Romance Aur Ek Prem Kahani (COMPLETED)

[Casinar]

Update 43​

Udhar Anny ka bhi bura haal tha magar ussko apne Abhay par pura yakeen tha phir bhi woh apne papa ke khilaaf kabhi nahin jaa sakti thi kyunke ussne apne papa ko hamesha se kaha hai ke agar woh kissi din ussko kissi bhi ladke ko naapassand karega to Anny uss ladke ko bhool jaegi. Aur ab Anny ka imtehaan ka ghadi tha woh kia karein apne papa ki baat ko maein ya sab bhool jayein aur apne Abhay ke paas chali jayein sab chor chaar kar? Badi duvida mein thi woh, ussko bhi chain-o-sukoon nahin tha, raat raat bhar jag rahi thi, enkhon mein neend na dil ko chain…..


Aur uss taraf Abhay raat ko mobile ko takte takte ro raha tha Anny ki meethi awaaz ko sunne ka mann kar raha tha ussko aur bahot betaab aur niraash tha. Dil ki dhadkan jeise band ho jaye eisa lag raha tha ussko. Apni maa se ussne kuch bhi nahin kaha aur khaamosh apne kamre mein band kiya huwa tha apne aap ko. Khane ke waqt jab maa ne awaaz di to ussne kaha ke ussko bhook nahin aur maa ko khana khaane ko kaha. Usski maa ne socha ke Anny se baatein kar raha hoga har raat ki tarah aur shaayad kuch khaa pee liya hoga Anny ke saath issi liye nahin khaega to maa ne ziada ghaur nahin kiya usski situation par uss raat ko.


Raat ko 2 ya 3 baje Abhay soya bilkool nahin tha aur usska sar dard kar raha tha. Uss taraf Anny bhi nahin soyi thi. Aur Abhay ko achanak Anny ke ghar jane ko sujha jeise ek baar beech raat mein gaya tha. Ussne socha Anny ke papa to uss waqt neendh mein hoga aur woh Anny ke khirki khatkhatega aur usske kamre mein daakhil ho sakta hai to Anny se baat ho sakti hai at least aakhri baar ke liye….. To ussne gadi nikaali aur chal pada subha ke 3 baje Anny ke ghar ko. Kia who sahi kar raha tha? Kia hoga agar Anny ke papa ne kissi tarah se dekh liya to? Kia Anny ussko andar ane degi? Kia woh Anny se baat kar paega? Yeh sab sochte huwe Abhay drive kiye jaa raha tha Anny ke ghar ke taraf…..


Udhar Anny sochte sochte khud se gambhirta se kaha, “Main apne pyar ko apne papa ke khushi ke liye qurbaan kar dungi. Pyar kia hota hai? Papa ne mujhko paal poskar itna bada kiya, mere bachpan se lekar aaj tak dekh bhaal ki papa ne, Abhay to aaaj meri zindagi mein aaya, papa se tulna kiya jaye to Abhay to kuch bhi nahin papa ke saamne. Main ne papa se hamesha kaha hai ke main kabhi bhi usske khilaaf nahin jawungi, to aaj kyun Abhi ke waja se apne papa ki baat ko thukrawun? Nahin nahin! Eisa nahin ho sakta- papa aakhir papa hai usska ziada haq hai mujhpar, main wohi karungi jo papa kahega. Main ussi ki baat manungi. Jawo Abhi main ne abhi se issi waqt se tumko bhoola diya, nikaaal diya tumko apne dil se, mat yaad awo mujhe ab, main koyi nahin lagti tumhari, ek bura sapna samajh kar bhool jawungi tumko main…. Han jaanti hoon dukh hoga tumko bahot magar main apne papa ke khilaaf nahin jaa sakti Abhi mujhko maaf kardena. Koyi baat nahin dil hi dil mein zindagi bhar tumko pyar karti rahungi magar kissi ko nahin pata chalega, tumko bhi nahin. Main ne pyar sirf tumse kiya magar apne papa ke khaatir main wohi karungi usske khushi ke liye.” Anny khud se badbada rahi thi aur than liya tha ke wohi karegi ab.


