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Romance Beintehaan Mohobbat (Completed)
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Update 56
Inspector college se nikal ke Commissioner ko call karke bolta hai ke woh innlogo se baat karta hai.
Commissioner: Aree tu kyaa pagal hogya hai jo unlogo se puchtach karne gaya tha. Agar Ishant Ji ya Vikram ji ko pata chal gaya naa toh tu toh jayega hi tere saath main bhi jaungaa.
Inspector: Sir maine unlogo se permission leke hi baat ki hai.
Commissioner: Kya bola unhone.
Phir Inspector sab batata hai.
Commissioner: Yeh saala khud bhi marta mujhe bhi marwata. Aur kuch pata chala.
Inspector: Nhii Sir.
Commissioner: Jald se jald usska pata laga. Usse aisi maut marunga ke agle janam mein machar maarne se bhi daregaa.
Inspector: Jii Sir.
Phir call cut kardeta hai.
Idher ek ladka apne room mein baitha hua tha aur soch raha tha.
Ladka: Kahi sir mein kuch jorr se toh nhi maar diya. Kahi saala memory loss naa hojaaye. Aur agar hojaayega toh achha hai. Saala meri Soniya pe buri nazar rakhega. Kam se kam isse usse bhul toh jayega. Usse toh usi din maar deta jis din mere saamne Soniya ko propose kiya tha aur jab pata chala tha isne Radha ko bhi pareshan kiya tha.
Yeh ladka Varun hi tha jisne Rohan ko thokaa tha.
Varun: Agar isske baad bhi saala nahi sudhra toh saale ka kissa hi khatam kardunga humesha ke liye.
Idher Varun apne room mein baitha yeh sab bol raha tha par usse nhi pata kisi ne uski yeh baate sunnli thi. Aur usko bahottt gussa bhi aaya.
Abhi Varun aur kuch bolta tabhi uske room mein Radha aati hai.
Radha: Bhai bahar chalo Soniya aayi hai. Tumne shayad usse bulaya tha.
Varun: Haa. Maine bulaya tha woh mujhe uske notes se kuch problem horaha hai isiliye usse bulaya tha college mein toh iske liye time nhi milta.
Phir dono bahar aate hai. Toh waha Soniya baithi hui thi. Soniya Varun ko dekh kar uthti hai aur bolti hai.
Soniya: Radha actually mujhe abhi jaana hoga. Mummy ka msg aaya hai kuch important kaam hai. Sorry.
Radha: Ooo. Koi baat nhi. Choti Mami ko koi jaruri kaam hoga tabhi bulaya hoga unhone.
Soniya waha se Varun ko dekhe bina hi waha nikal jaati hai. Varun ko Soniya ka aise jaana achha nhi laga aur usko hi ya bye bhi nhi bola isse woh aur udaas hogya.
Varun: Isse achanak kya hua. Abhi aayi aur sang sang chali gayi.
Radha: Ab hoga choti Mami ko koi kaam.
Yeh bol Radha waha se apne room mein chali jaati hai. Varun bhi apne kamre mein chala jaata hai.
Idher Soniya car se ghar jaa rahi hoti hai toh uske aankho se aansu nikal rahe hote hai. Woh chah ke bhi aansu nhi rokh paa rahi rhi. Woh full speed mein car chala rahi thi. Kuch durr jaane ke baad woh car ko ek park ke saamne rokh deti hai aur park ke andar jaake ek bench pe baith jaati hai aur apna muh apne ghutno pe chipa ke rone lagti hai.
Soniya: Rote hue. Kyo Varun kyo. Aakhir kyo tumne yeh kiyaa. Tumne mere liye kisi ki jaan leni chahi. Agar aaj uss Rohan ko kuch hojaata toh main apne aap ko kabhi maaf nhi kar paati. Tumhari wajah se main apni najro mein girr jaati. Yeh tumne bahot galat kiya Varun bahot galat kiyaa. Yeh bol woh aur jorr jorr se rone lagti hai.
