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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

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Update - 121 ~ A trip to the village (2)

Ab tak...

Dekha ki waha teen shaks khade hue the. Ya teen aurte!

Purvi samet Bhavna, Tejal dono ne hi Veer ko aate dekha.

Par...!

Do aise nazre thi jo aapas me jaa ke itni zorr se takraayi ki aas paas ke logo ko bhi unki bhidant mehsoos ho gayi.

Aur unn do nazro ki maalkin thi.

Bhavna aur Shweta!!!!


Ab aage...

Jab sansaar me ek jagah par kuch ghatit ho raha hota hai toh wahi dusri jagah par bhi kuch na kuch chal raha hota hai. Yahi toh duniya hai. Alag alag insaan ek hi samay par alag alag parishthitiyo se hokar guzarte hai.

Kuch aisa hi haal Arun ka tha. Purvi Tejal aur Bhavna ke saath nikal gayi thi. Shaam ko toh usne phone karke bataya tha par nikalte waqt ek baar bhi nahi jataaya.

Jab Arun apne ghar par kaam kaaj se lauta toh taala dekh ke usne bas ek thakaan bhari aah bhari. Jab aurte aapas me mili bhagat baitha leti thi na toh fir toh woh mardo ko aise ignore karti thi jese jethalal iyer ko karta hai.

Arun jab taala khol ghar ke andar aaya toh bagal me hi table par chipka ek sticky note usse dikhaayi diya. Usme likhawat saaf saaf Purvi ki thi,

'Mein jaa rahi hu. Kab aaungi woh sab phone par bata dungi. Subah shaam maid aayegi, jhaadu pocha bartan ke liye. Khana aap bana ke kha lena. Baahar ka mat khaana meri gerr haziri me. Maid advance me paise maange toh ek rupaya bhi nahi dena. Keh dena jab didi aayengi toh hisaab karengi. Dawayi wagarah sab TV waale showcase ke right drawer me hai. Aur kuch ho toh call kar lena. Bye!'

Itna sab padh ke Arun bas mann hi mann muskura ke baith gaya.

"Batao bhai! Mujhse zyada chinta toh inhe kaam waali ki hai. Chal bhai Arun! Lag jaa kaam par. Khana banaana hai. Aaj samajh aa raha hai ki khana banaana kitna mushqil hota hai. *sigh* "

Aur Arun haath muh dho ke lag gaya apne kaamo me.

Wahi yaha Ragini Veer aur baakiyo ko jab chorr ke aayi tabhi usse car me baithe baithe hi ehsaas hua,

'Hey bhagwaan ye mene kya kar diya?'

Woh ghabraate hue apne seene me haath rakhi. Pichli baar Veer jab Las Vegas gaya tha toh jaane se pehle itni chumma chaati hui thi unki, aur Ragini ne fir woh din kese kaate the ye sirf wahi jaanti thi.

Iss baar toh seedhe uski choot ko choos ke gaya tha Veer. Bhala ab kese samay katega uska?

'Nahiiiii!!! Y-Ye mene kya kar diya? Sab iss Veer ki galti hai. Oh god!!!'

Woh apni choot par haath rakhte hue khud ko aane waale dino ke liye taiyaar karne lagi. Kyuki harr raat ab usse Veer ki yaad hi sataane waali thi.

Ye toh tha swadesh ka haal. Par wahi desh ke baahar kisi dusre desh me ek khubsoorat mahila hospital par baithi baithi apne mobile ko ghoor ke dekh rahi thi.

Uska apna taapmaan badhe ya na badhe par uske gaalo ka taapmaan zaroor badha hua tha.

'Don't make me fall for you! Thank you!'

Baar baar woh line padh ke Suhana ka dil zorr zorr se dhadakne par majboor ho raha tha.

'What did he mean by that? P-Pagal hai kya? I'm- I'm married already.'

"Dinner is here~"

Darwaaza khula aur Sonia ek tray me khaana lete hue andar aayi. Apni choti behan ko dekh Suhana hadbada gayi aur usne fauran hi Veer ka message apni chat se delete kar diya.

Sonia : Huh? Kya hua?

Suhana : K-Kuch nahi! Tum firse le aayi? Nurse log hai toh na yaha?

Sonia : Nurse se hi leke aayi hu. Chaliye ab fatafat khaiye. Aur ye phone me kya dekh rahi thi?

Suhana : Kuch nahi!

Sonia : Don't lie to me! Aap kuch dekh rahi thi.

Usne aage badh seedhe Suhana ka phone hi chhina liya,

Suhana : Sonuuuu!!???

Sonia : Huh? Ohhh! Veer? Aap Veer se baat kar rahi thi?

Suhana : I...

Sonia : Hmm? Gift bheja hai aapne? Kya bheja hai?

Suhana : Kuch nahi! Bas aise hi...

Sonia : Bataiaye na!

Suhana : Mene kaha na kuch nahi hai. Woh toh usne yaha help kii thi isliye mene bhej diya. It's nothing. Lao mujhe khana do!

Sonia : O-Okay!

Sharmaate hue Suhana ek raahat ki saans lete hue khaane me lag gayi. Accha hua jo sahi samay par usne Veer ka message delete kar diya tha. Warna...!

***

Mumbai Central
Night ~ 10:45 PM


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*Ding Dong*

Station ke shor ne jese sab ko hosh me laaya. Bhavna aur Shweta dono ek dusre ko dekh rahi thi. Aisa laga jese waqt hi tham gaya ho. Dono ek dusre ko pehli baar dekh rahi thi, fir bhi dono ko jese abhaas ho gaya tha. Apne pratidwandi ka.

'This is bad...!'

Veer ne ye dekhte hi khud ko kosna shuru kar diya. Kya soch ke usne Shweta ko saath chalne ke liye haan kaha tha? Uski aqal tab kya ghaas charne chali gayi thi?

*Ding*

[Intimidating Presence has been equipped.]

Ek Raja ke aura me nahaate hue Veer bina derri kiye aage badha aur unn dono maao ke beech aaya. Usne baari baari dono ko dekha. Waha ka vatavaran tang ho rakha tha. Aur ye sabhi mehsoos kar paa rahe the.

Veer : Mujhe station par koi vivaad nahi chahiye. Sabke mann me questions hai I know. Ek baar apni apni seats par hum baith jaaye uske baad hi koi charcha hogi. Is that clear?

Jab uski commanding tone unn sabhi ne suni, toh sab ke badan me ek sihran daud gayi. Unn sabhi aurto ke beech akela mard tha woh. Aur jo tej uski aankho me tha, jis qadar woh apni buland awaaz me unhe nirdesh de raha tha, uski soorat, uski adaa, sabhi khadi aurte waha haami bharne par majboor ho gayi. Ek chu tak nahi nikli kisi ke muh se.

Kamaal tha Intimidating Presence ka. Jesa naam wesa kaam.

Sab ne haan me apni gardan hilaayi aur uske turant baad hi unki train ka announcement hua, jo jald hi nikalne waali thi.

Veer : Chalo!

Baari baari ek ek karke woh sabhi Veer ke peeche chal dii. Uske dono kandho par bags the, saath hi dono haatho me bhi. Arohi aur Kavya peeche se usse dekh ke hi mann hi mann uski tareefo ke pul baandh rahi thi.

Itna sab kuch uthaane ke baad bhi uski peeth zara bhi nahi jhuki. Veer ke liye toh jese ye uski chhingli ka kaam tha.

Suman ki nazre ek taq Bhavna par hi tiki hui thi. Uski aankho me chamak thi. Bhavna bhi kayi baar usse asmanjas me dekhi par jese woh confused sii prateet ho rahi thi. Aur Suman ye dekh bas mann hi mann hass rahi thi.

Peeche chal rahi Tej bhi apna trolley bag ghaseetate hue kabhi apni maa ko dekhti toh kabhi uss anjaan aurat ko.

Shweta!!

Woh jese samajh gayi thi turant hi ki ye aurat kaun thi.

Tej : Aapne usse roka kyu nahi kal? Haan?

Woh apni maa ke paas aate hue virodh me boli,

Bhavna : Kya?

Tej : Veer ko! Usse roka kyu nahi aapne ghar me hi?

Bhavna : Tumhe lagta hai ki woh rukta?

Tej : Kyu nahi? Aap maa ho. Agar aapne manaaya hota toh-

Bhavna (Tej ko dekhte hue) : Woh nahi rukta.

Tej : Kaise?

Bhavna : Maa hu uski! Jaanti hu kyu naraaz hai mujhse. Waaqif hu uski udaasi se. Aur ye bhi jaanti hu ki kab tak woh mujhse rootha rahega.

Tej : A-Aap samajh nahi rahi hai. Dekha na aapne? Kaun kaun aaya hai uske saath. Aap kuch nahi jaanti hai mom apne bete ke baare me. Literally, 20 saal baad mil rahe ho aap ek dusre se.

Bhavna : Accha? Aur tum mujhse zyaada jaanti ho?

Uski baat par Tej ko Nidhi dwara bataayi gayi Veer ki saari baatein yaad aayi. Aur woh guroor me apni maa se boli,

Tej : Bilkul! Mein kuch aisi baate jaanti hu jo aap bhi nahi jaanti.

Bhavna : Ohhh!?

Tej : Isliye keh rahi hu. Aap ne manaya hota toh...! Woh rukk jaata. Aap sach me kuch nahi jaanti! Ek baar koshish toh-

Bhavna jo chal rahi thi woh achanak hi rukk gayi.

Tej : Huh?

Tej bhi saath me rukte hue apni maa ko prashn bhari nigaaho se dekhi.

Bhavna : Tej!

Tej : Hmm?

Bhavna : Tumse 9 mahine zyaada jaanti hu mein usse.

Bas! Ye vaakya hi kaafi tha Tej ko sab kuch bataane ke liye. Woh ek vaakya jese Tej ke saare bolo par haawi pad gaya. Maa thi woh Veer ki. Toh kya hua agar woh uss se 20 saal baad mil rahi thi. Kya hua agar unke beech woh communication nahi tha abhi. Iska matlab ye toh nahi ki Veer ab uski santaan hona chorr chuka tha?

Woh bina kuch kahe firse aage badh gayi. Aur Tej bas wahi khadi rahi.

"Tch!" Nichle honth ko daato tale dabaaye antatah woh bhi peeche peeche chal dii.

Bheed toh thi.


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Logo ki bheed se idhar udhar hote hue idhar Veer apne second AC ke compartment ke darwaaze par jab pohucha.

"Le chai chai chai chai~" Ek chai waala ruki train me fatafat bhaagte hue ek compartment se dusre compartment me ghusa.

*Ding Dong*

Aur fir se announcement hua,

"Yaatri gann kripya dhyaan de. Mumbai se Jaipur jaane waali train xxxxx kuch hi samay me platform kramaank xx se chalne waali hai."

Veer : Bheed kaafi hai. Pehle aap log andar hoiye. Mein aata hu fir.

Suman : Jii maali- J-Jii! Veer jii!

Suman sabse pehle andar gayi toh ussi ke peeche Arohi aur Kavya bhi andar ho lii.

Bhavna jab Veer ke saamne aayi toh Veer ne usse dekha,

Veer : Hamara compartment ye left wala hai. Aur baaki inn logo ka right wala.

Bhavna : Hmm!

Balhaar ne reservation toh araam se karwa diya tha. Par compartment agal bagal waale mile the. Yaani alag alag coach.

Bhavna upar chadhi toh uske peeche hi Purvi bhi chadhte hue andar ho gayi. Par jaane se pehle woh Veer pe ek nazar daalna nahi bhuli.

Shweta aayi aur Veer ko ek baar dekh woh bhi chadh ke daaye waale coach me chali gayi. Woh jese kuch kehna chaahti thi. Par baahar khade aur bhi logo ke kaaran woh bina kuch kahe hi bheetar chal dii.

Akhir me Tej jo sabse peeche chal rahi thi woh bhi aa gayi.

Veer : Rukiye!

Tej : ???

Veer : Suitcase mujhe de dijiye!

Tej : Arre nahi! Mein rakh lungi.

Veer : Chot lagi hai aapko! Bhuliye mat!

Uske kehne par Tej chup chaap apne bhai ko dekhne lagi. Uske bhai ko iss baat ka abhi bhi khayaal tha.

Tej : It's- It's really okay!

Veer : Nahi! Aap andar jaiye! Mein leke aata hu.

Tej : No way! Tumhare paas pehle hi itna hai. Aur mein itni kamzor nahi hu ki ek chota sa-

Veer : Baat kamzori ki nahi hai.

Woh kehte hue uske kaan ke paas jhuka aur dheere se bola,

"I know you are strong. Par baat chot ki hai. Pressure se wound khul sakta hai firse. Andar chaliye! Mein laata hu!"

Veer ke bol sunn Tej ko aisa laga jese kap-kapaati thand ki sheet-leher me kisi ne usse garm kambal udha diya ho.

Ek garm sa ehsaas, woh garmaahat, Tej ne jese apne dil me mehsoos kii. Aur apne bhai ki baat maan woh andar chal ke baaye coach ki orr mud gayi.

Usne palat ke dekha toh Veer peeche peeche hi aa raha tha. Aur woh ye dekh khush ho gayi.

Andar Bhavna aur Purvi dono apni seat numbers dekh jagah dhundne me lagi thi. Aur kuch derri ke baad hi unhe apni jagah mil gayi.

Bhavna : Ohh! Ye waali hai.

Purvi : Hmm? Haan! Ye dono upar neeche ki apni hai. Samaan rakh dete hai pehle.

Fatafat apna samaan berth ke neeche daalte hue dono hi Veer aur Tej ka intezaar karne lagi.

Tej khaali haath aayi toh Bhavna ne uss se uske bag ka pucha, jiska jawaab usse agle hi shan mil gaya Veer ko dekhte hue.

Veer ne kuch bhi kahe bina Tej ka suitcase bhi andar kiya aur fir ahista se bola,

Veer : Mein ye baaki samaan rakh ke aata hu.

Tej (nods) : Hmm!

