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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

    Votes: 1,210 83.1%
  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 24 1.6%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 189 13.0%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 33 2.3%

  • Total voters
    1,456

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Update - 141 ~ The Last Breath

Ab tak...

Magar, agle hi second woh saaya waha se gaayab ho gaya.

Aur idhar,

Raghu : Kya baat hai? Tu kuch pareshaan lag raha hai?

Jassi : Huh? N-Nahi! Kuch nahi! Chal!

'Akhir wo kya tha??? I'm sure mene uchaayi par wo saaya dekha tha. Kya wo koi jaanvar tha? Samajh nahi aa raha.' Jassi apne mann ki gutthi me uljha reh gaya.


Ab aage...

Ushant Islands~

“Urrrrghhhh~”

Ek dard bhari karaah unn bhaari vishaal pattharo ke neeche se aayi. Veer unke neeche daba hua tha.

Haddiya to Bone Reaper ke chalte sahi salamat thi parantu, unn pattharo ke bhaar se ho rahe dard ko kaise kam kiya jaa sakta tha?

Woh toh accha tha jo Veer ne neeche dabne se pehle turant Bone Reaper equip kar liya tha. Warna uski haddiyo ka choorma bann jaana tha.

[Master-!? Are you okay?]

Pari ki ek chinta-janak awaaz uske mann me aayi.

'Y-Yeah!'

Veer ne keh toh diya magar woh jaanti thi ki uske Master bilkul bhi theek nahi the.

Veer ke perro par bhaar bohut adhik tha. Ek perr bacha hua tha lekin dusra pattharo ke neeche tha. Uska seena aur ek haath bhi buri tarah unn pattharo ki chapet me aa chuke the.

'Meri fiqr mat karo. Mein kaise bhi kar ke baahar aa jaunga. Tum ye batao kya tumne kuch observe kiya?'

[I think I have figured it out Master.]

Pari kuch sochte hue boli.

'What is it?'

[Shayad mujhe pata lag gaya hai ki ye sab akhir chal kya raha hai.]

'Tell me!'

[Ye toh pakka hai ki aapko frame kiya gaya hai. Kisne kiya hai? Toh aapka guess bhi sahi hai. Uss Crimson ne hi hume fassaya hai.]

'I know that. Lekin kyu aur kaise?'

[Kyu ka jawaab mere paas abhi nahi hai Master. Lekin kaise? Uska zaroor hai. Hear me out!]

'Mein sunn raha hu!'

[I think ye Crimson-!]

'??'

[Ye Crimson hi House of the Killers ka rachayita hai. Isne hi House of the Killers jaise bade khatarnaak organisation ko banaaya hai.]

'Koi proof Pari?'

[Proof nahi hai. But meri thinking bohut strongly uski orr point out kar rahi hai. Kyuki ye Las Vegas me bhi tha.]

'Yeah!'

[Agar usse maarna hota to woh wahi maar deta. Toh maara kyu nahi? Answer is simple! He wanted to frame you! DGSI ko issi ne shayad aapke khilaaf galat info di hai.]

'Ohhh!'

[Remember the fake police?]

Pari ke bataane par Veer ko yaad aaya. Jab unn alleys me smoke bomb feka gaya tha aur Ava ka bodyguard jo zakhmi hua tha. Woh fake police ke kaaran hi hua tha.

'Shit!!! Mujhe yaad hai. Woh fake police-!!'

[Woh issi ne bheji hongi Master. Ye Terashima log tab waha hum par nigrani rakh rahe honge. Unhone jab police ko hamla karte dekha to unhe galat message chala gaya. Oh no!!! Ye mene pehle kyu nahi realize kiya?]

[Master! Isliye wo hamare peeche hai. Jab unhone dekha ki police shoot kar rahi hai toh unhe confirm ho gaya ki hum suspect hai. But these fuckers didn't know that they were fake police officers.]

'Iska matlab woh fake police ka hamla sirf mujhe suspect confirm karwane ke liye tha!?'

[Yes!!! Lekin kuch aur bhi hai-! Wo ye assume kar rahe hai ki Ava ko hum laaye hai. But that's not true. Unke haath kuch aur bhi laga hai Master. Crimson ne unhe koi aur jankaari bhi di hai. Lekin mujhe aur analyse karne ke liye samay chahiye. I'm sorry!]

'Nahi Pari! Tumne wese hi bohut kar diya hai. It's enough and- arrggh!!!'

[Maaasterrr!!!]

Veer ka dard ab badh raha tha.

[It hurts Master. I know! But please~ Stay Calm.]

Pari ki awaaz uske andar goonji toh wo apni saanson ko durust karne laga. Pari jaanti thi ki uske Master iss waqt kis haal me the. Uske bawajood woh khud ko shaant rakhi hui thi.

Yahi thi uski personality. Agar iss waqt Pari ki koi aur personality hoti toh pakke se panic mode me chali jaati. Magar, ye Pari alag thi.

[Yes! Breathe in, Breathe out!!!]

Veer lambi-lambi, gehri par santulit saansein lene laga.

[Mene aapke kandhe par lagi bullet waale ghaav ke blood flow ko rok diya hai. Blood loss se bachaane ke liye. But sorry, I cannot remove your pain.]

[Mein ek samay par aapki body me ek kaam kar sakti hu. Right now I’m focusing on your blood flow. Sorry Master! Agar mein aur capable hoti toh aapki sensory nerves par bhi dhyaan de deti. Kam se kam kuch dard kam ho jaata.]

‘You are more than capable Pari!’

[Master...!]

‘Mera dard bhale hi kam ho jaata, par damage ko toh nahi roka jaa sakta na?’

[Y-Yes Master! Body to aapki damage tab bhi hoti.]

‘Then what’s the point? It’s okay Pari! Dard se mujhe darr nahi lagta.'

[That’s-]

[Ye sab uss Crimson ke kaaran. He damaged your body too much. I can feel the pain too. Andhruni chot zyaada hai. Muscles aur tissues me baitha woh dard-!]

[But we will pay him back. Don't worry! As long as I’m here. I won’t let you die. Now listen to me-]

'Pari!!! Tum kitna kuch karti ho mere liye-!' Veer ne usse bolte waqt beech se hi kaat diya.

Uske achanak se aise bol sunn Pari maun reh gayi.

[???]

Veer ke mann me tabhi Bhavna ka khayaal aaya. Mall me jab uski mulaqat Louis se hui thi, toh Bhavna se phone par uski baat hui thi.

Aur uss call ke baad se Veer ki ghar pe kisi se bhi baat nahi ho paayi thi. Samay hi nahi mila tha usse.

'Ghar par sab chinta kar rahe honge.'

Ye soch usne ek gehri lambi saans li.

'Mein ab ek stupid move try karne jaa raha hu. Par wahi mujhe yaha se nikaal payega.'

[What?]

Usne apna ek perr apne dusre perr ke upar tike bhaari patthar par lagaaya aur agle hi shan-

"Haaaaaaaaarrrrrrgggghhh-!!!!"

[Maaaasterrrr!!!]

Woh apni sirf physical strength ka istemaal kar usse hataane ki koshish karne laga. Kintu, Pari bechain ho uthi.

[Don't do it! Please! N-No-!!! At this rate-]

Uska poora perr kaanp raha tha. Perr ki saari nasse phatne ko ho rahi thi. Usne apni bhar taaqat lagaayi.

[What are you doing?? Stop it!!!!! Agar aise hi strain badhta gaya toh-]

Magar woh na ruka.

"Nnnngghhhh-!!!"

Uska poora muh laal hone laga. Aur agle hi pal,

"Aaaaaaaaarrrggghhhh!!!"

*Splurt*

[Nooooooo!!!]

Veer ke perr me ghutne ke neeche, peeche ka maans ka hissa phat gaya.

Aise jaise tarbooj phatata hai. Muscle Tearing. Kisi ek jagah adhik strain se, adhik pressure se andhruni maanspeshiyo ke phatne ka darr rehta tha.

Veer ke saath bhi wahi hua tha. Usne apne jeevan me kabhi itna zorr nahi lagaya tha. Isse karne ke liye insaan ko kitna jazba chahiye hota tha, ye baat Pari bakhubi jaanti thi.

Apne Master ke uss jazbe ko dekh woh stabdh bhi thi par saath hi unki aisi haalat dekh usse dard bhi ho raha tha.

Zameen par khoon bikhar gaya. Veer ke perr ke peeche ka maans ka hissa latakne laga. Uske honth daato tale dabe hue the. Woh dard sehen karne ka prayaas kar raha tha.

Agle hi shan, bina samay gavaaye usne apna dusra perr zameen par tikaaya aur uski sahaayta se woh apne haatho ko churraane me lag gaya.

Dekhte hi dekhte usne ek ek karke sabse bhaari pattharo ko alag kar diya. Aur neeche se sarak-sarak ke woh jaise taise baahar aa gaya.

Atyant buri tarah ghayal ho chuka tha woh. Pari uske perr se nikalte khoon ko rokne me lagi hui thi. Kandhe aur perr dono hi jagaho ke blood loss par wo dhyaan de rahi thi.

[M-Master-!]

'Eric ko mein nahi le jaa paunga. Woh log usse kuch nahi karenge. Zyada se zyada jail me daalenge. Wese bhi wo behosh hai. Usse pehle infirmary le jayenge. Itna samay mere liye kaafi hoga Miss Suhana se keh ke usse baahar churraane ke liye.'

Veer ko tabhi building ki floor par se qadmo ki awaaz sunaayi padi. Aur unhe sunn uski bauhe chintan me sikud gayi.

[Yaha rukna theek nahi.]

Usne mud ke dekha to wahi raasta tha ab uske saamne jiske baare me Eric ne bataaya tha. Ye wahi raasta tha jiske agal-bagal pattharo ki deewaare thi. Parantu, woh sirf sunset ki sightseeing ke liye tha. Aage jaake raasta band tha.

Fir neeche samudra hi bas tha.

'Kuch derr hum waha chhip sakte hai. Kyuki building ki taraf jaana bewakoofi hogi.'

[Mmm!]

Ye soch woh aage badh gaya.

*huff* *huff*

Woh langda-langda ke chal raha tha. Uski saansein ukhdi-ukhdi aa rahi thi. Adhkhuli aankhein liye woh jaise-taise bas ghaseet raha tha khud ko.

Uski iss haalat ko dekh Pari jaise andar hi andar tootati jaa rahi thi. Par woh nishabd rahi.

Apne chotil kandhe par haath rakh woh haafte hue aage badhta raha.

Dheere-dheere woh raaste ke chhor par pohuch raha tha. Kaafi ujaala aa raha tha waha se. Chaand ki roshni thi uss khuli jagah par.



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'Bas aa hi gaye!' Aur wo chhor par pohuch gaya.

Par waha pohuchte hi, usse apni zindagi ke sabse bade jhatko me se ek jhatka laga.

Uski aankhein felti chali gayi. Pari ka bhi wahi haal tha.

Kandhe par rakha haath uska apne aap neeche gir latak gaya. Aisa lag raha tha jaise wo kisi jung me apna sab kuch kho diya ho.

Kyuki agle hi shan, uske saamne ka manzar tha-

10 armed police officers apne hathiyaar liye. Ek seeking helicopter jo uske waha pohuchte hi hawa me udaan bhar uss par spotlight tainaat kar diya.



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Andre aur Senior police officer jo helicopter me baithe usse ghoor rahe the.

[N-No-!! It cant be-!! Master-!!!]

Anjaane me woh ussi trap me aa chuka tha jo Andre aur team biccha ke baithe the. Ye Team C thi jinhe Chris ne Veer ko pakadne ka kaam saunpa tha.

Helicopter me khade Senior officer ne mic liya aur announce kar bola,

Senior Officer : Apne aap ko hamare hawale kar do. Yahi accha hoga tumhare liye.

Veer ne sarr upar kar uss Senior Officer ko helicopter me baithe dekha aur bola,

Veer : Apne aap ko hawaale kar du? Kis liye? Kisi ki madad karne ke liye? Ya kisi ki jaan bachaane ke jurm me?

Officer 1 : Ye kya bakwas kar raha hai?

Officer 2 : Pakad gaya hai na! Shayad pagal ho gaya hai!

Senior Officer ka munda wese hi thanka hua tha. Veer ka jawaab jaise usse aur gussa dila gaya.

Senior Officer : Bewakoof ladke! Tumko ghera jaa chuka hai. Apni galti maan lo aur surrender kar do. Chalaaki ki to goliyo se boon diye jaoge.

Veer : Tum logo ko koi galat fehmi hui hai. Apni agent Terashima se pucho! Ya fir Singer Natalia se. Mein unka bodyguard-

*BANG*

Veer abhi aage kuch kehta ki tabhi ek bullet uske perro ke paas aake zameen me dhass gayi.

Senior Officer : Apne saare hathiyaar feko. Aur haath upar kar khud ko hawaale karo.

[Woh maan'ne waale nahi hai Master. Just surrender!]

Veer ne apni baayi orr dekha. Ek lohe ki bench lagi hui thi baithne ke liye. Ahista-ahista woh uss orr chal diya.

Uske chalte hi dherr saari laser lights uske badan par tik gayi. Senior officer ne usse chetaavni di par Veer ko bench par baithata dekh usne apne officers ko shoot karne se rok liya.

Senior Officer : Surrender karte ho ya?

Veer : Surrender? Kis baat ke liye? Jab mene kuch kiya hi nahi toh-!?

Senior Officer : Tumhe last warning di jaa rahi hai. Tumhare khilaaf sab kuch hai hamaare paas. Surrender kardo warna-

[M-Master! Surrender kar dijiye! Warna yaha se nahi nikal payenge. Aur ye log maan'ne waale nahi hai. Kuch bohut badi galat fehmi hui hai. Crimson ne khel khela hai.]

'Surrender? Bina galti kiye? Never in my life I will surrender!'

[Maaaaastttteerrr! Samajhne ki koshish kariye!]

Veer ne punaah upar udd rahe uss helicopter me dekha. Aur tab jaake usse apne jeevan ka dusra sabse bada jhatka laga. Senior officer aur Andre ke alawa koi aur bhi tha jo maujood tha.

