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Update - 44 ~ Broken Soul
Ab tak...
Veer ke chehre par shikan thi.
Behad hi chinta aur gambheerta bhi.
'Pari! Go to sleep mode!'
[Huh??? Whaaaaattt!??]
'Mene kaha na...! Go to sleep mode! It's an order!'
[Ughhh! Fine!]
*Ding*
[System has entered into the sleep mode.]
Ab aage...
"Arre....!? Ye isse achanak kya ho gaya!? Kaha chala gaya ye!?"
Ye bol the Suhana ke.
Jo iss waqt kamre me maujood thi Sonia aur Veer ke sang, par achanak hi Veer unn dono ke saamne se ye kehke chala gaya ki wo kuch derr me waapas aaega.
Ab wo kaha gaya tha, kis kaam se... !? Ye kuch bhi bata ke nahi gaya.
Sonia : Umm... Shayad neeche tak gaya hai. Yadi usne kaha hai toh jald hi aa jaega.
Suhana : Arre par bata ke toh jaaye. Hmph! Hum dono ko wo kuch zyaada lightly nahi le raha!?
Sonia (smiles) : Yahi baat toh mujhe uski pasand hai. Wo harr ek insaan ko ek matlab... Poora insaan ki tarah hi dekhta hai. Matlab aise nahi ki, koi bada vyakti aaye toh uske saamne uska behaviour alag ho aur koi gareeb vyakti aaye toh uske saamne wo alag behave kare. Harr kisi se wo ek jaisa behave karta hai. That's what I like about him.
Suhana : Umm? Hmm.... You are right. Wait! Tum kab se ye sab notice karne lagi usme!?
Sonia (blushes) : Ehh!?? N-Noooo... Ab wo ham dono hi ek dusre se familiar hai toh ye choti choti baatein obviously dimaag pakad leta hai mera... You know na dii!? I-I'm sharp after all... Ahahaha~
Suhana : Hmmm....
Sonia ne apni sharm ko chhupaane ki koshish kari jisme shayad iss baar wo kaamyaab bhi ho gayi kyuki Suhana ne keval haami bhari aur uski baato ko zyaada deeply nahi socha.
Par sawaal abhi bhi wahi tha...
Akhir Veer unn dono ko bina kuch bataye yu achanak kaha nikal liya!?
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Idhar Veer, hotel me hi upar corridor ke end me window ke paas khada hua tha.
Na jaane kya baatein chal rahi thi uske mann me. Par itna zaroor tha ki wo iss samay kisi chintan me dooba hua tha.
Yaha tak ki usne Pari ko bhi sleep mode me daal diya tha.
'Kuch... Kuch gadbad hai... I should head downstairs.'
Wo mann me soch neeche jaane laga toh neeche se upar aati ek waitress usse dekhe jaa rahi thi aur upar badhti jaa rahi thi.
Veer ko iss baat ka abhaas bhi nahi hua. Ab wo ek average person se bhi thoda zyaada smart jo dikhne laga tha. Na jaane kya hoga jab uska Appearance stat 80 -90 ke upar jaega.
Fir toh shayad Veer ko dekhte hi ladkiyo ki panties me tsunami aa jaengi...
Kherr! Veer uss waitress ki nazro se anibhigya neeche aaya aur hotel ke resting area side hi wo chal diya jaha luxury sofas dale hue the, reception tha aur kaafi saare log idhar se udhar apne kaamo me lage hue the. Aur gaane bhi baj rahe the jisse log bhali bhaati sunn paa rahe the.
Ek sofa pakad wo firse apne chintan me doob gaya. Ye jagah gehre chintan ke liye sahi toh nahi thi. Par Veer khud hi itna apne thoughts me dooba hua tha ki usse koi farq hi nahi pada.
'Pari... Level 4 pe hone ke bawajood Miss Kaera ka status nahi dekh paayi. Wahi dusri taraf... She was able to see... Sonia's and Suhana's status. Iska matlab ek hi baat hai. Miss Kaera ka auhda kuch aur hi hai... Miss Sonia se bhi zyaada... Aur aisi hasti ke saath... Mene wo sab kiya hai. Par iske bawajood unhone ye baat chhipaayi hamaari. Na hi mere khilaaf koi karyavaahi kari... Kyu??'
'Kya wo apni image kharab nahi karwana chaahti isliye? Hmm! Ye ek reason ho sakta hai. Par... Wo mere khilaaf secretly action toh le hi sakti thi... Fir kyu? Kya mein unki nazar me worthless hu? Hmm! Ye bhi ek reason ho sakta hai...'
'Suhana ne ek pal me hi guess kar liya ki wo gunde Aatish ke the. Yaani ki Aatish Miss Kaera aur Miss Sonia dono ke peeche tha. But why!? Wait! Ye dono hi ek dusre se related hai... Aur Aatish ne... First time... Miss Kaera ko club me... Aahhh!!! So that's what it was... He was after Miss Kaera.'
'Par firse wahi sawaal... Kyu!???'
'Aur ye Pari... She's hiding something. Pari ko sleep mode me daalna zaroori tha. Warna abhi mein jo bhi sochta wo usse sunn leti. Atleast Sleep mode me wo mere koi bhi thoughts nahi sunn paegi.'
'Pari ke reactions kabhi kabhi ajeeb hote hai. Akhir kya hai ye system ki paheli!? Mujhe dheere dheere isse suljhaana hoga. Aur usse karne ke liye..
Mujhe Pari ko jitna jald ho sake utni jald level up karna padega.'
Abhi wo apne thoughts me ghum tha jab achank hi uske peeche se ek awaaz aayi,
"Can I have a seat!? If you don't mind!?"
Aur jese hi usne palat ke dekha toh woh stabdh reh gaya.
Uske peeche Kaera khadi hui thi.
Ek modern sii dress me wo itni khubsoorat prateet ho rahi thi ki Veer shabdo me uske saundarya ka varnan nahi kar sakta tha. Aur ye pehli baar nahi tha. Harr baar...
Jitni baar wo usse dekhta, uska muh khula ka khula reh jaata tha. Kaera perfect thi. Harr angle se...
Kahi se bhi aisa mehsoos nahi hota tha usse dekh ke ki iss ladki se ye kaam nahi banta hoga. She was damn perfect.
Ye Veer ke thoughts the Kaera ke prati...
Veer : S-Sure!
Aur Veer ki haami paate hi wo aayi aur uske bagal se baith gayi.
Aur bas...
Agle hi pal poori hotel ka vatavaran badal gaya. Jo log pehle Veer ko dekh tak nahi rahe the, wo sabhi ab usse aur Kaera ko dekh khus pusaane me lage hue the. Ye tha Kaera ki presence ka jaadu...
Jo iss qadar fela hua tha...
Veer ne dekha ki forun hi kayi saare media reporters andar ghus uski photos lene lage par agle hi pal, Kaera ne kisi ko ishaara kiya aur kuch hi moments me sabhi reporters baahar the.
Ye kaam tha uske bodyguard Jassi ka, jo Raghu ke saath thodi dur khada hua tha.
Raghu : Akhir Miss iss ladke me itna interest kyu le rahi hai!? Hmph! Normal sa ladka hi toh hai wo...
Jassi : Abe chutiye! Uss ladke ne unki jaan bachaayi thi aur tune dekha nahi tha kal?
Raghu : Kya?
Jassi : Wo ladka Miss ki bachpan ki dost Miss Sonia ke saath tha. Iska matlab wo Miss Sonia ko jaanta hai. Toh bhala hamari Miss ko jigyaasa toh hoegi hi na...!?
Raghu : Ohhhhhh!
Jassi : Bewakoof rahega tu ekdum...
Raghu : Par Miss ne kal raat... Uska blazer ko liya hmph... Mera blazer bhi toh itna accha hai...
Jassi : Chal hatt be... Tere blazer se kya lena dena unhe... Par iska jawaab mere paas bhi nahi hai.
Raghu : Arrrghhh! Mera sarr phata jaa raha hai soch soch ke.
Jassi : Toh udhar jaa ke phat, idhar nahi...
Inn dono se thodi dur Kaera aur Veer baith apni baato me lage hue the. Aur Veer ne akhir kar himmat kar wo sawal puch hi liya...
Veer : You...
Kaera : Hmm?
Veer : Ahem... Wo... Hamaare beech... First time... I mean... Uss raat jab mein aur aap mile the uss club me...
Kaera : Yeah...!?
Veer : Toh... Uske baad... Hamaare beech wo sab hua tha... Ahem...
Kaera : Hmm?
Veer : I mean... You remember right? W-We... *Cough* We... We had sex...
Kaera : .....
Kaera ka ye baat sunn apne aap muh ekdum expressionless ho gaya.
Aur Veer bechaara thoda seham gaya. Ki kahi usne galat topic toh nahi cherr diya.
'Shit! Is she pissed...!?'
Kaera : I...
Veer : Hmm?
Kaera ne fir wo jawaab diya jiski umeed Veer ko bilkul bhi nahi thi. Usne aisa jawaab toh bilkul bhi expect nahi kiya tha.
Kaera : I don't know... Should I be sad? I don't feel anything...
Veer : Huh!??
Kaera : ...
'Kya kaha isne!??'
Veer : K-Kya kaha? Pardon...!?
Kaera : I said I don't feel anything. Should I be sad? Or happy?
Ye sab kya tha? Veer ke mann me yahi chal raha tha abhi. Ek ladki ne uske kaaran apni virginity khoyi aur sawaal puchne par wo keh rahi hai ki usse kuch feel nahi hua? Usse ye bhi nahi pata ki wo khush hoye ya dukhi iss baat pe? Bhala ye kesa jawaab tha? Ye kesa reaction tha? Ek normal ladki ko toh ab tak uske upar chadh jaana chahiye tha aur uski khatiya khadi kar deni chahiye thi. Par yaha Kaera ne toh...
Jese bilkul hi alag jawaab diya tha. Aisa jawaab, jiski Veer ko katayi umeed nahi thi.
Veer : Wait! You said you don't feel anything!?
Kaera : Yeah...! Tell me... Should I be sad?
'Ye... Kahi ye paagal toh nahi na? No way! Iske jesa dimaag toh mene kisi ladki me nahi dekha hai. She's not mad... But fir whyyyyy? Kyuuu?? What is this reaction?? Fuck! Pari ko bhi mene sleep mode me daala hua hai.'
Veer : Dekhiye... We... Hamaare beech... Wo sab hua... Right? You remember!? Itni badi baat hai ye... Y-You don't feel anything?
Kaera : I don't... That's why... Tell me... Also, what is life? Tumne answer diya tha. But I couldn't understand.
Veer : T-This....
'Akhir chal kya raha hai behanchod ye sab!????? Fucccckkkkk!!!!'
