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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

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Update - 142 ~ Necessitation

Ab tak...

Idhar upar udte helicopter me uss ladki ke baal hawa me lehra rahe the.

Tabhi uske mann me ek awaaz aayi,

*DING*

‘I’m sorry…! Veer!’

Aur udhar Mumbai me Ragini ke ghar me, apne kamre me laiti Bhavna achanak bechaini ke chalte bistar par uth ke baith gayi.


Ab aage...

*Badump* *Badump*

Bhavna ka dil zorr-zorr se dhadak raha tha. Kaleja baahar aane ko ho raha tha. Ye kaisi ajeeb si bechaini woh mehsoos kar rahi thi. Uska jee behad michla raha tha.

Achanak hi uske kamre ka darwaza khula aur haafti hui Tej andar aayi,

Tej : M-Mom!?

Bhavna : Tej?? Iss waqt yaha? Kya hua?

Subah ke 7 baj rahe the aur Tej ka iss qadar uske kamre me aana koi maamuli baat nahi thi.

Tej : Mom! Ajeeb sa mehsoos ho raha hai. Ek bure sapne ke chalte neend khul gayi. Paseena aane laga, jee ghabrane laga. Isliye yaha aa gayi.

Bhavna ki bauhe ye sunte hi chintan me sikud gayi.

Bhavna : Tum akeli nahi ho beta. Aao! Baitho!

Tej kamre ke andar aake apni Maa ke bagal se baith gayi.

Tej : Veer se abhi tak baat nahi hui hai. Mujhe ab fiqr ho rahi hai. Wo bhi to call kar sakta hai na? Kahi wo kisi musibat me toh nahi fass gaya na?

Bhavna (frowns) : Tum theek keh rahi ho beta! Itna lamba samay nahi lagna chahiye. Agar wo vyast bhi hai to kam se kam ek phone call to kar hi dena tha usse. Kuch baat zaroor hai.

Bhavna nahi chaahti thi ki uska mann uss disha me jaaye. Par na chaahte hue bhi uska mann wahi jaa raha tha. Aur, uski ghabrahat harr guzarte pal badhti hi jaa rahi thi.

'Mera beta...!' Usne apne ek haath se apne seene ko bheench liya.

Tej : Toh kya kare Mom?

Bhavna : Huh? Ho sakta hai Veer kisi ko koi alag number ya soochna de ke gaya ho. Shayad Ragini ko kuch pata ho. Sab ko uth jaane do. Fir hum baat karte hai.

Tej (nods) : Mmm!

Veer ke ghar me subah wese hi sabhi jaldi uth jaate the. Unn sabhi ke uthate hi jab saare log living room me ekatr hue toh Tej se ab aur raha na gaya,

Tej : A-Aap sab! Kya aap sab me se kisi ki Veer se baat hui hai?

Shweta sabse pehli thi jisne jawaab diya,

Shweta : Nahi! Lekin, uska phone Ragini ko zaroor aaya karta tha jab bhi woh baahar jaata tha. Ragini?

Ragini : Nahi Tai ji! Meri baat Veer se bas message pe hui thi. Mene parso pucha tha uss se ki sab theek hai waha? Toh uska reply aaya tha ki sab badhiya hai. Woh jald hi lautega.

Tej : Uske baad?

Ragini : Uske baad mene kal bhi message bheja tha. Lekin, message seen nahi hai.

Ragini ki iss khabar par woh sabhi ek chinta me doob gayi.

Bhavna : Kya woh tumhe koi aur number deke gaya hai? Emergency ke liye?

Ragini : Hmm? Nahi! Woh khud se hi call karta tha toh-!

Tej : Arohi? Kavya? Kya tum dono ki baat hui hai uss se?

Tej ka prashna sunn Arohi ne dheere se naa me sarr hila diya. Veer ki khabar se woh bhi anjaan thi.

Kavya : Didi! Veer bhaiya ne zaroor apna phone gira diya hoga kahi. Woh bhulakkad toh hai hi. Hehe! Ek baar school time me apna rumaal bhul gaye the. Toh fir mera ladkiyo wala rumaal use kiye the hahahaha!

Arohi : Kavyaaaa!!! Ye mazaak ka waqt nahi!

Arohi ki daant sunn Kavya apna chehra ferr muh fula li.

Kavya : Aap sab itna kyu darr rahe ho? Abhi Choti Tai ji ke gaav me Veer bhaiya uss ghar ki terrace se neeche nahi gire the? Kursi pe land kiye the. Unko kuch nahi hua tha. Ek baar Diwali ke time jab mein aur Arohi di ye waale ghar aa rahe the tab kuch gunde hamare peeche lag gaye the.

Tej : Gunde?

Kavya (nods) : Mmm-hmmm! Gunde! Gande waale! Par Veer Bhaiya waha hero ki tarah bachane aaye the hume. Dii yaad hai na aapko?

Arohi ko turant hi woh pal yaad aa gaya jab Veer usse bachaane aaya tha. Uska haath apne aap hi Veer dwaara di gayi unn kaan ki baaliyo par chala gaya. Aur woh ahista se apna sarr haan me hilaayi,

Arohi (nods) : Mmm!

Kintu, Bhavna ke maathe par lakeere chhaayi hui thi.

'Gunde...!?'

Woh samajh chuki thi ki uska abhi apne bete ke bohut se kisso ke baare me jaan'na baaki tha.

Kavya : Toh aap log khamakha itni tension le rahe ho. Bhaiya ka phone ghum gaya hai pakke se. Woh dekhna khud hi apni taraf se call karenge.

Usne keh toh diya, par sabhi ke ashaant mann ko saantvna dene ke liye ye kaafi nahi tha.

Ragini : Ahhh! Ek minute!! Kavya? Pichli baar Veer woh Suhana Miss ke saath gaya tha na? Woh famous Sonia..! Businesswoman!! Unki badi behan hai na? Woh dono holi me aayi thi na hamare ghar?

Tej : Sonia? Suhana? K-Kaun hai ye?

Kavya (nods) : Mm! Haan! Yaad aaya! Aayi toh thi woh dono.

Ragini : Toh unhone tumhe apna number diya tha na?

Kavya : Ahhn! W-Woh-!!

Jab Kavya nazre churaane lagi toh Arohi ne uski baah pakad li,

Arohi : Ab ye mat kehna ki tumne woh kho diya.

Kavya : Nahi!!! Woh...! Mene paper pe note down kiya tha unka number. Aur ab mujhe yaad nahi ki-

Arohi : Kaaaaavyyyaaaaaa!!

Woh zorr se usse chillaayi.

Arohi : Mene tumhe kaha hai na kitni baar ki hamesha important numbers ko apne phone me save kiya karo.

Kavya : Dii! Tab Holi thi. Mein buri tarah rang se puti hui thi. Isliye mobile ko haath nahi lagaya. Bhaiya ke room se hi copy pen laayi thi aur- arre haan!!! Bhaiya ke room me kahi padi hogi woh copy. Ruko!!!

Woh bhaagte hue andar gayi toh uske peeche-peeche Arohi bhi chal di.

Toh wahi idhar Ragini ke phone par ussi samay Nidhi ka call aa gaya.

Ragini : Hello?

Nidhi : Hello! Kaisi hai aap?

Ragini : J-Jii mein theek hu! Aap bataiye! Aaj mujhe kaise yaad kiya?

Nidhi : Veer ka phone nahi lag raha tha toh socha aapko hi laga lu. Darasal, agle mahine Holi hai. Aur exams bhi rahenge. Mene bas ye batane ke liye phone kiya hai ki Veer se kahiyega woh padhna shuru kar de. Semester ke last exams hai. Fir uska last year lag jayega.

Ragini : Ah! J-Jii! Mein keh dungi!

Nidhi (smiles) : Jii! Dekhiye! Business apni jagah hai. Par- Par ab companies aane lagengi. Veer se kahiyega wo prepare kare. Baaki, mein toh hu hi. Aap jaanti hai ki job kitni zaroori hai. Side me wo business kar sakta hai. Lekin-

Ragini : H-Haan! Aap sahi hai. M-Mein keh dungi uss se.

Nidhi : Jii! Aur usse mere paas bhi bhej dijiyega. Mein usse samjha dungi. Kuch pointers de dungi exams ke liye.

Ragini : S-Sure! Thank you!

Nidhi (smiles) : No need for that. Accha! Mein rakhti hu.

Ragini : Hmm!

Aur call cut ho gaya. Log Veer ko yaad kar rahe the. Parantu, unhe kya pata tha ki woh iss waqt kis haal me tha. Zinda tha bhi ya nahi?

***

Mumbai me Veer ke ghar bhale hi subah ke 7:30 ho rahe the. Parantu, Paris me yaha ab bhi raat ka andhera barkaraar tha.

Yaha derr raat ke 3 baje hue the. Paris ka samay Mumbai se lagbhag saadhe 4 ghante peeche tha.

Hawa me helicopter lehra raha tha. Saagar ki ufanti lehre chattaano par thapede maar rahi thi. Dheere-dheere jab badi lehre takra ke thamti toh paani kuch shan ke liye shaant ho jaata. Aur ussi ke saath uska shor bhi.

Uss ardh-paardarshi jal ke andar dekh paana jatil tha. Upar se raat ka andhera. Helicopter ki spotlight ke bawajood kahi unhe woh nazar nahi aa raha tha jiski unhe talaash thi. Aur woh tha-

Veer ka shav!

"Dhoondhte raho!!! Aasmaan kha gaya usse ya dharti nigal gayi? Paani me hi hoga. Chappa-chappa chhaan maaro."

Senior officer ki awaaz uss poore ilaake me goonj gayi.

Par talaashi ke pehle Ava urf Natalia Martin ko helicopter se neeche utaar diya gaya.

Andre : Miss Natalia. Ab aap surakshit hai. Mein Andre! DGSI ki orr se ek agent. Mere saath chaliye.

Ava ne ahista se haami bhari aur uske peeche-peeche chal di.

Raasta wahi tha jaha se Veer aaya tha. Aur waha se nikal jaise hi woh sab building ke nazdeek aaye toh Andre ghabraate hue aage badha,

Andre : Terashimaaa!!!!

Woh chillaaya aur Terashima ko zameen se uthaate hue usse jhunjhlaya. Kintu, woh hosh me nahi thi.

Uski saansein aur physical condition check karne ke baad Andre ne ek raahat ki saans li.

Toh utne me building ke dusre maale se Chris aur uski team neeche aayi. Chris ki baah me goli lagi hui thi.

Neeche aate hi Chris ki aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi jab usne apne aas-paas ka nazaara dekha.

Lighthouse ka chhajja tabaah ho chuka tha. Aur neeche, ek bade se chopper ke chithde ude hue the jo aag ki lapto me jhulas rahe the.

Chris : Good god!! K-Kya hua yaha par?

Andre : Chris!!!

Chris : Andre?

Andre : Tumhe toh chot lagi hai. Quick! Jaldi chalo!

Chris : H-Haan! Upar bache hue logo ko arrest kar liya gaya hai.

Andre : Chinta mat karo! Poora area chhaan ke hi yaha se niklenge. Pehle tumhe medical assist dena zaroori hai.

Airplane airstrip par pehle se hi khada hua tha. DGSI aur police officers dwaara Natalia ko plane ke andar baitha diya gaya.

Toh wahi jis plane me Natalia ko laaya gaya tha, uske andar bhi chhaan-been shuru kar di gayi. Kintu,

Jo pilots Natalia ko plane me yaha baitha ke laaye the, unki bas laashe hi haath lagi.

Andre : Shit!!! Ab kya kiya jaaye?

Senior officer : Le ke chalna hoga inhe. Forensic report shayad kuch bata de. Baaki, bodies par se phones aur baaki details kese retrieve karni hai woh kaam hum par chhor do.

Andre (nods) : Hmm!

Aur kaafi mehnat mashakkat ke baad ek airplane ko waha se bhej diya gaya.

Yaha se ek plane ravaana hua tha toh wahi Paris ke airport par ek airplane land ho raha tha.

Plane ke land hote hi, usme se log nikle aur airport ke baahar jaane lage.

Unhi chand logo me se ek khubsoorat aurat tezz qadmo ke saath aage badh rahi thi. Uske peeche-peeche ek aadmi tha aur ek aur aurat chal rahi thi.

"Miss! Yaha se ab kaha?"

Awaaz Prakash Uncle ki thi. Aur aage chal rahi aurat koi aur nahi balki Suhana hi thi.

Uske chehre par chinta aur ghabrahat saaf jhalak rahi thi.

"Suhana!!! Kuch bataogi ya nahi?"

Ye awaaz thi Ashita ki. Suhana ki personal psychologist. Divya toh na aa saki parantu Ashita Suhana ke peeche peeche chali aayi.

Suhana ka ravaiyya bada hi ajeeb lag raha tha usse. Uski personal psychologist hone ke naate uski harr harqato par dhyaan dena Ashita ki zimmedari thi.

Suhana : Prakash Uncle!! Hume Ava ko dhundhna hai.

Prakash : P-Par Ava Miss to kidnap ho chuki hai na Miss.

