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Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

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हमेशा की तरह ही अद्भुत...
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आखिर वीर और तेज़ की बीच की दूरियाँ और उलझते बिगड़ते वो अंचाहे से पलों की डोर आखिर आज टूट ही गयी...
खैर ये ज़रूरी भी था, आखिर प्रेम और आकर्षण कब तक ढका रह सकता इक दूसरे के हांक तले ।
दोनों के बीच सुलह भी हो चुकी हैं। और अब तो उनका रिश्ता और भी मज़बूत हो चुका हैं।
साला एक साल तो होने बाला होगा यार वीर का "निधी" को पेलने का जो टास्क उसे सिस्टम के तरफ से मिला था उसका । और अभी तक निधी उसे घुमा ही रही है...
खैर जो विलंभ से बैठे लण्ड पर... उसे उछालने का मज़ा ही कुछ और होता है ।
वीर को कब निधि को पेलने का टास्क मिल गया? :Jerry:
ऐसा कोई भी टास्क नहीं मिला हैं भाई। :sigh:
ये आर्क ही निधि के लिए हैं। इसमें बहुत कुछ देखने को मिल जायेगा। सय्यम रखना होगा बस।
तेज़, जो की अपनी मुहब्बत कहें या फिर महज़ एक आकर्षण... के खातिर अपनी वर्षो की मेहनत से कमाई आर्किलोजिस्ट की एक अच्छी खाशी पेशकश को ठुकरा बैठी है । क्या इस त्याग का उसे उचित परिणाम मिल पायेगा ? क्या वीर सच मे तेज़ को अपनी जिंदगी मे वो जगह दे पायेगा, जिस जगह के लिए पहले से ही कहानी के बहुत से महत्वपूर्ण किरदार को हम पहले से ही देख रहे हैं?
ये तो वक्त ही बताएगा। वीर तो तेज को काफी स्पेस दे चुका हैं। वो वीर के कामों में अब दखल देने लगी हैं और वीर ने इसके लिए उसे अनुमति भी दे रखी हैं।
उन किरदारों मे से " निधी " मुझे अभी भी वीर की संगिनी की दावेदारी मे सबसे आगे लगती है... और उसके बाद अगर किसी को देखें तो वो " काईरा " होगी जो " निधी " के बाद उस हक को पाने की उचित दावेदार है ।
उसके बाद... "नतालिया (एवा) " का क्रम आता है, तब कहीं जाकर रागिनी का....
(भले ही रागिनी मेरी अब तक की सबसे पसंदीदा पात्र है कहानी मे) .
ये बात कही ना कही सही हैं। रागिनी क्रम में तो पीछे हैं। अब सबसे आगे कौन हैं क्रम ये तो मैं नहीं बताऊंगा। ये कहानी खुद बताएगी।
बाकी जीतने भी है वे सभी क्रम मे इन सभी के बाद ही दिख रहे हैं मेरी नज़रों मे... तो आखिर तेज़ कैसे अपनी त्याग की उचित परिणाम पा सकेगी ये देखने बाली बात होगी ।
ये मेरे लिए परीक्षा हैं। तेज के लिए नहीं। मैं कैसे तेज को प्रस्तुत करता हूं वही दर्शाएगा कि उनके बीच आगे क्या होगा। क्या तेज वो जगह प्राप्त कर पाएगी?
अब आते है अपने वीर पे... ये ज़नाब तो जैसे आज कल हलवाई के भंडारे मे ही बैठे है...
जहाँ देखो इन महाराज को कोई न कोई अपना रास्मालायी खिला रहा है । भैंचो... कभी कभी इस चुतिये से जलन भी होने लगती है..
उधर तक पहुंचने के लिए उसने पापड़ भी तो बहुत बेले हैं। :laughing: क्या कुछ नहीं सहा हैं? तब जा के uss मुकाम पर पहुंचा हैं। और अभी भी ये अंत नहीं हैं।