'It's you-!!!!!?'

Uski aankhon ki putliyaan achambhav ke maare felti chali gayi. Pari ki khud ki rooh kaanp gayi jab usne helicopter me khadi uss ladki ko dekha toh.

[N-No-!! It can't be-!!]

Aur Veer ko saara maajra samajh aa gaya. Uska sarr fauran hi jhuka aur uske facial expressions chhip gaye.

Woh ladki kahi aur hi dekh rahi thi. Kuch pal baad hi waha ek hassi zorr se goonj uthi. Veer pagalo ki tarah hassne laga tha.

Officer 1 : Y-Ye kya-!?

Officer 2 : Pakde jaane ke darr se paagal ho gaya hai.

Officer 1 : Sir? Kya hum usse seedha jaake nahi pakad sakte?

Senior Officer : Nahi! Uske paas hathiyaar ho sakte hai. Kahi bomb wagarah na rakha ho. Keep your distance. Surrender karwa ke hi maanenge hum.

Veer idhar bas hassta raha. Uski aankhein uss ladki ki aankhon se takraayi. Aur ek kadvaahat Veer ke dil me fel gayi.

Woh sarr jhukaaya.

Senior Officer : Agar tumne co-operate nahi kiya. Toh mein fire ka order de dunga.

‘Pari!’

[Huh?]

'Beowulf's Blessings ka kitna samay baaki hai?'

[Sirf 5 seconds hi bache hai uske Master.]

‘Alright then! Pari! Mein jo ab karne jaa raha hu…! It’s a bad move!’

[Wh-What? Ye aap kya-!?]

Pari ne agle hi shan Veer ke dimaag me jhaanka aur ye pata karte hi ki woh kya karne jaa raha tha, uska sanshay bhayankar darr me badal gaya. Aur pehli baar aaj,

[YOU FUCKING IDIOTIC STUPID MASTERRRR!]

Woh uss par baras uthi. Veer jaanta tha Pari ki ye personality kitni shaant thi. Par aaj woh uss par garaj rahi thi. Uss par gussa ho rahi thi, uss se naraaz thi, niraash thi aur sabse mehatvpoorn-

Uski parvaah thi usse. Aaj usme bhay bhi tha aur ghabrahat bhi.

[Why don’t you fucking understand? There will be no Pari without you. I will cease to exist. Aap me saanse hai toh ye Pari hai. Aap me jaan hai toh mujh me jaan hai. Aap zinda ho toh mein hu. Samajhte kyu nahi ho? For fuck sake just surrender. Aap ko nahi kho sakti mein. Why don’t you fucking understand this small thing? YOU ARE THE MOST IMPORTANT TO ME!!!]

Aur usne keh diya. Pari se ab raha na gaya. Usne apna ek raaz saamne rakh diya. Agar Veer apni jaan gawaata hai, toh Pari khud apna astitv hamesha hamesha ke liye kho degi. Veer se hi Pari khud hai.

Veer kuch derr tak shaant raha. Pari ka itna bada raaz bataana ye saboot tha ki woh kitni zyaada bechain thi iss waqt. Magar Veer ne uska jawaab na diya. Aur apni baat ko punaah rakha,

‘I knew it. Kahi na kahi mein ye expect kar hi raha tha. Par yaad hai na jab tum pehli baar mere shareer me aayi thi? I’m sure tum kisi aur ko apna host bana sakti ho. Aise me-’

[YOU FUCKING STOP THIS BULLSHIT OKAY? Mene kaha na! Woh sirf one time use ke liye energy thi. Ab mein uss tarah space me move nahi kar sakti.]

Lekin usne Pari ki baat ko beech me hi kaat diya,

‘Meri baat suno Pari! Mere jaate hi…! Consume my energy! I hope tumhe kam se kam kuch na kuch toh mil hi jayega mere shareer se. That will be enough for you to travel in air. Right? Tum ek naya host dhoondh sakti ho. Ek naya shareer! Koi mujh jaise stupid se behtar haha!’

[STOP IT! PLEEAAASEEE! I BEG YOU! YOU ARE NOT STUPID. You are my Master. Surrender yourself now!!!]

Iss baar uski awaaz ruwaasi thi. Veer khud iss baar aashcharya me reh gaya.

‘T-Tum-!!? Tum ro rahi ho? Haha! Mujhe nahi pata tha meri Pari mere liye kabhi royegi. It’s good to know before dying.’

[P-Pleaaasseee~ Listen to me! They won't kill you. J-Just surrender.]

'No! I won't! Ye bohut bada setup tha Pari. Tum bhi realise kar chuki ho. Hai na? It's almost impossible to get out of it. I think Miss Suhana bhi meri help nahi kar payengi-!'

[N-Nooo-]

Pari ki awaaz me lad-khadahat thi.

‘I’m sorry Pari!!’

[???]

‘Mein kabhi ek accha host na bann paaya tumhare liye. Kaash hamara safar aur lamba hota. Kitni baatein jaan’na tha tumhare baare me. Aur ghar me sab log. Woh abhi bhi soch rahe honge mein business tour par hu. Kaash sabse ek baar acche se mil paata. Juhi my cutie. Uske liye ek chocolate factory ka vaada kiya tha mene apne aap se.’

Bol woh apni kalaayi me bandhe uss kaale dhaage ko dekhne laga jo uski maa ne pehnaaya tha.

‘Maa! Ye dhaaga mujhe bacha na saka. Still! I love you! It will be a great memory to die with…!’

Usse apni maa ke bol bhi yaad aaye jo usne phone ke waqt kahe the.

“Jaldi aana beta!”

‘Shayad-!!! Ab nahi aa paunga Maa!!’

[N-NO!! Ye kya keh rahe ho aap? J-Just stop! I can’t let you go away like that. Mene kaha na aapke jaate hi mein nahi rahungi. Chaahe mujhe kitni bhi energy hi kyu na mil jaaye. A-Aap aisa kaise kar sakte ho mere saath? YOU UNGRATEFUL BASTARDDD! STOP IT NOW! PLEAASEEE!!]

Woh sarr jhukaye-jhukaye hi muskuraaya.

‘Pari I admit-!’

[!!??]

Uski aankho se iss baar ek aasu ki boond nikal uske gaalo se behte hue neeche giri.

‘I ADMIT…! TODAY! I HAVE LOST!’

Uske hontho par muskaan ab bhi barkaraar thi. Ye muskaan thi uss bodh ki. Uss aatm-samarpan ki. Aatm-samarpan unn saamne khade hue logo ke prati nahi. Aatm-samarpan sachhayi ke prati.

Woh jaan chuka tha ki aaj zindagi aur maut ke iss khel me woh haar chuka tha. Bhale hi derr se usse bodh hua par ho chuka tha.

Woh ek bohut hi badi saazish me phass chuka tha. Itni badi ki ab uss se baahar aana lagbhag naamumkin tha.

[N-No! You can’t die like that. M-Mein aapko kuch nahi hone dungi. Listen! I have a plan! Let’s just surrender first. Th-Then-]

‘Tumhe lagta hai mein surrender karunga?’

Uska sawaal sunn Pari maun reh gayi. Woh jaanti thi iska jawaab. Veer ke shareer me aane se pehle hi Veer ne kitni taqleefe jheli thi. Ajay aur uske saathiyo ne milke usse kitna maara tha. Uski koi galti bhi nahi thi tab. Parantu adhmare hone ke bawajood, usne apna sarr nahi jhukaaya tha. Maar khaata raha lekin jhuka nahi.

Jab woh bina system ke tab nahi jhuka, toh aaj inn namoono ke saamne kaise ghutne tek sakta tha woh? Bhale hi usne ek Raja ki tarah janm nahi liya tha. Par ek Raja, ek Baadshah ki tarah marr toh sakta tha.

Idhar Senior officer ne agle hi pal mic pe announce kar diya.

Senior officer : Since, you're not cooperating we're going to execute you-!

‘Pari!’ Veer fir muskuraya. ‘Humara waqt khatam ho raha hai. Saamne khade log meri maut ka intezaar kar rahe hai. So, let me say this one last thing to you.’

[!??]

Woh apne akhiri shabd kehne jaa raha tha. Pari hamesha usse shaant rehne kehti thi. Lekin abhi uski khud ki dhadkane kisi train ke maafiq chal rahi thi. Itna darr usse kabhi mehsoos nahi hua tha. Samay ret ki tarah uski mutthi se fisal raha tha. Aisa lag raha tha woh apni sabse keemti cheez kuch hi palo me khone jaa rahi hai.

‘Pari!’

[H-Huh!!]

‘Tumne mujhe ek naya jeevan diya. Tum mera hausla bann ke mera saath nibhaati rahi. Tumne harr waqt pe meri madad ki. Shayad ye meri acchi kismat thi jo tum mujhe mili. Warna mujh jaise insaan ko toh koi dekhna pasand bhi nahi karta tha.’

[M-Master!]

‘Tumhare kaaran mein kitne pyaare logo se mila. Miss Kaera, Miss Sonia, Miss Suhana. Maa se dobaara mil paaya. Teju dii! Maasi! Shweta Maa! Bhumika Dii! Arohi, Kavya, Dada jii! Suman aur baaki sab. Karan! Nidhi ma’am! Sab se…! You gave me motivation. Unfortunately, ab ye safar yahi khatam hota hai!’

[N-Nooo!]

‘Aur ek akhiri baat-’

[??]

‘I love you Pari!’

Bas! Veer ne fir aage kuch na kaha. Lekin woh Pari ki rundhe gale se nikalti hui zorr-zorr se sisakne ki awaaz sunn paa raha tha.

Achanak hi Veer ke agal bagal ka aura badalne laga.

*Ding*

[Intimidating Presence has been equipped.]

Iss baar usne sarr utha ke upar dekha. Helicopter hawa me ab bhi tainaat tha aur uski spotlight Veer par hi tiki hui thi.

Tamaam guns ki laser sights se laser ke laal-laal bindu uske shareer ke alag-alag ango ke pharchatte udaane ke liye taiyaar the.

Light house samudri tat se lage hone ke kaaran, waha ka vatavaran tezz hawaao se ghira hua tha.

Veer ke baal hawao ke saath lehra rahe the aur khoon se lathpath hone ke bawajood woh adab ke saath uss lohe ki bench par baitha hua tha.

Itne logo me woh akela tha, par wahi tha ek jiska aura sabse zyada taqatwar tha. Jo tej uski aankho me tha, waha khada harr aadmi ye dekh thoda bhay me chala gaya.

Tamaam logo ke hone ke bawajood bhi abhi unhe iss ek ladke ko dekh andar se darr mehsoos ho raha tha.

Ek aankh khuli ek band, sarr se behta khoon, kandhe par lagi goli, jagah jagah choto ke khooni ghaav, bikhre ghane baal aur perr se latakta hua maans. Kuch yahi chhavi thi Veer ki abhi.

Fir bhi waha khada aadmi uske iss roop se darr raha tha. Veer kisi ghaayal sher ki tarah lag raha tha unhe.

Uski nazre harr ek aadmi ko dekhte hue guzri aur fir usne ek buland awaaz me kaha,

“EVEN IF I DIE TODAY! I WON’T DIE BY THE HANDS OF YOU LAPDOGS.”

Uski awaaz light house ke poore samudri tat par goonj gayi. Log usse dekh uska mazaak udaane lage. Woh khud ko confidence dene ke liye ye kar rahe the. Andar se woh sabhi jaante the ki unke shareer ke ruye khade hue the.

“Hahaha! Ye ladka paagal ho gaya hai.”

“Shayad isse apni sthiti ke baare me pata nahi hai. Haha!”

“Itne logo ke beech ghire hone ke baad bhi iski aqal ab bhi thikaane nahi aayi.”

Woh ek dusre se French me bolne lage.

Veer nahi jaanta tha ki Crimson yaha maujood tha bhi ya nahi. Lekin fir bhi usne bolna jaari rakha,

“CRIMSON!!!!! AGAR AAJ MEIN MARTA HU, TOH MERI LAASH KO DEKH KE SUNISHCHIT KAR LENA KI WOH MERI HI LAASH HAI…! WARNA AGAR MEIN YAHA SE ZINDA BACHA…! TOH TUMHE WO MAUT DUNGA JO SANSAAR NE PEHLE KABHI NAHI DEKHI HOGI!!”

Kehte hue achanak hi Veer bench ki back rest par apna ek haath rakhe apne wazan ko leke peeche jhuka.

Bench uske wazan ke kaaran apni pichli do taango ke bal peeche ko jhool gayi. Par iske pehle ki woh peeche girta, Veer ne apna wazan aage ko jhuka diya.

Aur iss baar bench waapas se apni position par aayi lekin ab Veer ka bhaar aage hone ki wajah se bench iss baar apni agli do taango par jhool gayi.

Iss se pehle ki Veer aage ki orr girta, usne punaah apna wazan peeche kar diya aur yu lagataar aage peeche karne ke baad, bench bhi uske bhaar ke chalte peeche jaati aur fir aage aati.

Aisa lag raha tha Veer ek rocking chair par baitha ho. Bench ke yu aage peeche dolne ke kaaran Veer ne ek motion bana liya tha.

Waha khade logo ne jab usse ye karte dekha toh hairat me reh gaye.

Ek armed police cop Veer par gun aim kiye upar helicopter me baithe senior officer ki orr dekha aur pucha,

“S-Sir? Kya hum shoot kare?”

Senior officer : Nahi! Behtar hoga hum isse zinda pakde. Agar zinda na pakad paaye, agar woh hamaare liye khatra banta hai, tabhi shoot karna hai. Let’s just see woh kya kar raha hai. Wese bhi woh yaha se kahi bhaag nahi sakta. Situation hamare haatho me hai.

Officer 1 : Okay Sir!

Sabhi Veer ki harqato ko jigyaasa se dekh rahe the. Aur bas uske surrender karne ka wait kar rahe the.

Senior officer ne mic haatho me liya aur Veer ko firse chetaavni di.