Kuch der rone ke baad jab uska mann shant hua toh woh waha se ghar ki taraf chali jaati hai. Par uske pehle usne apni halat thik karli thi. Jisse kisi ko yeh pata naa chale woh royi hai.
Ghar aake woh sidha apna room mein chali jaati hai aur dinner tak wahi rehti hai. Isi beech Varun ne Soniya ko bahot baar call kiya par Soniya ne uska call nhi uthaya aur baad mein apna phone hi band kardiya.
Dinner ke baad woj apne room mein aayi aur padhne ki koshish karne lagi par woh chah ke bhi apna mann padhai mein nhi laga saki. Baar baar uske dimaag mein Varun ka kiya hue kaand hi aaraha tha.
Kuch der baad woh jaise taise karke so jaati hai.
Idher Varun ne sham se Soniya ko naa jaane kitne calls msgs kiye the par ek ka bhi reply Soniya ne nhi kiya upar se kuch time baad uska phone bhi band aaraha tha. Jisse Varun bahot jyaada udaas aur pareshan hogya. Woh chah ke bhi apna dhyaan kahi nhi laga paa raha thaa. Radha Varun ko udaas dekh kar uske paas aati hai.
Radha: Kyaa baat hai bhai. Main bahot derr se dekh rahi hu tum pareshan ho aur tumhara chehra bhi utra hua hai.
Varun: Nhi Radha aisi koi baat nhi hai. Bas thoda sir dard hai isiliye tumhe aisa lag raha hoga.
Radha: Kyaa. Toh tumne dawai li yaa nhi. Main abhi bua ji ko bolti hu.
Varun: Aree kyaa kar rahi ho Radha. Main ab thikk hu. Aur maine dawai le li hai. Please Mom ko kuch mat bolna warna woh pareshan hongi. Thoda aaram karunga toh thikk hojayegaa.
Radha: Sach mein sab thik hai naa bhai.
Varun: Haa Radha. Sab thik hai. Tum tension mat lo.
Radha: Thikk hai. Good night.
Varun: Good Night.
Phir Radha apne room mein aake so jaati hai. Aur idher Varun bhi sone ki koshish karta hai. Par woh so nhi paata. Uske mann mein baar baar Soniya ke behaviour ka khayal aaraha thaa.
Varun: Yeh Soniya ko achanak kya hua. Aakhir woh aisa kyo behave kar rahi hai. College mein toh sab thik tha. Phir achanak kya hua. Woh yeh sab sochte hue hi jaise taise so jaata hai.
Idher Hospital mein Rohan ko sham ko hosh aachuka tha. Par hosh mein aate hi woh dard ke chalte chillane lagta hai. Uski puri body mein aur sir mein beintehaan dard horaha tha.
Doctor usko ek pain killer ka aur ek neend ka injection dete hai jisse usko aaram milta hai aur woh so jaata hai.
Raat ko jab woj uthta hai toh usko aaram mil raha hota hai. Doctor uske paas aate hai aur usse puchte hai.
Doctor: Tumhara naam kya hai.
Rohan: Mera naam Rohan Sharma hai.
Doctor: Tumhare dad kya karte hai.
Rohan: Woh mumbai police commissioner hai.
Doctor: Good. Toh tumhe last kyaa yaad hai.
Rohan: Apne dimaag mein thoda jorr deta hai phir bolta hai. Mujhe last yaad hai ke main pub mein tha maine drink kiya hua tha main parking mein jaaraha tha apni car ki taraf. Main full nashe mein tha. Par achanak mere sir mein kuch bahot jor ka lagta hai aur main behosh hojaata hu. Aur jab hosh aaya toh yaha pe tha.
Doctor: Greatttt. Toh tumhari memory loss nhi hui. Tumhare upar kisi ne jaanleva humla kiya tha. Tumhari kismat achhi thi tum bach gaye. Sir fatt gaya tha khoon bahot beh chuka tha. Shareer ki bahot saari haddiyan toot chuki hai. Haath aur pairr toot gaye hai.
