Romance Beintehaan Mohobbat (Completed)
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Thank Youuu Naina ji.waise writer sahab ke soch aur kalpna ko manna padega ki jis tarike se apne Kalpana jariye aise shabdo ka roop deke kahani mein darshaya hai... sach mein saraahaneeya aur prashansaniya hai..
kahani mein ek athyadhik action se bhare aur romanchit kar dene wale mahol banane mein aap mahir hai... jishe padhte waqt ek mast ehsaas cha jaye dilo dimag pe....
aur jo scenes create ki hai update ke har ek point pe wo sach mein adbhut aur kabile tarif hai... jagah, paristhiti, waqt aur kirdaar... kaise, kaha, kis tarah se, kis karm mein rahenge kahani mein bhumika nibhate huye iska sathik mulyankan karke update ko jis tarah pesh ki hai hum readers ke samaks wo apne apme bemisaal hai..
Btw ye jo ghatana ghati hai, matlab raghu ki maut.. kuch jaldi jaldi mein nahi ho gaya.. matlab aisa lage ki saare scenes skip kar diye gaye ho..
Khair... udhar kayi logo raghu ke maut se khush hai kayi log hairan.. Had se zyada Khush to Vikram hai.. wohi wo commissioner had zyada pareshan aur hairan... Ki kisne ye kand kar diya.. haalaki ushe shaq bhi hai..
Well... to Radha ne ghar pe bata di ki ushe uska dream boy mil gaya hai, lekin sochne wali baat ye hai ki kya wo ladka bhi yahin sochta hai,
waise kahani ke nayak aur uski team hai bade khatarnak... ek mafiya leader ko aise maar diya jaise koi chuja ho..
Btw ab next shikar ke intezaar mein hai kab wo India aane wala hai apni maut se milne..
udhar us commissioner ki bete rohan bhi khud liye hi gaddha khodne mein busy.. ushe pata nahi jis raah pe wo chalne wala hai waha uski aur uski family walo ki sirf aur sirf barbadi likhi huyi hai.. ye dono baap bete to giyo..
Let's see what happens next
Brilliant update with awesome writing skills
Aapne toh kuch jyaada hi tareef kardi. Aur Raghu ka scene issliye jaldi jaldi nikal diya kyoki woh koi important role nhi tha. Bas ek namuna tha.
Commissioner aur uske bete ko pata hai woh kis jagah haath de rahe hai. Par lalach aur buri niyat ne unko andha kardiya hai.
Aur jiska intezaar horaha hai India mein aane ka woh jab aayega toh story end ki taraf jayegi. Kyoki main villain wahi hai
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Iss saal ka quota toh pura hogya. Jiske wajah se main apne mann mutabik college mein admission nhi karwa saka.
Ab jo hoga agle saal
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Update 11
Aise 4 din guzar jaate hai. Aaj sabhi ke college ka pahla din tha.
Par Radha thodi jyaada hi excited thi. Isiliye woh subah jaldi uth ke achhe se taiyaar hoke nichhe aati hai.
Sanjana: Radha college jaa rahi ho yaa shaadi mein.
Radha: Mom college jaa rahi hu.
Sanjana: Toh itna saj sawar ke kyo jaa rahi ho.
Radha: Sharmaa ke. Woh Mom aaj college mein agar woh milgaya toh.
Sanjana: Tohh kya.
Radha: Mom woh kehte hai first impression is last impression. Isiliye main apni taraf se koi kami nhi chorna chahti.
Sanjana: Pagal ladki. Usse mili bhi nhi jaanti bhi mili. Yaha tak ke uska naam tak nhi pata. Aur woh aaj aayega bhi yaa nhi. Yeh tak nhi pata. Aur yeh pagal aise saj sawar ke jaa rahi hai.
Radha bas sharmaa jaati hai.
Sanjana: Ab sharmana choro aur nashta karo.
Radha: Dad kaha hai.
Vikram: Hum yaha princess.
Radha: Good Morning Dad.
Vikram: Good Morning Princess. So excited for college.
Radha: Yes Dad.
Sanjana: Tu sach mein college ke liye excited hai yaaaaaaa.
Radha: Mommmmmm.
Sanjana: Achha achha thik hai. Chalo nashta karo.
Phir Radha jaldi se nashta karke college ke liye nikal jaati hai.
Idher Yash and group bhi jaldi se nashta karke college ke liye nikal jaate hai.
Radha jaldi se college pahonch ke parking mein hi apni car mein baithi rehti hai.
Arushi aur Megha jab aate hai toh Radha ko car mein hi dekhte hai.
Dono: Oyee pagal car mein kya kar rahi hai chal naa.
Radha: Aree yaha parking mein hi rukhte hai. Jab woh aayega toh usko yehi se pehchan lungi.
Dono: Yeh ladki pagal hochuki hai.
Radha: Jyaada bakbak band karo aur car mein baitho aur har ladke ki aankho ko dekh kar apne jijaji ko khojo.
Dono: Oohoo Jijaji.
Radha: Haa toh jab usse meri shaadi hogi toh woh tumhara jijaji na hogaa. Yeh bol sharma jaati hai.
Dono: Abhi tak usse mili bhi nhi. Jaanti tak nhi aur shaadi tak pahonch gayi.
Radha: Sharma ke. Chup karo. Aur help karo.
