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TheBlackBlood

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bada confused character hai avinash................
kabhi to, kahin to, kisi ke sampark me raha hi hoga................
jo kuchh lambe samay tak isse juda raha ho...........

kyonki dushmani nikalne wala..........iske bare me jankari kahin se to jutayega

ya fiir ye psycho hai............pagalpan me sab karta hai aur fansta hai


dekhte hain hare "vijay tha great" kya pata lagate hain...........
bheemseni kajal padi moong ki dal khake

agle update ka besabri se intzar rahega
Bahut bahut shukriya kamdev99008 bhai aapki is khubsurat pratikriya ke liye,,,,,:hug:

Wo 'Vijay tha great' nahi balki 'Dushyant the great' likha hai maine,,,,:dazed:
 

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Greattt shubham bro. Such a mind blowing update and your writing skill. :applause: :applause: :applause:

Avinash ek baar fir se same hi jurm me fas gaya tha. Ye shocking baat hai. I mean ki avinash jis jagah bhi jata hai then after two month wo same hi jurm me police ke hawale ho jta hai and then police uski gaand tod kutaai karti hai and ye avinash itni maar ke baad bhi yahi kahta hai ki isne kuch nahi kiya strange. :coffee1:

To ab inspector dushyant avinash ko apne sath ghar le aaya hai and ghar me ab wo usse puchh raha hai ki sach kya hai but puchne par usne jo bataya wo bhi stange hi hai. Ya to ye sach chhupa raha hai ya fir ye koi sanki type ka hai. Ise ye nahi pata ki agar isne kuch nahi kiya to aakhir kaun hai jo ise fasa kar har baar police se iski gaand todwa deta hai. Anyways let's see what happens next. :coffee1:

Overall fabulous update bro and now waiting for the next. :waiting1:


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Bahut bahut shukriya VIKRANT bhai aapke is khubsurat review aur pratikriya ke liye,,,,,:hug:
 

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Behad hi shandar or jabardast update
Lagta hai Avinash kuchh to jarur chhupa raha hai ab dekhte hai Dushyant ke ghar rahkar uski badnasibi badlti hai ya nahi .
Yashwant aur DUSHYANT KI jodi kamla ki hai . Ab dekhte hai dono milkar es rahshy ko suljha pate hai ya nahi?
Bahut bahut shukriya Iron Man bhai aapki is khubsurat pratikriya ke liye,,,,,:hug:

Dhire dhire avinash ke bare me pata chalega. Dushyant ne avinash ko apne paas isi liye rakha hai ki wo uske bare me pata kar sake aur ye bhi dekhe ki sachchaayi kya hai,,,,:dazed:
 

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Bahut bahut shukriya kamdev99008 bhai aapki is khubsurat pratikriya ke liye,,,,,:hug:

Wo 'Vijay tha great' nahi balki 'Dushyant the great' likha hai maine,,,,:dazed:
Jaha se sourcing ki hai.... Is character ka source to vijay the great hi hai.......sharma ji ne tarasha tha jise :D
 

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TheBlackBlood

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Jaha se sourcing ki hai.... Is character ka source to vijay the great hi hai.......sharma ji ne tarasha tha jise :D
Ved Prakash Sharma ji ne Vijay ka character kisse liya tha pata hoga na aapko,,,,:D

Meri jaankari ke hisaab se Vijay ka character Sharma ji se pahle Ved Prakash Kamboj ji ke paas tha, balki ye kahe ki Vijay ka character unhi ka ijaad kiya hua tha. Pahle Vijay Raghunath series ke novel wahi likhte the. Baad me Sharma ji ne jab likhna shuru kiya to unhone Vijay ke sath ek naye character Vikas ko ijaad kiya jo ki Raghunath ka beta tha,,,:dazed:
 
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Update - 01


"Ye le yaha sign kar" Police thane me Inspector Dushyant Varma ne apne policiya andaaz me ek aise shakhs ki taraf kalam badhate huye kaha jo abhi abhi lockup se nikala gaya tha aur ab inspector ke saamne table ke us paar aa kar khada hua tha.

Inspector ke kahne par us shakhs ne bina kuch bole usse pen liya aur table par rakhe register par apne halke halke kaampte hatho se sign kiya. Uske baad wo register par hi pen ko chhod kar ek nazar inspector ki taraf dekha aur fir nazre jhuka li.

