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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

    Votes: 1,209 83.1%
  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 24 1.6%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 189 13.0%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 33 2.3%

  • Total voters
    1,455

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Update - 51~ Trapped
Ab tak...

*Ding*

[Mission : Rescue Kaera from the hideout.

Rewards : ??? Points.
Mission Failure Penalty : 5000 Points.
Time Limit : 2 Days.]

Aur ye padhte hi uski aankhein felti chali gayi....

'Shiiiitttttt!!!'


Ab aage...

Aaj naye saal ka pehla din tha. Ek shubh din. Sab kuch kitna acche se guzar raha tha. Aaj hamaara parivaar kaafi saalo ke baad idhar hamaari kuldevi ke mandir me darshan karne aaya tha.

Shuruaat se hi mujhe puja paath me utni dilchaspi nahi rahi, par aaj waqai sab ke saath milke samay guzaarne me mera mann khush ho gaya tha. Ye sab ki mujhe kitni zaroorat thi, ye aaj mujhe aur acche se samajh me aane laga tha.

Hum sab abhi yahi the, bas lautne ki hi derr thi. Mein baithi hui soch hi rahi thi ki sab ikhatta hoye aur hum sab laute. Ek acche naye saal ki shuruaat ke baad ek acchi bhali shubh raatri. Par shayad ye hona devi ko manzoor nahi tha.

Jab achanak...

"Dadaaaaa jiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!"

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaa"

Paas me hi maujood upar mandir ki seedhiyo se kuch awaazein aayi.

Jese hi meri nazre uss shor ki orr gayi...

Toh saamne ka nazaara dekh meri rooh kaanp gayi.
Dada jii! Mandir ki seedhiyo se ludhakte hue neeche girte jaa rahe the. Unke peeche unki wheelchair bhi girti hui bas neeche ki orr aati jaa rahi thi. Aur mujhe jo sunaayi de raha tha wo tha shor... Dada jii ki dard bhari cheenkh, Pranjal ka bebasi se chillaana aur uss wheelchar ki girne ki awaaz jo seedhiyo se bas takraati jaa rahi thi.

Tabhi unke peeche se upar mandir se Pranjal ghabraata hua daudta hua neeche aane laga. Saath hi saath mandir me maujood baaki jan bhi. Unke chehro par shikan saaf nazar aa rahi thi mujhe.

Aur hum sab jo mandir ke niche side bhandaare waali jagah par baithe hue the, sab ikhatte uthe aur Dada jii ki taraf daud pade.

Meri choti behan Kavya...

Dada jii ki haalat dekh, unke maathe par khoon saja dekh zorr zorr se bilakhne lagi.

Mein chup chaap peeche khadi hui thi. Kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha kya karu. Par itna zaroor abhaas ho gaya tha mujhe ki...

Meri aankhein bhi namm ho chali thi.

Tau jii aur mere papa, dono hi boht ghabraaye hue lag rahe the. Unn dono ne Dada jii ko uthaaya aur sabse pehle ek jagah acche se unhe litaaya.

Harr taraf afra tafri sii machi hui thi. Kavya ro rahi thi. Tau jii aur Papa Pranjal se sawaalo pe sawaal kar rahe the. Bhumika dii aur Tai jii... Wo bhi chintit nazre liye baato me uljhi hui thi. Vivek bhaiya upar mandir me dekhne gaye the ki Tau jii akhir gire kese!?

Pranjal ka kehna tha ki wo prashaad le raha tha jab achanak hi usne peeche se Dada jii ki cheenkh suni toh woh ghabraate hue daud ke forun hi neeche aaya. Mandir ke pujaari jii ka bhi yahi kehna tha. Wo apne haatho se hi Pranjal ko prashaad de rahe the. Jab achanak hi Dada jii ki wheelchair seedhiyo se neeche chali gayi.

Par ye kese ho sakta tha?

Mein iss sawaal me uljhi hui thi. Akhir Dada jii ki kursi apne aap kese neeche aa gayi!?

Mere mann me bas sawaal hi sawaal ghoom rahe the. Pehle laga ki shayad Pranjal se galti se khisak gayi hogi, par Pranjal toh Pujaari jii ke paas tha. Fir ek pal ke liye mere mann me ye khayaal bhi aaya ki kahi aisa toh nahi ki Dada jii ko kisi ne peeche se dhakka de diya ho? Par fir agle hi pal ye khayaal mere mann se nikal gaya.

Nahi! Aisa kaun karega!? Gaav ke log hume bade hi aadar ke saath kal se rakhe hue the. Hamaari hi seva me lage the. Koi kar hi nahi sakta aisa. Aur kar ke milega bhi kya? Toh bas ab ek hi anumaan baaki tha.

Ki shayad Dada jii ne hi khud galti se chair move kar lii ho aur wo neeche ki orr aa gire. Ye possible tha. Par ye jaan'ne ke liye unka hosh me aana zaroori tha.

Par filhaal...

"Tod dunga... *sniff* Kyu laaye aap sab ye kursi!? Haan!? Mein tod dunga aisi kursi ko. Sab iss kursi ke kaaran. Nahi baithenge aaj se Dada jii ispe..."

Pranjal zorr zorr se rote hue wheelchair ko utha utha ke fek ke patak raha tha. Usne ek wheel bhi ukhaad diya tha wheelchair ka.

Jab Achanak Vivek bhaiya ne aake usse peeche se jakad liya.

"Chorr! Chote... Chote chorr!!! Kya kar raha hai? Paagal ho gaya hai kya!?"

"Chorr do mujhe bhaiya! Sab iss kursi ke kaaran. Na ye hoti na Dada jii girte... *sniff* "

Mein...

Kuch bhi kehne laayak nahi thi. Ekdum maun hi saare nazaare ko dekh rahi thi. Shayad ghabra gayi thi mein. Aisa pehli baar meri aankho ke saamne ho raha tha. Dada jii ki khoon se sani haalat dekh mere jese paav jamm se gaye the.

"Jaldi! Nazdeek me hospital dikha tha na hume aate waqt!? Forun! Papa jii ko car me litao aur chalo forun. Jaldi!"

Tau jii ki awaaz sunn hum sab jese ab rukne laayak sthiti me nahi thi. Gaav waalo ko jaldbaazi me hi vida dekaar hum sab jald se jald nazdeeki hospital pohuche.

Kavya! Mere kandhe par sarr rakh poore time aasu bahaati jaa rahi thi. Meri maa bhi, boht chinta me thi.

Dada jii ko forun hi hospital waalo ne bharti kar liya tha.

Aur hum sab bas unke ward ke baahar hi gumsum se baithe hue the.

Aaj ka itna accha shubh din, jese ek maatam ke din me badal gaya tha. Palak jhapakte kya se kya ho gaya. Bas dua yahi thi, ki Dada jii ko kuch na ho.

Sabse zyaada Dada jii ka attachment Kavya se tha aur...

Haan!

Jese mujhe koi yaad aaya.

Veer!

Kavya aur Veer se hi Dada jii sabse zyaada attached rahe hai. Shayad kuch dino se Pranjal ke prati bhi unka rujhaan badh raha hai.

Veer ke baare sochte hi... Mujhe uska chehra apne mann me nazar aane laga.

Aur wo lamhe...

Wo Diwali ki raat...

Jab Mein Kavya ko scooty par baitha ke unn gundo se bhaag rahi thi. Aur uss raat Veer hume bachaane aaya tha. Jab wo ek chattaan ki tarah saamne khada tha mujhe unn gundo se bachaane ke liye.

Pata nahi kyu, par aaj bhi uss lamhe ko yaad kar, mere raungte khade jaate hai. Wo pal mein kabhi na bhul paungi.

Uske baad se samajh aaya tha mujhe. Ki mein kitni galat thi. Kitne bade andhkaar me jee rahi thi. Bhala mein aisa kese kar sakti thi!? Keval Vivek Bhaiya aur Pranjal ki baato me aakar mein apne uss pyaare bhai ko neglect karti aayi jo bina kuch soche, bina apni jaan ki parvaah kiye ek pal me waha haazir ho gaya tha mujhe bachaane ke liye.

Wahi ye Vivek bhaiya, aur Pranjal. Kehne ko toh mere sage bhai hai. Par inn dono ne uss din mera phone nahi uthaaya tha. Aur mein inki baat maan rahi thi!?

Sach me...

Mujhe khud pe ab hassi bhi aati hai aur ghin bhi. Mein shayad isliye... Veer se nazre nahi mila paati. Badi mushqil se uske aas paas mein khadi reh paati hu. After all, he's too pure.

Aur Veer ke baare me sochte sochte hi mujhe ye bhi khayaal aaya ki...

Dada jii ke baare me usse toh pata hi nahi.

Mene bagal me baithi Kavya ko dekha aur uss se kaha,

"Kavya! Veer ko iss baare me kuch nahi pata hai. Usse bata do."

"Huh!?"

Kavya meri baat sunn ascharya me mujhe dekhi par fir agle hi pal wo haan me sarr hilaayi aur uth ke baahar ki orr chali gayi.

Aur mein yaha yahi soch rahi thi.

'Will he come!?'

***

'Fuck! Keval tumhaare kehne par mein ye risk le raha hu.'

[Wait what!? Mene tumhe force nahi kiya okay!? I only suggested.]

'Haan! I know ki kese suggest kiya tha tumne. Arre Dada jii ke paas baad me chale jaana. Pehle mission pe jao. Uske baare me details lo. Blah blah blah. Kaun tha ye kehne waala!?'

[Wh-!?? Haan toh kya galat kaha!? Hmph! Dada jii ko toh baad me bhi dekhne jaa sakte hai. But Mission ki time limit 2 days ki hi hai. Aur bhulo mat ki mission update hua tha kuch derr pehle hi. Yadi firse hua aur time limit ghat gayi toh!? Fir kya karoge!?]

