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Romance Bepanaah Ishq (Completed)

Bilal jan

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Update 52
Hospital ke bahar aake Raj Sonal wapas god mein utha leta hai aur dhyaan se gaadi mein baitha deta hai aur Sonal ke agal bagal Smita aur Meera baith jaati hai.

Sonal: Thank You meri itni help karne ke liye.

Raj bas halke se smile kardeta hai aur jaake driving seat mein baith jaata hai aur gaadi ko Kapoor House ki taraf ghuma deta hai.

Gaadi mein Raj baar baar Sonal ko dekh raha tha saamne lage mirror mein se jo Sonal dekh leti hai aur usko yeh bilkul bhi achha nhi lag raha tha. Aur yeh chiz Sonal ki nazro mein Raj ka impression aur down kar raha tha.

Sonal: Mann mein. Yeh kaise mujhe dekhe jaa raha hai. Mujhe laga tha yeh achhe insaan hai par iske liye meri pehli soch hi sahi thi yeh bahot hi besharam insaan hai.

Thodi der mein sablog ghar mein aajate hai. Raj gaadi se utar ke Sonal ko godd mein lene lagta hai toh Sonal usko gusse se ghurr rahi hoti hai. Par woh kuch nhi bolti.

Raj Sonal ko godd mein utha ke achhe se wheelchair mein baitha deta hai aur usko andar lejaane lagta hai.

Sonal jaise jaise andar jaa rahi thi usko ajeeb sa lagne lagta hai. Usko aisa lagta hai jaise woh iss ghar ko achhe se jaanti hai aur bahot baar aachuki hai. Woh ghurr ghurr se harchiz ko dekh rahi thi.

Main door pe Smita pehle Sonal ki aarti utarti hai uske baad usko andar aane deti hai.

Andar aane ke baad bhi Sonal ghar ko ghure jaa rahi thi usko yeh ghar bilkul apna sa lag raha thaa.

Smita: Sonal beta kyaa dekh rahi ho.

Sonal: Yehh gharrr. Aisa lag raha hai jaise main yaha pehle bhi kai baar aachuki hu. Iss ghar ke har kone se waakif hu. Par thikk se kuch yaad nhi aaraha hai.

Sonal ki baat sunne ke baad sablog thode udaas hojaate hai.

Swati: Woh tu abhi hospital se aayi hai aur thaki hui bhi hai naa isiliye aisa lag raha hogaa. Tu jaa jaake thoda rest karle.

Sonal: Hosakta hai.

Smita: Raj jao Sonal ko uske room mein le jao woh nichhe wala.

Raj: Jiii.

Phir Raj Sonal ko uss room mein le jaata hai aur bed mein achhe se baitha deta hai. Aur bahar aane lagta hai.

Sonal: Suniyee.

Raj: Haa bolo koi kaam hai.

Sonal: Kuch puchna tha sach sach batayenge.

Raj: Hmm pucho.

Sonal: Aap mujhe gaadi mein ghurr kyo rahe the. Inkaar nhi karna maine pure raaste yeh notice kiya hai. Dekho mujhe yeh sab pasand nhi hai. Aap mere papa ke dost cum bhai ke bete hai isiliye main aapki iss harqat ko leke gharwalo ko kuch nhi bolungi par aage se aisa mat kijiyega. Warna mujhe gharwalo ko sab bolna padega.

Raj: Main tumhe jaanmuzz ke nhi ghurr raha tha. Tumhare sir mein chott lagi hai raaste mein thode bahot gaddhe the jiske wajah se tumhe problem horahi hai yaa nhi bas wahi dekhne ke liye tumhe dekh raha tha aur tumhe laga main tumhe ghurr raha hu.

Mujhe pata hai tumhe kyaa pasand hai kyaa naa pasand hai. Aur main aisa koi kaam nhi karunga jo tumhe pasand nhi. Agar tumhe kisi bhi chiz ki jarurat ho toh Bhabhi ko yaa Mummy ko kisi ko bhi bula lena.

Yeh bol Raj waha se chala jaata hai par tab uski aankho mein thode aansu bhi the.

Pichhe Sonal bed mein baithi bas Raj ko jaate hue dekh rahi thi aur soch rahi thi ke woh kitna galat soch rahi thi Raj ke baare mein. Usne uski kitni madad ki aur woh usse galat samaj ke kitna kuch bol baithi.

Sonal: Maine unhe phir se bura bhala keh diya jabki woh toh meri parwaah hi kar rahe the. Yeh sab uss Vicky ki wajah se hua hai. Waha woh mujhe jiss tarah se ghurta hai chune ki koshish karta hai uski wajah se mujhe harkoi uski tarah hi lagta hai. Aur isi wajah se main Raj ko galat samaj baithi. Mujhe unse maafi maangni chahiye. Agli baar jab mere saamne aayenge tab maafi maamg lungi.