"Sale ab dubara aise jurm me pakda gaya." Inspector ne teekhe lahje me kaha____"To is baar aisi aisi dhara laga ke andar karuga ki kabhi salaankho se baahar nahi aa payega."

"Bada dheeth hai sahab." Paas me hi khada ek hawaldaar inspector se mukhaatib ho kar bola____"Ek baar bhi isne apna gunaah qabool nahi kiya. Dekha tha na aapne. Maar kha kha kar adhmara ho gaya tha magar yahi bakta raha ki main begunaah hu. Apni puri zindagi me iske jaisa latkhor aur theeth aadmi nahi dekha maine."

"Ab yu khada kyo hai be.?" Inspector dushyant hawaldaar ki baat par dhyaan diye bina saamne khade us shakhs ko ghudakte huye chillaya____"Kya laat maar ke tujhe baahar bhagana padega.?"

Inspector ki baat sun kar us shakhs ne ek baar fir inspector ki taraf dekha aur fir hawaldaar par ek nazar daalte huye wo baahar ki taraf badh chala. Andaaz aisa tha jaise pairo me ya to menhdi lagi ho ya fir pairo me jaan hi na bachi ho. Waise ye sach to tha ki uske paisro me waisi jaan nahi thi jaise ki normal insaano ke pairo me hoti hai. Aakhir maheene bhar police ne uski achhi khaasi khatirdaari ki thi. Chehre par taav khaye huye nishaan abhi bhi saaf nazar aa rahe the uske.

Thaane se baahar aa kar usne idhar udhar nazre ghumaayi aur ek auto wale ko rok kar usne auto wale ko pata bataya aur auto me baith gaya. Sare raaste wo khamosh raha. Chehre par ek dard use buri tarah rula dene par amada nazar aa raha tha kintu usne jaise badi mushkil se apne andar ke jazbaato ko roka hua tha.

Kareeb pandrah minute baad auto ek makaan ke paas ruka. Us shakhs ne auto se utar kar driver ko paise diye aur fir palat kar us makaan ki taraf badha. Maddhyam size ki boundary par ek maddhyam size ka hi lohe ka gate laga hua tha jise usne khola. Andar aa kar usne makaan ke darwaje ke bagal se lagi door bell bajaayi. Thodi hi der me darwaja khula. Darwaja khulte hi shakhs ek kadam pichhe hat gaya.

"Tu...tum.?" Darwaje ke paas nazar aayi aurat ne us shakhs ko dekhte hi maano gusse me sulag uthi aur naagin ki tarah funkaarte huye boli____"Ab yaha kya lene aaye ho.? Nikal jaao yaha se. Mujhe aise kirayedaar ki koi zarurat nahi hai."

"M..meri baat to sun lo taayi." Shakhs ke hotho se bahut narm kintu dukh me duba swar ubhra____"Bas ek baar taayi. Bas ek baar meri baat sun lo."
"Mujhe tumhari koi bakwaas nahi sunni." Us aurat ne apni badi badi aankho ko aur bhi bada karte huye kaha____"Maine tumhara sara samaan kamre se nikaal diya hai. Use uthaao aur chalte bano yaha se. Agar ek pal ki bhi deri ki to police ko bula kar fir se band karwa dugi samjhe."

Shakhs ne ashaay bhaav se taayi ki taraf dekha. Uske andar ka dard maano ab uski bardaast se baahar hone wala tha magar fir bhi usne khud ko samhaala. Udhar wo taayi use hi ghoore ja rahi thi. Uske chehre ke bhaav bata rahe the ki wo us shakhs ko kachcha chaba lene ki hasrat rakhe huye thi.

"Ye...ye kya kah rahi ho taayi.?" Shakhs ne bhaari awaaz me kaha____"Main bhala is haal me kaha jaauga.? Itna jaldi kaha mujhe rahne ki jagah milegi.? Thik hai agar tum mujhe apne yaha ab nahi rahne dena chaahti to kam se kam ek do din ki mohlat to de do. Taaki main kahi aur rahne ke liye kiraye se kamra khoj lu."

"Do din to kya main ek pal ke liye bhi tumhe apne ghar me nahi rakhugi." Taayi ne sapaat lahje me shakhs ko ghoorte huye kaha____"Shukar manaao ki maine tumhara samaan ghar se baahar nahi fenk diya. Is liye ab apna samaan lo aur foot lo yaha se...aur haan agar tum apni koi safaayi dene ka irada rakhe huye ho to us irade ko apne paas hi rakho. Apne jeewan me pahli baar kisi gair par bharosa kiya tha maine aur uska sila tumne mujhe bahut achhe tarike se de diya hai."