'Ussi ko dhyaan me rakh ke yaha aaya hu. Even though, mujhe Dada jii ko dekhne ka mann kar raha hai. Na jaane kya hua hai, kis haal me honge wo?'

Raat ke 9 baj rahe the aur Veer aur Pari dono hi yaha anjaan sii jagah par apni hi behas me lage hue the.

Kaaran!?

Kaaran tha ki Veer ka mission already update ho chuka tha aur usse location mil gayi thi ki hideout kaha par hai.

Nikla toh wo Ragini ke liye samaan lene tha. Par bechaara aa pohucha tha wo hideout. Yahi thi Veer ki Zindagi. Naye saal ke pehle din hi, usse aaj aise mod pe laake khada kar diya tha system ne. Ek taraf uske Dada jii toh ek taraf Kaera. Uski zindagi me uthal puthal toh hona hi tha.

Aur kab na jaane kya ho jaaye.

Kherr! Usne phone kar Suman ko bol diya tha ki wo Ragini ke liye samaan le aaye aur Ragini ko jata bhi de ki wo late aaega aaj.

Par sabse bada sawaal abhi uske mann me ye tha ki...

'Wtf is Miss Kaera doing here!? Wo toh Delhi me thi na? Yaha kab aayi? Shit! Kaun hai ye log jo unhe yaha le aaye hai. I can't let anything happen to her.'

[I don't know. Par mujhe kuch galat sa mehsoos ho raha hai. Like kuch waqai bura hone waala hai. So beware~]

'Hmm! Par ye kesi ajeeb sii jagah hai!?'

Usne apni bike ek jagah dur lagai jaha kisi ko asaani se nazar na aaye aur wo sunsaan raaste ko paar kar hideout ki boundary par aaya.

Usne dekha ki andar jaane ke liye side me ek bada sa gate tha jo ki band tha andar se. Aur aisa bhi ho sakta hai ki gate ke andar pehre daar bhi ho.

Par abhi iss waqt usse boundary par lagi jaaliyo se hi andar ka kuch nazaara dikhaayi de raha tha.

Lohe ke bade bade container rakhe hue the alag alag rang ke. Na jaane kya bhara hua tha unme.

'Huh!? Ye Pubg me goergopol waali jagah ki tarah kyu dikhaayi de raha hai mujhe. Khaas kar ki wo lohe ke containers.'

[Shut up! Think ki andar kese jaaoge. Game ke baare me baad me sochna.]

'Oh c'mon! I'm your master! Not you... I dont know tumhari deal kya hai but I have already figured out ki tumhaara behaviour harr level par badal jaata hai.'

[What!? What are you saying!!? It's... It's nothing like...]

'Jhooth nahi bolo. Koi fayda nahi hai. I already know. Harr level par... Your behaviour changes. Warna mujhe aap kehkar pukaarti tum. Aise rudely baat naa karti. Na jaane meri pichle level ki Pari kaha chali gayi. I miss her.'

[Huh!? W-What the hell? Y-You think I'm rude!? Huh!??? :angry: ]

'Of course you are. Aur shut up! Let me think...'

[Y-You... Y-You... :angry++: ]

'Sleep mode me bheju tumhe!?'

[Ehhh!? N-Noo! Ughhh! Dekh lungi... Hmph! :beee:]

'I can hear that.'

[ :eek1: ]

'Just what are these things...!?'

Bauhe sikodte hue wo dheemi chaal chal ke ek boundary ke paas rakhe hue container ke paas aaya aur...

'Check'

[Description : An Iron Container. Contains sedatives and other drugs for smuggling.]

Veer ne uss container ko jese hi check kiya, uski aankhein hairaani ke maare felti chali gayi.

'No wayyyyy! This...!?'

[Drugs... Iska matlab saaf hai. Ye koi gang hai. Andar boht log ho sakte hai. Now I think ki tumhe andar nahi jaana chahiye. It's getting late.]

'Waah! Pehle khud bolti ho ki jaldi se hideout par chalo, aur ab aa gaye toh keh rahi ho ki waapas chalo.'

[That... That's because Mujhe nahi pata tha ki it will be a gang. Look! In simpler terms, hume nahi pata andar kaun hai, uska kya iraada hai, kyu wo Kaera ko laaya hai. Mere khayaal se hume kuch details leke hi andar jaana chaahiye.]

'Nahi! I'm going in. Miss Kaera andar hai.'

[B-But...]

'You won't understand! She's my responsibility. Jab tak wo khud se mujhe mana nahi kar deti, wo meri zimmedaari rahengi. I must help her. Aur kya pata, kaho andar kam log ho aur hum asaani se unhe churra ke baahar le aaye.'

[I-I don't think so...]

'As I said... I'm going in...'

[W-Wait!]

Par Veer na ruka. Shayad uske andar jaane ka kaaran, bheetar maujood Kaera thi.

Veer ko na jaaane kyu, Kaera apni ek zimmedari ki tarah prateet hoti rahi.

Akhir, Kaera ka first time usne uss se chheena tha.
Chheena toh nahi kehenge. Par ye bhi nahi kahenge ki Kaera ne apni marzi se usse diya tha. Akhir wo toh nashe me thi. Bas! Shayad isliye, Veer ko ek sense of responsibility mehsoos hoti thi apne upar.

Andar jaane ke liye, zaahir sii baat thi wo main gate se nahi jaane waala tha. Waha se jaana matlab khud ke perr par kulhaadi maarna.

Poore hideout ki boundary ka chakkar lagaane ki soch jab wo aage badha toh ek jagah usse ek chota gate nazar aaya. Ye hideout ka pichla hissa tha shayad. Aur yaha se keval auto tak ke nikalne jitni jagah thi. Uss se zyaada nahi.

Jese hi Veer uss gate ke nazdeek aaya, usne gate ko halka sa dhakka diya aur...

*Creeeaaaaaaakkkkk*

'Fuckkk! It's open!'

[Shor mat karo....]

'You shut up first...'

[You.... ]

Andar aate hi uske kaano par ek awaaz padi,

"Abe peeche ka gate band kar, aur faaltu ke jo bulb jal rahe hai unhe bhi band kar..."

"Haan! Karta hu..."

Aur ek aadmi gate ki taraf badha.

'Shit~!"

Mauka dekhte hi Veer ek wahi rakhe container ke peeche chhup gaya.

Ye uski kismat thi, jo uss aadmi ne usse nahi dekha tha. Wo aadmi aaya gate band kiya aur andar chal diya.

Andar ek badi sii building type kii thi. Kuch jagah se puraani toh kuch jagah se nayi prateet ho rahi thi.

Khud ko savdhaan kar, Veer ahista ahista logo se bach bach ke jese tese andar tak pohucha.

'1, 2, 4.... 16... 22... Fuckkk! Kitne log hai behanchod! Damn it! Where is she!?? Miss Kaera!?'

[B-Be... Safe...]

'I know! Mein soch raha hu ki bina fight liye hi unhe yaha se churra ke le jau. But I don't think ye utna asaan hai.'

[Asaan hai!? It's almost impossible!]

Jab Veer thoda aur andar tak aaya toh usse jese sabse bada jhatka laga.

Uske perr wahi jamm se gaye the. Muh ekdum khula ka khula, ankhein feli ki feli...

Kyuki saamne...

Kaera ek kursi par baithi hui thi, rassiyo se bandhi, shayad behosh thi woh.

Par...

Uss se bhi zyaada jhatka dene waali baat ye thi ki Kaera ke saamne jo shaks khada tha...

Wo koi aur nahi balki wahi tha. Jis se Veer do baar path cross kiya tha.

Slogan!!!

'N-No wayyyy! H-He... Ye toh wahi hai. It's him!!!! K-Kya naam tha!? Yes!!! Slogan!!!! Wh-What is he doing here!? Iska matlab... He's the one!??? I... I knew it. There was something wrong with him.'

[W-Why!?? Ye sab aur ulajhta jaa raha hai. Listen! Let's go back. Kaera ke bodyguards ko hum inform karte hai. Wo usse search karne me lage honge. We will find tgem aur fir unke saath hum waapas yaha...]

"Chalo baahar bhi aa jao ab!"

Pari ki baat adhoori hi reh gayi jab achanak hi Veer ko apni peeth par ek gun ki nok mehsoos hui aur uske peeche se kahe gaye wo shabd.

'Shit!!!!'

Wo palta aur dekha toh saamne ek hatta katta aadmi maujood tha. Uske haath me ek silver colour ka revolver tha.

Revolver se ishaara kar wo Veer ko baahar laaya aur Veer aur Slogan ki aankhein ek baar fir aapas me takraayi.

Slogan : Swaagat hai! Welcome! Welcome! Mujhe pata tha tum yaha aaoge hi!

'Huh!? How did he..!?'

[Isse kese pata? Is he joking or what!?]

Slogan : Baitho! Baitho!

Slogan ne ishaara kae Veer ko Kaera ke bagal me rakhi chair par baithaaya. Majbooran Veer ko baithna pada.

Par uski nazre ek baaj ki tarah Slogan par hi maujood thi.

Slogan : Zara inka bhi toh swagat karo bhai!

Aur uske itna kehte hi Steve jo revolver liya tha usne apna revolver khosa aur rassiya laake Veer ke haath perr dono baandh diye.

Veer (gusse me) : Kaun ho tum asal me!? Aur ye sab kya hai!?

Slogan (smiles) : Arre bataya toh tha na bacche!? I'm Slogan!

Veer (gusse me) : Don't fuck with me. Mein already internet aur harr jagah search kar chuka hu. Slogan naam ka koi aadmi nahi hai.

Slogan (laughs) : Of course! Of course! Hahaha~ But... Kya tumne underworld me kisi se pucha!?

Veer : Huh!??

Slogan (smiles) : Nahi na!? Toh kese pata chalega!?

[Ugh! Ye aadmi boht creepy hai. What the hell is wrong with his smile!?]

Slogan : Steve!

Steve : Jii Dada!

Slogan (smiles) : Kursi lagao bhai! Aur show shuru kiya jaaye!