Par unhe kaise pata hai mujhe kyaa pasand hai kyaa naa pasand hai. Hum toh bahot saal baad mile hai aur woh toh mujhe achhe se jaante bhi nhi hai phir unhone aisa kyo kaha.

Abhi Sonal aur kuch bolti tabhi uske kamre mein Swati Meera Smita aur Ragini aajate hai.

Ragini: Kyaa soch rahi ho beta.

Sonal: Kuch nhi bas yehi soch rahi thi ke main hospital mein kaise pahonchi kyaa hua tha mere saath.

Meera: Betaa tumhara ek accident hogya tha Jaipur mein aur uski wajah se tumhare sir mein chott aagayi thi. Jiske treatment ke liye hum tumhe yaha Mumbai leke aaye.

Swati: Par treatment ke baad tu Coma mein chali gayi thi. Aur kal tujhe hosh aaya hai. Isiliye tujhe sabkuch ajeeb lag raha hai.

Sonal: Par mera accident hua kaise. Mujhe toh yaad bhi nhi hai. Mujhe toh bas itna pata hai ke main ghar se mandir jaane ke liye nikli thi. Phir kyaa hua mujhe kuch yaad nhi.

Swati: Mandir se ghar aate waqt hi tera accident hogya tha. Aur ab tu innsab ke baare mein mat soch. Tu thik hai humare saath hai yehi humare liye bahot hai.

Sonal: Main kitne dino se Coma mein thi.

Swati: Tu 9 mahino se Coma mein thi. Aur kal tujhe hosh aaya hai.

Sonal yeh sunke shock hojaati hai.

Sonal: Kyaaaaa 9 mahine. Matlab itne mahino se main behosh thi.

Swati: Haaa. Aur ab tu tension mat le. Ab tu thikk hai. Par apne dimaag mein jyaada jor mat dena aur jyaada kuch sochne ki jarurat nhi hai.

Sonal: Thikkk hai.

Smita: Chalo ab tum aaram karo. Kisi bhi chiz ki jarurat ho toh humhe bula lena. Thikk hai.

Sonal: Jiii.

Phir charo waha se bahar aajate hai aur Sonal aaram karne lagti hai.

Idher Raj Sonal ke kamre se nikalne ke baad sidha apne room mein jaata hai aur jaldi se fresh hoke ready hoke Karan ke kamre mein aata hai.

Raj: Bhaiyaaa.

Karan: Haa Raj bol. Sonal thikk hai naa.

Raj: Woh thikk hai. Par ab woh thikk nhi rahega jisne meri Sonal ke saath aisa kiyaa hai. Aapko CCTV footage mila.

Karan: Haa mil gaya hai aur wahi dekhne main jaa raha hu.

Raj: Main bhi chalunga.

Karan: Chall.

Yash: Main bhi nhi bol hum bhi chalenge.

Raj: Yash tu.

Yash: Haa main. Aur akele akele jaa raha tha. Main bhi chalunga tere saath.

Phir teeno nikal padhte hai police station ki taraf.

Udher Ranjeet ko bhi pata chal gaya tha Sonal bachh gayi hai par yeh nhi pata tha ke uski yaadast chali gayi hai.

Ranjeet: Gusse se chillate hue. Aaaahhhhhhh itni planning ke baad bhi sab kuch barbaad hogya.

Rajesh: Kyaaa huaaa kyo chilla raha hai.

Ranjeet: Woh Sonal bachh gayi hai.

Rajesh: Kyaaaa. Itne bure accident ke baad woh bachh kaise gayi. Kyaa tujhe pura yakeen hai ke Sonal bachh gayi hai.

Ranjeet: Haaa mere uss aadmi ne dekha hai Sonal ko Hospital ke bahar woh bhi zinda.

Rajesh: Humhe laga tha Sonal ki maut se Raj puri tarah se barbaad hojayega. Par nhiii. Iss baar bhi hum naakaam rahe. Pehle toh ek kaam kar uss aadmi ko bol kahi chupp jaaye. Kyoki ab Raj aur Karan pagalo ki tarah iss baat ka pata lagayenge.

Ranjeet: Chorungaa nhii uss Rajj ko. Jaan se maardungaa usse. Yeh bol woh waha se kahi chala jaata hai.
Wahhhhh jabrdast mindblowing superbbb speechless update.......
keep posting bhai.......
waiting for next update........
 