“Tumhare paas bas 30 seconds hai! Seedhe tareeqe se apne aap ko kanoon ke hawaale kar do. Warna-”

Par Veer toh jaise uski chetaavni ko ek kaan se sunn dusre se nikaal raha tha. Uska poora dhyaan uss helicopter me baithi uss ladki par tha.

Uska shareer ab bhi aage peeche jhool raha tha. 20 seconds guzar gaye.

10 seconds bachte hi officer ne mic par countdown karna shuru kar diya.

“Ten”

Veer abhi bhi bench par jhool raha tha.

“Nine”

Koi jawaab nahi!!

“Eight”

Veer ki aankhein uss ladki par hi thi.

“Seven”

Ab bhi koi harqat nahi.

“Six”

Par 6 hote hi, jaise hi iss baar uski bench aage ko apni do taango par jhooli,

“Five”

*DING*

Achanak uski aankhein crimson laal ho gayi.

[Beowulf’s Blessings has been activated.]

Neeche apne perr tikaate hi, uska haath jo bench ki back rest par tha, usne poori taaqat se usse aage kheencha aur agle hi pal,

*Wuh-psssh*

Woh bench hawa me 360° flip hone lagi. Time jaise slow motion me chala gaya. Samay achanak se dheeme ho gaya unn sab ke liye.

Bench hawa me flip ho rahi thi, aur ussi ke saath Veer ka haath usse pakadne ke liye taiyaar ho raha tha. Saath hi uske hontho par haiwaano waali ek muskaan chadhti jaa rahi thi.

Aur waha khade logo ki aankhein hairat ke maare felti jaa rahi thi.

Bench ke sahi angle par flip hote hi Veer ne agle hi shan uss poori bench ko apni hatheli khol ek haath se jhatt-se usse jakad liya aur uske dono perr zameen par sthirta se tik gaye.

*Whoosh*

Woh turant baayi orr palta.

Sab kuch itni jaldi hua ki logo ki aankhein saamne hue drishya ko process hi nahi kar paayi.

Ab waha khade kuch logo ke dimaag ko samajh aa raha tha ki kyu ye ladka bench par aage-peeche dol raha tha. Veer yu hi nahi aisa kar raha tha. Woh jo motion bana raha tha woh tha~

Periodic motion.

Uss bench par usne hi ye motion banaaya tha. Apne perro ko zameen ke virudhh le jaake apne bhaar se bench ko jaan-boojh ke aage peeche kiya gaya tha. Newton ke second law ke chalte woh asaani se dol sakta tha agar ye rocking chair hoti.

Par woh rocking chair nahi thi. Isliye Veer ko apne bhaar ka istemaal karna pada.

Periodic motion bann’ne ke kaaran jab Veer ne usse fir ekdum se apni Beowulf ki taaqat se kheencha, toh bhaari lohe ki bench yuhi hawa me flip ho gayi. Aur uske flip hote hi Veer ne usse thaam liya.

Uss ek chote se pal me unn sabhi ki saansein atak gayi thi. Senior officer ne jaise hi ye dekha woh chillaaya,

“THIS BASTARD!!! SHOOOOOOTTTTT!!!”

Woh dahaad lagaaya aur uske garajte hi,

*BANG* *BANG* *BANG*

*RATATATATATATA*

*BANG* *BANG* *BANG*

Dhada-dhad kar ke goliyaan barasna shuru ho gayi. Par tab tak Veer hawa ke jhoke ki tarah kayi feet ek jhatke me laangh chuka tha.

“THIS MOTHEFUCER!! KILLLL HIMMMM!! SHOOOOT THATTT BASTARDDD DOWNNN!!”

Helicopter hawa me muda aur uske neeche lagi gatling gun ne andha-dhundh firing shuru kar di.

Goliyo ki bauchhaar se waha ki deewaare aur chattaane ke chithade uddne lage. Veer ki gati itni tezz thi ki woh aage badhta jaa raha tha aur goliyaan uske nikalne ke baad khaali zameen se bhid rahi thi.

Officer ka countdown bhale hi beech me band ho gaya ho, lekin Veer ke Beowulf ka countdown chalu tha. Maatra 2 seconds hi baaki the uske deactivate hone ke liye. Ye uska akhiri daav tha.

Dimaag lagaate hue cops ne aim Veer ke aage kiya aur iska abhaas hote hi,

Veer ne apne haath me li hui uss bench se apne aap ko dhak liya. Bench usne dikhaave ke liye thodi uthaayi thi.

*BANG* *BANG* *BANG*

*KLANG* *KLANG* *KLANG*

Bullets jaa ke uss bench se takraane lagi, par kuch thi jinse Veer khud ko bacha na paaya.

*Squelch*

“Arghh!”

Ek uske perr ko cheer ke andar ghus gayi.

*Squelch*

“Urghh!”

Aur dusri uski baah ko.

Fir bhi woh ruka nahi. Senior officer ko jaise hi iss baat ka abhaas hua ki Veer ka maqsad kya hai, uski aankhein bhay ke maare fel gayi.

“Th-This bastard!!! K-Kill him!! KEEP SHOOTING! Bach ke bhaagne na paaye woh. BLOCK HIS PATH.”

Par tab tak derr ho chuki thi.

2 aur bullets Veer ke shareer ko lagi. Beowulf band hone waala tha, magar uske band hone se pehle hi, Veer ne uss uchaayi se ek lambi chhalaang maar di.

*DING*

[Beowulf’s Blessings has been deactivated.]

Ye sab kuch unhi 5 seconds me hua.

“NOOOOOOOOO!!!”

Senior officer apna gala phaad gusse me chillaaya.

Idhar samudri tat ke neeche khaayi thi. Sagar ki ufanti lehre uss chattaan se aake bhid rahi thi. Veer usme kood gaya.



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“SEARCH HIM!! Zinda bachne ne paaye woh. He must be killed now! SEARCH EVERYTHING! KEEP SHOOTING!”

Helicopter udd ke aage badha aur Veer ke doobne waali jagah par lagataar paani me fire karne laga.

Bullets paani me ghus friction ke chalte dheemi ho rahi thi aur apni trace chorrte hue andar jaane lagi.


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Veer ke shareer par ek antim bullet uske seedhe seene ko aake cheer di.

Woh neeche girta gaya. Bullets ab uss tak na pohuch paayi. Dheere dheere uski aankhein band hone lagi. It was the end.

[MAAAAAASTEEERRRR!!!]

Aankhein band hone se pehle uske mann me bas ek hi khayaal aaya,


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‘Just why?? Ava!!’

Aur uski aankhein band ho gayi.

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Idhar upar udte helicopter me uss ladki ke baal hawa me lehra rahe the.

Tabhi uske mann me ek awaaz aayi,

*DING*


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‘I’m sorry…! Veer!’

Aur udhar Mumbai me Ragini ke ghar me, apne kamre me laiti Bhavna achanak bechaini ke chalte bistar par uth ke baith gayi.
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Update - 141 ~ The Last Breath

Ab tak...

Magar, agle hi second woh saaya waha se gaayab ho gaya.

Aur idhar,

Raghu : Kya baat hai? Tu kuch pareshaan lag raha hai?

Jassi : Huh? N-Nahi! Kuch nahi! Chal!

'Akhir wo kya tha??? I'm sure mene uchaayi par wo saaya dekha tha. Kya wo koi jaanvar tha? Samajh nahi aa raha.' Jassi apne mann ki gutthi me uljha reh gaya.


Ab aage...

Ushant Islands~

“Urrrrghhhh~”

Ek dard bhari karaah unn bhaari vishaal pattharo ke neeche se aayi. Veer unke neeche daba hua tha.

Haddiya to Bone Reaper ke chalte sahi salamat thi parantu, unn pattharo ke bhaar se ho rahe dard ko kaise kam kiya jaa sakta tha?

Woh toh accha tha jo Veer ne neeche dabne se pehle turant Bone Reaper equip kar liya tha. Warna uski haddiyo ka choorma bann jaana tha.

[Master-!? Are you okay?]

Pari ki ek chinta-janak awaaz uske mann me aayi.

'Y-Yeah!'

Veer ne keh toh diya magar woh jaanti thi ki uske Master bilkul bhi theek nahi the.

Veer ke perro par bhaar bohut adhik tha. Ek perr bacha hua tha lekin dusra pattharo ke neeche tha. Uska seena aur ek haath bhi buri tarah unn pattharo ki chapet me aa chuke the.

'Meri fiqr mat karo. Mein kaise bhi kar ke baahar aa jaunga. Tum ye batao kya tumne kuch observe kiya?'

[I think I have figured it out Master.]

Pari kuch sochte hue boli.

'What is it?'

[Shayad mujhe pata lag gaya hai ki ye sab akhir chal kya raha hai.]

'Tell me!'

[Ye toh pakka hai ki aapko frame kiya gaya hai. Kisne kiya hai? Toh aapka guess bhi sahi hai. Uss Crimson ne hi hume fassaya hai.]

'I know that. Lekin kyu aur kaise?'

[Kyu ka jawaab mere paas abhi nahi hai Master. Lekin kaise? Uska zaroor hai. Hear me out!]

'Mein sunn raha hu!'

[I think ye Crimson-!]

'??'

[Ye Crimson hi House of the Killers ka rachayita hai. Isne hi House of the Killers jaise bade khatarnaak organisation ko banaaya hai.]

'Koi proof Pari?'

[Proof nahi hai. But meri thinking bohut strongly uski orr point out kar rahi hai. Kyuki ye Las Vegas me bhi tha.]

'Yeah!'

[Agar usse maarna hota to woh wahi maar deta. Toh maara kyu nahi? Answer is simple! He wanted to frame you! DGSI ko issi ne shayad aapke khilaaf galat info di hai.]

'Ohhh!'

[Remember the fake police?]

Pari ke bataane par Veer ko yaad aaya. Jab unn alleys me smoke bomb feka gaya tha aur Ava ka bodyguard jo zakhmi hua tha. Woh fake police ke kaaran hi hua tha.

'Shit!!! Mujhe yaad hai. Woh fake police-!!'

[Woh issi ne bheji hongi Master. Ye Terashima log tab waha hum par nigrani rakh rahe honge. Unhone jab police ko hamla karte dekha to unhe galat message chala gaya. Oh no!!! Ye mene pehle kyu nahi realize kiya?]

[Master! Isliye wo hamare peeche hai. Jab unhone dekha ki police shoot kar rahi hai toh unhe confirm ho gaya ki hum suspect hai. But these fuckers didn't know that they were fake police officers.]

'Iska matlab woh fake police ka hamla sirf mujhe suspect confirm karwane ke liye tha!?'

[Yes!!! Lekin kuch aur bhi hai-! Wo ye assume kar rahe hai ki Ava ko hum laaye hai. But that's not true. Unke haath kuch aur bhi laga hai Master. Crimson ne unhe koi aur jankaari bhi di hai. Lekin mujhe aur analyse karne ke liye samay chahiye. I'm sorry!]

'Nahi Pari! Tumne wese hi bohut kar diya hai. It's enough and- arrggh!!!'

[Maaasterrr!!!]

Veer ka dard ab badh raha tha.

[It hurts Master. I know! But please~ Stay Calm.]

Pari ki awaaz uske andar goonji toh wo apni saanson ko durust karne laga. Pari jaanti thi ki uske Master iss waqt kis haal me the. Uske bawajood woh khud ko shaant rakhi hui thi.

Yahi thi uski personality. Agar iss waqt Pari ki koi aur personality hoti toh pakke se panic mode me chali jaati. Magar, ye Pari alag thi.

[Yes! Breathe in, Breathe out!!!]

Veer lambi-lambi, gehri par santulit saansein lene laga.

[Mene aapke kandhe par lagi bullet waale ghaav ke blood flow ko rok diya hai. Blood loss se bachaane ke liye. But sorry, I cannot remove your pain.]

[Mein ek samay par aapki body me ek kaam kar sakti hu. Right now I’m focusing on your blood flow. Sorry Master! Agar mein aur capable hoti toh aapki sensory nerves par bhi dhyaan de deti. Kam se kam kuch dard kam ho jaata.]

‘You are more than capable Pari!’

[Master...!]

‘Mera dard bhale hi kam ho jaata, par damage ko toh nahi roka jaa sakta na?’

[Y-Yes Master! Body to aapki damage tab bhi hoti.]

‘Then what’s the point? It’s okay Pari! Dard se mujhe darr nahi lagta.'

[That’s-]

[Ye sab uss Crimson ke kaaran. He damaged your body too much. I can feel the pain too. Andhruni chot zyaada hai. Muscles aur tissues me baitha woh dard-!]

[But we will pay him back. Don't worry! As long as I’m here. I won’t let you die. Now listen to me-]

'Pari!!! Tum kitna kuch karti ho mere liye-!' Veer ne usse bolte waqt beech se hi kaat diya.

Uske achanak se aise bol sunn Pari maun reh gayi.

[???]

Veer ke mann me tabhi Bhavna ka khayaal aaya. Mall me jab uski mulaqat Louis se hui thi, toh Bhavna se phone par uski baat hui thi.

Aur uss call ke baad se Veer ki ghar pe kisi se bhi baat nahi ho paayi thi. Samay hi nahi mila tha usse.

'Ghar par sab chinta kar rahe honge.'

Ye soch usne ek gehri lambi saans li.

'Mein ab ek stupid move try karne jaa raha hu. Par wahi mujhe yaha se nikaal payega.'

[What?]

Usne apna ek perr apne dusre perr ke upar tike bhaari patthar par lagaaya aur agle hi shan-

"Haaaaaaaaarrrrrrgggghhh-!!!!"

[Maaaasterrrr!!!]

Woh apni sirf physical strength ka istemaal kar usse hataane ki koshish karne laga. Kintu, Pari bechain ho uthi.

[Don't do it! Please! N-No-!!! At this rate-]

Uska poora perr kaanp raha tha. Perr ki saari nasse phatne ko ho rahi thi. Usne apni bhar taaqat lagaayi.

[What are you doing?? Stop it!!!!! Agar aise hi strain badhta gaya toh-]

Magar woh na ruka.