Suhana tezz raftaar se chalti jaa rahi thi. Uska peeche karne ke liye Prakash aur Ashita ko bhaagna pad raha tha.

Prakash : Aur aap abhi bhi poori tarah theek nahi hui ho.

Suhana (frowns) : Abhi sabse zyada important hai Ava ke baare me khabar lagna Uncle. Veer bhaari musibat me hai. Uska Phone nahi lag raha hai aur na hi aapke uss Eric se contact ho paa raha hai.

Ashita : Veer? Who's this Veer?

Prakash ne ek jhalak Ashita ko dekha par uske prashn ka uttar na diya.

Prakash : Aise me toh fir Ava Miss ke sabse qareebi log ya fir yaha ke investigation department jaana hi behtar hoga. Wahi se kuch detail lag payegi Miss.

Suhana : Ava ke qareebi kaun hai, ye hum nahi jaante. Investigation department hi chalna behtar hoga.


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Road taraf aate hi ek car pehle se hi unke liye lagi hui thi.

Prakash ne aage badh car ka darwaza khola aur Suhana andar baith gayi. Saath hi Ashita bhi.

Prakash aage driver ke bagal se baitha aur car waha se ravana ho gayi.

Magar abhi kuch hi kilometer ki duri tay ki thi unhone ki saamne ka nazara dekh woh sabhi chaunk gaye.

Paris ke iss jaane maane chauraahe par afra-tafri machi hui thi. News reporters idhar se udhar apne cameramans ke saath coverage ke liye bhaag rahe the.


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Toh wahi police unhe control karne me lagi hui thi. Logo ko surakshit rakhne ke liye woh waha se jald se jald area khaali karwaane me lage hue the.

Ye ilaaka wahi tha jaha kal raat bada dhamaka hua tha. Tehqiqat karna kisse pasand nahi hota? Log apna camera leke aur reporters apna mic leke pohuch rahe the.

Police ke liye kaam badhta jaa raha tha.

Suhana : Something big has happened. Whole city is in chaos.

Ashita : Y-Ye sab!? Akhir ho kya raha hai?

Car me baithe-baithe unn sab ne dekha ki kaise news reporters harr ghatna ki jankaari dene me lage hue the.

Toh wahi janta me se kuch log aise the jo virodh ka pradarshan kar rahe the. Naare lagaate hue woh police aur France ki govt. ke khilaaf awaaz utha rahe the.


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"Kya yahi hai France ki suraksha? Kya yahi hai police ki security? Aise hi itna bada hamla sheher ke beecho-beech kar diya jaata hai. Kya kar rahi thi police? Kitne log maare gaye hai. Kaha hai hamla karne waala? Kya police pakad paayi usse? Hum jawaab chaahte hai!!!"

Janta ka virodh badhta hi jaa raha tha. Aur unki awaaz ko logo tak pohuchaane ka kaam media kar rahi thi.

Police officers logo aur media ke beech ghir kar unhe bas hidaayat hi de sakte the.

"France 24 News channel se mein bol rahi hu Audrey aur hamaare saamne maujood hai police department ke jaane maane Chief. Sir! Kya kehna chaahte hai aap iss waqt? Janta police se naakhush hai. Din-dahaade hamla ho jaata hai aur police ke paas saamne rakhne ke liye koi jawaab nahi hai."

Chief ne logo ko shaant rehne ka ishaara kiya par shor tha jo kam hone ka naam hi nahi le raha tha.

"Dekhiye!! Situation kaafi critical hai aur complex bhi. Ye samay virodh ka nahi hai. Mein janta se kehna chahunga ki kripya kar woh hume apna kaam karne de. Mujrim ke peeche DGSI aur hamari force lagi hui hai. Mujhe aasha hai jald hi hum ghuspethiye ko pakad lenge. Mein aashvashan deta hu ki France ki police apna poora de rahi hai."

"Par janta ka kya Sir? Jinhone apni jaan gavaayi hai unka kya? Uss baare me aap kya kehna chaahenge? Kya aap maante hai ki aap ke department me se kahi na kahi security ko lekar chook hui hai?"

"Ji nahi! Hum harr samay alert rehte hai. Ye ek haadsa hai. Aur mujhe bohut khed hai iss baat ka ki kuch logo ne apni jaane gawa di hai. Magar hum jald hi mujrim ko pakad ke janta ke saamne pesh karenge."

Itna bol Chief waha se hatt ke jaane lage toh news reporter unka peecha karne lage. Parantu, police officers ne unhe aage badhne na diya.

"Toh jaisa ki dekha aapne. Police chief ka yahi kehna hai ki woh apna poora de rahe hai aur tehqiqaat karne me teams juti hui hai. Mera bhi yahi nivedan hai darshako se ki kripya apne apne ghar me hi rahiye. Police ko apna kaam karne dijiye. Tab tak ke liye aaiye aapko dikhaate hai, uss building ki dasha jaha par dhamaka hua tha."

Aur news reporter cameraman ke saath waha se nikal gayi.

Car me baithe jab Suhana aur baaki sab ne ye dekha toh unki haalat patli ho gayi.

Ashita : I-Itna bada haadsa ho gaya yaha?

Prakash : Aage bhaari checking lagi hai Miss. Cars ko bina check kiye aage badhne nahi de rahe hai.



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Suhana : Hum clean hai. Hum par koi aarop nahi hai. It's okay. Let them do! Lekin agar time lagta hai then-!! Find another route.

Prakash : Jii! Mein aage jaake unse puch ke aata hu ki pehle hamari checking kar de. Toh hum yaha se nikal sake.

Suhana (nods) : Hmm!

Prakash gaadi se utar aage Signal ki orr chal diya. Lekin tabhi chauraahe ke upar bade bade hoardings ke paas lagi ek badi si screen par news aayi.

Suhana ki nazre fauran hi uss par tik gayi.


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"Breaking News coming from the blast incident which took place yesterday. Singer and celebrity Miss Natalia Martin has been rescued by the DGSI and police force. The suspect has been executed on the spot. It has been confirmed that the suspect didn't co-operate with the police. Hence, squandering his life. Body has still not been found. However, DGSI is working diligently to search the criminal's body."

Khabar ke saat hi Veer ki wahi tasveere screen par aayi jo Andre ne slot machine waali alley me video me record ki thi.

Suhana ne jab ye suna aur dekha toh uski saansein maano atak gayi. Saaf saaf likha hua tha. Suspect was executed on the spot.

Apraadhi ko wahi par maar diya gaya. Suhana ka badan thar-thar kaanpne laga. Uski aankhein feli hui thi. Kya woh saamne jo dekh rahi thi woh sach tha?

Aur fir iska bodh hote hi ek ajeeb si anubhooti usse andar se hui. Aankhon se apne aap aasu nirantar behne lage.

Ashita : Suhana!?

Suhana toh jaise kisi aur hi duniya me jaa chuki thi. Badan me kampan rukne ka naam nahi le raha tha.

Achanak hi uske phone par call aaya, jiski awaaz ne uska dhyaan kheecha.

Bina screen me number dekhe Suhana ne call uthaaya aur phone ko kaan pe lagaya.

Toh waha se awaaz aayi,

"Umm! Suhana ma'am? Kya ye aapka number hai? Mein Veer bhaiya ki choti behan- Kavya bol rahi hu. Hello? Hello?"

Suhana ki bolti band thi. Kaise jawaab de? Aur kya jawaab de? Saamne screen par Veer ki akhiri tasveere jhalak rahi thi. Kaise kahe uss ladki se ki uska bhai marr chuka hai?

Usse mehsoos hua jaise andar se kuch behad keemti toot gaya ho. Jisse ab dobaara kabhi nahi joda jaa sakta.

Kavya : H-Hello?

Suhana : M-Mein tumhe baad me call karti hu Kavya. Okay?

Kavya : Ohh! O-Okay! Wo-! Woh Veer bhaiya ke baare me puchna tha. K-Kya aapko koi khabar hai woh kaha par hai?

Suhana : N-Nahi! Mein pata kar ke tumhe uske baare me bataati hu. Th-Theek hai?

Kavya : Okay! Thank you~ B-Bye!

Aur call cut ho gaya. Magar call cut hote hi Suhana toot ke bikhar gayi. Woh zorr zorr se rone lagi. Ashita usse achanak se iss qadar dekh ghabra gayi.

Ashita : Suhaaaanaa???

Parantu, Suhana koi jawaab nahi de rahi thi. Woh bas roti jaa rahi thi. Jhar-jhar uske aansu aankhon se beh ke gir rahe the.

'It can't be-!!! H-How can this happen?'

Yakeen nahi karna chaahti thi woh magar saamne news channel uske mann ko aur duwidha me daal raha tha.

'N-Nahi!! Aisa nahi ho sakta. It doesn't make any sense. R-Right! They haven't discovered him yet. Jab tak mein apni aankho se nahi dekh leti tab tak mein yakeen nahi karungi! Woh Aatish, Slogan, Nightwalker, Pitcher jaiso ke changul se baahar aaya hai. I know you're out there Veer...!'

Ashita : Suhanaaa?

Suhana ne agle hi shan apne aansu poche. Tab tak Prakash bhi laut ke aa chuka tha.

Prakash : Miss! Woh maan gaye hai. Check karwa ke nikalte hai.

Suhana : Plan badal chuka hai Uncle. Ab hum waha nahi jaa rahe. Ek hotel me rooms book kariye sab ke liye. Aaj raat hum wahi thehrenge. Aur kal Ava laut ke aa chuki hogi Paris me! Then we'll meet her.

Prakash : Theek hai!

'She's hiding something.'

Car checking ke baad seedhe ek hotel ki disha me chali gayi.

***


Las Vegas
Night...


Veer ke liye uske chaahne waale log lag chuke the. Harr koi uski khabar paane ke liye bechain tha.

Yaha Vegas me Divya ko ek baar punaah Nolan ne apne department bulaaya hua tha.

Andar jaate hi ek aur report uske saamne table par patak di gayi.

Nolan : Ab sthiti haath se nikal rahi hai Divya. Take a look at this.

Report ko uthaate hue jab Divya ne sab kuch padha toh woh bhauchakki reh gayi. Atyant krodh janm liya, saath hi vyaakulta bhi.

Divya : Ye France waale paagal ho gaye hai kya? Andhe hai kya? Dikhaayi nahi deta kya namoono ko??

Nolan : Tumhe ek baat aur bataani hai. Kuch din pehle France ki orr se House of the Killers ke cases ko leke ek request aayi thi.

Divya : Wh-What?

Nolan : Hmm! Unhe report chahiye thi HOK ki.

Divya : Kyaaaaa?

Nolan : Aur humne unhe bheji bhi hai report.

Divya : What? Are you in your right mind??? HOK koi normal murder case nahi hai. Ye confidential hai. Classified reports ko department dusre desh me kaise bhej sakta hai?

Nolan : Unka daawa hai ki wahi hamla unke upar hone waala tha. Unhe saboot bhi mile hai. Aur iska rachayita unn logo ne kisse tehraya hai pata hai na?

Nolan ne agle hi pal report ka akhiri panna khola toh usme Veer ki tasveer bani hui thi.

Divya ka haal behaal ho utha. Woh apni jagah par baithate hue bhayanak peeda mehsoos kar rahi thi. Usse koi raasta nazar nahi aa raha tha. Uske nain bheeg uthe.



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Divya : Y-Ye sab-!!!

Nolan : Hum jaante hai Veer nirdosh hai. Hum sirf ek hi kaam kar sakte hai. Aur woh hai ki apni report bana ke bheje jisme Veer ko normal citizen ke roop me dikhaaya jaaye. Jaisa ki vaastav me hai. Lekin-! Jo kuch hoga woh wahi se ho payega. Mujhe nahi lagta woh maanenge.

Divya (sobs) : A-Aap kaise!? Kaise bhej sakte ho waha reports? *sniff*

Nolan : Divya! Jab dusra desh vipda me aane waala ho aur unhone koi maang rakhi ho toh hume badle me madad karni hi padti hai. Hamara desh iss samasya se joojh chuka hai. Upar se order the ki report ko bheja jaaye taaki woh pehle se iske liye taiyaar ho sake. Hume kya pata tha ki waha Veer ko fassa diya jayega!

Divya (screams) : Magar Veer nirdosh hai!!!!

Nolan : Jaanta hu! Isliye jo bann padega, department woh karega.

Itna bol woh baahar nikal gaya. Kintu, Divya wahi gir ke subakne lagi. Iss ladke se itna lagaav ho jayega usse, usne khud kabhi nahi socha tha.

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Agli raat mahaul kuch aur hi tha. News par Ava se sawaal jawaab kiye jaa rahe the. Usse Paris aaye kuch hi ghante hue the ki reporters uske upar chadh pade.

Tamaam sawaalo ke saamne Ava mics se ghiri hui thi.

Aur unn sabhi sawaalo ka bas usne ek hi jawaab diya,

"Mujhe theek se yaad nahi mere saath kya hua tha. Mein bhaag rahi thi. Fir pakad li gayi aur fir kahi mujhe le jaaya gaya. Mujhe koi jankaari nahi hai inn sab ke peeche kaun hai. Mein abhi ghabrayi hui hu aur abhi kuch samay akele me guzarna chaahti hu."

