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Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

    Votes: 1,195 83.0%
  • Sab kuch kho baithega

    Votes: 24 1.7%
  • Kuch paega toh kuch khoega

    Votes: 188 13.1%
  • Kuch nahi bann paega

    Votes: 33 2.3%

  • Total voters
    1,440

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Love is a sweet poison
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Update - 72 ~ Divorce!
Ab tak...

'Nahi!!!! I cannot... I don't love him! Wo mera bas ek student hai. Aam students ki tarah. Aur mein ek teacher. Hamaare beech ek profesional rishta hai. Formal relationship. Nothing else. There's nothing between us. From now on... I will treat him just like any other student. That's right! Aisa hi hona chahiye! Yes! I'm right! Of course!!!!'

Apne aasuo ko poch wo kuch derr baad washroom se baahar nikal gayi.

Aur Veer ke mann me tabhi firse ek ghanti baji,

*Ding*

[Nidhi's favourability has been reduced to 40.]


Ab aage...

Kal Nidhi ma'am se mulaqaat ke baad, Veer ke liye kuch bhi faldaayak nahi tha. Na keval Veer Nidhi ma'am ke sang apna rishta sudhaarne me nakaam tha. Balki, Nidhi ma'am ki favourability uske prati aur bhi gir chuki thi. 58 se seedha 40 par aa chuki thi favourability. Wo aur udaas thi uss se.

Nidhi ne decide kar liya tha ki wo Veer se ab zyaada matlab nahi rakhegi, na hi zyaada milegi aur na hi zyaada baat karegi. Ek professional rishta hi bana ke rakhegi wo khud ke aur uske beech.

Veer jaanta tha sab kuch. Wo jaanta tha ki Nidhi ma'am ke mann me uske liye kuch toh hai. Par wo unn feelings ko accept nahi karna chaahti. Wo ye bhi jaanta tha ki ab Nidhi ma'am uss se dur bhaagengi. Uss se kam baat karengi. Ye bahaana dengi ki wo ek student teacher hai aur unhe itna friendly nahi hona chahiye. Usne toh pehle hi aane waale incidents ke baare me imagine kar liya tha.

Par ye sab jaante hue bhi Veer abhi pissed tha.

Wo pissed tha isliye kyuki Nidhi apne emotions ko accept nahi kar rahi thi. Ek taraf Kaera thi jo apne emotions ko feel karne ke liye athak prayaas kar rahi thi. Toh wahi Nidhi thi jiske paas emotions hote hue bhi, wo unhe dhaak kar apni feelings ko chhupa rahi thi. Aur yahi baat Veer ko disappoint kar rahi thi.

Still, wo shaant tha. He was calm. Thanks to his 95 intelligence. Usne saari baatein parakh lii thi. Aur unhe kese deal karna tha ye bhi soch liya tha. Nidhi ma'am bhale hi uss se dur bhaage. Veer ne decide kar liya tha ki ek din wo unhe unke emotions ke aage harwa ke rahega. Aur wo din dur nahi jis din Nidhi khud aake uss se apne dil ki baat kahegi.

Par filhaal, uska attention iss waqt kahi aur zaroori tha. Naha dhone ke baad wo apne room se nikla aur main hall me aaya jaha Suman, Ragini, Aabha aur Sonali sabhi uska hi intezaar kar rahi thi.

Ragini : Baitho Veer!

Ragini ne usse ishaare karte hue baithne ko kaha.

Veer baitha. Wo toh pehle se hi jaanta tha ki Ragini ne yaha sabhi ko subah subah kyu bulaaya tha. Bas wo intezaar kar raha tha.

Ragini : Jaise Dada jii ne apna nirnay liya aur wo apni zimmedari se muqt ho gaye...

Kehte hue usne ek nazar sab par daali fir ek lambi saas lete hue continue kii,

Ragini : Wese hi mene bhi apne jeevan ka faisla le liya hai. Aap sab ko mein apna maanti hu. Apna parivaar maanti hu. Iss ghar ke sadasya hai aap sab. Aur isliye, mein aaj aap sab ke saath apna nirnay saajha karna chaahti hu.

Suman ne ek nod dete hue Ragini ko ishaara kiya ki hum sab sunn rahe hai. Aap kehte jaaiye.

Ragini (nods) : Kaafi kuch soch vichaar karne ke baad, khud se lakh baar sawaal karne ke baad, mein finally iss nirnay par pohuch chuki hu ki...

Sabki nazre uske upar hi tiki hui thi iss waqt. Ragini bhi baari baari sabhi ko dekh rahi thi. Uske baad bina koi sankoch kiye wo boli,

Ragini : Ki... Mein Vivek ko DIVORCE de rahi hu!!!

*Silence*

Aur kuch derr tak bas khaamoshi chhaayi rahi. Koi kuch nahi bola. Veer bas muskuraaya jaise usse pata tha ki Ragini yahi faisla legi.

Na jaane kitni raato ko wo jab jab apne kamre ki orr jaata tha tab tab Ragini ke kamre ke andar se uski rone ki awaaz usse aksar sunaayi de jaaya karti thi. Kamre me sikud kar na jaane kitni raatein roke guzaari thi Ragini ne. Par ab aur nahi. Zindagi me aage bhi badhna tha usse.

Aur Veer jaanta tha ki Ragini issi qadam ko chunegi. Still, yadi wo iska ulta faisla bhi leti toh bhi Veer uska saath deta. Kyuki ab tak Ragini uske sang uske harr kadam par saath de rahi thi. Badle me itna toh karna banta hi tha.

Suman aankho me chamak liye forun hi uth ke aayi aur Ragini ke kandhe par haath rakh uske bagal se baith gayi,

"Aapne ekdum sahi nirnay liya hai Ragini jii! Mein boht khush hu aapke iss faisle se. Ab aap khul ke apna jeevan vyateet kar sakti hai. Aapko ab koi bandish nahi. Yadi aap waapas jaati toh zaahir hai ki aap uss niraasha se kabhi baahar nahi nikal paati. Par ab... Ab sab kuch behtar ho sakta hai."

Suman ki baat sunn Ragini muskuraayi par uske chehre pe waapas se maayusi chha gayi thi. Uski udaasi ko mehsoos karte hue Suman fir boli,

"Aur... Aur mujhe vishvaas hai ki koi aapse behad pyaar karne waala aapke jeevan me jald hi khushiyo ke rang bhar dega. Dekhna..."

Suman ne Veer ko dekhte hue ye baat boli.

'Hmm?'

Suman : Kyu hai na? Veer ji!?

Veer : !?? Haan! O-Of course!

Ragini stabdh nigaaho se Veer ko dekhi aur fir halki muskaan liye neeche dekhne lagi. Uske gaal halke gulaabi the, na jaane kya soch rahi thi.

Par itna zaroor tha ki wo pehle se kaafi behtar mehsoos kar rahi thi.

Aabha aur Sonali toh bas chup chaap baithi rahi shuru se ant tak. Unke kehne ya na kehne se wese bhi kuch nahi hone waala tha. Aur na hi wo itni experienced thi inn maamlo me.

***

Veer's old home...

Veer ke puraane ghar me iss waqt apne kamre me Pranjal baithe hue tha. Diary me na jaane kya likh raha tha.

Par uske chehre ke bhaav bade hi khaufnaak the iss waqt.

'Veeeeerrr!!!! How dare you...!!!!? Hmm~ Nice... Nice... I see!! Toh aisa hai sab kuch haan? Veer!!!! Tumhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha. Na keval tumne mera mazaak banaaya balki, meri poori planning par tumne paani fer ke rakh diya... DAMN YOUUUU VEEERRRR!!! MEIN TUJHE CHORRUNGA NAHIIII!!!'

Pranjal jo apne gusse ko qaabu me karne ki koshish kar raha tha, uska gussa harr guzarte pal badhta hi jaa raha tha. Jese hi wo aankhein band karta, uske saamne wahi banquet me hua sharmindagi waala nazaara saamne aa jaata. Kitna embarassed hona pada tha usse waha. Aaj tak apni poori zindagi me Pranjal ne kabhi itni sharmindagi mehsoos nahi kii thi.

Aur ye sab kiski wajah se hua tha? Khaali ek Veer ki wajah se. Wo Veer, jisse Pranjal bachpan se ullu banaata aaya tha, aaj usme itni himmat aa gayi thi ki wo palat ke uska mazaak bana sake? Wo bhi sab ke saamne?

Pranjal ka khoon khaul raha tha uss manzar ko yaad kar kar ke.

Par Pranjal bhi koi kaccha khilaadi nahi tha. Wo aisa saanp tha jo apne ande ek hi bil me kabhi nahi rakhta tha. Dusre shabdo me, uske paas kayi paitre the. Yadi Veer ne uske plan ka pardafaash bhi kar diya tha toh bhi uske paas kayi upaay the.

In fact, Pranjal ab aur chaukanna ho gaya tha. Usse pata lag chuka tha ki Veer active hai inn maamlo me aur ab boht hi bareeki se jaal bichhaana padega.

'Hmm~ Badla toh mein lunga Veer! Tumne ye wese accha kiya jo mujhe aagah kar diya. Harr ek beizzati ka badla lunga mein. Ab tak mein choti macchliyo ko pakadne me laga hua tha. Par ab mujhe sabse pehle badi macchli pakad ke usse paani me se nikaalna padega. Uske baad... I'll deal with you!!! Kyuki, pehle paisa zaroori hai. Once I'll have that... Tumse nipatna fir chutkiyo ka khel hoga mere liye.'

Sochte hue usne diary me zorr se apna pen panno me khos diya.

***

Aatish' Hideout 5...
Time : 8:13 PM

"Kya sab aa gaye?"

Ye awaaz thi Slogan ki jo kursi par baithe hue tha. Chehre ki chinta saaf bata rahi thi ki wo yaha kuch serious discuss karne hi aaya tha.

Warehouse tha ye Aatish ka ek prakaar se. Uska adda number 5. Aksar wo badi deals yahi kiya karta tha. Kyuki, ye jagah kaafi safe thi.

Slogan ke samaksh baithe Steve ne haa me gardan hilaayi aur apni baat rakhi,

"Aa gaye hai sab Dada. Aap bataiye. Jo bhi orders honge mein wo sab aadmiyo ko samjha dunga."

Slogan : Hmm! Uske pehle... Ye glass bharwao pehle.

Steve : Jii! Balhaar, idhar aao!!!!!

Steve ne Balhaar ko zorr se chillaaya toh wo peeche se aaya aur uske haath me ek jug tha.

Steve aur Slogan dono hi baatein kar rahe the. Aur Balhaar nazre neeche kiye glass me beer bhar raha tha.

Par tabhi jese jis baat ka usse darr tha wahi hua,

Steve : Hmm? Tum toh right handed the na? Ye baaye haath se kyu serve kar rahe ho?

Ye sunte hi Balhaar ke chehre se uska rang udd gaya. Waqai! Steve boht sharp tha. Aise hi nahi usko apna right hand bana ke rakha hua tha Slogan ne. Steve ki baat sunn iss baar Slogan ne bhi usse dekha. Aur dono ki nazro ko apne upar mehsoos kar, Balhaar ke paseene chhootne lage the.

But thanks to Veer, ki usne pehle hi usse iss baare me aagah kar diya tha. So he came prepared. Usse pata tha ki usse kya bolna tha.

Balhaar : Steve bhai! Jis din hum sabhi uss Veer ko pakad ke laaye the. Aur, fir baad me unki gang aa gayi thi. Tab adde se bhaagte time mein aur mere aadmi unke aadmiyo se bhid gaye the. Aur... Ussi ladaayi me... Ye sab ho gaya. Mera haath mud gaya.

Steve : Ohhh! Toh ab tak treatment kyu nahi liya?