एक मै जिसे सही से " शांती " नही दे रही... और एक ये है... साला सबकी " शांती " की पुरजोड़ कमर हिला कर ले रहा है । हद्द है यार...
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कहानी के इस अंश मे एक मोड आता है...
हाहा :laughing:
ये जो BKL मिसेज तिवारी है न , ऐसे ही लोगों को बोलते है
"दो कुत्ते कुत्तियों की च*दायी है...
जहाँ चूत और लिंग की हो रही लड़ाई है...
वहाँ पे जाने कहाँ से ये बहन की लौड़ी आई है...
रंडवे बकरे की साली ने अपनी सींघ है बीच मे लाई है... "
ये क्या था? :laugh:
ऐसा तो पहले ना सुना।
भाई अपडेट तो हमेशा की तरह ही बेहतरीन था । आज बहुत दिनों बद एक ही बार मे पूरा एक अपडेट पढ़ लिया, बहुत मज़ा आया..
इसे ही तैयार करने में बहुत समय लगता हैं। पढ़ने में बस कुछ मिनट।
साला पिछले 4 से 5 अपडेट से मै हर एक को पढ़ने मे एक हफ्ता लगा दिया करता था ।
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टाइम ने ही हम जैसे होनहार युवाओं की गाँड़ मार रखी है... नही तो अब तक हम देश को माउंट एवरेस्ट से भी अधिक उचाई पर ले जा चुके होते....
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खैर... आज फ्री था... मूड की भी एकदम मैया चुदी पड़ी थी... तो सोचा की आज इस अपडेट को पूरा पढ़ कर मूड फ्रेश कर लूँ... और कसम है कामदेव की... साला मूड एकदम सही हो गया बे ।
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हाहा। जू तो अपना मूड अपडेट पढ़ के सही कर सकते हो। पर मेरा क्या? मैं तो लेखक हूं। मेरे पास ऑप्शंस कम ही होते हैं।
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बस Werewolf ...
एक अनुरोध है.. वीर का जो अगला प्रतिद्वंदी लाना वो मानशिक तौर पर एक मजबूत प्रतिद्वंदी हो ऐसा लाना... ताकी जब तक विलेन हीरो की दिमाग की माँ बहन एक नही कर देता । तब तक साला वो विलेन ही नही लगता ।
अभी तक जितने भी आए हैं क्या किसी ने निराश किया? :D विलेंस के बारे में तो बोलो ही मत। ऐसे ऐसे विलेंस हैं कि गांड मार के रख देंगे। क्रिमसन और जॉ लॉन्ग को हम देख ही चुके हैं। अब को भी विलेंस आयेंगे वो सिस्टम होल्डर्स ही रहेंगे। क्योंकि, वही हैं को तरीके से वाट लगा सकते हैं। जो खौफ में रख सकते हैं।
बाकी अपडेट के बारे मे जितना लिखे उतना ही कम ।
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भविष्य के लेखनी के लिए शुभकामनाएं... और हाँ...
अबकी बार..
कर लिए न तुम 4000 पार...
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... बहुत बहुत बधायी ...
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बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद। थोड़ा टेक्स्ट साइज़ बढ़ा के लिखने का। पढ़ने में आसानी होगी। बाकी ऐसे ही साथ बने रहने का और सपोर्ट करते रहने का। ✨
 