Kaera usse aasha ki nazro se dekh rahi thi. Par jese achanak hi Veer ko kuch abhaas hua aur usse ek zordaar jhatka sa laga. Usne firse sawaal karna shuru kiye.
Veer : Wait! Toh aapka kehna hai... You don't feel anything...
Kaera : Right...
Veer ne unn aankho ko dekha... Jo jheel sii prateet ho rahi thi. Itne sundar wo kaale kaale nain...
Itna manmohak chehra... Wo khule halke geele baal jinhe wo apne maathe ke peeche kare hue thi. Kaano me lagi wo chamakti baaliya... Sab kuch itna aakarshak ki pucho mat.
Maano Veer pal bhar ke liye uski sundarta me doob gaya tha.
Peeche hi ek jaana pehchaana gaana baj raha tha.
Jiski kuch panktiyo ne Veer ko ekdum maun kar diya.
Soche dil ke aisa kaash ho...
Tujhko... ek nazar meri talaash ho...
Jese... Khaab hai aankho me base meri...
Wese... Neendon pe silvate pade teri...
Bheege bheege armaano ki wo hadd hai...
Haaye... Geeli geeli khwaaish bhi toh behad hai...
Mar jaawaa... Mar jaawaa...
Aur ye panktiya... Gaayika ki wo madhur awaaz aur saamne Kaera ke wo kuch bechain se chehre ne jese Veer ko ek pal ke liye wahi baandh ke rakh diya tha. Maano jese wo panktiya Kaera apne muh se kehna chaah rahi thi, aisa mehsoos hua Veer ko.
Unn aankho me kahi na kahi... Veer ko atyant hi dard aur peeda nazar aa rahi thi. Itni zyaada ki Veer ko apni nazre hataani pad gayi.
Ya yu kahe ki uski nazre apne aap hi Kaera ki aankho se alag ho gayi.
'No No No No.... She's not perfect. Not at all. She's... She's broken...'
Usne apni bauhe sikode Kaera ko dekha. Aur uske iss tarah se dekhne par bechaari Kaera bhi confused ho gayi.
Par agle hi pal...
Veer ne uska haath thaama aur usse uthaate hue le jaane laga,
"Come with me..."
"Huh???"
Ye pehli baar tha, jab kisi ladke ne uska haath thaama tha iss prakaar se. Aur usse yu kheech ke le jaa raha tha.
Wo apne haath ko dekhi, jo iss waqt Veer ke unn haatho ki giraft me tha. Uski rookhi rookhi hatheli ki twacha wo apne makhmali narm hatheli me bhali bhaati mehsoos kar paa rahi thi. Aur ek ajeeb sii feeling uske andar jaag rahi thi. Ya yu kahe ki jaagna chaahti thi... Ya jaagne ki koshish kar rahi thi.
Raghu : Oye... Iski toh...
Raghu saamne ka nazaara dekh forun hi badhne ke liye hua par tabhi Jassi ne usse rok diya.
Jassi : Ruko...
Raghu : Ughhh... Jassi chorr... Wo dekh wo ladka... Miss ko kaha le jaa raha hai!? Aur uski himmat kese hui unhe aise chheene kii?
Jassi : Shut up... Miss ne mujhe ishaara kiya abhi. Ki hum unhe follow na kare...
Raghu : Par...
Jassi : Mene kaha na... Aur wo ladka... I think ki hum uspe bharosa kar sakte hai...
Raghu : Kyaaa??? Tum ek anjaan ladke par kese bharosa kar sakte ho?
Jassi : Miss ne uske baare me mujhe details nikaalne kaha tha kal. Saari ki saari... Uska naam Veer hai. Kuch yaad aaya!? Jaha tak mera anumaan hai... Miss ke liye wo khatra nahi hai.
Raghu : Par...
Jassi : Mene kaha na... Hum follow nahi karenge unhe.
Raghu (daat meeste hue) : Fine!!!
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Kaera ko thaame Veer usse ek thodi shaant sii jagah laaya aur uske saamne khada ho gaya.
Usne Kaera ko dekha aur apne dono haath uske kandhe par rakhe aur apna maath uske maathe se laga ke khada ho gaya.
Bechaari Kaera... Uski aankhein phati ki phati thi. Wo bas Veer ko dekhe jaa rahi thi. Poori confused thi wo iss ravaiyye se... Par...
Kehne ke liye koi shabd na nikle uske hontho se.
"I think now I get it..."
Kaera : ??
Veer : You are...
Kaera : ??
Veer : You are broken idiot...
Kaera : Huhhhhh?? *Gasp*
Aise shayad hi kabhi kisi ki himmat hui hogi uss se baat karne ki. Par aaj usse yu iss tarah ek ladka thaame hue bol pe bol sunaaye jaa raha tha.
Aur ye koi aur nahi, uski hi Virginity lene waala insaan tha ~ Veer.
Kaera abhi bhi confused thi...
Par tabhi usse Veer ki aankho se nikalte hue aasu dikhe aur wo aur zyaada confused ho gayi...
Bhala Veer kyu ro raha tha iss waqt...!?
Wo ekdum prashnjanak bhaav se usse dekhe jaa rahi thi. Par Veer toh bas usse hold kiye ro raha tha.
Veer : You are broken... Aur uss se bhi badi dard bhari baat ye hai ki...
Kaera : ??
Veer : ...ki you don't even realize it you idiot...
Kaera : ...??
Aur agle hi pal Veer ne kass ke usse thaam liya aur apni baaho me jakad liya.
Kuch derr tak wo dono hi ek dusre ki baaho me the. Na toh Veer ne usse azaad kiya aur na hi Kaera ki kuch samajh aaya ki ye chal kya raha tha.
Jab Veer ne usse apne se alag kiya toh usne Kaera ki aankho me aankhein daalte hue dekha aur kaha,
"You want to know the meaning of life right? I will tell you... No! In fact, I will teach you... Kya hoti hai zindagi"
Kaera : Y-You will...!?
Veer : I will... I will teach you everything... You are broken right now.... Lonely... Hurt... Depressed... Frustrated... Anxious... Apathetic... Perplexed... Right!?
Kaera : ???
Veer : Aaj pehli baar... Kisi ki madad karne ka itna mann kar raha hai... *smiles* I will make you feel... Everything...
Kaera : ...
Veer aur Kaera jis sthiti me the abhi, yadi uss sthiti me koi unhe dekh leta toh aaj pakka bawaal khada ho jaana tha.
Veer ke paas aate hi Kaera aaj achanak hi itni timid sii ho gayi ki wo bas Veer ke flow ke saath behti sii chali gayi. Aur sabse shocking ye tha ki... Usse zara bhi iska abhaas nahi hua aur na hi bura laga.
Kaera : I...
Par iske pehle wo kuch keh paati Veer ne apne bol rakh diye,
"Ab mujhe jaana hoga. I promised Miss Sonia ki mein jald hi aa jaunga. Aap... You take care. We'll meet again."
Aur bas... Unn baato ko rakh wo waha se nikal gaya. Kaera idhar keval uski jaati hui peeth dekhti rahi.
Wo wahi khadi kabhi apni hatheli ko dekhti toh kabhi apne maathe ko touch karti toh kabhi apne nagn kandho ko...
Jaha jaha usse abhi bhi... Veer ka touch mehsoos ho raha tha.
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Waapas aate hi Veer se kayo sawaal Sonia aur Suhana ne kiye jiska jawaab usne ghuma fira ke de diya. Fir wo seedhe Suhana ke saamne baitha aur kaha,
"I want to talk to you..."
Suhana : Hmm? Haa toh kaho na...
Veer : Wo... Sonia miss bhi yahi hai... It's important...
Suhana : Ohhh!
Suhana : Sonu! Jao... Jaake bath le lo...
Sonia : Okay!!
Sonia jo koi magazine padhne me lagi thi wo agle pal hi uthi aur washroom me chali gayi.
Suhana : Hmm... Ab kaho...
Veer : Aapke teen favours hai na mere pe...!?
Suhana : Right...
Veer : Well... Ek aur badha lijiye...
Suhana : You sure? Pehle hi teen vaade kar chuke hai. Teen favour tumhe chukaane hai. Kahi... Khud ke hi vaado me na fass jao.
Veer : Mujhe pata hai mein kya kar raha hu.
Suhana : Ohhh...!
Veer : Bataiye fir... Will you help me?
Suhana : Fine...! Tumhaare 4 favours ho gaye ab. Bolo... What do you want!?
Usne pucha... Wo bhi jaan'na chaah rahi thi ki akhir Veer itna utawla kis baat ko lekar tha. Aur saath hi wo veer ke secrets bhi jaan'na chaahti thi isliye wo raazi ho gayi. Par Veer ke jawaab ne jese usse poora chaunka ke rakh diya.
Veer : I want to do business.
Suhana : Huhhhh!??
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Veer toh apni Zindagi me tha hi vyast. Aatish ko maarne ke baad usne uss taraf jaan'ne ki koi dilchaspi nahi dikhaayi thi.
Par usse nahi pata tha... Ki usne anjaane me hi sahi par Aatish ko maar ke ek nayi musibat ko apne sarr le liya tha.
Slogan jo iss waqt apni ek pasandeeda rocking chair par baitha hua tha.
Usse saari baatein ab pata lag chuki thi. Usse itna pata chal gaya tha ki Veer naam ke bande ne Aatish ko maara hai, wo wahi Mumbai ka rehne waala hai, ek college student hai, aur uske kuch ghar ke sadasya hai...
Itni baatein wo jaan chuka tha.
Aur abhi wo bas khud ke mann me ek chakravyuh me fassa hua tha.
'Isse baad me dekhunga... Pehle... Mera maqsad... Aatish ki maut ka badla uske baad. Akhir wo mera sabse khaas student tha.'
Wo kehte hai na, buddhimaan log nirnay lene me zyada samay nahi lagaate. Slogan jaanta tha ki usse iss waqt kis cheez ko priority deni hai.
Bhale hi uska dil Aatish ka badla lene ke liye zyaada kar raha tha par wo hamesha dil ki nahi apne dimaag ki sunta tha. Aur isliye wo ab tak zinda tha.
'Boht jald... Mera maqsad poora hoga. Boht jald...'
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Giza Pyramids...
Egypt...
Hamaare bhaarat se kayi koso dur...
Egypt me greater Cairo naamak ek jagah sansaar ki sabse zyaada popular archaeological sites me se ek maani jaati hai.
Kyu? Kyuki yaha The Great Pyramid of Giza jo tha.
Jisse The Great Pyramid of Khufu ke naam se bhi jaana jaata hai. Ye Giza ka sabse puraana aur sabse bada pyramid jo tha.
