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Romance Bepanaah Ishq (Completed)

Dhaal Urph Pradeep

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Bahar aate hi Swati rone lagti hai.

Swati: Rote hue. Mujhse Sonal ki yeh halat nhi dekhi jaati.
Yash: Swati sambhalo khud ko. Aise rone se kuch nhi hogaa.

Swati: Kaise sambhalu Yash. Aaj hi usko hosh aaya hai aur woh sawaal puchne lagi hai jiska humare paas koi jawaab nhi hai.

Meera: Swati aise mat ro. Humhe ab Sonal ke saare sawaalo ke jawab taiyaar karne honge. Yeh tum bhi jaanti ho aur hum bhi jaante hai Sonal chup baithne walo mein se nhi hai.

Swati: Jaanti hu Mummy. Aur yehi chiz ka darr hai mujhe. Kahi Sonal ko saamne koi aisi baat naa nikal jaaye jisse usse problem ho.

Meera: Humhe sambhalna hoga. Aur Raj Sonal ke waise behaviour ke liye main tumse maafi maangti hu.

Raj: Aaplog aisa naa bole. Sonal patni hai meri. Uska pura haq hai mujhpar. Usne mujhe jo bhi bola hai woh sab anjaane mein bola hai. Abhi humhe issbaat ke upar dhyaan dena chahiye ke Sonal ko kyaa batana hai aur kaise batana hai.

Phir sablog baithke taiyaari karne lagte hai ke Sonal ko kyaa batana aur kaise batana hai.

Idher Sonal andar room mein Raj ke baare mein hi soch rahi thi.

Sonal: Kaun thaa woh. Aur kaise mujhe touch kar raha tha mere permission ke bina. Jaise main uski biwi hu. Agli baar agar mujhe touch karne ki koshish bhi ki toh maardungi usse.

Sonal ki nazar mein Raj ka impression uss harqat se thoda down hogya tha. Aur ab Sonal Raj ko naa pasand karne lagi thi. Kyoki usko lag raha tha woh jaanmuzz ke usko touch kar raha tha jo usko bilkul bhi pasand nhi hai. Kaha pehli hi nazar mein usko apna sab kuch maan baithi thi aur ab ussi insaan ko woh naa pasand karti hai.

Sonal: Par main yaha hospital mein kaisi aayi. Mujhe kuch yaad kyo nhi hai. Dimaag mein jyaada jorr bhi nhi de sakti doctor ne mana bhi kiya hai. Aur woh aunty woh kitni achhi thi unhone jab mujhe chuaa toh aisa laga jaise meri Mummy ne mujhe chuaa hai.

Par woh sablog kaun the. Papa ne kaha tha wohlog Kapoor Uncle ke gharwale hai. Par main unhe pehchan hi nhi paayi. Kitne saal pehle dekha tha unhe.

Yeh sab sochte hue bhi Sonal ka dhyaan baar baar Raj ke touch ki taraf jaaraha tha jo usse bahot pareshan kar raha tha. Woh yeh accept nhi kar paarahi thi.

Thodi der baad Raj Deepak Karan Nandini doctor se milne jaate hai.

Raj: Doctor kaisi halat hai ab Sonal ki.

Doctor: Woh physically jaldi recover hojayengi. Par mentally kuch keh nhi sakte.

Deepak: Hum usse ghar kab tak le jaasakte hai Doctor.

Doctor: Aaplog chahe toh usse ghar le jaasakte hai. Par jaisa maine kal kaha tha unke dimaag mein jyaada pressure naa padhe uska khayak rakhna hoga.

Raj: Aap bilkul chinta naa karee Hum uska pura khayal rakhenge.

Doctor: Thikk hai. Aur yeh dhyaan rakhiyega ke abhi woh apne pairon mein koi jorr naa de.

Nandini: Aap chinta naa kare. Iska dhyaan main rakhungi ke Sonal ke pairon mein koi jorr naa padhe.

Doctor: Thikk hai toh main discharge paper taiyaar karwata hu. Aaplog unhe ghar le jaaye aur woh medicines time to time dete rahiye.

Raj: Thank You doctor. Kyaa aapka number mil sakta hai agar kabhi koi emergency aagayi toh...

Doctor: Yeah Sure why not. Phir doctor Raj ko apna card de deta hai.

Raj: Thank You Doctor.

Phir sab waha se nikal jaate hai.

Raj: Bhaiya aap Jijaji ke saath milke ghar jaane ki taiyaari kijiye. Bhabhi aap jara Sonal ko ready karwa dijiye. Main Hospital ka bill payment karke discharge paper leke aata hu. Yeh bol Raj chala jaata hai.

Nandini sidha Sonal ke kamre mein jaati hai jaha pehle se hi Savitri Smita Ragini Meera Shruti Payal Ishita aur Swati baithe hue the. Aur inhone apna apna intro Sonal ko de diya tha. Jaise hi Nandini room mein enter karti hai toh Sonal bolti hai.