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Ek Aur behtren Aur shandar update
Ek behtren writer he Janta hai Ke readers ko kab Aur Kese Aur Kya Dena hai parhne Ke lye Aur yaa Baat Wolfy bhai har Baar proof Krte Hain Apna best deke
Ise sochne me hi ek se do din lagte hai ki kaise kya scenes ko set karna hai. Uske baad imagination ki kaise kuchh hoga sab kuchh. Fir best possible setup kisi ek particular scene ko dikhaane ka. Uska environment aur fir narration. Last me dialogues. Tab jaa ke update ready hota hai.
Now come to point

Aadesh Ke Pass Jo shakhs aaya Wo Kon hai Jo veer Ke sub Khabar rakhta hai
Kahi ya Wohi to Nhi Jo Us Assisan Se Mila tha
They are the same. :approve:
Name reveal ho gaya hai already latest update me.
Ab Dekhte Hain veer Balhàar Ke madad Kese krta hai us shakhs ko Dhodne Mai Jo Ke lagta hai easy Hoga
Veer khud hi itna occupied hai ki woh Balhaar ki madad kar hi nahi sakta chaah ke bhi.
Yarnia Ek brand banega isme koi shak Nhi hai Aur agr kaiera Ne usky advertising krde to Phr to Kya he kehne dekhte Hain Wo Mante hai ya nhi is Ke lye
Uss se baat karna hoga. :approve:
Nidhi Aur Mrs agrwal Ke talking Mai Nidhi Ne Ya to saaf kr diya Ke uska veer Pe bharosa atot hai ab tak Aagy dekhte Hain ya pathr mom kb bante hai
Jald hi pata lag jayega.
Tej Ke Sath dubara sub Sahi hua Aur last Mai Jo hua Wo unexpected tha but see what she can do in future but she is in line now
She quit her job. And, now she will support Veer in his business. :approve:
Divya ko rubbeca use kr Rahi hai veer ko phasane Ke lye lagta hai Baki to Wolfy bhai Jaane Ke Unky Dimag Mai Kya hai

Baki sub Ek Dum fàaadu tha boos

Keep writing
We'll see why Divya was sent here. Soon. Maybe in the next update. :approve:
Thanks a lot btw.
And, keep supporting as usual. ✨
 

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Nice update bhai Dil khush kar diya apne hum sab jante hai ki aap written ke sath job vhi karte hai isliye mujhe bolna to nhi chahiye but apke diye update read kar ne baad wait agle update ke liye karna mushkil ho jata hai mai force to nhi karu ga par request kar sakta hu toda jaldi update dene ke liye
Mein apni taraf se koshish karunga.
:approve:
But you know it already. Festivals aa rahe hai aur mera bhi ab mere ghar me aana jaana laga rahega. Upar se job alag. So, I can only try. :dontknow:
Aap apni shaktiyo ka galat istemal kr rhe hai😂😂
Btw the updates you give are Just fabulous every single day i check 4 times whether any update or not keep writing bro really a fabulous and fantastic story the jealousy of tejal and how she quit her job shows how much she love him and the way veer thinks to sort the problem of balhaar and deal with hotel owner will be so much interesting all the best bhai❤️
Thanks a lot. :thank_you:
We'll see how Veer manages to find a solution for Balhaar's problem.
It's a long arc. It might appear that things are proceeding slowly. But here's a reminder. Things are moving at its pace. It's just me giving the updates late. Well, you guys know my problem. I'm bound by my duties.
It's a matter of degree, how much possessive one can be of other. As per the story till now, Tejal and Kaera I would put at the top. Although next should be Ragini, but I do not consider her as main heroin. The way Ava was trying to kill Divya by her gaze, I will put her at third place. However, character of Sonia and Arohi have still to grow.. And we can not forget the deadly green gaze of Garofano.

So my take, Tejal, Kaera and Ava.
We'll see. We'll see soon. :D
Definitely. You can't cross out the system holders how. Can you? I mean Garofano and then there is Erica...! There are still other system holders as well. The Australian lass. Who knows if we might see some more female system holders in the future too? :D
Vaise possesive to Ragani bhi bahut hai.
Eggjactly :declare:
Veer kaafi dino se purvi mausi se nahi mila👽🙈
Milwaaye dete hai... :whistle:
:death::headache3::headache3:Ragini ko bhul gya bhai,:) aur suhana he aisi h jo reality jane baher bhi possessive nhi h veer k lie,, @ werewolf mere khayal se logon k lie special characters se related ek question session rkhna chahie hr week jese apne ye most possessive heroines wala rkha hua h
Next update me naya quiz dunga ju logo ko :D
For me the main heroines are Nidhi, Kaera, Sonia, Ava, Tejal, Arohi and Kavya. Partners are Ragini, Suhana, Divya, Shreya, Garofano, Erica, and to some extent, Sonali. Salves are Suman, Sudha, Mukta, Versha, Saili and Niharika. It is not necessary that Veer becomes intimate with everyone, some may remain as friends. I hope, I have not missed anyone.
As I have already indicated,, limiting the scope to heroines only, the most possessive looks to be Tejal, Kaera and Ava. But later on I am sure Ava will be replaced by Sonia. However Arohi remains an enigma, a mystery, how she will react once she becomes intimate with Veer can not be predicted, except by writer sahib. :):)
We'll see how things turn out. This arc is the longest arc. So be prepared for seeing some family drama, some jealousy and love quadrilaterals along with the intense serial murders' plot in parallel.
Hoga bhai aage to dekhte jao kyoki kaira ka emotion bhi dheere dheere increase ho rha hai
Veer aur kaira ke bech sulah to hone do
Baaki werewolf bhai hi jaante hai ki kis Patra ko kaise darshana😁😁😁 aur ab dekhte hai aage ke update me kya scene hota hai

Aur bhai suhana and tejal ka mitting ka kya hua wo bhi dikhaw
Next update me Suhana aur tej ki meeting hogi. Be patient.
Koi ladka aaye in heroino ki zindagi me tab na...
Sab ki sab honeybee ki trh ek hi chhatte (Veer) se chipki hui hain...