Naik

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Hospital ke bahar aake Raj Sonal wapas god mein utha leta hai aur dhyaan se gaadi mein baitha deta hai aur Sonal ke agal bagal Smita aur Meera baith jaati hai.

Sonal: Thank You meri itni help karne ke liye.

Raj bas halke se smile kardeta hai aur jaake driving seat mein baith jaata hai aur gaadi ko Kapoor House ki taraf ghuma deta hai.

Gaadi mein Raj baar baar Sonal ko dekh raha tha saamne lage mirror mein se jo Sonal dekh leti hai aur usko yeh bilkul bhi achha nhi lag raha tha. Aur yeh chiz Sonal ki nazro mein Raj ka impression aur down kar raha tha.

Sonal: Mann mein. Yeh kaise mujhe dekhe jaa raha hai. Mujhe laga tha yeh achhe insaan hai par iske liye meri pehli soch hi sahi thi yeh bahot hi besharam insaan hai.

Thodi der mein sablog ghar mein aajate hai. Raj gaadi se utar ke Sonal ko godd mein lene lagta hai toh Sonal usko gusse se ghurr rahi hoti hai. Par woh kuch nhi bolti.

Raj Sonal ko godd mein utha ke achhe se wheelchair mein baitha deta hai aur usko andar lejaane lagta hai.

Sonal jaise jaise andar jaa rahi thi usko ajeeb sa lagne lagta hai. Usko aisa lagta hai jaise woh iss ghar ko achhe se jaanti hai aur bahot baar aachuki hai. Woh ghurr ghurr se harchiz ko dekh rahi thi.

Main door pe Smita pehle Sonal ki aarti utarti hai uske baad usko andar aane deti hai.

Andar aane ke baad bhi Sonal ghar ko ghure jaa rahi thi usko yeh ghar bilkul apna sa lag raha thaa.

Smita: Sonal beta kyaa dekh rahi ho.

Sonal: Yehh gharrr. Aisa lag raha hai jaise main yaha pehle bhi kai baar aachuki hu. Iss ghar ke har kone se waakif hu. Par thikk se kuch yaad nhi aaraha hai.

Sonal ki baat sunne ke baad sablog thode udaas hojaate hai.

Swati: Woh tu abhi hospital se aayi hai aur thaki hui bhi hai naa isiliye aisa lag raha hogaa. Tu jaa jaake thoda rest karle.

Sonal: Hosakta hai.

Smita: Raj jao Sonal ko uske room mein le jao woh nichhe wala.

Raj: Jiii.

Phir Raj Sonal ko uss room mein le jaata hai aur bed mein achhe se baitha deta hai. Aur bahar aane lagta hai.

Sonal: Suniyee.

Raj: Haa bolo koi kaam hai.

Sonal: Kuch puchna tha sach sach batayenge.

Raj: Hmm pucho.

Sonal: Aap mujhe gaadi mein ghurr kyo rahe the. Inkaar nhi karna maine pure raaste yeh notice kiya hai. Dekho mujhe yeh sab pasand nhi hai. Aap mere papa ke dost cum bhai ke bete hai isiliye main aapki iss harqat ko leke gharwalo ko kuch nhi bolungi par aage se aisa mat kijiyega. Warna mujhe gharwalo ko sab bolna padega.

Raj: Main tumhe jaanmuzz ke nhi ghurr raha tha. Tumhare sir mein chott lagi hai raaste mein thode bahot gaddhe the jiske wajah se tumhe problem horahi hai yaa nhi bas wahi dekhne ke liye tumhe dekh raha tha aur tumhe laga main tumhe ghurr raha hu.

Mujhe pata hai tumhe kyaa pasand hai kyaa naa pasand hai. Aur main aisa koi kaam nhi karunga jo tumhe pasand nhi. Agar tumhe kisi bhi chiz ki jarurat ho toh Bhabhi ko yaa Mummy ko kisi ko bhi bula lena.

Yeh bol Raj waha se chala jaata hai par tab uski aankho mein thode aansu bhi the.

Pichhe Sonal bed mein baithi bas Raj ko jaate hue dekh rahi thi aur soch rahi thi ke woh kitna galat soch rahi thi Raj ke baare mein. Usne uski kitni madad ki aur woh usse galat samaj ke kitna kuch bol baithi.

Sonal: Maine unhe phir se bura bhala keh diya jabki woh toh meri parwaah hi kar rahe the. Yeh sab uss Vicky ki wajah se hua hai. Waha woh mujhe jiss tarah se ghurta hai chune ki koshish karta hai uski wajah se mujhe harkoi uski tarah hi lagta hai. Aur isi wajah se main Raj ko galat samaj baithi. Mujhe unse maafi maangni chahiye. Agli baar jab mere saamne aayenge tab maafi maamg lungi.

