Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

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Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

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aaj apan pahle to review pelega........


To aate scene ke starting hoti hai apne Chester ke room ke baahar se to mughe laga pahle ki ju hamesha ki trah sidha scene aage badha doge lekin n ju ne ye nhi kiya kyunki flow jo khraab n Krna tha ju ko.......to jab door nhi khola kisi ne ander se yaa ye bhi Kahlo ki ander se awazz tk n aayi...... Khair jab koi response nhi aaya to itna confirm to krliya Mike ne ki something wrong inside.....aur tab veer ne aisi baat boli ki waha sabki najar veer pr eka ek tik gayi, wo log usse ghurne lage jo lajmi thi kyunki utna heavy door kisi se nhi tut sakta tha aur veer ne bola "Let's break it"......matlab yaar jara imagine hi krlo ki agar tumhe koi simple hi door todne ki bole to tum wo nhi tod sakte to itna heavy 🚪 door bilkul n..... ek simple door ko bhi todne me gaand fatt jaati hai ache acho ki to ye to ek heavy door jisse todne ka to sawal nhi paida hota......Mike ne tab bola ki atleast hame try to Krna hi chahiye kyunki 3:30 ho gaye hai aur NIGHTWALKER ka time hai ye .....aur tab Tommy,Mike,veer teeno ne door ko run-up lete hue 4-5 dhako me hi door ki toddiya aur ye to sabko pata hai ki Mike aur Tommy ke karan to door bilkul nhi tuta obviously bilkul nhi aur agar Werewolf bhaya likhte bhi nhi n to ye lagbhag sabko pata hi hota lekin ye likhna jaruri bhi tha ki veer ne akele ke dum pe hi door toda kyunki veer ke pass tha "bewolf blessings" jiske aur agar veer ye use bhi n krta to tab bhi door ko wo akela tod hi sakta tha itni to strength thi usme lekin still usne Tommy sur Mike ko issliye apne saath door ko todne ko kaha taaki unhe veer pr koi sakk yaa dout n ho.......

Aur sabse main line iss 1st scene ka kya raha pata hai wo hai
"Apni aankho ki laali chhupaane ke liye
Veer ne apni palke band kar lii."
Ye line matlab boleto kya hi bolu ek alag hi imagination pr le kr gayi ki usne apni wo laal ho rakhi aankhe kaise band ki hongi kyaa hi scenery yaa kaho view bane honge sabke saamne mtlab literally awesome........


Aur jab gate tuta to sabse pahle sabbka dhyaan farsh or gire hue hi bed pr gaya jaha wo so raha tha literally Chester so raha tha bahenchod gussa to sabko aaya hoga hi jise Tommy to gusse me usse sote dekh Gurate hue "MOTHERFUCKER" bhi bol gaya literally jara socho tumhe pure ghar me dhunda gaya bahar tk dhunda gaya lekin tum mile kaha bathroom me sote hue auur lajmi hai ki sabko gussa aayega hi aayega ......aur yaha to scene hi alag hai ek killer jo maut liye ghum raha hai piche sabke aur ye Chester mahasay yaha so rahe hai......

Lekin tab Mike ko smell aayi jo khun ki thi aur lajmi thi ki agar yaha khun hai kahi to Mike jo detective hai usse uske experience dhoka n de yaha aur uske experience ne usse dhoka bhi nhi diya.....


aur sabse main baat jab ju ne likha ye line maine padha tabhi mere dimag me ek baat khtk gayi thi

"Chester araam se bed par dala hua tha." Jab maine ye line padha n to mughe dout to ho gaya kyunki line chlo ju ne likha sahi lekin yaha ju ne "dala" word use kiya jo saaf saaf negative chis indicate kr rahi thi kyunki agar cheater sota to aap likhte

"Chester araam se bed par *pada* hua tha."
Lekin ju ne ye chis wo feel lane ke liye likhi ki "something is wrong there" aur wo hua bhi.......aur baat kre uske sarr pair jo bahar thi kambal ke to ispar utna dout n hua lekin itna confirm ho gaya puri trah se ki Chester beta tapak chuka hai lekin kaise ?? Aur iska jawab bhi ju ne de hi diya jab Chester ke uppar se Tommy ne kambal hataya to teeno ki rooh kaanp gayi matlab simple bhassa me bolu to unki atma bhi kaanp gayi ho gai ek pal bhar ke liye unke raungtey khade kya kaanp rahe honge aisa scene wo tha yaha tk ki Tommy ki to kya hi kahu bechare ki to Halat aisi ho gayi jaise bin badal pani aur jaise ju ne ye line likhi ki "uski atma ne uska sath chorr diya ho wo aise farsh or ludhak gaya" haa unn lines ka mtlab to yahi nikla lekin jo scenes veer ke saath hue jo hame Mike ke dwara ju ne feel krwaya yaa kaho to imagine hi krwa diya ju ne ki veer khauf se bhadi apni aankhe uss manzar pr hi gadaye hue tha uske ankho me ek chamak si ban gayi thi jo unn bund pani ki thi jo apne samne ke manzar ko dekh apne aap hi pnap se gaye the tabhi veer ko to ek alag si hi anubhati ho gayi thi jo pahli baar usse itna khauf me iss scene me ju nee dikhaya usse yaha tk apne saamne pade manzar ko dekh usse emit yaa kaho to vomit si situation create ho gayi thi lekin still usne control kiya haa usse vomiting nhi aayi thi ussne aisa manzar apne saamne deekh liya tha jisse wo bardas nnhi kr sakta yaa kaho to uske sense aur uska mind uss chis ko jyada der tk jhel nhi sakta tha jo lajmi bhi thi kyunki wo manzar hi aisa tha......veer ne jjaise taise khud or kabu paya


par tabhi pari jo shant thi usse veer ki halat dekhi n gayi aur wo bol padi jo lajmi bhi thi kyunki pari kabhi veer ko pareshani me nhi dekh sakti thi aur tab ju ne uss scene ko hamare samne laya jo uss samay se teeno ke liye pareshani si hogayi thi......samne Chester bed pr do hisso me bata hua tha boleto usko bicho bich se hi kaat diya tha kisine sorry aur kon hoga NIGHTWALKER......Chester ke wo andhruni jagaho se riste khun jo uss bedsheet ko lalam-laal kr rahi thi jo uski katte hisso se andhruni artariya aur manshpeshiya bahar aarahi ho ho ho bhai gajab yahi to chahiye apan ko ye feeling hi allag aati hai imagine krne me bloody wape moment that's I like it very much bhai very much iss scene ko tumne jiss trah se imagine krwaya n wo ek alag level ki thi ek Hollywood ka scene yaad agaya apan ko jab apan ne Alter's ke ek short movie dekha tha "PIECES OF ME" uska scene yaad agaya mai to kya hi bolu bhaya but ye scenes to abhi bloody gore's ki suruwat hai iss story ki abhi to aaur bhi bloodiest moment aayenge jo ander tk hila ke rakh dene wali hongi.......maine iss scene ko kamse kam 7-8 baar to pakka padha hi hoga bhaya lekin tab bhi man n bhara I just like this scene gajab ka moment hua ye

Ab baat kre uske bicho bich katne ki to bhaya ye to almost impossible hai kisi aam admi ke liye asal me jo scenes ham itni asani se dikha deta hai story me ki ye kaat diya wo kaat diya lekin ju ne to sidha bicho bich do part literally kitna strength use kiya hoga wo NIGHTWALKER just imaginable matlab boleto wo ek baar me to bilkul nhi kata hoga bilkul nhi lekin bhaya ju ke story padh kr jo realistic feeling aati hai n wo kisi story pr n aati kyunki ye story ju par tiki hai aur ju hi iske karta dharta ho...... Hatt's off man.......

