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Ussi ne banaaye hai. Jo dekha hai uski link bhejne ka. Usne ek nahi. Kayi saare banaaye hai. Ek bas mene abhi dikhaya hai. Dherro bheje hai usne.Mujhe nahi lAgta ki sayad is bande ne ye artwork banaya ho kyuki aisa hi same to nahi kahunga par youtube r par isi shakal ki thumbnail me dekha hoo wo bhi aaj
Harr ek ka answer milega. Tum log jo questions soch paa rahe ho. Usse mein pehle hi cross out kar chuka hu. Sab saamne aata jayega. Have patience.
Thanks bro
Mann toh bohut tha ki iss par animation ho. Dekhne ki khwaish hai meri. But it's impossible.
Thanks
Dekhenge hum aage. Kya hota hai. Read karte jaiye.
Thanks a lot. Veer ke baare me jaan'na hai toh bane rehne ka.
Thanks man
Ye kya possibility rakh di bhai? Crimson Ava hai? Baap re!!!
Thanks
Sharp hoke padhne ka.
Tum toh Trinity ko hi udwa do. Veer ke haatho Ava ka khoon!?
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Ye toh karna hi chahiye.
Vada Raha aage bhi update achha hua to aur bhi Like aur Tali dono thoki jayegiHarr ek ka answer milega. Tum log jo questions soch paa rahe ho. Usse mein pehle hi cross out kar chuka hu. Sab saamne aata jayega. Have patience.
Thanks bro
Mann toh bohut tha ki iss par animation ho. Dekhne ki khwaish hai meri. But it's impossible.
Thanks
Dekhenge hum aage. Kya hota hai. Read karte jaiye.
Thanks a lot. Veer ke baare me jaan'na hai toh bane rehne ka.
Thanks man
Ye kya possibility rakh di bhai? Crimson Ava hai? Baap re!!!
Thanks
Sharp hoke padhne ka.
Tum toh Trinity ko hi udwa do. Veer ke haatho Ava ka khoon!?
Thanks
Ye toh karna hi chahiye.
Dhanyavaad!Kya baat hai guruji, bahut hi khatarnak update tha. Raungte khade ho gaye.
DhanyavaadGajab ka update bhai yane full suspense bana diye ho na ab maza ayga aage kya hoga veer to gya bhai pani me jabardast update.....
Ladki ke chakkar me sab ek na ek baar dhoka khaate hi hai.System wali ladki koi or nahi ava hi thi.
Crimson or Ava dono ne mil kar Veer ko fasaya.. Khair ye to duniya ka dastur hai ladki ke chakkar me achhe achho ki L lag jati hai. Or veer ko marne ke piche bhi yahi khel khela gaya.
Hum wahi jaanenge.Ava ni konsi majburi me ye kiya ye janna baki hai abhi. Vaise uski kamjori uski maa hi hai to shayad wohi hogi.
Dekhte hai.ab aage dekhte hai veer zinda bachega ya mar jayega ? Vaisa ava ke pas notification to aa gaya veer ki death ka but phir bhi yakin nahi hai.
Thanks a lot bhai. Keep supporting!Superb Update Bhai.
Shukriya bhaaya.Dhamakedar update bhai ji you are great,,
Bohut bohut dhanyavaad bhai. Agla update kal aa jayega. Saath bane rahiyega.Werewolf
अद्भूत एक एक शब्द ने पूरा बदन को विस्मृत कर दिया बहुत ही सुंदर और वीर की विरासत को इस प्रकार से समुद्र की गहराई में परी पर इतना कुछ...
ऐवा का मिशन...
तू सी ग्रेट हो जी भाया....
अगले अंक की प्रतीक्षा संभव नहीं है, 135 से ज्यादा लाइक हो गए हैं.. पोस्ट करने के लिए शर्त पूरी....
इंतजार में
Bilkul! Veer ke liye toh saare readers aa gaye hai.Werewolf
तो ये प्लान बनाया है भाया वीर की विरासत को समेट दो फिर देखते हैं कि क्या प्रतिक्रियाएं देते हैं श्रोता पाठक गण
2900 पृष्ठों के उपरांत पाठकों की प्रतिक्रिया समीक्षा रुक नहीं रही है.. ये शाश्वत सत्य है कि हीरो की मृत्य मृत्यु कोई भी सहन नहीं कर सकते हैं
Bilkul! Kintu agla prakran Veer ke upar nahi hoga. Crimson aur Ava ke ird gird ghoomega. Aur bhi alag scenes honge. Hum dekhenge.इतनी विस्तार से चर्चा करते हुए समीक्षकों की ढेरो प्रतिक्रियाएं पूरा कहानी का समीकरण समझ में आने लगा..
