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Romance Aur Ek Prem Kahani (COMPLETED)

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Update 48
Anny ne bilatte rote huwe Iqbal ko apne daastaan sunaayi, aur Iqbal ke haath peyr kaampne lage aur Anny se kaha, “Hum abhi ate hein Anny!” Saleem bhai aur Vinay bilkool heyraan Iqbal ke baton ko sunkar andaza lagane ki koshish kar rahe the ke kia huwa hoga ab Ananya ko. Tab phone kaat kar Iqbal ne tooti awaaz mein kaha, “Vinay gaadi mor, wapas chal Anny ke ghar issi waqt yaar chal!!” kyunke jab tak baat kar raha tha gaadi ko park karne se pehle woh log Anny ke ghar ko koyi 5/7 kiometres se paar kar chuke the. Ab wapas jate jate Iqbal ne sab wakiya Saleem bhai aur Vinay ko sunaya ke Anny ke husband ne atmahatiya karli aur who apne ghar wapas agayi hai!! Aur sabhi baton ko bataya jo Anny ne ussko phone par batayi. Yehi ke usske saas ne ussko keise keise gande baatein bole…..

To teenon ab Anny ke ghar gaye! Ab uss manzar ko socho. Saleem bhai hamesha apne lambe talwaar ko saath lekar chalta tha, yeh usska style tha. Aur uss talwaar ko ek laathi ki tarah bhi istemaal karta tha aksar. Aur ek baar phir Varma sahab ke

saamne Saleem bhai wohi Iqbal aur Vinay ke saath magar iss baar usske ghar mein mawjood the! Inhi teenon ko Abhay ke saath ussne uss raat ko uss ghar mein dekha tha aur aaj usske ghar mein sab haazir the aur usska bolti band tha kyun ke uss ka dimaagh ka batti sach mein gul ho gaya tha uss waqt Anny ke haaadse ko lekar. Halaan ke mawka bada naazuk tha Iqbal ne jab Varma ji ko dekha phir Saleem bhai ke chehre ko dekha aur phir Vinay ko dekha to ussko hanssi agaya magar apne hanssi ko ussne andar hi dabaya! Ussko hanssi iss baat par aya ke jitna nafrat Varma ji Saleem bhai se karte the uss waqt shaayad utna hi majboor aur laachaar the unn teenon ko khud apne ghar mein paakar! Kal hi ussne sabko gunda mawali kaha tha aur aaj yehi gunde aur mawali usske ghar mein the aur who khamosh baitha tha bina ek lavz kahe!

Teenon ne ussko kuch nahin kaha aur seedha Anny se milne ko gaye…. Anny zor zor se rote huwe Vinay aur Iqbal se Abhay ke bare mein poochte huwe ussko peeche ke taraf dhund rahi thi. Magar jab unn logon ne bataya ke Abhay lapata hai to Anny behosh girr gayi.

Usski maa aayi ussko sambhaalne aur dekhne ke liuye tab tak Saleem bhai aur donon dost Varma ji ke paas gaye lounge mein.

Saleem bhai ek ghusse bhare muskaan mein Varma saab ke enkhon mein dekhte huwe apni mazboot goonjte huwe awaaz mein bola,

“Yeh kahawat suna hoga na tumne ke,

Muddayi laakh bura chahe to kia hota hai

Wohi hota hai jo mazoor-e-Khuda hota hai’

Ab khud dekhlo Khuda ko kia manzoor tha, dikhaayi diya ke nahin? Enkhon par patti bandha hai Varma ke bachche? Mere Khuda ko bilkool manzoor nahin tha ke tu Iss ladki ka rishta kahin aur kare! Tor diya rishte ko mere Khuda ne! Tujhko thapad mara hai upar wale ne ! Thapad padi na tere munh par? Ab kia karega? Apni beti ka aachaar dalega agar Abhay nahin mila to? Upar wale ne thapad aur laat mara tere gaand par kyun ke tu kudrat ke khilaaf gaya. Upar wale ne Abhay ko Ananya ke liye aur Ananya ko Abhay ke liye banaya hai to tu kaun hota hai isski shaadi kissi aur ke saath karne wala be?! Dekha kia huwa ab bhi kuch dikhaayi de raha hai ya dimaagh sun ho gaya hai tera?

Usski goonjti huwi awaaz ne Anny ko wapas hosh mein laya aur woh ahiste ahiste lounge mein aakar kuch door khade hokar Saleem bhai ki batein sun rahi thi aur donon dost bhi khade Saleem bhai ke attitude ko nihaar rahe the. Kia mard tha woh, kia style tha usska, kia ajeeb o gharib insaan tha woh, kuch khaas hone wala hai lagta tha ya kuch ajeeb batane wala hai Saleem bhai sab ko eisa lagta tha. Iqbal ne socha jiss baat ko zaahir karne ke liye Abhay ne mana kiya huwa tha itne dinon se shaayd aaj khud Saleem bhai sab raaz par se parda faash karega aur donon dost uss intezaar mein the aur kabhi Varma ji ko to kabhi Anny aur Saleem bhai par nazrein jamaye baithe the donon dost.

Aur Saleem bhai apne kadak awaaz mein, kuch ghusse mein to kabhie ek muskaan ke saath magar enkhon mein jeise khoon khaul raha ho, apne bayaan ko jaari rakha,

“Tum mujhko gunda samajhta hai nah? Iss vajah se inn bachchon ko bhi gunda kehta hai, sirf iss liye ke uss raat ko uss kamine ke ghar mein humko dekh liya tha? Tumko batawun main kaun hoon? Batawun? Are agar main nahin hota to tu chain ki sannss ke liye tarapta iss sheher mein! Tujh jeise logon ke hifaazat ke liye main mahinon bhar gundon ke saath jail mein rehta hoon apna ghar hote huwe!- Main kaun hoon? Kaun hoon main?” Aur ghusse se apna sarkaari id card jeb se nikaal kar Varma ji ke saamne table par phekte huwe ziada kadak awaaz mein Saleem bhai enkhon mein ensoo liye kehta hai kuch tharthataraate awaaz mein,

“Police ka aadmi hoon main- special squad- special secret branch, Sarkaar ke police department mein sirf 11 hein mere tarah desh bhar mein jo apne ghar baar chod kar mahinon bhar gundon ke saath jail mein jaakar sote hein khatmal ke saath!! Tum kar sakte ho yeh? Marr jawoge magar nahin kar pawoge! Hum Gunde mawali ke beech gunda bankar ghumte hein unn logon ka ata pata aur kaarobaar dekhne ke liye phir khufie tarike se dusre branch ko pata karte hein aur khud unn logon ke saath pakre jate hein aur jail bhi jaate hein taake unn logon ko kabhi shak na ho ke hum police ke aadmi hai! Dus saal se kar raha hoon aur kissi mafia wale ko aaj tak pata nahin chala ke main kaun hoon. Aaj tak weh sab mujhko apne biradari ka samajhte hein aur aaj bhi main unn logon ke kaarobaar ko police ko batata hoon aur unnko pakarwata hoon. Yeh dekh varma ke bachche,………” Aur Saleem bhai ne apna ek peyr par khada hokar donon hathon se apne ghutne ko zor se pakra aur khincha to uss ke aadha peyr baahar nikal ayaa!! Usska dayina peyr nakli tha..accident mein police ke kaam mein peyr kho diya hum logon ke hifazat karte huwe……..

“Aur kuch batawwun? Hmm?? Main 20 saal Canada police force mein tha. Iraq ki jung mein shaamil tha US army mein Canada army ke taraf se- Iraq mein ek zameen par rakhe mine par chal pada main…. Mine kia hota hao pata hai nah? Wohi bombs jo zameen mein mitti ke niche gaarte hein…. Kuch pata nahin chalta ke wahan kuch hai, reth ke niche chupa rehta hai….main ek soldier ko bachane ke liye daud raha tha aur uss waqt samaye nahin tha ke mine ka khayaal karun bus apne dost ko bachaane ke liye dawda aur ek peyr pad gaya uss zaalim mine par aur ussne mera ek peyr kha liya sala!!”

Aur kuch kahun??

Yaro agar yeh ek filmi script hota to main Saleem bhai ki character ko ziada scope deta… ab flashback mein jata aur Saleem bhai ki entry koyi 10 saal pehle jab woh jawaan tha ek zabardast action scene mein dikhata…. Bina dhadi ke, Canada police uniform mein ek mafia ka picha karta huwa tez raftaar se police ki car bhagaate huwe Saleem bhai nazar ate hein……. Kia main iss ko jaari rakhun Saleem bhai ki character ko flash back mein ya nahin? Aap log bataye phir age badhunga…… ab tak ke liye itna kaafi hai


To be continued……………….
 

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Update 49 Flash back of Saleem bhai

Ab Kyun ke Saleem bhai khud par guzre huwe waqt suna rahe the wahan mawjood logon ko, sab log apne apne nazarye se tasveer ke roop mein uss ke bole huwe shabdon ko dekh rahe the.

Saleem bhai, bachpan mein hi Canada chale gaye the apne parivaar ke saath kyun ke uss ke daddy wahan ek bade khaarkhane mein naukri karte the. Aur phir Saleem bhai ne wahin taalim haasil ki aur naukri bhi wahin mil gayi police mein. Ab kabhi kabhaar apne desh mein chutiyon par ghumne ko ate the apne parivaar ke saath.Canada ke police mein Saleem bhai ko naukri apne pehelwaan jeise jism ki wajah se mili. Physically bahot hi mazboot the aur bahot ooncha kad tha, ziada hi chawda seena aur baazu to aam logon ke do, teen baazuwon ko milaakar uss ke ek baazu banta tha!

Khair jeise ke main ne kaha ek filmi script ki tarah main ne socha ke agar Saleem bhai ko present karta to kuch eisa hoga…….

Canada ke lambe chawde raaston se ek latest model ki safed rang ke Mercedes gaadi bahot hi tez raftaar se bhaagte huwe nazar ate hein, samajhlo ke ek helicopter se shoot kiya gaya scene dikh raha tha, uss gaadi ke piche ek Canada ki police ki car oonche surr mein siren bajaate huwe uss Mercedes ke piche utne hi tezi ke saath chale jaa rahe the. Raftaar koyi 170 se 200 miles per hour ki hogi. Ab weise raftaar mein agar ek lamhe ke liye idhar ya udhar huwa to mawt saamne paya jata!