Tab Mike aur veer ne Tommy ko lekr nikle uss room se jo abhi behosh tha aur usse wo log apne room me le gaye jaha Zoey aur Emma thi.....jab zoey aur Emma ne jab Tommy ko behosh dekha to tension me to aayengi hi aur unki wo tension dar me badal gayi jab unhe chester ki maut ki news milli unhe to.....wahi Emma to ro padi uskee dimag me aisa baith sa gaya tha ki ab wo n bachegi lekin apan yaha ek baat bolna chta bhaya ki ju ne Emma ke charecter ko kuch alag hi sa banaya hai matlab ju smjh rahe ho n ek alag sa boleto ek darpok kahna galat hoga kyunki uske jagah koi aur bhi hota to wo bhi darta haa usse pirit kah sakte hai NIGHTWALKER se kyunki ussnne to apne saamne live dekha tha Jacob ki maut haa utne wistar se nhi lekin jo bhi ussne dekha tha scene jacobb ke maut ke saath saath NIGHTWALKER ka wo roop jo kisi ko bhi ander tk hila dene ke liye kaafi tha aur yaha to Emma ne sab khud apni aankho se ye sab deekha tha to lajmi hai ki wo aise rahe aur baat kre Zoey ki to wo to apne par had se zyada hi conttrol krti hai haa usse dar lagta hai pr wo appne dar pe kaboo to paa leti hai pr it seems to be amazing to be saw her in future updates.......



Emaa aur Zoey bed pr ekdusre se chipk kr baithi thi wahi veer aur Mike bagl me ek dusre se khade the

Emma aur Zoey ko agar wo bata dete ki Chester kaise mara to Emma ki to abhi hi jaan nikal jaati yaha tk ki Zoey ki ruwai paka foot padti lekin Khair veer aur Mike ne nhi bataya unhe

Lekin uss samay jab veer ne bewolf blessings on kiya tha tabhi usse smell agayi thi ye baat mai bhul gaya tha lekin ju ke aage yaad krate hi apan ko yaad agayi

Tab Mike ne cigrate nikalte hue khud bhi liya aur veer ko bhi offer kiya to veer ne accept krliyaa kyunki uski wo ability on thi boleto detoxification on thi usne cigrate lete hue jalayi lighter se wahi Mike abhi bhi gusse me tha akhir wo ek detective jo tha aur woo yaha apne saath walo ko nhi bacha paa raha tha.....

Khair dono khidki ke pass khade bahar kdkti bijiliya aur bataate moti moti wo chamkti boonde jo khidki or pad rahi thi aur ander jo dhua uth raha tha ek alag hi feeling laarahi thi jo horror sai lagi jo mughe ek alag hi feeling laa rahi thi just chilling in this imagination but ander kuch to feel hui thi mughe jo ek alag hi feel de rahi thi ekdum alag sa

Khair veer ne chupi todi aur baate suru hui unndono me aur aakr ruuki ek bbaaat pr jo tha cameras ka jikr jo Conor ne kiya tha apne video me matlab ssab record abhi bhi ho rahe hai aur tab Mike ne shock wali baat veer ko batayi ki usse 4 cameras mill chuke hai jo veer ko jhtka to laga lekin tab Mike ne usse bataya ki iss room me fan matlab pankhe ke bicho bich bhi ek camera hai unn 4 me se tab veer ne udhar dekhna chaha to Mike ne rok diya jo sahi bhi tha

Ab baat aayi ki chester search time me kaise maara gaya to ye sawal apan ka bhi tha to ju ne bola tha ki agle Update me to apan ko jawab mil gaya to jawab likhna to banta hai to chester issliye mara gaya jo veer ko uss voice ki baat se yyaad kyunki uss voice ne kuch nhi kaha tha iss baare me ki search time me NIGHTWALKER ghumega yaa nhi inn logish ne to khud b khud new rule boleto new point bana liye the jo chester ke maut ka karan bhi bana......aur chester to idhar se udhar ghum bhi raha tha aur uss awazz ne ye bola bhi tha ki agar ghumte mile to gaye NIGHTWALKER dwara.......matlab saaf baat me NIGHTWALKER khel gaya firki le daali unnsabkki

Tab veer ne kah daala sidha ki mai bahar jaa raha hu tab Mike ne bhi bol diya ki tum nhi sirf....mai aur tum dono chalenge saath aur ye baat pr pari ne bola bhi ki wo saath nhi jaa sakte nhi thik bhi tha tab veer ne bola ke hame alag alag jaana chahiye ki taki ham jaldi kuch dhund sake clue aur unke pass walki talkie bhi tha to koi problem bhi nhi thi jaldi contact banega aur Mike maan bhi gaya akhir kuch socha bhi hoga ussne jarur veer ke baare me lekin tab wo nikle bahar Zoey aur Emma ko smjha kr Tommy to behosh tha aur jab jaate jate veer se Zoey ne bola ki tum jinda laute ge matlab usse pura yakkin to tha hi kyunki wo wo veer ko utna to bhanp gayi hi thi lekin Emma to puri dar gayi thi veer ke jaane se bhi

aur wahi baat kre jab wo rasta chunne ki aayi to apne Mike ne right chose kiya jo lajmi thi aur veer ko left bheja jab Mike chal diya right side tab veer bhi left side se u turn lete hue matlab wapas Mike ki wor chala gaya jisska karan pari bhi smjh gayi aaur apan bhi akhire NIGHTWALKER veer pr attack to bilkul nhi krega kyunki wo janta veer sidha bhidega aur wahi Mike uske liye asan target tha kyunki usne veer ko notice krliya tha lekin Mike ko nhi to wo uske piche jaayega aur gaya bhi

Lekin ek baat batao aaj kal ju mistake kr rahe ho yaa hame hint dene ke liye mistake krte ho jaise ki ye

"You take left. I'll take the right."

"right" ke pahle "the" laga kr ju ne uska hint de diya hame ki Mike ne pahle bhi kha tha ki wo hamesha right hi krta hai yaaa leta hai ju to bohot Tezz ho rahe ho


Mike jab basement me pohoncha to waha usse pani ka level jyada badha dikha satah or jo mughe ajjib laga bohot jaise laga kuch plan sa ho ye lekin uss ko maine padhte waqt side rakh diya Khair aate ab veer par to wo pari ke kahne pr shoes utaar chalne laga aage ki wor aur wahi jab aage dhua utha aur NIGHTWALKER saamne aaya hath me hasiya liye aur face pr darwana mask liye lekin ju ne to uske mask ko sunder bataya tha to ye kya likha ju ne but isse related kuch to.......Khair aage badhta mai

To jab mike ne jab usse dekha to wo apni hand gun nikal point out jaise kiya waise hi NIGHTWALKER waha kalti mara lajmi thi uske hath me gun thi jo aur wo NIGHTWALKER bhaga aur ek alag side ghus gaya aur wahi jab kuch dur Mike aaya hi tha ki uske sar pe kuch laga jo bohot joro se laga aur wo gir pada behosh ho kr wahi bagal me NIGHTWALKER khada abhi uski mundi udane wala hi tha ki veer ne bottle fekk ke maari jisse uska hassiya gir gaya dur auur ye kamal Hawkeye ka tha

