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Sanki Rajput

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First of all pahle yaar ki ye story bohot intresting feel laayi mereko sach kahu to suru ke update mai bas isitrah padhta gaya but baad me jab Himachal wale scenes create hue just amazing burnup hua ekdum tez tarar matlab ki har ek sequence tumne jis tarah iss update ke starting se banaya hai wo bohot amazing rahe kyuki baad Wale update me hi unke result samne aate Gaye ek alag hi feel karate gaye khair maine iska pahla part to nhi padha aur padhna bhi nhi chahta bcz ye part jaise ju ne aage badhai wo pahle part ka koi sense hi create nhi krti ek amazing creativity thi tumhari story me bhale tumne biina sense ke ya sense ke likhi ho but I say this time brrother ki iss story ko tumne jis trah har stage par tumne jis trah change Kiya hai aur jaise scenes samne laye wo intrest create kr diya tha story me meko aage padhne ke liye khaskar wo dipti I mean Raja ki daughter ke har scenes bohot intresting the but ek trah se jo police station wale scene hue wo bhi excitement create kr raha tha aur wo bich ke scenes jo ju ne waha se skip kiye the wo 1st part me hoga iss story ke aur ye bhi kahna galat nhi ki unn skip kiye arrival time me bohot kuch hua hoga khair idhar abhi ke chal rahe update me aate to mai yahi kahna chahunga brother ki ju thodi si aur improved kroge n abhay ke scenes ko to wo aur bhi amazing part le lega jaise ki wo raat ke scene jab abhay baith gaddi ke bonut ke upar baith ke nashe me tha aur jo bhi wo kuch kahe jaa raha usse ju aur bhi sudhar sakte ho jisse Abhay ke scenes aur intresting hojaega khair aur jo dusre dimension ke scene ju ne create kiye the wo to except kisi ne nahi kiye the haa I know unhone kuch aur hi except kiye the but ju ne jo is me martial world ka jo scenery dala wo amazing tha bohot khair keep going in as like this!!

Take care.........
 

Dirty banda

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Ise hosh me lao kya kar rhe ho jaldi kro agar thakuro ne hame dhund liya naa to jaan se hath dho baithege
rokey chillate hue bola

asal me rokey or uske admi mandir pahuch chuke the
rokey jaldi se cahta tha ki uski or avni ki shadi ho jaye taki cah kar bhi thakur use hath naa laga sake

Agle 10 mint me hi sab taiyariya puri ho chuki thi
pandit ji bhi samajh gye the ye mamla gadbad h par apni jaan kise pyaari nahi hoti

avni -(rote hue) rokey dekh mujhe chhod de me wada karti hu tujhse koi kuch nahi kahega teri jaan nhi lige plzzz mujhe jane de

avni roye jaa rahi thi ye woh ghamandi avni thakur nahi dikh rahi thi jo gussa naak par chadaye ghumti thi ye to koi dari hui ladki lag rahi thi jo bas rone ke alawa kuch nahi kar sakti thi

asal me avni or rani ghar ki 2 woh bigdi hui ladkiya thi jinhe shuru se bas ye dikhaya gya tha ki ye duniya pariyo ka mela h or iske raja unke baap or dada
unhone kabhi problem's dekhi hi nahi or agar kabhi thakur pariwar par musibat aayi bhi to inhe usse dur hi rakha gya rani or avni dono ko hi logo ko pareshan karne me bada maza aata tha
isiliye aaj jab avni musibat me thi to bas woh ro hi rahi thi

rokey - meri jaan tu meri fikar mat kar ek baar tujhse shadi karke tujhe chodlun fir thakur to kya unke purkhe bhi mujhe hath nahi laga payige



Location collage

aaaahhhh bachao hamne kuch nahi kiya aaaahhhh nhi nhi or mat maro

ye ek class room tha asal me jab thakuro ko pata chala ki unki ek beti collage behosh mili or dusri agwa ho gyi h to ranveer sanjay arav or dhananjay thakur sab pahle collage hi bhage police ke pass jane ka matlab nahi tha thakuro ke ek phone par hi puri shahar ki police apne sare kaam chod kar chal deti

jab sab collage pahuche to waha ke students arav ko bade gor se dekh rahe the kuch ke liye woh villain tha to kuch ke liye ideal

thakuro ko waha jake 5 mint nahi lage ye pata lagane me ki rani or avni ka jhagda kal hi rokey ke sath hua tha jisse unhe kisi naye ladke ne bachaya tha

zahir si baat h ayise time par sabka shaq rokey par hi gaya or bas shamat aayi rokey ke dost classmate padosi rishtedar yaha tak ke jis dukaan par rokey baith kar chai pita tha thakuro ne use bhi utha liya tha

fir shuru hua arav ka tandav usne belt uthai or jo mila jaise mila bas sutne laga

thakuro ke admi shehar me 4ro taraf khoj bin kar rahe the kuch rods or dukano se cctv ki phuteg cheq maar rahe the