Samne wale car mein se goliyan bhi chal rahe the Saleem bhai ki gadi par. Magar goliyan car se takrakar rukh badal lete the. Ek sheher mein daakhil hote hi traffic ki vaja se raftaar kum huwa to ek gali se dusre gali phir teesre se chawthe galiyon mein mor par mor se guzarte huwe donon gadiyan ek dusre ke piche bachon ke khelte huwe khilawnon ki tarah nazar aa rahe the. Aaakhir mein Mercedes ke kuch kareeb ane ke baad Police ke gadi mein se ek haath revolver sameth baahar nikalte huwe dikhaayi deta hai aur ek hi nishaane se saamne wale Mercedes ke pahye par goli chalata hai, Mercedes left se right, phir right se left machalta hai phir bhi chala hi jaata hai aguey ki taraf bina raftaar kum kiye.

Tab kala chasma pehne huwe uss Police ki car mein Saleem bhai par rukh hoti hai, aur woh ghusse mein danton ko peeste huwe driving wheel ko kabhi daayein to kabhi baaayein ghumaate huwe dikhaayi deta hai….. Usske baad ek seedha aur bahot hi lamba raasta saamne hota hai, ek taraf kuch jangal jeisa nazara dikhte hein aur dusre taraf pahaariyon se saje huwe khubsurat manzar hote hein. Aguey ki car mein do log the jo mafia ke aadmi the, terrorist se mile huwe bomb ke maamle mein pehchaane gaye log the jissko Saleem bhai ne ek restaurant ke karib se picha karna shuru kiya tha. ‘Shoot at sight’ ka order mila huwa tha kayi dinon se. Saleem bhai bahot hi imaandaar police officer tha aur apna kaam bahot dil lagaakar karta tha aur wahan ke police mein kaafi naam kama chukka tha. Inspector to nahin tha magar sab ussko izat dete the kyunke sab ko pata tha ke woh kitna mehnati aur imaadaar hai. Police department mein sab ussko jaante the aur woh Canadian to nahin tha na, desi hokar goron ke beech unn se bhi behtar kaam karoge to pehchaan to hoga hi!

Phir kyunke raasta seedah aur lamba tha Saleem bhai ne phir apne revolver ko baahar kiya dusre taraf se, aur piche ke ek dusra payya par goli mara saamne wale Mercedes par….. bus ek second bhi nahin guzra, samajhlo ke palkon ko jhapakte hi saamne wale gaadi itna ooncha hawa mein uda, jitna ooncha ek double decker bus hota hai aur Mercedes 6 baar zameen par gir kar ulta, phir upar gaya, phir zameen par eisa 6 baar huwa aur car ke purze hawa mein udte nazar arahe the, Car ke darvaza khulta aur band ho raha tha uss dawraan…….

Phir Saleem bhai peeche zoron se brake maarte huwe driving wheel par apne chawde chaati ko dabate huwe dikhayi dete hein….. Jab saamne wale Mercedes ek patahr se takrakar ruk jate hein to Saleem bhai apne car ka darwaza kholta hai aur har filmon ki tarah pehle usske joote nazar ate hein , car se nikalte huwe, phir dhire dhire usske peyr dikhte hein, aur ahiste ahiste uss ke lambe kad tak camera pohonchta hai phir ek lamba, chawda Canada ki uniform mein police officer car se bahar nikal khada hota hai saamne wale Mercedes par nazar jamaaye huwe. Slow motion mein apne car se chalte huwe haath mein revolver liye Saleem bhai dikhaayi deta hai uss zameen par chaar payyon upar wale Mercedes ki taraf jate huwe….

Donon haath se Revolver thaame huwe jab woh ulte huwe Mercedes ke kaarib hota hai to Car ke taraf revolver ke naali kiye huwe zara jhhuk kar Car ke andar dekhta hai phir apne ek laat se Car ki dayein taraf wale darwaze ko khol kar ek kadam peeche hatta hai to andar se khoon mein latpath ek African origin ka aadmi zameen par ata hai, phir Saleem bhai uss jism ke karib ata hai, gunpoint par liye huwe apne laat se hi ussko hilata hai, aur jab woh aadmi bilkool nahin hilta tab Saleem bhai usske karib apne peyron par baith kar usske naak ke naalion ke paas apna haath rakh kar dekhta hai ke woh saanns le raha hai ya nahin, to pata chalta hai ke woh marr chukka hai…. Tab Saleem bhai car ke dusre taraf jata hai aur weise hi, ussi andaaz mein dusre darwaze ko kholta hai, aur uss taraf se ek gora aadmi, woh bhi ghaayal baahar nikal kar baith kar apna peeth car se lagakar hath jorta hai saleem bhai se….. Saleem bhai, apne pistol ko usske sar ke taraf kar ke khud dusre taraf dekhte huwe teen goliyan chalata hai uss addmi ke sar par phir bina mudh kar uss ko dekhe wapas apne car ki taraf slow motion mein jaate huwe nazar ate hein……

Phir usski gadi start hoti hai aur behtareen dhund mein uss police ki gaadi ko U-turn karke wapas jate huwe dikhaayi diya jaata hai. Ye tha Saleem bhai ki entry uss Canada ki zameen par.

To jab Iraq ki jung huwi US ne sabhi United Nation wale deshon se police aur military wale liye the Baghdad jane ke liye aur Canada ke team mein Saleem bhai mawjood the. Canada ke embassy se desh ke sarkaar ko Saleem bhai ke kaarnamon ka aur ache kaamon ki badhaayi di jaa chuki thi kayi baar. To apne desh mein Saleem bhai na hote huwe bhi pehle se mashoor the apne kaarnaamon ki vajah se. Phir Iraq mein woh haadsa pesh aya jab Saleem bhai ne ek taang gawa diya mine par kadam rakh kar, to wapas Canada gaya aur yeh khabar desh mein bhi aayi police department mein ke desh ka ek sipahi ghaayal ho gaya Iraq ke jung mein.

Usske baad koyi do saal baad desh ke sarkaar ne Saleem bhai ko wapas desh mein bulaya kaam karne ke liye aur tab se uss special squad mein secret police ke liye kaam karta hai. Police department mein weise aadmi ki zaroorat thi jo khud mafia ke saath milkar rahe aur khabar police ko dein aur waqt ane par unn logon ke saath khud jail jayein taake kissi ko kabhi shak naa ho ke woh police ka aadmi hai. To kayi saalon se desh mein Saleem bhai yehi kaam kar raha hai aur sach mein kayi baar jail gaaya mahinon bhar uss mafia ke logon ke saath guzara aur aaj tak kissi ko pata nahin ke woh police ka aadmi hai. Koyi bhi mamooli police inspector khud nahin jaante ke saleem bhai police ka aadmi hai, weh log bhi samamjhte hein ke woh ek mafia se mila huwa gunda hai…balke kayi police wale to Saleem bhai se darrte bhi hein aur police force ke special squad ne weisa hi chaha tha ke sabhi police wale bhi yehi soche ke Saleem bhai ek gunda hai. Koyi bhi chota mota gunda paida hota hai sheher mein to Saleem bhai ko pata chal jata hai aur turant ussko pakarwa deta hai, aur khud apne aadmiyon ko chaaron taraf pheylaya huwa hai ussne. Sab ussko gunda samajhte hein magar usska usool hai ke kabhi bhi kissi masoom par koyi takleef na ane diya jaye- jahan naa insaafi ho to turant ussko khabar kiya jaye, jahan zulm hota ho to woh turant ek gunde ka roop dhaaran karke situation ko sambhaalne ko chale jate aur hamesha kehte the Saleem bhai ke jab sidhi ungli se ghee nahin nikle to ungli mo tedha karna hi behtar hai, aur Varma ji ko yehi samjhaya ke wohi karne gaya tha uss raat uss raakesh ke saath jiss raat ko ussne teenon ko wahan dekha tha!!

Sab bayaan sunkar Varma ji Saleem bhai ke paon par girr pade rote huwe sajde ke position mein to Saleem bhai khada hogaya aur apne buland awaaz mein kaha, “abe oye Varma, mujhe sajda mat kar mujhe kufr ka darja mat de khuda ko muhn dikhana hai mujhe, insaan ka sajda karna mana hai mere mazhab mein uth aur maafi mangni hai to apni beti aur uss masoom Abhay se maangna, chalo bacho hum ab Abhay ko dhundne chalein pata nahin kahan chala gaya woh dil ka zakhmee bachcha, ya rab uss masoom ka hifazat karna mere mawla!”

To be continued…………….
 

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Ananya bhi saath gayi car mein Abhay ki talaash mein aur Varma sahab bhi. Bahot pachtawa ho raha tha Varma sahab ko ab sab sachaayi janne ke baad aur woh bilkool tayaar tha Abhi se maafi maangne ko aur apni beti ko usske hawale karne ko.

Vinay ne Abhi ki mummy ko phone karke sab maajra bataya aur woh ro padi Ananya ki daastaan sunkar magar usske dil ko tassalli huwi ke aakhir itne log to hein Abhi ko dhundne aur usska khayaal rakhne ke liye. Saleem bhai ne mobile se uss ilaake ke apne jaan pehchaan walon ko phone karke Abhi ka hulya bataya aur poocha ke kissi ne ussko uss taraf jaate dekha, magar kissi ko pata nahin tha. Saleem bhai ne phir aur kayi logon ko phone karke ussko dhundne ke liye kaha.

Raat ho gayi sheher sheher, gali gali dhundte huwe aur pooch taaj karte huwe logon se magar Abhay nahin dikha, nahin mila aur sab thake hare ghar wapas gaye. Anny to behaal thi aur bahot ro rahi thi. Donon dost bahot pareshaan aur udaas the. Saleem bhai bhi bahot mayoos tha magar sab ko tassalli de raha tha ke koyi fikar na karein woh mil jaega jaldi hi aur dusre din khoj jaari rakhne ke liye decide kiya gaya.

Udhar jiss aadmi ne Abhi ko mara tha wohi tha jissko Abhi ne peeta tha usske student ko cherne par nashe ke haalat mein. Aur Abhi ghayal to tha dil se ab shareer bhi ghayal ho gaya tha phir bhi behaal woh chalte chala jaa raha tha kissi anjaan manzil ki taraf. Kissi nadi ke paas ponhcha uss sehra ko paar karne ke baad raat bhar chalne par aur nadi ke paas kuch apne aap ko saaf karke ek darkhat ke neeche so gaya, bilkool sunssan jaga tha, kissi insaan ka koyi nishaan bhi nahin tha udhar. Din bhar sota raha aur uthne par phir chalne laga…… usska dimaagh jeise khali tha kuch hosh nahin tha ke kaun hai, kahan jaa raha hai aur kia kar raha hai…. Dimaaghi haalat bilkool bigar gaya tha usska aur sab kuch bhool gaya tha…. Ek sadme se guzra tha pyar mein dhoka khakar aur yeh dusra sadma uss se bardaasht nahin huwa aur khud bina jaane dimaaghi santoolan kho baitha bechara Abhay.