To ab kamal suru hua bewolf blessings ka jisse veer tezzi se uski wor badha jisse dekh wo pani waale satah or aagaya lekin ab mughe pura dout hogaya ki ye NIGHTWALKER ka plan to nhi kah haa kah sakte hai chalak bohot hai ye isne sayad se soch liya tha ki mai isse nhi jeet paunga to isse bijli wali wire ko pani me chor usse maar dunga yaa behosh kr sakta hu lekin ye chis uski fail gayi jab aisa hua to veer jaldi se NIGHTWALKER jaise boxes wali jagah pr chadh gaya jisse wo unn bijliyon se. Jhunjhnati hui pani se bach gaya aur bhid gaya NIGHTWALKER se aur dono ek dusre ko girane ki koshish kr e lage lekin yaha haar gaya NIGHTWALKER aur pani me gir gaya aur uski chikh ke saath wo behosh ho gaya krkarati hui bijli bhari pani se

Lekin jab ju ne NIGHTWALKER ki pahli baar awazz sunayi tab veer ne usko kya hi tease kiya ki "heh, so you can talk !!"

Jisske baad usse bandh ke rassiyo se veer usse wahi chor diya lekin jo reward system ne usse diya ye mere pale n pada sirf 1000 points mile usse aur 500 fame points ye kuch gadbad laga kyunki system hamesha kisi jaruri mission pr jyada points reward me deta hai lekin ye mission to bohot jaruri bhi tha lekin nope kuch gadbad hai system isitrah itne kam points may be ye sab jo ho raha ho NIGHTWALKER ka mamla kuch aur hi indication ho khair dekhte hai aage ju kya naye twist laate ho yaa mai hi galat hu saayad. ....

Lekin jab wo chester ke room se guzra to ussne kuch notice kiya saayad se ussne bed sheet ko notice kiya jo saayad side para hoga thoda aur uss bed ke ander koi jagah hogi may be tabhi to pari ne kaha how did he?? Matlab uss samay jab wo teeno ander aaye the tab saayad NIGHTWALKER ander hi chupa hua tha uske aur may be unke jate hi nikal liya.....

To iska saaf matlab hai kuch to hua aur veer Zoey ki traf gaya aur unn dono niche jaane ko kaha aur sayad se ussne bed sheet hata kr wo takhta Utha ke dekha bed ka but but wo sound jo create hue "Craaaaaassshhhhh" matlab koi kaanch tutne jaisi awazz yaa kaho to koi vase tutne ki awazz may be but it may be true......

Lekin jab veer jhep gayi jaise uuske aur veer ke bich kuch baat hui aur usme pari koi baat galat saabit ki ho aur wo baat abhi sach hogayi aise jhep gayi wo lekin jab veer ne bola jis tone me uska saaf matlab nikla ki wo jaan gaya ki ye sab kisne kiya ya krwa raha tha sabka krta dharta and I guess ye sab wo Connor kr raha tha I am sure about this but may be ki ye galat ho but I think ki uski dead body ka bhi to sayad jikr n hua to fir aur usse marta hua dekha bhi n gaya matlab ye sab ussi ka kiya dhara tha aur pahle wala murder jo hua tha Daniel ka wo bhi ussi ne kiya and I am damn sure about this dekhte kya hota hai aage

Aur ju ne to scene hi shift kr diya aage copter tk jab sab wapas aagaye aur tab suhana to bohot khus thi aur wahi divya ne bhi uska welcome uski to Muniya jal bhun gayi hogi lekin wo bhi khus thi may be mai kya uska dimag padhu ab but ju ne kya hi scene dikhaya aur imagine krwaya man mai to aur likhna chahta hu review me pr wiram dete hai akhiri paragraph se

Jab last me veer ne sabko photo dikhaya sayad se kisika and wo Connor ka hi hoga meri imagination seriously nhi lene ka lekin mai sure hu wahi hai inn sabke piche and ek baat batao ye Tommy kaha se agaya yaha wo to waha tha veer ke saath mansion me to ye Tommy yaha kaise kahi galti se to nik ki jagah nhi likh diye ju ne......

That update was just a marvellous I say just fucking creativity of realistic you done in this.....ju ne kya hi likha har scene me har line ki ek alag hi matlab aur maza aaraha tha feeling saaf bhar aarahi thi I just think ki ju Rihanna sahi to nhi ki tum kahi jadu tona to nhi krwate Werewolf sach batana Khair update was such marvellous I say....... Hatt's off man


Waiting for next one.......
Take care......
Bhai ye review he yaa update he me tho surprise hogaya update aagaya karke but superb review
 

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To aate scene ke starting hoti hai apne Chester ke room ke baahar se to mughe laga pahle ki ju hamesha ki trah sidha scene aage badha doge lekin n ju ne ye nhi kiya kyunki flow jo khraab n Krna tha ju ko.......to jab door nhi khola kisi ne ander se yaa ye bhi Kahlo ki ander se awazz tk n aayi...... Khair jab koi response nhi aaya to itna confirm to krliya Mike ne ki something wrong inside.....aur tab veer ne aisi baat boli ki waha sabki najar veer pr eka ek tik gayi, wo log usse ghurne lage jo lajmi thi kyunki utna heavy door kisi se nhi tut sakta tha aur veer ne bola "Let's break it"......matlab yaar jara imagine hi krlo ki agar tumhe koi simple hi door todne ki bole to tum wo nhi tod sakte to itna heavy 🚪 door bilkul n..... ek simple door ko bhi todne me gaand fatt jaati hai ache acho ki to ye to ek heavy door jisse todne ka to sawal nhi paida hota......Mike ne tab bola ki atleast hame try to Krna hi chahiye kyunki 3:30 ho gaye hai aur NIGHTWALKER ka time hai ye .....aur tab Tommy,Mike,veer teeno ne door ko run-up lete hue 4-5 dhako me hi door ki toddiya aur ye to sabko pata hai ki Mike aur Tommy ke karan to door bilkul nhi tuta obviously bilkul nhi aur agar Werewolf bhaya likhte bhi nhi n to ye lagbhag sabko pata hi hota lekin ye likhna jaruri bhi tha ki veer ne akele ke dum pe hi door toda kyunki veer ke pass tha "bewolf blessings" jiske aur agar veer ye use bhi n krta to tab bhi door ko wo akela tod hi sakta tha itni to strength thi usme lekin still usne Tommy sur Mike ko issliye apne saath door ko todne ko kaha taaki unhe veer pr koi sakk yaa dout n ho.......

Aur sabse main line iss 1st scene ka kya raha pata hai wo hai
"Apni aankho ki laali chhupaane ke liye
Veer ne apni palke band kar lii."
Ye line matlab boleto kya hi bolu ek alag hi imagination pr le kr gayi ki usne apni wo laal ho rakhi aankhe kaise band ki hongi kyaa hi scenery yaa kaho view bane honge sabke saamne mtlab literally awesome........