Unhe abtak pata chal chuka tha ki rokey kis taraf gaya h

jab thakuro ko pata chala ki is_kand me rokey ka hath h or uska baap kon h to unhe laga isme chaudhary's ka bhi hath ho sakta h kyuki rokey ka baap chaudharyo ka admi tha

par unki soch par pani ferne kaa kaam khud shayaam Choudhary ne kiya rokey ke baap ko khud thakuro ke hawale karke sath hi satb puri chutt bhi dedi ki agar beti ke liye maarna bhi pade to maar dena

waise to rokey kaa baap police wala tha par yaha ka kanun hi 4 pariwar chala rahe the use bhi apni jaan ki bahut chinta hone lagi thi

is_sab ke bich ek or ayisa insaan tha jiski saas atki hui thi woh tha tinka chahdhary

Trin trin trin trin

tika jab se rokey or sabko phone kar raha tha likin koi uska phone pich hi nahi kar raha tha

hello

tinka - madarchod kaha mar gye the tum sab kab se phone kar raha hu

gopal - relax bhai relax yaha sab theek chal raha h par rokey or uske admi busy h or mujhe pata h tujhe avni thakur ko chodne ki jaldi h
Par ayise kamo me time lagta h

Tinka - maa chudaye Avni thakur agar apni or meri gardan bachana cahta h to shadi rok or ladki ko kuch mat hone dena

gopal hoshiyari ke mamle me kam nahi tha use samajhne me der nahi lagi ki agar uska sanki bhai apni or uski gardan ki fikar kar raha h to isme zarur uske dada or tau involve ho chuke hai

gopal gadi se utar ke mandir ki taraf bhaga ki tabhi..



me gadiyo ka picha kar raha tha ki meri gadi ke aage gay(cow) or bakriyo ka jhund aa gya unhe nikalne me 5 min lage mujhe gussa aa raha tha ayisa nahi tha ki mujhe avni ki koi parwah thi mere liye to woh bas ek zaruri mohra tha jiski abhi mujhe zarurat thi or iske bina mera khel bigad sakta tha

janwaro ka jhund gya to mene car bhagadi par aage jake dekha to 2 raste gye hue the mene sidhe raste ki taraf gadi bhagayi par 10 min baad hi mujhe lagne laga tha ki me galat raste par hu kyuki aage to dur dur tak kuch bhi nahi tha mene car back ki or is baar left wale raste par car bhagane laga

thodi der me hi mujhe ek mandir dikhne laga jiske aage gadiya khadi hui thi

(Waha thodi dur gopal ki car bhi thi jis par abhay ne dhiyaan nahi diya)

Ek car gopal se thodi dur mandir ke aage jakar ruki or
ppphhhaaattttt karke darwaza band hone ki awar aayi

Gopal - OOOOO teri ki ye kya bala h

Gopal dekh raha tha us car me se ek lambe baal wala ladka badi tezi se nikla or mandir ki taraf bhaga

Or

aaaaaaahhhhhhhh

2 ladke jo mandir ki sidhiyo ke pass hi khade the woh 20 , 30 sidhiyo se sidhe road par gire

Mere samne ab 4 ladke khade the or rokey mundap me baitha tha avni bhi uske sath baithe thi par mujhe dekhte hi woh or tez tez rone lagi

rokey - sale tera nasib kuch zada hi kharaab h jo apni mout ko dhundta hua khud hi chala aaya

abhay - (smile) meri mout to mujhe us duniya me bhi nahi mili thi tere baski baat nahi

Jab tak kisi ko meri baat ka matlab samajh aata tab tak

Aaahhhhhhh mene samne khade ladke ke pairo ke bich me kaske laat mari or woh wahi lamba lamba pad gya

use dekh kar baki 3no ladke meri taraf chale pahle ke hath me bet tha usne ghumaya or mene niche se nikal kar doge kar diya

or turant hi baki 2no ladko ki aankho me 2 2 ungliya ghusadi
meri ungliya un_dono ki aankho me ghus chuki thi unki aankho se khun bahne laga tha
mene undono ko colar se pakda or pahle wale ki taraf fek diya or woh 3no hi sidhiyo se niche girne lage

ye sab dekh kar pandit ji to behosh hi ho gye avni ko bhi saap hi sungh gya tha usne apne bhai ko 1 2 baar logo ki haddiya todte hue dekha tha uska bhai karate jaanta tha to avni ne jab bhi apne bhai ko kisi ki pitai karte hue dekha to woh hamesha hi bahut stylish or accha dikhta tha par ye kya tha

