Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

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[Werewolf]

Bhai update kb tak aayega

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[Arjun2000]

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Bhai plz thoda writer sahab se khiye k jldi likhe.....aur unse khiyega ki unki story jabardast h......bs hm hi jante h k hm kese 2 din intjar krte h update ka.... isliye kis din anewala hota h tb SBR ni hota....... isliye krupya ho ske utna jldi de......aur ho ske to km se km time bta de k kb tk aaega approximately.....dhanywad

 

[Ashwathama]

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[Werewolf]

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[Ashwathama]

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[Werewolf]

Update - 77 ~ Preparations!

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Ab tak...

[Do you want to see Slogan's past???]

Bina koi derr kiye Veer ne Yes ko select kar diya.

Aur ek ke baad ek, Slogan ki saari memories, uska past system ne sab dikha diya.

[It's been quite a bit time... Master!!!?]

Wahi dusri orr... Jungle ki road waale ilaake par. Jaha chootiyaa thi dusri side par ussi ke upri ilaake par...

Ek ladki khadi hui thi. Hawa me lehraate baal aur agle hi pal...

Wo andhere me wahi mudte hue lupt ho gayi.

Ab aage...

Akhir ant ho gaya. Uss shaks ka, jisne Veer ko itna pareshaan kar ke rakha tha, jo uski jaan ke peeche pada hua tha. Wo, ab iss duniya se chal basa.

Aur ye sab kisne kiya? Veer ne, khud ne.

Itni mashaqqat ke baad, akhir wo Slogan ko outsmart karne me safal ho hi gaya. Aur uss se uska peecha chooth saka. Kya hi baat thi. Slogan ki maut bilkul ussi tarah hui jis tarah uski beti ki hui thi. Dono hi ussi khaayi me jaa gire. Shayad ab wo afterlife me ek dusre ke saath honge!?

Idhar Veer ek udaasi me iss waqt apne kamre me laita hua tha.

Uska mann boht hi maayus tha. Slogan ko jungle me dhund ke usne uska ant toh kar diya tha. Par sawaal tha ki wo Slogan ko jungle me dhund kese paaya?

Simple sii baat thi. Jab Veer ne Slogan ko goli maari thi, toh Slogan ke haath se khoon behna shuru ho chuka tha. Fir jidhar jidhar wo bhaagte hue gaya. Khoon ki ek trail banaata gaya.

Bhale hi wo khoon andhere me na nazar aaye. Par vatavaaran me khoon ki gandh toh fel hi gayi thi. Khoon me iron ki maatra toh hoti hi hai. Aur uss gandh ko harr koi jaanta hai ki wo kesi rehti hai. Veer ke senses already 120% par the. Including his sense of smell. Bhala aisa kese ho sakta tha ki usse khoon ki gandh na aaye!?

Yahi kaaaran tha ki Veer ne badi hi asaani se Slogan ko locate kar liya tha. Beowulf's Blessings ke samay samaapt hone se pehle hi.

Uss raat Veer ne Beowulf's Blessings ka istemaal poore 35 minutes ke liye kiya tha. Chaahe wo Matthew se ladaayi ho, ya chaahe Slogan se. Sab kuch inhi 35 minutes ke andar hua tha.

Bhale hi usne iss baar thode control me fight kii thi. Par fir bhi, uske istemaal ke baad Veer poora exhausted ho chuka tha. Wo kaafi derr tak ussi khaayi ke paas laita raha. Jab Jassi aur uski team andar aayi tab jaa ke unn logo ne Veer ko uthaaya tha.

Thanks to Karan, jisne ye bata diya tha ki Veer akele andar gaya hua tha. Aur wo fir usse dhundne andar aa paaye.

Jassi aur baaki sabhi ne uss raat Veer ko ek alag hi nazariye se dekhna shuru kar diya tha. Kyu? After all, Veer ne Slogan jese vyakti ka ant kiya tha. Aur ye koi sadhaaran baat nahi thi. Uss raat hui unke beech conversation, Veer ko acche se yaad thi.

Jassi : Tum theek toh ho?

Jassi ne Veer ko uthaaya aur usse sahaara diya.

Veer : Hmm! Par mujhse chala nahi jaa raha hai. I don't know why... Shareer ki poori energy jese gaayab sii ho gayi hai.

Jassi : Don't worry! Mein tumhe carry kar lunga. Aur Slogan? Wo kaha hai?

Veer : I killed him.

Jassi : Huhhhh???

Raghu : K-Kyaaa??

Veer : I killed him! Aur... Wo uss khaayi me jaake gir gaya.

Jassi : T-Tumne usse maara? Tumne?

Veer : Hmm!

Jassi : Y-Ye...

Veer : What? You guys... Tum sab meri complaint toh nahi karne waale na police me? Haan?

Jassi : Ehhh?? Of course not!!! Balki, hum toh tumhaare shukrguzaar hai. No! Infact, yadi tumhara zikr hota bhi hai kisi investigation me toh hum tumhara naam aane hi nahi denge.

Veer (sighs) : Thanks!

Jassi : Tumhe rest ki zaroorat hai. Team! Waapas chalo! Yaha se nikalne ka time aa gaya.

Jassi ne Veer ko Karan ko thamaaya aur usse le jaane ke liye kaha.

Raghu : Kya baat hai? Tu kuch pareshaan lag raha hai?

Jassi : Huh? N-Nahi! Kuch nahi! Chal!

'Akhir wo kya tha??? I'm sure mene uchaayi par wo saaya dekha tha. Kya wo koi jaanvar tha? Samajh nahi aa raha.' Jassi apne mann ki gutthi mann me hi liye aage badha.

Aur kuch issi prakaar Veer apne ghar laut paaya tha. Sawaal toh kayi puche the Ragini ne uss se ghar me. Par Karan ne matter sambhaal liya tha. Usne na jaane kaha ki kahaani banaayi on the spot aur Veer ko sawaalo se bacha liya tha. Par fir bhi, kal baal baal bacha tha Veer Ragini ke haatho se. Warna pakda jaata. Usse yaad hai Karan ne kese almost uski gaand marwa hi dii thi.

Car se utarte hi, Karan usse sambhaal ke ghar ke andar laaya tha aur laate hi Ragini ke sawaal shuru ho chuke the.

Ragini : Veeeeerrr??? Kaha the tum? Kab se phone laga rahi hu. Aur time dekha hai? Raat ke 2 baj rahe hai Veer. Tumhe pata hai yaha sab kitni chinta me the? Ek phone toh kar dete Veer? Mein thodi tumhe mana kar deti. It's just... Ghabraahat hone lagti hai idhar. Aur aap mahashay??? Aap toh Karan ho na? Veer ke naye dost? Fir aap ne Veer ko kyu nahi samjhaaya? Aur ek minute? Aap kya kar rahe ho idhar? Veer toh akele ghar se nikla tha. Huh??

Karan : Ahahahaha~ Bhabhi jii! Darasal... Wo hua ye tha ki...

'Fucccckkkk!!! Kya hua tha?? Kya hua tha? Poora full scale attack hua tha. But I cannot tell her that. Fuckkkk! Kuch soch Karan!!!' Karan mann me khud se socha. Bahaana toh dena tha kuch na kuch.

Karan : Bhabhi jii! Mein hi Veer ko le gaya tha actually. Ahem! Mere friend ki party thi ek. Toh mene socha akele kya karunga? Toh mein Veer ko le gaya tha. Ahahaha~

Ragini : Kya? Par Veer toh keh ke gaya tha ki business related matter se jaa raha hai woh.

Karan (Veer ko dekhte hue) : Hein? Tum business ki baat karne nikle the?

Veer :

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Veer ne agle hi pal apni kohni Karan ki pasli me de maari.

Karan : Gwaakhhh!! Arre! Haha! Haan wo sahi hi toh keh raha tha Bhabhi jii! Darasal jis friend ki party me gaye the uski business me acchi pakad hai. Toh... Aisa...

Ragini : Accha! Ek minute! Veer? Tum aise Karan ka sahaara kyu le rahe ho? K-Kya hua Veer?

Aur wo aage badh ke aayi aur Veer ko Karan ke haatho se pakad apni orr kheechi.