Aur jab gate tuta to sabse pahle sabbka dhyaan farsh or gire hue hi bed pr gaya jaha wo so raha tha literally Chester so raha tha bahenchod gussa to sabko aaya hoga hi jise Tommy to gusse me usse sote dekh Gurate hue "MOTHERFUCKER" bhi bol gaya literally jara socho tumhe pure ghar me dhunda gaya bahar tk dhunda gaya lekin tum mile kaha bathroom me sote hue auur lajmi hai ki sabko gussa aayega hi aayega ......aur yaha to scene hi alag hai ek killer jo maut liye ghum raha hai piche sabke aur ye Chester mahasay yaha so rahe hai......

Lekin tab Mike ko smell aayi jo khun ki thi aur lajmi thi ki agar yaha khun hai kahi to Mike jo detective hai usse uske experience dhoka n de yaha aur uske experience ne usse dhoka bhi nhi diya.....


aur sabse main baat jab ju ne likha ye line maine padha tabhi mere dimag me ek baat khtk gayi thi

"Chester araam se bed par dala hua tha." Jab maine ye line padha n to mughe dout to ho gaya kyunki line chlo ju ne likha sahi lekin yaha ju ne "dala" word use kiya jo saaf saaf negative chis indicate kr rahi thi kyunki agar cheater sota to aap likhte

"Chester araam se bed par *pada* hua tha."
Lekin ju ne ye chis wo feel lane ke liye likhi ki "something is wrong there" aur wo hua bhi.......aur baat kre uske sarr pair jo bahar thi kambal ke to ispar utna dout n hua lekin itna confirm ho gaya puri trah se ki Chester beta tapak chuka hai lekin kaise ?? Aur iska jawab bhi ju ne de hi diya jab Chester ke uppar se Tommy ne kambal hataya to teeno ki rooh kaanp gayi matlab simple bhassa me bolu to unki atma bhi kaanp gayi ho gai ek pal bhar ke liye unke raungtey khade kya kaanp rahe honge aisa scene wo tha yaha tk ki Tommy ki to kya hi kahu bechare ki to Halat aisi ho gayi jaise bin badal pani aur jaise ju ne ye line likhi ki "uski atma ne uska sath chorr diya ho wo aise farsh or ludhak gaya" haa unn lines ka mtlab to yahi nikla lekin jo scenes veer ke saath hue jo hame Mike ke dwara ju ne feel krwaya yaa kaho to imagine hi krwa diya ju ne ki veer khauf se bhadi apni aankhe uss manzar pr hi gadaye hue tha uske ankho me ek chamak si ban gayi thi jo unn bund pani ki thi jo apne samne ke manzar ko dekh apne aap hi pnap se gaye the tabhi veer ko to ek alag si hi anubhati ho gayi thi jo pahli baar usse itna khauf me iss scene me ju nee dikhaya usse yaha tk apne saamne pade manzar ko dekh usse emit yaa kaho to vomit si situation create ho gayi thi lekin still usne control kiya haa usse vomiting nhi aayi thi ussne aisa manzar apne saamne deekh liya tha jisse wo bardas nnhi kr sakta yaa kaho to uske sense aur uska mind uss chis ko jyada der tk jhel nhi sakta tha jo lajmi bhi thi kyunki wo manzar hi aisa tha......veer ne jjaise taise khud or kabu paya


par tabhi pari jo shant thi usse veer ki halat dekhi n gayi aur wo bol padi jo lajmi bhi thi kyunki pari kabhi veer ko pareshani me nhi dekh sakti thi aur tab ju ne uss scene ko hamare samne laya jo uss samay se teeno ke liye pareshani si hogayi thi......samne Chester bed pr do hisso me bata hua tha boleto usko bicho bich se hi kaat diya tha kisine sorry aur kon hoga NIGHTWALKER......Chester ke wo andhruni jagaho se riste khun jo uss bedsheet ko lalam-laal kr rahi thi jo uski katte hisso se andhruni artariya aur manshpeshiya bahar aarahi ho ho ho bhai gajab yahi to chahiye apan ko ye feeling hi allag aati hai imagine krne me bloody wape moment that's I like it very much bhai very much iss scene ko tumne jiss trah se imagine krwaya n wo ek alag level ki thi ek Hollywood ka scene yaad agaya apan ko jab apan ne Alter's ke ek short movie dekha tha "PIECES OF ME" uska scene yaad agaya mai to kya hi bolu bhaya but ye scenes to abhi bloody gore's ki suruwat hai iss story ki abhi to aaur bhi bloodiest moment aayenge jo ander tk hila ke rakh dene wali hongi.......maine iss scene ko kamse kam 7-8 baar to pakka padha hi hoga bhaya lekin tab bhi man n bhara I just like this scene gajab ka moment hua ye

Ab baat kre uske bicho bich katne ki to bhaya ye to almost impossible hai kisi aam admi ke liye asal me jo scenes ham itni asani se dikha deta hai story me ki ye kaat diya wo kaat diya lekin ju ne to sidha bicho bich do part literally kitna strength use kiya hoga wo NIGHTWALKER just imaginable matlab boleto wo ek baar me to bilkul nhi kata hoga bilkul nhi lekin bhaya ju ke story padh kr jo realistic feeling aati hai n wo kisi story pr n aati kyunki ye story ju par tiki hai aur ju hi iske karta dharta ho...... Hatt's off man.......

Tab Mike aur veer ne Tommy ko lekr nikle uss room se jo abhi behosh tha aur usse wo log apne room me le gaye jaha Zoey aur Emma thi.....jab zoey aur Emma ne jab Tommy ko behosh dekha to tension me to aayengi hi aur unki wo tension dar me badal gayi jab unhe chester ki maut ki news milli unhe to.....wahi Emma to ro padi uskee dimag me aisa baith sa gaya tha ki ab wo n bachegi lekin apan yaha ek baat bolna chta bhaya ki ju ne Emma ke charecter ko kuch alag hi sa banaya hai matlab ju smjh rahe ho n ek alag sa boleto ek darpok kahna galat hoga kyunki uske jagah koi aur bhi hota to wo bhi darta haa usse pirit kah sakte hai NIGHTWALKER se kyunki ussnne to apne saamne live dekha tha Jacob ki maut haa utne wistar se nhi lekin jo bhi ussne dekha tha scene jacobb ke maut ke saath saath NIGHTWALKER ka wo roop jo kisi ko bhi ander tk hila dene ke liye kaafi tha aur yaha to Emma ne sab khud apni aankho se ye sab deekha tha to lajmi hai ki wo aise rahe aur baat kre Zoey ki to wo to apne par had se zyada hi conttrol krti hai haa usse dar lagta hai pr wo appne dar pe kaboo to paa leti hai pr it seems to be amazing to be saw her in future updates.......



Emaa aur Zoey bed pr ekdusre se chipk kr baithi thi wahi veer aur Mike bagl me ek dusre se khade the

Emma aur Zoey ko agar wo bata dete ki Chester kaise mara to Emma ki to abhi hi jaan nikal jaati yaha tk ki Zoey ki ruwai paka foot padti lekin Khair veer aur Mike ne nhi bataya unhe

Lekin uss samay jab veer ne bewolf blessings on kiya tha tabhi usse smell agayi thi ye baat mai bhul gaya tha lekin ju ke aage yaad krate hi apan ko yaad agayi

Tab Mike ne cigrate nikalte hue khud bhi liya aur veer ko bhi offer kiya to veer ne accept krliyaa kyunki uski wo ability on thi boleto detoxification on thi usne cigrate lete hue jalayi lighter se wahi Mike abhi bhi gusse me tha akhir wo ek detective jo tha aur woo yaha apne saath walo ko nhi bacha paa raha tha.....

