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Romance Bepanaah Ishq (Completed)

ABHISHEK TRIPATHI

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Sonal waha baith baith Raj ke akele hone ka intezaar kar rahi thi aur kuch der mein hi Raj waha akela baitha rehta hai.

Sonal: Rajjjj.

Raj Sonal ki awaaz sunke uski taraf dekhta hai toh paata hai Sonal nazre nichhe kiye hue thi.

Raj: Haa bolo.

Sonal: Woh actually mujhe aapse kuch kehna tha.

Raj: Haa bolo.

Sonal: Wohh actually woh main aapse woh kehna chahti thi ke woh...

Raj: Kyaa huaa bolo.

Sonal: Ek gehri saans leke. Woh actually I Am Sorry. Mujhe aapke saath waisa behave nhi karna chahiye tha. Maine aapko galat samaj liya jabki aap meri madad hi kar rahe the. Please mujhe maaf kardijiye. Uss din ke aad mere dil mein ek bahot bada guilt tha ke maine aapko galat samajha jiske baad se main aajtak chain se nhi reh paayi.

Itna sabkuch Sonal ek hi saans mein boldeti hai aur Raj usko bas dekhte reh jaata hai.

Kuch der tak jab Raj ka koi reply nhi aata toh Sonal nazre uthake dekhti hai toh paati Raj usko hi dekhe jaa raha hai.

Sonal: Rajjjj. Rajjjj.

Raj: Haaa. Haaa main sunn raha hu.

Sonal: I Am Sorry.

Raj: Muskurate hue. Tumhe Sorry kehne ki koi jarurat hai. Main samaj sakta hu tumne jaanmuzz ke mujhe wohsab nhi kaha hoga.

Sonal: Actually. Aapne sahi kaha. Meri soch kisi ki wajah se aisi hogyi hai. Woh actually Jaipur mein ek ladka hai Vicky. Jo by mistake papa ka business friend ka beta hai jo mujhe hardin ghurta rehta hai touch karne ke bahane khojta rehta hai. Jiski wajah se mujhe laga aap bhi waise hi hai isiliye maine aapko woh sab boldiya. Once again I Am Sorry.

Raj: Koi baat nhi. Par meri baat maano toh aise ladko ke baare mein apne ghar mein bata dena chahiye kyoki aise ladke mentally disturb hote hai kab kyaa kar jaaye kisi ko pata nhi chalta.

Sonal: Hmm aap sahi keh rahe hai. Par ab shayad aisa kuch nhi hoga. Kyoki main piche 9 mahine se coma mein thi aur Mumbai mein hu toh ab shayad woh mujhe bhul gaya hoga.

Raj: Haa yeh bhi hai. Waisee ab tumhari tabiyat kaisi hai. Sir mein dard nhi hota naa.

Sonal: Tabiyat bilkul thik hai. Bas ek baar yeh pairr thikk hojaaye toh wapas apne ghar chali jaungi.

Raj yeh sunke thoda udaas hojaata hai ke Sonal wapas Jaipur jaana chahti hai.

Raj: Hmm achhi baat hai. Toh aage ka kyaa socha hai.

Sonal: Socha hai Interior design mein masters karu aur phir ek achha sa start up open karu jaha ghar ka interior achhe se design kar saku. Par confuse hu ke kaha se karu.

Raj: Achha hai. Waise tumne jo socha hai woh bahot achha hai aur meri nazar mein ek bahot achha college bhi hai jaha se tum apna master complete karsakti ho.


Sonal: Achhha kaha pe.

Raj: Woh yehi Mumbai mein hai. Tum chaho toh yaha se apni padhai karsakti ho uske baad yaha pe tumhe apne start up ke liye achhe achhe projects bhi mil jaayenge.

Sonal: Thank You. Par yaha mumbai mein akele rehna possible nhi. Aur mummy papa nhi manenge.

Raj: Maine bas idea diya hai. Ab tum dekhlo kyaa karna hai.

Sonal: Okk Good Nightttt.

Raj: Good Nightt.

Phir Sonal waha se apne kamre mein chali jaati hai aur Raj wahi baitha kuch sochne lagta hai.

Tabhi waha Deepak aata hai.

Deepak: Kyaa hua kyaa soch rahe ho Raj beta.

Raj: Sonal ko yaha Mumbai mein rehne ka ek idea toh diya hai par darr hai kahi woh inkaar naa karde.

Deepak: Kyaa idea diya hai.

Raj: Sonal confuse hai masters kaha se karee. Toh maine usko yaha mumbai se karne ke liye idea diya hai. Par woh darr rahi hai gharwalo se itna durr rehne se. Aur kahi usko Jaipur mein hi koi achha college mil gaya toh woh yaha se chali jaayegi.

Deepak: Tum chinta mat karo. Sonal ko jaipur mein koi achha college nhi milega woh yehi rahegi tumlogo ke saath.

Raj: Woh kaisee.

Deepak: Woh main dekhlunga. Tum chinta mat karo. Jaao jaake so jaao.

Raj bhi bina kuch bole waha se chala jaata hai.

Thodi der baad Deepak Sonal ke kamre mein aata hai.

Deepak: Sonal.

Sonal: Papa aap aaiye naa.

Deepak: Kyaa kar rahi ho.

Sonal: Kuch nhi papa. Aap bataiye.

Deepak: Beta main puchna chahta tha ke tumne aage ko leke kya socha hai.

Sonal: Maine interior design mein hi masters karne ka socha hai. Par confuse hu kaha se karu.

Deepak: Maine itne mahino mein yaha tumhare liye ek achha college dekha hai. Agar tum chaho toh yaha se kar sakti ho. Woh college bahot achha hai.

Sonal: Par papa ghar se itni durr akele kaise rahungi main.

Deepak: Akeli kaha ho beta. Tum yehi Kapoor House mein rehna.

Sonal: Nhi papa yeh achha nhi lagta. Aur phir 1-2 din ke liye toh rehna nhi hai pure 2 saal ke liye rehna hai. Itne din kisi ke ghar mein rehna achha nhi lagta.

Deepak: Woh sab main dekh lunga. Tum bolo kyaa tum yaha padhna chahti ho. Koi force nhi hai bilkul tumhari marzi hai.

Sonal: Main soch ke bataungi papa.

Deepak: Tum aaram se socho. Koi jaldi nhi hai. Good Night.

Sonal: Good Night Papa.

Phir Deepak waha se chala jaata hai aur Sonal Deepak ki baato ko sochne lagti hai. Aur thodi der baad kuch faisla karke woh sone ke liye dheere dheere bed mein aati hai aur aaram se so jaati hai.

Agle din subah sab dining table mein nashta kar rahe the aur issbaar inke saath Sonal bhi thi. Sablog naashta kar rahe the tabhi Karan ko ek call aata hai.

Karan: Haa Bolo.

Saamne se koi kuch bolta hai.

Karan: Thikk hai main abhi aata hu. Yeh bol call cut kardeta hai aur bolta hai. Rajjj chall jaldi.

Raj: Jii bhaiya.

Phir dono aadha naashta karke hi jaldi se jikal jaate hai. Karan ko nikalte dekh unko ajeeb nhi lagta hai par Karan ke saath Raj ko nikalte dekh sabko ajeeb lagta hai.

Vijay: Nandini.

Nandini: Jii Papa.

Vijay: Beta Karan ka toh samaj aata hai par woh Raj ko apne saath kyo le gaya.

Nandini: Pata nhi papa. Unhone mujhe issbaare mein kuch nhi bola.

Sablog phir apna naashta karne lagte hai.

Idher Karan aur Raj gaadi mein jaa rahe the.

Raj: Kya hua bhaiyaa. Hum kaha jaarahe hai.

Karan: Uss Ranjeet ki maa rihaa hone wali hai. Toh woh rihaa hoke jarur apne pati aur bete ke paas hi jaayegi. Aaj unn kamino ko pakad ke hi rahunga.

Raj: Bhaiyaa. Aapko unke saath jo karna hai karlijiyega. Par mujhe uss Ranjeet ko 10 mins ke liye mere hawale kardijiyegaa.

Karan: Ek pal Raj ko dekhta hai aur uski aankho mein jo gussa tha woh dekh kar woh bolta hai. Thikk hai.


Phir dono jaldi se police station ki taraf badh jaate hai.
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Luffy

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Update 57
Sonal waha baith baith Raj ke akele hone ka intezaar kar rahi thi aur kuch der mein hi Raj waha akela baitha rehta hai.

Sonal: Rajjjj.

Raj Sonal ki awaaz sunke uski taraf dekhta hai toh paata hai Sonal nazre nichhe kiye hue thi.

Raj: Haa bolo.

Sonal: Woh actually mujhe aapse kuch kehna tha.

Raj: Haa bolo.

Sonal: Wohh actually woh main aapse woh kehna chahti thi ke woh...

Raj: Kyaa huaa bolo.

