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Jis din wolfy bhai ka update raat 8 bje aajayega us din apni sarkari naukri lagne se bhi jayada khusi hogi mujhe .....
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Update - 142 ~ Necessitation
Ab tak...
Idhar upar udte helicopter me uss ladki ke baal hawa me lehra rahe the.
Tabhi uske mann me ek awaaz aayi,
*DING*
‘I’m sorry…! Veer!’
Aur udhar Mumbai me Ragini ke ghar me, apne kamre me laiti Bhavna achanak bechaini ke chalte bistar par uth ke baith gayi.
Ab aage...
*Badump* *Badump*
Bhavna ka dil zorr-zorr se dhadak raha tha. Kaleja baahar aane ko ho raha tha. Ye kaisi ajeeb si bechaini woh mehsoos kar rahi thi. Uska jee behad michla raha tha.
Achanak hi uske kamre ka darwaza khula aur haafti hui Tej andar aayi,
Tej : M-Mom!?
Bhavna : Tej?? Iss waqt yaha? Kya hua?
Subah ke 7 baj rahe the aur Tej ka iss qadar uske kamre me aana koi maamuli baat nahi thi.
Tej : Mom! Ajeeb sa mehsoos ho raha hai. Ek bure sapne ke chalte neend khul gayi. Paseena aane laga, jee ghabrane laga. Isliye yaha aa gayi.
Bhavna ki bauhe ye sunte hi chintan me sikud gayi.
Bhavna : Tum akeli nahi ho beta. Aao! Baitho!
Tej kamre ke andar aake apni Maa ke bagal se baith gayi.
Tej : Veer se abhi tak baat nahi hui hai. Mujhe ab fiqr ho rahi hai. Wo bhi to call kar sakta hai na? Kahi wo kisi musibat me toh nahi fass gaya na?
Bhavna (frowns) : Tum theek keh rahi ho beta! Itna lamba samay nahi lagna chahiye. Agar wo vyast bhi hai to kam se kam ek phone call to kar hi dena tha usse. Kuch baat zaroor hai.
Bhavna nahi chaahti thi ki uska mann uss disha me jaaye. Par na chaahte hue bhi uska mann wahi jaa raha tha. Aur, uski ghabrahat harr guzarte pal badhti hi jaa rahi thi.
'Mera beta...!' Usne apne ek haath se apne seene ko bheench liya.
Tej : Toh kya kare Mom?
Bhavna : Huh? Ho sakta hai Veer kisi ko koi alag number ya soochna de ke gaya ho. Shayad Ragini ko kuch pata ho. Sab ko uth jaane do. Fir hum baat karte hai.
Tej (nods) : Mmm!
Veer ke ghar me subah wese hi sabhi jaldi uth jaate the. Unn sabhi ke uthate hi jab saare log living room me ekatr hue toh Tej se ab aur raha na gaya,
Tej : A-Aap sab! Kya aap sab me se kisi ki Veer se baat hui hai?
Shweta sabse pehli thi jisne jawaab diya,
Shweta : Nahi! Lekin, uska phone Ragini ko zaroor aaya karta tha jab bhi woh baahar jaata tha. Ragini?
Ragini : Nahi Tai ji! Meri baat Veer se bas message pe hui thi. Mene parso pucha tha uss se ki sab theek hai waha? Toh uska reply aaya tha ki sab badhiya hai. Woh jald hi lautega.
Tej : Uske baad?
Ragini : Uske baad mene kal bhi message bheja tha. Lekin, message seen nahi hai.
Ragini ki iss khabar par woh sabhi ek chinta me doob gayi.
Bhavna : Kya woh tumhe koi aur number deke gaya hai? Emergency ke liye?
Ragini : Hmm? Nahi! Woh khud se hi call karta tha toh-!
Tej : Arohi? Kavya? Kya tum dono ki baat hui hai uss se?
Tej ka prashna sunn Arohi ne dheere se naa me sarr hila diya. Veer ki khabar se woh bhi anjaan thi.
Kavya : Didi! Veer bhaiya ne zaroor apna phone gira diya hoga kahi. Woh bhulakkad toh hai hi. Hehe! Ek baar school time me apna rumaal bhul gaye the. Toh fir mera ladkiyo wala rumaal use kiye the hahahaha!
Arohi : Kavyaaaa!!! Ye mazaak ka waqt nahi!
Arohi ki daant sunn Kavya apna chehra ferr muh fula li.
Kavya : Aap sab itna kyu darr rahe ho? Abhi Choti Tai ji ke gaav me Veer bhaiya uss ghar ki terrace se neeche nahi gire the? Kursi pe land kiye the. Unko kuch nahi hua tha. Ek baar Diwali ke time jab mein aur Arohi di ye waale ghar aa rahe the tab kuch gunde hamare peeche lag gaye the.
Tej : Gunde?
Kavya (nods) : Mmm-hmmm! Gunde! Gande waale! Par Veer Bhaiya waha hero ki tarah bachane aaye the hume. Dii yaad hai na aapko?
Arohi ko turant hi woh pal yaad aa gaya jab Veer usse bachaane aaya tha. Uska haath apne aap hi Veer dwaara di gayi unn kaan ki baaliyo par chala gaya. Aur woh ahista se apna sarr haan me hilaayi,
Arohi (nods) : Mmm!
Kintu, Bhavna ke maathe par lakeere chhaayi hui thi.
'Gunde...!?'
Woh samajh chuki thi ki uska abhi apne bete ke bohut se kisso ke baare me jaan'na baaki tha.
Kavya : Toh aap log khamakha itni tension le rahe ho. Bhaiya ka phone ghum gaya hai pakke se. Woh dekhna khud hi apni taraf se call karenge.
Usne keh toh diya, par sabhi ke ashaant mann ko saantvna dene ke liye ye kaafi nahi tha.
Ragini : Ahhh! Ek minute!! Kavya? Pichli baar Veer woh Suhana Miss ke saath gaya tha na? Woh famous Sonia..! Businesswoman!! Unki badi behan hai na? Woh dono holi me aayi thi na hamare ghar?
Tej : Sonia? Suhana? K-Kaun hai ye?
Kavya (nods) : Mm! Haan! Yaad aaya! Aayi toh thi woh dono.
Ragini : Toh unhone tumhe apna number diya tha na?
Kavya : Ahhn! W-Woh-!!
Jab Kavya nazre churaane lagi toh Arohi ne uski baah pakad li,
Arohi : Ab ye mat kehna ki tumne woh kho diya.
Kavya : Nahi!!! Woh...! Mene paper pe note down kiya tha unka number. Aur ab mujhe yaad nahi ki-
Arohi : Kaaaaavyyyaaaaaa!!
Woh zorr se usse chillaayi.
Arohi : Mene tumhe kaha hai na kitni baar ki hamesha important numbers ko apne phone me save kiya karo.
Kavya : Dii! Tab Holi thi. Mein buri tarah rang se puti hui thi. Isliye mobile ko haath nahi lagaya. Bhaiya ke room se hi copy pen laayi thi aur- arre haan!!! Bhaiya ke room me kahi padi hogi woh copy. Ruko!!!
Woh bhaagte hue andar gayi toh uske peeche-peeche Arohi bhi chal di.
Toh wahi idhar Ragini ke phone par ussi samay Nidhi ka call aa gaya.
Ragini : Hello?
Nidhi : Hello! Kaisi hai aap?
Ragini : J-Jii mein theek hu! Aap bataiye! Aaj mujhe kaise yaad kiya?
Nidhi : Veer ka phone nahi lag raha tha toh socha aapko hi laga lu. Darasal, agle mahine Holi hai. Aur exams bhi rahenge. Mene bas ye batane ke liye phone kiya hai ki Veer se kahiyega woh padhna shuru kar de. Semester ke last exams hai. Fir uska last year lag jayega.
Ragini : Ah! J-Jii! Mein keh dungi!
Nidhi (smiles) : Jii! Dekhiye! Business apni jagah hai. Par- Par ab companies aane lagengi. Veer se kahiyega wo prepare kare. Baaki, mein toh hu hi. Aap jaanti hai ki job kitni zaroori hai. Side me wo business kar sakta hai. Lekin-
Ragini : H-Haan! Aap sahi hai. M-Mein keh dungi uss se.
Nidhi : Jii! Aur usse mere paas bhi bhej dijiyega. Mein usse samjha dungi. Kuch pointers de dungi exams ke liye.
Ragini : S-Sure! Thank you!
Nidhi (smiles) : No need for that. Accha! Mein rakhti hu.
Ragini : Hmm!
Aur call cut ho gaya. Log Veer ko yaad kar rahe the. Parantu, unhe kya pata tha ki woh iss waqt kis haal me tha. Zinda tha bhi ya nahi?
***
Mumbai me Veer ke ghar bhale hi subah ke 7:30 ho rahe the. Parantu, Paris me yaha ab bhi raat ka andhera barkaraar tha.
Yaha derr raat ke 3 baje hue the. Paris ka samay Mumbai se lagbhag saadhe 4 ghante peeche tha.
Hawa me helicopter lehra raha tha. Saagar ki ufanti lehre chattaano par thapede maar rahi thi. Dheere-dheere jab badi lehre takra ke thamti toh paani kuch shan ke liye shaant ho jaata. Aur ussi ke saath uska shor bhi.
Uss ardh-paardarshi jal ke andar dekh paana jatil tha. Upar se raat ka andhera. Helicopter ki spotlight ke bawajood kahi unhe woh nazar nahi aa raha tha jiski unhe talaash thi. Aur woh tha-
Veer ka shav!
"Dhoondhte raho!!! Aasmaan kha gaya usse ya dharti nigal gayi? Paani me hi hoga. Chappa-chappa chhaan maaro."
Senior officer ki awaaz uss poore ilaake me goonj gayi.
Par talaashi ke pehle Ava urf Natalia Martin ko helicopter se neeche utaar diya gaya.
Andre : Miss Natalia. Ab aap surakshit hai. Mein Andre! DGSI ki orr se ek agent. Mere saath chaliye.
Ava ne ahista se haami bhari aur uske peeche-peeche chal di.
Raasta wahi tha jaha se Veer aaya tha. Aur waha se nikal jaise hi woh sab building ke nazdeek aaye toh Andre ghabraate hue aage badha,
Andre : Terashimaaa!!!!
Woh chillaaya aur Terashima ko zameen se uthaate hue usse jhunjhlaya. Kintu, woh hosh me nahi thi.
Uski saansein aur physical condition check karne ke baad Andre ne ek raahat ki saans li.
Toh utne me building ke dusre maale se Chris aur uski team neeche aayi. Chris ki baah me goli lagi hui thi.