*Clap* *Clap*

Aur uske taali bajaate hi achanak hi saari lights band ho gayi. Bas baaki tha, toh Veer aur Kaera ke upar laga hua uss safed L.E.D ka jalna jo hawa me taar se latka hua tha.

Aage kya hone waala tha, Ye toh Veer nahi jaanta tha. Par itna zaroor jaanta tha ki...

Something bad was about to happen.

***

Veer jab Ghar se baahar samaan lene nikla hua tha. Uske kuch derr baad hi uske ghar me ek shaks aaya.

Aur ye koi aur nahi uski chaheeti Nidhi ma'am thi.

Ragini : Arre!? A-Aap yaha!? Itni... Raat gaye!? Aaiye na!

Nidhi : Hmm~

Ragini : J-Jii! Kese aana hua!? Sab theek toh hai na?

Nidhi : Huh!? Ah! Sab... Sab theek hai. Wo... V-Veer kaha hai!?

Ragini : Veer ko toh mene samaan laane ke liye bheja tha. Par... Abhi thodi derr pehle hi uska phone aaya ki wo kisi kaam me busy hai toh aane me late ho jaega.

Nidhi (frowns) : Itni raat gaye wo kis kaam me busy hai!?

Ragini : Ye toh usne mujhe bhi nahi bataaya. Par jab aaega toh zaroor bata dega. Kuch aa gaya hoga usse zaroori kaam...

Nidhi : Aap uski Bhabhi ho... Aur aapko zara bhi chinta nahi ki wo kaha gaya hai itni raat gaye!? Na college jaata hai woh, na koi kaam dhandha, aur na hi uska koi dost hai. Fir kis kaam se gaya hai woh!? Aapne ek baar bhi sochne ka prayaas nahi kiya!?

Nidhi ke ekdum se bole gaye shabdo ko sunn Ragini jese hairat me wahi khadi reh gayi. Aur wo bas stabdh nigaaho se Nidhi ko ghur rahi thi.

Fir jese Nidhi ko bhi dhyaan aaya ki bhala ye kesa ravaiyya dikha diya usne apna Ragini ko. Na jaane kya soch rahi hogi woh uske baare me.

Nidhi : Ah! Wo... Maaf karna... Wo mein... I didn't mean it like...

Ragini : It's! It's okay! Aap aaiye... Baithiye na!

Nidhi : Hmm~

Thoda embarassed feel karte hue Nidhi sofe par baithi toh Ragini ne usse paani serve kia.

Ragini : Ab bataaiye!

Nidhi : Actually! Mujhe Veer se hi milna tha.

Ragini : Koi zaroori kaam!?

Nidhi : Hmm~ Kal jab hum saath me giant wheel...

Ragini : !???

Nidhi : Ahem... Mera matlab hai... Kal jab wo mere saath tha toh usne bataaya tha ki... Wo ab college continue nahi karega. Kal toh mein usse kuch keh na paayi...

Aur Nidhi kyu na keh paayi thi ye baat bhi wo jaanti thi. Akhir Veer uske hontho ke kareeb jo aa gaya tha kal.

Ragini : Usne aisa kaha!?

Nidhi : Hmm~ Aur isliye... Ek teacher hone ke naate ye mera farz hai ki mein apne students ko sahi raah dikhau. Aur Veer toh fir bhi mera favourite student raha hai. Hamaara relationship friends ki tarah bhi raha hai. Toh mein laut rahi thi... Isliye socha Veer se baat kar usse fir se samjhau... Kitna zaroori hai. Career!

Ragini : Aapki baat sahi hai. Wese... Aap kidhar se laut rahi thi? Aapka ghar toh yaha se thoda sa dur hai. Kisi relative ke yaha aayi thi aap!?

Nidhi : Wo...

Aur itna bol Nidhi bauhe sikode ekdum chup ho gayi.

Ragini : Maaf karna. Yadi nahi bataana hai toh koi baat nahi.

Nidhi : ....

Ragini : Par yadi aapki ye college waali baat sahi hai toh. Mein Veer se iss vishay par zaroor baat karungi. Usse samjhaungi.

Nidhi : You must...

Ragini : J-Jii! Bilkul! Ye kya!? Aapne itni patli sweater pehni hui hai!? Baahar kitni thand hai.

Nidhi : No! I'm fine~

Ragini : Aise kese!? Mein abhi aapke liye ek shawl le aati hu. Thand me laut'te waqt kaam aaega. Aur... Aap rukiye abhi chai bana ke laati hu.

Nidhi : Nahi! Iski koi zaroorat nahi.

Ragini : Mene kaha na... Rukiye! Warna Veer mujhe chillaega fir... Kahega ki meri favourite ma'am ko yu hi bina kuch khilaaye pilaaye hi kese jaane de diya!? Haha~

Nidhi (budbudaate hue) : Yadi usse meri baato ki itni parvaah hoti toh unn vaado ko nahi todta woh...

Ragini : Hmm!? Kuch kaha kya aapne!??

Nidhi : N-Nahi! Kuch bhi nahi!

Kuch derr baad dono hi baith ke chai pee rahi thi aur baato me lagi hui thi.

Par Ragini ko kuch mehsoos zaroor ho raha tha.

Usne dekha ki baat baat par kabhi Veer ka zikr aate hi Nidhi jese gum sum sii ho jaati thi toh kabhi kuch aur soch apne khayalaato me doob jaati.

Unki ye mulaqaat zyaada derr tak ki na rahi, kyuki Nidhi waha se bina Veer se mile hi jaa chuki thi.

Aur idhar Ragini bechaari...

Wo iss umeed me thi, ki Veer kuch derr me laut aaega. Par usse kya pata tha, ki Veer toh waha Slogan dwara kab ka uske changul me phass chuka tha.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!

Dhanyavaad!
 
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Werewolf

ʏᴏᴜ ᴍᴀʏ ᴄᴏᴍᴇ ᴛᴏ ʀᴇɢʀᴇᴛ ᴛʀʏɪɴɢ ᴛᴏ ᴍᴀɴɪᴘᴜʟᴀᴛᴇ ᴍᴇ
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Awesome update

Awsmmm update bhai

Supper updates bro

Fantastic mind-blowing update

Nice update brother

Super update hai Bhai

Amazing update bro maza a gya thanks for the update

Nice update...

Shaandaar bhai
penalty
Itna hai ki wo 25 slot khel le
Pata nhi kitna legendary mil jaye
Waise kaera miss ko slogan se bachana hai kyaa

Sala ab slogan veer ki lene kai liye piche pd gea or udr vivek sala apna hero aphi badshah bhi nhi bna or itne lfde …amazing update

Best update

Uttam Lekhni ka Prayog Werewolf bhai...Waiting for Next Update Eagerly...

Shaandar update bhai.

Superb update

nice update..!!
yeh pranjal aur vivek toh bade harami nikle yaar apne hi dada ka accident karwa diya aur shweta ko bhi sabak milna chahiye jo usne kiya hai veer ke sath ab usko bhugatne milega..!! aur pari ka behaviour toh bada change ho gaya hai..aap se ekdam tum par aagayi hai..matlab kuchh toh hai jo veer samajh nahi paa raha hai..!! ab dekhte hai kaise veer kaera ko bachata hai..!!

MIND BLOWING UPDATE BHAI.

Super update

Wah mind-blowing super update
yeh blast Keara ki car hua hai aur Slogan ne hi kidnap Kiya hai

मतलब बेहोश हुई लड़की कायरा थी
इसबार पेनल्टी 5000 पॉइंट्स मतलब मिशन जितनी जरूरी है उतनी ही ख़तरनाक भी प्रंजल अपने प्लान में फ़िलहाल क़ामयाब हो गया है

Ayiyo har baar suspense me kyu chodte ho ji

एक और शानदार अपडेट

अपडेट इतना बड़ा होता है फिर भी कहानी इतनी बेहतरीन है कि लगता है 2-4 पैराग्राफ और होते तो अच्छा रहता। 😁

Dhanya bad batane ke liye parbhu

Superb Update Bro...
Waiting for Next

Nice update

Amazing update...

Superb update

Nice update

Writer bhaiya aap kya thoda sa time km kr de update dene ka 2 din ki jgh 1 din itna axha update aata hai ki mn hi nhi krta jaane ka ek ar ek ar krte rho bs😉

मेरा number चाहिए ?

Nice update bhai

Nice update bro

bhai kya update hai. LAJAWAB:happy::happy:


Awsome update bhai
Ab dekhna ye hoga ki veer kaise khud ko manage karta hai
Ek taraf uske dada aur dusri side kaeara
Let see what happens
Waiting for next update

Super wonderful awesome mind-blowing update
Musibat per musibat

Mast ja rhi story bhai so veer ko kaera ko slogan se or apne dada ji ko pranjal or vivek ke changul se bacha kr unko saza bhi deni hogi ese kamine insaan veer ke dada ke pass khajur kha rhe hai itne buddhe or exp hone ke baad bhi aj tk unko unki double personality nhi dikhayi di pr veer ke upar jhootha ilzam lga to usi time Ghar se bahar Esa Thodi hota hai yrrr ye to cheating hai

Brilliant update bhai

Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai Werewolf bhai...
Nice and beautiful update...

Nice update bro

Ab dekhna pade ga ki vir kiss ke pass jae ga

Inki aisi ki taisi pranjal or Vivek ne milkr Dada ka Accha devi darsan karvaye new year me btao chikni chupdi bato se sabko fuslaya bahlaya or mauka milte hi kaam tmam, raste se hta diya... Kavya ko pranjal pr thoda sak to ho hi gya hai bhale hi thoda sa... Ye slogan dada kiska intjar kr rha hai new year me to dhamaka kar hi diya hai Kon thi vo ladki or kiski car thi vo Jisme dhamaka hua... Yadi kaera ki to uske bodyguard kaha pr hai uski PA kaha gyi or sabse aham sawal kaera headout kaise pahuchi... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast lajvab

Awesome Updateee

Ab toh mujhe bhi shakk hone laga hai ke yeh Pari mein kuch toh garbar hui hai. Kyoki jaise jaise time jaa raha hai Pari ka behaviour change horaha hai woh bhi massive change.

