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Baap Ji

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Spoiler....
Ye story ek police commissioner ki hai jo system or netao ka Gulam hai.
Kya Hoga tab jab jab iski beti iske or system k khilaaf jung shuru kar degi aur naksalio k group ko join kar legi..

Guys intro raat ko ayega or Mai roz update nhi de sakta kyoki mai apni story sisters revenge bhi likh raha hu jiski ek update roz deni hai meko

Warning : chutiyapanti bhi hogi thodi bahut. Hope you enjoy it & ignore kroge


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Baap Ji

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Imosnal update bhai ab agedekhte he kya hota he or kon pachta tahe waiting for next update

Osm update sneha shayat ab badal jaygi or ye jo sona anaya ko chorne ki baat kar rahi gai aisa to nahi k laxmi ne anaya ki sachai bata di ho sona ki ......
Ab mega update ka intizar.

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Congratulation for new thread

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Baap Ji

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Update 1

Suraj apne charam par tha aaj kai dino Baad Shimla me suraj nikla tha jiski roshni se pura Shimla chamchama raha tha suraj me itni taqat to nhi thi ki wo logo k pasine chuda sake lekin uski jo kirne ek jail par pad rahi thi Jahan police aur army ek maidan me ikatthi thi sama esa tha ki kisi ko fasi dene k liye ye police aur army ki bheed lagi inhi me kuch aam log bhi they jinka ro ro ke bura haal tha
Ansu pani ko tarah beh rahe they
Ek aurat jo bahut khubsurat thi wo cheekh cheekh k ye sadaye de rahi thi
Jab w dekhti hai ki kale kapro me ek pario jaisi ladki jise pakad ke do guard jail ki cell se nikal ke la rahe they.
Aur samne chabutre par Jahan fasi ka fanda latak raha tha wo ladki ek nazar us fasi ke fande ko dekhti jise marne ka koi gham nahi tha fir dusre hi pal barrier me khade logo ko dekhti hai jise dekhte hi uski ankhe nam ho jati hai aankhe ro ro ke sooj chuki thi. ..

Aurat us ladki ko dekhte hue : chod do meri beti ko chod do chod do mere kaleje ke tukde ko chor de..
Bina ruke wo bas ro ro ke cheekhti Jaa rahi thi esa malum padh raha tha jaise apni beti ki maut dekh k uski sanse bhi tham jayegi
Pass me apsara jaisi ladki zameen par ghutno k baal baith k sanse sambhalti hui bas apni bahen ko chorne ki bheekh mang rahi thi aansuo se uski frok bheeg gayi thi chahera laal pad gaya tha sara ..
Ladki : didiiiiiiiii........ Daddddddd..... Meri diii ko chor do chahe to mujhe fasi de do...

Ladki bheegti aankho se ek Sans me Kai baar minnate kar rahi thi apni di ko chod dene ki...

Unhi policewalo me ek 43 saal ka bhi aadmi tha jo apni beti ko dekhta hi is haal me to andar se wo bhi tadap jata hai
Gham ka sama charo or bana hua tha
Wo admi apni yadon me kho jata hai hai us ladki ko fasi ke fande ki or jata dekh k
Ki kitne nazo se Pala tha usne apni beti ko aaj khud apne hatho se fansi de raha tha
Jab us ladki k chahere par nazar dalta hai to uske samne us ladki ka bachpana Aa jata hai...

Flashback :
Ek 5th class me padne wali ladki bistar pe leti thi jiske bistar par ek admi baitha tha jo us ladki k sar ko sehla raha tha..
Ladki : papa ap mujhe bhi marenge jaise devi laal ko mara
Admi : kabhi nahi meri beti papa to apko kabhi chhu bhi nahi sakte apka bhai devi laal bada shaitaan hai jo badi badi galtiyan karta isliye papa ne mara Taki age se esa kuch na kare
Ladki masoomiyat se : acha papa ap mujhe kabhi nahi marenge
Admi : Haa meri rajkumari...

Flashback end....

