Incest Baadshah ~ The Tales of Debauchery

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Kya Veer apni life behtar kar paega ya sab kuch kho baithega?

  • Veer Baadshah banega

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Update - 98 ~ The Nightwalker
Ab tak...

[You have established a name of yourself by catching the criminal splendidly. You have been rewarded 200 Fame Points]

'One target down!!! Na jaane kitne baaki hai abhi.'

[It's going to be really tough Master! Really tough!!!]

Pari ki baat se sehmat hoke, Veer chal diya Suhana ke sang car ki orr.

Pehla criminal toh asaani se pakad aa gaya. Par kya baaki bhi itni asaani se pakad me aane waale the? Ye toh waqt hi bataane waala tha.


Ab aage...

Duniya me harr tarah ki ghatnaaye ghatit ho rahi hoti hai. Chaahe khushi ke pal ho, ya naraazgi, kisi se gussa, toh kisi se maar peet. Kahi fame hai toh kahi crime. Kahi controversies toh kahi bhrashtachar.

Aur aise hi Vegas me kal raat ek crime karne waale criminal ko pakda gaya tha. Iss ghatna ko anjaam diya gaya tha.

Aur Iss Operation ka hero kaun tha? Beshaq, Veer!

Par kya khatra tal chuka tha? Hargiz nahi! Jim toh keval shatranj ke khel me ek pyaada tha. Woh pyaada, jo khel me sabse pehle maara jaata tha.

Unn pyaado ke peeche ek se ek dhurindhar baithe hue the. Aise log jinka naam sunn log kaanp uthate.

Ye baat Divya bhali bhaati jaanti thi. Usse ye abhaas ho gaya tha ki boht hi badi koi planning kar raha hai. Par sawaal ye tha usse itna sab kese pata chala?

Kya Divya kuch aur bhi baat chhupa rahi thi? Veer ne ye bhaanp liya tha. Divya kuch na kuch toh zaroor chhipa rahi thi. Par kya? Ye jaan'na baaki tha.

Tab tak Mumbai me kya ho raha tha ye bhi jaan'na zaroori tha.

Idhar Ragini subah ka naashta Suman aur Shweta ke sang banaane ke baad chup chaap apne ghar ki terrace par khadi hui thi.

Bechaari ka mann hi nahi lag raha tha kahi. Kese lagega? Veer ke jaane se pehle hi Ragini ne jee bhar ke usse chooma tha. Aur wo ehsaas usse paagal kar chuka tha.

Ab toh ek pal bhi uske bina jeena mushqil ho raha tha.

'Hey Bhagwaan!! Mene uske jaane se pehle hi kyu kiya wo sab? Ab toh mujhse raha bhi nahi jaa raha. Baar baar wahi yaad aa raha hai. Akhir roz roz kitni video call karu usse?'

Wo apne aap se baatein kar ek chinta me doob gayi. Roz roz video calls par wo Veer se kam se kam ek ghante to baat kar hi leti thi.

Veer ki yaad Ragini ko itni zyaada sataaegi usse iss baat ka bilkul andaaza nahi tha. Pichli baar jab Veer Egypt gaya tha ya Rajasthan. Tab Ragini ko itni yaad nahi aayi thi. Shayad isse hi dil-lagi kehte the!?

Wo yaha niraasha me khadi hui thi ki uske peeche se tabhi Suman baalti bhar kapde leke aayi aur upar taar me geele kapde felaane lagi.

Aahat paate hue Ragini ne mud ke Suman ko dekha aur firse muh ferr ke wo udaasi me doob gayi. Parantu Suman nahi. Uske chehre par ek kutil muskaan saji hui thi. Wo kapde zaroor fela rahi thi, par uski nazre Ragini ki peeth par hi gadi hui thi.

"Veer jii ko yaad kar rahi ho?"

Ragini ke kaano me Suman ki awaaz peeche se padi. Pal bhar ke liye wo hichkichaayi. Lekin jab usse dhyaan aaya ki Suman toh uski apni hi thi. Ghar ke sadasyo me se ek thi woh. Toh usne dheere se sarr haa me hila diya.

Suman (smiles) : Mein jaanti thi yahi baat hogi.

Ragini : Uski aadat jo ho gayi hai. Uski baatein sunn sunn ke din kese guzar jaata tha pata hi nahi chalta tha. College ke liye jab wo jaata tha toh saara samaan mein ready kar ke deti thi usse. Par uske jaane se din jese katt hi nahi rahe ab...

Suman : Hmm! Ye baat toh hai. Par chinta mat kariye. Veer jii jald hi laut aaenge.

Ragini : Haan! Par kya karu? Mann hai ki maanta nahi. Kherr! Aap bhi araam kar lo. Subah subah machine me itne kapde dhoye hai aaj aapne.

Kehte hue woh neeche jaane lagi, toh Suman ne dheemi sii awaaz me kaha,

"Keval aap hi nahi ho jiski raato ki neend haraam hui hai. Ghar me mere aur aapke alaawa bhi aur koi hai jo mujhse aur aap se bhi zyaada bechain hai... Fufufu~" wo khil-khilaayi.

Suman ki khuspusaahat sunn Ragini palti,

Ragini : Kuch kaha kya aapne?

Suman (smiles) : Hmm? Nahi! Kuch bhi toh nahi.

Ragini : Ohh! Shayad mere hi kaan baj rahe hai...

Kehte hue wo neeche chali gayi. Aur Suman idhar muskuraate hue kapde jhatkaar kar dubaara unhe felaane lagi.

Uske labo se muskaan gayab hone ka naam hi nahi le rahi thi. Na jaane kya soch rahi thi woh.

***

Wahi idhar Nidhi ke ghar me subah subah Juhi bawaal machaaye hue thi.

Shreya toh job ke liye nikal gayi thi. Par aaj dono Maa beti ne chhutti lii hui thi. Juhi ghar me bechaari Nidhi ko hila ke rakhi hui thi. Aur zidd pe zidd kar rahi thi,

Juhi : Maamu se baat karao pehle... Ni toh mein breakfast nahi khaungi...

Nidhi : Juhiiii~ Gandi baatein nahi karte. Bad manners hai na ye!? Mamma ne samjhaaya hai na aapko. Breakfast ke time zidd nahi karte... Chup chaap breakfast karo apna.

Juhi : Niiiiiiiiii~ Pehle maamu se baat karao!!!

Nidhi : Tumhaare maamu yaha nahi hai. Wo baahar gaye hai.

Juhi : Phone pe baat karao pehle... Ni khaungi mein warna...

Nidhi : Tum bhi na!!!! Hey Bhagwan! Kya karu iss ladki ka!? J-Juhi... Beta... Maamu busy honge... Unhe call karna sahi nahi.

Juhi : Maamu Juhi ke liye busy nahi hote kabhi... Pehle baat karao... Ni to mein ni khaungi... Maamu se mujhe chocolate mangaani hai...

Nidhi : Kal hi toh itni badi chocolate khaayi thi na? Ab aur nahi!!! Roz hi khaati ho tum. Daanto me cavity ho jaegi toh sab chidhaenge tumhe fir school me. Bolenge dekho Juhi ke toh daant kharaab ho gaye. Hassenge sab.... Fir mat aana mamma ke paas rote hue.

Juhi : Haan???

Nidhi : Haan!!!!

Juhi : Toh mein Nana jii ki tarah naye daant lagwa lungi. Jese unke daant nikal jaate hai na? Mere bhi doctor uncle nikaal ke new new daant laga denge.

Nidhi : Ugghhh!!!!! Ye ladki... J-Juhi!!! Tumhaare Nana jii ki batteesi nakli hai.

Juhi : Maamu se baat karaoooo!!!!

Nidhi (sighs) : Ye ladki aise nahi maanegi.

Ab toh phone lagaana hi tha. Aur kya hi kar sakti thi Nidhi? Usne phone laga ke seedha Juhi ko hi pakda diya. Kisi kaaran vash wo Veer se baat karne me hichkicha rahi thi.

Par ye pehle ki tarah naraazgi nahi thi. Kuch aur hi baat thi. Kuch alag sii baat...

Nidhi : Z-Zyaada lambi baat mat karna Juhi.

Juhi : Helllooooo???? Maaaaamuuuuuu~

Veer : Juhiii??? Kesi ho??

Juhi : Acchi hu...!!!!

Veer : School nahi gayi aaj?

Juhi : Aaj mamma aur mein dono nahi gaye. Hehehehe ~ Aaj chhutti...

Veer : Ohh!! Accha?? Aur tumhari mummy kidhar hai?

Nidhi ne phone jaan boojh ke loudspeaker par kar ke diya tha Juhi ko. Toh usse saari baatein sunaayi de rahi thi.

Juhi : Mamma yahi khadi hai.

Veer : Kya kar rahi hai? Bas khadi hi hai kya?

Juhi : Mamma mujhe daant rahi thi. Maamu mamma keh rahi hai ki chocolate khaane se daant kharaab ho jaate hai... Maamu... Aap chocolate laoge na mere liye?

Veer : Hahahahaha ~ Roz roz khaane se toh sach me daant kharab ho jaate hai. Hmm! Mein zaroor launga tumhaare liye chocolate.

Juhi : Badi waalii...

Nidhi : Juhi nahiiii!!! Badi chocolate nahi!!!

Veer : Hahaha~ Theek hai baba badi waali le ke aaunga. Aur tumhari mummy kyu bhadak rahi hai?

Juhi : Mamma roz aisa karti hai. Mamma maamu ko miss kar rahi thi... Aur keh rahi thi...

Nidhi : J-Juuuuuhhhhhiiiiiiiiii...

Iss se pehle ki nanhi Juhi aur raaz khol paati Nidhi ne forun hi uske haatho se phone chhina liya.

Nidhi : H-Hello!!??

Juhi ka apna kaam toh nikal hi gaya tha. Chocolate badi waali aane waali thi. Maamu se baat bhi ho gayi thi. Baccho ka mann wese hi chanchal hota hai. Ek jagah zyaada derr unka mann tikta kaha hai. Apna kaam nikalwaane ke baad wo TV chaalu kar apna favourite program dekhne me lag gayi. Aur sofe par ucchal naachne lagi.