But i think isme Nidhi will at first...baaki ka ju log dekh lo...:pepeez:
Aaenge sab abhi :D
मेरे मत मे... " निधी " ही प्रेमिका के तर्ज़ पे पहली प्रार्थमिकता होगी " वीर " के लिए । पर अगर हम उससे परे देखें तब जाकर 'तेज़', 'आरोही', 'काइरा', 'एवा' एवं सोनिआ का नंबर आता है... बाकी तो बस भेड़िये की माया ।
Nidhi ne jaadu kar rakha hai.
Tumne story ka brahmasutra bta diya love story ko lekr,, kyuki starting me bhi dekha jaye tbb jb veer bikhari beghar chutiya sa ldka thaa,
Hero ko describe karne ka tareeka thoda cazual hai... :roll:
 

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Fantastic update…i think you are plotting big for upcoming updates…👌
I always plot big :approve:
Bahut badhiya. Ek taraf Ragini se duriyan badhi hai wahin Ava se duriyan kuchh kum huyi hain.
Balanced. :approve:
Suman should be punished for the exposing of everything Infront of ragini without the permission of her master. Suman should face a cruel BDSM session.
Oh she will. :approve:
Just keep reading. She went against her master's orders and did so without his permission. She's bound to receive the punishment. :approve:
DUDE BUILDING HYPE FOR SOMETHING I CAN SMELL IT...BTW LOVE THIS UPDATE MUJHE WAIT H RAAGINI OR NIDHI K CONFRONT KA.❤️
Thanks a lot.
Everything will be revealed as the arc will move to its final stage. Right now everything is building.
mast update
ragini ke dil ke haal ko samjhna hai veer ko aur khud ko bhi samjhna hai ki use kya karna hai
kyunki uski life me kayi ladies hai aur sabki zimeddari uspar hi hai
isliye wo kisi ko chodna nahi chahata hai kyunki sabhi uske dil ke kareeb hai
Lekin, har aurat iske liye raazi toh nahi ho sakti na. :dazed: Agar koi raazi ho bhi jaaye toh theek hai par sabko kaise manaoge?
ragini ko abhi samjh nahi aya hai ki veer bakiyo se alag kaise hai
koi bhi lakdi chahti hai jisse wo pyar karti hai wo sirf uska hi rahe par veer alag hai ye baat use abhi samjh nahi aayi hai
Jald hi samajh aa jayega ye bhi. Aur, fir decision Ragini ka hoga.
dekhte use kabtak samjh ayega aur kya ragini accept karegi ya veer se door ho jayegi

veer aur ava apni training me lage hue hai
aur dono khud ko train kar rahe hai
aur ek dusre ko samjhne aur bharosa karne ki kosis kar rahe hai
It's necessary.
kavya aur kritika ki bhi narazgi door ho gayi hai
rebbeca ne damian ko wapas bulaya hai australia jaane ke liye
lekin damian ne rajat ko kya kaha aur kaise badla lega rajat
aur ab ye naya character dhannjay aa gya hai kaun hai ye dekhte hai

keep writing
Dhananjay ne already bata diya hai ki woh kaun hai. :dazed:
Thanks btw. And, keep supporting. ✨
 

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😍😍 What a fantastic dramatic update 👏