Neeche aate hi Chris ki aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi jab usne apne aas-paas ka nazaara dekha.
Lighthouse ka chhajja tabaah ho chuka tha. Aur neeche, ek bade se chopper ke chithde ude hue the jo aag ki lapto me jhulas rahe the.
Chris : Good god!! K-Kya hua yaha par?
Andre : Chris!!!
Chris : Andre?
Andre : Tumhe toh chot lagi hai. Quick! Jaldi chalo!
Chris : H-Haan! Upar bache hue logo ko arrest kar liya gaya hai.
Andre : Chinta mat karo! Poora area chhaan ke hi yaha se niklenge. Pehle tumhe medical assist dena zaroori hai.
Airplane airstrip par pehle se hi khada hua tha. DGSI aur police officers dwaara Natalia ko plane ke andar baitha diya gaya.
Toh wahi jis plane me Natalia ko laaya gaya tha, uske andar bhi chhaan-been shuru kar di gayi. Kintu,
Jo pilots Natalia ko plane me yaha baitha ke laaye the, unki bas laashe hi haath lagi.
Andre : Shit!!! Ab kya kiya jaaye?
Senior officer : Le ke chalna hoga inhe. Forensic report shayad kuch bata de. Baaki, bodies par se phones aur baaki details kese retrieve karni hai woh kaam hum par chhor do.
Andre (nods) : Hmm!
Aur kaafi mehnat mashakkat ke baad ek airplane ko waha se bhej diya gaya.
Yaha se ek plane ravaana hua tha toh wahi Paris ke airport par ek airplane land ho raha tha.
Plane ke land hote hi, usme se log nikle aur airport ke baahar jaane lage.
Unhi chand logo me se ek khubsoorat aurat tezz qadmo ke saath aage badh rahi thi. Uske peeche-peeche ek aadmi tha aur ek aur aurat chal rahi thi.
"Miss! Yaha se ab kaha?"
Awaaz Prakash Uncle ki thi. Aur aage chal rahi aurat koi aur nahi balki Suhana hi thi.
Uske chehre par chinta aur ghabrahat saaf jhalak rahi thi.
"Suhana!!! Kuch bataogi ya nahi?"
Ye awaaz thi Ashita ki. Suhana ki personal psychologist. Divya toh na aa saki parantu Ashita Suhana ke peeche peeche chali aayi.
Suhana ka ravaiyya bada hi ajeeb lag raha tha usse. Uski personal psychologist hone ke naate uski harr harqato par dhyaan dena Ashita ki zimmedari thi.
Suhana : Prakash Uncle!! Hume Ava ko dhundhna hai.
Prakash : P-Par Ava Miss to kidnap ho chuki hai na Miss.
Suhana tezz raftaar se chalti jaa rahi thi. Uska peeche karne ke liye Prakash aur Ashita ko bhaagna pad raha tha.
Prakash : Aur aap abhi bhi poori tarah theek nahi hui ho.
Suhana (frowns) : Abhi sabse zyada important hai Ava ke baare me khabar lagna Uncle. Veer bhaari musibat me hai. Uska Phone nahi lag raha hai aur na hi aapke uss Eric se contact ho paa raha hai.
Ashita : Veer? Who's this Veer?
Prakash ne ek jhalak Ashita ko dekha par uske prashn ka uttar na diya.
Prakash : Aise me toh fir Ava Miss ke sabse qareebi log ya fir yaha ke investigation department jaana hi behtar hoga. Wahi se kuch detail lag payegi Miss.
Suhana : Ava ke qareebi kaun hai, ye hum nahi jaante. Investigation department hi chalna behtar hoga.
Road taraf aate hi ek car pehle se hi unke liye lagi hui thi.
Prakash ne aage badh car ka darwaza khola aur Suhana andar baith gayi. Saath hi Ashita bhi.
Prakash aage driver ke bagal se baitha aur car waha se ravana ho gayi.
Magar abhi kuch hi kilometer ki duri tay ki thi unhone ki saamne ka nazara dekh woh sabhi chaunk gaye.
Paris ke iss jaane maane chauraahe par afra-tafri machi hui thi. News reporters idhar se udhar apne cameramans ke saath coverage ke liye bhaag rahe the.
Toh wahi police unhe control karne me lagi hui thi. Logo ko surakshit rakhne ke liye woh waha se jald se jald area khaali karwaane me lage hue the.
Ye ilaaka wahi tha jaha kal raat bada dhamaka hua tha. Tehqiqat karna kisse pasand nahi hota? Log apna camera leke aur reporters apna mic leke pohuch rahe the.
Police ke liye kaam badhta jaa raha tha.
Suhana : Something big has happened. Whole city is in chaos.
Ashita : Y-Ye sab!? Akhir ho kya raha hai?
Car me baithe-baithe unn sab ne dekha ki kaise news reporters harr ghatna ki jankaari dene me lage hue the.
Toh wahi janta me se kuch log aise the jo virodh ka pradarshan kar rahe the. Naare lagaate hue woh police aur France ki govt. ke khilaaf awaaz utha rahe the.
"Kya yahi hai France ki suraksha? Kya yahi hai police ki security? Aise hi itna bada hamla sheher ke beecho-beech kar diya jaata hai. Kya kar rahi thi police? Kitne log maare gaye hai. Kaha hai hamla karne waala? Kya police pakad paayi usse? Hum jawaab chaahte hai!!!"
Janta ka virodh badhta hi jaa raha tha. Aur unki awaaz ko logo tak pohuchaane ka kaam media kar rahi thi.
Police officers logo aur media ke beech ghir kar unhe bas hidaayat hi de sakte the.
"France 24 News channel se mein bol rahi hu Audrey aur hamaare saamne maujood hai police department ke jaane maane Chief. Sir! Kya kehna chaahte hai aap iss waqt? Janta police se naakhush hai. Din-dahaade hamla ho jaata hai aur police ke paas saamne rakhne ke liye koi jawaab nahi hai."
Chief ne logo ko shaant rehne ka ishaara kiya par shor tha jo kam hone ka naam hi nahi le raha tha.
"Dekhiye!! Situation kaafi critical hai aur complex bhi. Ye samay virodh ka nahi hai. Mein janta se kehna chahunga ki kripya kar woh hume apna kaam karne de. Mujrim ke peeche DGSI aur hamari force lagi hui hai. Mujhe aasha hai jald hi hum ghuspethiye ko pakad lenge. Mein aashvashan deta hu ki France ki police apna poora de rahi hai."
"Par janta ka kya Sir? Jinhone apni jaan gavaayi hai unka kya? Uss baare me aap kya kehna chaahenge? Kya aap maante hai ki aap ke department me se kahi na kahi security ko lekar chook hui hai?"
"Ji nahi! Hum harr samay alert rehte hai. Ye ek haadsa hai. Aur mujhe bohut khed hai iss baat ka ki kuch logo ne apni jaane gawa di hai. Magar hum jald hi mujrim ko pakad ke janta ke saamne pesh karenge."
Itna bol Chief waha se hatt ke jaane lage toh news reporter unka peecha karne lage. Parantu, police officers ne unhe aage badhne na diya.
"Toh jaisa ki dekha aapne. Police chief ka yahi kehna hai ki woh apna poora de rahe hai aur tehqiqaat karne me teams juti hui hai. Mera bhi yahi nivedan hai darshako se ki kripya apne apne ghar me hi rahiye. Police ko apna kaam karne dijiye. Tab tak ke liye aaiye aapko dikhaate hai, uss building ki dasha jaha par dhamaka hua tha."
Aur news reporter cameraman ke saath waha se nikal gayi.
Car me baithe jab Suhana aur baaki sab ne ye dekha toh unki haalat patli ho gayi.
Ashita : I-Itna bada haadsa ho gaya yaha?
Prakash : Aage bhaari checking lagi hai Miss. Cars ko bina check kiye aage badhne nahi de rahe hai.
Suhana : Hum clean hai. Hum par koi aarop nahi hai. It's okay. Let them do! Lekin agar time lagta hai then-!! Find another route.
Prakash : Jii! Mein aage jaake unse puch ke aata hu ki pehle hamari checking kar de. Toh hum yaha se nikal sake.
Suhana (nods) : Hmm!
Prakash gaadi se utar aage Signal ki orr chal diya. Lekin tabhi chauraahe ke upar bade bade hoardings ke paas lagi ek badi si screen par news aayi.
Suhana ki nazre fauran hi uss par tik gayi.
"Breaking News coming from the blast incident which took place yesterday. Singer and celebrity Miss Natalia Martin has been rescued by the DGSI and police force. The suspect has been executed on the spot. It has been confirmed that the suspect didn't co-operate with the police. Hence, squandering his life. Body has still not been found. However, DGSI is working diligently to search the criminal's body."
Khabar ke saat hi Veer ki wahi tasveere screen par aayi jo Andre ne slot machine waali alley me video me record ki thi.
Suhana ne jab ye suna aur dekha toh uski saansein maano atak gayi. Saaf saaf likha hua tha. Suspect was executed on the spot.
Apraadhi ko wahi par maar diya gaya. Suhana ka badan thar-thar kaanpne laga. Uski aankhein feli hui thi. Kya woh saamne jo dekh rahi thi woh sach tha?
Aur fir iska bodh hote hi ek ajeeb si anubhooti usse andar se hui. Aankhon se apne aap aasu nirantar behne lage.
Ashita : Suhana!?
Suhana toh jaise kisi aur hi duniya me jaa chuki thi. Badan me kampan rukne ka naam nahi le raha tha.
Achanak hi uske phone par call aaya, jiski awaaz ne uska dhyaan kheecha.
Bina screen me number dekhe Suhana ne call uthaaya aur phone ko kaan pe lagaya.
Toh waha se awaaz aayi,
"Umm! Suhana ma'am? Kya ye aapka number hai? Mein Veer bhaiya ki choti behan- Kavya bol rahi hu. Hello? Hello?"
Suhana ki bolti band thi. Kaise jawaab de? Aur kya jawaab de? Saamne screen par Veer ki akhiri tasveere jhalak rahi thi. Kaise kahe uss ladki se ki uska bhai marr chuka hai?
Usse mehsoos hua jaise andar se kuch behad keemti toot gaya ho. Jisse ab dobaara kabhi nahi joda jaa sakta.
Kavya : H-Hello?
Suhana : M-Mein tumhe baad me call karti hu Kavya. Okay?
Kavya : Ohh! O-Okay! Wo-! Woh Veer bhaiya ke baare me puchna tha. K-Kya aapko koi khabar hai woh kaha par hai?
Suhana : N-Nahi! Mein pata kar ke tumhe uske baare me bataati hu. Th-Theek hai?