Ye to sarasar jungli_pan tha ye ladka aankho me ungliya ghusa raha tha avni ko ultiya jaisa ho raha tha par kahi naa kahi use ye sab accha bhi lag raha tha kyuki ye ladka 2 dino me dusri baat uske liye ladai kar raha tha

wahi rokey ki hawa kharaab ho chuki thi

Jab tak rokey koi baat karta tab tak woh hawa me tha or

Boom boom boom boom rokey ke 1 side ke lagbhag sabhi daat tut chuke the

unki naak or kano se khun nikalne laga tha
me abhi bhi use mare jaa raha tha mujhe rukna pada jab mujhe ahsas hua ki kisi ne mujhe piche se pakda hua h

avni - (rote hue)please use mat maro mar jayega

me - tumhe zada fikar ho rahi h to nahi maarta waise bhi pandit yahi h shadi me time nahi lagega

avni - (sisakte hue) woh nahi me nahi cahti ki tum jail jao
please chalo yaha se please

me avni ko lekar waha se nikal gaya

ek black car badi hi tezi se us mandir dur jaa rahi thi jisme ek ladka baitha muskura raha tha

gopal - accha hua usne mujhe nahi dekha warna mera bhi haal un logo jaisa hota

fir kuch soch kar

gopal -(man me ) hahahahahaha mujhe laga tha me apne maksad me kabhi kamyaab nahi ho pauga akhir kaar
ab aayega maza

30 min ke baad us mandir ke aage gadiya aake rukti h

ye thakur ke admi the inhe lead khud arav kar raha tha

jab arav or baki admi andar jake dekhte h to unhe kuch nahi dekhta sivaye khun ke dhabbo ke

admi - sir lagta h yaha ladai hui h

arav - hmmm

arav phone nikaalta h or ranveer ko phone karta h

is_waqt ranveer sanjay or dhananjay badi hi besabri se kisi bhi khabar ka intzaar kar rahe the

waise to 2no bhaiyo me koi khass baat chet nahi thi par aaj beti kaa maamla tha to dono hi sath the
ranveer ka phone baja

ranveer - haa beta bolo

arav- ........................

ranveer - kya pure shehar me alart ghoshit kardo chahe kuch bhi ho jaye avni ko kuch nahi hona chaheye sabhi hospital chaan maro

hospital ka naam aate hi sanjay or dhananjay ki saas atak gyi dhananjay kya hua ranveer hamari poti theek to h

ranveer arav ki kahi hui baat batata h

dhananjay - hmmm shant raho ranveer waha khun ka matlab h ki kisi ne avni ko rokey se chudaya h ab dekhna ye h ki use kya chaheye

ranveer - kaise shant rahu papa aapko pata h naa avni ko agar galti se bhi kuch hua to me raja sahab ko kya jawaab duga or ye bhi ho sakta h ki iske baad raja sahab arav or rajkumari ka rishta bhi tod de

ye sun kar waha baithe sanjay ki muthi kas gyi
kitna ghatiya h uska bhai yaha uski ikloti beti ki jaan ko khatra ho sakta h or uske bhai ko abhi bhi apne bete ke rishte ki padi h

arav ne apne admiyo ko phone lagaya

arav - dubara cctv ki futeg cheq kro or mujhe btao ab kon konsi gadiya gyi h or is baar raasta sahi hi batana warna.....

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aaj ke liye itna hi
(Kaha tha naa raat ko milte h)
Ab aage kya hone wala h
 

Dirty banda

Member
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First of all pahle yaar ki ye story bohot intresting feel laayi mereko sach kahu to suru ke update mai bas isitrah padhta gaya but baad me jab Himachal wale scenes create hue just amazing burnup hua ekdum tez tarar matlab ki har ek sequence tumne jis tarah iss update ke starting se banaya hai wo bohot amazing rahe kyuki baad Wale update me hi unke result samne aate Gaye ek alag hi feel karate gaye khair maine iska pahla part to nhi padha aur padhna bhi nhi chahta bcz ye part jaise ju ne aage badhai wo pahle part ka koi sense hi create nhi krti ek amazing creativity thi tumhari story me bhale tumne biina sense ke ya sense ke likhi ho but I say this time brrother ki iss story ko tumne jis trah har stage par tumne jis trah change Kiya hai aur jaise scenes samne laye wo intrest create kr diya tha story me meko aage padhne ke liye khaskar wo dipti I mean Raja ki daughter ke har scenes bohot intresting the but ek trah se jo police station wale scene hue wo bhi excitement create kr raha tha aur wo bich ke scenes jo ju ne waha se skip kiye the wo 1st part me hoga iss story ke aur ye bhi kahna galat nhi ki unn skip kiye arrival time me bohot kuch hua hoga khair idhar abhi ke chal rahe update me aate to mai yahi kahna chahunga brother ki ju thodi si aur improved kroge n abhay ke scenes ko to wo aur bhi amazing part le lega jaise ki wo raat ke scene jab abhay baith gaddi ke bonut ke upar baith ke nashe me tha aur jo bhi wo kuch kahe jaa raha usse ju aur bhi sudhar sakte ho jisse Abhay ke scenes aur intresting hojaega khair aur jo dusre dimension ke scene ju ne create kiye the wo to except kisi ne nahi kiye the haa I know unhone kuch aur hi except kiye the but ju ne jo is me martial world ka jo scenery dala wo amazing tha bohot khair keep going in as like this!!

