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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

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Update - 111 ~ Connecting the dots
Ab tak...

Wahi aadmi jisne Veer ke raungte khade kar diye the.

Text simple tha. Par rooh hila dene waala tha.

"Ek antim message tumhare liye Veer. Don't try to track this number. Tumhe kuch haasil nahi hoga. Samay ki barbadi hogi. Enjoy your remaining days with your family. Do whatever you want...! I just want to tell you one thing snd that's...!

I will kill you at the Crimson's Festival"


Ab aage...

*Huff* *Huff* *Huff*

"Goddamn it Suhana!!!! Don't you die on me!!"

Veer ki saase tezz thi. Steering aur gears par uske haath fatafat chal rahe the, aur gaadi raftaar pakad sadak par bhaag rahi thi. Suhana peeche ke seat par khoon se lathpat behosh laiti hui thi.

'WHAT THE HELL IS THIS PARI???'

[M-Master! I-I... M-Mujhe sach me nahi pata abhi abhi kya hua. It's not possible. H-How can it be? Uske paas system kese ho sakta hai?]

'Yahi toh mein tumse puch raha hu Pari!!! Tumne kaha tha ki sansaar ka koi bhi vyakti ye pata nahi laga sakta ki tum mere andar ho. Then what the FUCK was that-!?'

Woh zorr se chillaaya. Clearly, woh Pari par gussa tha. Pari ne uss se jhooth bola? Kyu?

[M-Master-! I-I... ]

'Tell me!!!!!'

[Woh meri dusri personality hogi Master. Trust me Master I-]

'SHUT THE FUCK UP PARI!!! SHUT UP!!!'

[Ahh!! M-Master!!! I really-]

'Just shut up! Ek anjaan aadmi aata hai aur kathputli ki tarah hume nachaate hue hamare hi member ko yu ghaayal karke araam se nikal jaata hai.'

[Th-That's--]

'Aur tumhe kuch pata bhi nahi hai. Aur jo pata hai woh galat hai. What a fucking great end it is to our tour.'

Uske zorr se chillaane par ek khamoshi chhaa gayi. Aur kuch derr baad Pari ki boht hi dheemi sii ruwaasi awaaz uske mann me goonji.

[I'm sorry Master! I'm so sorry! I was a failure! Mujhe aapko aur pehle inform kar dena chahiye tha. I wasn't good enough. I'm sorry.]

Aur iss se pehle ki Veer kuch keh paata,

[I'm sorry Master~]

*Ding*

[System has entered into the sleep mode.]

Pari sleep mode me chali gayi.

'Pari I...!'

Veer kuch keh na paaya. Suhana ko furti me hospital pohuchaate hue usne saari details fill in kii. Divya bhi kuch derr me hi Nik aur baakiyo ke sang pohuchi. Uske chehre ka rang uda hua tha.

Veer ke paas bhaagte hue aake usne usse thaama,

Divya : K-Kya huaaa?? Veeeerr??? How is she???

Veer : Treatment chal raha hai!

Divya chinta me aake wahi haatho me sarr rakh baith gayi.

Toh wahi Veer apne ravaiyye ko lekar niraash tha. Pari ke saath usse aisa behave nahi karna chahiye tha. Usne toh hamesha se hi uska bhala chaaha hai.

Jese hi kuch ghanto ke baad doctor se ye pata chala ki Suhana critical situation se baahar hai. Veer ke phone par tabhi woh text aa gaya. Aur usse dekhte hi, uski chintaaye aur badh gayi.

Ab yaha rukna theek nahi tha. Suhana ko antim baar dur se dekh woh waha se nikalne laga. Subah ho hi chuki thi. Baaki samay woh airport par hi guzaar sakta tha.

Divya : Tum...! Tum jaa rahe ho? Abhi se? Suhana se nahi miloge? How can you-!?

Veer : Nahi! Mera kaam yaha khatam hai.

Divya : Suhana ko aise chorr ke jaa rahe ho Veer?

Veer : I...

Divya : Tum aisa kese kar sakte ho?

Veer : She will be fine! Galti meri hai mein unhe safe nahi rakh saka. I don't want her to see me first. Chalta hu! Good luck with your investigation!

Aur woh apna bag utha ke waha se nikal gaya.

"Veeeeeeeeerrrrr!!!"

Divya hospital ke gate tak aake usse kayi baar pukaari, par Veer na ruka.

Aur dekhte hi dekhte woh uski nazro se ojhal ho gaya.

'Will we meet again? Veer?'

***

Uske baad se hi, Veer aur Pari ke beech poori flight bhar koi bhi baat nahi hui.

Jab Veer India pohucha tab hi Pari reactivate hui aur Veer ne fauran hi apni maafi rakh dii.

"I'm so sorry Pari!! M-Mein..."

[No! I'm sorry master! Galti meri thi. Mujhe aur attentive rehna chahiye tha. Lekin mein-]

'Nahi Pari! Tumse jitna hua tumne apna best diya. Aur wese bhi tum mere andar ho. Baahar ki saari cheezo par control rakhna mere haatho me hai. And I still-'

[It's... It's okay master! Please don't be sad. Chorriye woh sab. Ab hume uss unknown par focus karna hai.]

'Yeah!!!'

Pari se dobaara sulaah hone ke baad, Veer aur uske beech ab rishta aur bhi mazboot ho chuka tha. Jo ki dono ke liye hi accha tha.

***

Par Alpha ke stronger hone ke baad, maamla thoda bigad raha tha.

"Damn it! Damn it! Damn it!!!!!!"

*BAAAMMMMMM*

Veer ne zorr se apna haath diwaar par de maara. Poori diwaar vibrate ho uthi.

"The fucking timing-"

Woh behad gusse me tha. Apne sarr ko haatho me leke woh wahi zameen par baith gaya.

'P-Pari!! Mein sirf ek khush-haal zindagi jeena chaahta tha. Aur dekho kaha aa gaya mein?'

[Master!]

'Suhana waha ghaayal hai. Miss Kaera apni unstable condition me hai, Miss Sonia ko kuch nahi pata hai, Bhabhi aur baaki sabhi khatre se anjaan hai, Pranjal zaroor kuch peeth peeche kar raha hai, Nidhi ma'am aur Juhi uss Rajat ke liye firse ready nahi hai, Niharika... She might be plotting something too. Aur ab ye unknown person..!'

Baat sach thi. Akhir kaha kaha dhyaan de woh?

[One at a time master. One at a time. Ek ek karke hum seedhiya chadhte hai. Theek hai? Agar uss unknown aadmi ne hume abhi freedom dii hai. Then yahi time hai ki hum jald se jald yaha ki problems solve kare. Let's start with Rajat. Usse handle karna hamare liye asaan hi hoga.]

'Yeah! Thank You Pari!'

[Don't mention it master~❤️]

Woh abhi uth hi raha tha jab achanak uske bagal se aake koi wahi zameen par baith gaya.

'Hmm?'

Uske bagal se Bhumika baithi hui thi. Kal raat me theek se baat bhi nahi ho paayi thi uss se Veer kii.

Bhumika (smiles) : H-Hey!

Usne dheere se kaha.

Veer : *nods*

Bhumika : Mujhe laga ki tum pareshan ho isliye mein-

Veer : I'm fine!

Bhumika nazre chura chura ke Veer ko dekh rahi thi. Uski zyaada himmat nahi hui Veer ko dekhne ki aur uss se directly baat karne ki.

Bhumika : Hamaare beech...!

Veer : !??

Bhumika (sarr jhukaate hue) : Hamaare beech kabhi dhang se baatein hi nahi hui. Hai na!?

Veer (lambi saas lete hue) : Kuch lamhe bane the. Mene koshishe kii thi. Aapne pehchaan'ne se hi inkaar kar diya...!

Bhumika : W-Woh-

Veer ke ek ek shabd seedhe Bhumika ke dil me chhuri ki tarah jaa ke ghup gaye. Shabd uske gale me hi atak ke reh gaye. Veer ne usse woh pal yaad dila diya jab woh hotel me Veer ko pehchaan'ne tak se peeche hatt gayi thi. Aur iske liye glaani toh usme abhi bhi koot kootkar bhari hui thi. Veer ke bol jese zakhm par namak chhidakne ka kaam kar gaye.

Veer : Ab jab thodi fursat mile, toh ye sawaal khud se kariyega.

Iss se pehle ki Bhumika kuch keh paati,

"Veeeeeeeerrrrrr!?? Naashta lag gaya hai. Aa jao! Bhumika tum bhi!!!"

Andar hall se Ragini ki awaaz ne unka dhyaan kheech liya.

Veer agle hi shan utha aur bina kuch kahe ya peeche mude woh Bhumika ko wahi chorr waha se andar chal diya.

Bhumika ki aankho me aasu panap uthe. Agar Veer ek do vaakya aur dil ko ghayal karne wale kehta toh beshaq unn aankho me se aasu chhalak uthate.

Dining table par apni seat par virajmaan hote hue usne naashta shuru kiya. Pal pal Ragini andar se baahar hoti aur usse apni qaatilana nazro se dekhti.

Veer (sonali se) : Tumhare liye mene kuch socha hai.

Sonali : Hmm? Kya?

Veer : Samay aane par pata lag jaega.

Sonali : Ek aur food truck?

Veer (smiles) : Nahi!

Sonali : Toh?

Veer : Mujhe samay do thoda. Jald hi pata lag jaega. Business me koi dikkat toh nahi jaa rahi?

Sonali : Jaa rahi hai na.

Veer : Kya hua?

Sonali : Yahi samajh nahi aata ki mein iss jhamele me kyu fassi hui hu.

Veer : Well...

Veer ke kuch kehne se pehle hi Suman ne Sonali ki plate me ek paratha rakha aur saath hi saath uske sarr par ek tapli bhi de maari,

*Bonk*

Sonali : Maaaaaa!!????

Suman : Kahi bhi raha jaata hai toh kaam karna padta hai. Kya tum ab muft me aisho araam ki zindagi jeena chaahti ho? Mene tumhe ye sikhaaya hai? Veer jii ne tum pe itni badi zimmedaari saupi hai bharosa kar ke. Unka bharosa mat todna. Aur lagan se kaam karo. Tumhe toh khush hona chahiye ki-

Sonali : Maa tum hamesha aisa hi karti ho. Hamesha uska paksh leti ho. Jab dekho tab-

Suman : Haan toh kyu na lu paksh? Gaav ka samay yaad nahi kya? Kese jeete the hum harr roz? Bol! Aaj tu yaha chenn se baith ke iss tarah shaahi bhoj kar paa rahi hai toh woh kiski badaulat hai? Haan? Lungi mein paksh Veer jii ka. Aur tu bhi samajh jaa iss baat ko.

Sonali (khuspusaate hue) : Acche se jaanti hu kyu paksh leti ho uska.

Bola toh badi hi dheemi awaaz me tha Sonali me. Par Suman chuki kaafi nazdeek khadi thi, usne sab sunn liya aur palat ke Sonali ko usne apni aankhein dikhaayi. Antatah, Sonali kheejte hue shaant hoke baith gayi. Toh wahi Suman ka poora dhyaan Veer par kendrit ho gaya.

Suman : Ek paratha aur lijiye na!

Veer : Nahi! Ho gaya mera!

Suman (dheere se) : Lijiye na maalik! Sehat ka dhyaan rakhiye. Acche se naashta kariye.

Veer : Pait already bhar gaya hai.

Suman : Ek aur bas! Mere liye!?

Veer (sighs) : Rakh do!

Suman (smiles) : Mein paani laati hu.

Woh gunguna ke andar chali gayi toh wahi Ragini andar se baahar aayi aur Aabha aur Sonali ko sabzi parosne lagi.

Harr baar woh Veer ko dekhne se nahi chookti thi. Unhe serve karne ke baad jab usne dekha ki Shweta aur Suman dono hi andar thi to woh mauka dekha Veer ke nazdeek aayi,

Ragini : M-Mein... Mein chaah rahi thi ki hum kal chale kahi?

Veer (dheere se) : Kidhar?

Ragini : Kahi bhi. Jaga tum le jana chaaho.

Veer : How about beach?

Ragini (smiles) : Ahh! Wonderful! Mujhe kayi mahine ho gaye waha gaye. I'll... I'll be ready! Kal shaam ko. Okay?