Idhar uski Maa bechaari phone pakde awkwardly wahi khadi hui thi.

Veer : Hello... Ma'am!!

Nidhi : Mmm~

Veer : Kaisi hai aap?

Nidhi : M-Mein theek hu.

Bechaari Nidhi ki awaaz itni dheemi thi ki Veer ko dhang se sunaayi hi nahi dii pal bhar ke liye.

Veer : Aur Shreya jii kesi hai?

Nidhi : W-Wo bhi acchi hai. Office ke liye nikal gayi.

Veer : Accha!!!

Nidhi : T-Tum...

Veer : ???

Nidhi : Tum... Kab tak lautoge?

Veer (smiles) : Are you missing me?

Nidhi (blushes) : Wh-Who would??? Mein... Mein toh Juhi ke liye puch rahi thi. Wese bhi... Tum kaun sa college aate ho? Inn sab ke liye tumne kabhi dhyaan hi nahi diya. S-So who will miss you? I-I don't... Bas! Apni studies pe dhyaan do... Aur...

Veer : Hahahahahahahaha~

Nidhi : Wh-Whaatt? Hass kyu rahe ho?

Veer : Hass isliye raha hu ki itna safed jhooth jab aap bolti ho toh usse pakadne ki zaroorat hi nahi padti. Alag hi pata lag jaata hai. Aur... Yahi baatein aapko cute banaati hai.

Veer ki baat sunn Nidhi ke gaal surkh laal ho chale. Wo jawaab me kuch na boli.
Bas khamosh reh gayi.

Veer : Mujhe aane me abhi thoda samay lag sakta hai.

Nidhi : I-I see!!

Veer : Ek urgent call aa raha hai. Mein aapse baad me baat karta hu.

Nidhi : O-Okay!!

Aur Veer ne phone kaat diya.

Nidhi : B-Bye...!!!

Bechaara Veer Nidhi ka bye sunn hi nahi paaya. Ek lambi aah bharte hue Nidhi ne phone rakha. Juhi ko ek nazar dekha jo apna kaam nikalwa ke ekdum mazze me uchhal kood rahi thi. Kya hi Zindagi thi uski.

Aise pyaar lutaane waale maamu mile the usse. Shan bhar ke liye Nidhi ko jalan sii mehsoos hui. Par fir wo Juhi ke liye khush bhi ho gayi.

Gaal abhi bhi laal the uske. Mann ke vichaaro se baahar aane ke liye wk kitchen me bhaag gayi.

***

Veer waha Vegas me tha par uske khilaaf bil me ghuse saanp yaha haath par haath dhare nahi baithe the.

Chaahe Niharika ho, chaahe Pranjal ya chaahe Rajat. Teeno hi apni saazish ko anjaam dene ke liye sahi mauke ka intezaar kar rahe the.

"Yessssss~ Suck my clit bitchesss!!!!"

Harr baar ki tarah, Niharika washroom me thi. Neeche se poori nangi. Uska ek perr toilet seat par tha aur dusra neeche farsh par. Aur uski do slaves, uski chut chaatne me lagi hui thi.

Unn dono ke baalo ko kheech kar wo unka muh apni chut me daba rahi thi.

"Suck it!!!! Zorr se chaato kutiyo!!!! Zorr se!!! Aahhhhnnnn!!!! Mmmm~ Aise hi... Daana chabao... Haan!!! Yessssss~ Chusoooo chusoooo... Aur chusoooo mmmmm~"

Apni kamar matkaate hue wo apni geeli chut ko unke chehre par ragad rahi thi. Unki jeebh ko apne chut ke chhed me ghusa ke woh kamar hilaate jaa rahi thi.



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Kahi ek ladki ke muh me apni chut deti toh kahi dusri ke , toh kahi dono ko hi saath me chaatne kehti woh.

Par mann me uske kuch aur bhi chal raha tha. Jab se Veer ne uske dono chhedo ko choda tha. Tab se hi usse masturbation se wo santushti nahi mil paa rahi thi. Yaha tak ki lesbian sex me bhi usse wo maza nahi aa raha tha.

Aur iss baat se Niharika ko apne aap par itna gussa aa raha tha ki usse kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha ki kya kare. Woh ek aurat... Kese ek mard ke neeche aa sakti thi???? Par uska jism toh kuch aur hi maang raha tha.

Kheejte hue wo pareshaan ho chuki thi. Jab jab wo chut me ungli karti, ya apni slaves se apni chut chatwaati, Veer apna lund uske chhedo me daalte hue... uski woh chhavi uske mann me aa jaati. Aur nateeja?

Uski aankhein khul jaati, aur saari banaayi gayi uttejna gusse ke chalte kahi gaayab ho jaati.

"Fuuuuckkkk thisss....!!!! Urrrgghhhh!!!"

Aaj bhi wahi hua. Jab wo apne climax par lagbhag pohuch hi gayi thi. Tabhi, usse wo drishya yaad aa gaya, jab Veer uski chut me apna lund pel raha tha aur uska apna pati darwaaze ke theek baahar maujood uss se baat kar raha tha.

"Aaarggghhhhh!!!! I hate him soooo muchhh!!!!"

Yaad karte hi uski aankhein khul gayi gusse me par...

*Drip*

"H-Huhhhhh!!??? Ahhnnnnnnnnn ssssss~"

*Sqquiiiiiirtttttt*
*Sqquiiiiiirtttttt*

Uski chut kisi fuwwaare ki tarah khuli aur dherr saara paani bahaate hue unn do ladkiyo ke chehro ko bhigo diya.

"Wh-Whhaaaaattttt? Ahhnnnnnnnnn!!! This... This....!???"

Niharika ko vishvaas hi nahi ho raha tha. Wo jhar gayi??? Jese hi usse pata laga ki wo kya soch ke jhari... Uska badan kaanp utha.

"N-Nooo!!! It can't be!!!"

Wo jhari thi... Veer ko yaad karke. Uski chudaayi yaad karke. Bhale hi wo apne mann se kitna hi kyu na hate kare Veer se. Par ek aurat ka jism kabhi nahi jhooth bolega. Wahi hua...

Apne pati se chhup ke anjaan jawaan ladke se tabadtod chudaayi karwaana. Ye vichaar hi uske jism me ek aag laga diya tha. Kitna hi kyu na chidh le wo Veer se. Par chut ye nahi dekhti thi ki lund kiska hai.

Lund yadi mazboot ho, toh chut uske aage haar hi jaati hai. Niharika bhi haar chuki thi. Aur uski chut bhi.

"Nahiiiiii!!! Aisa hargiz nahi ho sakta.... Uss kameene ke saamne mein jhuk jau? H-Hargiz nahi!!!"

Aur fir usse wo drishya yaad aaya. Jab Veer ke mazboot haath uske baalo ko jakde hue the. Aur kese wo car ke andar usse pakad ke jhukaaya hua tha. Kese wo uske vishaal lund ko muh me bhar ke choos rahi thi. Kese Veer ki dusri slave Suman saare nazaare ko mazze se dekh rahi thi.

*Splllluuuurrrrtttttt*

*Drip* *Drip*

"Aaaaaahhhhhhhhhhnnnnnnnnn~"

Aur ek baar fir, uski chut ne apna pani chorr diya.

Niharika apni chut ko aankhein faade aur muh khole hairat me dekhne lagi. Aisa kese ho sakta tha bhala? Wo ek dominator thi. Submissive female nahi. Fir aisa kese ho sakta tha?

Kese uski chut itna pani bahaa rahi thi???

"I FUCKING HATE THISSS SO MUCCCH!!"

Usne zorr se chillaate hue apne haatho me lii hui apni panty dur fek dii.

"Dur hato kutiyo!!!!! GET FUCKING LOST!!!!"

Wo gurraayi!!! Aur apni dono hi slaves ko baahar bhaagne bol dii.

Uski dono slaves, jinme se ek Ayushi thi. Shreya ki colleague toh wahi dusri ka naam tha Ishani. Dono majboori ke chalte Niharika ki daasi bani hui thi.

Par dono iss baat se anjaan thi, ki unki ye maalkin khud kisi mard ki daasi banti jaa rahi thi.

Niharika haafte hue toilet seat par baith gayi. Chut ka haal behaal tha. Paani chorr chorr ke wo poori geeli ho chuki thi. Aur lund lene ke liye tadap rahi thi.

"Uggghhhhh!!!!" Usne zorr zorr se ungli kari aur kuch hi shan bhar me punah ek baar....

*Splurrrrtttttttt*

*Sqquiiiiiirtttttt*

Wo fir jharr gayi.

"I... *huff* I must do something! *huff* Mujhe uske... Mujhe uske paas se wo video haasil karni hi hogi. Yesssss!!! *huff* Veer! Khud ko boht smart samajhte ho??? *huff* Mene already tumhaare phone me keylogger install kar rakha hai. *huff* Hahahaha~"

Sochte hue ek khatarnak muskaan uske chehre par sajj gayi.

"Jald hi... *huff* Jald hi tum mere perro ki neeche hoge...!!"

***

Vegas
Evening ~ 7:14 PM

Subah Veer ki baat jab Nidhi se ho rahi thi. Tab usse ek urgent call aa gaya tha beech me. Jo kisi aur ka nahi, Karan ka tha.

Ek khushkhabri thi.

Veer ne apna paisa jis Vatsala Steel Industries ke shares par lagaaya tha. Uske daam badh chuke the.

Karan ko toh vishvaas hi nahi ho raha tha. Jo company itne loss me chal rahi thi woh akhir achanak se upar kese uth sakti thi? Aur yadi uthi bhi toh Veer ko pehle se itna bharosa kese tha company pe? Usse kese pata chala?

Iska raaz toh Veer hi jaanta tha. Stock Master!!! Ekmaatr skill jo uske business me uski madad ke liye thi.

Veer ne baithe baithe hi laakho rupaaye ka profit kar liya tha. Aur ye lakh jald hi crore me tabdeel hone waale the.

Aaj ki unki toli waapas se investigation department ki orr jaa rahi thi.

Sab pehle ki hi tarah baithe hue the. Driver seat par Nik, uske bagal se Suhana. Aur peeche Divya sang Veer.

Kal ki hui vardaat ke bawajood, Divya apne haatho par patti baandh ke kaam kar rahi thi.