Sonal: Aap kaha gayi thi bhabhi.

Nandini yeh sunke ek pal hairan rehti hai aur sochti hai ke Sonal ko sab yaad aagaya. Par agle hi pal woh haqiqat mein aajati hai.

Nandini: Main doctor ke paas gayi thi. Unhone chutti de di hai ab chalo ghar chalte hai.

Thodi der baad Raj discharge paper leke andar aata hai tab tak Sonal taiyaar hogyi thi. Sonal ki nazar jaise hi Raj ke upar padhti hai toh usko bahot gussa aajata hai.

Sonal: Tumm. Tumhari himmat kaise hui yaha aane ki. Niklo bahar. Mummy aap isse abhi ke abhi bahar nikaliye.
Sonal ke aise behaviour pe sab log shock hojaate hai. Jo Sonal kabhi Raj se aankhe utha ke baat nhi karti thi woh aaj usse aise baat kar rahi hai.

Smita: Kyaa hua Sonal. Tum isse aise kyo baat kar rahi ho. Tum janti ho yeh kaun hai.

Sonal: Chachi ji yeh ek badtameez insaan hai. Mujhe touch kar raha tha meri permission ke bina. Aur mere haatho ko kas ke pakde hue tha. Shakal se toh shareef hai par harqate bilkul bhi shareef nhi hai. Aur tum abhi tak yehi khade ho. Maine kaha naa niklo bahar.

Sonal ki baat pe sab Raj ko ghurr ke dekhte hai jaise puch rahe ho yehsab kyaa hai.

Smita: Sonal beta shant hojaao. Kyaa tumne isse nhi pehchana. Yeh Raj hai.

Sonal: Raj hai toh main kyaa karu. Naam Raj hone se kya yeh koi mahan bangaya. Aur main kisi Raj ko nhi.......

Abhi Sonal ne itna hi bola tha ke usse kuch yaad aata hai aur woh ghurr ke Raj ko dekhti hai aur usse pehchan ne ki koshish karti hai. Par jab Sonal ne Raj ko ghurr ke dekha toh usko thoda ajeeb lag raha tha aur uske sir mein halka sa dard hua.

Sonal: Aaahhhhh mera Sir.

Sonal ke aise bolne se sabko tension hojaati hai khaash karke Raj ko. Woh Sonal ke paas aana chahta tha par aa nhi paaya.

Swati: Kyaa hua Sonal. Sir dard kar raha hai.

Sonal: Haa di. Halka sa sir dukh raha hai aur ajeeb lag raha hai. Aisa lag raha hai jaise main isse bahot baar mil chuki hu.

Smita: Aree Sonal yeh Raj hai mera beta. Tumdono bachpan mein kitna khelte the. Aur tumne sahi toh kaha tum isse bahot baar milchuki ho. Ab itne saal baad dekh rahi ho upar se tumhare sir mein chot hai isiliye yaad nhi raha hoga aur dard horaha hoga. Tum jyaada jorr mat do apne dimaag mein.

Smita ne baat ko toh sambhal liya tha par Sonal ki baat se Raj ki aankho mein thodi nami aagayi thi.

Sonal jab sunti hai ke Raj kaun hai toh usse thoda sa jhatka lagta hai aur usse thoda sa pachtava hota hai ke usne Raj ke saath thodi badtameezi kardi.

Sonal: Kyaaa yeh Rajjj hai.

Smita: Haaa. Ab kuch yaad aaya.

Sonal: Nazre nichhe kiye hue. I am Sorry. Main aapko pehchan nhi paayi aur naajaane kya kya boldiya.

Raj: Nam aankho se. Tumhe sorry bolne ki koi jarurat nhi hai. Yeh mera bad luck hai ke tum mujhe bhul gayi ho. Yeh bolte hue Raj ki aakho se 2 boond aansu ke nikal jaate hai.

Raj ke bolne ka matlab sabko samaj aagaya tha ke woh kyaa bolna chah raha hai.

Sonal: Main samjhi nhi.

Raj: Choro. Yeh batao tum kaisi ho ab.

Sonal: Abhi thik hai. Bas thoda sir bhaari hai.

Raj: Jaldi thikk hojayega. Chalo ghar chalte hai.

Sonal: Par mere pairr.

Raj: Agar permission ho toh main touch kar sakta hu tumhe.

Sonal: Nazre nichhe karke. Main apne kiye pe sharminda hu. I am sorry.

Raj: Maine kaha naa tumhe sorry bolne ki jarurat nhi hai. Waise bhi galti meri thi mujhe tumhe uss tarah touch nhi karna chahiye tha. Par kya ab main tumhe touch kar sakta hu.

Sonal: Jiii.


Phir Raj Sonal ko apni godd mein utha ke wheel chair mein achhe se baitha deta hai aur phir uski chair ko dhakel ke hospital ke bahar lejaane lagta hai. Baaki sab bhi unke pichhe pichhe chalne lagte hai.

