Incest Bahan Ki nafarat Bhai ka Pyaar
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Nivan and ahana ka ab khana khatam ho gaya tha. Ab bhi ahana ke dimag me kucb saval the isiliye wo Nivan ko dur le jana chahti thi
Ahana - let me give you a little tour around here
Ab Nivan kaha mana karna wala tha us he kaha thi chalo. Fir dno waha se chal pade
Ab dono dusre peeps se dur the koi unhe dekh nahi sakta tha uska fayda uthake ahana kaha - why do you come here
Nivan - tune hi kaha tha isliye ne aagya fir tujhe mere bathroom me aane nahi dunga
Ahana - wo sab badme hoga par paise kaha se laye tune and admission kese le liya
Ab ahana ko hui pata tha yaha admission Bahut muskil tha paise bhi bahut jyada the upar se inka Naam Accha ho to Sirf topper student ko hi lete hai wo
Nivan - aese hi mene bola tum meri bahan ho to aane diya
Ab aahana ko pata tha ye majak kar raha hai isiliye unse serious hote huve gusse me dekha ek baar Nivan ki taraf to uski fatt gai usne kaha
Nivan - mera friend janta hai kisiko yaha par hamne kuch na kuch help ki thi unki isiliye mil gaya admission upar se wo paise bhi nahi lenge
Ahana ne socha kuch gadbad hai aese free me nahi aane dete yaha pe bahut jyada fees hai yaha ki. Par abhi ahana Nivan ke sab friends ko nahi janti thi usne bas ajit ko dekha tha jab wo ek baar unke ghar pe aaya tha uske alava kisiko nahi janti thi ab usko pata tha uske alava bhi uske friends honge par janti nahi thi unhone jyada dhayan nahi diya uske friends pe par ab usne socha saayd unko dhayan dena padega par ek tarah se unko Pura ka pura confident bhi tha ki wo sab sambhal lenge
Ahana - ab aesa kya diya jo bina fees ke admission de diya unhone
Ab Nivan ne socha uski bahan se kuch chupake fayda nah
Nivan - give me your lappy aur phone for second
Ab Nivan ne software creat kiya tha wo onlind classes ke sath sath bahut sari chije karta tha. Jaise koi edu app karta hai wo and phone me available tha. Ab ahana ne kuch soch me mobile de dia fir Nivan ne app open kia about me jake usne dikhaya uska Naam likha tha RC NIVV Asa karke usne ye dikhaya
Nivan - see this is my name ye sab mene banaya tha isiliye kuch paise nahi liye
Ab ahana ko ye Pehli baar pata chala tha ki Nivan ne ye sab banaya hai usko pata tha ki wo software developer hai wo sab karta rehta hai par usko laga koi chota Mota Kaam karta hoga varna uske paas baht paise bhi hote par aesa kuch dikh to nahi raha uske Paas ya fir Nivan ke Paas paise hai wo ye sab soch ke kaha uske
Ahana - fir to bahut se paise bhi mile honge iske liye
Nivan - kaha meto aese hi free me Kaam karta hun friend ke kuch Jane pehchan wale the to kar diya unke liye Kaam
Ahana ne socha wtf free me kon Kaam karta hai par Nivan tha bhi bhola tha koi bhi uska fayda utha sakta tha ye pata ahana ko tha. Ab usne kuch soch ke
Ahana - iske alava kuch aur developed kiyakiya tumne
Nivan - tumhe janke kya karna hai
Ahana - para to chale tumne kitne paise chupaye huve hai jiska ghar walo ko pata na ho
Nivan - kyun ab dad ko mat Bata Dena in sab ke bare me tumhe to pata hai wo kaise hai tumpe bharosa karke bataya hai ham dono ke bich me secret rakhna
Itna bolke usne ahana ko ankh Mardi fir ahana ne kahaa
Ahana - vaise kitne paise tumhare Paas jo mujhe nahi pata
Nivan - tumhe janke kya karna hai par kuch udane ke liye chahiye to bata dena tujhe mana nahi karunga
Ahana - tere paise ko me hath bhi na lagavu
Nivan - thi hai fir upi se le lena
Ahana - nope not gonna happen
Nivan - thik hai teri marji par ghar pe mat Bata dena varna mera plan bigad jayega
Ahana ne ye sunke thoda sock hoke pucha
Ahana - kaisa plan
Nivan - move out hone kha ab sari life m ghar walo ke sath to nahi rah sakta na girlfriend se shaadi karunga fir kuch bacche kaurnga