Take care.........
Bhai me khud chezon ko intresting rakhna cahta hu isi liye abhi abhay ki personality ko bacha kar rakha gya h sabhi ko dhere dhere hi samajh aayega ki woh h kaisa kya sochta h
Or rahi baat abhay bolta kyu nahi to abhi uske pass bolne ke liye koi h hi nahi


Baki thanks for tha commant bro accha laga padh kar aage kahani me bhi sudhar hoga kahani badi h bhai
 

tpk

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Ise hosh me lao kya kar rhe ho jaldi kro agar thakuro ne hame dhund liya naa to jaan se hath dho baithege
rokey chillate hue bola

asal me rokey or uske admi mandir pahuch chuke the
rokey jaldi se cahta tha ki uski or avni ki shadi ho jaye taki cah kar bhi thakur use hath naa laga sake

Agle 10 mint me hi sab taiyariya puri ho chuki thi
pandit ji bhi samajh gye the ye mamla gadbad h par apni jaan kise pyaari nahi hoti

avni -(rote hue) rokey dekh mujhe chhod de me wada karti hu tujhse koi kuch nahi kahega teri jaan nhi lige plzzz mujhe jane de

avni roye jaa rahi thi ye woh ghamandi avni thakur nahi dikh rahi thi jo gussa naak par chadaye ghumti thi ye to koi dari hui ladki lag rahi thi jo bas rone ke alawa kuch nahi kar sakti thi

asal me avni or rani ghar ki 2 woh bigdi hui ladkiya thi jinhe shuru se bas ye dikhaya gya tha ki ye duniya pariyo ka mela h or iske raja unke baap or dada
unhone kabhi problem's dekhi hi nahi or agar kabhi thakur pariwar par musibat aayi bhi to inhe usse dur hi rakha gya rani or avni dono ko hi logo ko pareshan karne me bada maza aata tha
isiliye aaj jab avni musibat me thi to bas woh ro hi rahi thi

rokey - meri jaan tu meri fikar mat kar ek baar tujhse shadi karke tujhe chodlun fir thakur to kya unke purkhe bhi mujhe hath nahi laga payige



Location collage

aaaahhhh bachao hamne kuch nahi kiya aaaahhhh nhi nhi or mat maro

ye ek class room tha asal me jab thakuro ko pata chala ki unki ek beti collage behosh mili or dusri agwa ho gyi h to ranveer sanjay arav or dhananjay thakur sab pahle collage hi bhage police ke pass jane ka matlab nahi tha thakuro ke ek phone par hi puri shahar ki police apne sare kaam chod kar chal deti

jab sab collage pahuche to waha ke students arav ko bade gor se dekh rahe the kuch ke liye woh villain tha to kuch ke liye ideal

thakuro ko waha jake 5 mint nahi lage ye pata lagane me ki rani or avni ka jhagda kal hi rokey ke sath hua tha jisse unhe kisi naye ladke ne bachaya tha

zahir si baat h ayise time par sabka shaq rokey par hi gaya or bas shamat aayi rokey ke dost classmate padosi rishtedar yaha tak ke jis dukaan par rokey baith kar chai pita tha thakuro ne use bhi utha liya tha

fir shuru hua arav ka tandav usne belt uthai or jo mila jaise mila bas sutne laga

thakuro ke admi shehar me 4ro taraf khoj bin kar rahe the kuch rods or dukano se cctv ki phuteg cheq maar rahe the

