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Romance Aur Ek Prem Kahani (COMPLETED)

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Seema ki laakh koshishon ke bawajood Jab Abhay ne kuch nahin bola to Seema niraash ho gayi aur apne ghar walon se poocha ke keise pata lagaya jaye usske bare mein. Seema chahti thi ke Abhay kuch bole, apna naam bataye, apne bare mein batayein aur uss se batein kare. Seema mann hi mann to bahot pyar karne lagi thi Abhay se magar budhe baba ke kahe huwe baton ko sochkar apne dil ko samjha rahi thi Abhay usska nahin hai phir bhi Seema ne socha ke mann ke andar apne pyar ko chupa to sakti hai.

Jiss raat ko gufe mein se Abhay mila tha aur raat bhar Abhay Seema ke yahan raha tha, uss subha ko Seema kaam par nahin gayi Abhay ke saath din bitane ko soch rakhi thi. To subha chae waghaira peene ke baad Seema Abhay ko apne saath legayi ghumne ke liye. Ek bus se donon uss taraf ke sheher ko gaye. Sheher pohonch kar Seema ne Abhay ke haath pakre huwe chalna shuru kiya. Log mudh mudh kar un donon ko dekh rahe the. Dekhne mein Abhay ek pagal khane se bhaga huwa mariz dikhta tha, lambe baal, lambe kale dadhi, dekhta eise tha jeise bowkla gaya ho….. Ab sheher mein charon taraf Abhay eise dekh raha tha jeise kissi cheez ki talaash kar raha ho….. kia ussko kuch yaad araha tha? Kia ussko kuch jana pehchana sa lag raha tha?? ….Seema usska haath pakre ussko khinchti chal rahi thi magar woh baar baar piche mudhkar kuch na kuch dekhta rehta tha upar se log ghurr kar donon ko dekhte jaa rahe the to Seema ko bilkool achcha nahin lag raha tha…. Phir ek jagah ruk kar Seema ne uss se kaha, “Chalo tumhare baal katwate hein aur tumhare dhaadi nikalwaate hein tab dekhun to keise lagte ho, thik hai?” Magar Abhay bachche ki tarah inkaar kar raha tha; phir bhi Seema ne zid ki aur ussko wahan ek barber ke yahan legayi.

Ghante bhar baith kar intezaar karne ke baad Abhay bina dhadi ke aur baal ki achi si cut ke baad Seema ke saamne aaya! Seema ussko dekh kar dekhti reh gayi aur kaha, “Kitne handsome ho tum! Bahot saare ladkiyan marte honge tum par nah? Tumko kissi ek ladki ka naam yaad bhi hai Anny ke siwa?” Abhay ne nah mein sar hilaya! Tab Seema ne kaha, “are tumko samajh mein aya ke main ne kia poocha?” Abhay ne han mein sar hilaya. Tab Seema ne kaha, “To har baat jab main tumse karti hoon to tumko samajh mein ata hai” tab Abhay ne apne kaandhon ko upar uthate huwe jawaab diya jisska matlab tha ke pata nahin…. Phir Seema ne Abhay ko ek ache dukaan mein kapde usske size ke try karwaaye aur teen sets liya jeans aur tshirs aur shirts Abhay ke liye. Ab kyun ke usska pehna huwa kapda ganda tha to shop mein hi ek naye jean aur Tshirt mein dress kar diya Seema ne Abhay ko, do naye joote bhi kharide Seema ne Abhy ke liye, aur baahar nikle to Abhay asli Abhay dikh raha tha uss waqt.

Seema jee bhar ke Abhay ko dekhti rahi aur mann hi mann kaha, “kyun kar tumse pyar na hoga mujhe? Itne handsome ho, achche ho, mera saathi ho, humsafar ban sakte ho, kyun pyar na karun main tumko?” Apne mann ko sambhaalna mushkil hota jaa raha tha Seema se phir bhi koshish mein lagi huwi thi hriday se Abhay ko nikaalne ko magar keise kuch samajh mein nahin araha tha Seema ko.

Khair, usske baad Seema ne Abhay ko khub ghumaya uss chote se sheher mein jo uss gaon ke bus thodi si doorie par tha. Aur aakhir mein ek chota sa hotel mein gaye khana khane ke liye. Abhay uss naye joote se thik se chal nahin paa raha tha, joota ussko kaat raha tha kyun ke kayi mahinon ke baad aaj joota pehna tha ussne… hotel mein khana khane ke baad jab Seema ne pine ke liye coke mangwaye to Abhay bola, “Pepsi peeta hoon main” Seema chonhki aur khushi ke mare uth khadi huwi yeh kahte huwe Abhay ke donon haathon ko apne haathon mein lekar, “Tum bole, Anny ke ilawa tum ne aur bhi baat kiya hein!! Pepsi peete ho? Tumko yaad hai ke tum pepsi peete ho, bolo bolo kahan last baar pepsi piya tha tumne bolo yaar bolo!!” jhoomte huwe Seema ke enkhon se ensoo nikal pade aur poochti rahi magar Abhay phir ek baar khaamosh hogaya!! Bahot koshish ki Seema ne, poochte poochte ro padi Abhay se usske bare mein magar Abhay ek buth bana tha usske saamne……

Wahan se ek chota sa garden mein jaakar baithe donon ek bench par aur Seema ne rote huwe Abhay se kaha, “Mujhpar kia beet rahi hai samajhte ho tum, mujhko kitni khushi hogi ke tum apne bare mein mujhko batawo, mujhe kitni khushi hogi ke tum aur ziada bolo, apne bare mein batawo, kia karun main keise tumse baat karwaun main?” Ussko rote huwe dekh kar Abhay bola bus itna “Anny par bhi bahot kuch beeta hai bechaari Anny” Seema rote rote hanss padi Abhay ko bolte huwe sunkar, aur Abhay ke gaalon ko chumte huwe kaha, “Tum phir bole yaar, kaun hai yeh Anny? Kia beeti hai usspar? Tumhara kia lagta hai Anny mujhse khul kar batawo nah, bolo please bolo Anny ke bare mein hi sahi kuch to batawo mujhe…bolo yaar bolo!”

Kamaal ki baat hai, Abhay apna hosh o hawaas kho baitha tha phir bhi ussko itna yaad aya ke usske Anny par bahot kuch beeta hai magar ussko kia pata ke jitna ussko pata hai uss se kayi ziada jheli hai usske Anny ne! ussko kia pata ke usski Anny ko kia kia kaha gaya aur keise usski Anny vidwa bhi ban gayi hai… yeh sab pata hota tab kia hota Abhay ko kia pata!! Jab laakh poochne par Abhay kuch nahin bola uss se ziada to roti huwi Seema ne Abhay ko wapas ghar lawtne ko kaha. Donon chal rahe the to Seema ne poocha, “Achchah apne ghar ka pata batawo mujhe? Address bolo?” Abhay ne socha phir kaha, “Dance school” Seema phir khush huwi aur sochne lagi ke dhire dhire shaayad Abhay ki yaaddaash wapas arahe hein, magar kyun ussne dance school kaha? Yeh to koyi pata ya address nahin huwi….

Ab kissko pata ke Abhay ke dimaagh ke kamre ke andar kitna adhera tha aur kahan thodi bahot roshni aarahe the jo ussko kuch kuch yaad araha tha ya memory ke kissi kone se zubaan par purani save ki gayi lavz bus zubaan par aajaate the kissko kia pata? Yeh to khud Abhay ko bhi nahin pata!!

Ghar wapas lawtte waqt Seema loo gayi aur Abhay ko ek bus stop ke paas wait karne ko kaha- toilet bus stop ke piche tha; jab Abhay wait kar raha tha to ek bus ruka thik jahan woh khada tha to uss bus mein se ek ladki ne apna haath wave karte huwe Abhay ko kaha, “Hi Abhay main aap ki fan hoon, kab agla show karoge?” Abhay uss ladki ko wave karne laga aur soch mein doobe huwe ussko ghurr raha tha…. Tab tak Seema loo se wapas arahi thi aur bus jaane lagi aur uss ladki ne jaate huwe bus mein se Abhay ko wave karte huwe zor se kaha, “Abhay we love you Abhi apna show continue karna Abhi….” Seema ne uss ‘Abhi” naam ko achchi tarah se suna aur dekha ke bus ke andar se who ladki Abhay ko uss naam se bula rahi thi to Seema thoda heyraan aur kuch khush hote huwe Abhay ke kareeb aayi aur dekha ke Abhay soch mein doobe magar wave karta jaa raha tha uss jaate huwe bus ke taraf…. To Seema ne usske kaan mein zor se kaha, “Abhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii” Tab Abhay chohonk gaya aur poocha, “Tumko keise pata ke main Abhi hoon?” Seema khushi se jhoom uthi aur kaha, “To kia tumhara naam sach mein Abhi hai? Tum Abhi ho?” Tab Abhay phir se khaaamosh ho gaya aur apne kaandon ko upar karte huwe ishara kiya ke pata nahin!!!!!

