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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

    Votes: 1,195 83.0%
  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 24 1.7%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 188 13.1%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 33 2.3%

  • Total voters
    1,440

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ʏᴏᴜ ᴀʀᴇ ᴀʟʀᴇᴀᴅʏ ᴜɴᴅᴇʀ ᴍʏ ɢᴇɴᴊᴜᴛꜱᴜ
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Werewolf

ʏᴏᴜ ᴀʀᴇ ᴀʟʀᴇᴀᴅʏ ᴜɴᴅᴇʀ ᴍʏ ɢᴇɴᴊᴜᴛꜱᴜ
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Update - 113 ~ Blunder (1)
Ab tak...

Nidhi iss ladki se vaakif nahi thi. Usne sawaaliya nazro se dekha toh uss ladki ne sawaal kiya,

"Miss Nidhi!?"

Nidhi : H-Haan! Nidhi mein hi hu. Kahiye!

Toh saamne maujood ladki ne ek hi vaakya kaha,

"Tejal here! Kya mein andar aa sakti hu?"

Nidhi : Huh!!?


Ab aage...

Khamoshi!

Jo kamre me chhayi hui thi. Aur iss kamre ki chaar diwaaro me agar koi shor tha, toh woh tha upar lage pankhe ka. Jo maddham maddham ghoom ke halki karkash awaaz ko anjaam de raha tha.

"Kya mene jo kuch bhi abhi abhi suna, woh sach tha?" Dheemi aur thodi ladkhadati hui ek ladki ki komal awaaz aayi.

Awaaz thi Tejal ki. Single seat sofe par woh virajman saamne divaan par baithi Nidhi ki orr dekh rahi thi. Aankhein poori naam! Jo kuch bhi abhi abhi suna, usse pacha paana mushqil maalum ho raha tha.

Nidhi ke chehre par bhi mayusi thi. Usne dheere se sarr haan me hilaaya aur nazre jhuka lii.

Tejal : Ye aapki beti hai?

Usne kamre ke parde ki orr ishara karte hue pucha, jaha Juhi uss parde ke peeche chhip ke khadi hui thi. Apna thoda sa mukh bas dikhaaye woh jhaak rahi thi. Anjaan logo ke saamne woh aksar aisa kiya karti thi.

Nidhi ne fir haami bhari aur Juhi ko ishaare se apne paas bulaaya. Bechari Juhi apne nanhe kadam lete hue sehme sehme divaan se chipak chipak ke Nidhi ke paas aayi.

Nidhi ne uski peeth par haath rakh Tejal ki taraf aage kiya toh Tejal ne Juhi ke dono haath thaam liye.

Tejal : Kya naam hai aapka?

"Juhi!!!" Woh dheeme se boli!

Tejal (smiles) : Juhi! Boht pyaara naam hai. Aap mujhse friendship karogi?

Juhi bina kuch kahe ahista se sarr hilaayi toh Tej punah muskuraayi.

Tejal : Boht cute hai aapki beti! Toh kya aap apni beti ki kasam khaa ke keh sakti hai ki aapne jo kuch abhi abhi kaha woh sab... Ek ek baat sach thi.

Tejal ki baat par Nidhi hakki bakki sii reh gayi.

Nidhi : Huh!!?

Tejal : Meri baat ka bura laga ho toh mujhe maaf karna. Par mujhe ye jaan'na boht zaroori hai. Please! If you can! Agar aapko dikkat hai toh mein abhi issi waqt yaha se chali jaungi.

Nidhi kuch derr shaant rahi, fir gehri saans lete hue boli,

Nidhi : Agar koi aur hota, toh mene usse ghar se nikal diya hota. Par aapne bataya ki aap Veer ki sagi behan hai. Aur iss baat ki bhi pushti nahi hui hai abhi bhi. Sirf aapke photo dikhaane se ye saabit nahi hua hai. Mujhe abhi bhi sanshay hai. Toh pehle aap-

Iss se pehle ki Nidhi aage keh paati Tejal ne usse wahi tok diya,

Tejal : Ye rahi meri Maa ki ekmaatr dii hui sone ki chain.

Usne apne gale se ek khubsoorat sii chain utaarte hue Nidhi ke haatho me thama dii.

Tejal : Mere paas abhi aur kuch nahi hai apni baat prove karne ke liye. Jab tak mein apne bhai se mil na lu aur ye baat sach na saabit ho jaaye ki woh mera bhai hai. Ye chain aapke paas rahegi.

Nidhi : N-Nahi!! Nahi nahi! Isse aap apne paas hi rakhiye!

Nidhi darr ke maare chain waapas karne lagi. Dherro frauds aise hote hai jidhar insaan apni marzi se aapko apni keemti cheez deke jaata hai aur baad me police complaint kar aapko andar karwa deta hai. Kahi ye ladki bhi unme se ek toh nahi thi!? Nidhi thoda ghabra gayi.

Tejal : Please!! Meri baat ka vishvaas kijiye! Mein aapki baat abhi apni Mom se nahi kara sakti. Please! Trust me! Trust me ma'am! I beg you! Ye mere liye boht important hai.

Woh ghutno pe baith Nidhi ko pakadte hue boli,

Nidhi : M-Mein aise kese...!?

Tejal : P-Please!!!

Uske chehre ke haav bhaav dekh pata nahi kyu, Nidhi ka mann andar se kehne laga. Ki ye ladki shayad jhooth nahi bol rahi thi.

Jo desperation tha iss ladki me. Uss desperation ne Nidhi ko sochne par majboor kar diya.

Nidhi : Th-Theek hai!

Aur woh maan gayi!

Tejal (beams in joy) : Thank you so much!

Nidhi : Par aapko ye chain dene ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. Mujhe yakeen hai!

Tejal : Huh!? Par!?

Nidhi : It's fine!

Tejal : O-Okay! Now please~ Mujhe aapse ek favour aur chahiye!

Nidhi : Kesa favour?

Tejal : Mere bhai ka address kya yahi hai jo mentioned hai idhar!

Usne apna phone dikhaate hue pucha. Phone me Veer ki social media profile thi. Aur uss me kuch details padi hui thi. Address unme se ek tha.

Nidhi (nods) : Ye uske puraane ghar ka address hai. Woh ab waha nahi rehta hai. Jesa ki mene bataya woh ab apni bhabhi ke saath dusre address par-

Tejal (smiles) : No! Thank you ma'am! Mujhe yahi jaan'na tha. Aur yahi chaahiye mujhe! Thank you so much once again and please ek last promise aur~

Nidhi : !??

Tejal (smiles) : Aap ye baat usse... I mean mere bhai Veer ko nahi bataengi!

Nidhi : Lekin kyu? Agar aap uski behan ho toh fir intezaar kesa? Woh toh jaan ke behad khush-

Tejal (smiles) : Kuch cheezein surprise rehne dijiye! I hope aap apna vaada rakhengi! I'm leaving now! Take care!

Woh palti aur jaate jaate Juhi ke sarr par pyaar se haath ferr waha se baahar ho gayi.

Nidhi daud ke darwaaze par aayi, lekin tab tak Tej apni tezzi me pehle hi lift se neeche jaa chuki thi.

'Mene sahi toh kiya na? Veer ki sagi behan...! Iska matlab uski maa bhi yahi aas paas...! Kya mene sab kuch bata ke sahi kiya? Kahi koi musibat na khadi ho jaaye! Veer...!'

Woh mann me soch wahi bas dekhti reh gayi! Na jaane kya hone waala tha.

Baahar nikalte hi Tej ne cab book kari aur waapas Purvi ke ghar ki orr nikal padi. Gaadi toh chalti jaa rahi thi. Aur manzil par pohuch kar ruk bhi jaegi. Par inn aasuo ka kya? Jo uski aankho se nirantar behte jaa rahe the?

Inhe kese roke woh?

Woh jitni baar aasu pochti, utni hi baar woh chhalak uthate.

Nidhi ke ghar me woh khud ko kese control kii hui thi ye wahi jaanti thi. Accha hua jo woh aaj Nidhi se milne aa gayi. Aur usse itni saari baatein pata chal gayi. Warna na jaane aur kitne samay tak woh andhere me rehti.

Kuch derr pehle...

"College toh yahi dikha raha hai profile me!"

Cab se utarte hue Tejal andar college me gayi. Campus me usse dherro ladke ladkiya nazar aaye. Kuch canteen me baithe the toh kuch playground me the. Kuch aa rahe the toh kuch jaa rahe the. Ek chahal pahal waala ilaaka.

Bina derri kiye woh seedha andar main building me ghusi.

Aur saamne hi usse fee counter dikh gaya.

Tejal : Excuse me!? Mujhe jaan'na tha ki ye person issi college me hai na?

Person : Andar Sir se miliye!

Tejal andar gayi toh usse ek peon nazar aaya,

Tejal : Suniye! Mujhe pata karna hai ki ye student issi college se hai ya nahi?

Peon : Madam ye toh aapko Sir log hi bata payenge. Ya bacche log. Kis department me hai?

Tejal : Sorry! Yaha ye toh mention nahi hai.

Peon : Aapko yahi nahi pata!?

'Pata hota toh mein tum se kyu puchti bewakoof?' woh mann me hi khud se boli aur usse ek look dete hue nikal gayi.

'Aise nahi hoga kuch! Mujhe khud se hi confront karna hoga...!'

Aur woh department to department jaane lagi. Woh harr department ki classes me se kisi na kisi student se puchti aur harr koi usse naa me hi uttar deta.

Umeed ghatati jaa rahi thi.

Par tabhi,

Jab usne ek random ladki ko pakadte hue photo dikhaate hue pucha toh woh ek baar me Veer ko pehchaan gayi,

Ladki : Ye toh veer hai! Hamari class me hi hai. Par regular nahi aata. Kuch kaam tha kya?

Tejal : Dhyaan se dekho! Kya sach me yahi hai?

Ladki : Arre haan na baba! Hehe~ Mein follow karti hu usko. Toh mujhe pata hoga na!

Tejal : Okay thank you! Kya koi teacher nahi hai? Veer ka koi friend hai? Ya teacher jis se uski pehchaan ho?

Ladki : Veer ka friend? Tch!! Uska koi friend nahi hai. Mene try kiya par ab woh kisi se baat hi nahi karta hai. Haan! Mene usse Nidhi ma'am ke saath aate hue zaroor dekha hai. Hehehe~ Kitni afwaahe udii thi tab toh! Pata hai kya hua tha?

Tejal : Nidhi ma'am!? Inke saath uski pehchaan hai?

Ladki : Arre haan! Arre mene toh ye bhi suna hai ki dono saath me rehte the. Ek hi ghar me. Aur upar se aapko pata hai? Nidhi ma'am ka divorce hone waala tha tab. Hehe! Ek teacher aur student ki-

Tejal : Kaha milengi ye Nidhi ma'am?

Ladki : Sorry! Par woh toh ab nikal gayi. Too bad! Aaj unhone early leave liya tha.

Tejal : T-Toh ab?

Ladki : Ab kuch nahi ho sakta. Kal aaiyega! Simple!

Kehte hue woh palti,

Ladki : Unless you know her address! *Yawns*

Aur yu hi carefree andaaz me woh nikal gayi. Par uske muh se nikli ye akhiri baat Tejal ke kaano me ghanti zaroor baja gayi.

"Her address huh!?

Par saath hi ek dwesh ki bhaavna bhi jaag gayi.

'Top notch colleges me se ek hai ye city ke according to the Google. Hmm! Itna paisa! Upar se regular nahi aata... Ma'am ke saath rehne ke charche...! Agar mujhe itni facilities mili hoti toh...! No! I can not...! Tejal! Ateet ki baat ateet me. Let's move forward!' usne ek gehri saans lii.

Fir shuru hua jhooth ka silsila.

"Sir! Mein Veer ki sister hu. College me studies se related Nidhi ma'am se aaj baat honi thi. Par woh aaj chali gayi hai. Shayad bhul gayi."

"Meri flight hai aaj! Jaane se pehle unse milna tha."

"Agar aap mujhe unka address dede toh ghar jaake abhi mein unse mil lungi!"

"Nahi nahi! Mein samajhti hu aap aise hi kisi teacher ki details nahi dete haha ~ Par ab situation hi aisi bann gayi hai Sir!"

"Unhone tab apne cabin ke phone se shayad mujhe contact kiya tha, apne number se nahi! Isliye ye problem arise ho gayi. Jii! Toh aap thoda agar~"

"Thank you so much sir!! Ab mein unse time se mil sakti hu. Thank you!"

Bas!

Kuch jhooth ki baatein, aur uska kaam nikal chuka tha.

Address milte hi Tejal Nidhi ke bataaye address par pohuchi. Raat ke 8 baj chuke the.

Aur Nidhi ko saari baatein bataane ke baad jese tese usne usse convince kiya. Nidhi bhi bechaari akhir kaar sach bataane par majboor ho gayi.

Jo jo usse pata tha Veer ko leke, woh poora chittha khol ke rakh diya usne.

Nidhi ke bol ab bhi Tejal ke mann me goonj rahe the.

"Mene dekha hai usse. Tootate, haarte, rote, ghaayal hote!!! Veer...! Sach me Veer hai!! Uske jaisa mene aaj tak apni poori zindagi me aisa ladka nahi dekha...!"

"Paapi hai woh log! Uske pita...! Sharm aati hai mujhe uske pita ke baare me sochte hue bhi. Chhiii!! Thuu hai aise pita par!! Woh ladka... ICU ke ward me kese tadap raha tha mene dekha hai apni nazro se... *sniff* Pucho mat!"

"Koi bhi usse dekhne tak na aaya! Koi bhi nahi! Na uske pita, na sauteli Maa, na behne, na bhai, na uske Dada jii! Koi bhi nahi! Kya fayda aise parivaar ka jidhar... *sniff* Jidhar apne hi na ho? Dhitkaar hai aise logo pe!"

"Mene usse apne saath rakha tha. Poore 1 mahine 13 din raha hai woh idhar. Uske baad woh apni Bhabhi ke ghar shift hua. Nadaan hai na. Samajh raha tha ki uske rehne se mujhe aarthik roop se dikkatein aa rahi hai. *sniff* Paagal kahi ka...! Ab bhi usse t-toh ek lappad maarne ka-"

Aur woh ro padi.

Bilakh bilakh ke royi!!! Hatheli se aasu poch usne aage kehna jaari rakha,

"Koi kese... K-Koi kese itna nirdayi ho sakta hai? *sniff* Na koi dost, na koi apna, na parivaar. Arre bolne batane wala koi bhi nahi tha uske paas. Fir bhi uske chehre par hamesha muskaan rehti thi. *sniff* Yaha jab tak woh raha... Mujhe kabhi bhi woh bojh ki tarah nahi laga. Hamesha hi *sniff* mene usse apna hi maana hai. Iss ghar ka sadasya!! Aaj woh qaabil hai. Kama raha hai. Khud ka business bhi shuru kiya hai. Toh dekh ke... *sniff* Dekh ke accha lagta hai. Dil ko sukoon milta hai. Khushi hoti hai."

Woh rote hue muskuraayi,

"Aur ye sab jo mein bata rahi hu ye sab toh sirf baahar ki baatein hai. Na jaane andhruni baato me kya kya jaan'ne ko milega. *sniff* Bechaare ne kitna kuch saha hoga ateet me. Ye koi nahi jaanta. Mujhe bhi nahi bataya hai usne. Aur uska parivaar...!"

"Thuu hai aise parivaar par!! Khaas kar woh Pranjal! Kalank hai woh kalank! Veer ne mujhe sachet kiya hai...! Ye ladka... Uska bhai nahi aasteen ka saanp hai. Kya aap yakeen kar sakti ho? Ki ek ladke ne apne hi Dada jii ka haadsa karvaya taaki woh apne bhai ko jaydaad se baahar kar sake. Soch sakti ho?"

"Iske kaale karnaame mujhe pata hai. Accha hua ki Veer ne iss ghatiya insaan ki pol khol ke rakh dii. Lekin abhi bhi... *sniff* abhi bhi mujhe uska parivaar kuch khaas pasand nahi hai."

"Hmm! Uski bhabhi pehle se kaafi sudhar chuki hai. Woh ab acchi hai. Samay rehte jaag gayi. Yaha tak ki... Uski do behne Kavya aur Arohi! Ye dono bhi behad acchi hai. Meri mulaqaat hui hai kayi baar. Same college me hai. Lekin baaki? Unke baare me mein kuch nahi keh sakti...!"

Aur fir...!

Khamoshi!

Jo kamre me chhayi hui thi. Aur iss kamre ki chaar diwaaro me agar koi shor tha, toh woh tha upar lage pankhe ka.

*Honk* *Honk*

Yaaddaasht dhundhli hui, aur waapas se Tejal ko saamne ka nazaara dikhaayi diya. Purvi ka ghar aa chuka tha.

Apne aasu poch woh utri aur cab wale ko pay kar ke woh andar society me jaane ke liye hui.

Chalte chalte, uske haatho me phone ki screen par wahi Veer ki tasveer thi jo usne chupke se Egypt me kheechi thi.

'Aur mujhe laga tha... Ki meri zindagi hi battar guzri hai. Now that I compare my life with yours. It's laughable!'

'The pain you've endured...! Tumhe dhundne ki talaash toh ussi din se thi jis din tumhare baare me pata chala tha. Bachpan me mene kya kuch nahi jhela. Mom ka akelapann, mera family ka na hona, aur roz roz taane sunn'na. Financial conditions, and what not. Aur sochti thi... Ki mere paas jab bhai hai toh uski zindagi kesi guzar rahi hogi? Milna chaahti thi tum se.'

