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Adultery BHABHI MAA (Completed)

Chutiyadr

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bas casi bhai apne Dr. saab mein yahi ek bimaari hai .. inki gaadi mein brake lagne ka system nahi hai .. ek baar inki gaadi shuru ho gayi fir to shatabdi ki tarah farrate dar dodti hai .. chahe kisi ko pasand aaye .. ya koi apne suggestion de .. majaal hai ki ye kisi ki maan jaaye .. na ji na .. ye Dr. saab hai .. inka to ek hee funda hai .. meri story mere rules ...
bhai main sab ki sunta hu :bat:
ha lekin karta apne dil ki hu :makeup:
 

TheBlackBlood

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:thanks: dhanywad shubhu bhai :)
unke risto ko lekar aap nishchint rahe, yakin maniye aapko wo scenes bahut pasand aayenge jo dono ke bich likhe jayenge , kyoki chahe aapko lage ki speed jyda ho gai lekin fir break markar nayi shuruwat ho jayegi fir thodi speed pakdegi fir break padega , safer ka pura maja dilaunga ye wada hai , kyoki manjil me jo hoga wo sahyd aap padna pasand nai karte isliye safer ka hi thoda maja le lena :)
Bilkul dr sahab, aisa hona bhi chahiye. Mujhe pata hai ki mujhe niraash nahi hona padega. :hug:
 

TheBlackBlood

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arre shubham bhai itni jaldi aap ye kaise faisla ya andaaza laga sakte hai ki aage story mein kya hoga .. aur aise budbak lekhak ke hote hue to aisa sochna bhi paap hai ki readers ko pehle se hee ye andaaza ho ki ant mein kya hoga .. ye to aapne hamare dear Dr. saab ki as a writer insult kar di .. hamare bechare lekhak mahoday ki ek yahi to USP hai ki jo log sochte hai wohi nahi hota .. but itna muzhe andaaza hai ki ant mein jo sab ko andaaza hai hone ka, us-se pehle to beeche mein bahut kuch hona hai ...

abhi to aap ye maan kar chalo ki filhal to sirf kaurvo aur pandavo ka janm hua hai .. abhi to mahabharat ki ladai se pehle bahut kuch sadyantrr rache jaane hai, kisi ka cheer-haran hoga, to koi apni jangha ko thap-thapayega .. etc ...

lets patiently wait .. as this story unfolds ...

Hahaha thoda bahut andaza lagaya hai bhai. Ho sakta hai ki mera sochna galat ho. Magar main iske alawa aur kya kahna chaahta tha ye dr sahab ko samajh aa gaya hai. Rahi baat mahabharat ki to wo to story me hogi hi. Bina mahabharat rachaye story me maza kaise aayega. Khair chhodiye....dr sahab ki is khubsurat story ka aanand lete hain.
 

Vinayleoo0357

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Totally in love with story :kiss1: the way story started and the fight between brothers and the pure love between them is so nice. I can't wait for the next update pls update fast pls don't increase the curiosity. And take a bow for ur story.
 

Anubhavp14

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Bister to haamre pas nahi tha ham dono fars me hi let gaye the,sharir ki thakan itani thi ki nind kab aayi pata hi nahi chala,diwar se sat kar bhabhi so gayi thi wahi main unke baju me hi soya tha ,kamra itana bada bhi nahi tha ki ham kahi dur dur so sakte,do logo ke sone ke bad thodi jagh aur bachi thi ,usme hame apne baki ke saman ko rakhna ha ,khair abhi to hamare pas kuch tha hi nahi ….


Meri nind kisi ke Darwaja khatkhtane se khuli ,mere sath Bhabhi bhi jaag gai thi ,awaj dene wali koi aourat thi..maine Darwaja khola ..aur wo hame dekhkar muskurai ..


“to tum log ho jinhe kalwa rat me laaya “


Maine haa me sar hilaa diya


“oh dekhne me to achche ghar ke lagate ho bhag kar aaye ho kya ..”


Ab main unse kya kahta ,main kuch jawab deta usse pahle hi wo bol padi ..


“are chhokari tera naam kya hai..”