To be continued………………..
 

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Seema bus mein lautte waqt sochti rahi ke woh ladki kaun thi jiss ne Abhi ko phukaara, woh keise Abhi ko jaanti thi, kahan rehti hai, keise iss taraf se guzar rahi thi, Seema soch mein padi bus mein safar kar rahi thi aur Abhay diwane ki tarah apne sar ko bus ke window side se lagaaye gum khoya tha kahin khayaaalon mein.

Ab Abhay ka mental problem yeh tha ke sadme se eisa hota hai ke dimaagh ke kissi hisse par dabaav padne ki vajaah se kissi ek fuse ka udh jana hota hai. Isse ek epileptic failure bhi kehte hein. Eise haalaat mein woh dimaagh ka fuse apne aap repair ho jata hai magar waqt ke saath, kuch waqt lagta hai ussko repair hone mein. Yaadaash kho jate hein aur kuch bhi yaad nahin rehta, aadmi chote bachon jeisa vyohaar karne lagte hein aur ek lamhe pehle guzre wakia ko bhool jate hein. Woh kissi ko pehchaante to nahin magar pehchaanne ki dhong karte hein aur kabhi chehre se to pehchaante hein magar naam nahin yaad kar paate ke woh pehchaani chehre wala kaun hai…. Ab agar gharwale ya doston ke beech rehte to yaadaash ka wapas ana asaan hota. Phir bhi waqt lagta hi hai, dhire dhire sab hota hai. Jiss ladki ne Abhay ko wave kiya Abhay ko bilkool pata nahin ke woh kaun thi aur kyun ussko weisa kaha, Abhay ko uss waqt laga ke ussko bhi wave karna chahiye so uss ne bhi wave kiya, magar ussko bilkool kuch bhi yaad nahin tha aur Abhay bhool bhi gaya ke ladki ne kaha woh usski fan hai aur ussko show continue karna chahiye yeh sab baat Abhay bhool gaya magar jiss waqt uss ladki ne show aur fan lavz istemaal kiye to Abhay ko thik uss waqt weh lavz ussko jana pehchana laga phir ussne ussko ladki ko respond kiya. Sab hone ke baad woh phir apne dunya mein kho gaya. Ab iss haalat mein weise sadme mein ghire log kia sochte hein aur kiss dunya mein rehte hein kiss ko pata?!

Taqdeer ka khel dekhiye bus kuch din pehle agar Seema ne ussko uss sheher mein legaya hota to papers aur TV mein charcha huwe the Abhay ka to koyi na koyi to pehchaanta, shayad dhadhi banane wala naayi hi ya kissi paper mein usski tasveer dikh jata Seema ko uss waqt…. Magar unn dinon jab akhbaar mein usska photo aya tha tab to Abhay ka chehra jana pehchana bhi nahin tha…..

Ab Seema ne yeh to nahin suna ke uss ladki ne usss se yeh kaha ke woh usski fan hai, varna Seema andaza to laga sakti thi ke Abhay koyi star, kalakar, actor vaghaira hai, magar Seema jab loo se nikli to bus jaa rahi thi aur ladki ko ‘Abhi’ phukaarte huwe suna bus to Seema ko bhi ziada pata nahin chala uss waqt.

Dargah par lawtne ke baad Budhe baba Abhay ke naye roop dekhkar khush huwe aur Seema ko duwaein di. Seema ne bataya ke Abhay ka naam Abhi hai. Seema ne sabhi sheher mein guzre wakeaat sunaaye baba ko. Aur baba bhi chintit ho gaya yeh sochte huwe ke kaun hoga yeh Abhay. Par baba ne Seema se kaha,

“Magar beti mere khayaal se shaayad isska koyi accident hone se isske dimaagh par chot ponhcha hai, kyun ke yeh jab yahan aya tha to isske kamiz par khoon lage huwe the aur choth lagi thi isske chehre par jo sukh bhi chuke the, dekho isske honth ke upar wale hisse par ek choth ka nishaan hai, sar par bhi hai, pata nahin car accident huwa ya kissi gadi se takraya ya kuch bhi huwa hoga… ab rab jane kia maajra hai …..”

Seema ne Abhay ke naye kharide huwe kapde baba ko diye rakhne ke liye aur phir se Abhay ko apne saath le gayi. Abhay se hazaar batein karne ke baad woh ek baat ka jawaab deta tha ya achanak beech beech mein kuch bol deta tha. Yunhi ek baar Seema baat cheet ke dawraan kehrahi thi, “Abhi tumko uss ladki ne Abhi kyun bulaya agar tum Abhi nahin ho to? Matlab saaf hai ke tumhara naam Abhi hai” Uss waqt achanak Abhay ne kaha, “Abhay naam hai mera Abhi to eise hi bulate hein sab mujhko!” Phir Seema ke dil ke dhadkan tez huwi aur pyar bhare nazron se bilkool heyraan Abhay ke enkhon mein dekhne lagi iss intezaar mein ko woh kuch ziada kahe magar bahot udaas ho jaati jab turant baad Abhay phir apne aap mein khud ko band kar leta.

Seema ke laakh poocne par bhi Abhay kuch nahin bola usske baad. Seema ne poocha, “Abhay kaun log tumko Abhi bulate hein Abhay ke bajaye? Kaun hein woh log? Yaad karo Abhay bolo mujhe, abhi abhi tumne baat kiya weise hi kuch aur kaho nah please Abhay bolo tum bolte ho to bahot achah lagta hai sunne ko, kuch to bolo nah!”

Magar Abhay keise bolta ussko khud nahin pata tha ke kyun aur keise woh jumla usske munh se nikla, aur khud hi bhool gaya ke ussne kia kaha tha, keise aur ziada bolta woh?

Phir sham ko dargah lawtne ke baad jab Seema ne baba ko baat batayi to baba ne kaha, “Lagta hai issko kissi hospital mein daakhil karna chahiye isske ilaaj ke liye tab isska dimaagh wapas kaam karega! Magar Seema raazi nahin thi ke hospital ki zaroorat hai Abhi ko. Ussne kaha, ke Abhay ko pyar ki zaroorat hai, ussko hamdardi aur ek saathi ki zaroorat hai jo ussko pyar kare, tab woh thik hoga, hospital lejaya gaya to shaayad dimaaghi hospital mein shift karein ussko aur Seema nahin chahti thi Abhay ko pagal khane mein lejaya jaye! Ussko yakeen thi ke uss ke saath rehkar Abhay thik ho sakta hai.

Magar jab raat ko Seema ko apne ghar lawtne ka waqt aya to udaas ho gayi aur baba se phir Abhay ko apne saath lejane ki farmaayish ki. To baba ne poocha, “Tere ghar walon ko eitraaz to nahin ke tum issko apne ghar lejawo?” Seema ne kaha ke nahin kissi ko koyi bhi eitraaz nahin to baba ne ijazat dedi ussko apne saath lejane ko phir ek baar aur Seema khushi khushi Abhay ko apne ghar legayi aur Abhay bhi khush tha usske saath jane ke liye.

Seema ke ghar mein sirf usske mata pita aur ek chota bhai tha. Weh log TV dekh rahe the aur Seema ne Abhay ko wahin baithne ko kaha. Abhay dusre logon ke beech rehna passand nahin karta tha, sirf Seema ke paas hi rehna passand karta tha. Seema ke chote bhai ne Abhay ko cherrte huwe kaha, “WAH WAH EKDUM HERO DIKHTE HO AAJ TO, KIA STYLE HAI YAAR! Kiss film ka actor ho yaar” To Abhay ne achanak uss ko jawaab diya, “Main actor nahin dancer hoon, par acting dance ke saath karta hoon”…… yeh sunkar Seema ke enkh bhar aaye aur jaldi se Abhay ke paas baithi aur poochne lagi, “Han han bolo tum dancer ho Abhay, kahan? Kahan dance karte ho kaun sa dance karte ho humko dance karke batawo, utho utho dance karo hum dekheinguey Abhay……..”

To be continued…………………..
 

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Seema ki laakh koshishon ke bawajood Jab Abhay ne kuch nahin bola to Seema niraash ho gayi aur apne ghar walon se poocha ke keise pata lagaya jaye usske bare mein. Seema chahti thi ke Abhay kuch bole, apna naam bataye, apne bare mein batayein aur uss se batein kare. Seema mann hi mann to bahot pyar karne lagi thi Abhay se magar budhe baba ke kahe huwe baton ko sochkar apne dil ko samjha rahi thi Abhay usska nahin hai phir bhi Seema ne socha ke mann ke andar apne pyar ko chupa to sakti hai.