Karan : Bhabhi jii! Aaj toh Veer ne kamaal hi kar diya. Party me thodi ladaayi ho gayi thi. Ek aadmi ek ladki ko pareshaan kar raha tha. Bas! Veer kood pade. Ladayi badh gayi. Aur do isne maare toh do usne maare. Isliye, Veer ki abhi ye haalat hai. Hahaha~

Ragini : V-Veeeerrr??? Kyu ladaayi me padte ho? Tum theek toh ho na? Kaha lagi tumhe batao?

Wo kehte hue Veer ko check karne lagi aur idhar Veer muskura ke Karan ko dekh raha tha. Jese kehna chaah raha ho ki saale kal mil, bataata hu tujhe.

Karan Veer ki muskaan ko bhaanp liya aur forun hi usne waha se nikalne me hi bhalaayi samjhi.

Karan : M-Mein chalta hu. Bhabhi jii! Veer ka khayaal rakhna. Aaj kaafi mehnat kari hai usne. Ahahaha~ Goodbye Veer! Fir milte hai.

Aur bas, kal kuch iss tarah hi Veer ki raat guzri.

Aaj toh usne poore din araam kiya aur wo abhi bhi laita hi hua tha. Udaasi me.

[You are sad master!!!] Pari ki awaaz uske mann me gunji.

Pari!!! Jo uss raat sytem levelling ke tehet apni personality ek baar fir badal chuki thi. Veer kahi na kahi, iss Pari ko miss bhi kar raha tha toh wahi uss Pari ke jaane par thoda udaas bhi tha. Par maayusi ka keval yahi kaaran nahi tha. Kaaran tha...

[Swati!!! You are sad about her! Right?]

'Hmm! Pari!'

[This is how life is Master. Uss bechaari ka ant boht hi dardnaak hua. Kya galti thi uss bechaari ki? Still, she died a gruesome death. Ye kismat hoti hai Master. Fortune... Luck... Kab kiska kesa ho jaaye, koi nahi jaanta. That's the reason, you must strive to become strong.]

'Hmm~'

[You have such a kind heart Master!]

'Huh?'

[Aap baccho ke prati kitne sensitive ho. Ye mene dekh liya. Swati bhi ek bacchi hi thi uss waqt. You were seeing her as a kid. And seeing her in pain... You were so hurt. I could feel it.]

'I...'

[Juhi ke prati bhi aap kitne sensitive ho Master. You love her so much. I can see that. Baccho ke prati aapka lagaav alag hi dikhta hai master. Even though aapne ek aadmi ki jaan lii, still... Aap ne ab tak apni sanity nahi khoyi. You are still just like before. That's why I said, you have such a kind heart Master.]

'Mein... Th-Thank you Pari!'

[No! Thank you Master! I'm lucky to have you as my Master.]

'Hmm! Ab ye system ke changes samjhaogi mujhe?'

[Right away Master!]

'Go on then!'

[Master~ You got a random skill yesterday. Let me show you...]

*Ding*

[Skill 'Stock Master' has been rewarded.
Bio : Offers a 70% chance to succeed in sharemarket.]

'Holy fucccckkkkk!!!!' Veer jo ab tak laita hua tha wo jhatke se uth ke baith gaya. Baat hi kuch aisi thi.

'I needed this. Iske zariye... I can...'

[Still! It's not really that good Master. 30% chances hai ki paise doob bhi sakte hai.]

'Pari par 70% success chances bhi toh hai. Normally logo ke liye 50-50 chances rehte hai. Still, log paise lagaate hai na? But for me... It will be 70 - 30.]

[Hmm! Ye baat bhi hai master.]

'Aur kya changes hai? I saw ki, System layout bhi upgrade hua tha. What is it?'

[Bas, cheezo ke dikhaana ka tareeqa master. Just the layout has changed. Let me show you!]

*Ding*

[Name : Veer | Age : 21 |
Status : Student / Businessman

Stats :
Strength - 96/100 | Intelligence - 95/100
Agility - 65/100 | Endurance - 65/100
Appearance - 75/100

Skills :
Sex Protection | Intermediate Martial Arts Skill |
Hawkeye | Limbo | Basic Enemy Tracker |
Absolute Chef | Basic Driving | Stock Master.

System's Internal Features :
Check | Path Tracker | Past Illustration |
Quest Hunt | Slot | Translator | Alpha Trait

Favourabilities :
Suman : 126 (Slave) | Aabha : 90 (Slave)
Sonali : 65 (Familiar) | Ragini : 75 (Close mate)
Nidhi : 40 (Mate) | Shreya : 67 (Close mate)
Juhi : 90 (Best mate) | Suhana : 64 (Close mate)
Sonia : 71 (Close mate) | Kavya : 88 (Best mate)
Shweta : 10 (Familiar) | Bhumika : 38 (Familiar)
Kaera : 75 (Close mate) | Arohi : 70 (Close mate)

Cards :
Bone Reaper | Beowulf's Blessings

Points Remaining : 3300

System Level : Level 6
(600 EXP more to reach Level 7)]

[How is it Master? Layout change ho chuka hai. Do you like it?]

'Ahhh! I see! Waqai! It looks good now. Kaafi cheeze add hui hai. Compact design. Hmm~ I like it.'

[Thank you Master!!! I'm glad you liked it.]

'Pari!!!'

[Yes Master?]

'Points add kar do. Saare stats me. Make them full. All 100.'

[As you wish Master!]

*Ding*

[All stats have reached 100.]

[Remaining Points : 3092]

[Changes kal...]

''Kal subah dekhne ko milenge. I know. Thanks Pari!'

[It's my job Master. Par, appearance ko aapne ekdum se full kar liya hai. Tomorrow! Things will be interesting. Fufufu~]

Saari cheezo ko samajhne ke baad, Veer utha aur haath muh dho ke woh neeche aaya. Neeche aate hi usse alag hi mahaul nazar aaya.

Suman, Ragini, Aabha, Sonali sab zameen par chataayi bicchaaye hue baithi thi aur kuch bana rahi thi.

Veer : Hmm?

Ragini : V-Veer? Aao na! Uth gaye? Ab kesa lag raha hai?

Veer : I'm good Bhabhi!

Ragini (smiles) : Acchi baat hai. Dekho! Mein tumhaare liye gulaab jaamun, namkeen, aur saloni bana rahi hu. Tumhe tyohaar ke pakwaan pasand hai na?

Veer : Hmm?

Ragini : Aaj Holika dehen hai. Hum jaha rehte hai, yaha aas paas koi holika nahi baithi hai. Kya tum m-mujhe leke... Raat me... Holika dehen dekhne chaloge? Yahi main road side?

Wo ek aas liye usse dekhi, wahi side me baithi Suman bhi unn dono ko hi dekh rahi thi. Na jaane kya soch rahi thi.

Veer (smiles) : Kyu nahi Bhabhi? Sure!

Ragini (smiles) : Ahh!! Thank you Veer! Bas, ye taiyaariya kar lu, fir hum dinner kar ke raat me chalte hai. Okay?

Veer (smiles) : Alright!

***

Nidhi's Apartment...

Ragini ke ghar ki hi tarah, Nidhi ke flat me bhi chahal pehel machi hui thi. Aur iss chahal pehel ka kaaran kaun tha? Of course, nanhi Juhi! Uske alawa kaun ho sakta tha?

"Do na mammaaaa!!! Do do do... Candyyyy dooo!!!"

Wo Nidhi ke gown ko kheench kheench ke zidd kar rahi thi. Toh wahi sofe par baithi Shreya uski zidd pe muskuraa rahi thi. Apne Laptop me kaam me lagi hui thi woh.

Nidhi bada sa ek packet khol rahi thi aur Juhi ke liye candy nikaal rahi thi.

Nidhi : De rahi hai na mamma. Aur suno, roz bas ek hi milegi. Okay?

Juhi : Mmm~

Nidhi : Ye lo~

Juhi (perr patakte hue) : Ummm.... Khol ke...

Nidhi : Haa baba! Ye lo...

Juhi : Ehehe~

Aur wo jhatpat apne muh me candy daal bhaag gayi apne khilauno se khelne.

Nidhi (sighs) : Ye ladki bhi...

Shreya : Kal ka kya scene hai Dii?

Nidhi : Hmm? Kal ka kya?

Shreya : Kal holi hai. Kuch socha hai aapne?

Nidhi : Holi me kya Shreya? Harr saal ki tarah, thode pakwaan banaaye hai. Ghar jaa ke Mamma papa se mil aaungi. Bas! Aur kya?