"Nnnngghhhh-!!!"

Uska poora muh laal hone laga. Aur agle hi pal,

"Aaaaaaaaarrrggghhhh!!!"

*Splurt*

[Nooooooo!!!]

Veer ke perr me ghutne ke neeche, peeche ka maans ka hissa phat gaya.

Aise jaise tarbooj phatata hai. Muscle Tearing. Kisi ek jagah adhik strain se, adhik pressure se andhruni maanspeshiyo ke phatne ka darr rehta tha.

Veer ke saath bhi wahi hua tha. Usne apne jeevan me kabhi itna zorr nahi lagaya tha. Isse karne ke liye insaan ko kitna jazba chahiye hota tha, ye baat Pari bakhubi jaanti thi.

Apne Master ke uss jazbe ko dekh woh stabdh bhi thi par saath hi unki aisi haalat dekh usse dard bhi ho raha tha.

Zameen par khoon bikhar gaya. Veer ke perr ke peeche ka maans ka hissa latakne laga. Uske honth daato tale dabe hue the. Woh dard sehen karne ka prayaas kar raha tha.

Agle hi shan, bina samay gavaaye usne apna dusra perr zameen par tikaaya aur uski sahaayta se woh apne haatho ko churraane me lag gaya.

Dekhte hi dekhte usne ek ek karke sabse bhaari pattharo ko alag kar diya. Aur neeche se sarak-sarak ke woh jaise taise baahar aa gaya.

Atyant buri tarah ghayal ho chuka tha woh. Pari uske perr se nikalte khoon ko rokne me lagi hui thi. Kandhe aur perr dono hi jagaho ke blood loss par wo dhyaan de rahi thi.

[M-Master-!]

'Eric ko mein nahi le jaa paunga. Woh log usse kuch nahi karenge. Zyada se zyada jail me daalenge. Wese bhi wo behosh hai. Usse pehle infirmary le jayenge. Itna samay mere liye kaafi hoga Miss Suhana se keh ke usse baahar churraane ke liye.'

Veer ko tabhi building ki floor par se qadmo ki awaaz sunaayi padi. Aur unhe sunn uski bauhe chintan me sikud gayi.

[Yaha rukna theek nahi.]

Usne mud ke dekha to wahi raasta tha ab uske saamne jiske baare me Eric ne bataaya tha. Ye wahi raasta tha jiske agal-bagal pattharo ki deewaare thi. Parantu, woh sirf sunset ki sightseeing ke liye tha. Aage jaake raasta band tha.

Fir neeche samudra hi bas tha.

'Kuch derr hum waha chhip sakte hai. Kyuki building ki taraf jaana bewakoofi hogi.'

[Mmm!]

Ye soch woh aage badh gaya.

*huff* *huff*

Woh langda-langda ke chal raha tha. Uski saansein ukhdi-ukhdi aa rahi thi. Adhkhuli aankhein liye woh jaise-taise bas ghaseet raha tha khud ko.

Uski iss haalat ko dekh Pari jaise andar hi andar tootati jaa rahi thi. Par woh nishabd rahi.

Apne chotil kandhe par haath rakh woh haafte hue aage badhta raha.

Dheere-dheere woh raaste ke chhor par pohuch raha tha. Kaafi ujaala aa raha tha waha se. Chaand ki roshni thi uss khuli jagah par.



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'Bas aa hi gaye!' Aur wo chhor par pohuch gaya.

Par waha pohuchte hi, usse apni zindagi ke sabse bade jhatko me se ek jhatka laga.

Uski aankhein felti chali gayi. Pari ka bhi wahi haal tha.

Kandhe par rakha haath uska apne aap neeche gir latak gaya. Aisa lag raha tha jaise wo kisi jung me apna sab kuch kho diya ho.

Kyuki agle hi shan, uske saamne ka manzar tha-

10 armed police officers apne hathiyaar liye. Ek seeking helicopter jo uske waha pohuchte hi hawa me udaan bhar uss par spotlight tainaat kar diya.



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Andre aur Senior police officer jo helicopter me baithe usse ghoor rahe the.

[N-No-!! It cant be-!! Master-!!!]

Anjaane me woh ussi trap me aa chuka tha jo Andre aur team biccha ke baithe the. Ye Team C thi jinhe Chris ne Veer ko pakadne ka kaam saunpa tha.

Helicopter me khade Senior officer ne mic liya aur announce kar bola,

Senior Officer : Apne aap ko hamare hawale kar do. Yahi accha hoga tumhare liye.

Veer ne sarr upar kar uss Senior Officer ko helicopter me baithe dekha aur bola,

Veer : Apne aap ko hawaale kar du? Kis liye? Kisi ki madad karne ke liye? Ya kisi ki jaan bachaane ke jurm me?

Officer 1 : Ye kya bakwas kar raha hai?

Officer 2 : Pakad gaya hai na! Shayad pagal ho gaya hai!

Senior Officer ka munda wese hi thanka hua tha. Veer ka jawaab jaise usse aur gussa dila gaya.

Senior Officer : Bewakoof ladke! Tumko ghera jaa chuka hai. Apni galti maan lo aur surrender kar do. Chalaaki ki to goliyo se boon diye jaoge.

Veer : Tum logo ko koi galat fehmi hui hai. Apni agent Terashima se pucho! Ya fir Singer Natalia se. Mein unka bodyguard-

*BANG*

Veer abhi aage kuch kehta ki tabhi ek bullet uske perro ke paas aake zameen me dhass gayi.

Senior Officer : Apne saare hathiyaar feko. Aur haath upar kar khud ko hawaale karo.

[Woh maan'ne waale nahi hai Master. Just surrender!]

Veer ne apni baayi orr dekha. Ek lohe ki bench lagi hui thi baithne ke liye. Ahista-ahista woh uss orr chal diya.

Uske chalte hi dherr saari laser lights uske badan par tik gayi. Senior officer ne usse chetaavni di par Veer ko bench par baithata dekh usne apne officers ko shoot karne se rok liya.

Senior Officer : Surrender karte ho ya?

Veer : Surrender? Kis baat ke liye? Jab mene kuch kiya hi nahi toh-!?

Senior Officer : Tumhe last warning di jaa rahi hai. Tumhare khilaaf sab kuch hai hamaare paas. Surrender kardo warna-

[M-Master! Surrender kar dijiye! Warna yaha se nahi nikal payenge. Aur ye log maan'ne waale nahi hai. Kuch bohut badi galat fehmi hui hai. Crimson ne khel khela hai.]

'Surrender? Bina galti kiye? Never in my life I will surrender!'

[Maaaaastttteerrr! Samajhne ki koshish kariye!]

Veer ne punaah upar udd rahe uss helicopter me dekha. Aur tab jaake usse apne jeevan ka dusra sabse bada jhatka laga. Senior officer aur Andre ke alawa koi aur bhi tha jo maujood tha.

'It's you-!!!!!?'

Uski aankhon ki putliyaan achambhav ke maare felti chali gayi. Pari ki khud ki rooh kaanp gayi jab usne helicopter me khadi uss ladki ko dekha toh.

[N-No-!! It can't be-!!]

Aur Veer ko saara maajra samajh aa gaya. Uska sarr fauran hi jhuka aur uske facial expressions chhip gaye.

Woh ladki kahi aur hi dekh rahi thi. Kuch pal baad hi waha ek hassi zorr se goonj uthi. Veer pagalo ki tarah hassne laga tha.

Officer 1 : Y-Ye kya-!?

Officer 2 : Pakde jaane ke darr se paagal ho gaya hai.

Officer 1 : Sir? Kya hum usse seedha jaake nahi pakad sakte?

Senior Officer : Nahi! Uske paas hathiyaar ho sakte hai. Kahi bomb wagarah na rakha ho. Keep your distance. Surrender karwa ke hi maanenge hum.

Veer idhar bas hassta raha. Uski aankhein uss ladki ki aankhon se takraayi. Aur ek kadvaahat Veer ke dil me fel gayi.

Woh sarr jhukaaya.

Senior Officer : Agar tumne co-operate nahi kiya. Toh mein fire ka order de dunga.

‘Pari!’

[Huh?]

'Beowulf's Blessings ka kitna samay baaki hai?'

[Sirf 5 seconds hi bache hai uske Master.]

‘Alright then! Pari! Mein jo ab karne jaa raha hu…! It’s a bad move!’

[Wh-What? Ye aap kya-!?]

Pari ne agle hi shan Veer ke dimaag me jhaanka aur ye pata karte hi ki woh kya karne jaa raha tha, uska sanshay bhayankar darr me badal gaya. Aur pehli baar aaj,

[YOU FUCKING IDIOTIC STUPID MASTERRRR!]

Woh uss par baras uthi. Veer jaanta tha Pari ki ye personality kitni shaant thi. Par aaj woh uss par garaj rahi thi. Uss par gussa ho rahi thi, uss se naraaz thi, niraash thi aur sabse mehatvpoorn-

Uski parvaah thi usse. Aaj usme bhay bhi tha aur ghabrahat bhi.

[Why don’t you fucking understand? There will be no Pari without you. I will cease to exist. Aap me saanse hai toh ye Pari hai. Aap me jaan hai toh mujh me jaan hai. Aap zinda ho toh mein hu. Samajhte kyu nahi ho? For fuck sake just surrender. Aap ko nahi kho sakti mein. Why don’t you fucking understand this small thing? YOU ARE THE MOST IMPORTANT TO ME!!!]

Aur usne keh diya. Pari se ab raha na gaya. Usne apna ek raaz saamne rakh diya. Agar Veer apni jaan gawaata hai, toh Pari khud apna astitv hamesha hamesha ke liye kho degi. Veer se hi Pari khud hai.

Veer kuch derr tak shaant raha. Pari ka itna bada raaz bataana ye saboot tha ki woh kitni zyaada bechain thi iss waqt. Magar Veer ne uska jawaab na diya. Aur apni baat ko punaah rakha,

‘I knew it. Kahi na kahi mein ye expect kar hi raha tha. Par yaad hai na jab tum pehli baar mere shareer me aayi thi? I’m sure tum kisi aur ko apna host bana sakti ho. Aise me-’

[YOU FUCKING STOP THIS BULLSHIT OKAY? Mene kaha na! Woh sirf one time use ke liye energy thi. Ab mein uss tarah space me move nahi kar sakti.]

Lekin usne Pari ki baat ko beech me hi kaat diya,

‘Meri baat suno Pari! Mere jaate hi…! Consume my energy! I hope tumhe kam se kam kuch na kuch toh mil hi jayega mere shareer se. That will be enough for you to travel in air. Right? Tum ek naya host dhoondh sakti ho. Ek naya shareer! Koi mujh jaise stupid se behtar haha!’

[STOP IT! PLEEAAASEEE! I BEG YOU! YOU ARE NOT STUPID. You are my Master. Surrender yourself now!!!]

Iss baar uski awaaz ruwaasi thi. Veer khud iss baar aashcharya me reh gaya.

‘T-Tum-!!? Tum ro rahi ho? Haha! Mujhe nahi pata tha meri Pari mere liye kabhi royegi. It’s good to know before dying.’

[P-Pleaaasseee~ Listen to me! They won't kill you. J-Just surrender.]

'No! I won't! Ye bohut bada setup tha Pari. Tum bhi realise kar chuki ho. Hai na? It's almost impossible to get out of it. I think Miss Suhana bhi meri help nahi kar payengi-!'

[N-Nooo-]

Pari ki awaaz me lad-khadahat thi.

‘I’m sorry Pari!!’

[???]

‘Mein kabhi ek accha host na bann paaya tumhare liye. Kaash hamara safar aur lamba hota. Kitni baatein jaan’na tha tumhare baare me. Aur ghar me sab log. Woh abhi bhi soch rahe honge mein business tour par hu. Kaash sabse ek baar acche se mil paata. Juhi my cutie. Uske liye ek chocolate factory ka vaada kiya tha mene apne aap se.’

Bol woh apni kalaayi me bandhe uss kaale dhaage ko dekhne laga jo uski maa ne pehnaaya tha.

‘Maa! Ye dhaaga mujhe bacha na saka. Still! I love you! It will be a great memory to die with…!’

Usse apni maa ke bol bhi yaad aaye jo usne phone ke waqt kahe the.

“Jaldi aana beta!”

‘Shayad-!!! Ab nahi aa paunga Maa!!’

[N-NO!! Ye kya keh rahe ho aap? J-Just stop! I can’t let you go away like that. Mene kaha na aapke jaate hi mein nahi rahungi. Chaahe mujhe kitni bhi energy hi kyu na mil jaaye. A-Aap aisa kaise kar sakte ho mere saath? YOU UNGRATEFUL BASTARDDD! STOP IT NOW! PLEAASEEE!!]

Woh sarr jhukaye-jhukaye hi muskuraaya.

‘Pari I admit-!’

[!!??]

Uski aankho se iss baar ek aasu ki boond nikal uske gaalo se behte hue neeche giri.

‘I ADMIT…! TODAY! I HAVE LOST!’

Uske hontho par muskaan ab bhi barkaraar thi. Ye muskaan thi uss bodh ki. Uss aatm-samarpan ki. Aatm-samarpan unn saamne khade hue logo ke prati nahi. Aatm-samarpan sachhayi ke prati.

Woh jaan chuka tha ki aaj zindagi aur maut ke iss khel me woh haar chuka tha. Bhale hi derr se usse bodh hua par ho chuka tha.

Woh ek bohut hi badi saazish me phass chuka tha. Itni badi ki ab uss se baahar aana lagbhag naamumkin tha.

[N-No! You can’t die like that. M-Mein aapko kuch nahi hone dungi. Listen! I have a plan! Let’s just surrender first. Th-Then-]

‘Tumhe lagta hai mein surrender karunga?’

Uska sawaal sunn Pari maun reh gayi. Woh jaanti thi iska jawaab. Veer ke shareer me aane se pehle hi Veer ne kitni taqleefe jheli thi. Ajay aur uske saathiyo ne milke usse kitna maara tha. Uski koi galti bhi nahi thi tab. Parantu adhmare hone ke bawajood, usne apna sarr nahi jhukaaya tha. Maar khaata raha lekin jhuka nahi.