Jiss raat ko gufe mein se Abhay mila tha aur raat bhar Abhay Seema ke yahan raha tha, uss subha ko Seema kaam par nahin gayi Abhay ke saath din bitane ko soch rakhi thi. To subha chae waghaira peene ke baad Seema Abhay ko apne saath legayi ghumne ke liye. Ek bus se donon uss taraf ke sheher ko gaye. Sheher pohonch kar Seema ne Abhay ke haath pakre huwe chalna shuru kiya. Log mudh mudh kar un donon ko dekh rahe the. Dekhne mein Abhay ek pagal khane se bhaga huwa mariz dikhta tha, lambe baal, lambe kale dadhi, dekhta eise tha jeise bowkla gaya ho….. Ab sheher mein charon taraf Abhay eise dekh raha tha jeise kissi cheez ki talaash kar raha ho….. kia ussko kuch yaad araha tha? Kia ussko kuch jana pehchana sa lag raha tha?? ….Seema usska haath pakre ussko khinchti chal rahi thi magar woh baar baar piche mudhkar kuch na kuch dekhta rehta tha upar se log ghurr kar donon ko dekhte jaa rahe the to Seema ko bilkool achcha nahin lag raha tha…. Phir ek jagah ruk kar Seema ne uss se kaha, “Chalo tumhare baal katwate hein aur tumhare dhaadi nikalwaate hein tab dekhun to keise lagte ho, thik hai?” Magar Abhay bachche ki tarah inkaar kar raha tha; phir bhi Seema ne zid ki aur ussko wahan ek barber ke yahan legayi.

Ghante bhar baith kar intezaar karne ke baad Abhay bina dhadi ke aur baal ki achi si cut ke baad Seema ke saamne aaya! Seema ussko dekh kar dekhti reh gayi aur kaha, “Kitne handsome ho tum! Bahot saare ladkiyan marte honge tum par nah? Tumko kissi ek ladki ka naam yaad bhi hai Anny ke siwa?” Abhay ne nah mein sar hilaya! Tab Seema ne kaha, “are tumko samajh mein aya ke main ne kia poocha?” Abhay ne han mein sar hilaya. Tab Seema ne kaha, “To har baat jab main tumse karti hoon to tumko samajh mein ata hai” tab Abhay ne apne kaandhon ko upar uthate huwe jawaab diya jisska matlab tha ke pata nahin…. Phir Seema ne Abhay ko ek ache dukaan mein kapde usske size ke try karwaaye aur teen sets liya jeans aur tshirs aur shirts Abhay ke liye. Ab kyun ke usska pehna huwa kapda ganda tha to shop mein hi ek naye jean aur Tshirt mein dress kar diya Seema ne Abhay ko, do naye joote bhi kharide Seema ne Abhy ke liye, aur baahar nikle to Abhay asli Abhay dikh raha tha uss waqt.

Seema jee bhar ke Abhay ko dekhti rahi aur mann hi mann kaha, “kyun kar tumse pyar na hoga mujhe? Itne handsome ho, achche ho, mera saathi ho, humsafar ban sakte ho, kyun pyar na karun main tumko?” Apne mann ko sambhaalna mushkil hota jaa raha tha Seema se phir bhi koshish mein lagi huwi thi hriday se Abhay ko nikaalne ko magar keise kuch samajh mein nahin araha tha Seema ko.

Khair, usske baad Seema ne Abhay ko khub ghumaya uss chote se sheher mein jo uss gaon ke bus thodi si doorie par tha. Aur aakhir mein ek chota sa hotel mein gaye khana khane ke liye. Abhay uss naye joote se thik se chal nahin paa raha tha, joota ussko kaat raha tha kyun ke kayi mahinon ke baad aaj joota pehna tha ussne… hotel mein khana khane ke baad jab Seema ne pine ke liye coke mangwaye to Abhay bola, “Pepsi peeta hoon main” Seema chonhki aur khushi ke mare uth khadi huwi yeh kahte huwe Abhay ke donon haathon ko apne haathon mein lekar, “Tum bole, Anny ke ilawa tum ne aur bhi baat kiya hein!! Pepsi peete ho? Tumko yaad hai ke tum pepsi peete ho, bolo bolo kahan last baar pepsi piya tha tumne bolo yaar bolo!!” jhoomte huwe Seema ke enkhon se ensoo nikal pade aur poochti rahi magar Abhay phir ek baar khaamosh hogaya!! Bahot koshish ki Seema ne, poochte poochte ro padi Abhay se usske bare mein magar Abhay ek buth bana tha usske saamne……

Wahan se ek chota sa garden mein jaakar baithe donon ek bench par aur Seema ne rote huwe Abhay se kaha, “Mujhpar kia beet rahi hai samajhte ho tum, mujhko kitni khushi hogi ke tum apne bare mein mujhko batawo, mujhe kitni khushi hogi ke tum aur ziada bolo, apne bare mein batawo, kia karun main keise tumse baat karwaun main?” Ussko rote huwe dekh kar Abhay bola bus itna “Anny par bhi bahot kuch beeta hai bechaari Anny” Seema rote rote hanss padi Abhay ko bolte huwe sunkar, aur Abhay ke gaalon ko chumte huwe kaha, “Tum phir bole yaar, kaun hai yeh Anny? Kia beeti hai usspar? Tumhara kia lagta hai Anny mujhse khul kar batawo nah, bolo please bolo Anny ke bare mein hi sahi kuch to batawo mujhe…bolo yaar bolo!”

Kamaal ki baat hai, Abhay apna hosh o hawaas kho baitha tha phir bhi ussko itna yaad aya ke usske Anny par bahot kuch beeta hai magar ussko kia pata ke jitna ussko pata hai uss se kayi ziada jheli hai usske Anny ne! ussko kia pata ke usski Anny ko kia kia kaha gaya aur keise usski Anny vidwa bhi ban gayi hai… yeh sab pata hota tab kia hota Abhay ko kia pata!! Jab laakh poochne par Abhay kuch nahin bola uss se ziada to roti huwi Seema ne Abhay ko wapas ghar lawtne ko kaha. Donon chal rahe the to Seema ne poocha, “Achchah apne ghar ka pata batawo mujhe? Address bolo?” Abhay ne socha phir kaha, “Dance school” Seema phir khush huwi aur sochne lagi ke dhire dhire shaayad Abhay ki yaaddaash wapas arahe hein, magar kyun ussne dance school kaha? Yeh to koyi pata ya address nahin huwi….

Ab kissko pata ke Abhay ke dimaagh ke kamre ke andar kitna adhera tha aur kahan thodi bahot roshni aarahe the jo ussko kuch kuch yaad araha tha ya memory ke kissi kone se zubaan par purani save ki gayi lavz bus zubaan par aajaate the kissko kia pata? Yeh to khud Abhay ko bhi nahin pata!!

Ghar wapas lawtte waqt Seema loo gayi aur Abhay ko ek bus stop ke paas wait karne ko kaha- toilet bus stop ke piche tha; jab Abhay wait kar raha tha to ek bus ruka thik jahan woh khada tha to uss bus mein se ek ladki ne apna haath wave karte huwe Abhay ko kaha, “Hi Abhay main aap ki fan hoon, kab agla show karoge?” Abhay uss ladki ko wave karne laga aur soch mein doobe huwe ussko ghurr raha tha…. Tab tak Seema loo se wapas arahi thi aur bus jaane lagi aur uss ladki ne jaate huwe bus mein se Abhay ko wave karte huwe zor se kaha, “Abhay we love you Abhi apna show continue karna Abhi….” Seema ne uss ‘Abhi” naam ko achchi tarah se suna aur dekha ke bus ke andar se who ladki Abhay ko uss naam se bula rahi thi to Seema thoda heyraan aur kuch khush hote huwe Abhay ke kareeb aayi aur dekha ke Abhay soch mein doobe magar wave karta jaa raha tha uss jaate huwe bus ke taraf…. To Seema ne usske kaan mein zor se kaha, “Abhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii” Tab Abhay chohonk gaya aur poocha, “Tumko keise pata ke main Abhi hoon?” Seema khushi se jhoom uthi aur kaha, “To kia tumhara naam sach mein Abhi hai? Tum Abhi ho?” Tab Abhay phir se khaaamosh ho gaya aur apne kaandon ko upar karte huwe ishara kiya ke pata nahin!!!!!

To be continued………………..
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Seema bus mein lautte waqt sochti rahi ke woh ladki kaun thi jiss ne Abhi ko phukaara, woh keise Abhi ko jaanti thi, kahan rehti hai, keise iss taraf se guzar rahi thi, Seema soch mein padi bus mein safar kar rahi thi aur Abhay diwane ki tarah apne sar ko bus ke window side se lagaaye gum khoya tha kahin khayaaalon mein.