Kavya : Okay! Thank you~ B-Bye!
Aur call cut ho gaya. Magar call cut hote hi Suhana toot ke bikhar gayi. Woh zorr zorr se rone lagi. Ashita usse achanak se iss qadar dekh ghabra gayi.
Ashita : Suhaaaanaa???
Parantu, Suhana koi jawaab nahi de rahi thi. Woh bas roti jaa rahi thi. Jhar-jhar uske aansu aankhon se beh ke gir rahe the.
'It can't be-!!! H-How can this happen?'
Yakeen nahi karna chaahti thi woh magar saamne news channel uske mann ko aur duwidha me daal raha tha.
'N-Nahi!! Aisa nahi ho sakta. It doesn't make any sense. R-Right! They haven't discovered him yet. Jab tak mein apni aankho se nahi dekh leti tab tak mein yakeen nahi karungi! Woh Aatish, Slogan, Nightwalker, Pitcher jaiso ke changul se baahar aaya hai. I know you're out there Veer...!'
Ashita : Suhanaaa?
Suhana ne agle hi shan apne aansu poche. Tab tak Prakash bhi laut ke aa chuka tha.
Prakash : Miss! Woh maan gaye hai. Check karwa ke nikalte hai.
Suhana : Plan badal chuka hai Uncle. Ab hum waha nahi jaa rahe. Ek hotel me rooms book kariye sab ke liye. Aaj raat hum wahi thehrenge. Aur kal Ava laut ke aa chuki hogi Paris me! Then we'll meet her.
Prakash : Theek hai!
'She's hiding something.'
Car checking ke baad seedhe ek hotel ki disha me chali gayi.
***
Las Vegas
Night...
Veer ke liye uske chaahne waale log lag chuke the. Harr koi uski khabar paane ke liye bechain tha.
Yaha Vegas me Divya ko ek baar punaah Nolan ne apne department bulaaya hua tha.
Andar jaate hi ek aur report uske saamne table par patak di gayi.
Nolan : Ab sthiti haath se nikal rahi hai Divya. Take a look at this.
Report ko uthaate hue jab Divya ne sab kuch padha toh woh bhauchakki reh gayi. Atyant krodh janm liya, saath hi vyaakulta bhi.
Divya : Ye France waale paagal ho gaye hai kya? Andhe hai kya? Dikhaayi nahi deta kya namoono ko??
Nolan : Tumhe ek baat aur bataani hai. Kuch din pehle France ki orr se House of the Killers ke cases ko leke ek request aayi thi.
Divya : Wh-What?
Nolan : Hmm! Unhe report chahiye thi HOK ki.
Divya : Kyaaaaa?
Nolan : Aur humne unhe bheji bhi hai report.
Divya : What? Are you in your right mind??? HOK koi normal murder case nahi hai. Ye confidential hai. Classified reports ko department dusre desh me kaise bhej sakta hai?
Nolan : Unka daawa hai ki wahi hamla unke upar hone waala tha. Unhe saboot bhi mile hai. Aur iska rachayita unn logo ne kisse tehraya hai pata hai na?
Nolan ne agle hi pal report ka akhiri panna khola toh usme Veer ki tasveer bani hui thi.
Divya ka haal behaal ho utha. Woh apni jagah par baithate hue bhayanak peeda mehsoos kar rahi thi. Usse koi raasta nazar nahi aa raha tha. Uske nain bheeg uthe.
Divya : Y-Ye sab-!!!
Nolan : Hum jaante hai Veer nirdosh hai. Hum sirf ek hi kaam kar sakte hai. Aur woh hai ki apni report bana ke bheje jisme Veer ko normal citizen ke roop me dikhaaya jaaye. Jaisa ki vaastav me hai. Lekin-! Jo kuch hoga woh wahi se ho payega. Mujhe nahi lagta woh maanenge.
Divya (sobs) : A-Aap kaise!? Kaise bhej sakte ho waha reports? *sniff*
Nolan : Divya! Jab dusra desh vipda me aane waala ho aur unhone koi maang rakhi ho toh hume badle me madad karni hi padti hai. Hamara desh iss samasya se joojh chuka hai. Upar se order the ki report ko bheja jaaye taaki woh pehle se iske liye taiyaar ho sake. Hume kya pata tha ki waha Veer ko fassa diya jayega!
Divya (screams) : Magar Veer nirdosh hai!!!!
Nolan : Jaanta hu! Isliye jo bann padega, department woh karega.
Itna bol woh baahar nikal gaya. Kintu, Divya wahi gir ke subakne lagi. Iss ladke se itna lagaav ho jayega usse, usne khud kabhi nahi socha tha.
***
Agli raat mahaul kuch aur hi tha. News par Ava se sawaal jawaab kiye jaa rahe the. Usse Paris aaye kuch hi ghante hue the ki reporters uske upar chadh pade.
Tamaam sawaalo ke saamne Ava mics se ghiri hui thi.
Aur unn sabhi sawaalo ka bas usne ek hi jawaab diya,
"Mujhe theek se yaad nahi mere saath kya hua tha. Mein bhaag rahi thi. Fir pakad li gayi aur fir kahi mujhe le jaaya gaya. Mujhe koi jankaari nahi hai inn sab ke peeche kaun hai. Mein abhi ghabrayi hui hu aur abhi kuch samay akele me guzarna chaahti hu."
Bas! Ye kuch shabd kaafi the. Doctors se leke security sabhi ne reporters ko Ava se dur kar diya. Doctors Ava ki health condition check karne lage. Toh wahi kuch reporters ke sawaal jawaab dene me lag gaye.
Sab kuch jab thoda shaant hua. Toh raat me Ava hospital ke liye chal padi.
Woh akeli thi. Face par mask tha uske. Car thode sunsaan raaste se guzar hi rahi thi jab theek saamne raaste par koi beech me aa gaya.
Ava ne car side me roki aur uss se baahar nikal woh uss shaks ki orr gayi.
Saamne wahi tha!!
Crimson!!!
Par uski aankhon me bhaiyankar krodh tha. Aag baboola ho rakhi thi uski aankhein.
Crimson (garajte hue) : Kaha hai woh??? Kaha hai??
Ava (frowns) : He's dead!
Agle hi pal Ava ka gala Crimson ke mazboot haatho me tha.
Crimson : NAHI!!!!! TUMNE MARRNE KAISE DIYA USSE??? WOH MERA SHIKAAR THA!!!!
Ava : Ngghhh!!!
*BAAAAAAMMMMMMM*
Ava ki laat turant hi Crimson ke pait se takraayi aur Crimson dur jaate hue lohe ke dabbo ke beech jaa gira. Uska ek haath wese hi pehle se gaayab tha. Seene par abhi bhi khoon ke dhabbe maujood the.
Ava : *huff* *huff* Mene tumhara kaam kar diya hai. Apne aadmiyo ko waapas bulao.
Crimson karaahte hue utha aur kuch derr tak Ava ko dekhta raha.
Ava ki awaaz agle hi pal kaafi khaufnaak ho gayi.
Ava : APNE AADMIYO KO WAAPAS BULAO! ABHI!!!
Crimson : Girl!!! Awaaz neeche! Bhulo nahi ki tum kis situation me ho abhi.
Fir bhi apna phone nikaal usne ek message bheja. Aur uske message bhejte hi,
8 se 10 snipers jo apna aim Grace Martin ke ward ki khidki par lagaaye baithe the woh waha se nikal gaye.
Crimson : They are gone!
Ava : Agar aisa kuch dobaara hua, toh mein tumhaare tukde tukde kar dungi! Fir chaahe apni hi jaan kyu na gawa du!
Crimson (gusse me) : Woh mera shikaar tha!!! Meraaaa!!!! But you let him-
Ava : He didn't surrender. He chose to die. He gave away his life rather than surrendering to you.
Kehte hue uski palke neeche ko jhuk gayi.
Crimson : Y-You-!!
Ava (glances) : Aur itna gussa kyu? Tum usse maarna chaahte the. Woh jaa chuka hai. Tumhara maqsad poora hua. Why the rage?
Crimson : Tch! Apne kaam se kaam rakho! Aur tumhara haal bhi toh alag hai. Aren't you caring for him too much? He was no one to you! Why such a reaction then!? Interesting!
Ava : Fuck off!
Ava waha se mudi aur apni car me baith ravana ho gayi.
Raaste par bas Crimson hi akela khada raha.
'Veeeeeerr!! You motherfucking bastard-!!! Mene nahi socha tha ki tum maut ko gale laga loge. Tch! Plan bigad gaya hai. Sirf iss ek move ke kaaran. Mujhe kuch aur karna hoga-!!! But first-!! I must fix something!'
Woh soch waha se hawa ke jhoke ki tarah gaayab ho gaya.
*Click*
Yaha Hospital me ward ka darwaza khula. Aur Ava apni Maa Grace ke kamre me pravesh ki.
Maa ko dekhte hi, Ava apne ghutno par gir padi.
Maa ko dekh woh unke paas aayi.
"Mother-!!!"
Kintu, Grace toh kisi murti ki tarah sthir waha laiti hui thi. Koi harqat nahi. Bas saansein chal rahi thi.
"K-Kyu? Kyu meri itni pareeksha li jaa rahi hai? Kyu mujhe woh karna pada?"
"Mother-!!! I commited a sin!!!"
"Mujhse bohut bada paap ho gaya hai mamma!!! I-I- I killed an innocent mamma!!"
Woh kaanch ki tarah toot ke bikhar gayi.
"Mein bewakoof-!! Samajh na paayi!! I couldn't understand his heart. I never wanted to do it. But I did-!!! Mamma!!!"
*sniff*
"Woh yaha mujhe bachaane ke liye aaya tha. He didn't even ask me for any details. *sniff* Yet I- Yet I worked with that guy to frame him!!!"
*hic*
"Mother-!! You are my strength!! But you are my weakness too!!"
"Kaise? *sniff* Yaha tak pohuch gayi hu. Ab kaise peeche hatt sakti hu?"
Uske mann me ek notification saaf saaf jhalak raha tha.
[Accumulated points : 18000]
[2000 points are required more to activate the Legendary Scroll ~ Maisie's cure!]
[Maisie's Cure - The scroll gives host the proper medication guidelines and surgery methodologies to recover any person from coma.]
"I'm sorry-!!! I'm sorry Veer!!! I never wanted to do it-!!! *sniff* Mamma!!! *sniff* Speak to me!!! P-Please-!!!"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Itne bade bade bawaal updates ke baad ek cooldown update zaroori tha. Update 4.6k words ka hai. Like thokne ka. Target wahi hai. 140 likes. 2 updates aur aayenge. 1 poore past ko darshayega ki Crimson ne ye sab racha kaise. HOK kaise paida hua. Veer kaise framed hua. Dusre me wapas hum present me aa jayenge.
