Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

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[ROHIT RAJ SINGH]

Ye yha kya nya chutiyapa chalu kiya gya hai do (ya ek hi) chutiyo dwara khaskar ye Dark RIder dwara
I mean criticism is not a bad thing...It definitely helps the writer in improving and correcting his mistakes....But the thing is that , koi logic bhi to ho usme....Ye padh ke to aisa lga jaise kisi ne sir pr bandook tan ke boli ho ki chal criticize kr ...Isliye bechare ne apne dimag se jabardasti kuch bhi points soch liya jo kabhi story me btaya hi nhi gya ya hua hi nhi aur usko leke sawal utha rha hai....mtlb hdd hai bhai

Iske review ke first part se hi pta chal gya ki ye waise readers me se hai jo ki story me story se jyada sex khojte hai....Iske hisab se abhi tk veer ko sbke sath sex kr lena cahiye tha tb ye story best lgti isko....Bhai mere aise stories bhari pdi hai forum pr...usko padho na , kyu kuch chuninda badhiya stories ko bhi waisa bnana cahte ho

Nidhi ka character jisse samaj aaye gya uske liye wo one of the best character rhegi story ki...Wo ek bhartiya sanskari nari ki reality ko show krta hai jo apne se jyada dusro ke bare me sochti hai....Kisne aur kb kha ki wo veer se pyar nhi krti....Kai jagah pr aise scene aaye hai jihne dekh kr hi pta chalta hai ki she too has feeling for veer...Par khi na khi wo khud iss bat ko nakar rhi hai samaj ke dar se ki samaj kya khega jb wo apne se chote apne hi student ke sath relationship me aa jaiegi....Wo drti hai ki khi uske iss kadam se uske baccho ko aage kisi ka tana na sunna pde....Aur isi sb karan se mujhe uska character reality ke bhut close lgta hai jo ki usko story ka one of the best character bnata hai (according to me)
Aur jha tk bat hai incest ki to logo ko samajhne ki jarurat hai ki reality kafi alag hai usse jaisa ki yha pr max stories me dikhai jati hai....Incest is not that common (not at least in India)...Jis pace se iss story me incest development ja rhi hai wo mere hisab se to best hai...Aur wolfi bhai ne bola hai ki sb samay se hoga , to bharosa rakhne ka na unpr

Ha ye mai manta hu agar aapka koi fav character story me bhut din ke liye na dikhe to wo thora kast dayak hota hai pr tumhe bhi to samajhna hoga ki inte sare character hai story me ab sbko aise hi kisi bhi time to nhi laya ja skta hai na...Thora patience to rakhna hoga na...Ab itna common sense to lgana pdega

He also wrote somewhere in his review that 'Your story is going to be a big disappointment for readers'...Mtlb sach me bhai??...Iss story ko readers ka jo pyar aur support mil rha hai uske bare me jante to ye bikul nhi khte lekin ye bhi hai ki agar nhi khte to itna attention kha se pate aur apna maksad kaise pura krte jise werewolf bhai ne turant hi decode kr liya

Ab uske aage to review me jo likha hai uske bare me kya hi bolu....Ye ek aise reader ke category se belong krte hai jinhe sbkuch clear likha hua cahiye story me nhi to apne se kuch bhi ulta sidha assume kr lena hai apna common sense bilkul nhi lgana...Oo sorry , common sense to hai hi nhi agar hota to aaj mujhe itna lamba likhna thori pdta
3-3 bar padh kr bhi agar ye hal to bhai meri bat mankar cauthi bar mt padhna kyuki tumhe tb bhi kuch palle nhi padne wala
Ha agar ye sb kewal attention pane ke liye kiya tha to It was really a great move...You won then

Ho skta hai tumhe lge ki mujhe itni kyu lg gyi story ko kuch bolne pe...To mere bhai story pr review bhale mai abhi nya nya likhna chalu kiya hu pr padh kafi phle se rha hu isliye ek connection sa bn gya hai iss story , werewolf bhai aur iske character se....criticism se kisi ko koi dikkat nhi pr aise illogical aur galat intension se review doge to sunoge hi

 

[ASH@7]

They both are same & its pretty evident by seeing typos.
This is biggest and the best story on this forum...of course it'll attract such attention seekers. This proves how great warewolf bhai's writing skills are. Just putting my views. Personally i'm a fan of your story...even better than a few novels i have read.
Keep writing warewolf bhai

 

[Black]

Also you saw through my move haha. I think you afraid of losing your audience and you r totally social blind bud. Haha. Feel sorry for u itna famous writer itna derta hi wo b muj blind individual say. Yad rakho k mainframe system meray pass hi. Not you. So chill.