Balhaar : Jab tak uss Veer ki khatiya na khadi kar du tab tak mujhe chenn nahi aayega Steve bhai. Ussi ke kaaran ye sab hua hai.

Slogan : Theek hai! Tum jaa sakte ho.

Balhaar : Jii!

Aur Balhaar peeche jaa ke khada ho gaya. Slogan ko pata nahi kyu, par kuch theek nahi laga.

Slogan : Steve! Hume kuch karna hoga. Jald hi.

Steve : Kahiye Dada!

Slogan : Wo jagah...

Slogan ne seedha Steve ki aankho me dekhte hue kaha. Steve bas do shabd sunte hi maun reh chuka tha.

Steve : Kya wahi par...!?

Slogan : Haa wahi par...

Steve : Samajh gaya Dada! Par aap waha par saara intezaam karoge kese? Uss ladki ko...!?

Slogan : Plan aisa hai ki...

Slogan apni saari baatein rakhta jaa raha tha par usse nahi pata tha ki Balhaar wahi peeche khada hua kya kuch nahi kar raha tha.

Slogan apne jeevan kaal me itni deaths ko escape kiya hua tha ki usse khatre ka abhaas ho jaata tha. Aise hi nahi wo itne saal tak zinda tha. Itne bade khatro se ladne ke bawajood wo harr baar zinda bach jaata tha. Kyuki usse experience tha. Wo khatre ko bhaanp leta tha.

Aaj bhi Steve se baatein karte hue, usse kuch ajeeb laga. Toh usne forun hi kaha,

Slogan : STEVE!!

Steve : Jii Dada!

Slogan : Iss Balhaar ko baahar jaane ko kaho.

Steve : Balhaaaarrr!!! Baahar jao!

Balhaar : Jii Steve bhai!

Wo bina kuch kahe baahar nikal gaya. Jese usse jo chaahiye tha, wo usse mil chuka tha. Uske chehre par ek kutil muskaan thi.

Steve : Kya hua Dada? Kuch baat hai kya?

Slogan : Nahi! Ye Balhaar...

Steve : Balhaar apna hi aadmi hai Dada. Aatish bhau ke andar hi wo saalo se kaam karta aaya hai. Wo gaddaari nahi karega, jaha tak mujhe lagta hai. Par kya aapko kuch doubt hai?

Slogan : Hmm! Iss Balhaar ki poori jankaari lo. Mobile phone se leke sab kuch. Mujhe kuch theek nahi lag raha.

Steve : Jesa aap kahe!

Aur issi ke saath Slogan ne wo meeting wahi samaapt kar dii. Aaj usse kuch gadbad mehsoos ho rahi thi. Aur isliye usne Steve ko bhi uss Balhaar ki info nikaalne ka kaam saup diya.

Par kis jagah ki baat kar rahe the ye Steve aur Slogan? Ho na ho, Slogan kuch bada hi soch ke aage badh raha tha. Kuch aisa jo iss baar usse uske maqsad tak pohucha sakta tha.

***

Ragini's PoV...

Aaj! Aaj mene apne jeevan ka ek boht hi aham faisla liya tha. Vivek se Talaak!

Mein harr raat jaagti aur mere khayaalo me wo mazar mandraata rehta tha.

"M-Mujhe chorr do... Mujhe mat maaro!"

Vivek ke wo shabd jo usne uss gunde se kahe the jab uss gunde ne ye pucha tha ki kiski jaan lu? Toh Vivek mera apna pati apni jaan ki bheekh maang raha tha. Bina meri koi parvaah kiye.

Kya kuch nahi kiya tha mene uske liye? Uss se pyaar kiya. Uske kehne hi pe mein do saal tak ruki rahi hamaari shaadi ke liye. Mere Dad T.V.S ke showrooms ke maalik the toh mene uski automobiles ki company me kitni madad karwayi thi unn se.

Of course mein ye sab baato ko ginti thodi thi. Kyuki mein sab kuch hamaare liye hi toh kar rahi thi. Shaadi hue abhi hume kuch hi mahine toh hue the. Uske kehne par mein abhi Maa bhi nahi bani thi.

Kyuki wo chaahta tha ki abhi hum life ko aur enjoy kare thoda. Aur mein bhi maan gayi thi.

Usse chaahiye thi property. Toh devar Pranjal ke saath milkar wo dono kuch khichdi pakaate rehte the aur mujhe bina bataaye hi harr baar plan me shaamil kar lete the. Mein bhi yahi samajhti thi ki ye jo bhi matter hai jald hi nipat jaega aur mein apna pyaara jeevan uske sang vyateet karungi.

Veer! Mera devar! Uske khilaaf hi hum sab shadiyantra rachte the. Mein toh bas naam ke liye unke plan me hua karti thi. Mujhe toh sab kuch aksar baad me pata chalta tha ki ye sab akhir karte kya the. Shuru me mujhe aisa lagta tha ki shayad Veer waqai ek bhondu insaan hai. Par mein galat thi.

Uss raat jab mene saari umeed chorr dii thi. Uss raat wahi Veer kisi farishte ki tarah mujhe bachaane aaya tha. Mein... Jo uske khilaaf rehti thi. Mujhe bachaane aaya tha woh. Uss raat mujhe pata lag chuka tha ki ek saccha asli insaan kesa hota hai. Wo tha Veer! Vivek nahi! Vivek ne toh mere dil ko choor choor kar ke rakh diya tha. Saare armaan mere, mere sapne, sab kuch ek hi jhatke me usne bikher ke rakh diye the.

Aur mein kathputli ki tarah uske haatho me naachti rahi. Kaash mujhe ye baatein pehle samajh aa jaati. Kherr! Galti toh insaan se hi hoti hai na? Mujhse bhi hui. Aur ab mein usse sudhaarungi.

Aaj hi na keval mene vakeel ko bula liya tha balki mein Veer aur baaki sabhi ke sang seedha apne mata pita ko leke Vivek ke ghar bhi gayi thi.

Itni kaha suni hui, kaafi derr tak mujhe uske gharwaale manaate rahe. Mere Mom Dad boht supporting the. Unhone poora decision mere pe chorr diya tha. Aaj wo Vivek gusse me mujhe chillaata raha, toh kabhi rote hue gidgidaata raha. Par mein tass se mass na hui. Saala aise insaan pe kese bharosa kar sakti thi mein.

Pata nahi kyu, par meri nazre Vivek ko chorr aaj Veer pe zyaada jaa rahi thi. Wo khaamosh sa bas mere harr faisle me mera saath de raha tha. Ye hoti hai maturity. Sach kahu toh Veer ek gentleman tha.

Haan thoda natkhat tha, aksar wo baatein bhi keh deta tha jo aurto ke liye appropriate nahi hoti thi. Par... Dheere dheere usme change aa raha tha. Aur boht hi behtar change aa raha tha. All in all, he knew how to treat a woman.

Vivek ke parivaar ke lakh manaane par bhi mein na maani aur mene divorce ke paper par sign kar diye the. Shayad Vivek ko bhi pata tha ki ab wo mujhe kabhi nahi mana sakta, toh usne bhi bemann papers par sign kar diye.

Ab toh bas formalities hi bachi thi. Jo kuch din me hi ho jaane waali thi. Main cheez toh sign hi the aur dono taraf ki razamandi.

Uss ghar me toh jese maatam sa chha gaya tha. Ghar ke do sadasya ghar jo chorr chuke the. Mein aur Veer. Do bhi nahi, teen. Veer ki asli maa bhi toh nahi thi. Mujhe unke baare me koi jaankaari nahi thi. Kitni hi ajeeb baat thi. Unse related koi bhi cheez nahi thi ghar me. Na koi photo, na koi zikr unka. Na jaane bechaare Veer ko kitni tadpan hoti hogi apni Maa ko lekar. Bechaare ko kabhi Maa ka pyaar nahi mil paaya tha. Maa ka kya kabhi theek se usse parivaar ka pyaar nahi mila.

Isliye mene usse apne sang rakhne ki sochi thi. I'll give him a familial love.

Aaj mein behad khush thi. Thoda maayus bhi thi par uss se bhi zyada khushi thi. Aisa lag raha tha jese kisi ne dil se kaafi wajni bhaar ko utha liya ho.

Ab mein azaad thi. Ab mein unn raato ko hamesha hamesha ke liye bhulna chaahti thi.

Aur isliye, aaj mene sab kuch hata diya. Saree utaar dii, mangal sutra hata diya, maang me se sindoor hata diya, apne haatho se choodiya nikaal dii. Aaj mein bas ek shining black top aur blue jeans me thi.

Mein bilkul college ki ladki lag rahi thi. Aisa lag raha tha ki mein Arohi aur Kavya ki college ki saheli hu. Jese hi mein iss roop me baahar aayi, meri nazre Veer ke chehre par hi thi. Kesa reaction hoga uska?

Aur jese hi usne mujhe dekha...

'Hahahahahaha~' Meri mann hi mann hassi chooth gayi. He was so cute. Fufu~

Uska muh khula hua tha. Wo aankhein phaade mujhe dekh raha tha. Mein bhi jese nayj naveli girlfriend ki tarah poora ghumte hue usse apna look dikha rahi thi.

'Just stop it! What was I even doing!?'

"K-Kaisi lag rahi hu mein?" Mere sawaal par wo maun reh gaya tha. Fir thkda hadbadaate hue jawaab diya tha usne.

"B-Bhabhi!?? You look wonderful!!!"

"Is that so?? Fufu~"

Usne meri tareef kii thi. Pata nahi kyu, par uske muh se tareef sunte hi mera mann prafullit ho utha tha. Vivek ko jab bhi mein aise dikhaaya karti thi apna look toh woh bas ek look deta tha aur bas yahi kehta tha, 'You look good!'

Harr baar uska same dialogue rehta tha. Par Veer!? I could feel ki usne dil se kaha tha.

"Veer!!! Aaj mein xxxxxxx cafe jaana chaahti hu. Will you take me?"

Mene uss se pucha. Mera waha jaane ka ek hi maqsad tha.

"O-Okay! Chaliye!"

Wo raazi bhi ho gaya. Kitna sweet tha Veer. Kabhi mujhe mana nahi karta tha. Hehe~

Wo car ki orr jaa hi raha tha toh mene usse mana kar diya.

"Nahi Veer! Hum bike pe chalenge!"

"Ehhh!?"

"Bike pe! Tum jaldi bike nikalo."

"Umm... Well! Okay!"

Usne firse mujhe mana nahi kiya. I really wanted to give him a hug. How can he be so sweet?

Wahi Vivek... To be honest usse bike chalaana hi nahi aata tha. Aaj tak mein uske saath bike par kabhi nahi baithi thi. Hamesha car me hi rehta tha woh.

Aaj mein Veer ke theek peeche baithi hui thi uski bike me. Aah! Bike se yaad aaya, ye bike mene hi toh usse gift kii thi. He loves this bike so much. Bhale hi utni mehngi nahi thi par Veer boht care karta tha bike kii.

Mein uske peeche baithi, aur pata nahi kyu par mene apne dono haath aaj uske seene me daal diye. Aur uss se bhi badi baat ki mujhe aisa karte waqt kuch bhi galat nahi laga.

Veer shayad meri iss harqat se thoda hadbada gaya tha par bola kuch nahi.

Kuch hi derr me hum uss cafe ke saamne the. Mere yaha aane ke do hi kaaran the. Pehla ye ki yaha cocktails aur mocktails dono hi boht acchi milti thi. Dusra... Well! Dusra kaaran bhi jald hi aane waala tha.

Andar aane se pehle hi Veer ne mere liye door khola.

'Oh Veer!!! How considerate of you!'

Usne mere liye door khola. Vivek toh inn baato par kabhi dhyaan hi nahi deta tha.