Jab wo commissioner in Lamho ko Yaad karta aur fansi ke fande k samne khadi apni beti ko dekhta aur pichey se Aa rahi cheekhe uski patni or beti ki to wo baa tadap jata hai..

Tabhi jailor bolna shuru karta hai jiske hatho me ek latter hota hai : ruhi Singh shakti ki beti
ilzam hai tum par tumne 5 mla 9 policemen aur high court ke judge ka katal kiya jinhe berehmi se mara aur sarkar ka arthik roop se bhi bahut nuksaan kiya in sab ki vajh se tumhe
Fansi ki saza sunayi jati hai..

Fir jailor ek lambi Sans leke dubra bolna shuru karta hai
Jailor : ruhi Singh koi aakhiri khwahish hai tumhari.....

Jab ladki ye sunti to bheegi aankho se cheekh k kehti hai

Ladki : bharrrrrrr me jaaaaooo....


Ye Kehte hue fansi ka fanda apne gale me daal leti hai...


Karta nahi kyo tu mujhpe yaqin....
Kyo mere dil ki tu sunta nahi.....
Tere bagair kitna tanha sa hu
Aalam ye dil ka tu samjhe kabhi ..

Ruhi ki Maa tadap k cheekhte hue : ruhiiiiiiii meri bachi
Chor do meri beti ko chor do Mai tumhare hath jodti hu chor do .......

Karta nahi kyo tu mujhpe yaqin....
Kyo mere dil ki tu sunta nahi.....
Tere bagair kitna tanha sa hu
Aalam ye dil ka tu samjhe kabhi ..


Ruhi ki bahen jab apni didi k gale me fansi ka fanda dekhti to uski jaan pairo se nikalna shuru ho jati hai rote cheekhte hue apne komal hath zameen par marne lagti hai
Ladki : diiiiiii.... Daddy chor do unhe plz chor do diiiiiii....
Isi k sath wo zameen pe gir k behosh ho jati hai....

Hai pata ye tujhe na ji sakunga bin tere..
Fir bhi kyo mujhse judaa...
Tuuuuuuuu.. Tu hi hai tu hi to hai mera junu...
Tu hai tu to hai... Dil ka sukoon
Tu hai tu hi to hai jiske bina mai ji na sakun.....

Flashback....


To be continue.....







 
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Baap Ji

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:congrats:to new story


Congratulation for new thread

Bhai log writer ko degrade kiun kar rahe ho aap sab to aise behaive kar rahe jo jaise ke hero ne us Ananya se shadi kar li ho ya uske piche apni behan ke sath kuch bura kiya ho agar writer kah raha he ke trip ke story ka rukh change ho ga to tab tak wait karo aur waise bhi agar hero us randi ko chod raha hai to is me masla kya hai abhi to fleshback bhi ana hai shayad hero ko bhi is sazish ka pata ho aur woh bhi koi game khail raha ho Sneha ke sath ya phir ho sakta hai ke is dhoke ke baad hero ki life me koi immportant change ana ho kuch bhi ho sakta is liye atleast tab tak to writer ko motivate karo.

Yah bhi to ho sakta hai ke trip se wapsi pe Laxmi hi hero ko sachai bata de to tab tak chill and enjoy the story.

Agar kisi ko story nahi pasand aa rahi to woh aur stories parh le ya apni story likhe kisi ko bhi yah hak nahi he ke woh kisi writer ki bezati kare hum yahan forum pe entertainment ke liye ate hain so enjoy the story or leave the story.

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Yar phele ap apni story p dehan do dosro ki story ko bura mat bolo.......
Writer jis tarha se story likh rahe hao log bohot like kar rahe so plz ap aise comments na kare and sorry agar bura lage to....

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Dosto update padh k batao age likhna chahiye ya nhi.....

 

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Bhai kya update diya hai pehle hii rula diya aisa time ek hii bat me jap raha hu kash fansi na ho uske bhai use bacha le dekhte hain devil aata hai ki nahi revel ko bachane
 
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Nice update
 
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