Baat hi kuch aisi thi. Police ne jab Jim ki acchi tarah khaatirdaari kari toh kayi ghanto ke baad jaake Jim ne apna muh khola.

Aur usne kuch details dii thi. Next criminal ki...

Jese hi wo jankaari crime investigation waalo ko pata chali, woh jaan ke unki rooh kaanp gayi.

Divya aur Nik bhi unme se ek the. Din ka daura toh unka chhaan been karne me hi guzar gaya tha. Woh Daniel ki post mortem reports bhi check karne gaye the. Toh wahi crime scene ke aas paas bhi jitna ho sakta tha utna pata lagaya. Par haath kuch na aaya.

Aur Jim ki dii gayi jaankaari ke chalte, uski pushti karne ke liye investigation department ne Connor ko bheja tha.

Woh bhi ek detective tha. Ek senior detective.

Anubhav me koi kami nahi thi uske paas. Sahi nirnay, sahi samay pe lena bakhubi aata tha usse.

Beshaq, wo maut ke kuye me tha ek prakaar se. Par ye hi toh uska kaam tha.

Lekin, jis baat ka darr tha wahi hua. Divya aur Nik ko urgent call aaya achanak8 department se ki woh jaha kahi bhi hai, jald se jald department pohuche.

Isliye, sabhi firse uss orr jaa rahe the.

Peeche ki seat par Divya aaj Veer ko alag nazro se dekh rahi thi. Kal Veer ne points badhaaye the. Appearance ke bhi. Zaahir tha uski twacha aur khili khili nazar aa rahi thi. Divya isliye aaj usse badi hi jigyaasa se nihaar rahi thi.

Kabhi wo sharaarti dhang me kuch soch muskuraati toh kabhi Veer ko dekh usse aankh maar deti.

Eka-ek Veer ki nazar jab Divya par gayi toh usne dekha ki woh uski orr thoda jhukte hue apna ang pradarshan kar rahi thi.

Uske gore badan ka cleavage saaf saaf jhalak raha tha. Veer ko woh smile karte hue dekh rahi thi.

Aur fir badi hi dheemi awaaz me boli,

Divya (smiles) : You can touch them.

Veer : Huh??

[I will fuckiinngggg killll herrrr!!!! (ʘᴗʘ✿) Maaassttteeerrrr~ Don't touch her!!]

Divya ki harqat Veer toh dekh hi raha tha acche se par saamne driver seat par baitha Nik bhi mirror se sab kuch dekh chuka tha.

Woh sunn toh nahi paaya ki uski patni ne kya kaha par woh itna zaroor jaan gaya tha ki Divya Veer ke saath flirt kar rahi thi. Filhaal woh kuch nahi bola. Par aankhein gada ke unko dekhta raha toh majbooran Divya ko apni flirting rokni padi.

Unhe nahi pata tha ki department ki taraf se urgently kyu bulaaya gaya hai. Isliye abhi woh aage aane waale jhatke ke pehle thoda relaxed the.

Gaadi ruki, sabhi uss se utre aur andar gaye.

Veer aur Suhana ko baahar hi rok diya gaya tha. Department ke Head ke cabin me keval aur keval Nik aur Divya hi gaye the.

***

*Click*

Darwaaza band hua aur dono pati patni, department ke Head yaani ki Nolan ke saamne baithe hue the.

Nik : What happened ?

Nolan : Look for yourself.

Kehte hue usne dono ke sarr par ek ek headphones pehna diya. Saamne computer screen thi.

Aur connection seedha Conner se tha.

Conner gaya hua tha ek Mansion me. Nik aur Divya dono hi Connor ki shaqal dekh sakte the. Camera connected tha. Aur Audio bhi.

Unn dono ko Connor ki saare baatein sunaayi de rahi thi.

Nolan : It's not live. It happened just a few minutes ago.

Aur fir unhone dekha...

Connor kuch keh raha tha. Uska chehra poora paseene se bheega hua tha. Chehre se ekdum rang udaa hua tha. Bhaybhheet poora!!! Lambi lambi saans lete hue haaf raha tha woh.

Uski haalat dekh aisa lag raha tha jese usne koi bhoot saamne dekh liya ho.

Aur wo bolna shuru kiya,


"I WILL FUCKING DIE!!!!! I'M TRAPPED!!!! I'M TRAPPED!!!! *huff* H-Help me!"

"This is much bigger than we thought of... It's insane... We all will die here!!! Listen to me!!! *huff* This is live killing!!!! FUCKING LIVE KILLING!!! There are few of us. They too participated here. But we are being recorded!! IT'S FUCKING DARK WEB!!!!"

"H-HE WILL KILL ONE OF US!!! REMEMBER! HIS NAME IS... *********** PEOPLE ARE PAYING TO WATCH US GETTING KILLED!!! IT'S A FUCKING HOUSE OF KILLERS. DANIEL WAS GODDAMN RIGHT!! *huff* *huff* THERE'S AIN'T A SINGLE ONE. *huff* P-PLEASE!!! GUYS!!! SEND ME THE HELP!!! SEND ME THE HELP!!!! I DON'T WANNA DIE HERE!!!!"

"H-Huhhhhhh????"


Par tabhi...

Connor kisi jagah dekh ghabraaya. Uski saasein atak gayi. Woh chillaaya,


"WHAT'S...? WHAT'S HAPPENING? N-Nooooo!!?!!!"

Aur agle hi pal...

*Thud* *Thud* *Thud*

Uske haatho se camera gira...

Cheekhne chillaane ki awaaz aane lagi. Connor ki cheenkh waha aur Nik aur Divya ke headphones me goonjne lagi.

Aur fir camera me jo Nik aur Divya ne dekha. Usse dekh dono ka badan thanda pad gaya. Maano jese saanp soongh gaya.

Divya apna muh dhak zorr zorr se bilakhte hue rone lagi. Uske poora badan ke ruye khade ho gaye.

Darr ke maare uska shareer kaanpne laga. Woh ghabraate hue daud kar baahar nikal ke aayi.

Idhar baahar Veer aur Suhana kareeb 1 ghante se unn dono ke baahar aane ka intezaar kar rahe the.

Veer : 1 ghante ke upar ho chuka hai. What are they doing inside?

Suhana : I have no clue!

Veer : Ohhh! Wo aa gaye...!

Suhana : Hmm??

Suhana ne jab Veer ki nazro ko follow kar uss orr dekha toh paaya ki Divya ghabraate hue baahar nikli aur seedha apne ghutno ke bal gir padi.

Suhana : Divyyyaaaaa!!!!

Dono Veer aur Suhana daudate bhaagte hue uske paas aaye aur usse sambhaal ke uthaaya.

Suhana : Divya kya hua????

Par Divya kuch na boli. Usse sambhalne me thoda samay lag gaya.

Jab uski haalat thodi theek hui toh usne rote hue bataaya,

Divya (cries) : C-Connor is dead!!!!

Suhana : Whaaaaaaaaatttttt?

Divya : Connor is dead Suhana.... He died!!!!

Suhana : ...

Divya : I must... I must show you something!!!

Wo aasu poch uth ke andar gayi. Aur usne jo dekha, uska ek paper par printout nikaalne lagi computer screen ko sahi timestamp par rok ke.

Idhar Nolan Divya ko aata dekh apni baat rakha,

Nolan : Who decided to send him alone there?

Nik : That... It was decided in the meeting in the morning.

Nolan : That's what I'm asking... Who voted for him to go there alone?

Nik : Th-That's....

Nolan (chillaate hue) : ANSWER MEEE!!!!

Divya : W-We all supported it. C-Connor too opted for it.

Nolan : YOU DUMB IDIOTSSSS!!!!!!! WE LOST HIM!!! WE LOST OUR ANOTHER PERSON!!!!!! I DON'T CARE WHAT YOU GUYS WILL DO NOW. BUT NEXT... I WANT YOU GUYS TO SEND SOMEONE FROM YOUR TEAM NOW MY SO CALLED PRIVATE DETECTIVES.... WE WON'T BE SENDING OUR DEPARTMENT'S DETECTIVES NOW!!!!!!! YOU GET THAT....??

Nik : W-We... We do!!!

Nolan : YOU CAN LEAVE!!!!

Divya jese hi baahar aayi, woh Suhana aur Veer ko haath pakad apne cabin me le gayi.

Divya : The second criminal...!!!!!

Veer : Huh???

Suhana : !!????

Aur agle hi pal... Usne table par ek paper patakte hue rakha. Ye wahi printout tha...



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Usse dekhte hi Suhana ka badan kaanp utha.

Saamne printout me jo tha, wo tha...

Ek wanted paper!!!!

Divya : And his name is...

Veer : ?????


"THE NIGHTWALKER!!!!"
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Update 97 & 98...

So, the dance of death has started in Vegas & Veer is going to have a good time out there, I guess :D ... Jim the Slippery naamak us criminal ko pakadne se Veer ko points aur actual fame ke maamle mein faayeda to beshaq hua hai but jo cheez yahaan dekhne laayak thi, wo ye ki Jim was the weakest of all... He was at the lowest level of all those criminals out there... Aisa hone ke bawajood bhi wo kayi baar Police aur Department ke haathon se nikal chuka tha, yahaan to Veer aur Beowulf's Blessings ke kaaran wo pakda gaya, anyatha Divya ne is baar bhi bewakoofi to kar hi thi... It simply shows that it's gonna be really tough for Veer to survive here in Vegas :eyes2: ... But one thing, that I'm sure about is that, jab Veer Vegas se baahar niklega, tab hum ek naye hi insaan se ru – baroo honge, obviously yahaan missions solve karne ke liye Veer kuchh skills khareedega, stats improve karega aur shayad kuchh cards bhi use praapt hon, but in sabse alag use jo milega wo hoga experience of surviving in such crisis... Aise haalat se nikalne ke baad, people like Pranjal, Rajat & Karunesh won't pose to be the same threat for Veer, as they are right now... :declare:

(Meanwhile, I just want to mention the way you're building up the character of Veer... Starting from Pari's words when he entered in Veer's body, “Maine aaj tak itne kharaab stats kisi ke nahin dekhe", to this point, Veer's character has grown in a way, which I've really loved... He's stronger, more intelligent, more witty & obviously he's more matured... One of the finest build – ups I've ever read on this forum of the main protagonist, not only talking about Incest genre here, but about all the stories I've read... :applause:)

Coming back to the Update, Jim ko pakadne ka sabse bada laabh Divya ki favourability ke roop mein mila hai Veer ko... Fixed at 50, ab yahaan se ye favourability kewal oopar ki hi taraf jaa sakti hai, neeche nahin aane waali... And the kind of interest Divya is showing in Veer, I'm actually expecting this 50 to be around 90–95 when Veer will be leaving Vegas... Iske atirikt 3,000 points aur saath hi fame points bhi mile hain Veer ko, is samay Points to wholesale mein pade hain Veer ke paas, aur in donon updates se jitna main “House Of Killers" ko samajh paaya hoon, Veer ko bohot zarurat padne waali hai in points ki...