Pehle toh Pari ne bola tha mission fail hone se woh chali jaayegi Veer ki body se. Par ab aisa nhi hota. Veer ko penalty charges lagte hai. Matlab ab itna toh sure hai ke Veer ke marne ke baad hi Pari uske shareer se jaayegi warna nhi.

Idher unndono harami bhaiyon ne apne dada ko hi jaan se maarne ki koshish ki. Koi itna kaise girr sakta hai sirf daulat ki lalach mein.

Idher Kaera ki jaan ko bhi khatra hai ab. Dekhte hai Veer ab kyaa karta hai. Kaise woh Kaera ko bachata hai aur apne Dadaji se milta hai. Mil paata bhi hai yaa nhii.

Superb update

:congrats: For completed 50 update on your story thread.....

Update ki start ko jukaam hua tha(maane bahut slow tha) par fir thik ho gaya.

Lagta hai har level PE pari me bhi level up ho Raha hai

Lajawaab update Werewolf bhai....

Kya veer ko yeh pata nahi chalega ki uske bhai uske hisse ki sampatti usse chinna chahtey hai uske dada ko mar kar...

Mast update hai bhai ab kaera ko kaise bachate hai dekhte hai aage

Ghanghor Beizzati... Ab jeekar kya karega re Veer... Jaa mar jaa aur mukt hoja iss sansaar ke sabhi moh maya ke bandhano se... Ab to teri chahne waali bhi teri naa rahi... Sed Life Bro, sed life...

So, ek naya saal aur naye naye features system dwara Veer ko pradaan kiye gaye... Quest Hunt, Slot & that Translator... Translator to Check – I aur Check – II ki hi biraadri ka praani hai par this Quest Hunt and Slot... These are humungous... Translator ke zariye Veer saamne waale insaan ke dwara kisi bhi bhasha mein boli gayi baat aasani se samajh sakta hai... A good advantage I guess against his opposition team... Quest Hunt ek tarah ka jua hai yaani gambling... Isse khelne ka prize 200 points hai... Arthat agar aapko iss Quest Hunt naamak Casino mein jaana hai to 200 points gate par ticket lene mein lagenge... Andar jaakar aapke kaamyab hone ke chances 15% hain... Kyonki do tarah ke cards milte hain yahaan, legendary aur Veer cards... I mean Trash Cards... So, pehla gamble Veer ka de gaya usse ek Massive, massive reward...

Bone Reaper... Veer ki bones 70% tak hard ho chuki hain aur unki recovery injuries ke waqt 60% faster hogi... Most Importantly His Rib Cage is now almost unbreakable... Rahi baat Slot ki to wo ek khaancha hai jismein in Legendary Cards ko rakhna hoga inko istemaal karne ke liye... Baat karen iss reward yaani Card ki to this is a huge advantage for Veer in context of the next mission joki hai...



Saath hi ye bhi...

So, Kaera the Confused Girl ho chuki hai kidnap... Jo gaadi blast huyi thi Veer ke aas paas hi market mein wo Kaera ki hi thi aur uske behosh hone ke baad Steve & Party usse apne saath le gaye honge... Par iss dauraan ye saale Raghu aur Jaasi kahaan tharkipana kar rahe the... Kyonki lekhak saahab ne jab “Uss Ladki” ke hotel mein New Year Party se baahar nikalne ka scene dikhaya tab kahin nahi likha tha ke uske saath Do aadmi bhi hain... Khair, honge wo kahin aur... Aur shayad unki gair maujoodgi ki khabar Slogan ko pehle hi lag chuki hogi, that's why he said – “Itna bada mauka haath se aaj chooth nahi sakta mere...” Aur Kaera ka Mumbai mein hone ka kaaran shayad Veer hi hai, shayad apne Guruji se baaki ki shiksha lene hi wo yahaan aayi hogi aur ye sab... Jiss Hideout ka zikr Slogan ne kiya tha Steve se wo wahi hai jo Mission Window mein likha hua hai... Lekin ye kya... Mission Failure Penalty – 5000 points... Kya baat Werewolf bhai... Ju to mujhe keh rahe the ke Main Protagonist ki gend marte dekh kar main khush hota hoon aur jo aap uski lene par tule ho, uska kya :hinthint:...

Idhar Chhota aur Bada kameena yaani Kameene Brothers lag chuke hain apne hi Dada ko swarg pahunchane ke karyakram mein... Pranjal ne Apne Dada ko seedhiyon se dhakka to nahi diya par nischit hi ye dono bhaiyon ka koyi plan hi hoga jiske chalte wo bechara buzurg aadmi seedhiyon se gir pada... Ab wo manushya hospital mein hai... Iss ghatna ke do reasons ho sakte hain – Pehla, Manorath ko tapkakar uski Property hadap karna... But ye waala pehlu shayad utna aasaan nahi... Kyonki dono bhai saari property akele hadapna chahte hain to wo Manorath ke marne par shayad possible na ho kyonki fir shayad legally ek baraabar bantwara ho jaayega... Maybe iss kaand ke peechhe ye soch hogi ke Veer apne ko ghar se nikaale jaane ke gusse mein apne Dada ko hospital mein milne bhi naa aaye aur iss baat ka jhatka Manorath ko lage ke jiss pote ke liye wo Jaaydad ka bantwaara roke huye hain wo unki khair khabar bhi lene nahi aaya... Aur iss mental chot aur physical injury ke chalte wo in kameeno ke mann ki muraad poori hi karde... Khair, kya Reason hai wo to jald hi pata padd jaayega tab tak :dazed:...

Aur ye jo doosra reason maine bataya ye possible bhi ho sakta hai kyonki Veer ko iss waqt Kaera ko bachana hai aur agar wo naa bacha paaya to penalty bharne mein uski zindagi nikal jaayegi aur Kaera ke saath kya hoga wo alag... Iss kaaran shayad wo apne Dada ke paas jaa hi naa paaye aur ye cheez maybe Kavya aur Aarohi par bhi asar daale aur kahin unki favourability bhi neeche ki taraf naa chali jaaye... Bahut saari possibilities hain jismein se kya hoga ye bahut rochak hai...

Bhumika – Shweta... Inki alag hi planning chal rahi hai... Ab tak maine jitna in dono ka character jaana hai, I have reached a conclusion that Shweta is a selfish woman to an extent but more than that she is a “Mother”... Yess wo ek Maa hai jo har haalat mein apni beti ka future secure karna chahti hai, baaki chahe iske liye usse kisi ke saath galat hi kyun naa karna pade... Wo shayad doubtful hai iss baat ko leke ke Agar unhe apna hissa naa mila to uski beti ka kya hoga... Kyonki Brijesh jab apne sage bete ka naa hua to Sauteli Beti ka kya hi hoga!! Rahi baat Bhumika ki to She's a complete Mamma's Little Girl... Uske liye apni Maa ki kahi har baat sachaayi ka aayena hai... Patthar ki lakeer hai jise har haal mein wo maanti hi hai... Ismein shayad uski galti kam hi hai kyonki jo kuchh use bachpan se Shweta ne sikhaaya hoga, jiss saanche mein usse dhaala hoga, wo waisi hi ban gayi... Par Shweta sab kuchh jaanti thi... Vivek – Pranjal ke plan ke baare mein jiske tehat un dono ne Veer ka desh nikaala karwaya tha... Aur wo Chup rahi, Ek tarah se unke plan mein shamil hi ho gayi... Par kya wo aage jo bhi hoga uske baare mein jaanti hai... In kameene brothers ki planning jo Manorath ki laash par ban rahi hai, kya ye aurat uss baare mein jaanti hai... Agar haan then she never ever deserves any kind of exemption from the Punishment... Agar nahi to ab tak wo bahut si aesi harkatein kar chuki hai jinki maafi usse asani se nahi milegi :nope:...

Khair, ab Last but not the least, ya Kahun ke The most important point yaani ke Pari... Ab mujhe lag raha hai ke jaise jaise System ka level badhta hai to Pari mein changes aate hain... Something like a staircase method... Matlab jaise jaise System grow karega Pari ka Attitude Complex hota jaayega... In a sense, Pari ko pehle ek Alpha Female ki tarah maan sakte hain jo Level 5 par pahunchkar ek Sigma ban gayi hai... Jahaan pehle wo thoda Master... Master bolkar buttering kiya karti thi ab wo Tu tadaak par itar aayi hai... Iss Pari ke baare mein andaza lagaana abhi possible nahi hai, par in future kuchh aur baatein disclose hon iske baare mein tab shayad kuchh clarity aaye... Par Pari jab Veer ko mili thi, in the Hospital when system got activated, tab usne kaha tha ke Mission Failure = Losing The System... But ab wo cheez badalkar Penalty Points par aa gayi hai... Definitely Penalty agar lagti hai to wo bahut badi hai but definitely that's not bigger than losing the system... Arthat Pari ne uss samay jhooth kaha tha?? Veer ko daraane ke liye?? Kya System Veer ka saath uske Baadshah ban ne tak kisi bhi haalat mein nahi chhodne waala?? Sawaal wahi but jawaab nahi!!

Khair, ab dekhna ye hai ke Veer kya Manorath se milne jaa paayega?? Agar haan, to uski badli apperance ka sabpar kya asar padega?? Aur Vivek/Pranjal ka kya reaction hoga?? Agar nahi to iss nahi ke consequences kya honge! Aur Kaera usse Veer kaise bachaayega Slogan Dada ki kaid se... Aur agar bachaayega to uss sabke beech kya koyi nayi museebat janam le legi. Iss baar System Level 5 par hai to nischit hi Kaera aur Slogan ko dekh kar *Check* bolna bekaar nahi jaayega... Waiting eagerly to see Kaera's Status...