'Par yaha aake Purvi Maasi se pata laga ki tumhari family hai. Ek joint family. Aur mein akeli... Bas maa ke saath... Tum hassoge agar mene ye baat tumhare saamne kahi toh. Mujh me jalan jaag gayi thi. Haan! Tumse jalan! Aur thodi nafrat bhi...!'

'Mein yaha akeli aur tumhe itne bade parivaar ke saath rehne ko mila? Itna paisa? Itna accha college? Itna pyaar!? Par ab...!'

'Ab jab jaani hu... Toh khud par hassi aa rahi hai. The pain I've suffered is nothing compared to yours... How many wounds are you still hiding? Veer!?'

Sochte sochte woh gate par pohuxh doorbell bajaayi toh Purvi ne gate khola. Aur usse dekh khush ho gayi.

Purvi (smiles) : Aao! Tumhe hi yaad kar rahe the.

Kehte hue woh palat ke andar chali gayi. Parantu, Tejal wahi khadi rahi. Apni maasi ko jaate hue dekhti rahi,

'Maasi! Aap lucky ho! Filhaal kal ke liye... Mein apne plan ko anjaam nahi dungi. But after that...! I will do it!'

*Click*

Aur usne andar aake darwaaza band kar diya.

***

Next day...
Afternoon - 12:36 PM
Mahila mandal samiti...

"Aaj fir wahi hua hai. Humne toh waha poora support dikhaya tha na? Fir waha ke log hamare khilaaf aisa kese ~!?"

Kareeb ek 34-35 saal ki aurat kheejte hue boli. Dikhne me theek thaak thi. Par mahila mandal me aurto me uski bhumika bhi aham thi.

"Baat kuch aur bhi hai Sarika!"

Ek vinamrta bhari awaaz uske bagal se aayi.

Sarika : Aur kya baat ho sakti hai Suman jii?

Suman muskuraayi!

Suman : Agar humne uss shetr me apna poora yogdaan diya hai logo ko. Toh woh kabhi hamaare khilaaf morcha nahi nikaalenge. Aise awaaz nahi uthaenge. Par aaj ye do baar ho gaya hai. Kuch din pehle bhi hua tha. Tum khud socho!? Ki woh aisa kyu kar rahe hai? Zaahir hai ki unhe bhadkaaya gaya hai.

Suman ki baat sunn, Sarika ke maathe par lakeere chhaa gayi.

*Click*

Tabhi, kamre ka darwaaza khula aur ek khubsoorat sii saree me ek khubsoorti ki bala pravesh kii. Uske jism me maans harr uss jagah me sahi se bhara hua tha jaha ek mard ko chaahiye hota tha.

Chuttad, than, unn dono jagaho me maans ki koi kami nahi thi. Shayad isliye Veer ko iss aurat ke jism ko chakhne me itna maza aata tha.

Niharika roz ki tarah apni bhaari gaand matkaate hue andar aayi aur uski nazre sabse pehle Suman par padi,

Niharika : Suman ka kehna sahi hai. Mujhe ek ghinone shadiyantra ki buu aa rahi hai.

Sarika : Par didi! Humne kabhi kisi ka bura jab kiya hi nahi toh-

Niharika : Humne nahi kiya. Par hamare kaaran kuch logo ko mirchi zaroor lagti hai. Khaas kar raaes-zaado ko. Koi wajah hogi jiske chalte hum aade aa rahe honge. Bas! Hume hataane ka bahaana hai ye.

Sarika : Par kaun ho sakta hai akhir!?

Niharika : Yahi hume pata lagana hai!

Woh kuch raay rakhti ki ek baar fir darwaza khula par iss baar koi mahila nahi thi.

"Jii Suman jii se kaam tha. Unse milna tha thoda. Kya mein mil sakta hu?"

Kisi ko jhatka lage ya na lage par Niharika ko ye awaaz sunn ke zaroor jhatka lag chuka tha.

Woh bhi high voltage wala.

Uski sitti pitti gum ho chuki thi. Kyuki awaaz kisi aur ki nahi balki, Veer ki hi thi.

Bechari Niharika ka garam badan poora ekbaar me thanda pad gaya. Woh jaanti thi Veer ke saath akhiri baat kya hui thi uski. Usne Veer ka phone hack karna chaaha tha. Par woh nakaam thi. Veer ne kaha tha ki woh aake waha uski khabar lega. Aur ab uski rooh kaanp rahi thi.

Sarika : Suman jii? Ohh! Suman jii ke ghar se ho na?

Veer : Jii!

Sarika : Haan yahi hai Suman jii! Baat karlo!

Veer : Woh zara akele me baat karna thi.

Suman bhi khud hairat me apne maalik ko dekh rahi thi.

'Maalik yaha? Bhala kya kaam hoga?'

Uske dimaag me abhi ye nahi aaya tha ki Veer ne uski chori pehle hi pakad chuki hai.

Sarika : Akele me? Accha theek hai. Par zara jaldi!

Niharika : Sarika! Aur baaki sabhi, chalo baahar chalo. Jaldi!

Kehte hue woh sarr jhukaaye palti aur tezz kadmo ke saath bhaagne lagi. Uski nazre milaane tak ki himmat nahi ho rahi thi.

Veer (smiles) : Mujhe aap se bhi kaam hai Niharika jii!

Aur bas, ye sunte hi Niharika ke kadam wahi theher gaye. Darr ke maare!

Sarika aur baaki sabhi baahar jese hi nikli.

*Click*

Veer ne darwaza andar se band kar liya.

Aur ye dekhte hi Niharika ka badan kaanp utha.

Veer (smiles) : Suman! Meri pyaari Suman!

Suman (smiles) : Maalik~

Woh bina kuch jaane khush hote hue daud ke Veer ke nazdeek aayi par iske pehle ki woh khud ko uski baaho me saup paati, Veer ne uss thaama aur usse palat ke deewaar se sata diya.

Suman : Maalik!!??

Veer uske kaano ki orr jhuka,

Veer : Itni badi baat ho gayi aur tumhare muh se kuch nikla tak nahi? Hmm? Apni safaayi me kuch kehna chaahogi?

Suman : Ahhh!

Ab pata chalte hi Suman ki khud ki haakat patli ho gayi. Usse samajh aa gaya tha ki kyu Maalik naraaz the. Jhooth bolegi toh saza toh milni hi thi.

Jab Veer ne Suman se pucha tha ki sab kuch kesa chal raha hai? Toh Suman ne Veer ko koi taqleef nahi bataayi thi.

Jabki...

Musibatein toh thi!

Kisi basti ke log kuch hafte pehle ek din aake naari shakti ke khilaaf haaye haaye ke naare laga ke gaye the.

Sab kuch ast vyast kar diya tha. Log zyada bhi the toh mahila mandal kuch kar na saki. Bas tamasha dekhti rahi.

Jaha unki image ki dhajjiya udti rahi. Uss se badi baat ye thi ki ye wahi shetr ke log the jaha mahila mandal ne pehle avedh roop se paani chori hone ke liye awaaz uthaayi thi.

Kisi mahila ke ghar paani nahi aa raha tha aur usne mahila mandal se madad maangi thi. Mahila mandal ne poori madad kar, awaaz utha ke ye maamla sambhaala tha aur waha pani ki sahi tareeqe se supply chalu karwayi thi.

Par dekho. Jis thaali me khaaya, ussi me chhed kar diya.

Wahi basti ke log aaj poore mahila mandal ko gaali de rahe the.

Khaas kar Suman ko. Kyuki wahi thi jo aage thi uss waqt. Tab Suman nayi nayi thi. Aur usse kaam sambhaalna sikhaaya jaaye iske chakte usse ye zimmedari saupi gayi thi.

Aur ab nateeja? Usse gaaliya khaani pad rahi thi.

Apne maalik ko chinta me na daala jaaye, isliye Suman ne apne maalik se ye baat chhipa lii. Par Veer ko ye bilkul bhi pasand na aaya.

Aur kese aata? Suman uska parivaar thi. Sirf ek slave nahi! Koi maans ka tukda nahi thi woh jisse bas istemaal karne ke liye rakha jaaye.

Veer ne Suman ki saree uthaayi aur agle hi pal uske aur Niharika ke saamne uske nange nitambh ucchal ke ujaagar ho gaye.

Niharika hakki bakki sii sab dekh rahi thi.

Niharika : Y-Ye!!? Ye!? Panty k-kaha hai iski...!?

Veer (smiles) : Tumne aaj bhi panty nahi pehni hai? Na hi petticoat? Boht daring ho rahi ho aajkal! But it's good for me!

Niharika : wh-what!!?

Niharika ko ignore kar, Veer ne apne jeb se ek chota whip nikaala.

Aur fir,

*Chataaaaaakkkkkk*

"Aaahhhnnnnmmmmm~"

Ek zordaar cheenkh goonjti. Agar Veer uska muh band na karta toh. Usne zorr se whip ghumaate hue Suman ke nange chuttado par ek ke baad ek vaar kiye. Aur harr baar, Suman bechari ka shareer hil ke reh jaati.

Bas kuch hi maar me, uski cheekhein uttejna se bhari kaamuk siskiyo me badal gayi.

*Chataaaaaakkkkkk*

*Chataaaaaakkkkkk*

Uske kulhe laal pad gaye. Veer ne apne haatho se unn pato ko alag kiya toh usse manmohak drishya nazar aaya.

Do lazeez-daar chhed!!

Usne Suman ki gadaayi chamdi ko fela fela ke darshan liye. Uski choot geeli hui padi thi.

Mauka dekh Veer ne apna hathiyaar nikaala aur seedha Suman ki choot me pel diya.

"Nnnnnggghhhhhh~"

Darwaaze ke peeche khade hoke woh dono tabadtod chudaayi me lag gaye. Aur idhar bechaari Niharika ka sirr phata jaa raha tha. Woh stabdh hoye? Ya darre? Ya fir uttejit hoye? Uski samajh me kuch nahi aa raha tha.

*Phattttt* *phattttt* ki awaazein udhar aa rahi thi. Veer ka lund zorr zorr se dono chhedo ko bhogne me laga hua tha.

Veer : Ye hai tumhari saza!!

Suman : M-Maalik!! Ye saza nahi hai... *huff* *huff* Ye toh inaam hai!!

Veer (smiles) : Inaam hi sahi! Inaam se yaad aaya. Nayi slave ko bhi toh inaam dena hai na?

Niharika : A-Ahhh!

Niharika ka badan thitur utha.

Veer ke dhakke idhar tezz hue aur usne pucha,

Veer : Shittttt!!!! I'm close!! Kidhar chahiye tumhe Suman!

*Phattttt* *Phattttt* *Phattttt*

Suman : Ahhhnnn~ Maalik!!! M-Maalik!!! Dono chhed aapke hai... Nnnghhhh!!!? J-Jidhar daalna ho. N-Nahi!!! Rukiye! Mene... *huff* Mene tay kar liya hai. Choot me maalik. M-Meri choot me daaliye...!

*Splurrrttttttt*

Aur ek dhaar nikalte hui Suman ki andhruni diwaaro ko rang dii.

*Plop*

Jese hi lund uss chhed se baahar aaya Suman agle hi shan palat ke ghutno ke bal baith lund muh me bhar chusne lagi. Kyuki woh jaanti thi.

She knew it. A cocksleave must know its place. No matter from which hole Master's dick came from. A cocksleave's job is to clean it thoroughly and keep sucking it most of the time.

Jab Veer ne Niharika ko punaah dekha toh woh ghabraate hue peeche jaa rahi thi.

Par aisa hua na...

Veer ne usse bhi dabocha aur uske dono chhed chod chod ke apne veerya se bhar diye.

Uski chuttad laal the. Zaahir hai acchi khaasi spanking aur whipping hui thi. Balki deepthroat aur sandwich blowjob bhi mila tha Veer ko apni dono slaves se.

Suman apne maalik ke liye paani lene gayi thi. Par darwaza lagana bhul gayi. Jese hi pata laga ki koi aane waala hai. Veer ne apni dono naukraaniyo ko table ke neeche bhej diya. Aur woh upar Raja ki tarah baitha hua tha.

Do aurte uske lund athwa tatto ko choosne me lagi hui thi. Tabhi Sarika aa dhamki,

Sarika : Hmm? Didi kaha hai? Aur Suman jii!?

*Slurrrrpppp*

'Ohhh fucccckkk!!! Suman dheere!!! Uggh!!!'

Veer : Woh dono baahar gayi thi.

Sarika : Tum idhar kya kar rahe ho? Aur ek minute! Suman jii ki kursi par kyu baithe ho?

*Slurrrrrpppppp* *slurrrrrpppp*

*Kisssss* *lick*

Idhar woh baate kar rahi thi. Par usse kya pata tha ki uski mahila mandal ki Head aur nayi member Suman, ek mard ke saamne table ke andar ghus uska lund choosne me lagi hui thi.

Niharika thi man hater! Aur woh apne hi area me baith ke, ek mard ka lund choos rahi thi.

Veer (smiles) : Mein yaha? Hahaha! Ahem! Mujhe Suman jii hi baitha ke gayi hai. Aati hi hongi.

Bina kuch kahe Sarika toh nikal gayi. Par idhar Veer unke sarr ko baalo ke bal pakadta aur khilaune ki tarah istemaal kar unke mukho ko chodta.

Niharika ka toh poora chehra lund ki mehek se mehek raha tha.

Aur jharrne ke baad usne dono ke hi muh me thoda thoda hissa gira diya. Jisse majbooran Niharika ko gutakna pada.

Ye sab samapt hote hi, Veer ne important baat rakhi,

Veer : Koi hai jo hamare khilaaf hai. Aur agar mein sahi hu. Toh jesa kar raha hu wesa hi hona chahiye. Niharika tum!

Niharika : A-Ahnn? M-Mein ..!?

Veer : Tum!!! Aaj mere saath kahi chalogi!

Usne itna kaha hi tha ki tabhi uske phone par do messages aa gaye.

Veer : huh!?

Veer ne check kiya toh paaya ki, ek purvi ka tha aur dusra... Miss Kaera ka!!!

Purvi : Hum shaam ko 6 baje milenge. Vikram!

Kaera : Tonight!! Come to my home @ 7 PM!!!

'Ahh! Shit!!! Firse nahi! The timing...!'

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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Update consists of 4.4k words. Ab koi supporting updates nahi hai. Ye update padh ke samajh aa gaya hoga. Iss update se hi ye arc tezz pace pakad chuka hai. Toh like thok ke jaane ka. Aur revos rakhne ka bhaaya.

Baaki, dhanyavaad! ✨
 
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ʏᴏᴜ ᴀʀᴇ ᴀʟʀᴇᴀᴅʏ ᴜɴᴅᴇʀ ᴍʏ ɢᴇɴᴊᴜᴛꜱᴜ
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Fantastic super update

That was best

Kafi acha update tha Werewolf bhai. Matlb abhi tak is story me veer ka sbse milna chal hi rahe hai. Aur sayad se aage ke kuch Updates me aur bhi ye chalta rahe.
H lakin ye bhi hai ki sbse milne ke sath sath yaha story bhi apne pace se aage badhati kar rahi hai. Jaise pari kaRajeev ko choose karna aur sath me uska valid reason bhi dena. Fir veer ka kavya aur arohi se milna. Uske baad veer aur Ragini ka encounter batao baat sari ko uthane tak pahuch cuki hai. Aur ending to kamak ki hi thi aakhirkar update me sbko jisbaat ka intejar tha wo last line me aapne dikha hi diya.
Veer ka apne business keliye future planbhi aapne dikha diya. Sath me sonali ke liye veer ka sochna bhi aapne sahi dikhaya.
Ye baat bhi confirm hai agar veer hotal chain open krega to sweta aur bhumika hi use sambhalengi. Sath me sayad sonali ko bhi study puri hone ke baad kisi chij me laga skta hai veer.
Dekhte hai aakhir veer ke baree me tej kya kya pata kar pati hai. Aur nidhi ko bhi kya kuch pata chlta hai.

Dhanyavaad! Update ke liye ✨

Nice update

Nice update

awesome update bro

Bahot behtareen shaandaar update bhai
Yeh achcha kia aapne jo sara status ko fir se edit kia
Ragini k saath beach per masti kerne wale h dekhte h beach or kitni garam hoti h dono k jaane se
Balhaar k paas kia jaankari thi jise sunker mathe per bal pad gaye
Balhaar n socha yeh bachxha h ise maar ker khud boss ban jaye lekin ab dubara uske dilo dimag m kabhi nahi aayega yeh thought jis tarah veer n uske kaam m kahi
Tejas bechari apne bhai ko dhoondhne k liye dar dar bhatak rahi or yaha maa ji namber rehte huwe bhi call nahi ker rahi Purvi k samjhane per call kia bhi tow baat nahi ki purvi n sambhal lia baherhal dekhte h ab Pirvi ki mulaqat jab hogi tab kia baat hogi or Tejas n kia plan banaya lia apne laptop se jaankari naikal k Veer ki
Dekhte h kia hota h
Bahot khoob shaandaar
Lajawab update bhai

Bahut hi maazedar update Werewolf bhai...

bakwas bull shit update

Waahhh..kahani ab aage badh rahi hai badhiya tarike se..karan kritika ka v scene badhiya hai.. Ragini ke sath khul ke baat aage badhaya Jaye .. veer aur tejal ka interaction ka intezar hai...