Let's just combine what Divya understood about the lines of Daniel & what Connor mentioned in the video message... House of Killers, mere khyal mein ek aisa khel jise hum maut ka khel bhi keh sakte hain... Shayad koyi psycho hai jo sabhi mukhya criminals (of Vegas) ko kisi tarah ke tasks de raha hai... Tasks to kill some people? :think: Connor ne aur Daniel ne, donon ne ek baat similar kahi thi, ki yahaan kewal ek nahi hai balki ek se bohot zyada hain... Shikaar ki baat kar rahe the wo donon ya fir shikaari ki? Shayad us ghar, jise Connor ne House Of Killers kaha, wahaan apne manoranjan ke liye koyi shakhs, kayi saare Connor jaise bandon ko laata hai (ya wo log khud jaate hain), aur uske baad shayad ek game ki tarah unhe wahaan survive karna hota hai..?

Ya fir iska ulta, wahaan gaye sabhi logon ko maarne ka task un criminals ko diya jaata hai, and they might get something as a reward after completing the task... Pehli baat, Divya – Nik ne kaha ki Connor ko wahaan bheja gaya tha, means they knew the location..? Ya fir Connor ne khud us sthaan ko khoja tha? Divya aur Suhana donon hi kuchh jaanti hain jo Veer se chhupa hai... Nightwalker ki photo dekh kar Suhana ka reaction, mujhe to yahi lagta hai ki Suhana ko jaankari hai is shakhs ke baare mein... I hope Veer jaldi hi donon ke bheetar chhupi un baaton ko baahar nikaal lega...

Divya ne shayad Nightwalker ko hi dekha hoga Video mein, jiske kaaran wo itna dar gayi thi, shayad wo Connor ki hatya kar raha hoga us waqt... Beharhal, Daniel ka jo message Divya ne decode kiya tha, us se mujhe aisa sandeh ho raha hai ki Daniel ho ya Connor, donon hi apni marzi se is jaal mein fanse... He was talking about being greedy, and the bad thoughts, shayad kisi laalach ke chalte wo donon is trap mein ghuse aur fir nikal nahin paaye..? :dazed:

Ab Nolan ne saaf kar diya hai ki Department ki taraf se kisi ko bhi nahin bheja jaane waala, arthat ab Divya – Nik ki agency se koyi shakhs wahaan jaayega... I guess, Veer... Khair, Nik ka nazariya bhi shayad Veer ke prati ab kuchh badalne laga hoga... Jaisa maine pehle bhi kaha hai, ki Nik mere sandeh ke daayre mein hai, to shayad wo Veer ke liye aage chalkar dangerous bhi saabit ho sakta hai... Khair, Divya uske saamne hi Veer se flirt kar rahi thi, aur ek baar nahin kayi baar, I think use maaloom hai Divya ki aadaton ke baare mein... Waise bhi Suhana ke prati Nik ka ravaiya kuchh bhinn nahin tha..? :dontknow:

Divya... Veer mein use ek aisa shakhs dikhayi de raha hai jiske sang khelne mein wo asamarth rahi hai... Apni aadaton se majboor Divya ke liye ye shayad aisa pehla mauka hai jab uski tricks kisi launde ko todne mein nakaamyab rahin hain... Secondly, Veer ki history, Slogan – Aatish ke saath, third, Jim waala maamla... Sab kuchh add on hokar Divya ka interest Veer mein badhane waala hain... I think ab Veer ek challenge ban jaayega Divya ke liye, jise fansate – fansate, wo kahin khud hi na fans jaaye... Waise bhi, she seems to be caught in the charm of Veer, especially after that effect of 20 points in appearance... Ang pradarshan ka wo karyakaram to at least yahi darshata hai :lol:...

Idhar Bhavana ki behen jaisi saheli Purvi ka bhi aagman ho gaya hai kahani mein... Ye doodh ka rishta :whistle:... Purvi ki baaton se yahi laga ki wo bhi Tej aur Veer se kaafi attached hai, shayad wo in donon ko apne hi bachon ki tarah pyaar karti hai aur yahi lagta hai ki uski dosti Bhavana ke saath kaafi gehri hai... Bhavana, I think abhi tak shayad wo faisle lene mein maahir nahin huyi hai... Veer ko khud se door karna, ispar yadi charcha ki jaaye to... Firstly, koyi bhi reason raha ho, uska Veer se door hone ko, Mere khyal mein wo kabhi bhi apne us reason ko justify nahin kar paayegi... Yahin par ye sawaal bhi khada hota hai ki jab wo itne saal apne bete se door rahi, uski khoj khabar lene ki koshish tak usne nahin ki (She could've done it with the help of someone like Purvi), ab Bhavana se zyada kaun jaanta hoga Brijesh ko, iske bawajood bhi usne Veer ki existence ko jaan ne ka kabhi koyi prayas nahin kiya... Fir ab aisi kya aafat aan padi ki wo Mumbai chali aayi..? Veer Egypt gaya aur usne wo locket dekh liya, sirf isiliye wo yahaan Mumbai aa gayi... Jaane kise moorkh banane ka prayas kar rahi hai ye mahila, she literally seems to be confused af...

Tej ko bhi usne kabhi uske bhai ke baare mein nahin bataya... Aur jo reason usne Purvi ke saamne rakha wo baseless hai, kyonki Tej pehle hi Veer ke baare mein jaanti hai, par usne koyi bhi waisa kadam nahi uthaya hai jiski aashanka Bhavana jata rahi thi... Khair, ab wo Veer ke baare mein jaan ne ki koshish karegi, I think College jaakar wo pata kare shayad, Nidhi... :think: Kaera sang Veer ki photo bhi chhapi thi na akhbaar mein, jab wo Delhi gaya tha..? Wo bhi ek zariya ban sakti hai... Idhar, shayad Tej bhi apne level par Veer ke baare mein jaan ne ka prayas zaroor kare, aur ho na ho, mujhe yahi lagta hai ki Tej, Bhavana se pehle hi Veer ke baare mein jaan jaayegi... Purvi aur Bhavana ki baatein uske liye bhi ek jhatka hi rahi hongi par main jitna abhi tak samjha hoon, she's really intelligent, and I think she'll handle everything nicely...

Idhar, Ragini ka dil hai ki maanta nahin :haha:... After what she did with Veer before he left for Vegas, uska intezar aur bhi kathin ho gaya hai... I think, jab Veer Vegas se lautega to turant halaal ho jaayega... Suman ki smile ka reason yahi lagta hai ki wo jaan chuki hai ki Ragini aur Veer ka relation kahaan pahunch gaya hai aur jis doosre shakhs ki baat usne ki, jo Veer ke intezaar mein hai, I think wo Shweta hai, par ek baat zaroor jaan na chahunga ki Suman ki favourability nearly 150 hai, aise mein uske andar ek jealousy factor bhi expect kar raha tha main, kya wo jealous ho rahi hai Ragini aur Veer ki gatividhiyon se ya apne Maalik ko ek naya maal multe dekh kar wo khush hai :evillaugh:...

:rip: Niharika... Iska bhi intezam Veer hi karega lautne par... Waise Veer nahin to Veer ke dwara ki gayi iski thukayi ki yaad mein baawli to hi chuki hai ye, par abhi bhi Niharika ke andar uska ghamand aur ego bhara hua hai, she's still forcing Ayushi and that other girl to serve her... Veer ke phone mein kuchh install kiya hai usne, I guess Veer ko bhi pata hoga is baare mein, yadi nahin to bas yahi umeed hai ki us video ki aur koyi copy bana rakhi ho Veer ne, jo uske phone mein na hokar kahin aur ho...

Nidhi is missing Veer too, Juhi ki baat bhale hi usne beech mein kaat di ho, par jo sudden rise uski favourability mein aaya hai wahi kaafi hai bataane ke liye ki shayad wo saara time ab Veer ke hi vishya mein sochti rehti hai... Juhi, again, she's just amazing... Her words, her cuteness, her antics, everything makes her the most loveable character of this story... :love3:

Khair, ab Mumbai mein bhi garmi badhne waali hai... Bhavana aur Tej, donon hi Veer ko dhoondne niklengi, uske baare mein jaan ne ke liye niklengi... To shayad kahin na kahin Bhavana, Brijesh ke parivar se bhi takra jaaye, waise to adhik logon ko uska chehra shayad pata bhi na ho, par jinhe maaloom hai,unka kya reaction hoga Bhavana ko Mumbai mein paakar... Niharika ki planning aur jo kuchh Pranjal plan kar raha hoga, uska kya impact padega, Veer ki absence mein... Nidhi aur Shreya par khatra badh sakta hai...

Most importantly, Vegas, wahaan Veer ki kismat kya kya dikhayegi use... Kya wo is Nightwalker naam ke aadmi ko maat de paayega, ya fir haar ke roop mein ek sabak milega Veer ko, Divya aur Veer ke beech panap rahi cheezen, kya rang dikhayengi aage, ye jaan na bhi interesting rehne waala hai...

Donon hi updates bohot hi khubsurat the bhai... You're nicely introducing more suspense & thrill in the story, the concept of this House Of Killers, is really outstanding, and the way you're executing it, that's appreciable... The closeness of this stort to reality & logic, despite a thing like Pari existing in the story, makes this story more special... So, I hope that you'll continue the way you're going on, and definitely this House Of Killers is going to be insane... :good:

Outstanding Updates Bhai & Waiting For Next...
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Update - 98 ~ The Nightwalker
Ab tak...