Ab Abhay ka mental problem yeh tha ke sadme se eisa hota hai ke dimaagh ke kissi hisse par dabaav padne ki vajaah se kissi ek fuse ka udh jana hota hai. Isse ek epileptic failure bhi kehte hein. Eise haalaat mein woh dimaagh ka fuse apne aap repair ho jata hai magar waqt ke saath, kuch waqt lagta hai ussko repair hone mein. Yaadaash kho jate hein aur kuch bhi yaad nahin rehta, aadmi chote bachon jeisa vyohaar karne lagte hein aur ek lamhe pehle guzre wakia ko bhool jate hein. Woh kissi ko pehchaante to nahin magar pehchaanne ki dhong karte hein aur kabhi chehre se to pehchaante hein magar naam nahin yaad kar paate ke woh pehchaani chehre wala kaun hai…. Ab agar gharwale ya doston ke beech rehte to yaadaash ka wapas ana asaan hota. Phir bhi waqt lagta hi hai, dhire dhire sab hota hai. Jiss ladki ne Abhay ko wave kiya Abhay ko bilkool pata nahin ke woh kaun thi aur kyun ussko weisa kaha, Abhay ko uss waqt laga ke ussko bhi wave karna chahiye so uss ne bhi wave kiya, magar ussko bilkool kuch bhi yaad nahin tha aur Abhay bhool bhi gaya ke ladki ne kaha woh usski fan hai aur ussko show continue karna chahiye yeh sab baat Abhay bhool gaya magar jiss waqt uss ladki ne show aur fan lavz istemaal kiye to Abhay ko thik uss waqt weh lavz ussko jana pehchana laga phir ussne ussko ladki ko respond kiya. Sab hone ke baad woh phir apne dunya mein kho gaya. Ab iss haalat mein weise sadme mein ghire log kia sochte hein aur kiss dunya mein rehte hein kiss ko pata?!

Taqdeer ka khel dekhiye bus kuch din pehle agar Seema ne ussko uss sheher mein legaya hota to papers aur TV mein charcha huwe the Abhay ka to koyi na koyi to pehchaanta, shayad dhadhi banane wala naayi hi ya kissi paper mein usski tasveer dikh jata Seema ko uss waqt…. Magar unn dinon jab akhbaar mein usska photo aya tha tab to Abhay ka chehra jana pehchana bhi nahin tha…..

Ab Seema ne yeh to nahin suna ke uss ladki ne usss se yeh kaha ke woh usski fan hai, varna Seema andaza to laga sakti thi ke Abhay koyi star, kalakar, actor vaghaira hai, magar Seema jab loo se nikli to bus jaa rahi thi aur ladki ko ‘Abhi’ phukaarte huwe suna bus to Seema ko bhi ziada pata nahin chala uss waqt.

Dargah par lawtne ke baad Budhe baba Abhay ke naye roop dekhkar khush huwe aur Seema ko duwaein di. Seema ne bataya ke Abhay ka naam Abhi hai. Seema ne sabhi sheher mein guzre wakeaat sunaaye baba ko. Aur baba bhi chintit ho gaya yeh sochte huwe ke kaun hoga yeh Abhay. Par baba ne Seema se kaha,

“Magar beti mere khayaal se shaayad isska koyi accident hone se isske dimaagh par chot ponhcha hai, kyun ke yeh jab yahan aya tha to isske kamiz par khoon lage huwe the aur choth lagi thi isske chehre par jo sukh bhi chuke the, dekho isske honth ke upar wale hisse par ek choth ka nishaan hai, sar par bhi hai, pata nahin car accident huwa ya kissi gadi se takraya ya kuch bhi huwa hoga… ab rab jane kia maajra hai …..”

Seema ne Abhay ke naye kharide huwe kapde baba ko diye rakhne ke liye aur phir se Abhay ko apne saath le gayi. Abhay se hazaar batein karne ke baad woh ek baat ka jawaab deta tha ya achanak beech beech mein kuch bol deta tha. Yunhi ek baar Seema baat cheet ke dawraan kehrahi thi, “Abhi tumko uss ladki ne Abhi kyun bulaya agar tum Abhi nahin ho to? Matlab saaf hai ke tumhara naam Abhi hai” Uss waqt achanak Abhay ne kaha, “Abhay naam hai mera Abhi to eise hi bulate hein sab mujhko!” Phir Seema ke dil ke dhadkan tez huwi aur pyar bhare nazron se bilkool heyraan Abhay ke enkhon mein dekhne lagi iss intezaar mein ko woh kuch ziada kahe magar bahot udaas ho jaati jab turant baad Abhay phir apne aap mein khud ko band kar leta.

Seema ke laakh poocne par bhi Abhay kuch nahin bola usske baad. Seema ne poocha, “Abhay kaun log tumko Abhi bulate hein Abhay ke bajaye? Kaun hein woh log? Yaad karo Abhay bolo mujhe, abhi abhi tumne baat kiya weise hi kuch aur kaho nah please Abhay bolo tum bolte ho to bahot achah lagta hai sunne ko, kuch to bolo nah!”

Magar Abhay keise bolta ussko khud nahin pata tha ke kyun aur keise woh jumla usske munh se nikla, aur khud hi bhool gaya ke ussne kia kaha tha, keise aur ziada bolta woh?

Phir sham ko dargah lawtne ke baad jab Seema ne baba ko baat batayi to baba ne kaha, “Lagta hai issko kissi hospital mein daakhil karna chahiye isske ilaaj ke liye tab isska dimaagh wapas kaam karega! Magar Seema raazi nahin thi ke hospital ki zaroorat hai Abhi ko. Ussne kaha, ke Abhay ko pyar ki zaroorat hai, ussko hamdardi aur ek saathi ki zaroorat hai jo ussko pyar kare, tab woh thik hoga, hospital lejaya gaya to shaayad dimaaghi hospital mein shift karein ussko aur Seema nahin chahti thi Abhay ko pagal khane mein lejaya jaye! Ussko yakeen thi ke uss ke saath rehkar Abhay thik ho sakta hai.

Magar jab raat ko Seema ko apne ghar lawtne ka waqt aya to udaas ho gayi aur baba se phir Abhay ko apne saath lejane ki farmaayish ki. To baba ne poocha, “Tere ghar walon ko eitraaz to nahin ke tum issko apne ghar lejawo?” Seema ne kaha ke nahin kissi ko koyi bhi eitraaz nahin to baba ne ijazat dedi ussko apne saath lejane ko phir ek baar aur Seema khushi khushi Abhay ko apne ghar legayi aur Abhay bhi khush tha usske saath jane ke liye.

Seema ke ghar mein sirf usske mata pita aur ek chota bhai tha. Weh log TV dekh rahe the aur Seema ne Abhay ko wahin baithne ko kaha. Abhay dusre logon ke beech rehna passand nahin karta tha, sirf Seema ke paas hi rehna passand karta tha. Seema ke chote bhai ne Abhay ko cherrte huwe kaha, “WAH WAH EKDUM HERO DIKHTE HO AAJ TO, KIA STYLE HAI YAAR! Kiss film ka actor ho yaar” To Abhay ne achanak uss ko jawaab diya, “Main actor nahin dancer hoon, par acting dance ke saath karta hoon”…… yeh sunkar Seema ke enkh bhar aaye aur jaldi se Abhay ke paas baithi aur poochne lagi, “Han han bolo tum dancer ho Abhay, kahan? Kahan dance karte ho kaun sa dance karte ho humko dance karke batawo, utho utho dance karo hum dekheinguey Abhay……..”

To be continued…………………..
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Seema ki laakh koshishon ke bawajood Jab Abhay ne kuch nahin bola to Seema niraash ho gayi aur apne ghar walon se poocha ke keise pata lagaya jaye usske bare mein. Seema chahti thi ke Abhay kuch bole, apna naam bataye, apne bare mein batayein aur uss se batein kare. Seema mann hi mann to bahot pyar karne lagi thi Abhay se magar budhe baba ke kahe huwe baton ko sochkar apne dil ko samjha rahi thi Abhay usska nahin hai phir bhi Seema ne socha ke mann ke andar apne pyar ko chupa to sakti hai.