Andar aate hi humne dekha. Cafe me harr jagah couples hi couples the. Haatho me haath liye wo ek dusre se baatein karne me lage hue the. Mand mand music baj raha rha. Cafe ka ambiance ekdum romantic tha.

Aur apni table par aate hi...

'Huh!?? Did he just...!?'

Veer ne mere liye kursi kheechi. Taaki pehle mein baith saku.

'Don't do this Veer. Aur kitna sweet banoge!??' mein mann me chillaayi.

Veer mere just saamne baitha hua tha aur wo thoda uncomfortable lag raha tha. Par meri khaatir wo ye sab kar raha tha. Really! He was too sweet.

Uske baad wo utha aur order dene gaya. Wo meri pasand jaanta tha. Usse puchne ki bhi zaroorat nahi padi. Wahi Vivek, mujh se hi order dene ko keh deta tha. Usse farq nahi padta tha ki mein kya pee rahi hu, meri choices kya hai. Sach me, dono me kitna difference tha. Veer was like a husband figure. Really, kitni lucky hogi wo ladki jisse Veer jaisa ladka milega.

*Sigh*

Mene ek aah bhari. Young hona kitna accha tha. Sadly, mein apne college ke dino se kayi saal aage aa chuki thi. If only I could go back in time...

Then!?

Then what?

Who would I have chosen?

Iss sawaal ko sochte hi meri nazar Veer pe chali gayi jo waha khade hoke order de raha tha.

Aur usse dekh uske baare me sochte hi mere gaal surkh laal pad gaye.

'Ragini!?? What are you even thinking?'

Unn baato ko mene dimaag se nikaal diya. Veer order deke aaya aur saamne baith gaya. Mein usse hi nihaar rahi thi. Aur wo meri nazro se bach kar idhar udhar dekh raha tha. Hehehe~ Shayad sharma raha tha.

It was so fun to tease him.

Jald hi hamaara order bhi aa gaya. Usne watermelon flavour ki ek mocktail mangwaai thi. No alcohol!

Aur mene cocktail! My favourite... Sex on the Beach!

Nahi nahi! Ye cocktail ka naam tha. Kuch aur nahi! Iska flavour mujhe personally pasand tha.

Veer jaanta tha. Mene usse bataaya tha pehle, mujhe yaad hai. Aur usse ab tak yaad tha.

Sip sip karte hue hum apni apni drinks pee rahe the. Par bechaara Veer mujhse nazre hi nahi mila paa raha tha. Hehe~

Uska ek aur kaaran tha. Kyuki, aaj mene black crop top pehna hua tha. Mera poora nanga pait khule aam nazar aa raha tha. Veer ne mujhe kabhi aise nahi dekhta tha. Of course, he was dumbfounded.

Pata nahi kyu, mujhe usse aur sataane ka mann karne laga.

"Veeer~ Idhar aao na! Mere bagal se baitho na!"

I called him. Aur wo mujhe dekhne ke baad firse mujhe inkaar kiye bina hi aake baith gaya. Oh god! Why was he so cute?

"A-Aaj aap khush ho Bhabhi?" Usne pucha.

"Hmm~ Behad! Aaj mere dil se ek bojh jese kam ho gaya." Mene jawaab diya.

Par ab samay aa gaya tha. Mere dusre maqsad ka...

Jis maqsad se mein yaha aayi thi.

Mene cafe ke baahar dekha. Road ke uss side hi boht badi sharaab ki dukaan thi. Mujhe pata tha koi waha aane wala tha. Uska hi intezaar tha mujhe...

Aur jese mein sahi thi.

Uski car aake waha ruki aur wo baahar nikla.

Kaun? Koi aur nahi, meri wahi pati... Pati nahi, ex-pati... Vivek!!!

Aur dukaan me jaake usne ek badi bottle sharaab ki lii aur car ke paas aake bonnet pe tik ke wo poori bottle gatakne laga.

I knew it!!! Mujhe pata tha wo aaega.

Aur tabhi...

"Veer!" I called him.

"Huh!?"

"Apna haath do." Mene uss se demand kiya.

"Ehh!? Mera haath!?"

"Hmm~"

Usne apna haath table ke upar rakha aur uske aisa karte hi...

Mene uska haath thaama aur apne peeche se le jaate hue seedhe apni nangi kamar par uska haath rakh diya.

"Bh-Bhabhiiiiiiii!!????" Wo hadbadaaya. Par mene uska haath ek pal ke liye bhi apne se juda nahi hone diya.

'Yesssssss!!! This was the touch I missed.. I was right!!!!'

Aur tabhi, jis cheez ke ghatit hone ka mujhe intezaar tha. Wo ho gayi.

Vivek ki nazar hamaare cafe ki window par padi. Aur hume dekhte hi...

*Craaaaasssssshhhhhhh*

Uski aankhein aag babula ho chuki thi. Hehehe~
Yessssss!!! I wanted to see him like that.

Mene Veer ka haath aur zorr se kass ke apni kamar me laga liya aur Vivek ko dekhne lagi.

Veer toh sabse anjaan tha. Wo sharma raha tha. Toh wahi Vivek... Uska seena gusse me upar neeche ho raha tha.

Aur wo agle hi pal waha se bhaag ke nikal gaya.

'Yesssssss!!! Ohhh god! This feeling!!! His face.... I feel so good!!!!!'

I achieved what I wanted to achieve.

Aur yaha ye buddhu Veer... Hehe~ Kitna sharma raha tha.

Ye buddhu sochta tha ki mein apne kamre me uss Vivek ke liye roti thi. Arre shuru me zaroor roti thi. Par keval Vivek hi ek kaaran nahi tha. Mein toh iss pagle ke liye roti thi.

Because I knew...

I FELL FOR HIM!!

Isliye roti thi. Ki ye galat hai, wagarah wagarah. Vivek ke wo gande laanchan mujhe yaad aa jaate. Par uske bawajood... I fell for this guy.

Aur yadi Vivek itna claim maarta hi tha. That I was having some illicit relationship with Veer.

So why not!??

I'll show him... This time!

Fir mene Veer ko dekha aur uski chin pakad apni orr aage kari.

Aur uske gaal par apni lipstick ke nishaan laga diye.

Not on those damn juicy lips. Unhe bhi chakhungi. Par ek ek seedhi chadhungi mein...

After all, Veer kahi bhaage thodi jaa raha tha.

"Right Veer?"

"Hmm? Kya?"

"Fufu~ Nothing!"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Kuch 3 se 4 updates kahani me mellow scenes chalenge. Romantic scenes, somewhere erotica and some different PoVs. But boht hi jald action aane waala hai. I'm doing some work. Some hard work on those. Prepare rehne ka action ke liye. Isliye abhi inn mellow scenes ko enjoy kariye. Kyuki palak jhapakte hi thrill start ho jaega.
Anyways! Like karne ka aur revos rakhne ka. ✨

Dhanyavaad!
veer ka nidhi ko lekr sochna acha lga ke woh kuch krega jisse nidhi accept kre ki uskI life adhuri hai veer ke bina. Sala Kya zindgi hai na chahte hue bhi apne life ke bure decision yaad ane lgte hai kash Maine bhi baghawat ki hoti baapu ke samne meri Madam sath hoti khairr ab pashchat hott Kya jab chidiya chug gai khet HaHaha😂😂 Dekhtr hai veer Kya krta hai nidhi ko manane ke liye. Veer ko pranjal or vivek ne bhot paresan kiya ab dono paresan hai dono ki zindgi uthal puthal machi hui hai sirf ek shakhs ke wajah se or woh hai veer, pranjal chup nhi baithne wala itna to pakka hai woh palatwar krega jbki veer ki koi glti nhi hai usne toh bss khud ka bachaw kiya pranjal koi tgda plan krega. Vivek ke kundli me iss wqt sadhe satii chal rhs hai na toh usko property me kuch mila na biwi mili Bhai bhi dhokhebaaz nikla biwi divorce de kr chali gai. Kehte hai na upr wala jb deta hai to chhappad phaad ke deta hai or jab leta hai to gaan.. D phaad ke leta hai. Wahi vivek ke sath Ho rha hai. Ragini ne sahi nirnay liya jesa ki ummed tha usne divorce ka decision liya ab uske liye asaan Ho jayega veer ke sath kis trh ka rishta chahti hai shayad usne accept bhi kr liya hai ki woh veer ko chahne lgi hai veer ka Usko touch krna Pati/premi ke trh lgta hai. Yahi jeevan hai jab ap kisi ke sath rhte Ho uski Har bat acha bura nyay anyay sab acha lgta Hai uske har baat me sath dete Ho bina ye soche ke uske aisa krne se kisi ko hurt ho skta hai fir ek wqt woh bhi ata hai jb apko woh bura lgne lgta hai uski achi baate bhi buri lgne lgti hai khamiyan nazar ane lgti hai yahan ragini ke Case me bhi yahi hai divorce paper pr sign hote hi Usne vivek ki hazaron kamiyan gina di. OR veer uske liye dev purush Ho gya wahi veer jIsko kal tak Footi ankh dekhti tk nhi thi baat krna to dur ki baat hai. Ab bhi apna ullu sidha kr rhi hai veer ke kandhe pr bandook rkh kr vivek ko jalane ke liye veer se chipak gai veer IN baato se anjaan ke uske pith piche Kya Ho rha hai. Ragini kitna ache se janti hai vivek ko usko full confidence tha ki vivek yahi ayega. Sahi kehte hai log aurat jaat agr krne pr aye to kuch bhi kr gujarti hai unhe pta hota hai kb Kya krna hai or kaise. Aurten ek nazar dekh le to hazaron ldke line me khade Ho jaye uske piche. Wahi agr ldka kitna bhi kr le ek ldki muskil se milti hai. Khairr ye ragini ki harkten veer ko bhari pdne wali hai vivek bhi veer ki piche pad jayega or pranjal to hai hi agr aisa nahi hota to shayad vivek ka focus pranjal pr hota dono Bhai apas me lad mrte lekin ab dono Bhai ka attention veer hoga. Arohi nazar nhi arhi kahan hai woh woh thodi sanjeeda type ldki hai emotionally ab woh veer ke kiss ko bhula nahi payegi veer se jud jayegi maza ayega jab uska veer se samna hoga. .
 

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bura insan wo hai jo dil me kisi ke liye buri soch rakhe.

From time to time there are people in our life who do not like us at all in the beginning.The way they introduce themselves varies greatly. But they are not wrong. wahi log waqt ke sath aapko pasand bhi aane lagte han.

Coming here, I started expressing my bad thoughts.I shouldn't have done it, but I did.
karna padta ha kabhi kabhi aisa bhi. har insan hamari zindagi me ek jaise andaz se dakhil nahi ho sakta. kuch galat likha tha maine. bohto ko bura bhi laga hoga. kya karun zamindar hon, padha likha hone ke sath sath kheton ka kaam bhi dekhna padta ha har tarha se junglee mind logon se bhi milna padta ha.

Sorry for that!!!!!!!!
Baat tark karne ki nahi hai man. :sigh:
Baat hai bina kuch yaha explore kiye ekdum se seedha allegations fekne ki.
but kuch galat bhi nahi tha.. mere first review me bohut kuch aisa tha. jo hidden tha. jise samjha nahi gaya..which no one could find.. agar bura bola tha.. to objection kaiyon ko hona chahiye tha.. lekin kisi ko utna ghussa nahi aaya. jitna aana chahiye tha.. sanki rajput Sir and asadjee both writers are great writers.. dono aapke jaise hi mahaan han. even har writer hi kamal ka insan hota ha.. brilliant minded, loving minded, supporting minded.. sabhi ko badhiya se intertain karte han.

i said, mera andaz badla hua tha. koi samjh nahi saka. matlab jo likha tha wo un readers ke liye bhi tha, jo koi bhi response nahi dete. bas main ye dekhna chahta mera bad reviews par response kaisa aata hai.. werewolf Sir aap nazar andaz kar gaye.. sanki rajput Sir ghusse me aa gaye.. asadjee Sir bhi nazar andaz kar gaye..
Mene nazar andaaz nahi kiya bhai. :laughing: I gave you a reply. You didn't read at all. :dazed:
Someone said ignore those, Who gave bad review...