[You have established a name of yourself by catching the criminal splendidly. You have been rewarded 200 Fame Points]

'One target down!!! Na jaane kitne baaki hai abhi.'

[It's going to be really tough Master! Really tough!!!]

Pari ki baat se sehmat hoke, Veer chal diya Suhana ke sang car ki orr.

Pehla criminal toh asaani se pakad aa gaya. Par kya baaki bhi itni asaani se pakad me aane waale the? Ye toh waqt hi bataane waala tha.


Ab aage...

Duniya me harr tarah ki ghatnaaye ghatit ho rahi hoti hai. Chaahe khushi ke pal ho, ya naraazgi, kisi se gussa, toh kisi se maar peet. Kahi fame hai toh kahi crime. Kahi controversies toh kahi bhrashtachar.

Aur aise hi Vegas me kal raat ek crime karne waale criminal ko pakda gaya tha. Iss ghatna ko anjaam diya gaya tha.

Aur Iss Operation ka hero kaun tha? Beshaq, Veer!

Par kya khatra tal chuka tha? Hargiz nahi! Jim toh keval shatranj ke khel me ek pyaada tha. Woh pyaada, jo khel me sabse pehle maara jaata tha.

Unn pyaado ke peeche ek se ek dhurindhar baithe hue the. Aise log jinka naam sunn log kaanp uthate.

Ye baat Divya bhali bhaati jaanti thi. Usse ye abhaas ho gaya tha ki boht hi badi koi planning kar raha hai. Par sawaal ye tha usse itna sab kese pata chala?

Kya Divya kuch aur bhi baat chhupa rahi thi? Veer ne ye bhaanp liya tha. Divya kuch na kuch toh zaroor chhipa rahi thi. Par kya? Ye jaan'na baaki tha.

Tab tak Mumbai me kya ho raha tha ye bhi jaan'na zaroori tha.

Idhar Ragini subah ka naashta Suman aur Shweta ke sang banaane ke baad chup chaap apne ghar ki terrace par khadi hui thi.

Bechaari ka mann hi nahi lag raha tha kahi. Kese lagega? Veer ke jaane se pehle hi Ragini ne jee bhar ke usse chooma tha. Aur wo ehsaas usse paagal kar chuka tha.

Ab toh ek pal bhi uske bina jeena mushqil ho raha tha.

'Hey Bhagwaan!! Mene uske jaane se pehle hi kyu kiya wo sab? Ab toh mujhse raha bhi nahi jaa raha. Baar baar wahi yaad aa raha hai. Akhir roz roz kitni video call karu usse?'

Wo apne aap se baatein kar ek chinta me doob gayi. Roz roz video calls par wo Veer se kam se kam ek ghante to baat kar hi leti thi.

Veer ki yaad Ragini ko itni zyaada sataaegi usse iss baat ka bilkul andaaza nahi tha. Pichli baar jab Veer Egypt gaya tha ya Rajasthan. Tab Ragini ko itni yaad nahi aayi thi. Shayad isse hi dil-lagi kehte the!?

Wo yaha niraasha me khadi hui thi ki uske peeche se tabhi Suman baalti bhar kapde leke aayi aur upar taar me geele kapde felaane lagi.

Aahat paate hue Ragini ne mud ke Suman ko dekha aur firse muh ferr ke wo udaasi me doob gayi. Parantu Suman nahi. Uske chehre par ek kutil muskaan saji hui thi. Wo kapde zaroor fela rahi thi, par uski nazre Ragini ki peeth par hi gadi hui thi.

"Veer jii ko yaad kar rahi ho?"

Ragini ke kaano me Suman ki awaaz peeche se padi. Pal bhar ke liye wo hichkichaayi. Lekin jab usse dhyaan aaya ki Suman toh uski apni hi thi. Ghar ke sadasyo me se ek thi woh. Toh usne dheere se sarr haa me hila diya.

Suman (smiles) : Mein jaanti thi yahi baat hogi.

Ragini : Uski aadat jo ho gayi hai. Uski baatein sunn sunn ke din kese guzar jaata tha pata hi nahi chalta tha. College ke liye jab wo jaata tha toh saara samaan mein ready kar ke deti thi usse. Par uske jaane se din jese katt hi nahi rahe ab...

Suman : Hmm! Ye baat toh hai. Par chinta mat kariye. Veer jii jald hi laut aaenge.

Ragini : Haan! Par kya karu? Mann hai ki maanta nahi. Kherr! Aap bhi araam kar lo. Subah subah machine me itne kapde dhoye hai aaj aapne.

Kehte hue woh neeche jaane lagi, toh Suman ne dheemi sii awaaz me kaha,

"Keval aap hi nahi ho jiski raato ki neend haraam hui hai. Ghar me mere aur aapke alaawa bhi aur koi hai jo mujhse aur aap se bhi zyaada bechain hai... Fufufu~" wo khil-khilaayi.

Suman ki khuspusaahat sunn Ragini palti,

Ragini : Kuch kaha kya aapne?

Suman (smiles) : Hmm? Nahi! Kuch bhi toh nahi.

Ragini : Ohh! Shayad mere hi kaan baj rahe hai...

Kehte hue wo neeche chali gayi. Aur Suman idhar muskuraate hue kapde jhatkaar kar dubaara unhe felaane lagi.

Uske labo se muskaan gayab hone ka naam hi nahi le rahi thi. Na jaane kya soch rahi thi woh.

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Wahi idhar Nidhi ke ghar me subah subah Juhi bawaal machaaye hue thi.

Shreya toh job ke liye nikal gayi thi. Par aaj dono Maa beti ne chhutti lii hui thi. Juhi ghar me bechaari Nidhi ko hila ke rakhi hui thi. Aur zidd pe zidd kar rahi thi,

Juhi : Maamu se baat karao pehle... Ni toh mein breakfast nahi khaungi...

Nidhi : Juhiiii~ Gandi baatein nahi karte. Bad manners hai na ye!? Mamma ne samjhaaya hai na aapko. Breakfast ke time zidd nahi karte... Chup chaap breakfast karo apna.

Juhi : Niiiiiiiiii~ Pehle maamu se baat karao!!!

Nidhi : Tumhaare maamu yaha nahi hai. Wo baahar gaye hai.

Juhi : Phone pe baat karao pehle... Ni khaungi mein warna...

Nidhi : Tum bhi na!!!! Hey Bhagwan! Kya karu iss ladki ka!? J-Juhi... Beta... Maamu busy honge... Unhe call karna sahi nahi.

Juhi : Maamu Juhi ke liye busy nahi hote kabhi... Pehle baat karao... Ni to mein ni khaungi... Maamu se mujhe chocolate mangaani hai...

Nidhi : Kal hi toh itni badi chocolate khaayi thi na? Ab aur nahi!!! Roz hi khaati ho tum. Daanto me cavity ho jaegi toh sab chidhaenge tumhe fir school me. Bolenge dekho Juhi ke toh daant kharaab ho gaye. Hassenge sab.... Fir mat aana mamma ke paas rote hue.

Juhi : Haan???

Nidhi : Haan!!!!

Juhi : Toh mein Nana jii ki tarah naye daant lagwa lungi. Jese unke daant nikal jaate hai na? Mere bhi doctor uncle nikaal ke new new daant laga denge.

Nidhi : Ugghhh!!!!! Ye ladki... J-Juhi!!! Tumhaare Nana jii ki batteesi nakli hai.

Juhi : Maamu se baat karaoooo!!!!

Nidhi (sighs) : Ye ladki aise nahi maanegi.

Ab toh phone lagaana hi tha. Aur kya hi kar sakti thi Nidhi? Usne phone laga ke seedha Juhi ko hi pakda diya. Kisi kaaran vash wo Veer se baat karne me hichkicha rahi thi.

Par ye pehle ki tarah naraazgi nahi thi. Kuch aur hi baat thi. Kuch alag sii baat...

Nidhi : Z-Zyaada lambi baat mat karna Juhi.

Juhi : Helllooooo???? Maaaaamuuuuuu~

Veer : Juhiii??? Kesi ho??

Juhi : Acchi hu...!!!!

Veer : School nahi gayi aaj?

Juhi : Aaj mamma aur mein dono nahi gaye. Hehehehe ~ Aaj chhutti...

Veer : Ohh!! Accha?? Aur tumhari mummy kidhar hai?

Nidhi ne phone jaan boojh ke loudspeaker par kar ke diya tha Juhi ko. Toh usse saari baatein sunaayi de rahi thi.

Juhi : Mamma yahi khadi hai.

Veer : Kya kar rahi hai? Bas khadi hi hai kya?

Juhi : Mamma mujhe daant rahi thi. Maamu mamma keh rahi hai ki chocolate khaane se daant kharaab ho jaate hai... Maamu... Aap chocolate laoge na mere liye?

Veer : Hahahahaha ~ Roz roz khaane se toh sach me daant kharab ho jaate hai. Hmm! Mein zaroor launga tumhaare liye chocolate.

Juhi : Badi waalii...

Nidhi : Juhi nahiiii!!! Badi chocolate nahi!!!

Veer : Hahaha~ Theek hai baba badi waali le ke aaunga. Aur tumhari mummy kyu bhadak rahi hai?

Juhi : Mamma roz aisa karti hai. Mamma maamu ko miss kar rahi thi... Aur keh rahi thi...

Nidhi : J-Juuuuuhhhhhiiiiiiiiii...

Iss se pehle ki nanhi Juhi aur raaz khol paati Nidhi ne forun hi uske haatho se phone chhina liya.

Nidhi : H-Hello!!??

Juhi ka apna kaam toh nikal hi gaya tha. Chocolate badi waali aane waali thi. Maamu se baat bhi ho gayi thi. Baccho ka mann wese hi chanchal hota hai. Ek jagah zyaada derr unka mann tikta kaha hai. Apna kaam nikalwaane ke baad wo TV chaalu kar apna favourite program dekhne me lag gayi. Aur sofe par ucchal naachne lagi.

Idhar uski Maa bechaari phone pakde awkwardly wahi khadi hui thi.

Veer : Hello... Ma'am!!