Ahana ne ye sunke Pehle thoda sock huvi par fir socha kuch to time lag hi jayega usko move out hone me tab tak to hoga bhi nahi ye fir usne kaha
Ahana - Accha tumahari girlfriend bhi hai
Nivan -kaha hogi koi acchi milti hi nahi
Ahana ne ab apna dimag lagaya Nivan life me usse juth nahi bolega agr.wo naina ko apni gf manta to wo uska Naam le leta par usne liya nahi Matlab kuch to gadbad hai fir usne normal hi baat karte huve pucha
Ahana - Accha fir kaisi chahiye
Nivan ne kucb sochke kaha
Nivan - dikhne me badi se aankhe ho chota sa nose ho acchi figure ho personality rude type chalegi par padhai me topper honi chahiye
Ahana ne mann me gali di kyun ki wo usko hi bol raha tha ab usko pata tha wo chidane ke liye bol rah hai isiliye usne bhi kuch offend huve bina kaha
Ahana - aesi kaha milegi tumhe thoda muskil hai
Nivan - ek tum ho par tumse shaadi kr nahi sakte par sayad tumhare jais dusri bhi kahi hogi
Ahana - I know age ho gai hai tumhari par khud ki Bahan se flirt karte saram nahi aati
Nivan - I always want best tumhari tarah koi joker ko to choose nahi karta
Ahana - oye hello he's not my bf
Nivan - sorry but me nahi manta vaise tumhare liye wo best hai usse Accha mil bhi nahi sakta
Ahana - I can get anyone if I want to not like you
Nivan - I had better than you,maybe not as beautiful as you but overall she wins
Ahana ne ye sunke firse soch me pad gai ab ye naina ke bare me baat kar raha hI ye kisi aur ke bare me ab usne socha ans lena padega kuch na kuch karke
Ahara - kya Matlab overall kisme acchi thi wo
Nivan - she loved me more than anything else
Ahana ne Nivan ke chere ki taraf dekh rahi thi ab uska chera change sa ho gaya tha jaise abhi rone wala ho par wo khud ko sambhale hua tha Aankho me ya chere pe dikhaya nahi kuch
Ahana - and what's her name
Nivan ne uske bare me apne friend ke alava kisi se baat nahi ki thi abhi uski baat ahana ke samne kar nahi sakta tha isiliye wo bina kuch javab diye nikal gaya waha se jaldi se
Ahana ne usko rokne ki kosis nohi ki ab uske hath aaj bahut sari nai bate pata chali thi Nivan ke bare me wo bhi itne se time me usne ye mission naina ko diya tha par usko kuch pata nahi chala itne mahino me par ahana ko ye sari bate kuch minutes me pata chal gai
Ab ahana ne socha usko naina ko mission dene ke bajay khud wo hi sab sambhal leti but on other hand wo Nivan se jyada baat nahi karna chahti thi. Ab ahana ko pata tha usne ye sari bate usko share ki par naina ko nahi uska karan yahi tha ki Nivan sabse jyada Pyaar abhi usko hi karta tha and sabse jyada trust bhi usko ho karta tha fir bhale wo usko apni jaan se bhi jyada hate kare
Ab ahana ke face pe muskan aagai ab usko kuch naya pata chala tha upar se Nivan ke Paas paise bhi hai par usko pata nahi tha kitne hai vaise ahana ko paiso ki jarurat thi par bahut jyada ki utne Nivan ke Paas honge nahi par dusri baat uske gf ki par ab pata lagana tha ki kab ki baat hai usne nivan ke past ke bare me jyada pata lagaya nahi tha uski jarur nahi tha unke liye par ab lag raha tha lagana padega vaise bhi uske friends ke bare me bhi usko pata lagana padega
Ab Nivan ko class me jana tha par uske banaj wo direct ghar pe gaya fir usne kuch soch me pad gaya uske past ko wo ab life me bich me nahi aane de sakta tha wo sneha se Hadd se jyada Pyaar karta tha bhulna bhi chahta tha par jab bhi uske bare me sochta tha to usko sneha ka chehra Yaad aata tha jab wo aakhri shans le rahi thi
Sneha ka khunbhara chehra uske hath me tha wo uske god me leti hvi thi smile ke sath bilkul Nivan ki taraf dekh rahi thi jaise bol rahi ho pls save me i dont want die par uske jaban par alag
Sneha - just run away from here unke Paas wo powers hai jinke bare me tumne socha bhi nahi hoga tum unse fight nahi kar sakte ye tumhari normal world se alag chij hai pls I beg you just go