Veer ke haath ko thaam halke se daba ke woh muskaan liye waha se andar ho gayi. Kal ki shaam, Ragini ke naam pehle hi booked ho chuki thi.

Jo akhiri sadasya tha ghar ka, akhir kaar woh bhi baahar aaya.

Shweta ek plate me kuch mithaiyaa rakh ke kitchen se baahar aayi. Sabhi ko ek ek piece dene ke baad woh akhir me Veer ke paas aayi. Aur jhuk ke usne ek mithaayi Veer ki plate me rakhi.

Parantu usne apna pallu nahi odha hua tha. Ye maatr ek ittefaaq tha. Aur ittefaaq se hi, Veer ki nigaahein unn do raseele aamo par jaake theher gayi.

Jese hi Shweta ne apni nigaahein upar kari, Veer uske urojo ko ghoorte hue pakda gaya.

Veer ne Shweta ko dekha, usse thoda ajeeb lag raha tha. Galti akhir uski thi. Par aur bhi ajeeb tab laga jab Shweta agle hi pal muskuraane lagi.

'Huh!?'

Woh ajeeb sii muskaan diye, apne than ke upar haath rakh usse pyaar se sehlaayi aur waha se nikal gayi.

'!!!??'

Veer ki kuch bhi palle na pada ki ye abhi abhi kya hua tha.

Shweta andar kitchen me aake abhi bhi apne stan par haath ferr rahi thi dheere dheere. Jese maano unhe kisi cheez ke liye taiyaar kar rahi ho. Uske chehre par ek santushti bhari muskurahat thi.

Agar Veer thodi derr aur yaha ruka toh beshaq tension aur confusion se uska sarr khap jaane wala tha.

Woh naashta karte hi ghar se nikal gaya. Aur raaste me hi uski baatein Pari se hoti rahi,

'Pari! Full status!'

[Right away Master!]

*Ding*


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Veer ne ek nazar apne stats par daali. Aur haami bhari. Itne points hone ke baad bhi usse abhi bhi ye kam maalum pad rahe the.

Usse ab apne stats badhaane ki bhi zaroorat thi aur saath hi ab ek advanced level martial arts skill ki bhi.

Lekin, uske liye bhaari maatra me points ki aavashyakta thi. Filhaal, Veer ne laalach na dikhaate hue apne stats ko jyo ka tyo hi rehne diya. Thode aur points jab ikhatta honge tab woh inhe badha lega. Ye soch woh chal diya Balhaar ke hideout ki orr,

Pehle hi Veer ko uska message aa chuka tha aur Balhaar milna chaah raha tha.

Andar aate hi Balhaar ke right hand aadmi athwa gang ke logo ne ek jhalak me hi Veer ko pehchaan liya aur usse andar aane ke liye raasta diya. Sabhi jaante the ye javaan ladke ki ahamiyat kya thi.

Ek acchi sii luxury seat par Veer ko baithaya gaya. Aur waha khade log usse chai coffee ke liye puchne lage.

Balhaar bhi fauran hi haazir ho gaya aur uske saamne baith usne apne logo ko baahar jaane ke liye ishaara kar diya.

Veer : I guess kuch hua hai meri gerr-maujoodagi me. Am I right!?

Balhaar : Jii boss! Aapka andaaza sahi tha. Jesa aap keh ke gaye the. Mere aadmi unn jagaho par poori nigraani rakhe hue the.

Veer : Hmm! Toh? Kya hua fir...!?

Balhaar : Darasal baat ye hai ki...

Usne saari baat samjhaayi toh Veer ke maathe par shikan aa gayi.

Veer : Thik hai! Mein dekhta hu! Tum khabar bas dete rehna. Aur kuch filhaal karne ki zaroorat nahi. Agar mujhe zaroorat hogi toh mein khud bataunga.

Balhaar : J-Jii!

Veer utha aur jaane ke liye hua. Peeche Balhaar usse ajeeb nazro se ghoor raha tha.
Uske mann me alag alag vichaar aa rahe the.

'Isse boss maan'ne ki kya zaroorat hai mujhe? Slogan marr chuka hai. Mumbai ka don mein hu. Fir bhi ek bacche ke neeche kaam kyu kar raha hu mein? Hai toh ye ek 21-22 saal ka ladka hi. Kya bigaad lega mera? Itni saari gangs hai mere paas. Saale ko ek baar me bhoon denge. Karodo ka karobaar hai mera. Mere neeche bade se bade aadmi bhi kaam karte hai. Roz mera auhda badhta jaa raha hai. Sirf haath hi toh moda tha isne. Fir iss ladke ke peeche kyu-'

Veer : Ohh by the way~

Balhaar (jhepte hue) : H-Huhh?

Veer ahista se uske kaan ke paas aaya aur dheemi par behad buland awaaz me uske bol Balhaar ke kaano me goonj gaye, jisse sunte hi Balhaar ke perr kamzor padd gaye.

"Betrayal ke baare me sochna bhi mat! Agli baar haath marodunga nahi. Seedha ukhaad ke shareer se alag kar dunga."

Aur itna bol, woh waha se nikal gaya.

Balhaar ka chehra dekhne laayak tha. Uski saari hekdi utar chuki thi. Jo thode boht bhi uske mann me Veer ko daga dene ke vichaar aaye the, unki jagah ab Veer ko baap maan'ne ke vichaar paida ho chuke the.

Usse samajh aa chuka tha ki bhale hi ye ladka 21-22 saal ka hi tha. Par isme kuch aisi baat thi jo usse galti karne se baar baar rok deti thi. Uske andar ek khatre ki ghanti baja deti thi. Ki agar woh iss ladke ke khilaaf gaya, toh uska sab kuch khatam ho jayega.

*Gulp*

Chehre par se paseena poch, Balhaar baahar nikal apne kaamo me lag gaya.

***

Mumbai ke hi ek shetr me ek medium sized ghar me teen log aapas me behas karne me lage hue the.

Ye aur koi nahi, Bhavna Tejal aur Purvi hi thi.

"Itni badi baat chhipaayi aapne mujhse? Kyuuuuu? Kyu kiya aapne aisa???"

Awaaz thi Tejal ki jo Bhavna par bhadak rahi thi.

Uski aankho me nami bhi thi. Uski maa aisa kese kar sakti thi bhala?

Bhavna : M-Mein-

Tej : Aap chaahti kya hai Mom?? Kya chaahti hai aap? Bata dijiye aaj mujhe!

Bhavna : Meri baat suno Tej-

Tej : Itne dino se mein paagalo ki tarah dar-dar bhatak ke jankaari batorne ki koshish kar rahi hu ki kahi se mere bhai ke baare me mujhe kuch pata chal jaaye aur aap itni badi info haath me rakhe hue mujhe bas dekh rahi thi? Ek bhi baar aapke mann me ye nahi aaya ki mein apni beti ko kam se kam bata toh du ye. Aap jaanti bhi hai mera haal? Kis haalat se guzar rahi hu mein apne bhai ko dhundne ke liye?

Bhavna : Sab samajhti hu Tej! Mein sab samajhti hu meri bacchi! Aur woh tumhara bhai hai par mere liye toh mera beta hai. Tum samajhti kyu nahi ki-

Tej : Bas!!! Boht ho gaya. Dijiye mujhe!! Aapse nahi ho payega! Mein khud hi karungi.

Bhavna : N-Nahi! Mujhe karne do mein-

Tej : Itne dino se toh aapse hua nahi mom. Ab kya karogi aap?

Purvi jo ab tak shaant thi, akhir kaar usse maa beti ke jhagde ke beech me aana hi pada.

Purvi : Tum dono! Ye kya laga rakha hai? Aur Bhavna tum!!! Tum aisa kese kar sakti ho? Apni hi beti se baate chhipaogi toh aise kese chalega haan? Yahi toh parivaar hai tumhara! Itni badi baat chhipaane ki kya zaroorat thi? Hum dono hi dekh rahe hai ki kese bechaari Tej roz roz baahar nikal Vikram ke liye jankari dhundhne jaati hai. Par bechari lautati khaali haath hi hai. Aur tum aise me...!

Bhavna : Aisa nahi hai Purvi! Agar mene ye kiya hai toh kuch soch ke hi kiya hoga na? Tum hi batao, kya mein kuch bhi kisi ko kasht dene ke liye jaan boojh ke karungi?

Purvi (sighs) : Bhavna! Tumhe ab samajhna hoga ki tumhari beti ab bacchi nahi rahi. Ab apne baccho se baatein chhipana matlab unn par bharosa na karna jesa hai.

Tej : Exactly!!!! Maasi! Meri baato se toh inhe farq tak nahi padta hai. Aap hi samjhaiye please!

Purvi uth ke Bhavna ke bagal se aake baithi jo sofe par viraajmaan thi aur uske kandhe par haath rakh usne Bhavna ko hausla diya.

Purvi : Ab zyada mat socho aur karo. Warna derri na ho jaaye Bhavna.

Bhavna : P-Par... Agar kuch hua toh!? Purvi mere haatho me ab woh bal nahi raha. Tum jaanti hi ho... Woh satta, woh shaasan... Tum sab jaanti ho kya hua tha. Agar kuch ho gaya toh? Mein kabhi apne aap ko maaf nahi kar paungi Purvi! Mein uspe aanch bhi nahi aane de sakti.

Iss baar apni maa ki baat Tej badi hi dhyaan se sunn rahi thi. Ye kya baatein ho rahi thi?

Tej : Kesa bal? Kesi satta? Aap kya keh rahi hai?

Bhavna : Huh!!? K-Kuch nahi!

Tej : Aap firse kuch chhipa rahi hai na? Dekha! Maasi!? Dekha na aapne? Ye firse mujhse kuch chhipa rahi hai.

Purvi : Ab tum karti ho ya nahi Bhavna?

Bhavna : Hmm! M-Mein... Karti hu!

Kehte hue usne apni mutthi khol ek parchi nikaali aur usse khola.

Saari behas issi ke liye hi toh ho rahi thi. Uss parchi me ek hi cheez thi...

Aur woh tha...

Veer ka phone number!

Wahi number jo Veer ne khud Bhavna ko diya tha jab woh Egypt se laut raha tha.

Aur ab tak, Bhavna usse sambhaal ke rakhi hui thi. Roz roz Tej baahar nikal ke kisi na kisi tareeqe se Veer ke baare me info nikaalne ki koshish karti thi. Par bechaari harr baar nakaam ho jaati thi.

Aur kyu na hoti? Mumbai itna bada sheher tha. Veer ko waha dhundna khet me sui dhundne jesa tha. Upar se bechaari ko naam bhi galat pata tha. Vikram toh naam hi nahi tha Veer ka. Saath hi jo photo Tej ke paas thi, woh ek side view photo thi. Toh Veer ko pehchaan'na aur bhi mushqil tha usme.

Lekin Tej ne ek bhi din zaaya nahi jaane diya. Harr roz woh nikalti, apne bhai ko dhundne ke liye. Colleges me jaati, jitni info milti utni paa ke waapas aa jaati.

Aur Bhavna ye ab tak chhipaaye hue thi ki uske paas Veer ka number maujood tha. Uska jee ghabra raha tha ki agar Veer se mulaqaat hui toh kya hoga? Ek darr tha, jo sirf wahi jaanti thi. Aur Purvi. Tejal toh kayi saari baato se anibhigya thi.

Aur itni mehnat karne ke baad usse pata chala ki uski apni hi maa pehle se hi jankaari dabaaye baithi hui thi.

Zaahir hai ki woh boht zyada gussa thi. Aur ab behas ho rahi thi Veer ko call lagane ki.

Purvi ke hausla dene ke baad akhir kaar Bhavna ne mann bana hi liya aur usne apna phone utha ke uss number par call lagaaya,

Tej : Loudspeaker par rakhiyega!

Bhavna : Hmm!

Waha maujood sabhi ke dil ki dhadkane tezz ho gayi.

Tej apne bicchde bhai ki awaaz sunn'ne waali thi. Toh wahi Bhavna apne bete kii. Aur Purvi pehli baar Veer ki awaaz se rubaru hone waali thi.