Bas! Ye kuch shabd kaafi the. Doctors se leke security sabhi ne reporters ko Ava se dur kar diya. Doctors Ava ki health condition check karne lage. Toh wahi kuch reporters ke sawaal jawaab dene me lag gaye.

Sab kuch jab thoda shaant hua. Toh raat me Ava hospital ke liye chal padi.

Woh akeli thi. Face par mask tha uske. Car thode sunsaan raaste se guzar hi rahi thi jab theek saamne raaste par koi beech me aa gaya.

Ava ne car side me roki aur uss se baahar nikal woh uss shaks ki orr gayi.

Saamne wahi tha!!


Crimson!!!

Par uski aankhon me bhaiyankar krodh tha. Aag baboola ho rakhi thi uski aankhein.

Crimson (garajte hue) : Kaha hai woh??? Kaha hai??

Ava (frowns) : He's dead!

Agle hi pal Ava ka gala Crimson ke mazboot haatho me tha.

Crimson : NAHI!!!!! TUMNE MARRNE KAISE DIYA USSE??? WOH MERA SHIKAAR THA!!!!

Ava : Ngghhh!!!

*BAAAAAAMMMMMMM*

Ava ki laat turant hi Crimson ke pait se takraayi aur Crimson dur jaate hue lohe ke dabbo ke beech jaa gira. Uska ek haath wese hi pehle se gaayab tha. Seene par abhi bhi khoon ke dhabbe maujood the.

Ava : *huff* *huff* Mene tumhara kaam kar diya hai. Apne aadmiyo ko waapas bulao.

Crimson karaahte hue utha aur kuch derr tak Ava ko dekhta raha.

Ava ki awaaz agle hi pal kaafi khaufnaak ho gayi.

Ava : APNE AADMIYO KO WAAPAS BULAO! ABHI!!!

Crimson : Girl!!! Awaaz neeche! Bhulo nahi ki tum kis situation me ho abhi.

Fir bhi apna phone nikaal usne ek message bheja. Aur uske message bhejte hi,

8 se 10 snipers jo apna aim Grace Martin ke ward ki khidki par lagaaye baithe the woh waha se nikal gaye.

Crimson : They are gone!

Ava : Agar aisa kuch dobaara hua, toh mein tumhaare tukde tukde kar dungi! Fir chaahe apni hi jaan kyu na gawa du!

Crimson (gusse me) : Woh mera shikaar tha!!! Meraaaa!!!! But you let him-

Ava : He didn't surrender. He chose to die. He gave away his life rather than surrendering to you.

Kehte hue uski palke neeche ko jhuk gayi.

Crimson : Y-You-!!

Ava (glances) : Aur itna gussa kyu? Tum usse maarna chaahte the. Woh jaa chuka hai. Tumhara maqsad poora hua. Why the rage?

Crimson : Tch! Apne kaam se kaam rakho! Aur tumhara haal bhi toh alag hai. Aren't you caring for him too much? He was no one to you! Why such a reaction then!? Interesting!

Ava : Fuck off!

Ava waha se mudi aur apni car me baith ravana ho gayi.

Raaste par bas Crimson hi akela khada raha.

'Veeeeeerr!! You motherfucking bastard-!!! Mene nahi socha tha ki tum maut ko gale laga loge. Tch! Plan bigad gaya hai. Sirf iss ek move ke kaaran. Mujhe kuch aur karna hoga-!!! But first-!! I must fix something!'

Woh soch waha se hawa ke jhoke ki tarah gaayab ho gaya.

*Click*

Yaha Hospital me ward ka darwaza khula. Aur Ava apni Maa Grace ke kamre me pravesh ki.

Maa ko dekhte hi, Ava apne ghutno par gir padi.

Maa ko dekh woh unke paas aayi.

"Mother-!!!"


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Kintu, Grace toh kisi murti ki tarah sthir waha laiti hui thi. Koi harqat nahi. Bas saansein chal rahi thi.

"K-Kyu? Kyu meri itni pareeksha li jaa rahi hai? Kyu mujhe woh karna pada?"

"Mother-!!! I commited a sin!!!"

"Mujhse bohut bada paap ho gaya hai mamma!!! I-I- I killed an innocent mamma!!"

Woh kaanch ki tarah toot ke bikhar gayi.


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"Mein bewakoof-!! Samajh na paayi!! I couldn't understand his heart. I never wanted to do it. But I did-!!! Mamma!!!"

*sniff*

"Woh yaha mujhe bachaane ke liye aaya tha. He didn't even ask me for any details. *sniff* Yet I- Yet I worked with that guy to frame him!!!"

*hic*

"Mother-!! You are my strength!! But you are my weakness too!!"

"Kaise? *sniff* Yaha tak pohuch gayi hu. Ab kaise peeche hatt sakti hu?"

Uske mann me ek notification saaf saaf jhalak raha tha.


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"I'm sorry-!!! I'm sorry Veer!!! I never wanted to do it-!!! *sniff* Mamma!!! *sniff* Speak to me!!! P-Please-!!!"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Itne bade bade bawaal updates ke baad ek cooldown update zaroori tha. Update 4.6k words ka hai. Like thokne ka. Target wahi hai. 140 likes. 2 updates aur aayenge. 1 poore past ko darshayega ki Crimson ne ye sab racha kaise. HOK kaise paida hua. Veer kaise framed hua. Dusre me wapas hum present me aa jayenge.

Dhanyavaad! ✨
Bhai ab to 140 like bhi ho gaye update kab tk aayega :waiting1::waiting1::waiting1::waiting1::waiting::waiting::waiting::waiting1::waitwhat::waiting::waiting1::waitwhat:
 
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Ava, Veer ko marna ya marne nahi dena chahti thi jisse spasht hai ki ava ko jo flag note aaya tha "target veer is dead", wo koi mission completion note nahi tha, kewal information tha. Jabki ye clear hai ki veer ke marne se Crimson ( ya ava) ka plan fail ho gaya tha.
 

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Dekhte jao bas man! Bohut bada game chal raha hai peeche.

:laugh: Bohut confusion hai re baba! Hai na? sabr rakho! Sab saamne aa raha hai. Bas sabr rakhna hoga.

Just wait and watch! :smartm:

It's okay! You can make as many theories you want. Wait for a few updates and then you will be able to grasp the situation more clearly.

Already de diya gaya hai bhai update.

Arre haha! Thanks man! Update 3 din ke schedule se aata hai. keep supporting!

Ye toh jeevan hai man! Difficulty toh badhegi hi na! :D

Dekhte hai hum!

:smartm:

Haan! Periodic motion ne sama baandh diya. :laughing:

Padhte jao bhai. Sharp rehna. Sab samajh me aata jayega. Dhanyavaad!

Thode din pehle toh sabko acchi lag rahi thi. :laugh:
Ab kya ho gaya!? D

Dhanyavaad!

Hein? :Jerry: Nahi bhai! Trinity ka matlab hi teen log hota hai. Tigdi! Tigdi complete hai apne aap me. Ava, Sonia aur Kaera. Ab inki trinity me aur koi na aane waala. Warna trinity apna meaning hi kho degi.

Ava is the last of them. First is Sonia, Second is Kaera and then Ava. Kahani me bhi unhe issi kram me laaya gaya hai.

:smartm:

Intezaar kiya tabhi toh aaj hum aise update dekh paa rahe hai aur unka lutf le paa rahe hai. Rush na karna mere liye sabse mushqil rehta hai. Temptation ke chalte aksar uske aage aadmi haar jaata hai. Mene roka hua hai khud ko. Koi kuch bhi kahe, kahani hamesha mere according hi akhir tak jayegi!
Arey ye to aapne pehle bhi bataya tha bhai. Pichle 3 episode ke prabhav mein meri buddhi bhrasht ho gayi aur main bhool gaya. Main to ab ye sochne laga tha ki trinity mein sab system waale honge aur wo veer ki madad karenge. Bahut bahut dhanyawad meri akal pe pade lighthouse ke pathar hatane ke liye
 

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Update - 142 ~ Necessitation

Ab tak...

Idhar upar udte helicopter me uss ladki ke baal hawa me lehra rahe the.

Tabhi uske mann me ek awaaz aayi,

*DING*

‘I’m sorry…! Veer!’

Aur udhar Mumbai me Ragini ke ghar me, apne kamre me laiti Bhavna achanak bechaini ke chalte bistar par uth ke baith gayi.


Ab aage...

*Badump* *Badump*

Bhavna ka dil zorr-zorr se dhadak raha tha. Kaleja baahar aane ko ho raha tha. Ye kaisi ajeeb si bechaini woh mehsoos kar rahi thi. Uska jee behad michla raha tha.

Achanak hi uske kamre ka darwaza khula aur haafti hui Tej andar aayi,

Tej : M-Mom!?

Bhavna : Tej?? Iss waqt yaha? Kya hua?

Subah ke 7 baj rahe the aur Tej ka iss qadar uske kamre me aana koi maamuli baat nahi thi.

Tej : Mom! Ajeeb sa mehsoos ho raha hai. Ek bure sapne ke chalte neend khul gayi. Paseena aane laga, jee ghabrane laga. Isliye yaha aa gayi.

Bhavna ki bauhe ye sunte hi chintan me sikud gayi.

Bhavna : Tum akeli nahi ho beta. Aao! Baitho!

Tej kamre ke andar aake apni Maa ke bagal se baith gayi.

Tej : Veer se abhi tak baat nahi hui hai. Mujhe ab fiqr ho rahi hai. Wo bhi to call kar sakta hai na? Kahi wo kisi musibat me toh nahi fass gaya na?

Bhavna (frowns) : Tum theek keh rahi ho beta! Itna lamba samay nahi lagna chahiye. Agar wo vyast bhi hai to kam se kam ek phone call to kar hi dena tha usse. Kuch baat zaroor hai.

Bhavna nahi chaahti thi ki uska mann uss disha me jaaye. Par na chaahte hue bhi uska mann wahi jaa raha tha. Aur, uski ghabrahat harr guzarte pal badhti hi jaa rahi thi.

'Mera beta...!' Usne apne ek haath se apne seene ko bheench liya.

Tej : Toh kya kare Mom?

Bhavna : Huh? Ho sakta hai Veer kisi ko koi alag number ya soochna de ke gaya ho. Shayad Ragini ko kuch pata ho. Sab ko uth jaane do. Fir hum baat karte hai.

Tej (nods) : Mmm!

Veer ke ghar me subah wese hi sabhi jaldi uth jaate the. Unn sabhi ke uthate hi jab saare log living room me ekatr hue toh Tej se ab aur raha na gaya,

Tej : A-Aap sab! Kya aap sab me se kisi ki Veer se baat hui hai?

Shweta sabse pehli thi jisne jawaab diya,

Shweta : Nahi! Lekin, uska phone Ragini ko zaroor aaya karta tha jab bhi woh baahar jaata tha. Ragini?

Ragini : Nahi Tai ji! Meri baat Veer se bas message pe hui thi. Mene parso pucha tha uss se ki sab theek hai waha? Toh uska reply aaya tha ki sab badhiya hai. Woh jald hi lautega.

Tej : Uske baad?

Ragini : Uske baad mene kal bhi message bheja tha. Lekin, message seen nahi hai.

Ragini ki iss khabar par woh sabhi ek chinta me doob gayi.

Bhavna : Kya woh tumhe koi aur number deke gaya hai? Emergency ke liye?

Ragini : Hmm? Nahi! Woh khud se hi call karta tha toh-!

Tej : Arohi? Kavya? Kya tum dono ki baat hui hai uss se?

Tej ka prashna sunn Arohi ne dheere se naa me sarr hila diya. Veer ki khabar se woh bhi anjaan thi.

Kavya : Didi! Veer bhaiya ne zaroor apna phone gira diya hoga kahi. Woh bhulakkad toh hai hi. Hehe! Ek baar school time me apna rumaal bhul gaye the. Toh fir mera ladkiyo wala rumaal use kiye the hahahaha!

Arohi : Kavyaaaa!!! Ye mazaak ka waqt nahi!

Arohi ki daant sunn Kavya apna chehra ferr muh fula li.

Kavya : Aap sab itna kyu darr rahe ho? Abhi Choti Tai ji ke gaav me Veer bhaiya uss ghar ki terrace se neeche nahi gire the? Kursi pe land kiye the. Unko kuch nahi hua tha. Ek baar Diwali ke time jab mein aur Arohi di ye waale ghar aa rahe the tab kuch gunde hamare peeche lag gaye the.

Tej : Gunde?

Kavya (nods) : Mmm-hmmm! Gunde! Gande waale! Par Veer Bhaiya waha hero ki tarah bachane aaye the hume. Dii yaad hai na aapko?

Arohi ko turant hi woh pal yaad aa gaya jab Veer usse bachaane aaya tha. Uska haath apne aap hi Veer dwaara di gayi unn kaan ki baaliyo par chala gaya. Aur woh ahista se apna sarr haan me hilaayi,

Arohi (nods) : Mmm!

