Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

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Update 178 has been posted. ​

 

[Dragon master]

Jldi likho next update
Veer ka locket bhi is ki neck MN hy to wh abhi nhn tota to veer hara bhi nhn na mra hy
he is alive

 

[Logan(Wolverine)]

136 update me hi mujhe doubt ho Gaya tha , aur mene iske baare me likhaa bhi tha ki veer jo poori tareh crimson ne trap kiyaa hai avaa ki madat se Ava top floor par pahoonchi thi crimson se milne taaki veer ko location mile aur veer ka encounter crimson se ho sake, ek- ek cheej plaaned ki huyi thi

 

[Logan(Wolverine)]

Veer ka locket jisme Neel manni hai wah koi powerful stone ya koi luck stone nahi hai yeh to sirf ek wahem hai, woh to sirf simple sa stone hai show- off ke liye
Kuchh cheeje aksar ittefaaq se ho jaaya karti hai usi tathyo par logo ka vishwaash ho jaata hai, sci- tech ke adhaar par aise tathy ( facts) Jo bebuniyaad ho unhe andh-vishwaash ( superstitious) kahaa jataa haise hi Neel-manni ke case me huaa hai.

Veer ke pairo me jo goli( bullet) lagi woh Ava ne challayi thi, baaki ki aur bullets dgsi ke logo ne, ho sakta hai wahaa crimson ho usne bhi chalaayi ho hidden place se, Ava ne bullet veer ke pairo par chalaayi taaki veer bhaag Naa paaye kyunki crimson ne usse sauda Kiya tha Ava ki mother ke badle veer ko use ( crimson) ko saunpne ka magar yahaa sab kuchh crimson ke mutaabik nahi ho paaya ho ki usne pre-planned kiyaa tha,. Crimson chaahta tha ki veer ko apne haatho se maare.

Ava kisi nirdosh par firing nahi karnaw chaahti thi woh chaahti thi ki veer surrender kare, uske baad wah kisi tareh se veer ko is museebat se nikaal sake

System ne veer ko jo mission Diya tha 'get Ava as early as possible' matlab yeh Ava ko jald se jald dhoondh nikaalna tha taaki condition hisaab se veer Ava ki majboori , problem Jaan sake isse pehle crimson koi aur nayi chaal chalta . Agar veer Ava ko building me hi dhoondh nikaalta to ho data tha veer Ava ko crimson ki planning me shaamil hone hataa deta.


Update 142 me, Ava ki mother koma me hai na ki veer koma me chalaa gayaa hai, Ava ko 20000 points collect karne the, system dwara diye gaye mission dwara jisme se 18000 points collect kar chuki hai, 20000 points collect kis liye legendary scroll maisie's cure achieve karne ke liye, taski wah ( Ava) apni maa ko komaa ( coma). Se baahar laa sake. Ava ne apni maa ke liye veer , ek nirdosh shaksh ka balidaan de diya.

Is story me crimson ke peechhe bhi bahut bade underworld don ka haath hai, crimson to sirf us din ke liye kaam karta hai 2-3 years se wah underworld ka don 18-20 saalo se ( approx 20 years) ka underworld me apni jagah banaaye huye hai, aur kai saalo se underworld ka din raha hai, no ki sabse last arc disbowlers arc me dikhega Jo maut ka khel khelta hai woh bhi bahut brutal ( nirdayi) tareeke se, jaise Hollywood movie saw me jigsaw maut ka khel khelta hai, farak yeh hai ki wah is story me sabse badaa villain hai.

Agar Ava ke paas system hai toh veer Ava ko parakh ( search) kyun nahi paya, kya Ava ke paas bhi aisa koi skill hai, ki wah apni identity hide kar sake , jaise crimson ab tak kar paaya hai, is story ki duniya me jis kisi ke paas bhi system hai wah apni shakshiyat ( personally system waali) chhupaate aa rahaa hai, magar jinke paas system hai shaayad un ko chhorkar, jaise crimson Jo ki Ava aur veer ke baare me yeh jaanta hai ki un dono ke paas system, ( power of system) hai. House of killers ka group ( gang) crimson ke under kaam karta tha aur apne boss ( underworld don) ke under kaam karta hai.