Nivan bas sneha ki taraf dekh raha tha uske samne road par ek bada sa aadmi apne hath me iron rod leke aaraha tha par usne apne hath se hi wo rod ko thoda marod diya Sirf apni physical powers se yaha Nivan ne sneha ko apni god me uthaya aur us bande ke samne Jane laga uske piche ek car thi jisko wo sneha ko hospital le Jane ke liye use karna chahta tha ye dekh kar sneha boli
Sneha - pls just go tumne dekha nahi wo normal insan nahi hai just run pls fir my sake tum nahi jante inko ye kya kar sakte hai
Ye sab bolte huve uski Aankho se aansu arahe the par Nivan ruka nahi usne bas chalna hi raha wo bilkul us bande ke Paas pohach gaya fir bola
Nivan - I don't care how powerful you are or how many of you are thare just I'm gonna say this once don't waste my time
Wo banda bas haste huve kaha - I'm from akrast family 8th mafia family jo me kar sakta hun uske bare tum soch bhi nahi sakte
Ye sab bato pe dhayan diye bina Nivan uske Paas chala gaya usne wo rod ghumai Jor se Nivan ke sar ke side me mara ye dekh ke sneha puri tarah tadap ne lgi thi par isse Sirf Nivan ka Sirf kuch khun nikla tha sar se jo khun sneha ke upar gir raha tha par Nivan ko jyada kuch hau nahi tha wo bas ab gusse me tha kuch Hadd se jyada sneha ne aesi gusse wali aankhe apni life me nahi dekhi thi waha us bande ko bhi sock lag gaya ki ye ab tak apne pero pe kaise khada hai par Nivan uske samne chalne laga wo banda apne aap baju me ho gaya wo Darr gaya tha baht jyada jate jate Nivan Keh raha tha
Nivan - I'm so pissed of right now but I can't waste my time here but just remember if she died today there will be not even one member from your family will be alive tomorrow
20 hour later, unknown place
Puri jagah pe bas lase padi thi sab jagah Sirf aur Sirf khun hi khun tha sabke bich me Nivan khada tha abhi bhi pure gusse me tha piche se ajit ki aavaj ne usko hos me laya
Ajit - let's go ab yaha rrhke kuch fayda nahi hai
Par Nivan apni jagah se hil raha tha usko abhi pata karna tha ki sneha ko marne wala kon tha par usko Kisne kucb nahi bataya par usko kuch bhi karke pata karna tha fir jo koi bhi ho usko jaan se marna tha
Ab Nivan ne firse apne room me aankhe khuli Raat hone wali thi
Waha ahana ne aaj jo jo Sikh hai Nivan ke bare me wo sab bataya sabko waha naina ko yakin nahi ho raha tha ki uski life me koi Pehle hoga bhi ya fir wo uske bare.me hi baat kar raha hai par ahana ne usko bola nahi aesa nahi hai
Naina - par aesa hona muskil hai sayad wo vaise hi jutj bol raha hoga
Ahana - na wo mujhse juth nahi bol sakta
Jay bhi ye sab sun raha tha sath me rahul bhi par rahul wo app and software dekh raha tha apne pc se apne kuch dost ke sath
Jay - thik hai jaisa tumhe lage and muje lagta hai dad ko aesi choti choti chijo ko bare me batana sahi nahi hai unko baki sab sambhal ne do ham Nivan ko sambhal hi sakte hai
Purvi - ha mujhe bhi wahi lagta hai
Ahana - thik hai and abse me Nivan se thoda close hone ka try karungi
Jay - kyun tumhe kya jarurat hai vaise bhi jab tum uska Paas hona nahi sah sakti usse kaise baat kar logi tumhare liye bahut jyada Muskil hoga
Ahana - I know but karna padega me hi hun jisse wo andha trust karta hai isiliye kuch bhi secret hoga to mujhe pata chal jayega and ham aese ignore nahi kar sakte kya pata kya info mil jaye
Jay - thik hai wo jo karna hai wo Karo par usko janse marne ka man bbi kare to control kar dena tum wo hamare liye jaruri asset hai
Ah
Ahana - kabhi socha nahi tha tumhare muh se itni acchi bate sunne ko milega
Jay - aakhir bhai kisika hun
Ahana - wo to hai par ab kya karna hai wo sochna padega
Rahul bich me bola
Rahul - guys suno
Sabne rahul ki taraf dekha