But!!!
I don't ignore anyone (except the retarded ones.)
I always accept their views. Yadi kisi ko koi update nahi pasand aata hai, toh I always agree to them. Maybe kahi kuch kami reh gayi hogi. I don't go like ki bhai tu bewakoof hai jo tujhe update pasand nahi aaya. No! If they don't like it, then there might be something missing. So I try harder on my next updates.
imran... noori mere pehle do revos baare tum kya kehti ho
noori... malik saab mai.. mai bhala kya kahungi
imran... kehna padega noori, baat tere malik saab ki izzat par ban aai ha
noori... aisi baat nahi ha malik saab, koi aapki baat par ghusse me kese a sakta ha
imran... to batao noori mene wo revos kyun sahi se nahi diye
noori... pehla hi review achha ho, zaruri nahi malik saab
imran... aage bolo noori
noori... malik saab aap ne Werewolf Sir ko sahi bhi kaha aur galat bhi
imran... to
noori... malik saab aapke aisa kehne se bohut se payare payare readers ne aap ki is baat par apne revos nahi diye. aap ke revos par aitraz nahi uthaya
imran... ruk kyun gayi, aage bolo
noori... yahan sab manoranjan ke liye aate han, lekin malik saab yahan is thread par sab mil gaye hn to sb ek han. sab ko chahiye jo revos achhe den, unhe sarahen.. jo revos achha na den.. unse kahen, bhai hum bhi yahi han, revos dene ka ye andaz sahi nahi ha.
imran... noori baat to tum theek kar rahi ho.
noori... shukriya malik saab
imran... aur batao noori
noori... aapne kitna kaha malik saab, zayada revos hone se update late ho jayegi. is baat par bhi kisi ne aapke review par apne khayalat ka izhaar nahi kiya.
imran... ye baat to ha noori
noori... malik saab ek saal se aap bina account ke hi Xforum par achhi achhi si kahaniyan padh rahe han. aap ke jese aur bhi bohut se payale payale padhne wale bhi bina account ke, account bana ke silent readers ban kar kahaniyan padh rahe han.
imran... to isse kya
noori... itni achhi story kisi ko bhi aaj tak nahi mili, fir bhi dekhen na malik saab abhi tak kitne kam payare payare readers ne revos dene par khud ko tayyar kiya hai
imran... haan bohut kam readers han
noori... unko khayal karna chahiye malik saab. abb dekhen na malik saab ab ki baar ka aaya update kitna kitna achha tha, kitna payara tha. kitna maza aaya na mujhe aapse sunkar malik saab.
imran... haan maza to bohut aaya noori..
noori... *sniff* *sniff*
imran... ?????
noori... Sanki Rajput Sir
imran... ?????
noori... asadjee Sir
imran... ?????
noori... *sniff* malik saab *sniff* aap kitne achhe han *sniff*
imran... ?????
noori... Sanki Rajput Sir aapse naraz ho gaye han
imran... nahi aisa nahi noori.. koi bhi mahaan insan kisi dusre se itni jaldi naraz nahi hota.
noori... *sniff* *sniff*
imran... achha achha ro mat.. ab batao mene Sanki Rajput Sir aur asadjee Sir ke baare me aisa kyun likha tha.
noori... malik saab *sniff* aap *sniff* aapke likhne ka matlab bhi wahi tha *sniff* jo Werewolf Sir ko leke aapne likha tha. Werewolf Sir ke thread par Rihanna mem saab, Sanki Rajput Sir,asadjee Sir aur kuch dusre payare payare reviews dene walun ki waja se ronaq lagi hui ha.. aap kese unhe galat keh sakte han
imran.... ?????
noori.... Sanki Rajput Sir ke jese revos dene ke baad hi to sabne achhe achhe se payare payare se revos dene shuru kiye han.
imran.... noori hamara revos bohut lamba ho gaya ha
noori.... jab tak Sanki Rajput Sir aapko maaf nahi karenge, mujhe chain nahi aayega malik saab
imran.... achha ek baat ro reh hi gai noori
noori.... kaunsi malik saab
imran.... wo jo mene 2nd review diya tha.. wo gande wala
noori.... hehehehehe wooooooooo waaaalaa..
imran.... han noori
noori.... malik saab ye thread incest ha. adult review galat kese hua. aur fir kisi ne us reviews par bhi apna khayal zahir nahi kiya
imran.... sivaye
noori.... Sanki Rajput aur asadjee Sir ne


Sorry Werewolf ... Sorry Sanki Rajput Sir... Sorry asadjee Sir..
For this you'll have to read the answers which we are giving too. :declare:
 

Werewolf

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This is a update, what a update bro fan ho gaya tera to, hero hero hai pr use uski okat dikha di and to be very honest story hero centric jada hone lagi thi ye bohot jaruri tha that is what i think, ab to bas age kya hoga ye dekhne layak hoga kese atish ki gand todi jayegi kese veer is sadme se bahar nikal payega or nikal payega bhi ya nahi.
Aage aao bhai fir dekho kya kya hota hai. Thanks btw!
Lovely fantastic Update. Love emotions jealousy sab Kuch dekhne ko mila iss update me. karan ko doubt agya hai apne baap pr veer ko lekr dekhte hai Karan Kya krta hai. Veer ko hosh agya hai lekin usne khud ko kisi anjan jagah pe paya jahan uske hath pakde arohi Soyi hui thi. Ye clinic shayad karan ke jaan pehchan ki hogi mrinal Madam ki jisko shayad veer ke immunity power pr Doubt Ho rha hai. Arohi ka ek baar fir se wahi corrector dekhne ko mila jo veer ka uske name lene se woh ajib si condition me chali jati hai shayad seham jati hai. Arohi shayad Smjh nhi pa rhi hai Kya ho rha uske sath. Ragini ki situation alg hai lekin itna zrur hai ke yahan se veer or ragini or jyada close Ho jayenge fir iske baad shayad vivek ke sath divorce tk baat pahunch jaye aisa mujhe lgta hai baki writer sahab jane. Dada ji ke sath pranjal bhi Milne aya pranjal ka ana shock se km na tha lekin number bnane ke agya Dada Ji ki nazro me Dada ji bol gye ke ab woh Kuch faisla sunane wale hai. Juhi or kavya ka Milne ana badaa hi cute moment tha. Juhi or veer ka kanafusi mst tha. Uske baad ayi meri sbse Best corrector Meri fav nidhi ma'am Writer sahab ap jese nidhi ma'am ki entry uski presence dikhaye Ho kasam se bta rha hu veer ka toh pta nahi lekin mujhe Kuch -2 hone lgta hai main itna excited Ho jata hu ke bta nahi skta. Bhai ye veer or nidhi ka kasmakas kb tk chalne wala hai. ? Abhi veer nidhi ki kalaai pakad ke kuch kehne hi wala tha ke kaera agai kabaab me haddi bnne halanki ye bhi meri 2nd fav hai. Ayi to ayi gale or lag gai jo Shayad Nidhi ko Kuch to feel hua hoga beshq show nahi kri Ho. Nidhi ki jate hi soniya bhi agai suhana ke sath soniya ne woh dekha jo usko nahi dekhna chahiye tha Veer ko gale lge hue kaera ko jiske dekhne ke baad soniya Jal bhun gai or turant hi washroom bhag gai apne dard ko sametne ke liye ki kaera ek baar fir baazi maar gai. Suhana smjh gai behan ki halat or shayad yahi jalan soniya ko veer ke karib le jayegi. Wese dekha jaye to soniya ke absent ka full fayda Kaera ne uthaya. In billiyon ki ladaai me veer ka Kya hoga ane wala update hi btayega.
Dhanyavaad bhai! ✨
Noah White ( Night Walker) ki gutthi sulajh gayi lock ko pighla ker ander gaya Chester ko mara room saaf kia or baher aaker room lock kia fir weld ker fir se waisa ker dia it a bawal sirf apni satisfaction ke liye insan ko marne se satisfaction milega sahi tha bhai
Or gold ko chupane ka dimag k uske dimag ko salami deni chahiye
Idher Mumbai m Niharika Veer ka mobile hack kerwane m lagi huwi thi jo huwa nahi balki Veer n phone kerke or ziada gaand faad di Niharika madam ki
Suhana or Divya kyon lad rahi h billiyon ki tarah or kon sa card feka h Divya n suhane muh per jise dekh ker hil k reh gayi
Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h
Shaandaar lajawab update bhai
Dhanyavaad! ✨
https://xforum.live/members/werewolf.3608/ yrr bro enlogo ko jara story mai notes kese karte hai or kese read karte hai jara dhayaan do yrr 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Ya toh update yaad ho jaata hai ya fir type karte waqt update khula rehta hai taaki points saare pick up kar sake. :declare:
 

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Update - 103 ~ A Day to Breathe Out


Ab tak...

Suhana : You fuckiinngggg know something... Tell me what the fuck you are hiding? Huh? Bolo! Kya chhupa rahi ho mujhse?

Divya : Urgghh! Jaan'na hai tumhe? Fine then!!! Ye lo!!! Tumhe yaad hai na kis liye bulaaya tha mene tumhe? Ye lo fir...

Kehte hue usne ek card feka jo seedha Suhana ke muh pe land kiya,

Haatho me pakad jab usne uss card ko dekha toh woh hairaani ke maare hil ke reh gayi,

"Whaaaaaaattttttttttttt!!!????"


Ab aage...

Mumbai...
Purvi's Home...
Morning ~ 8:32 AM

*Klink*

"Ye lo beta, chai!"

Saucer plate par chai se bhara cup rakhte hue Purvi ne kaha.

Saamne sofe par baithi hui thi Tej, aur uske hi bagal se virajmaan thi, Bhavna.

Uss din ke baad se, Purvi ne dono Maa beti ko hotel se check out karwa ke apne ghar me thehra liya tha.

Purvi ke pati wahi Mumbai me hi sthit ek sarkaari school ke principal the. Unn dono ki ek santaan bhi hai. Ek beta, jiska naam Tushar hai. Tushar Veer se keval ek saal hi chota hai aur woh medical ki padhayi hetu AIIMS me Delhi me shift ho chuka hai.

Usne fir ek cup chai ka Bhavna ki saucer plate par rakha, aur fir tray me se ek cup apne liye uthaate hue wahi dining table ki ek chair par baith gayi.

Purvi : Kuch pata laga kya fir?

Uske iss sawaal se Bhavna hairat me uski orr dekhi. Ye kya puch rahi thi woh? Bagal me Tej baithi hui thi. Fir bhi aisa sawaal? Purvi ka sawaal Veer ki khoj ke liye tha. Aur usne Tej ke saamne hi ye prashn puch liya. Zaahir tha ki Bhavna usse ajeeb nazro se dekhe,

Purvi (baat sambhaalte hue) : Ahh! Mera matlab tha ki, kuch pata laga kya kaam ke baare me? Tumne kaha tha na ki kaam chorr ke yaha par aayi ho tum. Toh koi dikkat toh nahi yadi tum yaha kuch aur din ruk jao toh?

Bhavna : R-Right! Nahi! Filhaal aisi koi pareshaani nahi hai.

Purvi (nakli hassi lete hue) : Ahahaha~ Okay!

Bhavna (awkwardly) : Hmm!

*Silence*

Dono ka yeh nakli naatak khatam hua aur ek ajeeb sii shaanti phel gayi kamre me.

