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Romance Beintehaan Mohobbat (Completed)
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Thank youbaakeyi mein kaafi romantic mahol raha update .... ab pyar mohabbat kiye hai to Yun chup chupa ke pyar karne se acha ke saamne se izhaar kar de dil baat..... aur kar bhi diya in chaaro ne..
Well... Yash, radha aur Sia ki tarah in chaaro ke pyar aur chahat puri jor pe hai.... .. BTW gharwalo ko bhi pata chal gaya.... acha hi hai officially rishte ko tay kar denge Jaise yash, sia aur radha ka kar diya tha...
hope ye chaaro kirdaar bhi yash, sia aur radha ki tarah aise hi sath rahe zindagi bhar chahat ke tale hanshte muskuharte in pyar ke palo ko jeete huye ..
Khair... Kaafi dilchasp aur dikash update tha sath hi kirdaaro ki bhumika bhi...
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills
Aapki yeh hope toh puri hogi hi.
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Nain11ster creation... a monter in me
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Aur murder mystery, thrill
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Murder mystery bhi hosakta haiAur murder mystery, thrill
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Update 40
Idher Agarwal Mansion mein Mehak Siya se.
Mehak: Siya kal koi shaitani nhi.
Siya: Main toh achhi bachhi hu main kyo shaitani karungi.
Mehak: Teri maa hu. Pata hai mujhe kitni achhi bachhi hai tu. Mujhe pata hai kal tum teeno shaitaan unn dono ko bahot pareshan karogi.
Siya: Mom unhone bhi toh kiya tha. Thoda sa toh karungi hi. Yeh bol hasne lagti hai.
Mehak: Kal unko yaha le aana. Kiran Shruti aur Shalini aayengi unse milne ke liye.
Siya: Bahot jaldi hai unhe apni bahuon se milne ke liye.
Mehak: Uske sir mein maarte hue. Bahot bolne lagi ho.
Siya hasne lagti hai.
Mehak: Ab jao aur so jao.
Siya: Good Night Mom.
Mehak: Good Night.
Phir Siya aake apne room mein so jaati hai.
Agli subah sab college aate hai. Jaise hi Megha aur Arushi aati hai saari ladkiyan unhe pakad leti hai.
Dono ko pata tha aaj pura din unke saath aisa hi hoga isiliye woh prepare thi. Teeno milke undono ko bahot pareshan karte hai. Woh dono toh bas Aarav aur Avi ko umeed bhari nazro se dekh rahi thi. Par woh dono bhi majbur thee.
Thodi der baad sab apni apni classes mein jaate hai. Recess mein Siya bolti hai.
Siya: Haa toh meri devraniyon aaj tumdono ko humare ghar chalna hai.
Dono: Achanak kisliye.
Radha: Woh issliye kyoki tumdono ki saas waha pe tumdono ko milne wali hai.
Undono ke saath Aarav aur Avi bhi shock hojaate hai.
Charo: Kyaaaaaaaaaa.
Radha: Haaaa. Aur yeh humari saas ka order hai toh chup chap chalnaa.
Dono: Parrrr.
Siya: Koi par nhi. Aur tum dono bhi chaho toh aasakte ho. Invitation toh nhi hai.
Aarav aur Avi: Jarurat bhi nhi hai. Humari Bua aur Mami ka ghar hai. Hum toh jarur aayenge.
Siya: Haa haa aajana.
Dono: Radha Siya yeh jaruri hai. Matlab itni jaldi.
Radha: Tension mat lo. Woh bas tumdono se achhe se milna chahti hai.
Dono: Yeh sab iss Soniya ke wajah se hua hai. Hum toh thik se taiyaar bhi nhi hosaktee.
Soniya: Haste hueee. Ab hogya jo hona tha. Bachhe ki jaan loge kya.
Aarav: Agar bachha tujh jaisa ho toh bhagwan bachaye aise bachhe se.
Avi: Sahi kaha. Kal mom ne jo taang khinchi hai woh bolne layak nhi hai.
Soniya: Jyaada mat bolo. Warna bua se boldungi toh shaadi ke pehle inki shakal toh durr awaaz bhi nhi sunne milegi.
Aarav aur Avi: Aree aisaa mat kar maaf karde. Galti hogyi.
Soniya: Agli baar sambhal ke rehna. Aur tum dono tension mat lo. Woh TV serials wali jaise nhi hai.
Dono: Jo bhi ho. Humhe kitni sharm aarahi hai.
Radha: Koi nhi. Sab thik hojayegaa.
Phir sab apni baaki ki class karke Agarwal Mansion aate hai.
Megha aur Arushi toh tension mein thi.
Woh sab ghar ke andar aate hai toh aab hall mein hi baithe hue thee.
Mehak: Aree tumsab aagaye.
Siya: Yes Mom.
Mehak: Woh dono kaha hai.