Nidhi : Mmm~

Veer : Kaisi hai aap?

Nidhi : M-Mein theek hu.

Bechaari Nidhi ki awaaz itni dheemi thi ki Veer ko dhang se sunaayi hi nahi dii pal bhar ke liye.

Veer : Aur Shreya jii kesi hai?

Nidhi : W-Wo bhi acchi hai. Office ke liye nikal gayi.

Veer : Accha!!!

Nidhi : T-Tum...

Veer : ???

Nidhi : Tum... Kab tak lautoge?

Veer (smiles) : Are you missing me?

Nidhi (blushes) : Wh-Who would??? Mein... Mein toh Juhi ke liye puch rahi thi. Wese bhi... Tum kaun sa college aate ho? Inn sab ke liye tumne kabhi dhyaan hi nahi diya. S-So who will miss you? I-I don't... Bas! Apni studies pe dhyaan do... Aur...

Veer : Hahahahahahahaha~

Nidhi : Wh-Whaatt? Hass kyu rahe ho?

Veer : Hass isliye raha hu ki itna safed jhooth jab aap bolti ho toh usse pakadne ki zaroorat hi nahi padti. Alag hi pata lag jaata hai. Aur... Yahi baatein aapko cute banaati hai.

Veer ki baat sunn Nidhi ke gaal surkh laal ho chale. Wo jawaab me kuch na boli.
Bas khamosh reh gayi.

Veer : Mujhe aane me abhi thoda samay lag sakta hai.

Nidhi : I-I see!!

Veer : Ek urgent call aa raha hai. Mein aapse baad me baat karta hu.

Nidhi : O-Okay!!

Aur Veer ne phone kaat diya.

Nidhi : B-Bye...!!!

Bechaara Veer Nidhi ka bye sunn hi nahi paaya. Ek lambi aah bharte hue Nidhi ne phone rakha. Juhi ko ek nazar dekha jo apna kaam nikalwa ke ekdum mazze me uchhal kood rahi thi. Kya hi Zindagi thi uski.

Aise pyaar lutaane waale maamu mile the usse. Shan bhar ke liye Nidhi ko jalan sii mehsoos hui. Par fir wo Juhi ke liye khush bhi ho gayi.

Gaal abhi bhi laal the uske. Mann ke vichaaro se baahar aane ke liye wk kitchen me bhaag gayi.

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Veer waha Vegas me tha par uske khilaaf bil me ghuse saanp yaha haath par haath dhare nahi baithe the.

Chaahe Niharika ho, chaahe Pranjal ya chaahe Rajat. Teeno hi apni saazish ko anjaam dene ke liye sahi mauke ka intezaar kar rahe the.

"Yessssss~ Suck my clit bitchesss!!!!"

Harr baar ki tarah, Niharika washroom me thi. Neeche se poori nangi. Uska ek perr toilet seat par tha aur dusra neeche farsh par. Aur uski do slaves, uski chut chaatne me lagi hui thi.

Unn dono ke baalo ko kheech kar wo unka muh apni chut me daba rahi thi.

"Suck it!!!! Zorr se chaato kutiyo!!!! Zorr se!!! Aahhhhnnnn!!!! Mmmm~ Aise hi... Daana chabao... Haan!!! Yessssss~ Chusoooo chusoooo... Aur chusoooo mmmmm~"

Apni kamar matkaate hue wo apni geeli chut ko unke chehre par ragad rahi thi. Unki jeebh ko apne chut ke chhed me ghusa ke woh kamar hilaate jaa rahi thi.



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Kahi ek ladki ke muh me apni chut deti toh kahi dusri ke , toh kahi dono ko hi saath me chaatne kehti woh.

Par mann me uske kuch aur bhi chal raha tha. Jab se Veer ne uske dono chhedo ko choda tha. Tab se hi usse masturbation se wo santushti nahi mil paa rahi thi. Yaha tak ki lesbian sex me bhi usse wo maza nahi aa raha tha.

Aur iss baat se Niharika ko apne aap par itna gussa aa raha tha ki usse kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha ki kya kare. Woh ek aurat... Kese ek mard ke neeche aa sakti thi???? Par uska jism toh kuch aur hi maang raha tha.

Kheejte hue wo pareshaan ho chuki thi. Jab jab wo chut me ungli karti, ya apni slaves se apni chut chatwaati, Veer apna lund uske chhedo me daalte hue... uski woh chhavi uske mann me aa jaati. Aur nateeja?

Uski aankhein khul jaati, aur saari banaayi gayi uttejna gusse ke chalte kahi gaayab ho jaati.

"Fuuuuckkkk thisss....!!!! Urrrgghhhh!!!"

Aaj bhi wahi hua. Jab wo apne climax par lagbhag pohuch hi gayi thi. Tabhi, usse wo drishya yaad aa gaya, jab Veer uski chut me apna lund pel raha tha aur uska apna pati darwaaze ke theek baahar maujood uss se baat kar raha tha.

"Aaarggghhhhh!!!! I hate him soooo muchhh!!!!"

Yaad karte hi uski aankhein khul gayi gusse me par...

*Drip*

"H-Huhhhhh!!??? Ahhnnnnnnnnn ssssss~"

*Sqquiiiiiirtttttt*
*Sqquiiiiiirtttttt*

Uski chut kisi fuwwaare ki tarah khuli aur dherr saara paani bahaate hue unn do ladkiyo ke chehro ko bhigo diya.

"Wh-Whhaaaaattttt? Ahhnnnnnnnnn!!! This... This....!???"

Niharika ko vishvaas hi nahi ho raha tha. Wo jhar gayi??? Jese hi usse pata laga ki wo kya soch ke jhari... Uska badan kaanp utha.

"N-Nooo!!! It can't be!!!"

Wo jhari thi... Veer ko yaad karke. Uski chudaayi yaad karke. Bhale hi wo apne mann se kitna hi kyu na hate kare Veer se. Par ek aurat ka jism kabhi nahi jhooth bolega. Wahi hua...

Apne pati se chhup ke anjaan jawaan ladke se tabadtod chudaayi karwaana. Ye vichaar hi uske jism me ek aag laga diya tha. Kitna hi kyu na chidh le wo Veer se. Par chut ye nahi dekhti thi ki lund kiska hai.

Lund yadi mazboot ho, toh chut uske aage haar hi jaati hai. Niharika bhi haar chuki thi. Aur uski chut bhi.

"Nahiiiiii!!! Aisa hargiz nahi ho sakta.... Uss kameene ke saamne mein jhuk jau? H-Hargiz nahi!!!"

Aur fir usse wo drishya yaad aaya. Jab Veer ke mazboot haath uske baalo ko jakde hue the. Aur kese wo car ke andar usse pakad ke jhukaaya hua tha. Kese wo uske vishaal lund ko muh me bhar ke choos rahi thi. Kese Veer ki dusri slave Suman saare nazaare ko mazze se dekh rahi thi.

*Splllluuuurrrrtttttt*

*Drip* *Drip*

"Aaaaaahhhhhhhhhhnnnnnnnnn~"

Aur ek baar fir, uski chut ne apna pani chorr diya.

Niharika apni chut ko aankhein faade aur muh khole hairat me dekhne lagi. Aisa kese ho sakta tha bhala? Wo ek dominator thi. Submissive female nahi. Fir aisa kese ho sakta tha?

Kese uski chut itna pani bahaa rahi thi???

"I FUCKING HATE THISSS SO MUCCCH!!"

Usne zorr se chillaate hue apne haatho me lii hui apni panty dur fek dii.

"Dur hato kutiyo!!!!! GET FUCKING LOST!!!!"

Wo gurraayi!!! Aur apni dono hi slaves ko baahar bhaagne bol dii.

Uski dono slaves, jinme se ek Ayushi thi. Shreya ki colleague toh wahi dusri ka naam tha Ishani. Dono majboori ke chalte Niharika ki daasi bani hui thi.

Par dono iss baat se anjaan thi, ki unki ye maalkin khud kisi mard ki daasi banti jaa rahi thi.

Niharika haafte hue toilet seat par baith gayi. Chut ka haal behaal tha. Paani chorr chorr ke wo poori geeli ho chuki thi. Aur lund lene ke liye tadap rahi thi.

"Uggghhhhh!!!!" Usne zorr zorr se ungli kari aur kuch hi shan bhar me punah ek baar....

*Splurrrrtttttttt*

*Sqquiiiiiirtttttt*

Wo fir jharr gayi.

"I... *huff* I must do something! *huff* Mujhe uske... Mujhe uske paas se wo video haasil karni hi hogi. Yesssss!!! *huff* Veer! Khud ko boht smart samajhte ho??? *huff* Mene already tumhaare phone me keylogger install kar rakha hai. *huff* Hahahaha~"

Sochte hue ek khatarnak muskaan uske chehre par sajj gayi.

"Jald hi... *huff* Jald hi tum mere perro ki neeche hoge...!!"

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Subah Veer ki baat jab Nidhi se ho rahi thi. Tab usse ek urgent call aa gaya tha beech me. Jo kisi aur ka nahi, Karan ka tha.

Ek khushkhabri thi.

Veer ne apna paisa jis Vatsala Steel Industries ke shares par lagaaya tha. Uske daam badh chuke the.

Karan ko toh vishvaas hi nahi ho raha tha. Jo company itne loss me chal rahi thi woh akhir achanak se upar kese uth sakti thi? Aur yadi uthi bhi toh Veer ko pehle se itna bharosa kese tha company pe? Usse kese pata chala?

Iska raaz toh Veer hi jaanta tha. Stock Master!!! Ekmaatr skill jo uske business me uski madad ke liye thi.

Veer ne baithe baithe hi laakho rupaaye ka profit kar liya tha. Aur ye lakh jald hi crore me tabdeel hone waale the.

Aaj ki unki toli waapas se investigation department ki orr jaa rahi thi.

Sab pehle ki hi tarah baithe hue the. Driver seat par Nik, uske bagal se Suhana. Aur peeche Divya sang Veer.

Kal ki hui vardaat ke bawajood, Divya apne haatho par patti baandh ke kaam kar rahi thi.

Baat hi kuch aisi thi. Police ne jab Jim ki acchi tarah khaatirdaari kari toh kayi ghanto ke baad jaake Jim ne apna muh khola.