So, ek bahut important update laga mujhe ye iss story ke context mein... Kyonki Kameene Brothers ne issi mein apni planning ko anjaam dena aarambh kiya hai aur wahin Slogan aur Kaera ke beech ki tension ek naya roop le chuki hai... Wahin Pari ka badla behaviour aur Naye Naye features Level 5 ke kaaran... Bahut kuchh tha iss update mein...

Vivek – Pranjal ka Bastardism, Slogan Dada ki villainousness, Pari ki weirdness, Kaera ke saath huyi tragedy aur at last Veer ke liye naye Challenges... Kuchh gifts bhi mile Veer ko but nayi problems bhi saath mein aayi... Bahut hi khubsoorti ke saath sab kuchh describe kiya Werewolf saahab aapne... Har ek scene ko bilkul jeevant kar diya... Khubsurat Varnan ek dum jeevant Chitran ke saath... Hat's Off Brother...

Outstanding Update Bhai & Waiting For Next...

Just up-to awesome bro

Fantastic... Fan...Fucking..Tastic

Bahut hi sandar update hai bhai

ab veer kaera ko rescue karega ya dadaji ki dekhbhal karega
pranjal ne kya soch ke ye behuda ganda khel rach diya
lagata hai ye uske uper hi ulta padane wala hai

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Superb update

मुझे कुछ कुछ अंदाजा हो रहा था कि प्रांजल और विवेक अपने दादाजी के साथ कुछ ऐसा ही करने वाले हैं ।
अगर दादाजी चल बसे तो उनके जिम्मे जो भी प्रोपर्टी है वो सभी परिवार के लोगों में बांट दी जायेगी बशर्ते उन्होंने कोई वसियत नहीं किया हो ।
और अगर बच जाते हैं तो प्रांजल और विवेक के इस घटिया प्लानिंग को असफल कहा जायेगा । मुर्खतापूर्ण कहा जायेगा ।

पर एक और भी चीज हो सकता है । बेहोशी के आलम में पड़े दादाजी का सिग्नेचर वो दोनों भाई अपने वकील द्वारा बनाए गए वसियत पर करा सकते हैं । यदि दादाजी की मृत्यु हो जाती है तो फिर उनकी सिग्नेचर की हुई यह वसियत उनकी अंतिम वसियत मानी जायेगी और पुरी सम्पत्ति पर उन भाइयों का एकाधिकार हो जायेगा ।

इसके अलावा उनके पास कोई विकल्प नहीं बचता था । दादाजी की मृत्यु और उनके अंगूठे का छाप या सिग्नेचर उनके मन माफिक वसियत पर होने से ही उनकी प्लानिंग सक्सेस होती ।

सबसे दुखद बात है कि श्वेता भी उन दोनों भाईयों के साजिश में शामिल है । मतलब वह भी दादाजी के कत्ल के साजिश में उन दोनों भाईयों का साथ दे रही है । और इसके लिए उसने अपनी एकलौती बेटी को भी विश्वास में नहीं लिया । यह औरत नेगेटिव किरदार में उभर कर सामने आ रही है ।
लेकिन यह बात उसकी बेटी भुमिका के लिए नहीं कह सकते । मुझे विश्वास है यदि उसे इनकी प्लानिंग के बारे में पता होता तो वह इंकार कर देती ।

इधर काइरा को आखिर किडनैप कर ही लिया गया है । इस बार स्लोगन अपने मिशन में कामयाब हो ही गया । पर यह पता नहीं है कि वो बार बार काइरा के पीछे क्यों पड़ा है ! धन दौलत का मसला है या कोई पुरानी दुश्मनी !

एक वक्त में ही वीर को दो जगहों पर अपना ध्यान केन्द्रित करना है । दादाजी का एक्सिडेंट और काइरा को स्लोगन के कब्जे से मुक्त कराना । बड़ी ही धर्म संकट में पड़ने वाला है वो । देखते हैं कैसे इस संकट से वो पार पाता है !

सच कहूं तो डेथ किंग ने बड़ी बारीकी से इस अपडेट का पोस्टमार्टम किया है । हर चीज के उपर बिल्कुल परफेक्ट आकलन किया है उन्होंने । इससे बेहतर समीक्षा हो ही नहीं सकता ।

और जहां तक मेरी बात है । मैं रोज न तो कहानी पढ़ पाता और न ही रोज रिभियू ही लिख सकता ! थोड़ा बहुत उन कहानियों पर जरूर करने की कोशिश करता हूं जहां रीडर्स ज्यादा नहीं है जबकि उनकी कहानियां भी अव्वल दर्जे की होती है । और आप की स्टोरी इस फोरम की सफलतम स्टोरी में से एक है । सबूत रीडर्स की संख्या और उनके कमेन्टस हैं ।
आप अपनी कहानी पर अपडेट्स देते रहिए । मैं शुरू से ही आप के साथ हूं और आगे भी रहूंगा ।

यह अपडेट भी बहुत बढ़िया था ।
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग एंड जगमग जगमग ।

★ Fabulous Mind Blowing Updated... 😍🔥

★ Ye blast to slogan ne krvaya tha..

★ Aur jis ladki ki car me ye blast hua ye koi aur nhi kaera hi thi..

★ Aur dadaji ko dhaka dene wala koi aur nhi vivek hi tha jo whai chuppa tha..

★ dono bhai ne aisa kya soch ke dhakka diya ye to pta nhi..

★ Kya isse inko jameen mil jyegi... Agar Veer ko pta chala ki uske Dada ji ko dhakka uke bhaiyo ne hi diya hai to Veer dono ka kya krega..

★ Veer Ka kya dono buri khabar ek sath usko mili..

★ Kya wo dadaji ke paas jyega ya Keara ke paas jyega..

★ Mission me 2 din diye hai to usse phele wo apne dadaji ko dekh skta hai fir apna mission pura kar skta hai..

★ Kya iss missin me Slogan Veer Ke liye kuch khatra ban skta hai Qki Slogan ko ab Veer ke baare me bhut kuch pta hai..

★ Veer ko in sab ki kuch khabar nhi hai ki Slogan ab uske piche lag chukka hai..


★ Dekhte hai aage samaye ke garabh me aur kya 2 likha hai... 🤭



★ Waiting for next update... 🙏

Jabardast update dost

Zabardast update

Nice update Bhai...

To ye chal thi vivek aur pranjal ki, dadaji ka accident karwaane ka taaki wo apni maarne ki soch kar jaldi se vasiyaat bata de. Ab veer dadaji ke paas jayega ya kaera ko bachayega. Tough call.

𝙼𝚒𝚗𝚍𝚋𝚕𝚘𝚠𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚞𝚙𝚍𝚊𝚝𝚎 𝚋𝚑𝚊𝚒 🖤🖤🖤
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𝙰𝚋 𝚟𝚎𝚎𝚛 𝚔𝚎 𝚕𝚒𝚏𝚎 𝚖𝚎 𝚏𝚞𝚕𝚕 2 𝚊𝚌𝚝𝚒𝚘𝚗 𝚜𝚌𝚎𝚗𝚎 𝚊𝚊𝚗𝚎 𝚕𝚊𝚐𝚊 𝚑𝚊𝚒

Mind blowing update... Now the story goes in hide and chase! Now time for action

Jabardast update

Superb fantastic update waiting for next update

Mind blowing update 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌

Shandar update bro

Shandar update bro


Amazing start to the story🤩...

Will definitely be fun to read🙌

FANTASTIC UPDATE


Suspence suspence let's see what will happen next

Superb update

:smartm::pepenice::pepenice::tease3:Nice update

Awesome update bhai keep posting

Nice super se

Brother waiting Plz update

Nice update bro

SUPER SE BHI UPER HAI UPDATE 50:respekt:

Super awsm update to gud finally some action time.
waiting for the next update plz do cont asap Takecare

Wahhhhh jabrdast mindblowing superbbb speechless update.......
waiting for next update.......

𝚑𝚊𝚖𝚎𝚜𝚑𝚊 𝚔𝚒 𝚝𝚊𝚛𝚊𝚑 𝚑𝚒 1 𝚍𝚊𝚖 𝚏𝚊𝚍𝚞 𝚞𝚙𝚍𝚊𝚝𝚎 😁

Next update kab

Waiting for next update Werewolf bhai

Aaj koi chances hai next update ke ?

Nixe update bhaii maza aya giea par kar ab new update ka intazar ha bhaiii wating new update

Waiting for next one

Super se upar

What an update!

200 points invest kerke card bada zaberdast mil gaya VEER ko jiski na use or na hi Pari ko ummed thi
Pranjal ka plan kamyab ho gaya aakhir usne apni ghinoni harkat ker hi di
Slogan n yeh blast karake kia Kaera ko kidnap kerna tha ya koyi or chaal
Ab VEER kidher jaye apne dada k paas ya mission poora kare jisme naa poora hone per 5000 points lost honge ager aisa hota h tow VEER n jaha se shuruwat ki thi wahi pahoch jayega
Baherhal dekhte h kia hota h aage
Badhiya shaandaar update bhai

Bhai aap bahut jayda Bollywood movie dekhate ho aisa lagta hai... Real life me aisa kuch nahi hota hai... सम्पत्ति का वसीयत ke har ek page par signature karna padta hai... Jo ki kam se kam 7 ya 9 page se upar he hota hai hai aur sath me 2 ya 3 guaranter bhi hota hai... Aur uske baad register office bhi Jana Hota Hai... Tab ja ke final वसीयत milta hai... Isme kam se kam 10 din lagta hai...
Uske baad fir mutation of land bhi karwana padta hai...
Kul mila ke ma bahan ek ho jata hai... First hand experience hai mujhe😁😁😁..
Filmi wale ka reality se ko lena dena nahi hota... 😅😅😅🙏🙏🙏

Amazing story brother 🔥...

Finished all previous updates in 2 days😬...

Really love the concept and style of the story 🤩...

Keep posting 🙌...