Yaha bhar bhar ke investigations hoti thi. Aaye din koi na koi archeologists ki team aati aur wo kuch na kuch investigate karti aur apni findings ko public ke saamne ujaagar karti.
Par of course... Iske liye permission leni padti thi.
Aur inhi kuch teams me se ek team aur bhi thi.
Aaj se inhe yaha par investigation karne ka mauka diya gaya tha.
"Let's go... Look it's huge! Right?"
Team me ek angrez lady thi jisne ye vaakya kaha toh team ke sabhi logo me uski baat me haami bhari. Waqai... Pyramid bhavya tha.
Uski greatness waha khade hokar hi bhaapi jaa sakti thi.
Aur issi team me... Ek aurat ek jeans pehne aur ek shirt daale apna luggage liye aage ki orr badhti jaa rahi thi.
"Wowwwwww!!"
Uske bagal se chal rahi ladki ne kaha. Toh uska reaction dekh wo keval muskura dii.
"I can't believe aap yaha pehle bhi aa chuki ho Mom. This is amazing... It's phenomenal."
"Ye toh kuch bhi nahi beta. Andar chalo... You will see some bizarre things."
"Ohhhh! Don't make me curious mom"
Jii Haa~ Ye aurat koi aur nahi balki Bhavana hi thi.
Jo apni beti ke saath yaha aayi hui thi.
Aur ab iss baat ka andaaza lagaana mushqil nahi tha ki Veer ki ye maa kitni qaabil archeologist thi. Jisse yaha par aane ka dusra mauka mila tha.
Apni beti ke chehre par khushi dekh wo behad khush thi. Par jaha wo iss baat se khush thi wahi...
Usse jese kuch yaad aaya aur agle hi pal wo wahi theher gayi.
"Hmm!? Kya hua...!?"
Bhavana : Huh!? K-Kuch nahi... Aao... Andar aao... Sambhal ke... Iske baad hum seedhe andar jaenge... Inside the actual pyramid okay..!? Come!
Wo bolte hue apne chehre ke bhaav ko chhupaate hue aage badh gayi. Par...
Peeche khadi uski beti...
Usse jaata hua dekh rahi thi. Jo utsaah thodi derr pehle tha uske chehre pe wo gaayab ho chuka tha. Aur ek expressionless chehra saamne aa chuka tha.
'Chaahe aap kitna bhi kyu na chhupa lo... Kitna bhi kyu na jhooth bol lo... But I can see through your every action Mom. And I know the truth you are hiding... I already know it... That...
I have a brother as well.'
Apne mann me soch wo fir dheere dheere aage badhi aur Bhavana ke sameep aake uske saath chalne lagi. Uske chehre pe waapas se wahi utsaah aa chuka tha. Jo shayad... Iss baar thoda banaavti tha.
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Dhanyavaad!
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Thok dia dear?
Fantastic update
Waiting for next update
Sleep mode
Majha aa gaya Werewolf bhai update padh ke.
Sabhi main character ka scene tha.
Ab baate Sonia karegi hi veer se. Sonia ko sab janna he veer aur kaera ke bich ka. Yahi ek khaas baat sonia ki lagi mujhe jab veer batata he ki kese wo kaera se mila. Pahele Sonia puchti he kaha bachaya par uske baad usse veer ki chinta hoti he. Ye choti choti details ka bhi aap dhyaan rakhte he. To ek tarah se Sonia ko sab janna chahti he uss samay bhi usse veer ki chinta he.
Suhana wahi veer ko observe karti he. Ye Sonia ko achanak periods kese aa gaye ?? Khair dekhte he aage.
Ye baat aapki best he bhai jab aap naye character introduce karte ho. Koi scene ke sath naya character aata he jisse veer ki image bhi achhi bane uss character me. Ab ye madhuri kab milegi wapis wo dekhte he. Aur wo ladke ko lagta he vikas ki galat definition pata thi. Par yahi kaera ne sab baate Suni aur lagta he impress ho gayi hogi.
Dubara kehta hu bhai ye karea ka character se milta julta character mene ek drama me dekha he.
Ek baar karea ke dil me veer puri tarah beth gaya phir mushkil hoga baki sab ke liye. Kyuki kaera lagta he bahut possessive hone wali he veer ko leke.
Yahi baat me bhi soch hi rakha tha ki karea aur veer ki photo news me na aaye. Aur paper me aa bhi gayi. Sonia ko uski dost wapis chahiye bas. Ab lagta he veer hi kuch karega jisse dono saheli sath aaye. Ese hi Sonia veer aur kaera mile to news walo ki lottery hi samjho. Kya kya chaap denge pata nahi.
Ye Nidhi ko bhi reh reh kar ab sab baate yaad aayegi aur waqt esa aayega jab wo nayi yaade banane ko chahegi veer ke sath. Bas juhi ka dimag chale aur veer ko ek baar papa bol de fir dekho
Excellent update
Awesome update ❤...veer ko Sonia like karti he.keara bhi veer ko pasand karne lagi he kya hoga bichara veer ka
Sonia ke sath kuch krega kya veer jo pari ko Sula diya...........
behad khubsurat lajwab awesome superbbbb speechless update.........
keep posting bhai.........
waiting for next update...........
Lo bhai ker lo bat ye to pori investigation karne k mood me hain ab bhala esi b kia bat ho gayi jo Sonia madam ko 1 pal ka b chain nhi or wahin Suhana b alag khichdi pakaye bethi hai kuch na milne wala usko Veer k matalik k akhir wo kaise Atish ko maar paya
Sonia to poori tarah se sure hai k Kaera Veer ko janti hai
Pochne per Veer ne b 1 healthy reason de diya k wo dono 1 dosre ko kaise jante hain
Ab seedhe seedhe ye to nhi bol sakta ta k un dono ka pehli martaba 20&20 1 dosre k sath howa ta
Match khele kafi din ho ge lakin batting or balling kia hi ghazab hoi ti k wo dono bhoola nhi pai
Suhana envi dimagh laga rhi hai Kaera kyu Veer ki madad karne lagi jb k wo dono 1 dosre ko jante hi nhi te
Ab ye bat shocking ti k Atish Kaera k peeche kyu ta use to Sonia ko uthana ta
Dono behnu ka 1 dosre ko ishara karna kuch to gadbad hai matlab k ye itefaaq nhi ho sakta k Sonia k peeche ane wala aise hi Kaera k peeche ae ga kuch to baat zaror ho gi
Suhana ne foran se guess ker li k wo koi or nhi Atish hi ho ga jis ye bat confirm hoti hai Kaera k liye Atish ka ana Itefaq nhi ta
Mazeed koi bat hoti ider us se pehle Sonia k to period chalu ho ge ab jao pads la k do Suhana ka parakash ko bolne wali bat pe Sonia ka jo reaction ta us pe bohat hansi ai
Finally Veer ko hi behji pads lane
raste me mile do anjan larka larki
Larka kuch chila rha ta or wo larki bechari bs dari sehmi c khari ti pochne pe jo batain us ne batayi to bhala ab middle class family se belong karti us larki ko kaise pta hu gi
Ab isme uska kia kasor ye to khud us larke ko sochna chahiye ta
Khair Veer ne us larki ki help ki or us lawde k baal ko bhagaya uder se
per is doraan Veer is bat se poori tarah anjan ta k Kaera b wahin ti or wo uski sari batain wo sun rhi ti
Veer ko pads ki yad ai to larki ko chalta kia or khud b shop ki or bhaga
ab ider Kaera ko pta nhi kia sojhi k us larki se Veer ka coat mang li
Kahin dill vill to nhi aa gaya
Lo ji saxena ji ki lag gayi ache wali bohat sheyanpati ker rha ta is chaker me apni niya hi dhooba li
Ab Veer ko kia chul hoi jo Pari ko sleeping mode me bejh diya kuch to baat zaror ho gi khair bad me to pta chal hi jai ga
Ab ate hain
Nidhi ji ki taraf
baal bandh rahin ti lakin scene to kuch or hi yad aa gaya
Veer ka unke kareeb hona or uski garam sansain
bat kuch age bharti itne me Juhi baby ne entry mari or unko kheyalu ki dunia se bahir kheench layi school na jane wali bat pe dantne ka sochi hi ti k itne me Veer 1 baar phir un ke kheyal me aa kuda
Veer ki wajah se Juhi baby ko chuti mil gayi school se or wo foran khushi se ulte pau wapis bhagi samne se ati Shareya use utha li
or pochne pe Juhi ne bata diya k use school se chuti ki permission mil gayi Veer mamu ki wajah se or
Mummy ko Veer mamu yad aa rhe hain
ab is bat pe Nidhi ji to pani pani ho gayin or waha se bhagne me hi afiyat jani Nidhi ji to kat li per Shareya chonki zaror k inhe kia howa
Shayad ye uske liye unexpected ta
Khair bohat hi acha update ta sir Kaera or Veer ka convo skip ker diya is update me adhoora sa laga expect to yehi ta k update un dono se hi shiro ho ga per khair koi na intezar rhe ga k un k bech or kia bat hoi
Best of luck for upcoming updates
Keep going
Mind blowing as always
@Werewolf Bhai ji lajawab update he aaj ka or ye Pari ko sleep mode pe kyo bhej diya vo bhi 3 days ke liye
पहला प्यार और पहली सेक्स हमेशा याद रहती है । वीर और काइरा दोनों ही वो रात कभी भुल नहीं सकते जिस रात उनका प्रथम मिलन हुआ था । याद के रूप में वीर की ब्लैजर लेना उसी का नतीजा था । इसके अलावा वो उसके बातों से भी तो बार बार इम्प्रेश होती गई ।
लेकिन माधुरी जैसी गरीब और सीधी सादी लड़की के साथ उसके फ्रेंड ने काफी गलत व्यवहार किया । एक गरीब इंसान को क्या पता कि कपड़े किस ब्रांड के है ! ऊंची सोसाइटी की रहन सहन के बारे में उन्हें क्या पता !
( वैसे होटल में खाने के बाद गर्म पानी के साथ नींबू को मैं भी पीने की पानी समझकर एक बार पी गया था पर उस वक्त मैं सिर्फ सात साल का ही था । यह देखते ही मेरे बड़े भाई ने अच्छी खासी फटकार लगाई थी मुझे । अब , मुझे क्या पता था कि वो हाथ धोने के लिए था)
माधुरी ने भी वही किया जो मैं बचपन में कर चुका हूं । लेकिन उसने जो कुछ किया वो जानकारी के अभाव में किया । इस चीज को लेकर उसके फ्रेंड का भड़कना उचित नहीं था । और जहां तक कपड़े से किसी के हैसियत को परखने की बात है तो वहां भी लोग अकसर धोखे खा जाते हैं । शायद इसी वजह से लोग बेईमानों द्वारा ठग भी लिए जाते हैं ।
लास्ट पैराग्राफ में सस्पेंस तब दिखने को मिला जब वीर ने " परी " को स्लिपिंग मोड में जाने को कहा ।
अब यह तो राइटर साहब ही बता सकते हैं कि वीर ने ऐसा क्यों कहा ! वैसे मुझे लगता है कि इससे परी की लेवल जो अधिकतर जागृत अवस्था में रहने से कमजोर पड़ने लगी थी , मजबूत होने लगेगी । मशीन को भी चंद समय के लिए रेस्ट देने की जरूरत होती है ।
बहुत ही बेहतरीन अपडेट Werewolf bhai.