Ding werewolf bhai disappointed update 🤧🤧🤧🤧 socha kuch nikla kuch😴😴😴😴but entry of tej🔥👻☠️ye batata hai next update suppose to be unimaginable keep your best work keep posting

Awesome👍👏, beautiful😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

Veer&Karan dono dostu ko kafi samey bad ek dosre k sang dikhaya gaya Veer apna business improve karne ki planning ker rha hai or isme uska sath Karan b de rha hai that's really good or Karan k suggestion hai k Kaera uske business me achi khasi investment ker sakti hai to is se saf zahir hai k jald hi back in to story ho gi or wo chahti hai k Veer uske sath contact me rhe kaise b reason don't know casual friends to hain hi wo dono lakin is se agey tak to filhal k liye kuch b bataya nahi gaya ohh sucks bc main to bhool hi gaya ta k Veer&Kaera ding dong kab ka khel chuke literally ye bat mere dimagh se hi nikal gayi thi:roflol:
Veer ka Kaera se kia howa promise b to sath hi hai abhi wo kitna fulfill ker paya hai kafi time se is bare me kuch b bataya nahi gaya we'll let's see next kab mulakat hoti hai dono ki Sonali k liye acha decision liya hai Veer ne wo apni studies continue kare is se ziada achi bat to or koi ho hi nahi sakti sath hi usey kam se b lagao ho gaya hai to maybe b wo poori tarah se kam se elahda na ho khair choice uski apni hai waise hai to cute:heartbeat:
ye Kavya kuch ziada hi naughty hoti ja rhi hai table k neche hide&seak kheli ja rhi hai shayad jald hi kuch ker guzre:despo:
Ajkal ki young generation se jawani kahan sambhale sambhalti tarap hi kuch esi hai k rha nahi jata:winknudge:
Veer:meri class teacher to Nidhi mam
hain:hehe:
khel gaya londa bc😂
Kiritika&Karan in dono me b scene on hai Kiritika ke bio me jo pic attach ki gayi hai to
us hisab se ye bandi bohat hi ziada cute lagi mujhe acha character hai we'll bat karen Karan ki to wo 1 rich family se belong kerta hai or jaisa uska bap hai agr in future in dono k rishte related kuch bat nikalti hai to wo zaror panga kre ga khair koi na dekhen ge abhi to kuch b kehna possible nahi
Babhi nahi Ragini bolo Veer Ragini😂
Is poore scene ko read karte doran mujhe bs yehi bat sojhi wtf main ye kia dekh rha hu k waqi aisa hi hai hansi thi k ruk hi nahi rhi thi 1 bar ko dimagh me kheyal aya k pagal wagal to nahi ho gaya main:winkiss:
Chalo ab jo hai so hai lage hathu hum b
free me:shag:
len ge manoranjan k liye:lol1:
Finally Nidhi ji ki wapsi hoi❤
last me thora sa hi Nidhi k part ko dikhaya gaya jo bohat hi acha laga Juhi baby to tv dekhne me busy hain lakin Nidhi ka bete ke bare me kuch nahi bataya?
Tejal pohanch chuki hai apne man me dheru sawal liye Nidhi k ghar ab ye bat dekhne wali ho gi k usey un sawal k jawab milte b hain ya nahi jis rah per wo chal nikli hai uski manzil tak pohanch b pai gi ya nahi?
Tejal ki tarah mere b kayin sawal hain jinke Jawab k liye next update ka intezar karen ge.
Update bohat hi acha ta or kafi time bad kuch normal chezu ko dikhaya gaya Veer ki wapsi pe change k liye good effort hai next chapter start hone se pehle


We'll once again update was marvelous❤


Ajke liye itna hi til then t.c😊


Good luck for upcoming updates.:goteam:

Fantastic update bro 💗🔥

Bhai yeh kya tha? Na koi suspence aur koi spoiler??? Just simple sa update??? Iss update se pata chalta hai aap bhi meri tarah navratri ke tyoharo main busy ho and readers ke demand peh yeh update diya hai😀😀😀i understand!!!

Awesome update

Marvelous update bro...👌👌👌👍

Super update hai Bhai

Super update hai Bhai

Behtreen update werewolf bro

तो बल्हार ने जो news दी थी जिससे वीर थोड़ा परेशान हो गया था वो रजत के द्वारा किए गए कांड है,
वैसे हो सकता है की अभी रजत easiest target हो but ये नहीं भूलना चाहिए की वो एक जाना माना criminal lawyer हैं, और criminal lawyers अक्सर criminals के केस लड़ते लड़ते अक्सर criminal minded हो जाते है

रजत के रहते जूही, ध्रुव और निधि तीनों को खतरा रहेगा, ध्रुव को प्यार की वजह से और जूही निधि को नफरत के वजह से
lets see how he deals with him


मैं बता नहीं सकता की मुझे काव्या के ऊपर कितना गुस्सा आया, बहन की लेडी थोड़ी देर से call करती तो kaira ki re-entry होती इस कहानी में जिसका मैं कब से wait कर रहा हु
kaira is just love 😘

सोनाली के favorability सोनिया और kaira से ज्यादा है लेकिन उसे देख कर लगता है system से उसकी favorability मापने में गलती हो गई है


Something is coocking between karan and ritika, well let's see karan का बाप मानेगा या नहीं

और भाई गलत बात हैं ये, वीर का समंदर किनारे सुहागरात मनवा दिए और हम लोग को पढ़ने को भी नही मिला



ये काम भले ही आसान दिख रहा हो लेकिन वीर को इसमें फुक फुक कर कदम रखना पड़ेगा, एक गलत move उसकी दोनों बहनों को hurt कर देगा, क्योंकि मेरा जहां तक ख्याल है परी जिस bacakup की बात कर रही उसका नाम करुणेश है,करुणेश वीर के लिए जैसा भी हो लेकिन अपनी दोनों बेटियों के लिए तो वो उतना ही special होगा जितना वीर है या शायद वीर से भी ज्यादा,
कही ऐसा ना हो की वीर से दोनो नफरत करने लगे, फिर तो वीर सबकुछ पा के भी खो देगा
क्योंकि काव्या का प्यार उसके भाई के लिए unconditional हैं, वो उसे तब भी support करती जब वीर के होने न होने से किसी को कुछ फर्क नहीं पड़ता था, भले ही छुप छुप कर करती थी but करती तो थी ही

लेकिन आज जिस point पर ये खत्म हुआ है खूब सारे सवाल भी छोड़ गया है,
क्या तेज निधि को साफ साफ बताएगी की वो वीर की sibling है या फिर ये भी भावना जैसा कोई alias name से मिलेगी
i Guess तेज इस Village arc की सबसे important charechter बनकर उभरेगी

and दोस्त कुछ negetive comments से demotivated मत होना, तुम्हारी कहानी बहुत अच्छी है और बहुत सही जा रही है, लेकिन कुछ लोग होते है न जिनको बस बुराई ढूंढना ही अच्छा लगता है, और वैसे भी किसी शुभ काम में नाचने वाले ना आए ऐसा हो सकता है क्या


शानदार अपडेट था आज का, पिछले 2–3 अपडेट में अब platerform set है यहां से कहानी speed भी पकड़ेगी तो किसी को awkward नहीं लगेगा

Keep going, best of luck ahead ❣️

Superb update

shaandaar update

Uttam Lekhni ka Prayog Werewolf bhai...Waiting for Next Update Eagerly...

Nice update...

superb update dear

Awesome update 🔥😍

Update waqi acha ta sir ye bat i don't know in logu ko samjh kyu nahi aa rhi jaisa k apne bola k basic updates te next arc se pehle to jahan tak meri samjh me ye bat ai hai us hisab se ap sahi ja rhe ho i know k as a writer bohat hi ziada tuf job hai ab her bar thori na goli ki tarah bhage ja sakte writer b insan hai usey b zarorat hoti relax ki mentally ab her waqt suspense or thrill to nahi continue rakh sakte

Nice update waiting for next

Thanks for update bade bhai
It was a beautiful update

Nice update

Adbhut aur apratim update hai bhai.

Amazing update bhai

Update ka notification kab tak ayega Werewolf bhaya?:bat1:


Mast update h bhai...🔥🔥🔥

Extraordinary update sir g.

Bahut sundar tejal kafi fast ja rahi hai
Veer sabhi problems ko ek ek karke
Solve kar raha hai
Pari ab jyada satark aur samjhdari wali bate
Kar rahi hai kahani me har din rochakta badh rahi hai

Jabardast update bhai 👏

Awesome update bhai keep posting

very nice update..... dil maange more

Nice update


Boht zabardast update

Mind blowing update

Awesome Updateee

Karan ke roop mein Veer ko ek achcha dost mil chuka hai, jiske saath wo saari to nahi magar kaafi baatein share karta hai aur Karan bhi uski madad karne se peeche nahi rahta.

Sonali ko aaj Veer ne wo tohfa de diya jo wo chahti to hamesha se thi magar paane ki umeed nahi thi. Magar ab Veer ye food trucks kaise manage karne waala hai ye dekhna hoga?

Veer aur Pari Rajat ko easy target maan kar chal rahe hai magar dono ye nahi jaante hai ki Rajat ke peeche Pranjal aur Pranjal ke peeche uska baap hai. To shayad Veer ko ek jhatka wahan bhi lege jab wo Rajat ko target karega.

Ragini ne aaj sabkuch khul kar kah hi diya hai aur Veer bhi uski bhavnao mein bah gaya hai ab dekhna hai ki ye rishta kya kah lata hai?

Tej bhi Nidhi ke ghar tak pahunch chuki hai ab wo apne aap ko kaise introduce karti hai aur kaise Veer ke baare mein pata karti hai wo bhi interesting hone waala hai. Very nice update.

Again you end with big suspense 😮
Eagerly awaiting next update 🤡

क्या बात है Werewolf भाई क्या बात है
यह वाला अपडेट बहुत ही फास्ट रहा
करण को कृतिका तक पहुँचा दिया हाँ काव्या और आरोही के मन में चल रहे उथल पुथल को वैसे ही छोड़ दिया l पर उससे पहले वीर न सोनाली की मन की बात को समझ कर आगे पढ़ाई जारी रखने की व्यवस्था कर दी l
फिर रागिनी के अरमानों में उसने पुरी तरह से रंग भी भर दिया l
अंत में तेज़ल वीर की तलाश में निधि के घर पहुँच गई l
वैसे आपकी हर अपडेट बहुत ही यूनिक रहती है हमेशा की तरह कोई शक नहीं l
बहुत बढ़िया रहा

Brilliant Work Wolfie :yourock:

Bahna Vaha pahuch gai jaha se use sab mil sakta hai sahi hai
Mast update

Awesome update bhai

Wao outstanding update bhai maza aa gaya ab dekhte hai age kya hota hai.

बहुत ही शानदार लाजवाब अपडेट भाई
मजा आ गया भाई
करण चाहें जितना खोद कर पुंछ लें वीर उसे कुछ नहीं बताने वाला हैं काव्या ओर वीर रोमांस शुरू हों गया हैं
वहीं करण किर्तीका में लगा हुआ

रागिनी ओर वीर का रोमांस भी बहुत अच्छा चल रहा हैं लेकिन कब तक छुप छुप कर रोमांस करेंगे भाई

वीर को बोल देना चाहिए अपने लायक लड़का देख कर शादी कर लों मैं आपसे शादी नहीं कर सकता हूं
वीर जल्द से जल्द पैसें कमाना चाहता हैं तभी वो जल्दी बिजनेस टायकून की दौड़ में शामिल हों सकता हैं

वैसे ये तेजल अब वीर को ढूंढे बगैर चेन से नहीं बैठने वालीं हैं क्योंकि ये नीधी के पास पहूंच गई हैं
देखते हैं नीधी उसे क्या बतातीं हैं या सुनाती हैं

एवन अपडेट भाई

Chlo acha hai kuch pyar kii boond Raghini ko mil gya aakhirkar kb se to trapa rha tha Werewolf usko to
Karan or Kritika ka nain mattaka bi masti me hai
Kavya Arohi ka jaisa chl rha tha waise he line pe hai abi bi
Social network ke jreyee Tejal ne PTA lga lia apne bhai Veer ki class teacher ka Nidhi madam ka
Or
Pari ki smjdari me kuch jada he improvement bi hogya Kamal hai
Or 1 baat Werewolf ye Veer ne Suman ko punishment Dene wali bat boli iska ky mtlb hua yr
Ky mai kisi update ko dhyan se ni read krpaya to btao plz yr

Awesome update

A very big salute to you from my heart ❤️💓💓

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Werewolf bhai....
Nice and beautiful update....

Awesome bhai maza aa gaya

Nice update bro

Who'll be the next addition to Veer's harem..?:hmm2: Ragini is ahead in the race at the moment ig... :peep:

Nice update

To sabse pehle hi karan na scene karan kafi time baad veer se mila or baate ki ek a che dost ki tarah wese veer ki hi wajah se karan krutika se bhi mil paya

Or bro lagta hai karan ke dad yani ki kishor ke pass lagta hai lagde level par paisa hai or ghamand bhi kishor main itna hai well jab kishor ko pata chalega ki karan krutika se shadi karna Cahta hai to wo kya sound karega ye dekhne layak hoga

Or sonali aakhir ise bhi padhne ka or aage badhne ka moka diya veer ne ye mujhe bahut accha laga or sonali bhale hi gussa nikale par kahina kahi use bhi ye kaam accha lagne laga tha

Now ragini aakhir kaar jiska sabko intezaar hai us Scene ki starting hogyi ragini ke veer ko propose karne se well accha hai

But bro mujhe ek baat samjh nahi aayi ki veer ne aisa kyu bola ki suman ko bhi punishment deni hai usne kya kiya jo use saza doge well ye to tum reply main bata hi doge nahi to update main pata chal jayega

Well mujhe veer or aarohi ka normal talk bahut jyada pasand aaya a actually pure update main mera wahi favourite scene tha khaas kar aarohi ka veer ko dumbo kehna

Well ab aate hai kavya par aakhir veer ne use bata hi diya ki veer uski har baar nahi maan sakta varna kavya to veer ko apne isharo par nachane lagi

And last scene jiska mujhe 75 % andesha tha ki tejal veer ke college paguchegi nidhise veer ke bare main puchegi then uske baad veer ke yani ki ragini keghar pahuchegi agar aisa huva to sach main bhai bahen ka milan main dekhna cahunga

Well outstanding update bro maza aagya

Superb update

Excellent update but what does he mean to say "suman ko punishment deni ha"
I think writer is going to introduce BDSM or agar aesa ha to is story ko char Chand nahi cahlees cahnd lag jayn gy...

Kya Ragini or veer ka :sex: ho gya kya wolfi bro

Sonali ko usko apna dream poora kerne ka mauka de dia Veer n jo tha study kerne ka hala ki thoda dukh huwa ki ab woh apne hatho se khana bana ker kisi customer ko nahi khila payegi lekin padhna bhi zaroori h
Kavya n tow seedha order de dia ki yaha aake milo ab bahen h tow itna faida tow uthana banta h
Ragini n aaj khule k apne dil baat bol di ab Veer ko bolna h halanki ab Veer bhinpeejhe hatne wala nahi yeh dono yaha apni masti m lage huwe h or waha Tejal pahoch Nidhi mam k gher Tejal tow bahot hi Tez nikli ab dekhte h Tejal yaha kon kon se swalo k taar chhodti h Nidhi k ooper
Bahot zaberdast shaandaar
Lajawab update bhai

Aap bam hi bam phoodo or mai 👍💐💐💐 krunga

wonderfull wonderfull.......maja aagaya bhai....

Tabahi Update.
Karan Aur Karitika ka ilu ilu full force se chal rha. Chalo accha hai thoda logical relation bhi banna chaiye bina soche sab londi khali Veer ko hi milte rhega toh baki male character ka kuch development hi ni ho pata.

Kavya toh bahut innocent hai Veer aur Uske rishte ne abhi uss mithas ko sungha bhi nai hai jo Arohi aur Veer ke rishte ne chakh liya hai inka relation bhi abhi under construction hai.
Aur Yehi baat is story ki isko khas banati hai Bhale hi kisi kisi character me thodi bahut similarities hai but Sabhi character ka apna alag individuality hai. Isiliye sare characters aur relationships ka development aur uska experience bahut unique aur special lagta hai.

Wahi Solani ke character ko kafi samay se side me rkha gya tha fir bhi uske character me badlav dekha ja sakta hai. Wo pehle se ab kahi jyada tolerent, grateful aur understanding ho gai hai. Aane wale samay me uski story ek naye mod se gujregi ab dekhna hai uske character me kya badlav aate hai. Mai usko strong character me dekhna chahta hu aisa na ho ke wo Veer ke ekhaas tale dabi hui ban jaye khair aisa uska charater hai bhi nai.

Ab aate hai Ragini par jo sare niyam bhandhan todh kr Veer ki ho jana chahti hai. Lekin lekhan sahab yaha sabko Blue Ball dene pe tule huve hai. Jabhi Ragini Ki bari hoti hai Warewolf bhai sabko Garam krke Thanda hi chhod dete hai. Khair isme bhi apna ek maza hai. Dekhte hai jo dhire dhire pyala bhara ja rha hai iska ras paan kab kiya jayega.

At last Tejal pe aate hai jo apne mission pe lagta hai kamyab hone hi wali hai wo pahuchi bhi ai toh aise jagha manna padega. Agle update ka besabri se intezar rhega.

Waiting for next update.