सारा किस्सा ही पलट गया खुशहाल ज़िंदगी अस्त व्यस्त होकर दायरे में सिमट गई। कहा सोनल राज से ऊंची आवाज़ में बात करना तो छोड़े ढंग से नजरे नहीं मिलती थीं लेकिन एक दुर्घटना से सब बदलकर रख दिया सोनल का प्यार जो वो राज से बेपन्ह करती थीं वो कहीं पीछे छूट गया। जहां पहली नजर के आकर्षण ने प्यार का रूप ले लिया था आज वहीं टच ने बेआदगी का रूप ले लिया। सोनल की कहीं हुई एक एक बात राज के दिल को छोट पहुंचा गई लेकिन राज की मजबूरी हैं की वो बता भी नहीं सकता सोनल मैं तुम्हारा पहला प्यार हु तुम्हारा पति हूं।

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Update 58
Thodi der mein jab dono police station pahonchte hai toh dekhte hai Ranjeet ki Maa jiska naam Reshma hai uski rihai hochuki hai.

Raj aur Karan gaadi se utar ke uske saamne se andar jaate hai aur woh dono ko gusse se ghurr ke dekh rahi thi par filhal woh koi panga nhi karna chahti thi isiliye chup hi rahi.

Karan: Inspector saari taiyaari hochuki hai.

Inspector: Haa Sir. Ek lady constable civil dress mein ready hai.

Karan: Good. Usko bol do ek pal ke liye bhi isko apne nazro se durr naa karee. Aur sambhal ke rahee.

Inspector: Yes Sir.

Phir woh inspector waha se chala jaata hai.

Idher Reshma police station se nikal ke waha se ek taxi karti hai aur nikal padhti hai apni manzil ki taraf aur uske pichhe pichhe woh lady inspector bhi jaarahi thi.

Takreeban 1 ghante ke baad Reshma taxi ko ek ghar ke bahar rokhti hai. Jo ki aisi jagah mein tha jaha bahot kam log hi rehte the.

Reshma taxi se utar ke charo taraf nazar ghuma ke dekhti hai jab usse yakeen hojaata hai ke koi uske pichhe nhi hai toh woh uss ghar ke darwaaze pe aake bell bajati hai.

Bell bajane ke kuch der baad ek aadmi darwaza kholta hai aur woh Reshm ko dekh kar khush hojaata hai.

Aadmi: Aakhir kaar aayi hi gayi tum.

Reshma: Woh toh aana hi tha. Ab jaldi se andar chalo. Agar kisi ne dekh liya toh musibat hojayegi.

Phir dono ghar ke andar chale jaate hai.

Lady Constable apni location Inspector ko bhej deti hai phir usko call karti hai.

Lady Constable: Sir maine aapko location bhej di hai. Rajesh ko maine dekha hai. Umeed hai Ranjeet bhi andar hi hogaa. Aaplog jaldi se aajaiye.

Inspector: Thikk hai tum waha pe hi raho aur nazar rakho hum thodi der mein aate hai.

Lady Constable: Yes Sir.

Phir Inspector Karan ke paas aata hai.

Inspector: Sir unka pata chal gaya hai. Humhe jaldi nikalna chahiye.

Karan: Greatt jaldi chalo. Aur woh arrest warrant bhi sang le lo.

Inspector: Yess Sir.

Phir Karan aur Raj nikal padhte hai uss location ki taraf. Inspector bhi kuch hawaldaar leke nikal padhta hai.

1 ghante ke baad woh log uss location pe pahonch jaate hai.

Karan: Kaha hai woh log.

Lady Constable: Sirr uss ghar mein hai.

Karan: Thikk hai. Inspector uss ghar ko gherr lo. Aaj woh bachh ke jaana nhi chahiye.

Inspector: Yes Sir.

Phir Inspector Hawaldaar ke saath ghar ko charo taraf se gherr leta hai. Aur Karan ko ishara karta hai.

Karan: Tum(Lady Constable) bell bajao.

Lady Constable bell bajati hai toh thodi der baad Reshma darwaaza kholti hai.

Reshma: Aap kaun aur kisse milna hai.

Lady Constable: Main teri saas. Tujhe sasuraal le jaane aayi hu.

Reshma: Matlab.

Karan: Matlab main samjhata hu.

Reshma Karan ko dekh kar darr jaati hai aur chillane hi wali hoti hai tabhi lady constable usko pakad leti hai aur uske muh ko band kardeti hai.

Karan: Agar chillane ki koshish karegi toh yehi thokk dunga. Phir Karan sabko leke andar aata hai toh dekhta hai Rajesh aur Ranjeet hall mein baithe baate kar rahe hai.

Karan: Karle jitni baate karni hai. Aajke baad tum dono baat karne toh kya kuch bhi karne ki halat mein nhi rahoge.