Unhe abtak pata chal chuka tha ki rokey kis taraf gaya h

jab thakuro ko pata chala ki is_kand me rokey ka hath h or uska baap kon h to unhe laga isme chaudhary's ka bhi hath ho sakta h kyuki rokey ka baap chaudharyo ka admi tha

par unki soch par pani ferne kaa kaam khud shayaam Choudhary ne kiya rokey ke baap ko khud thakuro ke hawale karke sath hi satb puri chutt bhi dedi ki agar beti ke liye maarna bhi pade to maar dena

waise to rokey kaa baap police wala tha par yaha ka kanun hi 4 pariwar chala rahe the use bhi apni jaan ki bahut chinta hone lagi thi

is_sab ke bich ek or ayisa insaan tha jiski saas atki hui thi woh tha tinka chahdhary

Trin trin trin trin

tika jab se rokey or sabko phone kar raha tha likin koi uska phone pich hi nahi kar raha tha

hello

tinka - madarchod kaha mar gye the tum sab kab se phone kar raha hu

gopal - relax bhai relax yaha sab theek chal raha h par rokey or uske admi busy h or mujhe pata h tujhe avni thakur ko chodne ki jaldi h
Par ayise kamo me time lagta h

Tinka - maa chudaye Avni thakur agar apni or meri gardan bachana cahta h to shadi rok or ladki ko kuch mat hone dena

gopal hoshiyari ke mamle me kam nahi tha use samajhne me der nahi lagi ki agar uska sanki bhai apni or uski gardan ki fikar kar raha h to isme zarur uske dada or tau involve ho chuke hai

gopal gadi se utar ke mandir ki taraf bhaga ki tabhi..



me gadiyo ka picha kar raha tha ki meri gadi ke aage gay(cow) or bakriyo ka jhund aa gya unhe nikalne me 5 min lage mujhe gussa aa raha tha ayisa nahi tha ki mujhe avni ki koi parwah thi mere liye to woh bas ek zaruri mohra tha jiski abhi mujhe zarurat thi or iske bina mera khel bigad sakta tha

janwaro ka jhund gya to mene car bhagadi par aage jake dekha to 2 raste gye hue the mene sidhe raste ki taraf gadi bhagayi par 10 min baad hi mujhe lagne laga tha ki me galat raste par hu kyuki aage to dur dur tak kuch bhi nahi tha mene car back ki or is baar left wale raste par car bhagane laga

thodi der me hi mujhe ek mandir dikhne laga jiske aage gadiya khadi hui thi

(Waha thodi dur gopal ki car bhi thi jis par abhay ne dhiyaan nahi diya)

Ek car gopal se thodi dur mandir ke aage jakar ruki or
ppphhhaaattttt karke darwaza band hone ki awar aayi

Gopal - OOOOO teri ki ye kya bala h

Gopal dekh raha tha us car me se ek lambe baal wala ladka badi tezi se nikla or mandir ki taraf bhaga

Or

aaaaaaahhhhhhhh

2 ladke jo mandir ki sidhiyo ke pass hi khade the woh 20 , 30 sidhiyo se sidhe road par gire

Mere samne ab 4 ladke khade the or rokey mundap me baitha tha avni bhi uske sath baithe thi par mujhe dekhte hi woh or tez tez rone lagi

rokey - sale tera nasib kuch zada hi kharaab h jo apni mout ko dhundta hua khud hi chala aaya

abhay - (smile) meri mout to mujhe us duniya me bhi nahi mili thi tere baski baat nahi

Jab tak kisi ko meri baat ka matlab samajh aata tab tak

Aaahhhhhhh mene samne khade ladke ke pairo ke bich me kaske laat mari or woh wahi lamba lamba pad gya

use dekh kar baki 3no ladke meri taraf chale pahle ke hath me bet tha usne ghumaya or mene niche se nikal kar doge kar diya

or turant hi baki 2no ladko ki aankho me 2 2 ungliya ghusadi
meri ungliya un_dono ki aankho me ghus chuki thi unki aankho se khun bahne laga tha
mene undono ko colar se pakda or pahle wale ki taraf fek diya or woh 3no hi sidhiyo se niche girne lage

ye sab dekh kar pandit ji to behosh hi ho gye avni ko bhi saap hi sungh gya tha usne apne bhai ko 1 2 baar logo ki haddiya todte hue dekha tha uska bhai karate jaanta tha to avni ne jab bhi apne bhai ko kisi ki pitai karte hue dekha to woh hamesha hi bahut stylish or accha dikhta tha par ye kya tha