Par unhe kaise pata hai mujhe kyaa pasand hai kyaa naa pasand hai. Hum toh bahot saal baad mile hai aur woh toh mujhe achhe se jaante bhi nhi hai phir unhone aisa kyo kaha.

Abhi Sonal aur kuch bolti tabhi uske kamre mein Swati Meera Smita aur Ragini aajate hai.

Ragini: Kyaa soch rahi ho beta.

Sonal: Kuch nhi bas yehi soch rahi thi ke main hospital mein kaise pahonchi kyaa hua tha mere saath.

Meera: Betaa tumhara ek accident hogya tha Jaipur mein aur uski wajah se tumhare sir mein chott aagayi thi. Jiske treatment ke liye hum tumhe yaha Mumbai leke aaye.

Swati: Par treatment ke baad tu Coma mein chali gayi thi. Aur kal tujhe hosh aaya hai. Isiliye tujhe sabkuch ajeeb lag raha hai.

Sonal: Par mera accident hua kaise. Mujhe toh yaad bhi nhi hai. Mujhe toh bas itna pata hai ke main ghar se mandir jaane ke liye nikli thi. Phir kyaa hua mujhe kuch yaad nhi.

Swati: Mandir se ghar aate waqt hi tera accident hogya tha. Aur ab tu innsab ke baare mein mat soch. Tu thik hai humare saath hai yehi humare liye bahot hai.

Sonal: Main kitne dino se Coma mein thi.

Swati: Tu 9 mahino se Coma mein thi. Aur kal tujhe hosh aaya hai.

Sonal yeh sunke shock hojaati hai.

Sonal: Kyaaaaa 9 mahine. Matlab itne mahino se main behosh thi.

Swati: Haaa. Aur ab tu tension mat le. Ab tu thikk hai. Par apne dimaag mein jyaada jor mat dena aur jyaada kuch sochne ki jarurat nhi hai.

Sonal: Thikkk hai.

Smita: Chalo ab tum aaram karo. Kisi bhi chiz ki jarurat ho toh humhe bula lena. Thikk hai.

Sonal: Jiii.

Phir charo waha se bahar aajate hai aur Sonal aaram karne lagti hai.

Idher Raj Sonal ke kamre se nikalne ke baad sidha apne room mein jaata hai aur jaldi se fresh hoke ready hoke Karan ke kamre mein aata hai.

Raj: Bhaiyaaa.

Karan: Haa Raj bol. Sonal thikk hai naa.

Raj: Woh thikk hai. Par ab woh thikk nhi rahega jisne meri Sonal ke saath aisa kiyaa hai. Aapko CCTV footage mila.

Karan: Haa mil gaya hai aur wahi dekhne main jaa raha hu.

Raj: Main bhi chalunga.

Karan: Chall.

Yash: Main bhi nhi bol hum bhi chalenge.

Raj: Yash tu.

Yash: Haa main. Aur akele akele jaa raha tha. Main bhi chalunga tere saath.

Phir teeno nikal padhte hai police station ki taraf.

Udher Ranjeet ko bhi pata chal gaya tha Sonal bachh gayi hai par yeh nhi pata tha ke uski yaadast chali gayi hai.

Ranjeet: Gusse se chillate hue. Aaaahhhhhhh itni planning ke baad bhi sab kuch barbaad hogya.

Rajesh: Kyaaa huaaa kyo chilla raha hai.

Ranjeet: Woh Sonal bachh gayi hai.

Rajesh: Kyaaaa. Itne bure accident ke baad woh bachh kaise gayi. Kyaa tujhe pura yakeen hai ke Sonal bachh gayi hai.

Ranjeet: Haaa mere uss aadmi ne dekha hai Sonal ko Hospital ke bahar woh bhi zinda.

Rajesh: Humhe laga tha Sonal ki maut se Raj puri tarah se barbaad hojayega. Par nhiii. Iss baar bhi hum naakaam rahe. Pehle toh ek kaam kar uss aadmi ko bol kahi chupp jaaye. Kyoki ab Raj aur Karan pagalo ki tarah iss baat ka pata lagayenge.

Ranjeet: Chorungaa nhii uss Rajj ko. Jaan se maardungaa usse. Yeh bol woh waha se kahi chala jaata hai.
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Naina

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Gaadi mein Raj baar baar Sonal ko dekh raha tha saamne lage mirror mein se jo Sonal dekh leti hai aur usko yeh bilkul bhi achha nhi lag raha tha. Aur yeh chiz Sonal ki nazro mein Raj ka impression aur down kar raha tha.