Rahul - mene try Kiya par kuch pata nahi chala iske piche kon hai par ye software masterpiece hai Pura alag level pe creativity and dimag laga hai wo pata nahi kaise bolu
Tabhi bich me Jay bola
Jay - tumhara level ka hai
Ab rahul best tha wo sab kuch karta unke liye hacking tak abhi uske jaisa milna muskil hai sabse best me mana jata hai rahul
Purvi - nahi rahul ke level pe hona muskil hai he's genius just like ahana
Ye
Ab rahul ne kaha - I thing you don't understand he's one of kind me uske level pe Jane ki soch bhi nahi sakta if you think I'm genius than he's 10 times batter than me or even more
Ab ye sunke sab sock me the Rahul aese hi kisi ki tarif nahi nahi karta. Agar usne bola hai to sahi hai par ab kya karna hai sath me Iska Matlab wo ahana se bhi jyada smart hai kya
Jay - are you sure you're not over-exaggerating this kyun ki Iska Matlab tum bol rahe ho wo ahana se bhi bada mastermind hai
Rahul - no and sorry to say this but agar ye hamara dusman hai to kehna nahi chahta but we can get fucked up really bad
Jay - ye kya bak raha hai agar uske Paas dimag hai bhi to wo kya kar lega hamare Paas itni power to hai ham usko zinda nahi Jane denge
Rahul - me samaj sakta hun par mene or Rishabh ne wahi dekha aur jo mujhe laga mene bol diya and jo mene usko software me brain use karte huve dekha hai agr wo reallife me bhi karta hai to Matlab chance hai ki usko hampe shak hoga saayd usko hamare bare me pata bhi ho and wait kar raha ho sahi time ka
Ye sab sunke sab sock me the kya aesa bhi ho sakta hai kya
Rahul - me kuch nahi bolunga par rishabh uske behaviour ko Analyze kar rah hai saayd uska bhi kehna same hoga right rishabh
Rishabh - no I think Iska ulta hai sab
Ye sunke rahul ko sock laga sabko bhi sath me koi kuch samjha nahi vaise rishabh inka behaviour analyst tha jo apne field me best tha uska kehna sach hota hai hamesha
Ahana - kya Matlab
Ab sabke mann me bhi yahi question tha jo ahana ne kia tha
Rishabh - Matlab he just love you too much
Ab kisiko kuch samaj nahi aaya isiliye bich naina ne kaha
Naina - par uska kya lena dena
Rishabh ne ahana ki taraf dekhe ke kaha
Rishabh - you know he love right
Ab ahana ko Pehle se pata tha usme koi shawq nahi tha
Ahana - I know
Rishabh - but d thing is how much
Ab Jay ne kaha
Jay - kya fark padta hai usse
Rishabh - well thing is he just love her so much that wo soch hi nahi sakta ki ahana uske against kuch galat kar sakti hai mene uske behaviour ko Analyze kiya hai isse yahi bata sakta hun ki uska dimag out of the box sochta hai wo speed me bahut kuch soch leta hai bahut sare dusre raste soch leta hai alg alag tarike ke par jab baat ahana ki aati hai to uska sochne ka tarika Sirf sidha hota hai baki sare road pe jaise bich me bich me se cut hai wo uske Paas soch hi nahi sakta
Ye sab sun rahe the sath me ahana bhi usko vaise bhi pata tha ki wo uske against soch nahi sakta hai kuch bhi ho jaye jo naya nahi tha
Ahana - Matlab hamare mission me kuch problem to nahi hogi
Rishabh - nahi Iska ulta hoga
Jay - Matlab
Rishabh - Matlab yahi ki agar abhi ahana jake uske goli marde uske samne jake bhi wo sabse Pehle yahi sochega ki koi aur ahana ka chehra lagaya hai and uska dusra soch hoga ki Kisne usko mind control kiya hai par wo kabhi nahi manega ki ye sach me ahana hai
Ahana - well that's great news
Jay - ha but aesa possible kese hai
Rishabh - it's possible if you love someone more than yourself or anything else
Ab sabke mann me kuch na kuch chal raha tha bas ahana ke alava usko dekh ke Rishabh ne kaha
Rishabh - you know about this right
Ahana - ofcourse and also the problem
purvi - problem? What problem
Ahana ne Rishabh ki taraf dekha
Rishabh - thing is if somehow he comes know about this wo ahana ko kuch nahi karega but more likely will kill himself
Ye sunke sab sock the Jay se muh se nikla
Jay - are you sure?