Sonal: Ek gehri saans leke. Woh actually I Am Sorry. Mujhe aapke saath waisa behave nhi karna chahiye tha. Maine aapko galat samaj liya jabki aap meri madad hi kar rahe the. Please mujhe maaf kardijiye. Uss din ke aad mere dil mein ek bahot bada guilt tha ke maine aapko galat samajha jiske baad se main aajtak chain se nhi reh paayi.

Itna sabkuch Sonal ek hi saans mein boldeti hai aur Raj usko bas dekhte reh jaata hai.

Kuch der tak jab Raj ka koi reply nhi aata toh Sonal nazre uthake dekhti hai toh paati Raj usko hi dekhe jaa raha hai.

Sonal: Rajjjj. Rajjjj.

Raj: Haaa. Haaa main sunn raha hu.

Sonal: I Am Sorry.

Raj: Muskurate hue. Tumhe Sorry kehne ki koi jarurat hai. Main samaj sakta hu tumne jaanmuzz ke mujhe wohsab nhi kaha hoga.

Sonal: Actually. Aapne sahi kaha. Meri soch kisi ki wajah se aisi hogyi hai. Woh actually Jaipur mein ek ladka hai Vicky. Jo by mistake papa ka business friend ka beta hai jo mujhe hardin ghurta rehta hai touch karne ke bahane khojta rehta hai. Jiski wajah se mujhe laga aap bhi waise hi hai isiliye maine aapko woh sab boldiya. Once again I Am Sorry.

Raj: Koi baat nhi. Par meri baat maano toh aise ladko ke baare mein apne ghar mein bata dena chahiye kyoki aise ladke mentally disturb hote hai kab kyaa kar jaaye kisi ko pata nhi chalta.

Sonal: Hmm aap sahi keh rahe hai. Par ab shayad aisa kuch nhi hoga. Kyoki main piche 9 mahine se coma mein thi aur Mumbai mein hu toh ab shayad woh mujhe bhul gaya hoga.

Raj: Haa yeh bhi hai. Waisee ab tumhari tabiyat kaisi hai. Sir mein dard nhi hota naa.

Sonal: Tabiyat bilkul thik hai. Bas ek baar yeh pairr thikk hojaaye toh wapas apne ghar chali jaungi.

Raj yeh sunke thoda udaas hojaata hai ke Sonal wapas Jaipur jaana chahti hai.

Raj: Hmm achhi baat hai. Toh aage ka kyaa socha hai.

Sonal: Socha hai Interior design mein masters karu aur phir ek achha sa start up open karu jaha ghar ka interior achhe se design kar saku. Par confuse hu ke kaha se karu.

Raj: Achha hai. Waise tumne jo socha hai woh bahot achha hai aur meri nazar mein ek bahot achha college bhi hai jaha se tum apna master complete karsakti ho.


Sonal: Achhha kaha pe.

Raj: Woh yehi Mumbai mein hai. Tum chaho toh yaha se apni padhai karsakti ho uske baad yaha pe tumhe apne start up ke liye achhe achhe projects bhi mil jaayenge.

Sonal: Thank You. Par yaha mumbai mein akele rehna possible nhi. Aur mummy papa nhi manenge.

Raj: Maine bas idea diya hai. Ab tum dekhlo kyaa karna hai.

Sonal: Okk Good Nightttt.

Raj: Good Nightt.

Phir Sonal waha se apne kamre mein chali jaati hai aur Raj wahi baitha kuch sochne lagta hai.

Tabhi waha Deepak aata hai.

Deepak: Kyaa hua kyaa soch rahe ho Raj beta.

Raj: Sonal ko yaha Mumbai mein rehne ka ek idea toh diya hai par darr hai kahi woh inkaar naa karde.

Deepak: Kyaa idea diya hai.

Raj: Sonal confuse hai masters kaha se karee. Toh maine usko yaha mumbai se karne ke liye idea diya hai. Par woh darr rahi hai gharwalo se itna durr rehne se. Aur kahi usko Jaipur mein hi koi achha college mil gaya toh woh yaha se chali jaayegi.

Deepak: Tum chinta mat karo. Sonal ko jaipur mein koi achha college nhi milega woh yehi rahegi tumlogo ke saath.

Raj: Woh kaisee.

Deepak: Woh main dekhlunga. Tum chinta mat karo. Jaao jaake so jaao.

Raj bhi bina kuch bole waha se chala jaata hai.

Thodi der baad Deepak Sonal ke kamre mein aata hai.

Deepak: Sonal.

Sonal: Papa aap aaiye naa.

Deepak: Kyaa kar rahi ho.

Sonal: Kuch nhi papa. Aap bataiye.

Deepak: Beta main puchna chahta tha ke tumne aage ko leke kya socha hai.

Sonal: Maine interior design mein hi masters karne ka socha hai. Par confuse hu kaha se karu.

Deepak: Maine itne mahino mein yaha tumhare liye ek achha college dekha hai. Agar tum chaho toh yaha se kar sakti ho. Woh college bahot achha hai.

Sonal: Par papa ghar se itni durr akele kaise rahungi main.

Deepak: Akeli kaha ho beta. Tum yehi Kapoor House mein rehna.

Sonal: Nhi papa yeh achha nhi lagta. Aur phir 1-2 din ke liye toh rehna nhi hai pure 2 saal ke liye rehna hai. Itne din kisi ke ghar mein rehna achha nhi lagta.

Deepak: Woh sab main dekh lunga. Tum bolo kyaa tum yaha padhna chahti ho. Koi force nhi hai bilkul tumhari marzi hai.

Sonal: Main soch ke bataungi papa.

Deepak: Tum aaram se socho. Koi jaldi nhi hai. Good Night.

Sonal: Good Night Papa.

Phir Deepak waha se chala jaata hai aur Sonal Deepak ki baato ko sochne lagti hai. Aur thodi der baad kuch faisla karke woh sone ke liye dheere dheere bed mein aati hai aur aaram se so jaati hai.

Agle din subah sab dining table mein nashta kar rahe the aur issbaar inke saath Sonal bhi thi. Sablog naashta kar rahe the tabhi Karan ko ek call aata hai.

Karan: Haa Bolo.

Saamne se koi kuch bolta hai.

Karan: Thikk hai main abhi aata hu. Yeh bol call cut kardeta hai aur bolta hai. Rajjj chall jaldi.

Raj: Jii bhaiya.

Phir dono aadha naashta karke hi jaldi se jikal jaate hai. Karan ko nikalte dekh unko ajeeb nhi lagta hai par Karan ke saath Raj ko nikalte dekh sabko ajeeb lagta hai.

Vijay: Nandini.

Nandini: Jii Papa.

Vijay: Beta Karan ka toh samaj aata hai par woh Raj ko apne saath kyo le gaya.

Nandini: Pata nhi papa. Unhone mujhe issbaare mein kuch nhi bola.

Sablog phir apna naashta karne lagte hai.

Idher Karan aur Raj gaadi mein jaa rahe the.

Raj: Kya hua bhaiyaa. Hum kaha jaarahe hai.

Karan: Uss Ranjeet ki maa rihaa hone wali hai. Toh woh rihaa hoke jarur apne pati aur bete ke paas hi jaayegi. Aaj unn kamino ko pakad ke hi rahunga.

Raj: Bhaiyaa. Aapko unke saath jo karna hai karlijiyega. Par mujhe uss Ranjeet ko 10 mins ke liye mere hawale kardijiyegaa.

Karan: Ek pal Raj ko dekhta hai aur uski aankho mein jo gussa tha woh dekh kar woh bolta hai. Thikk hai.

Phir dono jaldi se police station ki taraf badh jaate hai.
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Thodi hi der mein Raj aur Yash uss jagah pahonch jaate hai jaha ka address Raj ke mobile mein aaya thaa.

Yash: Abee main tujhe kab se puch raha hu tu batata kyo nhi. Tujhe kispe shak hai aur tujhe yaha ka address kisne diya.

Raj: Tu kuch der shant nhi reh sakta kyaa. Kab se bak bak kiye jaa raha hai. Ekbaar unhe pakad lu phir apne aap pata chal jayega.

Yash: Par tu yaha dhundega kaisee. Yaha toh kitne saare ghar hai.

Raj: Yeh tune ki kaam ki baat. Kuch toh sochna padegaa.

Abhi Yash kuch bolta tabhi usko waha ek gaadi aate hue dikhti hai.

Yash: Abee woh dekh ek gaadi aarahi hai.

Raj: Yehh toh bhaiyaa ki gaadi hai. Par woh yaha kaisee. Unhone toh mera call tak nhi uthaya.

Idher Karan jab Raj aur Yash ko waha dekhta hai toh woh bhi hairaan hojaata hai.

Karan: Tumdono yaha kyaa kar rahe ho.

Raj: Hum toh yaha ek jaruri kaam se aaye the par aap yaha kya kar rahe ho aur aapka phone kaha hai kab se try kar raha hu aap utha hi nhi rahe.

Karan: Aree main toh yaha tere kaam se hi aaya tha aur mera phone silent hai. Par kisliye call kar raha tha.

Raj: Mera kaam matlab. Aur main toh aapko yehi bulane ke liye call kar raha tha.

Karan: Matlabb.