आउटस्टैंडिंग एंड अमेजिंग ।
Ha ye to h Kaera Mai guhsana to pre ga hi
Apne sound effect wale bhayia ji ke salary barhao wo mann laga ker kaam nahi ker rahe ye Bam ki jo sound di hai takiya darwaze per laga hai ke bomb phata hai kucho samajh nahi aa raha
Wo kehte hai na bhalayi ka zamana he nahi raha.....kisi ko seedhi rah dikhao to wo aage se gaali deta hai.....aisa he kuch veer ke saath huwa..... agar ye purana veer hota to paka aisi situation me ukta react karta.....lekin ab us ke saath Pari thi iss liye veer ne Suhana ko beech me he tok dia....Mere papa mujh se ek baat kehte hai ke.... 'Don't be too honest in this world, Because straight trees are always chosen first for Cutting'
I Think mujhe pata hai ke veer ye job kis ke liye le raha hai.....ye ek bura guess ho sakta hai but phir bhi tukka maarne me kia jata hai....kia veer ye job Nidhi ki behan shreya ke liye job maange ga kia.....look mere paas reason hai iss guess ka kiu ke shreya ne veer se kaha tha ke wo job dhoond rahi hai us ko acha nahi lagta ke wo apni behan per bojh hai.....agar main sahi hu to bata dena kanhi main suspense me mar he na jao agar galat hu to bus ek huh wala reaction dene ka dil nahi torne ka mera
Kisi bhi tarha ka Favour allow hai kia
Ye ap ki baate uff....itna pyaar ke veer khud se zada nidhi ke liye khusiya chahta hai ye he ek pal Lucifer series me aya tha jab Lucifer ne dua ki thi ke Chloe decker ko bacha lia jaye wo scene aur aj ye scene seedhe dil per Lage hai
EK He update me kitni baar dil luto gye zalim.....kuch shikwe shikayat apno se he hote hai iss scene per ek shayari yad ayi
'Gila bhi tujh se bohat hai magar Mohabbat bhi.......wo baat apni jagah hai ye baat apni jagah'
AKHIR jis ka dar tha wo he hone wala hai....veer ki wajha se us ke gharwalo per khatra aa gaya hai.....agar us ki wajha se us ke apno ko kuch huwa to na jane veer iss galani ke bhaw se kaise ubhar sake ga
And Finally like always update kamal ka tha parhne me bohat maza aya lekin 20k wale update ka abhi bhi intezar hai
Allu bhai aap se acha postmartam koi nahi kar sakta kisi bi storie ka.ur the best
Mere Revo Pe Reply...
Commenting after a long time so here is my sum up
1. Nidhi is really confused about her feelings for veer. The way he supported her and that day his touch still gives her goosebumps. Hope so soon nidhi's feeling will be cleared as soon as they return and she will get more lime light.
2. Ragini's character is also very strange. Absolutely his husband did a big mistake but let's see when they resolve that matter. Her feeling for veer sometimes remember me of song kismat ki hawa kabhi garam garam kabhi naram naram as she is caring but have extra affection maybe coz he saved her.
3.kaera- aise dekha jaye to inke bare me kehne ki jarurat h ni kyuki logo ne already bahut kuch keh rakha h
4. Sonia- it's really hard to grow in such competition. Life sucks when each and every moment you have to be compared with someone and specially when she is your best friend. She clearly is not as happy as she seems but a broken one . But clearly she is also a
5. Suhana- complex numbers are not as complex as her character. Seems to be a rich strong bold lady who have many powerful connections and have done many mischievous activities before. Trying to study veer Werewolf bhai be like dil me aata hu samajh me ni
6. Veer- the protagonist of our story, once a bechara now in the path of becoming a baadshah. Clearly he is building his empire with the works he is doing. Also it seems his mother bhavana belonged to a royal family. No mentioning of her since that ring incident. She also had a daughter whose birth was not specified.
7. Werewolf bhai kya hi kehne aapke jabardast lekhni, really wonderful. Keep going and keep entertaining us
Waiting for your next update bro
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Veer kuch pareshan he because he can't read the status of keara.After veer and keara met in hotel room veer somehow understand that keara is lonely,Anxious and broken.Then veer decided to help keara to get rid of her problems.Update - 44 ~ Broken SoulAb tak...
Veer ke chehre par shikan thi.
Behad hi chinta aur gambheerta bhi.
'Pari! Go to sleep mode!'
[Huh??? Whaaaaattt!??]
'Mene kaha na...! Go to sleep mode! It's an order!'
[Ughhh! Fine!]
*Ding*
[System has entered into the sleep mode.]
Ab aage...
"Arre....!? Ye isse achanak kya ho gaya!? Kaha chala gaya ye!?"
Ye bol the Suhana ke.
Jo iss waqt kamre me maujood thi Sonia aur Veer ke sang, par achanak hi Veer unn dono ke saamne se ye kehke chala gaya ki wo kuch derr me waapas aaega.
Ab wo kaha gaya tha, kis kaam se... !? Ye kuch bhi bata ke nahi gaya.
Sonia : Umm... Shayad neeche tak gaya hai. Yadi usne kaha hai toh jald hi aa jaega.
Suhana : Arre par bata ke toh jaaye. Hmph! Hum dono ko wo kuch zyaada lightly nahi le raha!?
Sonia (smiles) : Yahi baat toh mujhe uski pasand hai. Wo harr ek insaan ko ek matlab... Poora insaan ki tarah hi dekhta hai. Matlab aise nahi ki, koi bada vyakti aaye toh uske saamne uska behaviour alag ho aur koi gareeb vyakti aaye toh uske saamne wo alag behave kare. Harr kisi se wo ek jaisa behave karta hai. That's what I like about him.
Suhana : Umm? Hmm.... You are right. Wait! Tum kab se ye sab notice karne lagi usme!?
Sonia (blushes) : Ehh!?? N-Noooo... Ab wo ham dono hi ek dusre se familiar hai toh ye choti choti baatein obviously dimaag pakad leta hai mera... You know na dii!? I-I'm sharp after all... Ahahaha~
Suhana : Hmmm....
Sonia ne apni sharm ko chhupaane ki koshish kari jisme shayad iss baar wo kaamyaab bhi ho gayi kyuki Suhana ne keval haami bhari aur uski baato ko zyaada deeply nahi socha.
Par sawaal abhi bhi wahi tha...
Akhir Veer unn dono ko bina kuch bataye yu achanak kaha nikal liya!?
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Idhar Veer, hotel me hi upar corridor ke end me window ke paas khada hua tha.
Na jaane kya baatein chal rahi thi uske mann me. Par itna zaroor tha ki wo iss samay kisi chintan me dooba hua tha.
Yaha tak ki usne Pari ko bhi sleep mode me daal diya tha.
'Kuch... Kuch gadbad hai... I should head downstairs.'
Wo mann me soch neeche jaane laga toh neeche se upar aati ek waitress usse dekhe jaa rahi thi aur upar badhti jaa rahi thi.
Veer ko iss baat ka abhaas bhi nahi hua. Ab wo ek average person se bhi thoda zyaada smart jo dikhne laga tha. Na jaane kya hoga jab uska Appearance stat 80 -90 ke upar jaega.
Fir toh shayad Veer ko dekhte hi ladkiyo ki panties me tsunami aa jaengi...
Kherr! Veer uss waitress ki nazro se anibhigya neeche aaya aur hotel ke resting area side hi wo chal diya jaha luxury sofas dale hue the, reception tha aur kaafi saare log idhar se udhar apne kaamo me lage hue the. Aur gaane bhi baj rahe the jisse log bhali bhaati sunn paa rahe the.
Ek sofa pakad wo firse apne chintan me doob gaya. Ye jagah gehre chintan ke liye sahi toh nahi thi. Par Veer khud hi itna apne thoughts me dooba hua tha ki usse koi farq hi nahi pada.
'Pari... Level 4 pe hone ke bawajood Miss Kaera ka status nahi dekh paayi. Wahi dusri taraf... She was able to see... Sonia's and Suhana's status. Iska matlab ek hi baat hai. Miss Kaera ka auhda kuch aur hi hai... Miss Sonia se bhi zyaada... Aur aisi hasti ke saath... Mene wo sab kiya hai. Par iske bawajood unhone ye baat chhipaayi hamaari. Na hi mere khilaaf koi karyavaahi kari... Kyu??'
'Kya wo apni image kharab nahi karwana chaahti isliye? Hmm! Ye ek reason ho sakta hai. Par... Wo mere khilaaf secretly action toh le hi sakti thi... Fir kyu? Kya mein unki nazar me worthless hu? Hmm! Ye bhi ek reason ho sakta hai...'
'Suhana ne ek pal me hi guess kar liya ki wo gunde Aatish ke the. Yaani ki Aatish Miss Kaera aur Miss Sonia dono ke peeche tha. But why!? Wait! Ye dono hi ek dusre se related hai... Aur Aatish ne... First time... Miss Kaera ko club me... Aahhh!!! So that's what it was... He was after Miss Kaera.'
'Par firse wahi sawaal... Kyu!???'
'Aur ye Pari... She's hiding something. Pari ko sleep mode me daalna zaroori tha. Warna abhi mein jo bhi sochta wo usse sunn leti. Atleast Sleep mode me wo mere koi bhi thoughts nahi sunn paegi.'
'Pari ke reactions kabhi kabhi ajeeb hote hai. Akhir kya hai ye system ki paheli!? Mujhe dheere dheere isse suljhaana hoga. Aur usse karne ke liye..
Mujhe Pari ko jitna jald ho sake utni jald level up karna padega.'
Abhi wo apne thoughts me ghum tha jab achank hi uske peeche se ek awaaz aayi,
"Can I have a seat!? If you don't mind!?"
Aur jese hi usne palat ke dekha toh woh stabdh reh gaya.
Uske peeche Kaera khadi hui thi.
Ek modern sii dress me wo itni khubsoorat prateet ho rahi thi ki Veer shabdo me uske saundarya ka varnan nahi kar sakta tha. Aur ye pehli baar nahi tha. Harr baar...