“ji ji arati ..”Bhabhi ne bade hi shaby tarike se kaha


“ohh to chal ynha suhab subah hi pet saf kar le warna fir bheed ho jayegi ,sarkari sulabh hai pas hi ,puri basti wahi aati hai to bheed lag jata hai ,sabhi aourate subah jaldi hi jaati hai wanha ,wahi se naha kar bhi aa jana ..”


Bhabhi ne ha me sar hilaya aur apne bag se kuch kapde nikal kar uske sath chali gai ,main fir se wahi so gaya tha lekin is bar mujhe fars ke kathorta ka abhas hone laga tha ..


1 ghante bad wo waps aa gai ,unke chahre me ek muskan thi,


Mujhse najr milte hi unhone kaha


“ynha ki aourte to hamare ganw jaisi hi hai ,lagta hai main yanha achche se rah lungi ,yanha aourte milkar ek sahkari samuh chlati hai jise sarkari madad bhi milti hai ,wo log milkr kapde silne ka kaam karti hai “


Unke ankho me aayi chamak se mujhe bahut raht mili ,thodi der me kalwa bhi aa gaya ,main uske sath chala gaya,sach me mujhe mere ganw ki hi yad aa gayi log kuch aise hi the lekin yanha ke sabhi log bas majdur hi the mujhse milne aur meri kahani janne ka koutuhal sabhi ke andr tha ,wanha mujhe pta chala ki kalwa ek tarh se ynha ka don hi hai aur jo aourt subah aayi thi wo uski biwi thi ..


Kalwa ne mujhe 9 baje tak apne sath chalne ko kaha,khana bhi kalwa ke ghar se aa gaya tha ,


“dekh janha le ja raha hu wo yanha ke baap hai ,unke samne jyda bolna mat samjha “


Kalwa ne jaate hue mujhse kaha


‘ji bhai “


Thodi der me baki ke log bhi sath ho liye ,ham fir se usi station ke pas the,bus stand ke pichhe ek godam tha kalwa wahi mujhe kaam dilwane wala tha ,mujhe bahar hi rukwa kar kalwa andr gaya thode der me mujhe bhi bula liya gaya ..


“lala sahab yahi ladka hai jiske bare me maine bataya tha “


Lala ne mujhe uper se niche tak dekha ..


“hummm dikhane me to khuch khas nahi hai fir bhi police wale ko maar diya “


Unhone mujhe ghurate hue kaha


“sahab marne ke liye sharir nahi balki jigar chahiye “


Maine bahut hi shalinta se jawab diya ,wahi kalwa mujhe ghurne lga tha jaise mujhse koi gunah ho gaya ho ,lekin shayd lala ko meri bat pasand aa gayi thi ..


“humm badiya ,chalo thik hai ise loding wale kaam me laga de ..”


“sahab kuch kam mehnat wala kaam de dijiye na naya ladka hai “kalwa ne lala se request kiya


“are naya hai to kya sala main koi dharmshala to khol ke nahi baitha hu jo hai wo karga to kare warna jaaye yanha se “


Lala ne saf saf shabdo me jawab dediya tha ,mujhe noukari karni hi thi chahe jo bhi ho jaaye ,maine kalwa ko ankho se hi ishara kiya ki mujhe kaam karne me koi dikkat nahi hai …


Aur maine jiwan ka pahla kam kiya, boriyo ko trako me utarne chadhane ka kaam ,aise laga jaise haddiya tut gai ho,tab jakar mujhe 300 rs diye gaye ,pahli bar apni kamai ko hatho me lekar main fule nahi sama raha tha,mujhe yad aaya ki gahr me khane ke liye kuch nahi hai wahi bister bhi nahi hai ,lekin 300 me akhir kya kya aa sakta tha ,


Kalwa ne mujhe desi daru offer ki lekin maine use saf mana kar diya,maine daru kabhi nahi pi thi aur pine ka koi iraada bhi nahi tha ,main to bas jaldi se jaldi jakar Bhabhi ke hatho me apni ye kamai dena chahata tha ,baki ke log daru pine chale gaye the aur main gahr ki or bhaga ..


