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Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

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Bohat he zabaradast update tha lalach ke chalte kafi logo ne apni Jaan dedi iktha me he takat or faida hy agr sab log sath millkr Sona dhondte to shayad inki Jan Bach jati ab dekhte Sona milta b hy inhe ya ye SIRF ek trap hy or night walker Ka investigator ke khoon se Kiya taluq or veer or night walker jab bidhengy to ye Banda mazedar ho ga dono he kafi takatwar hy eagerly waiting for next update
 

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Update 100 ko lekr boleto apan ekich baat bolega ki ye century abhi tk ki sabse best update ko laa kr hamare saamne apke dwara pesh ki gayi hai...... gajab man ju ke writing pr apan ko kuch n bolna chata kyunki sab jaante hai apke writing skill ek alag hi level pe chalti hai........


Ye divya to apne chutiye kam gaandu husband ke bachao me jyada lagi hai sorry insult nhi dekha ja raha usse 🤣.....suhaana bohot jyada hi pareshan hai veer ko lekr jo lajmi hai hona bhi chahiye aakhir wo ussse lekr aayi hai yaha pr aur wo bhi indirectly divya ke kaaran,aur rahi baat nik ki to wo gaandu ki to gaand me kiwde chal rahe hai bhosdika.........Khair suhana ki bhi baat sahi hai ki ye sab sirf nik ke kaaran hua matlab veer ko sirf ussi ke kahne pr bheja gaya jo bohot galat tha lekin still suhana bohot jyada pareshan ho rakhi hai veer ko lekr aur veer ke prati wo jyada hi emotionally attach si ho rahi hai yaa ho bhi gayi hai jo spast roop se hmare saamne dikh bhi raha hai........ab batao iss divya ko isse matlab iss situation me bhi muh chodi sugh gayi batao matlab suru krdi ussne aur usse bahak kr suhana ne bhi apne husband ka izzat ka balatkar n dekha gaya

Khair ab aate apan log aage ke scene pe jo hai island ka boleto mansion ka,ab idhar Emaa piche gayi Jacob ke aur ye chutiya socho jara apne aap ko ye mahashay
race 3 movie ke salman khan smjh rahe the bc jaa to aise rahe the ki killer unka langotiya yaar ho, bahenchod iski to literally gaand hi ahemm-ahemm sorry haa to mai bol raha tha ki uski mundi ko hi football bana diya bc wo scene jab uske aankho me shocked wala reaction aur uske Kate hue hisse se jab wo khun riss rahe the aur uski andhruni nase woh....ho ho...ho.....kya hi scene tha it's fucking from that scene that I just loves it to see and imagine..... uss bloody wape scene ko imagine kr ke jo ek alag hi horror scene wali feeling aayi n wo mast tha mai sach kahu to bhai ye scene aur jo aage ke scene hue n dono ke murder ke to blood lust wali jo feeling aayi n gajab ki thi fucking great Hatt's off man ju ko and realy I am waiting for even more dangerous and bloody scenes.......but ...but but........ye scenes mughe sach kahu to utna bloody feeling n de payi lekin still mai jaanta hu Werewolf bhaya ki ye jo scenes the ye to abhi bas shuruwat thi iss story me abhi to asli jo scenes aaane wale hai wo alag hi level pr hongi, I just want to say man ki mai unn arcs ka besabri se intezar me rahunga lekin apka koi bharosa nhi kahi issi arc me wo scenes laa do aap

Khair mai kaha se kaha chala gaya apan log aate review pr sorry mai ata review pr

Emma ki to kya hi haalat ho gayi uski jaan hii nikal gayi thi mano jab wo apne hosh me aayi aur wo bhhagne lagi NIGHTWALKER se bach ke tab uski jo buri haalat huyi jitna uss katti hui mundi ko dekh kr n huyi thi kyunki piche uske wo NIGHTWALKER pada huua tha wo bhi hassiya liye hue literally ek aisa scene mind me ubhar ke aayi hogi n sab reader ke dimag me ki unke bhi raungtey khade ho gaye honge......aur jo uski chikh nikli thi wo dar aur khauf bayan kr rahi thi jo maine saaf notice kiya bhale ju log ne na kiya ho pr maine kiya jo uske uss chikh me jhalak rahi thi maut ka dar.....

Aur jab veer aur baaki sab apne kamre se nikal kr uss halway me aaye to unhe fir se chikh sunayi di jo kaafi pass se aayi thi aur agle hi pal Emma bhagti hui aakr veer se lag gayi.....gale yaar....haa to usne bas yahi bola ki usne dekha use aur uski baat sun oahlee to nhi smjh paaye lekin jab unhe pata chala to unki halak sukh gayi.....wo Tommy ne suggest kiya ki uske room me chalte hai jo manne hazam ho gaya 🤣lekin jab ander Emma ne puri scene ko bataya to unn sabki to fatt ke kya unki to rooh bhi kuch samay ke liye ghumne chali gayi hogi......and Emma jo veer se chipki padi thi kya kahu mere khyaal se Zoey laundiya jal bhun rahi thi sorry ye bakchodi-bakchodi me pel di.....

Haa to ab aate uss mahol me jab sab dare sahme khade the unke dare sahme jism me khauf aur badha diya uss grjarahat ne jo badal ke garjne ki awazz thi aur Emma to fir se lipat padi dar ke maare veer se jo Zoey ne bhaap liya ki uske just bagal me wo bhi hai lekin wo usse chorr veer pr kud rahi hai.......

And tab kiya veer ne ek sawal jo bohot jaaruri tha aur kyun tha mai aage batata......veer ka sawal ki tum log yaha kaise pahuche jiska sabne jawab diya bas Emma ko chor kr lekin ye baat Ronnie launde ko n bhayi aur wo Emma pr shak ki disha se apne bhav rakha jo sahi bhi tha aur hoi bhi kyun n lekin still veer apna gentle man 😜Emma ki jimedari matlab apne sr pe li ki ye mere saath rahegi agar mai mara to ispar shakk kya pura hakk hi jayega katl ka lekin agar mughe kuch n hua to ye innocent prove ho jayegi jo sun to Emma ko bhagwan hi dikh gaye honge veer ke roop me......

And ab aate veer ke uss sawal pr jab veer ne bola ki jab ham aaye matlab veer aur Mike jab waha aye copter se to uss island ke pass kahi bhi unhe koi jetski yaa koi boat wagera n dikhi jo sun to unke ander jo dar ka bamm tyaar ho raha tha n wo phatt gaya wo bhi booommmm🤣.....unnsabki to gandiya fatt gayi and ek baat bata du mai ki ye ssawal jaruri bhi hai ek baat ko clear krne ke liye ki uss NIGHTWALKER ne pahle se hi ye sab plan kr rakha tha yaa jitne bhi log waha aaye pade hai wo sab NIGHTWALKER ke dwara hi laye gaye hai lekin choro aage agar maine 2-3aur koi possibility likh di to lekhak mahoday meko gaali bakenge.......lekin ye to ssocho jara wo boats aur jet ski gaye kaha ye to issi traf indicate kr raha hai wo hai plan ki tarf matlab ye sab plan tha matlab insabko yaha laya gaya tha naki wo khud aaye the........



Ab Mike bhaya n kah daala indirectly ki apan ko investigation mangta hai jo sunke to unki aur fatti lekin still unhone apne timing ke hisab se maan liya ki khazana bhi to chahiye unhe aur iss chis ke lalach me pade Chester,Tommy aur Ronnie jo bohot bura bhi hua ek ke liye because lalach wo chis hai jisske piche agar tum pad gaye to tum aise loote jaoge ki tumhara kuch n bachega khas kar tumhari jaan bhi wo mang leti hai ye lalach itni burri bhavna hai n ki ye tumse khud jitna maangegi wo uske liye kam hai, ye khud me hi khud ko niharti hai ye lalach khud ko hi khud se bayan kr deti hai .......