Aur woh nikal gaya. Uske jaate hi teeno stree apni seats par virajmaan ho gayi. Veer ne aisa agar kaha hai ki woh aayega toh zaahir hai woh unke saath hi safar karne wala tha. Na ki apne unn parivaar waalo ke saath. Ye soch ke mann hi mann Tej samet Bhavna aur Purvi bhi kaafi khush ho gayi.

Idhar Veer iss coach se nikal jab bagal waale coach me jese hi aaya. Toh pehle hi usse Kavya ki khil-khilaati hui awaaz sunayi pad gayi,

'Ye ladki bhi! Kitni zorr se hassti hai.'

[Par uske baad bhi aap kabhi nahi bhadakte uss par.]

'Well...!'

[Kyuki woh aapki chaheeti hai.]

'Y-Yeah!'

[Aur aap usse pyaar bhi karte ho.]

'Hmm!'

[Aur-]

'That's it! Ahem! Hum baad me baat karenge iss par.'

[ :smile2: ]

"Arre! Veer bhaiya aa gaye hahaha~"

Kavya apni berth par baithe paav ko latka ke zorr se hilaate hue boli.

Kavya : Bhaiya! Ye chaaro apni seats hai hehe~ Poori full! Upar neeeche agal bagal. Line se hai hamari!

Veer : Haan toh? Ticket me line se hi numbers diye hai. Toh obviously line se hi milegi.

Kavya (blushes) : O-Ohh!

Arohi : Tum itni excited ho Kavya? Aisi kya baat hai?

Kavya : Ohh c'mon dii! Arre mein kitne saalo baad train me safar kar rahi hu. Jab choti thi tab gayi thi. Uske baad kahi jaane nahi mila. Mama ki shaadi me bhi aap log ho aaye the par mujhe nahi le gaye the. Hmph~ Aur uske baad aaj jaa rahi hu. Woh bhi ek unknown gaav me. Woh bhi Veer bhaiya ke saath. Aur wo bhi bina mummy papa ke. Akele! Hehehehe~

Uska excitement usse dekh ke hi pata chal raha tha. Usse aise dekh Veer jo ab tak tensed tha woh khud muskura baitha.

Kavya : Par ek minute! Ehhh? Bhaiya aapki seat?

Veer (smiles) : Meri seat bagal waale coach me hai.

Kavya : Whaaaatttt??? Kyuuuuu????

Woh zorr se chillaayi!

Veer : Arreee?? Kyu kya? Reservation mera pehle unhone kar diya tha toh seat uss hisaab se mili. Mujhe kya pata tha tum sab log bhi baad me kood padoge?

Kavya : B-But-

Idhar Shweta ne jese hi Veer ke muh se 'unhone' shabd suna. Uski maayus aankho me jese ek chamak aa gayi. Ek umang jaagi jese.

Veer ne 'maa' keh ke nahi bulaaya Bhavna ko. Kya ye sanket tha? Kya uske paas abhi bhi mauka tha? Woh taktaki lagaaye Veer ko hi dekhne lagi.

Suman (smiles) : Kood padoge se aapka kya matlab hai Veer jii? Kya aap nahi chaahte the ki hum sab aaye?

Kavya : Haan! Boliye boliye! Jawaab dijiye! We want to know! Nation wants to know...!!!

Kavya ki baat par Arohi halke se hassi. Aur bechaara Veer,

Veer : Mein-

Khamosh reh gaya!

Suman (smiles) : Kherr chorriye! Aap samaan toh rakh dijiye! Kab se liye hue hai!

Veer : Ohh right!

Veer ne saara samaan berth ke neeche kiya aur fir woh seat par baith gaya.

Kavya ne itne me ek chips ka packet khola toh Veer ke bagal se baith woh uske saath share karte hue khaane lagi.

Arohi bhi Veer ke bagal se baithi hui thi. Woh window seat par thi. Usse sight seeing behad pasand thi. Isliye window seat hi leti thi woh. Aur saath me haatho me ek book hoti thi. Harr safar me ye uski aadat thi.

*Munch* *Munch*

Kavya : Bhaiya! *nom* *nom* Hum kab tak pohuchenge?

Veer : Din me!

Kavya : Huhh? Din me?

Veer : Lagbhag 15 ghante ka route hai. Toh tum khud gin lo!

Kavya : Hmm! 11 baje niklegi na train!? 11 toh baj gaye. *munch*

Veer : Bas chalti hi hogi.

Aur uske kehte hi train ne ek dhakka khaaya aur apna sanket de diya.

Veer : Lo! Chal dii!

Arohi : Veer?

Veer : Hmm?

Arohi : Wese! Hum flight se bhi toh jaa sakte the na??

Veer : I don't know! Unhone train ki tickets kii toh fir aapki bhi wahi kari mene.

Arohi : Ohh!

Veer : Aur tum ye harr baar lays ka green flavour kyu laati ho?

Kavya : Because it's the BESTTTT flavour!!!! *nom* *nom*

Arohi (smiles) : Kya tumhe pasand nahi!?

Ek chip woh packet se nikaalte hue puchi.

Veer : Well! Utna nahi jitna dark blue wala hota hai.

Arohi : Ohh! You like spice!!? Huh!!

Veer ko pata nahi kya hua par usne Arohi ki aankho me dekha aur tapaak se bol diya,

Veer : Yes! I love spice!

Jis qadar usne ye kaha tha, aisa laga jese uska ishaara kahi aur bhi tha. Aur isse bhaanpte hi Arohi ke gaal laal ho gaye. Woh fauran hi muh ferrte hue baahar dekhne lagi.

'Fuck! What did I just-!??'

Mann palatne ke liye usne apna phone nikaal Ragini ko ek message daala ki train chal dii hai. Aur fir woh uth gaya.

Veer : Alright! Mein chalta hu. Agar koi bhi dikkat ho toh bas bata dena. Okay?

Kavya : Ehhhh!!? Bhaiyaaa???

Veer (smiles) : What?

Kavya : Aap yahi rukiye na!!!

Veer : Sadly, mujhe jaana hai waha.

Kavya : Ahhh! Right Right! Woh didi!! Mujhe bhi unse milna hai.

Veer : Huh?

Arohi : Mujhe bhi!!!

Veer : Wait!

Suman : Kyu nahi? Shuru se hi ye safar atpata sa lag raha hai. Agar hum unse baat nahi karenge toh aage ka safar aur bhi atpata ho jayega hum sab ke liye.

Kavya : Ohh! Suman aunty aap sach me sabse best ho!!!!

Woh uth ke Suman se chipak gayi.

Suman : Fufufu~ Toh chale?

Kavya : Yes yes!!!

Dono behne uth ke waha se nikal gayi. Aur Shweta akeli waha reh ke ghabra uthi.

Shweta (uthate hue) : M-Mein bhi-

Uske uthate hi Suman ne usse pakad ke waapas baitha diya,

Suman : Aap yahi rukiye tab tak! Mein mil ke aati hu na. Yaha pe kisi ka hona bhi toh zaroori hai na? Mein ho aau, fir aap chali jaana?

Shweta : P-Par-

Suman (smiles) : Chaliye Veer jii!

Bina Shweta ko bolne ka mauka diye, Suman Veer ke aage chal dii.

Usne Veer ka haath thaama hua tha. Aisa lag raha tha jese ek biwi apne pati ke sang chal rahi ho.

Veer : Umm...! Suman!

Suman : Hmm?

Veer ne ishaara jab apne haath ki orr kiya toh Suman ne ek pal me hi uska haath chorr diya.

Veer : Woh! I think sab galat samjhenge toh-

Suman (nazre jhukaate hue) : Maaf kijiye maalik! Bhavnao me beh gayi thi.

Kehte hue woh palat ke firse jaane lagi par achanak hi rukk gayi. Uski mulaayam baah ko Veer jo jakde hue tha.

Suman : Maalik?

Veer : No! Sorry! Tum meri ho! Log kya sochenge, farq nahi padna chahiye mujhe. Chalo!

Uski baah ko chorr Veer ne uski hatheli ko pakda aur aage chal diya. Suman ke hontho par pyaari sii ek muskaan sajj gayi.

Idhar Arohi aur Kavya dono hi Tejal Purvi aur Bhavna ki berth ke paas pohuch gayi thi.

Kavya : Umm...!

Tej (smiles) : Arre? Kavya? Arohi? Aao na!

Woh dono hi aake baith gayi.

Tej : Mom!!! Aapko pata hai ye dono kaun hai? Meri behne!!! Ye Arohi aur ye Kavya!

Usne uth ke dono ko apne gale se laga liya.

Kavya : Umm mein-

Tej (smiles) : Ye tum dono ki Tai jii hai! Meri aur Veer ki mom!

Kavya : O-Ohh! Namaste Tai jii! Umm-

Arohi : N-Namaste!

Bhavna (smiles) : Namaste! Tum dono...! Sumitra ki beti ho?

Kavya : Ahhh? Aap mummy ko jaanti ho?

Bhavna (smiles) : Kyu nahi jaanungi? Idhar aao meri bacchiyo!

Usne apni baah khol dono ko bulaaya toh dono uske paas aayi. Aur dono ko hi Bhavna ne apne gale se laga liya.

Bhavna : Boht pyaare bacche hai Sumitra ke. *Muah*

Uski iss baat pe Tejal ka muh bigad gaya. Pranjal kameene ki jo yaad aa gayi thi usse. Agar abhi woh Pranjal ki kartoote bata deti toh shayad uski maa apne shabd waapas le leti.

Kavya : T-Tai jii? Aap? Aap fir ghar me kyu nahi thi? Ghar me aapke baare me koi baate kyu nahi karta? Hume toh kuch pata hi nahi tha aapke baare me. Ek photo tak nahi hai aapki. Agar aap Veer bhaiya ki mummy ho toh aap kaha thi ab tak?

Usne bebaak andaaz me sab puch liya.

Bhavna : Beta! Ye lambi kahani hai.

Kavya : Mein sunn lungi!

Bhavna (smiles) : Ussi ke liye toh hum sab iss safar par jaa rahe hai.

Arohi : Past me kuch bada hua tha. Hai na?

Arohi ki baat par Bhavna ne peni nazar se usse dekha. Ye ladki hoshiyaar thi.

Bhavna (nods) : Hmm!

Arohi : K-Kya...!? Kya isliye aapne tau jii ko chorra?

Bhavna (sighs) : Nahi! Woh ghatna alag hai. Par haan! Woh ghatna bhi saath hi judi hui hai. Tum dono chal rahi ho toh sab pata chalega tumhe. Wese!? Sumitra kesi hai?

Arohi : Woh theek hai!

Bhavna (smiles) : Hmm! Apni maasi se toh mil lo!

Dono ne mud ke saamne baithi Purvi ko dekha jo pehle se hi muskura ke apni baahe felaaye unka intezaar kar rahi thi. Dono khushi se uth ke Purvi ke paas gayi toh Purvi ne pyaar se unhe apne seene se laga liya.

Purvi (smiles) : Tum dono boht pyaari ho!

Kavya : Thank you! Hehe! Ahh! Bhaiya aa gaye!!

Itne me Veer bhi Suman ke saath aa chuka tha.

Suman dono Bhavna aur Purvi ko namaste kar ekdum Bhavna ke saamne baith gayi. Aur usse hi dekhne lagi,

Bhavna : ???

Bechaari Bhavna ki samajh nahi aa raha tha ki bhala ye aurat usse aise kyu dekh rahi thi? Par kahi na kahi jese uska mann bhi usse kuch sanket dene ki koshish kar raha tha.

Bhavna : Aap? Kya mein aapko jaanti hu?

Aur ab Suman se jese na raha gaya. Uski aankho se achanak hi aasu nikal pade. Veer hairat me bagal me baithe sab dekh raha tha.

Aur tabhi,

Suman : Didi!!!!

Kehte hue Suman aage badh seedhe Bhavna ke gale se lag gayi.

'Whattttt???'

Stabdh hue Veer saamne ke drishya ko dekh raha tha. Didi? Par Suman ka toh koi rishta hi nahi tha Bhavna se. Fir didi? Kya muh boli didi maana tha usne?

'Just what is going on????'

[Tamaasha dekhte rahiye! Don't stop them. When it crosses the limit. Only then cease them!]

Veer chup chaap baithe sab kuch ghatit hota dekhne laga. Aur baaki sab bhi. Ye sab chal kya raha tha?

Bhavna : Huhh??

Suman namm aankhein liye peeche hui aur apni chaathi par haath rakhte hue boli,

"M-Mein...! Mein Suman Didi!!!"

Bhavna : S-Suman? Huhhhh??!!

Pehle toh Bhavna ki kuch samajh na aaya. Par uske baad hi jese uske dimaag me kuch aaya aur woh bhauchakki sii Suman ko dekh chillaayi,

Bhavna : Sumannnn???!!!!

Suman (nods) : Haan didi!!! Suman!!! Mein Suman! Aapki Suman!!!!

Uske itna kehte hi Bhavna ne usse kass ke apne seene se laga liya.

Bhavna : Hey bhagwaannn!!! Sumannn!!!

Suman : Didiiiiii!!! *sniff*

'Ye dono? Ek dusre ko itne acche se jaanti hai? Akhir maajra kya hai?'

[Just witness!]

Bhavna :T-Tum yaha? Mujhe vishwaas nahi ho raha. Tum! Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho? Haan? M-Mein toh pehchaan hi na paayi tumhe.

Suman (smiles) : Kese pehchaanti aap? Tab mein choti thi. *sniff* Aur ab lagbhag 20 saal baad dekh rahi hai aap mujhe. Par aap abhi bhi utni hi khubsoorat hai. Bilkul bhi nahi badhi hai aapki umr.

Suman ko iss tarah bhaavuk hote Veer ne boht hi kam dekha tha. Matlab saaf tha. Suman aur Bhavna ke beech ek gehra rishta tha.

Bhavna : Accha toh? Aur khud ko toh dekho? Haan? Kaha hai baal bacche? Shaadi ho gayi hai na?

Suman : Ek beti hai. Sonali! Woh ghar pe hai. Aur...! Mene apne pati ko chorr diya hai.

Bhavna : K-Kyu??

Toh Suman uske kaano me jhuki aur dheere se boli, "Maalik ke hote mujhe kisi aur mard ki kya zaroorat?"