Rajesh aur Ranjeet Karan Raj aur baaki police walo ko dekh kar darr jaate aur pichhe ke raaste se bhaagne ki koshish karte hai. Jaise hi pichhe ka darwaaza kholte hai police unko pakad leti hai aur ghaseet ke unko andar leke aati hai.

Karan: Bahot bhaag liya aur bahot karli apni manmaani ab marte dum tak sadte rehna jail mein.

Ranjeet: Choro mujhee. Maine kaha choro mujheee.

Raj jo gusse se Ranjeet ko dekhe jaa raha tha woh ishare se hawaldaar ko bolta hai Ranjeet ko chor dene ko.

Jaise hi Hawaldaar Ranjeet ko chorta hai Raj Ranjeet ke seene mein ek laat maarta hai jisse woh durr jaake girta hai.

Raj: Tujhe aaj main nhi chorunga. Tune meri masoom si Sonal ko maarne ki koshish ki. Aaj tujhe yehi zinda gaar dunga. Yeh bol woh Ranjeet ke paas jaake usko maarne lagta hai. Kabhi laat kabhi ghushe usko andhadhun maarne lagta hai.

Raj apna saara gussa Ranjeet ke upar nikalta hai. Ranjeet ki halat kharab hochuki thi. Uske pure chehre se khoon beh raha tha.

Karan jaake Raj ko rokhta hai.

Karan: Bas kar Raj bas kar. Mar jaayega woh. Aur mat maar.

Raj: Mujhe chorr do bhaiyaa. Jaan le lunga main iski. Isne meri Sonal ko maarne ki koshish ki hai. Maardungaa isse main aaj.

Karan: Nhii Rajj. Yeh kaam tera nhi hai. Chorr de usse. Tujhe teri Sonal ki kasam chorr de usse.

Sonal ki kasam sunte hi Raj shant hojaata hai aur Karan ko dekhta hai.

Karan: Shant hojaa mere bhai. Isne jo kiya uski saza isse mil ke rahegi. Par gusse mein tu koi aisa kaam naa kar jisee tere pichhe Choti Mummy Sonal aur hum sab ko dukhh ho.

Karan ki baat sunke Raj puri tarah shant hojaata hai. Phir Karan adhmaare Ranjeet ko uthata hai aur usko ek thappad khinch ke maarta hai jisse woh wapas jaake nichhe girta hai.

Karan: Inspector arrest karo isse.

Inspector aake Ranjeet ko uthata hai aur uske haath mein hatkari lagata hai aur iss dauran Raj usko ghuree jaa raha tha.

Phir Karan aur Raj aage chalne lagte hai. Idher Inspector Ranjeet ko le jaane lagta hai. Par tabhi Ranjeet apni puri chalaki se Inspector se uski gun chinn ke usko dhakka de deta hai aur gun ko Raj ke upar point kardeta hai.

Ranjeet: Rajjjjjjj.

Sablog pichhe ghumm ke dekhte hai toh shock hojaate hai. Karan bhi apni gun nikal ke Ranjeet ke upar point kardeta hai.

Karan: Ranjeet gunn fhekk de. Tu chahe kuch bhi karle par tu bachega nhiii.

Ranjeet: Abeee chuppp. Mujhe pata hai main marunga. Par main akele nhi marunga. Mere sabse bade dushman iss Raj Kapoor ke leke marungaa.

Karan: Ranjeet main bol raha hu gun fhekk dee. Warna yehi tujhe thokk dungaa.

Ranjeet: Gun tu fhekk Karan. Warna tera bhai toh marega hi saath main tu bhi maregaa. Sunaa hai teri haseen biwi ne bete ko janam diya hai. Bechera iss umar hi anaath hogaa. Yeh bol hasne lagta hai.

Karan: Gusse se. Kamine apni hadd mein reh. Warna yehi tujhe zinda garr dungaa.

Ranjeet: Rajjj. Tune mere har kaam mein apni taang adaayi. Main jiss project ko paana chahta usse tu chinn leta. Teri uss kamsin behen se thodi baat kyaa karli tune bharee bazaar mein meri beizaati ki. Tujhe tere parivaar ke saamne beizaat karne ki koshish ki par tere iss bhai ne tujhe bacha liya aur humsab ko jail meim daal diya.

Teri hi shaadi mein tujhe maarne ki koshish ki par tu bachh gaya. Phir baari aayi teri biwi ki. Manna padega badi haseen aur kamsin hai. Par saali woh bhi bachh gayi. Par aaj nhi aaj tujhe maar ke apna badla lunga.

Raj: Ranjeet tune apni gandi jabaan se meri biwi ke baare mein bolke apne din pure karliye. Aaj tu yehi maregaa.

Ranjeet: Jorr jorr se hasta hua. Mujhe pata hai main marunga. Par tujhe maarne ke baad. Yeh bol ek nazar sab pe ghumta hai aur goli chala deta hai.