Yash: Matlab yeh bhaiya ke isse pata nhi kaise yeh pata chala hai ke Sonal ka accident karne wala yaa karwane wala yaha chupaa hua hai aur yeh usse pakadne aaya hai.

Karan Yash ki baat sunke shock hojaata hai.

Karan: Tujhe kaise pata chala woh kaun hai aur yaha chupaa hua hai.

Yash: Main bhi kab se ye puche jaa raha hu par yeh batata hi nhi.

Raj: Woh bhaiya mujhe ek jan pe shak tha. Aur kuch din pehle hi meri mulakat ek detective se hui thi toh maine usko uss aadmi ke baare mein sabkuch pata lagane ko kaha tha. Toh abhi usne mujhe msg karke yaha ka address diya.

Karan: Aur tujhe kispe shak hai.

Raj: Ranjeet pe. Kyoki usne pehle bhi mere upar jaanleva humla kiya hai toh hosakta hai issbaar usne Sonal pe attack kardiya.

Karan: Hosakta hai nhi. Usi ne kiya hai. Kal raat tera pichha karne wala aadmi pakda gaya tha aur aaj subah usko 2 dande maare toh sab kuch boldiya hai aur usne dono baap bete ka sketch bhi banwa diya tha aur usine humhe yaha ka address diya hai.

Par mujhe ek baat samaj nhi aarahi hai jisse hum police wale itne time se nhi khoj paaye usse tere iss detective ne kaise khoj nikala.

Raj: Bhaiya actually iss detective ne Ranjeet ko ekbaar yaha tak apni gaadi mein lift di isiliye usko pata chala aur usne mujhe bata diya.

Karan: Toh chal chalke dekhte hai uss Ranjeet ko.

Yash: Par bhaiya itne saare ghar mein se kaunse ghar mein jaayenge.

Karan: Wohlog kaunse ghar mein honge yeh mujhe pata hai. Chalo ab.

Phir sablog Karan ke saath ek ghar ke paas aate hai.

Karan: Tumdono yehi ruko. Hosakta hai uske paas koi hatiyaar ho. Inspector apni position lo. Aur dekho ghar ke andar jaane ka koi dusra raasta hai kyaa.

Inspector aur Hawaldaar ghar ke charo taraf faill jaate hai aur achhi tarah se check karte hai toh unhe pichhe ki taraf se ek darwaza dikhta hai.

Inspector ishare se bolta Karan ko yeh baat bolta hai. Toh Karan uss taraf jaata hai.

Karan: Ek kaam karo 2 hawaldaar yaha ruko agar woh yaha se bhaagne ki koshish kare toh unhe pakadlena.

Phir sab aage ke darwaaze ki taraf jaate hai.

Karan: Hawaldaar(Jo Civil dress mein tha) bell bajao aur dekho wohlog hi hai yaa nhi.

Hawaldaar bell bajata hai toh kuch der baad ek aadmi gate kholta hai.

Aadmi: Ji kahiyee.

Aadmi ki awaaz sunte hi Karan bahar aata hai toh dekhta hai yeh koi aur aadmi hai.

Woh aadmi police dekhte hi thoda ghabra jaata hai.

Aadmi: Jii sahab kahiyee. Kyaa hua hai.

Karan: Aadmi ko pakadte hue. Inspector pure ghar ki achhe se talashi lo. Aur dekho woh dono kamine kaha hai.

Inspector hawaldaar ke saath jhatt se andar ghusta hai aur ghar ko achhe se check karne lagta hai.

Karan: Ghar mein aur kaun kaun hai.

Aadmi: Sahab ghar mein aur koi nhi hai. Main iss ghar ka caretaker hu. Yaha main aur meri biwi rehte hai jo market gayi hai.

Karan: Sach sach bata warna tu bhi jail ke andar jaayega.

Aadmi: Sahab main kyo jhoot bolunga. Agar aapko yakeen nhi hai toh aap dekh lijiye.

Tabhi Inspector bahar aata hai aur bolta hai sir yaha koi nhi hai. Pura ghar khaali hai sirf ek kamre mein kuch kapde hai aur kitchen mein thoda khaane ka samaan hai.

Aadmi: Main sach keh raha hu Sahab. Yaha sirf main aur meri biwi hi rehte hai jo iss ghar ki dekhbhal karte hai.

Karan: Yeh ghar kiska hai aur yaha ka maalik kaha hai.

Aadmi: Sir yeh ghar Sharma Sahab ka hai aur woh toh london mein rehte hai 6 months mein 1 baar aate hau family ke saath.

Raj: Par bhaiyaa uss aadmi ne yeh ghar aur mere detective ne toh yehi area bola tha.

Karan: Yehi toh samaj nhi aaraha hai. Shayad uss aadmi ne mujhe jhoothi khabar di hai. Phir Karan Rajesh aur Ranjeet ki photo uss aadmi ko dikhata hai aur puchta hai.

Karan: Kyaa inndono ko yaha kabhi dekha hai pichle kuch mahino mein yaa dino mein.

Woh aadmi uss photo ko dhyaan se dekhta hai phir bolta hai.

Aadmi: Haa sahab. Iss budhhe aur iss jawaan ladke ko maine inn kuch dino mein bahot baar dekha hai yaha. 2-3 baar toh iss ghar ke aaspaas bhi ghumte hue dekha hai. Maine ekbaar pucha bhi tha toh bola tha isko iss area mein ek ghar lena hai toh wohi dekh raha hai.

Phir Karan Raghu ka photo dikhata hai aur puchta hai isko dekha hai.

Aadmi thikk se dekha hai aur bolta hai haa sahb 1-2 baar inn dono ke saath isko bhi dekha hai.

Inspector: Matlab sir woh Raghu sach bol raha tha. Ranjeet ne usko jaanmuzz ke yeh ghar dikhaya hoga jisse agar Raghu kabhi pakda jaaye toh humhe ghumra kar sake. Aur Raj ji ke detective ne jo iss Ranjeet ko lift di thi woh bhi sach hi hai.

Karan: Hmmm. Saale ne bahot hi chalaki se issbaar yeh sab kiya hai. Usko pata tha hum kaise bhi karke usske baare mein pata laga lenge.

Yash: Bhaiyaa hum toh wapas ghum fhirr ke phir se wahi aagaye jaha se start kiya tha.

Raj: Nhii Yashh. Pehle humhe pata nhi tha yeh sab kisne kiya hai par ab humhe pata hai.

Karan: Haa Yash. Aur abhi bhi humare paas ek option hai unn tak pahonchne kaa.

Dono: Kaun sa option.

Karan ekbaar uss aadmi ko dekhta hai aur phir waha se wapas apne car ki taraf aata hai aur waha bolta hai.

Karan: Inspector uss aurat ke baare mein kyaa pata chala. Kab uski rihaai horahi hai. Uska Beta aur Pati usko apne paas jarur bulayenge aur tabhi saalon ko pakdenge.

Inspector: Sir kal hi uski rihaai hai.

Karan: Greattt. Ek kaam karo uske pichhe ek lady constable ko uske pichhe laga do civil dress mein. Aur usko boldena ek pal ke liye bhi woh uski nazro se ojhall naa ho paaye. Kal unn saalon ko pakad ke rahenge.

Inspector: Yes Sirr.

Karan: Raj Yash ab tumdono jaao. Main bhi nikalta hu.

Phir sab waha se nikal jaate hai.

Raat ko jab Raj ghar aata hai toh woh dekhta hai aaj Sonal apne kamre mein naa hoke bahar hall mein sabke saath baithi hui hai.

Sonal ko aise sabke saath baat karte dekh kar Raj ko achha lagta hai. Woh wahi khada Sonal ko haste muskurate dekh raha tha tabhi Smita bolti hai.

Smita: Aree Raj aagaya. Waha kyo khada hai.

Smita ki awaaz sunke Sonal darwaaze ki taraf dekhti hai toh usko waha Raj khada dikhata hai. Itne dino baad Raj ko dekh kar Sonal ko ek ajeeb si khushi milti hai par woh iss khushi ka matlab samaj nhi paati. Par iss khushi ke saath saath usko thoda dukhh bhi hota hai uske behaviour ko leke.

Sonal: Mann mein. Aaj itne dino baad Raj mere saamne aaye hai. Aaj toh inse maafi maang hi lungi jisse mere dil mein jo guilt hai woh durr hojayega. Warna yeh guilt mujhe chainn se jeene nhi de raha hai.

Idher Sonal Raj ko dekh kar yeh soch rahi thi udher Raj Sonal ki taraf dekh bhi nhi raha tha jisse Sonal ko thoda bura lagta hai par filhal woh iss chiz ko ignore kardeti hai.

Nandini: Raj jaldi se jao fresh hojao. Dinner ready hai.

Raj: Ji bhabhi.

Phir Raj apne kamre mein chala jaata hai aur Sonal usko jaate hue dekhte rehti hai.