Kintu, Bhavna ke maathe par lakeere chhaayi hui thi.

'Gunde...!?'

Woh samajh chuki thi ki uska abhi apne bete ke bohut se kisso ke baare me jaan'na baaki tha.

Kavya : Toh aap log khamakha itni tension le rahe ho. Bhaiya ka phone ghum gaya hai pakke se. Woh dekhna khud hi apni taraf se call karenge.

Usne keh toh diya, par sabhi ke ashaant mann ko saantvna dene ke liye ye kaafi nahi tha.

Ragini : Ahhh! Ek minute!! Kavya? Pichli baar Veer woh Suhana Miss ke saath gaya tha na? Woh famous Sonia..! Businesswoman!! Unki badi behan hai na? Woh dono holi me aayi thi na hamare ghar?

Tej : Sonia? Suhana? K-Kaun hai ye?

Kavya (nods) : Mm! Haan! Yaad aaya! Aayi toh thi woh dono.

Ragini : Toh unhone tumhe apna number diya tha na?

Kavya : Ahhn! W-Woh-!!

Jab Kavya nazre churaane lagi toh Arohi ne uski baah pakad li,

Arohi : Ab ye mat kehna ki tumne woh kho diya.

Kavya : Nahi!!! Woh...! Mene paper pe note down kiya tha unka number. Aur ab mujhe yaad nahi ki-

Arohi : Kaaaaavyyyaaaaaa!!

Woh zorr se usse chillaayi.

Arohi : Mene tumhe kaha hai na kitni baar ki hamesha important numbers ko apne phone me save kiya karo.

Kavya : Dii! Tab Holi thi. Mein buri tarah rang se puti hui thi. Isliye mobile ko haath nahi lagaya. Bhaiya ke room se hi copy pen laayi thi aur- arre haan!!! Bhaiya ke room me kahi padi hogi woh copy. Ruko!!!

Woh bhaagte hue andar gayi toh uske peeche-peeche Arohi bhi chal di.

Toh wahi idhar Ragini ke phone par ussi samay Nidhi ka call aa gaya.

Ragini : Hello?

Nidhi : Hello! Kaisi hai aap?

Ragini : J-Jii mein theek hu! Aap bataiye! Aaj mujhe kaise yaad kiya?

Nidhi : Veer ka phone nahi lag raha tha toh socha aapko hi laga lu. Darasal, agle mahine Holi hai. Aur exams bhi rahenge. Mene bas ye batane ke liye phone kiya hai ki Veer se kahiyega woh padhna shuru kar de. Semester ke last exams hai. Fir uska last year lag jayega.

Ragini : Ah! J-Jii! Mein keh dungi!

Nidhi (smiles) : Jii! Dekhiye! Business apni jagah hai. Par- Par ab companies aane lagengi. Veer se kahiyega wo prepare kare. Baaki, mein toh hu hi. Aap jaanti hai ki job kitni zaroori hai. Side me wo business kar sakta hai. Lekin-

Ragini : H-Haan! Aap sahi hai. M-Mein keh dungi uss se.

Nidhi : Jii! Aur usse mere paas bhi bhej dijiyega. Mein usse samjha dungi. Kuch pointers de dungi exams ke liye.

Ragini : S-Sure! Thank you!

Nidhi (smiles) : No need for that. Accha! Mein rakhti hu.

Ragini : Hmm!

Aur call cut ho gaya. Log Veer ko yaad kar rahe the. Parantu, unhe kya pata tha ki woh iss waqt kis haal me tha. Zinda tha bhi ya nahi?

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Mumbai me Veer ke ghar bhale hi subah ke 7:30 ho rahe the. Parantu, Paris me yaha ab bhi raat ka andhera barkaraar tha.

Yaha derr raat ke 3 baje hue the. Paris ka samay Mumbai se lagbhag saadhe 4 ghante peeche tha.

Hawa me helicopter lehra raha tha. Saagar ki ufanti lehre chattaano par thapede maar rahi thi. Dheere-dheere jab badi lehre takra ke thamti toh paani kuch shan ke liye shaant ho jaata. Aur ussi ke saath uska shor bhi.

Uss ardh-paardarshi jal ke andar dekh paana jatil tha. Upar se raat ka andhera. Helicopter ki spotlight ke bawajood kahi unhe woh nazar nahi aa raha tha jiski unhe talaash thi. Aur woh tha-

Veer ka shav!

"Dhoondhte raho!!! Aasmaan kha gaya usse ya dharti nigal gayi? Paani me hi hoga. Chappa-chappa chhaan maaro."

Senior officer ki awaaz uss poore ilaake me goonj gayi.

Par talaashi ke pehle Ava urf Natalia Martin ko helicopter se neeche utaar diya gaya.

Andre : Miss Natalia. Ab aap surakshit hai. Mein Andre! DGSI ki orr se ek agent. Mere saath chaliye.

Ava ne ahista se haami bhari aur uske peeche-peeche chal di.

Raasta wahi tha jaha se Veer aaya tha. Aur waha se nikal jaise hi woh sab building ke nazdeek aaye toh Andre ghabraate hue aage badha,

Andre : Terashimaaa!!!!

Woh chillaaya aur Terashima ko zameen se uthaate hue usse jhunjhlaya. Kintu, woh hosh me nahi thi.

Uski saansein aur physical condition check karne ke baad Andre ne ek raahat ki saans li.

Toh utne me building ke dusre maale se Chris aur uski team neeche aayi. Chris ki baah me goli lagi hui thi.

Neeche aate hi Chris ki aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi jab usne apne aas-paas ka nazaara dekha.

Lighthouse ka chhajja tabaah ho chuka tha. Aur neeche, ek bade se chopper ke chithde ude hue the jo aag ki lapto me jhulas rahe the.

Chris : Good god!! K-Kya hua yaha par?

Andre : Chris!!!

Chris : Andre?

Andre : Tumhe toh chot lagi hai. Quick! Jaldi chalo!

Chris : H-Haan! Upar bache hue logo ko arrest kar liya gaya hai.

Andre : Chinta mat karo! Poora area chhaan ke hi yaha se niklenge. Pehle tumhe medical assist dena zaroori hai.

Airplane airstrip par pehle se hi khada hua tha. DGSI aur police officers dwaara Natalia ko plane ke andar baitha diya gaya.

Toh wahi jis plane me Natalia ko laaya gaya tha, uske andar bhi chhaan-been shuru kar di gayi. Kintu,

Jo pilots Natalia ko plane me yaha baitha ke laaye the, unki bas laashe hi haath lagi.

Andre : Shit!!! Ab kya kiya jaaye?

Senior officer : Le ke chalna hoga inhe. Forensic report shayad kuch bata de. Baaki, bodies par se phones aur baaki details kese retrieve karni hai woh kaam hum par chhor do.

Andre (nods) : Hmm!

Aur kaafi mehnat mashakkat ke baad ek airplane ko waha se bhej diya gaya.

Yaha se ek plane ravaana hua tha toh wahi Paris ke airport par ek airplane land ho raha tha.

Plane ke land hote hi, usme se log nikle aur airport ke baahar jaane lage.

Unhi chand logo me se ek khubsoorat aurat tezz qadmo ke saath aage badh rahi thi. Uske peeche-peeche ek aadmi tha aur ek aur aurat chal rahi thi.

"Miss! Yaha se ab kaha?"

Awaaz Prakash Uncle ki thi. Aur aage chal rahi aurat koi aur nahi balki Suhana hi thi.

Uske chehre par chinta aur ghabrahat saaf jhalak rahi thi.

"Suhana!!! Kuch bataogi ya nahi?"

Ye awaaz thi Ashita ki. Suhana ki personal psychologist. Divya toh na aa saki parantu Ashita Suhana ke peeche peeche chali aayi.

Suhana ka ravaiyya bada hi ajeeb lag raha tha usse. Uski personal psychologist hone ke naate uski harr harqato par dhyaan dena Ashita ki zimmedari thi.

Suhana : Prakash Uncle!! Hume Ava ko dhundhna hai.

Prakash : P-Par Ava Miss to kidnap ho chuki hai na Miss.

Suhana tezz raftaar se chalti jaa rahi thi. Uska peeche karne ke liye Prakash aur Ashita ko bhaagna pad raha tha.

Prakash : Aur aap abhi bhi poori tarah theek nahi hui ho.

Suhana (frowns) : Abhi sabse zyada important hai Ava ke baare me khabar lagna Uncle. Veer bhaari musibat me hai. Uska Phone nahi lag raha hai aur na hi aapke uss Eric se contact ho paa raha hai.

Ashita : Veer? Who's this Veer?

Prakash ne ek jhalak Ashita ko dekha par uske prashn ka uttar na diya.

Prakash : Aise me toh fir Ava Miss ke sabse qareebi log ya fir yaha ke investigation department jaana hi behtar hoga. Wahi se kuch detail lag payegi Miss.

Suhana : Ava ke qareebi kaun hai, ye hum nahi jaante. Investigation department hi chalna behtar hoga.


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Road taraf aate hi ek car pehle se hi unke liye lagi hui thi.

Prakash ne aage badh car ka darwaza khola aur Suhana andar baith gayi. Saath hi Ashita bhi.

Prakash aage driver ke bagal se baitha aur car waha se ravana ho gayi.

Magar abhi kuch hi kilometer ki duri tay ki thi unhone ki saamne ka nazara dekh woh sabhi chaunk gaye.

Paris ke iss jaane maane chauraahe par afra-tafri machi hui thi. News reporters idhar se udhar apne cameramans ke saath coverage ke liye bhaag rahe the.


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Toh wahi police unhe control karne me lagi hui thi. Logo ko surakshit rakhne ke liye woh waha se jald se jald area khaali karwaane me lage hue the.

Ye ilaaka wahi tha jaha kal raat bada dhamaka hua tha. Tehqiqat karna kisse pasand nahi hota? Log apna camera leke aur reporters apna mic leke pohuch rahe the.

Police ke liye kaam badhta jaa raha tha.

Suhana : Something big has happened. Whole city is in chaos.

Ashita : Y-Ye sab!? Akhir ho kya raha hai?

Car me baithe-baithe unn sab ne dekha ki kaise news reporters harr ghatna ki jankaari dene me lage hue the.

Toh wahi janta me se kuch log aise the jo virodh ka pradarshan kar rahe the. Naare lagaate hue woh police aur France ki govt. ke khilaaf awaaz utha rahe the.


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"Kya yahi hai France ki suraksha? Kya yahi hai police ki security? Aise hi itna bada hamla sheher ke beecho-beech kar diya jaata hai. Kya kar rahi thi police? Kitne log maare gaye hai. Kaha hai hamla karne waala? Kya police pakad paayi usse? Hum jawaab chaahte hai!!!"

Janta ka virodh badhta hi jaa raha tha. Aur unki awaaz ko logo tak pohuchaane ka kaam media kar rahi thi.

Police officers logo aur media ke beech ghir kar unhe bas hidaayat hi de sakte the.

"France 24 News channel se mein bol rahi hu Audrey aur hamaare saamne maujood hai police department ke jaane maane Chief. Sir! Kya kehna chaahte hai aap iss waqt? Janta police se naakhush hai. Din-dahaade hamla ho jaata hai aur police ke paas saamne rakhne ke liye koi jawaab nahi hai."

Chief ne logo ko shaant rehne ka ishaara kiya par shor tha jo kam hone ka naam hi nahi le raha tha.

"Dekhiye!! Situation kaafi critical hai aur complex bhi. Ye samay virodh ka nahi hai. Mein janta se kehna chahunga ki kripya kar woh hume apna kaam karne de. Mujrim ke peeche DGSI aur hamari force lagi hui hai. Mujhe aasha hai jald hi hum ghuspethiye ko pakad lenge. Mein aashvashan deta hu ki France ki police apna poora de rahi hai."

"Par janta ka kya Sir? Jinhone apni jaan gavaayi hai unka kya? Uss baare me aap kya kehna chaahenge? Kya aap maante hai ki aap ke department me se kahi na kahi security ko lekar chook hui hai?"

"Ji nahi! Hum harr samay alert rehte hai. Ye ek haadsa hai. Aur mujhe bohut khed hai iss baat ka ki kuch logo ne apni jaane gawa di hai. Magar hum jald hi mujrim ko pakad ke janta ke saamne pesh karenge."

Itna bol Chief waha se hatt ke jaane lage toh news reporter unka peecha karne lage. Parantu, police officers ne unhe aage badhne na diya.

"Toh jaisa ki dekha aapne. Police chief ka yahi kehna hai ki woh apna poora de rahe hai aur tehqiqaat karne me teams juti hui hai. Mera bhi yahi nivedan hai darshako se ki kripya apne apne ghar me hi rahiye. Police ko apna kaam karne dijiye. Tab tak ke liye aaiye aapko dikhaate hai, uss building ki dasha jaha par dhamaka hua tha."

Aur news reporter cameraman ke saath waha se nikal gayi.

Car me baithe jab Suhana aur baaki sab ne ye dekha toh unki haalat patli ho gayi.

Ashita : I-Itna bada haadsa ho gaya yaha?