Sunte hi Bhavna ka shareer kaanp utha. Ek sansani bhara vichaar uske mastishq se hote hue guzra.

Bhavna : I-Iska matlab!?

Usne ek jhatke me Veer ki orr dekha.

Veer : Hmm?

Aur fir Suman ko. Jo rehesyamayi tareeqe se muskura rahi thi. Aur agle hi pal usse saara maajra samajh aa gaya. Uska sarr neeche jhuk gaya.

Bhavna : Suman t-tum...!?

Suman (smiles) : Hmm?

Veer idhar poori tarah se confused tha.

'What the-!?? What was that look? Woh mujhe aise kyu dekhi?'

[Shayad...!]

'Shayad?'

[Shayad unhe pata chal gaya.]

'Kya???'

[Ki aapne Suman ke saath sex kiya hai.]

'Whaaaatttttttt???'

[Hmm! That look says it all. She seems disappointed.]

'Fucccckkk!!! P-Par ek minute! Suman ne kyu?'

[Suman ne kuch soch rakha hoga. I don't know. I'm trying to calculate everything. Rokiye mat unhe. Jo ho raha hai hone dijiye filhaal. We'll get clues.]

'Shiiitttt!!!'

Veer unn dono ko bareeki se dekhne laga.

Bhavna : Par tum-!?

Suman : Mein yaha kese?

Bhavna : Haan!

Suman : Lambi kahani hai. Safar me aage bataungi. Jese jese aap apne ateet ko kholengi, wese wese mere ateet ke panne bhi saamne aate jayenge.

Bhavna (frowns) : T-Tum!!

Suman : Par aapko swasth dekh boht accha laga. Ab lag raha hai jese sab kuch theek ho jayega.

Bhavna (sighs) : Mujhe pehle se hi andaaza ho jaana chahiye tha.

Suman : Aap kitna hi khilaaf kyu na ho le. Iske virodh me kyu na chali jaaye. Ye hoke hi rahega.

Bhavna : Sh-Shayad tum sahi ho!

Veer ko unki baate zara bhi samajh nahi aa rahi thi. Aur Veer hi kya? Waha baithe kisi ko bhi samajh nahi aa rahi thi siwae Purvi ke.

Purvi : Aur mujhse nahi milogi?

Suman : A-Aap?

Purvi (smiles) : Andaaza kyu nahi lagaati?

Suman ne jab asmanjas me Bhavna ko dekha toh Bhavna ne muskura ke kaha,

Bhavna : Ye Purvi hai!

Suman : Ahhh!!?! Didi!? A-Aap bhi?

Purvi (smiles) : Hmm!

Aur dono saheliyo ki tarah ek dusre se lipat gayi.

Tej : Koi mujhe batayega ki yaha kya ho raha hai? Haan?

Suman (smiles) : Bas ye samajh lijiye! Ki saheliya aapas me mil rahi hai.

Tej : M-Mom??

Bhavna : Hmm! Filhaal yahi kehna sahi hoga.

Tej : Urghh!!

Aur iss tarah Suman Purvi aur Bhavna ki aapas me puraani yaado ko lekar baate hone lagi. Par Veer ki kuch bhi samajh nahi aa raha tha. Usse itna zaroor pata tha ki Suman Bhavna aur Purvi ke saath ateet me judi hui thi. Par kese?? Iska jawaab hi usse dhundna tha. Usne ek aur baat notice kii thi. Woh ye ki Purvi aur Bhavna dono hi usse ab kuch zyaada hi chhup chhup ke dekh rahi thi.

Raat ke 11:50 ho chuke the. Aur dheere dheere ab train ki lights band honi shuru ho gayi thi. Log khaa pee ke apni apni berth par sone jaa rahe the.

Bhavna ne itne me bag se ek tiffin nikaala aur usse khol ke unn sab ko dekhte hue boli, khaas kar Veer se.

Bhavna : Beta! Ye lo! Thoda sa tum sab kha lo!

Tiffin me uske haath ka banaya hua khaana tha. Veer ne jese hi dekha uska mann sach me lalcha gaya. Apni maa ke haath ka khaana.

Kavya : Ohh ohh! Kya hai?

Bhavna (smiles) : Puri aur aloo ki sabzi!

Kavya : Ohh! Achaar bhi?

Bhavna : Haan haan! Aam ka mirchi ka dono ka hai. Lo na!

Kavya : Haan mein lungi! Mujhe roll kar ke do na tai jii!

Bhavna (smiles) : Kyu nahi!

Arohi (blushes) : Kavya? Hum ghar se khaa ke hi aaye the na?

Kavya : Haan par mujhe firse bhook lag gayi.

Jaha Arohi sharma rahi thi toh wahi Bhavna aur Purvi dono hi Kavya ke ravaiyye se behad khush thi.

Bhavna : V-Veer!? Tum-

Veer : Nahi! Mene ghar me kha liya tha.

Bhavna : O-Ohh!

Tej : Veer???

Purvi : Thoda sa kha lo beta?

Veer : Mujhe waqai bhook nahi hai. Maasi!

Purvi ne udaasi me Bhavna ko dekha. Jese kehna chaah rahi ho ki mene koshish ki, par tumhara ladka nahi maana.

Veer : Aur aap!

Tej : Huh?

Veer : Aapki aaj dressing badalni hai. Mein leke aaya hu. Chaliye!

Tej : Nahi! Iski koi zaroorat nahi hai!

Veer : Bilkul nahi! Mrinal jii ne kaha tha ki yaad se dressing badal dena.

Tej : Par...!

Veer : Dikhaiye!

Tej : Toh ab top utaaru yaha?

Veer : ....

Tej (smiles) : Aise upar nahi hoga.

Tej ne apne full sleaved maroon top ki taraf ishaara karte hue kaha. Upar karna asaan nahi tha.

Arohi : Kya hua?

Tej : Ohh kuch nahi!

Veer : Pranjal ne haath me kechi maari thi inhe.

Kavya aur Arohi : K-Kyaaaaa????

Veer : Hmm! Ussi raat fir mein usse ghar par chorr ke gaya tha.

Arohi : Toh ye sab hua tha? I'm so sorrryyy!!!

Kavya : S-Sorryyyy!!!

Woh dono sarr jhuka ke Tej se maafi maangi.

Tej : Arre arre? Isme tum maafi kyu maang rahi ho? It's really okay! I'm fine!

Arohi : I just-

Veer : Arohi dii! Inhe washroom me le jaa kar please inki dressing change karwa dijiye!

Arohi : Haan! Kyu nahi!

Tej : But-

Arohi : Nahi! Aap chaliye! Abhi!

Woh Tej ko pakad ke medic box ke saath seedhe usse washroom me le gayi.

Suman : Ab mujhe bhi chalna chahiye! Koi aur bhi hai, jo betaab hai yaha aane ke liye. Ijaazat dijiye!

Suman uth ke Bhavna aur Purvi ki taraf haami bhar waha se fauran hi nikal gayi.

Toh wahi Shweta jo ab tak akele baithi hui thi. Uske mann me na jaane kese kese drishya aa rahe the.

Ek drishya me usne dekha, ki Bhavna Veer ko apne gale se lagaaye usse choom rahi hai. Aur uski taraf dekh ke haivaano waali hassi hass rahi hai.

Toh dusre drishya me usse dikhaayi diya. Ki usse Tej aur Purvi pakdi hui hai. Aur Bhavna train me Veer ke saath baith ke ravaana ho rahi hai. Woh zorr zorr se guhaar laga rahi hai. Par Tejal aur Purvi hasste hue usse chorrne ka naam nahi le rahi.

"N-Nahiiii!!!!"

Woh jhatka maarte hue aankh khol ke baith gayi. Poora chehra uska paseene se bheega hua tha.

"H-Hey bhagwaan! Nahi! Mera baccha!!!"

Tab tak Suman bhi aa pohuchi.

Suman : Ab aap jaa sakti hai.

Shweta : H-Haan!

Fatafat woh kuch samaan utha ke waha se nikal gayi.

Toh wahi yaha se Arohi aur Tej bhi waapas aa chuki thi. Aur woh bhi ab waha se apne coach ke liye nikal gayi.

Abhi unhe gaye thodi derr hi hui thi ki Shweta haafte hue unke coach me aa dhamki.

Aur bas, do nazre firse aapas me jaa takraayi.

Shweta aur Bhavna ki!

Shweta jaanti thi ki uske saamne ye baithi Veer ki asli maa thi. Aur uski sautan. Par Bhavna nahi jaanti thi ki ye aurat Veer ki sauteli maa hai.

Veer : Aap yaha?

Shweta : H-Haan mein ye! B-Beta! Mein ye pulaav laayi thi. Sabke liye thoda thoda banaya tha. Th-Thoda kha lo.

Veer : Umm! Mujhe bhook nahi hai asal me.

Shweta : Ahh?

Uski nazar achanak hi wahi side table par rakhe tiffin par padi. Jo Bhavna ke paas rakha hua tha. Iska matlab? Iska matlab Veer ne Bhavna ke haath ka khaana kha liya tha?

Khud se hi mann me soch woh itna udaas ho gayi ki usse rona aa gaya.

Tej : Aaiye aaiye! Baithiye!!! Mom! Aap jaanti hai ye kaun hai?

Tej jese intezaar hi kar rahi thi iss aurat ke aane ka. Uski nazre aag fek rahi thi.

Bhavna : ???

Tej : Ye hai hamaare Veer ki dusri maa!! Uski sauteli Maa!! Kyu? Mene sahi kaha na?

Shweta : M-Mein-

Shweta itna darr gayi ki uska badan tak hilne laga. Inn sabhi ke beech woh ek akeli fass gayi thi. Upar se Veer bhi kuch nahi keh raha tha.

Tej : Veer!

Veer : Huh?

Tej : Mene socha tha mein tumse permission lungi uske baad hi ye sab bataungi. Par ab mujhse aur chup raha nahi jayega.

Veer : ???

Tej jo safar ki shuruaat se hi ek kharaab mood me thi. Shweta ko dekhne ke baad woh seedha bhadak uthi.

Tej : Kuch puch rahi hu aapse! Aap mere bhai ki sauteli maa hai ya nahi?

Shweta : H-Haan! M-Mein hu! P-Par-

Tej (smiles) : Mom! Ab jo mein aapko bataane jaa rahi hu. Aap dhyaan se suniyega!

Purvi : Tej? Araam se! Shor nahi beta!

Tej : Nahi Maasi! Ab aur chup nahi reh sakti. Wahiyaat giri ki bhi hadd hoti hai.

Bhavna : Tej??

Tej : Ye aurat!!! Aapko pata hai isne kya kiya tha? Kya kya kar ke baithi hai ye?

Bhavna : ???

Veer ko ek abhaas hua. Shayad Tej koi bhaanda phodne waali thi. Woh uthne hi waala tha ki,

[Wait Master!]

'Pari? Mujhe rokna hoga Tejal dii ko. Warna woh kuch-'

[No! Abhi nahi! Hone do jo ho raha hai. Just watch!]

'Shit!!!'

Majbooran woh rukk gaya.

Tej : Jab aap Veer ko chorr ke gayi thi mom!! Toh ye aurat!! Ye aurat kuch saal baad hamaare Veer ki zindagi me aayi. Aur pata hai isne kya kiya mom?? Mere bhai ki zindagi nark bana dii isne! Nark!!!

Bhavna : !!!??

Purvi : Tej dheere!!

Tej (bhaavuk hote hue) : Ye aurat ne...! Mom! Mujhse kaha bhi nahi jaa raha hai. Iss aurat ne itne dard aur itne kasht diye hai hamaare Veer ko ki ginaane par bhi gin nahi paogi aap.

Bhavna : Tej??

Tej : Mom!!! Iss aurat ne shadiyantra racha tha. Y-Ye shadiyantra kar rahi thi hamare Veer ke khilaaf. Usse jaydaad se baahar karne ke liye. Issi ki vajah se bhai darr darr bhatakta raha. Ghar se baahar nikalwa diya tha isne mom Veer ko. Ek number ki jhoothi, makkaar aur kapti aurat hai ye...!

Shweta : Nahhhiiiiii!!!!

Shweta kaanp uthi. Uski aankho se aasu dhaar bann ke behne lage. Harr ek shabd usse uski buri harqato ki yaad dila raha tha. Woh ghinoni kartoote jo usne ateet me kii thi. Kaise woh saazisho ka hissa thi. Ussi ki glaani ke bhaar se toh ab tak ubhar nahi paa rahi thi woh. Aur idhar Tej ek ke baad ek waar karti jaa rahi thi.

Tej : Dekhiye isse! Dekhiye kese naatak kar ke Veer ko behlaane fuslaane aayi hai. Taaki humse Veer ko dur kar sake Mom! Yahi iska lakshya hai. Sharm nahi aayi aapko ek baar bhi? Thuu hai aapke upar!! Khud ka beta nahi tha toh jalan ke maare sautele bete ko ghar se baahar fikwa diya? Arre bhagwaan bhi maaf nahi karega aapko. Meri haay lagegi aapko!

Shweta : N-Nahhhiiii!!! Chup ho jao!! Bhagwaan ke liye...! *sniff*

Tej : Chup ho jau? Kyu chup ho jau?? Aisi ghinoni harqat karne waali aurat ko toh jail ki salakho ke peeche hona chahiye. Uske baad bhi mere bhai ka badapann toh dekho. Mom!! Inhe aur inki beti ko Veer bachaane gaya. Jaan jokhim daal ke. Upar se inn madam ko rehne ki jagah bhi dilvaayi. Fir bhi syaanapanti toh dekho!! You are not only a disgrace to the family. But you're a disgrace to yourself as well!!!

Uske itne kadve shabd sunn Shweta bechaari ka dil dahal gaya. Woh toh yaha bas pyaar se Veer ko tiffin khilaane aayi thi. Ek ke baad ek jese uss se saari cheeze chhinti jaa rahi thi.