Rishabh - ofcourse isiliye jitna ho sake utna tum sabko shatark rehna hai ahana ka to chalega par agar tumme se kisi pe bhi thoda bhi shaq hua to samaj lo
Ab sab soch me the kuch na kuch naina ko ye sab sunke yakin nahi ho raha tha baki sabko bhi par sabse badi baat ye thi ke ahana ko pata bhi tha ki wo usko itna Pyaar karta hai
Ab ahana ke liye sabke dil me dar aur beth gaya tha kyun ki wo Nivan ko bina chehre pe sikanaj aaye Maar sakti hai to wo kya chij hai usne itni sari bate suni par usko kuch fark nahi pada wo bas apane mission ke bare me hi soch rahi thi jo uske liye uski life se bhi jyada tha
Ab ahana apni car leke apne ghar ke taraf Jane lagi ab wo sab soch rahi thi usko bhi pata tha uske aas Paas bahut log hai jo usko Pyaar karte hai par Nivan jitna koi nahi karta agar unki life Kaas simple hoti Kaas wo normal bhai bahan hote to unki life aaj kya hoti kisko nahi chahiye aesa koi jo aapko sabse jyada Pyaar kare world me par wo kuch nahi kar sakti thi kyun ke uski vajah se jo hua hai wo uski khud ki life se bhi badkar tha
Ab chalate chalte uski car ruk gai sayad usne sochte time dhayan nahi diya kuch hua tha wo niche utni to dekha tyre to punchar to tha hi par car kyun band huvi usko pata nahi chala usne Paas jake dekha to tyre ke kile lagi huvi thi kisine jaan buj kar diya tha wo ab dhayan nahi dia dusra tyre lene ke liye dikki open ki tabhi uske piche ek car aake ruki usne dekha usne kuch ladke bethe the. Fir ek ladka utar kar Bahr aaya ahana ke pass me par wo ahana ki Khubsurati dekh kar dang rah gaya uski dhadkan baht tej ho gai. Usne piche isara kiya to dusre ladke bhi pass me aagaye
Wo ladka bola Medam kuch help chahiye ab ahana ne us ladke taraf dekha and kaha tyre change karna hai and saayd kuch aur bhi kharabi huvi hai car me
Abhi ahana bina dare sab kaam kar rahi thi un ladko ne bhi sath dena suru kar diya fir unhone tyre bhi fix kar dia ab tak ahana ne dekha ki ye ladke jo usne socha tha aese to nahi hai vaise flirt karne ka try kar rahe the par kucb aggressive dikha nahi rahe the Matlab inka kuch galat irada nahi the fir koi aur hoga jisne ye sab kiya hai isilye usne ek ladke ko kaha ab me sambhal lungi you can go now. Ladka bola par ab tak car suru nahi huvi. Ab ahana ne kaha koi nahi wo sab me kar lungi. Ye sab chal raha tha ki ek dusra ladka bola are you feeling uncomfortable. Ab aesa kuch tha nahi par ahana ne kaha ha isiliye.