And jab Chester aur Tommie dono launde jab waha kalti maar liye Mike ko chorkr to wo unke greed ko saaf indicate kr raha tha

Aur rahi baat veer,Emma,Zoey,Ronnie ki to wo to basement me entry le li thi lekin unki to halak hi sukh gaya utne bade aur sequence type basement dekh kr aur lekin still mai ek baat bolna bhul gaya bhaya ki ju ne images ek dum perfecto daale hai jo har scenes ko ek alag hi imagination pr laakr chor deti hai.......Khair uss bbasement me bohot se se side way nikle hue the,wo logo ke kuch dur jaate hi Ronnie waha se ek side mud gaya jaha usse ek box millaa jise kholte hi uski khushi ka thikana hi nhi raha usse to laga ki matlab literally tum jara imagine kro ki tumhe ek box wo bhi gold biscuits se bhara pada mil jaaye to tumhara kya haal hoga tum to pagla jaoge and yaha to usse wahi mila jo dekh yaa paakr uski khushi charam sima pr thi leekin usse lalach ne daboch liya aur ussne ye baat veer aur Emma,Zoey ko n batayi jo uske liye bohot buri hone wali thi......jab Ronnie uss box ko wahi chorkr unke paas aakr unhe bahana bana kr baat ko Rafa dafa kiya lekin still wo uss lalach me doob chuka tha usse sirf wo gold biscuits hi chahiye the issliye to jab veer aur unnsabko kuch n mila uss basement me to wo wapas aagaye

Wahi baat kre apne Mike pe to wo kya hi kahe uska bhi haal behal tha Jacob ke body dekh lekin still usne jyada body ke saath cher chaar nhi kiya bas normally investigate kiya lekin usse itna to pata chal gaya investigation kr ke ki NIGHTWALKER kisi sharp weapons ka use kr raha hai lekin utna sharp nhi hai wo weapon......aur wo bhi laut aaya wapas

Aur idhar apne veer ne sabkee status check kr liya tha lekin usse kuch nhi mila yaha tk ki ussne Mike ko bhi check krliya tha lekin still nothing is there but bhaya ek baat batao ye aaj tumne mistake kr diya likhne me aapne Mike ko muke likh diya koi n bhaya ho jata hai apan aisa waisa kuch n bola.......and one thing also bhaya ki veer ne uss door ko bhi Check krliya lekin still kuch hath nhi aaya.......

Ab aate hai basement side jaha apne jony sorry Ronnie bhi nikal chuka tha apne saath ek bag lete hue and uske piche Zoey bhi kyunki wo apne room side aayi thi paani ke chalte kyunki usse lagi thi bhayankar pyaas aur wo nikli water bottle le kr bahar lekin usse dikhha Ronnie to hogayi wo uske piche, to wo jab aage ki wor gayi to Ronnie uske aankho se wojhal ho chuka tha lekin udhar Ronnie ke side to tandav chalu hogaya tha khauf ka bbc ki gandiya fatty gayi thi jab usne bag me gold biscuits bhar kr jaane laga aur piche se usse do pairo ki aur awazz sunayi jab wo piche muda to uske haath se wo bag hi chutt kr niche gir pada jisme se wo gold biscuits bahar ki wor gir gaye aur NIGHTWALKER jo uske saamne kisi bhootiye look ke saath khada tha

Thode der baad jab Zoey phonne ki light jala kr aage badhi aur kuch der me hi jab usse ek kata sar waha dikha to usse ulti si aagayi lekin usne control kiya aur bhagne ko hui to usse dikha wo NIGHTWALKER jiske mask ki wo do aankhe darane ke liye hi kaffi thi wo jor see chikhti hui bahar ki wor bhagi aur uske piche bhaga hasiya chalata hua. NIGHTWALKER jo bohot hi horror look de raha tha......aur jab wo halway side pohochi to wwo gir padi gile floor ke karan aur uskke saamne NIGHTWALKER khada tha uska sar dhad se alag krne ke liye jiske hasiya chalate hi uske aur hasiya ke bich koi lohe ki rod liye khada tha jo veer tha uski wo entry Zoey ne kabhi expect nhi ki thi lekin entry dhakar thi bhaya.....and Emma ki awazz piche se sunn Zoey uth kr uski. Wor gayi bhag kr jo hath me ek lakdi liye khadi thi lekin uski bhi fatti padi thi......

Wahi NIGHTWALKER ne veer ke chhest pr attack kiya jisse wo dodge kiya veer ne aur ye dekh kr NIGHTWALKER Emma aur Zoey ki traf bhaga hasiya liye aur idhar veer nee apne bewolf blessings ko on kiya aur uski traf tezzi se bhaga jo NIGHTWALKER ne bhi sense krliya aur wo thoda side ki traf bhaga lekin still wo achambhe me tha veer ki speed dekh aur wo Zoey aur Emma ke bagal se niklte hue unke piche lohe ke poles jo aksar kaam lagte hai tents ke wo the jisse NIGHTWALKER ne hasiye se ek jhatka diya aur bhag gaya aur idhar wo poles girne lagi lekin veer ne bacha liya EMMA aur Zoey ko kyunki usko kuch nhi hoga unn poles sse lekin Zoey aur Emma ko to hoga issliye ussne unhe bachana thik smjha aur pari ne kitni baar pucha bhi ki bone reaper oon kru lekin ussne usse mana krdiya lekin veer ko bhi takleef ho rahi thi thodi si aur Zoey aur Emma ki aankhe namm thi kyunki koi aur hota to bachata bhi nhi lekin veer !!

Aur jab wo waha se bach gaye to wo uss basement side gaye aur uss bag ko dekha jisme se gire wo gold biscuits colour chor rahi thi bhigte hue pani se and they are fake,and Ronnie to bekar hi me mara gaya isiliye maine kaha tha pichle review me ki agar greedygiri karoge to maut tumhe khud yaha bulayegi........

unhe pata chal gaya ki ye itna asan nhi hoga lekin jab wo kamre me aaye to veer pari se bato me laga tha jo usse NIGHTWALKER ke murder krne ke sequence smjha rahi thi wahi Chester dhundne nikal chuka tha god bars ko lekin usse mila NIGHTWALKER hasiya liye hue lekin usse still koi dar n laga aur wo khuleyaam bhagta hua kamre me aa chupa lekin wo yaha n ruka ussne chidhayya NIGHTWALKER ko jo usse bilkul acha n llaga hoga bilkul n iske liye wo natija bhugatna Hoga hi

Thodi der baad jab sab ikatha hua to unhe Chester kahi nhi dikha to unhone uske kamre ke door knock kiye lekin ussne nhi khola na hi awazz di it's means 🤣mughe kaise pata hoga but I guess that ki wo tapk gaya lekin awazze to n aayi ab bologe ki ander se soundproof hoga to may be lekin bahar ki awazze to,
Khair choro aage dekh lenge update me matlab padh lenge

Bhaya kuch chutt gaya hoga mere mind se to uspe jyada mind mt Krna bhaya kyunki ye review bohot jaldi likha hai maine biswas n kroge 10 minute pe pel daala ye review bhaya to kuch chutte to maaf krdena 🤣


Take care........
 