Ye to sarasar jungli_pan tha ye ladka aankho me ungliya ghusa raha tha avni ko ultiya jaisa ho raha tha par kahi naa kahi use ye sab accha bhi lag raha tha kyuki ye ladka 2 dino me dusri baat uske liye ladai kar raha tha

wahi rokey ki hawa kharaab ho chuki thi

Jab tak rokey koi baat karta tab tak woh hawa me tha or

Boom boom boom boom rokey ke 1 side ke lagbhag sabhi daat tut chuke the

unki naak or kano se khun nikalne laga tha
me abhi bhi use mare jaa raha tha mujhe rukna pada jab mujhe ahsas hua ki kisi ne mujhe piche se pakda hua h

avni - (rote hue)please use mat maro mar jayega

me - tumhe zada fikar ho rahi h to nahi maarta waise bhi pandit yahi h shadi me time nahi lagega

avni - (sisakte hue) woh nahi me nahi cahti ki tum jail jao
please chalo yaha se please

me avni ko lekar waha se nikal gaya

ek black car badi hi tezi se us mandir dur jaa rahi thi jisme ek ladka baitha muskura raha tha

gopal - accha hua usne mujhe nahi dekha warna mera bhi haal un logo jaisa hota

fir kuch soch kar

gopal -(man me ) hahahahahaha mujhe laga tha me apne maksad me kabhi kamyaab nahi ho pauga akhir kaar
ab aayega maza

30 min ke baad us mandir ke aage gadiya aake rukti h

ye thakur ke admi the inhe lead khud arav kar raha tha

jab arav or baki admi andar jake dekhte h to unhe kuch nahi dekhta sivaye khun ke dhabbo ke

admi - sir lagta h yaha ladai hui h

arav - hmmm

arav phone nikaalta h or ranveer ko phone karta h

is_waqt ranveer sanjay or dhananjay badi hi besabri se kisi bhi khabar ka intzaar kar rahe the

waise to 2no bhaiyo me koi khass baat chet nahi thi par aaj beti kaa maamla tha to dono hi sath the
ranveer ka phone baja

ranveer - haa beta bolo

arav- ........................

ranveer - kya pure shehar me alart ghoshit kardo chahe kuch bhi ho jaye avni ko kuch nahi hona chaheye sabhi hospital chaan maro

hospital ka naam aate hi sanjay or dhananjay ki saas atak gyi dhananjay kya hua ranveer hamari poti theek to h

ranveer arav ki kahi hui baat batata h

dhananjay - hmmm shant raho ranveer waha khun ka matlab h ki kisi ne avni ko rokey se chudaya h ab dekhna ye h ki use kya chaheye

ranveer - kaise shant rahu papa aapko pata h naa avni ko agar galti se bhi kuch hua to me raja sahab ko kya jawaab duga or ye bhi ho sakta h ki iske baad raja sahab arav or rajkumari ka rishta bhi tod de

ye sun kar waha baithe sanjay ki muthi kas gyi
kitna ghatiya h uska bhai yaha uski ikloti beti ki jaan ko khatra ho sakta h or uske bhai ko abhi bhi apne bete ke rishte ki padi h

arav ne apne admiyo ko phone lagaya

arav - dubara cctv ki futeg cheq kro or mujhe btao ab kon konsi gadiya gyi h or is baar raasta sahi hi batana warna.....

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(Kaha tha naa raat ko milte h)
Ab aage kya hone wala h
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update -21

Ise hosh me lao kya kar rhe ho jaldi kro agar thakuro ne hame dhund liya naa to jaan se hath dho baithege
rokey chillate hue bola

asal me rokey or uske admi mandir pahuch chuke the
rokey jaldi se cahta tha ki uski or avni ki shadi ho jaye taki cah kar bhi thakur use hath naa laga sake

Agle 10 mint me hi sab taiyariya puri ho chuki thi
pandit ji bhi samajh gye the ye mamla gadbad h par apni jaan kise pyaari nahi hoti

avni -(rote hue) rokey dekh mujhe chhod de me wada karti hu tujhse koi kuch nahi kahega teri jaan nhi lige plzzz mujhe jane de

avni roye jaa rahi thi ye woh ghamandi avni thakur nahi dikh rahi thi jo gussa naak par chadaye ghumti thi ye to koi dari hui ladki lag rahi thi jo bas rone ke alawa kuch nahi kar sakti thi

asal me avni or rani ghar ki 2 woh bigdi hui ladkiya thi jinhe shuru se bas ye dikhaya gya tha ki ye duniya pariyo ka mela h or iske raja unke baap or dada
unhone kabhi problem's dekhi hi nahi or agar kabhi thakur pariwar par musibat aayi bhi to inhe usse dur hi rakha gya rani or avni dono ko hi logo ko pareshan karne me bada maza aata tha
isiliye aaj jab avni musibat me thi to bas woh ro hi rahi thi

rokey - meri jaan tu meri fikar mat kar ek baar tujhse shadi karke tujhe chodlun fir thakur to kya unke purkhe bhi mujhe hath nahi laga payige