*Ring* *Ring*

*Ring* *Ring*

Ghanti gayi aur kuch rings ke baad hi,

"Hello?"

Ek awaaz aayi. Jisse sunn Bhavna ka dil zorr se dhadak utha. Awaaz wahi thi. Wahi same awaaz. Number ussi ka tha matlab.

Tej ka khud ka muh khula hua tha.

Bhavna ke honth thar-thara rahe the. Bechari ke muh se shabd hi nahi nikal paaye.

"Hello?"

Punaah awaaz aate hi Purvi ne Bhavna ke haatho se phone chhinaaya aur khud baat karna shuru kii,

Purvi : H-Hello!?

"Jii kahiye! Aap kaun?"

Bhavna aur Tejal dono ki hi himmat nahi ho rahi thi ab baat karne ki. Tejal toh hazaaro baatein kehna chaahti thi uss se. Par ab jab mauka aaya toh pata nahi kyu, uski himmat nahi hui. Baat ko shuru kese kare, uski ab kuch samajh me nahi aaya. Shayad ye sab kuch ekdum se zyaada hi ho gaya tha uske liye.

Purvi : Kya mein Vikram se baat kar rahi hu?

"Hmm!? Ohh! Yeah!! Jii haan! Aap Vikram se hi baat kar rahi hai. Kahiye!"

Purvi : B-Beta mein... Ahem! Mujhe aapse kuch zaroori kaam hai.

"Hmm? Par aap hai kaun?"

Purvi : Bas yu samajh lo ki mein aapki... Aapki koi apni hi hu.

"Aur mein kese maan lu?"

Purvi : Trust me beta! Mein aapko jaanti hu. K-Kya aap mujhse kal mil sakte ho?

"Well! Actually nahi! Kal mein kahi busy rahunga."

Purvi : T-Toh parso? Parso theek rahega?

"Fine! Parso! Kab aur kaha?"

Purvi : Parso xxxxxxx hotel me. Shaam ko theek rahega?

"Okay! That sounds fine."

Purvi (smiles) : G-Good!

"Aur mein aapko pehchanunga kese?"

Purvi : Don't worry! Mein tumhe call kar dungi. Par number different rahega. Ye nahi! Mein bata dungi mein kaha par baithi houngi. Okay?

"Alright!"

Purvi : Th-Thank you! Vikram! I'll see you day after tomorrow! Bye!

"Jii!"

*Call ends*

Call cut hote hi Purvi ne ek lambi saas lii. Uski khud ki dhadkane poore vartalaap ke dauraan tezz thi.

Bhavna : Thank God tumne usse kuch nahi bataya abhi.

Purvi : Mein jaanti hu sab. Of course mein usse abhi se kuch nahi bataungi!

Tej : Kyuuuu? Kyu nahi bataaya? Arre aapko kehna chahiye tha na ki uski sagi maa aur behan yaha par hai. Aap uski maasi ho. Kyu nahi kaha aapne? Hum abhi ke abhi mil sakte the. Kyu kiya aapne aisa?

Purvi : Kyuki tum woh baatein nahi jaanti jo hum jaante hai Tej.

Tej : Toh bataaiye na mujhe!!!!

Purvi (sighs) : Itna asaan nahi hai. Anyways! Woh agree ho gaya hai. Agar parso kuch nahi hua, iska matlab hum aage proceed kar sakte hai.

Bhavna : Hmm! Aur Purvi-

Purvi (smiles) : Pata hai mujhe! Uss se milne sirf mein jaungi.

Bhavna (smiles) : Hmm!!

Tej : Whaaaaaatttttt? Kya matlab? Kya matlab sirf aap jaogi? Aur hum?

Purvi : Tum dono yahi par rahogi!

Tej : PAR KYUUUUUU????

Purvi : Baad me tumhe sab pata lag jaega. Kuch din ka intezaar karo.

Tej : A-Aap log... Aap log boht bure ho.

Purvi (smiles) : Ahh! Toh ye baat thi. Tej! Tumhare nakaam hone ka raaz pata lag gaya.

Bolte hue Purvi ne mobile ki screen jese hi saamne kii, toh screen par ek naam likha hua tha.

Veer ka poora naam!

Truecaller par Veer ka original name hi registered tha. Purvi ne jese hi woh dikhaaya toh saara maajra samajh me aa gaya ki kyu Tejal Veer ko dhundh nahi paa rahi thi.

Tej : V-Veer!!!!

Bhavna : Veer! Kitna... pyara naam hai.

Woh apne khayalaato me ghum ho gayi.

'Zaroor Veer ki dadi jii ne hi ye naam rakha hoga. Aapki ab bhi yaad aati hai mujhe, Maa jii! Kaash aap ab bhi hamare beech hoti!'

Purvi : Decide ho gaya hai fir. Parso! Mein jaa ke uss se mil ke aaungi. Agar sab kuch sahi raha toh... Toh hum sab milenge uss se fir.

Purvi aur Bhavna apni baato me lag gayi.

Par idhar, Tej ke mann me kuch aur hi baatein ghoom rahi thi. Kuch aur hi tarqeebe...

Woh chup chaap bas waha se uthi aur apne laptop me lag gayi.

Kuch minutes ke baad hi uski Laptop ki screen par ek window khuli hui thi.

Ek social media ki window. Jisme Veer ki adhiktar details maujood thi.

'xxxxxxxx college huh!? I know what I have to do now! Sorry Maasi! Lekin mein aapke rules ke according nahi chalne wali.'
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Full status ko edit karne me boht samay lagta hai guys. Mujhe pichle poore 15-16 updates ko thoroughly dekhna pada taaki pata lag sake ki kaha kaha points me anyar aaya hai. Kon sii mew cheeze unlocked hui hai. Uske baad jaake mujhe edit karna padta hai. It takes a lot of time. Village arc pace pakadta jaa raha hai. Taiyaar rahiyega!
Dhanyavaad! ✨


Kya baat Hai Bhai
 

Werewolf

ʏᴏᴜ ᴀʀᴇ ᴀʟʀᴇᴀᴅʏ ᴜɴᴅᴇʀ ᴍʏ ɢᴇɴᴊᴜᴛꜱᴜ
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Awesome update 😍

Thanks for update dost, kab se wait kar raha tha

its my first comment here

आपकी स्टोरी बहुत अच्छी है, सब चीज perfect है, emotion, action, lust, romance
everything is perfect

Expectations बहुत high है villege arc से
i hope वैसी ही होगी भी

I am waiting की जल्दी से veer kaira और निधि से मिले

just loves both female character

दोस्त कोशिश करना की week में 2 update दे सको
ऐसे ही story continue रखना, future के लिए ऑल द बेस्ट

Jordar update.....

Nice update bro super mind blowing update


शानदार जबरदस्त लाजवाब update bhai jann superree duperrere update

जबरदस्त arc tha bhi shurwat achi huvi hey
Ate hi Suman ko thok diya ghar ka swad chakh liya ate hi

Rat ko anjane mey hi sahi shweta Ka bhi thoda bohot ras pan kar liya hey apne bhai ne

Aur ohhh kon hey sala dhamki de raha hey ye 1 villen hey to direct thok dalne ki dhamki bada Dan banrela hey idher ake dekhte hey kya hota hey ab age

Jhaksh update...aur is update mein veer ko marne ki planning bhi fix ho gayi....let's see what will be happen in next update....👍


Veer ne achcha surprise diya sabko, magar baaki sabke liye to wo surprise tha magar Shweta ke liye ye surprise utna achcha nahi raha aur uska dil toot gaya magar Veer bhi apni jagah sahi hai, jisse jeevan bhar gaali khayi ho usko ekdum se maaf bhi to nahi kiya jaa sakta aur upper se ab Alpha instincts.

Suman ne aate hi Veer ko recharge kar diya aur shayad raat ko bhi karti agar Shweta nahi aayi hoti. Ab situation ki interpretation thodi gadbad ho gayi, kyonki Veer jise Suman sanjh raha tha Shweta use Veer ki maa ki tadap samjh rahi thi magar dono ko hi apni apni tarah santushti mil gayi.

Ab ek bahut bada khatra aa gaya hai Veer ki zindagi mein jo uaske aur uske is chote se parivaar ke liya bahut bada khatra ban chuka hai. Kya wo shaks Veer ko maar kar uske system ko apne kabje mein Lena chahta hai taaki wo aur bhi jayada strong aur powerful ho jaye? Emotional update Werewolf.

Village arc is gonna be insane 🔥🔥💓💓

Awesome👍👏, beautiful😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨

Super update

Fantastic update

Wow bahut hi khubsurat tarike se is arc ke ek part ko aapne suru kiya hai. Maine ek part is liye kaha Quki abhi baki sub ko bhi veer ke aane ka aur usase milna baki hai. To wo jab hoga tab hme abhi aur bhi bahut kuchh dekhne ko milega.
Aur sath me mujhe ek baat pata chlegi ki aakhir itne din se tej aur bhwna kya kar rahi thi. Aur ek baat ye bhi ab mujhe confirm ho gayi hai. Us Enemy ko uske system ne veer ko marne ka ab task de diya hai. Phle diya tha ya nahi ye nahi pata lakin ab de diya hai itna mai definitely kah skta hu.
Aur jo bhi ho mujhe yaha lagta hai ki sweta bhi veer ke list me add hogi ab aisa Actually me hota hai ya nahi ye to aage hi pata chlega. Aur ragini ka bhi ab no. Jldi hi lagne wala hai. Lakin sath me mera ye bhi swal hai kya ab sidhe ragini ka hi no. Lagega ya usase phle koi aur aa jayega. Ab ye to aage hi pata chlega. Overall bahut hi acha Update tha bhai.
Nd ha best of luck for Mr. Foram Event.

Awesome update bro

Amezing update

Nice updates🎉👍


Superb mindblowing update sir g

Mast update h bhai...👌🏻

Dhashu update

Zabardast update

Awesome update bhai

Kya hi Lajvab update tha bhai bhavnao ka sailab or veer ke system ki chaal (move)
Veer ko sabse pahle Suman ne Ghar me ghuste dekha aur dekh kr uski dhadkane bekabu ho gyi pr veer ne use sant rahne bol kr rok diya Vahi Ragini ji ne jo dekha hai usne to na sarm ki or na lihaaj bs daud kr gyi or lipat gayi veer ke baho me, aise jaise vo Uski Bibi ho ya premika vo to veer ne yaad karaya ki or bhi log hai sath me Varna chhodne ko taiyar nhi thi...

Suman ji veer ke gale lagi to ragini insecure feel karne lagi, usne to yha tk samajh liya ki Suman ke boobs veer ke chubh rhe honge or unki tulna bhi karne lagi... Pr uska kya jo khud Itni der veer ki chhati me dhasi rhi...

Ye mel milap ke Bich jo system me kya bvaal active kiya hai vo to or bhi mazedar hai Alfa male instinct grow kr gyi hai pr sath hi sigma male instinct bhi na sirf unlock Ho gyi Balki active bhi ho gyi, inka use Aaj hi dekhne mila jb sweta ki Bnai mithi vali misthi ko chakh kr uska review diya...

Suman ko Din dahade pel diya yah Bolte huye ki jo bhi hoga dekha jayega...

Ye sweta ji to ek baar fir raat me veer ke kamre me ghus gyi or unka matra prem jag gya Jisme veer ke hoth stan pr lag Jane ke chalte ek baar fir galat disha me sochne lagi aur had to tb ho gyi jb unhone apna blowse khol kr stan veer ke muh me lga diya or veer ne Suman ke dhokhe chusna bhi suru kr diya nind me...

Crimson's festival tk ka time diya hai us unknown system dhari identity ne, or Usne khud ko dhundh kr Samay barbad na karne kaha hai, Dekhte hai veer uski pripration Kaise karta hai...

I am :confuse:.

(excuse me kisi ke pass koi dusri dixnary hai kya mere vali ke sabd kam pad rhe hai or vo purane ho gye hai, Yadi ho to jara mujhe dena to)

Superb Lajvaab amazing update bhai sandar Jabardast...


gud nice apdate

2 update ke bad kahani teez hogi matlab 1 ya 2 mahene bad

heheheh

Jabardast update :applause:

Superb awsm update brother to gud Luvd it

Mast bigning hai agle padav ke
Liye dekhte hai kaun kise marta hai

Shaandaar lajawab update

Aate ke sath kya damdaar seen ke sath suruat maza aa gaya bhai

Means Crimson Arc mein ye aadmi villain hoga!? :hmm2:

Awesome update

Uttam Lekhni ka Prayog Werewolf bhai...waiting for Next Update Eagerly...