Thodi der baad Raj fresh hoke nichhe aata hai aur dinner karne baith jaata hai aur chup chaap dinner karne lagta hai. Par itne waqt mein usne ekbaar bhi Sonal ki taraf naahi dekha tha aur naahi usse baat karne ki koshish ki thi. Jo Sonal ko lag rhaa tha uske dil mein ek anjaana sa dard paida kar rahi thi jisko woh samaj nhi parahi thi. Par asal baat toh yeh thi ke jabse Raj ghar aaya tha woh mauka milte hi Sonal ko mann bharr ke dekh leta tha aur Sonal ki nazar uspe parti uske pehle hi apni nazre hata leta tha.


Dinner khatam hojaane ke baad Raj hall mein baith jaata hai aur Sonal ko bina pata chale usko dekh raha tha. Thodi der baad Sonal bhi apni wheelchair jo ab woh khud hi chala paa rahi thi usko leke Raj ke paas aajati hai.
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Thodi hi der mein Raj aur Yash uss jagah pahonch jaate hai jaha ka address Raj ke mobile mein aaya thaa.

Yash: Abee main tujhe kab se puch raha hu tu batata kyo nhi. Tujhe kispe shak hai aur tujhe yaha ka address kisne diya.

Raj: Tu kuch der shant nhi reh sakta kyaa. Kab se bak bak kiye jaa raha hai. Ekbaar unhe pakad lu phir apne aap pata chal jayega.

Yash: Par tu yaha dhundega kaisee. Yaha toh kitne saare ghar hai.

Raj: Yeh tune ki kaam ki baat. Kuch toh sochna padegaa.

Abhi Yash kuch bolta tabhi usko waha ek gaadi aate hue dikhti hai.

Yash: Abee woh dekh ek gaadi aarahi hai.

Raj: Yehh toh bhaiyaa ki gaadi hai. Par woh yaha kaisee. Unhone toh mera call tak nhi uthaya.

Idher Karan jab Raj aur Yash ko waha dekhta hai toh woh bhi hairaan hojaata hai.

Karan: Tumdono yaha kyaa kar rahe ho.

Raj: Hum toh yaha ek jaruri kaam se aaye the par aap yaha kya kar rahe ho aur aapka phone kaha hai kab se try kar raha hu aap utha hi nhi rahe.

Karan: Aree main toh yaha tere kaam se hi aaya tha aur mera phone silent hai. Par kisliye call kar raha tha.

Raj: Mera kaam matlab. Aur main toh aapko yehi bulane ke liye call kar raha tha.

Karan: Matlabb.

Yash: Matlab yeh bhaiya ke isse pata nhi kaise yeh pata chala hai ke Sonal ka accident karne wala yaa karwane wala yaha chupaa hua hai aur yeh usse pakadne aaya hai.

Karan Yash ki baat sunke shock hojaata hai.

Karan: Tujhe kaise pata chala woh kaun hai aur yaha chupaa hua hai.

Yash: Main bhi kab se ye puche jaa raha hu par yeh batata hi nhi.

Raj: Woh bhaiya mujhe ek jan pe shak tha. Aur kuch din pehle hi meri mulakat ek detective se hui thi toh maine usko uss aadmi ke baare mein sabkuch pata lagane ko kaha tha. Toh abhi usne mujhe msg karke yaha ka address diya.

Karan: Aur tujhe kispe shak hai.

Raj: Ranjeet pe. Kyoki usne pehle bhi mere upar jaanleva humla kiya hai toh hosakta hai issbaar usne Sonal pe attack kardiya.

Karan: Hosakta hai nhi. Usi ne kiya hai. Kal raat tera pichha karne wala aadmi pakda gaya tha aur aaj subah usko 2 dande maare toh sab kuch boldiya hai aur usne dono baap bete ka sketch bhi banwa diya tha aur usine humhe yaha ka address diya hai.

Par mujhe ek baat samaj nhi aarahi hai jisse hum police wale itne time se nhi khoj paaye usse tere iss detective ne kaise khoj nikala.

Raj: Bhaiya actually iss detective ne Ranjeet ko ekbaar yaha tak apni gaadi mein lift di isiliye usko pata chala aur usne mujhe bata diya.

Karan: Toh chal chalke dekhte hai uss Ranjeet ko.

Yash: Par bhaiya itne saare ghar mein se kaunse ghar mein jaayenge.

Karan: Wohlog kaunse ghar mein honge yeh mujhe pata hai. Chalo ab.

Phir sablog Karan ke saath ek ghar ke paas aate hai.

Karan: Tumdono yehi ruko. Hosakta hai uske paas koi hatiyaar ho. Inspector apni position lo. Aur dekho ghar ke andar jaane ka koi dusra raasta hai kyaa.

Inspector aur Hawaldaar ghar ke charo taraf faill jaate hai aur achhi tarah se check karte hai toh unhe pichhe ki taraf se ek darwaza dikhta hai.

Inspector ishare se bolta Karan ko yeh baat bolta hai. Toh Karan uss taraf jaata hai.

Karan: Ek kaam karo 2 hawaldaar yaha ruko agar woh yaha se bhaagne ki koshish kare toh unhe pakadlena.

Phir sab aage ke darwaaze ki taraf jaate hai.

Karan: Hawaldaar(Jo Civil dress mein tha) bell bajao aur dekho wohlog hi hai yaa nhi.

Hawaldaar bell bajata hai toh kuch der baad ek aadmi gate kholta hai.

Aadmi: Ji kahiyee.

Aadmi ki awaaz sunte hi Karan bahar aata hai toh dekhta hai yeh koi aur aadmi hai.

Woh aadmi police dekhte hi thoda ghabra jaata hai.

Aadmi: Jii sahab kahiyee. Kyaa hua hai.

Karan: Aadmi ko pakadte hue. Inspector pure ghar ki achhe se talashi lo. Aur dekho woh dono kamine kaha hai.

Inspector hawaldaar ke saath jhatt se andar ghusta hai aur ghar ko achhe se check karne lagta hai.

Karan: Ghar mein aur kaun kaun hai.

Aadmi: Sahab ghar mein aur koi nhi hai. Main iss ghar ka caretaker hu. Yaha main aur meri biwi rehte hai jo market gayi hai.

Karan: Sach sach bata warna tu bhi jail ke andar jaayega.

Aadmi: Sahab main kyo jhoot bolunga. Agar aapko yakeen nhi hai toh aap dekh lijiye.

Tabhi Inspector bahar aata hai aur bolta hai sir yaha koi nhi hai. Pura ghar khaali hai sirf ek kamre mein kuch kapde hai aur kitchen mein thoda khaane ka samaan hai.

Aadmi: Main sach keh raha hu Sahab. Yaha sirf main aur meri biwi hi rehte hai jo iss ghar ki dekhbhal karte hai.

Karan: Yeh ghar kiska hai aur yaha ka maalik kaha hai.

Aadmi: Sir yeh ghar Sharma Sahab ka hai aur woh toh london mein rehte hai 6 months mein 1 baar aate hau family ke saath.

Raj: Par bhaiyaa uss aadmi ne yeh ghar aur mere detective ne toh yehi area bola tha.

Karan: Yehi toh samaj nhi aaraha hai. Shayad uss aadmi ne mujhe jhoothi khabar di hai. Phir Karan Rajesh aur Ranjeet ki photo uss aadmi ko dikhata hai aur puchta hai.

Karan: Kyaa inndono ko yaha kabhi dekha hai pichle kuch mahino mein yaa dino mein.

Woh aadmi uss photo ko dhyaan se dekhta hai phir bolta hai.

Aadmi: Haa sahab. Iss budhhe aur iss jawaan ladke ko maine inn kuch dino mein bahot baar dekha hai yaha. 2-3 baar toh iss ghar ke aaspaas bhi ghumte hue dekha hai. Maine ekbaar pucha bhi tha toh bola tha isko iss area mein ek ghar lena hai toh wohi dekh raha hai.

Phir Karan Raghu ka photo dikhata hai aur puchta hai isko dekha hai.

Aadmi thikk se dekha hai aur bolta hai haa sahb 1-2 baar inn dono ke saath isko bhi dekha hai.

Inspector: Matlab sir woh Raghu sach bol raha tha. Ranjeet ne usko jaanmuzz ke yeh ghar dikhaya hoga jisse agar Raghu kabhi pakda jaaye toh humhe ghumra kar sake. Aur Raj ji ke detective ne jo iss Ranjeet ko lift di thi woh bhi sach hi hai.

Karan: Hmmm. Saale ne bahot hi chalaki se issbaar yeh sab kiya hai. Usko pata tha hum kaise bhi karke usske baare mein pata laga lenge.

Yash: Bhaiyaa hum toh wapas ghum fhirr ke phir se wahi aagaye jaha se start kiya tha.

Raj: Nhii Yashh. Pehle humhe pata nhi tha yeh sab kisne kiya hai par ab humhe pata hai.

Karan: Haa Yash. Aur abhi bhi humare paas ek option hai unn tak pahonchne kaa.

Dono: Kaun sa option.

Karan ekbaar uss aadmi ko dekhta hai aur phir waha se wapas apne car ki taraf aata hai aur waha bolta hai.