"Bhagwan janta hai taayi" Shakhs ne rundhe huye gale se kaha_____"Ki maine kuch bhi nahi kiya. Mujhe nahi pata ki wo paise...wo gahne jewar mere kamre me kaha se aaye the.? Tum khud socho taayi ki agar main chor hota to kya wo paise aur gahne jewar apne kamre me rakhta.? Nahi taayi...balki main to wo sab le kar yaha se chup chaap nikal jata."

"Baat agar sirf itni hi hoti." Taayi ke chehre par sahsa nafrat ke bhaav numaya hote nazar aaye____"To main tumhe maaf bhi kar deti magar tumne meri bahu ke sath galat karne ki koshish ki...wo to shukar tha ki usne shor macha diya warna tum to meri bahu ki ijjat hi loot lete."

"Nahi taayi nahi." Shakhs ki aankhe jaise usse bagawat kar uthi. Aankho se chhalak kar aanshu uske kapolo tak bah aaye, bola____"Main aisa soch bhi nahi sakta unke bare me. Aap jaanti hain ki main unhe bhabhi maa kahta hu aur maanta bhi hu. Fir bhala kaise main unke sath aisa ghinauna kaam karne ka soch sakta hu.?"

"Neech insaan." Taayi maano gusse se aag babula ho gayi, boli____"Aisa kukarm karne ke baad bhi kahta hai ki tu aisa soch bhi nahi sakta.? Isse pahle ki mujhe aur bhi gussa aa jaye nikal ja yaha se aur kabhi apni manhoos shakal mat dikhana mujhe."

Taayi kahne ke sath hi palat kar andar ki taraf pair patakte huye chali gayi. Wo shakhs wahi par khada apne aanshu ponchhta raha. Abhi ek minute bhi na hua tha ki taayi fir se darwaje par nazar aayi magar is baar uske hath me ek bag bhi tha. Taayi ne ek jhatke se apne hath me liye bag ko shakhs ki taraf dhakel diya.

"Ye le pakad apna bag aur dafa ho ja yaha se." Taayi ne shakhs se kaha aur fir ek jhatke se darwaza band kar liya. Apne paas pade bag ko shakhs ne apni aanshu bhari aankho se dekha aur fir sir utha kar ek baar aasmaan ki taraf dekha. Jaise kah raha ho ki 'Bahut khoob'.

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Police thane me us shakhs ke jane ke baad abhi hawaldaar fir se kuch bolne hi wala tha ki inspector ne use chaay magwane ka hukum suna diya. Hukum ka paalan karte huye hawaldaar jaldi se baahar gaya aur thane ke saamne hi road ke us paar chaay ke thele ki taraf dekhte huye awaaz laga kar chaay bhejne ko bola. Chaay ka bol kar hawaldaar fauran hi andar aaya aur inspector ke saamne aa kar ajeeb andaaz se khada ho gaya.

"Pet me jo bhi hai baahar nikaal do bhanu pyare." Inspector ne ek nazar hawaldaar bhanu ki taraf dekhne ke baad kaha_____"Mujhe pata hai ki koi baat tumhare pet ka haajma kharaab karne par amada hai. Is liye jab tak tum use ugloge nahi tab tak tumhe chain nahi aayega."

"Aap kitne samajhdaar hain sahab." Bhanu ne apni batteesi halke se dikhate hue kaha____"Isi liye to har wakt aapki chhaya me rahta hu taaki thodi bahut samajhdaari mujh me bhi aa jaye."

"Maska lagane ki zarurat nahi hai pyare" Inspector ne file se nazar utha kar ek baar fir se ek nazar hawaldaar bhanu par daal kar kaha____"Kaam ki baat karo."
"Sahab wo main us chorkat ke bare me kuch kahna chaahta hu." Hawaldaar ne maano apni awaaz ko prabhaavshali banate huye kaha____"Aur us par aapki raay bhi jaanna chaahta hu."

"Ok fine." Inspector ne file ko band karne ke baad chair ki pichhli pusht par apni peeth tikaate huye kaha___"Kaho kya kahna chaahte ho uske bare me.?"
"Yahi ki maheene bhar saza kaatne ke baad aaj wo yaha se chhoot kar chala gaya." Hawaldaar kuch sochte huye bola____"Use hamne maar maar kar adhmara kar diya magar fir bhi usne ye kabool nahi kiya ki uske kamre se jo paise aur gahne jewar talaashi me paye gaye the wo sab uske hi dwara chori kiye gaye the. Jabki saboot aur gawaah dono hi uske khilaaf the. Ye baat mujhe hajam nahi ho rahi sahab ji."