Brilliant and Fantastic update bro

Sandaar update bhai
Ye unknown admi to bhot hi khatrnak malum pdta h dekte h ye kya krta h crimson festival ko

बहुत अच्छा शुरुआत है इस नए अर्क का। इंतज़ार मे थे हाउस ऑफ किल्लेर्स अर्क के समाप्ती के। जो कुछ भी भी होगा इसके साथ मेरे जैसे कुछ पाठक अपने आप कनैक्ट हो पाएगा। बहुत दिन बाद रागिनीजी मैदान मे आई है। शुरुवात है, आगे बहुत कुछ होने का संभावना हो सकता है। उसी का इंतज़ार मे रहेंगे। इस बार वीर बहुत दिन देश से बाहर रहा है मित्र। धन्यबाद।

Superb update bhai

Superb update


amazing update

Werewolf bro update ka length thoda Chhota tha par update padte samay pata nai chala ki update khatam bhi ho gya let's see ki agle update me kya Tezas apne bhai se mil payegi ? But update padke maza bhi aaya:hinthint:

Hmmm to village arc bhi shuru hogya or jis update ka itne dino se sabko intezaar tha wo bhi aagya hat's off wolfi bro

Veer ghar aagya or suman ki bahe chat patane lagi but veer ne tab to shant kardiya but wo bhi khud ko sambhal nahi payi wese bhi veer hai hi aisa ki or uper se suman keliye veer kya mayne rakhta hai ye to Hum sabhi jante hai

Ragini to ragini hai veer jise chingari ko bhadka kar vegas gaya tha uske chalte ragini bhi khud ko rok nahi payi or wese bhi mere hisab se veer keliye ragini ek dum perfect or best option hai or ragini ko kisi ko puchne ki jarurat nahi hai veer ko pyaar karne keliye par wo shayad thodi jealous fill kargayi suman ke gale lagne se

Aabha bhi bahut kuch kehna chahti thi but bechari kuch jyada keh nahi payi but in sab main ek wohi thi jisne apni bhavnao par pura control rakhha

Shweta bechari sabse jyada tadap hai uske ander wo bhi bechari kya kare ab uske liye or muskil hochuka hai veer ko manana kyu ki veer ka alpha or sigma dono strong hochuka hai

Or raat ko sote wqat shweta to jara bhi haar manne ke mood main nahi hai or mujhe ye accha laga ki is baar shweta veer ko pyaar dene se piche nahi hati
Bechari ne aaj apne man or dill ke sath sath apna tan bhi soup diya aakhir veer ko bhi vegas ki treep ke baad ek maa ki sabse jyada jarurat thi

But bro ek baat bolu jesa ki aapne Story main kaha ki alpha sabko batate hai ki wo kitne strong hai to kya veer nightwalker picher ke bare main batayega kya sabko mere hisab se batana cahiye unhe bhi to pata chale ki veer kitna strong hai
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Or ye arc mere khayal se pure saal ke sbar ka fal hoga Hum readers keliye akhir in sabkeliye hi to itna utsahi hai sabhi readers ki kab bhavna or veer ke raaz khile kab hume incest dekhne ko mile

Well baki kya hi kahu aapke har update keliye sabd kam pad hi jate hai

Good work wolfi bro

Outstanding update

Nice behtarin mast awesome update bro

Excited Lets Go GIF by The Animal Crackers Movie

Veer To Suman

Nice update

romanchak aur lovely update .veer ko dekhkar suman aisa behave karti hai jaise wo uska pati ho aur ragini ka bhi yahi haal tha .
ragini ne bina kuch soche sidha gale laga liya veer ko ko aabha ke liye naya tha .
suman ne bhi waisa hi kiya jisse ragini ko jalan hone lagi usse kyunki suman ka paas badewale doodh hai 😁.
lagta hai ye alpha male waat lagane par tula hai veer ki 🤣 .sabke saamne chipak raha tha ragini se .ragini ko paane ki chahat jaag rahi hai veer me isliye alpha male strong hota jaa raha hai .par sigma ki wajah se thoda balance bana hua hai .
shweta ne kitne pyar se banaya tha par veer ne uske dil ko hi tod diya jiski wajah alpha hai .

suman ki chut me kuch jyada hi aag lagi thi jo sidha chali gayi veer se chudne aur apne malik ko maja diya .

shweta ka emotional hona achcha hai par wo ye bhul jaati hai ki veer ab bachcha nahi raha .

to ek dhamki bhara message mila hai veer ko jisme crimson festival maarne ki baat kahi hai jisse veer pareshan bhi hai .
ab ye crimson festival kya hai aur kaha honewala hai dekhte hai aage .

Badiya update he bhai..

Bahot dino bad aakhir kar Veer ki ghar vapsi ho hi gayi...

Aur aake uska Alpha Aur sigma instict on hoke aur bhi grow ho gyaa...

Suman ki bhi servicing ho gayi...

Sweta fir se galat samaaj ke Veer ko apna dudh pila gayi..

Aur last me us unknown person ke message ne rongte khade kar diye jo sidhe sidhe Veer ko mot ki dhamki de gaya aur kya uske paas bhi system he jo Veer se jyada level up he ???

Aur ye Crimson Festival kya he ???

Bechara veer.jab use pata chalega ki wo shweta ke thano ko choos raha hai to kaise react karega.mast update hai Bhai.

Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Werewolf bhai...
Nice and lovely update....

Nice update bro

Jabardast update bhai ab ye naya villen kon hai or age kya karta hai dekhte hai.

Nice update bro

Jabardastttt Updatee

Awesome superb update

Super wonderful awesome mind-blowing update

Nice update

Ye unkown sajjan ko kya takleef hai veer se bhai ???? Werewolf jara batana

Superb update

Lajawab bemisaal update

Awesome as always. Conflict of Alfa and Sigma is interesting. Seems you will develop further on it.

Superb update


Awesome👍👏, beautiful😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

Bhai gajab update tha dil ko 6u liya , aise hi update ka intezaar tha, ek pyaar bhara nagma jisko baar baar padhne ka dil kare , or rahi baat us unknown ki toh woh suspense jab khulega tab or hi maja hoga,
Mein toh still wait kar raha hoon uski maa or bahen ke saath ke emotional update ki , i hope woh update rongtey khade kar dene vaale honge, jiska koi shabd kehne ke liye na ho...!👌
Keep Writing.....!😊

nice update bro


Werewolf तो crimson festival पर कुछ बहुत बहुत ही बड़ा होने वाला है... वीर की वापसी का बेह्तरीन चित्रण किया है...

अब तो बहुत से उत्पन्न हुए विभिन्न घटनाक्रम के उत्तर के इंतजार में...

देखते हैं माँ बहिन बेटे वीर का मिलन कितना रोमांचकारी या भावनात्मक रूप से होता है..

वीर के रिस्तेदार अब क्या नई योजना बना कर उसे अपने जाल में फंसा कर तकलीफें देते हैं

निधी, काव्या और कई किरदारों को कैसे वीर अपने किए गए वादों को पूरा करने के लिए तत्पर रहता है

ये एक और सिस्टम जैसे ओर भी है या ये भी एक नया रोमांच रहस्यमयी संसार है...
Village आर्क की प्रतिक्षा में.. 😍

Haye 🙈🙈 Ragini darling to pagal hogai hai veer babu ke liye and very nice update bro

Nice update...

Nice update bro

Excellent update bro

Superb update

Seems like it is going to take a lot of time to meet Ragini and veer 😔😔

Welcome back bhai 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 update diya hai aapne...... Village arc and villain suspence!!! Ek baat pooch raha hu ki veer pari se kyu nahi poochta... Dusre system ke bare mai??? Just for quary

Eagerly waiting for the convo bhai :iambest:.........

Nice update bro

Jabardast nice update bhai 👏👏🤠

Bhai beech beech me veer ke stats ki progress bhi dikhate jao just for our information

Excellent update bhai☺😊

Ding first of all nice update comeback is good Sweta ko taunt de ke acha kiya but most important question pari ??????kya woh janti hai about another system veer is friendly to pari after incident hahaha aapne iske bare mein bhi kuch socha hoga but as quorosity asking great jaldi break khatam kiya aapne next update ka intazar rahenga keep posting

Fantastic zabaradast update waiting for next update

Fantastic mind-blowing update

Wow kya scene tha ragini ka hug fir Suman ka hug maja aagya ab to veer me ragini ke prati love feelings aa gya hai dekhte kab hoga ragini ki .....

Suman ka chudayi v bahut acha laga....😁

Shweta bichari bahut depress ho jaeygi veer ki bartab se ab alpha male activ ho gya Shweta ko or v thoda kast krna padega ....

Or to veer ka tension badh gya hai wo padh ke dekhte hai kya hota hai...

Btw fabulous 👌 update....



Super awesome update bro 💗💗

Update to dhasu thaa nice

Behtareen update Werewolf bhai....

Yah unknown ne to tabahi macha di kuch alag hi level ka hain aatish wagera to kahi tikte hi nahi ab dekhna hoga is pure samay me veer kuch kar payega uske liye ha nahi. I mean khoob sex kar ke apna level increase karey aur kuch tasks bhi complete karey agar aisa hota hain to shayad kuch baat baney. In sab me ek cheez acchi hai ki unknown bohat bohat zada overconfident hain aur yahi uske patan ka karan ban sakta hain aur veer ke sath uske apno ki shakti hain. I mean bohat sarey log usay pyaar karte hain aur wohi pyaar usko ek alag shakti dega aur bachpan ki nafrat ne usay bohat rigid bana diya thaa woh sab se pitai kha ker bhi khada rehta thaa iska matlab woh is tufaan se muqabla mushkil hoga per naa mumkin nahi hoga.

Another awesome update but you sure took your time. Anyways....

Jaise jaise system ka level badhte jaa rha Veer ka challenge bhi badhte jaa rha.
I have played many games and visual novels of system genre and have read some stories and manga of this genre. I can say with 100% surety that the way you have structured the story and blended the story with system is really really commendable.
Now back to the story...
Ragini ka emotion ka ghada ab itna bhar chooka hai ke bahar chalakne laga hai haha... Ab dekhna hai dono ka milan kab aur kaise hota hai kyunki Suman aur abha toh apna pyas bhuja hi lenge par ragini toh bin pani ke machhli jaise hai dekhna hai Veer kab ragini ko pani pila ke uski pyas bhujata hai.
Ab aate hai alpha aur sigma traits par.. jaisa alpha traits Veer pe haavi hone lage hai mujhe lagta hai veer ko jaldi apna sigma trait badhana chaiye. Aur dono traits pe veer ko jaldi control krna sikhna padega cause kuch character hai jinko Veer ka alpha trait bahut pasand aayega but kuch aise bhi character hai jo kam se kam filhal alpha trait se turn off ya hurt ho jayenge jo veer ke liye thik nai hoga.
Ab rahi Shweta ki toh I am not someone who forget and forgive people easily so mai chahunga ke shweta thoda abhi aur punishmnet sahe. Lekin aisa bhi naa ho ke Veer Shweta ke liye indifferent feel krne lage thoda love hate wala tention hona chaiye phir gussa, nafrat se lagav fir thoda pyar mohobbat ki aur rishta badhe....
Khair filhal toh Veer ko Shweta ka dudh suchste sone dete hai aur agle update ka intezar krte hai..
Kyuki ye jo naya villain hai ye bahut khatarna malum padta hai Veer ko apna level badhana padega isse ladne ke liye.

Ab dekhte hai agle update me kya hota hai...