Khair dono khidki ke pass khade bahar kdkti bijiliya aur bataate moti moti wo chamkti boonde jo khidki or pad rahi thi aur ander jo dhua uth raha tha ek alag hi feeling laarahi thi jo horror sai lagi jo mughe ek alag hi feeling laa rahi thi just chilling in this imagination but ander kuch to feel hui thi mughe jo ek alag hi feel de rahi thi ekdum alag sa

Khair veer ne chupi todi aur baate suru hui unndono me aur aakr ruuki ek bbaaat pr jo tha cameras ka jikr jo Conor ne kiya tha apne video me matlab ssab record abhi bhi ho rahe hai aur tab Mike ne shock wali baat veer ko batayi ki usse 4 cameras mill chuke hai jo veer ko jhtka to laga lekin tab Mike ne usse bataya ki iss room me fan matlab pankhe ke bicho bich bhi ek camera hai unn 4 me se tab veer ne udhar dekhna chaha to Mike ne rok diya jo sahi bhi tha

Ab baat aayi ki chester search time me kaise maara gaya to ye sawal apan ka bhi tha to ju ne bola tha ki agle Update me to apan ko jawab mil gaya to jawab likhna to banta hai to chester issliye mara gaya jo veer ko uss voice ki baat se yyaad kyunki uss voice ne kuch nhi kaha tha iss baare me ki search time me NIGHTWALKER ghumega yaa nhi inn logish ne to khud b khud new rule boleto new point bana liye the jo chester ke maut ka karan bhi bana......aur chester to idhar se udhar ghum bhi raha tha aur uss awazz ne ye bola bhi tha ki agar ghumte mile to gaye NIGHTWALKER dwara.......matlab saaf baat me NIGHTWALKER khel gaya firki le daali unnsabkki

Tab veer ne kah daala sidha ki mai bahar jaa raha hu tab Mike ne bhi bol diya ki tum nhi sirf....mai aur tum dono chalenge saath aur ye baat pr pari ne bola bhi ki wo saath nhi jaa sakte nhi thik bhi tha tab veer ne bola ke hame alag alag jaana chahiye ki taki ham jaldi kuch dhund sake clue aur unke pass walki talkie bhi tha to koi problem bhi nhi thi jaldi contact banega aur Mike maan bhi gaya akhir kuch socha bhi hoga ussne jarur veer ke baare me lekin tab wo nikle bahar Zoey aur Emma ko smjha kr Tommy to behosh tha aur jab jaate jate veer se Zoey ne bola ki tum jinda laute ge matlab usse pura yakkin to tha hi kyunki wo wo veer ko utna to bhanp gayi hi thi lekin Emma to puri dar gayi thi veer ke jaane se bhi

aur wahi baat kre jab wo rasta chunne ki aayi to apne Mike ne right chose kiya jo lajmi thi aur veer ko left bheja jab Mike chal diya right side tab veer bhi left side se u turn lete hue matlab wapas Mike ki wor chala gaya jisska karan pari bhi smjh gayi aaur apan bhi akhire NIGHTWALKER veer pr attack to bilkul nhi krega kyunki wo janta veer sidha bhidega aur wahi Mike uske liye asan target tha kyunki usne veer ko notice krliya tha lekin Mike ko nhi to wo uske piche jaayega aur gaya bhi

Lekin ek baat batao aaj kal ju mistake kr rahe ho yaa hame hint dene ke liye mistake krte ho jaise ki ye

"You take left. I'll take the right."

"right" ke pahle "the" laga kr ju ne uska hint de diya hame ki Mike ne pahle bhi kha tha ki wo hamesha right hi krta hai yaaa leta hai ju to bohot Tezz ho rahe ho


Mike jab basement me pohoncha to waha usse pani ka level jyada badha dikha satah or jo mughe ajjib laga bohot jaise laga kuch plan sa ho ye lekin uss ko maine padhte waqt side rakh diya Khair aate ab veer par to wo pari ke kahne pr shoes utaar chalne laga aage ki wor aur wahi jab aage dhua utha aur NIGHTWALKER saamne aaya hath me hasiya liye aur face pr darwana mask liye lekin ju ne to uske mask ko sunder bataya tha to ye kya likha ju ne but isse related kuch to.......Khair aage badhta mai

To jab mike ne jab usse dekha to wo apni hand gun nikal point out jaise kiya waise hi NIGHTWALKER waha kalti mara lajmi thi uske hath me gun thi jo aur wo NIGHTWALKER bhaga aur ek alag side ghus gaya aur wahi jab kuch dur Mike aaya hi tha ki uske sar pe kuch laga jo bohot joro se laga aur wo gir pada behosh ho kr wahi bagal me NIGHTWALKER khada abhi uski mundi udane wala hi tha ki veer ne bottle fekk ke maari jisse uska hassiya gir gaya dur auur ye kamal Hawkeye ka tha

To ab kamal suru hua bewolf blessings ka jisse veer tezzi se uski wor badha jisse dekh wo pani waale satah or aagaya lekin ab mughe pura dout hogaya ki ye NIGHTWALKER ka plan to nhi kah haa kah sakte hai chalak bohot hai ye isne sayad se soch liya tha ki mai isse nhi jeet paunga to isse bijli wali wire ko pani me chor usse maar dunga yaa behosh kr sakta hu lekin ye chis uski fail gayi jab aisa hua to veer jaldi se NIGHTWALKER jaise boxes wali jagah pr chadh gaya jisse wo unn bijliyon se. Jhunjhnati hui pani se bach gaya aur bhid gaya NIGHTWALKER se aur dono ek dusre ko girane ki koshish kr e lage lekin yaha haar gaya NIGHTWALKER aur pani me gir gaya aur uski chikh ke saath wo behosh ho gaya krkarati hui bijli bhari pani se

Lekin jab ju ne NIGHTWALKER ki pahli baar awazz sunayi tab veer ne usko kya hi tease kiya ki "heh, so you can talk !!"

Jisske baad usse bandh ke rassiyo se veer usse wahi chor diya lekin jo reward system ne usse diya ye mere pale n pada sirf 1000 points mile usse aur 500 fame points ye kuch gadbad laga kyunki system hamesha kisi jaruri mission pr jyada points reward me deta hai lekin ye mission to bohot jaruri bhi tha lekin nope kuch gadbad hai system isitrah itne kam points may be ye sab jo ho raha ho NIGHTWALKER ka mamla kuch aur hi indication ho khair dekhte hai aage ju kya naye twist laate ho yaa mai hi galat hu saayad. ....

Lekin jab wo chester ke room se guzra to ussne kuch notice kiya saayad se ussne bed sheet ko notice kiya jo saayad side para hoga thoda aur uss bed ke ander koi jagah hogi may be tabhi to pari ne kaha how did he?? Matlab uss samay jab wo teeno ander aaye the tab saayad NIGHTWALKER ander hi chupa hua tha uske aur may be unke jate hi nikal liya.....

To iska saaf matlab hai kuch to hua aur veer Zoey ki traf gaya aur unn dono niche jaane ko kaha aur sayad se ussne bed sheet hata kr wo takhta Utha ke dekha bed ka but but wo sound jo create hue "Craaaaaassshhhhh" matlab koi kaanch tutne jaisi awazz yaa kaho to koi vase tutne ki awazz may be but it may be true......