Ghar ya wo ek kamre ki kholi hi ab mera ghar thi ,wo mere liye kis mahal se kam bhi na thi kyoki wanha meri pyari Bhabhi maa rahti hai ..


Kamre ka Darwaja khatkhtana nahi pada kyoki wo pahle se hi khuli hui thi ,wanha mujhe do mahilaye baithi hui dikhai di ..


Bhabhi mujhe dekhte hi khus ho gayi thi ..


“achcha arati ham chalate hai …”wo dono hi muskurate hue nikl gaye ..


Main dekhe kar hairan tha ,kone me ek chulha bana diya gaya tha wahi ek ghada bhi rakha hua tha ,kuch bartan aur rashan saman ke dibbe ..


“ye kya hai Bhabhi ..”


Wo muskurai


“are yanha ke log dil ke bahut achche hai dekhne me garib jarur hai lekin dil ke bahut hi bade log hai ,pas ki rashan ki dukan wale se meri pahchan karwa di usne udhar me saman de diya aur ye bichhane ke liye bister bhi pas ke dukan se udhar me le aayi ,Shobha(kaliya ki biwi) boli ki jab tujhe pahli pagar milegi to sab louta dena ,janta hai yanha par kapde silne ka bada saa samuh hai supervisor ne to mujhe dekhte hi kaam par rakh liya …ab sab thik ho jaayega sonu dil lagakar kaam karungi aur tu fir se padna shuru kar sakata hai ab “


Main khus tha isliye kyo ki ye sab ho raha tha, nahi, balki isliye kyoki isse Bhabhi ke chahre me chamk thi ,wo khus thi aur unke khusi ke liye main koi bhi kimat chukane ko taiyar tha …


Maine jeb se apni pahli kaamai nikaali aur unke aage kar diya ..


“Bhabhi ye meri pahli kaamai “


Ise dekhkar wo bahut hi bhawuk ho gai lekin jaise unhone mere hatho ko chhua unhone ise dhyan se dekhaa ..


“tere hatho me to chhale pad gaye hai..”


Unke ankho se pani girne lga tha..


“haa adat nahi hai na isliye kuch din me adat ho jayegi “


Unhone khichkar mujhe apne sine se lga liya..


“nahi nahi tu kal se aise kaam me nahi jayega main kaise bhi karke kuch kama lungi tu bas padai kar, ye din dekhne ke liye to nahi aaya tha na mere sath “


“oho Bhabhi aap bhi na, dono milkar kamayenge tab to yanha se nikl paayenge ,warna kya sari jindagi yahi rahna hai “


“nahi sonu tujhe meri kasam hai tu aisa kaam nahi karega “


Maine usne chahre ko apne hatho se jakad liya ,usnka wo pyara sa chahra unke hi ansuo se bheeg chuka tha ,badi badi ankhe abhi bhi nam thi ,mujhe apne bhai ki kismat par dukh hota hai ki usne inhe chhod diya tha ,itani sunder, mamta se bhari hui thi meri Bhabhi ,maine bade hi pyar se unke galo me ek kiss kiya ,mere hotho me unke ansu bhi lag gaye the thoda saa namkin sa swad mere jibh me laga ..


“Bhabhi main ab bachcha nahi hu pura mard ban gaya hu ,aap kyo fikra karti ho ,main pdhunga bhi aur kamaunga bhi ,aur apni Bhabhi ko rani banakar rakhunga “


Mere bat se unke hotho me ek muskan to tairi lekin ankhe abhi bhi gili hi thi ,unhone mere galo par apna hath rakh diya aur bade hi mamta se sahlaya ..


“itana payr kyo karta hai tu apne Bhabhi se “


Maine unhe pas bichhe hue bister me bitha diya aur unke god me sar rakhkar let gaya …


“kyoki aapne mujhe jitana payr diya utana to meri maa ne bhi mujhe nahi diya,aap mere liye meri maa ho meri badi bahan bhi ho ,aur meri sabse achchi dost bhi …”


Wo bade hi pyar se mere balo ko sahla rahi thi aur thoda jhuk kar unhone mere mathe par ek kiss kiya ..