Unhe laga ki akhir kaar woh Tejal se baat chhupaane me qamyaab ho gayi par...

Tej : 2 points for your acting.

Purvi : Huhh???

Bhavna : ???

Woh dono usse stabdh nazro se dekhi,

Tej : I said two points for your acting. Ye naatak khatam kar dijiye Mom, Aur maasi aap bhi. Aap dono ki hi acting bilkul bhi nahi jach rahi hai.

*Shwwwwooooooppppp*

Usne chai ki chuski lete hue kaha,

Tej : By the way, Chai acchi hai.

Purvi : T-Tej beta!

Bhavna : Tej! Tum...

Tej (dono ko dekhte hue) : Hmm! Sab pata hai mujhe. Wahi baat jo aap mujhse itne saalo se chhipaate aa rahi thi. Sab jaanti hu mein. I know ki mera ek saga chota bhai bhi hai. Aur woh bhi issi sheher me.

*Silence*

Purvi ka toh pata nahi, par Bhavna ko zaroor 440 volt ka jhatka laga tha. Jis raaz ko woh barso se chhipaate aayi, woh uske bina pata lage hi khul chuka tha?

Purvi (frowns) : Bhavna...!

Bhavna ne ek lambi saas lii aur chai ka cup waapas table par rakh diya,

Bhavna : K-Kab? Kab pata chala tumhe ye?

Raaz par se ab parda chuki khul hi chuka tha toh usse bekaar me firse dhaakne ki koi zaroorat nahi thi. Isliye, Bhavna ne shaanti se sawaal kiya,

Tej : Last year!

Bhavna : ????

Tej : Jab aap aur mein Rajasthan me the. Site par...

Tej ki nazre neeche jhuki hui thi. Jese maano woh ateet ko yaad kar rahi thi. Woh lamha jab usse apne bhai ke astitv ke baare me pehli baar pata chala tha.

Bhavna : Rajasthan me? T-Tab kese!? Mein toh...

Tej : Survey ki ek raat... Jab aap apne camp me thi...

Bhavna : Huh!!!

Tej : Mein aapse baat karne ke liye aa rahi thi. Par, jab tak aapke camp tak pohuchi, mene dekha ki...

Bhavna : !!??

Tej : Aap ro rahi thi. Seene se aap ek bacche ke chote se kapde ko bheenche hue thi. Haatho me ek photograph thi aapke. Aur, Mujhe yaad hai aapke woh bol. "Mera baccha!" "Kesa hoga tu ab?" "Dekh! Teri Maa kese tadap rahi hai yaha." "Kya tujhe yaad nahi aa rahi apni Maa ki?" "Tujhe pata bhi hai tere bina kese jee rahi hu mein?" "Par mein majboor hu mere laal. Mein majboor hu."

Bhavna achambhav me Tej ki saari baatein sunn rahi thi. Usse yaad aaya ki usne sach me uss raat yahi vaakya bole the. Toh kya Tej ne woh sab sunn liya tha?

Par yaha Tej aur Bhavna dono hi nahi jaante the ki jab woh Rajasthan se waapsi kar rahe the. Uss raat hi...

Tej toh apni birth par so chuki thi. Uss raat hi Bhavna apne bete Veer se mili thi. Jiske baare me usse pata bhi nahi tha. Ye wahi pal tha, jab Veer Suhana aur Sonia ki mom ki anguthi waale chor ko pakadne train par sawaar hoke Rajasthan aaya tha. Aur jaipur ke station se baith ke woh Suman, Aabha aur Sonali ko Mumbai leke jaa raha tha jab,

Ek aurat dusre platform par alag train me baithe paani ki bottle ke liye request kar rahi thi. Ye Bhavna hi toh thi. Jo survey ke baad se apne ghar laut rahi thi.

Par na hi Tej aur na hi Bhavna ye baat jaanti thi ki unke raaste aapas me iss tarah bhi mil chuke hai.

Bhavna khamosh reh gayi. Kya kehti ab? Sab kuch toh saamne tha.

Purvi (sighs) : Ek na ek din toh ye hona hi tha. Balki mujhe toh khushi hai ki akhir kaar Tej beta tumhe iss baat ka pata chala. Warna tumhari ye Maa na jaane kab tak ye raaz chhipaati rehti.

Bhavna : Tej mein...

Woh kehne ke liye daayi orr mudi par apne saamne usne jo dekha woh dekh ke Bhavna dang reh gayi,

Tej ki aankho se aasu beh rahe the. Kab dekha tha usne apni nidar beti ko iss tarah naino se paani ki boonde bahaate hue? Shayad Bhavna ko yaad bhi na hoga ki akhiri baar usne kab Tej ko iss qadar rote dekha tha. Par aaj...

Aaj woh ro rahi thi. Woh jaanti thi ki uski beti Tej ko zara bhi pasand nahi tha ki koi usse rota hua dekhe. Aur aaj toh...

Woh na keval uske saamne, balki apni maasi Purvi ke bhi saamne ro rahi thi. Ye ishaara tha ki uski peeda kitni zyaada thi.

Tej : K-Kyu?? Kyu kiya aapne aisa?

Bhavna ki khud ki aankho se anayas hi aasu nikal pade.

Bhavna : Beta...!!!

Tej : Kuch puch rahi hu mein... *sniff* Huh? Boliye! Kyu kiya aapne aisa?

Purvi : Tej! Meri baat suno, mein bataati hu...

Par iske pehle ki Purvi apni baat poori rakh paati, Tej apni jagah se uthi aur,

Tej : WOH SIRF AAPKA BETA HI NAHI HAI!!!!! WOH MERA SAGA BHAI BHI HAI!!!!!

Woh itni zorr se chillaayi ki waha baithi Purvi bhi avak reh gayi.

Tej : Kya soch ke aapne mujhse ye sach chhupaaya tha??? Haaaaannn??? Tell meee!!!!! Aapki himmat kese hui mujhse mere hi bhai ka astistv chhupaane ki???? Boliyeeee!!!!

Bhavna ki aankho se aasuo ki dharaaye behna shuru ho chuki thi. Aur uska shareer kaanpne laga,

Purvi ne jese hi ye dekha woh agle hi pal aage badh Bhavna ko thaam ke uske bagal se baith gayi.

Purvi (frowns) : Tej! Meri baat suno...

Tej ne apni maa ki haalat jab dekhi toh usse bhi ye ehsaas hua ki woh kuch zyaada hi bol gayi thi. Agle hi shan woh waha se palti aur apne kamre me jaake,

*THUUUUUDDDDDD*

Usne zorr se darwaaza band kar liya,

Purvi : Teeeeeejjjj!!!!

Purvi ne usse pukaara par, Bhavna ne uska haath thaam liya.

Bhavna : Rehne do Purvi! Rehne do! Usse akela rehne do thodi derr! Mein hi ek acchi Maa na bann saki. Isme uss bechaari ka koi dosh nahi... *sniff* koi dosh nahi!!!

Purvi (frowns) : Bhavna....!!!

Idhar kamre ke andar Tej darwaaze se tike zorr zorr se ro rahi thi. Na jaane kab iske pehle woh iss tarah royi thi. Usse khud bhi yaad nahi tha.

Woh itni kamzor toh nahi thi. Fir kyu? Harr baar jab bhi baat uske bichhde bhai se sambandhit aati thi toh kyu woh iss tarah toot sii jaati thi? Itni kamzor pad jaati thi? Woh toh mili bhi nahi thi uss se theek se.

Khud ke bhaar ko bed par patakte hue usne apna phone khola aur saamne screen par ek tasveer dekh, uske aasu aur zorr se behne lage,

'Kyuuu??? Aisa mere saath hi kyu hota hai??? And why it had to be you?? Do you have any idea that your Mom and big sis exists too?'

Siski bharte hue usne screen par komalta se haath ferra.

Screen par ek image maujood thi. Aur ye kisi aur ki nahi balki Veer ki hi thi.

Ye photo Tej ne apne phone se tab lii thi jab Egypt ke survey me Veer underground site me waha rakhe gupt samaan ko haath laga raha tha.

Ittefaaq se Tej ne usse tab dekh liya tha. Aur fauran hi usne apna phone nikaal ke ye photo click kar lii thi, ye soch ke ki baad me woh usse chori ke maamle me range haath pakad legi.

Par... Par ye photo dhari ki dhari reh gayi. Kyuki Veer ne uss samaan ko chhuune ke baad usse wese hi chorr diya tha. Usne kuch bhi nahi churaaya tha.

Lekin kisne socha tha ki Tej apni kheechi gayi iss tasveer ko aaj iss qadar apne seene se laga ke roegi? Usne khud bhi ye nahi socha tha kabhi.

'Vikram... Huh...!!?? Mein tumhe dhoondh ke rahungi. Chaahe kuch bhi ho jaaye.'

Woh khud se bol wahi laiti rahi. Na jaane kya chal raha tha uske mann me.

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Idhar Mumbai me hi, Veer ke puraane ghar me Arohi aur Kavya apni baato me lagi hui thi.

Kavya bed par laiti ceiling ki orr apne dono haath felaaye apni shikaayate jata rahi thi, aur wahi Arohi Kavya ke college ka work kar rahi thi.

Kavya : Uggghhh!!! Agli baar ka competition mein hi jeetungi dekhna aap.

Arohi : Tum jeet jaati, agar woh Pragya participate nahi kari hoti toh.

Kavya : Wahi!!!! Hehehehe~ Par apne last year ke baad wo college toh leave kar hi dengi. Tab mein apne last year me finally first place le sakungi.

Arohi : Stupid! Abhi hi haraane ki koshish kyu nahi karti tum?

Kavya : Because she's better than me.

Arohi : Excuses...!

Kavya : Noooooo ~ Mene sach kaha. Lekin woh sab chorriye. Ye Veer bhaiya kab foreign se lautenge? Kuch bataaya kya aapko?

Arohi ne Kavya ke sawaal par sarr naa me hila diya,

Kavya : Uggghhhh!!! Ye Veer bhaiya bhi na. Harr baar bina bataaye lambi trips par nikal jaate hai. Hmph~ I hate him.

Arohi : Accha? Kuch din pehle woh kaun tha jo apne necklace ko baar baar dekh ke "I love you Veer bhaiya" chillaa raha tha? I guess koi toh tha. Hmm....!? Par kaun?

Kavya (blushes) : Ahhhh!!! W-Wo toh mein aise hi bas... Wait!!! Aap bhi toh... Aap bhi toh jaan boojh ke baar baar apne baalo ko kaan ke peeche karti ho na? Uss din bhi Kritika ke saamne jaan bujh ke aapne kiya tha taaki woh aapse aapki kaan ki baaliyo ke baare me puche. Jo ki usne pucha bhi tha. Weren't you showing off dii???

Arohi (blushes) : Wh-Whaatttt???

Woh achanak hi jhep sii gayi,

Arohi (blushes) : Wh-Whaaat rubbish!!!???

Kavya : Mujhse jhooth nahi bol sakti aap. Choti behan hu aapki. Sab pata hai mujhe. Mein toh atleast... Atleast... *blushes* openly sab kuch karti hu. Par aap toh... Sabse chhipte hue show off karti ho.

Arohi (blushes) : Y-Youuuu!!!! Jao nahi bana rahi mein tumhari ye drawing vrawing... Stupid!!!

Kavya : Kyaaaaaaa???? Ab aap... Ab aap uska gussa meri drawing par nikaalogi?

Arohi : It's your college work. Make it by your own.

Kavya : Par aap jaanti ho ki aapki drawing mujhse acchi hai.

Arohi : Haan toh ye abhi abhi kahe gaye shabdo ko bolne se pehle dhyaan me rakhna tha.