Lekin jab veer jhep gayi jaise uuske aur veer ke bich kuch baat hui aur usme pari koi baat galat saabit ki ho aur wo baat abhi sach hogayi aise jhep gayi wo lekin jab veer ne bola jis tone me uska saaf matlab nikla ki wo jaan gaya ki ye sab kisne kiya ya krwa raha tha sabka krta dharta and I guess ye sab wo Connor kr raha tha I am sure about this but may be ki ye galat ho but I think ki uski dead body ka bhi to sayad jikr n hua to fir aur usse marta hua dekha bhi n gaya matlab ye sab ussi ka kiya dhara tha aur pahle wala murder jo hua tha Daniel ka wo bhi ussi ne kiya and I am damn sure about this dekhte kya hota hai aage

Aur ju ne to scene hi shift kr diya aage copter tk jab sab wapas aagaye aur tab suhana to bohot khus thi aur wahi divya ne bhi uska welcome uski to Muniya jal bhun gayi hogi lekin wo bhi khus thi may be mai kya uska dimag padhu ab but ju ne kya hi scene dikhaya aur imagine krwaya man mai to aur likhna chahta hu review me pr wiram dete hai akhiri paragraph se

Jab last me veer ne sabko photo dikhaya sayad se kisika and wo Connor ka hi hoga meri imagination seriously nhi lene ka lekin mai sure hu wahi hai inn sabke piche and ek baat batao ye Tommy kaha se agaya yaha wo to waha tha veer ke saath mansion me to ye Tommy yaha kaise kahi galti se to nik ki jagah nhi likh diye ju ne......

That update was just a marvellous I say just fucking creativity of realistic you done in this.....ju ne kya hi likha har scene me har line ki ek alag hi matlab aur maza aaraha tha feeling saaf bhar aarahi thi I just think ki ju Rihanna sahi to nhi ki tum kahi jadu tona to nhi krwate Werewolf sach batana Khair update was such marvellous I say....... Hatt's off man


Waiting for next one.......
Take care......
Iska reply dene me toh ek din lag jaega man. :Munch:
 

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Ye notices hai ye........

Kasam se Aankho mai 🤣😂 Aanshu aagya aap ki notices dekh kar Apne latakte nichewaale ki kasam aesa notice koi nhi krega koi nhi 😁

ab iska jawab ab khud eske writer shahb de 😉

Werewolf writer shahb​


Wese aap ne update 101 read ke time kitne snacks packets fhaade.....😉

Note : Gustaaki Maaf Mohtarma......😎
Unhone to abhi update 100 k review ka bhi reply nahi dia h... :sad:
 

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aaj apan pahle to review pelega........


To aate scene ke starting hoti hai apne Chester ke room ke baahar se to mughe laga pahle ki ju hamesha ki trah sidha scene aage badha doge lekin n ju ne ye nhi kiya kyunki flow jo khraab n Krna tha ju ko.......to jab door nhi khola kisi ne ander se yaa ye bhi Kahlo ki ander se awazz tk n aayi...... Khair jab koi response nhi aaya to itna confirm to krliya Mike ne ki something wrong inside.....aur tab veer ne aisi baat boli ki waha sabki najar veer pr eka ek tik gayi, wo log usse ghurne lage jo lajmi thi kyunki utna heavy door kisi se nhi tut sakta tha aur veer ne bola "Let's break it"......matlab yaar jara imagine hi krlo ki agar tumhe koi simple hi door todne ki bole to tum wo nhi tod sakte to itna heavy 🚪 door bilkul n..... ek simple door ko bhi todne me gaand fatt jaati hai ache acho ki to ye to ek heavy door jisse todne ka to sawal nhi paida hota......Mike ne tab bola ki atleast hame try to Krna hi chahiye kyunki 3:30 ho gaye hai aur NIGHTWALKER ka time hai ye .....aur tab Tommy,Mike,veer teeno ne door ko run-up lete hue 4-5 dhako me hi door ki toddiya aur ye to sabko pata hai ki Mike aur Tommy ke karan to door bilkul nhi tuta obviously bilkul nhi aur agar Werewolf bhaya likhte bhi nhi n to ye lagbhag sabko pata hi hota lekin ye likhna jaruri bhi tha ki veer ne akele ke dum pe hi door toda kyunki veer ke pass tha "bewolf blessings" jiske aur agar veer ye use bhi n krta to tab bhi door ko wo akela tod hi sakta tha itni to strength thi usme lekin still usne Tommy sur Mike ko issliye apne saath door ko todne ko kaha taaki unhe veer pr koi sakk yaa dout n ho.......

Aur sabse main line iss 1st scene ka kya raha pata hai wo hai
"Apni aankho ki laali chhupaane ke liye
Veer ne apni palke band kar lii."
Ye line matlab boleto kya hi bolu ek alag hi imagination pr le kr gayi ki usne apni wo laal ho rakhi aankhe kaise band ki hongi kyaa hi scenery yaa kaho view bane honge sabke saamne mtlab literally awesome........


Aur jab gate tuta to sabse pahle sabbka dhyaan farsh or gire hue hi bed pr gaya jaha wo so raha tha literally Chester so raha tha bahenchod gussa to sabko aaya hoga hi jise Tommy to gusse me usse sote dekh Gurate hue "MOTHERFUCKER" bhi bol gaya literally jara socho tumhe pure ghar me dhunda gaya bahar tk dhunda gaya lekin tum mile kaha bathroom me sote hue auur lajmi hai ki sabko gussa aayega hi aayega ......aur yaha to scene hi alag hai ek killer jo maut liye ghum raha hai piche sabke aur ye Chester mahasay yaha so rahe hai......

Lekin tab Mike ko smell aayi jo khun ki thi aur lajmi thi ki agar yaha khun hai kahi to Mike jo detective hai usse uske experience dhoka n de yaha aur uske experience ne usse dhoka bhi nhi diya.....


aur sabse main baat jab ju ne likha ye line maine padha tabhi mere dimag me ek baat khtk gayi thi

"Chester araam se bed par dala hua tha." Jab maine ye line padha n to mughe dout to ho gaya kyunki line chlo ju ne likha sahi lekin yaha ju ne "dala" word use kiya jo saaf saaf negative chis indicate kr rahi thi kyunki agar cheater sota to aap likhte

