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nice update ..aakhir shadi ho hi gayi sabki .Update-39
Plan ke mutabik door ek mandir pe shadi ka ayojan kiya gaya hai. Wanha ko bhade ke kuchh log laye the. Jo bas family ka natak kare. Unko achha khasa paisa de diya . Pujari ne mujhe aur Lucky ko dejh ke ascharjya ho gaya. Dono ek jese dekhte the.
Phir hamare pooja ke bidhi ke baad dono kanya ko bulane ka sanay agaya. Pehle ander se shalini nikli. Oh apne jindegi main dusri basr shadi kar rahi thi khud ki bete ki sath. Uski munh main ek alag sharam ki laaz sobha badha rahi thi. Lucky usko dekh ta hi reh gaya.
gehne ke sringar main oh aur bhi khubsurat lag rehi thi. Uski muskan usse aur bhi khubsurat bana rehi thi.
Kuchh pal ke baad Payel nikal ke ayi. Main usko dekh ke reh gaya. Kya khubsurti ke bala thi. Khudki beti aaj meri dulhan banne ja rehi thi. Bahut anand dayi samay tha. Main bas usko dekhta hi reh gaya.
Laal jode main ek modeler sanskari ladki lag rehi thi. Bahut sunder lag rehi thi meri beti jo kuchh hi bakt ke baad mere naam ki sindoor apne mathe pe dharan karegi.
PHir dono hamare do side main baith gaye. Kuchh der ke baad bibah mantra chala. Phir dono ne ek dusre ke mang bhar die. Ek beta apni maa ki aur ek pita apne beti ke mang. Kisi ko kuchh pata na tha.
Ab sare riste badal chuke the. Payel meri dharm patni ban chuki thi aur Shalini Lucky ki. Phir photo grapher ne ham dono ki achhi se photo li.
( ye sare photo internet se lia hoon. Ager kisibhi byakti se koi appati ho to bataye main delwte kar dunga.)
Phir ham dono ne hamare sahar agaye. Prakash ke ghar shaam ko party tha. Sare guest aye. Payel aur uski bete ko dher sare gifts deke chale gaye. Naam ki bahu payel ban gayi prakash ki .
Ab hamane dono simla ke lie nikal pade. Honynoon ke trip ke lie. Hamne ek sath baithke kuchh bat chit karne ka socha. Main kaha ab hamare riste badal chuke hai. Payel ne kahi. Han ab main lucky ki nayi maa hoo aur shalini meri bahu. Pehla rasam bete aur badhu hamse asirbad lo.
Main kaha ye kya kar rehi ho. Pyel ne kahi apko kuchh pata nehi chup baitho. Main kaha abhi se hukum dene lagi. Payel ne kahi han biwi ka ye haq hai. Shalini ko akward aur sharam dono ane lagi. Kal tak jo pati aur beti the. Aaj uske lie sasur aur saas ban gayehai.
phir lucky utha shalini ke hath pakad ke uthaya aur dono ne mujhe aur payel ke pair chhu ke asirbad lene lie. Main kaha achhe se jio apne jindegi. Payel nekahi jug jug jio meri baho. Achhe se apne baibahik jiban ko upbhog karo. Mujhe ek saal keander pote potion ka muh dikha dena. Iss baat se Shalini sharma gayi aur lucky ke sine main chhup gayi. Sab hasne lage. Phir ham dono ne nikal pade shimla. Hamare honymoon ke lie.
I'm AgreedKya mast story thi.
Kahani ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaye kam hai, starting ke updates me baap bete ki bonding badi hi zabardast dikhayi hai , aapne emotions ko thoos thooskar daala hai. Kahani ka concept unique tha mujhe to bahut pasand aaya. Kuch kuch jagah mujhe aisa laga ki aap fantasy likh rahe ho jaise family ko itna liberal dikhaya hai, koi bhi double meaning ya aisa bolu ki asleel baatein bahut khulkar kar raha hai jo ki mujhe thoda unrealistic laga.
Kuch khamiyaan thi kahani me jaise spelling errors par phir bhi kahani samajh aa rahi thi aur aisa lag raha tha ki kahani aapne bahut jaldbaazi me likhi ho, baap beti aur maa bete ko badi jaldi ek kar diya par kahani jaisi bhi thi mujhe padhne me maza aaya aur ek baat ki kahani me twist bhi nahi tha phir bhi kahani badi interesting lag rahi thi bas mujhe ek baat pasand nahi aayi vo ye thi ki aapne Raghav , lucky aur Payal ke character ko acche se darshane ke liye jitna samay diya hai utna samay aapne shalini ko nahi diya. Personally mujhe Shalini ka character kahani me thoda daba hua laga.
All the best for your future stories.
Shukriya
Thank you friend for this review.. han kahani ko thoda jaldbaji kardiya kiun ki mera health issue hai. Isilie thoda jaldbaji main end kardiya.. thanks for reading and supportingKya mast story thi.
Kahani ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaye kam hai, starting ke updates me baap bete ki bonding badi hi zabardast dikhayi hai , aapne emotions ko thoos thooskar daala hai. Kahani ka concept unique tha mujhe to bahut pasand aaya. Kuch kuch jagah mujhe aisa laga ki aap fantasy likh rahe ho jaise family ko itna liberal dikhaya hai, koi bhi double meaning ya aisa bolu ki asleel baatein bahut khulkar kar raha hai jo ki mujhe thoda unrealistic laga.
Kuch khamiyaan thi kahani me jaise spelling errors par phir bhi kahani samajh aa rahi thi aur aisa lag raha tha ki kahani aapne bahut jaldbaazi me likhi ho, baap beti aur maa bete ko badi jaldi ek kar diya par kahani jaisi bhi thi mujhe padhne me maza aaya aur ek baat ki kahani me twist bhi nahi tha phir bhi kahani badi interesting lag rahi thi bas mujhe ek baat pasand nahi aayi vo ye thi ki aapne Raghav , lucky aur Payal ke character ko acche se darshane ke liye jitna samay diya hai utna samay aapne shalini ko nahi diya. Personally mujhe Shalini ka character kahani me thoda daba hua laga.
All the best for your future stories.
Shukriya