Mst update bro bht sahi ab maza aaega one more system two sides it will be interesting to see

Superb update👏👏👏👏👏👏 ❤❤❤❤👌👌🌷👌👌👌🌷🌷🌷

Hujure ala bahut der kar di par...,.
Der se aaye durust aaye
Awesome

Veer n sabko surprise ker dia lekin Ragini n use usse ziada surprise ker dia aise chipak gayi jaise banwer chipak jaati h pedo se
Suman n apna hak ada ker dia apne malik aate hi khush ker dia
Suweta veer ko itni yaad ker rahi thi or uske liye itni khusi se meetha banaya tha lekin sirf ek shabd ki isme mithaas kam h sari khushi kafoor ho gayi
Yeh Alfa Male instinct k chakker m Veer tow bahot saare longo ko kuch bhi bol sakta h ise jald se jald control m lena hoga
Baherhal dekhte h yeh dhmki kitni karger sabit hoti h kon kisko marta h
Bahot behtareen shaandaar
Lajawab update bhai

Werewolf bhai aapne is story me bich me ek update me kuch pics daali thi same women ki jo ki perfect thi ragini ke liye aur jo abhi dali hai utni match nhi krti, Haan agr sirf ragini hota toh thik hai par hai toh ragini "bhabhi" na 😅😅

BTW yeh pic thi jo aapne phle post ki thi


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Correction : dono same girl hi h bs outfit different hone k karan different dikh rhi h is I just realized and double checked so werewolf bhai saree wali pic jyada better suit krti hai ragini ke liye it looks more mature and more womanish that's all.

Super update hai Bhai

अद्भुत अंश बंधु । आज फिर से रागिनी को देखकर अंतर्मन मे जो अपार खुशी हुई है इसका मै किस शब्द मे ज़िक्र करू मुझे समझ ही नही आरहा है । वीर को यूँ अचानक अपने आँखो के सामने , इतने दिनों बाद देखकर उसके मन मे जो आया वो बिना किसी के परवाह के वही करी । वीर को जाकर अपने बाहों मे भर ली । इस सुकून को ही तो वो मिस कर रही थी जब से वीर वेगास गया था ।
खलबली तो सुमन के जिस्म मे भी मची थी, और आभा भी तो उसकी दासी थी, आभा और सुमन दोनो को कहीं न कहीं वीर के डंडे की याद सता रही थी इतने दिन ।
स्वेता, अजीब बिडंबना है इस औरत का भी... लेकिन कर भी क्या सकते है... कहा गया है न की जैसी करनी वैसी भरनी, उसने जब वीर को माँ की ममता की सबसे ज्यादा ज़रूरत थी, तब उसे पूछा तक नही, और अब उसे अपना मातृत्व याद आरहा है, अपराध की सज़ा तो होती ही है, और उसी को स्वेता भुगत रही है ।
रही बात वीर की, तो आज मुझे वीर मे एक अल्फा नज़र आया, उसके ऐटीटुय्ड मे जो भी बदलाव देखने को मिला वो मुझे पसंद आया, अब वीर को भड़वा कहना भी बेबकूफी होगी । अब वो असल मे अल्फा हियुमम के श्रेणी मे आता है । यही ऐटीटुय्ड उसे रागिनी और बाकी संगीनियो के कारीव ले जायेगा, और अब शायद हमे वो पहले बाला भड़वा वीर नही बल्की... एक मजचोदू शूरवीर देखने को मिलेगा । जिसके सामने ये प्रंजल और उसके जैसे छोटे मोटे चुतिये तो ऐसे ही झटक जायेंगे ।
बाकी अंश शानदार रहा । इसमे हमे उस बंदे का भी ज़िक्र मिला जिसने वीर को वेगास मे अचंभित किया था । और साथ ही साथ ये भी पता चला की उस बंदे ने वीर को मारने की धमकी भी दी है । अब आगे का इंतज़ार रहेगा की आखिर कोन है वो, ?

Superb fantastic amazing update bhai...

Veer ne kya entry mari h sab ko surprise kar diya appne kya path change kiya h house of killer arc se village arc pe jaha Ragini appne emotion apni feelings nahi control kar paye or sidha veer se chipak gaye or jese h veer ne bola ki aabha piche hame dekh rahi h to Ragini ne veer ko alag hue per jese h Ragini alag hue Suman khaha piche rehne wali thi wo bhi kaske chipak gaye or iske wajah se Ragini ko thodi jalan hue or yahi jalan batata h ki Ragini abb veer ko leke kitna possessive h or kisi or khubsurat aurat/ladki k sath nahi dekh sakti wo yahi Ragini ka pyaar batata h veer k prati ye sab Mel milap hone k bad jab Shweta k bari aye or tab alpha male instincts k wajah se ussne jo bola Shweta ko us words ne bohot hurt kiya par jab raat me usee veer se khaha k tum jo chahe bol lo lekin me tumhe appne pyaar deti rahungi or tumhe appni maa bolva k rahungi...

Appne ne to village arc k starting m hi intimation laa diya matlab ye arc bohot kadak hone wala h ab to agge ye dekhna h ki Suman k bad is arc m kiski bari ati h or last m us system wala admi ne veer ko ek chetawani de di h or bata diya h ki unka next takar khaha hogi Crimson's Festival me abbto agge dekhne padega ye arc me or kya hoga...

बहुत ही शानदार लाजवाब अपडेट भाई
अचानक वीर को देख कर सब खुश हो गए
सबका भरतमिलाप बहुत ही शानदार था भाई
लेकिन स्वेता का हाल बुरा हों गया उसे अपनी कोशिश बेकार जाती दिख रही हैं लेकिन वों भी हार मानने वालीं नहीं हैं भाई
वहीं वीर टेंशन में क्रीशमश पर उसे मारने वो अनजान शख्स आ रहा हैं
भावनाओं से ओतप्रोत बहुत ही लाजवाब अपडेट भाई


Hn werewolf bhai ye pyaar vyaar ki shakti mein mat padna 😂......#Be Sigma 🤙🤙

waise bhai aapka autograph lene konsi jagah aana hoga krapiya karke humko bataye ....:hinthint::hinthint:

प्रणाम भाई सहाब 🙏
अनुच्छेद काफी नपा तुला था,
घर वापसी पर जो फॅमिली ड्रामा देखने को मिला काफी तनाव पूर्ण था बाद मे सुमन द्वारा वीर के तनाव को कम करना बेहतरीन था
इस अनुच्छेद मे अगर कुछ ज्यादा पसंद आया मुझे तो वो थे सुमन के दो बड़े बड़े विचार 😁 बड़े विचार काफी अच्छे लगते हैं

Nice update bhaii bhit Awla Maza Aya gya par Kar ab new update Ka intazar ha

Bahut badhiya update hai bhai.......
Waiting for next update

Fantastic update bhaya

Ragini ke andar pyaar kut kut ke bhara tha..Ragini aisa hi kregi uski uumid pehle se hi thi.. Jo chingaari veer ragini ko lga kr gya tha Veer ko wapas saamne dekh kr Aag toh bhadkna hi tha.. Aag me ghee daalne ka kaam mystic touch ne last time kiya tha.. Jiska result ye niklaa tha ki khule Aasman ke niche doodh sucking or lips sucking bhot ache se krwaai thi... Jis speed se ragini veer se takraai usse imagine kr skta hu veer ke seene me doodh ki thailiyan kis kadar takraai hogi..Suman ki kutil muskaan fir veer se gale lgna ragini ko insecure feel krwaa gai.. Agr ragini ke paas doodh ki dairy hai to suman ke paas doodh ki factory hai.. Bechari suman bhi kya kre jisko adat Ho daily palangtod ki toh usne itne din akele kaise gujazra kiya sochne wali baat hai.... Wese bhi suman ka favourability 150 ke upr tha last time ab toh or badh gya hoga... Toh isi baat se andaza lgaya ja skta hai ki woh bhi veer se kitna pyar krti hai... Bade bhaiya ne jo suman ki pic daali hai main toh usi ko soch ke padhta hu uss pic se compare krun to suman ragini se kamtar nhi hai.. Toh ragini ka suman se jalan hona lazmi hai...Ragini ko Aabha bachi lgti hai usko Kya pta ye bachi veer ka bistar grm krti aai hai...
Alfa male instincts ka asar veer pr kitna hua hai uska toh nhi pta lekin mere pe to tagda wala asar kr gya hai.. Shweta ko dekh kr gussa to mera saatwe aasman pr hota hai.. Uske chakkar me last time maine bechari ragini ko bhi maine lapete me le liya tha...
Veer bhi ragini ko paane ke liye ab bekraar hue ja rha hai .. Hoga kyo nahi Vegas jaane se pehle doodh ki dairy pee kr gyaa tha sath me vanilla flavored lips khaa kr gya tha... Aag dono trf barabar lagi hai.. Ummid hai jldi hi rati milan hoga... Shweta ko ab mamta dulaar yaad arha hai jab sbse jyada zrurt thi tb katu shabd hi nkalte the..gaaliyan nikalti thi uss mamtamayi muh se ab jb veer ne usko bachaya toh mamta chhalak rhi hai..Acha taunt mara veer ne khairr isse bhi behtar taunt Ho skta tha shayad sigma male ne Kuch hadd tk control kr liya hoga.. Har baar glt direction me shweta ki soch chali jati hai woh ye kyo bhul jati hai ki veer ab bacha nhi rha.. Ab woh bacha paida krne layak Ho gya hai...wese bhi usme doodh toh hai nhi jo doodh ke lalach me Teri chuchi dekhega...

Veer ko sigma pr focus krna hoga jisse alfa ko counter kr sake balance kr sake.. Wrna lene ke dene pad jayenge..

Uss unknown shakhs ne veer ko dhamki di hai.. Crimson's festival tak jee le apni zindagi.. Jisne vegas me attack kiya tha.. Iska mtlb uss shakhs ko system ne tb sirf itna task diya hoga Ke woh veer ko haar ka muh dikha sake.. Veer ko manobal tod sake?... Ab shayad veer ko Maarne ka task diya hoga?... Kya system earth pr exist krti hai ya sach me koi Alian planet se aya hai?...Veer ke pith piche yahan India me Kya kya hua ye bhi dekhna important hoga.. Bhawna maa tejal ne itne din kya kiye ye bhi dekhna hoga.... Pranjal rajat niharika ne itne din Kya kiya woh bhi dekhna mahatvapurna hoga... Veer ne kaha tha India wapas akr niharika ka hisab krega dekhte hai kya krta hai... Sonali ke ke liye veer ne kya plan kiya woh bhi dekhna hai... Nidhi ji arohi sbko kaise time deta hai dekhte hai... Nidhi ji ka or arohi ka reaction dekhna hai qki veer ka appearance 120cross kr gya hai shayad... Suhana ka india wapsi ka besbri se intzaar rhega ...

Bade bhaiya Kya village arc Mumbai me hi hoga? ya gaon me bole toh manorath ke purkho wale gaon me?
Suman ki kutil muskan ke piche kahin ye reason toh nahi ke woh ragini ko bhi saamil krna chahti hai jese Abha ko kr liya hai?.. Jisse suman befikr veer ke paas jaa ske?.. Bade Bhai apne toh review ka jawaab diya nahi diye hote to revo dene shayad kuch help mil jata...


Awesome mazedar marvelous jabardast update bro

Ok sirji waiting for tomorrow

Mujhe laga hi tha... 😟

Wah wah

Wah wah

Ek aur

Kam se kam ek aur

Next update kab tak aayega

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Waiting for next update bhai

Waiting for next update

Wow amazing

Update bohot hi smoothly raha aur khaskar ek baat jis tarah se ju ne ye alpha instinct aur ye Sigma instinct yo feature yaha utha kr de patka bc confuse hogaya tha mai lekin fir smjh me aayi sab baat khair dono hi instinct strong hai lekin alpha male ka asar thoda jyada hi hai lekin Sigma stinct apne hisab se yaa limit me usko balance rakh raha tha nhi to jab veer ne jis trah Shewata ke saath behave ki wo aur bhi bura behaviour ho sakta tha agar veer ke sigma instinct ne control me nhi rakhta to.

Ab aate hai ragni par to jo itti utawli thi veer se milne ke liye ki utna maine bhi na socha tha lekin ragni ka wo jealous hone wala scene bohot hi lajavaab tha bechari 😂suman ke do bare bare aam bechari ka to halak ke jagah Muniya hi sukh gayi thi akhir suman ke aaamo sorry kharbujo ko dekh to kisi ka bhi man tatol jaaye :D

Aur jab Shewata ko veer ne rude behave kia jo uske instinct feature ke karan hua khair veer ko baad me pachtawa nhi khunga lekin dukh to hua thoda ki aisa behave nhi Krna chahiiye tha lekin pari ne usko smjha diya.