Ab wo ladke ek dusre ki taraf dekha ab usme se ek bola thik hai par kisiko call karke bula lo. Ab ahana ne kaha thik hai tum niklo me sambhal lungi. Ab wo sab kya karte nikal gaye waha se ab ahana ne aesa kiya kyun ki agar unhone nahi kia ye to koi aur hoga ye sab soch hi rahi thi ki dusri taraf se ek car aai wo uske Paas aake ruki fir uske piche dusri aai wo bhi uske Paas aake ruki. Ab un cars me se ek banda Pehle nikla Paas aake ahana ka hath padam ke bola let's go
Ab ahana ko pata nahi tha ki wo kon the par usko puche bina usko koi touch kar nahi sakta tha usne us bande ka hath pe hath rakha and kaha leave my hand
Par usne suna nahi ahana ka and hsne laga par tabhi ahana ne Jor se ek puncj mara wo wahi pe gir gaya dusri car se sab utar gaye ek badme pe baseball bat tha wo marne ko aage aaya piche se usko kisine mana kiya jo car me betha tha par wo bande ne bat ghuma diya par ahana ne ek punch bat todte huve mara wo dekh ke sab dar gaye ab sab ek dusre ki aur dekh rahte par ahana ruki nahi sabko ek ek karke marne lagi bas ek car me betha banda tha usne kaha tum janti nahi ham kon Pehle meri baaf suno par ahana ne bina kuch sune window ke aar paar ek puch me usko gira dia
Ab sab aese hi pade the haddi bahut ki fatt gai thi ab usne Naina ko call Kia usne sari baat samaj kar jaha pe wo sab the wah pe aai sath me ek bande ko leke aai jise truck tha usme sabko bhar ke ek jagah le gaye
Ab waha se ahana nikal gai wo sochme pad gai firse aaj jo hua un sabme ab ye log kon the wo soch rahi thi kisina kisi mafia family se the jo uske upar attack kia par ek time aesa bhi tha jab unki family pe attack karne ka koi soch bhi nahi sakte the tab unki family emperor thi yani sab family ki head family unke kaha sab chalta tha yank ahana ke dad ka kaha tab ahana choti thi jiska usko kuch Yaad Nahi tha bas usne photos and kahani ya suni thi par unki life tab royle thi. Uski mom tab bahut khush thi sath me uske dad bhi wo sabse upar the unka kaha hi chalta tha sab jagah par ek din sab chamge ho gaya uske real mom dad ki death ho gai and uski vajah tha Nivan
Ab Nivan ka birt ahana ke Pehle huva tha wo next emperor banne wala tha par ek chij ne sab change kar diya ab ahana ki family ke bodyguard the jo sab family ke hote hai. Aur is family ka bodyguard sabse powerful tha Naam tha veer
Ahana ke dad ka Naam raj tha uski mom ka Naam indu tha. Jab Nivan ka birth nahi hua tha uske Pehle ki baat hai jab veer Sirf indu ke sath rehta tha jisse kisko problem nahi thi kyun ki wo sabse wafadar tha par pata nahi kab indu and veer ke bich relationship change ho gaye waha veer ki bhi family thi jisme powerful log the bhale family choti thi par powerful thi. Veer ko hamesha se raj karna tha sab pe fir veer ko beti huvi arohi Naam Ki fir kuch time Baad use para chala indu pregnent hai.
Ab chance the ki uske pet me jo baccha hai wo uska hi tha par usne kabhi jataya nahi jab usne indu ko is bare me pucha to usne mana kar dia par usko kahi na kahi pata thi wo baccha uska hi hai tab kucb time ke Baad Nivan ka birth hua ab wo agla emperor tha ab veer ne bhi kuch nahi bola.kisiko and uska aur indu ka relationship aese hi Pehle khatam ho gaya tha kuch time Jane ke Baad jab ahana ka birth hua tab kuch time Baad pata nahi kaid raj ko pata chal gaya veer ka beta hai wo ab veer ko Nivan ko emperor banana tha isiliye usne raj ko Maar dala Pehle to kisko pata nahi chala Kisne raj ko mara hai par indu ko pata tha ki ye Kaam veer ka hai and usne kis liye mara hai
Par kuch bhi hota usse Pehle Nivan ka Naam likh diya gaya tha emperor ke Naam pe par ye indu se dekha nahi gaya usko pata tha agar usne Sach bata diya to uska beta mar jayega isilye usne apne bhai ko bola jiska bhi ek beta tha jay Naam ka ab usne promise liya tha ki kuch bhi ho jaye uske bete ko bacha lena kyun ke aakhir wo Maa thi. Fir dono family ke bich me fight huvi wo bhi Sirf Nivan ko emperor banane ki vajah se uski vajah se indu ki bhi death ho gai usko bhi Maar diya sath me dusri bhi bahut sare lgo ko bhi fight jyada bad gai last me veer bhi mar gaya tab jake fight ruki dono taraf ab log kam bache the par veer ki family me jo bache the wo sab waha se Bhaag gaye ab ek Nivan tha jo uska blood tha par uska kya karna tha uske bare me soch ne ka time nahi tha kyun ki ab wo ka jor the. Unke upar dusri family hamla karke sab le legi unko pata tha isiliye wo waha se Pehle se hi nikal gaye jab unkr kuch aur family members ki death huvi
Ab sab kahi na kahi chup gaye the vaise bhi wo kam bache the sath me veer ki family bhi baht Kam bachi thi kuch saal Baad ahana ko ye sari baat ka pata chala jab jo 14 saal ki thi tab wo Nivan ko apna bhai Manti thi par ab sab change ho gaya tha uski and uski family ki vajah se aaj uske mom and dad nahi the uske Paas and upar se uske dad ne hi uske mom and dad ko mara tha ab aese ladke ko wo apna bhai kese Maan Le usko gussa aata tha jab bhi wo uske family ke photos ko dekhti thi.