Prakash : Aage bhaari checking lagi hai Miss. Cars ko bina check kiye aage badhne nahi de rahe hai.



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Suhana : Hum clean hai. Hum par koi aarop nahi hai. It's okay. Let them do! Lekin agar time lagta hai then-!! Find another route.

Prakash : Jii! Mein aage jaake unse puch ke aata hu ki pehle hamari checking kar de. Toh hum yaha se nikal sake.

Suhana (nods) : Hmm!

Prakash gaadi se utar aage Signal ki orr chal diya. Lekin tabhi chauraahe ke upar bade bade hoardings ke paas lagi ek badi si screen par news aayi.

Suhana ki nazre fauran hi uss par tik gayi.


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"Breaking News coming from the blast incident which took place yesterday. Singer and celebrity Miss Natalia Martin has been rescued by the DGSI and police force. The suspect has been executed on the spot. It has been confirmed that the suspect didn't co-operate with the police. Hence, squandering his life. Body has still not been found. However, DGSI is working diligently to search the criminal's body."

Khabar ke saat hi Veer ki wahi tasveere screen par aayi jo Andre ne slot machine waali alley me video me record ki thi.

Suhana ne jab ye suna aur dekha toh uski saansein maano atak gayi. Saaf saaf likha hua tha. Suspect was executed on the spot.

Apraadhi ko wahi par maar diya gaya. Suhana ka badan thar-thar kaanpne laga. Uski aankhein feli hui thi. Kya woh saamne jo dekh rahi thi woh sach tha?

Aur fir iska bodh hote hi ek ajeeb si anubhooti usse andar se hui. Aankhon se apne aap aasu nirantar behne lage.

Ashita : Suhana!?

Suhana toh jaise kisi aur hi duniya me jaa chuki thi. Badan me kampan rukne ka naam nahi le raha tha.

Achanak hi uske phone par call aaya, jiski awaaz ne uska dhyaan kheecha.

Bina screen me number dekhe Suhana ne call uthaaya aur phone ko kaan pe lagaya.

Toh waha se awaaz aayi,

"Umm! Suhana ma'am? Kya ye aapka number hai? Mein Veer bhaiya ki choti behan- Kavya bol rahi hu. Hello? Hello?"

Suhana ki bolti band thi. Kaise jawaab de? Aur kya jawaab de? Saamne screen par Veer ki akhiri tasveere jhalak rahi thi. Kaise kahe uss ladki se ki uska bhai marr chuka hai?

Usse mehsoos hua jaise andar se kuch behad keemti toot gaya ho. Jisse ab dobaara kabhi nahi joda jaa sakta.

Kavya : H-Hello?

Suhana : M-Mein tumhe baad me call karti hu Kavya. Okay?

Kavya : Ohh! O-Okay! Wo-! Woh Veer bhaiya ke baare me puchna tha. K-Kya aapko koi khabar hai woh kaha par hai?

Suhana : N-Nahi! Mein pata kar ke tumhe uske baare me bataati hu. Th-Theek hai?

Kavya : Okay! Thank you~ B-Bye!

Aur call cut ho gaya. Magar call cut hote hi Suhana toot ke bikhar gayi. Woh zorr zorr se rone lagi. Ashita usse achanak se iss qadar dekh ghabra gayi.

Ashita : Suhaaaanaa???

Parantu, Suhana koi jawaab nahi de rahi thi. Woh bas roti jaa rahi thi. Jhar-jhar uske aansu aankhon se beh ke gir rahe the.

'It can't be-!!! H-How can this happen?'

Yakeen nahi karna chaahti thi woh magar saamne news channel uske mann ko aur duwidha me daal raha tha.

'N-Nahi!! Aisa nahi ho sakta. It doesn't make any sense. R-Right! They haven't discovered him yet. Jab tak mein apni aankho se nahi dekh leti tab tak mein yakeen nahi karungi! Woh Aatish, Slogan, Nightwalker, Pitcher jaiso ke changul se baahar aaya hai. I know you're out there Veer...!'

Ashita : Suhanaaa?

Suhana ne agle hi shan apne aansu poche. Tab tak Prakash bhi laut ke aa chuka tha.

Prakash : Miss! Woh maan gaye hai. Check karwa ke nikalte hai.

Suhana : Plan badal chuka hai Uncle. Ab hum waha nahi jaa rahe. Ek hotel me rooms book kariye sab ke liye. Aaj raat hum wahi thehrenge. Aur kal Ava laut ke aa chuki hogi Paris me! Then we'll meet her.

Prakash : Theek hai!

'She's hiding something.'

Car checking ke baad seedhe ek hotel ki disha me chali gayi.

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Las Vegas
Night...


Veer ke liye uske chaahne waale log lag chuke the. Harr koi uski khabar paane ke liye bechain tha.

Yaha Vegas me Divya ko ek baar punaah Nolan ne apne department bulaaya hua tha.

Andar jaate hi ek aur report uske saamne table par patak di gayi.

Nolan : Ab sthiti haath se nikal rahi hai Divya. Take a look at this.

Report ko uthaate hue jab Divya ne sab kuch padha toh woh bhauchakki reh gayi. Atyant krodh janm liya, saath hi vyaakulta bhi.

Divya : Ye France waale paagal ho gaye hai kya? Andhe hai kya? Dikhaayi nahi deta kya namoono ko??

Nolan : Tumhe ek baat aur bataani hai. Kuch din pehle France ki orr se House of the Killers ke cases ko leke ek request aayi thi.

Divya : Wh-What?

Nolan : Hmm! Unhe report chahiye thi HOK ki.

Divya : Kyaaaaa?

Nolan : Aur humne unhe bheji bhi hai report.

Divya : What? Are you in your right mind??? HOK koi normal murder case nahi hai. Ye confidential hai. Classified reports ko department dusre desh me kaise bhej sakta hai?

Nolan : Unka daawa hai ki wahi hamla unke upar hone waala tha. Unhe saboot bhi mile hai. Aur iska rachayita unn logo ne kisse tehraya hai pata hai na?

Nolan ne agle hi pal report ka akhiri panna khola toh usme Veer ki tasveer bani hui thi.

Divya ka haal behaal ho utha. Woh apni jagah par baithate hue bhayanak peeda mehsoos kar rahi thi. Usse koi raasta nazar nahi aa raha tha. Uske nain bheeg uthe.



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Divya : Y-Ye sab-!!!

Nolan : Hum jaante hai Veer nirdosh hai. Hum sirf ek hi kaam kar sakte hai. Aur woh hai ki apni report bana ke bheje jisme Veer ko normal citizen ke roop me dikhaaya jaaye. Jaisa ki vaastav me hai. Lekin-! Jo kuch hoga woh wahi se ho payega. Mujhe nahi lagta woh maanenge.

Divya (sobs) : A-Aap kaise!? Kaise bhej sakte ho waha reports? *sniff*

Nolan : Divya! Jab dusra desh vipda me aane waala ho aur unhone koi maang rakhi ho toh hume badle me madad karni hi padti hai. Hamara desh iss samasya se joojh chuka hai. Upar se order the ki report ko bheja jaaye taaki woh pehle se iske liye taiyaar ho sake. Hume kya pata tha ki waha Veer ko fassa diya jayega!

Divya (screams) : Magar Veer nirdosh hai!!!!

Nolan : Jaanta hu! Isliye jo bann padega, department woh karega.

Itna bol woh baahar nikal gaya. Kintu, Divya wahi gir ke subakne lagi. Iss ladke se itna lagaav ho jayega usse, usne khud kabhi nahi socha tha.

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Agli raat mahaul kuch aur hi tha. News par Ava se sawaal jawaab kiye jaa rahe the. Usse Paris aaye kuch hi ghante hue the ki reporters uske upar chadh pade.

Tamaam sawaalo ke saamne Ava mics se ghiri hui thi.

Aur unn sabhi sawaalo ka bas usne ek hi jawaab diya,

"Mujhe theek se yaad nahi mere saath kya hua tha. Mein bhaag rahi thi. Fir pakad li gayi aur fir kahi mujhe le jaaya gaya. Mujhe koi jankaari nahi hai inn sab ke peeche kaun hai. Mein abhi ghabrayi hui hu aur abhi kuch samay akele me guzarna chaahti hu."

Bas! Ye kuch shabd kaafi the. Doctors se leke security sabhi ne reporters ko Ava se dur kar diya. Doctors Ava ki health condition check karne lage. Toh wahi kuch reporters ke sawaal jawaab dene me lag gaye.

Sab kuch jab thoda shaant hua. Toh raat me Ava hospital ke liye chal padi.

Woh akeli thi. Face par mask tha uske. Car thode sunsaan raaste se guzar hi rahi thi jab theek saamne raaste par koi beech me aa gaya.

Ava ne car side me roki aur uss se baahar nikal woh uss shaks ki orr gayi.

Saamne wahi tha!!


Crimson!!!

Par uski aankhon me bhaiyankar krodh tha. Aag baboola ho rakhi thi uski aankhein.

Crimson (garajte hue) : Kaha hai woh??? Kaha hai??

Ava (frowns) : He's dead!

Agle hi pal Ava ka gala Crimson ke mazboot haatho me tha.

Crimson : NAHI!!!!! TUMNE MARRNE KAISE DIYA USSE??? WOH MERA SHIKAAR THA!!!!

Ava : Ngghhh!!!

*BAAAAAAMMMMMMM*

Ava ki laat turant hi Crimson ke pait se takraayi aur Crimson dur jaate hue lohe ke dabbo ke beech jaa gira. Uska ek haath wese hi pehle se gaayab tha. Seene par abhi bhi khoon ke dhabbe maujood the.

Ava : *huff* *huff* Mene tumhara kaam kar diya hai. Apne aadmiyo ko waapas bulao.

Crimson karaahte hue utha aur kuch derr tak Ava ko dekhta raha.

Ava ki awaaz agle hi pal kaafi khaufnaak ho gayi.

Ava : APNE AADMIYO KO WAAPAS BULAO! ABHI!!!

Crimson : Girl!!! Awaaz neeche! Bhulo nahi ki tum kis situation me ho abhi.

Fir bhi apna phone nikaal usne ek message bheja. Aur uske message bhejte hi,

8 se 10 snipers jo apna aim Grace Martin ke ward ki khidki par lagaaye baithe the woh waha se nikal gaye.

Crimson : They are gone!

Ava : Agar aisa kuch dobaara hua, toh mein tumhaare tukde tukde kar dungi! Fir chaahe apni hi jaan kyu na gawa du!

Crimson (gusse me) : Woh mera shikaar tha!!! Meraaaa!!!! But you let him-

Ava : He didn't surrender. He chose to die. He gave away his life rather than surrendering to you.

Kehte hue uski palke neeche ko jhuk gayi.

Crimson : Y-You-!!

Ava (glances) : Aur itna gussa kyu? Tum usse maarna chaahte the. Woh jaa chuka hai. Tumhara maqsad poora hua. Why the rage?

Crimson : Tch! Apne kaam se kaam rakho! Aur tumhara haal bhi toh alag hai. Aren't you caring for him too much? He was no one to you! Why such a reaction then!? Interesting!

Ava : Fuck off!

Ava waha se mudi aur apni car me baith ravana ho gayi.

Raaste par bas Crimson hi akela khada raha.

'Veeeeeerr!! You motherfucking bastard-!!! Mene nahi socha tha ki tum maut ko gale laga loge. Tch! Plan bigad gaya hai. Sirf iss ek move ke kaaran. Mujhe kuch aur karna hoga-!!! But first-!! I must fix something!'

Woh soch waha se hawa ke jhoke ki tarah gaayab ho gaya.

*Click*

Yaha Hospital me ward ka darwaza khula. Aur Ava apni Maa Grace ke kamre me pravesh ki.

Maa ko dekhte hi, Ava apne ghutno par gir padi.

Maa ko dekh woh unke paas aayi.

"Mother-!!!"


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Kintu, Grace toh kisi murti ki tarah sthir waha laiti hui thi. Koi harqat nahi. Bas saansein chal rahi thi.

"K-Kyu? Kyu meri itni pareeksha li jaa rahi hai? Kyu mujhe woh karna pada?"

"Mother-!!! I commited a sin!!!"

"Mujhse bohut bada paap ho gaya hai mamma!!! I-I- I killed an innocent mamma!!"

Woh kaanch ki tarah toot ke bikhar gayi.


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"Mein bewakoof-!! Samajh na paayi!! I couldn't understand his heart. I never wanted to do it. But I did-!!! Mamma!!!"

*sniff*

"Woh yaha mujhe bachaane ke liye aaya tha. He didn't even ask me for any details. *sniff* Yet I- Yet I worked with that guy to frame him!!!"

*hic*

"Mother-!! You are my strength!! But you are my weakness too!!"

"Kaise? *sniff* Yaha tak pohuch gayi hu. Ab kaise peeche hatt sakti hu?"

Uske mann me ek notification saaf saaf jhalak raha tha.