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Nice Update bahi......dimag ka dahi ban gia sala yah kia ho gia story ka hero he maar dia app naymeray ko to lagta hay ab wo neel mani he.................................................
Ding after long timepar ye kya pahadi wali ladki Eva ke pas system
aur ye death Flag Eva ka system shayad targeting death mission
veer ke naam ka death Flag tho mil gaya wats next
full bheja fry firse update 1 start karta hu
What hurts more than a betrayal from a trustworthy.
First of all thanks for giving such an unexpected update .
Ek baat to pta chal gyi hai agar apki story padhni hai to expect the unexpected wala mindset hi kaam karega.
Raat ke 3 baje or ye update.
Shant kamre mein jaise jaise update aage badh rha hai waise waise heartbeat bhi tez or audible hoti ja rahi hai.
Emotions and suggestions boht sare hai
But is update ke baad sawal bohot kam reh gye hai.
Photo frame: Grace Martin.
That's why we saw crimson at hospital.
Each and everything was planned.
from that party invitation,,, Charlotte killing,,, appointment of veer as bodyguard,,, those fake emotions....
Everything was fuckin setup
Goddamn...
Most importantly she is one with system.
Sayad usne koi singing ki ability buy kri hogi.
That's why she's a great singer though.
Keeping that aside,,, what an update man jitna tarif kru kam hai.
Kuch best parts lge unko jroor mention krna chaunga
Is part ka apna ek alag hi thrill mehsus hua.
Jo aura wha likha hai.
Wo padte padte feel kiya ja sakta hai without any doubt.
Bhagwan bohot kam logo ko aisi khubi se nawazta hai.
Well done
Or iss part ke kya hi kehne sara kinematics se lekar SHM oscillatory sab samjha Diya.
Force=∆momentum.
Bohot khoob.
Or bhi bohot parts the ache but ye dono mera favourite the.
Ab aage terishma or mr pilot ko apna ehsan chukana banta hai.
Behrhaal dekhna ye bhi zaroori Banta hai ki jab ekbar system apna Target complete krne ka notification de Diya tab bhi vo action reverse kaise ho sakega.
Parantu hero k survival ke liye ye zaroori bhi hai
Dekhna hai ki writer saab ne iske baare me kya socha hai.
Expectation and suggestions to yehi hai ki ava ko villan ki tarah potray na kiya jaye.
Pichla guess to almost sahi hua hai
Ki betray krne wala koi known hi hai bas naming Galt ho gyi.
As promised apne story ko bohot bhayankar turn de Diya is update ke madhyam se.
Hope karte hai aage bhi itne hi frequently update mile.
Next update kaera par hoga.
But ek request hai veer k liye ab curiosity badh gyi hai to veer wale part ko bhi thoda include kariye ga.
All the best for further updates.
Best wishes
Bhai zabardast update..
Are bhai kiya bole ab kuch bolne ke liye chora hi kaha he bhai aap ne is ka mtlb pahar wali larki ava thi aur ava ne hi veer ko double cross kiya he aur us ke pass system bhi he bhai ye ho kiya raha he ye mera anuman he agar me galat nhi hu to aur agar me sahi hu to sawal ye he ke kyu "kyu" aur kiya crimson ne hi ava se koi deal ki he aur agar ye bhi anuman thik he to crimson ki dusri shart veer ko waha bulana thi me ab chote chote dots ko connect karne ki koshish kar raha hu ke kyu ava ko itna confidence tha ke house of killer use marna chahti he ye 1 pre plan tha aur kyu wo bar bar veer ko shot ka ishara karti thi kyu crimson ne veer ko itna confidently kaha tha ke me tmhe crimson festival pe maru ga kyu ke us se veer ko bulane ka plan pehle hi bana liya tha kyu crimson ne itni asani se veer ko itne bare kand me phasa diya,
Ye sb meri thoughts he bhai koi bhi ise galat mt smjhe me sirf apni thinking share kar raha hu,
Ab bat kare veer ki to bhai gazab kar diya veer aur pari ki conversation amazing se bhi ziyada thi emotions se bharpur
Aur pari ka 1 raaz bhi pata chala ke agar veer marta he to pari bhi hamesha ke liye khtm hojaye gi,
Veer ka surrender na karna bhi buhat amazing tha 1 baadhshah ki trha wo akhri saans tak data raha itna to hume pata he veer abhi mara nhi he kyu ke abhi story buhat he aage ki,
Aab dekhna ye he ke veer comeback kese kare ga aur ab jub veer wapis aaye ga to crimson ko aur ava ko to koi nhi bacha sakta he,
Baqi aur kiya hi bolu bhai such kaho to aab tak is story ke jitne bhi update aye he ye wala update mere liye one of the best tha bhai excellent work bro
Keep it up,
Lot's of love and respect
Werewolf nice and thriller update....shayad yanha bhavana ka o dhaga kam AA Jaye...ya fir bhavana ko Jo nil mani Mila tha usala kuch use ho jaye veer ko bachane ke liye.....pata nahi kya hoga lekin aapaki writing skill awesome hai....iss PE ek badhiya book ban sakati hai movie ban sakati hai series ban sakati hai.....keep it up and thanks for updates
Superb suspense update bro but veer can't die like that what about the pendent given by bhavana the another biggest secret in the story.. ? It is still in veer neck right
And this update was fucking marvelous
Mera words iska value ko measure nahi kar sakta and this is a life lesson update. Excellent Bhai eagerly waiting for next update
रहस्य से परिपूर्ण भरा हुआ अपडेट , बहुत ही सुंदर लेखिनी से आपने वर्णन किया है अपडेट का
आवा ने क्यों धोखा दिया ये आगे अपडेट में देखने लायक होगा.....
Kya Faad update diya hai bhai, Veer ne toh iss bar shant rehne vali Pari ka bhi dimag hila dala. Veer ki determination and emotions for family, friends and enemy ka clear view dikhaya update mein.
But kya Veer ko target karna hi 2 task tha jo uss caller ne Ava urf Natalia ko dia tha,, yeah dekhna vali baat hai aur iske badle Ava ko caller se kya milta hai jo usne Veer ko target kiya. And also agar Veer Ava ke stats check kar sakta hai toh usse pata kaise nhi chala ki uske pass bhi system hai, kya Ava ke pass koi aisi skill hai ki woh apne system ko Veer se hide kar payi.
Awesome jabardast fabulous update
Ohh bhai
Your writing skills are insane
That girl was Avafuck her bahen ki lawdi.
Ava ne ye sab plan kiyakhair ava ka maqsad Veer ko marna aur uska death flag wala mission gajab this shit was going there fuck off this situation that is running on !!
Khair veer ye to na jaan paya ki ava ne aisa kyu kiya but I can guess this wasn't ass hole of her.
Werewolf kuch points mil jayenge teko ava ki virgin chut maar kr,so go ahead in future update and we know it will be going to done but in far way.
Ava ke pass bhi system tha bc ye shock tha khair veer ko notification kyu nhi aya ye kuchh dout tha,crimson me bhi nhi dikhaya tha ki uske pass system hai kyuki crimson ne samne se bataya tha to normal hai ki ava ke pass system hai ye kaise pata chalta obviously ava low hai veer aur crimson ke level se tabhi to usko check karne par dikha diya and i am sure about that ki she was investing her points in intelligence more as well more khair ek aur chis ki she has a some trick cards also for move out from critical situation and i am damn sure ki suru se lekar ab tak ava ka ye sab plan tha usse it building me bhagana bhi uska hi ek plan tha and may be she have found system when she was suffered from accident with her family may be it can possible.
And ek chus hai Ava ke pass driving skill bhi hai
Veer to na mara haina marega bhale uss ava ke system kuch bhi dikhaye but haa yaha ek situation ban sakti hai veer ke gale me pendant haa ab kahoge ki tu uske pendant ke hi piche kyu pada hai to haa that pendant was the whole creator of this situation that is running here with veer and am damn sure that veer is alive due to the help of pendant baat khtm
Khair Update was ossm and the best part was the veer's attitude or badass moment,that was literally faadu scene was that.
Ava Ka ye sab karna lajmi hai karan hai pichhe kuchh aur usse jisne phone kr ke ye sab kaha tha krne ke liye uske baare me to bhulne ka kyu ki usse mahagandu ki charcha karna hi bekar hai khair aate ava par to yaha ek chis clear hui ki
1• Wo photo jo ava ne liya tha wo uski maa ki thi
2•Second one it was the huge situation is that when veer saw Ava in helicopter and tab usse sari baate realise hui.
3•It was crimson yep haa wahi tha HOK ka creator and all know that now
4•pari and veer's conversation was literally as in emotional stuff,sari dahleej pe aaye dard ko veer samne rakhta gaya aur antim me apni dil ki baat uss pari se kahta gaya.
5•There was many thing that was cleared out but there many questions are rising as we realising in this update.Ava ka sach may be usne ye sab apane maa ke liye kiya ho yep she can do it every thing for her mom and this lit is confidential there.
Ava ke karan ye ho sakte hai,
1•She want to cure her mom in any way,ab ju bologe ki ye kaisa point de raha,to it was clear that ki uski maa utne saal se coma me hai but it wasn't woke up aur may be it wasn't chance to came out from coma,well,so there was clear that ki Ava ne koi skill chahti ho apne system se jo jyada points ke ho bohot jyada and then she was completing death flag mission for high points, remember that time of slogan and now veer and i think in b/w this she kill many more,kya pata usi ne Indirect way me apne dost singer ko mara ho,yep it can be possible bcz she was doing all her death flag mission in indirect way,Khair veer ko marne ka notification pane ke baad usne Sorry bhi kaha ye darsa raha tha ki wo Veer ke yaha aane aur itne karname krne par kuch to lagav hua tha but atleast there was no more emotions toward him akhir maar hi to diya bahen ki lawdi ne.
दर्द बयां करता चला गया दिल,
कुछ बुरे वक़्त याद आए तो कुछ खुशनुमा,
आखिरी वक़्त भी ऐसे दिल झुका नहीं मेरा,
शायद ये आखिरी नुमाइश थी मेरे दिल की,
जो जुबां पर सारी यादों को पीरों ले आया,
अपने दिल के जज्बात कहने की देर थी मानो,
एक नया अक्श आगया हो मुझमें,
मौत को दावत देना आखिरी चाहत हो गई थी उस वक़्त ऐसे,
मानो जैसे उस मौत का कोई गहरा रिश्ता हो मुझसे ।।
Ha ab smhaj main aaya ki qq apney slogan ka episode diya pichla wala ...
