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Romance Aur Ek Prem Kahani (COMPLETED)

Casinar

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Car jiss waqt budhe baba wale dargah ke taraf jaa rahe the tab, Abhay jiss onnchaayi par kaam kar raha tha woh car ke left side par paaya jata tha. Aur aguey ke left wale seat par Saleem bhai baithe the aur Iqbal drive kar raha tha. Sakeena piche wale seat par baithi thi apni ammi ji ke saath. Kachcha rasta tha dhool se bhare aur car ke guzarne se bahot sare mitti ke dhool udh rahe the. Aur upar jahan Abhay kaam kar raha tha wahan drilling machine aur pathar todne wale machine ke shor aur wahan bhi bahot sare dhool udhte dikh rahe the….

Uss jagah se car guzar gaya jahan se Abhay aur dusre mazdooron ko niche se ate jaate car, bus, ya trucks dikhaayi dete the. Wahan se guzar kar hi darga tak pohonchne ka raasta paye jaate the. Upar se kuch mazdooron ne car ko guzarte dekha magar uss waqt Abhi apne kaandhe par ek bada sa pathar liye dam ke border par rakhne jaa raha tha to uss ko kuch nahin dikha. To zaahir hai ke Saleem bhai ko bhi kuch nazar nahin aya halaan ke woh upar ke taraf dekhte huwe Iqbal se kaha, “Lagta hai koyi dam ban raha hai idhar, iss kade dhoop mein dekho yeh mazdoor keise jhulass rahe hein aur kitna milta hoga inn logon ko, kewal kuch rupaya.” Iqbal drive kar raha tha iss liye sirf ek jhalak dekha nazar utha kar upar ke taraf aur weh log chale gaye dargah ke taraf…..

Budhe baba se sab mile aur baba ne duwaein ki, taaviz bana kar diya aur chand gulaab ke patiyon par kuch padhkar phoonka aur ussko pani mein milakar peenee ko kaha. Phir baba ne Quraan ki chand ayatein padhi aur Fateha padha. Koyi 45 minutes ke baad weh log wahan se nikle baba se ijaazat lete huwe. Magar kisi ne Abhay ke bare mein baba se nahin poocha. Iss liye nahin poocha ke wahan ke sheher mein hi jab Saleem bhai keh rahe the itne door to Abhi nahin aya hoga aur phir kissi ne bhi nahin dekha kabhi ussko uss taraf. Iqbal ka mann tha poochne ko baba se magar kyunke Saleem bhai ne weisa kaha tha uss sheher mein jahan unn logon ne aakhri photo chipkaya, to woh sochkar Iqbal ne bhi socha Abhi ka wahan tak ajana mumkin nahin hoga.

Wahan se ek ghante ke baad weh log nikle aur Saleem bhai ne drive karna chaha, to usski biwi aguey baithne gayi apne shawhar ke bagal mein aur Iqbal aur Sakeena piche wale seat par ashikon ke gun gaane ko baithe! To Saleem bhai drive karne lage aur car uss jagah ponhcha jahan Abhi upar kaam kar raha tha. To ab car ke lautne samaye woh oonchaayi wali jagah car ke right mein tha aur right mein Sakeena baithi thi aur left mein Iqbal. Magar Saleem bhai kyun ke drive kar rahe the to woh right mein paye gaye drive karte huwe, usski lambhi dhadi, sar par pagri, aur woh tha hi eisa insaan ke koyi bhi ussko door se pehchaan le….. thik jab car wahan ponhcha jahan Seema bus mein se utarti thi aur Abhi upar se ussko dekhta tha, uss jagah par do, teen gaye road cross kar rahe the aur saleem bhai ko brake lagana pada aur uss ne horn bhi bajaya…. Iss liye ke horn baja to upar se Abhi ne niche dekha raaste ke or…. Aur usski nazar seedha Saleem bhai par gaya… uss waqt Abhi ke haath mein ek chota sa hal jeisa kuch tha jiss se woh mitti ko ek baste mein bhar raha tha, uss hal ko upar uthaaye huwe Abhi Salim bhai ko dekhta raha, usske pasine se mitti mile huwe the maathey pe aur jab ussne apna maatha poncha to usska maatha aur bhi ganda ho gaya….. Saleem bhai ruka huwa tha aur unn jaanwaron ko raasta paar karne ke liye wait kar raha tha…. Do gaye sadak paar kar chuke the ek reh gaya beech raaste par jo nahin hil bhi raha tha….

Abhay ne hal ko niche rakha aur usske enkhon ke saamne se udhte huwe mitti ke dhool ko apne haathon se hatate huwe ek do kadam niche gaya ghaur se car ke driver ko dekhte huwe….usske dil ke dhadkanon ka raftaar badh rahe the aur woh ek ek kar ke upar se seedhiyan utarta gaya, seediyan jo mitti aur pathar ko kaat kar kaaligari se banaya gaya tha uss onnchaayi se neeche raaste tak…. Sirf do chaar kadam niche ponhcha tha Abhi ke gaye paar chala gaya aur Saleem bhai ne first gear lagaya phir second aur gaadi aguey jaane lage….. Abhi hadbadate huwe tez kadmon ke raaftaar badhate huwe upar se niche utar hi raha tha aur car jaane laga, tab tak car mein se kyun ke sakeena right mein thi to ussne upar ke taraf dekha, to ussko ek daadhi wala aadmi niche ate huwe dikhaayi diya magar woh to Abhi ko nahin pehchaanti thi…… udhar Abhi hampte huwe khada hokar car ko jate huwe dekhta raha phir achanak zor se chillaya, “SALEEM BHAI…SALEEM BHAI RUKO RUKO NAH!!” Yeh kehne ke baad Abhi dawte huwe niche ke taraf jane laga aur haath car ke taraf ishara karte huwe phukaar raha tha Saleem bhai ko. Sakeena ne dekha aur Iqbal se kaha, “Woh dekho woh aadmi hamare car ke taraf ishara karte huwe phukaar raha hai lagta hai….”

Ab car kaafi aguey nikal chuki thi aur raaste par bahot mitti udh rahe the to Iqbal ko piche mudh kar car ke rear window se dekhna pada to kia nazar aya ussko? Ussko bhi ek daadhi wala aadmi udhte huwe dhool ke peeche upar se niche ke taraf ate huwe dikhaayi diya magar kissko pata tha ke woh Abhi hai? Iqbal ne Sakeena se kaha, “tum ne filmon mein dekha hoga ke jab ek car ek gaon mein jata hai to keise gaon ke sabhi bachche uss car ke piche dawte huwe jaate hein weise hi woh aadmi hamare car ke piche dawdne ki koshish kar raha hai!!” Aur tab tak car bahot aguey nikal gayi yahan tak ke ek mod aya aur turn bhi kar gayi aur jab tak Abhi niche raaste par gaya usske aaguey woh gaye the jo sadak paar karke ruke huwe the….. Abhay bahot hamp raha tha aur khanssne bhi laga aur dhire se “Saleem bhai, Saleem bhai” kehte huwe rone laga…….

Jiss waqt Abhay chilla raha tha to kayi dusre mazdooron ne suna aur unn mein se kayi log usske piche niche utre, aur uss ke paas aakar uss se poochne lage ke woh Saleem bhai kaun hai….. Abhay rote rote shant huwa aur niche zameen par baith gaya ek bimaar aadmi ki tarah…. Ussne kissi ko jawaab nahin diya….. bus kuch der baad bus aayi aur uss mein se Seema utri aur dekha ke kayi log jama hai…phir Abhay ko zameen par paya….. sab logon se poochne ke baad pata chala ke kissi car mein koyi Saleem bhai jaa raha tha aur Abhi uss car ke piche usska naam phukarte dawd raha tha to Seema ne jab Abhi se poocha ke kaun hai Saleem bhai tab tak khud Abhay ko yaad nahin tha ke Saleem bhai kaun hai aur kyun woh usska naam phukaar raha tha!!

Laakh poochne par Abhi ko kuch yaad nahin aya! Aur woh khud kuch der baad Seema se poochne laga, “Kyun mein ne eisa kiya? Kyun main uss gadi ke piche jana chahta tha? Kyun main ne Saleem bhai phukara? Kaun hai Saleem bhai? Yeh naam kuch jana pehchana lag raha hai magar mujhe kyun kuch yaad nahin araha kyun kyun kyun?!!” yeh kehte huwe Abhi apna maatha peethne laga!!”

To be continued………………
 

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Saleem bhai pariwaar ke saath ghar wapas ponhche. Ab kyunke Iqbal Sakeena ka mangitar tha to kabhi kabhaar Saleem bhai ke yahan ruk jata tha raat bhar. To uss raat ko der ho gayi ghar lawtte waqt to Saleem bhai ne Iqbal ko rukne ke liya kaha aur kamra tayyaar kiya usske liye. Magar raat ko takriban barah ya ek baje tak Sakeena Iqbal ke saath thi lounge mein ishk farmate huwe, jab ke Saleem bhai aur usski biwi sone chale gaye the. Iqbal ko full azaadi thi ghar mein wahan.