#786

keep Going

Guru Ji

Super se upar


Desperately waiting for next update..

Waiting for next update bhai

जैसा आपने कहा कि मैं फिल्म बहुत देखता हूं , वो एक समय में था । 60 - 70 दशक की फिल्मों का ही शौकिन हूं । अब न तो वैसे एक्टर हैं और न ही गानें । और न ही डायरेक्टर के पास कोई स्टोरी । पुरानी फिल्मों की स्टोरी और गानों पर बस रिमेक बन रहा है । हां , कुछ अपवाद जरूर है ।

मुझे नहीं पता कि वसियत के मामले में आप के साथ क्या हुआ था पर मैं इतना तो जरूर जानता हूं कि वसियत एक मृत व्यक्ति की अंतिम इच्छा होती है ।

आप ने जो कहा वो सब , कोई प्रोपर्टी के खरीद बेच पर लागू होता है । म्यूटेशन , रजिस्ट्री , प्रोपर्टी का टेक्स वगैरह किसी प्रोपर्टी के खरीद बिक्री पर लागू होता है ।

वसियत में इन चीजों की जरूरत नहीं होती । भारतीय उत्तराधिकार अधिनियम की धारा ३ में इसके बारे में विवरण दिया गया है । वसियत करने के लिए स्टाम्प तक की जरूरत नहीं होती । बस , दो गवाह की मौजूदगी अवश्य है ।

एक सौ साल का बंदा कहां से यह सब कर सकता है जो आपने कहा ! उसे यदि लगता है कि अब वो मरने वाला है तो वो किसी वकील और दो गवाह को बुलाकर अपना आखिरी ख्वाहिश एक दस्तावेज के रूप में बनवाता है ।
वसियत भले ही कई बार बनाए वो लेकिन अंतिम बार संशोधित हुआ ही मान्य होता है । और इसके लिए किसी कोर्ट कचहरी की जरूरत नहीं होती है वसियतनामा लिखने वाले के लिए ।
जिस व्यक्ति को वसियत में उतराधिकारी बनाया गया है और वो उस वसियत से संतुष्ट नहीं हैं तो वो कोर्ट कचहरी का दरवाजा खटखटाते हैं ।

और मेरे भाई ! फिल्मों में भी ऐसी सेंसेटिव चीजें गलत नहीं दिखाई जाती । डायरेक्टर और राइटर्स बहुत ज्यादा ज्ञानी होते हैं हम जैसे आम इंसान से ।

Bhai I am eagerly waiting for next update.next update kab tak aayega date batado. Pls,.........

Waiting for update,?


कितने time ayega update

Aj update milega kya sir g

Update 12 ke baad hi aayga :notme:


Aaj update ka din he..


Aaj update aaye ga bhai..

Agar dadaji ko marne ka plan to nahi hoga...shayad etna hone ke bavjood veer nahi aya ye bolke vivek aur pranjal..dada jo ki bhadaka de aur jaydad ka batwara uske bina karne ko kahe....
Hone ko toh kuch bhi hoga woh toh bhai hi jane.
Waiting for next update bro


Bhai Aaj update aaega bhi ya ni itna to bta do

Abey Yaar Kya tagda story hai. Mai sala isko fantasy story soch kar hath nahi lagata tha. Aur abhi Padhna start kiya to ye ek Baad ek shocked de raha hai. Koi itna achha kaise likh sakta hai Yaar. Mujh jaise silent ko bolne par majboor kar diya. Bass itna kahunga it's unbelievable.. :10:

Desperately waiting

Ok intazar rahega update ka




BBehad hi shanadar or jabardast update.
Bahut khoob superb.

Ek or bawal....

Hi bro
This is very good project an you are doing great , making good suspens in storyline
But you are taking too much time to post new parts this is braking link of what we read in last part it's killing the big picture thrill of reader
And i think my of readers forgetting middle part of story and it's details
If you try to recall the full story we only remember only big thing of story not all details that your described
That means you are wasting your time on great project thats worthy of getting remember an get Goosebumps but taking longer time making it short episodes,its not making it big picture
If you're getting what I'm trying to say
Don't us wait any more

Waiting update bro

Waiting for next update...

Ye sab to theek hai. Bro kabhi time pe bhi update de diya karo. Har baar yahi hota hai

Waiting update bro

Pyaar mein aur story ke updates me koi umeed nahi rakhna kisi se

99% aayega.


koi umeed hy update ki ya nhi
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Update - 51~ Trapped
Ab tak...

*Ding*

[Mission : Rescue Kaera from the hideout.

Rewards : ??? Points.
Mission Failure Penalty : 5000 Points.
Time Limit : 2 Days.]

Aur ye padhte hi uski aankhein felti chali gayi....

'Shiiiitttttt!!!'


Ab aage...

Aaj naye saal ka pehla din tha. Ek shubh din. Sab kuch kitna acche se guzar raha tha. Aaj hamaara parivaar kaafi saalo ke baad idhar hamaari kuldevi ke mandir me darshan karne aaya tha.

Shuruaat se hi mujhe puja paath me utni dilchaspi nahi rahi, par aaj waqai sab ke saath milke samay guzaarne me mera mann khush ho gaya tha. Ye sab ki mujhe kitni zaroorat thi, ye aaj mujhe aur acche se samajh me aane laga tha.

Hum sab abhi yahi the, bas lautne ki hi derr thi. Mein baithi hui soch hi rahi thi ki sab ikhatta hoye aur hum sab laute. Ek acche naye saal ki shuruaat ke baad ek acchi bhali shubh raatri. Par shayad ye hona devi ko manzoor nahi tha.

Jab achanak...

"Dadaaaaa jiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!"

"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaa"

Paas me hi maujood upar mandir ki seedhiyo se kuch awaazein aayi.

Jese hi meri nazre uss shor ki orr gayi...

Toh saamne ka nazaara dekh meri rooh kaanp gayi.
Dada jii! Mandir ki seedhiyo se ludhakte hue neeche girte jaa rahe the. Unke peeche unki wheelchair bhi girti hui bas neeche ki orr aati jaa rahi thi. Aur mujhe jo sunaayi de raha tha wo tha shor... Dada jii ki dard bhari cheenkh, Pranjal ka bebasi se chillaana aur uss wheelchar ki girne ki awaaz jo seedhiyo se bas takraati jaa rahi thi.

Tabhi unke peeche se upar mandir se Pranjal ghabraata hua daudta hua neeche aane laga. Saath hi saath mandir me maujood baaki jan bhi. Unke chehro par shikan saaf nazar aa rahi thi mujhe.

Aur hum sab jo mandir ke niche side bhandaare waali jagah par baithe hue the, sab ikhatte uthe aur Dada jii ki taraf daud pade.

Meri choti behan Kavya...

Dada jii ki haalat dekh, unke maathe par khoon saja dekh zorr zorr se bilakhne lagi.

Mein chup chaap peeche khadi hui thi. Kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha kya karu. Par itna zaroor abhaas ho gaya tha mujhe ki...

Meri aankhein bhi namm ho chali thi.

Tau jii aur mere papa, dono hi boht ghabraaye hue lag rahe the. Unn dono ne Dada jii ko uthaaya aur sabse pehle ek jagah acche se unhe litaaya.

Harr taraf afra tafri sii machi hui thi. Kavya ro rahi thi. Tau jii aur Papa Pranjal se sawaalo pe sawaal kar rahe the. Bhumika dii aur Tai jii... Wo bhi chintit nazre liye baato me uljhi hui thi. Vivek bhaiya upar mandir me dekhne gaye the ki Tau jii akhir gire kese!?

Pranjal ka kehna tha ki wo prashaad le raha tha jab achanak hi usne peeche se Dada jii ki cheenkh suni toh woh ghabraate hue daud ke forun hi neeche aaya. Mandir ke pujaari jii ka bhi yahi kehna tha. Wo apne haatho se hi Pranjal ko prashaad de rahe the. Jab achanak hi Dada jii ki wheelchair seedhiyo se neeche chali gayi.

Par ye kese ho sakta tha?

Mein iss sawaal me uljhi hui thi. Akhir Dada jii ki kursi apne aap kese neeche aa gayi!?

Mere mann me bas sawaal hi sawaal ghoom rahe the. Pehle laga ki shayad Pranjal se galti se khisak gayi hogi, par Pranjal toh Pujaari jii ke paas tha. Fir ek pal ke liye mere mann me ye khayaal bhi aaya ki kahi aisa toh nahi ki Dada jii ko kisi ne peeche se dhakka de diya ho? Par fir agle hi pal ye khayaal mere mann se nikal gaya.

Nahi! Aisa kaun karega!? Gaav ke log hume bade hi aadar ke saath kal se rakhe hue the. Hamaari hi seva me lage the. Koi kar hi nahi sakta aisa. Aur kar ke milega bhi kya? Toh bas ab ek hi anumaan baaki tha.

Ki shayad Dada jii ne hi khud galti se chair move kar lii ho aur wo neeche ki orr aa gire. Ye possible tha. Par ye jaan'ne ke liye unka hosh me aana zaroori tha.

Par filhaal...

"Tod dunga... *sniff* Kyu laaye aap sab ye kursi!? Haan!? Mein tod dunga aisi kursi ko. Sab iss kursi ke kaaran. Nahi baithenge aaj se Dada jii ispe..."

Pranjal zorr zorr se rote hue wheelchair ko utha utha ke fek ke patak raha tha. Usne ek wheel bhi ukhaad diya tha wheelchair ka.

Jab Achanak Vivek bhaiya ne aake usse peeche se jakad liya.

"Chorr! Chote... Chote chorr!!! Kya kar raha hai? Paagal ho gaya hai kya!?"

"Chorr do mujhe bhaiya! Sab iss kursi ke kaaran. Na ye hoti na Dada jii girte... *sniff* "

Mein...