Yeh abhi ki budnaseebi dekho yaaro. Agar koyi ek ghante pehle Abhay ghar se nikalta to shaayad Anny ne yeh sab nahin kaha hota apne aap se. Shaayad tab woh khushi khushi Abhi se mil leti. Magar yeh dil mein thaan lene ke baad kia woh Abhi se milegi? Chalo dekhte hein kia hota hai…..


Pichli baar ki tarah, Abhi ne uss bus stop ke paas apne gaadi ko park karke choron ki tarah ahiste ahiste chalkar Anny ke room ke khirki ke paas gaya. Usska dil bahot zoron se dhadak raha tha. Charon taraf andhera to tha hi magar Anny ke kamre mein light on dekh kar Abhi ko tassali huwi ke chalo woh bhi jaag rahi hai. ‘Keise neend ayegi ussko jab main nahin so raha hoon’ Abhi ne socha. Ussko pichli baar itna darr nahin laga tha jitna iss waqt lag raha tha Anny ke khirki khatkhatane ko. Shaayad iss liye ke uss baar Anny ka baap nahin tha yahan; aur ab achaanak Abhi ne socha, ‘kia hoga agar aaj Anny ke papa ne jaan bujh kar Anny ko kissi dusre kamre mein shift kar diya ho aur khud iss kamre mein so raha ho to?!!’ iss khayaal se to Abhi ghabra hi gaya aur socha ke maamla to bahot ziada bigar jaega agar weisa huwa to? Agar Anny ka baap ne raat ko 3 baje ussko usski beti ke kamre ke paas dekh liya tab to kayamat ajayegi!! Yeh sochkar Abhi ka pasina chhuth gaya halaan ke thandi hawa beh rahi thi baahar. Ab Abhi pareshaan ke kia kare! Ghurnon ke bal khirki ke niche pada tha phir chor ki tarah sar ko upar karke kamre ke andar dkhne aur sunne ki koshish kar raha tha. Parda khincha huwa tha kuch bhi dikh to nahin raha tha magar Abhi ne ek lambi saanss liya aur enkhon ko band karke meditate kiya. Apne aap se kaha, “agar mera pyar sacha hai to mujhko apni mehbooba ki iss kamre mein mawjoodgi ka pata chalna hai, agar Anny iss waqt iss kamre mein hai to usski khushbhoo mujh tak zaroor ana chahiye ya usski kadmon ki aahat sunaayi dena chahiye, keise bhi karke mujhko apne pyar ka pata chalna hi chahiye……..”


Yaaro manon ya na manon sacha pyar, sacha iskh mein ek ajeeb si taaqat hoti hai jo tab anumaan lagaya jaa sakta hai agar uss tarah ka pyar kiya jaye. Ishk uss junoon tak pohonch jaati hai jahan khudaayi bhi nahin pohonchti agar ishk sacha aur gehra ho to. Khudaayi bhi karwat badal leta hai jahan sacha aashik apna rukh karta hai eisa suna hai kayi baar. To kia Abhay ki muhabat mein woh taaqat hai ke kuch eisa hota iss waqt? Chalo dekhein kia kudrat Abhay ke dil ka haal sun raha tha aur kia kudrat usska saath deta hai iss waqt?



Yaaro Abhay jeise ibaadat karne laga apne enkhon ko mundhe huwe kissi aur dunya mein pohonch gaya, junoon ki had paar kardi ussne iss tarah ka meditation kiya ussne uss khirki ke niche baithkar… itni gehraayi se Ananya ke soch mein dooba aur iss tarah se usska naam labon par laya ussko sochte huwe aur mehsoos karte huwe unn lamhon ko yaad kar kar ke jo ussne Ananya ke saath guzare hein ke ussko khud laga ke uss waqt woh Ananya ko apne bahon mein bhare huwe hein aur kissi aur dunya mein hai. Usske enkhon se ensoo beh rahe the magar khud ussko pata nahin tha. Uss ke jism tharthara raha tha magar woh anjaan tha, kudrat usske saath tha uss waqt magar woh naawaakif tha, usska message khudaayi Ananya tak kissi bhi zarye se ponhcha raha tha magar kissi ko pata nahin tha…… woh to diwane ki tarah, majnu jeisa apne pyar ko yaad aur mehsoos kar raha tha bus, ussko kia pata ke uss waqt kaenaat usska saath de raha tha…….