Uss taraf Jab budhe baba ko pata chala ke Abhi ne uss ke paas ane wale aadmi ko Saleem bhai kehkar phukara to ussko bahot hi mayussi huwi ke kyun usske paas uss Salim bhai ka ata pata nahin tha! Baba bahot afsos kar raha tha ke kyun Abhay ko kaam karne diya. Agar woh kaam par nahin jata to Saleem bhai ussko dargah ke andar hi mil jaate….. Budhe baba kuch josh mein agaya aur pata nahin kia kia duwaein ayatein padhte huwe Abhay par phookne laga aur ajeeb o gharib awaaz mein pata nahin kia kia keh raha tha kuch samajh mein nahin arahe the aur Abhay bahot heyraani ke saath budhe baba ke chehre mein dekhta chala jaa raha tha aur woh padh padh kar Abhay ke chehre aur sar ke upar phoonk maarte chala jaa raha tha bilkool josh mein jeise woh koyi aur ho! Aakhir mein yeh alfaaz budhe baba ke lab se saaf sunaayi diya, “Jo bhi aye the yahan unn ke khwab mein paighaam bhejh ke yeh yahan hai, keise bhi kar, unnko wapas bhej isske paas bahot ho chukka sabr mera; mera imtehaan nah le ab!!” Yeh kehkar budhe baba behosh ho gaye! Woh kuch iss kadar josh mein the jeise rab se baatein kar raha ho aur uss ke kareeb pohonch gaya ho….. wahan ke log kehte the ke saal mein sirf ek ya do baar baba uss mukaam tak pohonchta hai jab dargah wale peer se mukhatib hote the, aur wohi chamatkaar tha uss dargah ki, ke wahan ke murid uss dargah wale peer par yakeen karte the ke woh sab ki bigri ko banata hai… kayi log to yeh maante the ke budhe baba uss dargah wale peer ka rishtedaar hai aur ussko bhi ussi jagah dafnaya jaega usske intekaal ke baad.

Aur Sakeena ke yahan, donon lounge mein ek sofe par baithe ek dusre ko bahon mein liye ishk farmate huwe, meethi meethi baton mein mubtela the. Tab Sakeena ne achanak yeh baat chedi….. “ Tumko yaad hai woh aadmi dadhi wala jo upar se neeche utar rahe the hamare car ke taraf ishara karte huwe?”

Iqbal ne Sakeena ke chehre mein ek ajeeb si nazar se dekhte huwe kaha, “Han magar tum achanak kyun uss baat ko lekar baith gayi? Are yaar hum donon ke bare mein baatein karo, pyar ki batein karo kia dargah wale jagah ki baat ko ched baithi tum?!”

Sakeena ne kaha, “Pata nahin kyun mujhe laga ke woh aadmi hum logon se kuch kehna chah raha tha, jeise woh hum mein se kissi ko phukaar raha tha magar kissi ne nahin suna!”

Iqbal, “What nonsense Sakeena! Kia baat kar rahi ho tum, chalo ab sone ka time ho gaya, mujhe neend arahi hai goodnight”

Aur donon alag alag kamre mein sone chale gaye…….. Ab isse kudrat ka karishma samjho ya budhe baba ki duwaon ka assar, ke bus ek ghante ke neend ke andar achanak Iqbal cheekh utha bistar par se, “Abhayyyyyyyy, Abhayyy mera yaaaaaaaaaar!!” ghar ke sab log jaag gaye. Subha ke sare teen baje the. Saleem bhai aur Sakeena dawte huwe Iqbal ke kamre mein gaye, Iqbal pasina pasina ho gaya tha aur tarapti awaaz mein Saleem bhai se lipat kar rote huwe bola, “Saleem bhai woh hamara Abhay tha, hum ussko wahin chorr aaye Saleem bhai Hamara Abhay tha woh!!”

Yeh sunkar Saleem bhai kaampte haath se Iqbal ka peeth thapthapate huwe Sakeena ke chehre mein dekhte huwe ishare se poocha kia baat hai…. Tab tak Iqbal ne Sakeena ke taraf dekh kar ensoo bhare nazar se kaha, “Sakeena woh hamara Abhay tha, jissko tum ne dekha tha……” Sakeena ne poocha, “Magar achanak iss waqt tum yeh kyun keh rahe ho, jab main ne kuch der pehle tumse baat ki to……” Iqbal ne Sakeena ko bolne nahin diya aur thar thar kaampte huwe badan se bayaan kiya,

“Main ne zindagi mein kabhi eise darawni sapna nahin dekha hai kabhi, sapna nahin hakikat lagta tha… hum sab uss jagah se lawt rahe the aur Abhay upar se niche ke taraf dawte huwe phukaar raha tha “Saleem bhai Saleem bhai” aur main bhaagte huwe ussko apne bahon mein pakar kar ro raha tha aur ussne kaha, “Yaar Iqbal tum mujhe akela kyun chorr kar chale gaye mujhko mudh kar dekha bhi nahin mujh se milne to awo yaar main bilkool akela, tanha hoon….”….

Yeh kehkar Iqbal zoron se rone laga, aur tab tak Sakeena ne apne abu ko bataya ke jahan car roka tha ussne jab gaye rasta paar kar rahe the upar se ek daadhi wala aadmi hamare car ke taraf ishara karte huwe araha tha…… yeh sab sunkar Saleem bhai ne socha ke uss dargah par jane se shayad Iqbal par bura assar pada issi liye uss jagah ki hawa raas nahin aya ussko….. Magar thik ussi waqt Iqbal bed se utar kar apne kapde pehenkar bahot serious hokar kaha, “Jaldi chalo wapas wahan, Abhay hamara intezaar kar raha hai, Vinay aur Ananya aur Abhay ki mummy ko phone karo abhi issi waqt unn sab ko chalna hoga!

Saleem bhai yakeen nahin kar raha tha jo usske saamne ho raha tha subha ke sare teen baje ghar se nikalna aur dusron ko phone karna ussko ajeeb lag raha tha to ussne Iqbal ko shaant karne ki koshish ki, magar Iqbal kuch bhi sunne ko tayyaar nahin tha aur Saleem bhai se jhagad pada, apne hone wale sasur se oonchi awaaz mein baat kiya ussne, “Dekhiye aap logon ko agar nahin jaana hai to mat jayiye, mujhe abhi aur issi waqt nikalna hai wahan pohonchte pohonchte subha ke 8 baj jayeinguey…… main chalta hoon, pehle Vinay aur Anny ko phone kar lun…..”

Sakeena jaldi se tayaar huwi apne walid se yeh kehkar ke woh Iqbal ke saath jaegi, aur Saleem bhai ne kaha, “Beti tum kia samajhti ho ke main nahin jaa raha hoon are beshak main bhi chalta hoon, kaash hum ne uss darga wale baba se Abhay ke bare mein poocha hota!” Tab Iqbal ne kaha, “Wohi to, wohi hamari sab se badi ghalati thi ke hum ne socha ke Abhi utne door nahin nikal sakta aur woh wahin hai itne mahinon se, aap ne dekha kia haal bana liya hai apna…ek paagal jeisa dikh raha tha mera yaar….” Yeh kehkar Iqbal phir rone laga…..

Ek chamatkaar aur huwa, Jab Anny ne phone uthaya to Iqbal se rote huwe kaha, “Main ne abhi abhi Abhay ko sapne mein dekha ek oonchaayi par se niche ke taraf “Saleem bhai” phukaarte huwe dawd raha hai aur mujhse kaha, ‘Tum bhi mujhe bhool gayi nah Anny’…..” Aur Anny zoron se ro padi phone par…. To Iqbal ne kaha, “Rona band karo hamara Abhay humko mil gaya hum ussko lene jaa rahe hein tum tayaar rehna main tumko lene araha hoon usske mummy ko lekar……”

Dargah wale baba ki duwaein door aasmaan mein assar kar gaye, ke kudrat ko bhi jhukna pada aur khwab ke roop mein sahi, Abhay ka deedaar karwa diya yaaron ko. Wah!

To be continued…………….
 