Jab crimson ne las vegas me veer se huyi encounter me crimson ke aadmiyon ne miss suhana ki peeth me bullet fire ki thi , crimson ke order pe ki thi par crimson chaahta tha suhaana par jaanleva hamlaa kar use raaste se hataa sake taaki veer ko kisi bhi haalat me koi help Naa mil paaye, crimson ke aadmiyon se chook ( mistake in bad firing) huyi aur suhaana mar nahi paayi.

Veer ko crimson ke baare me Ava se baatcheet ( investigation) karni chahiye thi, ho na ho use is maamle me kaafi madat milti.

Crimson ka pre-planned yeh thaa ki veer ko bahut bada criminal goshit ( crimiinal, terrorist declare) kare , taaki usne jitna bhi fame kamaaya hai wah chalaa jaaye, Jo ki usne underworld ke gangsters , criminals mafia don aadi ka safaaya karke kamaaya ( earned) tha. Crimson Isi baat ka badlaa veer se le rahaa hai, crimson chahata tha ushaant island par veer surrender karke police ke giraft me aaye aur duniya ki janta ke aage bahut bada criminal saabit ho aur iske baad wah ( crimson) veer ko police custody se illegal rihaa karke tadpaa tadpaa kar bahut hi nirdayata se ( brutally) .
Kyunki veer ne aatish, slogan do bade underworld ke logo ka sadasya Kiya tha , is wajeh se underworld ka head ( supreme) veer se badlaa ( revenge) le rahaa hai , kyunki veer ki wajeh se underworld ko kaafi nuksaan uthaana padaa hai, underworld ke head ne yeh kaam ( veer ko tadpaa-tadpaa kar use criminal declared karke) crimson ko saunpa hai.

Ia story me update 141-142 paral Ava wahi unknown ladki hai jiska paas bhi veer aur crimson ki tareh system hai yeh dikhaaya hai, yeh story writer ji bahut hi kharaab koshish hai, jabki Ava par bane jitne bhi update hai un facts se pataa chaltaa hai ki avaa ke paas system nahi ho sakta , yeh writer ki bahut badi Kami dikhaayi deti hai, jiske wajeh se story unbalanced ( niraadhar) maloom dikhaayi deti hai, agar Ava ke paas system hot to wah apni jindagi ko khone ke baare itni chintit ( worry) , itni khauf me kyun dikhaayi deti , Ava ki friend singer Charlotte ji hatya ( murder) hone par Ava ka darr ( fear) saaf dikhaayi de rahaa tha, kyun, jabki veer aur crimson ke paas bhi system hai wah toh hamesha se nidarr ( fearless) rahe hai, jahaa bhi jaate hai sar par kafan baandh kar jaate hai, jabki Ava ke condition Aisa nahi hai , Ava apne pariwaar ( apni mother ke baare me) ke baare me chintit , dari huyi ho sakti thi magar, yeh ho saktaa hai, yahaa story ke writer ne bahut hi kharaab tareeke se nayaa mod ( direction) diyaa hai, yeh bahut jyaada confusion z illusion creat karta hai,. Isse story ghatiyaa banti hai,

Crimson ke boss ho ki underworld ka don hai ausa keh sakte hai, usne verr kka murder ka kaam crimson ko saunpaa tha , isliye crimson aur avaa ke beech behas huyi, yeh lekar ki wah sirf mera shikaar tha,.