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Update 100 ko lekr boleto apan ekich baat bolega ki ye century abhi tk ki sabse best update ko laa kr hamare saamne apke dwara pesh ki gayi hai...... gajab man ju ke writing pr apan ko kuch n bolna chata kyunki sab jaante hai apke writing skill ek alag hi level pe chalti hai........


Ye divya to apne chutiye kam gaandu husband ke bachao me jyada lagi hai sorry insult nhi dekha ja raha usse 🤣.....suhaana bohot jyada hi pareshan hai veer ko lekr jo lajmi hai hona bhi chahiye aakhir wo ussse lekr aayi hai yaha pr aur wo bhi indirectly divya ke kaaran,aur rahi baat nik ki to wo gaandu ki to gaand me kiwde chal rahe hai bhosdika.........Khair suhana ki bhi baat sahi hai ki ye sab sirf nik ke kaaran hua matlab veer ko sirf ussi ke kahne pr bheja gaya jo bohot galat tha lekin still suhana bohot jyada pareshan ho rakhi hai veer ko lekr aur veer ke prati wo jyada hi emotionally attach si ho rahi hai yaa ho bhi gayi hai jo spast roop se hmare saamne dikh bhi raha hai........ab batao iss divya ko isse matlab iss situation me bhi muh chodi sugh gayi batao matlab suru krdi ussne aur usse bahak kr suhana ne bhi apne husband ka izzat ka balatkar n dekha gaya

Khair ab aate apan log aage ke scene pe jo hai island ka boleto mansion ka,ab idhar Emaa piche gayi Jacob ke aur ye chutiya socho jara apne aap ko ye mahashay
race 3 movie ke salman khan smjh rahe the bc jaa to aise rahe the ki killer unka langotiya yaar ho, bahenchod iski to literally gaand hi ahemm-ahemm sorry haa to mai bol raha tha ki uski mundi ko hi football bana diya bc wo scene jab uske aankho me shocked wala reaction aur uske Kate hue hisse se jab wo khun riss rahe the aur uski andhruni nase woh....ho ho...ho.....kya hi scene tha it's fucking from that scene that I just loves it to see and imagine..... uss bloody wape scene ko imagine kr ke jo ek alag hi horror scene wali feeling aayi n wo mast tha mai sach kahu to bhai ye scene aur jo aage ke scene hue n dono ke murder ke to blood lust wali jo feeling aayi n gajab ki thi fucking great Hatt's off man ju ko and realy I am waiting for even more dangerous and bloody scenes.......but ...but but........ye scenes mughe sach kahu to utna bloody feeling n de payi lekin still mai jaanta hu Werewolf bhaya ki ye jo scenes the ye to abhi bas shuruwat thi iss story me abhi to asli jo scenes aaane wale hai wo alag hi level pr hongi, I just want to say man ki mai unn arcs ka besabri se intezar me rahunga lekin apka koi bharosa nhi kahi issi arc me wo scenes laa do aap

Khair mai kaha se kaha chala gaya apan log aate review pr sorry mai ata review pr

Emma ki to kya hi haalat ho gayi uski jaan hii nikal gayi thi mano jab wo apne hosh me aayi aur wo bhhagne lagi NIGHTWALKER se bach ke tab uski jo buri haalat huyi jitna uss katti hui mundi ko dekh kr n huyi thi kyunki piche uske wo NIGHTWALKER pada huua tha wo bhi hassiya liye hue literally ek aisa scene mind me ubhar ke aayi hogi n sab reader ke dimag me ki unke bhi raungtey khade ho gaye honge......aur jo uski chikh nikli thi wo dar aur khauf bayan kr rahi thi jo maine saaf notice kiya bhale ju log ne na kiya ho pr maine kiya jo uske uss chikh me jhalak rahi thi maut ka dar.....

Aur jab veer aur baaki sab apne kamre se nikal kr uss halway me aaye to unhe fir se chikh sunayi di jo kaafi pass se aayi thi aur agle hi pal Emma bhagti hui aakr veer se lag gayi.....gale yaar....haa to usne bas yahi bola ki usne dekha use aur uski baat sun oahlee to nhi smjh paaye lekin jab unhe pata chala to unki halak sukh gayi.....wo Tommy ne suggest kiya ki uske room me chalte hai jo manne hazam ho gaya 🤣lekin jab ander Emma ne puri scene ko bataya to unn sabki to fatt ke kya unki to rooh bhi kuch samay ke liye ghumne chali gayi hogi......and Emma jo veer se chipki padi thi kya kahu mere khyaal se Zoey laundiya jal bhun rahi thi sorry ye bakchodi-bakchodi me pel di.....

Haa to ab aate uss mahol me jab sab dare sahme khade the unke dare sahme jism me khauf aur badha diya uss grjarahat ne jo badal ke garjne ki awazz thi aur Emma to fir se lipat padi dar ke maare veer se jo Zoey ne bhaap liya ki uske just bagal me wo bhi hai lekin wo usse chorr veer pr kud rahi hai.......

And tab kiya veer ne ek sawal jo bohot jaaruri tha aur kyun tha mai aage batata......veer ka sawal ki tum log yaha kaise pahuche jiska sabne jawab diya bas Emma ko chor kr lekin ye baat Ronnie launde ko n bhayi aur wo Emma pr shak ki disha se apne bhav rakha jo sahi bhi tha aur hoi bhi kyun n lekin still veer apna gentle man 😜Emma ki jimedari matlab apne sr pe li ki ye mere saath rahegi agar mai mara to ispar shakk kya pura hakk hi jayega katl ka lekin agar mughe kuch n hua to ye innocent prove ho jayegi jo sun to Emma ko bhagwan hi dikh gaye honge veer ke roop me......

And ab aate veer ke uss sawal pr jab veer ne bola ki jab ham aaye matlab veer aur Mike jab waha aye copter se to uss island ke pass kahi bhi unhe koi jetski yaa koi boat wagera n dikhi jo sun to unke ander jo dar ka bamm tyaar ho raha tha n wo phatt gaya wo bhi booommmm🤣.....unnsabki to gandiya fatt gayi and ek baat bata du mai ki ye ssawal jaruri bhi hai ek baat ko clear krne ke liye ki uss NIGHTWALKER ne pahle se hi ye sab plan kr rakha tha yaa jitne bhi log waha aaye pade hai wo sab NIGHTWALKER ke dwara hi laye gaye hai lekin choro aage agar maine 2-3aur koi possibility likh di to lekhak mahoday meko gaali bakenge.......lekin ye to ssocho jara wo boats aur jet ski gaye kaha ye to issi traf indicate kr raha hai wo hai plan ki tarf matlab ye sab plan tha matlab insabko yaha laya gaya tha naki wo khud aaye the........



Ab Mike bhaya n kah daala indirectly ki apan ko investigation mangta hai jo sunke to unki aur fatti lekin still unhone apne timing ke hisab se maan liya ki khazana bhi to chahiye unhe aur iss chis ke lalach me pade Chester,Tommy aur Ronnie jo bohot bura bhi hua ek ke liye because lalach wo chis hai jisske piche agar tum pad gaye to tum aise loote jaoge ki tumhara kuch n bachega khas kar tumhari jaan bhi wo mang leti hai ye lalach itni burri bhavna hai n ki ye tumse khud jitna maangegi wo uske liye kam hai, ye khud me hi khud ko niharti hai ye lalach khud ko hi khud se bayan kr deti hai .......