Kuch bhi kehne laayak nahi thi. Ekdum maun hi saare nazaare ko dekh rahi thi. Shayad ghabra gayi thi mein. Aisa pehli baar meri aankho ke saamne ho raha tha. Dada jii ki khoon se sani haalat dekh mere jese paav jamm se gaye the.

"Jaldi! Nazdeek me hospital dikha tha na hume aate waqt!? Forun! Papa jii ko car me litao aur chalo forun. Jaldi!"

Tau jii ki awaaz sunn hum sab jese ab rukne laayak sthiti me nahi thi. Gaav waalo ko jaldbaazi me hi vida dekaar hum sab jald se jald nazdeeki hospital pohuche.

Kavya! Mere kandhe par sarr rakh poore time aasu bahaati jaa rahi thi. Meri maa bhi, boht chinta me thi.

Dada jii ko forun hi hospital waalo ne bharti kar liya tha.

Aur hum sab bas unke ward ke baahar hi gumsum se baithe hue the.

Aaj ka itna accha shubh din, jese ek maatam ke din me badal gaya tha. Palak jhapakte kya se kya ho gaya. Bas dua yahi thi, ki Dada jii ko kuch na ho.

Sabse zyaada Dada jii ka attachment Kavya se tha aur...

Haan!

Jese mujhe koi yaad aaya.

Veer!

Kavya aur Veer se hi Dada jii sabse zyaada attached rahe hai. Shayad kuch dino se Pranjal ke prati bhi unka rujhaan badh raha hai.

Veer ke baare sochte hi... Mujhe uska chehra apne mann me nazar aane laga.

Aur wo lamhe...

Wo Diwali ki raat...

Jab Mein Kavya ko scooty par baitha ke unn gundo se bhaag rahi thi. Aur uss raat Veer hume bachaane aaya tha. Jab wo ek chattaan ki tarah saamne khada tha mujhe unn gundo se bachaane ke liye.

Pata nahi kyu, par aaj bhi uss lamhe ko yaad kar, mere raungte khade jaate hai. Wo pal mein kabhi na bhul paungi.

Uske baad se samajh aaya tha mujhe. Ki mein kitni galat thi. Kitne bade andhkaar me jee rahi thi. Bhala mein aisa kese kar sakti thi!? Keval Vivek Bhaiya aur Pranjal ki baato me aakar mein apne uss pyaare bhai ko neglect karti aayi jo bina kuch soche, bina apni jaan ki parvaah kiye ek pal me waha haazir ho gaya tha mujhe bachaane ke liye.

Wahi ye Vivek bhaiya, aur Pranjal. Kehne ko toh mere sage bhai hai. Par inn dono ne uss din mera phone nahi uthaaya tha. Aur mein inki baat maan rahi thi!?

Sach me...

Mujhe khud pe ab hassi bhi aati hai aur ghin bhi. Mein shayad isliye... Veer se nazre nahi mila paati. Badi mushqil se uske aas paas mein khadi reh paati hu. After all, he's too pure.

Aur Veer ke baare me sochte sochte hi mujhe ye bhi khayaal aaya ki...

Dada jii ke baare me usse toh pata hi nahi.

Mene bagal me baithi Kavya ko dekha aur uss se kaha,

"Kavya! Veer ko iss baare me kuch nahi pata hai. Usse bata do."

"Huh!?"

Kavya meri baat sunn ascharya me mujhe dekhi par fir agle hi pal wo haan me sarr hilaayi aur uth ke baahar ki orr chali gayi.

Aur mein yaha yahi soch rahi thi.

'Will he come!?'

***

'Fuck! Keval tumhaare kehne par mein ye risk le raha hu.'

[Wait what!? Mene tumhe force nahi kiya okay!? I only suggested.]

'Haan! I know ki kese suggest kiya tha tumne. Arre Dada jii ke paas baad me chale jaana. Pehle mission pe jao. Uske baare me details lo. Blah blah blah. Kaun tha ye kehne waala!?'

[Wh-!?? Haan toh kya galat kaha!? Hmph! Dada jii ko toh baad me bhi dekhne jaa sakte hai. But Mission ki time limit 2 days ki hi hai. Aur bhulo mat ki mission update hua tha kuch derr pehle hi. Yadi firse hua aur time limit ghat gayi toh!? Fir kya karoge!?]

'Ussi ko dhyaan me rakh ke yaha aaya hu. Even though, mujhe Dada jii ko dekhne ka mann kar raha hai. Na jaane kya hua hai, kis haal me honge wo?'

Raat ke 9 baj rahe the aur Veer aur Pari dono hi yaha anjaan sii jagah par apni hi behas me lage hue the.

Kaaran!?

Kaaran tha ki Veer ka mission already update ho chuka tha aur usse location mil gayi thi ki hideout kaha par hai.

Nikla toh wo Ragini ke liye samaan lene tha. Par bechaara aa pohucha tha wo hideout. Yahi thi Veer ki Zindagi. Naye saal ke pehle din hi, usse aaj aise mod pe laake khada kar diya tha system ne. Ek taraf uske Dada jii toh ek taraf Kaera. Uski zindagi me uthal puthal toh hona hi tha.

Aur kab na jaane kya ho jaaye.

Kherr! Usne phone kar Suman ko bol diya tha ki wo Ragini ke liye samaan le aaye aur Ragini ko jata bhi de ki wo late aaega aaj.

Par sabse bada sawaal abhi uske mann me ye tha ki...

'Wtf is Miss Kaera doing here!? Wo toh Delhi me thi na? Yaha kab aayi? Shit! Kaun hai ye log jo unhe yaha le aaye hai. I can't let anything happen to her.'

[I don't know. Par mujhe kuch galat sa mehsoos ho raha hai. Like kuch waqai bura hone waala hai. So beware~]

'Hmm! Par ye kesi ajeeb sii jagah hai!?'

Usne apni bike ek jagah dur lagai jaha kisi ko asaani se nazar na aaye aur wo sunsaan raaste ko paar kar hideout ki boundary par aaya.

Usne dekha ki andar jaane ke liye side me ek bada sa gate tha jo ki band tha andar se. Aur aisa bhi ho sakta hai ki gate ke andar pehre daar bhi ho.

Par abhi iss waqt usse boundary par lagi jaaliyo se hi andar ka kuch nazaara dikhaayi de raha tha.

Lohe ke bade bade container rakhe hue the alag alag rang ke. Na jaane kya bhara hua tha unme.

'Huh!? Ye Pubg me goergopol waali jagah ki tarah kyu dikhaayi de raha hai mujhe. Khaas kar ki wo lohe ke containers.'

[Shut up! Think ki andar kese jaaoge. Game ke baare me baad me sochna.]

'Oh c'mon! I'm your master! Not you... I dont know tumhari deal kya hai but I have already figured out ki tumhaara behaviour harr level par badal jaata hai.'

[What!? What are you saying!!? It's... It's nothing like...]

'Jhooth nahi bolo. Koi fayda nahi hai. I already know. Harr level par... Your behaviour changes. Warna mujhe aap kehkar pukaarti tum. Aise rudely baat naa karti. Na jaane meri pichle level ki Pari kaha chali gayi. I miss her.'

[Huh!? W-What the hell? Y-You think I'm rude!? Huh!??? :angry: ]

'Of course you are. Aur shut up! Let me think...'

[Y-You... Y-You... :angry++: ]

'Sleep mode me bheju tumhe!?'

[Ehhh!? N-Noo! Ughhh! Dekh lungi... Hmph! :beee:]

'I can hear that.'

[ :eek1: ]

'Just what are these things...!?'

Bauhe sikodte hue wo dheemi chaal chal ke ek boundary ke paas rakhe hue container ke paas aaya aur...

'Check'

[Description : An Iron Container. Contains sedatives and other drugs for smuggling.]

Veer ne uss container ko jese hi check kiya, uski aankhein hairaani ke maare felti chali gayi.

'No wayyyyy! This...!?'

[Drugs... Iska matlab saaf hai. Ye koi gang hai. Andar boht log ho sakte hai. Now I think ki tumhe andar nahi jaana chahiye. It's getting late.]

'Waah! Pehle khud bolti ho ki jaldi se hideout par chalo, aur ab aa gaye toh keh rahi ho ki waapas chalo.'

[That... That's because Mujhe nahi pata tha ki it will be a gang. Look! In simpler terms, hume nahi pata andar kaun hai, uska kya iraada hai, kyu wo Kaera ko laaya hai. Mere khayaal se hume kuch details leke hi andar jaana chaahiye.]

'Nahi! I'm going in. Miss Kaera andar hai.'

[B-But...]

'You won't understand! She's my responsibility. Jab tak wo khud se mujhe mana nahi kar deti, wo meri zimmedaari rahengi. I must help her. Aur kya pata, kaho andar kam log ho aur hum asaani se unhe churra ke baahar le aaye.'

[I-I don't think so...]

'As I said... I'm going in...'

[W-Wait!]

Par Veer na ruka. Shayad uske andar jaane ka kaaran, bheetar maujood Kaera thi.

Veer ko na jaaane kyu, Kaera apni ek zimmedari ki tarah prateet hoti rahi.

Akhir, Kaera ka first time usne uss se chheena tha.
Chheena toh nahi kehenge. Par ye bhi nahi kahenge ki Kaera ne apni marzi se usse diya tha. Akhir wo toh nashe me thi. Bas! Shayad isliye, Veer ko ek sense of responsibility mehsoos hoti thi apne upar.

Andar jaane ke liye, zaahir sii baat thi wo main gate se nahi jaane waala tha. Waha se jaana matlab khud ke perr par kulhaadi maarna.

Poore hideout ki boundary ka chakkar lagaane ki soch jab wo aage badha toh ek jagah usse ek chota gate nazar aaya. Ye hideout ka pichla hissa tha shayad. Aur yaha se keval auto tak ke nikalne jitni jagah thi. Uss se zyaada nahi.

Jese hi Veer uss gate ke nazdeek aaya, usne gate ko halka sa dhakka diya aur...