Karan: Inspector uss aurat ke baare mein kyaa pata chala. Kab uski rihaai horahi hai. Uska Beta aur Pati usko apne paas jarur bulayenge aur tabhi saalon ko pakdenge.

Inspector: Sir kal hi uski rihaai hai.

Karan: Greattt. Ek kaam karo uske pichhe ek lady constable ko uske pichhe laga do civil dress mein. Aur usko boldena ek pal ke liye bhi woh uski nazro se ojhall naa ho paaye. Kal unn saalon ko pakad ke rahenge.

Inspector: Yes Sirr.

Karan: Raj Yash ab tumdono jaao. Main bhi nikalta hu.

Phir sab waha se nikal jaate hai.

Raat ko jab Raj ghar aata hai toh woh dekhta hai aaj Sonal apne kamre mein naa hoke bahar hall mein sabke saath baithi hui hai.

Sonal ko aise sabke saath baat karte dekh kar Raj ko achha lagta hai. Woh wahi khada Sonal ko haste muskurate dekh raha tha tabhi Smita bolti hai.

Smita: Aree Raj aagaya. Waha kyo khada hai.

Smita ki awaaz sunke Sonal darwaaze ki taraf dekhti hai toh usko waha Raj khada dikhata hai. Itne dino baad Raj ko dekh kar Sonal ko ek ajeeb si khushi milti hai par woh iss khushi ka matlab samaj nhi paati. Par iss khushi ke saath saath usko thoda dukhh bhi hota hai uske behaviour ko leke.

Sonal: Mann mein. Aaj itne dino baad Raj mere saamne aaye hai. Aaj toh inse maafi maang hi lungi jisse mere dil mein jo guilt hai woh durr hojayega. Warna yeh guilt mujhe chainn se jeene nhi de raha hai.

Idher Sonal Raj ko dekh kar yeh soch rahi thi udher Raj Sonal ki taraf dekh bhi nhi raha tha jisse Sonal ko thoda bura lagta hai par filhal woh iss chiz ko ignore kardeti hai.

Nandini: Raj jaldi se jao fresh hojao. Dinner ready hai.

Raj: Ji bhabhi.

Phir Raj apne kamre mein chala jaata hai aur Sonal usko jaate hue dekhte rehti hai.

Thodi der baad Raj fresh hoke nichhe aata hai aur dinner karne baith jaata hai aur chup chaap dinner karne lagta hai. Par itne waqt mein usne ekbaar bhi Sonal ki taraf naahi dekha tha aur naahi usse baat karne ki koshish ki thi. Jo Sonal ko lag rhaa tha uske dil mein ek anjaana sa dard paida kar rahi thi jisko woh samaj nhi parahi thi. Par asal baat toh yeh thi ke jabse Raj ghar aaya tha woh mauka milte hi Sonal ko mann bharr ke dekh leta tha aur Sonal ki nazar uspe parti uske pehle hi apni nazre hata leta tha.


Dinner khatam hojaane ke baad Raj hall mein baith jaata hai aur Sonal ko bina pata chale usko dekh raha tha. Thodi der baad Sonal bhi apni wheelchair jo ab woh khud hi chala paa rahi thi usko leke Raj ke paas aajati hai.
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Sonal waha baith baith Raj ke akele hone ka intezaar kar rahi thi aur kuch der mein hi Raj waha akela baitha rehta hai.

Sonal: Rajjjj.

Raj Sonal ki awaaz sunke uski taraf dekhta hai toh paata hai Sonal nazre nichhe kiye hue thi.

Raj: Haa bolo.

Sonal: Woh actually mujhe aapse kuch kehna tha.

Raj: Haa bolo.

Sonal: Wohh actually woh main aapse woh kehna chahti thi ke woh...

Raj: Kyaa huaa bolo.

Sonal: Ek gehri saans leke. Woh actually I Am Sorry. Mujhe aapke saath waisa behave nhi karna chahiye tha. Maine aapko galat samaj liya jabki aap meri madad hi kar rahe the. Please mujhe maaf kardijiye. Uss din ke aad mere dil mein ek bahot bada guilt tha ke maine aapko galat samajha jiske baad se main aajtak chain se nhi reh paayi.

Itna sabkuch Sonal ek hi saans mein boldeti hai aur Raj usko bas dekhte reh jaata hai.

Kuch der tak jab Raj ka koi reply nhi aata toh Sonal nazre uthake dekhti hai toh paati Raj usko hi dekhe jaa raha hai.

Sonal: Rajjjj. Rajjjj.

Raj: Haaa. Haaa main sunn raha hu.

Sonal: I Am Sorry.

Raj: Muskurate hue. Tumhe Sorry kehne ki koi jarurat hai. Main samaj sakta hu tumne jaanmuzz ke mujhe wohsab nhi kaha hoga.

Sonal: Actually. Aapne sahi kaha. Meri soch kisi ki wajah se aisi hogyi hai. Woh actually Jaipur mein ek ladka hai Vicky. Jo by mistake papa ka business friend ka beta hai jo mujhe hardin ghurta rehta hai touch karne ke bahane khojta rehta hai. Jiski wajah se mujhe laga aap bhi waise hi hai isiliye maine aapko woh sab boldiya. Once again I Am Sorry.

Raj: Koi baat nhi. Par meri baat maano toh aise ladko ke baare mein apne ghar mein bata dena chahiye kyoki aise ladke mentally disturb hote hai kab kyaa kar jaaye kisi ko pata nhi chalta.

Sonal: Hmm aap sahi keh rahe hai. Par ab shayad aisa kuch nhi hoga. Kyoki main piche 9 mahine se coma mein thi aur Mumbai mein hu toh ab shayad woh mujhe bhul gaya hoga.

Raj: Haa yeh bhi hai. Waisee ab tumhari tabiyat kaisi hai. Sir mein dard nhi hota naa.

Sonal: Tabiyat bilkul thik hai. Bas ek baar yeh pairr thikk hojaaye toh wapas apne ghar chali jaungi.

Raj yeh sunke thoda udaas hojaata hai ke Sonal wapas Jaipur jaana chahti hai.

Raj: Hmm achhi baat hai. Toh aage ka kyaa socha hai.

Sonal: Socha hai Interior design mein masters karu aur phir ek achha sa start up open karu jaha ghar ka interior achhe se design kar saku. Par confuse hu ke kaha se karu.

Raj: Achha hai. Waise tumne jo socha hai woh bahot achha hai aur meri nazar mein ek bahot achha college bhi hai jaha se tum apna master complete karsakti ho.


Sonal: Achhha kaha pe.

Raj: Woh yehi Mumbai mein hai. Tum chaho toh yaha se apni padhai karsakti ho uske baad yaha pe tumhe apne start up ke liye achhe achhe projects bhi mil jaayenge.

Sonal: Thank You. Par yaha mumbai mein akele rehna possible nhi. Aur mummy papa nhi manenge.

Raj: Maine bas idea diya hai. Ab tum dekhlo kyaa karna hai.

Sonal: Okk Good Nightttt.

Raj: Good Nightt.

Phir Sonal waha se apne kamre mein chali jaati hai aur Raj wahi baitha kuch sochne lagta hai.

Tabhi waha Deepak aata hai.

Deepak: Kyaa hua kyaa soch rahe ho Raj beta.

Raj: Sonal ko yaha Mumbai mein rehne ka ek idea toh diya hai par darr hai kahi woh inkaar naa karde.

Deepak: Kyaa idea diya hai.

Raj: Sonal confuse hai masters kaha se karee. Toh maine usko yaha mumbai se karne ke liye idea diya hai. Par woh darr rahi hai gharwalo se itna durr rehne se. Aur kahi usko Jaipur mein hi koi achha college mil gaya toh woh yaha se chali jaayegi.

Deepak: Tum chinta mat karo. Sonal ko jaipur mein koi achha college nhi milega woh yehi rahegi tumlogo ke saath.

Raj: Woh kaisee.

Deepak: Woh main dekhlunga. Tum chinta mat karo. Jaao jaake so jaao.

Raj bhi bina kuch bole waha se chala jaata hai.

Thodi der baad Deepak Sonal ke kamre mein aata hai.

Deepak: Sonal.

Sonal: Papa aap aaiye naa.

Deepak: Kyaa kar rahi ho.

Sonal: Kuch nhi papa. Aap bataiye.

Deepak: Beta main puchna chahta tha ke tumne aage ko leke kya socha hai.

Sonal: Maine interior design mein hi masters karne ka socha hai. Par confuse hu kaha se karu.

Deepak: Maine itne mahino mein yaha tumhare liye ek achha college dekha hai. Agar tum chaho toh yaha se kar sakti ho. Woh college bahot achha hai.

Sonal: Par papa ghar se itni durr akele kaise rahungi main.

Deepak: Akeli kaha ho beta. Tum yehi Kapoor House mein rehna.

Sonal: Nhi papa yeh achha nhi lagta. Aur phir 1-2 din ke liye toh rehna nhi hai pure 2 saal ke liye rehna hai. Itne din kisi ke ghar mein rehna achha nhi lagta.

Deepak: Woh sab main dekh lunga. Tum bolo kyaa tum yaha padhna chahti ho. Koi force nhi hai bilkul tumhari marzi hai.