Shreya : Bas? Really? Aur Juhi ka kya? Wo holi kese khelegi?

Nidhi : Society me Juhi ki umr ke bacche boht kam hai Shreya. Aur jo hai, unhe Juhi nahi jaanti. Kal usse bas gulaal lagwa laungi wahi baccho se. Aur kya?

Shreya : What??? Really dii? Yadi aap holi celebrate nahi kar rahi ho toh kam se kam bechari Juhi ko toh karne do.

Nidhi : Mein...

Shreya : Waqai aap bhi na. Aur uss duffer ka kya?

Nidhi : Huh?

Shreya (smiles) : Mera matlab wo... Veer ka kya?

Nidhi : I... Bhala mujhe kese pata hoga uske baare me?

Shreya : Huh? Kya aapki baat nahi hoti uss se? Haan? Aap hi ne toh bataaya tha na ki wo college aaya tha tests dene. Fir? Kya baat nahi hui.

Shreya ke sawaal par Nidhi ko wahi din yaad aa gaya. Wo din jab Veer ne uss se apne dil ki baat keh dii thi. 'I like you ma'am!!!'

Isse sunn ke Nidhi ke saare din itni mushqil se guzar rahe the ki harr thodi derr me usse Veer ke khayaal aane lagte the. Aur wo jese tese khud ko koss ke, samjha ke Veer ki chavvi apne mann se hata deti thi.

Nidhi : N-Nahi!! Meri baat nahi hui. Aur tumhara kya? Aaye din toh tum uske baare me puchti rehti thi. Kya hua? Kya tumhari baat nahi hui uss se?

Shreya (blushes) : Ahh! Wh-Whaaattt? M-Mein... N-No of course not!!! Mein toh k-kaafi samay se busy hu kaam me.

Nidhi : Toh bas fir. Hum dono ko hi nahi pata uske baare me.

Shreya : I... Hey dii!? Kyu na hum usse surprise de? Hahahaha~ Yes! Ye badhiya rahega. What do you say?

Nidhi : N-Nahi! K-Koi zaroorat nahi hai jaane ki. Wo waha apni family ke saath holi manaega. It will be a disturbance for them.

Shreya : Kya dii? Kesa disturbance? Hum toh ghar jese hai na? Aur uski bhabhi bhi toh kitna hume invite karti rehti hai. Veer yaha reh ke gaya hai kitne hafto tak. Toh ye koi bahaana nahi hua.

Nidhi : N-Noooo hum waha...

Wo kuch bolti ki andar se Juhi daudati bhaagti hui aake uski goad par chadh gayi.

Juhi : Maaaamuuu ke ghar... Maaamuuu ke ghar... Mein jaungi!!!! Mammmaa~ Maaasssiii!!!

Pata nahi kese, par apne maamu ka naam sunte hi Juhi ke kaan khade ho gaye aur wo jhatpat andar se bhaag ke aa gayi.

Shreya : Dekha!? Kam se kam ab Juhi ke liye toh chaliye. Uski bhi Holi kitni acchi guzar jaegi. Waha logo se milegi usse accha lagega. Ho sakta hai Kavya bhi aaye? Akhir Juhi aur uski boht banti hai. Ab toh chalenge na hum?

Juhi : Chalna hai... Chalna hai... Maamuuuu ke ghar... Chalna hai...

Nidhi firse mana karne hi waali thi. Par jab usne Juhi ki aankho me dekha aur ye abhaas kiya ki Juhi wese hi apne chote bhai, Dhruv se bichdi hui hai. Na usse koi khelne waala milta hai aur na koi saathi. Yadi problem uski Veer se hai toh isme bechari Juhi ki khushiya kyu daav pe lagaayi jaaye? Ye ek parent hone ka kartavya tha Nidhi ka ki wo Juhi ki khushiyo ka dhyaan rakhe.

Aur ye abhaas hote hi, uski nazre glaani se jhuk gayi.

Nidhi : Sorry beta! Sorry Shreya! Hum kal chalenge.

Juhi : Yaaaaaayyyyyy~

Shreya (smiles) : It's alright!!!

***

Kaera's Villa...

Meanwhile idhar Kaera apne villa me kal ke liye planning kar rahi thi. Julia, uski maid uske makhmal gore badan se kapde utaar rahi thi aur nighty pehnaane hi wali thi jab Kaera ne usse rok diya.

Kaera : No! Not this today! Just a t-shirt and leggings. That's it.

Julia : Are you really sure Miss?

Kaera : Yes!!!

Aur Julia usse fir wahi pehnaane lagi.

Kaera ko Slogan ki maut ke baare me pata lag chuka tha. Par uss se kaafi baatein chhipaayi gayi thi.

Jese ki wo ye nahi jaanti thi ki Slogan ka khaatma Veer ne kiya tha. Usse ye bhi nahi pata tha ki uske hi resort me uss din Steve ka sarr udd gaya tha.

Usse bas itna pata tha ki Steve ki car me firing hui thi. Par iss se pehle ki wo Steve ke shareer ko car se girta dekh paati, uske agal bagal security ne usse surround kar ke andar kar diya tha. Aur wo inn sabhi baato se anibhigya thi.

Par chuki, ab Slogan jaa chuka tha. Wo kaafi relaxed thi. Aur mann me uske planning chal rahi thi. Wo light mood me bed par baithi aur sochne lagi,




'Tomorrow! Hmm~ It's Holi! I never played this. I'll go and visit him. Only he can teach me about this.'

Kaera : Julia!

Julia : Yes miss?

Kaera : W-What is this feeling? Wh-When you don't want someone to get hurt. When you don't want to see that someone getting suffer. When... When you want that person always within your sight?

Julia (smiles) : It's Love Miss!!

Kaera : L-Love?? What is Love?

Julia (smiles) : Didn't you answer me just now?

Kaera : Huh?

Julia : When you don't want to see that person getting hurt and suffer. You want that person to be around you all the time. It's Love Miss! That means you love this person.

Kaera : I... I see!!

'I'll ask Veer. Tomorrow!!!'

***

Ragini's home...

"Hum nikal rahe hai Suman jii! Par aap sab bhi chalte toh accha hota."

Ragini ne apni sandals pehente hue kaha.

Laal saree me aaj wo itni kamaal lag rahi thi ki Veer ko badi mushqil jaa rahi thi. Wo nahi chaah raha tha ki apni hi bhabhi ko taade. Par wo lag hi itni sundar rahi thi ki na chaahte hue bhi uski nazre Ragini par chali jaa rahi thi.

Aur yaha Ragini uski harr nazar pakad le rahi thi. Wo aisa dikha rahi thi jese usse Veer ki nigaaho ke baare me kuch nahi pata. Wo toh balki jaan bujh ke khud ko dikhaana chaah rahi thi. Akhir uske sajne ke peeche ka maqsad hi toh yahi tha.

Wo Veer ke liye hi toh itna saji hui thi.

'Lipstick is fine... Ummm~ Nailpolish done. Baal side me hai, they are looking hot. Bindi done, kaajal done, make-up ka halka touch bhi ho gaya. Sleeveless saree bhi pehn lii. What else? Perfume bhi laga chuki hu. Jwellery bhi ho gayi. What else now? Everything is okay I guess.'

Uske mann me abhi yahi baatein chal rahi thi. Wo nahi chaahti thi ki Suman ya koi aur bhi uske sang aaye. Wo keval Veer ke saath akele jaana chaahti thi. Aur Suman jese uske mann ki baat samajh chuki thi. Usne forun hi keh diya ki wo sabhi ghar par rahenge.

Suman : Koi baat nahi! Aap jaaiye! Hum sab hai yaha. Phone me photo le aaiyega Ragini jii. Hum yahi dekh lenge.

Ragini (smiles) : Bilkul! Video bana laungi. Chale Veer?

Veer : Hmm~

Aur wo dono hi car me baithe aur nikal gaye.

Sonali (muh fulaate hue) : Mujhe jaane kyu nahi diya aapne? Ghar ki dekh rekh ke liye aap toh thi na Maa? Fir yaha hum teen teen jann ko rukne ki zaroorat?

Suman (smiles) : Zaroorat hai. Unhe...

Sonali : Hmm?

Suman (smiles) : Kuch nahi!!!