Jab woh bina system ke tab nahi jhuka, toh aaj inn namoono ke saamne kaise ghutne tek sakta tha woh? Bhale hi usne ek Raja ki tarah janm nahi liya tha. Par ek Raja, ek Baadshah ki tarah marr toh sakta tha.

Idhar Senior officer ne agle hi pal mic pe announce kar diya.

Senior officer : Since, you're not cooperating we're going to execute you-!

‘Pari!’ Veer fir muskuraya. ‘Humara waqt khatam ho raha hai. Saamne khade log meri maut ka intezaar kar rahe hai. So, let me say this one last thing to you.’

[!??]

Woh apne akhiri shabd kehne jaa raha tha. Pari hamesha usse shaant rehne kehti thi. Lekin abhi uski khud ki dhadkane kisi train ke maafiq chal rahi thi. Itna darr usse kabhi mehsoos nahi hua tha. Samay ret ki tarah uski mutthi se fisal raha tha. Aisa lag raha tha woh apni sabse keemti cheez kuch hi palo me khone jaa rahi hai.

‘Pari!’

[H-Huh!!]

‘Tumne mujhe ek naya jeevan diya. Tum mera hausla bann ke mera saath nibhaati rahi. Tumne harr waqt pe meri madad ki. Shayad ye meri acchi kismat thi jo tum mujhe mili. Warna mujh jaise insaan ko toh koi dekhna pasand bhi nahi karta tha.’

[M-Master!]

‘Tumhare kaaran mein kitne pyaare logo se mila. Miss Kaera, Miss Sonia, Miss Suhana. Maa se dobaara mil paaya. Teju dii! Maasi! Shweta Maa! Bhumika Dii! Arohi, Kavya, Dada jii! Suman aur baaki sab. Karan! Nidhi ma’am! Sab se…! You gave me motivation. Unfortunately, ab ye safar yahi khatam hota hai!’

[N-Nooo!]

‘Aur ek akhiri baat-’

[??]

‘I love you Pari!’

Bas! Veer ne fir aage kuch na kaha. Lekin woh Pari ki rundhe gale se nikalti hui zorr-zorr se sisakne ki awaaz sunn paa raha tha.

Achanak hi Veer ke agal bagal ka aura badalne laga.

*Ding*

[Intimidating Presence has been equipped.]

Iss baar usne sarr utha ke upar dekha. Helicopter hawa me ab bhi tainaat tha aur uski spotlight Veer par hi tiki hui thi.

Tamaam guns ki laser sights se laser ke laal-laal bindu uske shareer ke alag-alag ango ke pharchatte udaane ke liye taiyaar the.

Light house samudri tat se lage hone ke kaaran, waha ka vatavaran tezz hawaao se ghira hua tha.

Veer ke baal hawao ke saath lehra rahe the aur khoon se lathpath hone ke bawajood woh adab ke saath uss lohe ki bench par baitha hua tha.

Itne logo me woh akela tha, par wahi tha ek jiska aura sabse zyada taqatwar tha. Jo tej uski aankho me tha, waha khada harr aadmi ye dekh thoda bhay me chala gaya.

Tamaam logo ke hone ke bawajood bhi abhi unhe iss ek ladke ko dekh andar se darr mehsoos ho raha tha.

Ek aankh khuli ek band, sarr se behta khoon, kandhe par lagi goli, jagah jagah choto ke khooni ghaav, bikhre ghane baal aur perr se latakta hua maans. Kuch yahi chhavi thi Veer ki abhi.

Fir bhi waha khada aadmi uske iss roop se darr raha tha. Veer kisi ghaayal sher ki tarah lag raha tha unhe.

Uski nazre harr ek aadmi ko dekhte hue guzri aur fir usne ek buland awaaz me kaha,

“EVEN IF I DIE TODAY! I WON’T DIE BY THE HANDS OF YOU LAPDOGS.”

Uski awaaz light house ke poore samudri tat par goonj gayi. Log usse dekh uska mazaak udaane lage. Woh khud ko confidence dene ke liye ye kar rahe the. Andar se woh sabhi jaante the ki unke shareer ke ruye khade hue the.

“Hahaha! Ye ladka paagal ho gaya hai.”

“Shayad isse apni sthiti ke baare me pata nahi hai. Haha!”

“Itne logo ke beech ghire hone ke baad bhi iski aqal ab bhi thikaane nahi aayi.”

Woh ek dusre se French me bolne lage.

Veer nahi jaanta tha ki Crimson yaha maujood tha bhi ya nahi. Lekin fir bhi usne bolna jaari rakha,

“CRIMSON!!!!! AGAR AAJ MEIN MARTA HU, TOH MERI LAASH KO DEKH KE SUNISHCHIT KAR LENA KI WOH MERI HI LAASH HAI…! WARNA AGAR MEIN YAHA SE ZINDA BACHA…! TOH TUMHE WO MAUT DUNGA JO SANSAAR NE PEHLE KABHI NAHI DEKHI HOGI!!”

Kehte hue achanak hi Veer bench ki back rest par apna ek haath rakhe apne wazan ko leke peeche jhuka.

Bench uske wazan ke kaaran apni pichli do taango ke bal peeche ko jhool gayi. Par iske pehle ki woh peeche girta, Veer ne apna wazan aage ko jhuka diya.

Aur iss baar bench waapas se apni position par aayi lekin ab Veer ka bhaar aage hone ki wajah se bench iss baar apni agli do taango par jhool gayi.

Iss se pehle ki Veer aage ki orr girta, usne punaah apna wazan peeche kar diya aur yu lagataar aage peeche karne ke baad, bench bhi uske bhaar ke chalte peeche jaati aur fir aage aati.

Aisa lag raha tha Veer ek rocking chair par baitha ho. Bench ke yu aage peeche dolne ke kaaran Veer ne ek motion bana liya tha.

Waha khade logo ne jab usse ye karte dekha toh hairat me reh gaye.

Ek armed police cop Veer par gun aim kiye upar helicopter me baithe senior officer ki orr dekha aur pucha,

“S-Sir? Kya hum shoot kare?”

Senior officer : Nahi! Behtar hoga hum isse zinda pakde. Agar zinda na pakad paaye, agar woh hamaare liye khatra banta hai, tabhi shoot karna hai. Let’s just see woh kya kar raha hai. Wese bhi woh yaha se kahi bhaag nahi sakta. Situation hamare haatho me hai.

Officer 1 : Okay Sir!

Sabhi Veer ki harqato ko jigyaasa se dekh rahe the. Aur bas uske surrender karne ka wait kar rahe the.

Senior officer ne mic haatho me liya aur Veer ko firse chetaavni di.

“Tumhare paas bas 30 seconds hai! Seedhe tareeqe se apne aap ko kanoon ke hawaale kar do. Warna-”

Par Veer toh jaise uski chetaavni ko ek kaan se sunn dusre se nikaal raha tha. Uska poora dhyaan uss helicopter me baithi uss ladki par tha.

Uska shareer ab bhi aage peeche jhool raha tha. 20 seconds guzar gaye.

10 seconds bachte hi officer ne mic par countdown karna shuru kar diya.

“Ten”

Veer abhi bhi bench par jhool raha tha.

“Nine”

Koi jawaab nahi!!

“Eight”

Veer ki aankhein uss ladki par hi thi.

“Seven”

Ab bhi koi harqat nahi.

“Six”

Par 6 hote hi, jaise hi iss baar uski bench aage ko apni do taango par jhooli,

“Five”

*DING*

Achanak uski aankhein crimson laal ho gayi.

[Beowulf’s Blessings has been activated.]

Neeche apne perr tikaate hi, uska haath jo bench ki back rest par tha, usne poori taaqat se usse aage kheencha aur agle hi pal,

*Wuh-psssh*

Woh bench hawa me 360° flip hone lagi. Time jaise slow motion me chala gaya. Samay achanak se dheeme ho gaya unn sab ke liye.

Bench hawa me flip ho rahi thi, aur ussi ke saath Veer ka haath usse pakadne ke liye taiyaar ho raha tha. Saath hi uske hontho par haiwaano waali ek muskaan chadhti jaa rahi thi.

Aur waha khade logo ki aankhein hairat ke maare felti jaa rahi thi.

Bench ke sahi angle par flip hote hi Veer ne agle hi shan uss poori bench ko apni hatheli khol ek haath se jhatt-se usse jakad liya aur uske dono perr zameen par sthirta se tik gaye.

*Whoosh*

Woh turant baayi orr palta.

Sab kuch itni jaldi hua ki logo ki aankhein saamne hue drishya ko process hi nahi kar paayi.

Ab waha khade kuch logo ke dimaag ko samajh aa raha tha ki kyu ye ladka bench par aage-peeche dol raha tha. Veer yu hi nahi aisa kar raha tha. Woh jo motion bana raha tha woh tha~

Periodic motion.

Uss bench par usne hi ye motion banaaya tha. Apne perro ko zameen ke virudhh le jaake apne bhaar se bench ko jaan-boojh ke aage peeche kiya gaya tha. Newton ke second law ke chalte woh asaani se dol sakta tha agar ye rocking chair hoti.

Par woh rocking chair nahi thi. Isliye Veer ko apne bhaar ka istemaal karna pada.

Periodic motion bann’ne ke kaaran jab Veer ne usse fir ekdum se apni Beowulf ki taaqat se kheencha, toh bhaari lohe ki bench yuhi hawa me flip ho gayi. Aur uske flip hote hi Veer ne usse thaam liya.

Uss ek chote se pal me unn sabhi ki saansein atak gayi thi. Senior officer ne jaise hi ye dekha woh chillaaya,

“THIS BASTARD!!! SHOOOOOOTTTTT!!!”

Woh dahaad lagaaya aur uske garajte hi,

*BANG* *BANG* *BANG*

*RATATATATATATA*

*BANG* *BANG* *BANG*

Dhada-dhad kar ke goliyaan barasna shuru ho gayi. Par tab tak Veer hawa ke jhoke ki tarah kayi feet ek jhatke me laangh chuka tha.

“THIS MOTHEFUCER!! KILLLL HIMMMM!! SHOOOOT THATTT BASTARDDD DOWNNN!!”

Helicopter hawa me muda aur uske neeche lagi gatling gun ne andha-dhundh firing shuru kar di.

Goliyo ki bauchhaar se waha ki deewaare aur chattaane ke chithade uddne lage. Veer ki gati itni tezz thi ki woh aage badhta jaa raha tha aur goliyaan uske nikalne ke baad khaali zameen se bhid rahi thi.

Officer ka countdown bhale hi beech me band ho gaya ho, lekin Veer ke Beowulf ka countdown chalu tha. Maatra 2 seconds hi baaki the uske deactivate hone ke liye. Ye uska akhiri daav tha.

Dimaag lagaate hue cops ne aim Veer ke aage kiya aur iska abhaas hote hi,

Veer ne apne haath me li hui uss bench se apne aap ko dhak liya. Bench usne dikhaave ke liye thodi uthaayi thi.

*BANG* *BANG* *BANG*

*KLANG* *KLANG* *KLANG*

Bullets jaa ke uss bench se takraane lagi, par kuch thi jinse Veer khud ko bacha na paaya.

*Squelch*

“Arghh!”

Ek uske perr ko cheer ke andar ghus gayi.

*Squelch*

“Urghh!”

Aur dusri uski baah ko.

Fir bhi woh ruka nahi. Senior officer ko jaise hi iss baat ka abhaas hua ki Veer ka maqsad kya hai, uski aankhein bhay ke maare fel gayi.

“Th-This bastard!!! K-Kill him!! KEEP SHOOTING! Bach ke bhaagne na paaye woh. BLOCK HIS PATH.”

Par tab tak derr ho chuki thi.

2 aur bullets Veer ke shareer ko lagi. Beowulf band hone waala tha, magar uske band hone se pehle hi, Veer ne uss uchaayi se ek lambi chhalaang maar di.

*DING*

[Beowulf’s Blessings has been deactivated.]

Ye sab kuch unhi 5 seconds me hua.

“NOOOOOOOOO!!!”

Senior officer apna gala phaad gusse me chillaaya.

Idhar samudri tat ke neeche khaayi thi. Sagar ki ufanti lehre uss chattaan se aake bhid rahi thi. Veer usme kood gaya.



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“SEARCH HIM!! Zinda bachne ne paaye woh. He must be killed now! SEARCH EVERYTHING! KEEP SHOOTING!”

Helicopter udd ke aage badha aur Veer ke doobne waali jagah par lagataar paani me fire karne laga.

Bullets paani me ghus friction ke chalte dheemi ho rahi thi aur apni trace chorrte hue andar jaane lagi.


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Veer ke shareer par ek antim bullet uske seedhe seene ko aake cheer di.

Woh neeche girta gaya. Bullets ab uss tak na pohuch paayi. Dheere dheere uski aankhein band hone lagi. It was the end.

[MAAAAAASTEEERRRR!!!]

Aankhein band hone se pehle uske mann me bas ek hi khayaal aaya,


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‘Just why?? Ava!!’

Aur uski aankhein band ho gayi.

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Idhar upar udte helicopter me uss ladki ke baal hawa me lehra rahe the.

Tabhi uske mann me ek awaaz aayi,

*DING*


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‘I’m sorry…! Veer!’

Aur udhar Mumbai me Ragini ke ghar me, apne kamre me laiti Bhavna achanak bechaini ke chalte bistar par uth ke baith gayi.
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Ab tak...

Shweta ke thar-tharaate hontho se fir bas itna hi nikla,

"Th-Thank you!!!"

Aur antatah...! Veer ki baahe apne aap Shweta ke ird gird lapit gayi. Ek thakaan bhari aah chorr woh apni sauteli maa ke saath aalingan me wahi khada raha.

Aaj ye haal tha. Na jaane waha pohuchne par kya kya hone waala tha!?


Ab aage...