Sonal: Main soch ke bataungi papa.

Deepak: Tum aaram se socho. Koi jaldi nhi hai. Good Night.

Sonal: Good Night Papa.

Phir Deepak waha se chala jaata hai aur Sonal Deepak ki baato ko sochne lagti hai. Aur thodi der baad kuch faisla karke woh sone ke liye dheere dheere bed mein aati hai aur aaram se so jaati hai.

Agle din subah sab dining table mein nashta kar rahe the aur issbaar inke saath Sonal bhi thi. Sablog naashta kar rahe the tabhi Karan ko ek call aata hai.

Karan: Haa Bolo.

Saamne se koi kuch bolta hai.

Karan: Thikk hai main abhi aata hu. Yeh bol call cut kardeta hai aur bolta hai. Rajjj chall jaldi.

Raj: Jii bhaiya.

Phir dono aadha naashta karke hi jaldi se jikal jaate hai. Karan ko nikalte dekh unko ajeeb nhi lagta hai par Karan ke saath Raj ko nikalte dekh sabko ajeeb lagta hai.

Vijay: Nandini.

Nandini: Jii Papa.

Vijay: Beta Karan ka toh samaj aata hai par woh Raj ko apne saath kyo le gaya.

Nandini: Pata nhi papa. Unhone mujhe issbaare mein kuch nhi bola.

Sablog phir apna naashta karne lagte hai.

Idher Karan aur Raj gaadi mein jaa rahe the.

Raj: Kya hua bhaiyaa. Hum kaha jaarahe hai.

Karan: Uss Ranjeet ki maa rihaa hone wali hai. Toh woh rihaa hoke jarur apne pati aur bete ke paas hi jaayegi. Aaj unn kamino ko pakad ke hi rahunga.

Raj: Bhaiyaa. Aapko unke saath jo karna hai karlijiyega. Par mujhe uss Ranjeet ko 10 mins ke liye mere hawale kardijiyegaa.

Karan: Ek pal Raj ko dekhta hai aur uski aankho mein jo gussa tha woh dekh kar woh bolta hai. Thikk hai.


Phir dono jaldi se police station ki taraf badh jaate hai.
Itni aasani se Ranjeet or uska baap nahi milne wale jitna aasan karan soch raha h
Yeh Sonal n kia fesla lia kahi jaipur jane ka tow nahi soch lia
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Sonal waha baith baith Raj ke akele hone ka intezaar kar rahi thi aur kuch der mein hi Raj waha akela baitha rehta hai.

Sonal: Rajjjj.

Raj Sonal ki awaaz sunke uski taraf dekhta hai toh paata hai Sonal nazre nichhe kiye hue thi.

Raj: Haa bolo.

Sonal: Woh actually mujhe aapse kuch kehna tha.

Raj: Haa bolo.

Sonal: Wohh actually woh main aapse woh kehna chahti thi ke woh...

Raj: Kyaa huaa bolo.

Sonal: Ek gehri saans leke. Woh actually I Am Sorry. Mujhe aapke saath waisa behave nhi karna chahiye tha. Maine aapko galat samaj liya jabki aap meri madad hi kar rahe the. Please mujhe maaf kardijiye. Uss din ke aad mere dil mein ek bahot bada guilt tha ke maine aapko galat samajha jiske baad se main aajtak chain se nhi reh paayi.

Itna sabkuch Sonal ek hi saans mein boldeti hai aur Raj usko bas dekhte reh jaata hai.

Kuch der tak jab Raj ka koi reply nhi aata toh Sonal nazre uthake dekhti hai toh paati Raj usko hi dekhe jaa raha hai.

Sonal: Rajjjj. Rajjjj.

Raj: Haaa. Haaa main sunn raha hu.

Sonal: I Am Sorry.

Raj: Muskurate hue. Tumhe Sorry kehne ki koi jarurat hai. Main samaj sakta hu tumne jaanmuzz ke mujhe wohsab nhi kaha hoga.

Sonal: Actually. Aapne sahi kaha. Meri soch kisi ki wajah se aisi hogyi hai. Woh actually Jaipur mein ek ladka hai Vicky. Jo by mistake papa ka business friend ka beta hai jo mujhe hardin ghurta rehta hai touch karne ke bahane khojta rehta hai. Jiski wajah se mujhe laga aap bhi waise hi hai isiliye maine aapko woh sab boldiya. Once again I Am Sorry.

Raj: Koi baat nhi. Par meri baat maano toh aise ladko ke baare mein apne ghar mein bata dena chahiye kyoki aise ladke mentally disturb hote hai kab kyaa kar jaaye kisi ko pata nhi chalta.

Sonal: Hmm aap sahi keh rahe hai. Par ab shayad aisa kuch nhi hoga. Kyoki main piche 9 mahine se coma mein thi aur Mumbai mein hu toh ab shayad woh mujhe bhul gaya hoga.

Raj: Haa yeh bhi hai. Waisee ab tumhari tabiyat kaisi hai. Sir mein dard nhi hota naa.

Sonal: Tabiyat bilkul thik hai. Bas ek baar yeh pairr thikk hojaaye toh wapas apne ghar chali jaungi.

Raj yeh sunke thoda udaas hojaata hai ke Sonal wapas Jaipur jaana chahti hai.

Raj: Hmm achhi baat hai. Toh aage ka kyaa socha hai.

Sonal: Socha hai Interior design mein masters karu aur phir ek achha sa start up open karu jaha ghar ka interior achhe se design kar saku. Par confuse hu ke kaha se karu.

Raj: Achha hai. Waise tumne jo socha hai woh bahot achha hai aur meri nazar mein ek bahot achha college bhi hai jaha se tum apna master complete karsakti ho.


Sonal: Achhha kaha pe.

Raj: Woh yehi Mumbai mein hai. Tum chaho toh yaha se apni padhai karsakti ho uske baad yaha pe tumhe apne start up ke liye achhe achhe projects bhi mil jaayenge.

Sonal: Thank You. Par yaha mumbai mein akele rehna possible nhi. Aur mummy papa nhi manenge.

Raj: Maine bas idea diya hai. Ab tum dekhlo kyaa karna hai.

Sonal: Okk Good Nightttt.

Raj: Good Nightt.

Phir Sonal waha se apne kamre mein chali jaati hai aur Raj wahi baitha kuch sochne lagta hai.

Tabhi waha Deepak aata hai.

Deepak: Kyaa hua kyaa soch rahe ho Raj beta.

Raj: Sonal ko yaha Mumbai mein rehne ka ek idea toh diya hai par darr hai kahi woh inkaar naa karde.

Deepak: Kyaa idea diya hai.

Raj: Sonal confuse hai masters kaha se karee. Toh maine usko yaha mumbai se karne ke liye idea diya hai. Par woh darr rahi hai gharwalo se itna durr rehne se. Aur kahi usko Jaipur mein hi koi achha college mil gaya toh woh yaha se chali jaayegi.

Deepak: Tum chinta mat karo. Sonal ko jaipur mein koi achha college nhi milega woh yehi rahegi tumlogo ke saath.

Raj: Woh kaisee.

Deepak: Woh main dekhlunga. Tum chinta mat karo. Jaao jaake so jaao.

Raj bhi bina kuch bole waha se chala jaata hai.

Thodi der baad Deepak Sonal ke kamre mein aata hai.

Deepak: Sonal.

Sonal: Papa aap aaiye naa.

Deepak: Kyaa kar rahi ho.

Sonal: Kuch nhi papa. Aap bataiye.

Deepak: Beta main puchna chahta tha ke tumne aage ko leke kya socha hai.

Sonal: Maine interior design mein hi masters karne ka socha hai. Par confuse hu kaha se karu.

Deepak: Maine itne mahino mein yaha tumhare liye ek achha college dekha hai. Agar tum chaho toh yaha se kar sakti ho. Woh college bahot achha hai.

Sonal: Par papa ghar se itni durr akele kaise rahungi main.

Deepak: Akeli kaha ho beta. Tum yehi Kapoor House mein rehna.

Sonal: Nhi papa yeh achha nhi lagta. Aur phir 1-2 din ke liye toh rehna nhi hai pure 2 saal ke liye rehna hai. Itne din kisi ke ghar mein rehna achha nhi lagta.

Deepak: Woh sab main dekh lunga. Tum bolo kyaa tum yaha padhna chahti ho. Koi force nhi hai bilkul tumhari marzi hai.

Sonal: Main soch ke bataungi papa.

Deepak: Tum aaram se socho. Koi jaldi nhi hai. Good Night.

Sonal: Good Night Papa.

Phir Deepak waha se chala jaata hai aur Sonal Deepak ki baato ko sochne lagti hai. Aur thodi der baad kuch faisla karke woh sone ke liye dheere dheere bed mein aati hai aur aaram se so jaati hai.

Agle din subah sab dining table mein nashta kar rahe the aur issbaar inke saath Sonal bhi thi. Sablog naashta kar rahe the tabhi Karan ko ek call aata hai.

Karan: Haa Bolo.