Raaste bhar Ragini aur Veer me zyaada baatein nahi hui. Baatein hui toh keval nazro se. Veer side-eye karke Ragini ko dekhta toh kabhi Ragini usse dekhti aur usse apni orr dekhta hua paati.

Wo jab jab Veer ko apni orr dekhta hua pakadti, uska mann aur khil uthata. Yaani ki Veer ko bhi usme interest tha. Aur Veer uske saundarya ke aage haar raha tha.

Jab dono hi holika dehen ke sthaan par pohuche toh wahi utar ke Ragini ne saari vidhi se holika ke chakkar lagaaye aur darshan kiye.

Kal holi ka tyohaar tha. Ye tyohaar uske divorce ke baad pehla tyohaar hone waala tha. Aur wo isme koi bhi kami nahi hone dena chaahti thi.

Waha khade log bas Ragini aur Veer ko hi dekhe jaa rahe the. Isliye jaldi se darshan kar Ragini aur Veer car me aake baith gaye. Aur car se hi baahar holika dehen ko dekhne lage.

Tabhi achanak Veer ki nazar Ragini ke gale par gayi,

Veer : Aapka... Mangalsutra...!?

Ragini : Ab jab pati ko hi dur kar diya. Toh kis baat ka mangalsutra Veer?

Veer : No I mean... Aapka gala khaali khaali lag raha tha isliye... I just...

Veer apni nazre ferra hi tha ki Ragini ne uska haath thama aur utha ke apne stano ke theek upar seene par rakhwa liya.

Veer : B-Bhabhi!!!???

Ragini (smiles) : Khaali lag raha hai? T-Toh... Tum kuch kyu nahi laate apni iss bhabhi ke liye? Haan? Anything will do.

Veer : I...

Veer iss sudden harqat se yadi andar tak hil ke nahi reh gaya tha toh ye kehna galat tha. Ragini ke iss action ki usse zara bhi umeed nahi thi. Uske seene par haath rakh wo Ragini ke dil ki dhadkan bakhubi mehsoos kar paa raha tha. Bas thoda sa hi faasla tha. Bas thoda sa... Thoda aur neeche yadi haath galti se bhi lag jaata toh Veer ko unn raseele aamo ka ehsaas mil jaata.

Ragini : Kaho!? Kya apni iss nakaar dii gayi Bhabhi ke liye laoge kuch!?

Veer : Aisa kyu keh rahi ho aap? Kisi ne nahi nakaara hai aapko.

Ragini (smiles) : Tumne bhi nahi na!? Kyuki kisi ek ne toh apne jeevan se nakaar ke phek diya mujhe.

Veer : Aap uss baare me mat sochiye Bhabhi! Hum sab aapke saath toh hai na!?

Ragini (smiles) : What about you!?

Veer : Of course! M-Mein bhi aapke saath hu.

Ragini (smiles) : Then that's all that matters. Fufu~♡

Aur agle hi pal wo aage badhi aur uske laal laal raseele honth Veer ke gaal par the.

*Chu~♡*

*Badump*

Pal bhar ke liye Veer ki jese saans hi atak gayi. Uske gaal par Ragini ke hontho ka thappa jo lag chuka tha. Wo laal lipstick poori tareeqe se uske gaal par honth ka nishaan bann ke chadh chuki thi. Kya Ragini ne issi iraade se aaj fiery red lipstick lagaayi thi. Who knows!?

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Suhana's home...

*THUD*

Zorr se door band hone ki awaaz aayi aur Suhana apne business outfit me ghar ke andar aayi. Uska mood kuch boht hi kharaab lag raha tha.

'Damn itt!!!!! Ye badi deal haath se nikal gayi. All because of that bastard advisor. Yadi wo beech me taang nahi adaata. Toh sab kuch smoothly ho gaya hota.'

Mann me badbadaate hue wo apne kapde change kari. Aaj uska dimaag behad kharaab tha.

*Ring Ring*

'Huhhh? Sonu ka phone?'

Suhana : Bol Sonu!!!

Sonia : Diii! Kal holi hai.

Suhana : Haan toh?

Sonia : Dii! Kal... Kal mein Veer ke ghar jaaungi. To celebrate Holi. Are you coming?

Suhana : Mein dekh rahi hu tum kaafi close hote jaa rahi ho uske? Kya maajra kya hai Madam?

Sonia (blushes) : Ahhh??? Y-Ye kya bol rahi ho aap. I'm going to give my thanks... T-That's it.

Suhana : Tumhari tarah yadi koi ladki aise ladko ko thanks dene lagi na harr baar toh wo kuch hi dino baad bacche leke ghumegi.

Sonia (blushes) : W-Whaaat?? What are you even saying diii? It's... It's nothing like that. Stop it! Are you coming are not?

Suhana : No waaayyy! Mera mood abhi kharaab hai wese bhi. I'll talk to you later.

Sonia : Huhhhh? D-Diii!!!?

*Call ends*

Suhana ne bina Sonia ke baat sune hi phone cut kar diya. Aur apne anguthe ko daato tale dabaaye soch me pad gayi.

'That idiot... He actually killed him... I knew it... Kuch gadbad hai... He hasn't even returned my gun.'

Wo soch me thi jab achanak hi darwaaza khula aur ek suit pehne aadmi andar pravesh kiya.

"Ohh! Tum aa gayi? Kesi rahi deal?"

Gaurav!!! Suhana ka pati. Usne Suhana ko dekh pucha. Kyuki, Suhana uski hi company ki taraf se deal karne gayi thi.

Suhana : Deal failed. Sab kuch uss company ke advisor ke kaaran.

Gaurav : Whaaaaaaatttttt? Deal fail ho gayi? Kya karti ho Suhana? Itna chota sa kaam nahi hua? Kese tumne aaj..!? Sab tumhari galti hai. Mujhe ye deal nahi deni chahiye thi tumhe.

Suhana : Meri galti? Meri galti????? Excuse me!!!!! Meri koi galti nahi thi samjhe Gaurav??? Wo advisor pehle se hi planning kar ke aaya tha.

Gaurav : Still... Anyways! Jo hua so hua. Jao accha! Jaake mere liye aaj kuch special banao khaane ke liye.

Suhana : Whaaaattttt? Samay dekh rahe ho Gaurav??? 12 baj rahe hai raat ke. Poore time office me thi. Waha se mathapacchi kar ke itni late lauti hu. Yaha tak ki aaj holika dehen tha toh kahi gayi bhi nahi. Aur itni thakaan ke baad tum mujhse khaana maang rahe ho? Chef bhi hai hamaare ghar me. Do you know???

Gaurav : I know! Aur mein bhi koi park me ghum ke nahi aa raha hu Miss Suhana! Din bhar mehnat karta hu. Meri ek post hai. C.E.O ki. Unlike you... Tum ghar me khana nahi banaogi toh kaun banaega? Make me something good. Mein aata hu change kar ke.

Aur wo nikal gaya upar. Idhar Suhana ki mutthi kassi hui thi gusse ke maare. She had enough!!! Mann toh kar raha tha abhi ghar se bhaag jaaye. Din bhar ki bhaag daud ke baad ab wo khaana banaaye???

Wo gusse me kapde badli aur kitchen me gayi kuch banaane bemann se.

Usne agle hi pal Sonia ko call kiya,

Sonia : Hello?? Dii?

Suhana : Tum kal Veer ke yaha jaa rahi ho na?

Sonia : Umm.. haan! yeah!!

Suhana : Count me in!!!!

Sonia : Ehhhh?
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
I told you guys ki update 77 will be interesting. But see, yahi pe moderation ho gaya. Aur iss update me mene left over questions ke answers diye. Ab, sabhi Veer ke ghar par jaa rahi hai. Meanwhile Veer inn sab se anibhigya hai.


Like thokne ka and revos rakhne ka.
Dhanyavaad!

 

[Werewolf]

Dhamakedar update..

Fantastic mind-blowing update

MAST AWOSOME UPDATE

Nice update...

Bhai bht hi emotions sy bhara update tha yaqin mano 1 Pall ko laga slogan axha banda hai per usny hmary hero k 7 panga liya tha uski saza to banti thi chalo ab phir 2 din wait next update k liye

Just marvelous and super fantabulous update Werewolf bhai....

Slogan ka past padhkar kafi bura laga aur ab veer ko kishor ne jo Swati ke saath galat kiya hai uske liye usse saja dena chahiye taki usko eshsas ho ki galat karna kabhi sahi nahi hota hai....