तो अब इन्तेज़ार है अगले गाढ फाड़ प्रकरण का
इस असभ्य शब्द के लिए माफ... पर क्यों..
वीर को मार गिराया ये तो.....
शीघ्र मिलते हैं मित्र
Shukriya bhai. Thread me aapka swaagat hai.Bhai me aapki ye story bhut lambe time se padh raha hu but isse pehle mene forum par register nahi kar rakha tha.
Lekin aapka ye update padhne ke bad me khud ko rok nahi saka.
Intezaar rahega ju ke revos ka.To sabse pehle to sorry itne dino tak silent reader bane rehne ke liye or ab se me aapke har update par response dunga.
Bohut bohut dhanyavaad bhai.Sahi me Bhai kya update likha h aapne man gay aapko.
Meri heartbeat itni tej ho gayi thi update padhte huye ki kya hi batau,esa lag raha tha jaise koi movie chal rahi h mere aankhon ke samne.
Thanks a lot bhai. Keep supporting!Awesome wonderful update bro.
Well well well. Ava ne betray kiya hai. Aur filhaal uski Maa grace...! Ahem! To maa to nahi chudne waali. Baaki hum dekhte hai.Ab bat kare update ki to Veer kahani ka hero h. Maybe he is dead for now but use somehow vapis aana hi hoga, apna badla lene ke liye or apne parivar ke liye.
Bhai bas aapse ek request h ki jitne bhi logo ne veer ko cheat kiya h un sabki maa chudni chahiye achhe se.
Eagerly waiting for next update.
Dhanyavaad. Saath bane rehne ka.Intresting update rahi, stories esy twists say hi apna intrest qaim rakhti hay or aagy berhti hay. Veer kisi na kisi trha bach hi jaye ga. aagy dekhty hen kya samny ata hay
Par iss waqt to Veer ki physical condition kharab hai. He's dead.सुहाना आएगी।
वही तो है। जो बचा सकती है
Shukriya.Awesome kiya change diya hye bhai
Yes!Update 137 se saare update kayi baar padhne ke baad -
1. Veer ko Ava ko kidnapper se bachane ka mission nahi mila tha, bas kaha tha - 'Get to Ava as soon as possible', per kyon. Is hisab se to mission pura ho gaya. Veer reached Ava aur Ava to kidnap huyi hi nahi thi.
Hum jaanenge.2. Kya Suhana ko Ava ke baare me kuch pata tha jo weh uske France jane ki baat se chaunk gayi.
She didn't want to kill Veer. That's why she was sorry....3. Ava ne ant me Veer ko sorry bola, yani weh Veer ko is tarah se marta nahi dekhna chahti thi, Crimson usko kuch aisa batana chahta tha jiske liye weh yeh karne ke liye majboor ho gayi thi.
Ye abhi nahi kaha jaa sakta. Dekhte hai hum death flag ko samajhna hoga pehle.4. Ava ko death flag mila - akhir Crimson hi nahi, uska system bhi use koi task de rah tha.
Wait what!?Dimag ka bhosda ho gaya hai sach me. Kaha maine socha tha ki aaj veer bach jayega fir ava pair khol kar veer ke samne khadi ho jayegi aur maja hi maja lekin yaha to jajbaat hi badal daale
Yahi to next update darshayega.Sabse bada sawal ye hai ki ava ne aisa kiya hi kyu? Aisi kya majburi thi uski?
Ye to confirm ho gaya ki vo kisi ke dabaav me aisa kar rahi thi lekin kiske?
Ava doesn't care for any guy rn.Kya crimson ne uski maa ko utha liya hai aur vo ava ko force kar raha hai ya koe chotha banda apni gand dikhata ghum raha hai jiski gand par ava ka dil aa gaya hai?
Dilchasp hoga dekhna.Dusra sabse bada sawal hai veer bachega kaise?
Pari ne starting me hi bataya tha ki vo kisi mare hue insaan ko jinda nahi kar sakti aur vo apni energy sirf ek baar use kar sakti hai kisi ko bachane me jo vo kar chuki hai
Yes! I'm sure this isn't a ghost story.Ab ava ke pass message aa gaya to matlab veer mar to gaya hai lekin ab sala vo jinda kaise ho?