*Creeeaaaaaaakkkkk*

'Fuckkk! It's open!'

[Shor mat karo....]

'You shut up first...'

[You.... ]

Andar aate hi uske kaano par ek awaaz padi,

"Abe peeche ka gate band kar, aur faaltu ke jo bulb jal rahe hai unhe bhi band kar..."

"Haan! Karta hu..."

Aur ek aadmi gate ki taraf badha.

'Shit~!"

Mauka dekhte hi Veer ek wahi rakhe container ke peeche chhup gaya.

Ye uski kismat thi, jo uss aadmi ne usse nahi dekha tha. Wo aadmi aaya gate band kiya aur andar chal diya.

Andar ek badi sii building type kii thi. Kuch jagah se puraani toh kuch jagah se nayi prateet ho rahi thi.

Khud ko savdhaan kar, Veer ahista ahista logo se bach bach ke jese tese andar tak pohucha.

'1, 2, 4.... 16... 22... Fuckkk! Kitne log hai behanchod! Damn it! Where is she!?? Miss Kaera!?'

[B-Be... Safe...]

'I know! Mein soch raha hu ki bina fight liye hi unhe yaha se churra ke le jau. But I don't think ye utna asaan hai.'

[Asaan hai!? It's almost impossible!]

Jab Veer thoda aur andar tak aaya toh usse jese sabse bada jhatka laga.

Uske perr wahi jamm se gaye the. Muh ekdum khula ka khula, ankhein feli ki feli...

Kyuki saamne...

Kaera ek kursi par baithi hui thi, rassiyo se bandhi, shayad behosh thi woh.

Par...

Uss se bhi zyaada jhatka dene waali baat ye thi ki Kaera ke saamne jo shaks khada tha...

Wo koi aur nahi balki wahi tha. Jis se Veer do baar path cross kiya tha.

Slogan!!!

'N-No wayyyy! H-He... Ye toh wahi hai. It's him!!!! K-Kya naam tha!? Yes!!! Slogan!!!! Wh-What is he doing here!? Iska matlab... He's the one!??? I... I knew it. There was something wrong with him.'

[W-Why!?? Ye sab aur ulajhta jaa raha hai. Listen! Let's go back. Kaera ke bodyguards ko hum inform karte hai. Wo usse search karne me lage honge. We will find tgem aur fir unke saath hum waapas yaha...]

"Chalo baahar bhi aa jao ab!"

Pari ki baat adhoori hi reh gayi jab achanak hi Veer ko apni peeth par ek gun ki nok mehsoos hui aur uske peeche se kahe gaye wo shabd.

'Shit!!!!'

Wo palta aur dekha toh saamne ek hatta katta aadmi maujood tha. Uske haath me ek silver colour ka revolver tha.

Revolver se ishaara kar wo Veer ko baahar laaya aur Veer aur Slogan ki aankhein ek baar fir aapas me takraayi.

Slogan : Swaagat hai! Welcome! Welcome! Mujhe pata tha tum yaha aaoge hi!

'Huh!? How did her...!?'

[Isse kese pata? Is he joking or what!?]

Slogan : Baitho! Baitho!

Slogan ne ishaara kae Veer ko Kaera ke bagal me rakhi chair par baithaaya. Majbooran Veer ko baithna pada.

Par uski nazre ek baaj ki tarah Slogan par hi maujood thi.

Slogan : Zara inka bhi toh swagat karo bhai!

Aur uske itna kehte hi Steve jo revolver liya tha usne apna revolver khosa aur rassiya laake Veer ke haath perr dono baandh diye.

Veer (gusse me) : Kaun ho tum asal me!? Aur ye sab kya hai!?

Slogan (smiles) : Arre bataya toh tha na bacche!? I'm Slogan!

Veer (gusse me) : Don't fuck with me. Mein already intwrne aur harr jagah search kar chuka hu. Slogan naam ka koi aadmi nahi hai.

Slogan (laughs) : Of course! Of course! Hahaha~ But... Kya tumne underworld me kisi se pucha!?

Veer : Huh!??

Slogan (smiles) : Nahi na!? Toh kese pata chalega!?

[Ugh! Ye aadmi boht creepy hai. What the hell is wrong with his smile!?]

Slogan : Steve!

Steve : Jii Dada!

Slogan (smiles) : Kursi lagao bhai! Aur show shuru kiya jaaye!

*Clap* *Clap*

Aur uske taali bajaate hi achanak hi saari lights band ho gayi. Bas baaki tha, toh Veer aur Kaera ke upar laga hua uss safed L.E.D ka jalna jo hawa me taar se latka hua tha.

Aage kya hone waala tha, Ye toh Veer nahi jaanta tha. Par itna zaroor jaanta tha ki...

Something bad was about to happen.

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Veer jab Ghar se baahar samaane lene nikla hua tha. Uske kuch derr baad hi uske ghar me ek shaks aaya.

Aur ye koi aur nahi uski chaheeti Nidhi ma'am thi.

Ragini : Arre!? A-Aap yaha!? Itni... Raat gaye!? Aaiye na!

Nidhi : Hmm~

Ragini : J-Jii! Kese aana hua!? Sab theek toh hai na?

Nidhi : Huh!? Ah! Sab... Sab theek hai. Wo... V-Veer kaha hai!?

Ragini : Veer ko toh mene samaan laane ke liye bheja tha. Par... Abhi thodi derr pehle hi uska phone aaya ki wo kisi kaam me busy hai toh aanee late ho jaega.

Nidhi (frowns) : Itni raat gaye wo kis kaam me busy hai!?

Ragini : Ye toh usne mujhe bhi nahi bataaya. Par jab aaega toh zaroor bata dega. Kuch aa gaya hoga usse zaroori kaam...

Nidhi : Apa uski Bhabhi ho... Aur aapko zara bhi chinta nahi ki wo kaha gaya hai itni raat gaye!? Na college jaata hai woh, na koi kaam dhandha, aur na hi uska koi dost hai. Fir kis kaam se gaya hai woh!? Aapne ek baar bhi sochne ka prayaas nahi kiya!?

Nidhi ke ekdm se bole gaye shabdo ko sunn Ragini jese hairat me wahi khadi reh gayi. Aur wo bas stabdh nigaaho se Nidhi ko ghur rahi thi.

Fir jese Nidhi ko bhi dhyaan aaya ki bhala ye kesa raviayya dikha diya usne apna Ragini ko. Na jaane kya soch rahi hogi woh uske baare me.

Nidhi : Ah! Wo... Maaf karna... Wo mein... I didn't mean it like...

Ragini : It's! It's okay! Aap aaiye... Baithiye na!

Nidhi : Hmm~

Thoda embarassed feel karte hue Nidhi sofe par baithi toh Ragini ne usse paani serve kia.

Ragini : Ab bataaiye!

Nidhi : Actually! Mujhe Veer se hi milna tha.

Ragini : Koi zaroori kaam!?

Nidhi : Hmm~ Kal jab hum saath me giant wheel...

Ragini : !???

Nidhi : Ahem... Mera matlab hai... Kal jab wo mere saath tha toh usne bataaya tha ki... Wo ab college continue nahi karega. Kal toh mein usse kuch keh na paayi...

Aur Nidhi kyu na keh paayi thi ye baat bhi wo jaanti thi. Akhir Veer uske hontho ke kareeb jo aa gaya tha kal.

Ragini : Usne aisa kaha!?

Nidhi : Hmm~ Aur isliye... Ek teacher hone ke naate ye mera farz hai ki mein apne students ko sahi raah dikhau. Aur Veer toh fir bhi mera favourite student raha hai. Hamaara relationship friends ki tarah bhi raha hai. Toh mein laut rahi thi... Isliye socha Veer se baat kar usse fir se samjhau... Kitna zaroori hai. Career!

Ragini : Aapki baat sahi hai. Wese... Aap kidhar se kaut rahi thi? Aapka ghar toh yaha se thoda sa dur hai. Kisi relative ke yaha aayi thi aap!?

Nidhi : Wo...

Aur itna bol Nidhi bauhe sikode ekdum chup ho gayi.

Ragini : Maaf karna. Yadi nahi bataana hai toh koi baat nahi.

Nidhi : ....

Ragini : Par yadi aapki ye college waali baat sahi hai toh. Mein Veer se iss vishay par zaroor baat karungi. Usse samjhaungi.

Nidhi : You must...

Ragini : J-Jii! Bilkul! Ye kya!? Aapne itni patli sweater pehni hui hai!? Baahar kitni thand hai.

Nidhi : No! I'm fine~

Ragini : Aise kese!? Mein abhi aapke liye ek shawl le aati hu. Thand me laut'te waqt kaam aaega. Aur... Aap rukiye abhi chai bana ke laati hu.

Nidhi : Nahi! Iski koi zaroorat nahi.

Ragini : Mene kaha na... Rukiye! Warna Veer mujhe chillaega fir... Kahega ki meri favourite ma'am ko yu hi bina kuch khilaaye pilaaye hi kese jaane de diya!? Haha~

Nidhi (budbudaate hue) : Yadi usse meri baato ki itni parvaah hoti toh unn vaado ko nahi todta woh...

Ragini : Hmm!? Kuch kaha kya aapne!??

Nidhi : N-Nahi! Kuch bhi nahi!

Kuch derr baad dono hi baith ke chai pee rahi thi aur baato me lagi hui thi.

Par Ragini ko kuch mehsoos zaroor ho raha tha.

Uske dekha ki baat baat par kabhi Veer ka zikr aate hi Nidhi jese gum sum sii ho jaati thi toh kabhi kuch aur soch apne khayalaato me doob jaati.

Unki ye mulaqaat zyaada derr tak ki na rahi, kyuki Nidhi waha se bina Veer se mile hi jaa chuki thi.

Aur idhar Ragini bechaari...

Wo iss umeed me thi, ki Veer kuch derr me laut aaega. Par usse kya pata tha, ki Veer toh waha Slogan dwara kab ka uske changul me phass chuka tha.
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