Sonal: Mann mein. Yeh kaise mujhe dekhe jaa raha hai. Mujhe laga tha yeh achhe insaan hai par iske liye meri pehli soch hi sahi thi yeh bahot hi besharam insaan hai.

Thodi der mein sablog ghar mein aajate hai. Raj gaadi se utar ke Sonal ko godd mein lene lagta hai toh Sonal usko gusse se ghurr rahi hoti hai. Par woh kuch nhi bolti.
:roflol: :lol:
bahot badhiya :lotpot:
waise agar sonal us waqt waha hoti jab raj jis kadar meera ka hath kas ke pakda hua tha hospital mein to shayad sonal ke bagal wale room mein ek bed par raj bhi sar par patti baandhe leta hota :roflol:
kyun na koi chugli kar de :D aur sonal ke kano ye baat daal de ki raj ne hi ushe chalti car ke saamne dhakka diya tha.... tab kya hoga raj ke sath :roflol:

Raj Sonal ko godd mein utha ke achhe se wheelchair mein baitha deta hai aur usko andar lejaane lagta hai.

Sonal jaise jaise andar jaa rahi thi usko ajeeb sa lagne lagta hai. Usko aisa lagta hai jaise woh iss ghar ko achhe se jaanti hai aur bahot baar aachuki hai. Woh ghurr ghurr se harchiz ko dekh rahi thi.

Main door pe Smita pehle Sonal ki aarti utarti hai uske baad usko andar aane deti hai.

Andar aane ke baad bhi Sonal ghar ko ghure jaa rahi thi usko yeh ghar bilkul apna sa lag raha thaa.

Smita: Sonal beta kyaa dekh rahi ho.

Sonal: Yehh gharrr. Aisa lag raha hai jaise main yaha pehle bhi kai baar aachuki hu. Iss ghar ke har kone se waakif hu. Par thikk se kuch yaad nhi aaraha hai.

Sonal ki baat sunne ke baad sablog thode udaas hojaate hai.

Swati: Woh tu abhi hospital se aayi hai aur thaki hui bhi hai naa isiliye aisa lag raha hogaa. Tu jaa jaake thoda rest karle.

Sonal: Hosakta hai.
ye uske subconscious mind ke chalte ho raha hai.... ushe trigger to kare lekin afsos :sigh:
Sonal: Aap mujhe gaadi mein ghurr kyo rahe the. Inkaar nhi karna maine pure raaste yeh notice kiya hai. Dekho mujhe yeh sab pasand nhi hai. Aap mere papa ke dost cum bhai ke bete hai isiliye main aapki iss harqat ko leke gharwalo ko kuch nhi bolungi par aage se aisa mat kijiyega. Warna mujhe gharwalo ko sab bolna padega.
:lol: uff ye tevar..... ye gussa...
btw Raj & Sonal be like

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Raj: Main tumhe jaanmuzz ke nhi ghurr raha tha. Tumhare sir mein chott lagi hai raaste mein thode bahot gaddhe the jiske wajah se tumhe problem horahi hai yaa nhi bas wahi dekhne ke liye tumhe dekh raha tha aur tumhe laga main tumhe ghurr raha hu.

Mujhe pata hai tumhe kyaa pasand hai kyaa naa pasand hai. Aur main aisa koi kaam nhi karunga jo tumhe pasand nhi. Agar tumhe kisi bhi chiz ki jarurat ho toh Bhabhi ko yaa Mummy ko kisi ko bhi bula lena.
Chal jhutha :slap:
Are koi 50 rupey kaato re iske overacting ka :D
Yeh bol Raj waha se chala jaata hai par tab uski aankho mein thode aansu bhi the.

Pichhe Sonal bed mein baithi bas Raj ko jaate hue dekh rahi thi aur soch rahi thi ke woh kitna galat soch rahi thi Raj ke baare mein. Usne uski kitni madad ki aur woh usse galat samaj ke kitna kuch bol baithi.

Sonal: Maine unhe phir se bura bhala keh diya jabki woh toh meri parwaah hi kar rahe the. Yeh sab uss Vicky ki wajah se hua hai. Waha woh mujhe jiss tarah se ghurta hai chune ki koshish karta hai uski wajah se mujhe harkoi uski tarah hi lagta hai. Aur isi wajah se main Raj ko galat samaj baithi. Mujhe unse maafi maangni chahiye. Agli baar jab mere saamne aayenge tab maafi maamg lungi.

Par unhe kaise pata hai mujhe kyaa pasand hai kyaa naa pasand hai. Hum toh bahot saal baad mile hai aur woh toh mujhe achhe se jaante bhi nhi hai phir unhone aisa kyo kaha.