Jitni baar wo usse dekhta, uska muh khula ka khula reh jaata tha. Kaera perfect thi. Harr angle se...
Kahi se bhi aisa mehsoos nahi hota tha usse dekh ke ki iss ladki se ye kaam nahi banta hoga. She was damn perfect.
Ye Veer ke thoughts the Kaera ke prati...
Veer : S-Sure!
Aur Veer ki haami paate hi wo aayi aur uske bagal se baith gayi.
Aur bas...
Agle hi pal poori hotel ka vatavaran badal gaya. Jo log pehle Veer ko dekh tak nahi rahe the, wo sabhi ab usse aur Kaera ko dekh khus pusaane me lage hue the. Ye tha Kaera ki presence ka jaadu...
Jo iss qadar fela hua tha...
Veer ne dekha ki forun hi kayi saare media reporters andar ghus uski photos lene lage par agle hi pal, Kaera ne kisi ko ishaara kiya aur kuch hi moments me sabhi reporters baahar the.
Ye kaam tha uske bodyguard Jassi ka, jo Raghu ke saath thodi dur khada hua tha.
Raghu : Akhir Miss iss ladke me itna interest kyu le rahi hai!? Hmph! Normal sa ladka hi toh hai wo...
Jassi : Abe chutiye! Uss ladke ne unki jaan bachaayi thi aur tune dekha nahi tha kal?
Raghu : Kya?
Jassi : Wo ladka Miss ki bachpan ki dost Miss Sonia ke saath tha. Iska matlab wo Miss Sonia ko jaanta hai. Toh bhala hamari Miss ko jigyaasa toh hoegi hi na...!?
Raghu : Ohhhhhh!
Jassi : Bewakoof rahega tu ekdum...
Raghu : Par Miss ne kal raat... Uska blazer ko liya hmph... Mera blazer bhi toh itna accha hai...
Jassi : Chal hatt be... Tere blazer se kya lena dena unhe... Par iska jawaab mere paas bhi nahi hai.
Raghu : Arrrghhh! Mera sarr phata jaa raha hai soch soch ke.
Jassi : Toh udhar jaa ke phat, idhar nahi...
Inn dono se thodi dur Kaera aur Veer baith apni baato me lage hue the. Aur Veer ne akhir kar himmat kar wo sawal puch hi liya...
Veer : You...
Kaera : Hmm?
Veer : Ahem... Wo... Hamaare beech... First time... I mean... Uss raat jab mein aur aap mile the uss club me...
Kaera : Yeah...!?
Veer : Toh... Uske baad... Hamaare beech wo sab hua tha... Ahem...
Kaera : Hmm?
Veer : I mean... You remember right? W-We... *Cough* We... We had sex...
Kaera : .....
Kaera ka ye baat sunn apne aap muh ekdum expressionless ho gaya.
Aur Veer bechaara thoda seham gaya. Ki kahi usne galat topic toh nahi cherr diya.
'Shit! Is she pissed...!?'
Kaera : I...
Veer : Hmm?
Kaera ne fir wo jawaab diya jiski umeed Veer ko bilkul bhi nahi thi. Usne aisa jawaab toh bilkul bhi expect nahi kiya tha.
Kaera : I don't know... Should I be sad? I don't feel anything...
Veer : Huh!??
Kaera : ...
'Kya kaha isne!??'
Veer : K-Kya kaha? Pardon...!?
Kaera : I said I don't feel anything. Should I be sad? Or happy?
Ye sab kya tha? Veer ke mann me yahi chal raha tha abhi. Ek ladki ne uske kaaran apni virginity khoyi aur sawaal puchne par wo keh rahi hai ki usse kuch feel nahi hua? Usse ye bhi nahi pata ki wo khush hoye ya dukhi iss baat pe? Bhala ye kesa jawaab tha? Ye kesa reaction tha? Ek normal ladki ko toh ab tak uske upar chadh jaana chahiye tha aur uski khatiya khadi kar deni chahiye thi. Par yaha Kaera ne toh...
Jese bilkul hi alag jawaab diya tha. Aisa jawaab, jiski Veer ko katayi umeed nahi thi.
Veer : Wait! You said you don't feel anything!?
Kaera : Yeah...! Tell me... Should I be sad?
'Ye... Kahi ye paagal toh nahi na? No way! Iske jesa dimaag toh mene kisi ladki me nahi dekha hai. She's not mad... But fir whyyyyy? Kyuuu?? What is this reaction?? Fuck! Pari ko bhi mene sleep mode me daala hua hai.'
Veer : Dekhiye... We... Hamaare beech... Wo sab hua... Right? You remember!? Itni badi baat hai ye... Y-You don't feel anything?
Kaera : I don't... That's why... Tell me... Also, what is life? Tumne answer diya tha. But I couldn't understand.
Veer : T-This....
'Akhir chal kya raha hai behanchod ye sab!????? Fucccckkkkk!!!!'
Kaera usse aasha ki nazro se dekh rahi thi. Par jese achanak hi Veer ko kuch abhaas hua aur usse ek zordaar jhatka sa laga. Usne firse sawaal karna shuru kiye.
Veer : Wait! Toh aapka kehna hai... You don't feel anything...
Kaera : Right...
Veer ne unn aankho ko dekha... Jo jheel sii prateet ho rahi thi. Itne sundar wo kaale kaale nain...
Itna manmohak chehra... Wo khule halke geele baal jinhe wo apne maathe ke peeche kare hue thi. Kaano me lagi wo chamakti baaliya... Sab kuch itna aakarshak ki pucho mat.
Maano Veer pal bhar ke liye uski sundarta me doob gaya tha.
Peeche hi ek jaana pehchaana gaana baj raha tha.
Jiski kuch panktiyo ne Veer ko ekdum maun kar diya.
Soche dil ke aisa kaash ho...
Tujhko... ek nazar meri talaash ho...
Jese... Khaab hai aankho me base meri...
Wese... Neendon pe silvate pade teri...
Bheege bheege armaano ki wo hadd hai...
Haaye... Geeli geeli khwaaish bhi toh behad hai...
Mar jaawaa... Mar jaawaa...
Aur ye panktiya... Gaayika ki wo madhur awaaz aur saamne Kaera ke wo kuch bechain se chehre ne jese Veer ko ek pal ke liye wahi baandh ke rakh diya tha. Maano jese wo panktiya Kaera apne muh se kehna chaah rahi thi, aisa mehsoos hua Veer ko.
Unn aankho me kahi na kahi... Veer ko atyant hi dard aur peeda nazar aa rahi thi. Itni zyaada ki Veer ko apni nazre hataani pad gayi.
Ya yu kahe ki uski nazre apne aap hi Kaera ki aankho se alag ho gayi.
'No No No No.... She's not perfect. Not at all. She's... She's broken...'
Usne apni bauhe sikode Kaera ko dekha. Aur uske iss tarah se dekhne par bechaari Kaera bhi confused ho gayi.
Par agle hi pal...
Veer ne uska haath thaama aur usse uthaate hue le jaane laga,
"Come with me..."
"Huh???"
Ye pehli baar tha, jab kisi ladke ne uska haath thaama tha iss prakaar se. Aur usse yu kheech ke le jaa raha tha.
Wo apne haath ko dekhi, jo iss waqt Veer ke unn haatho ki giraft me tha. Uski rookhi rookhi hatheli ki twacha wo apne makhmali narm hatheli me bhali bhaati mehsoos kar paa rahi thi. Aur ek ajeeb sii feeling uske andar jaag rahi thi. Ya yu kahe ki jaagna chaahti thi... Ya jaagne ki koshish kar rahi thi.
Raghu : Oye... Iski toh...
Raghu saamne ka nazaara dekh forun hi badhne ke liye hua par tabhi Jassi ne usse rok diya.
Jassi : Ruko...
Raghu : Ughhh... Jassi chorr... Wo dekh wo ladka... Miss ko kaha le jaa raha hai!? Aur uski himmat kese hui unhe aise chheene kii?
Jassi : Shut up... Miss ne mujhe ishaara kiya abhi. Ki hum unhe follow na kare...
Raghu : Par...
Jassi : Mene kaha na... Aur wo ladka... I think ki hum uspe bharosa kar sakte hai...
Raghu : Kyaaa??? Tum ek anjaan ladke par kese bharosa kar sakte ho?
Jassi : Miss ne uske baare me mujhe details nikaalne kaha tha kal. Saari ki saari... Uska naam Veer hai. Kuch yaad aaya!? Jaha tak mera anumaan hai... Miss ke liye wo khatra nahi hai.
Raghu : Par...
Jassi : Mene kaha na... Hum follow nahi karenge unhe.
Raghu (daat meeste hue) : Fine!!!
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Kaera ko thaame Veer usse ek thodi shaant sii jagah laaya aur uske saamne khada ho gaya.
Usne Kaera ko dekha aur apne dono haath uske kandhe par rakhe aur apna maath uske maathe se laga ke khada ho gaya.
Bechaari Kaera... Uski aankhein phati ki phati thi. Wo bas Veer ko dekhe jaa rahi thi. Poori confused thi wo iss ravaiyye se... Par...
Kehne ke liye koi shabd na nikle uske hontho se.
"I think now I get it..."
Kaera : ??
Veer : You are...
Kaera : ??
Veer : You are broken idiot...
Kaera : Huhhhhh?? *Gasp*
Aise shayad hi kabhi kisi ki himmat hui hogi uss se baat karne ki. Par aaj usse yu iss tarah ek ladka thaame hue bol pe bol sunaaye jaa raha tha.
Aur ye koi aur nahi, uski hi Virginity lene waala insaan tha ~ Veer.
Kaera abhi bhi confused thi...
Par tabhi usse Veer ki aankho se nikalte hue aasu dikhe aur wo aur zyaada confused ho gayi...
Bhala Veer kyu ro raha tha iss waqt...!?
Wo ekdum prashnjanak bhaav se usse dekhe jaa rahi thi. Par Veer toh bas usse hold kiye ro raha tha.
Veer : You are broken... Aur uss se bhi badi dard bhari baat ye hai ki...
Kaera : ??
Veer : ...ki you don't even realize it you idiot...
Kaera : ...??
Aur agle hi pal Veer ne kass ke usse thaam liya aur apni baaho me jakad liya.
Kuch derr tak wo dono hi ek dusre ki baaho me the. Na toh Veer ne usse azaad kiya aur na hi Kaera ki kuch samajh aaya ki ye chal kya raha tha.
Jab Veer ne usse apne se alag kiya toh usne Kaera ki aankho me aankhein daalte hue dekha aur kaha,
"You want to know the meaning of life right? I will tell you... No! In fact, I will teach you... Kya hoti hai zindagi"
Kaera : Y-You will...!?