Par idher ek nhi do goli chalti hai. Ek Ranjeet ke gun se aur dusri Karan ke gun se. Par chikhh sirf 1 jan ki nikalti hai.
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Karan: Bas kar Raj bas kar. Mar jaayega woh. Aur mat maar.

Raj: Mujhe chorr do bhaiyaa. Jaan le lunga main iski. Isne meri Sonal ko maarne ki koshish ki hai. Maardungaa isse main aaj
Reality...
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Naina

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Update 58
Thodi der mein jab dono police station pahonchte hai toh dekhte hai Ranjeet ki Maa jiska naam Reshma hai uski rihai hochuki hai.

Raj aur Karan gaadi se utar ke uske saamne se andar jaate hai aur woh dono ko gusse se ghurr ke dekh rahi thi par filhal woh koi panga nhi karna chahti thi isiliye chup hi rahi.

Karan: Inspector saari taiyaari hochuki hai.

Inspector: Haa Sir. Ek lady constable civil dress mein ready hai.

Karan: Good. Usko bol do ek pal ke liye bhi isko apne nazro se durr naa karee. Aur sambhal ke rahee.

Inspector: Yes Sir.

Phir woh inspector waha se chala jaata hai.

Idher Reshma police station se nikal ke waha se ek taxi karti hai aur nikal padhti hai apni manzil ki taraf aur uske pichhe pichhe woh lady inspector bhi jaarahi thi.

Takreeban 1 ghante ke baad Reshma taxi ko ek ghar ke bahar rokhti hai. Jo ki aisi jagah mein tha jaha bahot kam log hi rehte the.

Reshma taxi se utar ke charo taraf nazar ghuma ke dekhti hai jab usse yakeen hojaata hai ke koi uske pichhe nhi hai toh woh uss ghar ke darwaaze pe aake bell bajati hai.

Bell bajane ke kuch der baad ek aadmi darwaza kholta hai aur woh Reshm ko dekh kar khush hojaata hai.

Aadmi: Aakhir kaar aayi hi gayi tum.

Reshma: Woh toh aana hi tha. Ab jaldi se andar chalo. Agar kisi ne dekh liya toh musibat hojayegi.

Phir dono ghar ke andar chale jaate hai.

Lady Constable apni location Inspector ko bhej deti hai phir usko call karti hai.

Lady Constable: Sir maine aapko location bhej di hai. Rajesh ko maine dekha hai. Umeed hai Ranjeet bhi andar hi hogaa. Aaplog jaldi se aajaiye.

Inspector: Thikk hai tum waha pe hi raho aur nazar rakho hum thodi der mein aate hai.

Lady Constable: Yes Sir.

Phir Inspector Karan ke paas aata hai.

Inspector: Sir unka pata chal gaya hai. Humhe jaldi nikalna chahiye.

Karan: Greatt jaldi chalo. Aur woh arrest warrant bhi sang le lo.

Inspector: Yess Sir.

Phir Karan aur Raj nikal padhte hai uss location ki taraf. Inspector bhi kuch hawaldaar leke nikal padhta hai.

1 ghante ke baad woh log uss location pe pahonch jaate hai.

Karan: Kaha hai woh log.

Lady Constable: Sirr uss ghar mein hai.

Karan: Thikk hai. Inspector uss ghar ko gherr lo. Aaj woh bachh ke jaana nhi chahiye.

Inspector: Yes Sir.

Phir Inspector Hawaldaar ke saath ghar ko charo taraf se gherr leta hai. Aur Karan ko ishara karta hai.

Karan: Tum(Lady Constable) bell bajao.

Lady Constable bell bajati hai toh thodi der baad Reshma darwaaza kholti hai.

Reshma: Aap kaun aur kisse milna hai.

Lady Constable: Main teri saas. Tujhe sasuraal le jaane aayi hu.

Reshma: Matlab.

Karan: Matlab main samjhata hu.

Reshma Karan ko dekh kar darr jaati hai aur chillane hi wali hoti hai tabhi lady constable usko pakad leti hai aur uske muh ko band kardeti hai.

Karan: Agar chillane ki koshish karegi toh yehi thokk dunga. Phir Karan sabko leke andar aata hai toh dekhta hai Rajesh aur Ranjeet hall mein baithe baate kar rahe hai.

Karan: Karle jitni baate karni hai. Aajke baad tum dono baat karne toh kya kuch bhi karne ki halat mein nhi rahoge.

Rajesh aur Ranjeet Karan Raj aur baaki police walo ko dekh kar darr jaate aur pichhe ke raaste se bhaagne ki koshish karte hai. Jaise hi pichhe ka darwaaza kholte hai police unko pakad leti hai aur ghaseet ke unko andar leke aati hai.

Karan: Bahot bhaag liya aur bahot karli apni manmaani ab marte dum tak sadte rehna jail mein.

Ranjeet: Choro mujhee. Maine kaha choro mujheee.