Casinar

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nice one again casi bro...
you explained so very well about the situation in which seema rather had pity and mistook it for love for abhay and now finally she found her love in Akash. good that happened or else she would have been disapointed the day abhay would tell her that her love is ananya.
salim bhai and team are trying hard still to find abhay.
such coiincidences really happen in life like they went to look for him in a shop next to the barber where abhy had got his hair cut!
#well now they are heading to the place abhay lives so will see in the next update if they succeed to meet him
good one casi :thumbup:
thanks very much bro
 

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Car jiss waqt budhe baba wale dargah ke taraf jaa rahe the tab, Abhay jiss onnchaayi par kaam kar raha tha woh car ke left side par paaya jata tha. Aur aguey ke left wale seat par Saleem bhai baithe the aur Iqbal drive kar raha tha. Sakeena piche wale seat par baithi thi apni ammi ji ke saath. Kachcha rasta tha dhool se bhare aur car ke guzarne se bahot sare mitti ke dhool udh rahe the. Aur upar jahan Abhay kaam kar raha tha wahan drilling machine aur pathar todne wale machine ke shor aur wahan bhi bahot sare dhool udhte dikh rahe the….

Uss jagah se car guzar gaya jahan se Abhay aur dusre mazdooron ko niche se ate jaate car, bus, ya trucks dikhaayi dete the. Wahan se guzar kar hi darga tak pohonchne ka raasta paye jaate the. Upar se kuch mazdooron ne car ko guzarte dekha magar uss waqt Abhi apne kaandhe par ek bada sa pathar liye dam ke border par rakhne jaa raha tha to uss ko kuch nahin dikha. To zaahir hai ke Saleem bhai ko bhi kuch nazar nahin aya halaan ke woh upar ke taraf dekhte huwe Iqbal se kaha, “Lagta hai koyi dam ban raha hai idhar, iss kade dhoop mein dekho yeh mazdoor keise jhulass rahe hein aur kitna milta hoga inn logon ko, kewal kuch rupaya.” Iqbal drive kar raha tha iss liye sirf ek jhalak dekha nazar utha kar upar ke taraf aur weh log chale gaye dargah ke taraf…..

Budhe baba se sab mile aur baba ne duwaein ki, taaviz bana kar diya aur chand gulaab ke patiyon par kuch padhkar phoonka aur ussko pani mein milakar peenee ko kaha. Phir baba ne Quraan ki chand ayatein padhi aur Fateha padha. Koyi 45 minutes ke baad weh log wahan se nikle baba se ijaazat lete huwe. Magar kisi ne Abhay ke bare mein baba se nahin poocha. Iss liye nahin poocha ke wahan ke sheher mein hi jab Saleem bhai keh rahe the itne door to Abhi nahin aya hoga aur phir kissi ne bhi nahin dekha kabhi ussko uss taraf. Iqbal ka mann tha poochne ko baba se magar kyunke Saleem bhai ne weisa kaha tha uss sheher mein jahan unn logon ne aakhri photo chipkaya, to woh sochkar Iqbal ne bhi socha Abhi ka wahan tak ajana mumkin nahin hoga.

Wahan se ek ghante ke baad weh log nikle aur Saleem bhai ne drive karna chaha, to usski biwi aguey baithne gayi apne shawhar ke bagal mein aur Iqbal aur Sakeena piche wale seat par ashikon ke gun gaane ko baithe! To Saleem bhai drive karne lage aur car uss jagah ponhcha jahan Abhi upar kaam kar raha tha. To ab car ke lautne samaye woh oonchaayi wali jagah car ke right mein tha aur right mein Sakeena baithi thi aur left mein Iqbal. Magar Saleem bhai kyun ke drive kar rahe the to woh right mein paye gaye drive karte huwe, usski lambhi dhadi, sar par pagri, aur woh tha hi eisa insaan ke koyi bhi ussko door se pehchaan le….. thik jab car wahan ponhcha jahan Seema bus mein se utarti thi aur Abhi upar se ussko dekhta tha, uss jagah par do, teen gaye road cross kar rahe the aur saleem bhai ko brake lagana pada aur uss ne horn bhi bajaya…. Iss liye ke horn baja to upar se Abhi ne niche dekha raaste ke or…. Aur usski nazar seedha Saleem bhai par gaya… uss waqt Abhi ke haath mein ek chota sa hal jeisa kuch tha jiss se woh mitti ko ek baste mein bhar raha tha, uss hal ko upar uthaaye huwe Abhi Salim bhai ko dekhta raha, usske pasine se mitti mile huwe the maathey pe aur jab ussne apna maatha poncha to usska maatha aur bhi ganda ho gaya….. Saleem bhai ruka huwa tha aur unn jaanwaron ko raasta paar karne ke liye wait kar raha tha…. Do gaye sadak paar kar chuke the ek reh gaya beech raaste par jo nahin hil bhi raha tha….

Abhay ne hal ko niche rakha aur usske enkhon ke saamne se udhte huwe mitti ke dhool ko apne haathon se hatate huwe ek do kadam niche gaya ghaur se car ke driver ko dekhte huwe….usske dil ke dhadkanon ka raftaar badh rahe the aur woh ek ek kar ke upar se seedhiyan utarta gaya, seediyan jo mitti aur pathar ko kaat kar kaaligari se banaya gaya tha uss onnchaayi se neeche raaste tak…. Sirf do chaar kadam niche ponhcha tha Abhi ke gaye paar chala gaya aur Saleem bhai ne first gear lagaya phir second aur gaadi aguey jaane lage….. Abhi hadbadate huwe tez kadmon ke raaftaar badhate huwe upar se niche utar hi raha tha aur car jaane laga, tab tak car mein se kyun ke sakeena right mein thi to ussne upar ke taraf dekha, to ussko ek daadhi wala aadmi niche ate huwe dikhaayi diya magar woh to Abhi ko nahin pehchaanti thi…… udhar Abhi hampte huwe khada hokar car ko jate huwe dekhta raha phir achanak zor se chillaya, “SALEEM BHAI…SALEEM BHAI RUKO RUKO NAH!!” Yeh kehne ke baad Abhi dawte huwe niche ke taraf jane laga aur haath car ke taraf ishara karte huwe phukaar raha tha Saleem bhai ko. Sakeena ne dekha aur Iqbal se kaha, “Woh dekho woh aadmi hamare car ke taraf ishara karte huwe phukaar raha hai lagta hai….”

Ab car kaafi aguey nikal chuki thi aur raaste par bahot mitti udh rahe the to Iqbal ko piche mudh kar car ke rear window se dekhna pada to kia nazar aya ussko? Ussko bhi ek daadhi wala aadmi udhte huwe dhool ke peeche upar se niche ke taraf ate huwe dikhaayi diya magar kissko pata tha ke woh Abhi hai? Iqbal ne Sakeena se kaha, “tum ne filmon mein dekha hoga ke jab ek car ek gaon mein jata hai to keise gaon ke sabhi bachche uss car ke piche dawte huwe jaate hein weise hi woh aadmi hamare car ke piche dawdne ki koshish kar raha hai!!” Aur tab tak car bahot aguey nikal gayi yahan tak ke ek mod aya aur turn bhi kar gayi aur jab tak Abhi niche raaste par gaya usske aaguey woh gaye the jo sadak paar karke ruke huwe the….. Abhay bahot hamp raha tha aur khanssne bhi laga aur dhire se “Saleem bhai, Saleem bhai” kehte huwe rone laga…….

Jiss waqt Abhay chilla raha tha to kayi dusre mazdooron ne suna aur unn mein se kayi log usske piche niche utre, aur uss ke paas aakar uss se poochne lage ke woh Saleem bhai kaun hai….. Abhay rote rote shant huwa aur niche zameen par baith gaya ek bimaar aadmi ki tarah…. Ussne kissi ko jawaab nahin diya….. bus kuch der baad bus aayi aur uss mein se Seema utri aur dekha ke kayi log jama hai…phir Abhay ko zameen par paya….. sab logon se poochne ke baad pata chala ke kissi car mein koyi Saleem bhai jaa raha tha aur Abhi uss car ke piche usska naam phukarte dawd raha tha to Seema ne jab Abhi se poocha ke kaun hai Saleem bhai tab tak khud Abhay ko yaad nahin tha ke Saleem bhai kaun hai aur kyun woh usska naam phukaar raha tha!!

Laakh poochne par Abhi ko kuch yaad nahin aya! Aur woh khud kuch der baad Seema se poochne laga, “Kyun mein ne eisa kiya? Kyun main uss gadi ke piche jana chahta tha? Kyun main ne Saleem bhai phukara? Kaun hai Saleem bhai? Yeh naam kuch jana pehchana lag raha hai magar mujhe kyun kuch yaad nahin araha kyun kyun kyun?!!” yeh kehte huwe Abhi apna maatha peethne laga!!”

To be continued………………
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Saleem bhai pariwaar ke saath ghar wapas ponhche. Ab kyunke Iqbal Sakeena ka mangitar tha to kabhi kabhaar Saleem bhai ke yahan ruk jata tha raat bhar. To uss raat ko der ho gayi ghar lawtte waqt to Saleem bhai ne Iqbal ko rukne ke liya kaha aur kamra tayyaar kiya usske liye. Magar raat ko takriban barah ya ek baje tak Sakeena Iqbal ke saath thi lounge mein ishk farmate huwe, jab ke Saleem bhai aur usski biwi sone chale gaye the. Iqbal ko full azaadi thi ghar mein wahan.