Woh chalta gaya, chalta gaya, kayi din beet gaye, udhar sab log har roz nikalte the dhundne ko magar khaali haath wapas lawtte the…. Abhay ke paon ke joote ghiss gaye, chedh ho gaayi joote mein par, paon ghayal ho gaya, khoon nikal pada phir bhi woh chalta raha… woh chalta gaya bina ruke, usske kapde maile ho gaye, kahin kahin par phat bhi gaye kanton aur shaakhon ke beech se guzarte phir bhi woh chalta gaya….. Usske chehre par daadhi bahr gaye, baal sar par bilkool ulje huwe ek diwana, sharaabi ya paagal lag raha tha. Kayi dion se usske halq se awaaz bhi nahin nikli thi, khud ko pata nahin tha ke bolta bhi ya nahin….

Ek mahine beet gaye…… Abhay ka pata nahin chala. Ananya ka bura haal tha. Ro ro kar ussne apna haal bigaar liya thaa aur apne papa par chillaya karti thi, aur woh bhi paagalon jeisi harkat kiya karti thi reh reh kar. Apne papa se jiss tarah se ghusse mein aur zor se baatein karti thi woh uss ne pehle kabhi nahin kiya tha…. Abhay ki maa ka bhi bahot bura haal tha. Abhay ke donon dost ussko milne jaya karte the aur hawsla dilaya karte the aksar. Saleem bhai ne police mein official entry karwaya Abhay ka missing hone ka tasveer ke saath.

Udhar Abhay ke baal aur daadhi lambe ho gaye aur pehchaanna mushkil tha. Mahine bhar mein Abhay ne ekaat din koyi phal khaya jo jangalon mein mila ussko varna paani pee kar raha. Patla sa ho gaya bechara….. joote phat gaye aur nange paon chalta raha tha….. koyi saat hazaar kilometers chalne ke baad utna door pohonchne par ek sham ko Abhay ek dargah ke saamne aakar girr pada. Woh dargah ek chota sa gaon mein, paya jata tha jahan sirf koyi 10 ya 15 ghar the aur khud dargah shareef unn gharon se kayi koss door tha.

Uss dargah par ek budha sa aadmi lambe safed daadhi wala raha karta tha wazife karte huwe. Usske chehre par jhuriyan pade huwe the aur usske enkhon se kum nazar ata tha. Log dargah jaate the to uss zaif aadmi ko khana de diya karte the. Ussko dargah wale baba bulate the sab.

Uss sham ko Abhay jab wahan gira to baba ne ussko uthakar khinchte huwe dargah ke andar legaya yeh badbadaate huwe, “Ab tu kaun hai? Kissi upar wale ka bheja huwa farishta to nahin jo insaan ke roop mein mujh gharib ka imtehaan lene ko aya hai!! Chal tera dekh bhaal karta hoon tujhe ek khuda ka bheja huwa farishta samajh kar issi bahane mujhe kuch sawaab to milega. Mujh fakir ke daaman mein hai bhi kia tujhko dene ke liye, ab tera khidmat hi to kar sakta hoon bus, bhooka pyasa lagta hai tu, shayad kismat ka mara hai meri tarah, chal andar chal mere saath……..”

Aur uss baba ne uss din se Abhay ko apne saath rakha, dekh bhaal kiya, khana pina apne hisse ka usske saath banta aur Abhay wahin rehne laga uss baba ke saath dargah mein!

Ab uss darga par door door se log aya karte the. Wahan ke log kum hi jaate the siwae ek do ke jo baba ko khana dene har roz jaya karte the. Baaki ziada tar baahar, door se aaye huwe log the jo baba ko paise ya khane pine ke samaaan aur kapde de diya karte the. To abhay ka wahan pohonchne ke baad log wahan jate to usske hisse ka bhi khana pina, kapde aur paise dete the. Iss tarah se Abhay dusre baba ban gaye uss dargah ke! Uss gaon ke log naye baba se milne ke liye aya karte magar sab kehte the yeh naya baba kabhi kuch bhi nahin bolta bus khaamosh rehta hai aur enkhon se sab ko ghurrta rehta hai……

Budhe baba ne laakh bhi Abhay se baatein kiye magar Abhay ne kabhi bhi ek lavz nahin bola. Bilkool khamosh rehta tha. Uss budhe baba ko samajh mein agaya ke woh kissi sadme ka shikaar huwa hai aur sudh budh kho baitha hai. To woh Abhi ka khayaal rakta. Hamesha Abhay se baatein karta rehta tha aur khud jawaab bhi deta tha. Abhay sirf usske enkhon mein ghurrta aur ussko upar se niche tak dekhta rehta. Budha baba ek din bola, “Yeh tere jeb mein telephone kisska hai? Tera hai ya kissi ka churaya huwa hai? Tu chorr hai kia? Kia police se bachchne ke liye yahan chupne ko aya hai aur dhong karta hai mere saath!! hein? Tu kaun hai bata to!” Tab Abhay ne apne mobile ko haath mein lekar ussko ek khilone ki tarah haath mein upar niche karke dekh raha tha, aur samajhne ki koshish kar raha tha ke woh kia hai aur keise usske paas hai….. lagta tha ke ek bandar ke haath mein ek khilona de diya ho aur ussko samajh meinj nahin ata ke woh uss ke saath kia karein…. Abhay ne uss mobile ko apne munh se lagaya aur danton se ussko kaatna chaha kuch khane ki cheez samajhkar, tab budhe baba ne uss se mobile ko chhina aur kaha, “are yeh khane ki cheez nahin hai iss se baatein karte hein dekha hai main ne. yeh jeb wala telephone hai. Magar yeh to abhi kissi kaam ka nahin, yeh bijli se chalti hai, aur iss mein bijli nahin hai abhi. Abhay sirf budhe baba ke chehre ko dekh raha tha sunte huwe jeise ek naadaan chota sa bachcha kissi bade aadmi ki baatein sunta hai……

To be continued……………..
 

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Anny ne bilatte rote huwe Iqbal ko apne daastaan sunaayi, aur Iqbal ke haath peyr kaampne lage aur Anny se kaha, “Hum abhi ate hein Anny!” Saleem bhai aur Vinay bilkool heyraan Iqbal ke baton ko sunkar andaza lagane ki koshish kar rahe the ke kia huwa hoga ab Ananya ko. Tab phone kaat kar Iqbal ne tooti awaaz mein kaha, “Vinay gaadi mor, wapas chal Anny ke ghar issi waqt yaar chal!!” kyunke jab tak baat kar raha tha gaadi ko park karne se pehle woh log Anny ke ghar ko koyi 5/7 kiometres se paar kar chuke the. Ab wapas jate jate Iqbal ne sab wakiya Saleem bhai aur Vinay ko sunaya ke Anny ke husband ne atmahatiya karli aur who apne ghar wapas agayi hai!! Aur sabhi baton ko bataya jo Anny ne ussko phone par batayi. Yehi ke usske saas ne ussko keise keise gande baatein bole…..

To teenon ab Anny ke ghar gaye! Ab uss manzar ko socho. Saleem bhai hamesha apne lambe talwaar ko saath lekar chalta tha, yeh usska style tha. Aur uss talwaar ko ek laathi ki tarah bhi istemaal karta tha aksar. Aur ek baar phir Varma sahab ke

saamne Saleem bhai wohi Iqbal aur Vinay ke saath magar iss baar usske ghar mein mawjood the! Inhi teenon ko Abhay ke saath ussne uss raat ko uss ghar mein dekha tha aur aaj usske ghar mein sab haazir the aur usska bolti band tha kyun ke uss ka dimaagh ka batti sach mein gul ho gaya tha uss waqt Anny ke haaadse ko lekar. Halaan ke mawka bada naazuk tha Iqbal ne jab Varma ji ko dekha phir Saleem bhai ke chehre ko dekha aur phir Vinay ko dekha to ussko hanssi agaya magar apne hanssi ko ussne andar hi dabaya! Ussko hanssi iss baat par aya ke jitna nafrat Varma ji Saleem bhai se karte the uss waqt shaayad utna hi majboor aur laachaar the unn teenon ko khud apne ghar mein paakar! Kal hi ussne sabko gunda mawali kaha tha aur aaj yehi gunde aur mawali usske ghar mein the aur who khamosh baitha tha bina ek lavz kahe!

Teenon ne ussko kuch nahin kaha aur seedha Anny se milne ko gaye…. Anny zor zor se rote huwe Vinay aur Iqbal se Abhay ke bare mein poochte huwe ussko peeche ke taraf dhund rahi thi. Magar jab unn logon ne bataya ke Abhay lapata hai to Anny behosh girr gayi.

Usski maa aayi ussko sambhaalne aur dekhne ke liuye tab tak Saleem bhai aur donon dost Varma ji ke paas gaye lounge mein.

Saleem bhai ek ghusse bhare muskaan mein Varma saab ke enkhon mein dekhte huwe apni mazboot goonjte huwe awaaz mein bola,

“Yeh kahawat suna hoga na tumne ke,

Muddayi laakh bura chahe to kia hota hai

Wohi hota hai jo mazoor-e-Khuda hota hai’

Ab khud dekhlo Khuda ko kia manzoor tha, dikhaayi diya ke nahin? Enkhon par patti bandha hai Varma ke bachche? Mere Khuda ko bilkool manzoor nahin tha ke tu Iss ladki ka rishta kahin aur kare! Tor diya rishte ko mere Khuda ne! Tujhko thapad mara hai upar wale ne ! Thapad padi na tere munh par? Ab kia karega? Apni beti ka aachaar dalega agar Abhay nahin mila to? Upar wale ne thapad aur laat mara tere gaand par kyun ke tu kudrat ke khilaaf gaya. Upar wale ne Abhay ko Ananya ke liye aur Ananya ko Abhay ke liye banaya hai to tu kaun hota hai isski shaadi kissi aur ke saath karne wala be?! Dekha kia huwa ab bhi kuch dikhaayi de raha hai ya dimaagh sun ho gaya hai tera?

Usski goonjti huwi awaaz ne Anny ko wapas hosh mein laya aur woh ahiste ahiste lounge mein aakar kuch door khade hokar Saleem bhai ki batein sun rahi thi aur donon dost bhi khade Saleem bhai ke attitude ko nihaar rahe the. Kia mard tha woh, kia style tha usska, kia ajeeb o gharib insaan tha woh, kuch khaas hone wala hai lagta tha ya kuch ajeeb batane wala hai Saleem bhai sab ko eisa lagta tha. Iqbal ne socha jiss baat ko zaahir karne ke liye Abhay ne mana kiya huwa tha itne dinon se shaayd aaj khud Saleem bhai sab raaz par se parda faash karega aur donon dost uss intezaar mein the aur kabhi Varma ji ko to kabhi Anny aur Saleem bhai par nazrein jamaye baithe the donon dost.