Huwa yeh ke kamre ke andar Ananya ko sab sochte sochte, apne papa aur Abhi ke beech tulna karte karte ussko garmi si chaa gayi aur thandi hawa khaane ke liye Ananya ne achanak khirki kholi parde ko hata kar ek lambi saanss lene ke liye apni gardan baahar kiya to Abhay ko saamne paaya kyunke uss waqt, thik ussi waqt Abhay ko usski khusbhoo naak ke naaliyon ke zarye dimaagh mein utar aya aur woh khada hogaya apni muhabat ke saamne…….. Anny ke kamre ka ujala Abhay ke chehre par tha aur Anny ki nazrein usspar yakayak Anny ki sansein thami reh gayi aur woh jeise baraf bankar jam gayi thi wahan…….


To be continued…………………

 

[Casinar]

Update 44 ​

Anny ghabra si gayi aur mudkar piche apne kamre ke darwaze ki taraf dekha phir Abhay ko dekhte huwe dhire se kaha, “Tum chale jawo abhi ab hum nahin mil sakte chale jawo please!” Abhay diwane ki tarah ussko dekh rahi thi aur ensoo bhare enkhon se thartharaati awaaz mein kaha, “Chala jawun? Chala jawun jaan meri? Achi tarah se sochkar keh rahi ho nah? Kahin eisa na ho ke mere lawtne ke baad pachtao aur khud se kaho ke kyun mujhko lawta diya khaali haath?!”

Anny ne Abhi ke dard bhare awaaz ko beech mein rokte huwe kaha, “Nahin pachtawungi, bilkool nahin pachtawungi, ab hamara koyi rishta nahin raha woh sirf iss liye ke mere papa nahin razi hai, bus sirf issi liye, mujhe tumse koyi shikwa gila nahin, tum ne to mujhe woh khushi di hai ke zindagi bhar talaashne se kissi kissi ko milti hai dunya mein, main khush kismat hoon ke mein tumhare saath itne dinon tak rahi, ab budkismat hoon ke tumse bicharna par raha hai….mujh mein apne papa ke khilaaf jane ki himmat nahin aur naa hi jana chahti hoon. Abhi please issko hamare taqdeer ka likha maankar sab bhool jawo aur mujhe maaf kardo please aur han apna khayaal rakhna, main nahin chahti hoon ke mere wajah se tum ko kuch huwe.. wada karo ke tum apna khayaal rakhoge…. Wada karo Abhi….” Yeh itna kehte kehte Anny ko khud pata nahin chala ke kab ussne Abhi ke donon haathon ko zor se thaam liya tha…. Hosh sambhala to jhat se apne haathon ko alag kiya……


Abhay usski enkhon ki gehraayi mein doob gaya tha aur sab kuch samajh gaya aur ussko kuch bhi kehne ki zaroorat nahin pari, bus sirf itna kaha, “Thik hai meri jaan, thik hai, aur kuch mat kaho main sab samajh gaya…..bus itna zindagi bhar zaroor yaad rakhna kabhi bhoolna mat ke tum meri ruh mein bassi huwi ho aur bassi rahogi jab tak main iss dharti par para rahunga, koyi aur iss ruh mein nahin ayegi mere aakhri dum tak kabhi bhi mat bhoolna iss baat ko, alvida meri pyari Ananya.” Itna kehkar Abhi wahan se nikla aur mudhkar dobara wapas nahin dekkha, seedha apni gaadi tak pohcha aur ghar chala gaya.