Khair ab aate hai Crimson festival par to meko smjh na aaya ye kon sa festival hai iss se related kuch suna hai jaise Crimson film festival , Crimson fare festival lekin ye sab kuch alag hai lekin ju ne jo ye socha hai Crimson festival ke baare wo bohot hi alag hoga akhir ju ne iss festival ko apne se create kiya hai Khair dekhte hai aage kya hota hai.
Aur ye Crimson matlab kahi halwoeen festival wagerah yaa kuch se related to nhi.

Update bohot hi lajavaab tha Werewolf.

Take care.......

Kya likhte ho bhai

Intezaar rahega Werewolf bhai....

Yeh Werewolf Writer saab yeh daru wali company kharid lo. Yeh story ke aad mein achha khasa business chalega. Update dene mein deri hoga tab bhi profit hi profit, dusra govt. aur desh ka fayida upar se tax ke bajah se.

paisa
Xabhi Werewolf Ashwathama


Great update Werewolf bhai. Ab agle arc me jarur kuch raaj khulne wale he.
Veer bina kisi ko bataye hi yaha aa gaya. Aur ghar ke logo ke liye jarur khushi ka samay tha ye.
Sab log har roj ke jese hi ghar ke kaam me vyast the aur sabse pehle veer ke darshan bhi suman ko hi hue. Ragini bhi khud ko na rok payi gale lagne se sabke samne. Uske baad suman ke gale lagte hi ragini ke mann me insecurity hui jo hona hi tha kyuki suman ko ese koi ignore nahi kar sakta aur khaas kar uske pahado ko😂. Aabha se to ragini ko koi darr nahi. Aur ye veer ke room suman saaf karti he to ragini jarur veer ke kapde aur khane ka dekhti hogi. Ye mahol achha tha par shweta ke aane se ek silence aa gaya. Ragini ke hatho bani saloni kha li par shweta ke uper gehra vaar kiya shabdo se. Aur ye sunn ke shweta jarur dukhi hui he. Par Veer bhi kya kare.
Uske andar ab alpha aur sigma dono ke hi traits he. Aur uper se alpha ka ye roop ab easily kisi ko veer se close hone nahi dega. Sigma ke traits bhi he sath me to dono balance out ho jayenge. Aur ye ek tarah se achha bhi he veer ke liye. Kuch samay pe veer ko dikhana hoga sabko ki wo baki logo se kyu alag he. Aur ladkiyo ke mamle me to abhi se ek se badh ke ek he to aage to list lambi hi hogi.
Ragini ko jab veer ki baat samjh aayi tab tak derr ho chuki thi. Par wo bhi Kya hi kare ? Aur shweta ko ye sab sehna bhi padega kyuki kaam hi esa kiya he usne. Aur abhi to wo ghar se veer ko nikalne ki baat ka hisab bhi baki he. Aur abhi aage bhumika ke liye bhi veer kuch na kuch jarur bolega esa lag raha he agar Alpha bhari raha to.
Uper shweta bhi rone ke siwa kuch aur kar nahi sakti abhi. Suman ne jarur apni sewa shuru kar di he. Aate hi veer ko relax kar diya. Sonali ka bhi admission karana he ab.
Raat me jarur shweta ne apna haal suna diya par abhi to veer kisi aur hi vicharo me he. Shweta ko jab bhavna ka pata chalega tab majha aayega. Tab dekhte he kya karti he wo ? Abhi to veer ko mana rahi he. Bhumika ke liye bhi ye aasan nahi hone wala.
Aarohi, kavya ko bhi surprise hi milega. Aur uske baad Nidhi, shreya ko. Aur juhi ko uska chocolate. Chocolate ke bina to ghar me entry na milegi veer ko😁. Nidhi ke sath bhi ab aage badhao veer ka relation.
Baki to ab kaera, Sonia bhi aayegi hi. Aur suhana se to khaas mulakaat hogi agli baar.
Waiting for next update.

श्वेता का अनुताप.....सच्चे दिल से किसी को अपने किए पर पछतावा हो तो उसे प्रभू भी माफ कर देते है। मुझे यह अल्फा और सिग्मा का कोई ज्ञान नही है..शायद एक डोमिनेटिक नेचर का होगा और एक बैलेंस नेचर का। पर जो हो सही गलत का परख होना चाहिए...दिल दरिया होना चाहिए। पश्चाताप की अग्नि मे झुलसना इंसान को एक नई पहचान दिलाता है। श्वेता की गलती कहें या सही , आर्थिक तंगी और पहली शादी ने उन्हे निर्मही बना दिया था। दूसरी शादी का तजुर्बा भी कोई अच्छा नही रहा। अगर अच्छा रहा होता तो वो अपने बेटी के लिए फाइनेंसियल असुरक्षा की भावना नही पालती और तिकड़मबाजी के फेर मे नही पड़ती।

अमेरिकन प्रवास के दौरान जिस शख्स ने हमे हैरत मे डाला था उसने इंडिया मे भी थ्रेट देकर यह बिगुल बजा दिया कि वो वीर के लाइफ मे ' जगमग जगमग ' जैसा कुछ भी नहीं होने देगा। एग्जाम्पल यू एस मे देख चुके है हम। इस शख्स की पैठ काफी गहरी है। ऐसा लगता है यह शख्स वीर की अच्छी खासी परिक्षा लेने वाला है।

और जहां तक रागिनी भाभी के दिल मे मचल रही हसीन जज्बातों की बात है....सही समय और सही मौके का इंतजार ही उनके सब्र का इम्तिहान होगा।

खुबसूरत अपडेट वेयरवोल्फ भाई ।
Outstanding & Amazing &brilliant.

Waiting for update

Ooooooeeeeey dhad ei ooooooeeeeey bhai tmny tu end main pora ka pora hi hila dala reyyyy it's totally different type of suspense nd thrilled.

Wolfy Bro...waiting for next update....

Waiting Bhai

Devi ji dono mahanubhav ek hi umr ke hai aur yaha apne jivan ka arjit anubhav Gyan dete rehte hai, baki Sanju sir tharki bhi h, bata du m aapko

Ding next update early morning


Isn't It Now One Update Per Week Hhhhhh.

:idk1:

Bhai update kab tak aayega

bhai de do update
Update 111 has been posted.
 

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Update - 111 ~ Connecting the dots
Ab tak...

Wahi aadmi jisne Veer ke raungte khade kar diye the.

Text simple tha. Par rooh hila dene waala tha.


"Ek antim message tumhare liye Veer. Don't try to track this number. Tumhe kuch haasil nahi hoga. Samay ki barbadi hogi. Enjoy your remaining days with your family. Do whatever you want...! I just want to tell you one thing snd that's...!

I will kill you at the Crimson's Festival"

Ab aage...

*Huff* *Huff* *Huff*

"Goddamn it Suhana!!!! Don't you die on me!!"

Veer ki saase tezz thi. Steering aur gears par uske haath fatafat chal rahe the, aur gaadi raftaar pakad sadak par bhaag rahi thi. Suhana peeche ke seat par khoon se lathpat behosh laiti hui thi.

'WHAT THE HELL IS THIS PARI???'

[M-Master! I-I... M-Mujhe sach me nahi pata abhi abhi kya hua. It's not possible. H-How can it be? Uske paas system kese ho sakta hai?]

'Yahi toh mein tumse puch raha hu Pari!!! Tumne kaha tha ki sansaar ka koi bhi vyakti ye pata nahi laga sakta ki tum mere andar ho. Then what the FUCK was that-!?'

Woh zorr se chillaaya. Clearly, woh Pari par gussa tha. Pari ne uss se jhooth bola? Kyu?

[M-Master-! I-I... ]

'Tell me!!!!!'

[Woh meri dusri personality hogi Master. Trust me Master I-]

'SHUT THE FUCK UP PARI!!! SHUT UP!!!'

[Ahh!! M-Master!!! I really-]

'Just shut up! Ek anjaan aadmi aata hai aur kathputli ki tarah hume nachaate hue hamare hi member ko yu ghaayal karke araam se nikal jaata hai.'

[Th-That's--]

'Aur tumhe kuch pata bhi nahi hai. Aur jo pata hai woh galat hai. What a fucking great end it is to our tour.'

Uske zorr se chillaane par ek khamoshi chhaa gayi. Aur kuch derr baad Pari ki boht hi dheemi sii ruwaasi awaaz uske mann me goonji.

[I'm sorry Master! I'm so sorry! I was a failure! Mujhe aapko aur pehle inform kar dena chahiye tha. I wasn't good enough. I'm sorry.]

Aur iss se pehle ki Veer kuch keh paata,

[I'm sorry Master~]

*Ding*

[System has entered into the sleep mode.]

Pari sleep mode me chali gayi.

'Pari I...!'

Veer kuch keh na paaya. Suhana ko furti me hospital pohuchaate hue usne saari details fill in kii. Divya bhi kuch derr me hi Nik aur baakiyo ke sang pohuchi. Uske chehre ka rang uda hua tha.

Veer ke paas bhaagte hue aake usne usse thaama,

Divya : K-Kya huaaa?? Veeeerr??? How is she???

Veer : Treatment chal raha hai!

Divya chinta me aake wahi haatho me sarr rakh baith gayi.

Toh wahi Veer apne ravaiyye ko lekar niraash tha. Pari ke saath usse aisa behave nahi karna chahiye tha. Usne toh hamesha se hi uska bhala chaaha hai.

Jese hi kuch ghanto ke baad doctor se ye pata chala ki Suhana critical situation se baahar hai. Veer ke phone par tabhi woh text aa gaya. Aur usse dekhte hi, uski chintaaye aur badh gayi.

Ab yaha rukna theek nahi tha. Suhana ko antim baar dur se dekh woh waha se nikalne laga. Subah ho hi chuki thi. Baaki samay woh airport par hi guzaar sakta tha.

Divya : Tum...! Tum jaa rahe ho? Abhi se? Suhana se nahi miloge? How can you-!?

Veer : Nahi! Mera kaam yaha khatam hai.

Divya : Suhana ko aise chorr ke jaa rahe ho Veer?

Veer : I...

Divya : Tum aisa kese kar sakte ho?

Veer : She will be fine! Galti meri hai mein unhe safe nahi rakh saka. I don't want her to see me first. Chalta hu! Good luck with your investigation!

Aur woh apna bag utha ke waha se nikal gaya.

"Veeeeeeeeerrrrr!!!"

Divya hospital ke gate tak aake usse kayi baar pukaari, par Veer na ruka.

Aur dekhte hi dekhte woh uski nazro se ojhal ho gaya.

'Will we meet again? Veer?'

***

Uske baad se hi, Veer aur Pari ke beech poori flight bhar koi bhi baat nahi hui.

Jab Veer India pohucha tab hi Pari reactivate hui aur Veer ne fauran hi apni maafi rakh dii.

"I'm so sorry Pari!! M-Mein..."

[No! I'm sorry master! Galti meri thi. Mujhe aur attentive rehna chahiye tha. Lekin mein-]

'Nahi Pari! Tumse jitna hua tumne apna best diya. Aur wese bhi tum mere andar ho. Baahar ki saari cheezo par control rakhna mere haatho me hai. And I still-'

[It's... It's okay master! Please don't be sad. Chorriye woh sab. Ab hume uss unknown par focus karna hai.]

'Yeah!!!'

Pari se dobaara sulaah hone ke baad, Veer aur uske beech ab rishta aur bhi mazboot ho chuka tha. Jo ki dono ke liye hi accha tha.

***

Par Alpha ke stronger hone ke baad, maamla thoda bigad raha tha.

"Damn it! Damn it! Damn it!!!!!!"

*BAAAMMMMMM*

Veer ne zorr se apna haath diwaar par de maara. Poori diwaar vibrate ho uthi.

"The fucking timing-"

Woh behad gusse me tha. Apne sarr ko haatho me leke woh wahi zameen par baith gaya.

'P-Pari!! Mein sirf ek khush-haal zindagi jeena chaahta tha. Aur dekho kaha aa gaya mein?'