Werewolf jis jagah khada hai
Wahan pahunchne mein abhi bahut samay lagega tumhein
Bewajah pange mat lo
Writer ho na apni writing se compete karo
Na ki kisi aur writer se pange lo
Aur werewolf kisi se darta nahi
Jab xf ke chaamiya writer's apni story mein 80 percent updates mein fambhog likhke views lete the
Utne update mein werewolf warmup karta hai
Apni story pe dhyan do
Wolfy ki story ke ek update pe 200 likes aate hain
Itne likes jab tumhare story ke ek update pe aajayein tab aake bolna ki story mein kya Kami hai kahan kahan sudhar ki jarurat hai...

 

[Kane the monster]

No!
Kuch nahi karna hai. Story pe dhyaan dene ka. Mein hu na...! Bas ignore karne ka. Simple! Use apni story likhne ka poora haq hai. Na hi hume dakhal dena hai aur na hi kisi ke PM me jaake kuch kehna hai. Just stay focused here.

Okay Big Brother as you say.....

 

[Dragon master]

Pa g gussy MN a k update hi tpka do

No!
Kuch nahi karna hai. Story pe dhyaan dene ka. Mein hu na...! Bas ignore karne ka. Simple! Use apni story likhne ka poora haq hai. Na hi hume dakhal dena hai aur na hi kisi ke PM me jaake kuch kehna hai. Just stay focused here.

y

 

[DeepHeart💘]

Angrezi nahi aati toh mat bola Karo.
Spellings nahi aati toh unhe seekho.
Mujhe 5 saal ho gaye hai iss forum par. Kisi bhi chutiyape ko dekh ke hi samajh jaata hu kya intention hai uska.

Ab tumhare double standards mein fir ek baar expose karta hu. Kitna khulwaoge aur?

Ek taraf tum kehte ho


Aur dusri taraf tum yaha aake ye kehte ho

Ab koi andha hi hoga jo use dekh ke ye samajh nahi payega ki akhir chal kya raha hai.

Batman ka two face bhi kuch nahi tumhare saamne.

Then I challenge you to please bring me that tale and disclose it in front of all of us.
3 saal se brainstorming kar raha hu. Aise hi nahi pahuchi hai ye iss muqaam par. Tum jaise log jab baatein halke me lete hai tab hi mujhe sabse zyada gussa aata hai.

I've invested almost 3 years into this story. Readers bhi saath bane hue hai. Tum sabko chutiya samajhte ho kya? You think we are fools?

Merae attitude ke baare me sabhi jaante hai. They know that... just don't poke me.. and everything will be fine. Sab acchi tarah se familiar hai mujhse. Ye kamaya jaata hai. Yuhi nahi mil jaata.

I don't care about your personal problems. Woh tumhari dikkatein hai. Mera unse aur tumse koi lena dena nahi.

Rahi baat meri image ki .. people just know. I don't have to give any explanation.

Aur ye tumne qubool kar liya.

I don't have any fear. I know what I'm delivering and I know my readers. Ab ya toh tumhe stats nazar nahi aa rahe ya fir kuch aur hi maajra hai. Agar blind ho toh padh kaise rahe ho mere comments?

Kherr uske bhi dherro excuses bann sakte hai. Uss baare me koi charcha nahi karna mujhe. I don't give a fuck about any mainframe system. I only focus on my story... And my readers. Par tumhari iss harqat ko saamne Lana bhi utna hi zaroori tha. Maine enough hints de di hai. Readers hoshiyar hai. Unhe pata hai ki maajra kya hai. Baaki, mein toh yaha likhne aata hu .. wahi karta rahunga.

werewolf bhai chodo na aise chutiyo ko ye to aate jate rahege inhe kya pta kuch bhi iska story ka intro padha sala samjh nhj aaya kon c bhasa mai likha hai tum apni story pe focus or thrill or maza lao baki in jaiso ko hum log dekh lenge

 

[Werewolf]

ROHIT RAJ SINGH Ju ka revo lamba hai. Bhula nahi hu mein. Uska reply Dena baaki hai. Samay milte hi dunga. Toh aisa mat sochna ki ju ke revo ka reply ab tak nahi aaya. Bade revos ka reply hamesha itminaan se baith ke lutf leke unhe padhte hue deta hu mein.