Ananya khirki par khadi ussko mudne ka intezaar karti rahi, street lights ke roshni mein ussko Abhi jate huwe nazar to araha tha aur woh intezaar karti rahi ke Abhi ussko ek aakhri baar mudhkar dekhega magar Abhi nahin muda aur Anny khirki bandh karke apne bistar par lethkar khub royi apne kismat ko koste huwe. Woh apne aap ko bhi koss rahi thi ke ussne kyun Abhi ko itna kuch keh diya kyun ussko wapas jane ko kaha, kyun Abhi ko kuch kehne ka mawka nahin diya ussne…. Woh sochne lagi, ‘pata nahin Abhi kia kehne ko aya tha, shaayad usske paas koyi upaaye tha hum donon ke liye, shaayad woh kuch kar sakta tha, woh mujhe apne seene se lagana chah raha hoga, kyun main ne ussko andar ane ko nahin kaha, kia pata woh akhri baar hi sahi mujhe gale lagana chata tha……’ yeh soch sochkar Anny bahot royi…magar ab rone se kia faeda jab chidya chug gayi khet….


Subha ka pehla kiran jab Anny ke kamre ke andar daakhil huwa to Anny ke takiye bheege huwe the ensoowon se aur uss suraj ki kiran ko Anny ne pranaam karne se inkaar kiya. ‘Jaa, chali jaa, mujhko andhere mein rehne de ab teri zaroorat nahin mujhe, zindagi to meri andheri ho gayi mere abhi ke bina to tera kia kaam ab chali jaa yahan se’ yeh badbadaya Anny ne suraj ke kirnon ke saath…..


Udhar Abhi apne bistar par lete chhath ko taak raha tha dil ki dhadkanon ke tez raftaar ko mehsoos karte huwe, aur enkhon ke nammi ko palkon se jhapakte huwe. Ek lambi saans lene ke baad woh apni maa se milne gaya rasoyi ghar mein. Maa ko taajub huwa ke who itni jaldi keise uth gaya aur kitchen mein kia karne aya, to heyraani se ussko dekhte huwe kaha, “Are aaj suraj uss taraf se uga hai kia?” Abhi apni maa ki enkhon mein dekhte huwe uss ke taraf badh raha tha ahiste ahiste, tab usski maa ne dekha ke usske palko se paani chalane hi wala tha aur usske honth tharthara rahe the, to maa ne jaldi se apne kadam usske taraf badhate huwe heyraani se poocha, “Are Abhi kia huwa? Kia huwa beta?” Tab tak Abhi apni maa ki baahon mein ek chote bachche ki tarah rone laga…..


Maa ne ek haath se ussko sambhala aur ek haath usske sar ke baalon mein pherte huwe dard bhari awaaz mein poochti gayi, “Are bol to huwa kia? Kyun itna ro raha hai, tere aur Anny ke beech kuch huwa kia re?”

Abhay ne bahot zor se rona shuru kiya chilaakar, khulkar bahot zor se rote huwe kaha, “Meri aany kho gayi maa, ab woh mujhe kabhi nahin milne waali, main ne kho diya usse maa, kho gayi meri Anny maa, main kuch nahin kar saka maa aur woh kho gayi, main bebus, laachaar dekhta raha aur meri Anny kho gayi maa…..”


Ek awrat roti hai to roti hai sab ko pata hota hai, magar jab ek mard chilla kar zor se rota hai to kaleja phat jata hai, khaaskar jab woh mard apni maa ke saamne weise rota ho to…… maa se dekha nahin gaya, suna nahin gaya aur woh khud rone lagi puchte huwe ke kia huwa aur keise huwa…..


Kaafi der rone aur bilakne ke baad, naak ko ponchte huwe Abhi ne apni maa ko sab bataya….. maa ne sujhav di, wahan jaakar Anny ke papa se baat karne ki baat ki magar Abhay ne mana kar diya ke jab Anny khud nahin chahti to kyun baap se mila jaaye….. Abhay ne maa se kaha ke ab usski kismat par sab chorr diya jaye….