Tej : Mom! Iss aurat ke kaaran mere bhai ko ghar se nikaal diya gaya. Woh raat me baarish me bheegta koi thikaana dhundta raha par koi na aaya uski madad ke liye. Uska itna dardnaak haadsa hua ki ICU me kuch din admit tha. Par ek insaan uss ghar se dekhne nahi aaya mom hamare Veer ko!!! Ek insaan bhi nahiii!!! Bhala ho unn Nidhi ma'am ka! Jinhone Veer ko panaah dii. Tab jab woh ekdum akela tha!! Par ye- ye toh- sach me...!

Tej aur hamle karti ki itne me Bhavna ne ishaare se rok diya. Woh haafte hue gusse me shaant hoke baith gayi. Shweta apna muh apne haatho se chhipaaye bas sisak sisak ke roye jaa rahi thi.

Tabhi Bhavna ne bas ek sawaal pucha,

"Kyu?"

Uske gaal se ek aasu ki boond beh ke neeche giri. Purvi ka bhi yahi haal tha.

Bhavna : Kyu kiya? Mere bacche ke saath aisa?

Aur Shweta aatm glaani me aur doob gayi. Woh fafkaarte hue rone lagi. Bechaari ka haal behaal tha.

Ye sawaal toh jese aur uske dil ko tode jaa raha tha. Aur sach me, Shweta ke paas iska koi jawaab nahi tha.

Bas! Bohut hua!

Woh uthi aur rote hue bhaagte hue waha se apna muh chhipa ke nikal gayi.

Uske jaate hi Purvi ne Veer ko gale se laga ke choom liya.

Purvi : Aur kya kaha tha tune mujhse? Ki ghar me sab mera khayaal rakhte hai? Sab badhiya hai! Ye khayaal rakhte hai tera? *sniff* Haan? Bol? Jhooth bolta hai apni maasi se? Itne dard chhipaaye kya soch raha tha? Ki kabhi maa aur maasi ko pata nahi chalega? Bol?

Veer : Mein-

Bhavna turant hi uth ke aayi aur Purvi ke haatho se Veer ka chehra lete hue apne pait se laga liya.

Bhavna : Ahinda se aisa kabhi nahi hona chahiye. K-Kabhi nahi! Galti meri hai. Jo uss daldal me tujhe chorr gayi. Mujhe kya pata tha ki woh sab-

Veer : ...

Tej : Itne atyachaar kiye hai na unn logo ne mere bhai par. Mann toh karta hai ki-

Veer : It's okay!

Bhavna ne pyaar se iss baar poore garv se apne bete ko chooma aur uske bagal se baith gayi.

Veer : Mein ek minute! Aata hu!

Tej : Kaha jaa rahe ho? Ab ye mat kehna ki tumhe unki chinta ho rahi hai Veer!?

Veer : Bas dekhne jaa raha hu. Check karne! Unhe kisi cheez ki zaroorat toh nahi.

Bhavna ne usse nahi roka. Aur Tej ne bhi.

Veer jese hi utha, woh poori tezzi me dusre coach ki orr jaane laga. Pata nahi kyu par uska dil jese paseej gaya. Usse ek ghabrahat bhi ho rahi thi.

Woh jese hi dusre coach me jaane ke liye washroom ke paas tak aaya toh saamne ka drishya dekh uski saans hi atak gayi.

"N-Noo!"

Shweta bas ek qadam dur the darwaaze se neeche girne ke liye.

Woh besudh sii wahi khadi hui thi. Tezz raftaar me train chalti jaa rahi thi aur zorrdaar hawaaein ki lehre uski zulfo ko udaati jaa rahi thi. Usse na hosh tha na hawaas.

Aur agle hi pal,

Uska ek perr apne aap aage badh gaya.

Uska shareer girte hue hawa ke jhatke se baayi orr itne tezzi se gaya. Par tabhi,

"Huhh!??"

Ek mazboot haath uske pait ke ird gird lapta aur ek hi jhatke me uske badan ko kheechte hue andar kar liya.

Shweta jese apni besudh haalat se jaagi. Gaalo par aasu sajaaye woh uss haath ke maalik ke chehre ko jab dekhi toh,

"PAAGAL HO GAYI HO KYA AAP??"

"Ye kya harqat thi?? Dimaag hai ya nahi aap me? Kuch sochti bhi ho ya nahiii? Haan? Ek baar bhi Bhumika dii ke baare me nahi socha? Aqal kaha thi aapki ye karte waqt??? Haan? Bolo???"

Veer usse lagataar daate jaa raha tha. Par Shweta? Woh khush thi. Khushi ke maare uske aasu nahi ruk rahe the.

Veer ki daant ke bol bhi aaj jese usse amrit samaan lag rahe the.

Woh foot foot kar rote hue uske seene se lag gayi. Usne uski t shirt ko itni kass ke bheencha hua tha ki Veer khud wahi murti sa jamm ke reh gaya.

Aur tab Shweta ne uske seene par kaan lagaaye uski dhadkane suni.

*Badump* *Badump*

Sunte hi uske aasu aur zorro se nikal pade. Kyuki ye saboot tha.

He cared! He actually cared!

Veer ko uski parvaah thi. Fiqr thi. Tabhi toh itna daat raha tha. Tabhi toh uske peeche peeche aaya. Tabhi toh usse bachaaya. Aur tabhi toh uski dhadkane... Itni tezz thi.

Shweta ke thar-tharaate hontho se fir bas itna hi nikla,

"Th-Thank you!!!"

Aur antatah...! Veer ki baahe apne aap Shweta ke ird gird lapit gayi. Ek thakaan bhari aah chorr woh apni sauteli maa ke saath aalingan me wahi khada raha.

Aaj ye haal tha. Na jaane waha pohuchne par kya kya hone waala tha!?
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Ye update hai more than 6.8k words ka. It's a huge mega update. Mene kaafi detailing me likha hai isse. Kyuki mera mann tha iss hisse ko bade acche se darshaane ka. I hope aap ko pasand aaya hoga. Toh likes zaroor thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka guys.
Dhanyavaad! ✨
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Badhiya update tha.

Iss update ka review kya likhu samjh nai aa rha fir bhi try krta hu..
Isme sochne kya bhai? :laughing: Jo dil me aaye likh do.
Ragini lagta hai Veer ko har thode din me apna bag pack krta dekh ab samjhne lagi hai maybe wo akeli Veer ki life me center banke nai reh sakti aur iss baat se samjhauta krna uske chalu kr diya hai. Fir bhi dil ko udaas hone se kaun rok sakta hai. Dil ne dimaag ka kab hi suna hai..? Lekin iss baar Veer ne Ragini ke dil aur mann ke tassali ke liye kuch de diya hai wahi jo bahut se londe ladkiyo ko nahi de pate wo hai orgasm. There is a saying that "food is way to a man's heart" ab maine ye banai hai "orgasm is way to a woman's heart".😅
Waise jaise Ragini ka character develop ho rha aane wale time me wo ek bahut suljhi hui personality bante ja rahi jisko apna haq aur dayara dono pata hai.
Samjhauta toh karna hi padega bhaaya. Par abhi Ragini ne ye baat realize nahi kii hai. Uska kaaran ye hai ki kisi ne bhi Veer ki gf ko nahi dekha. Basically hai hi nahi koi uski gf officially. Jis vajah se sab yahi soch rahi hai ki Veer hathiyaane ke liye asaan hai. Par woh sabhi ye baat nahi jaanti ki baaki aur bhi ladkiya hai jinke dilo me Veer ke liye aham jagah bann chuki hai. Aur unme se Ragini ek hai. Jab pata chalega tab boht bawaal hoega. :D
Now lets come to Veer's most loyal lover cum slave Suman. Suman kisi bhi kimat pe Veer ko sabse uncha dekhna chahti hai wo Veer ke khushi ke liye kisi bhi had tak jaa sakti hai. Uske lagbhag sare sapne Veer ke liye hi hai lekin kuch sapne uske khud ke bhi jisme se ek hai Veer usko puri tarah se jaan jaye uske saare raaz Veer ko uske bare me sab kuch pata ho aur dusra sapna hai Veer ka ek ansh jo Veer uski kokh me use de. Dekhte uske kismat me aage kye likha hai.
Suman sirf naam ki slave nahi hai. Woh ye proof karti hai ki poorn roop se slave hona kya hota hai. Ek slave fir apni khushiya pehle nahi dekhta, ya apni icchaye pehle nahi rakhta. Jo kuch bhi sochna hota hai woh pehle unke master ke liye hota hai. Aur ye baat Suman acche se samajhti hai. :smartm:
Ab baat krte hai Nidhi ki Veer aur uska rishta ab bahut gehra hota dikh rha. Bhale hi dono ke bich thode nok-jhok ho rhe lekin ye bhi ek tarah se pyar ko darshta hai. Ab Nidhi bhi Veer pe haq jatane lagi hai. Khair inke rishte me bas ek maryada ki patli diwar hi bachi hai dekhna hoga ye kab giregi wrna dil me pyar toh dono ke hi hai.
Jese hi Nidhi ne ye accept kiya ki woh Veer se pyaar karne lagi hai ye deewaar boht kamzor ho jayegi.
Kavya aur arohi ki kya hi baat ki jaye wo toh jitna ho sake Veer ke sath samay bitana chahte hai uske paas rehna chahte hai bhale hi Arohi apne feeling Kavya ki tarah express nahi krti magar dil me toh uske bhi yehi tha. Wo apne bhai se judi har ek cheej me shamil hona chahte hai aise unhe sath ghumne ka bhi mauka mil jaye ye toh sone pe suhaga hogya. Dekhna hoga aane wale safar me dono kya gul khilati hai
Safar behad romaanch se bharpoor hai bhai. Dekhte jaiye aage kya kya hota hai. Haan par saath me zaroor bane rehna hoga aapko. :budhau:
Shweta.. waise ek bahut hi ajeeb cheej hui iss update pe idk if I am overthinking but wo kuch pal jab Veer aur Shweta ki nazre mili mujhe lagta hai ye bahut bada aur imp point tha iss update ka. Kyuki Veer ab wo londa nahi rha jo libir libir krta tha ab sab usko dete hai full izzat. Aise me mujhe lagta hai Veer ne yaa toh kuch dekha ya usko kuch laga cause Alpha aur Signa traits ke rehte wo aise emotion me beh jayega ?
Waise Shweta ke pov se dekhe toh ye uske liye bahut badi jeet hai. Shayad abtak usko koi hope nazar nahi aai hogi lekin Veer ke iss tarah uske liye bhi ticket krane se usko ab asha ki kiran dikhne lagi hogi. Dekho kahi kuch aur competition ke chalte Shweta ke boob se sach me dudh naa aane lage 🤣🤣.
Darasal uss waqt jab Shweta ne dekha Veer ko toh uski aankho me tadap thi. Saath jaane ki. Desperation jisse hum kehte hai. Aur wahi Veer dekh khamosh reh gaye. Aur anjaane me tickets ke liye haan keh gaya. Jiska nateeza humne dekha hi. :D
Waise update ka end bhi bahut khatrnak huva hai. Ab dekhna hoga kiske Boob me jyada taqat I mean dudh hai. Aage bahut maza aane wala hai.
:laugh: Vote kariye! Kaun se boob pair jeetenge? :hinthint:
Waiting for next update
Thanks a lot man for such a big and lovely revo. :five:
Aam taur par itna sab boht kam hi log likhte hai aur baate rakhte hai. Mujhe khushi hoti hai ki ju harr baar apni baate rakhte ho. Aur issi ke liye hum writers likhte hai. :smile2: Apna kaam karte hai. Toh aise hi bane rahiyega!
Boht boht dhanyavaad ek baar fir se. :thank_you:
 

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Your updates always raise the curiosity
Keep it up
Ye toh kaam hai apun ka. :smarty:
Bohot he majeedar update! Yaha se rahasaya romanch ki yatra shuru hogi
"Yaatri gann kripya dhyaan de. Mumbai se Delhi jaane waali train xxxxxxx kuch hi samay me platform kramank xx par aa rahi hai."

Aap ne ek ek shabdh Accurate likha hai, 😄😄😄kaise kar lete ho bhai?
Observation! :smartm: :hidee:

क्या खूब लिखा है।
बहुत से सवाल खड़े हो चुके है
जिनके जबाब देने का काम अब वक्त पर छोड़ दिया।
Waqt sabse bada hai. :budhau:
यहाँ महिला जंग के बीच वीर फसता नजर आ रहा है।
रागिनी के अंग के तार छिड़ गए है। वो आग में तपेगी।

सवाल बहुत है जबाब आपके उपडते देगे।
बस उम्मीद है। जल्दी जल्दी उपडते आये
Updates aane me thoda samay toh lagega hi. Kyuki ek toh quality aur uske baad update ki length. Aap khud samajhdaar hai. :D
Fantastic superb update Bhavna or Shweta ab aamne saamne hy Shweta k liye ye movement kafi awkward hnea wala hy jab uski sautan Uske aamne hy waiting for next update
Thanks man! Keep supporting! ✨
wonderful update hai....
khas kar ke jo gift Mila hai suhana se vo to Veer ke liye bahut mayane rakhata hai.....
:thank_you:
last me jo suspense diya hai vo bahut hi rochak hone vala hai, mujhe lagta hai ki dono ek dusre ko achchi tarah se janti hai...
Kese jaanengi bhai? :dazed: Dono pehli baar ek dusre ke saamne aa rahi hai.
Bhai please give update daily ! Don’t make us suffer
:roll3:
Are wolf Bhai ji mere kehne ka tatparya ye tha ki kaera ke emotions ko lekr mission mila hai to veer Jo itne mahine se lga hua h kaera ki help mai wo kya kuch dino mai kr lega kya??...I mean abhi tk veer uski help hi kr rha tha pr abhi tk kaera wahi ki wahi hai emotions less.... isliye mere mnn mai ye janne ki khujli hai ki itne short time veer kaise krega kaera ki help???
Kaera:love2: meri 2nd fav character hai story ki after nidhi:love:
Kuch na kuch toh karna hi hoga. :smartm: Dekhte jao bas.
 

