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Thanks dear for suggestion soo nice of uLage raho.
Thanks dear for suggestion soo nice of uLage raho.
Yadi mere suggestions se plot change ho rha hai to app ise abhi ke liye rahne den ham ise bhi dil khol kr Injoy kr lenge... baad me kisi or story me Aap aisa kr sakti hain...OK dear, will try to be slow, actually plot of the story is changing parteners,not seduction,phir bhi,I will take care of your feelings.Story ka jyada focus on "swad badlane per hai"Thanks for your suggestion, will definitely try on other characters,yaha to teer kaman se nikal chuka hai, between Pammi nd Pankaj.
I never mind any kind of things in this forum. Or aap Jaisa bhi likh rahi ho mujhe pasand aa rha hai, So don't change anything in the story, please. I like incest...Dear u r right from your side but note that Pammi is also young and has hormonal influence:and sympathy for her mother and honouring the will of her mother is also a factor.So far as open minded ness is concerned,dear it's a story just for enjoyment.Story aur natak ki sabhi baate kaha true hoti hai,ye to sirf fun ke liye hai.But it happens may be in about 5-10% people in real life,and it happens more in high class.My observation could be wrong,dear please don't mind if u don't like incest.Thanks for your views Abhi
Dear me hamesha readers ke suggestions ko bahut ehmiyat deti hun,aapki baat bhi rakhungi, lekin ye Sheetal ka cancer se peedit hona story ki foundation hai,jab story agge chalegi to seduction bhi ayegi story me.Actually story ka ek part Punjabi section me complete kar diya hai menne,aur agge chal kar seduction hai, Punjabi readers ko pata hai.Tum bhi jan jayonge darling,aapki writer Raji ,kisi ko bhi naraz nahi kregi,sab ka maan rakhegi.Agar tum Raji se gussa ho gye to Raji ka story likhne ka kya fayda.Raji u nd your suggestions.dear AbhiYadi mere suggestions se plot change ho rha hai to app ise abhi ke liye rahne den ham ise bhi dil khol kr Injoy kr lenge... baad me kisi or story me Aap aisa kr sakti hain...
Vaise yah pr sab raji - raji hain. Koi narajgi nhi kisi se, Vaise mere suggestions tk to Thik hai pr mujhe♥ mt kro mai sadisudha admi hu kahi galti se Bivi ki najar pad gyi to Aap to meri lanka hi lagva dogiDear me hamesha readers ke suggestions ko bahut ehmiyat deti hun,aapki baat bhi rakhungi, lekin ye Sheetal ka cancer se peedit hona story ki foundation hai,jab story agge chalegi to seduction bhi ayegi story me.Actually story ka ek part Punjabi section me complete kar diya hai menne,aur agge chal kar seduction hai, Punjabi readers ko pata hai.Tum bhi jan jayonge darling,aapki writer Raji ,kisi ko bhi naraz nahi kregi,sab ka maan rakhegi.Agar tum Raji se gussa ho gye to Raji ka story likhne ka kya fayda.Raji u nd your suggestions.dear Abhi
Are tum har cheez ko real me kyon lene lagte ho Abhi, Xforum ki duniya artificial hai,real life aur xforum life different hai.Me bhi married hu ,aur hum dono specialist docs hain.OK,then if u mind it.Vaise yah pr sab raji - raji hain. Koi narajgi nhi kisi se, Vaise mere suggestions tk to Thik hai pr mujhe♥ mt kro mai sadisudha admi hu kahi galti se Bivi ki najar pad gyi to Aap to meri lanka hi lagva dogi
i fully agree with you. If in this forum open minded character nahi honge m readers ko enjoyment nahi miega to khaan seduction is important and sex is also important i am sure you will do the right mix, .... and certainly readers feedback is an important input but every writer is different and as it is your first story, you will certainly evolveDear u r right from your side but note that Pammi is also young and has hormonal influence:and sympathy for her mother and honouring the will of her mother is also a factor.So far as open minded ness is concerned,dear it's a story just for enjoyment.Story aur natak ki sabhi baate kaha true hoti hai,ye to sirf fun ke liye hai.But it happens may be in about 5-10% people in real life,and it happens more in high class.My observation could be wrong,dear please don't mind if u don't like incest.Thanks for your views Abhi
waaaahhhhhh raji ji great aap ki lekhni ka jawaab mere paas to nahi hai ab to mujhe meri story ki fikr hai ki waha koi aayega bhi ya nahi hindi me to aag laga rakhi hai tum ne har update me aise hi likhte raho hot update dearRaji ji plz read my story https://xforum.live/threads/parivartan-2.41358/Update-4. Pammi jab apne room me pahunchi apne Mummy papa ka sex dekh kar,to vo bahut hot ho gyi,vo apne kapde utar kar nangi ho gyi,aur apne nange jism se khelne lagi.Jab jism ki garmi bardasht nahi hui to vo bathroom me ja kar shower lene lagi aur apni naked body
ko masal ne lagi aur moan karne laggi haiiii uffff cccccc hyeeeee papa tumara lund kitna bada hai,to kya hua agar mummy tumara mussal apni chut me nahi le sakti apni Pammi beti ki chut me
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dal dena apna big loda. Zor zor se apne mummay dabane lagi aur chut sahlane lagi.Hai Raje ab mujh akeli se nahi apni chut ko masala ja raha tum hi dabao iss nigodi ko,aur imagine karne lagi jaise vo
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apne Pankaj papa se unka hath pakad kar apni chut masal va rahi hai,aisa karte karte adhe ghante baad uski chut ne pani chhoda,tab ja kar usko chaain aya.Lekin sapno me bhi usko apne papa ka mussal dikhai deta raha.