Location collage

aaaahhhh bachao hamne kuch nahi kiya aaaahhhh nhi nhi or mat maro

ye ek class room tha asal me jab thakuro ko pata chala ki unki ek beti collage behosh mili or dusri agwa ho gyi h to ranveer sanjay arav or dhananjay thakur sab pahle collage hi bhage police ke pass jane ka matlab nahi tha thakuro ke ek phone par hi puri shahar ki police apne sare kaam chod kar chal deti

jab sab collage pahuche to waha ke students arav ko bade gor se dekh rahe the kuch ke liye woh villain tha to kuch ke liye ideal

thakuro ko waha jake 5 mint nahi lage ye pata lagane me ki rani or avni ka jhagda kal hi rokey ke sath hua tha jisse unhe kisi naye ladke ne bachaya tha

zahir si baat h ayise time par sabka shaq rokey par hi gaya or bas shamat aayi rokey ke dost classmate padosi rishtedar yaha tak ke jis dukaan par rokey baith kar chai pita tha thakuro ne use bhi utha liya tha

fir shuru hua arav ka tandav usne belt uthai or jo mila jaise mila bas sutne laga

thakuro ke admi shehar me 4ro taraf khoj bin kar rahe the kuch rods or dukano se cctv ki phuteg cheq maar rahe the

Unhe abtak pata chal chuka tha ki rokey kis taraf gaya h

jab thakuro ko pata chala ki is_kand me rokey ka hath h or uska baap kon h to unhe laga isme chaudhary's ka bhi hath ho sakta h kyuki rokey ka baap chaudharyo ka admi tha

par unki soch par pani ferne kaa kaam khud shayaam Choudhary ne kiya rokey ke baap ko khud thakuro ke hawale karke sath hi satb puri chutt bhi dedi ki agar beti ke liye maarna bhi pade to maar dena

waise to rokey kaa baap police wala tha par yaha ka kanun hi 4 pariwar chala rahe the use bhi apni jaan ki bahut chinta hone lagi thi

is_sab ke bich ek or ayisa insaan tha jiski saas atki hui thi woh tha tinka chahdhary

Trin trin trin trin

tika jab se rokey or sabko phone kar raha tha likin koi uska phone pich hi nahi kar raha tha

hello

tinka - madarchod kaha mar gye the tum sab kab se phone kar raha hu

gopal - relax bhai relax yaha sab theek chal raha h par rokey or uske admi busy h or mujhe pata h tujhe avni thakur ko chodne ki jaldi h
Par ayise kamo me time lagta h

Tinka - maa chudaye Avni thakur agar apni or meri gardan bachana cahta h to shadi rok or ladki ko kuch mat hone dena

gopal hoshiyari ke mamle me kam nahi tha use samajhne me der nahi lagi ki agar uska sanki bhai apni or uski gardan ki fikar kar raha h to isme zarur uske dada or tau involve ho chuke hai

gopal gadi se utar ke mandir ki taraf bhaga ki tabhi..



me gadiyo ka picha kar raha tha ki meri gadi ke aage gay(cow) or bakriyo ka jhund aa gya unhe nikalne me 5 min lage mujhe gussa aa raha tha ayisa nahi tha ki mujhe avni ki koi parwah thi mere liye to woh bas ek zaruri mohra tha jiski abhi mujhe zarurat thi or iske bina mera khel bigad sakta tha

janwaro ka jhund gya to mene car bhagadi par aage jake dekha to 2 raste gye hue the mene sidhe raste ki taraf gadi bhagayi par 10 min baad hi mujhe lagne laga tha ki me galat raste par hu kyuki aage to dur dur tak kuch bhi nahi tha mene car back ki or is baar left wale raste par car bhagane laga

thodi der me hi mujhe ek mandir dikhne laga jiske aage gadiya khadi hui thi

(Waha thodi dur gopal ki car bhi thi jis par abhay ne dhiyaan nahi diya)

Ek car gopal se thodi dur mandir ke aage jakar ruki or
ppphhhaaattttt karke darwaza band hone ki awar aayi

Gopal - OOOOO teri ki ye kya bala h

Gopal dekh raha tha us car me se ek lambe baal wala ladka badi tezi se nikla or mandir ki taraf bhaga

Or

aaaaaaahhhhhhhh

2 ladke jo mandir ki sidhiyo ke pass hi khade the woh 20 , 30 sidhiyo se sidhe road par gire

Mere samne ab 4 ladke khade the or rokey mundap me baitha tha avni bhi uske sath baithe thi par mujhe dekhte hi woh or tez tez rone lagi

rokey - sale tera nasib kuch zada hi kharaab h jo apni mout ko dhundta hua khud hi chala aaya

abhay - (smile) meri mout to mujhe us duniya me bhi nahi mili thi tere baski baat nahi