Jiss raat ko gufe mein se Abhay mila tha aur raat bhar Abhay Seema ke yahan raha tha, uss subha ko Seema kaam par nahin gayi Abhay ke saath din bitane ko soch rakhi thi. To subha chae waghaira peene ke baad Seema Abhay ko apne saath legayi ghumne ke liye. Ek bus se donon uss taraf ke sheher ko gaye. Sheher pohonch kar Seema ne Abhay ke haath pakre huwe chalna shuru kiya. Log mudh mudh kar un donon ko dekh rahe the. Dekhne mein Abhay ek pagal khane se bhaga huwa mariz dikhta tha, lambe baal, lambe kale dadhi, dekhta eise tha jeise bowkla gaya ho….. Ab sheher mein charon taraf Abhay eise dekh raha tha jeise kissi cheez ki talaash kar raha ho….. kia ussko kuch yaad araha tha? Kia ussko kuch jana pehchana sa lag raha tha?? ….Seema usska haath pakre ussko khinchti chal rahi thi magar woh baar baar piche mudhkar kuch na kuch dekhta rehta tha upar se log ghurr kar donon ko dekhte jaa rahe the to Seema ko bilkool achcha nahin lag raha tha…. Phir ek jagah ruk kar Seema ne uss se kaha, “Chalo tumhare baal katwate hein aur tumhare dhaadi nikalwaate hein tab dekhun to keise lagte ho, thik hai?” Magar Abhay bachche ki tarah inkaar kar raha tha; phir bhi Seema ne zid ki aur ussko wahan ek barber ke yahan legayi.

Ghante bhar baith kar intezaar karne ke baad Abhay bina dhadi ke aur baal ki achi si cut ke baad Seema ke saamne aaya! Seema ussko dekh kar dekhti reh gayi aur kaha, “Kitne handsome ho tum! Bahot saare ladkiyan marte honge tum par nah? Tumko kissi ek ladki ka naam yaad bhi hai Anny ke siwa?” Abhay ne nah mein sar hilaya! Tab Seema ne kaha, “are tumko samajh mein aya ke main ne kia poocha?” Abhay ne han mein sar hilaya. Tab Seema ne kaha, “To har baat jab main tumse karti hoon to tumko samajh mein ata hai” tab Abhay ne apne kaandhon ko upar uthate huwe jawaab diya jisska matlab tha ke pata nahin…. Phir Seema ne Abhay ko ek ache dukaan mein kapde usske size ke try karwaaye aur teen sets liya jeans aur tshirs aur shirts Abhay ke liye. Ab kyun ke usska pehna huwa kapda ganda tha to shop mein hi ek naye jean aur Tshirt mein dress kar diya Seema ne Abhay ko, do naye joote bhi kharide Seema ne Abhy ke liye, aur baahar nikle to Abhay asli Abhay dikh raha tha uss waqt.

Seema jee bhar ke Abhay ko dekhti rahi aur mann hi mann kaha, “kyun kar tumse pyar na hoga mujhe? Itne handsome ho, achche ho, mera saathi ho, humsafar ban sakte ho, kyun pyar na karun main tumko?” Apne mann ko sambhaalna mushkil hota jaa raha tha Seema se phir bhi koshish mein lagi huwi thi hriday se Abhay ko nikaalne ko magar keise kuch samajh mein nahin araha tha Seema ko.

Khair, usske baad Seema ne Abhay ko khub ghumaya uss chote se sheher mein jo uss gaon ke bus thodi si doorie par tha. Aur aakhir mein ek chota sa hotel mein gaye khana khane ke liye. Abhay uss naye joote se thik se chal nahin paa raha tha, joota ussko kaat raha tha kyun ke kayi mahinon ke baad aaj joota pehna tha ussne… hotel mein khana khane ke baad jab Seema ne pine ke liye coke mangwaye to Abhay bola, “Pepsi peeta hoon main” Seema chonhki aur khushi ke mare uth khadi huwi yeh kahte huwe Abhay ke donon haathon ko apne haathon mein lekar, “Tum bole, Anny ke ilawa tum ne aur bhi baat kiya hein!! Pepsi peete ho? Tumko yaad hai ke tum pepsi peete ho, bolo bolo kahan last baar pepsi piya tha tumne bolo yaar bolo!!” jhoomte huwe Seema ke enkhon se ensoo nikal pade aur poochti rahi magar Abhay phir ek baar khaamosh hogaya!! Bahot koshish ki Seema ne, poochte poochte ro padi Abhay se usske bare mein magar Abhay ek buth bana tha usske saamne……

Wahan se ek chota sa garden mein jaakar baithe donon ek bench par aur Seema ne rote huwe Abhay se kaha, “Mujhpar kia beet rahi hai samajhte ho tum, mujhko kitni khushi hogi ke tum apne bare mein mujhko batawo, mujhe kitni khushi hogi ke tum aur ziada bolo, apne bare mein batawo, kia karun main keise tumse baat karwaun main?” Ussko rote huwe dekh kar Abhay bola bus itna “Anny par bhi bahot kuch beeta hai bechaari Anny” Seema rote rote hanss padi Abhay ko bolte huwe sunkar, aur Abhay ke gaalon ko chumte huwe kaha, “Tum phir bole yaar, kaun hai yeh Anny? Kia beeti hai usspar? Tumhara kia lagta hai Anny mujhse khul kar batawo nah, bolo please bolo Anny ke bare mein hi sahi kuch to batawo mujhe…bolo yaar bolo!”

Kamaal ki baat hai, Abhay apna hosh o hawaas kho baitha tha phir bhi ussko itna yaad aya ke usske Anny par bahot kuch beeta hai magar ussko kia pata ke jitna ussko pata hai uss se kayi ziada jheli hai usske Anny ne! ussko kia pata ke usski Anny ko kia kia kaha gaya aur keise usski Anny vidwa bhi ban gayi hai… yeh sab pata hota tab kia hota Abhay ko kia pata!! Jab laakh poochne par Abhay kuch nahin bola uss se ziada to roti huwi Seema ne Abhay ko wapas ghar lawtne ko kaha. Donon chal rahe the to Seema ne poocha, “Achchah apne ghar ka pata batawo mujhe? Address bolo?” Abhay ne socha phir kaha, “Dance school” Seema phir khush huwi aur sochne lagi ke dhire dhire shaayad Abhay ki yaaddaash wapas arahe hein, magar kyun ussne dance school kaha? Yeh to koyi pata ya address nahin huwi….

Ab kissko pata ke Abhay ke dimaagh ke kamre ke andar kitna adhera tha aur kahan thodi bahot roshni aarahe the jo ussko kuch kuch yaad araha tha ya memory ke kissi kone se zubaan par purani save ki gayi lavz bus zubaan par aajaate the kissko kia pata? Yeh to khud Abhay ko bhi nahin pata!!

Ghar wapas lawtte waqt Seema loo gayi aur Abhay ko ek bus stop ke paas wait karne ko kaha- toilet bus stop ke piche tha; jab Abhay wait kar raha tha to ek bus ruka thik jahan woh khada tha to uss bus mein se ek ladki ne apna haath wave karte huwe Abhay ko kaha, “Hi Abhay main aap ki fan hoon, kab agla show karoge?” Abhay uss ladki ko wave karne laga aur soch mein doobe huwe ussko ghurr raha tha…. Tab tak Seema loo se wapas arahi thi aur bus jaane lagi aur uss ladki ne jaate huwe bus mein se Abhay ko wave karte huwe zor se kaha, “Abhay we love you Abhi apna show continue karna Abhi….” Seema ne uss ‘Abhi” naam ko achchi tarah se suna aur dekha ke bus ke andar se who ladki Abhay ko uss naam se bula rahi thi to Seema thoda heyraan aur kuch khush hote huwe Abhay ke kareeb aayi aur dekha ke Abhay soch mein doobe magar wave karta jaa raha tha uss jaate huwe bus ke taraf…. To Seema ne usske kaan mein zor se kaha, “Abhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii” Tab Abhay chohonk gaya aur poocha, “Tumko keise pata ke main Abhi hoon?” Seema khushi se jhoom uthi aur kaha, “To kia tumhara naam sach mein Abhi hai? Tum Abhi ho?” Tab Abhay phir se khaaamosh ho gaya aur apne kaandon ko upar karte huwe ishara kiya ke pata nahin!!!!!

To be continued………………..

Bahut hi behtareen update hai ye bhai. Bahut hi laajawaab. Kitne detail mein aap ne sab kuch describe kiya hai. Aap eise sab kuch describe karte ho ke sab kuch enkhon ke saamne dikhne lagta hai. Emotions to eise likhte ho k sab feel hota hai. Iss seema ke dil ka peeda bhi khub feel hua jiss tarah se aap ne likha hai. Ab iss line ka kia kahun jahan aap ne likha ke abhay k dimagh ke kamre ke andar kahan andhera aur kaha roshni hai. Kiss tarah se aap ne hum ko usska dimaghi problem ko samjha diya. Vah casi bhai vah. Kitne bade writer ho aap.
Seema ne Abhi ke baal aur dadhi banwaye, kapde kharide, new look diya k kissi abhi k fan ne ussko bus mein se dekha aur baat ki. To shayad dhire dhire abhay ko yaad ane lage. Hope so
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Seema bus mein lautte waqt sochti rahi ke woh ladki kaun thi jiss ne Abhi ko phukaara, woh keise Abhi ko jaanti thi, kahan rehti hai, keise iss taraf se guzar rahi thi, Seema soch mein padi bus mein safar kar rahi thi aur Abhay diwane ki tarah apne sar ko bus ke window side se lagaaye gum khoya tha kahin khayaaalon mein.