*Yawn*

Palke jhapkaate hue Veer apni neend se jaaga. Badi mushqil se usse sirf 2-3 ghante ki neend naseeb hui thi. Jo bagal waale ki vajah se kharaab ho gayi. Yaani ki bagal waale logo me se ek couple apna baccha laaya hua tha. Aur harr thodi derr me woh baccha aise rota jese uska kuch loot liya ho kisi ne.

Kherr, woh sab toh theek tha par raat me toh jese ye train ke do coach yudhh bhumi me tabdeel ho chuke the. Shweta ko kal Veer ne kaafi daanta bhi tha uss baad waali harqat ke liye.

Jese tese woh sab samaapt hua aur sabhi apni apni berth par aa kar soye. Veer ko neend badi hi derr se lagi thi. Jiska kaaran Pari jaanti thi.

[Why are you taking so much stress Master? Sehat ke liye ye sahi nahi.]

Subah subah hi woh uss par chadh gayi.

'What? Ab kya hua?'

[Aap stress le rahe ho. Woh bhi bohut zyada.]

'Aisa kuch nahi hai.'

[Aisa hi hai. Stress is not good for health. Kya mein nahi jaanti? Aap kya kya sochte ho? Apni mom ko leke stress, Shweta ko lekar alag chinta, Nidhi ma'am se leke Ragini tak. Unn sab ki chinta alag. Behno ki fiqr. Apne dosto ki tension. Business ke baare me sochna. Suhana aur Kaera ke prati regret. Aur sabse khaas...]

'???'

[Uss unknown aadmi ki dii hui jaan se maar daalne ki dhamki.]

Uss insaan ka zikr aate hi Veer ki adhkhuli aankhein poore se khul gayi aur ek baar fir uske bol uske kaano me goonj gaye.


"System...! Sirf tumhaare paas nahi hai Veer!!"

Uski woh ajeeb sii muskaan aur pehli mulaqaat ka woh manzar Veer ki aankho ke saamne aa gaya.

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'Shiiitttt!!!'

[See! Agar aap ki jagah koi aur hota then I'm sure woh pressure ke chalte hi do teen baar hyperventilate kar chuka hota. Stay Calm! I'm with you at all times.]

'I...'

[I know aap uss unknown person ko lekar tension me ho bohut. Aur aapko apne se zyaada apne logo ki chinta hai. But listen to me carefully.]

'??'

[Uske baare me sochne se abhi koi fayda nahi hai. Focus here for now. Aap jitna engage rahoge yaha, ho sakta hai zyada se zyada missions mil sake yaha. That'll be beneficial for our stats. Aur hume yahi karna bhi hai. Accumulate points Master.]

'Yeah! Tum sahi ho Pari. Uss baare me sochne se tension aur badhegi. Jab samay aayega tab dekha jayega.'

[Yes!]

'Thank you Pari!'

[Mention not!]

Woh ek lambi saas lete hue jese hi palta,

'Huhh!?'

Upar bagal waali berth me Tej laiti hui muskura ke usse hi dekh rahi thi.

Tej (smiles) : Uth gaye?

Veer : Umm! Haan!

Tej : Neend nahi aayi?

Veer : Aayi! Lekin thodi derr ki.

Tej (smiles) : Same here!

Veer : Ohh! Train ruki hui hai?

Tej : Hmm!

Veer ne apni smartwatch me time dekha toh subah ke 7 baj rahe the.

Tej : Mein bhi just abhi uthi. Koi station aaya hai shayad.

Veer : Ohhh!

Tabhi usse neeche se do jaani pehchaani awaaze sunaayi dii. Toh woh apni berth pe uth ke baitha aur aage jhuk usne neeche dekha.

Aur neeche dekhte hi, Veer apne faisle par pacchtaaya. Kyu woh aage badh neeche dekha?

Darasal, upar se neeche dekhte samay Purvi theek uske neeche wali berth par baithi hui thi. Toh upar se apni maasi ke bade bade pahaado ke beech ki ghaati Veer bhali bhaati dekh paa raha tha.

'Fuccckkk!!!'

Na chaahte hue bhi uski nazre Purvi ke cleavage par jaa tiki. Kya kare? Ye drishya hote hi aise hai ki ek mard unhe dekhne par majboor ho hi jaata hai.

Bhavna jo Purvi ke theek saamne virajmaan thi woh Veer ke hilne dulne ki aahat paate hi usse upar ki orr dekhi,

Bhavna : Beta? Uth gaye? Aao! Aao neeche aa jao! Haath muh dho lo, brush kar lo. Train ruki hai abhi. Ye lo! Chai lelo aur biscuits bhi hai.

Veer ne dekha ki Purvi aur uski maa dono ek ek cup chai ka liye baithi thi aur saath me hi namkeen biscuits bhi liye hue thi.

Purvi : Arre? Sone do na usse. Beta??? So jao tum. Abhi bohut raasta baaki hai. Din me pohuchenge hum. Araam se so lo. Koi kaam thodi hai.

Jaha ek taraf Bhavna usse utha rahi thi. Toh wahi dusri taraf uski maasi Purvi usse aur bigaadne me lagi hui thi.

Bhavna : Arre par!? Ab uth hi gaya hai toh aake naashta kar lega na.

Purvi : Tum toh aur...! Khamakha bacche ki neend bigaad dii. Abhi kaun sa Jaipur aa gaya hai. Sone do baccho ko araam se.

Veer aage badh neeche jhuka. Ek baar fir usse Purvi ke gore gore aadhe doodh jhalke. Usne dekha ki Purvi ke daaye doodh par andar ek chota sa til bhi tha. Jo uske urojo ki sundarta ko ek alag hi aakarshan de raha tha.

'Fuuuucckkkkk!!!'

Aur jiska darr tha wahi hua.

Morning wood! Subah lund ka khada hona ek hasht pusht ladke ki nishaani hoti hai. Aur ye scene dekhne ke baad Veer ka lund apne poore josh me aa chuka tha. Ghar me toh Suman choos ke usse halka kar deti thi. Ya seedhe choot ya gaand me hi le leti thi. Par ab yaha? Yaha kaun usse blowjob dene aane wala tha?

Veer fatafat neeche utra. Acchi baat ye thi ki usne jeans daali hui thi. Zyaada samajh me nahi aaya uska ubhaar. Warna agar jogger ya lower hota toh neeche baithi dono mahilaaye cheekh uthati.

Purvi : Arre? Beta so lete thodi derr aur.

Veer : Nahi maasi! Ab neend nahi aayegi.

Purvi : Kyu bhala?

'Ab kese batau maasi!??'

Bhavna (smiles) : Uth gaye ho toh jao beta, pehle brush kar lo. Aur aake chai pee lo. Nashta kar lo.

Veer : H-Haan! Woh mein washroom hi jaa raha tha. Wese kaun sa station aaya hai?

Purvi : Ratlam junction pada hai beta. Abhi yahi rukegi kam se kam 10-15 minute. Toh jaldi se ho aao.

Veer : Ohh! Okay!

Veer fatafat waha se nikla aur dusre coach me aaya jaha usse sabhi log sote hue dikhaayi diye. Shweta ko neeche sota dekh usne ek chenn ki saans lii. Wahi Kavya bhi upar ghode bech ke so rahi thi. Arohi sarr ke upar chaadar daale neend ki waadiyo me thi.

Unhe chorr Veer seedha neeche laiti Suman ke paas gaya. Wahi uska ilaaj kar sakti thi abhi. Wahi usse iss samasya se nijaat dila sakti thi. Kyuki lund tha jo baithne ka naam hi nahi le raha tha.

Veer : Suman!!!! Suman!!! Tch!!!

Suman : Mmm?

Khushkismati ki baat thi jo Suman jaagi hui thi. Veer ke bulaate hi woh aankh khol usse dekhi,

Suman : Maalik?

Veer ne bina kuch kahe hi apne pant ki orr ishaara kiya. Toh Suman fauran hi saara maajra samajh gayi.

Suman (smiles) : Mere paas ek upaay hai maalik.

Veer : Paheliya mat bujhao abhi Suman. I need relief. Jald se jald iska kuch karo.

Suman : Toh suniye! Mein bathroom me jaati hu. Aur aap kuch derr yaha rukk ke aaiyega. Do baar darwaaze ko khat khatana aur mein samajh jaungi ki aap ho. Darwaaza khol ke mein aapko andar aane de dungi. Kahiye?

Veer : Risky hai. But fuck that. I'll take the risk. Tum jao fauran!

Suman (smiles) : Intezaar rahega aapka maalik!

Woh uthi, apni sandal pehen seedhe andar washroom me ghus gayi. Veer yaha bas yahi dua kar raha tha ki Shweta, Arohi ya Kavya me se koi jaag na jaaye.

Ghadi me time dekh, woh wahi kuch derr baith raha. Jab 2-3 minute guzar gaye toh woh utha aur seedha washroom ki orr chal diya.

Par abhi woh uth ke do qadam chala hi tha ki itne me coach ka darwaza khula aur ek khoob buzurg budhi aurat hilte hilte andar aayi. Dheere dheere woh aage badh rahi thi,

'Fuuuccckkkk!!! Amma jaldi karo!!!' veer mann me chillaaya.

Par bechaari budhiya toh apne slow motion me thi. Woh kaha naujavano ki tarah farraate se chal fir sakti thi?

"Alok?? Aye Alok! Maala bhook laagli aahe!" Woh kaanpte hue boli.

"Eekde ye aai!!" Alok uska ladka jo Shweta ke bagal waale block me baitha tha woh uthate hue bola.

"Hoo! Hoo!" Aur woh amma dheere dheere uski taraf jaane lagi. Uska poora shareer chaalu generator ki tarah hil raha tha.

Veer : Y-Ye aapke saath hai?

Alok : Haan!!

Veer : Inhe band kaun karega?

Alok : Ehhh?

Veer : K-Kuch nahi!

Hilti hui budhiya ke jaate hi Veer khud ko kos hadbada ke firse gate ki orr bhaaga ki,

*Thud*

Gate firse khula aur,

"Ayyye! Frooti hai, paani ki bottle hai, pepsi, thumps up, slice, maaza. Loge kya boss?"

Apni poore container ko soft drinks aur cold drinks se sajaaye ek ladka aate hue Veer se bola.

Veer : Fuuuccckkk!!!

Ladka : Ehhh? Boss ye toh nahi hai apne paas. Pepsi nahi chalegi kya?

Veer : T-Teri toh-

[ :laugh: ]

Ladka : Ayye! J-Jaata hai mein. Bhadakta kaaye ko hai? Kamaal aadmi hai.

Woh darr ke maare side hatt firse chillaate hue nikal gaya. Akhir kaar Veer apni manzil tak pohuchne me qamyaab hua.

Usne theek wesa hi kiya jesa Suman ne bataya tha. Aur uske khat-khataate hi Suman ne andar se chatakni khol dii.

*Click*

Darwaza khulte hi Veer dhadalle se andar ghusa aur palat ke usne andar se lock kar diya.

Veer : Shukr hai kisi ne dekha nahi. Ye inn logo ko kitni panchaayat rehti hai sahi me.

Suman (smiles) : Kya hua?

Veer : Kuch nahi! Suman! Jaldi!

Apne maalik ki haalat ka anumaan lagaate hue woh bina derri kiye neeche jhuki. Fatafat apne maalik ke pant ko utaar usne lund baahar nikaal fauran hi muh me leke usse geela karna shuru kar diya.

Veer : Ohh fuccckkk!!!!

Suman ke sarr par haath rakh Veer usse sehlata raha aur Suman apne maalik ke auzaar ki khidmat me lagi rahi.

Chusaayi ke baad Suman ne seedhe apni saree petticoat ke saath upar kii aur panty ko neeche utaar apni choot ke darshan diye.

Suman (smiles) : Aaiye maalik! Par dhyaan rahe, aaj aapko khade khade hi dhakke lagaane honge.

Usne apni choot pakad zorr se upar kheechte hue phaanko ko alag kar andar ke chhed ko dikhaate hue kaha.

Veer : Uff! Suman!!

Aur Veer se ab aur ruka na gaya. Lund ko choot pe set kar usne zorr se usse andar pel diya.

Suman : Aannngghhh~

Veer : Shiiitttt!!!

Jaldbaazi me usne Suman ki chaathi se blouse khola aur uski bhaari bharkam chuchhiya baahar nikaali. Unke baahar aate hi Veer ne unn nipples pe apna muh de diya.

*Slllurrrpp* *suck* *kisss*

Veer : Ufff~ Tumhaare ye doodh Suman!!

Suman (khilkhilaate hue) : Y-Ye toh aapke pasandeeda hai. Hai na? Hahaha~ Ummm~ Ssssssss~ Aahhhh maalik!!!!

Veer apne baaki dono haatho ko uske peeche le jaa kar Suman ke nange kulho ko dabochte hue dabaav bana ke usse aage dhakel kar chodne laga.

Suman : Ahhhnnn~

Veer : Fuckkk! Fuckkk! Fuccckk! Suman!!!

Suman : Uuummmmm~ Haan maalik!!!

*Phattt* *Phatttt*

Dhakke Veer poori taaqat se nahi maar raha tha. Aisa karna kaafi risky tha. Fir bhi jitna ho sakta tha Veer utna prayaas kar raha tha.

Suman : Ohhh maalikkk!!! M-Mein aane waali hu~ Ahhnnn maaa~

*Phatttt* *Phatttt*

Veer : Shiiittt!!! Shiiitttt! Shiiittt!! Mein bhi nazdeek hu Suman!!!

Ye param aanand ka anubhav jald hi apni charam seema par pohucha aur,

Suman : Maaaaaaliiiikkkk!!! Nnnghhhh~

Suman iss se pehle ki zorr se cheenkhti usne apne muh par haath rakh apni cheenkh rok lii aur itni zorr se jhari ki uska badan thar-tharaane laga.

Veer bhi ussi samay uske kuch seconds baad hi jhar gaya aur saara ka saara maal usne Suman ki choot me hi udel diya.

Veer : Aarrggh! Finally!!