Saamne se koi kuch bolta hai.

Karan: Thikk hai main abhi aata hu. Yeh bol call cut kardeta hai aur bolta hai. Rajjj chall jaldi.

Raj: Jii bhaiya.

Phir dono aadha naashta karke hi jaldi se jikal jaate hai. Karan ko nikalte dekh unko ajeeb nhi lagta hai par Karan ke saath Raj ko nikalte dekh sabko ajeeb lagta hai.

Vijay: Nandini.

Nandini: Jii Papa.

Vijay: Beta Karan ka toh samaj aata hai par woh Raj ko apne saath kyo le gaya.

Nandini: Pata nhi papa. Unhone mujhe issbaare mein kuch nhi bola.

Sablog phir apna naashta karne lagte hai.

Idher Karan aur Raj gaadi mein jaa rahe the.

Raj: Kya hua bhaiyaa. Hum kaha jaarahe hai.

Karan: Uss Ranjeet ki maa rihaa hone wali hai. Toh woh rihaa hoke jarur apne pati aur bete ke paas hi jaayegi. Aaj unn kamino ko pakad ke hi rahunga.

Raj: Bhaiyaa. Aapko unke saath jo karna hai karlijiyega. Par mujhe uss Ranjeet ko 10 mins ke liye mere hawale kardijiyegaa.

Karan: Ek pal Raj ko dekhta hai aur uski aankho mein jo gussa tha woh dekh kar woh bolta hai. Thikk hai.


Phir dono jaldi se police station ki taraf badh jaate hai.
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Meera wahi darwaze pe khadi rehti hai. Ab uska gussa darr bechaini shant hui thi aur isiliye ab usko Smita aur Raj ke saath kiya behaviour yaad aaraha tha specially Raj ko thappad marna.

Meera: Aankhe nichhe karke haath jod ke. Rajjjj. Pleasee mujhee maaf kardoo. Main Sonal ko leke darr gayi thi aur usi darr ne mujhse woh kaam karwa diya. Maine tumhe thappad mardiyaa. Pleasee mujhee maaf kardooo.

Raj: Meera ke haatho ko pakadte hue. Nhi nhi yeh aap kyaa kar rahi hai. Aap mujhse umar mein bahot badi hai aap meri Sonal ki mummy hai yaani meri bhi mummy hai. Aur aapne jo bhi kaha jo bhi kiya woh gusse aur darr ki wajah se kiya. Aap maafi maang ke mujhe meri hi nazro mein giraa rahi hai. Aur aapne sahi kaha tha meri wajah se hi aaj Sonal ki yeh halat hai.

Meera: Nhii Rajjj. Isme tumhari koi galti nhi hai. Tum toh Sonal ko khush rakhne ke liye usko ghumane le gaye the. Tum apne aap ko dosh mat do. Aur Smita tum bhi mujhe maaf kardo. Gusse mein aur darr mein main bhi naajaane tumhe kya kya bol baithi.

Smita: Nhii Meera. Main samaj sakti hu uss waqt tumhari situation kyaa thi. Main bhi ek maa hu. Tum aise maafi mat maango.

Kuch der baad Sonal ko room mein shift kardiya gaya tha aur sirf Meera hi uske paas baithi hui thi. Raj bahar khada darwaze se Sonal ko dekhe jaa raha tha. Sonal ko waise halat mein dekh ke Raj ki aankho se lagatar aansu beh rahe the. Tabhi Nandini Raj ke paas aati hai.

Nandini: Sonal thikk hojayegi Rajj.

Raj: Aaj iska birthday hai bhabhi. Socha tha aaj isko propose karunga. Isko isk pyaar dunga. Par dekho naa kyaa hogyaa. Agar isse kuch hogya toh main jee nhi paunga bhabhi. Megha ka dukh toh mein jhell gaya bhabhi par Sonal ka nhi jhell paunga.

Nandini: Aisa mat socho Raj. Dekhna bahot jald Sonal thikk hojayegi. Aur phirse tumhare aage pichhe ghumti rahegi.
Raj kuch nhi bolta bas Sonal ko dekhta rehta hai.

Udher ghar mein Shruti aur Savitri ko bhi tension horahi thi. Shruti baar baar hospital call karke Sonal ka haal chaal puch rahi thi. Savitri toh mandir mein baithi Sonal ke liye puja kiye jaa rahi thi.

Kuch 2 ghante baad Sonal ko hosh aane lagta hai yeh dekh kar Nurse jaldi se doctor ko bula ke laati hai.

Doctor jaldi se Sonal ke paas aata hai.

Doctor: Hello Sonal.

Sonal: Behoshi aur kamzoori bhari halat mein. Hello Doctor.

Doctor: Ab kaisa feel horaha hai.

Sonal: Achha lag raha hai. Par sir bahot dukhh raha hai.

Doctor: Woh thikk hojayega. Achha mujhe yeh batao yeh kaun hai jo tumhare bagal mein baithi hai.

Sonal bagal mein nazre ghumati hai toh dekhti hai Meera aankho mein aansu liye usse hi dekh rahi hai.

Sonal: Yeh meri mummy hai.

Doctor: Good. Ab yeh batao tumhe last kyaa yaad hai. Dimaag mein jyaada jorr dene ki koi jarurat nhi hai.

Sonal apni aankhe band karke sochne lagti hai toh usko last ka jo yaad aata hai woh Doctor ko bolti hai.

Sonal: Mujhe last ka bas yehi yaad hai ke main Apne college ka final exam diya hai aur results ka wait kar rahi hu. Uske baad mujhe kuch yaad nhi.

Doctor: Ookk Sonal. Kyaa tumhe uske baad ka kuch bhi yaa nhi hai.

Sonal thoda apne dimaag mein jorr deti hai toh uska sir dard karne lagta hai. Jisse woh chillane lagti hai.

Sonal ko aise chillate dekh Meera darr jaati hai aur rone lagti hai. Nurse jaldi se Sonal ko ek neend ka aur ek pain killer ka injection de deti hai jisse Sonal dheere dheere so jaati hai.

Phir Doctor bahar aata hai.

Doctor: Kyaa unki shaadi hochuki hai.

Raj: Jii haa. Main uska pati hu. Kaisi hai meri Sonal. Woh thikk toh hai naa.

Doctor: Aap mere cabin mein aaiye. Mujhe kuch jaruri baat karni hai.

Deepak: Doctor aisi kyaa baat hai jo aap humsab ke saamne nhi bol paarahe hai. Dekhiye main uska pita hu please mujhe bataiye meri beti kaisi hai.

Doctor: Aaplog mere cabin mein aaiye waha baat karte hai.

Raj Deepak Karan aur Yash Doctor ke Cabin mein chale jaate hai.

Raj: Doctor aakhir aisi kyaa baat hai. Meri Sonal thikk toh hai naa.

Doctor: Dekhiye mujhe jiss baat ka darr tha wohi hua hai. Mrs. Sonal ke dimaag ke internal area mein chott lagi hai aur waha ke nerves mein khoon jam gaya hai. Agar main uss area mein haath deta toh unki jaan bhi jaa sakti thi.
Yeh sunne ke baad waha jaise ek sannata chaa jaata hai. Raj ki aankho se aansu behne lagte hai.

Deepak: Toh iska koi ilaaz nhi hai kya doctor.

Doctor: Jii nhii. Jaisa maine kaha agar maine waha haath diya toh unki jaan jaa sakti hai.

Raj: Nhii Doctorr. Aisa kuch bhi mat kijiyega jisse meri Sonal ki jaan ko khatra ho.

Karan: Abhi Sonal kya condition hai doctor. Woh jo blood jama hua hai woh kaise thikk hoga aur jab tak woh thikk nhi hota toh Sonal ka kyaa hoga.

Doctor: Dekhiye yeh apne aap thikk hoga. Aur isme kitna time lagega yeh bata paana mushkil hai. Aur jab tak woh thikk nhi hota hai tab tak.....

Yash: Tab tak kyaa Doctor.

Doctor: I am sorry to say but tab tak ke liye she will have a memory loss. Aur yeh memory loss ka time period unke College passout hone ke pehle ka hai. Unhone bataya unhe last yehi yaad hai ke woh apne college ke exams khatam karke results ka wait kar rahi hai.

Doctor ki baat ne jaise waha ek dhamaka hi kardiya tha. Aur iss dhamake ka sabse jyaada asar hua tha Raj ke upar. Woh toh jaise sadme mein chala gaya tha.

Deepak Yash Karan sabki nazar Raj ke upar thi. Raj waha jaise pathar bann gaya tha.

Teeno: Rajjjj. Rajjjjjjj.

Karan: Doctor. Dekhiye naa kyaa hua isse. Yeh kuch bol kyo nhi raha hai.

Doctor Raj ko check karta hai aur uske haath mein ek safety pin inject karta hai jiske wajah se Raj hosh mein aata hai.

Doctor: Inko sadma laga tha.

Teeno: Rajj tum thikk hooo.

Raj: Doctor kyaa meri Sonal mujhe bhi bhull gayi hai.

Doctor: Aaplog ekdusre ko kitne time se jaante hai.