Awesome updates

Mast update brother

Rula diya bhai.....achha aadmi sabse bura tabhi banta hai jab uske saath bohat bura hua ho veer khud roya slogan ka past dekhke...to hum to cheej hi kya hai bhai.....swati ke saath achha nhi kiya KISHOR ne. Veer use sabak sikhaye to hi achha hai ab to. Slogan marte waqt bhi apni beti SWATI ko hi yaad karke mara. That's true Father's love for his daughter. Jab koi bhi bachha apne baap ke saamne dum todta hai........we can't imagine the scene that time...baap bechara mar jaata hai andar se pura.

Main abhi tak apni chhoti bahan ko yaad karke har waqt marta hu...bcz she left me 1 year ago...jab bade bhai ke saamne uski chhoti bahan ki body padi ho to wo bhai to mar hi jaata hai

Nice good mast update bro

Razi Konya banda badmash banke
Har badmash ki story pavegi.

Bhai shandar update.

Slogan ka past kafi sadness se bhara hua jarur raha but kahi na kahi uski revenge lene ki mentality ne uska ant kara diya.

Ye sala kishor bhi bada mc nikla slogan ki puri life darkness se bhari gyi iske karan.

Akhir me hero ne apna mission successfully complete kar liya h.

An dekhna ye h ki system ke new update ka behaviour kaisa rhta h hero ke sath but kuch bhi ho system bhi uske bhale ke liye hi karta h sab kuch. Or ye shop ke price badhane ka kya seen h bhai??

Or bhai ye ladki kon h Jo jungle me thi??

bhai slogan ka past janker bada hee dukh laga bhai swati us ke sath to galat ho gya bhai

Kishor se badla to babta tha slogan ka

Awesome and beautiful update bhai

Awesome Updateee

Kishore aur uss dhongi baba ne bahot galat kiya Sanjeev ke saath. Agar Kishore Swati ka haath nhi chorta toh shayad Slogan ka kabhi janam hi nhi hota aur naahi Kaera ki jaan ko itna khatra hota aur naahi woh ek kaidi ki zindagi jeeti.

Idher Slogan ka ant hua aur saath hi Pari bhi ab upgrade hogyi saath bahot saare naye function bhi unlock hogaye.

Udher woh ladki kaun thi. Jo andhere mein lupt hogyi. Dekhte hai ab aage kya hota hai Famiglia Arc mein jo Family se related hai.

दर्दनाक अतीत दर्दनाक मौत
स्लोगन समाप्त
वीर में अभी भी भावनायें शेष हैं
बढ़िया रहा यह अपडेट

Slogan yah sirf ek naam nhi hai yah ek majboor baap or pati ka paida kiya hua darinda hai Jo apni beti or patni ko na bcha saka pr use paida karne me jitna dosh sanjeev ka tha usse koi hjar guna dosh Kishor ka tha... Slogan ka past dekh kr sach me anshu aa gye Bhai pr isme us Mali ka kya hath tha Jise sanjeev ne mar diya or yhi se sanjeev ke villan banne ki suruvat hoti hai pr Jaisa bhi tha takkar ka dushman tha bhai... Jaha se dushmani ki suruvat hui thi Vahi se khatm hui pr kya sach me ye dushmani khatm ho gyi Ya ye to suruvat lagti hai jo hua abhi...
Vo us mountain pr khadi ladki Kon thi kya vo villan logis ki serni me aayegi Ya heroin logis ki... Akhir itni raat ko vha kya kar rhi thi Vo Janna chahta hai forum...
Veer ka system update Ho gya, mission accomplished Ho gya or sath hi Bahut si skills bhi upgreat Ho gyi hai, pari ne ye kyo kaha
It's been quite a bit time... Master!!!?
Kya Iska mtlb ham ye nikale ki jo pichhle Upgread se pahle pari ka behavior tha Vo vapas aa gya hai ya kuchh aur...
Awesome update bhai superb mind blowing jabarjast with amazing writing skills bhai...

Yeah! Vo sadhu ya kahe dhongi baba ka kaam slogan ne tmam kiya tha past me or yha Bahut hi Kamal ke dhairya ka parichay dekr likha hai aapne... Isme koi do ray nahi hai...
Slogan ke sath ek ladki thi jab veer ka pahli baar samna hua tha usse vo kyA Ab aayegi 'chain of command' me kahi ye jungle vali Vahi ladki to nhi... Hamne to kafi bareeki se pdha hai ab Dekhte hai iska sambandh kaise fit karte ho past se ya kahe veer ke past se...
Superb Werewolf bhaya

Iska ek alternative yah bhi ho sakta hai ki veer suhana, kaera or karan ko Slogan ka past btaye pr Kishor ne kya kiya tha yah bhi... Jisse ho sakta hai unko slogan ke dwara kiye gye Har kaam ka reason samajhne me asani hogi... Mera to yhi manna hai kyo Werewolf bhaya

Superb mindblowing update sir g

प्रणाम भाई साहब....
हर इंसान अच्छा होता हैं बस कभी कभी उस के हालात उसे बुरा बना देते हैं.....
भावुक अपडेट.....

Slogan did not die ... he will be back ...

waise ... after all this hard dry work, Veer deserves some soft wet work in bed ...

Shandaar update

Fan bana diya aapane ....keep it up

Really mind blowing update

Zabardast shandaar fantastic update

Bro sach main kishor ne galat kiya or mujhe slogan keliye bura lag raha hai bhale hi wo jesa bhi par apni beti keliye ek pyaar karne wala jimmedar pita bhi tha

Ab samaj aaya ki ki slogan kishor ko kese janta hai

Baki bohot shaandar update tha

Bro kya veer apni dono maa or dono behno ke sath sex karega ya nahi

Superb Update Bro...
Waiting for Next

Fantastic update

awesome update hai Werewolf bhai,
Behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,

Awesome update brother

Mast update tha bhai
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Amazing update bro...

Shaandaar update kaafi dard bhara jeevan the salogan ka. ab veer kya kishore se badla lega aur wo ladki kya swati ki aatma thi?

Superb update Bhai

Werewolf Bhai Meray pass words nhi hain his say main express kar Sako itna amazing update hay ye. Masterpiece mind blowing. Kash main animator hota to apki story to animate kar sakta it's simply fantabulous. Kamal LIKHA hay Bhai amazing.

Zabardast update

Uttam Lekhni ka Prayog Werewolf bhai...Waiting for Next Update Eagerly...

Nice update

very very nice update

Awesome update bro

NICE UPDATE BHAI

Fantastic update kishor bahut ghatiya kisam k insan he....veer finally killed slogan but suspense ye hai ki wo ladki kon thi jo gayab ho gayi swati ki atma...

Bahn ka loda kishor bosdika machar ki jhant londu saaala tatto ka shuadagar. Iski ma ki chut madarchod haramjaada. Slogan was right yarr. Koi bhi hota bo slogan ke raste par hi jata.

Nice update

Wonderful update......

Beautiful writing....

You are surpassing yourself update by update.

Awesome update bro

मस्त अपडेट भाई

क्या स्लोगन सचमुच मार गया है??? मुझे तो नहीं लगता.

Latki in thi ye abhi bqi hy

Enough is enough man....ek hi to dil h bro kitni baar jeetoge...
Amazing update man.. Hats off

Too Emotional To Read..

Slogan : -
Kya Galti thi uski.. jo uski beti ko usse chheen liya gaya, Kitna Khush tha wo apne jeewan me.. Ek din sab kuch khatm ho gaya..
Biwi na rahi , bachhi na rahi.. kya bcha uski jindgi me.. kiski liye wo ye sb kr rha tha.. toot gaya ek dm se Sanjeev.. aur fir jab insaan toot jata hai na sab kuch khone par tab use sirf wahi dikhta hai jo iska kashurbar ho.

Khud ke liye insan itna sab kuch karta hai.. aakhir kare bhi kyu na par dusro ke liye uske apne apne hote hain.