Abhi Sonal aur kuch bolti tabhi uske kamre mein Swati Meera Smita aur Ragini aajate hai.

Ragini: Kyaa soch rahi ho beta.

Sonal: Kuch nhi bas yehi soch rahi thi ke main hospital mein kaise pahonchi kyaa hua tha mere saath.

Meera: Betaa tumhara ek accident hogya tha Jaipur mein aur uski wajah se tumhare sir mein chott aagayi thi. Jiske treatment ke liye hum tumhe yaha Mumbai leke aaye.

Swati: Par treatment ke baad tu Coma mein chali gayi thi. Aur kal tujhe hosh aaya hai. Isiliye tujhe sabkuch ajeeb lag raha hai.

Sonal: Par mera accident hua kaise. Mujhe toh yaad bhi nhi hai. Mujhe toh bas itna pata hai ke main ghar se mandir jaane ke liye nikli thi. Phir kyaa hua mujhe kuch yaad nhi.

Swati: Mandir se ghar aate waqt hi tera accident hogya tha. Aur ab tu innsab ke baare mein mat soch. Tu thik hai humare saath hai yehi humare liye bahot hai.

Sonal: Main kitne dino se Coma mein thi.

Swati: Tu 9 mahino se Coma mein thi. Aur kal tujhe hosh aaya hai.

Sonal yeh sunke shock hojaati hai.

Sonal: Kyaaaaa 9 mahine. Matlab itne mahino se main behosh thi.

Swati: Haaa. Aur ab tu tension mat le. Ab tu thikk hai. Par apne dimaag mein jyaada jor mat dena aur jyaada kuch sochne ki jarurat nhi hai.

Sonal: Thikkk hai.

Smita: Chalo ab tum aaram karo. Kisi bhi chiz ki jarurat ho toh humhe bula lena. Thikk hai.

Sonal: Jiii.

Phir charo waha se bahar aajate hai aur Sonal aaram karne lagti hai.

Idher Raj Sonal ke kamre se nikalne ke baad sidha apne room mein jaata hai aur jaldi se fresh hoke ready hoke Karan ke kamre mein aata hai.

Raj: Bhaiyaaa.

Karan: Haa Raj bol. Sonal thikk hai naa.

Raj: Woh thikk hai. Par ab woh thikk nhi rahega jisne meri Sonal ke saath aisa kiyaa hai. Aapko CCTV footage mila.

Karan: Haa mil gaya hai aur wahi dekhne main jaa raha hu.

Raj: Main bhi chalunga.

Karan: Chall.

Yash: Main bhi nhi bol hum bhi chalenge.

Raj: Yash tu.

Yash: Haa main. Aur akele akele jaa raha tha. Main bhi chalunga tere saath.

Phir teeno nikal padhte hai police station ki taraf.

Udher Ranjeet ko bhi pata chal gaya tha Sonal bachh gayi hai par yeh nhi pata tha ke uski yaadast chali gayi hai.

Ranjeet: Gusse se chillate hue. Aaaahhhhhhh itni planning ke baad bhi sab kuch barbaad hogya.

Rajesh: Kyaaa huaaa kyo chilla raha hai.

Ranjeet: Woh Sonal bachh gayi hai.

Rajesh: Kyaaaa. Itne bure accident ke baad woh bachh kaise gayi. Kyaa tujhe pura yakeen hai ke Sonal bachh gayi hai.

Ranjeet: Haaa mere uss aadmi ne dekha hai Sonal ko Hospital ke bahar woh bhi zinda.

Rajesh: Humhe laga tha Sonal ki maut se Raj puri tarah se barbaad hojayega. Par nhiii. Iss baar bhi hum naakaam rahe. Pehle toh ek kaam kar uss aadmi ko bol kahi chupp jaaye. Kyoki ab Raj aur Karan pagalo ki tarah iss baat ka pata lagayenge.

Ranjeet: Chorungaa nhii uss Rajj ko. Jaan se maardungaa usse. Yeh bol woh waha se kahi chala jaata hai.

ye kya sonal to raj pe phir viswas karne lag gayi :ohno: noooo
kaisi hai ye anhoni....
so raagini, sweta, meera milke sonal ko ye bharosa dilane mein kamyaab rahi ki sonal 9 months secoma mein hai....
dusri taraf cctv footage ke jariye karan, raj ko clue mil jaane hai ki akhir koun tha is accident karaane ke piche...

waise ye to ek sochi samjhi chaal thi sonal ko maarne ki taaki ye ghatana raj ko totally tod de mentally...
Udhar wo culprit ranjeet baukhlaya hua hai.... jitni baar koshish ki utni baar nakaami mili hai ushe....