Raj jo gusse se Ranjeet ko dekhe jaa raha tha woh ishare se hawaldaar ko bolta hai Ranjeet ko chor dene ko.

Jaise hi Hawaldaar Ranjeet ko chorta hai Raj Ranjeet ke seene mein ek laat maarta hai jisse woh durr jaake girta hai.

Raj: Tujhe aaj main nhi chorunga. Tune meri masoom si Sonal ko maarne ki koshish ki. Aaj tujhe yehi zinda gaar dunga. Yeh bol woh Ranjeet ke paas jaake usko maarne lagta hai. Kabhi laat kabhi ghushe usko andhadhun maarne lagta hai.

Raj apna saara gussa Ranjeet ke upar nikalta hai. Ranjeet ki halat kharab hochuki thi. Uske pure chehre se khoon beh raha tha.

Karan jaake Raj ko rokhta hai.

Karan: Bas kar Raj bas kar. Mar jaayega woh. Aur mat maar.

Raj: Mujhe chorr do bhaiyaa. Jaan le lunga main iski. Isne meri Sonal ko maarne ki koshish ki hai. Maardungaa isse main aaj.

Karan: Nhii Rajj. Yeh kaam tera nhi hai. Chorr de usse. Tujhe teri Sonal ki kasam chorr de usse.

Sonal ki kasam sunte hi Raj shant hojaata hai aur Karan ko dekhta hai.

Karan: Shant hojaa mere bhai. Isne jo kiya uski saza isse mil ke rahegi. Par gusse mein tu koi aisa kaam naa kar jisee tere pichhe Choti Mummy Sonal aur hum sab ko dukhh ho.

Karan ki baat sunke Raj puri tarah shant hojaata hai. Phir Karan adhmaare Ranjeet ko uthata hai aur usko ek thappad khinch ke maarta hai jisse woh wapas jaake nichhe girta hai.

Karan: Inspector arrest karo isse.

Inspector aake Ranjeet ko uthata hai aur uske haath mein hatkari lagata hai aur iss dauran Raj usko ghuree jaa raha tha.

Phir Karan aur Raj aage chalne lagte hai. Idher Inspector Ranjeet ko le jaane lagta hai. Par tabhi Ranjeet apni puri chalaki se Inspector se uski gun chinn ke usko dhakka de deta hai aur gun ko Raj ke upar point kardeta hai.

Ranjeet: Rajjjjjjj.

Sablog pichhe ghumm ke dekhte hai toh shock hojaate hai. Karan bhi apni gun nikal ke Ranjeet ke upar point kardeta hai.

Karan: Ranjeet gunn fhekk de. Tu chahe kuch bhi karle par tu bachega nhiii.

Ranjeet: Abeee chuppp. Mujhe pata hai main marunga. Par main akele nhi marunga. Mere sabse bade dushman iss Raj Kapoor ke leke marungaa.

Karan: Ranjeet main bol raha hu gun fhekk dee. Warna yehi tujhe thokk dungaa.

Ranjeet: Gun tu fhekk Karan. Warna tera bhai toh marega hi saath main tu bhi maregaa. Sunaa hai teri haseen biwi ne bete ko janam diya hai. Bechera iss umar hi anaath hogaa. Yeh bol hasne lagta hai.

Karan: Gusse se. Kamine apni hadd mein reh. Warna yehi tujhe zinda garr dungaa.

Ranjeet: Rajjj. Tune mere har kaam mein apni taang adaayi. Main jiss project ko paana chahta usse tu chinn leta. Teri uss kamsin behen se thodi baat kyaa karli tune bharee bazaar mein meri beizaati ki. Tujhe tere parivaar ke saamne beizaat karne ki koshish ki par tere iss bhai ne tujhe bacha liya aur humsab ko jail meim daal diya.

Teri hi shaadi mein tujhe maarne ki koshish ki par tu bachh gaya. Phir baari aayi teri biwi ki. Manna padega badi haseen aur kamsin hai. Par saali woh bhi bachh gayi. Par aaj nhi aaj tujhe maar ke apna badla lunga.

Raj: Ranjeet tune apni gandi jabaan se meri biwi ke baare mein bolke apne din pure karliye. Aaj tu yehi maregaa.

Ranjeet: Jorr jorr se hasta hua. Mujhe pata hai main marunga. Par tujhe maarne ke baad. Yeh bol ek nazar sab pe ghumta hai aur goli chala deta hai.