"Chester araam se bed par *pada* hua tha."
Lekin ju ne ye chis wo feel lane ke liye likhi ki "something is wrong there" aur wo hua bhi.......aur baat kre uske sarr pair jo bahar thi kambal ke to ispar utna dout n hua lekin itna confirm ho gaya puri trah se ki Chester beta tapak chuka hai lekin kaise ?? Aur iska jawab bhi ju ne de hi diya jab Chester ke uppar se Tommy ne kambal hataya to teeno ki rooh kaanp gayi matlab simple bhassa me bolu to unki atma bhi kaanp gayi ho gai ek pal bhar ke liye unke raungtey khade kya kaanp rahe honge aisa scene wo tha yaha tk ki Tommy ki to kya hi kahu bechare ki to Halat aisi ho gayi jaise bin badal pani aur jaise ju ne ye line likhi ki "uski atma ne uska sath chorr diya ho wo aise farsh or ludhak gaya" haa unn lines ka mtlab to yahi nikla lekin jo scenes veer ke saath hue jo hame Mike ke dwara ju ne feel krwaya yaa kaho to imagine hi krwa diya ju ne ki veer khauf se bhadi apni aankhe uss manzar pr hi gadaye hue tha uske ankho me ek chamak si ban gayi thi jo unn bund pani ki thi jo apne samne ke manzar ko dekh apne aap hi pnap se gaye the tabhi veer ko to ek alag si hi anubhati ho gayi thi jo pahli baar usse itna khauf me iss scene me ju nee dikhaya usse yaha tk apne saamne pade manzar ko dekh usse emit yaa kaho to vomit si situation create ho gayi thi lekin still usne control kiya haa usse vomiting nhi aayi thi ussne aisa manzar apne saamne deekh liya tha jisse wo bardas nnhi kr sakta yaa kaho to uske sense aur uska mind uss chis ko jyada der tk jhel nhi sakta tha jo lajmi bhi thi kyunki wo manzar hi aisa tha......veer ne jjaise taise khud or kabu paya


par tabhi pari jo shant thi usse veer ki halat dekhi n gayi aur wo bol padi jo lajmi bhi thi kyunki pari kabhi veer ko pareshani me nhi dekh sakti thi aur tab ju ne uss scene ko hamare samne laya jo uss samay se teeno ke liye pareshani si hogayi thi......samne Chester bed pr do hisso me bata hua tha boleto usko bicho bich se hi kaat diya tha kisine sorry aur kon hoga NIGHTWALKER......Chester ke wo andhruni jagaho se riste khun jo uss bedsheet ko lalam-laal kr rahi thi jo uski katte hisso se andhruni artariya aur manshpeshiya bahar aarahi ho ho ho bhai gajab yahi to chahiye apan ko ye feeling hi allag aati hai imagine krne me bloody wape moment that's I like it very much bhai very much iss scene ko tumne jiss trah se imagine krwaya n wo ek alag level ki thi ek Hollywood ka scene yaad agaya apan ko jab apan ne Alter's ke ek short movie dekha tha "PIECES OF ME" uska scene yaad agaya mai to kya hi bolu bhaya but ye scenes to abhi bloody gore's ki suruwat hai iss story ki abhi to aaur bhi bloodiest moment aayenge jo ander tk hila ke rakh dene wali hongi.......maine iss scene ko kamse kam 7-8 baar to pakka padha hi hoga bhaya lekin tab bhi man n bhara I just like this scene gajab ka moment hua ye

Ab baat kre uske bicho bich katne ki to bhaya ye to almost impossible hai kisi aam admi ke liye asal me jo scenes ham itni asani se dikha deta hai story me ki ye kaat diya wo kaat diya lekin ju ne to sidha bicho bich do part literally kitna strength use kiya hoga wo NIGHTWALKER just imaginable matlab boleto wo ek baar me to bilkul nhi kata hoga bilkul nhi lekin bhaya ju ke story padh kr jo realistic feeling aati hai n wo kisi story pr n aati kyunki ye story ju par tiki hai aur ju hi iske karta dharta ho...... Hatt's off man.......

Tab Mike aur veer ne Tommy ko lekr nikle uss room se jo abhi behosh tha aur usse wo log apne room me le gaye jaha Zoey aur Emma thi.....jab zoey aur Emma ne jab Tommy ko behosh dekha to tension me to aayengi hi aur unki wo tension dar me badal gayi jab unhe chester ki maut ki news milli unhe to.....wahi Emma to ro padi uskee dimag me aisa baith sa gaya tha ki ab wo n bachegi lekin apan yaha ek baat bolna chta bhaya ki ju ne Emma ke charecter ko kuch alag hi sa banaya hai matlab ju smjh rahe ho n ek alag sa boleto ek darpok kahna galat hoga kyunki uske jagah koi aur bhi hota to wo bhi darta haa usse pirit kah sakte hai NIGHTWALKER se kyunki ussnne to apne saamne live dekha tha Jacob ki maut haa utne wistar se nhi lekin jo bhi ussne dekha tha scene jacobb ke maut ke saath saath NIGHTWALKER ka wo roop jo kisi ko bhi ander tk hila dene ke liye kaafi tha aur yaha to Emma ne sab khud apni aankho se ye sab deekha tha to lajmi hai ki wo aise rahe aur baat kre Zoey ki to wo to apne par had se zyada hi conttrol krti hai haa usse dar lagta hai pr wo appne dar pe kaboo to paa leti hai pr it seems to be amazing to be saw her in future updates.......



Emaa aur Zoey bed pr ekdusre se chipk kr baithi thi wahi veer aur Mike bagl me ek dusre se khade the

Emma aur Zoey ko agar wo bata dete ki Chester kaise mara to Emma ki to abhi hi jaan nikal jaati yaha tk ki Zoey ki ruwai paka foot padti lekin Khair veer aur Mike ne nhi bataya unhe

Lekin uss samay jab veer ne bewolf blessings on kiya tha tabhi usse smell agayi thi ye baat mai bhul gaya tha lekin ju ke aage yaad krate hi apan ko yaad agayi

Tab Mike ne cigrate nikalte hue khud bhi liya aur veer ko bhi offer kiya to veer ne accept krliyaa kyunki uski wo ability on thi boleto detoxification on thi usne cigrate lete hue jalayi lighter se wahi Mike abhi bhi gusse me tha akhir wo ek detective jo tha aur woo yaha apne saath walo ko nhi bacha paa raha tha.....

Khair dono khidki ke pass khade bahar kdkti bijiliya aur bataate moti moti wo chamkti boonde jo khidki or pad rahi thi aur ander jo dhua uth raha tha ek alag hi feeling laarahi thi jo horror sai lagi jo mughe ek alag hi feeling laa rahi thi just chilling in this imagination but ander kuch to feel hui thi mughe jo ek alag hi feel de rahi thi ekdum alag sa

Khair veer ne chupi todi aur baate suru hui unndono me aur aakr ruuki ek bbaaat pr jo tha cameras ka jikr jo Conor ne kiya tha apne video me matlab ssab record abhi bhi ho rahe hai aur tab Mike ne shock wali baat veer ko batayi ki usse 4 cameras mill chuke hai jo veer ko jhtka to laga lekin tab Mike ne usse bataya ki iss room me fan matlab pankhe ke bicho bich bhi ek camera hai unn 4 me se tab veer ne udhar dekhna chaha to Mike ne rok diya jo sahi bhi tha

Ab baat aayi ki chester search time me kaise maara gaya to ye sawal apan ka bhi tha to ju ne bola tha ki agle Update me to apan ko jawab mil gaya to jawab likhna to banta hai to chester issliye mara gaya jo veer ko uss voice ki baat se yyaad kyunki uss voice ne kuch nhi kaha tha iss baare me ki search time me NIGHTWALKER ghumega yaa nhi inn logish ne to khud b khud new rule boleto new point bana liye the jo chester ke maut ka karan bhi bana......aur chester to idhar se udhar ghum bhi raha tha aur uss awazz ne ye bola bhi tha ki agar ghumte mile to gaye NIGHTWALKER dwara.......matlab saaf baat me NIGHTWALKER khel gaya firki le daali unnsabkki

