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Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Bade hi behtareen shabdon me samjhaya h Guruvar VISHVAMITRA ne.
Aapne bhi ise bakhoobi dikhaya h.
LaGTA h kalyan hi kalyan hoga or uski shuruaat bhi ho chuki h aadi or chitra dono ko nirvastra dekh liya Raajnandini ne to.
Shree ki vyatha wakai badi hi karun h.
Azgar kya rach raha h ab ??

Or isiliye ,
Aage ka intjaar


UPDATE- 113

Poora din aise hi milne milane me vyatit ho gaya…murugan aur maina ne bhi hamare sath hi rahne ka faisla kiya.. shree ke dil me pichhli ghatnao ka dukh to tha lekin uske mann me ek khushi bhi thi ki ab vo ek din jarur apne pyar, apne adii ki biwi banegi.

Main bhi aaj behad khush tha ki kayi varsho ke baad aaj rajnandini ke sath sone ko milega…uski komal baho ke ghere me uske madak jism ka sparsh aaj phir se mujhe milega….raat hote hi main iss khushi me jhumte huye apne kamre me ghus gaya…jaha pahle se hi koi leti huyi thi…main bhi khushi se uchhal kar uske upar kood gaya.

Ab aage……

Bistar me girte hi main khush ho gaya ye mahsoos hote hi ki chadar ke andar vo poorn nirvastra ho kar mera intazar kar rahi thi…..

Maine uske dono stano ko kas ke pakad liya aur unhe dhire dhire dabate huye apne hotho ko uske adhro se mil jane diya…lekin mujhe rajanandini ke hotho ke chumban ka ehsaas aaj kuch bhinn sa lag raha tha, pahle ki tulna me…

Kintu maine iss par adhik dimag kharch kiye bina apne kaam ke phir se bhid gaya…maine kuch der ke uske hotho ko apne hotho se juda kiya hi tha ki tabhi main chounk gaya..

“Aaahhhhh…adiii….main kab se iss pal ki pratiksha kar rahi thi..ruko mat adiii…aur aage badho aur mujhe aaj ek aurat hone ka ehsaas kara do….ufff.”

Adii (shocked ho kar mann me)—Ye rajnandini ki awaz to kadapi nahi ho sakti…koun hai ye…?

Rajnandini ki awaz se bhinn awaz sunte hi main chounk gaya...aur jaldi se table me laga night lamp on kar diya.. phir jisko maine samne dekha to phir jhatka kha gaya…

Adii (shocked)—Chitraaa..tummm yahaaaaa….iss waqt vo bhi nangi pungi ho kar mere bistar me kya kar rahi thi…..?

Chitra—aaahhhh…mere stan aur dabao na adii…thoda jor jor se….

Ji haan, ye aur koi nahi balki chitra hi thi jo light band kar ke mere bistar me chadar taan kar sone ka natak kar rahi thi…jaise hi mujhe ehsaas hua ki mere hath chitra ke stano par hain aur chitra khud hi mere hatho ke upar apne hath rakh ke unhe daba rahi hai…to maine turant apne hath khich kar bistar se niche kood gaya.

Adii—ye…ye kya harkat hai chitra…? Jaldi se kapde pahno apne..aur jao yaha se…...agar kisi ne tumhe iss halat me mere room me dekh liya to main bina vajah phir se phans jaunga..

Chitra—koi nahi dekhega adii….sab iss samay so rahi hain…rajnandini didi bhi shree ke sath soyi huyi hain… main tumhare sath soungi.

Adii—kyaaaaa….?

Chitra—haan, maine bahut intazar kiya hai tumhara….tumne sab ko to apna liya phir mere sath hi paksh paat kyo.?

Adii—vo sab sharir dhari hain, samjhi…vaise bhi jitni chahiye thi utni ho chuki hain mere paas…lekin tum pareshan mat ho..main tumhari mukti ka bhi kuch na kuch upay jarur kaunga jaldi hi.

Chitra—mujhe mukti nahi chahiye, mujhe sirf tumhara pyar chahiye…Tumhare jane ke baad se maine kuch bhi khaya piya tak nahi hai…aur kisi ka khoon bhi nahi piya maine…kya mera jism tumhe pasand nahi aaya…?

Adii (dusri taraf muh kar ke)—sabse pahle to tum kapde pahno tabhi kuch baat karunga tumse…

Chitra—pahle meri taraf dekh kar batao ki main tumhe kaisi lag rahi hu…?

Adii—chupchap apne kapde pahno...tabhi tumhari taraf dekhunga..

Chitra—theek hai..ye lo pahan liye...ab meri taraf dekh kar baat karo…

Adii (palat kar)—chheee....niche ke kapde kaha hai.... ? warna main phir kabhi baat nahi karunga..

Chitra—nahi..nahi..to tum khud hi pahna do na kapde mujhe..

Adii—chal bhag yaha se..

Chitra (udas ho kar)—kaha jau...tumhare alawa to koi nahi hai mera... ? main yahi niche so jaungi.

Adii—chal theek hai muh mat latka.

Tabhi kisi ke kadmo ki aahat sun kar chitra vaha se adrishya ho gayi…aur phir kisi ne dhire se darwaja khol kar mere room me pravesh kiya aur aate hi mujhe piche se apni baho me bhar liya…maine palat ke dekha to ye shree thi.. main bhi shayad na pahchan pata ki ye shree hai ya phir rajnandini kintu bina sindoor ki maang dekhte hi samajh gaya ki ye shree hi hai.

Adii—didi aap yaha…itni raat me…? Neend nahi aa rahi kya…?

Shree—
Yu to nahi chahti thi, Kahni ek baat..
Soyi nahi ye ankhe, Tumse bichhadne ke baad.