"Hajam to apne ko bhi nahi ho rahi pyare." Inspector ne cigarette ka gahra kash laga kar uske dhuye ko upar hawa me udaane ke baad kaha_____"Ek taraf sab kuch uske khilaaf tha jisse saaf nazar aaya ki usne mrs babita ki bahu ke sare gahne churaye aur fir unki bahu ke sath galat karne ki koshish bhi ki. Wahi dusri taraf police dwara itni khaatirdaari karne ke baad bhi wo yahi raag alaapta raha ki usne na to paise aur gahno ki chori ki aur na hi mrs babita ki bahu ke sath kuch galat karne ki koshish ki thi."

"Wahi to sahab ji." Hawaldaar bhaanu ne is tarah reaction diya jaise usne koi zabardast point pakda ho, bola____"Wo koi professional chor uchakka nahi tha aur na hi usme aisi koi baat nazar aayi thi. Iske baavjud usne itni yaatnaye jheli. Dusra koi hota to maar ke dar se kuch der me kabool kar hi leta ki haan usi ne wo sab kiya tha..bhale hi usne na kiya raha ho. Magar ye pattha to apni hi baat par ada raha sahab ji. Kya lagta hai aapko.?"

"Filhaal to kuch bhi ho sakta hai pyare." Inspector ne cigarette ka aakhiri kas liya aur fir cigarette ke tukde ko apne pair ke niche gira kar kuchalte huye kaha____"Aisa is liye kyo ki iske pahle ham sirf us shakhs par hi focus kar rakhe the. Magar itna kuch hone ke baad aur last me uske jane ke baad bhi jab sach nazar nahi aaya to ab sochne ka nazariya badlana yakeenan tark sangat hai."

"To aapko kya lagta hai sahab ji.?" Hawaldaar bhanu tapaak se bol pada____"Ye to zaahir hi hai ki wo shakhs begunaah hai. Ji haan ab to use begunaah hi kahege na sahab ji.? Kyo ki usne bhale hi jurm ko nahi kabula magar saza to kaat hi li usne."

"Saza kaat lene se wo begunaah kaise ho gaya pyare.?" Inspector ne kaha____"Saza to use tabhi mili na jab wo gunahgaar saabit hua tha.? Sare saboot uske khilaaf the. Ye alag baat hai ki usne kisi vajah se apna jurm kabool nahi kiya. Hame sirf ye jaanna hai ki usne kis vajah se us jurm ko kabool nahi kiya.? Dusri baat agar ham ye maan le ki usne sach me koi gunaah nahi kiya tha to uske sir par ye ilzaam kaise lag gaye.? Uske kamre me mrs babita ki bahu ke paise aur gahne jewar kaha se pahuch gaye.? Sabse badi baat ye ki mrs babita ki bahu komal ne us par ye ilzaam kyo lagaya ki avinash ne uske sath zor zabardasti karne ki koshish ki aur agar wo shor na machati to wo uski ijjat loot leta.? Ye aise sawaal hain pyare jo ab uth rahe hain aur hamare dimaag me uchhal kood machane lage hain."

"Mera to dimaag chakrane laga hai sahab ji." Hawaldaar ne apne maathe par hatheli ragadte huye kaha____"Ek taraf wo namuraad avinash hai jo last tak yahi raag alaapta raha ki usne kuch nahi kiya dusri taraf mrs babita aur unki bahu cheekh cheekh kar kahti rahi ki usne wo sab kiya tha. Baat agar sirf paise aur gahne jewar ki hoti to samajh me bhi aata magar koi aurat apni hi ijjat ko is tarah kyo bewajah uchhaal kar khud ko aur apne pariwar ko badnaam karegi.?"