Well... shaandaar update, shaandaar lekhni, shaandaar shabdon ka chayan...

Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills :applause: :applause:
 

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Hospital ke bahar aake Raj Sonal wapas god mein utha leta hai aur dhyaan se gaadi mein baitha deta hai aur Sonal ke agal bagal Smita aur Meera baith jaati hai.

Sonal: Thank You meri itni help karne ke liye.

Raj bas halke se smile kardeta hai aur jaake driving seat mein baith jaata hai aur gaadi ko Kapoor House ki taraf ghuma deta hai.

Gaadi mein Raj baar baar Sonal ko dekh raha tha saamne lage mirror mein se jo Sonal dekh leti hai aur usko yeh bilkul bhi achha nhi lag raha tha. Aur yeh chiz Sonal ki nazro mein Raj ka impression aur down kar raha tha.

Sonal: Mann mein. Yeh kaise mujhe dekhe jaa raha hai. Mujhe laga tha yeh achhe insaan hai par iske liye meri pehli soch hi sahi thi yeh bahot hi besharam insaan hai.

Thodi der mein sablog ghar mein aajate hai. Raj gaadi se utar ke Sonal ko godd mein lene lagta hai toh Sonal usko gusse se ghurr rahi hoti hai. Par woh kuch nhi bolti.

Raj Sonal ko godd mein utha ke achhe se wheelchair mein baitha deta hai aur usko andar lejaane lagta hai.

Sonal jaise jaise andar jaa rahi thi usko ajeeb sa lagne lagta hai. Usko aisa lagta hai jaise woh iss ghar ko achhe se jaanti hai aur bahot baar aachuki hai. Woh ghurr ghurr se harchiz ko dekh rahi thi.

Main door pe Smita pehle Sonal ki aarti utarti hai uske baad usko andar aane deti hai.

Andar aane ke baad bhi Sonal ghar ko ghure jaa rahi thi usko yeh ghar bilkul apna sa lag raha thaa.

Smita: Sonal beta kyaa dekh rahi ho.

Sonal: Yehh gharrr. Aisa lag raha hai jaise main yaha pehle bhi kai baar aachuki hu. Iss ghar ke har kone se waakif hu. Par thikk se kuch yaad nhi aaraha hai.

Sonal ki baat sunne ke baad sablog thode udaas hojaate hai.

Swati: Woh tu abhi hospital se aayi hai aur thaki hui bhi hai naa isiliye aisa lag raha hogaa. Tu jaa jaake thoda rest karle.

Sonal: Hosakta hai.

Smita: Raj jao Sonal ko uske room mein le jao woh nichhe wala.

Raj: Jiii.

Phir Raj Sonal ko uss room mein le jaata hai aur bed mein achhe se baitha deta hai. Aur bahar aane lagta hai.

Sonal: Suniyee.

Raj: Haa bolo koi kaam hai.

Sonal: Kuch puchna tha sach sach batayenge.

Raj: Hmm pucho.

Sonal: Aap mujhe gaadi mein ghurr kyo rahe the. Inkaar nhi karna maine pure raaste yeh notice kiya hai. Dekho mujhe yeh sab pasand nhi hai. Aap mere papa ke dost cum bhai ke bete hai isiliye main aapki iss harqat ko leke gharwalo ko kuch nhi bolungi par aage se aisa mat kijiyega. Warna mujhe gharwalo ko sab bolna padega.

Raj: Main tumhe jaanmuzz ke nhi ghurr raha tha. Tumhare sir mein chott lagi hai raaste mein thode bahot gaddhe the jiske wajah se tumhe problem horahi hai yaa nhi bas wahi dekhne ke liye tumhe dekh raha tha aur tumhe laga main tumhe ghurr raha hu.

Mujhe pata hai tumhe kyaa pasand hai kyaa naa pasand hai. Aur main aisa koi kaam nhi karunga jo tumhe pasand nhi. Agar tumhe kisi bhi chiz ki jarurat ho toh Bhabhi ko yaa Mummy ko kisi ko bhi bula lena.

Yeh bol Raj waha se chala jaata hai par tab uski aankho mein thode aansu bhi the.

Pichhe Sonal bed mein baithi bas Raj ko jaate hue dekh rahi thi aur soch rahi thi ke woh kitna galat soch rahi thi Raj ke baare mein. Usne uski kitni madad ki aur woh usse galat samaj ke kitna kuch bol baithi.