“chal ab pyar jatana ho gaya ho to kuch khane ke liye bana du bahut bhukh lag rahi hai “


Main bhi unke god se uth gaya tha…


“bhookh to mujhe bhi badi tej lagi hai lekin khayenge kya ???”


Wo thodi der sochi fir dhyan se rashan ki or dekhne lgi


“sabjiya to hai nahi aaj khichadi hi kha lete hai “


Jab sone ka samy aaya to main thoda asmanjas me fans gaya tha ,bister ek hi tha jo ki jamin me bichha hua tha aur Bhabhi usme so nahi rahi thi ..


“mujhe kuch nahi pata bister me tu soyega main fars me hi soungi “


Unhone jid ki


“kya Bhabhi aap bhi aap bister me soiye main fars me sounga “


“are tu itani mehnat kar raha hai tere sharir ko jyda aram ki jarurat hai “


Unhone mujhe lagbhag dantate hue hi kaha ..


“achcha ager aap bistar me nahi sowogi to main bhi nahi sota jaao “


Maine jhuthmuth hi sahi apna muh fula liya tha ..wo mere galo ko apne hatho me bhar li .aur joro se hilaa diya


“badmash kahi ka …chal thik hai dono hi so jaate hai “


Maine ek bar unhe dekha, wo bas muskura rahi thi , unhone bister bichhaya aur fir kone me so gai bister me thodi si hi jagh bachi thi ..


“aaja yanha so “


Main thoda ghabra raha tha ..


“are itana bada ho gaya hai abhi bhi mujhse ghabrata hai ,chal aa “


Main unke baju me jakar let to gaya tha lekin unka jism mere jism se chhu raha tha aur wahi mujhme thodi ajib si felling ka janm ho rha tha ,unhone mera chahra apni or kiya aur mere mathe me ek kiss kar diya ..


“soja bete …”


Unke chahre me aayi wo pyari si muskan itani pyari thi ki main bas use dekhta hua kho hi gya tha ..


“kya hua ?? aise kyo dekh raha hai “


“aap bahut hi payri ho Bhabhi “


Main ab bhi unhe dekh raha tha ..wo bas muskurai


“chalo so jaao “


Wo palat kar so gai ,


Unhone abhi ek purani saree pahni thi aur blouse, unki pith ka kuch hissa mujhe dikh raha tha lekin unke lambe bal bikhre hue the,pata nahi mere ander kya hua main unse sat gaya aur balo ko ek tarf karke unke khule hue kandhe par ek kiss kar diya …


“sonu ..”


Bhabhi ne halke se kha lekin wo palti nahi maine apne hath ko unki kamar se lapet liya aur unse bilkul hi sat kar sone lga …


Mere pure sharir me kaam ki wajah se aaj tagada dard tha aur bister komal to nahi lekin fars se to behtar tha meri nind lagne lgi thi aur mera ek pair Bhabhi ke kmar ko gher chuka tha ,nind me achank mujhe aisa laga jaise kisi ne mere hatho ko pakda hai ,shayd mere hath bhabhi ke pet se uthate hue unke vaksh sthalo(boobs) tak pahuchne wale the isliye Bhabhi ne bade hi pyar se use pakdkar niche kar diya tha ,mere chahre me bas ek muskan thi aur ankho me ab gahari nind….

Bhot bhot bhot bhot pyara update spsly jo ending thi .....
Kalwa ki biwi ki madad se bhabi ko bhi job mil gayi aur Kalwa ne Sonu ko bhi dilwa di ..
Sonu ka ye kaam karna bhabhi ko pasand nahi aya sayad unke man se abhi tak ye nahi gaya ki usko ye sab kaam sirf isiliye karna pad raha hai kyu ki wo unke saath aya....aur dekhte hai bhabhi ne to kasam se de di hai sonu kya karta hai aur

Bhot hi acha update Dr Bhaiya ese hi likhte rahiye ... Bhot achi chal rahi hai story
 

Chutiyadr

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Totally in love with story :kiss1: the way story started and the fight between brothers and the pure love between them is so nice. I can't wait for the next update pls update fast pls don't increase the curiosity. And take a bow for ur story.
:thanks: dhanywad vinay bhai :)
 
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