Phir teeno wahi baith ke gate se andar aate har ladke aankh ko dekh rahi thi. Par tabhi waha ek car aur ek bike andar aate hai. Jaise hi woh andar aate hai waise hi Radha ki dhadkane tez hogyi.
Radha : Woh aagaya.
Dono: Kaha hai.
Radha: Meri dil ne kaha woh aagaya hai.
Dono: Abhi ek car aur bike andar aayi hai hosakta hai usme ho.
Radha yeh sunte hi bhaag ke udher jaati hai.
Yeh dono bhi bhaag kar uske pichhe jaate hai.
Radha bhaagte hue jaa rahi thi tabhi woh kisi se takraa jaati hai.
Par jab woh girr rahi thi tabhi kisi ne usse pakad liya. Radha girne ke darr se apni aankhe band karleti hai.
Jiss ladke ne usse pakda woh uske uss masoom chehre mein khoo sa gaya. Woh bas uske uss masoom se chehre ko hi dekh raha tha. Aur Radha bas apni aankhe band kiye girne ka intezaar kar rahi thi.
Par jab kuch der tak woh giri nhi tab usne apni aankhe kholi toh khud ko kisi ke haatho mein paaya. Woh jhatt se uth jaati hai.
Jab woh uthti hai toh uss ladke hosh aata hai. Uss ladke ke pichhe khade uske saathi scene ka maza le rahe the. Unme se kisi ne unki ek pic li. Par jab scene khatam tab woh bhi uske paas aate hai. Tab tak Arushi aur Megha bhi aagye the.
Radha jab khadi hoti hai toh uss ladke dekhti hai. Phir bolti hai.
Radha: Thank You. Mujhe bachanee.....
Abhi woh itna hi bolti hai ke achanak chup hojaati hai.
Kyoki Radha bolte hue achanak uski aankho mein dekh leti hai. Aur jab woh uski aankho mein dekhti hai toh usko shockkk lagtaaa hai.
Ladka: Kyaaa tumm thikk hoo.
Radha ko toh jaise kuch sunayi hi nhi de raha tha woh toh bas uske chehre ko apne dil dimaag aur aankho mein basa rahi thi.
Ladka: Hello.
Arushi Radha ko chuti kaat ti hai. Jisse woh chikh uthti. Aur uski taraf dekhti hai. Toh woh ishare se uss ladke ki taraf dekhne ko bolti hai.
Radha jab uski taraf dekhti hai tab usko hosh aata hai.
Radha: Thank You mujhe bachane ke liyee.
Ladka: Kya tum thik ho.
Radha: Haaaa.
Ladka: Okkk.
Tabhi uske side mein khadi ladki uske paas aati hai aur usse chipak jaati hai.
Uss ladki ke aise chipakne se Radha ko bahot gussa aata hai uska mann kar raha tha abhi uss ladki ko maar dee.
Ladki: Chale.
Ladka: Haa chalo. Okk nice to meet you.
Radha: Kya hum dost ban sakte hai.
Ladka: Aaj toh pahla din hai. Agar kismat mein raha toh dost jarur banenge. By the Way mera naam Yash hai Yash Agarwal.
Radha: Radha. Radha Singh.
Yash: Nice to meet you Radha.
Radha: Same Here Yashhhh.
Phir Yash aage chala jaata hai. Aur Radha wahi uske khayalo mein khooo jaati hai aur usko jaate hue dekhti rehti hai.
Arushi aur Megha: Areee ooooo yaha khadi kyo hai. Tujhe usko dhundna nhi hai kyaa.
Radha: Kisse dhundnaa hai.
Dono: Areee tere dream Krishna ko. Jiske liye tu pagal hai.
Radha: Dream Krishna nhi Yashhhhhh. Meraaaa Yashhhhhhh.
Dono: Ab yeh Yash kaun hai aur kaha milaaaaaaaaaa. Ek minute kahi yeh ladka hi toh........
Radha: Yash Mera Yash. Yash Agarwal.
Dono: Iska matlab yeh wohi ladka hai. Jisne tujhe pagal kar rakha hai aur jisne tujhe uss din bachaya tha.
Radha: Haaaa. Yash. Mera Yash.
Dono: Areee kyaa kabse ek hi chiz bol rahi hai. Tu chal humare saath.
Woh dono usko khinch ke canteen mein le jaate hai aur ek side mein table mein baith jaate hai.
Dono: Ab chup chap bata. Kya yeh woh hi ladka hai. Jo tere sapno mein aata tha. Jisne tujhe ussdin yaha pe help kiya tha. Aur uss din mall mein jiska aihsaas tujhe hua tha.
Radha: Haaa yehi hai mera dream Krishna. Mera Yash. Tumdono ne mere Yash ki aankhe nhi dekhi thi. Yeh wahi aankhe hai jo mujhe sapno mein dikhti hai. Yeh wahi aankhe hai jo uss din mujhe yaha help kiya tha.
Dono: Matlab tera dream Krishna Yash hai. Yash Agarwal.
Radha: Sharma ke. Haaaaa.
Dono jhattt se usse gale lagaa leti hai.
Dono: Congratulations Radha. Aakhir tujhe woh mil hi gaya.
Radha: Jo aankhe mujhe 2 saal se dikhti thi aaj uska pura chehra dikh gaya. Jisse main anjaane mein hi pure 2 saal se pyaar kar rahi hu woh aaj mujhe mil gaya. I am so so so happy.
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Nixe update bhaii bhot awala maza aya giea par kar ab new update ka intazar ha bhaiii
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