And jab Chester aur Tommie dono launde jab waha kalti maar liye Mike ko chorkr to wo unke greed ko saaf indicate kr raha tha

Aur rahi baat veer,Emma,Zoey,Ronnie ki to wo to basement me entry le li thi lekin unki to halak hi sukh gaya utne bade aur sequence type basement dekh kr aur lekin still mai ek baat bolna bhul gaya bhaya ki ju ne images ek dum perfecto daale hai jo har scenes ko ek alag hi imagination pr laakr chor deti hai.......Khair uss bbasement me bohot se se side way nikle hue the,wo logo ke kuch dur jaate hi Ronnie waha se ek side mud gaya jaha usse ek box millaa jise kholte hi uski khushi ka thikana hi nhi raha usse to laga ki matlab literally tum jara imagine kro ki tumhe ek box wo bhi gold biscuits se bhara pada mil jaaye to tumhara kya haal hoga tum to pagla jaoge and yaha to usse wahi mila jo dekh yaa paakr uski khushi charam sima pr thi leekin usse lalach ne daboch liya aur ussne ye baat veer aur Emma,Zoey ko n batayi jo uske liye bohot buri hone wali thi......jab Ronnie uss box ko wahi chorkr unke paas aakr unhe bahana bana kr baat ko Rafa dafa kiya lekin still wo uss lalach me doob chuka tha usse sirf wo gold biscuits hi chahiye the issliye to jab veer aur unnsabko kuch n mila uss basement me to wo wapas aagaye

Wahi baat kre apne Mike pe to wo kya hi kahe uska bhi haal behal tha Jacob ke body dekh lekin still usne jyada body ke saath cher chaar nhi kiya bas normally investigate kiya lekin usse itna to pata chal gaya investigation kr ke ki NIGHTWALKER kisi sharp weapons ka use kr raha hai lekin utna sharp nhi hai wo weapon......aur wo bhi laut aaya wapas

Aur idhar apne veer ne sabkee status check kr liya tha lekin usse kuch nhi mila yaha tk ki ussne Mike ko bhi check krliya tha lekin still nothing is there but bhaya ek baat batao ye aaj tumne mistake kr diya likhne me aapne Mike ko muke likh diya koi n bhaya ho jata hai apan aisa waisa kuch n bola.......and one thing also bhaya ki veer ne uss door ko bhi Check krliya lekin still kuch hath nhi aaya.......

Ab aate hai basement side jaha apne jony sorry Ronnie bhi nikal chuka tha apne saath ek bag lete hue and uske piche Zoey bhi kyunki wo apne room side aayi thi paani ke chalte kyunki usse lagi thi bhayankar pyaas aur wo nikli water bottle le kr bahar lekin usse dikhha Ronnie to hogayi wo uske piche, to wo jab aage ki wor gayi to Ronnie uske aankho se wojhal ho chuka tha lekin udhar Ronnie ke side to tandav chalu hogaya tha khauf ka bbc ki gandiya fatty gayi thi jab usne bag me gold biscuits bhar kr jaane laga aur piche se usse do pairo ki aur awazz sunayi jab wo piche muda to uske haath se wo bag hi chutt kr niche gir pada jisme se wo gold biscuits bahar ki wor gir gaye aur NIGHTWALKER jo uske saamne kisi bhootiye look ke saath khada tha

Thode der baad jab Zoey phonne ki light jala kr aage badhi aur kuch der me hi jab usse ek kata sar waha dikha to usse ulti si aagayi lekin usne control kiya aur bhagne ko hui to usse dikha wo NIGHTWALKER jiske mask ki wo do aankhe darane ke liye hi kaffi thi wo jor see chikhti hui bahar ki wor bhagi aur uske piche bhaga hasiya chalata hua. NIGHTWALKER jo bohot hi horror look de raha tha......aur jab wo halway side pohochi to wwo gir padi gile floor ke karan aur uskke saamne NIGHTWALKER khada tha uska sar dhad se alag krne ke liye jiske hasiya chalate hi uske aur hasiya ke bich koi lohe ki rod liye khada tha jo veer tha uski wo entry Zoey ne kabhi expect nhi ki thi lekin entry dhakar thi bhaya.....and Emma ki awazz piche se sunn Zoey uth kr uski. Wor gayi bhag kr jo hath me ek lakdi liye khadi thi lekin uski bhi fatti padi thi......

Wahi NIGHTWALKER ne veer ke chhest pr attack kiya jisse wo dodge kiya veer ne aur ye dekh kr NIGHTWALKER Emma aur Zoey ki traf bhaga hasiya liye aur idhar veer nee apne bewolf blessings ko on kiya aur uski traf tezzi se bhaga jo NIGHTWALKER ne bhi sense krliya aur wo thoda side ki traf bhaga lekin still wo achambhe me tha veer ki speed dekh aur wo Zoey aur Emma ke bagal se niklte hue unke piche lohe ke poles jo aksar kaam lagte hai tents ke wo the jisse NIGHTWALKER ne hasiye se ek jhatka diya aur bhag gaya aur idhar wo poles girne lagi lekin veer ne bacha liya EMMA aur Zoey ko kyunki usko kuch nhi hoga unn poles sse lekin Zoey aur Emma ko to hoga issliye ussne unhe bachana thik smjha aur pari ne kitni baar pucha bhi ki bone reaper oon kru lekin ussne usse mana krdiya lekin veer ko bhi takleef ho rahi thi thodi si aur Zoey aur Emma ki aankhe namm thi kyunki koi aur hota to bachata bhi nhi lekin veer !!

Aur jab wo waha se bach gaye to wo uss basement side gaye aur uss bag ko dekha jisme se gire wo gold biscuits colour chor rahi thi bhigte hue pani se and they are fake,and Ronnie to bekar hi me mara gaya isiliye maine kaha tha pichle review me ki agar greedygiri karoge to maut tumhe khud yaha bulayegi........

unhe pata chal gaya ki ye itna asan nhi hoga lekin jab wo kamre me aaye to veer pari se bato me laga tha jo usse NIGHTWALKER ke murder krne ke sequence smjha rahi thi wahi Chester dhundne nikal chuka tha god bars ko lekin usse mila NIGHTWALKER hasiya liye hue lekin usse still koi dar n laga aur wo khuleyaam bhagta hua kamre me aa chupa lekin wo yaha n ruka ussne chidhayya NIGHTWALKER ko jo usse bilkul acha n llaga hoga bilkul n iske liye wo natija bhugatna Hoga hi

Thodi der baad jab sab ikatha hua to unhe Chester kahi nhi dikha to unhone uske kamre ke door knock kiye lekin ussne nhi khola na hi awazz di it's means 🤣mughe kaise pata hoga but I guess that ki wo tapk gaya lekin awazze to n aayi ab bologe ki ander se soundproof hoga to may be lekin bahar ki awazze to,
Khair choro aage dekh lenge update me matlab padh lenge


Take care........
What is this???? :shocked2:
 

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Par aage badhte waqt, usse apne do perro ki jagah... Chaar perro ki awaaz aa rahi thi.
This sentence... This fucking sentence... My whole body shuddered when I read this at night... Goosebumps all over my body... 😨😨
Words ko choose karna... As I said earlier... Yaar ab kya bolu main... Iss update ka narration. It was just sooo sooo sooo good!!! 💕 Kya hi kahu aapke baare me. Ye kehna galat nahi h ki ye story forum par dominate kar k rakhi h sabhi ko... I've visited so many threads par kahi woh baat nahi lagi jo yaha lagi h...
The audience, the story, the response, everything is so phenomenal. 💫🖤
 

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Update - 99 ~ A Night at the Mansion (1)

Ab tak...

Divya : The second criminal...!!!!!

Veer : Huh???

Suhana : !!????

Aur agle hi pal... Usne table par ek paper patalte hue rakha. Ye wahi printout tha...

Usse dekhte hi Suhana ka badan kaanp utha.