Veer : I will... I will teach you everything... You are broken right now.... Lonely... Hurt... Depressed... Frustrated... Anxious... Apathetic... Perplexed... Right!?
Kaera : ???
Veer : Aaj pehli baar... Kisi ki madad karne ka itna mann kar raha hai... *smiles* I will make you feel... Everything...
Kaera : ...
Veer aur Kaera jis sthiti me the abhi, yadi uss sthiti me koi unhe dekh leta toh aaj pakka bawaal khada ho jaana tha.
Veer ke paas aate hi Kaera aaj achanak hi itni timid sii ho gayi ki wo bas Veer ke flow ke saath behti sii chali gayi. Aur sabse shocking ye tha ki... Usse zara bhi iska abhaas nahi hua aur na hi bura laga.
Kaera : I...
Par iske pehle wo kuch keh paati Veer ne apne bol rakh diye,
"Ab mujhe jaana hoga. I promised Miss Sonia ki mein jald hi aa jaunga. Aap... You take care. We'll meet again."
Aur bas... Unn baato ko rakh wo waha se nikal gaya. Kaera idhar keval uski jaati hui peeth dekhti rahi.
Wo wahi khadi kabhi apni hatheli ko dekhti toh kabhi apne maathe ko touch karti toh kabhi apne nagn kandho ko...
Jaha jaha usse abhi bhi... Veer ka touch mehsoos ho raha tha.
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Waapas aate hi Veer se kayo sawaal Sonia aur Suhana ne kiye jiska jawaab usne ghuma fira ke de diya. Fir wo seedhe Suhana ke saamne baitha aur kaha,
"I want to talk to you..."
Suhana : Hmm? Haa toh kaho na...
Veer : Wo... Sonia miss bhi yahi hai... It's important...
Suhana : Ohhh!
Suhana : Sonu! Jao... Jaake bath le lo...
Sonia : Okay!!
Sonia jo koi magazine padhne me lagi thi wo agle pal hi uthi aur washroom me chali gayi.
Suhana : Hmm... Ab kaho...
Veer : Aapke teen favours hai na mere pe...!?
Suhana : Right...
Veer : Well... Ek aur badha lijiye...
Suhana : You sure? Pehle hi teen vaade kar chuke hai. Teen favour tumhe chukaane hai. Kahi... Khud ke hi vaado me na fass jao.
Veer : Mujhe pata hai mein kya kar raha hu.
Suhana : Ohhh...!
Veer : Bataiye fir... Will you help me?
Suhana : Fine...! Tumhaare 4 favours ho gaye ab. Bolo... What do you want!?
Usne pucha... Wo bhi jaan'na chaah rahi thi ki akhir Veer itna utawla kis baat ko lekar tha. Aur saath hi wo veer ke secrets bhi jaan'na chaahti thi isliye wo raazi ho gayi. Par Veer ke jawaab ne jese usse poora chaunka ke rakh diya.
Veer : I want to do business.
Suhana : Huhhhh!??
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Veer toh apni Zindagi me tha hi vyast. Aatish ko maarne ke baad usne uss taraf jaan'ne ki koi dilchaspi nahi dikhaayi thi.
Par usse nahi pata tha... Ki usne anjaane me hi sahi par Aatish ko maar ke ek nayi musibat ko apne sarr le liya tha.
Slogan jo iss waqt apni ek pasandeeda rocking chair par baitha hua tha.
Usse saari baatein ab pata lag chuki thi. Usse itna pata chal gaya tha ki Veer naam ke bande ne Aatish ko maara hai, wo wahi Mumbai ka rehne waala hai, ek college student hai, aur uske kuch ghar ke sadasya hai...
Itni baatein wo jaan chuka tha.
Aur abhi wo bas khud ke mann me ek chakravyuh me fassa hua tha.
'Isse baad me dekhunga... Pehle... Mera maqsad... Aatish ki maut ka badla uske baad. Akhir wo mera sabse khaas student tha.'
Wo kehte hai na, buddhimaan log nirnay lene me zyada samay nahi lagaate. Slogan jaanta tha ki usse iss waqt kis cheez ko priority deni hai.
Bhale hi uska dil Aatish ka badla lene ke liye zyaada kar raha tha par wo hamesha dil ki nahi apne dimaag ki sunta tha. Aur isliye wo ab tak zinda tha.
'Boht jald... Mera maqsad poora hoga. Boht jald...'
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Giza Pyramids...
Egypt...
Hamaare bhaarat se kayi koso dur...
Egypt me greater Cairo naamak ek jagah sansaar ki sabse zyaada popular archaeological sites me se ek maani jaati hai.
Kyu? Kyuki yaha The Great Pyramid of Giza jo tha.
Jisse The Great Pyramid of Khufu ke naam se bhi jaana jaata hai. Ye Giza ka sabse puraana aur sabse bada pyramid jo tha.
Yaha bhar bhar ke investigations hoti thi. Aaye din koi na koi archeologists ki team aati aur wo kuch na kuch investigate karti aur apni findings ko public ke saamne ujaagar karti.
Par of course... Iske liye permission leni padti thi.
Aur inhi kuch teams me se ek team aur bhi thi.
Aaj se inhe yaha par investigation karne ka mauka diya gaya tha.
"Let's go... Look it's huge! Right?"
Team me ek angrez lady thi jisne ye vaakya kaha toh team ke sabhi logo me uski baat me haami bhari. Waqai... Pyramid bhavya tha.
Uski greatness waha khade hokar hi bhaapi jaa sakti thi.
Aur issi team me... Ek aurat ek jeans pehne aur ek shirt daale apna luggage liye aage ki orr badhti jaa rahi thi.
"Wowwwwww!!"
Uske bagal se chal rahi ladki ne kaha. Toh uska reaction dekh wo keval muskura dii.
"I can't believe aap yaha pehle bhi aa chuki ho Mom. This is amazing... It's phenomenal."
"Ye toh kuch bhi nahi beta. Andar chalo... You will see some bizarre things."
"Ohhhh! Don't make me curious mom"
Jii Haa~ Ye aurat koi aur nahi balki Bhavana hi thi.
Jo apni beti ke saath yaha aayi hui thi.
Aur ab iss baat ka andaaza lagaana mushqil nahi tha ki Veer ki ye maa kitni qaabil archeologist thi. Jisse yaha par aane ka dusra mauka mila tha.
Apni beti ke chehre par khushi dekh wo behad khush thi. Par jaha wo iss baat se khush thi wahi...
Usse jese kuch yaad aaya aur agle hi pal wo wahi theher gayi.
"Hmm!? Kya hua...!?"
Bhavana : Huh!? K-Kuch nahi... Aao... Andar aao... Sambhal ke... Iske baad hum seedhe andar jaenge... Inside the actual pyramid okay..!? Come!
Wo bolte hue apne chehre ke bhaav ko chhupaate hue aage badh gayi. Par...
Peeche khadi uski beti...
Usse jaata hua dekh rahi thi. Jo utsaah thodi derr pehle tha uske chehre pe wo gaayab ho chuka tha. Aur ek expressionless chehra saamne aa chuka tha.
'Chaahe aap kitna bhi kyu na chhupa lo... Kitna bhi kyu na jhooth bol lo... But I can see through your every action Mom. And I know the truth you are hiding... I already know it... That...
I have a brother as well.'
Apne mann me soch wo fir dheere dheere aage badhi aur Bhavana ke sameep aake uske saath chalne lagi. Uske chehre pe waapas se wahi utsaah aa chuka tha. Jo shayad... Iss baar thoda banaavti tha.
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Dhanyavaad!
Don't forget to like and share your thoughts.
Next update se action hai. Be prepared.
Villain is back.wo sab kuch jan chuka he veer k baare me.but he is waiting for the right moment to take his revenge.writer sir veer needs to be more powerful against his new opponent.
I think in pyramid veer's sister and his mother are discussed something.Veer's sister know that she has a brother.but why her left her brother?
Fantastic update....carry on✌✌✌
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Excellent updateUpdate - 44 ~ Broken SoulAb tak...
Veer ke chehre par shikan thi.
Behad hi chinta aur gambheerta bhi.
'Pari! Go to sleep mode!'
[Huh??? Whaaaaattt!??]
'Mene kaha na...! Go to sleep mode! It's an order!'
[Ughhh! Fine!]
*Ding*
[System has entered into the sleep mode.]
Ab aage...
"Arre....!? Ye isse achanak kya ho gaya!? Kaha chala gaya ye!?"
Ye bol the Suhana ke.
Jo iss waqt kamre me maujood thi Sonia aur Veer ke sang, par achanak hi Veer unn dono ke saamne se ye kehke chala gaya ki wo kuch derr me waapas aaega.
Ab wo kaha gaya tha, kis kaam se... !? Ye kuch bhi bata ke nahi gaya.
Sonia : Umm... Shayad neeche tak gaya hai. Yadi usne kaha hai toh jald hi aa jaega.
Suhana : Arre par bata ke toh jaaye. Hmph! Hum dono ko wo kuch zyaada lightly nahi le raha!?
Sonia (smiles) : Yahi baat toh mujhe uski pasand hai. Wo harr ek insaan ko ek matlab... Poora insaan ki tarah hi dekhta hai. Matlab aise nahi ki, koi bada vyakti aaye toh uske saamne uska behaviour alag ho aur koi gareeb vyakti aaye toh uske saamne wo alag behave kare. Harr kisi se wo ek jaisa behave karta hai. That's what I like about him.
Suhana : Umm? Hmm.... You are right. Wait! Tum kab se ye sab notice karne lagi usme!?
Sonia (blushes) : Ehh!?? N-Noooo... Ab wo ham dono hi ek dusre se familiar hai toh ye choti choti baatein obviously dimaag pakad leta hai mera... You know na dii!? I-I'm sharp after all... Ahahaha~
Suhana : Hmmm....
Sonia ne apni sharm ko chhupaane ki koshish kari jisme shayad iss baar wo kaamyaab bhi ho gayi kyuki Suhana ne keval haami bhari aur uski baato ko zyaada deeply nahi socha.
Par sawaal abhi bhi wahi tha...
Akhir Veer unn dono ko bina kuch bataye yu achanak kaha nikal liya!?
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Idhar Veer, hotel me hi upar corridor ke end me window ke paas khada hua tha.
Na jaane kya baatein chal rahi thi uske mann me. Par itna zaroor tha ki wo iss samay kisi chintan me dooba hua tha.
Yaha tak ki usne Pari ko bhi sleep mode me daal diya tha.
'Kuch... Kuch gadbad hai... I should head downstairs.'
Wo mann me soch neeche jaane laga toh neeche se upar aati ek waitress usse dekhe jaa rahi thi aur upar badhti jaa rahi thi.