Ab Abhay ka mental problem yeh tha ke sadme se eisa hota hai ke dimaagh ke kissi hisse par dabaav padne ki vajaah se kissi ek fuse ka udh jana hota hai. Isse ek epileptic failure bhi kehte hein. Eise haalaat mein woh dimaagh ka fuse apne aap repair ho jata hai magar waqt ke saath, kuch waqt lagta hai ussko repair hone mein. Yaadaash kho jate hein aur kuch bhi yaad nahin rehta, aadmi chote bachon jeisa vyohaar karne lagte hein aur ek lamhe pehle guzre wakia ko bhool jate hein. Woh kissi ko pehchaante to nahin magar pehchaanne ki dhong karte hein aur kabhi chehre se to pehchaante hein magar naam nahin yaad kar paate ke woh pehchaani chehre wala kaun hai…. Ab agar gharwale ya doston ke beech rehte to yaadaash ka wapas ana asaan hota. Phir bhi waqt lagta hi hai, dhire dhire sab hota hai. Jiss ladki ne Abhay ko wave kiya Abhay ko bilkool pata nahin ke woh kaun thi aur kyun ussko weisa kaha, Abhay ko uss waqt laga ke ussko bhi wave karna chahiye so uss ne bhi wave kiya, magar ussko bilkool kuch bhi yaad nahin tha aur Abhay bhool bhi gaya ke ladki ne kaha woh usski fan hai aur ussko show continue karna chahiye yeh sab baat Abhay bhool gaya magar jiss waqt uss ladki ne show aur fan lavz istemaal kiye to Abhay ko thik uss waqt weh lavz ussko jana pehchana laga phir ussne ussko ladki ko respond kiya. Sab hone ke baad woh phir apne dunya mein kho gaya. Ab iss haalat mein weise sadme mein ghire log kia sochte hein aur kiss dunya mein rehte hein kiss ko pata?!

Taqdeer ka khel dekhiye bus kuch din pehle agar Seema ne ussko uss sheher mein legaya hota to papers aur TV mein charcha huwe the Abhay ka to koyi na koyi to pehchaanta, shayad dhadhi banane wala naayi hi ya kissi paper mein usski tasveer dikh jata Seema ko uss waqt…. Magar unn dinon jab akhbaar mein usska photo aya tha tab to Abhay ka chehra jana pehchana bhi nahin tha…..

Ab Seema ne yeh to nahin suna ke uss ladki ne usss se yeh kaha ke woh usski fan hai, varna Seema andaza to laga sakti thi ke Abhay koyi star, kalakar, actor vaghaira hai, magar Seema jab loo se nikli to bus jaa rahi thi aur ladki ko ‘Abhi’ phukaarte huwe suna bus to Seema ko bhi ziada pata nahin chala uss waqt.

Dargah par lawtne ke baad Budhe baba Abhay ke naye roop dekhkar khush huwe aur Seema ko duwaein di. Seema ne bataya ke Abhay ka naam Abhi hai. Seema ne sabhi sheher mein guzre wakeaat sunaaye baba ko. Aur baba bhi chintit ho gaya yeh sochte huwe ke kaun hoga yeh Abhay. Par baba ne Seema se kaha,

“Magar beti mere khayaal se shaayad isska koyi accident hone se isske dimaagh par chot ponhcha hai, kyun ke yeh jab yahan aya tha to isske kamiz par khoon lage huwe the aur choth lagi thi isske chehre par jo sukh bhi chuke the, dekho isske honth ke upar wale hisse par ek choth ka nishaan hai, sar par bhi hai, pata nahin car accident huwa ya kissi gadi se takraya ya kuch bhi huwa hoga… ab rab jane kia maajra hai …..”

Seema ne Abhay ke naye kharide huwe kapde baba ko diye rakhne ke liye aur phir se Abhay ko apne saath le gayi. Abhay se hazaar batein karne ke baad woh ek baat ka jawaab deta tha ya achanak beech beech mein kuch bol deta tha. Yunhi ek baar Seema baat cheet ke dawraan kehrahi thi, “Abhi tumko uss ladki ne Abhi kyun bulaya agar tum Abhi nahin ho to? Matlab saaf hai ke tumhara naam Abhi hai” Uss waqt achanak Abhay ne kaha, “Abhay naam hai mera Abhi to eise hi bulate hein sab mujhko!” Phir Seema ke dil ke dhadkan tez huwi aur pyar bhare nazron se bilkool heyraan Abhay ke enkhon mein dekhne lagi iss intezaar mein ko woh kuch ziada kahe magar bahot udaas ho jaati jab turant baad Abhay phir apne aap mein khud ko band kar leta.

Seema ke laakh poocne par bhi Abhay kuch nahin bola usske baad. Seema ne poocha, “Abhay kaun log tumko Abhi bulate hein Abhay ke bajaye? Kaun hein woh log? Yaad karo Abhay bolo mujhe, abhi abhi tumne baat kiya weise hi kuch aur kaho nah please Abhay bolo tum bolte ho to bahot achah lagta hai sunne ko, kuch to bolo nah!”

Magar Abhay keise bolta ussko khud nahin pata tha ke kyun aur keise woh jumla usske munh se nikla, aur khud hi bhool gaya ke ussne kia kaha tha, keise aur ziada bolta woh?

Phir sham ko dargah lawtne ke baad jab Seema ne baba ko baat batayi to baba ne kaha, “Lagta hai issko kissi hospital mein daakhil karna chahiye isske ilaaj ke liye tab isska dimaagh wapas kaam karega! Magar Seema raazi nahin thi ke hospital ki zaroorat hai Abhi ko. Ussne kaha, ke Abhay ko pyar ki zaroorat hai, ussko hamdardi aur ek saathi ki zaroorat hai jo ussko pyar kare, tab woh thik hoga, hospital lejaya gaya to shaayad dimaaghi hospital mein shift karein ussko aur Seema nahin chahti thi Abhay ko pagal khane mein lejaya jaye! Ussko yakeen thi ke uss ke saath rehkar Abhay thik ho sakta hai.

Magar jab raat ko Seema ko apne ghar lawtne ka waqt aya to udaas ho gayi aur baba se phir Abhay ko apne saath lejane ki farmaayish ki. To baba ne poocha, “Tere ghar walon ko eitraaz to nahin ke tum issko apne ghar lejawo?” Seema ne kaha ke nahin kissi ko koyi bhi eitraaz nahin to baba ne ijazat dedi ussko apne saath lejane ko phir ek baar aur Seema khushi khushi Abhay ko apne ghar legayi aur Abhay bhi khush tha usske saath jane ke liye.

Seema ke ghar mein sirf usske mata pita aur ek chota bhai tha. Weh log TV dekh rahe the aur Seema ne Abhay ko wahin baithne ko kaha. Abhay dusre logon ke beech rehna passand nahin karta tha, sirf Seema ke paas hi rehna passand karta tha. Seema ke chote bhai ne Abhay ko cherrte huwe kaha, “WAH WAH EKDUM HERO DIKHTE HO AAJ TO, KIA STYLE HAI YAAR! Kiss film ka actor ho yaar” To Abhay ne achanak uss ko jawaab diya, “Main actor nahin dancer hoon, par acting dance ke saath karta hoon”…… yeh sunkar Seema ke enkh bhar aaye aur jaldi se Abhay ke paas baithi aur poochne lagi, “Han han bolo tum dancer ho Abhay, kahan? Kahan dance karte ho kaun sa dance karte ho humko dance karke batawo, utho utho dance karo hum dekheinguey Abhay……..”

To be continued…………………..

Majedaar update bhai. Ab Abhay ko yaad ane laga hai . Bechari seema kitni khush hoti hai ussko yaad ane par sekh kar ke usske enkh bhar jaate hein.
Bahot pyari si update hai bhai.
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Seema ki laakh koshishon ke bawajood Jab Abhay ne kuch nahin bola to Seema niraash ho gayi aur apne ghar walon se poocha ke keise pata lagaya jaye usske bare mein. Seema chahti thi ke Abhay kuch bole, apna naam bataye, apne bare mein batayein aur uss se batein kare. Seema mann hi mann to bahot pyar karne lagi thi Abhay se magar budhe baba ke kahe huwe baton ko sochkar apne dil ko samjha rahi thi Abhay usska nahin hai phir bhi Seema ne socha ke mann ke andar apne pyar ko chupa to sakti hai.