"Point to hai pyare." Inspector ne gahri saans lete huye kaha____"Chhota mota nahi balki bada point hai. Ab is baat par zara gaur karo ki agar ye maan le ki mrs babita aur uski bahu ne avinash par jhutha ilzaam lagaya aur use police ke hatthe chadhwa diya to sawaal hai ki aisa unhone kyo kiya hoga.? Aakhir aisa karke unhe avinash se kya haasil ho gaya hoga.? Taftees to hamne bhi ki thi aas pados wale se. Sabka yahi kahna tha ki avinash bahut hi shaant aur apne kaam se matlab rakhne wala aadmi tha. Kisi factory me kaam karta tha. Subah time se jata tha aur shaam aath baje aata tha. Khana pina wo baahar hi kha leta tha. Apne kamre me wo raat me sota tha aur subah uth kar fir se apne kaam par chala jata tha. Do mahine pahle aaya tha wo aur tab se aaj tak kabhi bhi kisi ne uske bare me koi bhi faaltu ki baat nahi suni thi." Inspector ne pal bhar rukne ke baad fir se kaha____"Taftees to karni hi padi bhanu pyare. Itni marammat ke baad bhi jab us namune ne jurm kabool nahi kiya to hamare dimaag me ye vichaar bhi aaya ki kahi ye sach me begunaah to nahi aur bewajah hi ham iski khaatirdaari kiye ja rahe hain. Khair chhodo pyare....ham ye kah rahe hain ki poin to hai..aur gadbad bhi hai."

"Kaisi gadbad sahab ji" Hawaldaar bhanu ne na samajhne wale bhaav se apne aala officer ki taraf dekha.
"Kuch to gadbad zaroor hai pyare." Inspector ne sir hilate huye kaha____"Aur ab is gadbad ka pata karna hi padega. Aakhir pata to chalna hi chahiye ki ye kya chakkar tha jisme ek pariwar ki saas bahu ne apni ijjat tak uchhaal di aur ek namuraad ne apni haddiya tudwa li."

"Lagta hai haajma durust hone ka time aa gaya hai sahab ji." Hawaldaar ne ek baar fir se apni batteesi nikaal di.
"Bilkul pyare." Inspector kahne ke sath hi chair se uth khada hua aur table se utha kar apni topi ko sir par lagaya. Uske baad bhanu ki taraf dekhte huye kaha____"Tum to hamare sath hi chipkoge is liye mana karne ka koi faayda nahi. To chalo apna haajma durust karte hain."

Inspector dushyant ki baat sun kar hawaldaar bhanu khi khi kar ke hasne laga aur inspector ke chalte hi uske piche piche shaan se chal pada.

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Shaam hone wali thi.
Din bhar ki bhaag daud ke baad aakhir us shakhs yaani avinash ko ek jagah rahne ke liye ek kamra kiraye se mil hi gaya. Kabhi paidal to kabhi auto se safar kar ke wo buri tarah thak gaya tha. Peeth par lada hua bag jisme uske kuch kapde aur kuch zaruri samaan thusa hua tha. Uska bojh pratipal jaise badhta hi ja raha tha. Bhookh se bura haal to hua tha magar usne pet pooja karne ki bajaay rahne ke liye kiraye ka kamra khojne ko zyada mahattwa diya tha.

District wahi tha bas jagah badal gayi thi. Halaaki wo us jagah ke kareeb ab rahna bhi nahi chaahta tha kyo ki uski chhavi waha par bigad chuki thi. Jo log pahle use ijjat ki nazar se dekhte the wo ab use hikarat bhari dristi se dekhne wale the aur ye baat wo achhi tarah samajhta tha. Babita taayi use agar apne ghar me rahne bhi deti tab bhi wo waha nahi rukta kyo ki apni bigdi huyi chhavi ke sath wo sukoon se waha nahi rah sakta tha. Uska apna zameer use chain se sone nahi deta. Haalaki zameer to use kahi bhi chain se sone dene wala nahi tha magar man me ek chhoti si hi sahi magar ye tasalli wali baat to thi hi ki dusri jagah ke log uske bare me kuch nahi jaante hain.

Advance me maheene bhar ka kiraya jama karne ke baad hi use kamra mila tha. Haalaki aisa to har jagah hota hai magar problem tab hoti hai jab aapke paas advance me dene ke liye kiraye ke paise nahi hote. Khair ye jagah pahle wali jagah ki tarah uske liye behtar to nahi lagi magar fir bhi usne ye soch kar isi jagah par kamra liya tha kyo ki ek to din bhar ka thaka hua tha wo aur dusre andar se thoda dukhi bhi tha. Dusri baat ye thi ki use kaun sa kisi se koi matlab rakhna tha.