Uss taraf Jab budhe baba ko pata chala ke Abhi ne uss ke paas ane wale aadmi ko Saleem bhai kehkar phukara to ussko bahot hi mayussi huwi ke kyun usske paas uss Salim bhai ka ata pata nahin tha! Baba bahot afsos kar raha tha ke kyun Abhay ko kaam karne diya. Agar woh kaam par nahin jata to Saleem bhai ussko dargah ke andar hi mil jaate….. Budhe baba kuch josh mein agaya aur pata nahin kia kia duwaein ayatein padhte huwe Abhay par phookne laga aur ajeeb o gharib awaaz mein pata nahin kia kia keh raha tha kuch samajh mein nahin arahe the aur Abhay bahot heyraani ke saath budhe baba ke chehre mein dekhta chala jaa raha tha aur woh padh padh kar Abhay ke chehre aur sar ke upar phoonk maarte chala jaa raha tha bilkool josh mein jeise woh koyi aur ho! Aakhir mein yeh alfaaz budhe baba ke lab se saaf sunaayi diya, “Jo bhi aye the yahan unn ke khwab mein paighaam bhejh ke yeh yahan hai, keise bhi kar, unnko wapas bhej isske paas bahot ho chukka sabr mera; mera imtehaan nah le ab!!” Yeh kehkar budhe baba behosh ho gaye! Woh kuch iss kadar josh mein the jeise rab se baatein kar raha ho aur uss ke kareeb pohonch gaya ho….. wahan ke log kehte the ke saal mein sirf ek ya do baar baba uss mukaam tak pohonchta hai jab dargah wale peer se mukhatib hote the, aur wohi chamatkaar tha uss dargah ki, ke wahan ke murid uss dargah wale peer par yakeen karte the ke woh sab ki bigri ko banata hai… kayi log to yeh maante the ke budhe baba uss dargah wale peer ka rishtedaar hai aur ussko bhi ussi jagah dafnaya jaega usske intekaal ke baad.

Aur Sakeena ke yahan, donon lounge mein ek sofe par baithe ek dusre ko bahon mein liye ishk farmate huwe, meethi meethi baton mein mubtela the. Tab Sakeena ne achanak yeh baat chedi….. “ Tumko yaad hai woh aadmi dadhi wala jo upar se neeche utar rahe the hamare car ke taraf ishara karte huwe?”

Iqbal ne Sakeena ke chehre mein ek ajeeb si nazar se dekhte huwe kaha, “Han magar tum achanak kyun uss baat ko lekar baith gayi? Are yaar hum donon ke bare mein baatein karo, pyar ki batein karo kia dargah wale jagah ki baat ko ched baithi tum?!”

Sakeena ne kaha, “Pata nahin kyun mujhe laga ke woh aadmi hum logon se kuch kehna chah raha tha, jeise woh hum mein se kissi ko phukaar raha tha magar kissi ne nahin suna!”

Iqbal, “What nonsense Sakeena! Kia baat kar rahi ho tum, chalo ab sone ka time ho gaya, mujhe neend arahi hai goodnight”

Aur donon alag alag kamre mein sone chale gaye…….. Ab isse kudrat ka karishma samjho ya budhe baba ki duwaon ka assar, ke bus ek ghante ke neend ke andar achanak Iqbal cheekh utha bistar par se, “Abhayyyyyyyy, Abhayyy mera yaaaaaaaaaar!!” ghar ke sab log jaag gaye. Subha ke sare teen baje the. Saleem bhai aur Sakeena dawte huwe Iqbal ke kamre mein gaye, Iqbal pasina pasina ho gaya tha aur tarapti awaaz mein Saleem bhai se lipat kar rote huwe bola, “Saleem bhai woh hamara Abhay tha, hum ussko wahin chorr aaye Saleem bhai Hamara Abhay tha woh!!”

Yeh sunkar Saleem bhai kaampte haath se Iqbal ka peeth thapthapate huwe Sakeena ke chehre mein dekhte huwe ishare se poocha kia baat hai…. Tab tak Iqbal ne Sakeena ke taraf dekh kar ensoo bhare nazar se kaha, “Sakeena woh hamara Abhay tha, jissko tum ne dekha tha……” Sakeena ne poocha, “Magar achanak iss waqt tum yeh kyun keh rahe ho, jab main ne kuch der pehle tumse baat ki to……” Iqbal ne Sakeena ko bolne nahin diya aur thar thar kaampte huwe badan se bayaan kiya,

“Main ne zindagi mein kabhi eise darawni sapna nahin dekha hai kabhi, sapna nahin hakikat lagta tha… hum sab uss jagah se lawt rahe the aur Abhay upar se niche ke taraf dawte huwe phukaar raha tha “Saleem bhai Saleem bhai” aur main bhaagte huwe ussko apne bahon mein pakar kar ro raha tha aur ussne kaha, “Yaar Iqbal tum mujhe akela kyun chorr kar chale gaye mujhko mudh kar dekha bhi nahin mujh se milne to awo yaar main bilkool akela, tanha hoon….”….

Yeh kehkar Iqbal zoron se rone laga, aur tab tak Sakeena ne apne abu ko bataya ke jahan car roka tha ussne jab gaye rasta paar kar rahe the upar se ek daadhi wala aadmi hamare car ke taraf ishara karte huwe araha tha…… yeh sab sunkar Saleem bhai ne socha ke uss dargah par jane se shayad Iqbal par bura assar pada issi liye uss jagah ki hawa raas nahin aya ussko….. Magar thik ussi waqt Iqbal bed se utar kar apne kapde pehenkar bahot serious hokar kaha, “Jaldi chalo wapas wahan, Abhay hamara intezaar kar raha hai, Vinay aur Ananya aur Abhay ki mummy ko phone karo abhi issi waqt unn sab ko chalna hoga!

Saleem bhai yakeen nahin kar raha tha jo usske saamne ho raha tha subha ke sare teen baje ghar se nikalna aur dusron ko phone karna ussko ajeeb lag raha tha to ussne Iqbal ko shaant karne ki koshish ki, magar Iqbal kuch bhi sunne ko tayyaar nahin tha aur Saleem bhai se jhagad pada, apne hone wale sasur se oonchi awaaz mein baat kiya ussne, “Dekhiye aap logon ko agar nahin jaana hai to mat jayiye, mujhe abhi aur issi waqt nikalna hai wahan pohonchte pohonchte subha ke 8 baj jayeinguey…… main chalta hoon, pehle Vinay aur Anny ko phone kar lun…..”

Sakeena jaldi se tayaar huwi apne walid se yeh kehkar ke woh Iqbal ke saath jaegi, aur Saleem bhai ne kaha, “Beti tum kia samajhti ho ke main nahin jaa raha hoon are beshak main bhi chalta hoon, kaash hum ne uss darga wale baba se Abhay ke bare mein poocha hota!” Tab Iqbal ne kaha, “Wohi to, wohi hamari sab se badi ghalati thi ke hum ne socha ke Abhi utne door nahin nikal sakta aur woh wahin hai itne mahinon se, aap ne dekha kia haal bana liya hai apna…ek paagal jeisa dikh raha tha mera yaar….” Yeh kehkar Iqbal phir rone laga…..

Ek chamatkaar aur huwa, Jab Anny ne phone uthaya to Iqbal se rote huwe kaha, “Main ne abhi abhi Abhay ko sapne mein dekha ek oonchaayi par se niche ke taraf “Saleem bhai” phukaarte huwe dawd raha hai aur mujhse kaha, ‘Tum bhi mujhe bhool gayi nah Anny’…..” Aur Anny zoron se ro padi phone par…. To Iqbal ne kaha, “Rona band karo hamara Abhay humko mil gaya hum ussko lene jaa rahe hein tum tayaar rehna main tumko lene araha hoon usske mummy ko lekar……”

Dargah wale baba ki duwaein door aasmaan mein assar kar gaye, ke kudrat ko bhi jhukna pada aur khwab ke roop mein sahi, Abhay ka deedaar karwa diya yaaron ko. Wah!

To be continued…………….
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Car jiss waqt budhe baba wale dargah ke taraf jaa rahe the tab, Abhay jiss onnchaayi par kaam kar raha tha woh car ke left side par paaya jata tha. Aur aguey ke left wale seat par Saleem bhai baithe the aur Iqbal drive kar raha tha. Sakeena piche wale seat par baithi thi apni ammi ji ke saath. Kachcha rasta tha dhool se bhare aur car ke guzarne se bahot sare mitti ke dhool udh rahe the. Aur upar jahan Abhay kaam kar raha tha wahan drilling machine aur pathar todne wale machine ke shor aur wahan bhi bahot sare dhool udhte dikh rahe the….