Jiss raat ko gufe mein se Abhay mila tha aur raat bhar Abhay Seema ke yahan raha tha, uss subha ko Seema kaam par nahin gayi Abhay ke saath din bitane ko soch rakhi thi. To subha chae waghaira peene ke baad Seema Abhay ko apne saath legayi ghumne ke liye. Ek bus se donon uss taraf ke sheher ko gaye. Sheher pohonch kar Seema ne Abhay ke haath pakre huwe chalna shuru kiya. Log mudh mudh kar un donon ko dekh rahe the. Dekhne mein Abhay ek pagal khane se bhaga huwa mariz dikhta tha, lambe baal, lambe kale dadhi, dekhta eise tha jeise bowkla gaya ho….. Ab sheher mein charon taraf Abhay eise dekh raha tha jeise kissi cheez ki talaash kar raha ho….. kia ussko kuch yaad araha tha? Kia ussko kuch jana pehchana sa lag raha tha?? ….Seema usska haath pakre ussko khinchti chal rahi thi magar woh baar baar piche mudhkar kuch na kuch dekhta rehta tha upar se log ghurr kar donon ko dekhte jaa rahe the to Seema ko bilkool achcha nahin lag raha tha…. Phir ek jagah ruk kar Seema ne uss se kaha, “Chalo tumhare baal katwate hein aur tumhare dhaadi nikalwaate hein tab dekhun to keise lagte ho, thik hai?” Magar Abhay bachche ki tarah inkaar kar raha tha; phir bhi Seema ne zid ki aur ussko wahan ek barber ke yahan legayi.

Ghante bhar baith kar intezaar karne ke baad Abhay bina dhadi ke aur baal ki achi si cut ke baad Seema ke saamne aaya! Seema ussko dekh kar dekhti reh gayi aur kaha, “Kitne handsome ho tum! Bahot saare ladkiyan marte honge tum par nah? Tumko kissi ek ladki ka naam yaad bhi hai Anny ke siwa?” Abhay ne nah mein sar hilaya! Tab Seema ne kaha, “are tumko samajh mein aya ke main ne kia poocha?” Abhay ne han mein sar hilaya. Tab Seema ne kaha, “To har baat jab main tumse karti hoon to tumko samajh mein ata hai” tab Abhay ne apne kaandhon ko upar uthate huwe jawaab diya jisska matlab tha ke pata nahin…. Phir Seema ne Abhay ko ek ache dukaan mein kapde usske size ke try karwaaye aur teen sets liya jeans aur tshirs aur shirts Abhay ke liye. Ab kyun ke usska pehna huwa kapda ganda tha to shop mein hi ek naye jean aur Tshirt mein dress kar diya Seema ne Abhay ko, do naye joote bhi kharide Seema ne Abhy ke liye, aur baahar nikle to Abhay asli Abhay dikh raha tha uss waqt.

Seema jee bhar ke Abhay ko dekhti rahi aur mann hi mann kaha, “kyun kar tumse pyar na hoga mujhe? Itne handsome ho, achche ho, mera saathi ho, humsafar ban sakte ho, kyun pyar na karun main tumko?” Apne mann ko sambhaalna mushkil hota jaa raha tha Seema se phir bhi koshish mein lagi huwi thi hriday se Abhay ko nikaalne ko magar keise kuch samajh mein nahin araha tha Seema ko.

Khair, usske baad Seema ne Abhay ko khub ghumaya uss chote se sheher mein jo uss gaon ke bus thodi si doorie par tha. Aur aakhir mein ek chota sa hotel mein gaye khana khane ke liye. Abhay uss naye joote se thik se chal nahin paa raha tha, joota ussko kaat raha tha kyun ke kayi mahinon ke baad aaj joota pehna tha ussne… hotel mein khana khane ke baad jab Seema ne pine ke liye coke mangwaye to Abhay bola, “Pepsi peeta hoon main” Seema chonhki aur khushi ke mare uth khadi huwi yeh kahte huwe Abhay ke donon haathon ko apne haathon mein lekar, “Tum bole, Anny ke ilawa tum ne aur bhi baat kiya hein!! Pepsi peete ho? Tumko yaad hai ke tum pepsi peete ho, bolo bo lo kahan last baar pepsi piya tha tumne bolo yaar bolo!!” jhoomte huwe Seema ke enkhon se ensoo nikal pade aur poochti rahi magar Abhay phir ek baar khaamosh hogaya!! Bahot koshish ki Seema ne, poochte poochte ro padi Abhay se usske bare mein magar Abhay ek buth bana tha usske saamne……

Wahan se ek chota sa garden mein jaakar baithe donon ek bench par aur Seema ne rote huwe Abhay se kaha, “Mujhpar kia beet rahi hai samajhte ho tum, mujhko kitni khushi hogi ke tum apne bare mein mujhko batawo, mujhe kitni khushi hogi ke tum aur ziada bolo, apne bare mein batawo, kia karun main keise tumse baat karwaun main?” Ussko rote huwe dekh kar Abhay bola bus itna “Anny par bhi bahot kuch beeta hai bechaari Anny” Seema rote rote hanss padi Abhay ko bolte huwe sunkar, aur Abhay ke gaalon ko chumte huwe kaha, “Tum phir bole yaar, kaun hai yeh Anny? Kia beeti hai usspar? Tumhara kia lagta hai Anny mujhse khul kar batawo nah, bolo please bolo Anny ke bare mein hi sahi kuch to batawo mujhe…bolo yaar bolo!”

Kamaal ki baat hai, Abhay apna hosh o hawaas kho baitha tha phir bhi ussko itna yaad aya ke usske Anny par bahot kuch beeta hai magar ussko kia pata ke jitna ussko pata hai uss se kayi ziada jheli hai usske Anny ne! ussko kia pata ke usski Anny ko kia kia kaha gaya aur keise usski Anny vidwa bhi ban gayi hai… yeh sab pata hota tab kia hota Abhay ko kia pata!! Jab laakh poochne par Abhay kuch nahin bola uss se ziada to roti huwi Seema ne Abhay ko wapas ghar lawtne ko kaha. Donon chal rahe the to Seema ne poocha, “Achchah apne ghar ka pata batawo mujhe? Address bolo?” Abhay ne socha phir kaha, “Dance school” Seema phir khush huwi aur sochne lagi ke dhire dhire shaayad Abhay ki yaaddaash wapas arahe hein, magar kyun ussne dance school kaha? Yeh to koyi pata ya address nahin huwi….

Ab kissko pata ke Abhay ke dimaagh ke kamre ke andar kitna adhera tha aur kahan thodi bahot roshni aarahe the jo ussko kuch kuch yaad araha tha ya memory ke kissi kone se zubaan par purani save ki gayi lavz bus zubaan par aajaate the kissko kia pata? Yeh to khud Abhay ko bhi nahin pata!!

Ghar wapas lawtte waqt Seema loo gayi aur Abhay ko ek bus stop ke paas wait karne ko kaha- toilet bus stop ke piche tha; jab Abhay wait kar raha tha to ek bus ruka thik jahan woh khada tha to uss bus mein se ek ladki ne apna haath wave karte huwe Abhay ko kaha, “Hi Abhay main aap ki fan hoon, kab agla show karoge?” Abhay uss ladki ko wave karne laga aur soch mein doobe huwe ussko ghurr raha tha…. Tab tak Seema loo se wapas arahi thi aur bus jaane lagi aur uss ladki ne jaate huwe bus mein se Abhay ko wave karte huwe zor se kaha, “Abhay we love you Abhi apna show continue karna Abhi….” Seema ne uss ‘Abhi” naam ko achchi tarah se suna aur dekha ke bus ke andar se who ladki Abhay ko uss naam se bula rahi thi to Seema thoda heyraan aur kuch khush hote huwe Abhay ke kareeb aayi aur dekha ke Abhay soch mein doobe magar wave karta jaa raha tha uss jaate huwe bus ke taraf…. To Seema ne usske kaan mein zor se kaha, “Abhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii” Tab Abhay chohonk gaya aur poocha, “Tumko keise pata ke main Abhi hoon?” Seema khushi se jhoom uthi aur kaha, “To kia tumhara naam sach mein Abhi hai? Tum Abhi ho?” Tab Abhay phir se khaaamosh ho gaya aur apne kaandon ko upar karte huwe ishara kiya ke pata nahin!!!!!

To be continued………………..