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saat deviyan aur ek veer ... aur writer mahoday ne hame iss arc me bahut kuch between the sheets hone ka aashvasan diya hai ... with actual incest ... to sawal yeh hai ki inn cche(Suman is not counted as she is already conquered) me se kitni veer ke neeche ayengi ... in the train and in the village ... mere khyaal se Arohi aur Shweta ke chances jyada hain ... may be Tej too ... after all she is tej ... aur will the writer spring a surprise and a dark horse will win the race into Veer's bed ... but I think abhi writer Purvi aur Arun ki married life me darrar nahi dalega ... Purvi me Veer ka daalke ... so she is the least likely of the lot ... even less likely than Bhavan ... the queen of the bitches ...
Dekhna hoga kya paristhitiya banti hai village me. Jesi situations banengi wahi decide karengi relationships ko.
Super se bhi upar…u have god gifted talent…👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
:thanx:
Fantastic update bro ab dekhte kya hota h train ki journey me kavya ki masti nd tej ka konsa roop dekhne ko milega abhi wo dekhna hai re baba
Already posted hai update. I hope padh liya hoga. Aur dono hi cheeze dekhne ko mil gayi hongi. :D
Kaun bol raha h thank you tumhe... :girlmad:
Aur unka contact mere paas hota to main unse baat na kar rhi hoti... Saare secrets jaan leti story k... :evillaugh:
Aisa kya? :roll:
 

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Update - 121 ~ A trip to the village (2)

Ab tak...

Dekha ki waha teen shaks khade hue the. Ya teen aurte!

Purvi samet Bhavna, Tejal dono ne hi Veer ko aate dekha.

Par...!

Do aise nazre thi jo aapas me jaa ke itni zorr se takraayi ki aas paas ke logo ko bhi unki bhidant mehsoos ho gayi.

Aur unn do nazro ki maalkin thi.

Bhavna aur Shweta!!!!


Ab aage...

Jab sansaar me ek jagah par kuch ghatit ho raha hota hai toh wahi dusri jagah par bhi kuch na kuch chal raha hota hai. Yahi toh duniya hai. Alag alag insaan ek hi samay par alag alag parishthitiyo se hokar guzarte hai.

Kuch aisa hi haal Arun ka tha. Purvi Tejal aur Bhavna ke saath nikal gayi thi. Shaam ko toh usne phone karke bataya tha par nikalte waqt ek baar bhi nahi jataaya.

Jab Arun apne ghar par kaam kaaj se lauta toh taala dekh ke usne bas ek thakaan bhari aah bhari. Jab aurte aapas me mili bhagat baitha leti thi na toh fir toh woh mardo ko aise ignore karti thi jese jethalal iyer ko karta hai.

Arun jab taala khol ghar ke andar aaya toh bagal me hi table par chipka ek sticky note usse dikhaayi diya. Usme likhawat saaf saaf Purvi ki thi,

'Mein jaa rahi hu. Kab aaungi woh sab phone par bata dungi. Subah shaam maid aayegi, jhaadu pocha bartan ke liye. Khana aap bana ke kha lena. Baahar ka mat khaana meri gerr haziri me. Maid advance me paise maange toh ek rupaya bhi nahi dena. Keh dena jab didi aayengi toh hisaab karengi. Dawayi wagarah sab TV waale showcase ke right drawer me hai. Aur kuch ho toh call kar lena. Bye!'

Itna sab padh ke Arun bas mann hi mann muskura ke baith gaya.

"Batao bhai! Mujhse zyada chinta toh inhe kaam waali ki hai. Chal bhai Arun! Lag jaa kaam par. Khana banaana hai. Aaj samajh aa raha hai ki khana banaana kitna mushqil hota hai. *sigh* "

Aur Arun haath muh dho ke lag gaya apne kaamo me.

Wahi yaha Ragini Veer aur baakiyo ko jab chorr ke aayi tabhi usse car me baithe baithe hi ehsaas hua,

'Hey bhagwaan ye mene kya kar diya?'

Woh ghabraate hue apne seene me haath rakhi. Pichli baar Veer jab Las Vegas gaya tha toh jaane se pehle itni chumma chaati hui thi unki, aur Ragini ne fir woh din kese kaate the ye sirf wahi jaanti thi.

Iss baar toh seedhe uski choot ko choos ke gaya tha Veer. Bhala ab kese samay katega uska?

'Nahiiiii!!! Y-Ye mene kya kar diya? Sab iss Veer ki galti hai. Oh god!!!'

Woh apni choot par haath rakhte hue khud ko aane waale dino ke liye taiyaar karne lagi. Kyuki harr raat ab usse Veer ki yaad hi sataane waali thi.

Ye toh tha swadesh ka haal. Par wahi desh ke baahar kisi dusre desh me ek khubsoorat mahila hospital par baithi baithi apne mobile ko ghoor ke dekh rahi thi.

Uska apna taapmaan badhe ya na badhe par uske gaalo ka taapmaan zaroor badha hua tha.

'Don't make me fall for you! Thank you!'

Baar baar woh line padh ke Suhana ka dil zorr zorr se dhadakne par majboor ho raha tha.

'What did he mean by that? P-Pagal hai kya? I'm- I'm married already.'

"Dinner is here~"

Darwaaza khula aur Sonia ek tray me khaana lete hue andar aayi. Apni choti behan ko dekh Suhana hadbada gayi aur usne fauran hi Veer ka message apni chat se delete kar diya.

Sonia : Huh? Kya hua?

Suhana : K-Kuch nahi! Tum firse le aayi? Nurse log hai toh na yaha?

Sonia : Nurse se hi leke aayi hu. Chaliye ab fatafat khaiye. Aur ye phone me kya dekh rahi thi?

Suhana : Kuch nahi!

Sonia : Don't lie to me! Aap kuch dekh rahi thi.

Usne aage badh seedhe Suhana ka phone hi chhina liya,

Suhana : Sonuuuu!!???

Sonia : Huh? Ohhh! Veer? Aap Veer se baat kar rahi thi?

Suhana : I...

Sonia : Hmm? Gift bheja hai aapne? Kya bheja hai?

Suhana : Kuch nahi! Bas aise hi...

Sonia : Bataiaye na!

Suhana : Mene kaha na kuch nahi hai. Woh toh usne yaha help kii thi isliye mene bhej diya. It's nothing. Lao mujhe khana do!

Sonia : O-Okay!

Sharmaate hue Suhana ek raahat ki saans lete hue khaane me lag gayi. Accha hua jo sahi samay par usne Veer ka message delete kar diya tha. Warna...!

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Mumbai Central
Night ~ 10:45 PM


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*Ding Dong*

Station ke shor ne jese sab ko hosh me laaya. Bhavna aur Shweta dono ek dusre ko dekh rahi thi. Aisa laga jese waqt hi tham gaya ho. Dono ek dusre ko pehli baar dekh rahi thi, fir bhi dono ko jese abhaas ho gaya tha. Apne pratidwandi ka.

'This is bad...!'

Veer ne ye dekhte hi khud ko kosna shuru kar diya. Kya soch ke usne Shweta ko saath chalne ke liye haan kaha tha? Uski aqal tab kya ghaas charne chali gayi thi?

*Ding*

[Intimidating Presence has been equipped.]

Ek Raja ke aura me nahaate hue Veer bina derri kiye aage badha aur unn dono maao ke beech aaya. Usne baari baari dono ko dekha. Waha ka vatavaran tang ho rakha tha. Aur ye sabhi mehsoos kar paa rahe the.

Veer : Mujhe station par koi vivaad nahi chahiye. Sabke mann me questions hai I know. Ek baar apni apni seats par hum baith jaaye uske baad hi koi charcha hogi. Is that clear?

Jab uski commanding tone unn sabhi ne suni, toh sab ke badan me ek sihran daud gayi. Unn sabhi aurto ke beech akela mard tha woh. Aur jo tej uski aankho me tha, jis qadar woh apni buland awaaz me unhe nirdesh de raha tha, uski soorat, uski adaa, sabhi khadi aurte waha haami bharne par majboor ho gayi. Ek chu tak nahi nikli kisi ke muh se.

Kamaal tha Intimidating Presence ka. Jesa naam wesa kaam.

Sab ne haan me apni gardan hilaayi aur uske turant baad hi unki train ka announcement hua, jo jald hi nikalne waali thi.

Veer : Chalo!

Baari baari ek ek karke woh sabhi Veer ke peeche chal dii. Uske dono kandho par bags the, saath hi dono haatho me bhi. Arohi aur Kavya peeche se usse dekh ke hi mann hi mann uski tareefo ke pul baandh rahi thi.

Itna sab kuch uthaane ke baad bhi uski peeth zara bhi nahi jhuki. Veer ke liye toh jese ye uski chhingli ka kaam tha.

Suman ki nazre ek taq Bhavna par hi tiki hui thi. Uski aankho me chamak thi. Bhavna bhi kayi baar usse asmanjas me dekhi par jese woh confused sii prateet ho rahi thi. Aur Suman ye dekh bas mann hi mann hass rahi thi.

Peeche chal rahi Tej bhi apna trolley bag ghaseetate hue kabhi apni maa ko dekhti toh kabhi uss anjaan aurat ko.

Shweta!!

Woh jese samajh gayi thi turant hi ki ye aurat kaun thi.

Tej : Aapne usse roka kyu nahi kal? Haan?

Woh apni maa ke paas aate hue virodh me boli,

Bhavna : Kya?

Tej : Veer ko! Usse roka kyu nahi aapne ghar me hi?

Bhavna : Tumhe lagta hai ki woh rukta?

Tej : Kyu nahi? Aap maa ho. Agar aapne manaaya hota toh-

Bhavna (Tej ko dekhte hue) : Woh nahi rukta.

Tej : Kaise?

Bhavna : Maa hu uski! Jaanti hu kyu naraaz hai mujhse. Waaqif hu uski udaasi se. Aur ye bhi jaanti hu ki kab tak woh mujhse rootha rahega.

Tej : A-Aap samajh nahi rahi hai. Dekha na aapne? Kaun kaun aaya hai uske saath. Aap kuch nahi jaanti hai mom apne bete ke baare me. Literally, 20 saal baad mil rahe ho aap ek dusre se.

Bhavna : Accha? Aur tum mujhse zyaada jaanti ho?

Uski baat par Tej ko Nidhi dwara bataayi gayi Veer ki saari baatein yaad aayi. Aur woh guroor me apni maa se boli,

Tej : Bilkul! Mein kuch aisi baate jaanti hu jo aap bhi nahi jaanti.

Bhavna : Ohhh!?

Tej : Isliye keh rahi hu. Aap ne manaya hota toh...! Woh rukk jaata. Aap sach me kuch nahi jaanti! Ek baar koshish toh-

Bhavna jo chal rahi thi woh achanak hi rukk gayi.

Tej : Huh?

Tej bhi saath me rukte hue apni maa ko prashn bhari nigaaho se dekhi.

Bhavna : Tej!

Tej : Hmm?

Bhavna : Tumse 9 mahine zyaada jaanti hu mein usse.

Bas! Ye vaakya hi kaafi tha Tej ko sab kuch bataane ke liye. Woh ek vaakya jese Tej ke saare bolo par haawi pad gaya. Maa thi woh Veer ki. Toh kya hua agar woh uss se 20 saal baad mil rahi thi. Kya hua agar unke beech woh communication nahi tha abhi. Iska matlab ye toh nahi ki Veer ab uski santaan hona chorr chuka tha?

Woh bina kuch kahe firse aage badh gayi. Aur Tej bas wahi khadi rahi.

"Tch!" Nichle honth ko daato tale dabaaye antatah woh bhi peeche peeche chal dii.

Bheed toh thi.


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Logo ki bheed se idhar udhar hote hue idhar Veer apne second AC ke compartment ke darwaaze par jab pohucha.

"Le chai chai chai chai~" Ek chai waala ruki train me fatafat bhaagte hue ek compartment se dusre compartment me ghusa.

*Ding Dong*

Aur fir se announcement hua,

"Yaatri gann kripya dhyaan de. Mumbai se Jaipur jaane waali train xxxxx kuch hi samay me platform kramaank xx se chalne waali hai."

Veer : Bheed kaafi hai. Pehle aap log andar hoiye. Mein aata hu fir.

Suman : Jii maali- J-Jii! Veer jii!

Suman sabse pehle andar gayi toh ussi ke peeche Arohi aur Kavya bhi andar ho lii.

Bhavna jab Veer ke saamne aayi toh Veer ne usse dekha,

Veer : Hamara compartment ye left wala hai. Aur baaki inn logo ka right wala.

Bhavna : Hmm!

Balhaar ne reservation toh araam se karwa diya tha. Par compartment agal bagal waale mile the. Yaani alag alag coach.

Bhavna upar chadhi toh uske peeche hi Purvi bhi chadhte hue andar ho gayi. Par jaane se pehle woh Veer pe ek nazar daalna nahi bhuli.

Shweta aayi aur Veer ko ek baar dekh woh bhi chadh ke daaye waale coach me chali gayi. Woh jese kuch kehna chaahti thi. Par baahar khade aur bhi logo ke kaaran woh bina kuch kahe hi bheetar chal dii.

Akhir me Tej jo sabse peeche chal rahi thi woh bhi aa gayi.

Veer : Rukiye!

Tej : ???

Veer : Suitcase mujhe de dijiye!

Tej : Arre nahi! Mein rakh lungi.

Veer : Chot lagi hai aapko! Bhuliye mat!

Uske kehne par Tej chup chaap apne bhai ko dekhne lagi. Uske bhai ko iss baat ka abhi bhi khayaal tha.

Tej : It's- It's really okay!

Veer : Nahi! Aap andar jaiye! Mein leke aata hu.

Tej : No way! Tumhare paas pehle hi itna hai. Aur mein itni kamzor nahi hu ki ek chota sa-

Veer : Baat kamzori ki nahi hai.

Woh kehte hue uske kaan ke paas jhuka aur dheere se bola,

"I know you are strong. Par baat chot ki hai. Pressure se wound khul sakta hai firse. Andar chaliye! Mein laata hu!"

Veer ke bol sunn Tej ko aisa laga jese kap-kapaati thand ki sheet-leher me kisi ne usse garm kambal udha diya ho.

Ek garm sa ehsaas, woh garmaahat, Tej ne jese apne dil me mehsoos kii. Aur apne bhai ki baat maan woh andar chal ke baaye coach ki orr mud gayi.