Rohan: Main yaha kaise aaya aur mere dad kaha hai.
Doctor: Woh bahar hi hai. Aur jisne tumhe maara usne hi tumhara phone se ambulance aur tumhare dad ko call karke bulaya tha.
Rohan: Thank You Doctor. Meri jaan bachane ke liye. Kyaa aap mere dad ko bula sakte hai.
Doctor: Its our duty. Yeh bol doctor bahar chala jaata hai aur commissioner andar aata hai.
Commissioner: Kaiso ho Rohan.
Rohan: Sir mein aur body mein bahot dard horaha hai. Halka sa bhi halta hu toh bahot bahot dard hota hai.
Commissioner: Thik hojayegaa. Tu jyaada hil mat.
Rohan: Yeh sab kisne kiya dad.
Commissioner: Yeh toh tu batayega. Kisse panga liya hai tune. Aur woh ladki kaun hai jiske wajah se yeh sab hua.
Rohan: Ladki. Kaun ladki. Aap kya bol rahe hai dad.
Commissioner: Yeh sab kisi ladki ki wajah se hua hai. Kisi ne kisi ladki ke wajah se tujhe maara hai taaki tu usse durr rahe. Yeh ek tarah ki warning hai agar aaj ke baad tu uss ladki ki taraf dekhta bhi hai toh tujhe jaan se maardega. Ab bata kaun hai woh ladki.
Rohan: Whatttt.
Commissioner: Haaa.
Rohan: But dad main aisi kisi ladki ko nhi jaanta. Jiske wajah se meri yeh halat hui hai.
Commissioner: Toh usne teri halat kyo ki. Yaad kar kis ladki ke pichhe padha hai tu.
Rohan: Dad main toh aaj tak woh Agarwals ki beti Soniya ke pichhe tha. Usko apne pyaar mein girane ki koshish kar raha tha. Par uske saath kuch jyaada hua hi nhi.
Commissioner: Kya kya hua tha.
Rohan: Maine usse propose kiya tha toh usne mujhe thappad maar diya tha phir maine use directly kabhi kuch nhi kaha aur naahi baat hui. Bas durr se hi nazar rakhta tha. Kahi unhone toh.
Commissioner: Shakk hai but tune directly kuch aur nhi kiya toh woh bhi aisa nhi karenge. Yeh kisi aur ka kaam hai. Yaad kar aur koi ladki hai kya. Aur agar yeh unhone kiya bhi hai toh humare paas iske khilaaf koi saboot nhi hai. Tujhe badi chalaki se maara hai.
Rohan: No dad aur koi ladki nhi hai. Last kuch waqt se Soniya ke saath hi kaand hua tha.
Commissioner: Tu aaram kar. Main nikalta hu.
Yeh bol commissioner waha se nikal jaata hai aur Rohan dard mein tadapta reh jaata hai.
Rohan: Saala pehle unn dono ladkiyon ko maara aur ab mujhe maara. Saala yeh hai kaun. Aur kis ladki ke liye mujhe maara. Kya sirf propose kiya uske liye itna maara aur woh bhi uss baat ke itne din baad. Nhi yeh unka kaam nhi hosakta. Jaha tak maine unhe jaana hai woh pith pichhe kaam nhi karte. Toh phir kisne maara.
Woh yeh sab sochte hi reh jaata hai.
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Great update!!!! Soniya khafa hai Varun se. Ek angle se dekha jaaye to Soniya ki baat bhi sahi hai. Rohan harami to jarur hai but directly to kuchh na kiya tha usne agar kuchh gadbad karta to Yash ne hi thok dena tha usse. Dekhte hain aage kya hota hai. Superb writing. Waiting for next.
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Jordar update tha bhai par lagta hai varun ne kuch jyada hi mardiya rohan ko
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