Fantastic update bhai...veer ki shadi kab he,😳

एक बेहतरीन और मस्त अनुच्छेद। इस अनुच्छेद मे सबसे पहले देखे की करण जैसा दोस्त के संग वीर का समय बिताना, उसी क्रम मे सोनाली का स्वप्न पूरा करने के संग अपना फूड ब्याबसा का आगे बढ़ाना। इस अनुच्छेद के तहत सबसे महत्वपुर्ण बात रहा है की १) रागिनी का धमाकेदार उद्घोष वीर के प्रति और एक तरह से वीर को हतिया लेना लेकिन सबसे बड़ी बात ये है की २) तेज का निधि के घर पहुच जाना। तेज बहुत तेज तो था ही लेकिन इतना तेज मैं उम्मीद नहीं किए थे। लाजवाब। तेज और निधि मैडम दोनों का आपसी बार्तालाप का क्या असर होता है ये देखने के लिए उत्सुक रहेंगे। अगला अनुच्छेद से लगता है की वीर का गाड़ी एक तरफ रागिनी के संग जबर्दस्त दौड़ेगा और दूसरे तरफ तेज-भावना के गाड़ी बगल बगल रहेगी। बहुत मस्त जगह पर कहानी को ले आयें है मित्र। कोशिश कीजिएगा अनुच्छेद के बीच का अंतराल कम करने का। धन्यबाद।

beautiful update:applause:

Ahan! Sab see pehly TU update ak dam mast tha bhaya .

Veer apny business badhany KY chakkar main hai usy bhut achy Sy pata hai AAJ Kal har masly ka Hal one an only money.

Veer or uski behno ko mulaqat hogaii Jo KY bhut amusing thi perfect Kuch nuok jhok or mazak Mai.

Veer ka apny food business ka tour bhi acha Raha or Sonali ka wo rawiya Bada mazakiya tha ye BAAT dekhny layak thi uska behavior ( tone) veer KY prati ak dhons jmana or veer ko Zara bhi bura Nahin Laga Ulta veer Thoda bhut amuse HOA usy I don't think k veer ki personality jab Sy change hoii hai Kisi ladki,aurat NY veer par rob jmaya ho ( Niharika ki BAAT or hai or uska end kaisy HOA k kaisy veer NY USKO apni slave bna Liya )or veer ka Sonali Ka future decision bhi acha tha k wo ye Sab chor kar apna future baiy padhy likhy.


Wahin ab TU rajat KY bhi din shuru hony waly Hain iska bhi chapter I think jaldi hi close ho jaiy ga or phir aain gy I think apny choty Sy piyaary Bhai pranjoo par wo bhi Kuch ti plan kar KY beitha hi hoga or is baar I think koi sold plan hoga uska ho bhi kiu na? Veer NY uska Sab Kuch barbaad kar diya bechara achi khaasi property hadpny ko tha iska chapter shaiyd close ho maybe.

Wahin aty Hain apni RAJNI par ayee hayee ye aurat badi sexy Nahin Nahin badi hot Nahin ye bhi Nahin ye ak tarha ki bomb hai maa qasam mujhy bhut Pasand aati hai ye chambaili wahin iska in counter bhi jaldi hi ho jaiy ga I think. Akhir inki ak hot Beach date bhi hogaii wahin RAJNI NY Akhir apny piyaar ka bta hi diya veer ko I think veer ko pehly hi is Bary main koi idea tha? Veer bhi kafi attracted that RAJNI Sy or veer ki wo kiss Nahin Nahin wo smooch or milap is BAAT ko gawahi tha .

Wahin Tejo bhi punch gaii Akhir NIDHI ma'am k pass ab TU usky liy bhi ye asaan tha bas veer ka nam social media par dala or fatak Sy jankaari nikal li or wahin college Sy maybe? Punch gaii address ly kar NIDHI ma'am k pass ab agiy inki Kiya conversation hoti hai ye dekhny laiyak hogii or I think NIDHI wo Sab Nahin btaiy gi mean veer ka past I think k kaisy wo Ghar Sy lada or usky saath Raha right? Ye itni jaldi I think Tejo ko pata Nahin lagny wala or maybe address dy dyy RAJNI k Ghar ka . Tej ko Maza aay ga veer ko janny main NIDHI ma'am Sy I think! Or ye Tejo ka veer KY pechy apni Bua maa Sy chup kar unki BAAT na maan kar NIDHI k Ghar punchna is BAAT ka sboot hai k wo Kitna chahti hai apny Bhai veer ko.

Kul Mila KY BAAT ye hai k yehi hai ( dhmaal movie Sy yaad agaya )
Chalain agy dekhty Hain next update main k veer rajat ko kaisy handle karta hai NIDHI ki Tejo Sy batain maybe something else like that unknown system holder usky relat koi BAAT ya koi naya katta khol du aap kia pata ? .

Smash

Tezal veer ke bare me jane ke liye pahunch gaya hai nidhi ke pass dkhte hai kya jankari ouch puchna chahti hai tezal....

Ragini or veer ka wo hot moment wow maja aagya brother 👍👍awesome...

Sonali b bahut akward me fas gaya hai dekhte hai wo kya decision leta hai....

Hi Guys!!!:itsme:
I am a new member here and Werewolf You are one of my favorite writers on this forum. :good:
Mein isse pehle sirf as a guest hi stories padhta tha but your story made me to logIn and comment here, specially Baadshah.
Mene isse pehle aapki "Akhir kyun?" bhi padhi he aur wo bhi mujhe kaafi pasand aai thi. :approve:

For the latest update, village arc ka sabse best update tha yeh. Sabse jyada curiosity to ab Tej ko lekar he.
  1. Kya wo purvi se pehle veer se mil payegi?
  2. Nidhi ka kya reaction hoga jab use pata lagega ki tej Veer ki sagi behan he? Kya Tej use yeh batayegi?
Veer ne sonali se ji vada kiya tha use aage padhane ka, wo ab pura karne ja raha he. May be sonali has a bigger role on veer's business in future?:idk1:

Ragini bhi ab veer ke sath aage badhne lagi he, shayad Veer uske sath jaldi hi relationship mein aa jayega.

Dusri taraf Shweta aur bhumika ko veer khari khoti suna chuka he but there is a movement in their relation too. Personally I think, ki jaldi hi unka matter sudhar jaana chahiye.

Interesting yeh dekhna hoga ki Kaera, Nidhi, aur Shreya ka kya reaction rahega jab Veer se akele mein milega. Kyunki Sonali ka to bahut hi majedar tha:laugh:

Lajawab update Werewolf bhai

Nice behtarin mast awesome update bro

Bai likha tO bohut Acce but
Maja Nahi aya......😐

Nice update

Superb fantastic update to akhir Kar ragini Bhabi veer ki goad me aa he gai ek taraf veer bechara ane wale mushkil Palo ki planning kr Raha hy wahi tej b shayad apne Bhai k sath college me admission Lene k liye Nidhi se help Leni aai ho par veer to college Jata he nhi dekhte hy agy Kia Hoya hy eagerly waiting for next update

Jis tarha se tejal tej chal rahi hai vo jaldh hi veer ke samne hogi.dekhne wala pal hoga jab veer r tejal or uski maa samne honge.

Awesome updates🎉

Nice update bro

nice update ..karan ke saath apne business ko badhane ne laga hua hai veer .karan ko jyada kuch nahi bataya par suhana ka naam sunne par usko aisa laga ki veer ko badi umar ki aurto me dilchaspi hai 🤣🤣.
sonali ko wakai me ek achcha gift diya veer ne 😍😍.. usko padhne ki chaah thi jo veer ab puri karna chahta hai .sonali jaise baat kar rahi thi veer se wo ekdam majedar tha 😍..

kritika ka naam sunke ekdam se apni baat badal di karan ne aur cafe me chala gaya kritika ka didar karne 🤣 .
kavya ke saath thoda maja liya veer ne 😁..

aur aajka sabse best day tha ragini ke liye jo sabko busy karake veer ke saath ghumne chali gayi .ragini ki baato se aisa lagta hai ki wo kuch jyada hi possesive hai veer ko lekar .
chudai ki puri taiyari karke aayi hai veer ke saath .

pari ne pehla target rajat ko banane ki salaah di .
pari ko shak bhi hai ki koi to hai jo veer ka bhai ko chupke se support kar raha hai aur uske liye koi badhiya plan banana chahte hai .

to tejal ne jo info jama ki thi veer ki wo kaam me aa gayi aur kavya mam ke ghar pahuch gayi shayad college me admission lene ki baat karne 🤔🤔.. shayad main maksad to veer ke saath waqt bitana ho tej ka.. jab baate hongi tabhi to ek dusre ko samajh payenge aur jab rishta open hoga to taklif bhi nahi hogi .
jaante to hai apno ke baare me par isko raaz banaye rakha hai .

waiting for next update bro

super awesome update

Awesome update bro

Fabulous update hai bhai maza aa gaya

Waiting for the next update bro

veer ab jald se jald apne business ko badha na chahta hai or uski puri planing kar raha hai..
Keira or sonali dono ki help se veer ko kamyabi mil hi jayegi.

rajat or pranjal ko sabak sikhana bhi ab jaroori hai varna jo bada khatra Vegas vala aa raha hai usse pehle in sab ko niptana hi padega. Dekhte hai ab rajak ka kya karta hai veer.

wahi ragini ne veer ko apne pyaar izhar mar kar diya or thoda romance bhi ho gaya..

outstanding update Bhai.

Me to veer ki ma se veer kab milega us intjar me hu

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Waiting For Next Update 😉

Wolf एक poll होना चाहिए favorite female character को लेकर,
सबकी अपनी अपनी पसंद है किसी को निधि पसंद है तो किसी को रागिनी, किसी को सोनाली और किसी किसी को काव्या

वैसे तो सारी ही female कैरेक्टर अच्छी है, लेकिन personally i like kaira and Suhana, specially kaira


सुहाना :—
को देख कर समझ आता है की किसी को भी तुरंत ही judge नहीं करना चाहिए, लोग situation के according react करते है।
और जरूरी नहीं की हमेशा जैसा दिखता हो reality में भी वैसा ही हो, कभी कभी आंखे भी धोखा खा जाती है

जब शुरू शुरू में उसकी entry हुई थी उसकी इस कहानी में तो शायद ही कोई ऐसा रहा हो जिसने उसको गाली नहीं दिया हो
शुरुआत की जिद्दी,बिगड़ैल,अड़ियल, बदतमीज सुहाना कब इतनी प्यारी हो गई पता ही नहीं चला,

सोनिया को तो शायद पता भी नही होगा की उसके पास उसकी बहन जैसी इतनी precious चीज है, जिसका सपना हर इंसान देखता है की उनके जीवन में भी कोई ऐसा हो जो उसकी हर मुसीबत उसके पास आने से पहले ही रोक ले,

खुद के जीवन में इतना दुख है इतना struggle कर रही है फिर भी अपनी बहन तक कोई दुख नहीं पहुंचने दे रही
यहाँ तक की मरते वक्त भी जो चीज उसने वीर से सबसे पहले मांगी थी वो थी की सोनिया को protect करना

अपनी split personality को झिपाने के जद्दोजहद में अक्सर वो चिड़चिड़ी हो जाती है लेकिन अभी तक शायद ही किसी किरदार ने वीर की इतनी मदद की हो जितना सुहाना ने किया है, चाहे आतिश को मारने में मदद करना, slogen को मारने के लिए gun देना, उसकी मां से मिलाने में मदद करना,

Kiss as the last favour 🤨, something is coocking in her mind
वैसे wolf आपने ये बताया नहीं की last favour में वीर को kiss करने से पहले सुहाना वीर से क्या कह रही थी जिसे वीर सुन नही पाया??


Kaira :-
इस पूरी कहानी में reality के सबसे ज्यादा करीब जो कैरेक्टर है वो kaira का है

खुशियां पैसों की मोहताज नहीं होती ये kaira को देख कर समझ आता है, वास्तविक जीवन में भी बहुत से ऐसे लोग देखे है जिनके पास अथाह पैसा है लेकिन फिर भी अलग अलग कारण से दुखी है क्योंकि पैसे से हर चीज नहीं मिलती

sympthy भी होती है की कैसे एक पाखंडी के छोटे से झूठ की वजह से एक छोटी सी बच्ची का बचपन, खुशी,चाह छीन कर चलता फिरता robot बना दिया गया

जब kaira पहली बार veer से मिली थी क्लब में,तब veer के पास कुछ नहीं था, ना तो वीर अच्छा दिखता था ना इतना strong और biceps, triceps थे, नॉर्मल से ही कपड़े पहनता था
पर फिर भी kaira veer से सभ्य तरीके और बराबर वाले की तरह पेश आई थी, she is just too pure

Veer इस कहानी में बहुत सी लड़की के साथ रिलेशन में आएगा, physical भी होगा
But veer ने अपनी virginity तो kaira के साथ ही share की है
(I know कुछ लोग बोलेंगे virginity बस बोलने का है, फर्क नही पड़ता, लेकिन दोस्त तुम जिसे भी अपनी वर्जिनिटी देते हो वो special तो हो ही जाता है at least मेरे लिए तो है और i hope veer के लिए kaira भी उतनी ही special हो)



क्या kaira veer को लेकर possessive हो रही है, तब तो गड़बड़ हो जायेगी क्योंकि kaira को देख कर लगता नही की वो veer को किसी और के साथ share करेगी

उम्मीद है की आगे veer aur kaira की जोड़ी और improve होगी, और close आएंगे,

काव्या थोड़ा देर बाद call करती तो कम से कम kaira की वापस entry हो जाती खैर 15–20 update wait कर लिए तो 1–2 update और सही,
सुहाना के वापसी में तो कम से कम 4–5 अपडेट लगेंगे ही

Eagerly waiting for both the characters to return to the story

अब जब वीर और रागिनी गुलु–गुलु कर लिए है तो उम्मीद कर रहा हूं की next update में veer अपनी मां पर फोकस करते हुए अपनी पूर्वी मौसी से मिलेगा

Next update से expectations बहुत high है दोस्त, hope की अगला अपडेट veer को अपनी मां और बहन से मिलन के और करीब लाएगा

वैसे बोलना तो नहीं चाहिए but मुझे कभी कभी feel आता है की कुछ readers को जब तक update में मार काट ना दिखाया जाए उन्हे वो update, update जैसा नहीं लगता,
but मुझे लगता है एक अच्छी कहानी में emotions और थोडा बहुत drama भी उतना ही जरूरी है जितना की action,
हो सकता है कुछ लोग agree ना करे but that's fine,
लड़ने मत आ जाना😅


Wonderful story dost, keep going

Nice update

🔥🔥🔥nice update 🔥🔥🔥
Waiting for next

Lovely update finally ragini has confessed it great
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Waiting for next update

Karan or Veer ki dosti jai veeru ki dosti si lag rhi hai....Veer ab chef on wheel ke naam se hi food truck ki branding kr rha hai... Veer ab har mumkin koshish kr rha hai earnings ke lekin white money ligel way se .. chef on wheel ke through woh popular ho jana chahta hai food truck ki dishes items logon ke bich famous kr dena chahta hai.. jisse hotel kholne me Aasani ho... Kavya ke baare me kya kahun bhot pyari ldki hai. Uska pyar jatane ka andaaz hi nirala hai.. veer bhi uski masumiyat ke agey haar jata hai... Lekin mujhe lgta hai ek baar toh sahi Veer ko smjhana chahiye ke har wqt aise behave thik nhi woh kaam me phansa ho skta hai or bina puri baat sune phone na kaate.. agr veer wahan nhi pahunch paya toh jahan kavya bulati hai iss bich kavya kisi musibat me phans gai toh dushmano ki kami thodi na hai.. woh toh shukar hai humari Arohi ka jo apna samjhdari dikhati hai.. bilkul laila ho rkhi hai pta nhi veer kab majnu wala pyar dega Arohi ko... veer karan ke feelings ko smjh rha hai isliye karan ko Krithika sath chhod gya.. Krithika or karan me bhot kuch pakk rha hai.. sunil bole toh amrish puri ka kya reaction hoga dekhna dilchsp hoga..
Kaera bhi chahti hai Veer uske touch me rhe kaise bhi krke.. beshq bandi me ab lgta hai kuch emotions reactive hue hai lgta hai... Veer kaha ata hai jata hai kya krta Hai woh janna chahti hai...
Bhumika ke baare me toh pehle hi bol chuka hu ek nadaan si ladki hai jisne apni maa ki baato me akar Veer ke liye kuch na krke bhi Veer ko nicha dikhane ke koi kasar nhi chhodi thi... Bina baat ke Veer ki berukhi jhel rhi hai shweta ke chakkar me... Shweta ko bhi ab apni glti ka paschtava mehsus kr rhi hai dekhte hai dono maa beti ho kabtk maafi milti hai..
Rajat ek criminal lawyer hai veer or pari iss baat ko achi trh jante honge.. Usko halke me lena mtlb aundhe muh girne jaisa hoga.. Criminal lawyer hai to obvious hai mind bhi criminal hoga.. Sala jo insaan nidhi jesi malliaka-e-husan ko torture kr skta hai toh woh kis type ka psycho hoga.. Hum sirf soch hi skte hai... Mera bsss chale toh saale ke pichhwade pe mombatti jalaun..
Pranjal akela nahi hai.. pari ne sense kr liya hai uss chomoo ke piche se koi or hi khel,khel rha hai jo or koi nhi karunesh hi hai... Jisse Veer anjaan hai...
Vivek shaant baitha hai mujhe lgta hai wqt ane pr woh bhi apne patte kholega kuch na kuch toh woh bhi krega...
Niharika bhi kuch na kuch khichdi paka rhi hogi woh bhi shaant baithne walo me nhi se nhi hogi.. veer uske sath kya krta Hai or kaise dekhna hoga...
Sonali ke liye acha lag rha hai.. Ab uska sapna pura hoga.. Ek befikri si ldki bebaak andaaz sonali apne sapne jeene ke liye azaad hai... Lekin ab uska food truck se bhi lagaav sa ho gya...
Ragini or veer ka pyar parwaan chadhta ja rha hai... Ragini iss baar apna dil khol kr rkh diya... Haale-e-dil bayaan krkr.... Lekin ye Kya bade bhaiya apne iss baar bhi klpd kr diya.. Last time apne divya ke sath bhi aisa hi kiya tha... Ragini bechari puri taiyari krke aai thi.. Bina petticoat ke or apne.... Khairr dekhte hai iss village arc me Kya Kya dekhne ko milta hai.. Kon apne hai kon paraaye isi arc me apno ki asli pehchaan hogi..
Bhawna maa se jyada important abhi purvi maasi se milna hoga.. Kya veer bura manega ki uski khud ki maa na akar purvi maasi ko milne bheja hai.. Dekhna dilchasp hoga...
Tejal, tejal se mujhe ummid thi ki woh nidhi se milegi lekin iss trh direct nidhi ma'am ke ghar pahunch jayegi gajab... Teju smart hai purvi mausi se pehle hi veer se judi baate jaan lena chahti hai.. Bss dekhna ye hai woh khud ko kaise introduce krwati hai tejal veer ki bahan ban kr ya kisi dusre naam ko use krke or nidhi kitna btati hai or kya kya.. Veer ka struggle veer ke sath past me kya kya hua woh sab jaanne ke baad shayad teju ke mann me jo kuch bhi veer ke liye kadwahat hoga khatam ho jaye aisa ummid krte hai..