Jaha par use kamra mila tha wo do manjila makaan tha. Jiske ground floor me makaan maalik aur uska pariwar tha. Uske pariwar me khud wo jo ki pachaas ke paar ka tha aur uski dusri biwi jo usse umar me pandrah baras chhoti thi. Pahli biwi mar chuki thi aur usse use ek beti thi jo ab jawaani ki dehleez par thi. Dusri biwi se do bachche the jo umar me abhi kachche the.

Upar ke floor par jane ke liye main gate se enter karte hi bagal se seedhiya lagi thi. Upar ke floor par do kamre the jisme ek store room tha aur ek room wo jisme ab avinash rahne wala tha. Upar dono kamro ke saamne baaki ka chhat tha jisme ek taraf toilet bana hua tha.

Avinash ke paas samaan ke roop me bas uske kapde the aur bag me kuch aur zaruri samaan tha. Kuch kitaabe thi jinhe wo free time me padhta tha. Khair kamre ki safaayi use khud hi karni padi. Kamre me koi bed nahi tha. Ye dekh kar uske hotho par pal bhar ke liye feeki si muskaan ubhri thi. Jaise soch raha ho ki kya kismat hai aur kya ittefaaq hai ki har jagah use farsh par hi sona likha hai. Aisa nahi tha ki wo apne sone ke liye bed nahi le sakta tha magar use apni kismat par zara bhi bharosa nahi tha. Wo khud ko dharti ka sabse bada bojh maanta tha...jisme jine ki koi chaah nahi thi. Suicide is liye nahi karta tha kyo ki wo khud ko mara hua hi maanta tha.

Saaf safaayi kar ke usne thodi der farsh par let kar araam kiya aur fir khud ko fresh karne ke liye wo upar hi bane us toilet me chala gaya. Adhe ghante baad wo kapde pahan kar kamre se baagar nikla aur darwaje par tala laga kar wo seedhiyo se niche ki taraf chal diya.

Jaise hi wo antim seedhi par aaya to andar se makaan maalik bhi main gate ki taraf aaya. Dono ki aapas me nazre mili. Makaan maalik to use dekh kar muskuraya magar avinash ek nazar dekhne ke baad gate se baahar ki taraf chal diya. Uska ye bartaav makaan maalik ko thoda ajeeb laga magar usne ye socha ki shayad use kisi baat ka tention hoga is liye ignore kiya aur khud bhi uske piche baahar aa gaya.

"Aree beta suno zara." Gate se baahar aate hi makaan maalik ne avinash ko awaaz di to wo ruk gaya aur palat kar makaan maalik ki taraf dekha. Jabki uske kareeb pahuch kar makaan maalik ne kaha____"Kahi ja rahe ho kya.?"

"Ji wo khana khane ja raha hu." Avinash ne bilkul sapaat lahje me kaha.
"Khana khane.?" Makaan maalik ke chehre par chaunkne ke bhaav ubhre____"Par beta khana khane baahar kaha ja rahe ho.?"

"Ji yaha koi dhaba to hoga hi." Avinash ne poorv ki bhaanti hi sapaat bhaav se kaha____"Wahi khana khaauga. Achha ab chalta hu."
"Are dhabe me kyo khaoge beta.?" Makaan maalik use palat'ta dekha to jaldi se bol pada____"Hamne to tumhare liye bhi khana bana lene ko bol diya hai ghar me. Is liye hamare sath hi kha lena."

"Ji shukriya aapka." Avinash ne is baar bechaini se kaha____"Magar main hamesha baahar hi khana khata hu. Aapne bewajah hi mere liye khana banane ka bol diya hai."
"Ab bol diya hai to aaj kha lo beta." Makaan maalik ne prem se kaha____"Kal se baahar hi kha liya karna. Waise main to yahi salaah duga ki baahar ka khana mat khaya karo. Apne ghar ka ya apne hath ka bana khana hi khaya karo. Kyo ki baahar ke khane me milawat badi hoti hai jo sehat ke liye thik nahi hai."

Avinash ko apne makaan maalik ki baat na chaahte huye bhi maanni hi padi. Usne makaan maalik ko haan kaha aur fir waapas upar apne kamre me chala gaya. Use makaan maalik par nahi balki apne aap par gussa aa raha tha ki usne khane ke liye haan kyo kaha.?

Kamre ke farsh par wo aankhe band kiye pada hua tha. Band palko me bahut si tasveere nazar aa rahi thi jo kuch dhundhli si bhi thi aur kuch saaf bhi. Lockup me band police dwara apni kutaayi aur taayi(mrs babita) aur uski bahu komal ka use police ke hawale karna. Us par ye aarop lagana ki usne unke paise aur gahne chura kar apne kamre me chhupaye the. Itna hi nahi komal ke sath zor zabardasti kar ke uski ijjat lootne ki koshish bhi ki thi. Ye sab yaad kar ke wo buri tarah byathit ho raha tha.

