi aisa hai jo khud to strict dikhata hai duniya ke samne par andar se woh bohat naram hota hai like nariyal ki tarah)

Ek ghante ki mehnat karke jab apna hero ghar mein ghusta hai toh samne dinning table pe hero ke dad bethe hote hai, hero jake unke pair chuta hai or phir apni exercise ke baryen mein batata hai.

Dad: ok beta daily apne ese hi practise karni hai samjhe, chalo pehle juice piyo or phir nashta karke school bhi jana hai.

Phir apna hero juice pita hai or change karne apne room mein chala jata hai, change karke woh niche ata hai or nashta karke van mein beth school nikal jata hai, abhi school khule 1 mahina hi hoa exams ke bad ki chutiyon se.

Aaj ke liye itna hi baki agaye pahrenge.

 

[Asad91]

Update 4

Vikram school pounch apni seat pe baith jata hai, or class attend karne lagta hai, thori der mein vise principle class mein ati hai or unke sath ek ladka hota hai lagbhag vikram ke se saal dedh saal bada.

VP: bachon yeah hai aryaan inhone aaj hi join kya hai humare school mein toh aap log iska welcome kare or ise apna dost banaye.

VP bache ko class mein chor chali jati hai, aryaan jake ek khali seat pe baith jata hai.

Jabse aryaan class mein enter hoa hai koi ladka hai jo use dekhe jaraha hai, yaha tak ke vp chalagaya aryaan peeche jake beth gaya lekin woh use dekhe jaraha tha, uski tantra tab tutti hai jab class ki teacher us ladke ko awaz lagati hai.

Teacher: vikram.. vikram kya hoa hai kab se pouch rahi ho home work dikhao, class mein sapne dekhne ate ho kya.

Ha dosto yeah ladka vikram hai, vikram apna homework teacher ko dete hoye bolta hai.

Vikram: sorry madam yeah raha mera homework.

Vikram homework check karake wapis apni seat pe baith jata hai, phir isi tarha recess khatam hota hai or woh class jese hi nikalta hai toh kisi ladki se takra jata hai.

Ladki: bagair vikram ki taraf dekhe bolti hai, andha hai kya dekh ke nahi chal sakta tiffin bhi gira diya or jese hi uski nazar vikram per padti hai woh use thati hai or sorry bolne lagti hai kan pakadke.

Vikram: yar didi sorry mein apke pass araha tha or jaldi mein takragaya, or aap sorry toh nahi bolo mein chota hon.

Dosto ji ha yeah anjali hai rajveer ke dost ki beti, or nita ki gudiya or apne hero ki didi.

Anjali: chote to toh samajhdar hogaya hai, chal ab tere tiffin se khungi dekhon massi ne kya diya hai.

Vikram: ji nahi didi mein or mom apse naraz hai or mom ne bola hai mein apne tiffin se apko kuch nahi khilaun.

Anjali: kyun chote massi or toh kyun mujhse naraz hai.

Vikram: kyun ke 3 days se aap ghar pe nahi ayi hon isliye, lekin didi aap tension nahi lo mein ne chupke se maid didi se apke liye tiffin rakhliya tha hehehehe.

Anjali: chote sorry tujhe toh pata hai next month test or mujhe apna assignment submit karana hai, or dont worry mein massi ko manalungi toh chal lunch karte hai.

Phir dono cafeteria mein baith lunch karte hai, phir apni apni class mein chale jate hai.
Isi tarah school ki chutti hoti hai or vikram apne ghar chala jata hai.

Ese hi 1 month nikal jata hai, vikram daily 6 baje uthta hai running phir exercise phir school, school mein bhi woh daily aryaan ko dekhta hai aryaan bilkul chup rehta hai koi usse dosti nahi karna chata kyunki oh orphanage mein rehta hai, lekin kuch dino se vikram uske sath beth raha tha oh usse dosti karna chah raha tha, lekin koi bhi pehl nahi karraha tha, phir ek din woh himmat kar usse dosti keliye pouchta hai.

Vikram: hi kya hal hai, mein tumse dosti karna chahta hon kya tum mujhse dosti karoge.

Aryaan uski taraf dekhta hai oh sile karraha tha or usne apna right hand agye barhaya tha.

Aryaan: mein ek orphan hon koi mujhse dosti choro bat bhi nahi karta phir tum kyun dosti karna chahte hon.

Vikram: are yar mein alag hon, or mujhe tum ache or sache lage isliye mein tum se dosti karna chahta hon, kya tum dosti karna chaoge.

Aryaan ke chehre pe smile ajati hai or woh hath mila kar usse doati karleta hai or phir dono gale milte hai, phir yunhi 2 mahine nikal jate hai.

Abhi ke liye itna hi.

 

[kamdev99008]

Interesting buildup...

Lekin usse bhi jyada interesting is story ki catagory hai. ..
Non erotic...
Incest, adultery, romance ya erotica na sahi...
Thriller to lag rahi hai 1st update se.... Some suspense

Lekin non erotic se idea hi nahi lag raha ki story kaisi hogi...

Dekhte hain aage

 

[Asad91]

Interesting buildup...

Lekin usse bhi jyada interesting is story ki catagory hai. ..
Non erotic...
Incest, adultery, romance ya erotica na sahi...
Thriller to lag rahi hai 1st update se.... Some suspense

Lekin non erotic se idea hi nahi lag raha ki story kaisi hogi...

Dekhte hain aage

First time story likhraha tha prefix save hogaya baad mein change karne ki try ki ho nahi rahi hai

 

[David Goodman]

Congratulations