Kishor ne sahi kiya ?? Agar Kishor ke najriye se dekhenge to, Ha bilkul usne sahi kiya qki wo sirf ek ko hi bacha sakta tha.. usne apni beti ko bachana thik samjha.. wahi agar Sanjeev ke najriye se dekho to uski to duniya hi swati thi.. aur bhala jab samne duniya ujde to fir jism me jaan kanha bachti hai.

andhvishwasi hona is jeewan ki sabse bdi durghatna hai. par kya ye kahna sahi h ??
baba ne kaha use khud ko khush rakhkar deal karna hoga grahako ko wo bhi bina chinta ke. ye to jeewan ki sachhai hai. to is hisab se baba ki koi galti nahi.. beshaq wo dhongi hi kyu na ho usne sanjeev ko sahi raah dikhai... par par agar us din wo busy nahi hota to sb kuch esa nahi hota jo hua... jis kaaran se sanjeev ki najro me wo villain ban gaya.. aur uska anjam uski maut.

Insan Bura ya Bhala janm se nahi hota, uske haalat uski majburi use achha ya bura bnati hain.

slogan ka past dekh kar veer ko satya ka pata to lag chuka hai. par ab aage kya veer is satya ke bad khud ko bekasur ki hatya ke arop se mukt kr payega. Jaise last time aatish ka sch samne aaya wese hi aaj Slogan ka bhi satya samne aaya. dono ki hi majburiya thi is raah ko chunne ki..

Wo kahte hain na har bada aadmi mehnat ke sath bada bna ho ye jaruri nahi. unhi me se ek hai Kishor. ab tak ki kahani ke hisab se.. uske sochne ka tariqa ek selfish insan ke jaisa hai.. jo ki normal hai . har koi sirf apna bhala chahta hai.. apno ka bhala chahta hai chahe uske badle use parayo ki jaan bhi leni pade.. jo kishor ne lee hain.. abhi sirf kuch batein hi samne aayi hain. is sb se to yahi lagta hai..

About writer : -

Well.. You have a great mind, emotion, feel.. ek dam realistik feel aa jati hai jab kahani ko padti hu me.. Har ek line ke sath puri kahani aankho ke samne ek video ki tarah play ho jati hai.. esa kar pana hi ek writer ke liye kafi kathin hota hai.. par apke dwara likhi gayi is kahani me mujhe bilkul bhi dekh kar nhi lgta ap ko jyada kathinai hoti hogi is tarah ki kahani likhne me.. qki apke lekhni bahut hi saral samjhne yogya aur real life se judi hui hai.. Har ek bat ko bade dhyan se likha gaya hai taaki agar uska knhi aage connection mile to esa na lage wo bat pahle jo likhi gyi wo alag thi aur aaj alag.. jaise aaj ke update me hua.. Maali ki hatya wala scene... pahle hm use kishor ke najriye se dekh chuke hain aur aaj hmne slogan ke najriye se use dekha... kishor ke najriye wala schene turant dimag me ban gya ise padkar.. yahi kabiliyat mujhe apke lekhni ki prasansa krne ke liye majbur kar di aaj..

From My Side : -

Aap isi tarah apni lekhni ke dwara sabhi ka manoranjan karte rahe is bat ki kaamna karti hu.
you are a gem. ap jaise writer bahut hi rare hote hain.. we are glad ki aap is forum par apna keemti samay dekar kahani likh rahe hain. sabhi readers aur forum staff apka abhari rahega.

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Super fantastic update
tareef ke liye aur sabd nahin hai mere pass

Nice update sir g.
Awesome

What a wonderful update bro agle update ka intezar rahenga

Super duper dhamakedar gaand phaad update bhai

Fantastic

It was an emotional update....

I thik is story ka agla villain Kishore hoga

yar sach kaho to slogan ka past jaan kr kafi dukh hoa boht hi sad or emotional story thi kher kr bhi kia sakte hain

wese slogan or atish bhao ki kahani same to same thi farq sirf itna tha k atish k maa k 7 rape HOA tha or slogan k 7 dhoka

is liye slogan kaira k peche para HOA tha ,
lakin ek baat abhi bhi khtak rahi H k swati k marne ki khabar kishore ne sudha ko q btayi, kahi kishore to nahi tha qatel sudha ka
wese to sab kuch clear kr dia tum ne lakin jo dil mai aya wo bol dia

anyway veer ka system upgrade ho gia or us ko point bhi mil gay

lakin ye larki kon thi kahi ye pari to nahi thi?
let's see what happened

NYC update

Superb update

Bhai jannnn bohot hi badiya update
शानदार जबरदस्त लाजवाब
Aag laga di apne to
Par slogan ka past padke bohot dukh huva par ohh ladki kon thi bhai sab
Age dekhte हे
Fir se एक bar apne halla Macha diyaaaa

Nice update

Bingo
Matlab veer ko jo awaj ati thi usne human form le liya h ya aur kuch tha matlb veer ko ye realise huva ki har criminal ke piche ek wajah hoti h criminal banne ki ab kabhi aise toh ni hoga ki veer ab jinhone bure kaam kiya h unko unke kiye ki saja de.......
Taki phir koyi acha insaan criminal na bane badle ke liye......
Mission pura huva par sanjeev ki story soon dhuk bi huva....

Mast update diya...@werewolf

mujhe aadhe update mein ye laga tha ki swati...su hogi...lekin aapne wo chance bane hi nahi diya...

अप्रतिम update भई....
अबे हमरी कलेज़वा ही बाहर निकल गया था बे.... ई बाला update पढ़ने के बाद हम तो टोटले हैंग होई गए थे ...
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साला ई स्लोगणबा की कहानी तो बहुते इमोशनल था, उसकी बेटी के साथ जो हुआ, और फिर उसकी मेहरारू का फांसी लगा लेना, वाकई बहुते बुरा हुआ था ई बुडबक स्लोगणबा के साथ,
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ई सब मे किशोरबा भी बहुते माधरचोद आदमी निकला, साला तनिक भी कोशिश करता त दुन्हु के बचिया सही सलामत रहती...
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बहिन्चोद , तौ हम ई बाबा - साबा पर विश्वाश नही करते है, साला तनिक पैसा कमाने के लिए हस्ते खेलते परिवार को बर्बाद कर दिया,...
पक्का भोसडीबाला बाबा होगा उ ।
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खैर अब वीर के जिंदगी से ई स्लोगन नाम का तोता तो हमेशा के लिए उड़ गया, अब आगे देखते है क्या होता है ।
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Baaki update Ekdam shandar,, jaandaar,, zabardast,, mindblowing,, super,, duper,, hit,,, thi.....

Haalat ek seedhe saadhe Sanjeev aur Aashu ko kaise Slogan aur Aatish bana dete hai pata hi nahi chalta. Magar ye bhi sach hai ki poori galti Kishor ki bhi nahi thi magar usne poori koshish nahi ki do bachchiyon ko bachane ki. Aakhir mein wo ladki jo dikhayi di thi wo Swati to nahi thi jo kisi tarah se bach gayi ho us hadse mein. Bahut hi shandaar update.

Bohut sunder lajawab shandar wasay main nay kaha nahi thaa kay Slogan tuu suruwat hay abhi bohut buray durenday baki hay or un main say aak hay Kisore Kaerna kaa baap hahahaha let see kya huta hay khoob

Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai Werewolf bhai....
Nice and beautiful update.....

Wo jo ladki pahaad par khadi thi pakka slogan ki beti shweta hogi jo kisi tarah bach gayi hogi aur ab baap ki maut ke baare me jaankar veer se ladne aayegi.

Outstanding stuff Werewolf bro! Simply amazing... Pichhle teen updates joki Slogan Arc ke antim teen updates bhi the, apne aap mein ek alag hi level ke the... Firstly, jis prakaar se sabhi scenes ko explain kiya gaya, be it the fight with the Assassin or the emotional past of Sanjeev aka Slogan, or the masterplan of Veer through which he finally killed Slogan...

Ek baar firse ye saabit ho gaya ke har criminal ki ek back story hoti hi hai... Afterall koyi bhi by birth criminal nahi hota, either uski parvarish ya fir uski life ke dark experiences use wo ban ne par force kar dete hain jo shayad wo kabhi khud bhi nahi soch paata... Aatish ki kahani apne aap mein hi is baat ki pushti karti thi... Aur ab Slogan.. Slogan ki kahani satya mein behad hi emotional aur dil ko jhakjhor dene waali thi... Afterall, usne to apna sab kuchh hi kho diya tha, aur jab Insaan ke paas khone ko kuchh naa ho to uska aisa ban jaana kaafi obvious sa ho jaata hai... Shayad agar Sudha jeevit rehti tab bhi wo sambhal gaya hota, aur maybe tab Sanjeev Slogan naa bana hota... Ant mein Veer ki aankhon mein bhi aansun aa hi gaye uski kahani dekhne ke baad...