Radha: Mom hum bhi aaye hai.
Mehak: Areee meri bachhi. Woh dono aaj special hai. Isiliye unka puch rahi hu.
Soniya: Yeh rahi dono.
Mehak: Aree bachho waha kyu khadi yaha aao.
Dono bas apna sir neeche karke khadi thi. Mehak ke bulane pe dono uske paas aati hai aur pairr chune ke liye neeche jaati hai toh Mehak unhe rok leti hai.
Mehak: Humare ghar mein bahu betiyan pairr nhi chutti. Yeh bol unko gale laga leti hai.
Kiran: Didi humhe bhi milne do humari betiyon se.
Phir Kiran Shruti aur Shalini bhi inn dono se milte hai. Radha bhi inn teeno pairr chune jaati hai but woh rokhh ke gale laga leti hai.
Shalini: Tum sab waha kyo khade ho. Jaao jaake fresh hojao phir saath mein lunch karenge. Tab tak hum inse baat karle.
Yash Siya Aarav Avi Soniya Radha chale jaate hai. Yaha inndono ko bahot hi jyaada awkward feel horaha tha.
Shruti: Megha Arushi ghabrao mat bas relax karo.
Dono: Jiii.
Shalini: Achha yeh batao tumhare ghar mein pata hai.
Dono: Nhi nhi abhi kisi ko kuch nhi pata hai.
Kiran: Toh agar unko pata chalta hai toh kya woh gussa karenge.
Dono: Nhi nhi woh aisa kuch nhi karenge.
Mehak: Toh tumdono ke parents kya karte hai.
Dono: Jii dad businessman hai aur mom housewife.
Mehak: Ooo. Waise kya naam hai tumhare parents ka. Shayad woh ussdin party mein bhi aaye thee.
Dono: Jii haa. Unka naam Harshit Malhotra aur Meera Malhotra hai.
Mehak: Kahi tumhare dad Malhotra Group of companies ke owner toh nhi.
Dono: Jiii.
Mehak: Areee waah unke saath toh humare achhe relations hai. Ishant bahot maante hai tumhare dad ko.
Dono kuch nhi bolti.
Shalini: Achha hai bhabhi toh hum bhaiya se bolke inke parents se baat karte hai.
Dono: Itni bhi jaldi kya hai.
Shalini: Aree jaldi hai humhe. Agar baad mein tumdono ne humare pagal beto ko chorr diya toh tum jaisi sundar achhi ladkiyan kaha milegi unhee.
Kiran aur Shruti: Sahi kaha Shalini. Agar inka mann baad mein badal gaya toh inke jaise sundar achhi aur pyaari ladkiyan humare beto ko phir nhi milne wali.
Dono ladkiyan sharma jaati hai.
Mehak: Main aaj hi Ishant se baat karti hu. Aur jald se jald tumdono ka haath humare beto ke liye maang leti hu.
Siya: Kyaa baat hai humhe upar bhej ke yaha toh shaadi ki baat horahi hai. That’s not fair Mom.
Shalini: Mom ki bachhi tu yaha aa. Bua ki yaad nhi aati naa.
Siya: Aree aise kaise bua. Aapki yaad toh humesha aati hai.
Kiran aur Shruti: Aur Mamiyon ki.
Siya: Aree sabki yaad aati hai. Chaliye ab jaldi se lunch karte hai.
Phir sab lunch karne lagte hai. Lunch ke baad Megha aur Arushi apne ghar jaane ke liye nikal jaate hai Radha bhi unke saath hi chali jaati hai.
Idher Ex Minister aur Shivam apne ghar mein baithe hue the.
Shivam: Dad aap abhi tak chup kaise hai.
Ex Minister: Tu nhi jaanta woh kaun hai. Unke ek call se meri post chali gayi. Unse sidha panga lena bewakoofi hogi.
Shivam: Toh kya hum aise hi baithe rahe. Uss Yash aur uske baap ne pure college ke saamne humari beizaati ki. Aur hum unka kuch nhi kar paaye.
Ex Minister: Chinta mat kar humari beizaati ka badla toh hum leke rahenge.
Shivam: Par kaise dad.
Phir Ex Minister apne bete ko MT se hui saari baat batata hai.
Shivam: Waah toh kab kya karna hai.
Ex Minister: Kuch waqt pehle uska call aaya tha usne kaha hai sabse pehle Agarwal Empire ko tabah karenge. Pehle unki power ko khatam karenge phir unko.
Shivam: Toh kaise karengee.
Ex Minister: Chinta mat kar. Uske aadmi aur humare aadmi milke aaj Agarwal ki ek factory ko tabah karenge. Jisse unhe bahot bada nuksaan hoga.
Shivam: Waaah kyaa baat hai. Par uss Yash ko main nhi chorunga. Aur uski hone wali 2 biwiyon ko bhi.
Ex Minister: Abhi aisa kuch mat karnaa.