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"I'm sorry-!!! I'm sorry Veer!!! I never wanted to do it-!!! *sniff* Mamma!!! *sniff* Speak to me!!! P-Please-!!!"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Itne bade bade bawaal updates ke baad ek cooldown update zaroori tha. Update 4.6k words ka hai. Like thokne ka. Target wahi hai. 140 likes. 2 updates aur aayenge. 1 poore past ko darshayega ki Crimson ne ye sab racha kaise. HOK kaise paida hua. Veer kaise framed hua. Dusre me wapas hum present me aa jayenge.

Dhanyavaad! ✨
Sahi likha h aapne...
aise bombastic episodes k baad ek cooldown update zaroori tha...

So Ava majboor h... Aur ab veer kese frame hua ye show kia jaega... Wait rhega uska ..

abhi main zyada ni likhungi. Main wait kar rhi hu story k saamne aane k... Crimson kese inko anjaam diya. Then I'll give a big review on it. Waiting for next update sir... :love3:
 

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Update - 142 ~ Necessitation

Ab tak...

Idhar upar udte helicopter me uss ladki ke baal hawa me lehra rahe the.

Tabhi uske mann me ek awaaz aayi,

*DING*

‘I’m sorry…! Veer!’

Aur udhar Mumbai me Ragini ke ghar me, apne kamre me laiti Bhavna achanak bechaini ke chalte bistar par uth ke baith gayi.


Ab aage...

*Badump* *Badump*

Bhavna ka dil zorr-zorr se dhadak raha tha. Kaleja baahar aane ko ho raha tha. Ye kaisi ajeeb si bechaini woh mehsoos kar rahi thi. Uska jee behad michla raha tha.

Achanak hi uske kamre ka darwaza khula aur haafti hui Tej andar aayi,

Tej : M-Mom!?

Bhavna : Tej?? Iss waqt yaha? Kya hua?

Subah ke 7 baj rahe the aur Tej ka iss qadar uske kamre me aana koi maamuli baat nahi thi.

Tej : Mom! Ajeeb sa mehsoos ho raha hai. Ek bure sapne ke chalte neend khul gayi. Paseena aane laga, jee ghabrane laga. Isliye yaha aa gayi.

Bhavna ki bauhe ye sunte hi chintan me sikud gayi.

Bhavna : Tum akeli nahi ho beta. Aao! Baitho!

Tej kamre ke andar aake apni Maa ke bagal se baith gayi.

Tej : Veer se abhi tak baat nahi hui hai. Mujhe ab fiqr ho rahi hai. Wo bhi to call kar sakta hai na? Kahi wo kisi musibat me toh nahi fass gaya na?

Bhavna (frowns) : Tum theek keh rahi ho beta! Itna lamba samay nahi lagna chahiye. Agar wo vyast bhi hai to kam se kam ek phone call to kar hi dena tha usse. Kuch baat zaroor hai.

Bhavna nahi chaahti thi ki uska mann uss disha me jaaye. Par na chaahte hue bhi uska mann wahi jaa raha tha. Aur, uski ghabrahat harr guzarte pal badhti hi jaa rahi thi.

'Mera beta...!' Usne apne ek haath se apne seene ko bheench liya.

Tej : Toh kya kare Mom?

Bhavna : Huh? Ho sakta hai Veer kisi ko koi alag number ya soochna de ke gaya ho. Shayad Ragini ko kuch pata ho. Sab ko uth jaane do. Fir hum baat karte hai.

Tej (nods) : Mmm!

Veer ke ghar me subah wese hi sabhi jaldi uth jaate the. Unn sabhi ke uthate hi jab saare log living room me ekatr hue toh Tej se ab aur raha na gaya,

Tej : A-Aap sab! Kya aap sab me se kisi ki Veer se baat hui hai?

Shweta sabse pehli thi jisne jawaab diya,

Shweta : Nahi! Lekin, uska phone Ragini ko zaroor aaya karta tha jab bhi woh baahar jaata tha. Ragini?

Ragini : Nahi Tai ji! Meri baat Veer se bas message pe hui thi. Mene parso pucha tha uss se ki sab theek hai waha? Toh uska reply aaya tha ki sab badhiya hai. Woh jald hi lautega.

Tej : Uske baad?

Ragini : Uske baad mene kal bhi message bheja tha. Lekin, message seen nahi hai.

Ragini ki iss khabar par woh sabhi ek chinta me doob gayi.

Bhavna : Kya woh tumhe koi aur number deke gaya hai? Emergency ke liye?

Ragini : Hmm? Nahi! Woh khud se hi call karta tha toh-!

Tej : Arohi? Kavya? Kya tum dono ki baat hui hai uss se?

Tej ka prashna sunn Arohi ne dheere se naa me sarr hila diya. Veer ki khabar se woh bhi anjaan thi.

Kavya : Didi! Veer bhaiya ne zaroor apna phone gira diya hoga kahi. Woh bhulakkad toh hai hi. Hehe! Ek baar school time me apna rumaal bhul gaye the. Toh fir mera ladkiyo wala rumaal use kiye the hahahaha!

Arohi : Kavyaaaa!!! Ye mazaak ka waqt nahi!

Arohi ki daant sunn Kavya apna chehra ferr muh fula li.

Kavya : Aap sab itna kyu darr rahe ho? Abhi Choti Tai ji ke gaav me Veer bhaiya uss ghar ki terrace se neeche nahi gire the? Kursi pe land kiye the. Unko kuch nahi hua tha. Ek baar Diwali ke time jab mein aur Arohi di ye waale ghar aa rahe the tab kuch gunde hamare peeche lag gaye the.

Tej : Gunde?

Kavya (nods) : Mmm-hmmm! Gunde! Gande waale! Par Veer Bhaiya waha hero ki tarah bachane aaye the hume. Dii yaad hai na aapko?

Arohi ko turant hi woh pal yaad aa gaya jab Veer usse bachaane aaya tha. Uska haath apne aap hi Veer dwaara di gayi unn kaan ki baaliyo par chala gaya. Aur woh ahista se apna sarr haan me hilaayi,

Arohi (nods) : Mmm!

Kintu, Bhavna ke maathe par lakeere chhaayi hui thi.

'Gunde...!?'

Woh samajh chuki thi ki uska abhi apne bete ke bohut se kisso ke baare me jaan'na baaki tha.

Kavya : Toh aap log khamakha itni tension le rahe ho. Bhaiya ka phone ghum gaya hai pakke se. Woh dekhna khud hi apni taraf se call karenge.

Usne keh toh diya, par sabhi ke ashaant mann ko saantvna dene ke liye ye kaafi nahi tha.

Ragini : Ahhh! Ek minute!! Kavya? Pichli baar Veer woh Suhana Miss ke saath gaya tha na? Woh famous Sonia..! Businesswoman!! Unki badi behan hai na? Woh dono holi me aayi thi na hamare ghar?

Tej : Sonia? Suhana? K-Kaun hai ye?

Kavya (nods) : Mm! Haan! Yaad aaya! Aayi toh thi woh dono.

Ragini : Toh unhone tumhe apna number diya tha na?

Kavya : Ahhn! W-Woh-!!

Jab Kavya nazre churaane lagi toh Arohi ne uski baah pakad li,

Arohi : Ab ye mat kehna ki tumne woh kho diya.

Kavya : Nahi!!! Woh...! Mene paper pe note down kiya tha unka number. Aur ab mujhe yaad nahi ki-

Arohi : Kaaaaavyyyaaaaaa!!

Woh zorr se usse chillaayi.

Arohi : Mene tumhe kaha hai na kitni baar ki hamesha important numbers ko apne phone me save kiya karo.

Kavya : Dii! Tab Holi thi. Mein buri tarah rang se puti hui thi. Isliye mobile ko haath nahi lagaya. Bhaiya ke room se hi copy pen laayi thi aur- arre haan!!! Bhaiya ke room me kahi padi hogi woh copy. Ruko!!!

Woh bhaagte hue andar gayi toh uske peeche-peeche Arohi bhi chal di.

Toh wahi idhar Ragini ke phone par ussi samay Nidhi ka call aa gaya.

Ragini : Hello?

Nidhi : Hello! Kaisi hai aap?

Ragini : J-Jii mein theek hu! Aap bataiye! Aaj mujhe kaise yaad kiya?

Nidhi : Veer ka phone nahi lag raha tha toh socha aapko hi laga lu. Darasal, agle mahine Holi hai. Aur exams bhi rahenge. Mene bas ye batane ke liye phone kiya hai ki Veer se kahiyega woh padhna shuru kar de. Semester ke last exams hai. Fir uska last year lag jayega.

Ragini : Ah! J-Jii! Mein keh dungi!

Nidhi (smiles) : Jii! Dekhiye! Business apni jagah hai. Par- Par ab companies aane lagengi. Veer se kahiyega wo prepare kare. Baaki, mein toh hu hi. Aap jaanti hai ki job kitni zaroori hai. Side me wo business kar sakta hai. Lekin-

Ragini : H-Haan! Aap sahi hai. M-Mein keh dungi uss se.

Nidhi : Jii! Aur usse mere paas bhi bhej dijiyega. Mein usse samjha dungi. Kuch pointers de dungi exams ke liye.

Ragini : S-Sure! Thank you!

Nidhi (smiles) : No need for that. Accha! Mein rakhti hu.

Ragini : Hmm!

Aur call cut ho gaya. Log Veer ko yaad kar rahe the. Parantu, unhe kya pata tha ki woh iss waqt kis haal me tha. Zinda tha bhi ya nahi?

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Mumbai me Veer ke ghar bhale hi subah ke 7:30 ho rahe the. Parantu, Paris me yaha ab bhi raat ka andhera barkaraar tha.

Yaha derr raat ke 3 baje hue the. Paris ka samay Mumbai se lagbhag saadhe 4 ghante peeche tha.

Hawa me helicopter lehra raha tha. Saagar ki ufanti lehre chattaano par thapede maar rahi thi. Dheere-dheere jab badi lehre takra ke thamti toh paani kuch shan ke liye shaant ho jaata. Aur ussi ke saath uska shor bhi.

Uss ardh-paardarshi jal ke andar dekh paana jatil tha. Upar se raat ka andhera. Helicopter ki spotlight ke bawajood kahi unhe woh nazar nahi aa raha tha jiski unhe talaash thi. Aur woh tha-

Veer ka shav!

"Dhoondhte raho!!! Aasmaan kha gaya usse ya dharti nigal gayi? Paani me hi hoga. Chappa-chappa chhaan maaro."

Senior officer ki awaaz uss poore ilaake me goonj gayi.

Par talaashi ke pehle Ava urf Natalia Martin ko helicopter se neeche utaar diya gaya.

Andre : Miss Natalia. Ab aap surakshit hai. Mein Andre! DGSI ki orr se ek agent. Mere saath chaliye.

Ava ne ahista se haami bhari aur uske peeche-peeche chal di.

Raasta wahi tha jaha se Veer aaya tha. Aur waha se nikal jaise hi woh sab building ke nazdeek aaye toh Andre ghabraate hue aage badha,

Andre : Terashimaaa!!!!

Woh chillaaya aur Terashima ko zameen se uthaate hue usse jhunjhlaya. Kintu, woh hosh me nahi thi.

Uski saansein aur physical condition check karne ke baad Andre ne ek raahat ki saans li.

Toh utne me building ke dusre maale se Chris aur uski team neeche aayi. Chris ki baah me goli lagi hui thi.

Neeche aate hi Chris ki aankhein phati ki phati reh gayi jab usne apne aas-paas ka nazaara dekha.

Lighthouse ka chhajja tabaah ho chuka tha. Aur neeche, ek bade se chopper ke chithde ude hue the jo aag ki lapto me jhulas rahe the.

Chris : Good god!! K-Kya hua yaha par?

Andre : Chris!!!

Chris : Andre?

Andre : Tumhe toh chot lagi hai. Quick! Jaldi chalo!

Chris : H-Haan! Upar bache hue logo ko arrest kar liya gaya hai.

Andre : Chinta mat karo! Poora area chhaan ke hi yaha se niklenge. Pehle tumhe medical assist dena zaroori hai.

Airplane airstrip par pehle se hi khada hua tha. DGSI aur police officers dwaara Natalia ko plane ke andar baitha diya gaya.

Toh wahi jis plane me Natalia ko laaya gaya tha, uske andar bhi chhaan-been shuru kar di gayi. Kintu,

Jo pilots Natalia ko plane me yaha baitha ke laaye the, unki bas laashe hi haath lagi.

Andre : Shit!!! Ab kya kiya jaaye?

Senior officer : Le ke chalna hoga inhe. Forensic report shayad kuch bata de. Baaki, bodies par se phones aur baaki details kese retrieve karni hai woh kaam hum par chhor do.

Andre (nods) : Hmm!

Aur kaafi mehnat mashakkat ke baad ek airplane ko waha se bhej diya gaya.

Yaha se ek plane ravaana hua tha toh wahi Paris ke airport par ek airplane land ho raha tha.

Plane ke land hote hi, usme se log nikle aur airport ke baahar jaane lage.

Unhi chand logo me se ek khubsoorat aurat tezz qadmo ke saath aage badh rahi thi. Uske peeche-peeche ek aadmi tha aur ek aur aurat chal rahi thi.