Tab veer ne kah daala sidha ki mai bahar jaa raha hu tab Mike ne bhi bol diya ki tum nhi sirf....mai aur tum dono chalenge saath aur ye baat pr pari ne bola bhi ki wo saath nhi jaa sakte nhi thik bhi tha tab veer ne bola ke hame alag alag jaana chahiye ki taki ham jaldi kuch dhund sake clue aur unke pass walki talkie bhi tha to koi problem bhi nhi thi jaldi contact banega aur Mike maan bhi gaya akhir kuch socha bhi hoga ussne jarur veer ke baare me lekin tab wo nikle bahar Zoey aur Emma ko smjha kr Tommy to behosh tha aur jab jaate jate veer se Zoey ne bola ki tum jinda laute ge matlab usse pura yakkin to tha hi kyunki wo wo veer ko utna to bhanp gayi hi thi lekin Emma to puri dar gayi thi veer ke jaane se bhi

aur wahi baat kre jab wo rasta chunne ki aayi to apne Mike ne right chose kiya jo lajmi thi aur veer ko left bheja jab Mike chal diya right side tab veer bhi left side se u turn lete hue matlab wapas Mike ki wor chala gaya jisska karan pari bhi smjh gayi aaur apan bhi akhire NIGHTWALKER veer pr attack to bilkul nhi krega kyunki wo janta veer sidha bhidega aur wahi Mike uske liye asan target tha kyunki usne veer ko notice krliya tha lekin Mike ko nhi to wo uske piche jaayega aur gaya bhi

Lekin ek baat batao aaj kal ju mistake kr rahe ho yaa hame hint dene ke liye mistake krte ho jaise ki ye

"You take left. I'll take the right."

"right" ke pahle "the" laga kr ju ne uska hint de diya hame ki Mike ne pahle bhi kha tha ki wo hamesha right hi krta hai yaaa leta hai ju to bohot Tezz ho rahe ho


Mike jab basement me pohoncha to waha usse pani ka level jyada badha dikha satah or jo mughe ajjib laga bohot jaise laga kuch plan sa ho ye lekin uss ko maine padhte waqt side rakh diya Khair aate ab veer par to wo pari ke kahne pr shoes utaar chalne laga aage ki wor aur wahi jab aage dhua utha aur NIGHTWALKER saamne aaya hath me hasiya liye aur face pr darwana mask liye lekin ju ne to uske mask ko sunder bataya tha to ye kya likha ju ne but isse related kuch to.......Khair aage badhta mai

To jab mike ne jab usse dekha to wo apni hand gun nikal point out jaise kiya waise hi NIGHTWALKER waha kalti mara lajmi thi uske hath me gun thi jo aur wo NIGHTWALKER bhaga aur ek alag side ghus gaya aur wahi jab kuch dur Mike aaya hi tha ki uske sar pe kuch laga jo bohot joro se laga aur wo gir pada behosh ho kr wahi bagal me NIGHTWALKER khada abhi uski mundi udane wala hi tha ki veer ne bottle fekk ke maari jisse uska hassiya gir gaya dur auur ye kamal Hawkeye ka tha

To ab kamal suru hua bewolf blessings ka jisse veer tezzi se uski wor badha jisse dekh wo pani waale satah or aagaya lekin ab mughe pura dout hogaya ki ye NIGHTWALKER ka plan to nhi kah haa kah sakte hai chalak bohot hai ye isne sayad se soch liya tha ki mai isse nhi jeet paunga to isse bijli wali wire ko pani me chor usse maar dunga yaa behosh kr sakta hu lekin ye chis uski fail gayi jab aisa hua to veer jaldi se NIGHTWALKER jaise boxes wali jagah pr chadh gaya jisse wo unn bijliyon se. Jhunjhnati hui pani se bach gaya aur bhid gaya NIGHTWALKER se aur dono ek dusre ko girane ki koshish kr e lage lekin yaha haar gaya NIGHTWALKER aur pani me gir gaya aur uski chikh ke saath wo behosh ho gaya krkarati hui bijli bhari pani se

Lekin jab ju ne NIGHTWALKER ki pahli baar awazz sunayi tab veer ne usko kya hi tease kiya ki "heh, so you can talk !!"

Jisske baad usse bandh ke rassiyo se veer usse wahi chor diya lekin jo reward system ne usse diya ye mere pale n pada sirf 1000 points mile usse aur 500 fame points ye kuch gadbad laga kyunki system hamesha kisi jaruri mission pr jyada points reward me deta hai lekin ye mission to bohot jaruri bhi tha lekin nope kuch gadbad hai system isitrah itne kam points may be ye sab jo ho raha ho NIGHTWALKER ka mamla kuch aur hi indication ho khair dekhte hai aage ju kya naye twist laate ho yaa mai hi galat hu saayad. ....

Lekin jab wo chester ke room se guzra to ussne kuch notice kiya saayad se ussne bed sheet ko notice kiya jo saayad side para hoga thoda aur uss bed ke ander koi jagah hogi may be tabhi to pari ne kaha how did he?? Matlab uss samay jab wo teeno ander aaye the tab saayad NIGHTWALKER ander hi chupa hua tha uske aur may be unke jate hi nikal liya.....

To iska saaf matlab hai kuch to hua aur veer Zoey ki traf gaya aur unn dono niche jaane ko kaha aur sayad se ussne bed sheet hata kr wo takhta Utha ke dekha bed ka but but wo sound jo create hue "Craaaaaassshhhhh" matlab koi kaanch tutne jaisi awazz yaa kaho to koi vase tutne ki awazz may be but it may be true......

Lekin jab veer jhep gayi jaise uuske aur veer ke bich kuch baat hui aur usme pari koi baat galat saabit ki ho aur wo baat abhi sach hogayi aise jhep gayi wo lekin jab veer ne bola jis tone me uska saaf matlab nikla ki wo jaan gaya ki ye sab kisne kiya ya krwa raha tha sabka krta dharta and I guess ye sab wo Connor kr raha tha I am sure about this but may be ki ye galat ho but I think ki uski dead body ka bhi to sayad jikr n hua to fir aur usse marta hua dekha bhi n gaya matlab ye sab ussi ka kiya dhara tha aur pahle wala murder jo hua tha Daniel ka wo bhi ussi ne kiya and I am damn sure about this dekhte kya hota hai aage

Aur ju ne to scene hi shift kr diya aage copter tk jab sab wapas aagaye aur tab suhana to bohot khus thi aur wahi divya ne bhi uska welcome uski to Muniya jal bhun gayi hogi lekin wo bhi khus thi may be mai kya uska dimag padhu ab but ju ne kya hi scene dikhaya aur imagine krwaya man mai to aur likhna chahta hu review me pr wiram dete hai akhiri paragraph se

Jab last me veer ne sabko photo dikhaya sayad se kisika and wo Connor ka hi hoga meri imagination seriously nhi lene ka lekin mai sure hu wahi hai inn sabke piche and ek baat batao ye Tommy kaha se agaya yaha wo to waha tha veer ke saath mansion me to ye Tommy yaha kaise kahi galti se to nik ki jagah nhi likh diye ju ne......

That update was just a marvellous I say just fucking creativity of realistic you done in this.....ju ne kya hi likha har scene me har line ki ek alag hi matlab aur maza aaraha tha feeling saaf bhar aarahi thi I just think ki ju Rihanna sahi to nhi ki tum kahi jadu tona to nhi krwate Werewolf sach batana Khair update was such marvellous I say....... Hatt's off man


Waiting for next one.......
Take care......
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