Are you sure ye ghost story nahi hai?
Wahi poora setup dikhaya jayega jald hi. It's much bigger than you're assuming currently.Ye sab kuch ava ne hi plant kiya hai. Usse pata tha mall me kya hone wala hai esliye usne gambling zone me veer ko le jaya gaya fir kisi tarah veer us se thoda door hua to ava ne khud ko hi kidnapp kara liya
For a reason...! Which we'll see.Uske pass system tha aur veer crimson se lad raha tha jiska sidha matlab hai ki ava ne koe fight nahi ki. Agar ki hoti to vo aaram se bach kar nikal sakti thi. She planed all this but why?
Are you sure about that?Abhi bhi mujhe bahut jada lag raha hai ki vo call wala banda crimson hi tha. Uske pass ava ki koe dukti rag hai jisse dabba kar vo usse veer ke against use kar raha hai
Veer ko andar se kyu todna hai? Usse jab yu hi toda jaa sakta hai.Usse bhi pata hai ava veer ke friends ki friend hai aur uske jariya veer ko ander se toda ja sakta hai
But fir vohi sawal kyu?
Shukriya man!Veer aur pari ki conversation bahut behtarin dhang se dikhai aapne. Pari ka pyaar veer ke liye aur veer ka pari ke liye ek adbhut darshay tha vo aur bahut khubsurati ke sath dikhaya aapne
Didn't he mention? Woh itni buri tarah fassa hai ki Suhana bhi uski madad nahi kar sakti. He acknowledges that...! Pari se kehta hai woh ye. He has 150 above IQ that's why he chose not to surrender. Surrendering would have put him in jail. Lots of questions and he probably might have labelled as a terrorist there. Fir yaha India ki govt. tak baat pohuchti. Since Veer is an Indian citizen, toh Indian govt. apne citizen ko churrane ke liye procedure rakhti. Would have taken months in this.Veer ki intelligence 150 ke upar hai fir bhi usne surrender kyu nahi kiya?
Uske pass suhana thi, kaera thi, sonia bhi thi hi aur ye sab bahut powerful bhi hai jo usse bacha sakti thi dont forget to mention karan
You must not think like a regular guy here like we usually do. Try to dwelve deeper. Into Veer's thoughts. The reason behind his actions.Fir chutiyapa kyu?
Aise banega badhsah?
No bro! The bench wasn't made up of plastic. It was a big ass iron bench. Thos aur mazboot thi woh bohut. Beowulf Blessings strength nahi badhaata. It increases speed, reflexes, agility by 50%.Jab vo bench par periodic motion bana raha tha to us bench ko helicopter par hi kuu nahi fek mara?
Sabhi innocent hi hai (almost). Unhe nahi pata hai ki Veer nirdosh hai.Innocent jaan bachane ke liye?
Lekin unme innocent tha kon?
Hum dekhenge jald hi.Abhi kya hoga?
Kaise bachega vo?
Kya veer ka pari ke sath chhot jayega?
Thode dhaage bacha ke rakhna. Kyuki sbhi finale arc me haalat aur kharaab hone waali hai.Update to acha hi tha lekin dimag ke dhange khol diye
Koi na man! Jab samay mile, jab dil kare tab likh do. Kahani bhi yahi hai aur mein bhi.Hats off to your thinking bhai. Likhna to main kal hi chahta tha lekin dimag etna kharab ho hogya ki kya likhu kuch samjh me nahi aaya
And thanks a lot for this lovely and wonderful revo.Ek baar aur padhna tha ye update lekin man nahi kar raha ab
KEEP WRITING
Tab Pari aayi thi uske andar. Woh ek baar wali energy ki wajah se bacha tha woh. Ab dobaara Pari wo nahi kar sakti.भाई फिजिकल कन्डीशन खराब तो जब वो सुरु में था। उस वक्त कहा सही थी मरते हुए ही बचा था।
वही अब है।
फिर सर्वाइव करेगा छोरा
उस वक्त यादे भी तो कड़वी लेकर घूम रहा था। तो उस वक्त परी साथ दे गई।Tab Pari aayi thi uske andar. Woh ek baar wali energy ki wajah se bacha tha woh. Ab dobaara Pari wo nahi kar sakti.