[Master!]

'Suhana waha ghaayal hai. Miss Kaera apni unstable condition me hai, Miss Sonia ko kuch nahi pata hai, Bhabhi aur baaki sabhi khatre se anjaan hai, Pranjal zaroor kuch peeth peeche kar raha hai, Nidhi ma'am aur Juhi uss Rajat ke liye firse ready nahi hai, Niharika... She might be plotting something too. Aur ab ye unknown person..!'

Baat sach thi. Akhir kaha kaha dhyaan de woh?

[One at a time master. One at a time. Ek ek karke hum seedhiya chadhte hai. Theek hai? Agar uss unknown aadmi ne hume abhi freedom dii hai. Then yahi time hai ki hum jald se jald yaha ki problems solve kare. Let's start with Rajat. Usse handle karna hamare liye asaan hi hoga.]

'Yeah! Thank You Pari!'

[Don't mention it master~❤️]

Woh abhi uth hi raha tha jab achanak uske bagal se aake koi wahi zameen par baith gaya.

'Hmm?'

Uske bagal se Bhumika baithi hui thi. Kal raat me theek se baat bhi nahi ho paayi thi uss se Veer kii.

Bhumika (smiles) : H-Hey!

Usne dheere se kaha.

Veer : *nods*

Bhumika : Mujhe laga ki tum pareshan ho isliye mein-

Veer : I'm fine!

Bhumika nazre chura chura ke Veer ko dekh rahi thi. Uski zyaada himmat nahi hui Veer ko dekhne ki aur uss se directly baat karne ki.

Bhumika : Hamaare beech...!

Veer : !??

Bhumika (sarr jhukaate hue) : Hamaare beech kabhi dhang se baatein hi nahi hui. Hai na!?

Veer (lambi saas lete hue) : Kuch lamhe bane the. Mene koshishe kii thi. Aapne pehchaan'ne se hi inkaar kar diya...!

Bhumika : W-Woh-

Veer ke ek ek shabd seedhe Bhumika ke dil me chhuri ki tarah jaa ke ghup gaye. Shabd uske gale me hi atak ke reh gaye. Veer ne usse woh pal yaad dila diya jab woh hotel me Veer ko pehchaan'ne tak se peeche hatt gayi thi. Aur iske liye glaani toh usme abhi bhi koot kootkar bhari hui thi. Veer ke bol jese zakhm par namak chhidakne ka kaam kar gaye.

Veer : Ab jab thodi fursat mile, toh ye sawaal khud se kariyega.

Iss se pehle ki Bhumika kuch keh paati,

"Veeeeeeeerrrrrr!?? Naashta lag gaya hai. Aa jao! Bhumika tum bhi!!!"

Andar hall se Ragini ki awaaz ne unka dhyaan kheech liya.

Veer agle hi shan utha aur bina kuch kahe ya peeche mude woh Bhumika ko wahi chorr waha se andar chal diya.

Bhumika ki aankho me aasu panap uthe. Agar Veer ek do vaakya aur dil ko ghayal karne wale kehta toh beshaq unn aankho me se aasu chhalak uthate.

Dining table par apni seat par virajmaan hote hue usne naashta shuru kiya. Pal pal Ragini andar se baahar hoti aur usse apni qaatilana nazro se dekhti.

Veer (sonali se) : Tumhare liye mene kuch socha hai.

Sonali : Hmm? Kya?

Veer : Samay aane par pata lag jaega.

Sonali : Ek aur food truck?

Veer (smiles) : Nahi!

Sonali : Toh?

Veer : Mujhe samay do thoda. Jald hi pata lag jaega. Business me koi dikkat toh nahi jaa rahi?

Sonali : Jaa rahi hai na.

Veer : Kya hua?

Sonali : Yahi samajh nahi aata ki mein iss jhamele me kyu fassi hui hu.

Veer : Well...

Veer ke kuch kehne se pehle hi Suman ne Sonali ki plate me ek paratha rakha aur saath hi saath uske sarr par ek tapli bhi de maari,

*Bonk*

Sonali : Maaaaaa!!????

Suman : Kahi bhi raha jaata hai toh kaam karna padta hai. Kya tum ab muft me aisho araam ki zindagi jeena chaahti ho? Mene tumhe ye sikhaaya hai? Veer jii ne tum pe itni badi zimmedaari saupi hai bharosa kar ke. Unka bharosa mat todna. Aur lagan se kaam karo. Tumhe toh khush hona chahiye ki-

Sonali : Maa tum hamesha aisa hi karti ho. Hamesha uska paksh leti ho. Jab dekho tab-

Suman : Haan toh kyu na lu paksh? Gaav ka samay yaad nahi kya? Kese jeete the hum harr roz? Bol! Aaj tu yaha chenn se baith ke iss tarah shaahi bhoj kar paa rahi hai toh woh kiski badaulat hai? Haan? Lungi mein paksh Veer jii ka. Aur tu bhi samajh jaa iss baat ko.

Sonali (khuspusaate hue) : Acche se jaanti hu kyu paksh leti ho uska.

Bola toh badi hi dheemi awaaz me tha Sonali me. Par Suman chuki kaafi nazdeek khadi thi, usne sab sunn liya aur palat ke Sonali ko usne apni aankhein dikhaayi. Antatah, Sonali kheejte hue shaant hoke baith gayi. Toh wahi Suman ka poora dhyaan Veer par kendrit ho gaya.

Suman : Ek paratha aur lijiye na!

Veer : Nahi! Ho gaya mera!

Suman (dheere se) : Lijiye na maalik! Sehat ka dhyaan rakhiye. Acche se naashta kariye.

Veer : Pait already bhar gaya hai.

Suman : Ek aur bas! Mere liye!?

Veer (sighs) : Rakh do!

Suman (smiles) : Mein paani laati hu.

Woh gunguna ke andar chali gayi toh wahi Ragini andar se baahar aayi aur Aabha aur Sonali ko sabzi parosne lagi.

Harr baar woh Veer ko dekhne se nahi chookti thi. Unhe serve karne ke baad jab usne dekha ki Shweta aur Suman dono hi andar thi to woh mauka dekha Veer ke nazdeek aayi,

Ragini : M-Mein... Mein chaah rahi thi ki hum kal chale kahi?

Veer (dheere se) : Kidhar?

Ragini : Kahi bhi. Jaga tum le jana chaaho.

Veer : How about beach?

Ragini (smiles) : Ahh! Wonderful! Mujhe kayi mahine ho gaye waha gaye. I'll... I'll be ready! Kal shaam ko. Okay?

Veer ke haath ko thaam halke se daba ke woh muskaan liye waha se andar ho gayi. Kal ki shaam, Ragini ke naam pehle hi booked ho chuki thi.

Jo akhiri sadasya tha ghar ka, akhir kaar woh bhi baahar aaya.

Shweta ek plate me kuch mithaiyaa rakh ke kitchen se baahar aayi. Sabhi ko ek ek piece dene ke baad woh akhir me Veer ke paas aayi. Aur jhuk ke usne ek mithaayi Veer ki plate me rakhi.

Parantu usne apna pallu nahi odha hua tha. Ye maatr ek ittefaaq tha. Aur ittefaaq se hi, Veer ki nigaahein unn do raseele aamo par jaake theher gayi.

Jese hi Shweta ne apni nigaahein upar kari, Veer uske urojo ko ghoorte hue pakda gaya.

Veer ne Shweta ko dekha, usse thoda ajeeb lag raha tha. Galti akhir uski thi. Par aur bhi ajeeb tab laga jab Shweta agle hi pal muskuraane lagi.

'Huh!?'

Woh ajeeb sii muskaan diye, apne than ke upar haath rakh usse pyaar se sehlaayi aur waha se nikal gayi.

'!!!??'

Veer ki kuch bhi palle na pada ki ye abhi abhi kya hua tha.

Shweta andar kitchen me aake abhi bhi apne stan par haath ferr rahi thi dheere dheere. Jese maano unhe kisi cheez ke liye taiyaar kar rahi ho. Uske chehre par ek santushti bhari muskurahat thi.

Agar Veer thodi derr aur yaha ruka toh beshaq tension aur confusion se uska sarr khap jaane wala tha.

Woh naashta karte hi ghar se nikal gaya. Aur raaste me hi uski baatein Pari se hoti rahi,

'Pari! Full status!'

[Right away Master!]

*Ding*


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Veer ne ek nazar apne stats par daali. Aur haami bhari. Itne points hone ke baad bhi usse abhi bhi ye kam maalum pad rahe the.

Usse ab apne stats badhaane ki bhi zaroorat thi aur saath hi ab ek advanced level martial arts skill ki bhi.

Lekin, uske liye bhaari maatra me points ki aavashyakta thi. Filhaal, Veer ne laalach na dikhaate hue apne stats ko jyo ka tyo hi rehne diya. Thode aur points jab ikhatta honge tab woh inhe badha lega. Ye soch woh chal diya Balhaar ke hideout ki orr,

Pehle hi Veer ko uska message aa chuka tha aur Balhaar milna chaah raha tha.

Andar aate hi Balhaar ke right hand aadmi athwa gang ke logo ne ek jhalak me hi Veer ko pehchaan liya aur usse andar aane ke liye raasta diya. Sabhi jaante the ye javaan ladke ki ahamiyat kya thi.

Ek acchi sii luxury seat par Veer ko baithaya gaya. Aur waha khade log usse chai coffee ke liye puchne lage.

Balhaar bhi fauran hi haazir ho gaya aur uske saamne baith usne apne logo ko baahar jaane ke liye ishaara kar diya.

Veer : I guess kuch hua hai meri gerr-maujoodagi me. Am I right!?

Balhaar : Jii boss! Aapka andaaza sahi tha. Jesa aap keh ke gaye the. Mere aadmi unn jagaho par poori nigraani rakhe hue the.

Veer : Hmm! Toh? Kya hua fir...!?

Balhaar : Darasal baat ye hai ki...

Usne saari baat samjhaayi toh Veer ke maathe par shikan aa gayi.

Veer : Thik hai! Mein dekhta hu! Tum khabar bas dete rehna. Aur kuch filhaal karne ki zaroorat nahi. Agar mujhe zaroorat hogi toh mein khud bataunga.

Balhaar : J-Jii!

Veer utha aur jaane ke liye hua. Peeche Balhaar usse ajeeb nazro se ghoor raha tha.
Uske mann me alag alag vichaar aa rahe the.

'Isse boss maan'ne ki kya zaroorat hai mujhe? Slogan marr chuka hai. Mumbai ka don mein hu. Fir bhi ek bacche ke neeche kaam kyu kar raha hu mein? Hai toh ye ek 21-22 saal ka ladka hi. Kya bigaad lega mera? Itni saari gangs hai mere paas. Saale ko ek baar me bhoon denge. Karodo ka karobaar hai mera. Mere neeche bade se bade aadmi bhi kaam karte hai. Roz mera auhda badhta jaa raha hai. Sirf haath hi toh moda tha isne. Fir iss ladke ke peeche kyu-'

Veer : Ohh by the way~

Balhaar (jhepte hue) : H-Huhh?

Veer ahista se uske kaan ke paas aaya aur dheemi par behad buland awaaz me uske bol Balhaar ke kaano me goonj gaye, jisse sunte hi Balhaar ke perr kamzor padd gaye.

"Betrayal ke baare me sochna bhi mat! Agli baar haath marodunga nahi. Seedha ukhaad ke shareer se alag kar dunga."

Aur itna bol, woh waha se nikal gaya.

Balhaar ka chehra dekhne laayak tha. Uski saari hekdi utar chuki thi. Jo thode boht bhi uske mann me Veer ko daga dene ke vichaar aaye the, unki jagah ab Veer ko baap maan'ne ke vichaar paida ho chuke the.

Usse samajh aa chuka tha ki bhale hi ye ladka 21-22 saal ka hi tha. Par isme kuch aisi baat thi jo usse galti karne se baar baar rok deti thi. Uske andar ek khatre ki ghanti baja deti thi. Ki agar woh iss ladke ke khilaaf gaya, toh uska sab kuch khatam ho jayega.

*Gulp*

Chehre par se paseena poch, Balhaar baahar nikal apne kaamo me lag gaya.