Avinash ko samajh nahi aa raha tha ki jab usne aisa kuch kiya hi nahi tha to un dono ne us par aise ilzaam laga kar use police ke hawale kyo kar diya tha.? Aakhir is sabke pichhe kya vajah ho sakti hai.? Uske sath hamesha aisa hi case kyo hota hai.? Kyo har do maheene baad use isi tarah ke halaato se guzarna padta hai.? Uske baad fir use dusri jagah par rahna padta hai. Ye sab uske sath pichhle ek saal se ho raha tha magar har case me sirf kirdaar badalte the baaki case aisa hi hota tha. Use samajh nahi aata tha ki uske sath ye kaun sa khel khel raha tha bhagwan.?

Wo akele me hamesha yaad karne ki koshish karta tha ki kya sach me usne aisa kuch kiya tha jiske liye use baar baar ye sab bhugatna padta tha magar laakh koshisho ke baavjud use aisa kuch yaad nahi aata tha. Shuru shuru me use lagta tha ki koi use bewajah hi fasa raha hai magar jab aise kayi case uske sath huye to use ye sochne par majbur ho jana pada ki kahi ye sab sach to nahi.? Kahi sach me to maine wo sab nahi kiya.? Aakhir har ilzaam dene wala jhootha to nahi ho sakta...magar jab mujhe yaad hi nahi ki maine aisa kuch kiya hai to main kaise maan lu aur kaise kabool kar lu.?????

Avinash hamesha apne ateet me jhaankne ki koshish karta tha magar waha use kuch bhi nazar nahi aata tha. Uske anusaar wo is duniya me akela tha aur is dharti par uska apna koi nahi tha. Dar dar ki thokaro ne aur uski aisi kismat ne usko itna nirashawadi bana diya tha ki wo ab khud ko is dharti ka bojh samajhne laga tha. Uske andar na kisi cheez ki khwaahish thi, na koi armaan tha aur na hi kisi ki chaahat me jine ki chaah thi. Wo to bas jaise apni chalti firti laash ko ye soch kar dho raha tha ki jis din wakt pura ho jayega to koi use ya to kahi dafan kar dega ya fir jala dega ya fir aise hi kahi fenk dega jaha par pada wo sadega aur us par keede gijbijayege.

Darwaje ko kisi ne baahar se khatkhataya to avinash socho ke athaah sagar se baahar aaya aur uth kar darwaja khola to dekha makaan maalik tha. Wo avinash ko khana khane ke liye bulane aaya tha. Khair avinash ne darwaje ko baahar se kundi lagaya aur makaan maalik ke sath chal diya.

Niche andar ki taraf ek chhota sa hall tha jaha par pahle se hi kursi table laga hua tha. Table ke dusri taraf do kursiya rakhi huyi thi jabki is taraf ek hi kursi thi. Makaan maalik ne avinash ko us akeli kursi ki taraf ishara karte huye baithne ko kaha aur khud saamne wali kursi par baith gaya.

Avinash ko jaise baaki kisi baat se koi matlab nahi tha. Wo chup chaap baitha tha. Makaan maalik usi ki taraf dekhte huye kuch soch raha tha. Shayad wo samajhne ki koshish kar raha tha ki uske yaha naya naya aaya kirayedaar asal me kis kism ka praani hai. Wo nayi jagah par swabhaavik roop se chup hai ya fir uski khamoshi ke pichhe koi badi vajah hai.

"Maaf karna beta." Makaan maalik ne fiza me chha gaye sannate ko cheerte huye kaha___"Maine abhi tak tumse tumhara naam tak nahi puchha. Halaaki hamare bich der sawer jaan pahchaan ho hi jayegi."

"Avinash." Avinash ne sapaat bhaav se kaha jise sun kar makaan maalik ko thoda ajeeb to laga magar usne kaha kuch nahi jabki avinash ne aage kaha___"Mera naam avinash hai. Aapko bata du ki mujhe kisi se bhi zyada baate karna aur ghulna milna pasand nahi hai. Ho sakta hai ki aapko meri ye baat achhi na lage magar sach yahi hai."