Aur Saleem bhai apne kadak awaaz mein, kuch ghusse mein to kabhie ek muskaan ke saath magar enkhon mein jeise khoon khaul raha ho, apne bayaan ko jaari rakha,

“Tum mujhko gunda samajhta hai nah? Iss vajah se inn bachchon ko bhi gunda kehta hai, sirf iss liye ke uss raat ko uss kamine ke ghar mein humko dekh liya tha? Tumko batawun main kaun hoon? Batawun? Are agar main nahin hota to tu chain ki sannss ke liye tarapta iss sheher mein! Tujh jeise logon ke hifaazat ke liye main mahinon bhar gundon ke saath jail mein rehta hoon apna ghar hote huwe!- Main kaun hoon? Kaun hoon main?” Aur ghusse se apna sarkaari id card jeb se nikaal kar Varma ji ke saamne table par phekte huwe ziada kadak awaaz mein Saleem bhai enkhon mein ensoo liye kehta hai kuch tharthataraate awaaz mein,

“Police ka aadmi hoon main- special squad- special secret branch, Sarkaar ke police department mein sirf 11 hein mere tarah desh bhar mein jo apne ghar baar chod kar mahinon bhar gundon ke saath jail mein jaakar sote hein khatmal ke saath!! Tum kar sakte ho yeh? Marr jawoge magar nahin kar pawoge! Hum Gunde mawali ke beech gunda bankar ghumte hein unn logon ka ata pata aur kaarobaar dekhne ke liye phir khufie tarike se dusre branch ko pata karte hein aur khud unn logon ke saath pakre jate hein aur jail bhi jaate hein taake unn logon ko kabhi shak na ho ke hum police ke aadmi hai! Dus saal se kar raha hoon aur kissi mafia wale ko aaj tak pata nahin chala ke main kaun hoon. Aaj tak weh sab mujhko apne biradari ka samajhte hein aur aaj bhi main unn logon ke kaarobaar ko police ko batata hoon aur unnko pakarwata hoon. Yeh dekh varma ke bachche,………” Aur Saleem bhai ne apna ek peyr par khada hokar donon hathon se apne ghutne ko zor se pakra aur khincha to uss ke aadha peyr baahar nikal ayaa!! Usska dayina peyr nakli tha..accident mein police ke kaam mein peyr kho diya hum logon ke hifazat karte huwe……..

“Aur kuch batawwun? Hmm?? Main 20 saal Canada police force mein tha. Iraq ki jung mein shaamil tha US army mein Canada army ke taraf se- Iraq mein ek zameen par rakhe mine par chal pada main…. Mine kia hota hao pata hai nah? Wohi bombs jo zameen mein mitti ke niche gaarte hein…. Kuch pata nahin chalta ke wahan kuch hai, reth ke niche chupa rehta hai….main ek soldier ko bachane ke liye daud raha tha aur uss waqt samaye nahin tha ke mine ka khayaal karun bus apne dost ko bachaane ke liye dawda aur ek peyr pad gaya uss zaalim mine par aur ussne mera ek peyr kha liya sala!!”

Aur kuch kahun??

Yaro agar yeh ek filmi script hota to main Saleem bhai ki character ko ziada scope deta… ab flashback mein jata aur Saleem bhai ki entry koyi 10 saal pehle jab woh jawaan tha ek zabardast action scene mein dikhata…. Bina dhadi ke, Canada police uniform mein ek mafia ka picha karta huwa tez raftaar se police ki car bhagaate huwe Saleem bhai nazar ate hein……. Kia main iss ko jaari rakhun Saleem bhai ki character ko flash back mein ya nahin? Aap log bataye phir age badhunga…… ab tak ke liye itna kaafi hai


To be continued……………….
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Ab Kyun ke Saleem bhai khud par guzre huwe waqt suna rahe the wahan mawjood logon ko, sab log apne apne nazarye se tasveer ke roop mein uss ke bole huwe shabdon ko dekh rahe the.

Saleem bhai, bachpan mein hi Canada chale gaye the apne parivaar ke saath kyun ke uss ke daddy wahan ek bade khaarkhane mein naukri karte the. Aur phir Saleem bhai ne wahin taalim haasil ki aur naukri bhi wahin mil gayi police mein. Ab kabhi kabhaar apne desh mein chutiyon par ghumne ko ate the apne parivaar ke saath.Canada ke police mein Saleem bhai ko naukri apne pehelwaan jeise jism ki wajah se mili. Physically bahot hi mazboot the aur bahot ooncha kad tha, ziada hi chawda seena aur baazu to aam logon ke do, teen baazuwon ko milaakar uss ke ek baazu banta tha!

Khair jeise ke main ne kaha ek filmi script ki tarah main ne socha ke agar Saleem bhai ko present karta to kuch eisa hoga…….

Canada ke lambe chawde raaston se ek latest model ki safed rang ke Mercedes gaadi bahot hi tez raftaar se bhaagte huwe nazar ate hein, samajhlo ke ek helicopter se shoot kiya gaya scene dikh raha tha, uss gaadi ke piche ek Canada ki police ki car oonche surr mein siren bajaate huwe uss Mercedes ke piche utne hi tezi ke saath chale jaa rahe the. Raftaar koyi 170 se 200 miles per hour ki hogi. Ab weise raftaar mein agar ek lamhe ke liye idhar ya udhar huwa to mawt saamne paya jata!

Samne wale car mein se goliyan bhi chal rahe the Saleem bhai ki gadi par. Magar goliyan car se takrakar rukh badal lete the. Ek sheher mein daakhil hote hi traffic ki vaja se raftaar kum huwa to ek gali se dusre gali phir teesre se chawthe galiyon mein mor par mor se guzarte huwe donon gadiyan ek dusre ke piche bachon ke khelte huwe khilawnon ki tarah nazar aa rahe the. Aaakhir mein Mercedes ke kuch kareeb ane ke baad Police ke gadi mein se ek haath revolver sameth baahar nikalte huwe dikhaayi deta hai aur ek hi nishaane se saamne wale Mercedes ke pahye par goli chalata hai, Mercedes left se right, phir right se left machalta hai phir bhi chala hi jaata hai aguey ki taraf bina raftaar kum kiye.

Tab kala chasma pehne huwe uss Police ki car mein Saleem bhai par rukh hoti hai, aur woh ghusse mein danton ko peeste huwe driving wheel ko kabhi daayein to kabhi baaayein ghumaate huwe dikhaayi deta hai….. Usske baad ek seedha aur bahot hi lamba raasta saamne hota hai, ek taraf kuch jangal jeisa nazara dikhte hein aur dusre taraf pahaariyon se saje huwe khubsurat manzar hote hein. Aguey ki car mein do log the jo mafia ke aadmi the, terrorist se mile huwe bomb ke maamle mein pehchaane gaye log the jissko Saleem bhai ne ek restaurant ke karib se picha karna shuru kiya tha. ‘Shoot at sight’ ka order mila huwa tha kayi dinon se. Saleem bhai bahot hi imaandaar police officer tha aur apna kaam bahot dil lagaakar karta tha aur wahan ke police mein kaafi naam kama chukka tha. Inspector to nahin tha magar sab ussko izat dete the kyunke sab ko pata tha ke woh kitna mehnati aur imaadaar hai. Police department mein sab ussko jaante the aur woh Canadian to nahin tha na, desi hokar goron ke beech unn se bhi behtar kaam karoge to pehchaan to hoga hi!

Phir kyunke raasta seedah aur lamba tha Saleem bhai ne phir apne revolver ko baahar kiya dusre taraf se, aur piche ke ek dusra payya par goli mara saamne wale Mercedes par….. bus ek second bhi nahin guzra, samajhlo ke palkon ko jhapakte hi saamne wale gaadi itna ooncha hawa mein uda, jitna ooncha ek double decker bus hota hai aur Mercedes 6 baar zameen par gir kar ulta, phir upar gaya, phir zameen par eisa 6 baar huwa aur car ke purze hawa mein udte nazar arahe the, Car ke darvaza khulta aur band ho raha tha uss dawraan…….

Phir Saleem bhai peeche zoron se brake maarte huwe driving wheel par apne chawde chaati ko dabate huwe dikhayi dete hein….. Jab saamne wale Mercedes ek patahr se takrakar ruk jate hein to Saleem bhai apne car ka darwaza kholta hai aur har filmon ki tarah pehle usske joote nazar ate hein , car se nikalte huwe, phir dhire dhire usske peyr dikhte hein, aur ahiste ahiste uss ke lambe kad tak camera pohonchta hai phir ek lamba, chawda Canada ki uniform mein police officer car se bahar nikal khada hota hai saamne wale Mercedes par nazar jamaaye huwe. Slow motion mein apne car se chalte huwe haath mein revolver liye Saleem bhai dikhaayi deta hai uss zameen par chaar payyon upar wale Mercedes ki taraf jate huwe….

Donon haath se Revolver thaame huwe jab woh ulte huwe Mercedes ke kaarib hota hai to Car ke taraf revolver ke naali kiye huwe zara jhhuk kar Car ke andar dekhta hai phir apne ek laat se Car ki dayein taraf wale darwaze ko khol kar ek kadam peeche hatta hai to andar se khoon mein latpath ek African origin ka aadmi zameen par ata hai, phir Saleem bhai uss jism ke karib ata hai, gunpoint par liye huwe apne laat se hi ussko hilata hai, aur jab woh aadmi bilkool nahin hilta tab Saleem bhai usske karib apne peyron par baith kar usske naak ke naalion ke paas apna haath rakh kar dekhta hai ke woh saanns le raha hai ya nahin, to pata chalta hai ke woh marr chukka hai…. Tab Saleem bhai car ke dusre taraf jata hai aur weise hi, ussi andaaz mein dusre darwaze ko kholta hai, aur uss taraf se ek gora aadmi, woh bhi ghaayal baahar nikal kar baith kar apna peeth car se lagakar hath jorta hai saleem bhai se….. Saleem bhai, apne pistol ko usske sar ke taraf kar ke khud dusre taraf dekhte huwe teen goliyan chalata hai uss addmi ke sar par phir bina mudh kar uss ko dekhe wapas apne car ki taraf slow motion mein jaate huwe nazar ate hein……

Phir usski gadi start hoti hai aur behtareen dhund mein uss police ki gaadi ko U-turn karke wapas jate huwe dikhaayi diya jaata hai. Ye tha Saleem bhai ki entry uss Canada ki zameen par.