Bade bhaiya mast update jhakkaasss ...

Jabardast bro

Nice update

Wao! Superb amazing Jabardast update bhai sandar
Veer ne 8 food truck kharid liye sath me Apne brand ko pramot karne ke liye Usne apne Har product or property me naam bhi print karne ka contract de diya hai,

Sonali to veer ko dekhte hi Uspr bhadak utni, or aisa bhadki ki use kuchh bolne ka mauka hi nhi diya or jb veer ne bolna suru kiya to Sonali madam ki Bolti band ho gyi, unhe aage padhne ke liye admission ka bta diya hai, Sonali ko is business me bhi interest aane lga tha use khushi milne lagi thi pr dekha jaye to abhi bhi jyada kuchh nhi bigda, vo college se or Ghar se time milne pr kuchh Samay iske management me bhi de sakti hai... Mujhe bhi yah Sonali ka bebaak andaj pasand aaya vo jo bhi Bolti hai usme koi dwesh ghrina nhi hai bs Vo maze le leti hai Kabhi Kabhi veer ko suna kr...

Ye Kavya madam to na rukne vali mithi chhuri hai bolne hi nhi diya ek baar pta chla ki veer Ghar se bahar hai to bna diya plan Milne ka jagah bhi khud hi decide kr di or aane ka bol phone hi kaat diya...

Kritika ko bhi Kavya arohi Di ke sath le aai or yha apna veer kuchh bol hi nhi paya kuchh ye karan bhai Sahab ka suhana ko leke vo sab bolna or veer ke baar baar mna karne pr fir se bolne lag Jana or kritika ka maan sunte hi rukne ka kahna mujhe bada bhaya (भाया) hontho pr mushkan aa gyi, Bahut hi khubsurati ke sath darsaya aapne to Kavya ka vo I hate you kahna and all...

Ragini bhabhi ne Aaj khul kr confess kr liya jo unke dil me tha, aaj dono beach me samundar ke kinare pattharo pr baith kr jo arman bhadkaye hai aapne yha reader ke dil me sanp hi lot gye honge jb aapne drisya cut kr diya, mere liye to too good tha Vo... Superb :superb:

Ye Nidhi ma'am ke ghar Tejal ka aagman aisa cliffhanger hai ham readers ke liye jaise kisi ne garam tave me baitha kr wait karne Bol diya ho...

Mind blowing jabarjast superb bhai

What a twist! This is getting spicy!

Superb fantastic amazing mind blowing update Werewolf bhai...

Veer bachpan se akela tha or uske baad ek friend bana bhi tha wo bhi uski galti ki wajah se maara gaya uske baad uske dosti karne ka maan nahi karta tha phir usko Karan mila ab dono jada taar sath me hi hote h veer ko kuch bhi kaam hota h to wo Karan ko hi bulata h or karan bhi veer ko ek acha friend maan ta h obviously veer ne uski sister ki jaan bachaye h Aatish or Slogan jese villan se per mujhe to agge dekhne h jab agar Kaera or veer ki bich kuch love type hoga or karan ko pata chalega to uska reaction kesa hoga mere hisab se wo shock hoga khali kyu ki wo uski sister liye hue decision m kabhi kuch nahi bolta ab yet age h pata chalega...

Akhir Sonali ka padhne ka sapna ab sach hone wala h usko bhi ab padhne ko milega per wo thoda sad h kyu ki koye bhi ho uski jaga agar app bohot time se kuch kar rahe h or us Kaam se appko lagav ho jaye or suddenly appko wo kaam chodna pade to thoda dhukh hota h wahi haal Sonali ka h lekin time k sath wo bhi normal ho jayegi...

Kavya k ek call pe usko sab kaam chod k jana pada cafe per usi bich jab uski pari se baat hui to pari ne use ek chij bataye ki abhi Rajat se deal karna sahi rahega kyu ki usko lagta h Pranjal k piche kisika haath h jo uski help kar raha h or hame pata nahi h pari ki baat sahi or mere hisab se us dusre system wale kaand k baad jab veer or pari ki thodi khahasuni ho gaye thi uske bad ab pari puri alert rehke kaam kar rahi h or veer baata bhi rahi h jo usko lag raha h...

Ragini or veer ab dheere dheere close aa rahe or usme bhi main step Ragini h le rahi h per jab baat kiss or baki sabki ati h to veer main step leta h or usko kiss karna,boob press karna or etc ye sab wo khud karta h khali use ek baar green signal mil jaye or jis hisab se ye dono lage hue h dono ko intimate hone m bhi time nahi lagega ab ye to agge hi pata chalega ki dono halki si touching or kissing tak hi rukenge ki or agge badhenge...

Or in last veer ki behen tej direct nidhi mam k ghar phoch gaye h or nidhi mam se accha veer k bareme or koye nahi bata sakta kyu ki jab uske ghar walo ne usse nikal diya tha tab nidhi mam ne hi to usse khud k ghar m rakha tha or wahi se unhone ne veer ki growth bhi dekhi h ab next update me maza ayega agar tej nidhi mam ko veer ki real sister batake k intro kare or tab nidhi mam ka reaction or pyaari jhui veer ka naam sunke kya karti h wo dekhne layak hoga Werewolf bhai waiting for next update...

Bhai.. Aaj nite tk aa jayega kya update

Bahut badhiya update hai Bhai......
Waiting for next update

Awesome update

Intezaar rahega Werewolf bhai...


Intezaar rahega bhai

शानदार जबरदस्त भाई लाजवाब update bhai jann

Ye veer ne business keliye nya idea lga hey to success to hoga hi ye achi bat hey


Usne sonali ko bhi mukt krdiya truck Se our clg life enjoy krne de raha hey ye badiya huva

Aur Kavya ka or veer ka जय scene chal raha hey 🤔🤔🤔🤔

Fir arohi bhi hey waiting mey

Aur yaha ragine ne to Pura hat hi Mar diya veer par panja hi uth gya hey pyara

Ye Tejal nidhi ke ghar gayi hey veer ki info nikalane ke liye ab dekhna padega kya hota hey

Hum saath saath hai

nice update

मन मे एक सवाल उठ रहा है की कहीं सोनाली की जगह पर दिल्ली वाली माधुरी तो नहीं है क्योंकि आपकी कहानी मे कोई भी चरित्र ऐसे ही नहीं आता है। देखते है आगे क्या होता है।

Eagerly waiting for next update

Aaj update aayega na Werewolf

Time batane kaa :slap:


Waiting for update

Ding intazar rahenga

Ekdam laajwaab or jordaar update yaara....
Mazaaaa aa gaya bhai waah....

Kitna wait karu bro silent reader ko bhi bolne par majbur kar diya

Update 113 has been posted.
 

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Update - 112 ~ External Affairs
Ab tak...

Woh chup chaap bas waha se uthi aur apne laptop me lag gayi.

Kuch minutes ke baad hi uski Laptop ki screen par ek window khuli hui thi.

Ek social media ki window. Jisme Veer ki adhiktar details maujood thi.

'xxxxxxxx college huh!? I know what I have to do now! Sorry Maasi! Lekin mein aapke rules ke according nahi chalne wali.'


Ab aage...

"Toh? Kaha the tum itne din? Mein tumhare ghar pe bhi ek din gaya tha. Bhabhi jii ne bataya tha ki tum Las Vegas me ho? Really? Ghoomna tha toh ek baar puch toh lete mujhse? Maybe I would have joined you!? Ya mein kuch aur interesting places suggest kar deta. Seriously tum-"

Awaaz thi Karan kii, jo apni car drive kar raha tha aur uske bagal se baitha hua tha Veer.

Veer : Tum jesa soch rahe ho wesa kuch bhi nahi hai. Bas kaam se gaya tha.

Karan : Ohh really now? Kesa kaam? Wait! Tumhe Las Vegas me kya kaam pad gaya?

Veer (sighs) : Miss Suhana ke saath tha mein. Unhe kaam tha. Aur woh mujhe business related tour par leke gayi thi. Taaki mein business ke baare me aur jaan saku. Ab khush?

Veer ne Suhana ke injured state ki baat ko chhipaate hue kaha.

Karan : Whaaatttt? Miss Suhana? Sonia dii ki badi behan? Huh!!? W-Wait!! Veer!? Are you... Are you into older girls?

Veer : Shut up! Keep driving!

Karan : Ahem! Well, tum koi bhi baat share kar sakte ho, you know. I'm good at keeping secrets and-

Veer : Keep driving!!!

Karan : Ugh! Fine! Nahi batana toh mat batao. Although, koi bhi believe nahi karega ki tum Miss Suhana ke saath business tour par gaye the. Woh aur tumhe leke jaaye? Sawaal hi paida nahi hota. Given her personality, she won't even let-

Veer : KARAN!!??

Karan : F-Fine...! Fine! Chala raha hu. I won't talk now. Wese!?

Veer : Firse!?

Karan : Nahi woh baat nahi kar raha mein. Mein bas curious tha uss din ko lekar. I mean... You know... Tumne uss steel industries par stock investment kii. Mene tumhe roka tha par baad me shares ke rate ussi ke sabse upar gaye. Kese!?

Veer (smiles) : Just my hunch!?

Karan : Oh come on! Pehli hi baar me itna accha tukka nahi lagta. Tell me! Tumhe kese pata chala tha ki woh company dubegi nahi? You saw it coming right?

Veer (smiles) : Well! Ye ek secret hai!

Karan (sighs) : Aur jo tum kabhi nahi bataoge!

Veer (smiles) : Exactly!

Karan : Mujhe laga hi tha. Kherr! Here we are!

Gaadi se utarte hue dono ek badi sii building ke andar pravesh kiye.

Karan : Tum jo bhi chaahte ho yaha sab ho jayega. Don't worry! Yaha sab mujhe acche se jaante hai. Aur tumhara kaam boht acche se kar denge woh. Iski guarantee meri.

Veer : Hmm!

Karan ne Veer ki mulaqaat ek aadmi se karaayi. Veer jaha tha sirf wahi nahi reh sakta tha zindagi bhar. Usse kam samay me jald se jald aage badhna tha.

Aur paisa, ek aham bhumika nibhaata hai samaaj me. Ye baat Veer bhali bhaati jaanta tha.

Chef on wheels ke liye usne kuch naye changes kiye the. Usse aur upar uthaane ke liye, Veer ne total 8 food trucks ka ek set up taiyaar kiya tha.

Ye jagah jagah Mumbai me apni ek chain chala ke naam banaane ke liye tha. Uske paas abhi karodo rupaye the. Investment me usne koi kami nahi jaane dii.

Food serving ke dauraan usne choti se choti cheezo par dhyaan diya. Chef on wheels ke naam se hi napkins, plates, spoons ho ya kuch aur, sabhi me uske food truck ki Branding logo ke saath kari gayi.

Aur inn sab ke production ke liye hi Karan usse yaha iss aadmi ke paas laaya tha. Deal pakki ho jaane ke baad dono hi waha se chal diye. Manorath ki taraf se jo flats usse mile the, Veer ne unhe bhi rent par daal diye the. Woh ek hi saath alag alag jagah par focus rakhe hue tha. Earnings jaha se jitni bhi aa sake abhi, wahi boht tha.

Karan : Toh!? Isse tum aage aur bada banaana chaahte ho?

Veer : Of course! Ek baar ye enough popular ho jaaye toh hotel ke baare me socha hai. Funding boht lagegi.

Karan : Yeah! Wese mujhe gin sakte ho. I can be an invester too.

Veer : Hmm? Really?

Karan : Of course! Thoda boht mein invest kar hi dunga. But... Mere khyaal se tumhe dii se baat karni chahiye. Kyuki woh tumhe zyada investment provide kar sakti hai. She controls much bigger deals than me.

Veer : Toh kya abhi baat ho sakti hai?

Karan : Sure! Wese bhi woh mujhse kuch din pehle keh rahi thi.

Veer : Kya!?

Karan : She told me that... "Veer should let me know always where he's going. He should text me and call me."

Veer : Ahem! Well!! Let's go! Mein khud hi unse baat karta hu.

Abhi woh dono jaa hi rahe the ki Veer ke phone par Kavya ka call aa dhamka,

Veer : Bolo Kavya!

Kavya : Aap laut aaye!?? Aap laut aaye aur aapne bataaya bhi nahi bhaiya?? Mujhe abhi abhi bhabhi se pata chala.

Veer : Kal hi aaya hu meri maa! Saas toh lene de. Wese tum kaha ho?

Kavya : Obviously college me houngi na! Par woh sab chorriye. Aap bataiye aap kaha hai?

Veer : Mein filhaal kaam se ba--

Kavya : Wonderful! Toh mein aur Arohi dii! Oye Kritika? Tu jaldi leave lekar chal rahi hai kya? Chal na pagli! Veer bhaiya rahenge yaar aur kya...! Ek toh free ka thoosne mil raha hai aur nakhre kar rahi ho. Haan kuch nahi bolengi aunty. Unhe bataega hi kaun? Chal rahi hai na? Arohi dii bhi hai na yaar! Okay! Haan na baba! Hmm~ Hello? Hello?? Haan bhaiya! Mein, Arohi dii, aur Kritika, hum teeno hi yaha se nikal ke xxxxxxx cafe par jaa rahe hai. Aur aap wahi mil rahe ho hume. Okay!?

Veer : H-Hey! Kaavvyaaa!! W-Wait! Kavya mene kaha ki mein baahar--

Kavya : Thank you so much Bhaiya! B-Bye Mmmuuaaah~

*Call ends*

Kavya ne Veer ki baat sune bina hi apni baat poori rakh ke meeting bhi set kar lii. Veer bechara bas apna phone hi dekhta reh gaya. Kuch kaamo me ladkiya kitni aage hua karti thi.

Veer (smiles) : Ye ladki bhi poori cartoon hai!

Karan : Toh? Ab kaha chalna hai?

Veer : xxxxxxx Square lelo!

Karan : Huh!? Waha kyu? Waha kya hai?

Veer : Sonali!

Karan : Ohh!

Aur bina kuch sawaal kiye Karan ne gaadi ghuma ke uss chauraahe par laga dii.

Chef on wheels ka ek shandaar red truck wahi chauraahe ke paas ek jagah khada hua tha. Baahar kuch 2-3 customers the jo fast food ka lutf le rahe the.

Veer jese hi car se utar food truck ke paas pohucha, andar se hi Sonali ne usse aate hue dekh liya,

Sonali : Aaiye! Aaiye! Padhaariye! Maharaaj! Aaj kese yaad aa gayi aapko apni iss gaadi ki?? Kisi ne khabar dii kya ki aapka ek business bhi hai? Jisse poora ek sadhaaran sii ladki kasht utha utha ke sambhaal rahi hai?

Karan : Okay! She looks pissed!

Veer halke se muskuraaya. Woh jaanta tha Sonali kuch aisa hi react karne waali thi.

Veer : Ek kaam hai.

Sonali : Mein bataati hu kya hoga. Ek aur naya truck! Hai na?

Veer (smiles) : Total 8 rahenge. Isko aur baakiyo ko include kar ke!

Sonali : Kya kaha? Mere kaan toh nahi bajj rahe na? Oye! Kya tum logo ne bhi wahi suna jo mein sunn rahi hu?

Woh truck me maujood kaam kar rahe waale apne sehkarmiyo se boli, uska ye andaaz Veer ko pata nahi kyu bada lubha raha tha. Yahi ek ladki thi jo uss se iss andaaz me baat karti thi. Aur asal me kitna hi kyu na woh Veer ko bura bhala keh le. Veer ko iss par kabhi gussa aata hi nahi tha. Kyuki woh jaanta tha ki andar se Sonali ke mann me uske prati koi mel nahi tha.

Woh bas muskuraate hue uski harr adaao ko dekh raha tha.

Sonali : Dekh rahe ho tumlog? Ye jo khada hai tumhaare saamne itna sajj dhaj ke. Haan haan yahi ladka. Arre yahi hai saare trucko ka maalik. Ye sab issi ki tarqeebe hai. Aur mujh jesi jawaan sundar ladki ko dekho toh kin kaamo me lagaaya hua hai.

Karan (smiles) : Haha~

Peeche khade workers bhi Veer ko sharmindagi se dekhne lage. Woh ye baat kese bhul sakte the ki Veer hi food truck aur chef on wheels ka owner tha.

Veer : Ye kya baat hui!? Mein toh tumhare liye khushkhabri leke aaya tha. Aur tum ho ki sunn'na hi nahi chaahti.