Saamne printout me jo tha, wo tha...

Ek wanted paper!!!!

Divya : And his name is...

Veer : ?????

"THE NIGHTWALKER!!!!"


Ab aage...

[Is this the one? Master! Please! Be extra careful. Isse dekh ke mujhe bilkul bhi sahi nahi lag raha hai.]

'Tum akeli nahi ho Pari! I'm getting the same vibes. Yaha kuch boht hi bhayanak humse chhupa hua hai. Kuch aisa, jiske liye shayad hum taiyaar nahi.'

[Mein uss Nik ko kabhi maaf nahi karungi. I will never. Sab kuch uske hi kaaran hua hai. I hate that couple.]

'Nahi Pari! Ye toh hona hi tha. I guess maybe mujhe yaha next mission mil jaaye? Tum jaanti hi ho hume points ki kitni zaroorat hai.'

[Maaasttterrr~ Aap sirf points ke liye apni jaan daav pe nahi laga sakte. Missions ka kya hai? Woh toh milte rahenge. I cannot lose you like this okay? Aap sunn rahe ho na?]

'I'm listening Pari! Par, Aisa kaun sa waqt tha meri zindagi me jidhar mene risks nahi liye? Mera jeevan khatro se hi bhara tha Pari. Abhi bhi bhara hai. Aur aage bhi bhara rahega. Ye baat toh mein tab hi jaan gaya tha jab tum mere andar aayi thi."

[I-I'm so sorry. :verysad: ]

'Pagli! Mein tumhe dosh nahi de raha. Tumhare aane se hi toh mein firse zinda hua hu. I can never blame you. No matter what! You are my soul, Pari.'

[M-Maaaasssttteeerrr! (╥﹏╥)]

Pari aur Veer ke beech bhavnaatmak baate chal hi rahi thi jab,

"I'm dropping you both here. You better survive. I won't come here to pick your dead meat."

Saamne se pilot ne Veer se kaha. Helicopter me woh savaar tha. Aur uske bagal se baitha hua tha, Mike. Jo investigation department se hi tha.

Neeche unke ek hi drishya tha. Ek khubsoorat island!!!

Helicopter thoda neeche hua aur utarne ke liye airstairs ko hawa me neeche gira diya gaya.

'Fuck! Meri phat rahi hai utarne me. Mene kabhi kiya nahi ye.'

[Masterrrr! Don't worry! Bas pakad mazboot rakhna apni. Stay strong maaasterr~]

'Yeahhh!'

Mike ki dekha dekhi kar Veer stairs se utarna shuru kiya aur...

*Plop*

Dono ne zameen par girte hue apne qadam rakhe.

"I'm fucking leaving!! Good luck!!!"

Upar se pilot ne zorr se chillaaya, par helicopter ki ghoomti hui blades ki awaaz ke aage uski awaaz theek se sunaayi na de saki Veer aur Mike ko. Aur copter waha se nikal gaya.

Ek lambi aah chorr Veer ne apne saamne dekha. Uske saamne ye khaufnaak sa island maujood tha. Dur dur tak ped paudho ke alawa kuch nahi dikh raha tha usse.

Sooraj dhal chuka tha, andhera barkaraar tha. Chaand par ghane kaale baadalo ki chaadar bichhi hui thi. Aur mand mand chalti thandi hawaein, jo Veer ke badan me ruye khade kar rahi thi.

Yaha se aage ka raasta usse aur Mike ko akele hi tay karna tha. Wo dono iss island ke chorr par akele khade hue the.

Investigation department ki taraf se copter unhe yaha chorr ke nikal chuka tha. Kuch khaas shabd toh nahi kahe the pilot ne uss se kuch derr pehle. Private detectives se jude logo ko waqai kuch zyaada hi hate de rahe the ye investigation waale.

Kherr! Veer aur Mike aage badhe. Unke paas kaafi samaan tha utility ka. Chaahe emergency torch ho, knife ho, ya kuch bhi. Taiyaari ke saath woh yaha aaye the. Yaha aane se pehle kaafi bawaal bhi hua tha. Jesa ki Pari ne Nik ka zikr kiya.

Ek prakaar se Veer uske hi kaaran yaha tha. Investigation department ke Head Nolan ne saaf saaf Nik ko chetaavni de dii thi ki unke department se ab iss case ko lekar koi bhi apni taang nahi adayega. Unhone ye bhi keh daala tha ki ab tum log hi apni taraf se bhejo kisi ko. Bada shauk hai na private detectives hone ke baad public cases solve karna ka?

Toh lo fir. Diya case! Jao! Risk uthao! Aur saabit karo.

Nateeja? Nik ne Veer ko aage kar diya. Woh bewakoof nahi tha jo khud aisi khatarnak jagah jaake apni hi gaand marwaaye. Aur woh Divya ko bhi nahi bhejne waala tha. Suhana ko bhi nahi bhejta woh. Toh bacha kaun?

Of course! None other than Veer!!!

Aur Veer se toh uski koi pehchaan bhi nahi thi. Divya bhi bada hi flirt kar rahi thi Veer se. Isliye Veer ko khatre me daalne se pehle ek baar bhi usne Veer ke baare me nahi socha. Jalan sach me kutti cheez hoti hai.

Par Mike aisa nahi tha. Jab usne dekha ki kese Veer ko akele maut ke kuye me dhakela jaa raha hai. Toh uss se raha nahi gaya. Veer ka toh koi lena dena hi nahi tha iss case se. Usse faaltu me bali ka bakra banaya jaa raha tha. Isliye usne apna naam bhi aage kar diya. Beshaq, uske iss faisle se kaafi vivaad khada hua par ant me uski baat unhe maan'ni hi padi. Akhir uski marzi thi ye.

Woh Veer ko aise akele nahi jaane de sakta tha. Veer andar hi andar Mike ke prati abhaari tha. Kuch log insaaniyat ke aur dil ke boht hi acche the yaha. Jese Mike...

[I fucking hate that man soooo much!! Humne kya bigaada hai uska?]

"Shhhhh! Mene kaha na Pari! It's inevitable! Ye hona hi tha."

[But still...]

"Shhh!!! Let's get going."

Veer ne Pari ko shaant kiya.

Bagal me chal raha Mike tabhi uss se bola,

Mike (smiles) : Don't worry bro! We'll handle this.

Wo Veer ka confidence badhaane ki koshish kar raha tha.

Veer (smiles) : Sure!

Kuch bhi ho jaaye, Veer Mike ko marrne nahi de sakta tha. Apne mann me hi usne ek commitment baandha.

Yaha aane se pehle Suhana ne bhi kaafi virodh kiya tha. Suhana Veer ko yaha help ke liye laayi thi. Usse marwaane nahi. Jese tese Veer ne usse shaant kar diya tha. Par woh jaanta tha Suhana abhi kitni bechain ho rahi hogi. Jab woh copter me baith ke nikal raha tha tabhi uska chehra dekhne laayak tha. Sach kaha jaaye toh pehli baar Veer ne Suhana ke chehre par apne prati woh bhaav dekhe the.

She never showed but she really cares for him. Yaha tak ki Divya bhi kuch chinta me thi. Shayad uska ravaiyya badal raha tha.

Mike aur Veer aage badhe, haatho me torch thi unke. Ghane ped paudho ke patte hataate hue wo Island me aur bheetar ghuse. Aur jese hi ialand ke beecho beech aaye. Saamne ka nazara dekh unke hosh udd gaye.

Island ke beecho beech unke saamne tha...



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Ek khubsoorat par utna hi daraawna sa Mansion.