Usne palat ke dekha toh Veer peeche peeche hi aa raha tha. Aur woh ye dekh khush ho gayi.

Andar Bhavna aur Purvi dono apni seat numbers dekh jagah dhundne me lagi thi. Aur kuch derri ke baad hi unhe apni jagah mil gayi.

Bhavna : Ohh! Ye waali hai.

Purvi : Hmm? Haan! Ye dono upar neeche ki apni hai. Samaan rakh dete hai pehle.

Fatafat apna samaan berth ke neeche daalte hue dono hi Veer aur Tej ka intezaar karne lagi.

Tej khaali haath aayi toh Bhavna ne uss se uske bag ka pucha, jiska jawaab usse agle hi shan mil gaya Veer ko dekhte hue.

Veer ne kuch bhi kahe bina Tej ka suitcase bhi andar kiya aur fir ahista se bola,

Veer : Mein ye baaki samaan rakh ke aata hu.

Tej (nods) : Hmm!

Aur woh nikal gaya. Uske jaate hi teeno stree apni seats par virajmaan ho gayi. Veer ne aisa agar kaha hai ki woh aayega toh zaahir hai woh unke saath hi safar karne wala tha. Na ki apne unn parivaar waalo ke saath. Ye soch ke mann hi mann Tej samet Bhavna aur Purvi bhi kaafi khush ho gayi.

Idhar Veer iss coach se nikal jab bagal waale coach me jese hi aaya. Toh pehle hi usse Kavya ki khil-khilaati hui awaaz sunayi pad gayi,

'Ye ladki bhi! Kitni zorr se hassti hai.'

[Par uske baad bhi aap kabhi nahi bhadakte uss par.]

'Well...!'

[Kyuki woh aapki chaheeti hai.]

'Y-Yeah!'

[Aur aap usse pyaar bhi karte ho.]

'Hmm!'

[Aur-]

'That's it! Ahem! Hum baad me baat karenge iss par.'

[ :smile2: ]

"Arre! Veer bhaiya aa gaye hahaha~"

Kavya apni berth par baithe paav ko latka ke zorr se hilaate hue boli.

Kavya : Bhaiya! Ye chaaro apni seats hai hehe~ Poori full! Upar neeeche agal bagal. Line se hai hamari!

Veer : Haan toh? Ticket me line se hi numbers diye hai. Toh obviously line se hi milegi.

Kavya (blushes) : O-Ohh!

Arohi : Tum itni excited ho Kavya? Aisi kya baat hai?

Kavya : Ohh c'mon dii! Arre mein kitne saalo baad train me safar kar rahi hu. Jab choti thi tab gayi thi. Uske baad kahi jaane nahi mila. Mama ki shaadi me bhi aap log ho aaye the par mujhe nahi le gaye the. Hmph~ Aur uske baad aaj jaa rahi hu. Woh bhi ek unknown gaav me. Woh bhi Veer bhaiya ke saath. Aur wo bhi bina mummy papa ke. Akele! Hehehehe~

Uska excitement usse dekh ke hi pata chal raha tha. Usse aise dekh Veer jo ab tak tensed tha woh khud muskura baitha.

Kavya : Par ek minute! Ehhh? Bhaiya aapki seat?

Veer (smiles) : Meri seat bagal waale coach me hai.

Kavya : Whaaaatttt??? Kyuuuuu????

Woh zorr se chillaayi!

Veer : Arreee?? Kyu kya? Reservation mera pehle unhone kar diya tha toh seat uss hisaab se mili. Mujhe kya pata tha tum sab log bhi baad me kood padoge?

Kavya : B-But-

Idhar Shweta ne jese hi Veer ke muh se 'unhone' shabd suna. Uski maayus aankho me jese ek chamak aa gayi. Ek umang jaagi jese.

Veer ne 'maa' keh ke nahi bulaaya Bhavna ko. Kya ye sanket tha? Kya uske paas abhi bhi mauka tha? Woh taktaki lagaaye Veer ko hi dekhne lagi.

Suman (smiles) : Kood padoge se aapka kya matlab hai Veer jii? Kya aap nahi chaahte the ki hum sab aaye?

Kavya : Haan! Boliye boliye! Jawaab dijiye! We want to know! Nation wants to know...!!!

Kavya ki baat par Arohi halke se hassi. Aur bechaara Veer,

Veer : Mein-

Khamosh reh gaya!

Suman (smiles) : Kherr chorriye! Aap samaan toh rakh dijiye! Kab se liye hue hai!

Veer : Ohh right!

Veer ne saara samaan berth ke neeche kiya aur fir woh seat par baith gaya.

Kavya ne itne me ek chips ka packet khola toh Veer ke bagal se baith woh uske saath share karte hue khaane lagi.

Arohi bhi Veer ke bagal se baithi hui thi. Woh window seat par thi. Usse sight seeing behad pasand thi. Isliye window seat hi leti thi woh. Aur saath me haatho me ek book hoti thi. Harr safar me ye uski aadat thi.

*Munch* *Munch*

Kavya : Bhaiya! *nom* *nom* Hum kab tak pohuchenge?

Veer : Din me!

Kavya : Huhh? Din me?

Veer : Lagbhag 15 ghante ka route hai. Toh tum khud gin lo!

Kavya : Hmm! 11 baje niklegi na train!? 11 toh baj gaye. *munch*

Veer : Bas chalti hi hogi.

Aur uske kehte hi train ne ek dhakka khaaya aur apna sanket de diya.

Veer : Lo! Chal dii!

Arohi : Veer?

Veer : Hmm?

Arohi : Wese! Hum flight se bhi toh jaa sakte the na??

Veer : I don't know! Unhone train ki tickets kii toh fir aapki bhi wahi kari mene.

Arohi : Ohh!

Veer : Aur tum ye harr baar lays ka green flavour kyu laati ho?

Kavya : Because it's the BESTTTT flavour!!!! *nom* *nom*

Arohi (smiles) : Kya tumhe pasand nahi!?

Ek chip woh packet se nikaalte hue puchi.

Veer : Well! Utna nahi jitna dark blue wala hota hai.

Arohi : Ohh! You like spice!!? Huh!!

Veer ko pata nahi kya hua par usne Arohi ki aankho me dekha aur tapaak se bol diya,

Veer : Yes! I love spice!

Jis qadar usne ye kaha tha, aisa laga jese uska ishaara kahi aur bhi tha. Aur isse bhaanpte hi Arohi ke gaal laal ho gaye. Woh fauran hi muh ferrte hue baahar dekhne lagi.

'Fuck! What did I just-!??'

Mann palatne ke liye usne apna phone nikaal Ragini ko ek message daala ki train chal dii hai. Aur fir woh uth gaya.

Veer : Alright! Mein chalta hu. Agar koi bhi dikkat ho toh bas bata dena. Okay?

Kavya : Ehhhh!!? Bhaiyaaa???

Veer (smiles) : What?

Kavya : Aap yahi rukiye na!!!

Veer : Sadly, mujhe jaana hai waha.

Kavya : Ahhh! Right Right! Woh didi!! Mujhe bhi unse milna hai.

Veer : Huh?

Arohi : Mujhe bhi!!!

Veer : Wait!

Suman : Kyu nahi? Shuru se hi ye safar atpata sa lag raha hai. Agar hum unse baat nahi karenge toh aage ka safar aur bhi atpata ho jayega hum sab ke liye.

Kavya : Ohh! Suman aunty aap sach me sabse best ho!!!!

Woh uth ke Suman se chipak gayi.

Suman : Fufufu~ Toh chale?

Kavya : Yes yes!!!

Dono behne uth ke waha se nikal gayi. Aur Shweta akeli waha reh ke ghabra uthi.

Shweta (uthate hue) : M-Mein bhi-

Uske uthate hi Suman ne usse pakad ke waapas baitha diya,

Suman : Aap yahi rukiye tab tak! Mein mil ke aati hu na. Yaha pe kisi ka hona bhi toh zaroori hai na? Mein ho aau, fir aap chali jaana?

Shweta : P-Par-

Suman (smiles) : Chaliye Veer jii!

Bina Shweta ko bolne ka mauka diye, Suman Veer ke aage chal dii.

Usne Veer ka haath thaama hua tha. Aisa lag raha tha jese ek biwi apne pati ke sang chal rahi ho.

Veer : Umm...! Suman!

Suman : Hmm?

Veer ne ishaara jab apne haath ki orr kiya toh Suman ne ek pal me hi uska haath chorr diya.

Veer : Woh! I think sab galat samjhenge toh-

Suman (nazre jhukaate hue) : Maaf kijiye maalik! Bhavnao me beh gayi thi.

Kehte hue woh palat ke firse jaane lagi par achanak hi rukk gayi. Uski mulaayam baah ko Veer jo jakde hue tha.

Suman : Maalik?

Veer : No! Sorry! Tum meri ho! Log kya sochenge, farq nahi padna chahiye mujhe. Chalo!

Uski baah ko chorr Veer ne uski hatheli ko pakda aur aage chal diya. Suman ke hontho par pyaari sii ek muskaan sajj gayi.

Idhar Arohi aur Kavya dono hi Tejal Purvi aur Bhavna ki berth ke paas pohuch gayi thi.

Kavya : Umm...!

Tej (smiles) : Arre? Kavya? Arohi? Aao na!

Woh dono hi aake baith gayi.

Tej : Mom!!! Aapko pata hai ye dono kaun hai? Meri behne!!! Ye Arohi aur ye Kavya!

Usne uth ke dono ko apne gale se laga liya.

Kavya : Umm mein-

Tej (smiles) : Ye tum dono ki Tai jii hai! Meri aur Veer ki mom!

Kavya : O-Ohh! Namaste Tai jii! Umm-

Arohi : N-Namaste!

Bhavna (smiles) : Namaste! Tum dono...! Sumitra ki beti ho?

Kavya : Ahhh? Aap mummy ko jaanti ho?

Bhavna (smiles) : Kyu nahi jaanungi? Idhar aao meri bacchiyo!

Usne apni baah khol dono ko bulaaya toh dono uske paas aayi. Aur dono ko hi Bhavna ne apne gale se laga liya.

Bhavna : Boht pyaare bacche hai Sumitra ke. *Muah*

Uski iss baat pe Tejal ka muh bigad gaya. Pranjal kameene ki jo yaad aa gayi thi usse. Agar abhi woh Pranjal ki kartoote bata deti toh shayad uski maa apne shabd waapas le leti.

Kavya : T-Tai jii? Aap? Aap fir ghar me kyu nahi thi? Ghar me aapke baare me koi baate kyu nahi karta? Hume toh kuch pata hi nahi tha aapke baare me. Ek photo tak nahi hai aapki. Agar aap Veer bhaiya ki mummy ho toh aap kaha thi ab tak?

Usne bebaak andaaz me sab puch liya.

Bhavna : Beta! Ye lambi kahani hai.

Kavya : Mein sunn lungi!

Bhavna (smiles) : Ussi ke liye toh hum sab iss safar par jaa rahe hai.

Arohi : Past me kuch bada hua tha. Hai na?

Arohi ki baat par Bhavna ne peni nazar se usse dekha. Ye ladki hoshiyaar thi.

Bhavna (nods) : Hmm!

Arohi : K-Kya...!? Kya isliye aapne tau jii ko chorra?

Bhavna (sighs) : Nahi! Woh ghatna alag hai. Par haan! Woh ghatna bhi saath hi judi hui hai. Tum dono chal rahi ho toh sab pata chalega tumhe. Wese!? Sumitra kesi hai?

Arohi : Woh theek hai!

Bhavna (smiles) : Hmm! Apni maasi se toh mil lo!

Dono ne mud ke saamne baithi Purvi ko dekha jo pehle se hi muskura ke apni baahe felaaye unka intezaar kar rahi thi. Dono khushi se uth ke Purvi ke paas gayi toh Purvi ne pyaar se unhe apne seene se laga liya.

Purvi (smiles) : Tum dono boht pyaari ho!

Kavya : Thank you! Hehe! Ahh! Bhaiya aa gaye!!

Itne me Veer bhi Suman ke saath aa chuka tha.

Suman dono Bhavna aur Purvi ko namaste kar ekdum Bhavna ke saamne baith gayi. Aur usse hi dekhne lagi,

Bhavna : ???

Bechaari Bhavna ki samajh nahi aa raha tha ki bhala ye aurat usse aise kyu dekh rahi thi? Par kahi na kahi jese uska mann bhi usse kuch sanket dene ki koshish kar raha tha.

Bhavna : Aap? Kya mein aapko jaanti hu?

Aur ab Suman se jese na raha gaya. Uski aankho se achanak hi aasu nikal pade. Veer hairat me bagal me baithe sab dekh raha tha.

Aur tabhi,

Suman : Didi!!!!

Kehte hue Suman aage badh seedhe Bhavna ke gale se lag gayi.

'Whattttt???'

Stabdh hue Veer saamne ke drishya ko dekh raha tha. Didi? Par Suman ka toh koi rishta hi nahi tha Bhavna se. Fir didi? Kya muh boli didi maana tha usne?

'Just what is going on????'

[Tamaasha dekhte rahiye! Don't stop them. When it crosses the limit. Only then cease them!]

Veer chup chaap baithe sab kuch ghatit hota dekhne laga. Aur baaki sab bhi. Ye sab chal kya raha tha?

Bhavna : Huhh??

Suman namm aankhein liye peeche hui aur apni chaathi par haath rakhte hue boli,

"M-Mein...! Mein Suman Didi!!!"

Bhavna : S-Suman? Huhhhh??!!

Pehle toh Bhavna ki kuch samajh na aaya. Par uske baad hi jese uske dimaag me kuch aaya aur woh bhauchakki sii Suman ko dekh chillaayi,

Bhavna : Sumannnn???!!!!

Suman (nods) : Haan didi!!! Suman!!! Mein Suman! Aapki Suman!!!!

Uske itna kehte hi Bhavna ne usse kass ke apne seene se laga liya.

Bhavna : Hey bhagwaannn!!! Sumannn!!!

Suman : Didiiiiii!!! *sniff*

'Ye dono? Ek dusre ko itne acche se jaanti hai? Akhir maajra kya hai?'