Slogan key Time AVA hi aayei thi aur ab bhi ava aur crt... Ka plan tha veer ko phsaney ka ..
Ab angle update main pata chalega q kiya ava ney aisa
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Oh no... Ye kya ho gya
So it was Ava all along jiske trap me veer phasa aur phasa bhi to kaisa khtrnaak phasa ki aage kua peeche khai.
Aur kitne jhatke milenge sirji
Vaise this incident added the much needed touch to the story ki hmara MC bhi vulnerable hai... Koi invisible Banda nhi... Aur antagonist jitna tagda ho utna hi thrill bhadta hai.
Ab thode time to action ki pabandi lg chuki honi chahiye considering veer ki situation and considering veer Bach jaae
Ye kya tha, unable to figure out with this aaj tak itni thriller aur plot twists padhe par this one is ahead of every comparison. Werewolf bhai aapko Booker Prize milna chahiye for this creativity and vision.
Ohh bhai shab kya aag update thi ye I was a silent reader of xform but is update ko padhte hi mera man ho gaya reply krne ka aap great ho boss
wo kahani aapko yaad hai par mujhe uska naam yaad nahi ,writer ko galat lagta hai jab koi bura kehta hai par maine aisa kabhi nahi kiya ,
us kahani par sirf 3 ya 4 reader the jisme sabse jyada comment me hi karta tha par tab bhi us writer ko bura laga ,,ek galat comment ho jata hai par mera wo comment kahani ko lekar nahi balki past aur future ko lekar tha tab bhi usne ye kaha ki ek update tu likh ke bata ( agar me writer hota to apni khud ki kahani nahi likh sakta kya ) ..
ek reader ke najariye se kaha tha par wo bura maan gaya aur ab uski kahani kisko yaad bhi nahi..
Amazing update
romanchak update ..pari aur veer ki baate dil ko chhu gayi ,ek premi aur premika ki tarah ek dusre ko samjha rahe the dono .
laga hi tha helicopter me jab ladki ko dekha veer ne ,ki wo natalia hi hogi.. agar natalia pehle hi bata deti to veer ko kuch nuksan nahi hota par wo to gaddar nikli aur uske paas bhi pari jaisa system hai ..
aisa lagta hai ki crimson aur natalia (ava ) ne milke veer ko trap me fasaya hai ..
agar veer bach gaya to crimson ko buri maut milni hi hai par natalia ko bhi milni chahiye
Noooooooooooo.. what did you do???
Mne aapse kaha tha ki veer ko kuch ni hona chahiye... And you did this...
He's my favourite protagonist among all the stories which i have read till now. Usse kuch ni hona chahiye....
He's the most sweetest soul. Agar usse kuch hua to main aapki story par review dena band kar dungi...
Don't worry ab chahe aakash or pataal ek ho jayge lekin Werewolf ab VEER ko kuch ni hone dega uske bhle #WEREWOLF khud agle update me entry Q na Leni pde SUPERHERO ke roop me
Awesome update bro
we're wolf bhai, kya action &thillar scene tha padte padte roungate khade ho gaye, last main emotional scene,and talkbetween veer and pari, pari ki bhi emotions last scene main nikal aaye uff kya scene tha padte hua main bhi emotional ho gaya, aap ki writing plot se lagta hai aap bahut aage ke soch ke rakhi hai, toh atlest ye pata laga ki unknown girl ava the, but usne mazboori main kiya iss se pata chalta hai ki woo ye sab majbooti main kar rahi hai, but veer usko dekh ke hasta hai usko pata chal jata hai ava ne he usko phasaya, mujhe nahi lagta crimson ne ava ko mazboor kiya kyu ki ava ne he crimson par goli chalayi the, and last veer ki baat yeh toh koi karisma hoga jo veer bach jaye(may be neel mani, suhana, veer mother power etc) bahut he badiya update diya hai aapneno words
Werewolf the kingship quality is in veer blood by birth, am I rightbut why, you can guess what am i saying
Fa
Fantastic update sir
Fabulous Update Sir
Super bro
Veer dead,
very impressive writing skills u have. veer ke paas abhi bhi neelmani hai to wo mar to nahin sakta ab dekhna ye hai ki wo jinda kaise bachega. crimson arc hai to finally crimson isme khatam hona chahiye aur agar aisa hota hai to definitely 4th person hona chahiye in sabke peeche kyunki mujhe lag raha hai ki koi aur hi hai in sabke peeche aur khel abhi bahut bada hai may be koi sabhi system ko pana chahta hai aur iske liye wo sabhi ka plan kerke fasa raha hai per jo bhi ho bahut maja aa raha hai hum log to sirf soch hi sakte hain per asli kaam to aapka hi hai aur wo aapne bahut acche se kiya hai waise guess kerne bhi bahut maja aa raha pura dimag hil jata hai
Super nice update
Congratulation bhai for 2900 pages
Completely agreed.
Normal reading to ye story deserve hi nhi karti.
Onion ki tarah ek ek shell open hoti ja rahi hai.
Har baar interpret karne par kuch naye results hath lag rhe hai.
Lagta hai ek intimidating presence on karke ap story likhte ho.
Ya fir apke pas bhi koi skill purchased hai.
Wait wait kahi apke pass bhi to system nahi hai.
Bata do hum accept kar lege
Congratulations on 2900 Pages
This may sound mad, but there's a possibility ki the notification in Ava's system that "veer is dead" pertains to the death of his system aka "Pari"and not veer himself.
Ye sirf ek guess hai... Par fir bhi just thinking about it makes me sad.
emotional, update super hit h boss kya wakayi me veer mar jayega ya jo veer ke gale me jo locket uski maa ne diya tha uska shraap vardaan ke room me veer ko milega just thinking
again update faadu tha good work.
For completed 2900 pages on your story thread.....
Superb update
Dekho yaar update padne ne baad Like kya Tali bhi thoki sach main
Awesome updates
Bhai ko bola tha aap bhai ho???
System wali ladki koi or nahi ava hi thi.
Crimson or Ava dono ne mil kar Veer ko fasaya.. Khair ye to duniya ka dastur hai ladki ke chakkar me achhe achho ki L lag jati hai. Or veer ko marne ke piche bhi yahi khel khela gaya.
Ava ni konsi majburi me ye kiya ye janna baki hai abhi. Vaise uski kamjori uski maa hi hai to shayad wohi hogi.
ab aage dekhte hai veer zinda bachega ya mar jayega ? Vaisa ava ke pas notification to aa gaya veer ki death ka but phir bhi yakin nahi hai.
iss baar or strong ban ke aayega hamara bhai veer.
Superb Update Bhai.
सदाबहार प्रतिक्रिया.
जगमग जगमग ये तकिया कलाम छा गया है मित्र
Bhai me aapki ye story bhut lambe time se padh raha hu but isse pehle mene forum par register nahi kar rakha tha.
Lekin aapka ye update padhne ke bad me khud ko rok nahi saka.
To sabse pehle to sorry itne dino tak silent reader bane rehne ke liye or ab se me aapke har update par response dunga.
Sahi me Bhai kya update likha h aapne man gay aapko.
Meri heartbeat itni tej ho gayi thi update padhte huye ki kya hi batau,esa lag raha tha jaise koi movie chal rahi h mere aankhon ke samne.
Awesome wonderful update bro.
भाई like का target तो almost पूरा हो गया है, वो kaira वाला अपडेट थोड़ा जल्दी मिल जायेगा क्या,
अगर कल या परसों तक मिल जाता तो अच्छा होता
That bitch ava पूरा mood off कर दिया बहन की घोड़ी ने, अब बस kaira ही heal कर सकती है।
Please next update थोड़ा जल्दी दे दो
waiting for next update
Abi kya likhu mai.. Ye whi ldki h na jo Pichhle update me mystery thi
..sala iske pass b system h.. Bc kya ho ra h yha kuch smjh ni aa ra
...or uske system ne veer ko dead b confirm kr dia bc...well likes toh pkka se ho jayenge bhai.. Bs aap ab agla update likhna suru kr do.. Or veer ki wapsi aisi g**nd faad honi chaiye na k us crimson ki Maa ch*d jaye.. Or ab to is rndii Eva ko b sabak sikhanka pdega
... Well waiting for the next update eagerly.. Keep writing n keep entertain us
In my opinion betrayed veer is the last ever mistake done by Ava.Veer (Real man) will be arrive soon for revenge.
I hate the betrayal people
This update is so emotional
Zabardast fantastic update
Ding bhavana Shweta ka samna huatej ka reaction as a big sis
shyam new servant let see wats next
I love this story very much
What the fuck just happened ???
Bhai koi ilfaaz ni hai
Ueh kia tha???
Mere ko abhi tak yaqeen ni a rha
Sahi kar di bhai
Ding superb conversation between mom son
Please Bhai agla update jaldi do na wait nahi ho raha....
Superb update Bhai
Endless story guru
Please
Aaj update de do please
Ram ram bhai ghane dino ke baad review de rha hoon ...
Bhai yrr 3 tarah ke log Hove hein duniya mein and you are the who say something and make it happen jaisa tanne boliya tha ki 3 update mein boob footenge ...
I was literally feeling the motion of that fucking bench and what should I say about pari she is now the organ of veer's body as we say ..... Maade time mein koi saath na deta apne shareer(body) ko chhod kar or veer ke aise samay mein koi nhi tha uske saath par pari has try what ever she can so huge respect for her ....
Ab bhai tanne Jo shi Bomb foda wo ye tha ki bhen**o Ava ne hi veer ki ..
For ava and all those women Jo kabhi sahi aadmi ko choose na kar paayi ...
Or bhai crimson ki Leni hai bhai aache se jaisa veer ne kha ki crimson just check me out if I'm not dead then you are going to beg for death ..Make it happen Werewolf
Katai jeher ...
Veer should comeback and take revenge from ava and kill Crimson.
AMAZING AWESOME MAST ENMOSNAIL UPDATE HA BHAI
'House of Killers' but on a higher level.. Story based on 'Puppet & Masters' & Audience are like watching games with 'Popcorn & coldrink'
Ab dekhna hai 'Puppet kon?' ( System's owner?)
Ava ke pass 'path system' means ki vo path ko create karti hai..
Story behad ummda, aisi kai dino baad mili..Bejod !
Bas ab itna hi...Review agle update se..
Dhanywaad!!