Ek aah bharte hue usne lund baahar nikaala. Toh Suman usse muh se saaf karne me lag gayi. Saara bacha kucha maal woh jeebh se chaat ke gutak gayi. Uske baad paani se bhi usne lund ko dho diya.

Suman : Maalik! Ye lijiye! Par-

Veer : Huh?

Suman : Aapke joote thode geele ho gaye hai. Woh-

Veer (smiles) : Ab tum itna paani bahaogi toh geele toh honge hi na?

Suman (blushes) : Sab aapke kaaran!

Ye pehli baar tha jab Veer ne Suman ko sharmaate hue dekha tha. Woh muskuraaya aur baahar nikal gaya.

Suman kuch derr baad baahar aayi aur aake apne sthaan par baith gayi. Aur kuch issi tarah ye safar apne ant par pohuch gaya.

Din ke 1:50 ho rahe the aur train Jaipur pohuchne hi waali thi. Veer samet sabhi apne apne bags nikaal ke utarne ki taiyaari me lage hue the.

Veer : Aap log zara rukiye. Mein tab tak udhar dekh ke aata hu sabhi ko.

Purvi : Haan! Unhe bhi iss waale gate pe le aao na Veer!

Veer : Haan wahi kar raha hu.

Veer nikal ke Shweta aur baakiyo ke paas pohucha toh dekha ki Kavya abhi tak upar laiti hui thi.

Veer : Ye ladki ab tak so rahi hai?

Arohi : Mein kab se utha rahi hu. Harr baar kehti hai jab station aane waala hoga uske 2 minute pehle uthaana.

Veer bina kuch bole aage badha. Kavya ka gol gol bum usse saaf saaf apni nazro ke saamne dikhaayi de raha tha. Aur bina derri kiye,

*Chataaaaaakkkkkk*

Veer ne bechaari Kavya ke pichwaade me ek pyaar bhari thapki de maari.

"Aaaahhhhhhhhh!!!!"

Kavya achanak se apne butt par chamaat padte hi hadbada ke uthi.

Kavya : B-Bhaiyyyaaaa!!???

Veer : Ye koi time hai sone ka? Station aane waala hai.

Kavya : A-Aapne maara? Aise koi uthaata hai kya kisi ko? Buuuhhuuuuuu~

Veer : Abhi ek aur dunga! Jaldi neeche aao! Chalo!

Kavya : Waaaaa~ Jao! Gande kahi ke.

Veer : Hmm! Hu mein ganda! Khush! Ab neeche utro.

Kavya badbadaate hue binn mann ke neeche utri toh Veer sabhi ko leke gate ke paas pohucha. Aur waha se Tej aur baaki sab bhi aa chuki thi.

Saath me aate hi ek baar fir Tej ki nidar aur teekhi nazre Shweta par tik gayi. Aur bechaari Shweta sehem ke apni nigaaho ko hata lii.

Jaipur ke station me utarte hi unhe waha ki alag hawa ka ehsaas hua. Naya sheher, naye log, nayi sabhyata, nayi parampara. Sab kuch jese unke liye naya tha.

Siwae kuch ke. Veer bhi ek baar yaha aa chuka tha. Akhiri baar jab woh Suman ko leke yaha se nikla tha. Tab apni maa ke darshan usse sabse pehle yahi pe toh hue the. Aur aaj wahi maa uske saath thi.

Kismat bhi kya hi khel khelti hai. Suman ne dheere se uski kohni ko tatola aur uske kaan me boli,

Suman (smiles) : Idhar se hi aap mujhe bhaga ke le gaye the.

Veer : Bhaga ke!?

Suman (smiles) : Apna bana ke!

Veer muskuraaya.

Suman : Aur...! Woh yaad hai na aapko?

Veer : ???

Suman : Train ki woh raat. Jaha aapne bathroom me mere saath woh kiya tha...!

Woh aankh maarte hue boli. Veer ko jese hi yaad aaya. Woh thoda sharma gaya. Jo kinky game uss raat usne Suman ke saath khela tha, woh bhala kese usse bhul sakta tha?

Suman : Ab bhi agar aap woh mere saath karna chaaho. Toh kar sakte ho. Marzi aapki hai!

Woh itna bol, ek rehesyamayi muskaan liye aage badh gayi.

'Ye aurat bhi!!'

Harr baar Suman Veer ko surprise karne ka koi mauka nahi chorrti thi.

Station ke baahar aate hi coolie ke shor aur auto waalo ki bheed ne unhe gher liya.

Veer : Abhi? Kya route hai? Kaha chalna hai pehle?

Veer ne apni maa Bhavna ko dekhte hue pucha.

Bhavna : Idhar se sabse pehle hum Shyaam ke Ghar chalenge.

Veer : Kaun shyaam?

Bhavna (smiles) : Hai koi! Abhi toh auto hi karna padenge.

Veer : Auto me toh sirf teen hi banenge. Toh aise me...!

Purvi : Koi dikkat nahi hai. Teen kar lete hai na.

Veer : Theek hai!

Veer ne teen auto ko jald se jald book kiya aur ek me usne sabse pehle Purvi, Bhavna aur Tejal ko baithaaya. Toh wahi dusre me Kavya, Arohi baith gayi.

Suman iss se pehle ki Shweta ko auto me ghused apne maalik ke saath akele pal bitaati, Shweta ek qadam aage nikli. Usne khud hi tapaak se pehle bol diya.

Shweta : S-Suman! Tum bacchiyo ke saath niklo. Mein aur Veer peeche peeche aate hai.

Suman : Ohhh! J-Jii! Theek hai.

Baat ka bura na maante hue Suman dusre auto me savaar ho gayi. Aur bach gaye toh sirf Veer aur Shweta. Sautele maa aur bete!

Veer (sighs) : Chale?

Shweta : H-Haan!

Andar ghuste hue woh baithi toh Veer bhi baith gaya. Driver ne samaan utha ke peeche laada aur seat par aake baith auto chaalu kar woh sabhi waha se nikal pade.

*Vrrrrooooommmmm*

Shyaam ke ghar ki orr.

Aadhe raaste tak Veer aur Shweta dono ke beech ajeeb sii khaamoshi chhaayi hui thi.

Aur jab Shweta se aur na raha gaya toh woh bol uthi,

Shweta : W-Woh-

Veer : Hmm?

Shweta : M-Mein-

Veer : Jo kehna hai saaf saaf kahiye.

Shweta : H-Haan! Wo m-mein...! S-Sorry!

Veer : Huh? Kis baat ke liye?

Shweta : K-Kal ke liye.

Veer : Ohh!

Shweta : Kal mein woh sab nahi karna chaahti thi. P-Par pata nahi kese!? Ekdum jese sochna samajhna bhul chuki thi kuch derr ke liye. Aur mere perr apne aap hi...!

Veer : Jo hua so hua. Ahinda se aisa mat karna.

Shweta : H-Haan! Kabhi nahi!

Woh nazre neeche jhukaate hue muskuraayi. Uske hontho se muskaan hattne ka naam nahi le rahi thi.

Aur fir,

Veer : Huhhh????

Shweta bagal se jhukte hue Veer ki baah pe sarr rakh ke tik gayi. Par fir usse dhyaan bhi aaya.

'Hey bhagwaan! Ye mene kya kar diya?' Bhavnao me behte hue woh ye kar baithi. Par ab kya? Kya Veer usse khud se dur kar dega? Kya hoga ab? Chinta ke maare woh wahi jamm ke reh gayi.

Lekin jesa usne socha wesa kuch bhi na hua. Ulta ek chaukaane waala kissa janm liya.

Veer ne kuch bhi nahi kaha. Woh raasto aur naye sheher ko dekhne me vyast tha. Haan hairaan zaroor tha, par kaha kuch bhi nahi. Shweta ki toh jese kismat hi chamak gayi. Mann hi mann muskura ke woh aankhein band kar iss adhbhut ehsaas me doob gayi.

Kesa sheher? Kaun se raaste? Usse koi matlab nahi tha inn sab se. Uska toh poora sansaar uske bagal se baitha hua tha. Fir kaahe ke liye baahar dekhna?

Aur ek baar fir Shweta ke mann me jo umang thi woh aur mazboot ho gayi.

Raaste bhar fur woh kuch na boli. Bas Veer ki baah par sarr rakh ke baithi rahi. Par ye safar bhi kabhi na kabhi khatam hona hi tha. Jese hi woh sabhi bataye gaye address par pohuche, mann maar ke Shweta ko Veer se alag hona hi pada.

Sabhi Auto waalo ko paise Veer ne diye. Purvi usse dene nahi de rahi thi par Veer ne apni maasi ki ek na chalne dii idhar.

Sabhi ek main chauraahe ke nazdeek khade hue the.

Veer : Idhar se kaha? Bheed kaafi hai aur samaan bhi hai. Aise raste me khade rahe toh-

Bhavna : Yahi se andar hi hai.

Veer : Aapne unko bataya toh hai na ki hum sab aa rahe hai?

Bhavna : Nahi!

Veer : Okay! Aap pehle kabhi aayi hai yaha?

Bhavna : Haan!

Veer : Haaassshhh! Kab aayi thi?

Bhavna : Lagbhag 18 saal pehle...!

Apni maa ki baat sunte sunte Veer abhi raste par hi ladkhada ke gir jaata. Kya kaha uski maa ne? 18 saal pehle?

Veer : Aap jo bol rahi hai, woh aapke kaano me toh-

Bhavna (smiles) : Haan baba! Tum chalo toh sahi.

Veer : F-Fine!

Sabhi Bhavna ko follow karte hue ek gali se andar chalte chale gaye.

Aas paas ke log unhe hi ghoor ke dekh rahe the. Yaha tak ki jaanvar bhi.

Kavya sehem ke thoda Veer ke paas chalte chalte aa chipki.

Kavya : Bhaiya!? Ye sab hume aise kyu dekh rahe hai? H-Hum koi aliens thodi hai.

Veer : Ab mere paas kyu aayi hai? Mein toh ganda hu na?

Kavya abhi bolne waali thi ki 'haan ho aap gande.' par jese hi ek kutta uski taango ke paas aake usse soonghne laga toh bechaari Kavya ki haalat hi kharaab ho gayi.

Woh uchak ke apne Veer bhaiya se chipak gayi.

Kavya : Ahhhhnnnhahahahaha!!! Bhaiyyyyaaaa!!!

Veer : ....

Kavya : Bhaiyyyaaaaa!!!

Veer : ...

Kavya : Y-Youuu!!! Theek hai!! N-Nahi ho aap gande. S-Sorrrryyyyy!!! Dekho na uss doggy ko...! Hatao na...! E-Eeeekkkkkk!!!!

Veer bhi zyaada derr tak maraaz na reh saka. Akhir uski little princess thi Kavya. Jab itni baar sorry bola toh Veer ne perr patakte hue uss street dog ko darra ke ek jhatke me dur kar diya.

Kavya ek baar fir, ho na ho apne Bhaiya se impress hoke reh gayi.

Kavya : Th-Thank you! Hatt hi nahi raha tha.

Veer : Tumhe toh dogs pasand hai na?

Kavya : Hai! Par sirf paaltu waale. Street dogs nahi. Woh kaat sakte hai.

Veer : Waah!!!

Aur aise hi karte karte woh ek ghar ke saamne aa pohuche.

Ghar bada tha. Itna bada bhi nahi tha, par ekdum chota bhi nahi tha.

Bhavna ne aage badh gate khat-khataaya, toh andar se qareeb 35-36 saal ki ek aurat baahar aayi.

Aurat : Haan jii?

Bhavna : Kya Shyaam ghar par hai?

Aurat : Sh...yaam? Ohhhh!!! Zara rukiye!!

Woh andar gayi aur kuch derr me ek aadmi ke saath baahar nikli jo dikhne me 36-38 saal ka prateet ho raha tha.

Veer ne aurat ko bhi check kiya par usse kuch khaas jankaari nahi mili. Lekin uss aadmi ko check karte hi,

*Ding*

[Name : Shyaam
Age : 39
Bio : Shyaam, Prasad lal aur Shanti ka suputr. Travels ka business hai jo uske pita Prasad lal ne shuru kiya tha. Ab woh isse sambhaalta hai. Nature me accha hai aur apne bado ke prati aadar, sammaan rakhta hai. Host ki maa ke ghar me pehle kaam kiya karta tha. Par 24 saal pehle jo hua, uske baad se saara parivaar yahi par hai.

Favourability : 10
Relationship : Master/ Servant]

Veer ne jese hi ye padha, uske mann me confusion aur badhta hi jaa raha tha. Akhir chal kya raha tha ye sab?

24 saal pehle akhir aisa kya hua tha? Aur ye master servant?

Veer ne khamosh rehna hi behtar samjha. Ye soch ke ki uski maa zaroor kuch hi derr me uske kuch doubts clear karengi.

Shyaam baahar aaya aur sabhi ko hairat me dekhne laga.

Shyaam : J-Jii aap sab?

Bhavna (smiles) : Bhul gaye kya Shyaam?

Usne Bhavna ko upar se neeche gaur se dekha aur kuch shan me hi uske haav bhaav badal gaye.

Shyaam : D-Didii??? Aap ho????

Bhavna ne hasste hue haan me sarr hilaaya,

Bhavna : Haan! Mein! Bhavna!

Aur naam sunte hi Shyaam haath jod ke gate khol ke khada ho gaya.

Shyaam : Dhanya ho gaye hum jo aap padhaari yaha!

Kehte hue woh seedhe Bhavna ke charno me gir pada.

Veer : Hmm??

[Aisa lagta hai ki aapki mom ek badi family se belong karti hai.]

'Usme mujhe koi doubt nahi hai Pari. Saari baate wahi ishaara kar rahi hai.'

Shyaam ke perr par girte hi Bhavna ne usse uthaaya.

Bhavna : Arre arre? Theek hai! Iski koi zaroorat nahi.

Shyaam : Zaroorat kese nahi hai didi? Aapka aashirvaad hi le raha hu. P-Par aap yaha? Aise? Bin bataaye? Arre ek phone toh kiya hota didi?

Bhavna (smiles) : Shukr manao jo mujhe kam se kam ye ghar yaad tha. Kitne saalo pehle aayi thi yaha. Ab toh kaafi bada bann gaya hai.