Jab tak kisi ko meri baat ka matlab samajh aata tab tak

Aaahhhhhhh mene samne khade ladke ke pairo ke bich me kaske laat mari or woh wahi lamba lamba pad gya

use dekh kar baki 3no ladke meri taraf chale pahle ke hath me bet tha usne ghumaya or mene niche se nikal kar doge kar diya

or turant hi baki 2no ladko ki aankho me 2 2 ungliya ghusadi
meri ungliya un_dono ki aankho me ghus chuki thi unki aankho se khun bahne laga tha
mene undono ko colar se pakda or pahle wale ki taraf fek diya or woh 3no hi sidhiyo se niche girne lage

ye sab dekh kar pandit ji to behosh hi ho gye avni ko bhi saap hi sungh gya tha usne apne bhai ko 1 2 baar logo ki haddiya todte hue dekha tha uska bhai karate jaanta tha to avni ne jab bhi apne bhai ko kisi ki pitai karte hue dekha to woh hamesha hi bahut stylish or accha dikhta tha par ye kya tha

Ye to sarasar jungli_pan tha ye ladka aankho me ungliya ghusa raha tha avni ko ultiya jaisa ho raha tha par kahi naa kahi use ye sab accha bhi lag raha tha kyuki ye ladka 2 dino me dusri baat uske liye ladai kar raha tha

wahi rokey ki hawa kharaab ho chuki thi

Jab tak rokey koi baat karta tab tak woh hawa me tha or

Boom boom boom boom rokey ke 1 side ke lagbhag sabhi daat tut chuke the

unki naak or kano se khun nikalne laga tha
me abhi bhi use mare jaa raha tha mujhe rukna pada jab mujhe ahsas hua ki kisi ne mujhe piche se pakda hua h

avni - (rote hue)please use mat maro mar jayega

me - tumhe zada fikar ho rahi h to nahi maarta waise bhi pandit yahi h shadi me time nahi lagega

avni - (sisakte hue) woh nahi me nahi cahti ki tum jail jao
please chalo yaha se please

me avni ko lekar waha se nikal gaya

ek black car badi hi tezi se us mandir dur jaa rahi thi jisme ek ladka baitha muskura raha tha

gopal - accha hua usne mujhe nahi dekha warna mera bhi haal un logo jaisa hota

fir kuch soch kar

gopal -(man me ) hahahahahaha mujhe laga tha me apne maksad me kabhi kamyaab nahi ho pauga akhir kaar
ab aayega maza

30 min ke baad us mandir ke aage gadiya aake rukti h

ye thakur ke admi the inhe lead khud arav kar raha tha

jab arav or baki admi andar jake dekhte h to unhe kuch nahi dekhta sivaye khun ke dhabbo ke

admi - sir lagta h yaha ladai hui h

arav - hmmm

arav phone nikaalta h or ranveer ko phone karta h

is_waqt ranveer sanjay or dhananjay badi hi besabri se kisi bhi khabar ka intzaar kar rahe the

waise to 2no bhaiyo me koi khass baat chet nahi thi par aaj beti kaa maamla tha to dono hi sath the
ranveer ka phone baja

ranveer - haa beta bolo

arav- ........................

ranveer - kya pure shehar me alart ghoshit kardo chahe kuch bhi ho jaye avni ko kuch nahi hona chaheye sabhi hospital chaan maro

hospital ka naam aate hi sanjay or dhananjay ki saas atak gyi dhananjay kya hua ranveer hamari poti theek to h

ranveer arav ki kahi hui baat batata h

dhananjay - hmmm shant raho ranveer waha khun ka matlab h ki kisi ne avni ko rokey se chudaya h ab dekhna ye h ki use kya chaheye

ranveer - kaise shant rahu papa aapko pata h naa avni ko agar galti se bhi kuch hua to me raja sahab ko kya jawaab duga or ye bhi ho sakta h ki iske baad raja sahab arav or rajkumari ka rishta bhi tod de

ye sun kar waha baithe sanjay ki muthi kas gyi
kitna ghatiya h uska bhai yaha uski ikloti beti ki jaan ko khatra ho sakta h or uske bhai ko abhi bhi apne bete ke rishte ki padi h

arav ne apne admiyo ko phone lagaya

arav - dubara cctv ki futeg cheq kro or mujhe btao ab kon konsi gadiya gyi h or is baar raasta sahi hi batana warna.....

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aaj ke liye itna hi
(Kaha tha naa raat ko milte h)
Ab aage kya hone wala h
Awesome update bhai
 
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