To jab Iraq ki jung huwi US ne sabhi United Nation wale deshon se police aur military wale liye the Baghdad jane ke liye aur Canada ke team mein Saleem bhai mawjood the. Canada ke embassy se desh ke sarkaar ko Saleem bhai ke kaarnamon ka aur ache kaamon ki badhaayi di jaa chuki thi kayi baar. To apne desh mein Saleem bhai na hote huwe bhi pehle se mashoor the apne kaarnaamon ki vajah se. Phir Iraq mein woh haadsa pesh aya jab Saleem bhai ne ek taang gawa diya mine par kadam rakh kar, to wapas Canada gaya aur yeh khabar desh mein bhi aayi police department mein ke desh ka ek sipahi ghaayal ho gaya Iraq ke jung mein.

Usske baad koyi do saal baad desh ke sarkaar ne Saleem bhai ko wapas desh mein bulaya kaam karne ke liye aur tab se uss special squad mein secret police ke liye kaam karta hai. Police department mein weise aadmi ki zaroorat thi jo khud mafia ke saath milkar rahe aur khabar police ko dein aur waqt ane par unn logon ke saath khud jail jayein taake kissi ko kabhi shak naa ho ke woh police ka aadmi hai. To kayi saalon se desh mein Saleem bhai yehi kaam kar raha hai aur sach mein kayi baar jail gaaya mahinon bhar uss mafia ke logon ke saath guzara aur aaj tak kissi ko pata nahin ke woh police ka aadmi hai. Koyi bhi mamooli police inspector khud nahin jaante ke saleem bhai police ka aadmi hai, weh log bhi samamjhte hein ke woh ek mafia se mila huwa gunda hai…balke kayi police wale to Saleem bhai se darrte bhi hein aur police force ke special squad ne weisa hi chaha tha ke sabhi police wale bhi yehi soche ke Saleem bhai ek gunda hai. Koyi bhi chota mota gunda paida hota hai sheher mein to Saleem bhai ko pata chal jata hai aur turant ussko pakarwa deta hai, aur khud apne aadmiyon ko chaaron taraf pheylaya huwa hai ussne. Sab ussko gunda samajhte hein magar usska usool hai ke kabhi bhi kissi masoom par koyi takleef na ane diya jaye- jahan naa insaafi ho to turant ussko khabar kiya jaye, jahan zulm hota ho to woh turant ek gunde ka roop dhaaran karke situation ko sambhaalne ko chale jate aur hamesha kehte the Saleem bhai ke jab sidhi ungli se ghee nahin nikle to ungli mo tedha karna hi behtar hai, aur Varma ji ko yehi samjhaya ke wohi karne gaya tha uss raat uss raakesh ke saath jiss raat ko ussne teenon ko wahan dekha tha!!

Sab bayaan sunkar Varma ji Saleem bhai ke paon par girr pade rote huwe sajde ke position mein to Saleem bhai khada hogaya aur apne buland awaaz mein kaha, “abe oye Varma, mujhe sajda mat kar mujhe kufr ka darja mat de khuda ko muhn dikhana hai mujhe, insaan ka sajda karna mana hai mere mazhab mein uth aur maafi mangni hai to apni beti aur uss masoom Abhay se maangna, chalo bacho hum ab Abhay ko dhundne chalein pata nahin kahan chala gaya woh dil ka zakhmee bachcha, ya rab uss masoom ka hifazat karna mere mawla!”

To be continued…………….
Kuch log dash ke liye kuch bhi ker jate hain saleem bhai bhi aise hi hai
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Ananya bhi saath gayi car mein Abhay ki talaash mein aur Varma sahab bhi. Bahot pachtawa ho raha tha Varma sahab ko ab sab sachaayi janne ke baad aur woh bilkool tayaar tha Abhi se maafi maangne ko aur apni beti ko usske hawale karne ko.

Vinay ne Abhi ki mummy ko phone karke sab maajra bataya aur woh ro padi Ananya ki daastaan sunkar magar usske dil ko tassalli huwi ke aakhir itne log to hein Abhi ko dhundne aur usska khayaal rakhne ke liye. Saleem bhai ne mobile se uss ilaake ke apne jaan pehchaan walon ko phone karke Abhi ka hulya bataya aur poocha ke kissi ne ussko uss taraf jaate dekha, magar kissi ko pata nahin tha. Saleem bhai ne phir aur kayi logon ko phone karke ussko dhundne ke liye kaha.

Raat ho gayi sheher sheher, gali gali dhundte huwe aur pooch taaj karte huwe logon se magar Abhay nahin dikha, nahin mila aur sab thake hare ghar wapas gaye. Anny to behaal thi aur bahot ro rahi thi. Donon dost bahot pareshaan aur udaas the. Saleem bhai bhi bahot mayoos tha magar sab ko tassalli de raha tha ke koyi fikar na karein woh mil jaega jaldi hi aur dusre din khoj jaari rakhne ke liye decide kiya gaya.

Udhar jiss aadmi ne Abhi ko mara tha wohi tha jissko Abhi ne peeta tha usske student ko cherne par nashe ke haalat mein. Aur Abhi ghayal to tha dil se ab shareer bhi ghayal ho gaya tha phir bhi behaal woh chalte chala jaa raha tha kissi anjaan manzil ki taraf. Kissi nadi ke paas ponhcha uss sehra ko paar karne ke baad raat bhar chalne par aur nadi ke paas kuch apne aap ko saaf karke ek darkhat ke neeche so gaya, bilkool sunssan jaga tha, kissi insaan ka koyi nishaan bhi nahin tha udhar. Din bhar sota raha aur uthne par phir chalne laga…… usska dimaagh jeise khali tha kuch hosh nahin tha ke kaun hai, kahan jaa raha hai aur kia kar raha hai…. Dimaaghi haalat bilkool bigar gaya tha usska aur sab kuch bhool gaya tha…. Ek sadme se guzra tha pyar mein dhoka khakar aur yeh dusra sadma uss se bardaasht nahin huwa aur khud bina jaane dimaaghi santoolan kho baitha bechara Abhay.

Woh chalta gaya, chalta gaya, kayi din beet gaye, udhar sab log har roz nikalte the dhundne ko magar khaali haath wapas lawtte the…. Abhay ke paon ke joote ghiss gaye, chedh ho gaayi joote mein par, paon ghayal ho gaya, khoon nikal pada phir bhi woh chalta raha… woh chalta gaya bina ruke, usske kapde maile ho gaye, kahin kahin par phat bhi gaye kanton aur shaakhon ke beech se guzarte phir bhi woh chalta gaya….. Usske chehre par daadhi bahr gaye, baal sar par bilkool ulje huwe ek diwana, sharaabi ya paagal lag raha tha. Kayi dion se usske halq se awaaz bhi nahin nikli thi, khud ko pata nahin tha ke bolta bhi ya nahin….

Ek mahine beet gaye…… Abhay ka pata nahin chala. Ananya ka bura haal tha. Ro ro kar ussne apna haal bigaar liya thaa aur apne papa par chillaya karti thi, aur woh bhi paagalon jeisi harkat kiya karti thi reh reh kar. Apne papa se jiss tarah se ghusse mein aur zor se baatein karti thi woh uss ne pehle kabhi nahin kiya tha…. Abhay ki maa ka bhi bahot bura haal tha. Abhay ke donon dost ussko milne jaya karte the aur hawsla dilaya karte the aksar. Saleem bhai ne police mein official entry karwaya Abhay ka missing hone ka tasveer ke saath.

Udhar Abhay ke baal aur daadhi lambe ho gaye aur pehchaanna mushkil tha. Mahine bhar mein Abhay ne ekaat din koyi phal khaya jo jangalon mein mila ussko varna paani pee kar raha. Patla sa ho gaya bechara….. joote phat gaye aur nange paon chalta raha tha….. koyi saat hazaar kilometers chalne ke baad utna door pohonchne par ek sham ko Abhay ek dargah ke saamne aakar girr pada. Woh dargah ek chota sa gaon mein, paya jata tha jahan sirf koyi 10 ya 15 ghar the aur khud dargah shareef unn gharon se kayi koss door tha.

Uss dargah par ek budha sa aadmi lambe safed daadhi wala raha karta tha wazife karte huwe. Usske chehre par jhuriyan pade huwe the aur usske enkhon se kum nazar ata tha. Log dargah jaate the to uss zaif aadmi ko khana de diya karte the. Ussko dargah wale baba bulate the sab.

Uss sham ko Abhay jab wahan gira to baba ne ussko uthakar khinchte huwe dargah ke andar legaya yeh badbadaate huwe, “Ab tu kaun hai? Kissi upar wale ka bheja huwa farishta to nahin jo insaan ke roop mein mujh gharib ka imtehaan lene ko aya hai!! Chal tera dekh bhaal karta hoon tujhe ek khuda ka bheja huwa farishta samajh kar issi bahane mujhe kuch sawaab to milega. Mujh fakir ke daaman mein hai bhi kia tujhko dene ke liye, ab tera khidmat hi to kar sakta hoon bus, bhooka pyasa lagta hai tu, shayad kismat ka mara hai meri tarah, chal andar chal mere saath……..”

Aur uss baba ne uss din se Abhay ko apne saath rakha, dekh bhaal kiya, khana pina apne hisse ka usske saath banta aur Abhay wahin rehne laga uss baba ke saath dargah mein!

Ab uss darga par door door se log aya karte the. Wahan ke log kum hi jaate the siwae ek do ke jo baba ko khana dene har roz jaya karte the. Baaki ziada tar baahar, door se aaye huwe log the jo baba ko paise ya khane pine ke samaaan aur kapde de diya karte the. To abhay ka wahan pohonchne ke baad log wahan jate to usske hisse ka bhi khana pina, kapde aur paise dete the. Iss tarah se Abhay dusre baba ban gaye uss dargah ke! Uss gaon ke log naye baba se milne ke liye aya karte magar sab kehte the yeh naya baba kabhi kuch bhi nahin bolta bus khaamosh rehta hai aur enkhon se sab ko ghurrta rehta hai……

Budhe baba ne laakh bhi Abhay se baatein kiye magar Abhay ne kabhi bhi ek lavz nahin bola. Bilkool khamosh rehta tha. Uss budhe baba ko samajh mein agaya ke woh kissi sadme ka shikaar huwa hai aur sudh budh kho baitha hai. To woh Abhi ka khayaal rakta. Hamesha Abhay se baatein karta rehta tha aur khud jawaab bhi deta tha. Abhay sirf usske enkhon mein ghurrta aur ussko upar se niche tak dekhta rehta. Budha baba ek din bola, “Yeh tere jeb mein telephone kisska hai? Tera hai ya kissi ka churaya huwa hai? Tu chorr hai kia? Kia police se bachchne ke liye yahan chupne ko aya hai aur dhong karta hai mere saath!! hein? Tu kaun hai bata to!” Tab Abhay ne apne mobile ko haath mein lekar ussko ek khilone ki tarah haath mein upar niche karke dekh raha tha, aur samajhne ki koshish kar raha tha ke woh kia hai aur keise usske paas hai….. lagta tha ke ek bandar ke haath mein ek khilona de diya ho aur ussko samajh meinj nahin ata ke woh uss ke saath kia karein…. Abhay ne uss mobile ko apne munh se lagaya aur danton se ussko kaatna chaha kuch khane ki cheez samajhkar, tab budhe baba ne uss se mobile ko chhina aur kaha, “are yeh khane ki cheez nahin hai iss se baatein karte hein dekha hai main ne. yeh jeb wala telephone hai. Magar yeh to abhi kissi kaam ka nahin, yeh bijli se chalti hai, aur iss mein bijli nahin hai abhi. Abhay sirf budhe baba ke chehre ko dekh raha tha sunte huwe jeise ek naadaan chota sa bachcha kissi bade aadmi ki baatein sunta hai……