Badi hi ajeeb sii anubhooti karwa raha tha ye Mansion. Sundar tha, bada bhi tha, par uss mansion me kuch aisi baat thi jo Veer ko aage qadam badhaane se pehle chetaavni de rahi thi.

Ajeeb baat ye thi ki mansion ki lights jal rahi thi. Island me electricity ka koi source nahi tha. Matlab basement me generators pakke se maujood the.

Veer : What do you think?

Mike : Well! I never imagined there would be such a huge mansion hiding in here. And guess what? Lights are on.

Veer : Then that means...

Mike : Yeah! Someone else is inside.

Veer : Other participants?

Mike : Maybe! Or maybe not!

Mansion ki jalti hui lights yahi ishaara kar rahi thi ki koi na koi andar maujood tha.

Mike : We must find whoever it is. We will definitely catch Senior Connor's murderer.

Veer : Hope so...

Mike : Shall we head inside?

Veer : Alright!

Entrance ki orr woh badhe. Entrance par ek bhi guard maujood nahi tha. Koi security nahi thi. Lohe ka bada sa gate tha jisse khol woh andar aaye.

Mansion ke saamne chota sa lawn tha jaha ghaas lagi hui thi, bagal me ek chariot rakha tha safed rang ka par koi ghoda nahi bandha tha uss se.

Andhere me poora Mansion vishaal pedo se ghira hua tha aur woh dono main gate pe pohuch gaye.

Mike ne apne jeb se ek card nikaala aur Veer ko dekha.

Veer (nods) : Do it!

Aur darwaaze ke hi side me ek patla sa slit gap maujood tha. Mike ne jese hi card andar slit me daala toh...

*Click*

Darwaaze se awaaz aayi. Aur woh unlock ho gaya.

Mike : It actually worked.

Veer : The info was true then...

Jankari sach thi matlab. Connor ke akhiri video se unhe iss jagah ka pata chala tha. Ab sawaal ye tha ki Mike ko woh card kese aur kaha se mila? Iski jankaari bhi usne video me hi dii thi.

Slot machines ki street me hi ek aadmi tha jo ye cards bechta tha. Wahi lottery waali slot machines. Yaha sab kuch khufiya tareeqe se hota tha. Uss bechaare ko ye bhi nahi pata tha ki ye cards kis liye hai. Usse bas bechne diye gaye the aur cards bik rahe the, iss baat se hi khush tha woh.

Police usse yu hi giraftaar nahi kar sakti thi. Uss bechaare ko toh ye bhi nahi pata tha ki ye cards kaun bhijwata hai usse. Kyuki delivery wala toh deliver kar ke chala jaata tha.

Inn cards ka istemal island me maujood iss darwaaze ko kholne ke liye hi tha. Koi soch bhi sakta tha aisa? Kuch boht hi badi planning chal rahi thi peeth peeche.

Darwaaza khol jese hi woh andar aaye, andar ka nazaara kuch aisa tha.



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Upar ceiling se chandelier latak raha tha. Andhera tha par jagah jagah candles jal rahi thi. Kahi kuch lights bhi jal rahi thi.

Aur ye main hall bhi nahi tha. Ye toh sub hall ki tarah tha. Neeche bada sa carpet biccha hua tha jo saamne darwaaze ki orr jaake khatam ho raha tha.

Shayad wahi main hall ka entrance tha.

Mike : Let's go!

Veer : Yeah!!!

Mike aur Veer apne dil ki tezz dhadkano ko thaam aage badhe. Hall ka gate bhi khula hua tha.

Jese hi unhone gate khola, unhe ek hallway nazar aaya.



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Jagah jagah paintings lagi hui thi deewaaro par, jo kisi ke ateet ko baya kar rahi thi. Neeche biccha khubsoorat sa kaaleen. Iss area me lighting sub hall ke muqaable zyada thi.

Wo andar ki orr gaye aur jese hi wo enter kiye,

Veer : Huhh???

Unhe waha 6 log aur dikhaayi diye. Jinme se 4 ladke the aur 2 ladkiya.

"What the hell? More people are coming? But that's actually good."

Sofe pe baitha ek ladka unme se bola.

Veer : These guys...

Tabhi ek ladki jo kareeb 27-28 saal ki lag rahi thi woh uth ke aayi aur Veer aur Mike ke ird gird ghoomne lagi. Fir boli,

Ladki : You guys! Are you here for the bars too??

Veer : Y-Yeaahhh!!!

Uss ladki ne sawaal kiya. Kya Veer log bhi idhar bars ke liye aaye the? Veer ne jawaab haan me diya.

Bars!!! Samjhe? Golden bars!!! Bole toh sone ke biscuits.

Mansion me 10 million dollars worth ke golden bars maujood the. Alag alag jagaho par. 10 million bole toh kareeb kareeb 79 crores, 84 lakh, 55 hazaar ke aas paas ka rokda.

Aur shayad yaha maujood baaki log bhi issi ki talaash me the.

Ladki : Ohhh! I'm Emma by the way. A nurse by profession.

Mike : Nice to meet you! I'm Mike. Just a graduate. And he's Veer, my friend.

Mike ne apni identity jaan boojh ke chhupa lii.

Emma : Veer? Strange name! But you are hot though. I will give you that. *wink*

Emma khubsoorat thi. Par Veer ko usme koi interest nahi tha. Uski nazre jiski taraf gayi woh koi aur hi thi.



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Black denim jacket daale woh bookshelf ke paas khadi hui thi. Aur unhe hi dekh rahi thi. Khaaskar Veer ko. Ek sundar vyakti dusre sundar vyakti ki taraf aakarshit hota hai. Ye baat sach thi.

Khubsoorti ka uska koi jawaab nahi tha. Sonia aur Kaera ki takkar ki thi woh yadi chehre ki khubsoorti ki baat ki jaaye toh.

Usse dekhte hi...

*Ding*

[Name : Zoey Clarkson

Age : 27
Bio : Zoey ek model hai. Par paiso ki tangi ki wajah se woh apni life me aage nahi badh paa rahi hai. Khubsoorat hone ke bawajood usse Model contracts zyaada mil nahi paa rahe kyuki woh nudity ya intimate photoshoots pe nahi utarna chahti. Financial condition kaafi gir chuki hai. Kisi se gupt jankari usse mili hai ki island ke iss Mansion me khazana chhupa hai. Woh apna luck azmaane aayi hai yaha. Ghar me uska koi nahi hai. Toh apni jaan ki parvaah kiye bina woh ek akhiri baar apni kismat azmaana chaahti hai.

Favourability : 4
Relationship : Strangers.]

'I see!!!'

Emma dekh rahi thi ki Veer Zoey ko nihaar raha tha aur Zoey bhi usse dekh rahi thi. Ye dekhte hi andar hi andar woh jal bhun gayi.

Woh bhi yaha maujood thi. Fir uski sundarta par koi kyu dhyaan nahi de raha tha? Aisa nahi tha ki Emma sundar nahi thi. Bas, Zoey ke saamne woh thodi feeki lag rahi thi. Zoey kuch zyada hi aakarshak thi.

Mike : And who are they?

Emma : The girl over there. She's Zoey! A model. And these guys are, Jacob, Tommy, Chester, and Ronnie.

Ek ek karke Emma ne unka parichay diya.

Emma : We got familiar just few minutes ago.

[Dekha master!!!! Ye bilkul wesa hi hai jesa Connor ne bataya tha. Alag alag log yaha aate hai. Aur raat guzaarte hai. Golden bars ko dhundne ke liye jo yaha kahi na kahi chhupe hue hai. Par raat me hi...]

'Yeahhh!!! The NIGHTWALKER!!!'