Sonali : Mein jaanti hu kya khushkhabri hogi. Na baba na! Tum jao yaha se. Wese hi mere upar itni badi zimmedaari thop ke rakhe ho. Subah se shaam isme sarr khapao, aur fir ghar jaa ke Maa se daant khao. Nahi nahi! Tum abhi ke abhi jao. Mujhe koi baat nahi sunn'ni hai. Harr mahine ki tarah iss mahine bhi saare kamaaye paise ki lambi parchi mil jayegi tumhe. Ab jao! Aur mujhe apna kaam karne do!

Veer bina kuch kahe truck ke andar aaya aur usne ishaara kiya, toh andar maujood workers uski baat fauran samajh ke baahar nikal gaye.

Woh ahista se chalte hue Sonali ke qareeb aaya toh woh fir bhadak uthi,

Sonali : Mene kaha na tum jao. Mein kaam kar rahi hu aur-

Veer : Tumhe ab ye kaam karne ki zaroorat nahi!

Uske itna kehte hi Sonali ka muh band ho gaya.

Sonali : !!??

Veer (smiles) : Mene kaha ki tumhe ab kaam karne ki zaroorat nahi! Tum padhna chaahti thi na? Mein tumhe iss kaam se azaad karta hu. Nidhi ma'am se baat karke tumhaare liye mein padhaayi ka kuch prabandh karta hu. Ab se tumhe ye sab karne ki koi zaroorat nahi!

Veer ne keh toh diya tha. Aur Sonali bhi kab se yahi chaahti thi. Par...

Ab jab achanak se usse ye praapt hua. Bechaari kuch keh na paayi. Ab kahi na kahi usse itne din iss kaam me lage hone se ek lagaav sa ho gaya tha. Logo ko apne haatho se bana kuch khila ke unke chehre par jab woh khushi dekhti thi, ya jab koi uske paas aake business ki tareef karta tha, toh Sonali ka dil khush ho jaata tha.

Bhale hi business Veer ka tha. Par usse aisa mehsoos hota tha ki woh bhi ek hissa hi hai inn sab ka.

Lekin ab jab jo usse chaahiye tha woh usse pesh kiya gaya toh,

Woh maun pad gayi.

Sonali: Mein...!

Veer : ??

Sonali : Hahaha~ Mujhe samajh hi nahi aa raha ki mein kya karu. Mein-

Veer ne aage badh uske kandhe par haath rakha,

Veer : Chinta mat karo. Jo tum chaahti thi. Woh ab tumhare saamne hai. Aage badho aur sweekaar karo. Business ki chinta chorr do. Workers kaafi hai.

Sonali : Fir bhi... Kya woh mere bagerr sab..

Veer (smiles) : Hmm! Tension mat lo. Sab sahi ho jayega. Toh mein padhayi ke liye haan samjhu na?

Sonali : Mujhe sach me kuch samajh nahi aa raha. Mein padhna chaahti hu. Waqai! P-Par...

Veer : Toh bas fir! Aaj se tum padhogi!

Woh itna bol waha se palta ki itne me peeche se Sonali ki badi dheemi aur kamzor sii awaaz uske kaano me padi,

Sonali : S-Suno...!

Veer : ??

Sonali : T-Tum... Tum itne bure bhi nahi ho.

Veer muskuraaya,

Sonali : Th-Thank you!

Aur bas ek haami bhar woh waha se ravaana ho gaya. Sonali ka path decide ho chuka tha.

Car me baithe baithe hi uski baate Pari se bhi hoti jaa rahi thi.

[Master! Rajat se hi pehle deal karna better hoga.]

'Aisa kyu Pari? Mein ye daave ke saath keh sakta hu ki mera pyaara aasteen ka saanp bhai bhi abhi kahi na kahi koi saazish rach hi raha hoga mere khilaaf.'

[Hmm! See! Rajat ko ek baar deal karne se aap Nidhi ma'am ke liye saare potential dangers ko dur kar denge. Hume uss ghar me kisi khatre ke hone ki fiqr karne ki zaroorat nahi fir.]

'And!?'

[And I believe ki Pranjal ke saath deal karne ke baad bhi, koi aur bhi hamaare haath se chooth raha hai.]

'Tumhara matlab hai koi usse back-up de raha hai?'

[Exactly Master! Mujhe nahi lagta uss ghochu ne hi sab kuch akele kiya hai. There's something else going on here too. I have this feeling. Something much bigger is lurking in the shadows. I bet woh kisi ke back up ki wajah se hi itna ucchal raha hai. And we have only one task. And that is-]

'To destroy that back up!!!!'

[YES!]

'I see!'

[Aur isliye hum uss se baad me deal karenge. Because he isn't alone. Let's start with the easiest one Master! Rajat is the best choice to launch our attack.]

'Indeed! Rajat se deal karna asaan hoga.'

[Also, uski abhi ke harqat ke baad aap usse kese jaane de sakte ho?]

'Yeah! Suman ko bhi mujhe punishment deni hai.'

[Aur aap Rajat ko diye apne 50 lakh kese bhul sakte ho?]

'Ohh! Don't worry! Vasoolna, mujhe boht acche se aata hai Pari!'

[Yes! So let's focus on Rajat first.]

'Hmm!'

Karan : H-Hey!

Veer : Haan?

Karan : Mein keh raha tha ki ab toh kaam khatam hai na? So? Ab? Tumhe ghar drop karna hai ya tum dii se miloge?

Veer : Gaadi xxxxxx square laga lo.

Karan : Ehh? Woh toh ulti side hai. Waha kyu?

Veer : Kavya ka phone tha. Usne kaha hai ki woh aur Arohi dii milna chaahti hai.

Karan : Okay! Dusre shabdo me, mera waha koi kaam nahi hai. Hai na? Toh mein tumhe drop kar ke waha se nikal-

Veer : Kritika bhi aa rahi hai.

Karan : -Niklunga nahi. Mene kaha ki mein drop karke waha se niklunga nahi. You heard me!? Just for you okay!?

Woh bina Veer se nazre milaaye bola. Aur Veer uski ye harqat par mand mand muskuraaya.

Jab dono uss cafe me pohuche, toh cafe ke andar maujood log sab unhi ko ghoorne me lage hue the.

Ek toh Karan ki limited edition ki Mercedes, upar se dono ke high class kapde. Cafe me maujood adhiktar couples ki nazre Veer aur Karan par hi tiki hui thi.

Aur unhi me se ek table ke ird gird baithi hui thi Kavya, Arohi aur Kritika jo wahi se unhe haath hilaate hue bula rahi thi.

Karan ki nazre ek pal me hi Kritika par jaa kar tiki aur usse dekhte hi ek jhurjhuri sii uske shareer me daud gayi. Yahi haal Kritika ka bhi tha.

Veer se toh woh thi hi attracted. Par jese woh jaanti thi ki Veer ke saath uska kaata bhidna mushqil tha. Jis kaaran se uska rujhaan dheere dheere Karan ki orr hona shuru hua.

Aur ab Karan uski nazro me ek ideal ladko me se ek bann chuka tha.

Kayi baar toh woh khud ki kismat par hi hairaan reh jaati thi. Karan jesa ladka, uss se baat karne ke liye aatur ho raha tha. Kya hi kahe iss baare me ab toh.

Wahi veer ki nigaaho ne bhi apni dono behno ko dhundh liya tha.

Jese hi Veer unke paas aaya, Kavya apni kursi se uth jhatt se Veer ke gale lag gayi.

Arohi ne jab ye dekha toh woh bhi khud ka na rok paayi aur Veer se gale mil woh apni seat par baith gayi. Halaki uski hug ki time limit Kavya ke muqaable behad hi kam thi. Probably 1 se 2 second ki hi thi uski hug.

Kavya : Aap bhi aaye ho haan? Kese yaad aa gayi aaj?

Karan : Ab please yaar firse taang kheechna mat shuru kar dena.

Arohi : *smiles*

Kritika : M-Mujhe nahi pata tha ki aap bhi aa rahe ho.

Karan : Haan! Woh actually mein haha~ Woh-

Veer : Aa nahi raha tha. Par tumhara naam sunn ke bhaaga chala aaya.

Kritika : !!!?????

Karan : Wh-What? Ahahaha~ Arre ni ni! M-Mein toh bas-

Kritika (blushes) : Wese, accha kiya aap aa gaye.

Karan : O-Ohh!

Kavya : Huh!? Ye aap dono ke beech kya chal raha hai?

Kritika (blushes) : Order do na tum! Mujhe le aayi zabardasti. Ab kuch khilwaogi nahi kya?

Kavya : Aaj Veer bhaiya denge na party. Kyu? Bhaiya? Aap khilwa rahe ho na hume?

Veer : Of course! Of course! Meri choti behan jo khaana chaahegi woh milega usse. Aaj party meri orr se.

Kavya ne bade hi pyaar se Veer ke gaal noche aur boli,

Kavya : Hehehe~ Ye hui na baat! I love you~

Arohi : Tum itne din kyu the baahar Veer?

Veer : Work dii! Work! Samajh lijiye business related tour tha. Yaha se waha hote rahe bas.

Arohi : Okay!

Veer : Aap teeno seedhe college se yaha!?

Arohi : Mmm~ Kavya ko jab pata chala ki tum kal hi laut chuke ho toh woh tumse milne ke liye zidd karne lagi. Aur mujhe bhi shaamil kar liya.

Veer : Kya aapko nahi milna tha mujhse?

Arohi : Ah! O-Of course! *blushes* Mujhe bhi milna tha. Ye bhi koi puchne wali baat hai? Aur tum college kyu nahi aate?

Veer : Sirf exams dene jaunga!

Arohi : Aisa karoge toh dikkat jaengi. Internal marks teachers ke haath me hote hai Veer. Agar unse acchi bana ke nahi rakhoge toh woh low marks de denge.

Veer (smiles) : Meri class teacher hi Nidhi ma'am hai.

Arohi : Ahhn! That's... Par fir bhi Veer. College aaya karo. At least thodi derr ke liye hi aao. Par aaya karo.

Veer : I'll try!

Kavya aur Kritika menu pakad wahi order karne me lag gayi. Idhar beech beech me Kritika aur Karan ke nain matakka chal rahe the. Toh wahi saamne baithi Kavya Veer ko pal pal uski aankho me dekhti.

Baatein toh woh Kritika se kar rahi thi par table ke neeche uska perr Veer ki jaangh par tha. Aur Veer bina koi aapatti jataaye Kavya ke makhmali perro par apne haath ahista ahista ferrne laga. Toh kabhi unhe halke haath se dabaata. Jiske badle me Kavya ke labo par ek muskaan sajj jaati.

Khaana peena jese hi hua, Kavya ne apna naya plan patak diya,

Kavya : Okay! Toh ab hum chal rahe hai movie!

Veer : Bilkul nahi! Mujhe ek zaroori kaam hai. Mein nahi rahunga!

Kavya : Whaaaatttt!?? Noooooooooo! Bhaiyaaaaa! Aap se toh sabse zyada umeed thi aur aapne...

Veer : Kavyaaaa!

Kavya : Jao nahi baat karni aap se. Jab dekho tab kaam kaam kaam! Kabhi humaare saath ek night out bhi nahi kiya hoga aapne. Kabhi ghume bhi nahi hoge hamare saath raat me. Jao! Hmph~

Arohi : You go! I'll handle her!

Veer (smiles) : Thank god! Aap na ho, toh mera kya ho!

Arohi (blushes) : Dumbo! Go now!

Kavya : Hmph! Jao jao! Mujhe aap se ab baat nahi karni!

Veer : What about you?

Karan : Yeah! Well sure! Mein tumhe drop kar deta hu.

Veer : Nahi! Tum carry on karo. Mein chala jaunga. Don't worry!

Aur unhe wahi chorr veer waha se nikal aaya.

Karan ki baatein Kritika se acchi khaasi ho rahi thi. Aise me Veer usse disturb nahi karna chaahta tha. Aur Kavya ka kya tha? Aaj woh I hate you bol rahi thi. Kal sabse pehla call ussi ka aane wala tha Veer ko.

Veer jab ghar pohucha toh hall me ghuste hi Ragini bhaagti hui uske paas aayi,

Woh abhi awaaz lagaane hi waala tha ki Ragini ne aake uske hontho par ungli rakh usse rok diya.

Ragini : Ssshhhhhhh!!!!

Veer : Kya hua?

Ragini : Mene Suman jii aur Tai jii ko bhej diya hai baahar.

Veer : Kaha?

Ragini (smiles) : Shopping pe. Aur kaha!?

Veer : Aap behad excited lag rahi ho.

Ragini : Ohh of course! Kyu nahi rahungi? After all... Saath me tum rahoge!

Usne aankho me aankhein daalte hue kaha,

Veer : Ahem! So?

Ragini : Bas! Mein ready hi hu. Tum jaldi se change kar lo. Mene Aabha ko upar TV me movie laga ke dii hai. Ghar par wahi rahegi. Aur tum aur mein-

Veer (smiles) : Mein aata hu change kar ke.

Ragini : Jaldi aana!! I'm waiting ~

Veer jab ready hoke aaya toh Ragini uske sameep aake uski t shirt par jhatkaarte hue usse check karne lagi. Sab kuch sahi tha ya nahi! Woh muskuraayi aur aage aake usne ek chumban Veer ke gaal par de diya.

Ragini : Chalo! Iss se pehle ki koi aa jaaye. Tum nahi jaante mene kal raat kese kaati hai Veer!

Veer ne apni bike nikaali toh Ragini kisi bel ki tarah peeche baith ke uss se lipat gayi. Usne saree hi pehni hui thi.

Veer : Aapko saree me dekh accha laga bhabhi!

Ragini : Bhabhi nahi Veer! Bhabhi nahi! Mein Vivek ki patni nahi hu ab. Ragini bulao! K-Kaho na Veer! Ragini! Mera naam lo! Lo na naam Veer!

Veer asmanjas me pad gaya tha. Ragini uss se lagbhag 8 saal badi thi. Kherr jab ab woh Suman ko naam se bulaata tha toh Ragini ko bulaane me koi samasya nahi jaani chahiye thi.

Veer : Ragini!

Uske muh se nikla hi tha ki Ragini ka poora badan kaanp utha. Uski ungliya zorr se Veer ke kandhe par kass gayi.

Ragini : Ek baar aur...! P-Please!

Veer : Ragini!!!

Ragini : Ohh Veer!!!!

Woh zorr se apne stano ko uski peeth par gaadte hue uss se chipak gayi.

*Vrroooommmmmm*

Dono ghar se nikle apne iss Suhaane safar ke liye. Kitne dino baad aaj dono akele the. Hastakshep karne wala ab koi nahi tha. Chenn se dono ek dusre ko mehsoos ksr sakte the.

Mumbai ke beaches me bheed na ho aisa kese ho sakta tha? Ye Goa nahi tha.

Veer aur Ragini haatho me haath thaame samundar kinaare ret par chal rahe the. Samudr ka thanda paani harr lehar ke saath aake unke perro ko bhigota aur waapas chala jaata.

Dono yu hi chalte rahe. Dono me se koi kuch nahi keh raha tha. Aas paas ke jitne bhi log unhe dekh rahe the, woh unn dono ko newly married couple hi samajh rahe the.

Kaafi derr ki iss shaanti ko Ragini ne hi fir bhang kiya,

Ragini : Veer!?

Veer : Hmm~

Ragini : I love you~

Veer : ...

Woh kuch na bola. Bas maun raha!

Ragini : Mein sirf tumhe ye batana chaahti hu aaj. Apna dil khol ke. Kya hum!? Kya hum kahi shaant jagah par chal sakte hai?

Veer ne haami bharte hue apne kadam aage badhaaye aur woh beach me kinare ki orr chalte chalte ek behad hi sunsaan se spot par pohuch gaye.

Chattaane aur patthar hi patthar the aas pas aur saamne vishaalkaay neel samundar.


Dono hi ek bade se patthar par baith gaye. Unke haath abhi bhi aapas me bandhe hue the.

Ragini Veer ke kandhe par jhuki aur sarr rakh bolna shuru kii,

Ragini : Mein tumhe batana chaahti hu ki, mere divorce ke baad se, mujhe aisa kabhi kisi aur ke liye mehsoos nahi hua hai Veer!

Veer : ....

Ragini : Yes! I have fallen for you Veer! Tumne mujhe apne dil me panaah dii, mujhe maaf kiya, meri tumne harr baat maani. Aur tumhare bade bhai ki talakshuda biwi hone ke naate, mere mann tumhare prati aisa kuch bhi nahi aana chahiye tha. Lekin fir bhi... Ye hua!

Veer : Mein-

Ragini : Nahi! Pehle mujhe keh lene do Veer! Samaaj ki nazro se ye apraadh hai. Mein tumhare baare me aisa soch bhi nahi sakti thi. Lekin fir bhi ye sab hua. Bura mat maan'na par... Shuruaati dino me mene Vivek ko chorr ke dusri shadi lene ka faisla pehle hi le liya tha aur uske liye mene ek do hum umr ke ladko se bhi baat cheet kii thi. Dad ke kehne par mene baat kii thi. Par mujhe unme interest nahi aaya. Aur fir tumhaare saath waqt bitaane lagi.

Veer : !!?

Ragini : Jese jese samay guzar raha tha. Mujhe tumhare baare me jaan'ne ki aur iccha hone lagi. Tumhari pasand, na pasand, tumhari baatein, tumhari personality. Aur mein anjaane me hi inn sabhi ki taraf aakarshit hoti jaa rahi thi. Jab divorce hua, tab mujhe ehsaas ho chuka tha Veer ki...

Veer : ??