[Just witness!]

Bhavna :T-Tum yaha? Mujhe vishwaas nahi ho raha. Tum! Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho? Haan? M-Mein toh pehchaan hi na paayi tumhe.

Suman (smiles) : Kese pehchaanti aap? Tab mein choti thi. *sniff* Aur ab lagbhag 20 saal baad dekh rahi hai aap mujhe. Par aap abhi bhi utni hi khubsoorat hai. Bilkul bhi nahi badhi hai aapki umr.

Suman ko iss tarah bhaavuk hote Veer ne boht hi kam dekha tha. Matlab saaf tha. Suman aur Bhavna ke beech ek gehra rishta tha.

Bhavna : Accha toh? Aur khud ko toh dekho? Haan? Kaha hai baal bacche? Shaadi ho gayi hai na?

Suman : Ek beti hai. Sonali! Woh ghar pe hai. Aur...! Mene apne pati ko chorr diya hai.

Bhavna : K-Kyu??

Toh Suman uske kaano me jhuki aur dheere se boli, "Maalik ke hote mujhe kisi aur mard ki kya zaroorat?"

Sunte hi Bhavna ka shareer kaanp utha. Ek sansani bhara vichaar uske mastishq se hote hue guzra.

Bhavna : I-Iska matlab!?

Usne ek jhatke me Veer ki orr dekha.

Veer : Hmm?

Aur fir Suman ko. Jo rehesyamayi tareeqe se muskura rahi thi. Aur agle hi pal usse saara maajra samajh aa gaya. Uska sarr neeche jhuk gaya.

Bhavna : Suman t-tum...!?

Suman (smiles) : Hmm?

Veer idhar poori tarah se confused tha.

'What the-!?? What was that look? Woh mujhe aise kyu dekhi?'

[Shayad...!]

'Shayad?'

[Shayad unhe pata chal gaya.]

'Kya???'

[Ki aapne Suman ke saath sex kiya hai.]

'Whaaaatttttttt???'

[Hmm! That look says it all. She seems disappointed.]

'Fucccckkk!!! P-Par ek minute! Suman ne kyu?'

[Suman ne kuch soch rakha hoga. I don't know. I'm trying to calculate everything. Rokiye mat unhe. Jo ho raha hai hone dijiye filhaal. We'll get clues.]

'Shiiitttt!!!'

Veer unn dono ko bareeki se dekhne laga.

Bhavna : Par tum-!?

Suman : Mein yaha kese?

Bhavna : Haan!

Suman : Lambi kahani hai. Safar me aage bataungi. Jese jese aap apne ateet ko kholengi, wese wese mere ateet ke panne bhi saamne aate jayenge.

Bhavna (frowns) : T-Tum!!

Suman : Par aapko swasth dekh boht accha laga. Ab lag raha hai jese sab kuch theek ho jayega.

Bhavna (sighs) : Mujhe pehle se hi andaaza ho jaana chahiye tha.

Suman : Aap kitna hi khilaaf kyu na ho le. Iske virodh me kyu na chali jaaye. Ye hoke hi rahega.

Bhavna : Sh-Shayad tum sahi ho!

Veer ko unki baate zara bhi samajh nahi aa rahi thi. Aur Veer hi kya? Waha baithe kisi ko bhi samajh nahi aa rahi thi siwae Purvi ke.

Purvi : Aur mujhse nahi milogi?

Suman : A-Aap?

Purvi (smiles) : Andaaza kyu nahi lagaati?

Suman ne jab asmanjas me Bhavna ko dekha toh Bhavna ne muskura ke kaha,

Bhavna : Ye Purvi hai!

Suman : Ahhh!!?! Didi!? A-Aap bhi?

Purvi (smiles) : Hmm!

Aur dono saheliyo ki tarah ek dusre se lipat gayi.

Tej : Koi mujhe batayega ki yaha kya ho raha hai? Haan?

Suman (smiles) : Bas ye samajh lijiye! Ki saheliya aapas me mil rahi hai.

Tej : M-Mom??

Bhavna : Hmm! Filhaal yahi kehna sahi hoga.

Tej : Urghh!!

Aur iss tarah Suman Purvi aur Bhavna ki aapas me puraani yaado ko lekar baate hone lagi. Par Veer ki kuch bhi samajh nahi aa raha tha. Usse itna zaroor pata tha ki Suman Bhavna aur Purvi ke saath ateet me judi hui thi. Par kese?? Iska jawaab hi usse dhundna tha. Usne ek aur baat notice kii thi. Woh ye ki Purvi aur Bhavna dono hi usse ab kuch zyaada hi chhup chhup ke dekh rahi thi.

Raat ke 11:50 ho chuke the. Aur dheere dheere ab train ki lights band honi shuru ho gayi thi. Log khaa pee ke apni apni berth par sone jaa rahe the.

Bhavna ne itne me bag se ek tiffin nikaala aur usse khol ke unn sab ko dekhte hue boli, khaas kar Veer se.

Bhavna : Beta! Ye lo! Thoda sa tum sab kha lo!

Tiffin me uske haath ka banaya hua khaana tha. Veer ne jese hi dekha uska mann sach me lalcha gaya. Apni maa ke haath ka khaana.

Kavya : Ohh ohh! Kya hai?

Bhavna (smiles) : Puri aur aloo ki sabzi!

Kavya : Ohh! Achaar bhi?

Bhavna : Haan haan! Aam ka mirchi ka dono ka hai. Lo na!

Kavya : Haan mein lungi! Mujhe roll kar ke do na tai jii!

Bhavna (smiles) : Kyu nahi!

Arohi (blushes) : Kavya? Hum ghar se khaa ke hi aaye the na?

Kavya : Haan par mujhe firse bhook lag gayi.

Jaha Arohi sharma rahi thi toh wahi Bhavna aur Purvi dono hi Kavya ke ravaiyye se behad khush thi.

Bhavna : V-Veer!? Tum-

Veer : Nahi! Mene ghar me kha liya tha.

Bhavna : O-Ohh!

Tej : Veer???

Purvi : Thoda sa kha lo beta?

Veer : Mujhe waqai bhook nahi hai. Maasi!

Purvi ne udaasi me Bhavna ko dekha. Jese kehna chaah rahi ho ki mene koshish ki, par tumhara ladka nahi maana.

Veer : Aur aap!

Tej : Huh?

Veer : Aapki aaj dressing badalni hai. Mein leke aaya hu. Chaliye!

Tej : Nahi! Iski koi zaroorat nahi hai!

Veer : Bilkul nahi! Mrinal jii ne kaha tha ki yaad se dressing badal dena.

Tej : Par...!

Veer : Dikhaiye!

Tej : Toh ab top utaaru yaha?

Veer : ....

Tej (smiles) : Aise upar nahi hoga.

Tej ne apne full sleaved maroon top ki taraf ishaara karte hue kaha. Upar karna asaan nahi tha.

Arohi : Kya hua?

Tej : Ohh kuch nahi!

Veer : Pranjal ne haath me kechi maari thi inhe.

Kavya aur Arohi : K-Kyaaaaa????

Veer : Hmm! Ussi raat fir mein usse ghar par chorr ke gaya tha.

Arohi : Toh ye sab hua tha? I'm so sorrryyy!!!

Kavya : S-Sorryyyy!!!

Woh dono sarr jhuka ke Tej se maafi maangi.

Tej : Arre arre? Isme tum maafi kyu maang rahi ho? It's really okay! I'm fine!

Arohi : I just-

Veer : Arohi dii! Inhe washroom me le jaa kar please inki dressing change karwa dijiye!

Arohi : Haan! Kyu nahi!

Tej : But-

Arohi : Nahi! Aap chaliye! Abhi!

Woh Tej ko pakad ke medic box ke saath seedhe usse washroom me le gayi.

Suman : Ab mujhe bhi chalna chahiye! Koi aur bhi hai, jo betaab hai yaha aane ke liye. Ijaazat dijiye!

Suman uth ke Bhavna aur Purvi ki taraf haami bhar waha se fauran hi nikal gayi.

Toh wahi Shweta jo ab tak akele baithi hui thi. Uske mann me na jaane kese kese drishya aa rahe the.

Ek drishya me usne dekha, ki Bhavna Veer ko apne gale se lagaaye usse choom rahi hai. Aur uski taraf dekh ke haivaano waali hassi hass rahi hai.

Toh dusre drishya me usse dikhaayi diya. Ki usse Tej aur Purvi pakdi hui hai. Aur Bhavna train me Veer ke saath baith ke ravaana ho rahi hai. Woh zorr zorr se guhaar laga rahi hai. Par Tejal aur Purvi hasste hue usse chorrne ka naam nahi le rahi.

"N-Nahiiii!!!!"

Woh jhatka maarte hue aankh khol ke baith gayi. Poora chehra uska paseene se bheega hua tha.

"H-Hey bhagwaan! Nahi! Mera baccha!!!"

Tab tak Suman bhi aa pohuchi.

Suman : Ab aap jaa sakti hai.

Shweta : H-Haan!

Fatafat woh kuch samaan utha ke waha se nikal gayi.

Toh wahi yaha se Arohi aur Tej bhi waapas aa chuki thi. Aur woh bhi ab waha se apne coach ke liye nikal gayi.

Abhi unhe gaye thodi derr hi hui thi ki Shweta haafte hue unke coach me aa dhamki.

Aur bas, do nazre firse aapas me jaa takraayi.

Shweta aur Bhavna ki!

Shweta jaanti thi ki uske saamne ye baithi Veer ki asli maa thi. Aur uski sautan. Par Bhavna nahi jaanti thi ki ye aurat Veer ki sauteli maa hai.

Veer : Aap yaha?

Shweta : H-Haan mein ye! B-Beta! Mein ye pulaav laayi thi. Sabke liye thoda thoda banaya tha. Th-Thoda kha lo.

Veer : Umm! Mujhe bhook nahi hai asal me.

Shweta : Ahh?

Uski nazar achanak hi wahi side table par rakhe tiffin par padi. Jo Bhavna ke paas rakha hua tha. Iska matlab? Iska matlab Veer ne Bhavna ke haath ka khaana kha liya tha?

Khud se hi mann me soch woh itna udaas ho gayi ki usse rona aa gaya.

Tej : Aaiye aaiye! Baithiye!!! Mom! Aap jaanti hai ye kaun hai?

Tej jese intezaar hi kar rahi thi iss aurat ke aane ka. Uski nazre aag fek rahi thi.

Bhavna : ???

Tej : Ye hai hamaare Veer ki dusri maa!! Uski sauteli Maa!! Kyu? Mene sahi kaha na?

Shweta : M-Mein-

Shweta itna darr gayi ki uska badan tak hilne laga. Inn sabhi ke beech woh ek akeli fass gayi thi. Upar se Veer bhi kuch nahi keh raha tha.

Tej : Veer!

Veer : Huh?

Tej : Mene socha tha mein tumse permission lungi uske baad hi ye sab bataungi. Par ab mujhse aur chup raha nahi jayega.

Veer : ???

Tej jo safar ki shuruaat se hi ek kharaab mood me thi. Shweta ko dekhne ke baad woh seedha bhadak uthi.

Tej : Kuch puch rahi hu aapse! Aap mere bhai ki sauteli maa hai ya nahi?

Shweta : H-Haan! M-Mein hu! P-Par-

Tej (smiles) : Mom! Ab jo mein aapko bataane jaa rahi hu. Aap dhyaan se suniyega!

Purvi : Tej? Araam se! Shor nahi beta!

Tej : Nahi Maasi! Ab aur chup nahi reh sakti. Wahiyaat giri ki bhi hadd hoti hai.

Bhavna : Tej??

Tej : Ye aurat!!! Aapko pata hai isne kya kiya tha? Kya kya kar ke baithi hai ye?

Bhavna : ???

Veer ko ek abhaas hua. Shayad Tej koi bhaanda phodne waali thi. Woh uthne hi waala tha ki,

[Wait Master!]

'Pari? Mujhe rokna hoga Tejal dii ko. Warna woh kuch-'

[No! Abhi nahi! Hone do jo ho raha hai. Just watch!]

'Shit!!!'

Majbooran woh rukk gaya.

Tej : Jab aap Veer ko chorr ke gayi thi mom!! Toh ye aurat!! Ye aurat kuch saal baad hamaare Veer ki zindagi me aayi. Aur pata hai isne kya kiya mom?? Mere bhai ki zindagi nark bana dii isne! Nark!!!

Bhavna : !!!??

Purvi : Tej dheere!!

Tej (bhaavuk hote hue) : Ye aurat ne...! Mom! Mujhse kaha bhi nahi jaa raha hai. Iss aurat ne itne dard aur itne kasht diye hai hamaare Veer ko ki ginaane par bhi gin nahi paogi aap.

Bhavna : Tej??

Tej : Mom!!! Iss aurat ne shadiyantra racha tha. Y-Ye shadiyantra kar rahi thi hamare Veer ke khilaaf. Usse jaydaad se baahar karne ke liye. Issi ki vajah se bhai darr darr bhatakta raha. Ghar se baahar nikalwa diya tha isne mom Veer ko. Ek number ki jhoothi, makkaar aur kapti aurat hai ye...!

Shweta : Nahhhiiiiii!!!!

Shweta kaanp uthi. Uski aankho se aasu dhaar bann ke behne lage. Harr ek shabd usse uski buri harqato ki yaad dila raha tha. Woh ghinoni kartoote jo usne ateet me kii thi. Kaise woh saazisho ka hissa thi. Ussi ki glaani ke bhaar se toh ab tak ubhar nahi paa rahi thi woh. Aur idhar Tej ek ke baad ek waar karti jaa rahi thi.

Tej : Dekhiye isse! Dekhiye kese naatak kar ke Veer ko behlaane fuslaane aayi hai. Taaki humse Veer ko dur kar sake Mom! Yahi iska lakshya hai. Sharm nahi aayi aapko ek baar bhi? Thuu hai aapke upar!! Khud ka beta nahi tha toh jalan ke maare sautele bete ko ghar se baahar fikwa diya? Arre bhagwaan bhi maaf nahi karega aapko. Meri haay lagegi aapko!