Maa ko bahot fikar hone lagi kyun ke woh nahin chahti thi woh haadsaa dohraya jaye jo usski pehli muhabat ke lootne ke waqt huwa tha… ussko darr tha ke kahin Abhay sehen naa kar paaye aur apne dimaaghi santulan kho baithe…. To Abhay ki mummy ne Vinay aur Iqbal se phone par kaafi der tak baatein ki magar woh donon bhi laachaar the kyun ke khud Abhi nahin chahta tha ke koyi bhi usske liye koyi bhi kadam aguey badhayein…..



Abhay din bhar ghar par hi raha aur Vinay aur Iqbal ne school sambhaale. Aur Ananya ke yahan usske papa kahin gaye huwe the aur wapas aaye to do aadmi usske saath aaye. Unn mein se ek usska dost tha aur dusra uss dost ka jawaan beta. Ananya ko dikhane ke liye laye gaye the unnko. Anny ke papa ne Anny ko tayaar karwake unn logon ke saamne pesh kiya aur ladke ne ussko passand karli dekhte hi aur kia baatein ki gayi thi ke agle teen din mein shaadi ka din bhi fix kar di gayi.

Woh aadmi ek mashoor business man tha aur woh ladka usska ek lawta suntan tha. Anny ne to usska chehra bhi nahin dekha thik se sirf apne papa ke khatir han kiya aur shaadi ke liye raazi hogayi yeh kehte, “Papa aap jo bhi sahi samjhe kijiye aap mere papa ho aap to mera bhala hi karoge nah?!”


To be continued…………

 

[Rowdywa]

Thanks very very much bro.

 

[Casinar]

posting one more update here so that update 45 is on page 45

 

[Casinar]

Update 45​

Do din baad Abhay ko keise bhi khabar milhi gayi ke Ananya ki shaadi hone jaa rahi hai kissi raizade ke saath. Kia karta woh. Chup raha. Vinay aur Iqbal donon Abhay se ghar par milne ko aye, aur teenon dost ek saath milkar roye magar phir bhi Abhay ke donon dost ab bhi zid kar rahe the ke weh Anny ko utha laaye aur donon ko bhaga de yahan se. Yahan tak ke josh mein aakar Abhi ke maa ne bhi donon doston ka saath diya aur unn donon ko Anny ko uthane ke liye kaha. Faisla yeh bhi huwa ke saleem bhai ka sahara liya jaye Anny ko uthane ke liye.

Magar Abhi ko yeh bilkool manzoor nahin tha. Gham ke haalat mein ussne sab ko samjhaya ke jo usske kismat mein hone ko likha hai wohi hoga kissi ko kuch karne ki zaroorat nahin. Aur ussne dhamki di ke agar unn logon ne usske khilaaf kuch bhi kiya to woh kuch kar baithega. Ussko pata tha ke agar Anny ko uthaya gaya to Anny khud apne papa ko uss sharmindagi ka saamna karna nahin degi, sab aur bhi ulajh jaega. Abhi haalaat se samjhawta karne ki koshish mein laga huwa tha bhale hi who naamumkin tha. Donon dost laachaar apne ghar wapas lawte.

Magar bina Abhi ko kuch bataye donon Anny ke ghar gaye, Anny ko uthane nahin magar uss se ek aakhri baar milne aur baat karne ke liye. Raaste mein se Anny ke ghar pohonchne se pehle donon ne Abhay ki maa ko phone kiya aur ussko bhi saath ane ko kaha. Abhay ki maa ne uss se kaha ke ussko ek dost ke yahan jana hai to woh chali gayi Vinay aur Iqbal ke saath.