Ragini (smiles) : Mujhe tumse mohabbat ho gayi hai.

Veer : Bhabh-

Ragini : Ragini Veer! Aaj se mein tumhare liye Ragini hu. Bhabhi nahi! Sabke saamne tum mujhe bhabhi bula sakte ho. Par akele me!? Mein tumhare muh se apna sirf naam sunn'na pasand karungi.

Veer : J-Jii!!

Ragini : Jii nahi! Haan! Treat me like an equal person Veer!

Veer : I'll try!

Usne apna sarr utha ke Veer ko dekha. Khaas kar uske hontho ko. Aur Ragini ki saasein tez ho uthi.

Ragini : Kya inn hontho ko thodi derr ke liye choom sakti hu?

Veer jo ab tak khud ko control kiye hue tha, aise shabdo ko sunn apna aapa akhir kho hi diya.

Ragini ki patli gori makhmali kamar me haath daal Veer ne usse jakda aur apne seene se kass ke laga ke pal bhar me unn rassbhare hontho ko apne muh me bhar liya.

"Nnnnggghhhhhh~"

*Smooch* *Slurp* *Slurp*

Kuch shan bhi nahi guzre the jab dono ki jeebh aapas me kushti ladd ek dusre ke muh me ghus dabaav banaane ki koshish karne lagi.

Veer ki jeebh Ragini ke muh ke andar gayi aur andhruni muh ko tatol ke unka swaad lene lagi, toh wahi Ragini bhi yahi karne me lagi thi.

"Mmmmmmmmnnnnnn~"

Veer ke haath unn mulaayam aamo ko nichodne me bhi lag gaye. Blouse ke upar se unhe zorr zorr se masalne ka maza hi alag tha.

Ragini desperation me Veer ki goad me aake baithi aur Veer ke sharaarti haath turant hi uski gaand par chale gaye.

"Mmmmmnnnnn~" "Aaaahnnnnnnn~"

*Slurp* *Slurp*

Ragini : Aise nahi Veer... Saree uthao...

Woh uttejna bhari awaaz me boli. Veer ne jese hi uski saree peech uske kulho par le jaa kar uthaayi toh woh aashcharya me reh gaya.

Neeche koi petticoat nahi tha. Bas Ragini ki doodh jesi gori jaanghe.

"Ohh Veer!"

"Claim me!!! Cherish me Veer! Let Vivek know how you should cherish an elder brother's wife. Nnnghhhh~ I love you baby!!!!"

Woh paagalo ki tarah Veer par toot padi.

Aur dono ki siskiya samundar ki lehro ke shor me ghul gayi.

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Mumbai~
Nidhi's Apartment ~
Evening ~ 8:12 PM

Nidhi ahaar ke dabbo me naye packet khol unme samaan bharne me lagi hui thi.

Juhi roz ki hi tarah TV me apna favourite cartoon dekh rahi thi. Aur Shreya abhi job se laut rahi thi jab achanak hi,

*Ding* *Dong*

Uske ghar ki door bell baji aur woh ye soch ke uthi ki Shreya aa gayi hai.

Nidhi ne abhi Darwaza khola hi tha ki usne dekha ki saamne Shreya nahi thi. Balki, ek uske hi jitne umr ki ladki khadi hui thi.

Nidhi iss ladki se vaakif nahi thi. Usne sawaaliya nazro se dekha toh uss ladki ne sawaal kiya,

"Miss Nidhi!?"

Nidhi : H-Haan! Nidhi mein hi hu. Kahiye!

Toh saamne maujood ladki ne ek hi vaakya kaha,

"Tejal here! Kya mein andar aa sakti hu?"

Nidhi : Huh!!?
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Ab tak...

Nidhi iss ladki se vaakif nahi thi. Usne sawaaliya nazro se dekha toh uss ladki ne sawaal kiya,

"Miss Nidhi!?"

Nidhi : H-Haan! Nidhi mein hi hu. Kahiye!

Toh saamne maujood ladki ne ek hi vaakya kaha,

"Tejal here! Kya mein andar aa sakti hu?"

Nidhi : Huh!!?


Ab aage...

Khamoshi!

Jo kamre me chhayi hui thi. Aur iss kamre ki chaar diwaaro me agar koi shor tha, toh woh tha upar lage pankhe ka. Jo maddham maddham ghoom ke halki karkash awaaz ko anjaam de raha tha.

"Kya mene jo kuch bhi abhi abhi suna, woh sach tha?" Dheemi aur thodi ladkhadati hui ek ladki ki komal awaaz aayi.

Awaaz thi Tejal ki. Single seat sofe par woh virajman saamne divaan par baithi Nidhi ki orr dekh rahi thi. Aankhein poori naam! Jo kuch bhi abhi abhi suna, usse pacha paana mushqil maalum ho raha tha.

Nidhi ke chehre par bhi mayusi thi. Usne dheere se sarr haan me hilaaya aur nazre jhuka lii.

Tejal : Ye aapki beti hai?

Usne kamre ke parde ki orr ishara karte hue pucha, jaha Juhi uss parde ke peeche chhip ke khadi hui thi. Apna thoda sa mukh bas dikhaaye woh jhaak rahi thi. Anjaan logo ke saamne woh aksar aisa kiya karti thi.

Nidhi ne fir haami bhari aur Juhi ko ishaare se apne paas bulaaya. Bechari Juhi apne nanhe kadam lete hue sehme sehme divaan se chipak chipak ke Nidhi ke paas aayi.

Nidhi ne uski peeth par haath rakh Tejal ki taraf aage kiya toh Tejal ne Juhi ke dono haath thaam liye.

Tejal : Kya naam hai aapka?

"Juhi!!!" Woh dheeme se boli!

Tejal (smiles) : Juhi! Boht pyaara naam hai. Aap mujhse friendship karogi?

Juhi bina kuch kahe ahista se sarr hilaayi toh Tej punah muskuraayi.

Tejal : Boht cute hai aapki beti! Toh kya aap apni beti ki kasam khaa ke keh sakti hai ki aapne jo kuch abhi abhi kaha woh sab... Ek ek baat sach thi.

Tejal ki baat par Nidhi hakki bakki sii reh gayi.

Nidhi : Huh!!?

Tejal : Meri baat ka bura laga ho toh mujhe maaf karna. Par mujhe ye jaan'na boht zaroori hai. Please! If you can! Agar aapko dikkat hai toh mein abhi issi waqt yaha se chali jaungi.

Nidhi kuch derr shaant rahi, fir gehri saans lete hue boli,

Nidhi : Agar koi aur hota, toh mene usse ghar se nikal diya hota. Par aapne bataya ki aap Veer ki sagi behan hai. Aur iss baat ki bhi pushti nahi hui hai abhi bhi. Sirf aapke photo dikhaane se ye saabit nahi hua hai. Mujhe abhi bhi sanshay hai. Toh pehle aap-

Iss se pehle ki Nidhi aage keh paati Tejal ne usse wahi tok diya,

Tejal : Ye rahi meri Maa ki ekmaatr dii hui sone ki chain.

Usne apne gale se ek khubsoorat sii chain utaarte hue Nidhi ke haatho me thama dii.

Tejal : Mere paas abhi aur kuch nahi hai apni baat prove karne ke liye. Jab tak mein apne bhai se mil na lu aur ye baat sach na saabit ho jaaye ki woh mera bhai hai. Ye chain aapke paas rahegi.

Nidhi : N-Nahi!! Nahi nahi! Isse aap apne paas hi rakhiye!

Nidhi darr ke maare chain waapas karne lagi. Dherro frauds aise hote hai jidhar insaan apni marzi se aapko apni keemti cheez deke jaata hai aur baad me police complaint kar aapko andar karwa deta hai. Kahi ye ladki bhi unme se ek toh nahi thi!? Nidhi thoda ghabra gayi.

Tejal : Please!! Meri baat ka vishvaas kijiye! Mein aapki baat abhi apni Mom se nahi kara sakti. Please! Trust me! Trust me ma'am! I beg you! Ye mere liye boht important hai.

Woh ghutno pe baith Nidhi ko pakadte hue boli,

Nidhi : M-Mein aise kese...!?

Tejal : P-Please!!!

Uske chehre ke haav bhaav dekh pata nahi kyu, Nidhi ka mann andar se kehne laga. Ki ye ladki shayad jhooth nahi bol rahi thi.

Jo desperation tha iss ladki me. Uss desperation ne Nidhi ko sochne par majboor kar diya.

Nidhi : Th-Theek hai!

Aur woh maan gayi!

Tejal (beams in joy) : Thank you so much!

Nidhi : Par aapko ye chain dene ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. Mujhe yakeen hai!

Tejal : Huh!? Par!?

Nidhi : It's fine!

Tejal : O-Okay! Now please~ Mujhe aapse ek favour aur chahiye!

Nidhi : Kesa favour?

Tejal : Mere bhai ka address kya yahi hai jo mentioned hai idhar!

Usne apna phone dikhaate hue pucha. Phone me Veer ki social media profile thi. Aur uss me kuch details padi hui thi. Address unme se ek tha.

Nidhi (nods) : Ye uske puraane ghar ka address hai. Woh ab waha nahi rehta hai. Jesa ki mene bataya woh ab apni bhabhi ke saath dusre address par-

Tejal (smiles) : No! Thank you ma'am! Mujhe yahi jaan'na tha. Aur yahi chaahiye mujhe! Thank you so much once again and please ek last promise aur~

Nidhi : !??

Tejal (smiles) : Aap ye baat usse... I mean mere bhai Veer ko nahi bataengi!

Nidhi : Lekin kyu? Agar aap uski behan ho toh fir intezaar kesa? Woh toh jaan ke behad khush-

Tejal (smiles) : Kuch cheezein surprise rehne dijiye! I hope aap apna vaada rakhengi! I'm leaving now! Take care!

Woh palti aur jaate jaate Juhi ke sarr par pyaar se haath ferr waha se baahar ho gayi.

Nidhi daud ke darwaaze par aayi, lekin tab tak Tej apni tezzi me pehle hi lift se neeche jaa chuki thi.

'Mene sahi toh kiya na? Veer ki sagi behan...! Iska matlab uski maa bhi yahi aas paas...! Kya mene sab kuch bata ke sahi kiya? Kahi koi musibat na khadi ho jaaye! Veer...!'

Woh mann me soch wahi bas dekhti reh gayi! Na jaane kya hone waala tha.

Baahar nikalte hi Tej ne cab book kari aur waapas Purvi ke ghar ki orr nikal padi. Gaadi toh chalti jaa rahi thi. Aur manzil par pohuch kar ruk bhi jaegi. Par inn aasuo ka kya? Jo uski aankho se nirantar behte jaa rahe the?

Inhe kese roke woh?

Woh jitni baar aasu pochti, utni hi baar woh chhalak uthate.

Nidhi ke ghar me woh khud ko kese control kii hui thi ye wahi jaanti thi. Accha hua jo woh aaj Nidhi se milne aa gayi. Aur usse itni saari baatein pata chal gayi. Warna na jaane aur kitne samay tak woh andhere me rehti.

Kuch derr pehle...

"College toh yahi dikha raha hai profile me!"

Cab se utarte hue Tejal andar college me gayi. Campus me usse dherro ladke ladkiya nazar aaye. Kuch canteen me baithe the toh kuch playground me the. Kuch aa rahe the toh kuch jaa rahe the. Ek chahal pahal waala ilaaka.

Bina derri kiye woh seedha andar main building me ghusi.

Aur saamne hi usse fee counter dikh gaya.

Tejal : Excuse me!? Mujhe jaan'na tha ki ye person issi college me hai na?

Person : Andar Sir se miliye!

Tejal andar gayi toh usse ek peon nazar aaya,

Tejal : Suniye! Mujhe pata karna hai ki ye student issi college se hai ya nahi?

Peon : Madam ye toh aapko Sir log hi bata payenge. Ya bacche log. Kis department me hai?

Tejal : Sorry! Yaha ye toh mention nahi hai.

Peon : Aapko yahi nahi pata!?

'Pata hota toh mein tum se kyu puchti bewakoof?' woh mann me hi khud se boli aur usse ek look dete hue nikal gayi.

'Aise nahi hoga kuch! Mujhe khud se hi confront karna hoga...!'

Aur woh department to department jaane lagi. Woh harr department ki classes me se kisi na kisi student se puchti aur harr koi usse naa me hi uttar deta.

Umeed ghatati jaa rahi thi.

Par tabhi,

Jab usne ek random ladki ko pakadte hue photo dikhaate hue pucha toh woh ek baar me Veer ko pehchaan gayi,

Ladki : Ye toh veer hai! Hamari class me hi hai. Par regular nahi aata. Kuch kaam tha kya?

Tejal : Dhyaan se dekho! Kya sach me yahi hai?

Ladki : Arre haan na baba! Hehe~ Mein follow karti hu usko. Toh mujhe pata hoga na!

Tejal : Okay thank you! Kya koi teacher nahi hai? Veer ka koi friend hai? Ya teacher jis se uski pehchaan ho?

Ladki : Veer ka friend? Tch!! Uska koi friend nahi hai. Mene try kiya par ab woh kisi se baat hi nahi karta hai. Haan! Mene usse Nidhi ma'am ke saath aate hue zaroor dekha hai. Hehehe~ Kitni afwaahe udii thi tab toh! Pata hai kya hua tha?

Tejal : Nidhi ma'am!? Inke saath uski pehchaan hai?

Ladki : Arre haan! Arre mene toh ye bhi suna hai ki dono saath me rehte the. Ek hi ghar me. Aur upar se aapko pata hai? Nidhi ma'am ka divorce hone waala tha tab. Hehe! Ek teacher aur student ki-

Tejal : Kaha milengi ye Nidhi ma'am?

Ladki : Sorry! Par woh toh ab nikal gayi. Too bad! Aaj unhone early leave liya tha.

Tejal : T-Toh ab?

Ladki : Ab kuch nahi ho sakta. Kal aaiyega! Simple!

Kehte hue woh palti,

Ladki : Unless you know her address! *Yawns*

Aur yu hi carefree andaaz me woh nikal gayi. Par uske muh se nikli ye akhiri baat Tejal ke kaano me ghanti zaroor baja gayi.

"Her address huh!?

Par saath hi ek dwesh ki bhaavna bhi jaag gayi.

'Top notch colleges me se ek hai ye city ke according to the Google. Hmm! Itna paisa! Upar se regular nahi aata... Ma'am ke saath rehne ke charche...! Agar mujhe itni facilities mili hoti toh...! No! I can not...! Tejal! Ateet ki baat ateet me. Let's move forward!' usne ek gehri saans lii.

Fir shuru hua jhooth ka silsila.

"Sir! Mein Veer ki sister hu. College me studies se related Nidhi ma'am se aaj baat honi thi. Par woh aaj chali gayi hai. Shayad bhul gayi."

"Meri flight hai aaj! Jaane se pehle unse milna tha."

"Agar aap mujhe unka address dede toh ghar jaake abhi mein unse mil lungi!"

"Nahi nahi! Mein samajhti hu aap aise hi kisi teacher ki details nahi dete haha ~ Par ab situation hi aisi bann gayi hai Sir!"

"Unhone tab apne cabin ke phone se shayad mujhe contact kiya tha, apne number se nahi! Isliye ye problem arise ho gayi. Jii! Toh aap thoda agar~"

"Thank you so much sir!! Ab mein unse time se mil sakti hu. Thank you!"

Bas!

Kuch jhooth ki baatein, aur uska kaam nikal chuka tha.

Address milte hi Tejal Nidhi ke bataaye address par pohuchi. Raat ke 8 baj chuke the.

Aur Nidhi ko saari baatein bataane ke baad jese tese usne usse convince kiya. Nidhi bhi bechaari akhir kaar sach bataane par majboor ho gayi.

Jo jo usse pata tha Veer ko leke, woh poora chittha khol ke rakh diya usne.

Nidhi ke bol ab bhi Tejal ke mann me goonj rahe the.

"Mene dekha hai usse. Tootate, haarte, rote, ghaayal hote!!! Veer...! Sach me Veer hai!! Uske jaisa mene aaj tak apni poori zindagi me aisa ladka nahi dekha...!"

"Paapi hai woh log! Uske pita...! Sharm aati hai mujhe uske pita ke baare me sochte hue bhi. Chhiii!! Thuu hai aise pita par!! Woh ladka... ICU ke ward me kese tadap raha tha mene dekha hai apni nazro se... *sniff* Pucho mat!"

"Koi bhi usse dekhne tak na aaya! Koi bhi nahi! Na uske pita, na sauteli Maa, na behne, na bhai, na uske Dada jii! Koi bhi nahi! Kya fayda aise parivaar ka jidhar... *sniff* Jidhar apne hi na ho? Dhitkaar hai aise logo pe!"

"Mene usse apne saath rakha tha. Poore 1 mahine 13 din raha hai woh idhar. Uske baad woh apni Bhabhi ke ghar shift hua. Nadaan hai na. Samajh raha tha ki uske rehne se mujhe aarthik roop se dikkatein aa rahi hai. *sniff* Paagal kahi ka...! Ab bhi usse t-toh ek lappad maarne ka-"

Aur woh ro padi.

Bilakh bilakh ke royi!!! Hatheli se aasu poch usne aage kehna jaari rakha,

"Koi kese... K-Koi kese itna nirdayi ho sakta hai? *sniff* Na koi dost, na koi apna, na parivaar. Arre bolne batane wala koi bhi nahi tha uske paas. Fir bhi uske chehre par hamesha muskaan rehti thi. *sniff* Yaha jab tak woh raha... Mujhe kabhi bhi woh bojh ki tarah nahi laga. Hamesha hi *sniff* mene usse apna hi maana hai. Iss ghar ka sadasya!! Aaj woh qaabil hai. Kama raha hai. Khud ka business bhi shuru kiya hai. Toh dekh ke... *sniff* Dekh ke accha lagta hai. Dil ko sukoon milta hai. Khushi hoti hai."