Wonderful update Casi bro. Ur detailed descriptions are just awesome. You leave no stone unturned to ease the read for us readers to understand what you mean in your story. Its a plus for readers to easily understand whatever the circumstsnces you describe. U make sure that the reader never fails to understand it.
Fantastic writing bro. You made us feel all that Abhay is going through. We read and deeply ferl his trauma and that of seema too. U hv so well written the feeling of this girl who has fallen in love with Abhi.
Its so interesting the way u create scenes make abhay remember things. This is the part of ur brain work which always amazes me. Likr the part u make abhay suddenly say that he drinks pepsi when a coke is placed in front of him like u createba fan who shouts abhay from the bus.... but u take care not to let seema hear that.... snd and i make abhay say he is not abhi but abhay..... wow hats off my friend
 
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Seema bus mein lautte waqt sochti rahi ke woh ladki kaun thi jiss ne Abhi ko phukaara, woh keise Abhi ko jaanti thi, kahan rehti hai, keise iss taraf se guzar rahi thi, Seema soch mein padi bus mein safar kar rahi thi aur Abhay diwane ki tarah apne sar ko bus ke window side se lagaaye gum khoya tha kahin khayaaalon mein.

Ab Abhay ka mental problem yeh tha ke sadme se eisa hota hai ke dimaagh ke kissi hisse par dabaav padne ki vajaah se kissi ek fuse ka udh jana hota hai. Isse ek epileptic failure bhi kehte hein. Eise haalaat mein woh dimaagh ka fuse apne aap repair ho jata hai magar waqt ke saath, kuch waqt lagta hai ussko repair hone mein. Yaadaash kho jate hein aur kuch bhi yaad nahin rehta, aadmi chote bachon jeisa vyohaar karne lagte hein aur ek lamhe pehle guzre wakia ko bhool jate hein. Woh kissi ko pehchaante to nahin magar pehchaanne ki dhong karte hein aur kabhi chehre se to pehchaante hein magar naam nahin yaad kar paate ke woh pehchaani chehre wala kaun hai…. Ab agar gharwale ya doston ke beech rehte to yaadaash ka wapas ana asaan hota. Phir bhi waqt lagta hi hai, dhire dhire sab hota hai. Jiss ladki ne Abhay ko wave kiya Abhay ko bilkool pata nahin ke woh kaun thi aur kyun ussko weisa kaha, Abhay ko uss waqt laga ke ussko bhi wave karna chahiye so uss ne bhi wave kiya, magar ussko bilkool kuch bhi yaad nahin tha aur Abhay bhool bhi gaya ke ladki ne kaha woh usski fan hai aur ussko show continue karna chahiye yeh sab baat Abhay bhool gaya magar jiss waqt uss ladki ne show aur fan lavz istemaal kiye to Abhay ko thik uss waqt weh lavz ussko jana pehchana laga phir ussne ussko ladki ko respond kiya. Sab hone ke baad woh phir apne dunya mein kho gaya. Ab iss haalat mein weise sadme mein ghire log kia sochte hein aur kiss dunya mein rehte hein kiss ko pata?!

Taqdeer ka khel dekhiye bus kuch din pehle agar Seema ne ussko uss sheher mein legaya hota to papers aur TV mein charcha huwe the Abhay ka to koyi na koyi to pehchaanta, shayad dhadhi banane wala naayi hi ya kissi paper mein usski tasveer dikh jata Seema ko uss waqt…. Magar unn dinon jab akhbaar mein usska photo aya tha tab to Abhay ka chehra jana pehchana bhi nahin tha…..

Ab Seema ne yeh to nahin suna ke uss ladki ne usss se yeh kaha ke woh usski fan hai, varna Seema andaza to laga sakti thi ke Abhay koyi star, kalakar, actor vaghaira hai, magar Seema jab loo se nikli to bus jaa rahi thi aur ladki ko ‘Abhi’ phukaarte huwe suna bus to Seema ko bhi ziada pata nahin chala uss waqt.

Dargah par lawtne ke baad Budhe baba Abhay ke naye roop dekhkar khush huwe aur Seema ko duwaein di. Seema ne bataya ke Abhay ka naam Abhi hai. Seema ne sabhi sheher mein guzre wakeaat sunaaye baba ko. Aur baba bhi chintit ho gaya yeh sochte huwe ke kaun hoga yeh Abhay. Par baba ne Seema se kaha,

“Magar beti mere khayaal se shaayad isska koyi accident hone se isske dimaagh par chot ponhcha hai, kyun ke yeh jab yahan aya tha to isske kamiz par khoon lage huwe the aur choth lagi thi isske chehre par jo sukh bhi chuke the, dekho isske honth ke upar wale hisse par ek choth ka nishaan hai, sar par bhi hai, pata nahin car accident huwa ya kissi gadi se takraya ya kuch bhi huwa hoga… ab rab jane kia maajra hai …..”

Seema ne Abhay ke naye kharide huwe kapde baba ko diye rakhne ke liye aur phir se Abhay ko apne saath le gayi. Abhay se hazaar batein karne ke baad woh ek baat ka jawaab deta tha ya achanak beech beech mein kuch bol deta tha. Yunhi ek baar Seema baat cheet ke dawraan kehrahi thi, “Abhi tumko uss ladki ne Abhi kyun bulaya agar tum Abhi nahin ho to? Matlab saaf hai ke tumhara naam Abhi hai” Uss waqt achanak Abhay ne kaha, “Abhay naam hai mera Abhi to eise hi bulate hein sab mujhko!” Phir Seema ke dil ke dhadkan tez huwi aur pyar bhare nazron se bilkool heyraan Abhay ke enkhon mein dekhne lagi iss intezaar mein ko woh kuch ziada kahe magar bahot udaas ho jaati jab turant baad Abhay phir apne aap mein khud ko band kar leta.

Seema ke laakh poocne par bhi Abhay kuch nahin bola usske baad. Seema ne poocha, “Abhay kaun log tumko Abhi bulate hein Abhay ke bajaye? Kaun hein woh log? Yaad karo Abhay bolo mujhe, abhi abhi tumne baat kiya weise hi kuch aur kaho nah please Abhay bolo tum bolte ho to bahot achah lagta hai sunne ko, kuch to bolo nah!”

Magar Abhay keise bolta ussko khud nahin pata tha ke kyun aur keise woh jumla usske munh se nikla, aur khud hi bhool gaya ke ussne kia kaha tha, keise aur ziada bolta woh?

Phir sham ko dargah lawtne ke baad jab Seema ne baba ko baat batayi to baba ne kaha, “Lagta hai issko kissi hospital mein daakhil karna chahiye isske ilaaj ke liye tab isska dimaagh wapas kaam karega! Magar Seema raazi nahin thi ke hospital ki zaroorat hai Abhi ko. Ussne kaha, ke Abhay ko pyar ki zaroorat hai, ussko hamdardi aur ek saathi ki zaroorat hai jo ussko pyar kare, tab woh thik hoga, hospital lejaya gaya to shaayad dimaaghi hospital mein shift karein ussko aur Seema nahin chahti thi Abhay ko pagal khane mein lejaya jaye! Ussko yakeen thi ke uss ke saath rehkar Abhay thik ho sakta hai.

Magar jab raat ko Seema ko apne ghar lawtne ka waqt aya to udaas ho gayi aur baba se phir Abhay ko apne saath lejane ki farmaayish ki. To baba ne poocha, “Tere ghar walon ko eitraaz to nahin ke tum issko apne ghar lejawo?” Seema ne kaha ke nahin kissi ko koyi bhi eitraaz nahin to baba ne ijazat dedi ussko apne saath lejane ko phir ek baar aur Seema khushi khushi Abhay ko apne ghar legayi aur Abhay bhi khush tha usske saath jane ke liye.

Seema ke ghar mein sirf usske mata pita aur ek chota bhai tha. Weh log TV dekh rahe the aur Seema ne Abhay ko wahin baithne ko kaha. Abhay dusre logon ke beech rehna passand nahin karta tha, sirf Seema ke paas hi rehna passand karta tha. Seema ke chote bhai ne Abhay ko cherrte huwe kaha, “WAH WAH EKDUM HERO DIKHTE HO AAJ TO, KIA STYLE HAI YAAR! Kiss film ka actor ho yaar” To Abhay ne achanak uss ko jawaab diya, “Main actor nahin dancer hoon, par acting dance ke saath karta hoon”…… yeh sunkar Seema ke enkh bhar aaye aur jaldi se Abhay ke paas baithi aur poochne lagi, “Han han bolo tum dancer ho Abhay, kahan? Kahan dance karte ho kaun sa dance karte ho humko dance karke batawo, utho utho dance karo hum dekheinguey Abhay……..”

To be continued…………………..

Here u go. In this update u surprise me much more as a writer as u do ur homework well before writing. You document urself to b well placed to explain what exactly is going on in the brain of Abhay. U mention thr disease with precision, like u earlier described in beautifil words like we dont know in which room of his brain its dark and when which part gets clarity that he suddenly remember thingd..... Wonderful writing casi bro. Its fantastic. He even said he is a dancer.... it comes to his lips to pronounce it.... its in a corner of his brain recorded that he is a dancer but he is not sure of what he says.
Appreciate you work casi bro. Keep it up my friend.
 
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