Kavya : Uggghhhhh!! Sorry na...!

Jab Arohi ne apni choti behan ki rondu shaqal dekhi toh ek lambi aah chorr woh waapas se uske kaam me lag gayi.

Arohi (sighs) : Fine!

Kavya : Ehehehehe~ I know! You are the best!

Arohi (khuspusaate hue) : Stupid....!

Kehte hue uska haath apne aap anayaas hi baalo ko kaan ke peeche karne ke liye chala gaya aur...

Uske kaan ki baaliya uski ungli se jaa takraayi. Jo sharm usne chhipa lii thi, agle hi shan gaalo ki wahi laali aur bhi badh gayi.

'Stupid...!'

Firse uske andar se awaaz aayi. Par iss baar keval mann me, aur kisi aur ke liye...

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Las Vegas...
Forum shops at caesars...
Evening ~ 5:46 PM

Shaam ka samay ho raha tha. Mausam bhi haseen tha. Kul milaake ghoomne firrne ke liye ek perfect time.

Aur Aaj Veer aur Suhana wahi karne nikle the.

Itne dino se jo kuch bhi magazmaari unhone jheli thi, uss se baahar nikaalne ke liye ek breather lena zaroori tha.

Aur shopping se behtar aur kya hi ho sakta tha. Ek kaaran aur bhi tha shopping karne ka. Jo ki Divya ke dwaara dikhaaye gaye uss card me maujood tha.

Suhana aur Veer Divya ki ek dusri car leke khud hi yaha aaye hue the. Chuki investigation department me filhaal abhi koi kaam nahi tha unhe, aur saath hi teesre criminal ko lekar koi details nahi mil paayi thi, toh dono hi shoppi ke liye aa gaye.

Forum shops at caesars. Jo ki Vegas ki best jagah thi khareed-dari ke liye. Wese toh aur bhi behad acchi acchi jagah thi waha par ye sabse mashoor, aur ek must visit place thi.

Suhana hi gaadi chala rahi thi aur Veer baitha hua tha uske bagal se. Aur kuch hi derr me woh jagah ke saamne the.

Suhana : Hum pohuch gaye.

Veer : Hmm? Ohh! Ye jagah kaafi...



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Veer ne dur se hi jagah ko dekhte hue kaha,

Suhana : Badi hai?

Veer : Hmm! Saath hi mehngi bhi lag rahi hai.

Suhana : Of course mehngi hai. Sabse mehngi hai ye shopping ke liye. One of the finest places to shop. Last time mein aayi thi toh kaafi kuch khareeda tha mene.

Veer : I see! Toh aap pehle yaha aa chuki hai?

Suhana : Of course! Now come! Be quick! Let's go!

Woh dono hi baahar nikle, aur entrance par pohuche.

Entrance dekhte hi Veer vismit sa hoke wahi sthir khada reh gaya.

Aur uske muh se apne aap hi nikal gaya,

"W-Woooowwww!!!"



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Suhana (smiles) : Looks nice right?

Veer : It's actually amazing!

Suhana : Haha~ Let's go! Hamaare paas zyada waqt nahi hai. 8 baje tak hume waha bhi pohuchna hai.

Veer ne haami bhari. Aur woh dono andar chal diye. Andar brands ke showrooms aise maujood the jese chaupaati me alag alag khaane ke thele lage ho.



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Aur brands bhi aise aise ki jinka sirf naam hi kaafi tha apni value bataane ke liye.

Gucci, H & M, versace, na jaane kya kya...

Aisi aisi brands maujood thi jo Veer apne desh me shayad hi kisi mall me mushqil se dekh paata tha.

Veer : This...

Suhana : Ye kuch bhi nahi hai. Aao andar chale.




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Abhi woh aage badhe hi the ki usse wahi thehrna pada,

*Ring* *Ring*

Suhana ka phone baj utha.

Aur screen par naam tha,

Gaurav!!!!

Apni bauhe sikodte hue woh screen ko dekhi aur fir Veer ko,

Suhana : Umm?!! Give me a second okay?

Veer : Sure!!!

Aur idhar woh thoda distance lete hue aage aayi aur baat karne lagi,

Suhana : Hello??

Gaurav : Tum lauti nahi abhi tak? Aur kya baat hai? Itni busy ho gayi apni dost ke saath ki ek phone tak nahi kiya apne husband ko?

Bas! Ye jese akhiri shabd the jo Suhana abhi iss waqt sunn'na chaahti thi. Gaand ghis ghis ke kese woh log yaha kuch din survive kiye hai unn criminals ke beech me, ye baat keval wahi jaante the. Aur yaha uska pati ye soch raha tha ki woh yaha mazze kar rahi hai.

Pal bhar ke liye Suhana ke muh me gaali aayi thi. Lekin usne apne aap ko control kar liya,

Suhana : What do you mean? Mein yaha koi enjoy karne nahi aayi hu Gaurav! I'm here for work.

Gaurav : Accha? Haha! Arre bhai aisa kya work aa gaya?

Suhana (lambi saans chorrte hue) : Dekho! Mein abhi busy hu. Hum baad me baat karenge.

Gaurav : Busy? Bhala kis liye? Aisa kya ho raha hai waha? Aur zara apni friend Divya se toh baat karao. Kaafi samay se uss se baat nahi hui hai.

Suhana (mann me) : This... This idiot...

Suhana : Gaurav!!! Woh yaha nahi hai. Okay? Ab mein rakh rahi hu.

Gaurav : Nahi hai? Toh tum kaha ho?

Suhana : Mein shopping ke liye aayi hu.

Gaurav : Akele?

Suhana : Nahi! Veer hai saath me.

Gaurav : Veer? Kaun Veer?

Suhana : Huh? Mene tumhe bataya tha na? Veer! Sonu se jiski pehchaan hai? Uski car se jiska accident hua tha? Kuch yaad aaya?

Gaurav : Huh? Ohhhhh! Woh!!?? Haan!!! Ek minute!!! Toh tum uske saath waha kya kar rahi ho?

Suhana : What? Aane se pehle bataya toh tha ki ek friend ke saath jaa rahi hu mein Vegas.

Gaurav : What the hell Suhana? Woh kaha se tumhara friend ban gaya? Aur tumne ye toh nahi bataya tha mujhe ki tum uske saath jaa rahi ho. Matlab tum jabse ek anjaan ladke ke saath....

Suhana : Gauraavvv!!!! Tumhe meri baate sunn'ne ke liye waqt rahe tab toh jaanoge na.

Gaurav : Tum...

Suhana : Tumhe bataane waali thi. Par tumhara toh dhyaan hi nahi tha meri baato par. Jab tumse kaha ki mein jaa rahi hu. Your response was ~ "Yeah yeah! Go!"

Gaurav : Woh isliye kyuki mein meeting me tha Suhana.

Suhana : I don't care Gaurav!!! I don't care!

Gaurav : Youuuu!!!!

Suhana : Aur ab tum free hue ho toh ab yaad aayi meri? Socha ki ab apni patni se do chaar baate toh kar lu uska dil behlaane ke liye,

Gaurav : Tum jaanti ho mein busy tha...

Suhana : Aur mein toh paagalo ki tarah yaha gaand ghis rahi hu na?

Gaurav Suhana ke muh se abhadr shabd sunte hi thoda jhep gaya. Aisa nahi tha ki woh pehli baar uske muh se gaali sunn raha tha. Par bas baat ye thi ki Suhana tabhi aisi bhaasha ka prayog karti thi jab woh behad hi gusse me hoti thi.

Gaurav : Suhana...!

Suhana : Gaurav!! Mein abhi bilkul bhi mood me nahi hu kuch bhi baat karne ke liye. I'm here to freshen up myself a bit. So leave me alone. Is that clear?

Gaurav : Suhana tum...

Par iss se pehle ki woh kuch keh paata,

*Call ends*

Phone cut ho chuka tha.

Mann me gaaliya liye Suhana peeche ko aayi. Usme dekha ki Veer ek statue ko nihaar raha tha.



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Gussa shaant kar woh Veer ke paas gayi aur uss se chalne ke liye boli,

Veer : Ho gayi baat?

Suhana : Y-Yeah! Chalo!

Veer : Hmm? Sab theek toh hai na?

Uski sawaal par Suhana ne Veer ko shan bhar ke liye dekha aur fir haan me sarr hila diya.

Veer : Aisa laga ki aap pareshaan ho. So I just... You know...

Veer ka bas itna kehna hi tha ki,

Suhana : Arrrghhh!!! Fucking hell!!!!! What does he think of himself?????? Am I his servant or whaaaattttt???? That stupid idiotic rat.... Aaarrrghhhh!!!!!

Veer : E-Ehhhhh!!??

Uska ye roop dekh Veer ko PTSD sa mehsoos ho raha tha.

'Ohhh fuccckkkkk!!! Y-Ye inhe kya hua?'

[Seems like Suhana ki dusri personality trigger ho rahi hai Master!]

'F-Fuuuccckkkkkk!!! Wait!!! Woh aise kyu dekh rahi hai mujhe? Shittttt!!!! That's scary!!!!'

Suhana ajeeb sii muskaan liye Veer ka haath pakdi aur usse ghaseetate hue andar le gayi,

'Ohhhh fuuuucckkkkk!!!!'

[ :?: ]

Woh jese hi ek shop me ghusi,

Uska gussa saatve aasmaan par tha.

Shop me maujood employee uske paas aaya aur vinamrata se pucha,

Employee : Yes! Ma'am! What can I do for you?

Suhana ne apni ek ungli peeche uss employee ki orr point kii,

Suhana : That!!!!

Toh peeche jab Employee ne dekha toh paaya ki ek bada sa teddy waha latka hua tha.

Employee : Ohhh that? Haha~ That will cost you for...

Suhana : Bring me that!!!!

Employee : Huh? O-Okay!!!

Woh employee waha se teddy nikaal ke uske paas laaya,

Employee : Ma'am! This is created by our finest of craftsmen. The quality of the fur is...

Suhana : How durable is this?

Employee : Huh???

Suhana : How much punches it can survive?

Employee : Wh-Whaaattttt???

'Ohhhhh fuccckkk!!!!! Fuck fuck fuck....!!!!'

Idhar Veer Suhana ke peeche khade hoke jab sab dekh raha tha toh bechaare ke shareer me raungte khade ho gaye the.

Suhana ki dusri personality baahar aa chuki thi. She was pissed. Definitely pissed.

Woh ek teddy maang rahi thi. Jaha employee usse ye samjha raha tha ki teddy ka fur acchi quality ka tha toh Suhana ko inn sab baato se matlab hi nahi tha.

Woh toh ye puch rahi thi ki ye teddy kitne ghoose seh sakta tha? Zara sochiye ki aap ki ek gift ki dukaan hai. Aur koi khubsoorat lady aapke paas aake aap se puche ki aapki shop ka teddy kitne ghoose le sakta hai? Toh aapka muh kesa hoga?

Kuch aise hi bhaav abhi uss employee ke chehre par the.

Par iske pehle ki woh kuch keh paata,

Veer : We're leaving!!! Thank you for your time!!!!

'Fuuuuckkkkk!!!!'

Veer ne Suhana ke haath ko thaama aur usse kheech ke baahar le aaya.

Usne usse ek bench par wahi baithaaya aur uska gussa shaant karne ke liye woh chal diya wahi par lagi ek ice cream ki badi sii shop me,

Par jese hi woh aage aaya, saamne ka nazaara dekh ke hi woh chaka chaundh reh gaya.



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Kya khubsoorti thi iss jagah ki.

Yadi mall ho toh aisa...

[Ek din aapke paas iss se bhi accha mall hoga. A much bigger one!]

'Pari...!!!'

Kuch bhi ho jaaye, Pari kabhi bhi motivation dena band nahi karti thi.