Update 140 me veer mar ( dead) chukaa hai, may be veer ko medically dead declare kar diya hi, Aisa un case me hota hai jab insaan ki dil ki dhadkan band pad jaaye, ya Dil ki dhadkan bahut hi kam ho haye, ya phir insaan ki saans ( breath) chalnaa band pad jaaye to use medically death karaar ( declare) kiyaa jaata hai, may be veer ne aisa koi skill ya scroll hunt card ya lagendary card equip ( purchase) kiyaa ho jisse uski Dil ki dhadkan ( heart beat) band pad gayi ho kuchh ghante ke liye,

Is story me crimson ke boss sanyukt roop se ( partnership) do vyakti hai jo lagbhagh 20 years se underworld par hukumat kiye huye hai

Ava ka character and Tak isme ek selfish girl ka dikhaaya gayaa hai, Jo apne maa ke liye aur apne target ko pura karne ke liye kisi nirdosh ko bhi kurbaan ( sacrifice) kar de.

May be veer ko system dwara Diya gayaa mission complete nahi huyaa ho kyunki usne samay rahte mission complete nahi kiyaa tha, get Ava as early as possible, Jo ki building me hi avaa ko paane ( find) karne kaa tha, ushant island par veer ko avaa ke milne par mission complete nahi maana jaayega, magar uske paas 1692 points the jiske jareeye scroll hunt dwaara koi legendary skill, (card) le sakta hai agar uski kismat saath deti hai to jisme uske chances 15% hai , Jisme 85% chances me joker ( empty) nikaltaa hai, uske ho saktaa hai veer ki kismat is baar bhi uskaa saath de, agar use koi legendary card, Skill mil jaaye taski wah kuchh samay ke liye apni Dil ki dhadkan rokkar aur paani me kisi tareh survive kar sake.

Is story me crimson aur Ava ke system ko readers ne jyaada powerful bataaya hai ,, jabki Aisa nahi hai , mere khyaal se veer ke paas Jo system hai woh duniya me sab system se sabse jyaada powerful hai, ya one of most powerful system hai, kyunki uske paas Kai saare mission milte hai , iske saath-saath uske paas diamond tier level hawk-eye skill hai, werewolf-blessing skill hai, etc aur ab phoenix ( phoenix jaisa koi skill , legendary card) hai, jo use kuchh had tak amar banaata hai,

I think veer Ava ki saari asliyat jaankar use maand kar degaa, Ava veer ki maandi ke liye kuchh bhi sacrifice karne ke liye taiyar rehegi.
Kiera ke emotions jagaane ke liye veer kierra ko vibhinn prakaar ki khushiyan prdaan karegaa use haseen vaadiyon me ghumne phiraake , prakriti ke manoram drashya dikhaake, bike pe hairat angej stunts karwake, bunjuing jumping karwaa ke, sex pe pleasure aur satisfaction deke, romance karke, love karke etc.

 

[Amitgupta]

Helicopter me maujood woh ladki Ava hi hai. pahadi wali ladki bhi Ava hi hai.

Agar systam wali ladki Ava hi h to jab veer ne Ava ko check Kiya to uske bayo m use system ke bare m kuch pata Q nhi chala

 

[Werewolf]

Are bhai kiya bole ab kuch bolne ke liye chora hi kaha he bhai aap ne is ka mtlb pahar wali larki ava thi aur ava ne hi veer ko double cross kiya he aur us ke pass system bhi he

bhai ye ho kiya raha he ye mera anuman he agar me galat nhi hu to aur agar me sahi hu to sawal ye he ke kyu "kyu" aur kiya crimson ne hi ava se koi deal ki he aur agar ye bhi anuman thik he to crimson ki dusri shart veer ko waha bulana thi me ab chote chote dots ko connect karne ki koshish kar raha hu ke kyu ava ko itna confidence tha ke house of killer use marna chahti he ye 1 pre plan tha aur kyu wo bar bar veer ko shot ka ishara karti thi kyu crimson ne veer ko itna confidently kaha tha ke me tmhe crimson festival pe maru ga kyu ke us se veer ko bulane ka plan pehle hi bana liya tha kyu crimson ne itni asani se veer ko itne bare kand me phasa diya,

Abhi ju ye kaise decide kar liye ki phone karne waala crimson hi hai?
Sab plan saamne aayega. Dekhte jao. Saazish jitna ju ne socha hai uss se kayi zyada badi hai.