[Yes Master~ Abhi 7:30 hua hai time. Connor ne bataya tha raat 9 baje se shuru hota hai sab.]

'Hmm~ Hamaare paas dedh ghante hai yaha ki territory ko dimaag me baithaane ke liye. Pari!!!'

[Don't worry Master! Path Tracker on hi hai. Mansion boht bada hai. Mene off nahi kiya hai usse.]

'Good job!!!'

Connor ne jab video banaya tha, tab uska connection department se cut ho chuka tha. Mansion me network nahi milta hai. Dusri bhaasha me, phone calls nahi lagaaye jaa sakte aur na hi receive kiye jaa sakte hai.

Iska matlab, Divya aur Nik ko jo video mili woh NIGHTWALKER ne khud hi bheji thi unhe shayad.

Veer aur Mike ko ye raat apne hi bal bute par guzaarni thi. Veer ne harr ek ke naam dimaag me baitha liye the.

Emma jo nurse thi, Zoey ek model. Jacob ek fashion designer ka assistant tha. Tommy aur Chester ka group band tha aur Ronnie ek choti si company ka employee. Sabhi paiso ki tangi ki wajah se hi yaha the.

Mann me dherr saare sawaal aa rahe honge. Ki yadi ye crime yaha ho raha hai, toh police seedha dhaava kyu nahi bol deti yaha? Par jitna asaan ye dikhta tha utna tha nahi.

Ye Mansion band rehta tha. Keval chuni gayi dates par hi khulta tha ye. Aur aaj woh chuni gayi dates me se ek date thi.

Mike ne jo Card use kiya tha kuch derr pehle usme date mentioned thi. Aaj ki date.

Aur toh aur... Govt. police ki madad karne se katra rahi thi. Police department me restrictions thi kuch. Yaani ye jo kaam ho raha tha woh tha toh illegal. Par legally iss par koi rok nahi lagayi Jaa rahi thi.

Ye ek boht badi baat thi.

Emma : So? What are we gonna do?

Jacob : The NIGHTWALKER is real right? I heard rumours about him.

Emma : What do you mean?

Ronnie : The NIGHTWALKER!! He's a protector of the treasure. I have heard about him. He kills those people who try to steal the treasure.

Emma : Wh-Whaaattttt??!

Emma ko iss baare me koi jankari nahi thi ki yaha koi Nightwalker naam jesa bhi kuch tha. Woh toh yaha paisa kamane aayi thi. Kya matlab Nightwalker unhe maar deta hai jo khazana lene aate hai? Emma ki ab phat rahi thi.

Tommy : Of course! What were you expecting? Will someone allow you to steal his treasure just like that? We have to survive this night. A killer will be roaming here freely to kill the one amongst us who tries to steal the treasure.

Chester : Yeah!!! It's just like that. Do or die.

Emma : Whaaatttttt??? N-No waayyy! I-I'm fucking leaving. I don't wanna die.

Emma ne jab ye baat suni toh darr ke maare uske perr kaapne lage. Tommy ne kaha tha ki raat me ek killer mansion me ghoomta hai. Aur unn logo ko maut ke ghaat utaar deta hai jo bhi raat me uski nazro ke saamne aate hai.

Emma bhaagte hue baahar nikalne ko hui par jese hi woh main hall ke gate par pohuchi aur usse kholi...

Uski ghabraahat aur bhi badh gayi. Main hall ka gate band ho chuka tha.

Emma (screams) : Fucking open the goddamn door.... Aaaarrghhhhh!!! Open it!!!! I DON'T WANNA DIE HERE! I WANT TO LEAVE!!!

Par darwaaza nahi khula. Tabhi ek awaaz aayi aur unn sab ko sunaayi dii. Awaaz buland thi par usme ek kharaash thi, Daraavni thi woh awaaz.


"Welcome to the Nightwalker mansion!
You chose to come here. You purchased the card. Now you cannot leave the mansion until tomorrow morning."

"Rules are pretty simple!!! Survive the night! 10 million worth of gold bars are hidden in this mansion. If any of you can find them, you can take them away."

"Game will begin sharp @ 9 PM"

"Remember! You can only search the Mansion for half an hour during intervals. In other words, 9-9:30 will be your search time. After 9:30 Nightwalker will walk through the mansion. If he finds anyone of you roaming. YOU WILL BE KILLED."

"He will walk till 12 AM. Then, again you can search the Mansion for half an hour. After 12:30 he will walk till 3 AM. Again a half hour will be alloted. And last time will be Nightwalker walking from 3:30 AM till 6 AM"

"There are many rooms on both the floors. You can choose whichever you want."

"It's 8:00 PM now. You have 1 hour. You can do whatever you want to do. Remember the time. Sharp 9 PM."

"Good luck!"


Aur awaaz band ho gayi. Awaaz aayi toh intercom se hi thi par Veer ko kahi koi intercom nazar nahi aaya.

[Maaasterrrr~]

Pari ki ek chinta janak awaaz Veer ke mann me goonji,

'Don't worry Pari!! Mein apna dhyaan acche se rakhunga.'

[Yes please!!! Mujhse jitna hoga mein aapki madad karungi.]

Uss awaaz ke band hote hi sabhi ek dusre ko dekhne me lage hue the.

Emma (screams) : WHAT THE HELL IS THIS? YOU ARE TELLING ME A KILLER IS THERE IN THIS MANSION WITH US????

Ronnie : Seems like it.

Emma : This is bullshit... How the fuck can I search the bars if someone is roaming outside to kill me?

Rules simple the. Theek 9 baje maut ka ye khel shuru hona tha. Teen interval diye gaye the. 9 se 9:30, 12 se 12:30, aur 3 se 3:30 tak ka samay. Yaani kul milaake dedh ghante.

Iss dedh ghante ke samay me aapko bars dhundne the. Yadi aap dhundh sakte ho toh dhundho. Par baaki ke samay me, Nightwalker poore mansion me ghoomega. Yadi koi bhi usse nazar aaya toh...

Maut!!!

Veer thoda chintit tha. Emma ki toh phat ke hi chaar ho chuki thi. Par baaki sabhi kaafi relaxed lag rahe the.

Chester : Huhh? That's it??? Man!! This is so easy. We can search for half an hour and when that time ends. We can head back to our room. Simple right?

Zoey : Is that Nightwalker even real?

Zoey ne pehli baar kuch kaha. Veer aur uski nazre ek baar fir takra gayi.

Mike : Hmm! Yes! I can say for sure that the Nightwalker is real. It's not a myth or legend. He's here.

Tommy : Wait!!! What if he's one of us???

Zoey confirm kar rahi thi ki ye Nightwalker sach me hai bhi ya nahi? Kahi ye koi afvaah toh nahi hai? Mike ne bhi Connor ki video dekhi thi. Beshaq, Nightwalker ka mask bhi dekha tha usne uss video me. Isme koi shaq nahi tha ki woh hai. Aur issi Mansion me hai. Shayad woh awaaz bhi ussi ki thi? Kisse pata? Par itna zaroor pata tha ki woh hai yaha par.

Par Tommy ki baat ne ek baar fir unhe chinta me daal diya. Kahi unhi me se ek Nightwalker toh nahi tha?

Mike : I don't think it's plausible. Nightwalker is someone else. Maybe the one who told us about the details? Or maybe someone else? And if he's among us, then we can easily identify him. Whoever will be absent during our group meeting. Only he/she can be one.

Mike ne samjhaate hue kaha. Uska kehna tha ki yadi aapas me se koi Nightwalker nikalta bhi hai toh bhi usse asaani se pakda jaa sakta hai. Group meeting ke dauraan jo bhi unke beech gaayab rahega. Uske upar hi shaq jaega.