Aur usne kuch details dii thi. Next criminal ki...

Jese hi wo jankaari crime investigation waalo ko pata chali, woh jaan ke unki rooh kaanp gayi.

Divya aur Nik bhi unme se ek the. Din ka daura toh unka chhaan been karne me hi guzar gaya tha. Woh Daniel ki post mortem reports bhi check karne gaye the. Toh wahi crime scene ke aas paas bhi jitna ho sakta tha utna pata lagaya. Par haath kuch na aaya.

Aur Jim ki dii gayi jaankaari ke chalte, uski pushti karne ke liye investigation department ne Connor ko bheja tha.

Woh bhi ek detective tha. Ek senior detective.

Anubhav me koi kami nahi thi uske paas. Sahi nirnay, sahi samay pe lena bakhubi aata tha usse.

Beshaq, wo maut ke kuye me tha ek prakaar se. Par ye hi toh uska kaam tha.

Lekin, jis baat ka darr tha wahi hua. Divya aur Nik ko urgent call aaya achanak8 department se ki woh jaha kahi bhi hai, jald se jald department pohuche.

Isliye, sabhi firse uss orr jaa rahe the.

Peeche ki seat par Divya aaj Veer ko alag nazro se dekh rahi thi. Kal Veer ne points badhaaye the. Appearance ke bhi. Zaahir tha uski twacha aur khili khili nazar aa rahi thi. Divya isliye aaj usse badi hi jigyaasa se nihaar rahi thi.

Kabhi wo sharaarti dhang me kuch soch muskuraati toh kabhi Veer ko dekh usse aankh maar deti.

Eka-ek Veer ki nazar jab Divya par gayi toh usne dekha ki woh uski orr thoda jhukte hue apna ang pradarshan kar rahi thi.

Uske gore badan ka cleavage saaf saaf jhalak raha tha. Veer ko woh smile karte hue dekh rahi thi.

Aur fir badi hi dheemi awaaz me boli,

Divya (smiles) : You can touch them.

Veer : Huh??

[I will fuckiinngggg killll herrrr!!!! (ʘᴗʘ✿) Maaassttteeerrrr~ Don't touch her!!]

Divya ki harqat Veer toh dekh hi raha tha acche se par saamne driver seat par baitha Nik bhi mirror se sab kuch dekh chuka tha.

Woh sunn toh nahi paaya ki uski patni ne kya kaha par woh itna zaroor jaan gaya tha ki Divya Veer ke saath flirt kar rahi thi. Filhaal woh kuch nahi bola. Par aankhein gada ke unko dekhta raha toh majbooran Divya ko apni flirting rokni padi.

Unhe nahi pata tha ki department ki taraf se urgently kyu bulaaya gaya hai. Isliye abhi woh aage aane waale jhatke ke pehle thoda relaxed the.

Gaadi ruki, sabhi uss se utre aur andar gaye.

Veer aur Suhana ko baahar hi rok diya gaya tha. Department ke Head ke cabin me keval aur keval Nik aur Divya hi gaye the.

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*Click*

Darwaaza band hua aur dono pati patni, department ke Head yaani ki Nolan ke saamne baithe hue the.

Nik : What happened ?

Nolan : Look for yourself.

Kehte hue usne dono ke sarr par ek ek headphones pehna diya. Saamne computer screen thi.

Aur connection seedha Conner se tha.

Conner gaya hua tha ek Mansion me. Nik aur Divya dono hi Connor ki shaqal dekh sakte the. Camera connected tha. Aur Audio bhi.

Unn dono ko Connor ki saare baatein sunaayi de rahi thi.

Nolan : It's not live. It happened just a few minutes ago.

Aur fir unhone dekha...

Connor kuch keh raha tha. Uska chehra poora paseene se bheega hua tha. Chehre se ekdum rang udaa hua tha. Bhaybhheet poora!!! Lambi lambi saans lete hue haaf raha tha woh.

Uski haalat dekh aisa lag raha tha jese usne koi bhoot saamne dekh liya ho.

Aur wo bolna shuru kiya,


"I WILL FUCKING DIE!!!!! I'M TRAPPED!!!! I'M TRAPPED!!!! *huff* H-Help me!"

"This is much bigger than we thought of... It's insane... We all will die here!!! Listen to me!!! *huff* This is live killing!!!! FUCKING LIVE KILLING!!! There are few of us. They too participated here. But we are being recorded!! IT'S FUCKING DARK WEB!!!!"

"H-HE WILL KILL ONE OF US!!! REMEMBER! HIS NAME IS... *********** PEOPLE ARE PAYING TO WATCH US GETTING KILLED!!! IT'S A FUCKING HOUSE OF KILLERS. DANIEL WAS GODDAMN RIGHT!! *huff* *huff* THERE'S AIN'T A SINGLE ONE. *huff* P-PLEASE!!! GUYS!!! SEND ME THE HELP!!! SEND ME THE HELP!!!! I DON'T WANNA DIE HERE!!!!"

"H-Huhhhhhh????"


Par tabhi...

Connor kisi jagah dekh ghabraaya. Uski saasein atak gayi. Woh chillaaya,


"WHAT'S...? WHAT'S HAPPENING? N-Nooooo!!?!!!"

Aur agle hi pal...

*Thud* *Thud* *Thud*

Uske haatho se camera gira...

Cheekhne chillaane ki awaaz aane lagi. Connor ki cheenkh waha aur Nik aur Divya ke headphones me goonjne lagi.

Aur fir camera me jo Nik aur Divya ne dekha. Usse dekh dono ka badan thanda pad gaya. Maano jese saanp soongh gaya.

Divya apna muh dhak zorr zorr se bilakhte hue rone lagi. Uske poora badan ke ruye khade ho gaye.

Darr ke maare uska shareer kaanpne laga. Woh ghabraate hue daud kar baahar nikal ke aayi.

Idhar baahar Veer aur Suhana kareeb 1 ghante se unn dono ke baahar aane ka intezaar kar rahe the.

Veer : 1 ghante ke upar ho chuka hai. What are they doing inside?

Suhana : I have no clue!

Veer : Ohhh! Wo aa gaye...!

Suhana : Hmm??

Suhana ne jab Veer ki nazro ko follow kar uss orr dekha toh paaya ki Divya ghabraate hue baahar nikli aur seedha apne ghutno ke bal gir padi.

Suhana : Divyyyaaaaa!!!!

Dono Veer aur Suhana daudate bhaagte hue uske paas aaye aur usse sambhaal ke uthaaya.

Suhana : Divya kya hua????

Par Divya kuch na boli. Usse sambhalne me thoda samay lag gaya.

Jab uski haalat thodi theek hui toh usne rote hue bataaya,

Divya (cries) : C-Connor is dead!!!!

Suhana : Whaaaaaaaaatttttt?

Divya : Connor is dead Suhana.... He died!!!!

Suhana : ...

Divya : I must... I must show you something!!!

Wo aasu poch uth ke andar gayi. Aur usne jo dekha, uska ek paper par printout nikaalne lagi computer screen ko sahi timestamp par rok ke.

Idhar Nolan Divya ko aata dekh apni baat rakha,

Nolan : Who decided to send him alone there?

Nik : That... It was decided in the meeting in the morning.

Nolan : That's what I'm asking... Who voted for him to go there alone?

Nik : Th-That's....

Nolan (chillaate hue) : ANSWER MEEE!!!!

Divya : W-We all supported it. C-Connor too opted for it.

Nolan : YOU DUMB IDIOTSSSS!!!!!!! WE LOST HIM!!! WE LOST OUR ANOTHER PERSON!!!!!! I DON'T CARE WHAT YOU GUYS WILL DO NOW. BUT NEXT... I WANT YOU GUYS TO SEND SOMEONE FROM YOUR TEAM NOW MY SO CALLED PRIVATE DETECTIVES.... WE WON'T BE SENDING OUR DEPARTMENT'S DETECTIVES NOW!!!!!!! YOU GET THAT....??

Nik : W-We... We do!!!

Nolan : YOU CAN LEAVE!!!!

Divya jese hi baahar aayi, woh Suhana aur Veer ko haath pakad apne cabin me le gayi.

Divya : The second criminal...!!!!!

Veer : Huh???

Suhana : !!????

Aur agle hi pal... Usne table par ek paper patakte hue rakha. Ye wahi printout tha...



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Usse dekhte hi Suhana ka badan kaanp utha.

Saamne printout me jo tha, wo tha...

Ek wanted paper!!!!

Divya : And his name is...

Veer : ?????


"THE NIGHTWALKER!!!!"
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Aaj ke liye itna hi guys!
Samay samay par mein Mumbai ka zikr bhi dikhaunga. Baaki, like thokne ka aur revos rakhne ka. Ye sab banaane me mehnat lagti hai.

Dhanyavaad! ✨
Wahhh ek aur dhamakedar update.Lakin mai ek baat kahna cahunga bhai bura mat maniyega lakin ye update mujhe Is Arc ke baki Updates jitna utna jaandar nahi laga. Haa wo alag baat hai ki is Update ka aage ke story me ak important role hai. Lakin fir bhi is Updates me mujhe kuch bate hi bs achi lagi.
Pahli baat jo achi lagi mujhe wo tha Juhi wala conversation. She is too cute nd such a doll. Jb bhi aap juhi ko le ke ke koi bhi scene likhte ho wo bhut acha likhte ho jisase wo hme bikul apni aakho ke samne dekh rahe hai aisa feel hota hai.
Dusri baat is update ki ye achi lagi ki veer ko apne 2nd dusman ke bare me kuch hint mil gaya hai. Jo ki phle wale se bhi kafi jyada khatarnak hone wala hai.
Aur ab to police wale ne bhi kah diya hai ki unko koi aadmi aise kaam ke liye nahi jayega. Matlb ab in jasuso ko direct kud hi jana padega hr jagah. Jo ki phle se ab kafi jyada risky ho gaya hai.
Well dekhte hai next update me kya kya bawal hone wala hai.
 