So update ki shuruwat hi ek anxiety giving scene se hui. This time Ragini is not wrong at all. Uski icchaye uski khwahish jayaj bhi hai aur reasonable bhi. Apna sab kuch soupne ke baad vo to ye expect karegi ki Veer sab kuch clear kar de. But Veer is in more complicated situation, chahkar bhi vo sab kuch clear nahi kar sakta.
He loves other women too. :D
But who in the hell would accept multiple lovers for his/her partner? Ragini cannot accept this no matter what. It's equivalent to creating. Let's see how this pans out.
Aur BC ye kya tha ki 'tumne bhi to Vivek ke sath sex kiya tha' ye excuse hai Veer ke pass. BC system holder ban gaya lekin Aurto se baat karni nahi aayi ise.
Well, he is dense. Not to mention he's just 22 years old. Ladkiyo ke maamle me uska hamesha se yahi haal raha hai. He's good on the bed but he cannot fathom the true emotions of the ladies quickly. It takes time for him to understand them. Ab usne jo kaha wo basically dekha jaaye toh sahi hi tha. Ragini already had sex with Vivek. She lost her virginity to him. And, now she's demanding Veer to not have sex with other women?

I mean... Veer band kar sakta hai but ye baat ujaagar bhi toh karna tha. Ki Ragini ne jab sab kuchh kiya uske baad bhi Veer ne uss baare me koi charcha nahi ki thi. He accepted Ragini as it is. :dazed:

Lekin, uske kehne ka tareeka galat tha. :D
Ek Ragini jab isse handle nahi ho rahi, aage Tez, Nidhi, Trinity, Kavya aur baki sabko kaise handle karega. Asani se to koi nahi manne vali.
Ragini is possesive. Not every girl is possessive like her. We know Nidhi. She's more like sacrificial type. Kam se kam abhi ke liye toh wo aisi hi hai. Baad ka nahi pata. :D He will have to manage somehow. Otherwise he'll lose them all.
Scene dramatic tha phir sax Sux hua aur phir emotional ho gaya.

Aur vo scene ' I hate you Veer, I hate you...I love you...love you...even it's hurt me...even it's destroying me....still I love you...' Poor Ragini 🥺🥺
Kamal ka scene tha aur quite emotional 😭 I feel you Ragini....
That's the apt description of Ragini in a dialogue form. She hates him for what he hid away from her, she hates him for not giving her clear answer and stalling the time. But even after all this... She still loves him. And, it hurts. That's Ragini for you.
In this case Veer ka to kuch keh nahi sakta lekin Ragini kahi se bhi galat nahi hai. She is just asking what she deserves.
She just chose a difficult route man. :dazed:

She could have been happy with any other rich and loving dude. But she decided to go for Veer. She'll have to face this. :whistle:
Arc ke end tak aate aate ye relations ka locha sar dard kar dega, agar aise hi scene sabke sath hue to.
Yahi toh hona hai iss arc me. :approve:
You'll see heartbreaks. :evillaugh:
Btw vo bhawna ka reference sirf aise hi tha bich me time show karne ke liye yaa kahi bhawna ne Ragini ko kambal me lipta Veer ke room se nikalte naa dekh liya ho.
No! Bhavna didn't see Ragini at all. :sigh:
It's mentioned in the update that Bhavna wakes up at 6 in the morning. When Ragini left Veer's room, there was still some time left for the clock to hit 6.
Hope for the best for Ragini and Fuck you Veer.😡😡 Sari cuties ko rulane ka theka le liya hai isne. Vahan Suhana pareshan, Nidhi pareshan aur ab Ragini.
Ju ko badi chinta ho rahi hai saari shadi shuda ladkiyo ki :heh:
I see! You are a man of culture as well!
Bhauji lober huh? Bhauji lober!!? :Noice:
You and I.. We are the same. :heh:
Ragini ka teer nishane par laga hai ki vo mahila koi aur nahi balki Nidhi hi hogi. Ab dekhna ye hai ki usse kya baat karegi Ragini. Veer ne Ragini ko bataya ki vo lady bhi Veer se pyar karti hai, which is true lekin Nidhi ne kabhi ye accept nahi kiya. Aur kahi Ragini bhi Suman vala kaand naa kar de, matlab ye Veer ki sari debauchery ke kisse Nidhi ke samne naa khol de. Isse Nidhi ke samne kuch had tak mrs tiwari ka point sahi thehrega. I hope aisa naa ho.
Dekhna hoga. Ragini kya negative route apnayegi? Veer ko paane ke liye? Jis situation me woh abhi hai woh kuchh bhi kar sakti hai? :D
Now talks about Ava the cutie... Jungle me mangal nahi kiya, sirf ladne hi gaye the 🤔

But Fight kafi details ke sath aur behtreen dhang se picturised ki hai. We clearly imagine it. Dono dheere dheere apne skills ko sharp kar rahe hai, jiski jarurat aage padne hi vali hai.
I mean.. ab spar toh boring hi hoti hai. Use interesting to dikhana hi tha.