Uss jagah se car guzar gaya jahan se Abhay aur dusre mazdooron ko niche se ate jaate car, bus, ya trucks dikhaayi dete the. Wahan se guzar kar hi darga tak pohonchne ka raasta paye jaate the. Upar se kuch mazdooron ne car ko guzarte dekha magar uss waqt Abhi apne kaandhe par ek bada sa pathar liye dam ke border par rakhne jaa raha tha to uss ko kuch nahin dikha. To zaahir hai ke Saleem bhai ko bhi kuch nazar nahin aya halaan ke woh upar ke taraf dekhte huwe Iqbal se kaha, “Lagta hai koyi dam ban raha hai idhar, iss kade dhoop mein dekho yeh mazdoor keise jhulass rahe hein aur kitna milta hoga inn logon ko, kewal kuch rupaya.” Iqbal drive kar raha tha iss liye sirf ek jhalak dekha nazar utha kar upar ke taraf aur weh log chale gaye dargah ke taraf…..

Budhe baba se sab mile aur baba ne duwaein ki, taaviz bana kar diya aur chand gulaab ke patiyon par kuch padhkar phoonka aur ussko pani mein milakar peenee ko kaha. Phir baba ne Quraan ki chand ayatein padhi aur Fateha padha. Koyi 45 minutes ke baad weh log wahan se nikle baba se ijaazat lete huwe. Magar kisi ne Abhay ke bare mein baba se nahin poocha. Iss liye nahin poocha ke wahan ke sheher mein hi jab Saleem bhai keh rahe the itne door to Abhi nahin aya hoga aur phir kissi ne bhi nahin dekha kabhi ussko uss taraf. Iqbal ka mann tha poochne ko baba se magar kyunke Saleem bhai ne weisa kaha tha uss sheher mein jahan unn logon ne aakhri photo chipkaya, to woh sochkar Iqbal ne bhi socha Abhi ka wahan tak ajana mumkin nahin hoga.

Wahan se ek ghante ke baad weh log nikle aur Saleem bhai ne drive karna chaha, to usski biwi aguey baithne gayi apne shawhar ke bagal mein aur Iqbal aur Sakeena piche wale seat par ashikon ke gun gaane ko baithe! To Saleem bhai drive karne lage aur car uss jagah ponhcha jahan Abhi upar kaam kar raha tha. To ab car ke lautne samaye woh oonchaayi wali jagah car ke right mein tha aur right mein Sakeena baithi thi aur left mein Iqbal. Magar Saleem bhai kyun ke drive kar rahe the to woh right mein paye gaye drive karte huwe, usski lambhi dhadi, sar par pagri, aur woh tha hi eisa insaan ke koyi bhi ussko door se pehchaan le….. thik jab car wahan ponhcha jahan Seema bus mein se utarti thi aur Abhi upar se ussko dekhta tha, uss jagah par do, teen gaye road cross kar rahe the aur saleem bhai ko brake lagana pada aur uss ne horn bhi bajaya…. Iss liye ke horn baja to upar se Abhi ne niche dekha raaste ke or…. Aur usski nazar seedha Saleem bhai par gaya… uss waqt Abhi ke haath mein ek chota sa hal jeisa kuch tha jiss se woh mitti ko ek baste mein bhar raha tha, uss hal ko upar uthaaye huwe Abhi Salim bhai ko dekhta raha, usske pasine se mitti mile huwe the maathey pe aur jab ussne apna maatha poncha to usska maatha aur bhi ganda ho gaya….. Saleem bhai ruka huwa tha aur unn jaanwaron ko raasta paar karne ke liye wait kar raha tha…. Do gaye sadak paar kar chuke the ek reh gaya beech raaste par jo nahin hil bhi raha tha….

Abhay ne hal ko niche rakha aur usske enkhon ke saamne se udhte huwe mitti ke dhool ko apne haathon se hatate huwe ek do kadam niche gaya ghaur se car ke driver ko dekhte huwe….usske dil ke dhadkanon ka raftaar badh rahe the aur woh ek ek kar ke upar se seedhiyan utarta gaya, seediyan jo mitti aur pathar ko kaat kar kaaligari se banaya gaya tha uss onnchaayi se neeche raaste tak…. Sirf do chaar kadam niche ponhcha tha Abhi ke gaye paar chala gaya aur Saleem bhai ne first gear lagaya phir second aur gaadi aguey jaane lage….. Abhi hadbadate huwe tez kadmon ke raaftaar badhate huwe upar se niche utar hi raha tha aur car jaane laga, tab tak car mein se kyun ke sakeena right mein thi to ussne upar ke taraf dekha, to ussko ek daadhi wala aadmi niche ate huwe dikhaayi diya magar woh to Abhi ko nahin pehchaanti thi…… udhar Abhi hampte huwe khada hokar car ko jate huwe dekhta raha phir achanak zor se chillaya, “SALEEM BHAI…SALEEM BHAI RUKO RUKO NAH!!” Yeh kehne ke baad Abhi dawte huwe niche ke taraf jane laga aur haath car ke taraf ishara karte huwe phukaar raha tha Saleem bhai ko. Sakeena ne dekha aur Iqbal se kaha, “Woh dekho woh aadmi hamare car ke taraf ishara karte huwe phukaar raha hai lagta hai….”

Ab car kaafi aguey nikal chuki thi aur raaste par bahot mitti udh rahe the to Iqbal ko piche mudh kar car ke rear window se dekhna pada to kia nazar aya ussko? Ussko bhi ek daadhi wala aadmi udhte huwe dhool ke peeche upar se niche ke taraf ate huwe dikhaayi diya magar kissko pata tha ke woh Abhi hai? Iqbal ne Sakeena se kaha, “tum ne filmon mein dekha hoga ke jab ek car ek gaon mein jata hai to keise gaon ke sabhi bachche uss car ke piche dawte huwe jaate hein weise hi woh aadmi hamare car ke piche dawdne ki koshish kar raha hai!!” Aur tab tak car bahot aguey nikal gayi yahan tak ke ek mod aya aur turn bhi kar gayi aur jab tak Abhi niche raaste par gaya usske aaguey woh gaye the jo sadak paar karke ruke huwe the….. Abhay bahot hamp raha tha aur khanssne bhi laga aur dhire se “Saleem bhai, Saleem bhai” kehte huwe rone laga…….

Jiss waqt Abhay chilla raha tha to kayi dusre mazdooron ne suna aur unn mein se kayi log usske piche niche utre, aur uss ke paas aakar uss se poochne lage ke woh Saleem bhai kaun hai….. Abhay rote rote shant huwa aur niche zameen par baith gaya ek bimaar aadmi ki tarah…. Ussne kissi ko jawaab nahin diya….. bus kuch der baad bus aayi aur uss mein se Seema utri aur dekha ke kayi log jama hai…phir Abhay ko zameen par paya….. sab logon se poochne ke baad pata chala ke kissi car mein koyi Saleem bhai jaa raha tha aur Abhi uss car ke piche usska naam phukarte dawd raha tha to Seema ne jab Abhi se poocha ke kaun hai Saleem bhai tab tak khud Abhay ko yaad nahin tha ke Saleem bhai kaun hai aur kyun woh usska naam phukaar raha tha!!

Laakh poochne par Abhi ko kuch yaad nahin aya! Aur woh khud kuch der baad Seema se poochne laga, “Kyun mein ne eisa kiya? Kyun main uss gadi ke piche jana chahta tha? Kyun main ne Saleem bhai phukara? Kaun hai Saleem bhai? Yeh naam kuch jana pehchana lag raha hai magar mujhe kyun kuch yaad nahin araha kyun kyun kyun?!!” yeh kehte huwe Abhi apna maatha peethne laga!!”

To be continued………………

Oh My God! Casi bro this is a very heart breaking update man!! really heart breaking!
they all were in front of abhay, he cried, he shouted yet no one recognised or heard him!!
The person who saw her did not know him in the person of Sakina.
And in the fading brain of abhay only because he knew Salim bhai his memory recollected that face to be known so he called him but once they were gone he did not know why he called that person!! had he met him on that particular time his memory would have returned back immediately!
how dod you create such moments Casi bro? you are fantastic mate! yes you are!
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Saleem bhai pariwaar ke saath ghar wapas ponhche. Ab kyunke Iqbal Sakeena ka mangitar tha to kabhi kabhaar Saleem bhai ke yahan ruk jata tha raat bhar. To uss raat ko der ho gayi ghar lawtte waqt to Saleem bhai ne Iqbal ko rukne ke liya kaha aur kamra tayyaar kiya usske liye. Magar raat ko takriban barah ya ek baje tak Sakeena Iqbal ke saath thi lounge mein ishk farmate huwe, jab ke Saleem bhai aur usski biwi sone chale gaye the. Iqbal ko full azaadi thi ghar mein wahan.