Ab time ye tha jab unko bapas sab lena tha abhi Nivan unke Paas tha tab tak wo veer ki family ko blackmail kar sakte the sath me baki families se unko bachke rehna tha
Jay apne mom and dad ke sath bada nahi hua wo dur apne uncle ke sath chala gaya tha wo bhi kuch time.oehle bapas aaya hai ab wo sab ready the ek.ek karke sab kuch bapas lene ke liye
Ab ahana ko bhale Nivan Hadd se jyada Pyaar kare ya khud se jyada jo wo karta tha par usko kya fark padne wala tha jab us dunia bhar ke Pyaar ke badle uski dunia hi nahi bachi thi wo ab kuch nahi kar sakti thi bas ek Kaam tha wo tha badla lena Pehle veer Nivan ki family se fir Nivan se fir apna Misson complete karna wo tha firse unki family emperor banna bas ab empire ki jarurat thi
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He has nothing to do with this but he's the reason. And abhi sari bate nahi batai Hai mene suspense ke liye aur bhi kuch chichen judi huvi hai jisse ye sab cham raha haifirst of all II will request you to do less mistakes because I always need to read same paragraph twice or thrice, then only I understand the things.
ek baat ahana ki samajh mein nahi aayi. Veer aur ahana ki maa indu ke najayaz sambandh the jiska parinam tha Nivan. Isme uska kya dosh? Dosh to uski maa ka hua na jo ke ahana ki bhi maa hai. Strange wo zinda hai isliye dushman hai. Use to shayad pata bhi nahi hoga ke uski behan use kis galti ki wajah se nafrat karti hai aur use marna chahti hai.
par overall badhiya raha yeh update kyunki isme sab kuchh crystal clear ho gya. It's really a great story.
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abse story change hogi thoda yaha waha ghumegaawesome update.....
to ye raaj tha nafrat ka ...
aage dekhte hai hai nivaan ko is baare me kb pta chalta hai....
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kya chutiyapa hai..badala lena hai nivas se ek bache se ek kam kar do ahana ko hi mar do....
but hero chutiya hai...iska end mujhe abhi dikh raha hai...ki nivan last main mar jayega par jate jate ahana ko apne liye pyar jaga ke jayega...
par hamara dil thoda chota hai...andha pyar aur dhoka nahi dekh sakata...
isi liye hamare taraf se tata hau story ke liye...
but story achi hai aur pake likhane ki style bhi
but hero chutiya hai...iska end mujhe abhi dikh raha hai...ki nivan last main mar jayega par jate jate ahana ko apne liye pyar jaga ke jayega...
par hamara dil thoda chota hai...andha pyar aur dhoka nahi dekh sakata...
isi liye hamare taraf se tata hau story ke liye...
but story achi hai aur pake likhane ki style bhi
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Lol don't worry aesa kuch nahi hoga aapne 2nd update padha hoga to aapko pata hoga he can't die he's technically immortalkya chutiyapa hai..badala lena hai nivas se ek bache se ek kam kar do ahana ko hi mar do....
but hero chutiya hai...iska end mujhe abhi dikh raha hai...ki nivan last main mar jayega par jate jate ahana ko apne liye pyar jaga ke jayega...
par hamara dil thoda chota hai...andha pyar aur dhoka nahi dekh sakata...
isi liye hamare taraf se tata hau story ke liye...
but story achi hai aur pake likhane ki style bhi