अपडेट
Koi card purchase Kiya ho shop se jese pitcher k time kiya tha but is baar to itne points bhi nhi bache the uske pas aap mahan ho yr kya turn diya h story ko sb tarike se soch rhe hein readers mere mind m to uski vo line bhi chal rhi last update ki jisme usne kaha tha crimson meri body mile TB hi mujhe mara hua smjhna kyunki Bach gaya to bhut khtrnak maut dunga iska mtlb kuch pehle se hi chal Raha tha veer k mind mein ye sb to meri thinking h baki aap ki writing skills h
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Waiting for update bro
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Dhamakedar update Bhai......!!!!!Update - 142 ~ Necessitation
Ab tak...
Idhar upar udte helicopter me uss ladki ke baal hawa me lehra rahe the.
Tabhi uske mann me ek awaaz aayi,
*DING*
‘I’m sorry…! Veer!’
Aur udhar Mumbai me Ragini ke ghar me, apne kamre me laiti Bhavna achanak bechaini ke chalte bistar par uth ke baith gayi.
Ab aage...
*Badump* *Badump*
Bhavna ka dil zorr-zorr se dhadak raha tha. Kaleja baahar aane ko ho raha tha. Ye kaisi ajeeb si bechaini woh mehsoos kar rahi thi. Uska jee behad michla raha tha.
Achanak hi uske kamre ka darwaza khula aur haafti hui Tej andar aayi,
Tej : M-Mom!?
Bhavna : Tej?? Iss waqt yaha? Kya hua?
Subah ke 7 baj rahe the aur Tej ka iss qadar uske kamre me aana koi maamuli baat nahi thi.
Tej : Mom! Ajeeb sa mehsoos ho raha hai. Ek bure sapne ke chalte neend khul gayi. Paseena aane laga, jee ghabrane laga. Isliye yaha aa gayi.
Bhavna ki bauhe ye sunte hi chintan me sikud gayi.
Bhavna : Tum akeli nahi ho beta. Aao! Baitho!
Tej kamre ke andar aake apni Maa ke bagal se baith gayi.
Tej : Veer se abhi tak baat nahi hui hai. Mujhe ab fiqr ho rahi hai. Wo bhi to call kar sakta hai na? Kahi wo kisi musibat me toh nahi fass gaya na?
Bhavna (frowns) : Tum theek keh rahi ho beta! Itna lamba samay nahi lagna chahiye. Agar wo vyast bhi hai to kam se kam ek phone call to kar hi dena tha usse. Kuch baat zaroor hai.
Bhavna nahi chaahti thi ki uska mann uss disha me jaaye. Par na chaahte hue bhi uska mann wahi jaa raha tha. Aur, uski ghabrahat harr guzarte pal badhti hi jaa rahi thi.
'Mera beta...!' Usne apne ek haath se apne seene ko bheench liya.
Tej : Toh kya kare Mom?
Bhavna : Huh? Ho sakta hai Veer kisi ko koi alag number ya soochna de ke gaya ho. Shayad Ragini ko kuch pata ho. Sab ko uth jaane do. Fir hum baat karte hai.
Tej (nods) : Mmm!
Veer ke ghar me subah wese hi sabhi jaldi uth jaate the. Unn sabhi ke uthate hi jab saare log living room me ekatr hue toh Tej se ab aur raha na gaya,
Tej : A-Aap sab! Kya aap sab me se kisi ki Veer se baat hui hai?
Shweta sabse pehli thi jisne jawaab diya,
Shweta : Nahi! Lekin, uska phone Ragini ko zaroor aaya karta tha jab bhi woh baahar jaata tha. Ragini?
Ragini : Nahi Tai ji! Meri baat Veer se bas message pe hui thi. Mene parso pucha tha uss se ki sab theek hai waha? Toh uska reply aaya tha ki sab badhiya hai. Woh jald hi lautega.
Tej : Uske baad?
Ragini : Uske baad mene kal bhi message bheja tha. Lekin, message seen nahi hai.
Ragini ki iss khabar par woh sabhi ek chinta me doob gayi.
Bhavna : Kya woh tumhe koi aur number deke gaya hai? Emergency ke liye?
Ragini : Hmm? Nahi! Woh khud se hi call karta tha toh-!
Tej : Arohi? Kavya? Kya tum dono ki baat hui hai uss se?
Tej ka prashna sunn Arohi ne dheere se naa me sarr hila diya. Veer ki khabar se woh bhi anjaan thi.
Kavya : Didi! Veer bhaiya ne zaroor apna phone gira diya hoga kahi. Woh bhulakkad toh hai hi. Hehe! Ek baar school time me apna rumaal bhul gaye the. Toh fir mera ladkiyo wala rumaal use kiye the hahahaha!
Arohi : Kavyaaaa!!! Ye mazaak ka waqt nahi!
Arohi ki daant sunn Kavya apna chehra ferr muh fula li.
Kavya : Aap sab itna kyu darr rahe ho? Abhi Choti Tai ji ke gaav me Veer bhaiya uss ghar ki terrace se neeche nahi gire the? Kursi pe land kiye the. Unko kuch nahi hua tha. Ek baar Diwali ke time jab mein aur Arohi di ye waale ghar aa rahe the tab kuch gunde hamare peeche lag gaye the.
Tej : Gunde?
Kavya (nods) : Mmm-hmmm! Gunde! Gande waale! Par Veer Bhaiya waha hero ki tarah bachane aaye the hume. Dii yaad hai na aapko?
Arohi ko turant hi woh pal yaad aa gaya jab Veer usse bachaane aaya tha. Uska haath apne aap hi Veer dwaara di gayi unn kaan ki baaliyo par chala gaya. Aur woh ahista se apna sarr haan me hilaayi,
Arohi (nods) : Mmm!
Kintu, Bhavna ke maathe par lakeere chhaayi hui thi.
'Gunde...!?'
Woh samajh chuki thi ki uska abhi apne bete ke bohut se kisso ke baare me jaan'na baaki tha.
Kavya : Toh aap log khamakha itni tension le rahe ho. Bhaiya ka phone ghum gaya hai pakke se. Woh dekhna khud hi apni taraf se call karenge.
Usne keh toh diya, par sabhi ke ashaant mann ko saantvna dene ke liye ye kaafi nahi tha.
Ragini : Ahhh! Ek minute!! Kavya? Pichli baar Veer woh Suhana Miss ke saath gaya tha na? Woh famous Sonia..! Businesswoman!! Unki badi behan hai na? Woh dono holi me aayi thi na hamare ghar?
Tej : Sonia? Suhana? K-Kaun hai ye?
Kavya (nods) : Mm! Haan! Yaad aaya! Aayi toh thi woh dono.
Ragini : Toh unhone tumhe apna number diya tha na?
Kavya : Ahhn! W-Woh-!!
Jab Kavya nazre churaane lagi toh Arohi ne uski baah pakad li,
Arohi : Ab ye mat kehna ki tumne woh kho diya.
Kavya : Nahi!!! Woh...! Mene paper pe note down kiya tha unka number. Aur ab mujhe yaad nahi ki-
Arohi : Kaaaaavyyyaaaaaa!!
Woh zorr se usse chillaayi.
Arohi : Mene tumhe kaha hai na kitni baar ki hamesha important numbers ko apne phone me save kiya karo.
Kavya : Dii! Tab Holi thi. Mein buri tarah rang se puti hui thi. Isliye mobile ko haath nahi lagaya. Bhaiya ke room se hi copy pen laayi thi aur- arre haan!!! Bhaiya ke room me kahi padi hogi woh copy. Ruko!!!
Woh bhaagte hue andar gayi toh uske peeche-peeche Arohi bhi chal di.
Toh wahi idhar Ragini ke phone par ussi samay Nidhi ka call aa gaya.
Ragini : Hello?
Nidhi : Hello! Kaisi hai aap?
Ragini : J-Jii mein theek hu! Aap bataiye! Aaj mujhe kaise yaad kiya?
Nidhi : Veer ka phone nahi lag raha tha toh socha aapko hi laga lu. Darasal, agle mahine Holi hai. Aur exams bhi rahenge. Mene bas ye batane ke liye phone kiya hai ki Veer se kahiyega woh padhna shuru kar de. Semester ke last exams hai. Fir uska last year lag jayega.
Ragini : Ah! J-Jii! Mein keh dungi!
Nidhi (smiles) : Jii! Dekhiye! Business apni jagah hai. Par- Par ab companies aane lagengi. Veer se kahiyega wo prepare kare. Baaki, mein toh hu hi. Aap jaanti hai ki job kitni zaroori hai. Side me wo business kar sakta hai. Lekin-
Ragini : H-Haan! Aap sahi hai. M-Mein keh dungi uss se.
Nidhi : Jii! Aur usse mere paas bhi bhej dijiyega. Mein usse samjha dungi. Kuch pointers de dungi exams ke liye.
Ragini : S-Sure! Thank you!
Nidhi (smiles) : No need for that. Accha! Mein rakhti hu.
Ragini : Hmm!
Aur call cut ho gaya. Log Veer ko yaad kar rahe the. Parantu, unhe kya pata tha ki woh iss waqt kis haal me tha. Zinda tha bhi ya nahi?
***
Mumbai me Veer ke ghar bhale hi subah ke 7:30 ho rahe the. Parantu, Paris me yaha ab bhi raat ka andhera barkaraar tha.
Yaha derr raat ke 3 baje hue the. Paris ka samay Mumbai se lagbhag saadhe 4 ghante peeche tha.
Hawa me helicopter lehra raha tha. Saagar ki ufanti lehre chattaano par thapede maar rahi thi. Dheere-dheere jab badi lehre takra ke thamti toh paani kuch shan ke liye shaant ho jaata. Aur ussi ke saath uska shor bhi.
Uss ardh-paardarshi jal ke andar dekh paana jatil tha. Upar se raat ka andhera. Helicopter ki spotlight ke bawajood kahi unhe woh nazar nahi aa raha tha jiski unhe talaash thi. Aur woh tha-
Veer ka shav!
"Dhoondhte raho!!! Aasmaan kha gaya usse ya dharti nigal gayi? Paani me hi hoga. Chappa-chappa chhaan maaro."
Senior officer ki awaaz uss poore ilaake me goonj gayi.
Par talaashi ke pehle Ava urf Natalia Martin ko helicopter se neeche utaar diya gaya.
Andre : Miss Natalia. Ab aap surakshit hai. Mein Andre! DGSI ki orr se ek agent. Mere saath chaliye.
Ava ne ahista se haami bhari aur uske peeche-peeche chal di.
Raasta wahi tha jaha se Veer aaya tha. Aur waha se nikal jaise hi woh sab building ke nazdeek aaye toh Andre ghabraate hue aage badha,
Andre : Terashimaaa!!!!
Woh chillaaya aur Terashima ko zameen se uthaate hue usse jhunjhlaya. Kintu, woh hosh me nahi thi.
Uski saansein aur physical condition check karne ke baad Andre ne ek raahat ki saans li.