"Miss! Yaha se ab kaha?"

Awaaz Prakash Uncle ki thi. Aur aage chal rahi aurat koi aur nahi balki Suhana hi thi.

Uske chehre par chinta aur ghabrahat saaf jhalak rahi thi.

"Suhana!!! Kuch bataogi ya nahi?"

Ye awaaz thi Ashita ki. Suhana ki personal psychologist. Divya toh na aa saki parantu Ashita Suhana ke peeche peeche chali aayi.

Suhana ka ravaiyya bada hi ajeeb lag raha tha usse. Uski personal psychologist hone ke naate uski harr harqato par dhyaan dena Ashita ki zimmedari thi.

Suhana : Prakash Uncle!! Hume Ava ko dhundhna hai.

Prakash : P-Par Ava Miss to kidnap ho chuki hai na Miss.

Suhana tezz raftaar se chalti jaa rahi thi. Uska peeche karne ke liye Prakash aur Ashita ko bhaagna pad raha tha.

Prakash : Aur aap abhi bhi poori tarah theek nahi hui ho.

Suhana (frowns) : Abhi sabse zyada important hai Ava ke baare me khabar lagna Uncle. Veer bhaari musibat me hai. Uska Phone nahi lag raha hai aur na hi aapke uss Eric se contact ho paa raha hai.

Ashita : Veer? Who's this Veer?

Prakash ne ek jhalak Ashita ko dekha par uske prashn ka uttar na diya.

Prakash : Aise me toh fir Ava Miss ke sabse qareebi log ya fir yaha ke investigation department jaana hi behtar hoga. Wahi se kuch detail lag payegi Miss.

Suhana : Ava ke qareebi kaun hai, ye hum nahi jaante. Investigation department hi chalna behtar hoga.


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Road taraf aate hi ek car pehle se hi unke liye lagi hui thi.

Prakash ne aage badh car ka darwaza khola aur Suhana andar baith gayi. Saath hi Ashita bhi.

Prakash aage driver ke bagal se baitha aur car waha se ravana ho gayi.

Magar abhi kuch hi kilometer ki duri tay ki thi unhone ki saamne ka nazara dekh woh sabhi chaunk gaye.

Paris ke iss jaane maane chauraahe par afra-tafri machi hui thi. News reporters idhar se udhar apne cameramans ke saath coverage ke liye bhaag rahe the.


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Toh wahi police unhe control karne me lagi hui thi. Logo ko surakshit rakhne ke liye woh waha se jald se jald area khaali karwaane me lage hue the.

Ye ilaaka wahi tha jaha kal raat bada dhamaka hua tha. Tehqiqat karna kisse pasand nahi hota? Log apna camera leke aur reporters apna mic leke pohuch rahe the.

Police ke liye kaam badhta jaa raha tha.

Suhana : Something big has happened. Whole city is in chaos.

Ashita : Y-Ye sab!? Akhir ho kya raha hai?

Car me baithe-baithe unn sab ne dekha ki kaise news reporters harr ghatna ki jankaari dene me lage hue the.

Toh wahi janta me se kuch log aise the jo virodh ka pradarshan kar rahe the. Naare lagaate hue woh police aur France ki govt. ke khilaaf awaaz utha rahe the.


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"Kya yahi hai France ki suraksha? Kya yahi hai police ki security? Aise hi itna bada hamla sheher ke beecho-beech kar diya jaata hai. Kya kar rahi thi police? Kitne log maare gaye hai. Kaha hai hamla karne waala? Kya police pakad paayi usse? Hum jawaab chaahte hai!!!"

Janta ka virodh badhta hi jaa raha tha. Aur unki awaaz ko logo tak pohuchaane ka kaam media kar rahi thi.

Police officers logo aur media ke beech ghir kar unhe bas hidaayat hi de sakte the.

"France 24 News channel se mein bol rahi hu Audrey aur hamaare saamne maujood hai police department ke jaane maane Chief. Sir! Kya kehna chaahte hai aap iss waqt? Janta police se naakhush hai. Din-dahaade hamla ho jaata hai aur police ke paas saamne rakhne ke liye koi jawaab nahi hai."

Chief ne logo ko shaant rehne ka ishaara kiya par shor tha jo kam hone ka naam hi nahi le raha tha.

"Dekhiye!! Situation kaafi critical hai aur complex bhi. Ye samay virodh ka nahi hai. Mein janta se kehna chahunga ki kripya kar woh hume apna kaam karne de. Mujrim ke peeche DGSI aur hamari force lagi hui hai. Mujhe aasha hai jald hi hum ghuspethiye ko pakad lenge. Mein aashvashan deta hu ki France ki police apna poora de rahi hai."

"Par janta ka kya Sir? Jinhone apni jaan gavaayi hai unka kya? Uss baare me aap kya kehna chaahenge? Kya aap maante hai ki aap ke department me se kahi na kahi security ko lekar chook hui hai?"

"Ji nahi! Hum harr samay alert rehte hai. Ye ek haadsa hai. Aur mujhe bohut khed hai iss baat ka ki kuch logo ne apni jaane gawa di hai. Magar hum jald hi mujrim ko pakad ke janta ke saamne pesh karenge."

Itna bol Chief waha se hatt ke jaane lage toh news reporter unka peecha karne lage. Parantu, police officers ne unhe aage badhne na diya.

"Toh jaisa ki dekha aapne. Police chief ka yahi kehna hai ki woh apna poora de rahe hai aur tehqiqaat karne me teams juti hui hai. Mera bhi yahi nivedan hai darshako se ki kripya apne apne ghar me hi rahiye. Police ko apna kaam karne dijiye. Tab tak ke liye aaiye aapko dikhaate hai, uss building ki dasha jaha par dhamaka hua tha."

Aur news reporter cameraman ke saath waha se nikal gayi.

Car me baithe jab Suhana aur baaki sab ne ye dekha toh unki haalat patli ho gayi.

Ashita : I-Itna bada haadsa ho gaya yaha?

Prakash : Aage bhaari checking lagi hai Miss. Cars ko bina check kiye aage badhne nahi de rahe hai.



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Suhana : Hum clean hai. Hum par koi aarop nahi hai. It's okay. Let them do! Lekin agar time lagta hai then-!! Find another route.

Prakash : Jii! Mein aage jaake unse puch ke aata hu ki pehle hamari checking kar de. Toh hum yaha se nikal sake.

Suhana (nods) : Hmm!

Prakash gaadi se utar aage Signal ki orr chal diya. Lekin tabhi chauraahe ke upar bade bade hoardings ke paas lagi ek badi si screen par news aayi.

Suhana ki nazre fauran hi uss par tik gayi.


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"Breaking News coming from the blast incident which took place yesterday. Singer and celebrity Miss Natalia Martin has been rescued by the DGSI and police force. The suspect has been executed on the spot. It has been confirmed that the suspect didn't co-operate with the police. Hence, squandering his life. Body has still not been found. However, DGSI is working diligently to search the criminal's body."

Khabar ke saat hi Veer ki wahi tasveere screen par aayi jo Andre ne slot machine waali alley me video me record ki thi.

Suhana ne jab ye suna aur dekha toh uski saansein maano atak gayi. Saaf saaf likha hua tha. Suspect was executed on the spot.

Apraadhi ko wahi par maar diya gaya. Suhana ka badan thar-thar kaanpne laga. Uski aankhein feli hui thi. Kya woh saamne jo dekh rahi thi woh sach tha?

Aur fir iska bodh hote hi ek ajeeb si anubhooti usse andar se hui. Aankhon se apne aap aasu nirantar behne lage.

Ashita : Suhana!?

Suhana toh jaise kisi aur hi duniya me jaa chuki thi. Badan me kampan rukne ka naam nahi le raha tha.

Achanak hi uske phone par call aaya, jiski awaaz ne uska dhyaan kheecha.

Bina screen me number dekhe Suhana ne call uthaaya aur phone ko kaan pe lagaya.

Toh waha se awaaz aayi,

"Umm! Suhana ma'am? Kya ye aapka number hai? Mein Veer bhaiya ki choti behan- Kavya bol rahi hu. Hello? Hello?"

Suhana ki bolti band thi. Kaise jawaab de? Aur kya jawaab de? Saamne screen par Veer ki akhiri tasveere jhalak rahi thi. Kaise kahe uss ladki se ki uska bhai marr chuka hai?

Usse mehsoos hua jaise andar se kuch behad keemti toot gaya ho. Jisse ab dobaara kabhi nahi joda jaa sakta.

Kavya : H-Hello?

Suhana : M-Mein tumhe baad me call karti hu Kavya. Okay?

Kavya : Ohh! O-Okay! Wo-! Woh Veer bhaiya ke baare me puchna tha. K-Kya aapko koi khabar hai woh kaha par hai?

Suhana : N-Nahi! Mein pata kar ke tumhe uske baare me bataati hu. Th-Theek hai?

Kavya : Okay! Thank you~ B-Bye!

Aur call cut ho gaya. Magar call cut hote hi Suhana toot ke bikhar gayi. Woh zorr zorr se rone lagi. Ashita usse achanak se iss qadar dekh ghabra gayi.

Ashita : Suhaaaanaa???

Parantu, Suhana koi jawaab nahi de rahi thi. Woh bas roti jaa rahi thi. Jhar-jhar uske aansu aankhon se beh ke gir rahe the.

'It can't be-!!! H-How can this happen?'

Yakeen nahi karna chaahti thi woh magar saamne news channel uske mann ko aur duwidha me daal raha tha.

'N-Nahi!! Aisa nahi ho sakta. It doesn't make any sense. R-Right! They haven't discovered him yet. Jab tak mein apni aankho se nahi dekh leti tab tak mein yakeen nahi karungi! Woh Aatish, Slogan, Nightwalker, Pitcher jaiso ke changul se baahar aaya hai. I know you're out there Veer...!'

Ashita : Suhanaaa?

Suhana ne agle hi shan apne aansu poche. Tab tak Prakash bhi laut ke aa chuka tha.

Prakash : Miss! Woh maan gaye hai. Check karwa ke nikalte hai.

Suhana : Plan badal chuka hai Uncle. Ab hum waha nahi jaa rahe. Ek hotel me rooms book kariye sab ke liye. Aaj raat hum wahi thehrenge. Aur kal Ava laut ke aa chuki hogi Paris me! Then we'll meet her.

Prakash : Theek hai!

'She's hiding something.'

Car checking ke baad seedhe ek hotel ki disha me chali gayi.

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Las Vegas
Night...


Veer ke liye uske chaahne waale log lag chuke the. Harr koi uski khabar paane ke liye bechain tha.

Yaha Vegas me Divya ko ek baar punaah Nolan ne apne department bulaaya hua tha.

Andar jaate hi ek aur report uske saamne table par patak di gayi.

Nolan : Ab sthiti haath se nikal rahi hai Divya. Take a look at this.

Report ko uthaate hue jab Divya ne sab kuch padha toh woh bhauchakki reh gayi. Atyant krodh janm liya, saath hi vyaakulta bhi.

Divya : Ye France waale paagal ho gaye hai kya? Andhe hai kya? Dikhaayi nahi deta kya namoono ko??

Nolan : Tumhe ek baat aur bataani hai. Kuch din pehle France ki orr se House of the Killers ke cases ko leke ek request aayi thi.

Divya : Wh-What?

Nolan : Hmm! Unhe report chahiye thi HOK ki.

Divya : Kyaaaaa?

Nolan : Aur humne unhe bheji bhi hai report.

Divya : What? Are you in your right mind??? HOK koi normal murder case nahi hai. Ye confidential hai. Classified reports ko department dusre desh me kaise bhej sakta hai?

Nolan : Unka daawa hai ki wahi hamla unke upar hone waala tha. Unhe saboot bhi mile hai. Aur iska rachayita unn logo ne kisse tehraya hai pata hai na?

Nolan ne agle hi pal report ka akhiri panna khola toh usme Veer ki tasveer bani hui thi.

Divya ka haal behaal ho utha. Woh apni jagah par baithate hue bhayanak peeda mehsoos kar rahi thi. Usse koi raasta nazar nahi aa raha tha. Uske nain bheeg uthe.



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Divya : Y-Ye sab-!!!

Nolan : Hum jaante hai Veer nirdosh hai. Hum sirf ek hi kaam kar sakte hai. Aur woh hai ki apni report bana ke bheje jisme Veer ko normal citizen ke roop me dikhaaya jaaye. Jaisa ki vaastav me hai. Lekin-! Jo kuch hoga woh wahi se ho payega. Mujhe nahi lagta woh maanenge.

Divya (sobs) : A-Aap kaise!? Kaise bhej sakte ho waha reports? *sniff*

Nolan : Divya! Jab dusra desh vipda me aane waala ho aur unhone koi maang rakhi ho toh hume badle me madad karni hi padti hai. Hamara desh iss samasya se joojh chuka hai. Upar se order the ki report ko bheja jaaye taaki woh pehle se iske liye taiyaar ho sake. Hume kya pata tha ki waha Veer ko fassa diya jayega!

Divya (screams) : Magar Veer nirdosh hai!!!!