Shyaam : Sab aapki hi toh kripa hai.

Bhavna : Aisa toh kuch bhi nahi hai Shyaam!

Uski awaaz me iss baar jese thodi udaasi thi.

Shyaam : A-Aisa hi hai didi!

Shyaam haath jode hue kaha. Badle me Bhavna bas muskura uthi.

Shyaam : Aree mein bhi kya!? Aaiye! Aaiye na aap sab. Gauri!! Jaldi! Sabko andar leke jao. Ye sab hamaare mehmaan hai.

Gauri : H-Haan!!

Gauri, Shyaam ki patni saamne ho rahi ghatna ko samajh paati ki Shyaam ne usse kaam thama diya. Woh apne pati ki baat maante hue sabhi ko andar le gayi. Aur bache kuche bags Shyaam aur Veer ne turant hi andar kar diye.

Hall me baithe sab thakaan ke baad ek raahat ki saans le rahe the. Aur Gauri unhe paani serve karne me lagi hui thi.

Shyaam : Baitaiye didi ab! Iss taraf achanak kese aana hua?

Bhavna : Hmm! Par uske pehle, iss se nahi miloge Shyaam?

Usne apne bete Veer ki orr ishaara kiya.

Shyaam : Umm! Mein inhe pehchaana nahi didi!

Bhavna (smiles) : Beta hai mera! Veer!

Usne itne garv se kaha ki uski khushi saaf saaf uske chehre par jhalak rahi thi.

Shyaam : Huuhhhhh?? M-Matlab?

Bhavna (nods) : Haan! Par abhi isse kuch bhi pata nahi hai. Aur ye hai meri badi beti! Tejal!

Tejal (haath jodte hue) : Jii! Namaste!

Shyaam apni jagah se uthate hue seedhe Veer aur Tejal ke paas aaya jo agal bagal hi baithe hue the. Aur aake jhuk ke unke saamne haath jod liya,

Shyaam : Aaj toh sach me mein dhanya ho gaya. Iss chote se ghar me aap sab ke qadam jo pad gaye.

Veer : Haath mat jodiye! Wese hi aap bade hai humse umr me.

Veer ki baat sunn Bhavna aur garv se muskuraayi.

Shyaam : Bilkul! Poore aapne apne sanskaar diye hai munna ko.

Par Shyaam ki baat aate hi Bhavna ki bauhe sikud gayi. Sanskaar dene ke liye woh thi hi kaha apne bete ke paas?

Bhavna : Shyaam! Veer aur mein ab jaake mil rahe hai.

Shyam : ???? Matlab!!?

Bhavna : Woh mujhse tab se bichhda hua tha.

Shyaam : Hey bhagwaan! Maaf kijiyega. Mujhe laga ki-

Bhavna : Koi baat nahi!

Shyaam ek samjhdaar vyakti tha. Aisi baato se mahaul bigde na isliye usne turant hi baat palat dii,

Shyaam : Agar abhi pita jii yaha hote toh kehte, "Mhaare toh bhaagya khul gaye jo sakchhaat devi jii padhaari mhaare ghar." Hahaha!!

Uske hasste hi Gauri aur Bhavna bhi hass padi.

Bhavna : Kyu? Kaha gaye hai pita jii?

Shyaam : Pita jii aur Mata jii dono ko mene teerth yaatra par bheja hua hai. Chota bhai bhi unke hi saath gaya hai. Mene kaha abhi umr hai bhai. Chal fir lete ho. Abhi ghum aao. Kyuki baad me naazuk haalat me mein apni aankho se dur nahi hone dunga. Hahahaha!

Bhavna (smiles) : Accha kiya!

Purvi jo ab tak shaant thi woh bhi fir khud se boli,

Purvi : Bhavna? Hum se nahi milwaogi?

Bhavna (smiles) : Isme milvaana kya? Shyaam tumhe bhulega thodi!

Shyaam : Ehh!? Mein...!

Bhavna : Arre Purvi hai ye!

Shyaam : Kya baat kar rahi ho didi?

Purvi : Haan bhai! Ab toh hume bhi bhul jao.

Punaah woh haath jodte hue Purvi ke paas aake perr pada.

Shyaam : Ek ke baad ek jhatke de rahi ho aap toh didi!

Bhavna (smiles) : Bas! Itne hi jhatke hai.

Shyaam : Theek hai jii! Baaki baate baad me toh. Aap sab thak gaye honge. Mein aapke nahaane dhone ka intezaam karta hu. Bas 10 minute dijiye didi mujhe. Uske baad hum sab milke baat karenge. Aur aaj se aapki icchaa tak, aap hamaare mehmaan rahenge.

Veer aur uski paltan filhaal ke liye toh yaha araam farma sakte the. Par na jaane aage kya hone waala tha.

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New York
Night ~ 11:34 PM

Sansaar ki sabse mehngi aur ameero waali iss city me kisi ek club ke bagal se alley me ek aadmi aur ek aurat aapas me khade baat kar rahe the.

Uss aadmi ke haath me ek jalti hui cigarette thi. Toh wahi uske saamne maujood uss ladki ke haath me bhi.

Ladki : What now?

Aadmi : Of course! A price must be paid.

Ladki : So? What will you do now?

Aadmi ne ek kash lagaaya aur uss khubsoorat ladki ko dekha,

Aadmi : I'll think about it.

Ladki : And what about your prey?

Aadmi : Ohhh!!!

Usne agle hi pal woh cigarette nikaal ke seedhe pheki,


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Aur muskuraate hue apne coat me haath daal waha se palat gaya,

"Festival is approaching sweetie! Festival is approaching...!"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
This update consists of 4.8k words. Harr update badi length ka aa raha hai guys. Toh like thokna nahi bhulne ka. Aur revos rakhna bhi. Keep supporting!

Dhanyavaad! ✨
Ding bhavana Shweta ka samna hua 🧟🧟🧟🧟🧟tej ka reaction as a big sis 🧔🧔🧔 shyam new servant let see wats next
 

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What hurts more than a betrayal from a trustworthy.
Exactly!
First of all thanks for giving such an unexpected update
:thanx:
Ek baat to pta chal gyi hai agar apki story padhni hai to expect the unexpected wala mindset hi kaam karega.
Of course! Story is too complex. Ye woh story nahi jaha aap predict kar ke plot bata sako. Jabki mene aage ke 2 plots ke naam bhi pehle se bata ke rakhe hai. Then too you can't take a guess what it's going to be.
Raat ke 3 baje or ye update.
Shant kamre mein jaise jaise update aage badh rha hai waise waise heartbeat bhi tez or audible hoti ja rahi hai
Damn! You read that this late at night? Mere ko to 2 ke baad neend chadh jaati. :yawn:
Emotions and suggestions boht sare hai
But is update ke baad sawal bohot kam reh gye hai.
Gutthiyaan abhi bohut hai. Sulajh ke bhi uljhane aur aati jayengi.
Photo frame: Grace Martin.
That's why we saw crimson at hospital.
Each and everything was planned.
from that party invitation,,, Charlotte killing,,, appointment of veer as bodyguard,,, those fake emotions....
Everything was fuckin setup
Goddamn...
:laugh: Abhi toh poori tarah se sab reveal kiya jayega. Poora setip samjhaya jayega. Asli hosh tab udenge.
Most importantly she is one with system.
Sayad usne koi singing ki ability buy kri hogi.
That's why she's a great singer though.
:smartm:
Keeping that aside,,, what an update man jitna tarif kru kam hai.
Kuch best parts lge unko jroor mention krna chaunga
Thanks man! ✨
Is part ka apna ek alag hi thrill mehsus hua.
Jo aura wha likha hai.
Wo padte padte feel kiya ja sakta hai without any doubt.
Bhagwan bohot kam logo ko aisi khubi se nawazta hai.
Well done 👍
:thank_you:
Or iss part ke kya hi kehne sara kinematics se lekar SHM oscillatory sab samjha Diya.
Force=∆momentum.
Bohot khoob.
Padhaayi toh aati hi jayegi kahani me. :laugh: Ye pehli baar nahi hai. Nightwalker waale me chemistry ko darshaya gaya tha. Socha yaha thoda physics ke saath khel lu. :smile2:
Or bhi bohot parts the ache but ye dono mera favourite the.

Ab aage terishma or mr pilot ko apna ehsan chukana banta hai.
Filhaal dono behosh hai.
Behrhaal dekhna ye bhi zaroori Banta hai ki jab ekbar system apna Target complete krne ka notification de Diya tab bhi vo action reverse kaise ho sakega.
Parantu hero k survival ke liye ye zaroori bhi hai
Dekhna hai ki writer saab ne iske baare me kya socha hai.
Yahi toh dekhne laayak hoga. :approve:
Expectation and suggestions to yehi hai ki ava ko villan ki tarah potray na kiya jaye.
Kya mene ye pehle nahi bataaya? :?: Ava trinity ka hissa hai you know!?
Pichla guess to almost sahi hua hai
Ki betray krne wala koi known hi hai bas naming Galt ho gyi.
Betrayal karne waale ki kahani dekhni hai abhi hume.
As promised apne story ko bohot bhayankar turn de Diya is update ke madhyam se.
Mene pehle hi keh diya tha aane waale 3 updates kahani ki kaaya palat denge. :declare:
Hope karte hai aage bhi itne hi frequently update mile.
Next update kaera par hoga.
:nana: Kaera wala update thoda aage push kiya jaa sakta hai. Moderations hote rehte hai likhte waqt. Jab likhne baithunga to uss hisaab se decide karunga.
But ek request hai veer k liye ab curiosity badh gyi hai to veer wale part ko bhi thoda include kariye ga.
Probability abhi ye hai ki yahi ke part ko dikhaya jaa sakta hai.
All the best for further updates.
Best wishes
Thanks a lot for this lovely revo. Keep supporting as usual. :five: ✨
 

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Is story me may be crimson ke paas system jab nahi tha to wah bhi bahut gayaa- gujraa ( lowest quality, no have any skill person) tha, magar uski sochh itni yaa phir bilkul bhi achhi nahi thi jis wajeh se use mission boore kaam waale ( illegal activities, terrorist attack) waale milte the, yahaa system ke baare me jaise system jiske mind me jaata hai, uski soch-vichaaro ko uski bhaavnao ko ( thoughts, emotions etc) apne ander observed kar leta hai usi hisaab se wah mission deta hai, jaise veer ke case me uska system ( pari) bahut emotionally Rahi hai bahut care karne waali Rahi ,etc

Jahaa Tak us unknown ladki ( jiske paas bhi system hai) uski sochh bhi veer ki soch se different hai, is hisaab se system bhi use thode alag type ke mission deta hai yaa kaho target deta hai, uski soch hai bini kisi samjhote ke museebat ko jad se hatas dena, matlab uske raaste koi bhi aata hai to wah use apne raaste se poori tareh hataa deti hai matlab kill karna ya kisi aur ke jareeye marwaa Dena etc, kisi ke doshi ko sudharne ke bajaye use raaste se hatas deti hai.

Yahaa Tak baat hai veer ke case me to Kai log uske against the ek samay, matlab use dislike karte the jabki unme se kaiyo ko usne sudhaara balki unhe raaste se hataane ke bajaaye



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Hi
It's good to be bought back
I am a silent reader from the days of gossip and wished to remain so
Mujhe yaad ho ju man. Introduction ki zaroorat nahi. Kaha the itne din? :Munch:
But some stories are very life changing or some points in stories that put me in this position to comment
I am following your every update from the start even I have commented many times in your story also that time i am very free from life and wasting my time
That's other part it's not that very much important
Ohh thanks a lot! That's good to hear man. ✨
Yes! I remember your comments. And I remember you as well. Mein apni audience ko acche se jaanta hu. Sabke upar nazar rehti hai meri. :D
So coming to the story in the wildest dream I never thought that veer and pari will be separated because and that too because of so called "AVA"
But you show bitter part of life that if you entrust someone and put your life on the line that person only betrays you That really hurts and it has happened to veer this time
No one actually thought that Ava would be that girl. :D Even though I showed her in the very previous update. I built that vibe around her that people believed her to be a harmless waifu (Wife material.) And then it turned out to be her. Veer got betrayed. :sigh2: However, there must be a reason. :budhau:
But you show bitter part of life that if you entrust someone and put your life on the line that person only betrays you That really hurts and it has happened to veer this time
Yahi zindagi hai.
But i guess Ava has got her own reasons to do this
But I think here show must go on
Next updates be like about
What will happen to veer??
Will he come back or take revenge or
Introduction of new character
Just keep reading man. :D
I wanna know one thing from writer that only "VEER" is only HERO
Questions are lot time is less and waiting is more
Hope writer will Contradict here more
BUT IF IT IS LAST FROM CHARACTER "VEER" WILL SURELY MISS HIM FOR REST OF THIS STORY
Upar voting padhne ka. ;) What are the options? You should go with the majority you know. :hint:
AND TO THE WRITER HATS OFF FOR THIS MASTER PIECE STORY
HOPE YOU WILL WRITE MANY MORE AND ENTERTAIN MORE AND MORE
BYE FOR NOW
HOPE TO COMMENT HERE SOON
Thanks a lot man! ✨
Well mein toh likhta rahunga. I hope issi tarah ju ke revos aate rahenge. :five: ✨
 

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मित्र,बहुत दिन के बाद आए है। यह अर्क मेरे ऊपर से जा रहा है बोलके कुछ मंतब्य नहीं कर रहे थे। लेकिन आज रहा नहीं गया। यह कौन तरह का बात हो गया की वीर का अंतिम सांस निकल गया। यह तो सही है की आपका इस काहानी मे शुरू से ही आप बोलते आए है trinity के बारे मे। इस trinity मे आभा शामिल है लेकिन इसके वब्जूद ऐसा गद्दारी क्यों। खिचड़ी क्या पक रहा है समझ मे नहीं आ रहा है। आपका अगला अनुच्छेद के लिए बेसब्री से इंतज़ार करेंगे। नमस्कार
 
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