Toh utne me building ke dusre maale se Chris aur uski team neeche aayi. Chris ki baah me goli lagi hui thi.
Neeche aate hi Chris ki aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi jab usne apne aas-paas ka nazaara dekha.
Lighthouse ka chhajja tabaah ho chuka tha. Aur neeche, ek bade se chopper ke chithde ude hue the jo aag ki lapto me jhulas rahe the.
Chris : Good god!! K-Kya hua yaha par?
Andre : Chris!!!
Chris : Andre?
Andre : Tumhe toh chot lagi hai. Quick! Jaldi chalo!
Chris : H-Haan! Upar bache hue logo ko arrest kar liya gaya hai.
Andre : Chinta mat karo! Poora area chhaan ke hi yaha se niklenge. Pehle tumhe medical assist dena zaroori hai.
Airplane airstrip par pehle se hi khada hua tha. DGSI aur police officers dwaara Natalia ko plane ke andar baitha diya gaya.
Toh wahi jis plane me Natalia ko laaya gaya tha, uske andar bhi chhaan-been shuru kar di gayi. Kintu,
Jo pilots Natalia ko plane me yaha baitha ke laaye the, unki bas laashe hi haath lagi.
Andre : Shit!!! Ab kya kiya jaaye?
Senior officer : Le ke chalna hoga inhe. Forensic report shayad kuch bata de. Baaki, bodies par se phones aur baaki details kese retrieve karni hai woh kaam hum par chhor do.
Andre (nods) : Hmm!
Aur kaafi mehnat mashakkat ke baad ek airplane ko waha se bhej diya gaya.
Yaha se ek plane ravaana hua tha toh wahi Paris ke airport par ek airplane land ho raha tha.
Plane ke land hote hi, usme se log nikle aur airport ke baahar jaane lage.
Unhi chand logo me se ek khubsoorat aurat tezz qadmo ke saath aage badh rahi thi. Uske peeche-peeche ek aadmi tha aur ek aur aurat chal rahi thi.
"Miss! Yaha se ab kaha?"
Awaaz Prakash Uncle ki thi. Aur aage chal rahi aurat koi aur nahi balki Suhana hi thi.
Uske chehre par chinta aur ghabrahat saaf jhalak rahi thi.
"Suhana!!! Kuch bataogi ya nahi?"
Ye awaaz thi Ashita ki. Suhana ki personal psychologist. Divya toh na aa saki parantu Ashita Suhana ke peeche peeche chali aayi.
Suhana ka ravaiyya bada hi ajeeb lag raha tha usse. Uski personal psychologist hone ke naate uski harr harqato par dhyaan dena Ashita ki zimmedari thi.
Suhana : Prakash Uncle!! Hume Ava ko dhundhna hai.
Prakash : P-Par Ava Miss to kidnap ho chuki hai na Miss.
Suhana tezz raftaar se chalti jaa rahi thi. Uska peeche karne ke liye Prakash aur Ashita ko bhaagna pad raha tha.
Prakash : Aur aap abhi bhi poori tarah theek nahi hui ho.
Suhana (frowns) : Abhi sabse zyada important hai Ava ke baare me khabar lagna Uncle. Veer bhaari musibat me hai. Uska Phone nahi lag raha hai aur na hi aapke uss Eric se contact ho paa raha hai.
Ashita : Veer? Who's this Veer?
Prakash ne ek jhalak Ashita ko dekha par uske prashn ka uttar na diya.
Prakash : Aise me toh fir Ava Miss ke sabse qareebi log ya fir yaha ke investigation department jaana hi behtar hoga. Wahi se kuch detail lag payegi Miss.
Suhana : Ava ke qareebi kaun hai, ye hum nahi jaante. Investigation department hi chalna behtar hoga.
Road taraf aate hi ek car pehle se hi unke liye lagi hui thi.
Prakash ne aage badh car ka darwaza khola aur Suhana andar baith gayi. Saath hi Ashita bhi.
Prakash aage driver ke bagal se baitha aur car waha se ravana ho gayi.
Magar abhi kuch hi kilometer ki duri tay ki thi unhone ki saamne ka nazara dekh woh sabhi chaunk gaye.
Paris ke iss jaane maane chauraahe par afra-tafri machi hui thi. News reporters idhar se udhar apne cameramans ke saath coverage ke liye bhaag rahe the.
Toh wahi police unhe control karne me lagi hui thi. Logo ko surakshit rakhne ke liye woh waha se jald se jald area khaali karwaane me lage hue the.
Ye ilaaka wahi tha jaha kal raat bada dhamaka hua tha. Tehqiqat karna kisse pasand nahi hota? Log apna camera leke aur reporters apna mic leke pohuch rahe the.
Police ke liye kaam badhta jaa raha tha.
Suhana : Something big has happened. Whole city is in chaos.
Ashita : Y-Ye sab!? Akhir ho kya raha hai?
Car me baithe-baithe unn sab ne dekha ki kaise news reporters harr ghatna ki jankaari dene me lage hue the.
Toh wahi janta me se kuch log aise the jo virodh ka pradarshan kar rahe the. Naare lagaate hue woh police aur France ki govt. ke khilaaf awaaz utha rahe the.
"Kya yahi hai France ki suraksha? Kya yahi hai police ki security? Aise hi itna bada hamla sheher ke beecho-beech kar diya jaata hai. Kya kar rahi thi police? Kitne log maare gaye hai. Kaha hai hamla karne waala? Kya police pakad paayi usse? Hum jawaab chaahte hai!!!"
Janta ka virodh badhta hi jaa raha tha. Aur unki awaaz ko logo tak pohuchaane ka kaam media kar rahi thi.
Police officers logo aur media ke beech ghir kar unhe bas hidaayat hi de sakte the.
"France 24 News channel se mein bol rahi hu Audrey aur hamaare saamne maujood hai police department ke jaane maane Chief. Sir! Kya kehna chaahte hai aap iss waqt? Janta police se naakhush hai. Din-dahaade hamla ho jaata hai aur police ke paas saamne rakhne ke liye koi jawaab nahi hai."
Chief ne logo ko shaant rehne ka ishaara kiya par shor tha jo kam hone ka naam hi nahi le raha tha.
"Dekhiye!! Situation kaafi critical hai aur complex bhi. Ye samay virodh ka nahi hai. Mein janta se kehna chahunga ki kripya kar woh hume apna kaam karne de. Mujrim ke peeche DGSI aur hamari force lagi hui hai. Mujhe aasha hai jald hi hum ghuspethiye ko pakad lenge. Mein aashvashan deta hu ki France ki police apna poora de rahi hai."
"Par janta ka kya Sir? Jinhone apni jaan gavaayi hai unka kya? Uss baare me aap kya kehna chaahenge? Kya aap maante hai ki aap ke department me se kahi na kahi security ko lekar chook hui hai?"
"Ji nahi! Hum harr samay alert rehte hai. Ye ek haadsa hai. Aur mujhe bohut khed hai iss baat ka ki kuch logo ne apni jaane gawa di hai. Magar hum jald hi mujrim ko pakad ke janta ke saamne pesh karenge."
Itna bol Chief waha se hatt ke jaane lage toh news reporter unka peecha karne lage. Parantu, police officers ne unhe aage badhne na diya.
"Toh jaisa ki dekha aapne. Police chief ka yahi kehna hai ki woh apna poora de rahe hai aur tehqiqaat karne me teams juti hui hai. Mera bhi yahi nivedan hai darshako se ki kripya apne apne ghar me hi rahiye. Police ko apna kaam karne dijiye. Tab tak ke liye aaiye aapko dikhaate hai, uss building ki dasha jaha par dhamaka hua tha."
Aur news reporter cameraman ke saath waha se nikal gayi.
Car me baithe jab Suhana aur baaki sab ne ye dekha toh unki haalat patli ho gayi.
Ashita : I-Itna bada haadsa ho gaya yaha?
Prakash : Aage bhaari checking lagi hai Miss. Cars ko bina check kiye aage badhne nahi de rahe hai.
Suhana : Hum clean hai. Hum par koi aarop nahi hai. It's okay. Let them do! Lekin agar time lagta hai then-!! Find another route.
Prakash : Jii! Mein aage jaake unse puch ke aata hu ki pehle hamari checking kar de. Toh hum yaha se nikal sake.
Suhana (nods) : Hmm!
Prakash gaadi se utar aage Signal ki orr chal diya. Lekin tabhi chauraahe ke upar bade bade hoardings ke paas lagi ek badi si screen par news aayi.
Suhana ki nazre fauran hi uss par tik gayi.
"Breaking News coming from the blast incident which took place yesterday. Singer and celebrity Miss Natalia Martin has been rescued by the DGSI and police force. The suspect has been executed on the spot. It has been confirmed that the suspect didn't co-operate with the police. Hence, squandering his life. Body has still not been found. However, DGSI is working diligently to search the criminal's body."
Khabar ke saat hi Veer ki wahi tasveere screen par aayi jo Andre ne slot machine waali alley me video me record ki thi.
Suhana ne jab ye suna aur dekha toh uski saansein maano atak gayi. Saaf saaf likha hua tha. Suspect was executed on the spot.
Apraadhi ko wahi par maar diya gaya. Suhana ka badan thar-thar kaanpne laga. Uski aankhein feli hui thi. Kya woh saamne jo dekh rahi thi woh sach tha?
Aur fir iska bodh hote hi ek ajeeb si anubhooti usse andar se hui. Aankhon se apne aap aasu nirantar behne lage.
Ashita : Suhana!?
Suhana toh jaise kisi aur hi duniya me jaa chuki thi. Badan me kampan rukne ka naam nahi le raha tha.
Achanak hi uske phone par call aaya, jiski awaaz ne uska dhyaan kheecha.
Bina screen me number dekhe Suhana ne call uthaaya aur phone ko kaan pe lagaya.
Toh waha se awaaz aayi,
"Umm! Suhana ma'am? Kya ye aapka number hai? Mein Veer bhaiya ki choti behan- Kavya bol rahi hu. Hello? Hello?"
Suhana ki bolti band thi. Kaise jawaab de? Aur kya jawaab de? Saamne screen par Veer ki akhiri tasveere jhalak rahi thi. Kaise kahe uss ladki se ki uska bhai marr chuka hai?
Usse mehsoos hua jaise andar se kuch behad keemti toot gaya ho. Jisse ab dobaara kabhi nahi joda jaa sakta.
Kavya : H-Hello?
Suhana : M-Mein tumhe baad me call karti hu Kavya. Okay?
Kavya : Ohh! O-Okay! Wo-! Woh Veer bhaiya ke baare me puchna tha. K-Kya aapko koi khabar hai woh kaha par hai?