Kishore... The new synonym of Bastardism, haan shayad ek nazariye se jo Kishor ne kiya wo sahi thehraya jaa sakta hai... Wo kewal ek hi ko bacha sakta tha,aur isiliye usne apni beti ko bachana choose kiya but faayeda? Kya faayeda hua Kaera ke Zinda rakhne ka? Afterall, ek tarah se use bhi maar hi chuka hai Kishor... Bina emotions ka insaan zinda hota hai? I don't think so... Iske baad Sudha ko is ghatna ke baare mein inform karne ka kya matlab tha Kishore ka? Jab wo uski beti ko bacha nahi paaya to use kya hakk ki wo iski jaankari Sudha ko de... Yadi wo Swati ko bacha leta tab nischit hi wo ek dum Chaudhary ki tarah phone karke shekhi baghaar sakta tha but... Jo bhi ho Kishore ke sar do logon ki maut hai, directly ya indirectly wahi kaaran hai Sudha aur Swati ki maut ka aur Sanjeev ke Slogan ban ne ka... Let's see ke Kishore ko uske karmon ki saza kaun aur kis prakaar dega... Par fir bhi yadi Kishore thodi koshish karta to dono ladkiyon ko bacha sakta tha... Saath hi ek baar fir andh vishwas ke bure parinaamon ki ek jhalak hame dekhne ko mili... Btw. Kahin Sudha ki maut murder to nahi thi ...

Khair, Slogan ka past dekhne ke baad uske baare mein zyada kuchh baat karne ka ab mann nahi hai warna kaafi gaaliyan dene waala tha main use...Ab dekhte hain Balhaar aur Veer ki next mulakaat mein kya hota hai...

So, Slogan ke ant ke saath kuchh raaz aur mysteries par se parda bhi uth gaya to wahin kuchh naye sawaal khade ho gaye... Ek nazar un sab par daalna banta hi hai...

1.) Slogan ko Veer ke baare mein jo vyakti information de raha tha/rahi thi (Jab Kaera ki gaadi blast huyi thi) & jiss vyakti ke baare mein sochkar pichhle update mein Slogan ne kaha “Nahi - Nahi wo nahi ho sakta”, dono praani ek hi hain and I guess wo Raman hi hoga (Guruji ka chela). Also, I think wahi agla villain hoga story ka (maybe house of killers arc mein).

2.) Saath hi I think ke Raman (Ya fir agar koyi aur ho vo vyakti).. wo Veer par shayad kaafi samay se nigaah rakhe huye hai. Afterall, itni sateek information kaise rehti thi use Veer ki movements ki? Aur ek samay to aisa bhi laga tha ke us vyakti ko Pari ki existence ka bhi pata hai. Definitely, next villain, ek baar firse bahut se raaz apne saath liye hoga.

3.) Btw. ye bhi pata chala ke Guruji ko Slogan maar chuka hai, means ek kameene ke karmon ka hisaab ho hi chuka hai.


4.) Kaafi awaited moment tha ye mere liye is story ka, Pari (or System) reaching the Level 6. Har baar level badhne ke saath hi Pari ka behaviour ya kahun ke attitude badla tha, in other words Veer ke alpha male ban ne ki hi tarah Pari bhi Alpha Female ban gayi thi. And I thought ke shayad is baar Pari aur bhi adhik bossy ho jayegi but as a pleasant surprise...

Old & Cuteness filled Pari is back!!!!

Now, I think ke Pari ke behavioural change ke pichhe definitely koyi bada reason hai. Ye to param satya hai ke Pari & System sada Veer ke bhale ke liye hi har kaam karte hain. So, let's see ke iska kya kaaran tha aur kab wo kaaran pata chalega.

5.) Slogan ke khaatme ke saath hi Veer ko 3,000 points mil gaye hain, and saath hi main shayad ek random skill bhi mil gayi hogi. Mission ke info ke saath mention tha jahaan tak mujhe yaad hai.

6.) System layout has been changed... Iski jaankari to Pari hi degi agle update mein. But jahaan tak main samajhta hoon, ye shayad Features ke show hone ke tareeke se hi related hai. Afterall Suman ki favourability 100 ko cross kar gayi hai to maybe use ek naye tareeke se darshaya jaaye. Maybe, some changes in working of Shop, Quest Hunt & all. Btw. Quest Hunt khelne ki keemat bhi badh chuki hai, but Veer ko ab tak addiction ho gaya hai juye ka. I hope Pari is problem ko jaldi sahi karde anyatha points ki wastage badh jaayegi.

7.) Pahaad par khadi wo ladki jiska zikr aakhir ki lines mein hua tha... Most probably wo in dono mein se hi ek thi... Kaera (very less chances) or that Car Girl (Slogan ko jo Uncle bol rahi thi)... Kyonki ye Fantasy story nahi hai, so Aatma (Swati) wagerah ka chakkar to nahi hi hoga... Haan,in case wo yadi tab zinda reh gayi ho to kuchh keh nahi sakte, but is cheez ke hone ke chances utne hi hain jitne Registan mein baadh aane ke... Ab dekhna ye hai ke yadi wo ladki Kaera thi to uspar is ghatna ka kya prabhaav hoga aur yadi wo Car waali ladki thi (most probably wahi honi chahiye) to wo grey shade mein rahegi ya fir she'll be alongside Veer... Ya fir ek naya character Werewolf dada, Kaahe Veer ke L lagwa rahe ho, itni ladkiyon ke beech... (Btw. I also thought fir a moment ke Pari ka human form ho sakti hai wo, but no, Firstly, Pari ka human form hone ke chances kam hi hain aur yadi ho bhi to itni jaldi uski jhalak story mein mil jaaye... I don't think so!)

8.) Slogan ki maut se Suhana ko bhi Laboratory jaane ki zarurat padne waali hai,to investigate about Veer ... Let's see ke jab use pata chalega ke Veer ne Slogan ko bhi tapka diya hai, Aatish ke baad to Suhana aur haan uski friend Divya (yahi naam tha shayad).. dono ka kya reaction hota hai...

9.) Kaera ko jab iski jaankari milegi... Definitely uski favourability mein rise to hona hi hai... Yadi Kaera hi wo pahaad waali ladki thi, jiske chances kam hi hain,tab to use pata chal hi chuka hoga... Anyatha uska reaction dekhna bahut hi exciting rehne waala hai...

10.) At last, Veer ne Beowulf's Blessings ka use kiya hai for more than 30 minutes, iska uski body par kya impact hoga... I don't think ke abhi uski body ise itni time tak sehen karne ke capable hai... No doubt, ke is baar wo injured nahi tha last time ki tarah par fir bhi...

11.) Karan,Raghu aur Jassi joki baahar hi maujood the jungle ke... Haalanki, Karan gaadi mein hi tha jabki wo dono fight mein uljhe huye the... Dekhna hoga ke teeno sahi salaamat hain ya koyi inmein se bhi ghayal ho gaya hai...

I think, sabhi points cover ho hi gaye hain... Shayad kuchh miss hua ho, but mostly itni hi baatein judi hain Slogan Arc ke end se... Let's see ke filhaal chal rahe Familigia Arc mein kya kya hona baaki hai aur upcoming House Of Killers Arc kis prakaar ka hoga...

Nidhi ka matter, jiska solution shayad Veer dhoond chuka hai... Kaafi time se Kahani se gaayab ho chuki Shreya, Pranjal aur Vivek ki aage ki planning aur inke khilaaf Veer ki taiyaari... Aarohi ka us incident ke baad ka reaction aur saath hi Shweta ka thappad kaand ke baad ka reaction, kaafi saari cheezen hain jo aage ke kuchh updates mein romanch ke level ko badhane waali hain...

And of course, Ragini bhi shayad taiyaar hai Kahani mein ek naya dimension laane ke liye (Btw. Ragini ab Incest mein to count nahi hogi naa )... Suman ka bhi 126 favourability ke baad ka thought process dekhna interesting hoga, similarly 90+ ke saath Aabha ke emotions mein bhi ubaal aana nischit hai...