Par idher ek nhi do goli chalti hai. Ek Ranjeet ke gun se aur dusri Karan ke gun se. Par chikhh sirf 1 jan ki nikalti hai.
waise ek baat to sach hai ki raj ne kabhi ranjeet se kuch China hi nahi.... jo bhi projects mile sab uski kaabiliyat ke balboote par mile hai.... ab itne bade bade business men hai, weh log thodi na bewakoof hai jo honhaar business man ke sath project deal na karke ek lallu ke hatho sab soup de.... itne murkh na hai wo log..
Lekin ranjeet iska ulta matlab bhi nikal liya... wo khud ki kaabiliyat ko nikharne ki jagah raj ke piche hath dhoke pata raha.... aur kar bura so ho bura... na tuza uske saamne hi hai..
Khair chalo rajesh aur ranjeet pakda gaya... musibat tali...
.......................
lekin yaha gaur karne wali baat ye bhi hai ki ye devilwa thode na raj ko marne dega :D
goli chali do..... ek ranjeet ki taraf se aur dusri taraf karan ki aurr se... lekin jaan gayi ek ki hi... aur wo marne wala definitely ranjeet hi hoga :D

Shaandar update, shaandar lekhni shaandar shabdon ka chayan aur sath hi dilkash kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi...

Let's see what happens next
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Thodi der mein jab dono police station pahonchte hai toh dekhte hai Ranjeet ki Maa jiska naam Reshma hai uski rihai hochuki hai.

Raj aur Karan gaadi se utar ke uske saamne se andar jaate hai aur woh dono ko gusse se ghurr ke dekh rahi thi par filhal woh koi panga nhi karna chahti thi isiliye chup hi rahi.

Karan: Inspector saari taiyaari hochuki hai.

Inspector: Haa Sir. Ek lady constable civil dress mein ready hai.

Karan: Good. Usko bol do ek pal ke liye bhi isko apne nazro se durr naa karee. Aur sambhal ke rahee.

Inspector: Yes Sir.

Phir woh inspector waha se chala jaata hai.

Idher Reshma police station se nikal ke waha se ek taxi karti hai aur nikal padhti hai apni manzil ki taraf aur uske pichhe pichhe woh lady inspector bhi jaarahi thi.

Takreeban 1 ghante ke baad Reshma taxi ko ek ghar ke bahar rokhti hai. Jo ki aisi jagah mein tha jaha bahot kam log hi rehte the.

Reshma taxi se utar ke charo taraf nazar ghuma ke dekhti hai jab usse yakeen hojaata hai ke koi uske pichhe nhi hai toh woh uss ghar ke darwaaze pe aake bell bajati hai.

Bell bajane ke kuch der baad ek aadmi darwaza kholta hai aur woh Reshm ko dekh kar khush hojaata hai.

Aadmi: Aakhir kaar aayi hi gayi tum.

Reshma: Woh toh aana hi tha. Ab jaldi se andar chalo. Agar kisi ne dekh liya toh musibat hojayegi.

Phir dono ghar ke andar chale jaate hai.

Lady Constable apni location Inspector ko bhej deti hai phir usko call karti hai.

Lady Constable: Sir maine aapko location bhej di hai. Rajesh ko maine dekha hai. Umeed hai Ranjeet bhi andar hi hogaa. Aaplog jaldi se aajaiye.

Inspector: Thikk hai tum waha pe hi raho aur nazar rakho hum thodi der mein aate hai.

Lady Constable: Yes Sir.

Phir Inspector Karan ke paas aata hai.

Inspector: Sir unka pata chal gaya hai. Humhe jaldi nikalna chahiye.

Karan: Greatt jaldi chalo. Aur woh arrest warrant bhi sang le lo.

Inspector: Yess Sir.

Phir Karan aur Raj nikal padhte hai uss location ki taraf. Inspector bhi kuch hawaldaar leke nikal padhta hai.

1 ghante ke baad woh log uss location pe pahonch jaate hai.

Karan: Kaha hai woh log.

Lady Constable: Sirr uss ghar mein hai.

Karan: Thikk hai. Inspector uss ghar ko gherr lo. Aaj woh bachh ke jaana nhi chahiye.

Inspector: Yes Sir.

Phir Inspector Hawaldaar ke saath ghar ko charo taraf se gherr leta hai. Aur Karan ko ishara karta hai.

Karan: Tum(Lady Constable) bell bajao.

Lady Constable bell bajati hai toh thodi der baad Reshma darwaaza kholti hai.

Reshma: Aap kaun aur kisse milna hai.

Lady Constable: Main teri saas. Tujhe sasuraal le jaane aayi hu.

Reshma: Matlab.

Karan: Matlab main samjhata hu.

Reshma Karan ko dekh kar darr jaati hai aur chillane hi wali hoti hai tabhi lady constable usko pakad leti hai aur uske muh ko band kardeti hai.

Karan: Agar chillane ki koshish karegi toh yehi thokk dunga. Phir Karan sabko leke andar aata hai toh dekhta hai Rajesh aur Ranjeet hall mein baithe baate kar rahe hai.

Karan: Karle jitni baate karni hai. Aajke baad tum dono baat karne toh kya kuch bhi karne ki halat mein nhi rahoge.

Rajesh aur Ranjeet Karan Raj aur baaki police walo ko dekh kar darr jaate aur pichhe ke raaste se bhaagne ki koshish karte hai. Jaise hi pichhe ka darwaaza kholte hai police unko pakad leti hai aur ghaseet ke unko andar leke aati hai.