Suhana : N-Nahi! Mein pata kar ke tumhe uske baare me bataati hu. Th-Theek hai?
Kavya : Okay! Thank you~ B-Bye!
Aur call cut ho gaya. Magar call cut hote hi Suhana toot ke bikhar gayi. Woh zorr zorr se rone lagi. Ashita usse achanak se iss qadar dekh ghabra gayi.
Ashita : Suhaaaanaa???
Parantu, Suhana koi jawaab nahi de rahi thi. Woh bas roti jaa rahi thi. Jhar-jhar uske aansu aankhon se beh ke gir rahe the.
'It can't be-!!! H-How can this happen?'
Yakeen nahi karna chaahti thi woh magar saamne news channel uske mann ko aur duwidha me daal raha tha.
'N-Nahi!! Aisa nahi ho sakta. It doesn't make any sense. R-Right! They haven't discovered him yet. Jab tak mein apni aankho se nahi dekh leti tab tak mein yakeen nahi karungi! Woh Aatish, Slogan, Nightwalker, Pitcher jaiso ke changul se baahar aaya hai. I know you're out there Veer...!'
Ashita : Suhanaaa?
Suhana ne agle hi shan apne aansu poche. Tab tak Prakash bhi laut ke aa chuka tha.
Prakash : Miss! Woh maan gaye hai. Check karwa ke nikalte hai.
Suhana : Plan badal chuka hai Uncle. Ab hum waha nahi jaa rahe. Ek hotel me rooms book kariye sab ke liye. Aaj raat hum wahi thehrenge. Aur kal Ava laut ke aa chuki hogi Paris me! Then we'll meet her.
Prakash : Theek hai!
'She's hiding something.'
Car checking ke baad seedhe ek hotel ki disha me chali gayi.
***
Las Vegas
Night...
Veer ke liye uske chaahne waale log lag chuke the. Harr koi uski khabar paane ke liye bechain tha.
Yaha Vegas me Divya ko ek baar punaah Nolan ne apne department bulaaya hua tha.
Andar jaate hi ek aur report uske saamne table par patak di gayi.
Nolan : Ab sthiti haath se nikal rahi hai Divya. Take a look at this.
Report ko uthaate hue jab Divya ne sab kuch padha toh woh bhauchakki reh gayi. Atyant krodh janm liya, saath hi vyaakulta bhi.
Divya : Ye France waale paagal ho gaye hai kya? Andhe hai kya? Dikhaayi nahi deta kya namoono ko??
Nolan : Tumhe ek baat aur bataani hai. Kuch din pehle France ki orr se House of the Killers ke cases ko leke ek request aayi thi.
Divya : Wh-What?
Nolan : Hmm! Unhe report chahiye thi HOK ki.
Divya : Kyaaaaa?
Nolan : Aur humne unhe bheji bhi hai report.
Divya : What? Are you in your right mind??? HOK koi normal murder case nahi hai. Ye confidential hai. Classified reports ko department dusre desh me kaise bhej sakta hai?
Nolan : Unka daawa hai ki wahi hamla unke upar hone waala tha. Unhe saboot bhi mile hai. Aur iska rachayita unn logo ne kisse tehraya hai pata hai na?
Nolan ne agle hi pal report ka akhiri panna khola toh usme Veer ki tasveer bani hui thi.
Divya ka haal behaal ho utha. Woh apni jagah par baithate hue bhayanak peeda mehsoos kar rahi thi. Usse koi raasta nazar nahi aa raha tha. Uske nain bheeg uthe.
Divya : Y-Ye sab-!!!
Nolan : Hum jaante hai Veer nirdosh hai. Hum sirf ek hi kaam kar sakte hai. Aur woh hai ki apni report bana ke bheje jisme Veer ko normal citizen ke roop me dikhaaya jaaye. Jaisa ki vaastav me hai. Lekin-! Jo kuch hoga woh wahi se ho payega. Mujhe nahi lagta woh maanenge.
Divya (sobs) : A-Aap kaise!? Kaise bhej sakte ho waha reports? *sniff*
Nolan : Divya! Jab dusra desh vipda me aane waala ho aur unhone koi maang rakhi ho toh hume badle me madad karni hi padti hai. Hamara desh iss samasya se joojh chuka hai. Upar se order the ki report ko bheja jaaye taaki woh pehle se iske liye taiyaar ho sake. Hume kya pata tha ki waha Veer ko fassa diya jayega!
Divya (screams) : Magar Veer nirdosh hai!!!!
Nolan : Jaanta hu! Isliye jo bann padega, department woh karega.
Itna bol woh baahar nikal gaya. Kintu, Divya wahi gir ke subakne lagi. Iss ladke se itna lagaav ho jayega usse, usne khud kabhi nahi socha tha.
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Agli raat mahaul kuch aur hi tha. News par Ava se sawaal jawaab kiye jaa rahe the. Usse Paris aaye kuch hi ghante hue the ki reporters uske upar chadh pade.
Tamaam sawaalo ke saamne Ava mics se ghiri hui thi.
Aur unn sabhi sawaalo ka bas usne ek hi jawaab diya,
"Mujhe theek se yaad nahi mere saath kya hua tha. Mein bhaag rahi thi. Fir pakad li gayi aur fir kahi mujhe le jaaya gaya. Mujhe koi jankaari nahi hai inn sab ke peeche kaun hai. Mein abhi ghabrayi hui hu aur abhi kuch samay akele me guzarna chaahti hu."
Bas! Ye kuch shabd kaafi the. Doctors se leke security sabhi ne reporters ko Ava se dur kar diya. Doctors Ava ki health condition check karne lage. Toh wahi kuch reporters ke sawaal jawaab dene me lag gaye.
Sab kuch jab thoda shaant hua. Toh raat me Ava hospital ke liye chal padi.
Woh akeli thi. Face par mask tha uske. Car thode sunsaan raaste se guzar hi rahi thi jab theek saamne raaste par koi beech me aa gaya.
Ava ne car side me roki aur uss se baahar nikal woh uss shaks ki orr gayi.
Saamne wahi tha!!
Crimson!!!
Par uski aankhon me bhaiyankar krodh tha. Aag baboola ho rakhi thi uski aankhein.
Crimson (garajte hue) : Kaha hai woh??? Kaha hai??
Ava (frowns) : He's dead!
Agle hi pal Ava ka gala Crimson ke mazboot haatho me tha.
Crimson : NAHI!!!!! TUMNE MARRNE KAISE DIYA USSE??? WOH MERA SHIKAAR THA!!!!
Ava : Ngghhh!!!
*BAAAAAAMMMMMMM*
Ava ki laat turant hi Crimson ke pait se takraayi aur Crimson dur jaate hue lohe ke dabbo ke beech jaa gira. Uska ek haath wese hi pehle se gaayab tha. Seene par abhi bhi khoon ke dhabbe maujood the.
Ava : *huff* *huff* Mene tumhara kaam kar diya hai. Apne aadmiyo ko waapas bulao.
Crimson karaahte hue utha aur kuch derr tak Ava ko dekhta raha.
Ava ki awaaz agle hi pal kaafi khaufnaak ho gayi.
Ava : APNE AADMIYO KO WAAPAS BULAO! ABHI!!!
Crimson : Girl!!! Awaaz neeche! Bhulo nahi ki tum kis situation me ho abhi.
Fir bhi apna phone nikaal usne ek message bheja. Aur uske message bhejte hi,
8 se 10 snipers jo apna aim Grace Martin ke ward ki khidki par lagaaye baithe the woh waha se nikal gaye.
Crimson : They are gone!
Ava : Agar aisa kuch dobaara hua, toh mein tumhaare tukde tukde kar dungi! Fir chaahe apni hi jaan kyu na gawa du!
Crimson (gusse me) : Woh mera shikaar tha!!! Meraaaa!!!! But you let him-
Ava : He didn't surrender. He chose to die. He gave away his life rather than surrendering to you.
Kehte hue uski palke neeche ko jhuk gayi.
Crimson : Y-You-!!
Ava (glances) : Aur itna gussa kyu? Tum usse maarna chaahte the. Woh jaa chuka hai. Tumhara maqsad poora hua. Why the rage?
Crimson : Tch! Apne kaam se kaam rakho! Aur tumhara haal bhi toh alag hai. Aren't you caring for him too much? He was no one to you! Why such a reaction then!? Interesting!
Ava : Fuck off!
Ava waha se mudi aur apni car me baith ravana ho gayi.
Raaste par bas Crimson hi akela khada raha.
'Veeeeeerr!! You motherfucking bastard-!!! Mene nahi socha tha ki tum maut ko gale laga loge. Tch! Plan bigad gaya hai. Sirf iss ek move ke kaaran. Mujhe kuch aur karna hoga-!!! But first-!! I must fix something!'
Woh soch waha se hawa ke jhoke ki tarah gaayab ho gaya.
*Click*
Yaha Hospital me ward ka darwaza khula. Aur Ava apni Maa Grace ke kamre me pravesh ki.
Maa ko dekhte hi, Ava apne ghutno par gir padi.
Maa ko dekh woh unke paas aayi.
"Mother-!!!"
Kintu, Grace toh kisi murti ki tarah sthir waha laiti hui thi. Koi harqat nahi. Bas saansein chal rahi thi.
"K-Kyu? Kyu meri itni pareeksha li jaa rahi hai? Kyu mujhe woh karna pada?"
"Mother-!!! I commited a sin!!!"
"Mujhse bohut bada paap ho gaya hai mamma!!! I-I- I killed an innocent mamma!!"
Woh kaanch ki tarah toot ke bikhar gayi.
"Mein bewakoof-!! Samajh na paayi!! I couldn't understand his heart. I never wanted to do it. But I did-!!! Mamma!!!"
*sniff*
"Woh yaha mujhe bachaane ke liye aaya tha. He didn't even ask me for any details. *sniff* Yet I- Yet I worked with that guy to frame him!!!"
*hic*
"Mother-!! You are my strength!! But you are my weakness too!!"
"Kaise? *sniff* Yaha tak pohuch gayi hu. Ab kaise peeche hatt sakti hu?"
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"I'm sorry-!!! I'm sorry Veer!!! I never wanted to do it-!!! *sniff* Mamma!!! *sniff* Speak to me!!! P-Please-!!!"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Itne bade bade bawaal updates ke baad ek cooldown update zaroori tha. Update 4.6k words ka hai. Like thokne ka. Target wahi hai. 140 likes. 2 updates aur aayenge. 1 poore past ko darshayega ki Crimson ne ye sab racha kaise. HOK kaise paida hua. Veer kaise framed hua. Dusre me wapas hum present me aa jayenge.
Dhanyavaad!
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