Amazing Work Bro! Jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye wo kam hi hogi... Slogan ka past jis detailing ke saath darshaya gaya (though it can be a boring job to write that part) wo sach much mein prashansaniya hai... Fight scenes, jaisa Aapne kaha hi tha ke aage chalkar aur bhi intense honge, bilkul wahi hua... The fight scene with Matthew (Assassin) was written beautifully... Har update ke saath kahani ka level apne aap mein ooncha uth ta jaa raha hai... The bar is continuously rising and that's what makes this story a special one!

Outstanding Updates Bro & Waiting For Next...

Werewolf bhai amazing stuff.
U r a great writer.

Bhai what a pleasant update! Rogate khade ho gaye kahani ko padte hua!!! Har baar ek mysterious update! Keep updating!!!

Bhai Sach mai yaara Aj ka update dil ko chu jane wale tha ye nhi kahunga maza aayea Or nhi bhi ayea Slogan ka past itna jyada bura tha ki koi Or kya Khud wo bhi apni madad nhi kr skta tha wo bechara to apni biwi Or bachi ko khusyian dena chahta tha apni beti ka pair Sahi krna chahta tha uska future safe krna chahta tha uske liye sab best krna chahta tha par is kamine kishor ne past se ab tk kuch bhi acha nhi kiya pehle jis dost ne usko ek nayi hope di uski beti ko marne ke liye chod diya agar wo chahta to dono Bachyion ko bacha kr future bhi safe kr skta tha ek ek krke upar kheechne se aa jati pr Dono ko ek sath kheechne ki koshish krke khud ko thaka liya or last Mai ek choti c bachi ko jinda maar diya khayi Mai chod kr werewolf Bhai agar possible ho to future Mai koi Esa mission lekar ana ki jaha veer ko kaera karan baki sab jinka kishor gunhegaar hai tha ya hoga Sab ke samne veer se itni bedard mout usko dilwana ki uski rooh tk mout jaldi mange pr mile na or Slogan ne acha hi kiya us dhongi guru ko maar dala

Or wo lady kon thi jo last Mai veer ko Slogan ko marta hua dekh kr chali gayi kya wo kaera thi suhana ya wo lady Doctor??

Bhai super power update maja aa gaya slogan ki death par narm waali feeling ke saath
Aur ye laundiya kon hai jo slogan ki death dekh ke bikal li btao Wolf bhai
Aur haan pari next level
Waiting for next update

dukhbara update tha ye .

sanjeev ki jindagi me aisa kya hua ki wo slogan bann gaya ye aaj pata chal gaya .
kishor ne kuch had tak dhoka kiya sanjeev ke saath jab usne swati ka haath chhod diya us pool par .aur ye khabar sudha ko bhi bata di par kya wakai me sudha ne khudkhushi ki thi .. ya iske pichhe bhi kishor ka haath tha ..

aatish ki tarah slogan ka past bhi dard aur takleef se bhara hua tha .apne beti aur patni ke maut ne usko slogan banne par majbur kar diya ..

guru ji ko maarkar ekdam sahi kaam kiya slogan ne jo logo ko pyar bhari baate sunake unse paise loot raha tha .

par wo guru ka chela raman bach gaya usko nahi maar paya kya slogan ..

aatish ke baad ab slogan ki maut ka bhi dukh hua par unka marna bhi achcha hi tha baaki logo ke liye ..

par ek baat samajh nahi aayi ki kishor ko dekhte hi kaise pehchan gaya guru ..

Top class update bhai..... Lovely hogya....

Fantastic update

Nice update

Bhai past ke anusar slogan urf sanjeev ka badala lena jayez tha....lekin us vakat kisor ka swarthi hona bhi jayez tha.

Wonderdul updates

Bahut awesome update bro

Superb update

Nice update and please keep posting

Nice updates

Just superb update.

Slogan ka chapter to khtm higea ab lgta hai kaera kai baap ka chapter shuru hoga kyuki vi bhi bht sai raaj chupa rha hai or idr maybe swati bhi jinda hai ab dekhte hai kya game chle gi

Some views or theories on Criminals
1. Born Criminals or Criminal Atavism: Cesare Lombroso's theory of anthropological criminology essentially stated that criminality was inherited, and that someone "born criminal" could be identified by physical (congenital) defects, which confirmed a criminal as savage or atavistic. For Slogan it is not true.

2. Situational Criminals: Another theory tells that no one is born criminal. But the situations or environments which a person faces during his childhood or early adulthood makes or forces one to initiate criminal activities and makes him or her a criminal in due course. Slogan may be classified into this category.

3. Samaritan Criminals: Some people may do crime or take law into their hand to help others (e.g. who loot the reach to help poor people). I think Veer is becoming one......
Finally i am saying myself

Zalim update or ab to Kahoga zamila 1 update or de de

Nice update bro

Slogan ka ant uske character ke hisab se kam laga. Uska dar aur karyashaili aatankit karti thi us hisab se ant me minimum chithade udne chahiye the.

Just my thoughts.

Awesome again as always

Kamal update

Waiting for next update

I respect Werewolf bhaya and I admire your comments also ma'am...

Awesome update bro maza aa gaya

Excellent update... Waiting for famiglia arc

Lajwab update bhai

Waiting for next one

Superb update buddy

Keep it up kahin ye ladki Swati to nahi jise mara hua samjha tha Slogan.

I have no words!


Take a bow “werewolf”, to bring a twist this late! Thanks for showing everyone that world is not black and white! I really enjoyed this update!

Zabardast update

Waiting for another exciting update Werewolf bhai...

Awesome update bhai or ye ladki kon thi jo choti pe thi waiting for next update

Update kab ayega bro

Bhai laajawab, dil 6u liya is update ne....!
Somebody is alive...!
Last bt not list kishor....!
Veer's mom...!

Waiting for next update Bhai

Waiting for next update

Bhai next update kab ay ga please jaldi

Waiting bhai

Update Please

Waiting for next update bro

Waiting for your next update

Waiting

Shandaar....Jabardast....Zindabad

aesa laga hai next Update kuch lag saa hoga
I am right writer shaaheb ji ✍

स्लोगन का दर्दनाक अतीत दर्दनाक मौत के साथ कहानी समाप्त लेकिन बहुत सवाल छोडके गया की वो पहाड़ पर घूमने वाली लड़की कौन है ? उसका स्लोगन के संग कोई ताल्लुकत है की नहीं ? बात एक दम सही है जी जब कोई सीधा आदमी दूसरा किसी आदमी के चलते पत्नी और पुत्री बियोग जैसा वार झेलता है तब ऐसा खूंखार आदमी होता ही है। लेकिन किशोर के ऊपर बदला लेने के चक्कर मे बिश्व का एक खूंखार डॉन बन गया था। मुझे पहले लगा था की शायद कोई संबंध रहा होगा वीर के नौनिहाल के तरफ भी लेकिन शायद मैं गलत था। आगे देखते है। एक चीज अच्छा लग की वीर में अभी भी भावनायें शेष हैं, वो पूरा भावना बिहीन नहीं हुआ। कारण शायद है की कांसे कम परिवार के सदस्य कुछ उसके साथ जुड़ा हुआ है। बढ़िया अनुच्छेद है साहब मै अगला अनुच्छेद ७७ के प्रतीक्षा करेंगे क्योंकि लेखक एक स्थान पर उल्लेख किए थे की अनुछेद ७७ बहुत कमाल का होगा। मै बाहर थे, आते ही पहले यह अनुछेद पड़े। आपका बहुत आभार हुमे ऐसा एक भाबुक अनुच्छेद हुमे उफर देने के लिए। धन्यबाद। यह अनुच्छेद हुमे दिखाता है की जो बाहर से दिखता है वही सब कुछ नहीं है। Sub Plot is always there in every Plot.

Nice update bhai
Ab ye ladki kon aa gayi ?

Nice update but bhaut Jada imosonal update Hain superb

Waiting for next one

agreed...
take your time and publish another master piece...

Xforum didn't gave any money to writer's so keep quiet or otherwise leave the story and writer you never take seriously such type of comments which you can demotivated,

And also waiting for updates with love and Support

Werewolf aaj dega

Update 77 has been posted.

 

[Werewolf]

Mein kaafi derr se gif aur ek pic add kar raha tha par hui nahi. Imgbb maintainance ke liye down hai.

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