Veer dekh raha tha unn jagaho ko,



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Kya khoob tareeqe se statues ka istemaal kiya gaya tha.

'Hmmm? Wese idea bura nahi hai. Yadi inn statues me hamaare desh ke shurveero ki aakriti rahe toh?'

[That's a nice idea Master! Isse sticky note me add kijiye. Hum apna khud ka mall banaenge iss theme par. I'll support you... Always! ❤️]

'Hahahaha~ We still have a long way to go. By the way mere points ka kya? Itne kam points Nightwalker ke mission ke liye kyu?'

[Mene bataya tha na master. Mission jitne acche tareeqe se poora hoga, points uss hisaab se milenge.]

'Toh mene iss baar kya galti kar dii?'

[3 people died.]

'Ohhhhhh!!!'

[Mil gaya answer?]

'Yup Anyways! Let's go!!!'

Usne ice cream khareedi, aur Suhana ke paas leke gaya. Aur waqai, Suhana ka gussa kuch hadd tak shaant ho chuka tha.

Suhana ne na keval khud dherr saari shoping kii balki Veer ke liye bhi usne kaafi kuch khareed ke usse dilwaaya.

Khaaskar ek accha sa suit, jisse Veer ne pehen ke wahi change kar liya tha. Aur usne khud bhi ek khubsoorat sii dress pehni hui thi.

Kyuki unhe yaha se ab jaana tha apni doosri manzil ki orr,

*Thud*

Car ka darwaaza band hua,

Suhana : Chale?

Veer : Hmm!!!

Aur woh dono hi waha se nikal gaye,

Downtown ki orr. Kyuki yahi unki manzil thi.

Akhir issi ke liye toh woh shopping karne bhi aaye the. Divya ne jo kal c
ard Suhana ko fek ke diya tha, uske sang ek flyer bhi tha.

Jo tha...


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Aur akhir me jo card usne feka tha Suhana ke muh pe woh tha, ek invitation card.

Aur, Invitation tha...



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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
This update was to tone down the gritty and intense situation, as the name suggests. Next update me aap jaante hi hai ki kis se mulaqaat hone waali hai hamaari. Toh like thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka guys.

Dhanyavaad! ✨

Fantastic update bro
 

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Vegas ke investigation department se scene suru hote hi hame saari janta ko dikhaya jaata hai boleto waha sab the Head Nolan se lekr waha kaam karne wale sabhi pramukh sadasya, sab ke sab waha maujood the aur apni apni jagah par baithe hue the yaha tk ki divya, Suhana,aur mansion me gaye hue victims jo bach gaye the wo bhi maujood the jiske biche round si table pr file bikhre hue dikhaya gaya par sorry hamne to imagine kiya but but ye imagination bhi kisi bade meeting ka scene jaisa pratit hua just kahu to ek meeting hall aur usme baithe sabhi sadasya aur akela khada sakhs jo iss meeting ko held kr raha tha just epic i say ju logo ke baare me n pata mughe......
Aksar investigation meetinngs aise hi hold ki jaati hai. Generally case par kaam karne waale log hi rehte hai. But idhar sabhi isliye the because this was a huge case. Sab kuch chorr ke filhaal woh iss gutthi ko suljhaane me lage hue the. Danger ka level hi itna tha.
Aur waha projector ke saamne khada tha veer akhir ussiko to iss raaz se parda jo uthana tha sorry par iisse uthana nhi jalana khaenge kyunki ju ne raaz to khol diye lekin phir last me ye suspence de daala ki parde jalaye kisne.....matlab chain se to rahne hi n do hamare mind ko Khair choro ju ko gaaliya to n de sakta par meethe wachan jarur sunaunga apne andazz me mere last paragraph me......
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Bhale hi mansion ke kaand ka chapter veer ne close kr diya par abhi ye raaz to khulna hi tha jo sirf veer ko hi pata tha akhir ussi ne to Noah White urff NIGHTWALKER ko pakda aur waha uss mansion ke guthi ke saath saath treasure bhi dhund nikala just iconic scene is this for those audience that sit in meeting but but but idhar divya ki nazare to veer pe hi tiki thi akhir tike bhi kyun n veer ne kiya hi aisa kaam tha

Tab veer ne chuppi todi uss mahol me aur bolna suru kiya ki hame to pata hi hai ki hamare saath kya hua aur iss sab ki guthi mai aaj yaha suljjhane wala hu.....
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Wahi jo Mike tha ussne to saari vardaat suna daali thi department walo ko jo sun ke to unko to itna pata chal hi gaya ki ye koi asaan nhi tha ye abhi tk sabse khatarnaak case jo unhone handle kiya tha but sorry ye to veer ne kiya but I just say that unhe realise to ho hi gaya tha ki waha maut ka nanga naach hua tha
Yes! Mike told each and every detail about the mansion.
Wahi Tommy jo abhi bhi kaanp raha tha wo gusse me aakr chilate hue khada hua aur apni bhadaas nikalne laga NIGHTWALKER par,pr Mike ne usse shant krwaya lekin uska bhi gussa hona lajmi tha akhir Chester uska dost jo tha akhir wo uski family ko kya jawab deta lekin ye bhi sahi hai ki Chester to bekaar me hi maara gaya tha bechare ne kiya hi socha tha but usse maut mili wo bhi kamre ke ander ghus kr maara tha NIGHTWALKER ne usse it's so disgusting I say...... NIGHTWALKER ne unnsabke saath apne words ke unn chalave me hi aisa fasa diya tha ki wo kuch sahi judge n kar paaye unhone to apne se hi n jaane kya kya points bana liya......
Tommy gussa isliye tha because his friend died man. Chester was hi band member.
Pahla point ju ne clear kiya ki wo kkisi aur weapons se maara gaya tha chester and ju ne mere review me bhi ye bata diya tha Khair ab aate agle sawalo pr jo Nolan ne pucha
1) NIGHTWALKER ke baare me jo information mili tumhe wo kaha se mili ??
2) Chester room ke ander maara kaise gaya ?? (Literally ye judge krte krte hamari umar nikal jaati par ham iske jawab n dhund paate but you riduculous I say......ju khel gaye ham readers ke saath Khair kya kahu ab mai ju hi to karta dharta ho )
3) tumhe treasures kaha aur kaise mila ??( jo ki sab jaana chahte hai ki treasures tha bhi yaa nhi but ju ne treasure hi yaha patak diya )
:approve: Chester hasiya se nahi mara tha. Usse kisi aur strong aur sharp weapon se maara gaya tha. Ab ye disclose nahi kiya hai but you can guess it. :D
Unn sabki nazre ek baar veer par fir tikk gayi jo saaf bayan kr rahi thi ki wo saare sawalo ke jawab jaanne kke liye bohot betaab hai akhir unhe to ye bhi nhi pata hoga akhir jo veer janta hai wo unn logo ke sehat par kya asar daalega 😂

Lekin ek baat kahna padega ki jo NIGHTWALKER tha kaho to ek normal person hi itna khular killer ho sakta koi believe nhi kr sakta tha uski sakal se lekin ju ne kaha bhi isme "NEVER JUDGE A BOOK BY IT'S COVER"
That's what makes him more scary. He looked like a normal person but actually was a serial killer.
Khair ab aate apan log Nolan ke pahle sawal pe ho usne batane ko kaha veer ke puchne pr jo tha chester room ke ander kaise mara gaya ??.....sach kahu to apan to ekdum sunn pad gaya tha Nolan ke iss sawal ke sabse pahle puchne I just out of mind matlab boleto apan ke dimag me aise aise khyalaat ubhar aarhe the ki kya batau.....mai to jaise ye padh kr to 5-6 minute aise hi baitha sa rah gaya tha jab mughe relise hua to apan ko apne pe hi weird si feeling aane lagi thi but mai ek hi baat bolunga you are gem 💎 man you are gem....... Rihanna sahi kahti and mai iss baat ko aaj agajj krta hua bhai ki your are the gem of Xforum !!
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Aur jab veer ne jawaab diya badi hi asaani se wo bhi ki "wo ander aaya maara aur chala gaya"matlab ekdum sannata chaa gaya waha matlab aabhi ko saanp sungh gaya waha ka choro apan ka to mind hi divert sa hone laga ki ye bola kya veer ne..... literally mera mind bahenchod sari ghtnaye hi ghumane laga mere dimag me iss arc ki, I just out of my mind.......bc mere dimag bhi bol raha hoga be ki ab mai n rukunga be aisa haal ju ne kr diya

Khair waha sabko to veer koi namoona hi lagne laga matlab literally mazak chal raha tha kya ??

Aur tab khade hue apne Tommy bechare to bolne lage ki chester ko ghost ne maara hai ajii lauda mera yaha bhuto ka party chal raha hai kya bahenchod iski maa ka....Khair lekin fir wo hassne laga bahenchod paagal to n hogaya but fir hame smjh aaya ki ye to epic dramatic bol raela......usssne veer ko ektrah se khuli Dhamaki to nhi bolenge lekin yaha usko bol sakte askamat nikle hue lafz jo ussne dhamkiyon me paryog kar daale jo gusse ka bhi prabhavv tha usspar akhir uska dost jo mara tha aur yaha veer aisi bahki baat kr raha tha khair tumne to pahle hhi likh diya tha ki usse pahle chester *behka* " aur yaha ju ne pahle hi indicate kr diya tha
Tommy yaha Veer ka mazaak udaa raha tha. Veer ne kaha ki NW seedha ghusa aur maar diya toh Tommy bhi haakne laga ki nahi nahi... Bhoot ne maaara hai. Haha~
Jab Tommy ko Mike ne shaant kra diya tab Nolan ne bola ki "explain properly" par yaha to veer ko mastii sugh rahi thi lekin wo unke saath koi mastii yaa firki nhi le raha tha wo iss liyee nhi batana chahh raha tha jaldi ki kahi ye sab sun ke to u ke dimag ki maa n chud jaaye sorry ek trah se kaho to veer to abhi bhi goosebumps me hi tha usse aaj tk itna shock kabhi laga hi nhi tha literally kaho to uske abhi bhi roangte khade the khair jab veer ne wahi baat dubara dohrayi to apne gandu nik ko to jaise mauka mil gaya veer ki insult aur bejjati krne ka aur usne kiya bhi, uss gandu ne kya kya example me bakk diye and atlast usne bet laga ke bol diya literally mughe itni hassi aayi n usspar ki sach bolu to meri hassi chutt gayii thi padhte huye......:lol1:

Par idhar nik bhi ektrah se sahi hi tha apne tark par akhir kaise koi ander jaa sakta tha akhir gate andr se band jo tha aur koi secret passage boleto rasta bhi nhi tha phir kaise......