. Next morning,uski mummy Sheetal uske kamre me ayi aur kaha,beta aj se tum hi apne papa ka khyal rakha karo,jao unko bed tea de kar ayo,ab mujh se jyada kam nahi hoga kuchh din. Mummy me chaiye to le jati hu lekin agar papa ne mujhe tumhare bhulekhe me pakad liya to.To kya beti,unka bhi haq hai tum par,jab tumari marriage hogi dekha jayega,tab Tak tum enjoy Karo apne papa se,me to ab unka lund apni chut me le nahin sakti doctor ne bola hai.Kahin agar unhone dusri marriage kar li to hum dono ka kya hoga.Vo to thik hai mummy lekin mere hubby ko agar virgin chut na mili to veh gussa nahin hoga.Beti aj kal na hi to koi boy virgin hota hai na hi koi girl,hum itne rich hai ke koi boy tumhara niradar nahi kar sakta,tum khul kar apne papa se enjoy Karo,baki sab me dekh lungi.Aj tum Pankaj ke sath chali jana aur kuchh dresses vagaira le ana aur agar tumara dil kare to kahi ghum ana ya cinema hall me picture dekh ana.Thik hai mummy me Surbhi heroine se baat karungi, agar vo maanegi, to hum dono ghum ayenge papa ke saath.Beta abhi Surbhi princess ko kuchh mat batana,essi baat kisi ko bataya nahin kartey.Time aaney par vo khud jan jayegi,tab tum donon chale jaya karna Pankaj ke sath,aur tum Pankaj ko ab jyada papa papa mat kaha karo phir vo feelings nahi aati jo enjoy karne ke liye aani chahiye.Thik hai mummy lekin mene ab tak kuchh bhi chhipaya nahi Surbhi se,vo baad me gussa na kre.Tum Surbhi ki fiqr na kro me khud sab samjha dungi usko agar jarurat padi to.Thik hai mummy me jati hu phir papa ke room me chaiye le kar.Sheetal ne Pankaj ko pehle hi samjha diya tha,ke jab Pammi uske room me aye to vo saune ka natak karta rahe.
. To Pammi tea le kar, Pankaj ke room me jati hai,to dekhti hai Pankaj ka lund
khada tha uske underwear me, Pammi uske lode par hath pherti hai,aur usko bahar
nikal leti hai.Ek to uska dil karta tha lode ko hath me pakad kar hilane aur chusne ka,aisa karne se vo thoda darti bhi thi, phir sochti hai khud to mera hath apne lund par rakh diya tha papa ne,to me kyon daru,aur lode ko pyaar karne lagi,lund ki
chamdi pichhe karke usko kiss karne lagi.Phir lode ko munh me dal kar chusne
laggi, chuste chuste dekh bhi rahi thi kahi jag to nahi gye papa.Lekin Pankaj to jan bujh kar saune ka natak kar raha tha.Pammi ne pura loda apne
mouth me le kar lolypop ki tarah suck karna shuru kar diya.Phir Pammi ne socha aj ke liye itna bahut hai,aur chaiye bhi thandi ho rahi hai,to usne Pankaj ka lund vapas uske underwear me dal diya.Aur Pankaj ko jaga kar kaha ki chaiye pi lo,to Pankaj ne uth kar chaiye pakad li aur saath hi Pammi ko kiss
kar liya aur kaha ab chaiye aur bhi sweet ho jayegi.Pammi mushkra di aur khud bhi cheek kiss kar liya
Pankaj ko. Pankaj ab aur bhi bold ho gya aur Pammi ke mummay dabane lagga aur
bola bed tea aise pilate hai,to Pammi ne muskura kar kaha ab tum ne bata diya ji agge se aise hi pila diya karungi ji ,lekin yaha se to dudh piya jata hai ji, aur uske Lund ko daba kar boli lekin tum mujh se pyar to karte nahi.Ye tum kese keh sakti ho,mera to sab kuchh tumhara hi hai , Pankaj ne kaha.To Phir kabhi mujhe ghumane ya shopping krane to nahi le kar gye,Pammi ne uska loda daba kar kaha.Lo ye kaun si badi baat hai,hum aj hi chalenge dono kam karne.Tum tyar ho jana hum aj evening me chalenge.
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Thanks dear lovely Komal sisi fully agree with you. If in this forum open minded character nahi honge m readers ko enjoyment nahi miega to khaan seduction is important and sex is also important i am sure you will do the right mix, .... and certainly readers feedback is an important input but every writer is different and as it is your first story, you will certainly evolve