To be continued……………..
Fabulous kitni door nikal says abhay apno se kaise milega unse ab
 
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Anny ne bilatte rote huwe Iqbal ko apne daastaan sunaayi, aur Iqbal ke haath peyr kaampne lage aur Anny se kaha, “Hum abhi ate hein Anny!” Saleem bhai aur Vinay bilkool heyraan Iqbal ke baton ko sunkar andaza lagane ki koshish kar rahe the ke kia huwa hoga ab Ananya ko. Tab phone kaat kar Iqbal ne tooti awaaz mein kaha, “Vinay gaadi mor, wapas chal Anny ke ghar issi waqt yaar chal!!” kyunke jab tak baat kar raha tha gaadi ko park karne se pehle woh log Anny ke ghar ko koyi 5/7 kiometres se paar kar chuke the. Ab wapas jate jate Iqbal ne sab wakiya Saleem bhai aur Vinay ko sunaya ke Anny ke husband ne atmahatiya karli aur who apne ghar wapas agayi hai!! Aur sabhi baton ko bataya jo Anny ne ussko phone par batayi. Yehi ke usske saas ne ussko keise keise gande baatein bole…..

To teenon ab Anny ke ghar gaye! Ab uss manzar ko socho. Saleem bhai hamesha apne lambe talwaar ko saath lekar chalta tha, yeh usska style tha. Aur uss talwaar ko ek laathi ki tarah bhi istemaal karta tha aksar. Aur ek baar phir Varma sahab ke

saamne Saleem bhai wohi Iqbal aur Vinay ke saath magar iss baar usske ghar mein mawjood the! Inhi teenon ko Abhay ke saath ussne uss raat ko uss ghar mein dekha tha aur aaj usske ghar mein sab haazir the aur usska bolti band tha kyun ke uss ka dimaagh ka batti sach mein gul ho gaya tha uss waqt Anny ke haaadse ko lekar. Halaan ke mawka bada naazuk tha Iqbal ne jab Varma ji ko dekha phir Saleem bhai ke chehre ko dekha aur phir Vinay ko dekha to ussko hanssi agaya magar apne hanssi ko ussne andar hi dabaya! Ussko hanssi iss baat par aya ke jitna nafrat Varma ji Saleem bhai se karte the uss waqt shaayad utna hi majboor aur laachaar the unn teenon ko khud apne ghar mein paakar! Kal hi ussne sabko gunda mawali kaha tha aur aaj yehi gunde aur mawali usske ghar mein the aur who khamosh baitha tha bina ek lavz kahe!

Teenon ne ussko kuch nahin kaha aur seedha Anny se milne ko gaye…. Anny zor zor se rote huwe Vinay aur Iqbal se Abhay ke bare mein poochte huwe ussko peeche ke taraf dhund rahi thi. Magar jab unn logon ne bataya ke Abhay lapata hai to Anny behosh girr gayi.

Usski maa aayi ussko sambhaalne aur dekhne ke liuye tab tak Saleem bhai aur donon dost Varma ji ke paas gaye lounge mein.

Saleem bhai ek ghusse bhare muskaan mein Varma saab ke enkhon mein dekhte huwe apni mazboot goonjte huwe awaaz mein bola,

“Yeh kahawat suna hoga na tumne ke,

Muddayi laakh bura chahe to kia hota hai

Wohi hota hai jo mazoor-e-Khuda hota hai’

Ab khud dekhlo Khuda ko kia manzoor tha, dikhaayi diya ke nahin? Enkhon par patti bandha hai Varma ke bachche? Mere Khuda ko bilkool manzoor nahin tha ke tu Iss ladki ka rishta kahin aur kare! Tor diya rishte ko mere Khuda ne! Tujhko thapad mara hai upar wale ne ! Thapad padi na tere munh par? Ab kia karega? Apni beti ka aachaar dalega agar Abhay nahin mila to? Upar wale ne thapad aur laat mara tere gaand par kyun ke tu kudrat ke khilaaf gaya. Upar wale ne Abhay ko Ananya ke liye aur Ananya ko Abhay ke liye banaya hai to tu kaun hota hai isski shaadi kissi aur ke saath karne wala be?! Dekha kia huwa ab bhi kuch dikhaayi de raha hai ya dimaagh sun ho gaya hai tera?

Usski goonjti huwi awaaz ne Anny ko wapas hosh mein laya aur woh ahiste ahiste lounge mein aakar kuch door khade hokar Saleem bhai ki batein sun rahi thi aur donon dost bhi khade Saleem bhai ke attitude ko nihaar rahe the. Kia mard tha woh, kia style tha usska, kia ajeeb o gharib insaan tha woh, kuch khaas hone wala hai lagta tha ya kuch ajeeb batane wala hai Saleem bhai sab ko eisa lagta tha. Iqbal ne socha jiss baat ko zaahir karne ke liye Abhay ne mana kiya huwa tha itne dinon se shaayd aaj khud Saleem bhai sab raaz par se parda faash karega aur donon dost uss intezaar mein the aur kabhi Varma ji ko to kabhi Anny aur Saleem bhai par nazrein jamaye baithe the donon dost.

Aur Saleem bhai apne kadak awaaz mein, kuch ghusse mein to kabhie ek muskaan ke saath magar enkhon mein jeise khoon khaul raha ho, apne bayaan ko jaari rakha,

“Tum mujhko gunda samajhta hai nah? Iss vajah se inn bachchon ko bhi gunda kehta hai, sirf iss liye ke uss raat ko uss kamine ke ghar mein humko dekh liya tha? Tumko batawun main kaun hoon? Batawun? Are agar main nahin hota to tu chain ki sannss ke liye tarapta iss sheher mein! Tujh jeise logon ke hifaazat ke liye main mahinon bhar gundon ke saath jail mein rehta hoon apna ghar hote huwe!- Main kaun hoon? Kaun hoon main?” Aur ghusse se apna sarkaari id card jeb se nikaal kar Varma ji ke saamne table par phekte huwe ziada kadak awaaz mein Saleem bhai enkhon mein ensoo liye kehta hai kuch tharthataraate awaaz mein,

“Police ka aadmi hoon main- special squad- special secret branch, Sarkaar ke police department mein sirf 11 hein mere tarah desh bhar mein jo apne ghar baar chod kar mahinon bhar gundon ke saath jail mein jaakar sote hein khatmal ke saath!! Tum kar sakte ho yeh? Marr jawoge magar nahin kar pawoge! Hum Gunde mawali ke beech gunda bankar ghumte hein unn logon ka ata pata aur kaarobaar dekhne ke liye phir khufie tarike se dusre branch ko pata karte hein aur khud unn logon ke saath pakre jate hein aur jail bhi jaate hein taake unn logon ko kabhi shak na ho ke hum police ke aadmi hai! Dus saal se kar raha hoon aur kissi mafia wale ko aaj tak pata nahin chala ke main kaun hoon. Aaj tak weh sab mujhko apne biradari ka samajhte hein aur aaj bhi main unn logon ke kaarobaar ko police ko batata hoon aur unnko pakarwata hoon. Yeh dekh varma ke bachche,………” Aur Saleem bhai ne apna ek peyr par khada hokar donon hathon se apne ghutne ko zor se pakra aur khincha to uss ke aadha peyr baahar nikal ayaa!! Usska dayina peyr nakli tha..accident mein police ke kaam mein peyr kho diya hum logon ke hifazat karte huwe……..

“Aur kuch batawwun? Hmm?? Main 20 saal Canada police force mein tha. Iraq ki jung mein shaamil tha US army mein Canada army ke taraf se- Iraq mein ek zameen par rakhe mine par chal pada main…. Mine kia hota hao pata hai nah? Wohi bombs jo zameen mein mitti ke niche gaarte hein…. Kuch pata nahin chalta ke wahan kuch hai, reth ke niche chupa rehta hai….main ek soldier ko bachane ke liye daud raha tha aur uss waqt samaye nahin tha ke mine ka khayaal karun bus apne dost ko bachaane ke liye dawda aur ek peyr pad gaya uss zaalim mine par aur ussne mera ek peyr kha liya sala!!”

Aur kuch kahun??

Yaro agar yeh ek filmi script hota to main Saleem bhai ki character ko ziada scope deta… ab flashback mein jata aur Saleem bhai ki entry koyi 10 saal pehle jab woh jawaan tha ek zabardast action scene mein dikhata…. Bina dhadi ke, Canada police uniform mein ek mafia ka picha karta huwa tez raftaar se police ki car bhagaate huwe Saleem bhai nazar ate hein……. Kia main iss ko jaari rakhun Saleem bhai ki character ko flash back mein ya nahin? Aap log bataye phir age badhunga…… ab tak ke liye itna kaafi hai


To be continued……………….
fantastic update casi bro... marvelous yaar
casi bro YOU HAVE WRITTEN THIS DIALOGUE (Ab khud dekhlo Khuda ko kia manzoor tha, dikhaayi diya ke nahin? Enkhon par patti bandha hai Varma ke bachche? Mere Khuda ko bilkool manzoor nahin tha ke tu Iss ladki ka rishta kahin aur kare! Tor diya rishte ko mere Khuda ne! Tujhko thapad mara hai upar wale ne ! Thapad padi na tere munh par? Ab kia karega? Apni beti ka aachaar dalega agar Abhay nahin mila to? Upar wale ne thapad aur laat mara tere gaand par kyun ke tu kudrat ke khilaaf gaya. Upar wale ne Abhay ko Ananya ke liye aur Ananya ko Abhay ke liye banaya hai to tu kaun hota hai isski shaadi kissi aur ke saath karne wala be?! Dekha kia huwa ab bhi kuch dikhaayi de raha hai ya dimaagh sun ho gaya hai tera?)
such beautiful line can be written only by you, ONLY YOU casi bro. hats off to you casi. being a non hindi writer to such beautiful meaningful lines are just magical my friends bow to you my dear casi bro.
this is a fantastic update which shows the victory of good upon evil. and the good are salim bhai, anny, ikbal and vinay and evil is the dad of anny.
i felt so so happy to read what really Salim bhai is! how wonderful a character you have created casi bro, you are such a wonderful writer my fiend. thats wht i adore you and your writings my friend. hats off casi hats off my friend.
and this casi bhai this made me cry for true how do you write such lines bro?