Uss taraf Jab budhe baba ko pata chala ke Abhi ne uss ke paas ane wale aadmi ko Saleem bhai kehkar phukara to ussko bahot hi mayussi huwi ke kyun usske paas uss Salim bhai ka ata pata nahin tha! Baba bahot afsos kar raha tha ke kyun Abhay ko kaam karne diya. Agar woh kaam par nahin jata to Saleem bhai ussko dargah ke andar hi mil jaate….. Budhe baba kuch josh mein agaya aur pata nahin kia kia duwaein ayatein padhte huwe Abhay par phookne laga aur ajeeb o gharib awaaz mein pata nahin kia kia keh raha tha kuch samajh mein nahin arahe the aur Abhay bahot heyraani ke saath budhe baba ke chehre mein dekhta chala jaa raha tha aur woh padh padh kar Abhay ke chehre aur sar ke upar phoonk maarte chala jaa raha tha bilkool josh mein jeise woh koyi aur ho! Aakhir mein yeh alfaaz budhe baba ke lab se saaf sunaayi diya, “Jo bhi aye the yahan unn ke khwab mein paighaam bhejh ke yeh yahan hai, keise bhi kar, unnko wapas bhej isske paas bahot ho chukka sabr mera; mera imtehaan nah le ab!!” Yeh kehkar budhe baba behosh ho gaye! Woh kuch iss kadar josh mein the jeise rab se baatein kar raha ho aur uss ke kareeb pohonch gaya ho….. wahan ke log kehte the ke saal mein sirf ek ya do baar baba uss mukaam tak pohonchta hai jab dargah wale peer se mukhatib hote the, aur wohi chamatkaar tha uss dargah ki, ke wahan ke murid uss dargah wale peer par yakeen karte the ke woh sab ki bigri ko banata hai… kayi log to yeh maante the ke budhe baba uss dargah wale peer ka rishtedaar hai aur ussko bhi ussi jagah dafnaya jaega usske intekaal ke baad.

Aur Sakeena ke yahan, donon lounge mein ek sofe par baithe ek dusre ko bahon mein liye ishk farmate huwe, meethi meethi baton mein mubtela the. Tab Sakeena ne achanak yeh baat chedi….. “ Tumko yaad hai woh aadmi dadhi wala jo upar se neeche utar rahe the hamare car ke taraf ishara karte huwe?”

Iqbal ne Sakeena ke chehre mein ek ajeeb si nazar se dekhte huwe kaha, “Han magar tum achanak kyun uss baat ko lekar baith gayi? Are yaar hum donon ke bare mein baatein karo, pyar ki batein karo kia dargah wale jagah ki baat ko ched baithi tum?!”

Sakeena ne kaha, “Pata nahin kyun mujhe laga ke woh aadmi hum logon se kuch kehna chah raha tha, jeise woh hum mein se kissi ko phukaar raha tha magar kissi ne nahin suna!”

Iqbal, “What nonsense Sakeena! Kia baat kar rahi ho tum, chalo ab sone ka time ho gaya, mujhe neend arahi hai goodnight”

Aur donon alag alag kamre mein sone chale gaye…….. Ab isse kudrat ka karishma samjho ya budhe baba ki duwaon ka assar, ke bus ek ghante ke neend ke andar achanak Iqbal cheekh utha bistar par se, “Abhayyyyyyyy, Abhayyy mera yaaaaaaaaaar!!” ghar ke sab log jaag gaye. Subha ke sare teen baje the. Saleem bhai aur Sakeena dawte huwe Iqbal ke kamre mein gaye, Iqbal pasina pasina ho gaya tha aur tarapti awaaz mein Saleem bhai se lipat kar rote huwe bola, “Saleem bhai woh hamara Abhay tha, hum ussko wahin chorr aaye Saleem bhai Hamara Abhay tha woh!!”

Yeh sunkar Saleem bhai kaampte haath se Iqbal ka peeth thapthapate huwe Sakeena ke chehre mein dekhte huwe ishare se poocha kia baat hai…. Tab tak Iqbal ne Sakeena ke taraf dekh kar ensoo bhare nazar se kaha, “Sakeena woh hamara Abhay tha, jissko tum ne dekha tha……” Sakeena ne poocha, “Magar achanak iss waqt tum yeh kyun keh rahe ho, jab main ne kuch der pehle tumse baat ki to……” Iqbal ne Sakeena ko bolne nahin diya aur thar thar kaampte huwe badan se bayaan kiya,

“Main ne zindagi mein kabhi eise darawni sapna nahin dekha hai kabhi, sapna nahin hakikat lagta tha… hum sab uss jagah se lawt rahe the aur Abhay upar se niche ke taraf dawte huwe phukaar raha tha “Saleem bhai Saleem bhai” aur main bhaagte huwe ussko apne bahon mein pakar kar ro raha tha aur ussne kaha, “Yaar Iqbal tum mujhe akela kyun chorr kar chale gaye mujhko mudh kar dekha bhi nahin mujh se milne to awo yaar main bilkool akela, tanha hoon….”….

Yeh kehkar Iqbal zoron se rone laga, aur tab tak Sakeena ne apne abu ko bataya ke jahan car roka tha ussne jab gaye rasta paar kar rahe the upar se ek daadhi wala aadmi hamare car ke taraf ishara karte huwe araha tha…… yeh sab sunkar Saleem bhai ne socha ke uss dargah par jane se shayad Iqbal par bura assar pada issi liye uss jagah ki hawa raas nahin aya ussko….. Magar thik ussi waqt Iqbal bed se utar kar apne kapde pehenkar bahot serious hokar kaha, “Jaldi chalo wapas wahan, Abhay hamara intezaar kar raha hai, Vinay aur Ananya aur Abhay ki mummy ko phone karo abhi issi waqt unn sab ko chalna hoga!

Saleem bhai yakeen nahin kar raha tha jo usske saamne ho raha tha subha ke sare teen baje ghar se nikalna aur dusron ko phone karna ussko ajeeb lag raha tha to ussne Iqbal ko shaant karne ki koshish ki, magar Iqbal kuch bhi sunne ko tayyaar nahin tha aur Saleem bhai se jhagad pada, apne hone wale sasur se oonchi awaaz mein baat kiya ussne, “Dekhiye aap logon ko agar nahin jaana hai to mat jayiye, mujhe abhi aur issi waqt nikalna hai wahan pohonchte pohonchte subha ke 8 baj jayeinguey…… main chalta hoon, pehle Vinay aur Anny ko phone kar lun…..”

Sakeena jaldi se tayaar huwi apne walid se yeh kehkar ke woh Iqbal ke saath jaegi, aur Saleem bhai ne kaha, “Beti tum kia samajhti ho ke main nahin jaa raha hoon are beshak main bhi chalta hoon, kaash hum ne uss darga wale baba se Abhay ke bare mein poocha hota!” Tab Iqbal ne kaha, “Wohi to, wohi hamari sab se badi ghalati thi ke hum ne socha ke Abhi utne door nahin nikal sakta aur woh wahin hai itne mahinon se, aap ne dekha kia haal bana liya hai apna…ek paagal jeisa dikh raha tha mera yaar….” Yeh kehkar Iqbal phir rone laga…..

Ek chamatkaar aur huwa, Jab Anny ne phone uthaya to Iqbal se rote huwe kaha, “Main ne abhi abhi Abhay ko sapne mein dekha ek oonchaayi par se niche ke taraf “Saleem bhai” phukaarte huwe dawd raha hai aur mujhse kaha, ‘Tum bhi mujhe bhool gayi nah Anny’…..” Aur Anny zoron se ro padi phone par…. To Iqbal ne kaha, “Rona band karo hamara Abhay humko mil gaya hum ussko lene jaa rahe hein tum tayaar rehna main tumko lene araha hoon usske mummy ko lekar……”

Dargah wale baba ki duwaein door aasmaan mein assar kar gaye, ke kudrat ko bhi jhukna pada aur khwab ke roop mein sahi, Abhay ka deedaar karwa diya yaaron ko. Wah!

To be continued…………….

oh Wooooow fantastic! the part where ikbal started crying after dreaming the day's sequence made me cry bro. icried reading that part...... well miracles do happen, cal it the prayers of the old bab or nature but miracles do happen and i agree with the theory as you have written, that when nature decides to make something happen it does work in one way or amnother nd this is what happened..... all friends had same dream because they were inbvited to meet abahy there....
well so they have decided to go there again immediately..... the next updates will be eagerly awaited to see them all gathered once again casi bro.
wonderful update my friend. :yourock:
 
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awesome update casi bro lagta hai is baar dono ke dilon ko aap mila dengen..bahut hi shaandaar update :applause:
 
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Car jiss waqt budhe baba wale dargah ke taraf jaa rahe the tab, Abhay jiss onnchaayi par kaam kar raha tha woh car ke left side par paaya jata tha. Aur aguey ke left wale seat par Saleem bhai baithe the aur Iqbal drive kar raha tha. Sakeena piche wale seat par baithi thi apni ammi ji ke saath. Kachcha rasta tha dhool se bhare aur car ke guzarne se bahot sare mitti ke dhool udh rahe the. Aur upar jahan Abhay kaam kar raha tha wahan drilling machine aur pathar todne wale machine ke shor aur wahan bhi bahot sare dhool udhte dikh rahe the….