Sonal: Maine unhe phir se bura bhala keh diya jabki woh toh meri parwaah hi kar rahe the. Yeh sab uss Vicky ki wajah se hua hai. Waha woh mujhe jiss tarah se ghurta hai chune ki koshish karta hai uski wajah se mujhe harkoi uski tarah hi lagta hai. Aur isi wajah se main Raj ko galat samaj baithi. Mujhe unse maafi maangni chahiye. Agli baar jab mere saamne aayenge tab maafi maamg lungi.

Par unhe kaise pata hai mujhe kyaa pasand hai kyaa naa pasand hai. Hum toh bahot saal baad mile hai aur woh toh mujhe achhe se jaante bhi nhi hai phir unhone aisa kyo kaha.

Abhi Sonal aur kuch bolti tabhi uske kamre mein Swati Meera Smita aur Ragini aajate hai.

Ragini: Kyaa soch rahi ho beta.

Sonal: Kuch nhi bas yehi soch rahi thi ke main hospital mein kaise pahonchi kyaa hua tha mere saath.

Meera: Betaa tumhara ek accident hogya tha Jaipur mein aur uski wajah se tumhare sir mein chott aagayi thi. Jiske treatment ke liye hum tumhe yaha Mumbai leke aaye.

Swati: Par treatment ke baad tu Coma mein chali gayi thi. Aur kal tujhe hosh aaya hai. Isiliye tujhe sabkuch ajeeb lag raha hai.

Sonal: Par mera accident hua kaise. Mujhe toh yaad bhi nhi hai. Mujhe toh bas itna pata hai ke main ghar se mandir jaane ke liye nikli thi. Phir kyaa hua mujhe kuch yaad nhi.

Swati: Mandir se ghar aate waqt hi tera accident hogya tha. Aur ab tu innsab ke baare mein mat soch. Tu thik hai humare saath hai yehi humare liye bahot hai.

Sonal: Main kitne dino se Coma mein thi.

Swati: Tu 9 mahino se Coma mein thi. Aur kal tujhe hosh aaya hai.

Sonal yeh sunke shock hojaati hai.

Sonal: Kyaaaaa 9 mahine. Matlab itne mahino se main behosh thi.

Swati: Haaa. Aur ab tu tension mat le. Ab tu thikk hai. Par apne dimaag mein jyaada jor mat dena aur jyaada kuch sochne ki jarurat nhi hai.

Sonal: Thikkk hai.

Smita: Chalo ab tum aaram karo. Kisi bhi chiz ki jarurat ho toh humhe bula lena. Thikk hai.

Sonal: Jiii.

Phir charo waha se bahar aajate hai aur Sonal aaram karne lagti hai.

Idher Raj Sonal ke kamre se nikalne ke baad sidha apne room mein jaata hai aur jaldi se fresh hoke ready hoke Karan ke kamre mein aata hai.

Raj: Bhaiyaaa.

Karan: Haa Raj bol. Sonal thikk hai naa.

Raj: Woh thikk hai. Par ab woh thikk nhi rahega jisne meri Sonal ke saath aisa kiyaa hai. Aapko CCTV footage mila.

Karan: Haa mil gaya hai aur wahi dekhne main jaa raha hu.

Raj: Main bhi chalunga.

Karan: Chall.

Yash: Main bhi nhi bol hum bhi chalenge.

Raj: Yash tu.

Yash: Haa main. Aur akele akele jaa raha tha. Main bhi chalunga tere saath.

Phir teeno nikal padhte hai police station ki taraf.

Udher Ranjeet ko bhi pata chal gaya tha Sonal bachh gayi hai par yeh nhi pata tha ke uski yaadast chali gayi hai.

Ranjeet: Gusse se chillate hue. Aaaahhhhhhh itni planning ke baad bhi sab kuch barbaad hogya.

Rajesh: Kyaaa huaaa kyo chilla raha hai.

Ranjeet: Woh Sonal bachh gayi hai.

Rajesh: Kyaaaa. Itne bure accident ke baad woh bachh kaise gayi. Kyaa tujhe pura yakeen hai ke Sonal bachh gayi hai.

Ranjeet: Haaa mere uss aadmi ne dekha hai Sonal ko Hospital ke bahar woh bhi zinda.

Rajesh: Humhe laga tha Sonal ki maut se Raj puri tarah se barbaad hojayega. Par nhiii. Iss baar bhi hum naakaam rahe. Pehle toh ek kaam kar uss aadmi ko bol kahi chupp jaaye. Kyoki ab Raj aur Karan pagalo ki tarah iss baat ka pata lagayenge.

Ranjeet: Chorungaa nhii uss Rajj ko. Jaan se maardungaa usse. Yeh bol woh waha se kahi chala jaata hai.
Nice and superb update...
 
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