And, that's why I'm always ahead from the readers. No one understands the system better than me here. I'm talking about my own system here. Just this fight between Ava and Veer might have given you a hint. How they fought, their synergy and bond, their tactics, Ava's battle IQ, etc.

And, that's why I often restricts readers to guess anything about system. System is a pure mystery which will only be revealed at the end of the story. (i.e., tha last update of the story.)
Fight ki details me jyada nahi jaunga....
An apt choice :D
This pari said ki evil pari ne Ryotsken illegally sikha aur usko bhi Ryotsken aata hai to kya isne bhi kisi illegal tarike se Ryotsken sikha?
Who knows? We might come to learn about that later. :D (Or maybe in the next story which will be linked with this one.)
Ava aur Veer ke bich jami barf kuch kuch pighal rahi hai 😌, barf pighlegi tabhi to aag bhadkegi 😈.
I know where you're getting... Heh~
Wow, Kavya aur Kritika ka scene was much much ahead then my expectations. A true beautiful friendship.
If you liked it, I can put focus on these side scenes for the future updates.
Asli khela to alag chal raha hai, So Mr X aur the person in Morocco is same. Planning kya hai, definitely something is around Nuclear
:D
He has convinced Morocco king to do which he shouldn't do. NPT ka kya matlab? Is it Non Plorifiration Treaty which disallows any sighning country to make nuclear warheads. Aur Morocco ab iss treaty ko violet karne wala hai.
My readers after reading the word NPT in the update ~

Jaldi se Google kar leta hu... :Typo: Kisi ko kya ho pata chalega? :Pepesip:

Ek ek karke sare system holders ko target kiya jaa raha hai, now it's Australia and Europe.

Jo banda Renshu se lada tha uska naam bhi samne aa gaya Damien!. So he was the one. Jo Aadesh aur Dexter se mila tha aur jane se pehle Rajat ko bhi apne sath mila gaya. They know that much about Veer. He has gone to Australia and Rebecca sent someone else for India. A female system holder.
Rebecca didn't send anyone. :sigh:
She only sent Divya there. :hint:
You forgot...!
Kehte hai ki aap ateet ko bhul sakte hai lekin ateet kabhi aapko nahi bhulta vo ek na ek din aapke samne aakar khada ho jata hai. Yahi isbaar Veer ke sath hone vala hai, jin dushmano ko hara chuka hai, vo sab sath milkar isbar ayenge.

Aur Veer abhi is sabse anjan hai, Rajat, Dexter, Aadesh aur Gaon ke log, police jo Slogan aur Aatish ke bare me dhundh rahi hai aur Vo serial killer.
Use koi clue hi nahi mila hai. :dazed:
We can't even blame him at all.
Aur khatra isbar Veer par sidhe nahi balki uske apno par bhi ho sakta hai. Jinse vo pyar karta hai.
That is why I said...
Ju logo ki anxiety ke saath khelega ye arc.
Suhana aur Tez ka scene kahi traffic jam me atak gaya hai 😁 😁 aur Kaera to shayad kisi desert me kho gayi hai to vapas aane me time le rahi hai. 😁😁
Suhana aur Tej ka scene next update me hai. You'll see it.
Everything is going perfectly 😊 😊 😊 and Insane. Buildup tagda chal raha hai.

Again outstanding writing and fantastic Update 😊😊

Hope next update will come a little bit soon.

Baki jab do tab badhiya👍👍


Thanks 🙏🙏
Thanks a lot. ✨
Build up me time zaroor lagta hai par yahi baad me maza deta hai. You enjoy the last few updates of the arc because of these build up updates. If there wouldn't be any buildup, you won't get to see the intense end updates.
Aise hi saath bane rehne ka. Keep supporting. :five:
 

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Ab usne jo kaha wo basically dekha jaaye toh sahi hi tha. Ragini already had sex with Vivek. She lost her virginity to him. And, now she's demanding Veer to not have sex with other women?