 

[Ashwathama]

Major Analysis:
I have read youur story thrice till your latest update[176]. Over all the story is good and mind grasping, but it could be more atractive and interesting. That i'll tell you how....
Desclaimer!!!!!
This comment is not for any hatred purpose, being a reader, it's my right ... So, let's start....
1: Start se story bohat achi pick up ki, scenes description or character ploting bhi bohat realistic thi. As the story progresses and veer found a system or phir pari or veer ki chemistry devalope hui. Everything was going good, but why this system is having Multiple personality disorder??
I... mean, system is not a human right? Or DID sirf humans ko hota hai na k virtual softwares ko. In the begening, veer was very curious to know about system's secrets. But now it seems like he doesn't have any interest in system, because ab pari level 10 par hai or she can answer veer's every possible questions about her. Bohat saray secrets still secrets hain jo abhi tak unfold ho janay chahyie thay or wo nai huay jinn mai system ka raaz top of the list hai...
2: Nidhi iss story mai key character hai, OK..... maan liya. She let veer stay at her home, she helped him every time for sake of veer's character devalopment. But yahan toh veer seems in love with her and wo ussay ghaas tak nai daal rahi. Means, come on buddy... Wolf bro you can do better then this. Nidhi's character is so stubbon. She is like in denile state every time, this element made your updates booring even when I was reading it for the very first time. Jab veer ne nidhi or shraya k sath kuch karna he nai hai toh wo ab tak plot mai kar kya rahi hain???
3: Now let's talk about some adultry stuff. I think this story is insest, but insest k naam par ab tak kya he hua hai... Aik devorced lirki k sath sex jo veer ki bhabi thii... Come on man this is not insest. Suman sunali or abha wo toh veer ki slaves hain na toh wo toh insest mai count he nai hoon gee or sath he baki parizaad ghar ki aurteen bhi..
Tej, Bhoomika, Arohi, ye insest element ka key element hain... But inn k sath halki phulki kissing k ilawa kuch bhi nai hua... kyou???
Kiara ko start mai verginity lose karnay k liye use kar liya or uss k baat say he uss k sath koi romantic scene he nai hai.. On the contrary, Sonia jo veer k sath itni close ho rahi hai thi uss ki bhi kuch samajh nai aa rahi, kabhi wo veer k bohatcloser hoti toh kabhi kahan hoti kdoubt hota hai k wo story mai hai bhi k nai...
I have also read your first story, Akhir kyou: uss mai jiss tarha aap ne aurtoon ka haram banaya tah or at the end ek sath bari bari rahul unhay use kar raha tha that was intance booring. Agar iss story mai bhi aap ki approach wohi honay wali hai toh bro I'm sorry to say but, your this story is going to be a big disapointment for readers....
Now let me make you understand in your way, jessay aap examples detay ho. Maan lo k aap ko nahana hai or shampoo ki bottle almost khali hai. Aap k paas new shampoo bottle hai, but aap purani wali mai paani daal kar ussay he recycle kar k use kartay ja rahay ho. Bhai jab new bottlre hai toh purani kyou recycle kar rahy ho??? SAme case with your characters. Jab itni females hain toh kyou baar baar sirf suman or abha ko sex doll bana k rakha hai? Why don't use Bhoomika, tej, arohi or kavia instead?.. Wo toh veer mai interested bhi hain... Sonia or suhana bhi bekaar mai ghoom rahi hain because aap unhay toh use karo gay nai. Right?
4: Veer ko kiara ka mission mila k use k emotions retrieve karnay hain. Agar nai kiye toh wo kabhi normal nai ho sakay ge or veer ussay kho bhi de ga.. Aik taraf kiara Julia se kehtay hai k I want veer to clame me or doosri taraf you say k she doesn't have any emotions. Or agar ye emotions, ye feelings uss mai diary padhnay k baad ayen hain toh veer ka mission abhi tak clear kyou nai hua kiara wala???? WTF is going on???
5: NOw let's come to main fighting scenes jo iss story ki jaan hain... First of all veer ka fighting style kyou defined nai hai? Martialart in genral is an amalgamation of various fighting sports. Like.. Karatee, BJJ, Taikondo, Judo, Kungfuand many more. Veer kis style or form ko carry kar ra hai????
NOw, What rationalism is this????.. Ab tak jitnay system holders show case huay hain unn k paas aik he categorie k legendary cards kyou hain? Means veer Indian region ka hai iss liye uss k paas genral cards hain, crimson america se tha iss liye uss k paas bhi genral category k cards hain like limb substitution, probability manipulation etc etc.. But on the other hand Jaolong k paas black magic walay cards hain jo ab tak disclose huay.. HOwww and Whyyy???? Legendary cards toh kismat se miltay hain na khud ki marzi se toh nai, toh phir uss k paas same categorie k cards kaisay? Waheen Ranchu k paas shaolin fighting based cards hain and so the case with rest of the system holders... aisa kyou nai k veer k paas koi black magic wala card hota ya Ranchu k paas Beo wolf blessings ya aisay he cards shuffle bhi toh saktay thay na... toh kyou nai???????
6: Crimson K paas koi buff card nai tha jaisa veer k paas veo wolf hai, right? If you say no then tis is your biggest blunder. Because crimson k marnay k baad uss k cards veer or Ava mai distribute huay thay or humay ye samajh aa gaya k kisi bhi system holder k marnay k baad uss k legendary cards he reward k roop mai miltay hain na k uss ki skils bhi, toh agar aisa hai k crimson k paas aisa koi card nai tha or wo veer se sirf apnaay stats or bertigo skil ki base par lad raha tha toh uss k stats kya 200+ thay kya? Because paris mai veer ki agility 140 par thi or kyou k full moon nai tha toh uss ki speed 50% he extra thi that means 140 orignal agility + 70 beo wolf blessings card ki agility = 210... Or iss k bavajood veer ko crimson ki agility match karna mushkil lag ra tha. uss time toh veer ki strength bhi 140 thi jo baad mai oceant island tak jatay jatay 150 tak pohanch gai thi, or iss k bavajood crimson was almost 3 times stronger then him. How????
First. crimson was fighting only with the help of his stats no buff card was involved phir bhi wo itna strong tha jab k ussay b system milay 1 ya 1.5 saal se zayada nai hua, so how can he be so much powerful???
Now comes the latest fight. Here... congratulations.... your oponent is blind... [claps, claps..] But, he has ora vission skil jiss ki help se wo human, animals or trees ka ora dekh sakta hai.. OK, no problem... But the problem is, how much insane system he is having???
Abhi tak yahi samajh aye hai k Mr.X or chchoor kar baki sab ko system milay 1 se 2 saal he huay hai. Or hum ye baat achi tarhan se samajhtay hai k itnay time system kahan tak upgrade ho sakta hai toh crimson or jaolong itna havvy system kaisy rakhay huay hain wo bhi kisi buff card k bina???? Or jaolong toh blind hai na, wo toh sirf veer ka ora he dekh sakta hai. so, wo veer k haath paun ki exact movement kaisy dekh paa raha hai???? He should not be able to see veer's movement but yahan toh scene he kuch or hai. Veer is not even able to touch him dispite of his blindness... Means, WtFFFF..