Shweta : N-Nahhhiiii!!! Chup ho jao!! Bhagwaan ke liye...! *sniff*

Tej : Chup ho jau? Kyu chup ho jau?? Aisi ghinoni harqat karne waali aurat ko toh jail ki salakho ke peeche hona chahiye. Uske baad bhi mere bhai ka badapann toh dekho. Mom!! Inhe aur inki beti ko Veer bachaane gaya. Jaan jokhim daal ke. Upar se inn madam ko rehne ki jagah bhi dilvaayi. Fir bhi syaanapanti toh dekho!! You are not only a disgrace to the family. But you're a disgrace to yourself as well!!!

Uske itne kadve shabd sunn Shweta bechaari ka dil dahal gaya. Woh toh yaha bas pyaar se Veer ko tiffin khilaane aayi thi. Ek ke baad ek jese uss se saari cheeze chhinti jaa rahi thi.

Tej : Mom! Iss aurat ke kaaran mere bhai ko ghar se nikaal diya gaya. Woh raat me baarish me bheegta koi thikaana dhundta raha par koi na aaya uski madad ke liye. Uska itna dardnaak haadsa hua ki ICU me kuch din admit tha. Par ek insaan uss ghar se dekhne nahi aaya mom hamare Veer ko!!! Ek insaan bhi nahiii!!! Bhala ho unn Nidhi ma'am ka! Jinhone Veer ko panaah dii. Tab jab woh ekdum akela tha!! Par ye- ye toh- sach me...!

Tej aur hamle karti ki itne me Bhavna ne ishaare se rok diya. Woh haafte hue gusse me shaant hoke baith gayi. Shweta apna muh apne haatho se chhipaaye bas sisak sisak ke roye jaa rahi thi.

Tabhi Bhavna ne bas ek sawaal pucha,

"Kyu?"

Uske gaal se ek aasu ki boond beh ke neeche giri. Purvi ka bhi yahi haal tha.

Bhavna : Kyu kiya? Mere bacche ke saath aisa?

Aur Shweta aatm glaani me aur doob gayi. Woh fafkaarte hue rone lagi. Bechaari ka haal behaal tha.

Ye sawaal toh jese aur uske dil ko tode jaa raha tha. Aur sach me, Shweta ke paas iska koi jawaab nahi tha.

Bas! Bohut hua!

Woh uthi aur rote hue bhaagte hue waha se apna muh chhipa ke nikal gayi.

Uske jaate hi Purvi ne Veer ko gale se laga ke choom liya.

Purvi : Aur kya kaha tha tune mujhse? Ki ghar me sab mera khayaal rakhte hai? Sab badhiya hai! Ye khayaal rakhte hai tera? *sniff* Haan? Bol? Jhooth bolta hai apni maasi se? Itne dard chhipaaye kya soch raha tha? Ki kabhi maa aur maasi ko pata nahi chalega? Bol?

Veer : Mein-

Bhavna turant hi uth ke aayi aur Purvi ke haatho se Veer ka chehra lete hue apne pait se laga liya.

Bhavna : Ahinda se aisa kabhi nahi hona chahiye. K-Kabhi nahi! Galti meri hai. Jo uss daldal me tujhe chorr gayi. Mujhe kya pata tha ki woh sab-

Veer : ...

Tej : Itne atyachaar kiye hai na unn logo ne mere bhai par. Mann toh karta hai ki-

Veer : It's okay!

Bhavna ne pyaar se iss baar poore garv se apne bete ko chooma aur uske bagal se baith gayi.

Veer : Mein ek minute! Aata hu!

Tej : Kaha jaa rahe ho? Ab ye mat kehna ki tumhe unki chinta ho rahi hai Veer!?

Veer : Bas dekhne jaa raha hu. Check karne! Unhe kisi cheez ki zaroorat toh nahi.

Bhavna ne usse nahi roka. Aur Tej ne bhi.

Veer jese hi utha, woh poori tezzi me dusre coach ki orr jaane laga. Pata nahi kyu par uska dil jese paseej gaya. Usse ek ghabrahat bhi ho rahi thi.

Woh jese hi dusre coach me jaane ke liye washroom ke paas tak aaya toh saamne ka drishya dekh uski saans hi atak gayi.

"N-Noo!"

Shweta bas ek qadam dur the darwaaze se neeche girne ke liye.

Woh besudh sii wahi khadi hui thi. Tezz raftaar me train chalti jaa rahi thi aur zorrdaar hawaaein ki lehre uski zulfo ko udaati jaa rahi thi. Usse na hosh tha na hawaas.

Aur agle hi pal,

Uska ek perr apne aap aage badh gaya.

Uska shareer girte hue hawa ke jhatke se baayi orr itne tezzi se gaya. Par tabhi,

"Huhh!??"

Ek mazboot haath uske pait ke ird gird lapta aur ek hi jhatke me uske badan ko kheechte hue andar kar liya.

Shweta jese apni besudh haalat se jaagi. Gaalo par aasu sajaaye woh uss haath ke maalik ke chehre ko jab dekhi toh,

"PAAGAL HO GAYI HO KYA AAP??"

"Ye kya harqat thi?? Dimaag hai ya nahi aap me? Kuch sochti bhi ho ya nahiii? Haan? Ek baar bhi Bhumika dii ke baare me nahi socha? Aqal kaha thi aapki ye karte waqt??? Haan? Bolo???"

Veer usse lagataar daate jaa raha tha. Par Shweta? Woh khush thi. Khushi ke maare uske aasu nahi ruk rahe the.

Veer ki daant ke bol bhi aaj jese usse amrit samaan lag rahe the.

Woh foot foot kar rote hue uske seene se lag gayi. Usne uski t shirt ko itni kass ke bheencha hua tha ki Veer khud wahi murti sa jamm ke reh gaya.

Aur tab Shweta ne uske seene par kaan lagaaye uski dhadkane suni.

*Badump* *Badump*

Sunte hi uske aasu aur zorro se nikal pade. Kyuki ye saboot tha.

He cared! He actually cared!

Veer ko uski parvaah thi. Fiqr thi. Tabhi toh itna daat raha tha. Tabhi toh uske peeche peeche aaya. Tabhi toh usse bachaaya. Aur tabhi toh uski dhadkane... Itni tezz thi.

Shweta ke thar-tharaate hontho se fir bas itna hi nikla,

"Th-Thank you!!!"

Aur antatah...! Veer ki baahe apne aap Shweta ke ird gird lapit gayi. Ek thakaan bhari aah chorr woh apni sauteli maa ke saath aalingan me wahi khada raha.

Aaj ye haal tha. Na jaane waha pohuchne par kya kya hone waala tha!?
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Ye update hai more than 6.8k words ka. It's a huge mega update. Mene kaafi detailing me likha hai isse. Kyuki mera mann tha iss hisse ko bade acche se darshaane ka. I hope aap ko pasand aaya hoga. Toh likes zaroor thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka guys.
Dhanyavaad! ✨
Awesome update
 

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Hmm to veer kisi ko bina bataye paking kar raha tha khair sabko pata chal gaya to sawal to uthne hi the khair veer ne ragini ke sath apne achhi bonding ki chalte joith nahi bola par shayad use ye akele main karna chahiye tha
Ragini ko Veer jaan boojh ke nahi le gaya hai. Kaafi reasons hai uske.

• Ragini uss ghar ki maalkin hai. On the paper. Usse pata hai kaun sii cheez kis jagah par hai. Koi vyakti kis sambandh me aa raha hai kis kaam ke liye ye woh achhe se deal karna jaanti hai. Grehesti ki saari jaankaari hai usse.

• Unki gerr hazriri me Ragini hi ghar ko dhang se sambhaal sakti hai. Woh Veer ke food business ke hisaab kitaab ko bhi dekh sakti hai Sonali se. Sonali ko padhwane ke liye drive kar usse chorr bhi sakti hai. Aur Bhumika ke restaurant me in case zaroorat padi toh waha bhi madad karwa sakti hai.

Isliye Veer usse chorr ke gaya hai. Because he has faith in her. :budhau:

Yaha to shweta gale pad gayi re shweta ka to jese pura wajud hil kar reh gaya sahi bhi hai ye aakhir shweta veer keliye itna kuch kar rahi thi or ab veer sodha bhavna ke karib jane laga to lazmi hai shweta kese chup baithegi
Ek bacche se jab uski mann pasand toffee chhina lete hai tab jo bacche ka haal hota hai. Wahi haal Shweta ka hai abhi.
Well wo sab to theek tha but ye kavya or aarohi ne sara khel bigaad diya or bhai ye kavya ka kuch jyada ho raha hai chalo arohi ka to samajhte hai ki uska pehli baat aisa hai but kavya thodi jyada chaplusi kar rahi hai Well veer ne use bataya ki tej or bhavna kon hai
Isme chaplusi kya? :dazed: Kesi chaplusi? Woh jaan'na chaahti hai sab. Isliye toh aayi. :dontknow:
Uske baad suman ne accha sambhala baat ko or kya kehti wo kisi apne malik ko apna raaz batane le ja rahi hai tab to ragini veer ki or sonali or aabha or suman ki acchi class lagati
Kya pata wo sabke saamne hi kaho Maalik keh ke bula de. :laughing:
Well sonali yaa isko problem kya hai jab dekho tab apne hero ki insult karti hai Well veer ne nidhi se uski baat ki thi par wo kuch bhul gaya or beech main hume arum ka khayal dikha Well option to accha hai but self respect or ego naam ki bhi chiz hoti hai inshan main wo kese ye kar sakta tha
Usse insult nahi kehte. Usse taang kheechna kehte hai. :declare: Veer ke saath uska yahi ravaiyya hai. Aur kyu na kare woh? Ye jaante hue ki Veer ne hassi khushi uski maa ko apni daasi bana liya. Aur rozz ragedta hai uski maa ko. Toh? Kesa feel hoyega usse? Obviously bura lagega. Uske bawajood woh kaafi hadd tak Veer ko samajh chuki hai. Aur usse admire bhi karti hai.
Well nidhi ke sath baat chit bhi acchi rahi or sonali ka program set hogya par bro ye veer shweta ko apne sath kyu leja raha hai ye pakka is journy main jab bhi veer or bhavna karib aana cahenge ye problem creat karegi
Aise imagine karo ki ek mahila ne ek beej boya zameen me. Uss beej me se jese hi paudha nikla, woh mahila usse bina khaan paan diye bina uski parvaah kiye nikal gayi.
Ab ju aaye. :D Uss paudhe ke paas. Koshish karni chaahi ju ne ki ye paudha acche se bada hoye. Par paudha murjha sa gaya tha. Aur dikhne me bhi bekaar sa ho chuka tha. Ju ne usse ignore kar diya.

Fir dekhte dekhte woh paudha bada ho gaya. Ek mazboot ped bann gaya. Aur ek din jab ju ko boht zaroorat thi. Tabhi usne ju ko chhaaya dii aur barisho se bhi bachaaya.

Ju ne thaan liya ki aaj se ju hi uski seva karoge. Uska dhyaan rakhoge. Usse sab kuch doge. Ju ne uski dekh bhaal shuru kii. Tabhi achanak se wahi pehle waali mahila aati hai aur ju ke ped ko hathiyaane lagti hai.

Kesa lagega? :D Mere khayaal se uttar mil gaya hoga.

Bro agar aap incest dikhane keliye agar bhavna or shweta ki voating karwao to main 110 % bol raha hu bhavna hi jitegi
Bhavna bhale jeet jaaye. Par jo baat Shweta me hai. Woh baat toh Bhavna me bhi nahi hai. :D And vice versa.
Or mera prefer bhavna hi hai baki to aap hi jano Well jab sablog station ja rahe the tab rollc Royce ki entry sach main kamaal ki thi but bro yaar white ke jagah agar black hoti to vibe hi alag banti hai
Veer hota toh black hi leta. Par ye gift tha. Aur Suhana ne isliye white hi dii kyuki Divya ki bhi white thi. Toh Suhana ko laga ki Veer ko yahi color pasand hai. :declare:
Well shweta or bhavna in dono ki nazare milne par spark ki jagah aag ki lapte uthi maza aayega is safar main jab ye dono bhidengi wese wolfi bro aap bata sakte ho dono main se kiska palada bhari hai
Dono equal pe hai bhai. Kisi ka palda bhaari nahi hai.
• Bhavna bhale hi sagi maa hai. Par Veer ko chorrne ki baat abhi tak saamne nahi aayi hai. Tej bhi theek se abhi ghuli mili nahi hai aur na hi Purvi. Aise me Veer unhe sirf 50% preference dega.
• Wahi dusri orr Shweta ne bhale hi uske galat kiya hai. Par pachtaava bhi boht kia hai. Kayi baar daant khaayi hai usne Veer se. Upar se itne dino se uski seva kar rahi hai. Obviously thoda emotional touch toh aayega hi Veer me uske liye. Aur isliye 50% preference idhar gaya hai. Balanced! ⚖️

Well bro mujhe lagta hai ki ye arc aagr lamba chale to readers ko koi problem nahi hoga bas raaz kayde se khulne chahiye please
Raaz khulne ke liye hi toh ye arc hai. :dazed:
Well out standing update bro

But aapke update dene ka routine thoda dagmaga gaya hai bro bas use sahi karde please it's a request
I always choose quality first. Dene ko 1000 words ka dedu. Fir ek do din baad utne hi ka dedu. Par ye mera style nahi. :nana:
Apun ka style ju jaante ho.
Thanks a lot for such a well detailed revo. Itne sawaal rakhe. Uttar dene me mujhe boht maza aaya. :D Accha hua koi spoiler nahi pucha. Spoilers na dena bhi apne aap me boht kathin kaam hota hai. :sweat:
Anyways, keep supporting as usual mate! :five:
 

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Werewolf Bhai Kya Village Arc and Pe Ja Raha Hai.....

Suhana Accident K Samay Aane Wala System Wala Aadami Milega.....
Abhi kaha end bhai. Abhi toh bacha hai. Wo banda ab kya pata!? Shayad ek aad jhalak dikh jaaye. Par woh agle arc me hi theek se nazar aayega.
 
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