Shivam: Parrr.
Ex Minister: Bola naaa.
Shivam kuch toh nhi bolta par mann hi mann kuch decide kar leta hai.
Idher inki baate uss ladke ke group ka ek member sunn raha tha jo woh usske ghar mein lagaye hidden camera aur microphone se sunn raha tha jo uske ek aadmi ne kuch din pehle hi laga diya thaa.
Woh uss ladke ko call karta hai.
Ladka: Haaa bolo.
Ladka 1: Ex Minister aur Shivam ne kuch plan kiya hai.
Ladka: Kyaaa.
Phir ladka 1 ne uss ladke ko sab bata diya. Aur yeh bhi ke Shivam Agarwal ke bahuon ko leke kuch socha hai.
Ladka: Hmm unka plan toh main barbaad kardunga. Tum ek kaam karo Radha aur Siya ki security aur tight kardo.
Ladka 1: Thik hai.
Phir call cut hojaata hai.
Raat ko woh ladka apne ghar se nikal ke apne group ke saath uss factory ke paas aata hai aur unn aadmiyon ka wait karne lagta hai.
Thodi der wait karne ke baad waha kuch 15 aadmi aate hai. Unhe dekh kar ladki 1 bolti hai.
Ladki 1: Akele sambhal loge ya help chahiye.
Ladka: Ab itne pyaar se bologi toh koi kaise mana kareee.
Ladki 1: Jyaada nhi bol rahe ho. Call karu main usse. Saara flirt ekbaar mein nikal dengi.
Ladka: Nhi rehne deee. Chal aaj help le leta hu. Tu bhi kya yaad rakhegi kis dildaar se paala padha hai.
Ladki 2: Saala nautanki. Chal jaldi.
Phir yeh 5 jan unke paas aate hai.
Ladka: Kya bee khud toh kisi kaam ke nhi aur dusro ki mehnat ko barbaad karne aagaye. Sharm nhi aati.
A1: Abee kaun hai tu chal nikal yaha se. Warna iss factory ke saath tumlogo ko bhi yehi jala denge.
Ladka: Halwa hai kyaa. Aaj tumlogo ne yeh kaam apne haath mein leke apni zindagi ki aakhri galti kardi.
A1: Ayeee pehle inko thikane lagao phir iss factory ko.
Apne leader ki baat sunte hi woh saare aadmi inko maarne aate hai.
Yehlog apne apne weapons leke taiyaar khade the. Jaise jaise yehlog aate hai waise waise sab ko kaat dete.
Kuch 10 mins mein waha sirf woh aadmi akela khada tha.
Apne aadmiyon ki aisi haalat dekh kar woh aadmi darr jaata hai aur jaldi se apni gun nikal ke uss ladke pe fire kar deta hai.
Goli uss ladke ke kandhe mein lagti hai. Woh aadmi dusra fire karta uske pehle hi uss ladka apni sword ko usske gale mein ghusa diya.
Ladki 1 jab dekhti hai uss ladke ko goli lagi hai toh woh chilla uthiii.
Ladki 1: YASHHHHHHHHHHH.
Yash: Main thik hu Maya. Yeh sab jaldi se saaf kardo aur inn laasho ko uss Ex Minister ke ghar bhej do.
Maya: Kya thik ho. Tumhe goli lagi hai. Jaldi se hospital chalo.
Yash: Maya maine kaha na main thik hu.
Maya: Chup ekdum chup. Aur chup chap hospital chalo. Karan Rishi tumlog yaha ka dekhlo. Main aur Ritika hospital jaate hai.
Karan: Thikk hai.
Phir Maya aur Ritika Yash ko leke ek hospital mein jaate hai waha ka doctor unko achhe se jaanta tha.
Maya: Krish jaldi se Yash ko dekho. Isko goli lagi hai.
Krish: My God.
Phir Krish jaldi se Yash ka treatment start karta hai. Idher Maya ne tension mein galti se Siya ko call laga diya.
Siya: Neend mein hi. Haaa Maya. Woh toh bahot pehle hi nikal chuka hai. Pahoncha nhi.
Maya: Siya woh Yash Yash ko goli lagi hai.
Siya jab yeh sunti hai toh uski neend udd jaati hai aur woh rone lagti hai.
Siya: Rote hue. Kyaaaaaaaaaa. Kaiseee. Mera Yash kaha hai. Kaisa hai woh. Mujhe jaldi batao. Main abhi aati hu.
Maya: Siya hum usko leke Krish ke paas aaye hai. Uska treatment horaha hai.
Siya: Rote hue. Main main abhi aati hu. Kuch nhi hoga mere Yash ko. Main aati hu.
Siya jaldi se rote hue waha se chupke se nikal jaati hai aur jaldi se hospital pahonchti hai. Waha pe Maya Ritika khade the. Karan aur Rishi bhi aachuke the.
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