Veer ko iss baat ka abhaas bhi nahi hua. Ab wo ek average person se bhi thoda zyaada smart jo dikhne laga tha. Na jaane kya hoga jab uska Appearance stat 80 -90 ke upar jaega.
Fir toh shayad Veer ko dekhte hi ladkiyo ki panties me tsunami aa jaengi...
Kherr! Veer uss waitress ki nazro se anibhigya neeche aaya aur hotel ke resting area side hi wo chal diya jaha luxury sofas dale hue the, reception tha aur kaafi saare log idhar se udhar apne kaamo me lage hue the. Aur gaane bhi baj rahe the jisse log bhali bhaati sunn paa rahe the.
Ek sofa pakad wo firse apne chintan me doob gaya. Ye jagah gehre chintan ke liye sahi toh nahi thi. Par Veer khud hi itna apne thoughts me dooba hua tha ki usse koi farq hi nahi pada.
'Pari... Level 4 pe hone ke bawajood Miss Kaera ka status nahi dekh paayi. Wahi dusri taraf... She was able to see... Sonia's and Suhana's status. Iska matlab ek hi baat hai. Miss Kaera ka auhda kuch aur hi hai... Miss Sonia se bhi zyaada... Aur aisi hasti ke saath... Mene wo sab kiya hai. Par iske bawajood unhone ye baat chhipaayi hamaari. Na hi mere khilaaf koi karyavaahi kari... Kyu??'
'Kya wo apni image kharab nahi karwana chaahti isliye? Hmm! Ye ek reason ho sakta hai. Par... Wo mere khilaaf secretly action toh le hi sakti thi... Fir kyu? Kya mein unki nazar me worthless hu? Hmm! Ye bhi ek reason ho sakta hai...'
'Suhana ne ek pal me hi guess kar liya ki wo gunde Aatish ke the. Yaani ki Aatish Miss Kaera aur Miss Sonia dono ke peeche tha. But why!? Wait! Ye dono hi ek dusre se related hai... Aur Aatish ne... First time... Miss Kaera ko club me... Aahhh!!! So that's what it was... He was after Miss Kaera.'
'Par firse wahi sawaal... Kyu!???'
'Aur ye Pari... She's hiding something. Pari ko sleep mode me daalna zaroori tha. Warna abhi mein jo bhi sochta wo usse sunn leti. Atleast Sleep mode me wo mere koi bhi thoughts nahi sunn paegi.'
'Pari ke reactions kabhi kabhi ajeeb hote hai. Akhir kya hai ye system ki paheli!? Mujhe dheere dheere isse suljhaana hoga. Aur usse karne ke liye..
Mujhe Pari ko jitna jald ho sake utni jald level up karna padega.'
Abhi wo apne thoughts me ghum tha jab achank hi uske peeche se ek awaaz aayi,
"Can I have a seat!? If you don't mind!?"
Aur jese hi usne palat ke dekha toh woh stabdh reh gaya.
Uske peeche Kaera khadi hui thi.
Ek modern sii dress me wo itni khubsoorat prateet ho rahi thi ki Veer shabdo me uske saundarya ka varnan nahi kar sakta tha. Aur ye pehli baar nahi tha. Harr baar...
Jitni baar wo usse dekhta, uska muh khula ka khula reh jaata tha. Kaera perfect thi. Harr angle se...
Kahi se bhi aisa mehsoos nahi hota tha usse dekh ke ki iss ladki se ye kaam nahi banta hoga. She was damn perfect.
Ye Veer ke thoughts the Kaera ke prati...
Veer : S-Sure!
Aur Veer ki haami paate hi wo aayi aur uske bagal se baith gayi.
Aur bas...
Agle hi pal poori hotel ka vatavaran badal gaya. Jo log pehle Veer ko dekh tak nahi rahe the, wo sabhi ab usse aur Kaera ko dekh khus pusaane me lage hue the. Ye tha Kaera ki presence ka jaadu...
Jo iss qadar fela hua tha...
Veer ne dekha ki forun hi kayi saare media reporters andar ghus uski photos lene lage par agle hi pal, Kaera ne kisi ko ishaara kiya aur kuch hi moments me sabhi reporters baahar the.
Ye kaam tha uske bodyguard Jassi ka, jo Raghu ke saath thodi dur khada hua tha.
Raghu : Akhir Miss iss ladke me itna interest kyu le rahi hai!? Hmph! Normal sa ladka hi toh hai wo...
Jassi : Abe chutiye! Uss ladke ne unki jaan bachaayi thi aur tune dekha nahi tha kal?
Raghu : Kya?
Jassi : Wo ladka Miss ki bachpan ki dost Miss Sonia ke saath tha. Iska matlab wo Miss Sonia ko jaanta hai. Toh bhala hamari Miss ko jigyaasa toh hoegi hi na...!?
Raghu : Ohhhhhh!
Jassi : Bewakoof rahega tu ekdum...
Raghu : Par Miss ne kal raat... Uska blazer ko liya hmph... Mera blazer bhi toh itna accha hai...
Jassi : Chal hatt be... Tere blazer se kya lena dena unhe... Par iska jawaab mere paas bhi nahi hai.
Raghu : Arrrghhh! Mera sarr phata jaa raha hai soch soch ke.
Jassi : Toh udhar jaa ke phat, idhar nahi...
Inn dono se thodi dur Kaera aur Veer baith apni baato me lage hue the. Aur Veer ne akhir kar himmat kar wo sawal puch hi liya...
Veer : You...
Kaera : Hmm?
Veer : Ahem... Wo... Hamaare beech... First time... I mean... Uss raat jab mein aur aap mile the uss club me...
Kaera : Yeah...!?
Veer : Toh... Uske baad... Hamaare beech wo sab hua tha... Ahem...
Kaera : Hmm?
Veer : I mean... You remember right? W-We... *Cough* We... We had sex...
Kaera : .....
Kaera ka ye baat sunn apne aap muh ekdum expressionless ho gaya.
Aur Veer bechaara thoda seham gaya. Ki kahi usne galat topic toh nahi cherr diya.
'Shit! Is she pissed...!?'
Kaera : I...
Veer : Hmm?
Kaera ne fir wo jawaab diya jiski umeed Veer ko bilkul bhi nahi thi. Usne aisa jawaab toh bilkul bhi expect nahi kiya tha.
Kaera : I don't know... Should I be sad? I don't feel anything...
Veer : Huh!??
Kaera : ...
'Kya kaha isne!??'
Veer : K-Kya kaha? Pardon...!?
Kaera : I said I don't feel anything. Should I be sad? Or happy?
Ye sab kya tha? Veer ke mann me yahi chal raha tha abhi. Ek ladki ne uske kaaran apni virginity khoyi aur sawaal puchne par wo keh rahi hai ki usse kuch feel nahi hua? Usse ye bhi nahi pata ki wo khush hoye ya dukhi iss baat pe? Bhala ye kesa jawaab tha? Ye kesa reaction tha? Ek normal ladki ko toh ab tak uske upar chadh jaana chahiye tha aur uski khatiya khadi kar deni chahiye thi. Par yaha Kaera ne toh...
Jese bilkul hi alag jawaab diya tha. Aisa jawaab, jiski Veer ko katayi umeed nahi thi.
Veer : Wait! You said you don't feel anything!?
Kaera : Yeah...! Tell me... Should I be sad?
'Ye... Kahi ye paagal toh nahi na? No way! Iske jesa dimaag toh mene kisi ladki me nahi dekha hai. She's not mad... But fir whyyyyy? Kyuuu?? What is this reaction?? Fuck! Pari ko bhi mene sleep mode me daala hua hai.'
Veer : Dekhiye... We... Hamaare beech... Wo sab hua... Right? You remember!? Itni badi baat hai ye... Y-You don't feel anything?
Kaera : I don't... That's why... Tell me... Also, what is life? Tumne answer diya tha. But I couldn't understand.
Veer : T-This....
'Akhir chal kya raha hai behanchod ye sab!????? Fucccckkkkk!!!!'
Kaera usse aasha ki nazro se dekh rahi thi. Par jese achanak hi Veer ko kuch abhaas hua aur usse ek zordaar jhatka sa laga. Usne firse sawaal karna shuru kiye.
Veer : Wait! Toh aapka kehna hai... You don't feel anything...
Kaera : Right...
Veer ne unn aankho ko dekha... Jo jheel sii prateet ho rahi thi. Itne sundar wo kaale kaale nain...
Itna manmohak chehra... Wo khule halke geele baal jinhe wo apne maathe ke peeche kare hue thi. Kaano me lagi wo chamakti baaliya... Sab kuch itna aakarshak ki pucho mat.
Maano Veer pal bhar ke liye uski sundarta me doob gaya tha.
Peeche hi ek jaana pehchaana gaana baj raha tha.
Jiski kuch panktiyo ne Veer ko ekdum maun kar diya.
Soche dil ke aisa kaash ho...
Tujhko... ek nazar meri talaash ho...
Jese... Khaab hai aankho me base meri...
Wese... Neendon pe silvate pade teri...
Bheege bheege armaano ki wo hadd hai...
Haaye... Geeli geeli khwaaish bhi toh behad hai...
Mar jaawaa... Mar jaawaa...
Aur ye panktiya... Gaayika ki wo madhur awaaz aur saamne Kaera ke wo kuch bechain se chehre ne jese Veer ko ek pal ke liye wahi baandh ke rakh diya tha. Maano jese wo panktiya Kaera apne muh se kehna chaah rahi thi, aisa mehsoos hua Veer ko.
Unn aankho me kahi na kahi... Veer ko atyant hi dard aur peeda nazar aa rahi thi. Itni zyaada ki Veer ko apni nazre hataani pad gayi.
Ya yu kahe ki uski nazre apne aap hi Kaera ki aankho se alag ho gayi.
'No No No No.... She's not perfect. Not at all. She's... She's broken...'
Usne apni bauhe sikode Kaera ko dekha. Aur uske iss tarah se dekhne par bechaari Kaera bhi confused ho gayi.
Par agle hi pal...
Veer ne uska haath thaama aur usse uthaate hue le jaane laga,
"Come with me..."
"Huh???"
Ye pehli baar tha, jab kisi ladke ne uska haath thaama tha iss prakaar se. Aur usse yu kheech ke le jaa raha tha.
Wo apne haath ko dekhi, jo iss waqt Veer ke unn haatho ki giraft me tha. Uski rookhi rookhi hatheli ki twacha wo apne makhmali narm hatheli me bhali bhaati mehsoos kar paa rahi thi. Aur ek ajeeb sii feeling uske andar jaag rahi thi. Ya yu kahe ki jaagna chaahti thi... Ya jaagne ki koshish kar rahi thi.