Raj: Waise toh bachpan se jaante hai par hum 12 saal se alag the no contact. Abhi 8-9 mahine pehle hi mile hai.

Doctor: Tab toh woh aapko aapke saath shaadi aapke saath bitaye har ek pal ko bhul chuki hai.

Raj: Nhiii aisa nhi hosakta. Meri Sonal mujhe kaise bhul sakti hai. Woh toh mujhse kitna pyaar karti hai woh kuch bhi bhul sakti hai par apne Raj ko nhi bhul sakti.

Doctor: Sambhaliye apne aapko. Ab woh aapko aapke pyaar ko sabkuch bhul chuki hai. Ab woh ekdum waisi bann gayi hai jaise woh aapse milne ke pehle thi.

Karan: Toh doctor hosakta hai woh jab woh humhe dekhe toh yaad aajaye.

Doctor: Ho bhi sakta hai jab woh aaplogo ko dekhe toh woh aaplogo ko aapke naam se pehchan le kyoki aaplog uske bachpan ke relative hai. Par unko aaplogo se apna rishta yaad nhi aayega. Aur jaisa aapne(Raj) kaha woh aapse pyaar karti hai toh ab woh pyaar bhul chuki hai. Ab aap unke liye ek normal insaan hai.

Raj: Meri Sonal kab tak thikk hogi doctor.

Doctor: Yeh bolna mushkil hai. Yeh totally apne aap hoga aur isme kitna time lagega yeh main nhi bol sakta.

Deepak: Agar hum Sonal ko yaad dilane ki koshish kare toh.

Doctor: Aisa galti se bhi mat kijiyega. Isse unke dimaag mein gehra asar hoga jo sidha uss hisse pe attack karega jaha chott lagi hai isse unko brain haemorrhage bhi hosakta hai jo unki jaan bhi le sakta hai.

Raj: Nhii nhii. Main meri Sonal ko kuch nhi hone dunga.
Deepak: Toh ab hum kyaa kare Doctor.

Doctor: Unke liye aaplogo ko 8-9 mahine pehle ki zindagi jeeni hogi. Jaise woh uss samay thi unhe bilkul waisa hi rakhna hoga. Aisa koi kaam nhi karna jisse unke dimaag mein pressure padhe. Uss waqt unke saamne jo log jaise the bilkul waise hi rehna hoga. Uss waqt jo situation thi bilkul waisi situation laani hogi.

Sab: Jii Doctor.

Doctor: Main wapas bolta hu. Unko jabardasti yaad dilane ki koshish naa karee. Baaki aaplogo ki marzi.

Deepak: Ab Sonal ki halat kaisi hai.

Doctor: Woh ab thikk hai. Unke pairon mein fracture hai jiske wajah se unhe kuch din wheelchair ka use karna hoga. Aaplog kal unhe le jaa sakte hai. Aaj raat woh yehi observation mein rahengi.

Deepak: Jiii. Sonal ko hosh kab tak aayega doctor.

Doctor: Abhi toh woh soyegi. Unko hosh ab kal subah hi aayega.

Phir sab doctor ke cabin se bahar aate hai. Raj toh jaise pathar bana hua tha. Usko kuch samaj nhi aaraha tha. Uska pyaar uske aankho ke saamne rahega par usko pehchan nhi paayega yehchiz jaisr Raj ko hazaar maut maar rahi thi.

Yehlog chalte hue Sonal ke room ke paas aate hai toh sablog inhe gher lete hai aur sawaal puchne lagte hai. Par kisi mein itni himmat nhi thi ke woh bolsake.

Meera: Aaplog kuch bolte kyo nhi. Bataiye naa kyaa bola doctor ne. Kaisi hai meri Sonal.

Swati: Haa Yash bataiye naa. Kyaa bola doctor ne. Aur yeh Raj ko kyaa hua hai. Yeh iss tarah kyo behave kar raha hai.

Yash Raj ko ek jagah baitha deta hai aur uske paas baith jaata hai.

Nandini: Karan kyaa baat hai. Kyaa bola doctor ne. Sonal thikk toh hai naa. Aapsab kuch bol kyo nhi rahe hai.

Karan: Nandini woh Sonal actually Sonal ki...

Meera: Sonal ki kyaaaa... Woh thikk toh haii naa. Aapsab bataiyee naa.

Deepak: Sonal ki yaadast chali gayi hai. Woh pichle 8-9 mahino ka sabkuch bhul chuki hai. Usse yeh bhi yaad nhi hai ke uski shaadi hochuki hai.

Deepak ke khulase ne toh waha ek sannata kar diya tha. Sablog jaha the waha jaise jamm gaye the. Sabki aankho se aansu nikalne lage the. Nandini Raj ko dekhe jaa rahi rahi jiske chehre pe waisa hi bhavv tha jaisa Megha ke jaane ke baad tha.

Phir Deepak Doctor ki boli hui harbaat waha batata hai. Jaise jaise Deepak bol raha tha sablogo ke chehre ke bhavv badal rahe thee. Kisi ke aankho mein aansu the toh kisi ke aankho mein sunapan.

Meera: Rote hue. Meri beti ne aisa kaunsa paap kiya tha jiski usse aisi saza mil rahi hai. Usne kabhi kisi ka bura nhi chaha phir uske saath aisa kyoo horaha hai.

Deepak: Meera sambhalo khud ko. Abhi Sonal ko sabse jyaada tumhari jarurat hai. Humhe Sonal ka ab jyaada dhyaan rakhna hogaa. Aur iske liye humhe usse Jaipur lejaana hogaa.

Raj jo itni derr se chup baitha hua tha woh Deepak ki baat sunke bolta hai.

Raj: Meri Sonal kahi nhi jaayegi. Woh yehi mumbai mein apne ghar mein rahegi. Mere saath rahegi.

Deepak: Par beta woh tumsab ko bhul chuki hai. Usse kuch bhi yaad nhi hai.

Raj: Mujhe pata hai woh humhe bhul chuki hai. Aur agar mera pyaar sachha hai toh ekdin Sonal ko sabkuch yaad aayega. Aur iske liye Sonal ko mumbai mein rehna hi hoga. Hum usse jabardasti yaad nhi dila sakte. Par woh khud apne aap yaad karne ki koshish karegi.

Meera: Aur agar isse meri beti ko kuch hogya toh.

Raj: Ab woh meri patni hai. Aur mere rehte ab Sonal ka ek baal bhi baanka nhi hogaa.

Smita: Par Raj woh 8-9 mahine ka bhul chuki hai. Kal ko jab woh bahar niklegi toh tab usse pata chalega ke woh kitne time pichhe hai.

Raj: Woh sab main dekh lunga. Par Sonal yaha mumbai mein mere saath rahegi.

Sablog Raj ko samjhane ki koshish kar rahe the par Raj apni jidd mein raha aur aakhir mein sabko manna hi padha.

Deepak: Agar kalko Sonal puchegi ki uske saath aisa kyaa hua tha jiske wajah se usko 8-9 mahine ka kuch yaad nhi aaraha tha toh hum kyaa bolenge.

Raj: Hum usse sach batayenge ke uska ek accident hogya tha.

Karan: Rajjjj. Tera dimaag toh sahi hai. Tu usse sach batayega jisse uske dimaag mein asar padega.

Raj: Haa. Hum usse batayenge uska ek accident hua tha jiske wajah se woh 8-9 mahine se coma mein thi. Aur aaj usse hosh aaya hai. Isse woh 8-9 mahine ka gap cover hojayegaa. Aur isse uske dimaag mein koi pressure bhi nhi padega.

Sabko Raj ki kahi hui baat sahi lagti hai. Aur sab Sonal ko yehi batane ka faisla karte hai.

Raj: Swati tumhe Sonal ke liye phir se waise banna padega jaise tum shaadi se pehle thi.

Swati: Aankho mein aansu liye. Sonal ke liye main kuch bhi karungi.

Raj: Aarav ghar jaa waha didi ke saath milke ghar ko waisa karde jaisa shaadi ke pehle tha aur jis kamre mein pehle Sonal rehti thi woh kamra saaf karwa de.

Aarav: Jii bhaiya.

Raj: Swati Yash ke saath ghar jaao aur change karlo. Aur aapsab bhi ab ghar chale jaaiye. Yaha itne jan ka rukhna sahi nhi. Main yahi rahunga.

Deepak: Main aur Meera bhi yehi rahenge. Humari yaha jyaada jarurat hai.

Swati: Main bhi yehi rahungi. Main abhi aati hu change karke. Yash chaliyeee.

Yeh bol Swati Yash ke saath nikal jaati hai. Aur Raj wahi chup chaap baitha rehta hai.

Smita: Rajjj.

Raj: Main thikk hu Mummy. Aapsab ab ghar jaaiye. Waha didi aue Dadi akeli hai.

Smita: Apna khayal rakhna Raj.


Phir baaki sab bhi ghar ke liye nikal jaate hai. Hospital mein sirf Deepak Meera Samar aur Raj hi the.
To sonal ki yaadast chali gay hai...

Nice update
 
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