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Okay! To sabse pehle main ye batana chahungi ki Sir...
Mujhe pata tha update late aaega. 🤣
Taunt nahi kar rahi hu... Bas main bata rahi hu...
To mne pehle hi around 11 pe alarm laga diya tha 2 baje ka. 🤣

Uske baad 2 baje main uthi. Update padha... And let me tell you one thing. The moment I reached the last part and read that "The NIGHTWALKER" name. And then saw the criminal's look... I got goosebumps.

Mazak nahi kar rahi hu. I legit got goosebumps... :scared:
Writer easily humour daal sakta h story me, sad scenes daal sakta h. Par mere according toughest thing to achieve is... When a reader gets goosebumps.

Ye mere according bohut hi tough cheez hoti h achieve karne k liye. For that... Hats off Sir!!! ❣️ Aap itni mehnat kar k ye sari pic edit karte ho, hamare liye banate ho. Aap k jesa itna dedicated writer mne nahi dekha yaha. Stories to sabhi likhte h, par itna dedication koi nahi deta. You are amazing Sir! 🖤

(Porn wale gif ki baat nahi karungi main... 🤣 Ahem ahem ahem... That was sensual. 😝)

Hmmm... Continuing...

Connor bhi maara gaya. Ye sab ho kya raha hai baba? :what1: Pehle bechara Daniel aur ab connor? Aur video me zaroor nik and divya ne kuch horror dekha h. Something really terrifying. Maybe Connor ki death live dekhi ho.

because connor ne video me kaha tha ki... He will kill one of us. We are being watched... Kuch aisa hi kaha tha usne. Dark web!!!! I'm guessing someone is watching them getting killed live... 😨😨😨

Divya ne kuch zarur pata laga lia h ... She's not telling anyone. Suhana kis vajah se dar gayi? Was it because she knew the Nightwalker? Or was it because she got scared looking that picture? Mujhe nahi lagt Suhana Nightwalker se familiar h ... Because Nightwalker ka naam to abhi house of the killers me samne aaya h... Iss se pehle shayd unhe iss baare me nahi pata tha. Warna Nik aur divya ek baar me pehchaan jaate... Connor ko batane ki zaroorat nhi padti ...


Aur ye connor ko waha ka address kese mila? :what1: Kya jim ne detail dii? Kyuki update me ye baat mention thi. Maybe he exposed him. Par jim sirf NIGHTWALKER ko hi kyu janta h? Baki kisi ko kyu nahi? Wait.... Are they connected to each other? 😨😨 Something bigger is going on??? Jo hamare dimag ke upar se jaa raha h???

Leaving that... Juhiiiiiiiii!!!! :kiss1: My cutest little darling!!! I just love her sooo muchhh!!!! :love: She's the best!!! THE BEST!!!

Jab usne kaha ki wo nana ji ki tarah nakli new new daat lagwa legi... I laughed so hard... 🤣🤣🤣🤣
main bhi bachpan me aisa hi karti thi. Meri nani ji ko nakli daat lage hue the. To main puchti thi mummy se ki ye nani ke daat kese nikal jaate h??? 🤣🤣🤣

juhi ne mujhe bachpan ki yaad dila dii. So cute 💕

Next Ragini ji!!! She's missing Veer!!! Aur karlo uske jaane se pehle kuchi kuchi kuu... 🤣🤣🤣

Kya zarurat thi uss time karne ki? Arre baba jab aa jata Veer tab kar leti. Ab jhelo... 🤣
Suman ko shayad sab pata lag chuka h... Aur wo I think Shweta k baare me bhi janti h...
she might have seen shweta going in Veer's room!!!! Righttttt???? :what1:

Hmm... Niharika... ABhi bhi ego me h... She thought she was a dominator but baby you are wrong. You were the submissive female since the beginning. You just didn't know about it.... :girlmad:

One question... What is this keylogger??? Niharika ne kaha ki keylogger install kiya h Veer k phone me... Is it some type of app??? Wait!!! Is it for hacking???? Omggggg... 😨😨😨

Ant me apne abhi Arohi kavya kaera sonia inka scenes nahi dikhaya h... Par ek update me sab kuch dikhana impossible h... Fir bhi apne kaafi alag alag jagah k scenes dikhaye... For that I really appreciate you. 💫

I'm waiting for Tejal's approach. Kese wo Veer ko search karegi. Arohi's time with Veer. Final villian ki koi jhalak ... :hide2: Suhana ka past... Ava ka appearance :wooow: And tons of other things...

Aaj k liye bas itna hi guys...
likes thokne ka aur comments karne ka... 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
sorrrrryy I copied your style... Jab yaha kaafi dusre writers ye kar sakte h to main kyu nahi??? 🤣🤣😝

Next update ka wait h ab Sir... Safe rahiye... Health par dhyan dijiye. Aur aise hi likhte rahiye ... Hum sabhi aap par acche acche comments ki varsha karte rahenge... 😝
Take care... ❤️❤️❤️
Aap ne to update ke level kaa replay likh dia....
 

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Okay! To sabse pehle main ye batana chahungi ki Sir...
Mujhe pata tha update late aaega. 🤣
Taunt nahi kar rahi hu... Bas main bata rahi hu...
To mne pehle hi around 11 pe alarm laga diya tha 2 baje ka. 🤣

Uske baad 2 baje main uthi. Update padha... And let me tell you one thing. The moment I reached the last part and read that "The NIGHTWALKER" name. And then saw the criminal's look... I got goosebumps.

Mazak nahi kar rahi hu. I legit got goosebumps... :scared:
Writer easily humour daal sakta h story me, sad scenes daal sakta h. Par mere according toughest thing to achieve is... When a reader gets goosebumps.

Ye mere according bohut hi tough cheez hoti h achieve karne k liye. For that... Hats off Sir!!! ❣️ Aap itni mehnat kar k ye sari pic edit karte ho, hamare liye banate ho. Aap k jesa itna dedicated writer mne nahi dekha yaha. Stories to sabhi likhte h, par itna dedication koi nahi deta. You are amazing Sir! 🖤

(Porn wale gif ki baat nahi karungi main... 🤣 Ahem ahem ahem... That was sensual. 😝)

Hmmm... Continuing...

Connor bhi maara gaya. Ye sab ho kya raha hai baba? :what1: Pehle bechara Daniel aur ab connor? Aur video me zaroor nik and divya ne kuch horror dekha h. Something really terrifying. Maybe Connor ki death live dekhi ho.

because connor ne video me kaha tha ki... He will kill one of us. We are being watched... Kuch aisa hi kaha tha usne. Dark web!!!! I'm guessing someone is watching them getting killed live... 😨😨😨

Divya ne kuch zarur pata laga lia h ... She's not telling anyone. Suhana kis vajah se dar gayi? Was it because she knew the Nightwalker? Or was it because she got scared looking that picture? Mujhe nahi lagt Suhana Nightwalker se familiar h ... Because Nightwalker ka naam to abhi house of the killers me samne aaya h... Iss se pehle shayd unhe iss baare me nahi pata tha. Warna Nik aur divya ek baar me pehchaan jaate... Connor ko batane ki zaroorat nhi padti ...


Aur ye connor ko waha ka address kese mila? :what1: Kya jim ne detail dii? Kyuki update me ye baat mention thi. Maybe he exposed him. Par jim sirf NIGHTWALKER ko hi kyu janta h? Baki kisi ko kyu nahi? Wait.... Are they connected to each other? 😨😨 Something bigger is going on??? Jo hamare dimag ke upar se jaa raha h???

Leaving that... Juhiiiiiiiii!!!! :kiss1: My cutest little darling!!! I just love her sooo muchhh!!!! :love: She's the best!!! THE BEST!!!

Jab usne kaha ki wo nana ji ki tarah nakli new new daat lagwa legi... I laughed so hard... 🤣🤣🤣🤣
main bhi bachpan me aisa hi karti thi. Meri nani ji ko nakli daat lage hue the. To main puchti thi mummy se ki ye nani ke daat kese nikal jaate h??? 🤣🤣🤣

juhi ne mujhe bachpan ki yaad dila dii. So cute 💕

Next Ragini ji!!! She's missing Veer!!! Aur karlo uske jaane se pehle kuchi kuchi kuu... 🤣🤣🤣

Kya zarurat thi uss time karne ki? Arre baba jab aa jata Veer tab kar leti. Ab jhelo... 🤣
Suman ko shayad sab pata lag chuka h... Aur wo I think Shweta k baare me bhi janti h...
she might have seen shweta going in Veer's room!!!! Righttttt???? :what1:

Hmm... Niharika... ABhi bhi ego me h... She thought she was a dominator but baby you are wrong. You were the submissive female since the beginning. You just didn't know about it.... :girlmad:

One question... What is this keylogger??? Niharika ne kaha ki keylogger install kiya h Veer k phone me... Is it some type of app??? Wait!!! Is it for hacking???? Omggggg... 😨😨😨

Ant me apne abhi Arohi kavya kaera sonia inka scenes nahi dikhaya h... Par ek update me sab kuch dikhana impossible h... Fir bhi apne kaafi alag alag jagah k scenes dikhaye... For that I really appreciate you. 💫

I'm waiting for Tejal's approach. Kese wo Veer ko search karegi. Arohi's time with Veer. Final villian ki koi jhalak ... :hide2: Suhana ka past... Ava ka appearance :wooow: And tons of other things...

Aaj k liye bas itna hi guys...
likes thokne ka aur comments karne ka... 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
sorrrrryy I copied your style... Jab yaha kaafi dusre writers ye kar sakte h to main kyu nahi??? 🤣🤣😝

Next update ka wait h ab Sir... Safe rahiye... Health par dhyan dijiye. Aur aise hi likhte rahiye ... Hum sabhi aap par acche acche comments ki varsha karte rahenge... 😝
Take care... ❤️❤️❤️
Wohwww... Easy girl, take a breathe n say all is well😂...just control ur emotions a bit😅...but I'm really surprised that aap apna syllabus kaafi dhyan se cover krti h.. U talked a lot.. Well well well...also I knw n I agree that inke jaisa writer mne ni dekha xforum pe, he deserves all these revos n appreciations that he's getting all the time when he uploads a update..surely he's the best..then coming to you..seems like u became AC of him.. Right 😉😂.. Well gud to knw that real talent gets appreciation.. Lots of love to the writer n to all the readers of this story as well..i wish k ye story zda se zda logo tk phoche..👍🙏❤️
 
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