Raghu : Oye... Iski toh...
Raghu saamne ka nazaara dekh forun hi badhne ke liye hua par tabhi Jassi ne usse rok diya.
Jassi : Ruko...
Raghu : Ughhh... Jassi chorr... Wo dekh wo ladka... Miss ko kaha le jaa raha hai!? Aur uski himmat kese hui unhe aise chheene kii?
Jassi : Shut up... Miss ne mujhe ishaara kiya abhi. Ki hum unhe follow na kare...
Raghu : Par...
Jassi : Mene kaha na... Aur wo ladka... I think ki hum uspe bharosa kar sakte hai...
Raghu : Kyaaa??? Tum ek anjaan ladke par kese bharosa kar sakte ho?
Jassi : Miss ne uske baare me mujhe details nikaalne kaha tha kal. Saari ki saari... Uska naam Veer hai. Kuch yaad aaya!? Jaha tak mera anumaan hai... Miss ke liye wo khatra nahi hai.
Raghu : Par...
Jassi : Mene kaha na... Hum follow nahi karenge unhe.
Raghu (daat meeste hue) : Fine!!!
***
Kaera ko thaame Veer usse ek thodi shaant sii jagah laaya aur uske saamne khada ho gaya.
Usne Kaera ko dekha aur apne dono haath uske kandhe par rakhe aur apna maath uske maathe se laga ke khada ho gaya.
Bechaari Kaera... Uski aankhein phati ki phati thi. Wo bas Veer ko dekhe jaa rahi thi. Poori confused thi wo iss ravaiyye se... Par...
Kehne ke liye koi shabd na nikle uske hontho se.
"I think now I get it..."
Kaera : ??
Veer : You are...
Kaera : ??
Veer : You are broken idiot...
Kaera : Huhhhhh?? *Gasp*
Aise shayad hi kabhi kisi ki himmat hui hogi uss se baat karne ki. Par aaj usse yu iss tarah ek ladka thaame hue bol pe bol sunaaye jaa raha tha.
Aur ye koi aur nahi, uski hi Virginity lene waala insaan tha ~ Veer.
Kaera abhi bhi confused thi...
Par tabhi usse Veer ki aankho se nikalte hue aasu dikhe aur wo aur zyaada confused ho gayi...
Bhala Veer kyu ro raha tha iss waqt...!?
Wo ekdum prashnjanak bhaav se usse dekhe jaa rahi thi. Par Veer toh bas usse hold kiye ro raha tha.
Veer : You are broken... Aur uss se bhi badi dard bhari baat ye hai ki...
Kaera : ??
Veer : ...ki you don't even realize it you idiot...
Kaera : ...??
Aur agle hi pal Veer ne kass ke usse thaam liya aur apni baaho me jakad liya.
Kuch derr tak wo dono hi ek dusre ki baaho me the. Na toh Veer ne usse azaad kiya aur na hi Kaera ki kuch samajh aaya ki ye chal kya raha tha.
Jab Veer ne usse apne se alag kiya toh usne Kaera ki aankho me aankhein daalte hue dekha aur kaha,
"You want to know the meaning of life right? I will tell you... No! In fact, I will teach you... Kya hoti hai zindagi"
Kaera : Y-You will...!?
Veer : I will... I will teach you everything... You are broken right now.... Lonely... Hurt... Depressed... Frustrated... Anxious... Apathetic... Perplexed... Right!?
Kaera : ???
Veer : Aaj pehli baar... Kisi ki madad karne ka itna mann kar raha hai... *smiles* I will make you feel... Everything...
Kaera : ...
Veer aur Kaera jis sthiti me the abhi, yadi uss sthiti me koi unhe dekh leta toh aaj pakka bawaal khada ho jaana tha.
Veer ke paas aate hi Kaera aaj achanak hi itni timid sii ho gayi ki wo bas Veer ke flow ke saath behti sii chali gayi. Aur sabse shocking ye tha ki... Usse zara bhi iska abhaas nahi hua aur na hi bura laga.
Kaera : I...
Par iske pehle wo kuch keh paati Veer ne apne bol rakh diye,
"Ab mujhe jaana hoga. I promised Miss Sonia ki mein jald hi aa jaunga. Aap... You take care. We'll meet again."
Aur bas... Unn baato ko rakh wo waha se nikal gaya. Kaera idhar keval uski jaati hui peeth dekhti rahi.
Wo wahi khadi kabhi apni hatheli ko dekhti toh kabhi apne maathe ko touch karti toh kabhi apne nagn kandho ko...
Jaha jaha usse abhi bhi... Veer ka touch mehsoos ho raha tha.
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Waapas aate hi Veer se kayo sawaal Sonia aur Suhana ne kiye jiska jawaab usne ghuma fira ke de diya. Fir wo seedhe Suhana ke saamne baitha aur kaha,
"I want to talk to you..."
Suhana : Hmm? Haa toh kaho na...
Veer : Wo... Sonia miss bhi yahi hai... It's important...
Suhana : Ohhh!
Suhana : Sonu! Jao... Jaake bath le lo...
Sonia : Okay!!
Sonia jo koi magazine padhne me lagi thi wo agle pal hi uthi aur washroom me chali gayi.
Suhana : Hmm... Ab kaho...
Veer : Aapke teen favours hai na mere pe...!?
Suhana : Right...
Veer : Well... Ek aur badha lijiye...
Suhana : You sure? Pehle hi teen vaade kar chuke hai. Teen favour tumhe chukaane hai. Kahi... Khud ke hi vaado me na fass jao.
Veer : Mujhe pata hai mein kya kar raha hu.
Suhana : Ohhh...!
Veer : Bataiye fir... Will you help me?
Suhana : Fine...! Tumhaare 4 favours ho gaye ab. Bolo... What do you want!?
Usne pucha... Wo bhi jaan'na chaah rahi thi ki akhir Veer itna utawla kis baat ko lekar tha. Aur saath hi wo veer ke secrets bhi jaan'na chaahti thi isliye wo raazi ho gayi. Par Veer ke jawaab ne jese usse poora chaunka ke rakh diya.
Veer : I want to do business.
Suhana : Huhhhh!??
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Veer toh apni Zindagi me tha hi vyast. Aatish ko maarne ke baad usne uss taraf jaan'ne ki koi dilchaspi nahi dikhaayi thi.
Par usse nahi pata tha... Ki usne anjaane me hi sahi par Aatish ko maar ke ek nayi musibat ko apne sarr le liya tha.
Slogan jo iss waqt apni ek pasandeeda rocking chair par baitha hua tha.
Usse saari baatein ab pata lag chuki thi. Usse itna pata chal gaya tha ki Veer naam ke bande ne Aatish ko maara hai, wo wahi Mumbai ka rehne waala hai, ek college student hai, aur uske kuch ghar ke sadasya hai...
Itni baatein wo jaan chuka tha.
Aur abhi wo bas khud ke mann me ek chakravyuh me fassa hua tha.
'Isse baad me dekhunga... Pehle... Mera maqsad... Aatish ki maut ka badla uske baad. Akhir wo mera sabse khaas student tha.'
Wo kehte hai na, buddhimaan log nirnay lene me zyada samay nahi lagaate. Slogan jaanta tha ki usse iss waqt kis cheez ko priority deni hai.
Bhale hi uska dil Aatish ka badla lene ke liye zyaada kar raha tha par wo hamesha dil ki nahi apne dimaag ki sunta tha. Aur isliye wo ab tak zinda tha.
'Boht jald... Mera maqsad poora hoga. Boht jald...'
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Giza Pyramids...
Egypt...
Hamaare bhaarat se kayi koso dur...
Egypt me greater Cairo naamak ek jagah sansaar ki sabse zyaada popular archaeological sites me se ek maani jaati hai.
Kyu? Kyuki yaha The Great Pyramid of Giza jo tha.
Jisse The Great Pyramid of Khufu ke naam se bhi jaana jaata hai. Ye Giza ka sabse puraana aur sabse bada pyramid jo tha.
Yaha bhar bhar ke investigations hoti thi. Aaye din koi na koi archeologists ki team aati aur wo kuch na kuch investigate karti aur apni findings ko public ke saamne ujaagar karti.
Par of course... Iske liye permission leni padti thi.
Aur inhi kuch teams me se ek team aur bhi thi.
Aaj se inhe yaha par investigation karne ka mauka diya gaya tha.
"Let's go... Look it's huge! Right?"
Team me ek angrez lady thi jisne ye vaakya kaha toh team ke sabhi logo me uski baat me haami bhari. Waqai... Pyramid bhavya tha.
Uski greatness waha khade hokar hi bhaapi jaa sakti thi.
Aur issi team me... Ek aurat ek jeans pehne aur ek shirt daale apna luggage liye aage ki orr badhti jaa rahi thi.
"Wowwwwww!!"
Uske bagal se chal rahi ladki ne kaha. Toh uska reaction dekh wo keval muskura dii.
"I can't believe aap yaha pehle bhi aa chuki ho Mom. This is amazing... It's phenomenal."
"Ye toh kuch bhi nahi beta. Andar chalo... You will see some bizarre things."
"Ohhhh! Don't make me curious mom"
Jii Haa~ Ye aurat koi aur nahi balki Bhavana hi thi.
Jo apni beti ke saath yaha aayi hui thi.
Aur ab iss baat ka andaaza lagaana mushqil nahi tha ki Veer ki ye maa kitni qaabil archeologist thi. Jisse yaha par aane ka dusra mauka mila tha.
Apni beti ke chehre par khushi dekh wo behad khush thi. Par jaha wo iss baat se khush thi wahi...
Usse jese kuch yaad aaya aur agle hi pal wo wahi theher gayi.
"Hmm!? Kya hua...!?"
Bhavana : Huh!? K-Kuch nahi... Aao... Andar aao... Sambhal ke... Iske baad hum seedhe andar jaenge... Inside the actual pyramid okay..!? Come!
Wo bolte hue apne chehre ke bhaav ko chhupaate hue aage badh gayi. Par...
Peeche khadi uski beti...
Usse jaata hua dekh rahi thi. Jo utsaah thodi derr pehle tha uske chehre pe wo gaayab ho chuka tha. Aur ek expressionless chehra saamne aa chuka tha.
'Chaahe aap kitna bhi kyu na chhupa lo... Kitna bhi kyu na jhooth bol lo... But I can see through your every action Mom. And I know the truth you are hiding... I already know it... That...
I have a brother as well.'
Apne mann me soch wo fir dheere dheere aage badhi aur Bhavana ke sameep aake uske saath chalne lagi. Uske chehre pe waapas se wahi utsaah aa chuka tha. Jo shayad... Iss baar thoda banaavti tha.
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