Uss jagah se car guzar gaya jahan se Abhay aur dusre mazdooron ko niche se ate jaate car, bus, ya trucks dikhaayi dete the. Wahan se guzar kar hi darga tak pohonchne ka raasta paye jaate the. Upar se kuch mazdooron ne car ko guzarte dekha magar uss waqt Abhi apne kaandhe par ek bada sa pathar liye dam ke border par rakhne jaa raha tha to uss ko kuch nahin dikha. To zaahir hai ke Saleem bhai ko bhi kuch nazar nahin aya halaan ke woh upar ke taraf dekhte huwe Iqbal se kaha, “Lagta hai koyi dam ban raha hai idhar, iss kade dhoop mein dekho yeh mazdoor keise jhulass rahe hein aur kitna milta hoga inn logon ko, kewal kuch rupaya.” Iqbal drive kar raha tha iss liye sirf ek jhalak dekha nazar utha kar upar ke taraf aur weh log chale gaye dargah ke taraf…..

Budhe baba se sab mile aur baba ne duwaein ki, taaviz bana kar diya aur chand gulaab ke patiyon par kuch padhkar phoonka aur ussko pani mein milakar peenee ko kaha. Phir baba ne Quraan ki chand ayatein padhi aur Fateha padha. Koyi 45 minutes ke baad weh log wahan se nikle baba se ijaazat lete huwe. Magar kisi ne Abhay ke bare mein baba se nahin poocha. Iss liye nahin poocha ke wahan ke sheher mein hi jab Saleem bhai keh rahe the itne door to Abhi nahin aya hoga aur phir kissi ne bhi nahin dekha kabhi ussko uss taraf. Iqbal ka mann tha poochne ko baba se magar kyunke Saleem bhai ne weisa kaha tha uss sheher mein jahan unn logon ne aakhri photo chipkaya, to woh sochkar Iqbal ne bhi socha Abhi ka wahan tak ajana mumkin nahin hoga.

Wahan se ek ghante ke baad weh log nikle aur Saleem bhai ne drive karna chaha, to usski biwi aguey baithne gayi apne shawhar ke bagal mein aur Iqbal aur Sakeena piche wale seat par ashikon ke gun gaane ko baithe! To Saleem bhai drive karne lage aur car uss jagah ponhcha jahan Abhi upar kaam kar raha tha. To ab car ke lautne samaye woh oonchaayi wali jagah car ke right mein tha aur right mein Sakeena baithi thi aur left mein Iqbal. Magar Saleem bhai kyun ke drive kar rahe the to woh right mein paye gaye drive karte huwe, usski lambhi dhadi, sar par pagri, aur woh tha hi eisa insaan ke koyi bhi ussko door se pehchaan le….. thik jab car wahan ponhcha jahan Seema bus mein se utarti thi aur Abhi upar se ussko dekhta tha, uss jagah par do, teen gaye road cross kar rahe the aur saleem bhai ko brake lagana pada aur uss ne horn bhi bajaya…. Iss liye ke horn baja to upar se Abhi ne niche dekha raaste ke or…. Aur usski nazar seedha Saleem bhai par gaya… uss waqt Abhi ke haath mein ek chota sa hal jeisa kuch tha jiss se woh mitti ko ek baste mein bhar raha tha, uss hal ko upar uthaaye huwe Abhi Salim bhai ko dekhta raha, usske pasine se mitti mile huwe the maathey pe aur jab ussne apna maatha poncha to usska maatha aur bhi ganda ho gaya….. Saleem bhai ruka huwa tha aur unn jaanwaron ko raasta paar karne ke liye wait kar raha tha…. Do gaye sadak paar kar chuke the ek reh gaya beech raaste par jo nahin hil bhi raha tha….

Abhay ne hal ko niche rakha aur usske enkhon ke saamne se udhte huwe mitti ke dhool ko apne haathon se hatate huwe ek do kadam niche gaya ghaur se car ke driver ko dekhte huwe….usske dil ke dhadkanon ka raftaar badh rahe the aur woh ek ek kar ke upar se seedhiyan utarta gaya, seediyan jo mitti aur pathar ko kaat kar kaaligari se banaya gaya tha uss onnchaayi se neeche raaste tak…. Sirf do chaar kadam niche ponhcha tha Abhi ke gaye paar chala gaya aur Saleem bhai ne first gear lagaya phir second aur gaadi aguey jaane lage….. Abhi hadbadate huwe tez kadmon ke raaftaar badhate huwe upar se niche utar hi raha tha aur car jaane laga, tab tak car mein se kyun ke sakeena right mein thi to ussne upar ke taraf dekha, to ussko ek daadhi wala aadmi niche ate huwe dikhaayi diya magar woh to Abhi ko nahin pehchaanti thi…… udhar Abhi hampte huwe khada hokar car ko jate huwe dekhta raha phir achanak zor se chillaya, “SALEEM BHAI…SALEEM BHAI RUKO RUKO NAH!!” Yeh kehne ke baad Abhi dawte huwe niche ke taraf jane laga aur haath car ke taraf ishara karte huwe phukaar raha tha Saleem bhai ko. Sakeena ne dekha aur Iqbal se kaha, “Woh dekho woh aadmi hamare car ke taraf ishara karte huwe phukaar raha hai lagta hai….”

Ab car kaafi aguey nikal chuki thi aur raaste par bahot mitti udh rahe the to Iqbal ko piche mudh kar car ke rear window se dekhna pada to kia nazar aya ussko? Ussko bhi ek daadhi wala aadmi udhte huwe dhool ke peeche upar se niche ke taraf ate huwe dikhaayi diya magar kissko pata tha ke woh Abhi hai? Iqbal ne Sakeena se kaha, “tum ne filmon mein dekha hoga ke jab ek car ek gaon mein jata hai to keise gaon ke sabhi bachche uss car ke piche dawte huwe jaate hein weise hi woh aadmi hamare car ke piche dawdne ki koshish kar raha hai!!” Aur tab tak car bahot aguey nikal gayi yahan tak ke ek mod aya aur turn bhi kar gayi aur jab tak Abhi niche raaste par gaya usske aaguey woh gaye the jo sadak paar karke ruke huwe the….. Abhay bahot hamp raha tha aur khanssne bhi laga aur dhire se “Saleem bhai, Saleem bhai” kehte huwe rone laga…….

Jiss waqt Abhay chilla raha tha to kayi dusre mazdooron ne suna aur unn mein se kayi log usske piche niche utre, aur uss ke paas aakar uss se poochne lage ke woh Saleem bhai kaun hai….. Abhay rote rote shant huwa aur niche zameen par baith gaya ek bimaar aadmi ki tarah…. Ussne kissi ko jawaab nahin diya….. bus kuch der baad bus aayi aur uss mein se Seema utri aur dekha ke kayi log jama hai…phir Abhay ko zameen par paya….. sab logon se poochne ke baad pata chala ke kissi car mein koyi Saleem bhai jaa raha tha aur Abhi uss car ke piche usska naam phukarte dawd raha tha to Seema ne jab Abhi se poocha ke kaun hai Saleem bhai tab tak khud Abhay ko yaad nahin tha ke Saleem bhai kaun hai aur kyun woh usska naam phukaar raha tha!!

Laakh poochne par Abhi ko kuch yaad nahin aya! Aur woh khud kuch der baad Seema se poochne laga, “Kyun mein ne eisa kiya? Kyun main uss gadi ke piche jana chahta tha? Kyun main ne Saleem bhai phukara? Kaun hai Saleem bhai? Yeh naam kuch jana pehchana lag raha hai magar mujhe kyun kuch yaad nahin araha kyun kyun kyun?!!” yeh kehte huwe Abhi apna maatha peethne laga!!”

To be continued………………

Bahut dukh hua iss update ko padhke bhai.
Itni mushkil se veh log wahan gaye aur Abhay k itne karib se guzar ke laut aaye. Kia bhai eisa kyun kar diya yaar.
Mujhko rona agaya jab Abhay pagalon ki tarah niche araha tha salim bhai ko phukarte hue.
Usska dimagi haalat thik bhi nahin k wo yaad kar sake k kon hai salim bhai usske nazron ke taar se dimagh ka signal baja aur ussne salim bhai phukara magar sab pani mein gaya. Dhat!!!
Aguey pahadta hoon
 
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Saleem bhai pariwaar ke saath ghar wapas ponhche. Ab kyunke Iqbal Sakeena ka mangitar tha to kabhi kabhaar Saleem bhai ke yahan ruk jata tha raat bhar. To uss raat ko der ho gayi ghar lawtte waqt to Saleem bhai ne Iqbal ko rukne ke liya kaha aur kamra tayyaar kiya usske liye. Magar raat ko takriban barah ya ek baje tak Sakeena Iqbal ke saath thi lounge mein ishk farmate huwe, jab ke Saleem bhai aur usski biwi sone chale gaye the. Iqbal ko full azaadi thi ghar mein wahan.