I mean... Veer band kar sakta hai but ye baat ujaagar bhi toh karna tha. Ki Ragini ne jab sab kuchh kiya uske baad bhi Veer ne uss baare me koi charcha nahi ki thi. He accepted Ragini as it is. :dazed:

Lekin, uske kehne ka tareeka galat tha. :D
Totally disagree on this point.
Uske kehne ka tarika nahi, baat hi galat thi. What he supposed to imply on Ragini. Ki ek shadishuda ladki hone ke baad bhi use apne husband ke sath physical nahi hona chahiye tha, jabki uss time uske aur Veer ke bich aisa kuch nahi tha aur naa hi hone ke sambhavna.

What Ragini is asking from Veer is different from that situation.

Veer ki baton ka to aisa matlab nikalta hai jaise Vivek ke sath physical hoke usne Veer ko cheat kiya hai.

In this scene he totally dense and chutiya to understand Ragini's situation.

Ju ko badi chinta ho rahi hai saari shadi shuda ladkiyo ki :heh:
I see! You are a man of culture as well!
Bhauji lober huh? Bhauji lober!!? :Noice:
You and I.. We are the same. :heh:
No Bhauji lover 😌
Ab ju je sari badhiya female character ko married dikhaya hai, then it's your fault.
😌

I know where you're getting... Heh~
Main to pahuch raha hu, ju hi nahi pahuch rahe vahan tak....ab tak tu sax sux ho jata Ava aur Veer ka 😂😂
My readers after reading the word NPT in the update ~

Jaldi se Google kar leta hu... :Typo: Kisi ko kya ho pata chalega? :Pepesip:
Google🤔🤔
Can't say about others 😌
Lekin agar NPT ke liye bhi Google karna pade to lanat hai mere UPSC aspirant hone par.

Rebecca didn't send anyone. :sigh:
She only sent Divya there. :hint:
You forgot...!
Mr X said her to send Damian to Australia and send someone else in India, so I guessed...
 
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keara jo bolti thi ki veer usko claim kare ... bhai kab karega veer claim
 
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next update main purvi hogi kya ????
 

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Totally disagree on this point.
Uske kehne ka tarika nahi, baat hi galat thi. What he supposed to imply on Ragini. Ki ek shadishuda ladki hone ke baad bhi use apne husband ke sath physical nahi hona chahiye tha, jabki uss time uske aur Veer ke bich aisa kuch nahi tha aur naa hi hone ke sambhavna.

What Ragini is asking from Veer is different from that situation.

Veer ki baton ka to aisa matlab nikalta hai jaise Vivek ke sath physical hoke usne Veer ko cheat kiya hai.

In this scene he totally dense and chutiya to understand Ragini's situation.
Different people... Different perspectives.

I'm answering as per Veer's perspectives. That is how I've portrayed his character. He's dense... He may do dumb things and even say dumb things at wrong situations. But that's what makes him believable and realistic. It shows that he's not perfect. Even after being the protagonist and even after having the system. He's still not perfect. He makes mistakes and not everytime everything goes according to his plan. :D

You'll know why Veer said that to Ragini later. Ragini is right at her place. As I said, Veer's way of talking wasn't ethical. He messed up. And, when I say that... I say that from my own experience. :D

Trust me! A married lady who's in love with another dude other than her husband actually feels guilty for not being a virgin and giving herself to her dude earlier. Now I'm not saying this for all the women. Point to be noted. :D but there are some who actually feels guilty. So, that guilt is the driving factor here.

Being in guilt they can even allow their dude to have intimate relationship with any other female so that things can get balanced out. (Of course, if the dude is calculative, he may suggest so. Otherwise, he can just live with her without mentioning all of this.)

Now you can't disagree on that because I hold legit experience on this matter. :D Hence the reason I wrote that scene in the first place.

Remember! The guilt factor. If she's into you too much. She can do anything. She can go to any lengths. Even providing you another gurl so that later her guilt can vanish. Things get balanced out. And, then she can get the upper hand later. And, when then she demands anything according to her. You won't be able to neglect it. You won't have any excuse to get away from her. Or even label her as a cheater. Because by that time... You would have already enjoyed your debauchery with another gurl. :D

That's how calculative manipulation works. One of the forms of twisted love.
 
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