{“Police ka aadmi hoon main- special squad- special secret branch, Sarkaar ke police department mein sirf 11 hein mere tarah desh bhar mein jo apne ghar baar chod kar mahinon bhar gundon ke saath jail mein jaakar sote hein khatmal ke saath!! Tum kar sakte ho yeh? Marr jawoge magar nahin kar pawoge! Hum Gunde mawali ke beech gunda bankar ghumte hein unn logon ka ata pata aur kaarobaar dekhne ke liye phir khufie tarike se dusre branch ko pata karte hein aur khud unn logon ke saath pakre jate hein aur jail bhi jaate hein taake unn logon ko kabhi shak na ho ke hum police ke aadmi hai! Dus saal se kar raha hoon aur kissi mafia wale ko aaj tak pata nahin chala ke main kaun hoon. Aaj tak weh sab mujhko apne biradari ka samajhte hein aur aaj bhi main unn logon ke kaarobaar ko police ko batata hoon aur unnko pakarwata hoon. Yeh dekh varma ke bachche,………” Aur Saleem bhai ne apna ek peyr par khada hokar donon hathon se apne ghutne ko zor se pakra aur khincha to uss ke aadha peyr baahar nikal ayaa!! Usska dayina peyr nakli tha..accident mein police ke kaam mein peyr kho diya hum logon ke hifazat karte huwe……..}

Kia main iss ko jaari rakhun Saleem bhai ki character ko flash back mein ya nahin? Aap log bataye phir age badhunga…… ab tak ke liye itna kaafi hai

of course bhai jaari rakho ek filmi scene bhi padh lete hein going to read the next buddy :woohoo:


all my respect to a writer like you casi bhai :bow: :bow: :bow: :bow:

 
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Ab Kyun ke Saleem bhai khud par guzre huwe waqt suna rahe the wahan mawjood logon ko, sab log apne apne nazarye se tasveer ke roop mein uss ke bole huwe shabdon ko dekh rahe the.

Saleem bhai, bachpan mein hi Canada chale gaye the apne parivaar ke saath kyun ke uss ke daddy wahan ek bade khaarkhane mein naukri karte the. Aur phir Saleem bhai ne wahin taalim haasil ki aur naukri bhi wahin mil gayi police mein. Ab kabhi kabhaar apne desh mein chutiyon par ghumne ko ate the apne parivaar ke saath.Canada ke police mein Saleem bhai ko naukri apne pehelwaan jeise jism ki wajah se mili. Physically bahot hi mazboot the aur bahot ooncha kad tha, ziada hi chawda seena aur baazu to aam logon ke do, teen baazuwon ko milaakar uss ke ek baazu banta tha!

Khair jeise ke main ne kaha ek filmi script ki tarah main ne socha ke agar Saleem bhai ko present karta to kuch eisa hoga…….

Canada ke lambe chawde raaston se ek latest model ki safed rang ke Mercedes gaadi bahot hi tez raftaar se bhaagte huwe nazar ate hein, samajhlo ke ek helicopter se shoot kiya gaya scene dikh raha tha, uss gaadi ke piche ek Canada ki police ki car oonche surr mein siren bajaate huwe uss Mercedes ke piche utne hi tezi ke saath chale jaa rahe the. Raftaar koyi 170 se 200 miles per hour ki hogi. Ab weise raftaar mein agar ek lamhe ke liye idhar ya udhar huwa to mawt saamne paya jata!

Samne wale car mein se goliyan bhi chal rahe the Saleem bhai ki gadi par. Magar goliyan car se takrakar rukh badal lete the. Ek sheher mein daakhil hote hi traffic ki vaja se raftaar kum huwa to ek gali se dusre gali phir teesre se chawthe galiyon mein mor par mor se guzarte huwe donon gadiyan ek dusre ke piche bachon ke khelte huwe khilawnon ki tarah nazar aa rahe the. Aaakhir mein Mercedes ke kuch kareeb ane ke baad Police ke gadi mein se ek haath revolver sameth baahar nikalte huwe dikhaayi deta hai aur ek hi nishaane se saamne wale Mercedes ke pahye par goli chalata hai, Mercedes left se right, phir right se left machalta hai phir bhi chala hi jaata hai aguey ki taraf bina raftaar kum kiye.

Tab kala chasma pehne huwe uss Police ki car mein Saleem bhai par rukh hoti hai, aur woh ghusse mein danton ko peeste huwe driving wheel ko kabhi daayein to kabhi baaayein ghumaate huwe dikhaayi deta hai….. Usske baad ek seedha aur bahot hi lamba raasta saamne hota hai, ek taraf kuch jangal jeisa nazara dikhte hein aur dusre taraf pahaariyon se saje huwe khubsurat manzar hote hein. Aguey ki car mein do log the jo mafia ke aadmi the, terrorist se mile huwe bomb ke maamle mein pehchaane gaye log the jissko Saleem bhai ne ek restaurant ke karib se picha karna shuru kiya tha. ‘Shoot at sight’ ka order mila huwa tha kayi dinon se. Saleem bhai bahot hi imaandaar police officer tha aur apna kaam bahot dil lagaakar karta tha aur wahan ke police mein kaafi naam kama chukka tha. Inspector to nahin tha magar sab ussko izat dete the kyunke sab ko pata tha ke woh kitna mehnati aur imaadaar hai. Police department mein sab ussko jaante the aur woh Canadian to nahin tha na, desi hokar goron ke beech unn se bhi behtar kaam karoge to pehchaan to hoga hi!

Phir kyunke raasta seedah aur lamba tha Saleem bhai ne phir apne revolver ko baahar kiya dusre taraf se, aur piche ke ek dusra payya par goli mara saamne wale Mercedes par….. bus ek second bhi nahin guzra, samajhlo ke palkon ko jhapakte hi saamne wale gaadi itna ooncha hawa mein uda, jitna ooncha ek double decker bus hota hai aur Mercedes 6 baar zameen par gir kar ulta, phir upar gaya, phir zameen par eisa 6 baar huwa aur car ke purze hawa mein udte nazar arahe the, Car ke darvaza khulta aur band ho raha tha uss dawraan…….

Phir Saleem bhai peeche zoron se brake maarte huwe driving wheel par apne chawde chaati ko dabate huwe dikhayi dete hein….. Jab saamne wale Mercedes ek patahr se takrakar ruk jate hein to Saleem bhai apne car ka darwaza kholta hai aur har filmon ki tarah pehle usske joote nazar ate hein , car se nikalte huwe, phir dhire dhire usske peyr dikhte hein, aur ahiste ahiste uss ke lambe kad tak camera pohonchta hai phir ek lamba, chawda Canada ki uniform mein police officer car se bahar nikal khada hota hai saamne wale Mercedes par nazar jamaaye huwe. Slow motion mein apne car se chalte huwe haath mein revolver liye Saleem bhai dikhaayi deta hai uss zameen par chaar payyon upar wale Mercedes ki taraf jate huwe….

Donon haath se Revolver thaame huwe jab woh ulte huwe Mercedes ke kaarib hota hai to Car ke taraf revolver ke naali kiye huwe zara jhhuk kar Car ke andar dekhta hai phir apne ek laat se Car ki dayein taraf wale darwaze ko khol kar ek kadam peeche hatta hai to andar se khoon mein latpath ek African origin ka aadmi zameen par ata hai, phir Saleem bhai uss jism ke karib ata hai, gunpoint par liye huwe apne laat se hi ussko hilata hai, aur jab woh aadmi bilkool nahin hilta tab Saleem bhai usske karib apne peyron par baith kar usske naak ke naalion ke paas apna haath rakh kar dekhta hai ke woh saanns le raha hai ya nahin, to pata chalta hai ke woh marr chukka hai…. Tab Saleem bhai car ke dusre taraf jata hai aur weise hi, ussi andaaz mein dusre darwaze ko kholta hai, aur uss taraf se ek gora aadmi, woh bhi ghaayal baahar nikal kar baith kar apna peeth car se lagakar hath jorta hai saleem bhai se….. Saleem bhai, apne pistol ko usske sar ke taraf kar ke khud dusre taraf dekhte huwe teen goliyan chalata hai uss addmi ke sar par phir bina mudh kar uss ko dekhe wapas apne car ki taraf slow motion mein jaate huwe nazar ate hein……

Phir usski gadi start hoti hai aur behtareen dhund mein uss police ki gaadi ko U-turn karke wapas jate huwe dikhaayi diya jaata hai. Ye tha Saleem bhai ki entry uss Canada ki zameen par.

To jab Iraq ki jung huwi US ne sabhi United Nation wale deshon se police aur military wale liye the Baghdad jane ke liye aur Canada ke team mein Saleem bhai mawjood the. Canada ke embassy se desh ke sarkaar ko Saleem bhai ke kaarnamon ka aur ache kaamon ki badhaayi di jaa chuki thi kayi baar. To apne desh mein Saleem bhai na hote huwe bhi pehle se mashoor the apne kaarnaamon ki vajah se. Phir Iraq mein woh haadsa pesh aya jab Saleem bhai ne ek taang gawa diya mine par kadam rakh kar, to wapas Canada gaya aur yeh khabar desh mein bhi aayi police department mein ke desh ka ek sipahi ghaayal ho gaya Iraq ke jung mein.

Usske baad koyi do saal baad desh ke sarkaar ne Saleem bhai ko wapas desh mein bulaya kaam karne ke liye aur tab se uss special squad mein secret police ke liye kaam karta hai. Police department mein weise aadmi ki zaroorat thi jo khud mafia ke saath milkar rahe aur khabar police ko dein aur waqt ane par unn logon ke saath khud jail jayein taake kissi ko kabhi shak naa ho ke woh police ka aadmi hai. To kayi saalon se desh mein Saleem bhai yehi kaam kar raha hai aur sach mein kayi baar jail gaaya mahinon bhar uss mafia ke logon ke saath guzara aur aaj tak kissi ko pata nahin ke woh police ka aadmi hai. Koyi bhi mamooli police inspector khud nahin jaante ke saleem bhai police ka aadmi hai, weh log bhi samamjhte hein ke woh ek mafia se mila huwa gunda hai…balke kayi police wale to Saleem bhai se darrte bhi hein aur police force ke special squad ne weisa hi chaha tha ke sabhi police wale bhi yehi soche ke Saleem bhai ek gunda hai. Koyi bhi chota mota gunda paida hota hai sheher mein to Saleem bhai ko pata chal jata hai aur turant ussko pakarwa deta hai, aur khud apne aadmiyon ko chaaron taraf pheylaya huwa hai ussne. Sab ussko gunda samajhte hein magar usska usool hai ke kabhi bhi kissi masoom par koyi takleef na ane diya jaye- jahan naa insaafi ho to turant ussko khabar kiya jaye, jahan zulm hota ho to woh turant ek gunde ka roop dhaaran karke situation ko sambhaalne ko chale jate aur hamesha kehte the Saleem bhai ke jab sidhi ungli se ghee nahin nikle to ungli mo tedha karna hi behtar hai, aur Varma ji ko yehi samjhaya ke wohi karne gaya tha uss raat uss raakesh ke saath jiss raat ko ussne teenon ko wahan dekha tha!!