"Apna apna swabhaav hota hai beta." Makaan maalik ne halki muskaan ke sath kaha____"Aur kuch wakt aur halaat ke madde nazar se bhi insaan ka aisa swabhaav ban jata hai jiske tahat insaan kisi se baate karna ya ghulna milna pasand nahi karta. Khair chhodo beta aur haan mujhe tumhari koi bhi baat buri nahi lagegi. Tum mujhe Chacha bula sakte ho...Mahesh chacha."

Abhi avinash mahesh ki baat par kuch bolne hi wala tha ki tabhi waha par ek aurat aayi aur mahesh ke bagal wali kursi par baith gayi. Avinash ne bas ek pal ke liye uski taraf dekha uske baad usne mahesh ki taraf dekhte huye kaha_____"Abhi aur kitna wakt lagega chacha khane ko aane me. Asal me mujhe jaldi so jane ki aadat hai aur subah jaldi apne kaam par jane ki bhi."

"Bas do minute aur." Avinash ke sawaal ka jawaab mahesh ke bagal se baithi aurat ne bade namra swar me diya, boli_____"Waise kya kaam karte ho beta tum.?"

"Ye meri dharam patni hai avinash beta." Avinash kuch bolta usse pahle hi mahesh bol pada____"Tum soch rahe hoge ki main to buddha nazar aata hu aur ye thoda jawaan to beta iski vajah ye hai ki ye meri dusri patni hain."

"Kyo sarasar jhooth bolte ho ji.?" Aurat ne aankhe dikhate huye apne pati mahesh se kaga____"Main bas thoda jawaa hu.? Are tumhari beti se bas thoda hi badi hu warna abhi meri umar hi kya huyi hai.? Baat karte hain."

"Haan thik hai bhai." Mahesh ne jaise swikaar karte huye kaha____"Tum abhi bahut jawaan ho, ab khush.?"
"Wo to main hu hi." Aurat ne badi ada ke sath kaha aur halke se muskura uthi. Avinash is tarah react kar raha tha jaise uske saamne koi ho hi nahi. Tabhi uski nazar baye taraf se aati ek khubsurat ladki par padi magar fir usne apni nazar us par se hata li.

Wo ladki mahesh ki pahli biwi ki beti Shalini thi. Hath me khane ki thaali liye wo aayi aur table par avinash ke saamne rakh diya. Aise hi wo ek ek karke thaali laayi aur apne pita aur sauteli maa ke samne rakh diya. Mahesh ne is beech bina puche hi avinash ko apni beti ka tarruf karaya. Jiske jawaab me avinash kuch na bola. Balki usne thaali lagte hi khana shuru kar diya tha. Pure time mahesh aur uski dusri biwi gayatri hi baate karte rahe jabki avinash chup chaap bina un dono ko dekhe khata raha.


Khana khane ke baad avinash waapas apne kamre me chala gaya tha. Uske rookhe byohaar ko dekh kar mahesh ne to koi react nahi kiya magar gayatri ko bada ajeeb laga tha aur usne is bare me mahesh se bolna chaha to mahesh ne jane do kah kar use chup kara diya tha.
पहले एपिसोड में तो कहानी सस्पेंस की तरफ बढ़ती नजर आ रही है...... शायद अविनाश ही इस कहानी का प्रमुख नायक " बेगुनाह " है ।

लेकिन एक बात तो है कि सास बहू ने अपने घर में एक बैचलर और वो भी अकेले को....अपने यहां रहने के लिए रेंट में एक रूम दे दिया.... काफी हिम्मतगर औरतें थी । जहां पर एक भी फेमिली का मर्द नहीं हो वहां एक बैचलर को किराए पर रूम देना.... सास बहू के लिए हिम्मत वाला ही काम था ।

फिर से वही हुआ.... एक बैचलर को महेश एंड फैमिली ने किराए पर घर दे दिया । अब पता नहीं वहां क्या होने वाला है ?

अविनाश अपने को बेगुनाह मानता है.... जबकि उसे खुद ही नहीं पता है कि उसने विगत दिनों में क्या किया था ।

यदि प्वाइंट आफ भिव अविनाश से चलें तो वो निरपराध है ... उसके किसी प्लानिंग का हिस्सा है ....लेकिन यदि प्वाइंट आफ भिव न्यूट्रल चलें तो ये उसकी साजिश हो सकती है....या और भी कुछ हो सकता है ।

मजा आयेगा इस कहानी में ।

ब्यूटीफुल अपडेट शुभम भाई ।
 
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