Ye sb meri thoughts he bhai koi bhi ise galat mt smjhe me sirf apni thinking share kar raha hu,
Ab bat kare veer ki to bhai gazab kar diya veer aur pari ki conversation amazing se bhi ziyada thi emotions se bharpur

Bilkul banti thi woh toh

Aur pari ka 1 raaz bhi pata chala ke agar veer marta he to pari bhi hamesha ke liye khtm hojaye gi,

Veer ka surrender na karna bhi buhat amazing tha 1 baadhshah ki trha wo akhri saans tak data raha itna to hume pata he veer abhi mara nhi he kyu ke abhi story buhat he aage ki,

Toh fir Ava ko notification kaise aaya?

Aab dekhna ye he ke veer comeback kese kare ga aur ab jub veer wapis aaye ga to crimson ko aur ava ko to koi nhi bacha sakta he,

Ever seen a wounded Tiger?

Baqi aur kiya hi bolu bhai such kaho to aab tak is story ke jitne bhi update aye he ye wala update mere liye one of the best tha bhai excellent work bro

Aise toh dherr saare updates hai bhai jo ek se badhkar ek hai. Fir chaahe wo Nightwalker ke ho, Pitcher ke, Slogan ke, Aatish ke ya Crimson ke. Harr arc me koi na koi dhakad updates raha hai.

Keep it up,
Lot's of love and respect

Thanks a lot bhai! Keep supporting!

 

[Werewolf]

Agar systam wali ladki Ava hi h to jab veer ne Ava ko check Kiya to uske bayo m use system ke bare m kuch pata Q nhi chala

Wahi toh dekhna hai hume babu!

 

[Werewolf]

136 update me hi mujhe doubt ho Gaya tha , aur mene iske baare me likhaa bhi tha ki veer jo poori tareh crimson ne trap kiyaa hai avaa ki madat se Ava top floor par pahoonchi thi crimson se milne taaki veer ko location mile aur veer ka encounter crimson se ho sake, ek- ek cheej plaaned ki huyi thi

Veer ka locket jisme Neel manni hai wah koi powerful stone ya koi luck stone nahi hai yeh to sirf ek wahem hai, woh to sirf simple sa stone hai show- off ke liye

Ava ke paas system nahi hai wah koi aur ladki hai jiske paas system hai agar Ava ke paas system hota to wah crimson dwaara blackmail nahi hoti iske bajaaye wah usse fight ladti, veer ko sab kuchh bataa kar system ki baat ko chhorkar

'No one can stop me' waali ladki ( system waki) uske paas system ke koi legendary card, skill yaa system me maujood Jo kuchh bhi hai unme sabse behtar yaa sabse behtar me ek cheej system dwaara praapt ho chuki hai, jiekaa matlab hai us unknown ladki ke raaste me jo bhi aayega yaa to mooh ki khaayega ya phir maara jaayega ( defeat or kill) .

Tu hi toh likh raha hai kahani. Mein toh sirf comment padhne ke liye aata hu.

 

[Werewolf]

मित्र,बहुत दिन के बाद आए है। यह अर्क मेरे ऊपर से जा रहा है बोलके कुछ मंतब्य नहीं कर रहे थे। लेकिन आज रहा नहीं गया। यह कौन तरह का बात हो गया की वीर का अंतिम सांस निकल गया। यह तो सही है की आपका इस काहानी मे शुरू से ही आप बोलते आए है trinity के बारे मे। इस trinity मे आभा शामिल है लेकिन इसके वब्जूद ऐसा गद्दारी क्यों। खिचड़ी क्या पक रहा है समझ मे नहीं आ रहा है। आपका अगला अनुच्छेद के लिए बेसब्री से इंतज़ार करेंगे। नमस्कार