Aur yaha veer ne tab bola ki maine kab kaha ussne door nhi khola jisse sun ke to nik hairaan sa rah gaya boleto uske sabdo ki gaand maar li veer ke sabdo ne.....tab veer ne phir jo bola usse sun to waha sabki dai chudd gayi literally veer agar really me sahi baat bata deta sidhe n to ye to pakka thha ki waha 4-5 behosh jarur ho jaate issliye veer ne itna ghumaya baat ko yaa boleto unn logo ne khud ghuma liya ......ab divya bhi confused so ho gayi thi wahi suhana pareshan hogayi thi veer ko lekr aur apne mike sahab to iss chinta me aagaye ki kahi veer lataad boleto lathgodhan wala haal n ho jaye :haha: bc hassi chutt gayi ye line padh ke

Jab divya ne bola ki veer isse jayada mt badhao tab kya hi tease kiya veer ne usko apne eye contact se gajab literally ju ne yaha bhi tease wala scene embed kr diya Khair tab veer ne Nolan ki traf dekha jiska chehra hi ❓mark bana hua tha

Veer to yahi soch raha tha ki inhe mai kyaa batau ye sab to inke out of mind hai......Khair veer ruyee abhi bhi khade the still goosebumps me hi tha literally itna Sadma to usse slogan se ladne pe bhi laga tha
Nik ki gaand jali kyuki uski jeb me koi note nahi ghus paaye. :D He's after money. Wahi Veer ne case solve kiya plus Veer ki Nik se patati. Uski Divya se zyada chalti hai as compared to Nik. I mean Divya ke saath bhi kuch khaas dosti nahi hai par Nik ke comparison me dono dost hi kehlaenge. :laugh:
Veer ne Nolan se permission lete hue ek pic saamne indicate krwayi jisse dekh sabhi ke chehro pr gaandu wale ❓ mark ban gaye literally mazak chal raha hai kya ye aur ye baat apne Tommy buaa ne bol hi diya lekin usse chor kr sabke thobde serious ho gaye the akhir ho bhi kyun pic hi aisi chis ki thi jiske baare ham reader log soch tk nhi sakte the aur ye apna Werewolf khel gawa hamni ke saathe kono baat n apnaa time aayega.......aur tabhi divya bhi kuch smjh gayi aur uske to ruyee bhi khade ho gaye the mere khyaal se jhante sulagne ke jagah wo bhi khade ho gaye honge ahemm ahemm haa to ladies log ye line mat padhna haa to mai kaha tha boleto divya smjh gayi thi aur veer ne bola ki ye ATOMIC NUMBERS hai....... bettichod yee hua blast boleto wisphot unnsabke dimag ki gaand maar di iss nuclear blast bc unke to pakka raungtey nhi bc gaand tk ke baal khade ho gaye honge literally veer ka wo haal hogaya tha to ye sab to chutiye sorry hutiye ke prajati hai inki to dai hi chudd jayegi aur hua bhi wahi aur apne Tommy ne bolna chaha to uski to gaand maar di veer sabdo ne aur tab ussne pata chala Zoey se chester ka room no. Jo tha 50 boleto atomic no ke hisaab se Tin aur uski hoti hai melting point 231.85 degree literally ye dekhte hi to unke bacho khichi jo kasar baaki tha unke sarir me wo bhi puri ho gayi literally Unki to kya hi kahu jaise ju ne likha ki ridd ki haddi tk sihran daud padi.......jara socho kaise ussne uss metal door ke uss tin se bane side bar ko pighlaya aur phir haath ander daal kr khol kr ghusa chester ko marta raha jabtak uske do tukde n hogaye aur phir usse bistar pr leta diya sab saaf waaf kr ke baahar aaya aur kundi laga di aur phir melding kr ke wapas chala gaya...... boleto ye tha kya, yaar literally mere raungtey to nhi khade hue par ek sihran jarur daud gayi sarir me ki literally aisa kiya tha ussne.......sach me NIGHTWALKER blood lust ke liye pagal tha wo lusty creature tha ek ye kah sakte ho haa usse pashyco mai n kahunga lekin ek trah se kkah bhi sakte ho but pshycopathic to Khair choro itna deep nhi Jaana meko and main chis ye ki jab veer ne usse check kiya tha tab ju ne iss liye information nhi di thi ab smjh gaya nhi to ham smjh hi jaate Khair ju khel gaye hamare saath - NIGHTWALKER ki trah......
Should I tell you the story of NW? :D
Fine! Bata deta hu. Teenage me jab NW tha toh car me kahi jaate waqt car accident me uske 2 family members maare gaye the. Woh bach gaya tha. Par uss umr me usne pehli baar kisi ke shareer se khoon nikalte hue dekha tha. And guess what? He actually liked it. Yes! There are people like that. Ek baar firse woh khoon ko shareer se behta dekhna chaahta tha. Kese laal rang zameen par fel ke sab kuch laalam laal karta hai. Gaadha laal rang aur khoon ki woh gandh jo naak me padti hai. Paagal sa ho gaya tha woh uske peeche. Isliye usne badi himmat karke apne school me ek classmate ko maara tha. Aur usse maarne ke baad usse maza toh aaya par usse utna maza nahi aaya jitna pehli baar khoon ko dekh ke aaya tha. Fir shuru hua uski hi family ki maut ka safar. Ek ke baad ek usne unn sabko maara. Aur jab dab marr gaye toh talab aur badh gayi maarne ki. Khoon behte dekhne ki... Fir usne ye mansion ka khel shuru kiya. Issi dauraan usne as a technician aur welder ki job bhi kii thi. Metals ka usse knowledge tha. Aur isliye fir ye mansion ka nirmaan hua. Ab ye kese kiya usne ye spoiler hai. :D
Khair veer se wistar me sunnke ki NIGHTWALKER ne ye sab kaise kiya hoga unki to haalat hi khraab ho gayi....... unnsabki to kya hi batau literally jo khauf aur dar se jyada unke ander goosebumps aye honge n wo soch ke hi unhe khauf se guzarna pad raha hoga unhone aisa socha bhi nhi hoga ki ek killer aisa bhi kuch krega, Khair apna NIGHTWALKER to melder aur technician bhi nikal pada aur abhi mere ek aur baat clear bhi ho gayi ki kyun NIGHTWALKER ne veer ko pani side lekr aaya tha pichle fight scene me boleto NIGHTWALKER ka last fighting scene me

Waha to jaise maaatam chaa gaya tha.....divya to chair pr gir gayi wo khauf me thi aur dar uss khauf ko chir raha tha bechari !!

Khair ab unhe avgat ho gaya tha ki house of killers koi mamuli gang nhi hai ye alag. hi level hai bauaa log alag aur ye story ka writter bhi iconic level ki wor badh chuka hai
You are not prepared for what's about to come. :smoking:
Aur jab NIGHTWALKER ko veer ne check kiya tha to kya samne aaya ussne apne family tk ko n chora to ye mamuli log kya chis the literally ab mai bolunga he is dammmmmnnnn bloody wape Pshycopathic lekin jo aur bhi killers honge unki to kya hi kahu abhi se hi soch kr scenes ubhar lad rahe hai lekin literally bloody gore's scenes ko dekhne,padhne, imagine krne ka ek alag hi maza hai aur saamne dekho to kya hi kahu

Aur jab ne puri wakhiyat batayi ki veer ne kya kya dekha notice kiya boleto jab ussne puri baat batayi to unki to gaand ke gurde bhi fast gaye bc ab smjh aaraha hoga ki ye to sirf trailer tha abhi to house of killers ka aana baaki hai

Tab Mike ne treasure ke baare me pucha tab veer ne Zoey se uska room no. Pucha jo tha 79 boleto Au gold to simple ab jab ye baat saamne aayi to Zoey ka to badan hi thithur gaya literally ju ne jitne bhi words yaa kaho lafz paryog kiye wo alag hi imagination me baitha rahi thi hame !!

Aur tab veer ke taali bajate hi jo chis saamne aayi wo thi flower vase jo puri trah se ander se bhari hui thi gold se jo uss NIGHTWALKER ne golden bars ko pighla kr isme daal diye the aur uppar se mitti aur phir kuch flowers literally I just say tha he is dammmmmnnnn genius in his business......

Aur wo paintings to sirf deception the and second one boats wo kahha gaye to unhe to NIGHTWALKER ne chuppa diya tha literally ussne sab plan kr rakha tha
Thanks man! Yes! NW ne hi boats ko idhar se udhar kiya tha. Actually jab sabhi log Mansion me aa rahe the tab NW mansion ke baahar tha. Island ki boundary par. Ghane jungle me won chhipa hua tha. Aur jese hi koi aata tha, NW uski boat peeche ki orr shift kar deta tha. Boats ko alternative tareeqe se chaalu karna koi kathin kaam nahi tha uske liye.
Khair Nolan ne veer ki bohot taarife ki aur usse treasure ka kuch Percentage bhi de diya aur veer ne Mike ko bhi aage kr diya treasure ke percentage me jo lajmi thi aakhir wo bina kuch soche uske saath jo gaya tha

Aur ye to confirm ho gaya ki jo bhi department ko target kr raha tha wo ab satark ho gaya tha to ab wo kuch time tk to koi halchalnhi krenge matlab the end of this arc but twist is in last baby......:lol:

Akhiri baat aur ye confirm krwa diya ju ne ki har kamre ke no. Jo bhi tha usme alag alag elements ki khoobiya thi yaa kaho to surprise hi maan lo bhale wo surprise tumhe maut de yaa kuch aur and room no. Ko leke pari ne pahle hi ye baat jahir ki thi par wo puri trah se smjh n saki thi haa ye jarur smjh gayi thi ki room no. se related kuch to ajjib hai aur wo nikla bhi
Iss se mujhe ek baat yaad aa gayi. Death Kiñg ju ne kaha tha room numbers ka filhaal koi role nahi hai. :hinthint:
Khair aage badhte apan log.......

Veer ki bohot hi waah-wahi hui aakhir ussne akele jo ye sab kiya

Aur idhar Emma ne jaate hue usse 8:30 me milne ko bola department ke baahar mai smjh gaya tha wo apna raaz kholegi jo ussne waha chupaya aur hua bhi wahi ussne yacht chori kiya tha kisi rich person se Khair lekin ussne veer se uska assistant banne ki bola to veer ne Nolan ki secretary ko dekhte hue kuch aur hi bola

Khair yaha Niharika ne hack krwane ki koshish krwayi veer ka phone but veer to uske bohot uppar se bhi uppar ki chis tha wo khel gaya aur jhaar diya ache se Niharika ko aur Niharika ne uss hacker ko jhaar kr bhaga diya

Aur idhar jab veer ander aaya department ke to ussne suhana ko divya pe chilate hue paya ki wo kya chupa rahi hai bata de aur jisse tang aakar akhir kar divya ne ek card feka jo suhana ke muh par land hua plane ki trah shuuuuuuuuuu nhi be Khair choro aur jab uss card ko jab ussne dekha to wo shock me chilaayiii

"Whaaaaaattttttttt ??"
Niharika ko laga tha usne baazi maar lii. :rip:
Khair ab mai nhi jaanta ye kya tha par itna to pata hai ki jiss liye divya ne bulaya tha suhana ko usse related hi kuch hai par kis chis ka card hai ye n pata haa ye jarur pata hai ki ye card NIGHTWALKER. Se related aur uss mansion se related nhi hai ye kisi aur chis ka hi card hai jo envelope ke size ka hoga I think koi n dekhte hai aage ke update me !!

And this is the end of this arc I think but don't so I mean house of killers dubara jarur aayenge hi agar ye end hai to !!
Who told you this is the end of the arc? :laugh:
Aur ab aate ju kke writting aur shocking aur apan logo ko suspence me chor e ki to wo lajavaab tha.....ab mai kitni baar Hatt's off bolu ju ko mai to thsk gaya but mai yahi kahunga ki ju ek gem ho and I really really say and it's apply on you man you are insane in this.... Rihanna is right you are really a gem 💎


Take care........
spelling mistakes hui hongi jaldbaaji me to unko mind mt Krna Werewolf bhaya :tease3:
Bas kar re... Rulaega kya!? :dontmention:
Ju ke liye bhi :respekt: Bc itna bada revo bhi na patak dena ki reply dene me hi kayi ghante lag jaaye. Poora update me dubki hi maar dete ho bey... :what1: Kayi baar lagta hai ki ye mene kab likha? Ju ke kaaran update firse padhna padhta hai. Fir pata lagta hai arre haan bc ye toh likha hai mene. Same goes for Rihanna kya hi detail pakadti hai re. :kiss:
Thanks a lot man! For a such a detailed and massive revo. I appreciate a lot. It takes efforts to depict the update in your own terms. You guys are awesome. :thumbup: Keep supporting guys! ✨ :grouphug:
 
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