Sab bayaan sunkar Varma ji Saleem bhai ke paon par girr pade rote huwe sajde ke position mein to Saleem bhai khada hogaya aur apne buland awaaz mein kaha, “abe oye Varma, mujhe sajda mat kar mujhe kufr ka darja mat de khuda ko muhn dikhana hai mujhe, insaan ka sajda karna mana hai mere mazhab mein uth aur maafi mangni hai to apni beti aur uss masoom Abhay se maangna, chalo bacho hum ab Abhay ko dhundne chalein pata nahin kahan chala gaya woh dil ka zakhmee bachcha, ya rab uss masoom ka hifazat karna mere mawla!”

To be continued…………….
fantastic! Mindblowing update casi bhai. you can perfectly write a movie scene, a filmi script.
the scene you wrote here would have been a super duper hit it looks like the dhoom movies scene. fantastic
dialogues are very good too. and all dialogues spoken by salim bhai are greatly written specikally for him. he is being portrayed as a very strong character in this story and casi bhai you have done great justice to this character of his.
hats off bro. wonderful update.
how that varna saab turned to a miniature being in front of salim bhai lol
 
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Ananya bhi saath gayi car mein Abhay ki talaash mein aur Varma sahab bhi. Bahot pachtawa ho raha tha Varma sahab ko ab sab sachaayi janne ke baad aur woh bilkool tayaar tha Abhi se maafi maangne ko aur apni beti ko usske hawale karne ko.

Vinay ne Abhi ki mummy ko phone karke sab maajra bataya aur woh ro padi Ananya ki daastaan sunkar magar usske dil ko tassalli huwi ke aakhir itne log to hein Abhi ko dhundne aur usska khayaal rakhne ke liye. Saleem bhai ne mobile se uss ilaake ke apne jaan pehchaan walon ko phone karke Abhi ka hulya bataya aur poocha ke kissi ne ussko uss taraf jaate dekha, magar kissi ko pata nahin tha. Saleem bhai ne phir aur kayi logon ko phone karke ussko dhundne ke liye kaha.

Raat ho gayi sheher sheher, gali gali dhundte huwe aur pooch taaj karte huwe logon se magar Abhay nahin dikha, nahin mila aur sab thake hare ghar wapas gaye. Anny to behaal thi aur bahot ro rahi thi. Donon dost bahot pareshaan aur udaas the. Saleem bhai bhi bahot mayoos tha magar sab ko tassalli de raha tha ke koyi fikar na karein woh mil jaega jaldi hi aur dusre din khoj jaari rakhne ke liye decide kiya gaya.

Udhar jiss aadmi ne Abhi ko mara tha wohi tha jissko Abhi ne peeta tha usske student ko cherne par nashe ke haalat mein. Aur Abhi ghayal to tha dil se ab shareer bhi ghayal ho gaya tha phir bhi behaal woh chalte chala jaa raha tha kissi anjaan manzil ki taraf. Kissi nadi ke paas ponhcha uss sehra ko paar karne ke baad raat bhar chalne par aur nadi ke paas kuch apne aap ko saaf karke ek darkhat ke neeche so gaya, bilkool sunssan jaga tha, kissi insaan ka koyi nishaan bhi nahin tha udhar. Din bhar sota raha aur uthne par phir chalne laga…… usska dimaagh jeise khali tha kuch hosh nahin tha ke kaun hai, kahan jaa raha hai aur kia kar raha hai…. Dimaaghi haalat bilkool bigar gaya tha usska aur sab kuch bhool gaya tha…. Ek sadme se guzra tha pyar mein dhoka khakar aur yeh dusra sadma uss se bardaasht nahin huwa aur khud bina jaane dimaaghi santoolan kho baitha bechara Abhay.

Woh chalta gaya, chalta gaya, kayi din beet gaye, udhar sab log har roz nikalte the dhundne ko magar khaali haath wapas lawtte the…. Abhay ke paon ke joote ghiss gaye, chedh ho gaayi joote mein par, paon ghayal ho gaya, khoon nikal pada phir bhi woh chalta raha… woh chalta gaya bina ruke, usske kapde maile ho gaye, kahin kahin par phat bhi gaye kanton aur shaakhon ke beech se guzarte phir bhi woh chalta gaya….. Usske chehre par daadhi bahr gaye, baal sar par bilkool ulje huwe ek diwana, sharaabi ya paagal lag raha tha. Kayi dion se usske halq se awaaz bhi nahin nikli thi, khud ko pata nahin tha ke bolta bhi ya nahin….

Ek mahine beet gaye…… Abhay ka pata nahin chala. Ananya ka bura haal tha. Ro ro kar ussne apna haal bigaar liya thaa aur apne papa par chillaya karti thi, aur woh bhi paagalon jeisi harkat kiya karti thi reh reh kar. Apne papa se jiss tarah se ghusse mein aur zor se baatein karti thi woh uss ne pehle kabhi nahin kiya tha…. Abhay ki maa ka bhi bahot bura haal tha. Abhay ke donon dost ussko milne jaya karte the aur hawsla dilaya karte the aksar. Saleem bhai ne police mein official entry karwaya Abhay ka missing hone ka tasveer ke saath.

Udhar Abhay ke baal aur daadhi lambe ho gaye aur pehchaanna mushkil tha. Mahine bhar mein Abhay ne ekaat din koyi phal khaya jo jangalon mein mila ussko varna paani pee kar raha. Patla sa ho gaya bechara….. joote phat gaye aur nange paon chalta raha tha….. koyi saat hazaar kilometers chalne ke baad utna door pohonchne par ek sham ko Abhay ek dargah ke saamne aakar girr pada. Woh dargah ek chota sa gaon mein, paya jata tha jahan sirf koyi 10 ya 15 ghar the aur khud dargah shareef unn gharon se kayi koss door tha.

Uss dargah par ek budha sa aadmi lambe safed daadhi wala raha karta tha wazife karte huwe. Usske chehre par jhuriyan pade huwe the aur usske enkhon se kum nazar ata tha. Log dargah jaate the to uss zaif aadmi ko khana de diya karte the. Ussko dargah wale baba bulate the sab.

Uss sham ko Abhay jab wahan gira to baba ne ussko uthakar khinchte huwe dargah ke andar legaya yeh badbadaate huwe, “Ab tu kaun hai? Kissi upar wale ka bheja huwa farishta to nahin jo insaan ke roop mein mujh gharib ka imtehaan lene ko aya hai!! Chal tera dekh bhaal karta hoon tujhe ek khuda ka bheja huwa farishta samajh kar issi bahane mujhe kuch sawaab to milega. Mujh fakir ke daaman mein hai bhi kia tujhko dene ke liye, ab tera khidmat hi to kar sakta hoon bus, bhooka pyasa lagta hai tu, shayad kismat ka mara hai meri tarah, chal andar chal mere saath……..”

Aur uss baba ne uss din se Abhay ko apne saath rakha, dekh bhaal kiya, khana pina apne hisse ka usske saath banta aur Abhay wahin rehne laga uss baba ke saath dargah mein!

Ab uss darga par door door se log aya karte the. Wahan ke log kum hi jaate the siwae ek do ke jo baba ko khana dene har roz jaya karte the. Baaki ziada tar baahar, door se aaye huwe log the jo baba ko paise ya khane pine ke samaaan aur kapde de diya karte the. To abhay ka wahan pohonchne ke baad log wahan jate to usske hisse ka bhi khana pina, kapde aur paise dete the. Iss tarah se Abhay dusre baba ban gaye uss dargah ke! Uss gaon ke log naye baba se milne ke liye aya karte magar sab kehte the yeh naya baba kabhi kuch bhi nahin bolta bus khaamosh rehta hai aur enkhon se sab ko ghurrta rehta hai……

Budhe baba ne laakh bhi Abhay se baatein kiye magar Abhay ne kabhi bhi ek lavz nahin bola. Bilkool khamosh rehta tha. Uss budhe baba ko samajh mein agaya ke woh kissi sadme ka shikaar huwa hai aur sudh budh kho baitha hai. To woh Abhi ka khayaal rakta. Hamesha Abhay se baatein karta rehta tha aur khud jawaab bhi deta tha. Abhay sirf usske enkhon mein ghurrta aur ussko upar se niche tak dekhta rehta. Budha baba ek din bola, “Yeh tere jeb mein telephone kisska hai? Tera hai ya kissi ka churaya huwa hai? Tu chorr hai kia? Kia police se bachchne ke liye yahan chupne ko aya hai aur dhong karta hai mere saath!! hein? Tu kaun hai bata to!” Tab Abhay ne apne mobile ko haath mein lekar ussko ek khilone ki tarah haath mein upar niche karke dekh raha tha, aur samajhne ki koshish kar raha tha ke woh kia hai aur keise usske paas hai….. lagta tha ke ek bandar ke haath mein ek khilona de diya ho aur ussko samajh meinj nahin ata ke woh uss ke saath kia karein…. Abhay ne uss mobile ko apne munh se lagaya aur danton se ussko kaatna chaha kuch khane ki cheez samajhkar, tab budhe baba ne uss se mobile ko chhina aur kaha, “are yeh khane ki cheez nahin hai iss se baatein karte hein dekha hai main ne. yeh jeb wala telephone hai. Magar yeh to abhi kissi kaam ka nahin, yeh bijli se chalti hai, aur iss mein bijli nahin hai abhi. Abhay sirf budhe baba ke chehre ko dekh raha tha sunte huwe jeise ek naadaan chota sa bachcha kissi bade aadmi ki baatein sunta hai……

To be continued……………..

I am speechless casi bro
how on earth did you get the idea of writing this bro?
Amazing update full of breathless moments.
oh my god what do i say.
i never thought this story will reach here.
abhay has got an acute mental breakdown and needs psychiatric treatment i feel. this is the problem when no one know who he is and that sort of disease can deteriorate day by day....
Okay i better dont say more. i really appreciate your writing casi bro
hats off again my friend.
i get to shake my head after reading this update it has a terrible impact!
ok bro will wait for the next update my dear!! pheeeeeeeewwwwwwwwwww!!!!!
 
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