Uss taraf Jab budhe baba ko pata chala ke Abhi ne uss ke paas ane wale aadmi ko Saleem bhai kehkar phukara to ussko bahot hi mayussi huwi ke kyun usske paas uss Salim bhai ka ata pata nahin tha! Baba bahot afsos kar raha tha ke kyun Abhay ko kaam karne diya. Agar woh kaam par nahin jata to Saleem bhai ussko dargah ke andar hi mil jaate….. Budhe baba kuch josh mein agaya aur pata nahin kia kia duwaein ayatein padhte huwe Abhay par phookne laga aur ajeeb o gharib awaaz mein pata nahin kia kia keh raha tha kuch samajh mein nahin arahe the aur Abhay bahot heyraani ke saath budhe baba ke chehre mein dekhta chala jaa raha tha aur woh padh padh kar Abhay ke chehre aur sar ke upar phoonk maarte chala jaa raha tha bilkool josh mein jeise woh koyi aur ho! Aakhir mein yeh alfaaz budhe baba ke lab se saaf sunaayi diya, “Jo bhi aye the yahan unn ke khwab mein paighaam bhejh ke yeh yahan hai, keise bhi kar, unnko wapas bhej isske paas bahot ho chukka sabr mera; mera imtehaan nah le ab!!” Yeh kehkar budhe baba behosh ho gaye! Woh kuch iss kadar josh mein the jeise rab se baatein kar raha ho aur uss ke kareeb pohonch gaya ho….. wahan ke log kehte the ke saal mein sirf ek ya do baar baba uss mukaam tak pohonchta hai jab dargah wale peer se mukhatib hote the, aur wohi chamatkaar tha uss dargah ki, ke wahan ke murid uss dargah wale peer par yakeen karte the ke woh sab ki bigri ko banata hai… kayi log to yeh maante the ke budhe baba uss dargah wale peer ka rishtedaar hai aur ussko bhi ussi jagah dafnaya jaega usske intekaal ke baad.

Aur Sakeena ke yahan, donon lounge mein ek sofe par baithe ek dusre ko bahon mein liye ishk farmate huwe, meethi meethi baton mein mubtela the. Tab Sakeena ne achanak yeh baat chedi….. “ Tumko yaad hai woh aadmi dadhi wala jo upar se neeche utar rahe the hamare car ke taraf ishara karte huwe?”

Iqbal ne Sakeena ke chehre mein ek ajeeb si nazar se dekhte huwe kaha, “Han magar tum achanak kyun uss baat ko lekar baith gayi? Are yaar hum donon ke bare mein baatein karo, pyar ki batein karo kia dargah wale jagah ki baat ko ched baithi tum?!”

Sakeena ne kaha, “Pata nahin kyun mujhe laga ke woh aadmi hum logon se kuch kehna chah raha tha, jeise woh hum mein se kissi ko phukaar raha tha magar kissi ne nahin suna!”

Iqbal, “What nonsense Sakeena! Kia baat kar rahi ho tum, chalo ab sone ka time ho gaya, mujhe neend arahi hai goodnight”

Aur donon alag alag kamre mein sone chale gaye…….. Ab isse kudrat ka karishma samjho ya budhe baba ki duwaon ka assar, ke bus ek ghante ke neend ke andar achanak Iqbal cheekh utha bistar par se, “Abhayyyyyyyy, Abhayyy mera yaaaaaaaaaar!!” ghar ke sab log jaag gaye. Subha ke sare teen baje the. Saleem bhai aur Sakeena dawte huwe Iqbal ke kamre mein gaye, Iqbal pasina pasina ho gaya tha aur tarapti awaaz mein Saleem bhai se lipat kar rote huwe bola, “Saleem bhai woh hamara Abhay tha, hum ussko wahin chorr aaye Saleem bhai Hamara Abhay tha woh!!”

Yeh sunkar Saleem bhai kaampte haath se Iqbal ka peeth thapthapate huwe Sakeena ke chehre mein dekhte huwe ishare se poocha kia baat hai…. Tab tak Iqbal ne Sakeena ke taraf dekh kar ensoo bhare nazar se kaha, “Sakeena woh hamara Abhay tha, jissko tum ne dekha tha……” Sakeena ne poocha, “Magar achanak iss waqt tum yeh kyun keh rahe ho, jab main ne kuch der pehle tumse baat ki to……” Iqbal ne Sakeena ko bolne nahin diya aur thar thar kaampte huwe badan se bayaan kiya,

“Main ne zindagi mein kabhi eise darawni sapna nahin dekha hai kabhi, sapna nahin hakikat lagta tha… hum sab uss jagah se lawt rahe the aur Abhay upar se niche ke taraf dawte huwe phukaar raha tha “Saleem bhai Saleem bhai” aur main bhaagte huwe ussko apne bahon mein pakar kar ro raha tha aur ussne kaha, “Yaar Iqbal tum mujhe akela kyun chorr kar chale gaye mujhko mudh kar dekha bhi nahin mujh se milne to awo yaar main bilkool akela, tanha hoon….”….

Yeh kehkar Iqbal zoron se rone laga, aur tab tak Sakeena ne apne abu ko bataya ke jahan car roka tha ussne jab gaye rasta paar kar rahe the upar se ek daadhi wala aadmi hamare car ke taraf ishara karte huwe araha tha…… yeh sab sunkar Saleem bhai ne socha ke uss dargah par jane se shayad Iqbal par bura assar pada issi liye uss jagah ki hawa raas nahin aya ussko….. Magar thik ussi waqt Iqbal bed se utar kar apne kapde pehenkar bahot serious hokar kaha, “Jaldi chalo wapas wahan, Abhay hamara intezaar kar raha hai, Vinay aur Ananya aur Abhay ki mummy ko phone karo abhi issi waqt unn sab ko chalna hoga!

Saleem bhai yakeen nahin kar raha tha jo usske saamne ho raha tha subha ke sare teen baje ghar se nikalna aur dusron ko phone karna ussko ajeeb lag raha tha to ussne Iqbal ko shaant karne ki koshish ki, magar Iqbal kuch bhi sunne ko tayyaar nahin tha aur Saleem bhai se jhagad pada, apne hone wale sasur se oonchi awaaz mein baat kiya ussne, “Dekhiye aap logon ko agar nahin jaana hai to mat jayiye, mujhe abhi aur issi waqt nikalna hai wahan pohonchte pohonchte subha ke 8 baj jayeinguey…… main chalta hoon, pehle Vinay aur Anny ko phone kar lun…..”

Sakeena jaldi se tayaar huwi apne walid se yeh kehkar ke woh Iqbal ke saath jaegi, aur Saleem bhai ne kaha, “Beti tum kia samajhti ho ke main nahin jaa raha hoon are beshak main bhi chalta hoon, kaash hum ne uss darga wale baba se Abhay ke bare mein poocha hota!” Tab Iqbal ne kaha, “Wohi to, wohi hamari sab se badi ghalati thi ke hum ne socha ke Abhi utne door nahin nikal sakta aur woh wahin hai itne mahinon se, aap ne dekha kia haal bana liya hai apna…ek paagal jeisa dikh raha tha mera yaar….” Yeh kehkar Iqbal phir rone laga…..

Ek chamatkaar aur huwa, Jab Anny ne phone uthaya to Iqbal se rote huwe kaha, “Main ne abhi abhi Abhay ko sapne mein dekha ek oonchaayi par se niche ke taraf “Saleem bhai” phukaarte huwe dawd raha hai aur mujhse kaha, ‘Tum bhi mujhe bhool gayi nah Anny’…..” Aur Anny zoron se ro padi phone par…. To Iqbal ne kaha, “Rona band karo hamara Abhay humko mil gaya hum ussko lene jaa rahe hein tum tayaar rehna main tumko lene araha hoon usske mummy ko lekar……”

Dargah wale baba ki duwaein door aasmaan mein assar kar gaye, ke kudrat ko bhi jhukna pada aur khwab ke roop mein sahi, Abhay ka deedaar karwa diya yaaron ko. Wah!

To be continued…………….

Lo phir se rula diya aap ne Ikbal ko rula ke hame bhi....
Chalo uff ab to umeed ki kiran nazar aayi. Agle update mein sab zarur milenge ab :happy:
Mogambo khush huwa
 
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