So, these were some mistakes which I remember.. In real, there are many more but unfortunatly I can't write them down. Agar aisa kia toh meri khud ki aik update ban jaye ge mistakes par.. hahaha
so this was it, hope you won't make further illogical mistakes.
Waiting for next update.. smiles..

हे बन्धु, आप मेरे DARK केले का RIDE कीजिये...

तब तक इस कहानी को हम सब पढ लेते हैं ।​

 

[ROHIT RAJ SINGH]

ROHIT RAJ SINGH Ju ka revo lamba hai. Bhula nahi hu mein. Uska reply Dena baaki hai. Samay milte hi dunga. Toh aisa mat sochna ki ju ke revo ka reply ab tak nahi aaya. Bade revos ka reply hamesha itminaan se baith ke lutf leke unhe padhte hue deta hu mein.

it's ok bro...
waise ye bat mai khud bhi janta tha ki mere revo. Ka reply aaiega hi aaiega bhale thora late aaie...

kyuki bhut time se follow kr rha hu aapko aur itna to janta hu ki aap sare review ka hi reply dete ho.

 

[Ashwathama]

Well, graphed but I guess he cares more for views and likes thats y dono stories he incest may hi hala kay this is a fantasy and not a formal story. Content is going down like the great taitanic. More questions and low answers bringing 0 logic to us.

उपर बाला आपकी गुद्दा द्वार मे तीर मारेगा मित्र .
डरो बे ....कुछ तो डरो​