Woh rote hue muskuraayi,

"Aur ye sab jo mein bata rahi hu ye sab toh sirf baahar ki baatein hai. Na jaane andhruni baato me kya kya jaan'ne ko milega. *sniff* Bechaare ne kitna kuch saha hoga ateet me. Ye koi nahi jaanta. Mujhe bhi nahi bataya hai usne. Aur uska parivaar...!"

"Thuu hai aise parivaar par!! Khaas kar woh Pranjal! Kalank hai woh kalank! Veer ne mujhe sachet kiya hai...! Ye ladka... Uska bhai nahi aasteen ka saanp hai. Kya aap yakeen kar sakti ho? Ki ek ladke ne apne hi Dada jii ka haadsa karvaya taaki woh apne bhai ko jaydaad se baahar kar sake. Soch sakti ho?"

"Iske kaale karnaame mujhe pata hai. Accha hua ki Veer ne iss ghatiya insaan ki pol khol ke rakh dii. Lekin abhi bhi... *sniff* abhi bhi mujhe uska parivaar kuch khaas pasand nahi hai."

"Hmm! Uski bhabhi pehle se kaafi sudhar chuki hai. Woh ab acchi hai. Samay rehte jaag gayi. Yaha tak ki... Uski do behne Kavya aur Arohi! Ye dono bhi behad acchi hai. Meri mulaqaat hui hai kayi baar. Same college me hai. Lekin baaki? Unke baare me mein kuch nahi keh sakti...!"

Aur fir...!

Khamoshi!

Jo kamre me chhayi hui thi. Aur iss kamre ki chaar diwaaro me agar koi shor tha, toh woh tha upar lage pankhe ka.

*Honk* *Honk*

Yaaddaasht dhundhli hui, aur waapas se Tejal ko saamne ka nazaara dikhaayi diya. Purvi ka ghar aa chuka tha.

Apne aasu poch woh utri aur cab wale ko pay kar ke woh andar society me jaane ke liye hui.

Chalte chalte, uske haatho me phone ki screen par wahi Veer ki tasveer thi jo usne chupke se Egypt me kheechi thi.

'Aur mujhe laga tha... Ki meri zindagi hi battar guzri hai. Now that I compare my life with yours. It's laughable!'

'The pain you've endured...! Tumhe dhundne ki talaash toh ussi din se thi jis din tumhare baare me pata chala tha. Bachpan me mene kya kuch nahi jhela. Mom ka akelapann, mera family ka na hona, aur roz roz taane sunn'na. Financial conditions, and what not. Aur sochti thi... Ki mere paas jab bhai hai toh uski zindagi kesi guzar rahi hogi? Milna chaahti thi tum se.'

'Par yaha aake Purvi Maasi se pata laga ki tumhari family hai. Ek joint family. Aur mein akeli... Bas maa ke saath... Tum hassoge agar mene ye baat tumhare saamne kahi toh. Mujh me jalan jaag gayi thi. Haan! Tumse jalan! Aur thodi nafrat bhi...!'

'Mein yaha akeli aur tumhe itne bade parivaar ke saath rehne ko mila? Itna paisa? Itna accha college? Itna pyaar!? Par ab...!'

'Ab jab jaani hu... Toh khud par hassi aa rahi hai. The pain I've suffered is nothing compared to yours... How many wounds are you still hiding? Veer!?'

Sochte sochte woh gate par pohuxh doorbell bajaayi toh Purvi ne gate khola. Aur usse dekh khush ho gayi.

Purvi (smiles) : Aao! Tumhe hi yaad kar rahe the.

Kehte hue woh palat ke andar chali gayi. Parantu, Tejal wahi khadi rahi. Apni maasi ko jaate hue dekhti rahi,

'Maasi! Aap lucky ho! Filhaal kal ke liye... Mein apne plan ko anjaam nahi dungi. But after that...! I will do it!'

*Click*

Aur usne andar aake darwaaza band kar diya.

***

Next day...
Afternoon - 12:36 PM
Mahila mandal samiti...

"Aaj fir wahi hua hai. Humne toh waha poora support dikhaya tha na? Fir waha ke log hamare khilaaf aisa kese ~!?"

Kareeb ek 34-35 saal ki aurat kheejte hue boli. Dikhne me theek thaak thi. Par mahila mandal me aurto me uski bhumika bhi aham thi.

"Baat kuch aur bhi hai Sarika!"

Ek vinamrta bhari awaaz uske bagal se aayi.

Sarika : Aur kya baat ho sakti hai Suman jii?

Suman muskuraayi!

Suman : Agar humne uss shetr me apna poora yogdaan diya hai logo ko. Toh woh kabhi hamaare khilaaf morcha nahi nikaalenge. Aise awaaz nahi uthaenge. Par aaj ye do baar ho gaya hai. Kuch din pehle bhi hua tha. Tum khud socho!? Ki woh aisa kyu kar rahe hai? Zaahir hai ki unhe bhadkaaya gaya hai.

Suman ki baat sunn, Sarika ke maathe par lakeere chhaa gayi.

*Click*

Tabhi, kamre ka darwaaza khula aur ek khubsoorat sii saree me ek khubsoorti ki bala pravesh kii. Uske jism me maans harr uss jagah me sahi se bhara hua tha jaha ek mard ko chaahiye hota tha.

Chuttad, than, unn dono jagaho me maans ki koi kami nahi thi. Shayad isliye Veer ko iss aurat ke jism ko chakhne me itna maza aata tha.

Niharika roz ki tarah apni bhaari gaand matkaate hue andar aayi aur uski nazre sabse pehle Suman par padi,

Niharika : Suman ka kehna sahi hai. Mujhe ek ghinone shadiyantra ki buu aa rahi hai.

Sarika : Par didi! Humne kabhi kisi ka bura jab kiya hi nahi toh-

Niharika : Humne nahi kiya. Par hamare kaaran kuch logo ko mirchi zaroor lagti hai. Khaas kar raaes-zaado ko. Koi wajah hogi jiske chalte hum aade aa rahe honge. Bas! Hume hataane ka bahaana hai ye.

Sarika : Par kaun ho sakta hai akhir!?

Niharika : Yahi hume pata lagana hai!

Woh kuch raay rakhti ki ek baar fir darwaza khula par iss baar koi mahila nahi thi.

"Jii Suman jii se kaam tha. Unse milna tha thoda. Kya mein mil sakta hu?"

Kisi ko jhatka lage ya na lage par Niharika ko ye awaaz sunn ke zaroor jhatka lag chuka tha.

Woh bhi high voltage wala.

Uski sitti pitti gum ho chuki thi. Kyuki awaaz kisi aur ki nahi balki, Veer ki hi thi.

Bechari Niharika ka garam badan poora ekbaar me thanda pad gaya. Woh jaanti thi Veer ke saath akhiri baat kya hui thi uski. Usne Veer ka phone hack karna chaaha tha. Par woh nakaam thi. Veer ne kaha tha ki woh aake waha uski khabar lega. Aur ab uski rooh kaanp rahi thi.

Sarika : Suman jii? Ohh! Suman jii ke ghar se ho na?

Veer : Jii!

Sarika : Haan yahi hai Suman jii! Baat karlo!

Veer : Woh zara akele me baat karna thi.

Suman bhi khud hairat me apne maalik ko dekh rahi thi.

'Maalik yaha? Bhala kya kaam hoga?'

Uske dimaag me abhi ye nahi aaya tha ki Veer ne uski chori pehle hi pakad chuki hai.

Sarika : Akele me? Accha theek hai. Par zara jaldi!

Niharika : Sarika! Aur baaki sabhi, chalo baahar chalo. Jaldi!

Kehte hue woh sarr jhukaaye palti aur tezz kadmo ke saath bhaagne lagi. Uski nazre milaane tak ki himmat nahi ho rahi thi.

Veer (smiles) : Mujhe aap se bhi kaam hai Niharika jii!

Aur bas, ye sunte hi Niharika ke kadam wahi theher gaye. Darr ke maare!

Sarika aur baaki sabhi baahar jese hi nikli.

*Click*

Veer ne darwaza andar se band kar liya.

Aur ye dekhte hi Niharika ka badan kaanp utha.

Veer (smiles) : Suman! Meri pyaari Suman!

Suman (smiles) : Maalik~

Woh bina kuch jaane khush hote hue daud ke Veer ke nazdeek aayi par iske pehle ki woh khud ko uski baaho me saup paati, Veer ne uss thaama aur usse palat ke deewaar se sata diya.

Suman : Maalik!!??

Veer uske kaano ki orr jhuka,

Veer : Itni badi baat ho gayi aur tumhare muh se kuch nikla tak nahi? Hmm? Apni safaayi me kuch kehna chaahogi?

Suman : Ahhh!

Ab pata chalte hi Suman ki khud ki haakat patli ho gayi. Usse samajh aa gaya tha ki kyu Maalik naraaz the. Jhooth bolegi toh saza toh milni hi thi.

Jab Veer ne Suman se pucha tha ki sab kuch kesa chal raha hai? Toh Suman ne Veer ko koi taqleef nahi bataayi thi.

Jabki...

Musibatein toh thi!

Kisi basti ke log kuch hafte pehle ek din aake naari shakti ke khilaaf haaye haaye ke naare laga ke gaye the.

Sab kuch ast vyast kar diya tha. Log zyada bhi the toh mahila mandal kuch kar na saki. Bas tamasha dekhti rahi.

Jaha unki image ki dhajjiya udti rahi. Uss se badi baat ye thi ki ye wahi shetr ke log the jaha mahila mandal ne pehle avedh roop se paani chori hone ke liye awaaz uthaayi thi.

Kisi mahila ke ghar paani nahi aa raha tha aur usne mahila mandal se madad maangi thi. Mahila mandal ne poori madad kar, awaaz utha ke ye maamla sambhaala tha aur waha pani ki sahi tareeqe se supply chalu karwayi thi.

Par dekho. Jis thaali me khaaya, ussi me chhed kar diya.

Wahi basti ke log aaj poore mahila mandal ko gaali de rahe the.

Khaas kar Suman ko. Kyuki wahi thi jo aage thi uss waqt. Tab Suman nayi nayi thi. Aur usse kaam sambhaalna sikhaaya jaaye iske chakte usse ye zimmedari saupi gayi thi.

Aur ab nateeja? Usse gaaliya khaani pad rahi thi.

Apne maalik ko chinta me na daala jaaye, isliye Suman ne apne maalik se ye baat chhipa lii. Par Veer ko ye bilkul bhi pasand na aaya.

Aur kese aata? Suman uska parivaar thi. Sirf ek slave nahi! Koi maans ka tukda nahi thi woh jisse bas istemaal karne ke liye rakha jaaye.

Veer ne Suman ki saree uthaayi aur agle hi pal uske aur Niharika ke saamne uske nange nitambh ucchal ke ujaagar ho gaye.

Niharika hakki bakki sii sab dekh rahi thi.

Niharika : Y-Ye!!? Ye!? Panty k-kaha hai iski...!?

Veer (smiles) : Tumne aaj bhi panty nahi pehni hai? Na hi petticoat? Boht daring ho rahi ho aajkal! But it's good for me!

Niharika : wh-what!!?

Niharika ko ignore kar, Veer ne apne jeb se ek chota whip nikaala.

Aur fir,

*Chataaaaaakkkkkk*

"Aaahhhnnnnmmmmm~"

Ek zordaar cheenkh goonjti. Agar Veer uska muh band na karta toh. Usne zorr se whip ghumaate hue Suman ke nange chuttado par ek ke baad ek vaar kiye. Aur harr baar, Suman bechari ka shareer hil ke reh jaati.

Bas kuch hi maar me, uski cheekhein uttejna se bhari kaamuk siskiyo me badal gayi.

*Chataaaaaakkkkkk*

*Chataaaaaakkkkkk*

Uske kulhe laal pad gaye. Veer ne apne haatho se unn pato ko alag kiya toh usse manmohak drishya nazar aaya.

Do lazeez-daar chhed!!

Usne Suman ki gadaayi chamdi ko fela fela ke darshan liye. Uski choot geeli hui padi thi.

Mauka dekh Veer ne apna hathiyaar nikaala aur seedha Suman ki choot me pel diya.

"Nnnnnggghhhhhh~"

Darwaaze ke peeche khade hoke woh dono tabadtod chudaayi me lag gaye. Aur idhar bechaari Niharika ka sirr phata jaa raha tha. Woh stabdh hoye? Ya darre? Ya fir uttejit hoye? Uski samajh me kuch nahi aa raha tha.

*Phattttt* *phattttt* ki awaazein udhar aa rahi thi. Veer ka lund zorr zorr se dono chhedo ko bhogne me laga hua tha.

Veer : Ye hai tumhari saza!!

Suman : M-Maalik!! Ye saza nahi hai... *huff* *huff* Ye toh inaam hai!!

Veer (smiles) : Inaam hi sahi! Inaam se yaad aaya. Nayi slave ko bhi toh inaam dena hai na?

Niharika : A-Ahhh!

Niharika ka badan thitur utha.

Veer ke dhakke idhar tezz hue aur usne pucha,

Veer : Shittttt!!!! I'm close!! Kidhar chahiye tumhe Suman!

*Phattttt* *Phattttt* *Phattttt*

Suman : Ahhhnnn~ Maalik!!! M-Maalik!!! Dono chhed aapke hai... Nnnghhhh!!!? J-Jidhar daalna ho. N-Nahi!!! Rukiye! Mene... *huff* Mene tay kar liya hai. Choot me maalik. M-Meri choot me daaliye...!

*Splurrrttttttt*

Aur ek dhaar nikalte hui Suman ki andhruni diwaaro ko rang dii.

*Plop*

Jese hi lund uss chhed se baahar aaya Suman agle hi shan palat ke ghutno ke bal baith lund muh me bhar chusne lagi. Kyuki woh jaanti thi.

She knew it. A cocksleave must know its place. No natter from which hole Master's dick came from. A cocksleave's job is to clean it thoroughly and keep sucking it most of the time.

Jab Veer ne Niharika ko punaah dekha toh woh ghabraate hue peeche jaa rahi thi.

Par aisa hua na...

Veer ne usse bhi dabocha aur uske dono chhed chod chod ke apne veerya se bhar diye.

Uski chuttad laal the. Zaahir hai acchi khaasi spanking aur whipping hui thi. Balki deepthroat aur sandwich blowjo bhi mila tha Veer ko apni dono slaves se.

Suman apne maalik ke liye paani lene gayi thi. Par darwaza lagana bhul gayi. Jese hi pata laga ki koi aane waala hai. Veer ne apni dono naukraaniyo ko table ke neeche bhej diya. Aur woh upar Raja ki tarah baitha hua tha.

Do aurte uske lund athwa tatto ko choosne me lagi hui thi. Tabhi Sarika aa dhamki,

Sarika : Hmm? Didi kaha hai? Aur Suman jii!?

*Slurrrrpppp*

'Ohhh fucccckkk!!! Suman dheere!!! Uggh!!!'

Veer : Woh dono baahar gayi thi.

Sarika : Tum idhar kya kar rahe ho? Aur ek minute! Suman jii ki kursi par kyu baithe ho?

*Slurrrrrpppppp* *slurrrrrpppp*

*Kisssss* *lick*

Idhar woh baate kar rahi thi. Par usse kya pata tha ki uski mahila mandal ki Head aur nayi member Suman, ek mard ke saamne table ke andar ghus uska lund choosne me lagi hui thi.

Niharika thi man hater! Aur woh apne hi area me baith ke, ek mard ka lund choos rahi thi.

Veer (smiles) : Mein yaha? Hahaha! Ahem! Mujhe Suman jii hi baitha ke gayi hai. Aati hi hongi.

Bina kuch kahe Sarika toh nikal gayi. Par idhar Veer unke sarr ko baalo ke bal pakadta aur khilaune ki tarah istemaal kar unke mukho ko chodta.

Niharika ka toh poora chehra lund ki mehek se mehek raha tha.

Aur jharrne ke baad usne dono ke hi muh me thoda thoda hissa gira diya. Jisse majbooran Niharika ko gutakna pada.

Ye sab samapt hote hi, Veer ne important baat rakhi,

Veer : Koi hai jo hamare khilaaf hai. Aur agar mein sahi hu. Toh jesa kar raha hu wesa hi hona chahiye. Niharika tum!

Niharika : A-Ahnn? M-Mein ..!?

Veer : Tum!!! Aaj mere saath mahi chalogi!

Usne itna kaha hi tha ki tabhi uske phone par do messages aa gaye.

Veer : huh!?

Veer ne check kiya toh paaya ki, ek purvi ka tha aur dusra... Miss Kaera ka!!!

Purvi : Hum shaam ko 6 baje milenge. Vikram!

Kaera : Tonight!! Come to my home @ 7 PM!!!

'Ahh! Shit!!! Firse nahi! The timing...!'

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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Update consists of 4.4k words. Ab koi supporting updates nahi hai. Ye update padh ke samajh aa gaya hoga. Iss update se hi ye arc tezz pace pakad chuka hai. Toh like thok ke jaane ka. Aur revos rakhne ka bhaaya.

Baaki, dhanyavaad! ✨
Ding 😳kya bajayi hai suman ki har bar kuch alag scripts add kar dete ho soch se bhi aage tej ko veer ka pain tho samaj mein aa gaya but past usse bhi pata nahi aise laga tha ke aaj Purvi bhi veer se milegi but let's wait for next xiting update
 
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