***

Mumbai ke hi ek shetr me ek medium sized ghar me teen log aapas me behas karne me lage hue the.

Ye aur koi nahi, Bhavna Tejal aur Purvi hi thi.

"Itni badi baat chhipaayi aapne mujhse? Kyuuuuu? Kyu kiya aapne aisa???"

Awaaz thi Tejal ki jo Bhavna par bhadak rahi thi.

Uski aankho me nami bhi thi. Uski maa aisa kese kar sakti thi bhala?

Bhavna : M-Mein-

Tej : Aap chaahti kya hai Mom?? Kya chaahti hai aap? Bata dijiye aaj mujhe!

Bhavna : Meri baat suno Tej-

Tej : Itne dino se mein paagalo ki tarah dar-dar bhatak ke jankaari batorne ki koshish kar rahi hu ki kahi se mere bhai ke baare me mujhe kuch pata chal jaaye aur aap itni badi info haath me rakhe hue mujhe bas dekh rahi thi? Ek bhi baar aapke mann me ye nahi aaya ki mein apni beti ko kam se kam bata toh du ye. Aap jaanti bhi hai mera haal? Kis haalat se guzar rahi hu mein apne bhai ko dhundne ke liye?

Bhavna : Sab samajhti hu Tej! Mein sab samajhti hu meri bacchi! Aur woh tumhara bhai hai par mere liye toh mera beta hai. Tum samajhti kyu nahi ki-

Tej : Bas!!! Boht ho gaya. Dijiye mujhe!! Aapse nahi ho payega! Mein khud hi karungi.

Bhavna : N-Nahi! Mujhe karne do mein-

Tej : Itne dino se toh aapse hua nahi mom. Ab kya karogi aap?

Purvi jo ab tak shaant thi, akhir kaar usse maa beti ke jhagde ke beech me aana hi pada.

Purvi : Tum dono! Ye kya laga rakha hai? Aur Bhavna tum!!! Tum aisa kese kar sakti ho? Apni hi beti se baate chhipaogi toh aise kese chalega haan? Yahi toh parivaar hai tumhara! Itni badi baat chhipaane ki kya zaroorat thi? Hum dono hi dekh rahe hai ki kese bechaari Tej roz roz baahar nikal Vikram ke liye jankari dhundhne jaati hai. Par bechari lautati khaali haath hi hai. Aur tum aise me...!

Bhavna : Aisa nahi hai Purvi! Agar mene ye kiya hai toh kuch soch ke hi kiya hoga na? Tum hi batao, kya mein kuch bhi kisi ko kasht dene ke liye jaan boojh ke karungi?

Purvi (sighs) : Bhavna! Tumhe ab samajhna hoga ki tumhari beti ab bacchi nahi rahi. Ab apne baccho se baatein chhipana matlab unn par bharosa na karna jesa hai.

Tej : Exactly!!!! Maasi! Meri baato se toh inhe farq tak nahi padta hai. Aap hi samjhaiye please!

Purvi uth ke Bhavna ke bagal se aake baithi jo sofe par viraajmaan thi aur uske kandhe par haath rakh usne Bhavna ko hausla diya.

Purvi : Ab zyada mat socho aur karo. Warna derri na ho jaaye Bhavna.

Bhavna : P-Par... Agar kuch hua toh!? Purvi mere haatho me ab woh bal nahi raha. Tum jaanti hi ho... Woh satta, woh shaasan... Tum sab jaanti ho kya hua tha. Agar kuch ho gaya toh? Mein kabhi apne aap ko maaf nahi kar paungi Purvi! Mein uspe aanch bhi nahi aane de sakti.

Iss baar apni maa ki baat Tej badi hi dhyaan se sunn rahi thi. Ye kya baatein ho rahi thi?

Tej : Kesa bal? Kesi satta? Aap kya keh rahi hai?

Bhavna : Huh!!? K-Kuch nahi!

Tej : Aap firse kuch chhipa rahi hai na? Dekha! Maasi!? Dekha na aapne? Ye firse mujhse kuch chhipa rahi hai.

Purvi : Ab tum karti ho ya nahi Bhavna?

Bhavna : Hmm! M-Mein... Karti hu!

Kehte hue usne apni mutthi khol ek parchi nikaali aur usse khola.

Saari behas issi ke liye hi toh ho rahi thi. Uss parchi me ek hi cheez thi...

Aur woh tha...

Veer ka phone number!

Wahi number jo Veer ne khud Bhavna ko diya tha jab woh Egypt se laut raha tha.

Aur ab tak, Bhavna usse sambhaal ke rakhi hui thi. Roz roz Tej baahar nikal ke kisi na kisi tareeqe se Veer ke baare me info nikaalne ki koshish karti thi. Par bechaari harr baar nakaam ho jaati thi.

Aur kyu na hoti? Mumbai itna bada sheher tha. Veer ko waha dhundna khet me sui dhundne jesa tha. Upar se bechaari ko naam bhi galat pata tha. Vikram toh naam hi nahi tha Veer ka. Saath hi jo photo Tej ke paas thi, woh ek side view photo thi. Toh Veer ko pehchaan'na aur bhi mushqil tha usme.

Lekin Tej ne ek bhi din zaaya nahi jaane diya. Harr roz woh nikalti, apne bhai ko dhundne ke liye. Colleges me jaati, jitni info milti utni paa ke waapas aa jaati.

Aur Bhavna ye ab tak chhipaaye hue thi ki uske paas Veer ka number maujood tha. Uska jee ghabra raha tha ki agar Veer se mulaqaat hui toh kya hoga? Ek darr tha, jo sirf wahi jaanti thi. Aur Purvi. Tejal toh kayi saari baato se anibhigya thi.

Aur itni mehnat karne ke baad usse pata chala ki uski apni hi maa pehle se hi jankaari dabaaye baithi hui thi.

Zaahir hai ki woh boht zyada gussa thi. Aur ab behas ho rahi thi Veer ko call lagane ki.

Purvi ke hausla dene ke baad akhir kaar Bhavna ne mann bana hi liya aur usne apna phone utha ke uss number par call lagaaya,

Tej : Loudspeaker par rakhiyega!

Bhavna : Hmm!

Waha maujood sabhi ke dil ki dhadkane tezz ho gayi.

Tej apne bicchde bhai ki awaaz sunn'ne waali thi. Toh wahi Bhavna apne bete kii. Aur Purvi pehli baar Veer ki awaaz se rubaru hone waali thi.

*Ring* *Ring*

*Ring* *Ring*

Ghanti gayi aur kuch rings ke baad hi,

"Hello?"

Ek awaaz aayi. Jisse sunn Bhavna ka dil zorr se dhadak utha. Awaaz wahi thi. Wahi same awaaz. Number ussi ka tha matlab.

Tej ka khud ka muh khula hua tha.

Bhavna ke honth thar-thara rahe the. Bechari ke muh se shabd hi nahi nikal paaye.

"Hello?"

Punaah awaaz aate hi Purvi ne Bhavna ke haatho se phone chhinaaya aur khud baat karna shuru kii,

Purvi : H-Hello!?

"Jii kahiye! Aap kaun?"

Bhavna aur Tejal dono ki hi himmat nahi ho rahi thi ab baat karne ki. Tejal toh hazaaro baatein kehna chaahti thi uss se. Par ab jab mauka aaya toh pata nahi kyu, uski himmat nahi hui. Baat ko shuru kese kare, uski ab kuch samajh me nahi aaya. Shayad ye sab kuch ekdum se zyaada hi ho gaya tha uske liye.

Purvi : Kya mein Vikram se baat kar rahi hu?

"Hmm!? Ohh! Yeah!! Jii haan! Aap Vikram se hi baat kar rahi hai. Kahiye!"

Purvi : B-Beta mein... Ahem! Mujhe aapse kuch zaroori kaam hai.

"Hmm? Par aap hai kaun?"

Purvi : Bas yu samajh lo ki mein aapki... Aapki koi apni hi hu.

"Aur mein kese maan lu?"

Purvi : Trust me beta! Mein aapko jaanti hu. K-Kya aap mujhse kal mil sakte ho?

"Well! Actually nahi! Kal mein kahi busy rahunga."

Purvi : T-Toh parso? Parso theek rahega?

"Fine! Parso! Kab aur kaha?"

Purvi : Parso xxxxxxx hotel me. Shaam ko theek rahega?

"Okay! That sounds fine."

Purvi (smiles) : G-Good!

"Aur mein aapko pehchanunga kese?"

Purvi : Don't worry! Mein tumhe call kar dungi. Par number different rahega. Ye nahi! Mein bata dungi mein kaha par baithi houngi. Okay?

"Alright!"

Purvi : Th-Thank you! Vikram! I'll see you day after tomorrow! Bye!

"Jii!"

*Call ends*

Call cut hote hi Purvi ne ek lambi saas lii. Uski khud ki dhadkane poore vartalaap ke dauraan tezz thi.

Bhavna : Thank God tumne usse kuch nahi bataya abhi.

Purvi : Mein jaanti hu sab. Of course mein usse abhi se kuch nahi bataungi!

Tej : Kyuuuu? Kyu nahi bataaya? Arre aapko kehna chahiye tha na ki uski sagi maa aur behan yaha par hai. Aap uski maasi ho. Kyu nahi kaha aapne? Hum abhi ke abhi mil sakte the. Kyu kiya aapne aisa?

Purvi : Kyuki tum woh baatein nahi jaanti jo hum jaante hai Tej.

Tej : Toh bataaiye na mujhe!!!!

Purvi (sighs) : Itna asaan nahi hai. Anyways! Woh agree ho gaya hai. Agar parso kuch nahi hua, iska matlab hum aage proceed kar sakte hai.

Bhavna : Hmm! Aur Purvi-

Purvi (smiles) : Pata hai mujhe! Uss se milne sirf mein jaungi.

Bhavna (smiles) : Hmm!!

Tej : Whaaaaaatttttt? Kya matlab? Kya matlab sirf aap jaogi? Aur hum?

Purvi : Tum dono yahi par rahogi!

Tej : PAR KYUUUUUU????

Purvi : Baad me tumhe sab pata lag jaega. Kuch din ka intezaar karo.

Tej : A-Aap log... Aap log boht bure ho.

Purvi (smiles) : Ahh! Toh ye baat thi. Tej! Tumhare nakaam hone ka raaz pata lag gaya.

Bolte hue Purvi ne mobile ki screen jese hi saamne kii, toh screen par ek naam likha hua tha.

Veer ka poora naam!

Truecaller par Veer ka original name hi registered tha. Purvi ne jese hi woh dikhaaya toh saara maajra samajh me aa gaya ki kyu Tejal Veer ko dhundh nahi paa rahi thi.

Tej : V-Veer!!!!

Bhavna : Veer! Kitna... pyara naam hai.

Woh apne khayalaato me ghum ho gayi.

'Zaroor Veer ki dadi jii ne hi ye naam rakha hoga. Aapki ab bhi yaad aati hai mujhe, Maa jii! Kaash aap ab bhi hamare beech hoti!'

Purvi : Decide ho gaya hai fir. Parso! Mein jaa ke uss se mil ke aaungi. Agar sab kuch sahi raha toh... Toh hum sab milenge uss se fir.

Purvi aur Bhavna apni baato me lag gayi.

Par idhar, Tej ke mann me kuch aur hi baatein ghoom rahi thi. Kuch aur hi tarqeebe...

Woh chup chaap bas waha se uthi aur apne laptop me lag gayi.

Kuch minutes ke baad hi uski Laptop ki screen par ek window khuli hui thi.

Ek social media ki window. Jisme Veer ki adhiktar details maujood thi.

'xxxxxxxx college huh!? I know what I have to do now! Sorry Maasi! Lekin mein aapke rules ke according nahi chalne wali.'
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Full status ko edit karne me boht samay lagta hai guys. Mujhe pichle poore 15-16 updates ko thoroughly dekhna pada taaki pata lag sake ki kaha kaha points me anyar aaya hai. Kon sii mew cheeze unlocked hui hai. Uske baad jaake mujhe edit karna padta hai. It takes a lot of time. Village arc pace pakadta jaa raha hai. Taiyaar rahiyega!
Dhanyavaad! ✨


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