Nolan : Jaanta hu! Isliye jo bann padega, department woh karega.

Itna bol woh baahar nikal gaya. Kintu, Divya wahi gir ke subakne lagi. Iss ladke se itna lagaav ho jayega usse, usne khud kabhi nahi socha tha.

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Agli raat mahaul kuch aur hi tha. News par Ava se sawaal jawaab kiye jaa rahe the. Usse Paris aaye kuch hi ghante hue the ki reporters uske upar chadh pade.

Tamaam sawaalo ke saamne Ava mics se ghiri hui thi.

Aur unn sabhi sawaalo ka bas usne ek hi jawaab diya,

"Mujhe theek se yaad nahi mere saath kya hua tha. Mein bhaag rahi thi. Fir pakad li gayi aur fir kahi mujhe le jaaya gaya. Mujhe koi jankaari nahi hai inn sab ke peeche kaun hai. Mein abhi ghabrayi hui hu aur abhi kuch samay akele me guzarna chaahti hu."

Bas! Ye kuch shabd kaafi the. Doctors se leke security sabhi ne reporters ko Ava se dur kar diya. Doctors Ava ki health condition check karne lage. Toh wahi kuch reporters ke sawaal jawaab dene me lag gaye.

Sab kuch jab thoda shaant hua. Toh raat me Ava hospital ke liye chal padi.

Woh akeli thi. Face par mask tha uske. Car thode sunsaan raaste se guzar hi rahi thi jab theek saamne raaste par koi beech me aa gaya.

Ava ne car side me roki aur uss se baahar nikal woh uss shaks ki orr gayi.

Saamne wahi tha!!


Crimson!!!

Par uski aankhon me bhaiyankar krodh tha. Aag baboola ho rakhi thi uski aankhein.

Crimson (garajte hue) : Kaha hai woh??? Kaha hai??

Ava (frowns) : He's dead!

Agle hi pal Ava ka gala Crimson ke mazboot haatho me tha.

Crimson : NAHI!!!!! TUMNE MARRNE KAISE DIYA USSE??? WOH MERA SHIKAAR THA!!!!

Ava : Ngghhh!!!

*BAAAAAAMMMMMMM*

Ava ki laat turant hi Crimson ke pait se takraayi aur Crimson dur jaate hue lohe ke dabbo ke beech jaa gira. Uska ek haath wese hi pehle se gaayab tha. Seene par abhi bhi khoon ke dhabbe maujood the.

Ava : *huff* *huff* Mene tumhara kaam kar diya hai. Apne aadmiyo ko waapas bulao.

Crimson karaahte hue utha aur kuch derr tak Ava ko dekhta raha.

Ava ki awaaz agle hi pal kaafi khaufnaak ho gayi.

Ava : APNE AADMIYO KO WAAPAS BULAO! ABHI!!!

Crimson : Girl!!! Awaaz neeche! Bhulo nahi ki tum kis situation me ho abhi.

Fir bhi apna phone nikaal usne ek message bheja. Aur uske message bhejte hi,

8 se 10 snipers jo apna aim Grace Martin ke ward ki khidki par lagaaye baithe the woh waha se nikal gaye.

Crimson : They are gone!

Ava : Agar aisa kuch dobaara hua, toh mein tumhaare tukde tukde kar dungi! Fir chaahe apni hi jaan kyu na gawa du!

Crimson (gusse me) : Woh mera shikaar tha!!! Meraaaa!!!! But you let him-

Ava : He didn't surrender. He chose to die. He gave away his life rather than surrendering to you.

Kehte hue uski palke neeche ko jhuk gayi.

Crimson : Y-You-!!

Ava (glances) : Aur itna gussa kyu? Tum usse maarna chaahte the. Woh jaa chuka hai. Tumhara maqsad poora hua. Why the rage?

Crimson : Tch! Apne kaam se kaam rakho! Aur tumhara haal bhi toh alag hai. Aren't you caring for him too much? He was no one to you! Why such a reaction then!? Interesting!

Ava : Fuck off!

Ava waha se mudi aur apni car me baith ravana ho gayi.

Raaste par bas Crimson hi akela khada raha.

'Veeeeeerr!! You motherfucking bastard-!!! Mene nahi socha tha ki tum maut ko gale laga loge. Tch! Plan bigad gaya hai. Sirf iss ek move ke kaaran. Mujhe kuch aur karna hoga-!!! But first-!! I must fix something!'

Woh soch waha se hawa ke jhoke ki tarah gaayab ho gaya.

*Click*

Yaha Hospital me ward ka darwaza khula. Aur Ava apni Maa Grace ke kamre me pravesh ki.

Maa ko dekhte hi, Ava apne ghutno par gir padi.

Maa ko dekh woh unke paas aayi.

"Mother-!!!"


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Kintu, Grace toh kisi murti ki tarah sthir waha laiti hui thi. Koi harqat nahi. Bas saansein chal rahi thi.

"K-Kyu? Kyu meri itni pareeksha li jaa rahi hai? Kyu mujhe woh karna pada?"

"Mother-!!! I commited a sin!!!"

"Mujhse bohut bada paap ho gaya hai mamma!!! I-I- I killed an innocent mamma!!"

Woh kaanch ki tarah toot ke bikhar gayi.


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"Mein bewakoof-!! Samajh na paayi!! I couldn't understand his heart. I never wanted to do it. But I did-!!! Mamma!!!"

*sniff*

"Woh yaha mujhe bachaane ke liye aaya tha. He didn't even ask me for any details. *sniff* Yet I- Yet I worked with that guy to frame him!!!"

*hic*

"Mother-!! You are my strength!! But you are my weakness too!!"

"Kaise? *sniff* Yaha tak pohuch gayi hu. Ab kaise peeche hatt sakti hu?"

Uske mann me ek notification saaf saaf jhalak raha tha.


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"I'm sorry-!!! I'm sorry Veer!!! I never wanted to do it-!!! *sniff* Mamma!!! *sniff* Speak to me!!! P-Please-!!!"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys.
Itne bade bade bawaal updates ke baad ek cooldown update zaroori tha. Update 4.6k words ka hai. Like thokne ka. Target wahi hai. 140 likes. 2 updates aur aayenge. 1 poore past ko darshayega ki Crimson ne ye sab racha kaise. HOK kaise paida hua. Veer kaise framed hua. Dusre me wapas hum present me aa jayenge.

Dhanyavaad! ✨
कहते है न की वक़्त, हर प्राणी के लिए एक समान होता है, चाहे वो कोई आम इंशान हो या फिर विशेष शक्तियों से निपुण कोई साधक। अभी तक के लिखी गयी कहानी मे मे मैंने अगर किसी किरदार को हावी होते हुए देखा है तो वो वक़्त ही है। मैंने लगभग पिछले तीस अपडेट को एक बार फ़िर से पढ़ा। जो वीर के परिवारिक वर्णन के प्रारम्भ से लेकर पिछले अंश मे वीर की आसाधारण हार तक का था।
जहाँ परिवारिक वर्णन मे वीर को उसके अपनो और दोस्तो के साथ साथ वक़्त का भी भरपूर साथ मिला। और उसके फलस्वरूप वीर को उसकी बिछड़ी हुई माँ मिली, उसकी प्यारी और एक जिगर बाली बड़ी बहन मिली, उस वक़्त मे वीर ने अपनी माँ का बदला भी लिया, और खुद के लिए काम करने बाले कुछ दक्ष लोगो को भी समझा। उन्हे मौके दिये। एक पल मे तो ऐसा लग रहा था की सब कुछ अब उम्मीद से भी अच्छी हो चली है।
पर एक सांप तो कुंडली मार कर वीर के सर पे तब से बैठा था जब वीर लास वेगास मे H.O.K को तबाह करने गया था। Crimson..... Lord crimson...... Lord कहना गलत होगा इस भड़वे को,..... Lodu crimson..... हाँ ये सही है।, तो इन जनाब को पता नही क्या चुल्ल मची की ये बेचारे वीर भाई साहब के हस्ते खेलते जिंदगी को तबाह करने का प्रण लिए आगये उनके सामने। और तो और आते के साथ सबसे बड़ा झटका ये बोल के दिया की,.... "भाया, म्हारे पास भी घनी सुथरी सिस्टेम् होवे से " और तो और साले ने फटे मुह धमकी भी दे डाली की.... "बेटे.... तु तो गयो "
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हुआ भी लगभग वैसा ही देख लो, वक़्त ने एकबार फिर से अपना पासां फेका और इस वीर को आड़े हाथ लेते हुए उसे पेरिस खींच लाया। बहनचोद .... उसे बुलाने बाली भी कौन... वो... क्या नाम था... हँ... काएरा और सोनिया की दोस्त नतालिया.... शाली सुरुआत मे तो लगा की कहीं ये गवैया छोरी बेचारे वीर को अपने टांगों के बीच न दाब दे। शाली उसके करीब ही इतनी आरही थी वहाँ पेरिस मे। लेकिन हमारे समाज सेवक राजा धिराज वीर प्रताप जी तो उन्हे वचन दे बैठे की उसके होते हुए कोई भी गवैये नतालिया को छु तक नही पायेगा। उस बेचारे को क्या पता की शाली गवईये नतालिया उसके साथ ही गेम खेल रही है।
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और बहनचोद इस रांड के पास भी सिस्टेम् है वो भी वीर और शायद क्रिमसन से भी कहीं गुना मजबूत, देखा था न शाली ने एक लात मे उस क्रिमसन को दूर फेक दिया जिस से वीर भी सही से डील नही कर पा रहा था।
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वोल्फी ने हमे बीच मे एक और अंश दिया था जिसमे हमे उस लड़की के बारे मे बताया गया जो स्लोगन के मौत के वक़्त पहाड़ी पर थी। और वो नतालिया ही थी इसका पर्दा फ़ाश भी किया गया।
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इन सभी घटनाओ से एक बात साफ होती है की.... इस मौत के शतरंज मे अब तक सब प्यादे ही दिखते आये थे, चाहे वो स्लोगन हो, नाइट वॉकर हो, या फ़िर शायद क्रिमसन और नतालिया भी प्यादे ही हो, हाँ भले ये प्यादे कुछ मजबूत औंधे रखते हो, पर है तो सब प्यादे ही। और अब ये जानना दिलचस्प होगा की इन प्यादो को इतनी शालीनता से सजाने बाला वो षडयंत्र करता आखिर कौन है, इतनी बड़ी शतरंज रची, और मै ये भी नहीं कह सकता की ये महज वीर के लिए रची गयी होगी.... उसे ज़रूर कुछ ऐसा चाहिए होगा जिसका ज़रिया मात्र वीर होगा।
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बाकी पिछला दो अंश रॉगटे खड़े कर देने बाला था जनाब, वीर और क्रिमसन का वो मलयुध , इतनी बारीकी से लिखना कहीं से भी आशान काम नही रहा होगा आपके लिए लेखक महोदय।
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और भी बहुत ऐसे बिंदु थे, जो शायद मुझे समझ नही आया, हो सकता है की नियमित न रहने के कारण, और लगातार झरोके जैसा 30 अंश पढ़ने के कारण मुझे ऐसा लगा हो, खैर उसके बारे हम आप से फिर कभी बात करेंगे,

फिल्हाल तो अब बस हमे इस माहालंढो के स्वामी श्री क्रिमसन के इतिहास के बारे मे जानने की दिलचस्पी है।

आगे के लिए शुभकामनाएं🖤
 

DARK WOLFKING

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romanchak update ..ek baat to samajh aa gayi ki crimson ne ava ki maa ko target pe rakha tha jiski wajah se ava ko veer ko fasana pada ..
ava ka level bhi badh gaya hai aur ab usko wo skill milne wali hai jisse wo apni maa ko theek kar sakti hai ..

ghar me sab pareshan hai ki veer ka phone nahi aaya aur kavya ne suhana ko bhi call kiya par jis halat me suhana hai wo kya batati kavya ko .
sach bata nahi sakti ki kya ho raha hai waha pe ..
suhana bhi dard me hai veer ki khabar sunkar aur divya bhi par koi kuch kar nahi sakta ..sabne veer ko mara hua maan liya hai .
ek maa aur behan ke dil ko pata chal gaya ki veer musibat me hai 😍.
 

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इका मतबल ई है कि, आवा के पास भी सिस्टेमवा है। बस ऊका दूई हजार अंक चाही, फिर ऊ वीर के ढूंढी के ओकर ठीक करे के सकी।
रउआ ठीके समझलु हो, ससुरी एवा अप्पन नंबरबे बढ़ावे खातिर तो विरबा के फ़साइले बानी। लेकिन अब ऊ ससुरी वीर के ढुंढी की नाही ई तो रैटर्वे जानी।
 

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A few artworks by Diplomatic Gladiator :

1) Kaera at her university in a one piece dress~

एकदम वैसा ही चित्रण है, जैसा किरदार का वर्णन किया गया था, लज़ाबाब।
काश हमरी शांती भी ऐसने बबाल लगती, ससुरी खाली खा खा के भैंसियाल जा रही है..... हह्ह्ह्
 
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