Karan: Bahot bhaag liya aur bahot karli apni manmaani ab marte dum tak sadte rehna jail mein.

Ranjeet: Choro mujhee. Maine kaha choro mujheee.

Raj jo gusse se Ranjeet ko dekhe jaa raha tha woh ishare se hawaldaar ko bolta hai Ranjeet ko chor dene ko.

Jaise hi Hawaldaar Ranjeet ko chorta hai Raj Ranjeet ke seene mein ek laat maarta hai jisse woh durr jaake girta hai.

Raj: Tujhe aaj main nhi chorunga. Tune meri masoom si Sonal ko maarne ki koshish ki. Aaj tujhe yehi zinda gaar dunga. Yeh bol woh Ranjeet ke paas jaake usko maarne lagta hai. Kabhi laat kabhi ghushe usko andhadhun maarne lagta hai.

Raj apna saara gussa Ranjeet ke upar nikalta hai. Ranjeet ki halat kharab hochuki thi. Uske pure chehre se khoon beh raha tha.

Karan jaake Raj ko rokhta hai.

Karan: Bas kar Raj bas kar. Mar jaayega woh. Aur mat maar.

Raj: Mujhe chorr do bhaiyaa. Jaan le lunga main iski. Isne meri Sonal ko maarne ki koshish ki hai. Maardungaa isse main aaj.

Karan: Nhii Rajj. Yeh kaam tera nhi hai. Chorr de usse. Tujhe teri Sonal ki kasam chorr de usse.

Sonal ki kasam sunte hi Raj shant hojaata hai aur Karan ko dekhta hai.

Karan: Shant hojaa mere bhai. Isne jo kiya uski saza isse mil ke rahegi. Par gusse mein tu koi aisa kaam naa kar jisee tere pichhe Choti Mummy Sonal aur hum sab ko dukhh ho.

Karan ki baat sunke Raj puri tarah shant hojaata hai. Phir Karan adhmaare Ranjeet ko uthata hai aur usko ek thappad khinch ke maarta hai jisse woh wapas jaake nichhe girta hai.

Karan: Inspector arrest karo isse.

Inspector aake Ranjeet ko uthata hai aur uske haath mein hatkari lagata hai aur iss dauran Raj usko ghuree jaa raha tha.

Phir Karan aur Raj aage chalne lagte hai. Idher Inspector Ranjeet ko le jaane lagta hai. Par tabhi Ranjeet apni puri chalaki se Inspector se uski gun chinn ke usko dhakka de deta hai aur gun ko Raj ke upar point kardeta hai.

Ranjeet: Rajjjjjjj.

Sablog pichhe ghumm ke dekhte hai toh shock hojaate hai. Karan bhi apni gun nikal ke Ranjeet ke upar point kardeta hai.

Karan: Ranjeet gunn fhekk de. Tu chahe kuch bhi karle par tu bachega nhiii.

Ranjeet: Abeee chuppp. Mujhe pata hai main marunga. Par main akele nhi marunga. Mere sabse bade dushman iss Raj Kapoor ke leke marungaa.

Karan: Ranjeet main bol raha hu gun fhekk dee. Warna yehi tujhe thokk dungaa.

Ranjeet: Gun tu fhekk Karan. Warna tera bhai toh marega hi saath main tu bhi maregaa. Sunaa hai teri haseen biwi ne bete ko janam diya hai. Bechera iss umar hi anaath hogaa. Yeh bol hasne lagta hai.

Karan: Gusse se. Kamine apni hadd mein reh. Warna yehi tujhe zinda garr dungaa.

Ranjeet: Rajjj. Tune mere har kaam mein apni taang adaayi. Main jiss project ko paana chahta usse tu chinn leta. Teri uss kamsin behen se thodi baat kyaa karli tune bharee bazaar mein meri beizaati ki. Tujhe tere parivaar ke saamne beizaat karne ki koshish ki par tere iss bhai ne tujhe bacha liya aur humsab ko jail meim daal diya.

Teri hi shaadi mein tujhe maarne ki koshish ki par tu bachh gaya. Phir baari aayi teri biwi ki. Manna padega badi haseen aur kamsin hai. Par saali woh bhi bachh gayi. Par aaj nhi aaj tujhe maar ke apna badla lunga.

Raj: Ranjeet tune apni gandi jabaan se meri biwi ke baare mein bolke apne din pure karliye. Aaj tu yehi maregaa.

Ranjeet: Jorr jorr se hasta hua. Mujhe pata hai main marunga. Par tujhe maarne ke baad. Yeh bol ek nazar sab pe ghumta hai aur goli chala deta hai.


Par idher ek nhi do goli chalti hai. Ek Ranjeet ke gun se aur dusri Karan ke gun se. Par chikhh sirf 1 jan ki nikalti hai.
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