Jacob : We should select a room first. We can keep our bags there. And then how about taking a stroll in the Mansion? That way we can get familiar with our surroundings.

Chester : Definitely! Sounds good!!!

Jacob ki raay sabhi maan gaye. Uska kehna tha ki jo ye ek ghante ka samay mila tha. Kyu na hum uss ghante me apne apne room select kar usme samaan rakh de aur baahar nikal ke Mansion ka ek chakkar lagaaye taaki hume pata chal sake kaun sii jagah kidhar par hai.

Idea bura nahi tha. Aur yadi Jacob ye baat nahi bhi rakhta toh bhi Veer ek chakkar mansion ka maarta hi.

Zoey : Alright!

Tommy : Yes!!! That's it guys. Let's meet here after 15 minutes.

Ronnie : Okay!

Emma : J-Jacob, Can I stay in the room beside yours?

Jacob : Ohh sure!!!
Ronnie, Jacob, Tommy, Emma, Chester ye sabhi upar chadhe aur baayi orr mud ke baayi taraf hallway me chale gaye.

Toh wahi Veer aur Mike aage badhe, unke peeche Zoey thi.

Jese hi woh waha pohuche unke saamne do corridor ke liye raste the. Ek baayi orr jaa raha tha jaha woh sabhi abhi gaye hue the. Aur ek daayi orr.



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Veer : Which one?

Mike (smiles) : I always do my things right!

Veer (smiles) : Let's go then!!!

Mike ke kehne par dono aage badhe aur daayi orr mud gaye. Khaas baat ye thi ki Zoey bhi unke peeche thi.

Veer ne peeche palat usse dekha toh ek baar fir unn dono ki aankhein ek dusre se mili. Par dono ne hi kuch kaha nahi. Veer ki pride aur attitude usse conversation strike karne se rok rahi thi. Alpha male instincts active the uske. Ab woh unn ladko me se nahi tha jo laundiyo ke peeche bhaag ke unki chaate.

Ladkiya khud-ba-khud uske paas aati thi. Uski pehchaan hi ab aisi thi.

Mike toh friendly tha hi. Usne hi baat shuru kii,

Mike : You are not going with them?

Mike ne pucha. Zaahir hai ki Zoey unke saath khadi hui thi. Par fir bhi woh abhi veer aur uske saath aa rahi thi.

Zoey : I trust you guys more than them.

Veer : !!!???

Mike : Hahaha~ I see! So that's how it is. Veer! I'm choosing this one.

Mike ne ek room ke darwaaze ke baahar rukte hue kaha.

Veer : Alright! I'll choose the one next to you.

Woh aage badha aur jese hi room ke baahar ruka woh toh uska dhyaan darwaazo aur room numbers pe gaya.

Veer : Hmm?

Darwaaze ki banawat alag kism ki thi. Rectangular Bars bane hue the darwaaze me.

'Iss Nightwalker ko golden bars ka itna shauk hai ki darwaaze par bhi bars banwa diye!? Haha~'

[Yeah!!!]

Jis prakaar se rectangular bars ek chocolate me hote hai. Kuch ussi prakaar darwaaze ka structure tha. Veer ne jese hi darwaaza khola usse aashcharya hua.

'Ohhhh~'

Darwaaza kaafi bhaari tha.

'Hmm? That's weird!'

[Room number?]

'Yeahhh!!! Pari!!! Mike ka room number mere se ek kam ya zyada hona chahiye. Uska room mere bagal se hi hai. Par uska room number toh kuch aur hi tha. Yaha ki numbering lagta badi hi ajeeb hai.'

[I agree master! Yaha ki kaun sii cheez ajeeb nahi hai? Fucking everything!]

'Hahahaha~ Ye baat bhi sahi hai.'

Zoey Veer ke peeche se nikalte hue aage gayi aur Veer ke bagal waale room me ghus gayi. Ghusne se pehle ek baar usne Veer ko zaroor dekha.

[Hehehe~ She's interested in you.]

'Ohhh shut up! Favourability tumne dekhi nahi kya? 4 thi.'

[Toh fir woh aapke saath kyu aayi? Woh bhi aapke bagal waale room me? *sniff *sniff* I smell curiosity here.]

'Hahaha~ Tum overthink kar rahi ho Pari. Usne kaha toh. Woh humpe zyada bharosa kar rahi hai. Aur dusri baat, mene pehle Mike ke bagal wala room le liya. Toh woh zaahir hai ki mere next wala hi room choose karegi. Bhala akele hoke woh humse dur waala room kyu lena chaahegi?'

[Hmm... But still! I can tell... I'm a girl too.]

'Naah!!!'

Veer ne apna bag andar room me rakha. Room accha tha. Par uske bawajood scary vibes de raha tha.

Bag rakh sabhi ussi hall me ikhatta hue. 15 minute baad milne ka decide kiya tha unhone.

Sabhi ekatr hue aur sabhi ne mansion me ghoomna shuru kiya ek saath. Mansion itna bada tha ki sabhi stabdh the ye jaanke.

Aur ghoomte ghoomte unki asli gaand tab phati jab unhe pata chala ki washroom ek hi tha poore Mansion me.

Woh bhi ground floor par. Woh sabhi toh upar wali floor par the. Upar se kitchen bhi ekdum end me tha. Pani ki supply toh yahi thi. Ye toh dikkat waali baat thi.

Ghoomte ghoomte woh ek aise hisse par pohuche jaha ajeebo gareeb paintings latki hui thi.



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Veer unn paintings ke nazdeek pohucha...

'These are weird!! Check!!!'



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*Ding*

[One of the paintings collected by Noah.]

'Noah?? Ye Noah kaun hai? Yaha ka maalik? Ya past me jo yaha tha?'

[I don't know master! Par aap bas apna dhyaan rakho. Don't care for Money or anything else. I want you to be safe. That's it.]

'Tum toh meri maa bann rahi ho Pari! Haha~'

[Because I love you. You know that. Aur aap jaante hi ho mera kya haal hota hai. Why don't you understand?]

'Wese...'

[Hmm?]

'Kya meri maa waqai meri chinta karti hai? Asli maa...'

[Don't get emotional. She definitely loves you.]

'Unki taraf se abhi tak koi response nahi aaya hai Pari. Unhe Pendant dikhane ke baad bhi.'

[Thoda intezaar kijiye. Woh zaroor aapko dhundhne aaengi.]

'Kaash....!'

Poora mansion ghoomne ke baad.

Neeche rakhi badi sii ghadi ka ghanta baj chuka tha.

*Ding Dong*

Ghadi se chidiya nikal kuku kuku kar rahi thi. 9 baj chuke the. Intercom se iss baar koi awaaz sunaayi nahi dii thi.

Aadhe ghante tak unlogo ne dhundha par kahi koi khazana nahi mila.

Zoey : We didn't try harder. What if money is hidden in the basement? Or maybe behind the paintings? You know what I mean?

Tommy : Definitely! We will do that in our next shift.

Aur yahi soch sabhi apne apne kamre me chale gaye.

Kyuki Nightwalker ke ghoomne ka samay shuru ho chuka tha.

Sab ne andar se apne room ko lock kar liya. Raat me woh ghoomta tha, tabhi uska naam pada tha. Nightwalker!!!

Khauf ke maare sab andar dubak gaye. Veer bistar par lete kuch soch raha tha jab achanak hi...

"Eeeeaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrgggggghhhhhhhh"

Ek raungte khade kar dene waali cheenkh poore mansion me goonj gayi.
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