Adii—wah…didi kya baat hai…aaj kal to apka andaz shayrana ho gaya hai…

Shree—mujhe meri baat ka jawab chahiye adii…

Adii—kis baat ka jawab…?

Shree—yahi ki tumne mere vishay me kya faisla kiya hai….?

Adii—ye galat hai didi….aapne kabhi ye socha hai ki agar rajnandini ko ye baat pata chalegi ki uski apni beti hi uski soutan banna chahti hai tab uske dil par kya gujregi….?

Shree—maine nishchay kar liya hai ki mere iss jeevan ki kamna, vasna, sadhna aur aradhya sab kuch tumhi ho adii.. antar dwandwa se main haar gayi hu…ab mujhse raha nahi jata...agar tumne mujhe swikar nahi kiya to sun lo main nahi jee paungi.

Uske baad shree bina kuch kahe vaha se chali gayi to main bhi chupchap let kar rajnandini aur baki sab ke vishay me sochte huye ankhe band kar ke gurudev ka dhyan karne laga…kuch hi der me unki awaz mere kano me sunayi dene lagi.

Vishwamitra—kya baat hai vats..kafi udas lag rahe ho…?

Adii—pranam gurudev

Vishwamitra—tumhara kalyan ho..

Adii—samajh me nahi aa raha hai ki kya karu gurudev…? Shree aur chitra dono hi meri barso ki sadhna ko bhang karne par tuli huyi hain...

Vishwamitra—putra..yadi nari sabhi karyo me badha hi banti hoti to vidhata shayad uski srasti hi nahi karte....nar nari dono ke samanvay me hi srasti ka rahasya aur mahatmya hai...isliye shakti ke roop me nari ka aahvahan kiya jata hai....log jis maa durga ki sadhna, upasna karte hain vah bhi to nari roopa ek mahashakti hai...tum apni jis maa ke pair chhute ho, vah bhi to ek nari hi hai...ye sab kyo bhool rahe ho...nari ussi maha shakti ka ek mahatvapurn aur mahimamay ansh hai.

Vishwamitra—nari ke do hi mukhya roop hain….mata aur patni….pahla pujya roop hai aur dusra hai bhogya roop... aadi shakti ke dono mool tatva matratva aur kumaritva inhi dono roopo ka ashray lekar prakat hote hain...isliye inka tiraskar nahi kiya ja sakta aur na hi nari ki avhelna ki ja sakti hai...iska mahatvapurn karan hai ki sarvpratham kumaritya (kaumarya) bhang hone par hi matratva ki uplabdhi hoti hai..bhog ke baad hi pujya bhav hai...pahle bhog hone par hi nari ko matratva ka sthan prapt hota hai....agar aisa na hota to tumhara, mera ya phir kisi ka bhi astitva is sansar me nahi hota.

Vishwamitra—kuwari ladki pahle patni banti hai, phir usko bhogne ke baad hi nari mata banti hai aur vah pujya ban jati hai...patni uss maha shakti ka bhogya roop hai aur mata hai uska pujya roop..yahi karan hai ki maa durga ke dono roop kumari aur mata, ki pooja hoti hai...sadhna me bhi yatha samay in dono roopo ko grahan kiya jata hai.. nari ke prati teen bhav hain...pashu bhav, veer bhav aur divya bhav....sadharan jan athwa nimn koti ke log pashu bhav se nari ka upbhog karte hain....sadhna me iss bhav ka koi sthan nahi hai....nari yaha bandhan karak aur moh karak hai...sadhak iss bhav se kafi upar hota hai, vah veer bhav se nari ko bhogya roop me swikar karta hai...yahi maya roop hai prakrati ka...

Adii—kintu main rajnandini ko kaise samjhaunga gurudev... ?

Vishwamitra—ye to tumhe sochna hai vats...jo hota hai hone do...bas tum jan kalyan me lag jao..tumhara kalyan hi kalyan hoga.

Adii—iss jan kalyan ke chakkar me hi to mera pahle bhi kalyan ho chuka hai.....lagta hai phir se vaisa hi kalyan hoga.

Gurudev mushkurate huye antardhyan ho gaye aur main bhi let kar sone ki koshish karne laga..pata nahi kab neend lag gayi.

Subah jab sabse pahle rajnandini ki neend khuli aur usne sabhi ko abhi sote huye dekha to uth kar vo mere room ki taraf bhagi..aur jaise hi vo mere room me aayi to samne ka scene dekh kar uska mood hi kharab ho gaya kyon ki chitra phir se nirvastra avastha me mere upar soyi thi…aur sath me usne mere vastra bhi gayab kar diye the jiska ki mujhe koi andesha bhi nahi tha.

Vahi dusri taraf azgar aur kilwish yaha se adi ke hatho muh ki khane ke baad phir se kisi nayi ghatna ko anzam dene par vichar karne lage...halanki dono hi sidhe sidhe taur par adii ka samna nahi karna chahte the kyon ki azgar ko ye pata tha vah uska kawach tod sakta hai phir se, to vahi kilwish bhi ek bar adii ke hatho mout ka swad chakh chukha tha.

Kilwish—hame sidhi ldayi ladne ki bajaye kuch aur hi karna hoga….?

Azgar—hmmmm….devtao ne chhal kiya hai mere sath….mera kawach todne ke baad bhi adirishi ab tak jinda kaise hai…? Avashya devtao ne mere khilaf koi sazish rachi hai…lekin unhe malum nahi ki mera naam bhi azgar hai jo apne shikar ko poora nigal jata hai…

Kilwish—hame parilok aur baki anya lok sirf bhatkane ke liye banaye hain usne…jabki khud yaha dharti lok me maze se rajnandini ke sath rah raha hai.

Azgar—maine soch liya hai ki mujhe ab kya karna hai…?

Udhar pari lok me…..
 
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