सच सच बताओ। और कितनी कहानियां पढ़ रहे हो? अगर कई पढ़ रहे होगे तो स्वाभाविक हैं कि ऊपर से जायेगा। Crimson arc को दोबारा अच्छे से पढ़ो मित्र। Trinity में आभा शामिल नहीं हैं भाया। Ava शामिल हैं। तीन दोस्त को trinity कहा गया हैं यहां। Ava, Kaera, और Sonia

 

[Werewolf]

लास्ट अपडेट को दिखाने का रीजन शायद अवा के पास्ट को दिखाना था,
जहां वो किसी फोटो फ्रेम को देख कर रोते हुए दिखाई गई...!!!

वो रो रही थी? नहीं। वो रो नहीं रही थी।

उसे किसी की तलाश थी, फोन वाले बंदे ने उसे कुछ कहा, हो ना हो उसके मन में चल रहे द्वंद को वो अपने सिस्टम के कारण समझ गया हो, क्या वो क्रिमसन था ??

कुछ क्लियर लिखा नही तो हम बस अनुमान लगा सकते हैं !!!

जल्द सब सामने होगा।

लड़की विदेश से इंडिया आई, उस शख्स के कहने पर,
वो लड़की स्लोगन से उसके हाइड आउट में मिलती है, क्या सिर्फ मिलना ही उसका मकसद था ?

मकसद तो एक ही था। जो उसने मिल के पूरा कर लिया।

उसका मकसद अपने काम को पूरा करवाना रहा होगा स्लोगन से , जो की अभी अधूरा था, क्योंकि लड़की को देख कर स्लोगन ने कायरा को किडनैप करने की बात की...!!!!

लड़की का स्लोगन से कोई रिश्ता ही नहीं था।
वो तो कॉलर की वजह से गई थी ना इंडिया।
इसके पहले उसके लिए स्लोगन अंजान था। उसे कोई मतलब नहीं था उस से।

स्लोगन के मरने के बाद नोटिफिकेशन और वीर वाला नोटिफिकेशन सेम था...!!

तो उस हिसाब से पिछले अपडेट वाली लड़की अवा ही थी...

लेकिन वीर का अवा से क्या कनेक्शन है,
इसकी जानकारी हमे अब अगले भाग में ही पता लग पाए
क्योंकि इस अपडेट में तो कहानी आगे बड़ी ही नहीं...!!!

कहानी आगे बढ़ी नहीं? कहानी आगे ही तो बढ़ी। या जू अपडेट 140 की बात कर रही? शायद वही हैं।

वेट वेट...
आश्चर्य नहीं होगा हमे अगर भावना के पास भी सिस्टम हुआ तो
वेटिंग फॉर नेक्स्ट अपडेट

भावना के पास सिस्टम?
बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद। जू बहुत दिनों बाद आई। जू रेवो ना देती। देते रहना होगा।

 

[Werewolf]

Detailed review later on but just one thing I want to say right now... There are a lot of twists & turns in the story, so can't come to conclusion rn. I don't know what was Ava's role in all this plotting against Veer but one thing is clear, Ava could've saved Veer by just saying 'He didn't kidnap me' to the officers. She didn't! Now I won't be able to process, if she later on becomes a counterpart of Kaera or Sonia. She won't! No matter what, she killed Veer, and by no means, she'll get the similar position as of Kaera or Sonia. Even if she was forced or whatever, wanted to find the photo frame person or whatever, she should get that person and then get lost from the life of Veer... He ain't dead yet! I'm sure about that! Let Neelmani play its own game...

Everything happens for a reason. If Ava betrayed Veer. There must be a strong reason behind this. We haven't seen the other side. We have been seeing things from Veer's perspective only. Now that he's gone. We'll start to see what's really happening and how did it happen.