Wahan jeise hi pohnche gate par Anny ke papa ne Iqbal aur Vinay ko pehchaan liya aur donon ko gali galoch ke saath dhitkaar kar baahar nikalne ko kaha. Magar Abhay ki maa ko to who kuch nahin keh saka aur woh andar chali gayi Anny ke maa se baatein karne….. ghar ke aangan mein donon doston aur Anny ke papa ke beech oonchi awaaz mein behez ho rahe the. Anny ne andar se suna to jaldi se apne papa ke bagal mein aakar khadi huwi aur Vinay aur Iqbal se wapas laut jaane ke liye binati ki. Anny ke baap ne kaha,

“Gunde mawaali ho tum sab, yeh to shukar hai ke uss raat ko main wahan mawjood tha to tum sab ke kaarnaamein dekhe nahin to main to apni beti ke khushi ke liye iss rishte ko manzoor hi kar leta- Bhagwaan ka shukar hai ke main tum logon ka asliyat pehchaanta hoon kuton kaminon!”

Iqbal ne ghusse mein jawaab diya, “Varma saahab aap ko jiss din asliyat ka pata chalega to khoon ke ensoo rowoge aap, aur naaz karoge hum sab par. Agar uss raat hum wahan nahin hote to ek beti ka baap ho nah, to socho agar aap ki beti ke liye hum wahan gaye hote uss waqt tab kia ap yehi kehte? Kamaal hai bina jane samjhe hum ko gunda mawali keh rahe ho aap, pehle baat ki jarr tak ponhcho phir bakna jo bakna hai, aap ki jagah koyi aur hota to ab tak main ne usska thopda lahu mein rang diya hota abhi!”

Varma saahab bhi ghusse mein laal hokar chillate huwe kaha, “bandh karo apni gandi zubaan. Main police ko phone karun kia? Jate ho yahan se ya dhakka dekar nikalun?”

Tab Vinay ne zara narmi dikhane ki koshish ki aur kaha, “Dekhiye sahab, ghusse mein baat karne se koyi hal nahin nikalta, aap khud apni beti se poochiye kia woh khush hai iss shaadi se jo kal hone wali hai? Itni jaldi hadbadahat mein koyi shaadi hoti hai bhala? Aap please unn donon ko mila dijiye aap ka bahot bhala hoga aur dekhna aap ko khud apni decision par garv hoga…. Magar eise jaldbaazi mein faisla lene se sab bigar bhi sakta hai Sir, please aap Ananya aur Abhay ko juda mat kijiye weh donon ek dusre ke baghair nahin reh sakte, hamara dost bahot kumzor hai ussko kuch ho sakta hai, hum log usske liye bahot fikarmand hein pata nahin kia ho jaye ussko Anny se bicharne par aap zara sochiye kia aap thik kar rahe hein do masoom dilon ko alag karke?”

Anny ke papa ne phir bhi oonchi awaaz mein kaha, “Bhaad mein jaye tumhara dost. Mujhe kia lena dena ussko kuch huwe ya nahin woh tum janon.” Vinay ko yeh sunkar bahot ghussa aya aur ussne bhi chilla kar kaha, “Mister Varma agar aap Ananya ka baap nahin hote to mera haath uth jata abhi aap par, mere dost ke khilaaf ek bhi lavz agar kaha nah to aap ke dant aap ke peth ke andar honge issi waqt!” Tab tak Anny dawd kar Vinay ke paas aayi aur ussko ek thapad maarte huwe kaha, “tum kaun hote ho mere papa ko dhamkane wale? Chale jawo yahan se mera Abhay se koyi naata nahin suna tum logon ne? Get the hell out of here now!”

Tab tak Abhay ki maa Anny ke papa ke piche khadi thi Anny ke maa ke saath aur woh aayi Anny ke paas aur kaha, “Shaabaash beti, shaabaash bahot khub sila diya tumne mere bête ke pyar ka jawo khush raho, chalo tum donon yeh log kuch nahin samajhte pata nahin kyun mere bête ne iss ladki ko apnaya tha!”

Aur niraash hokar weh log Anny ke yahan se nikle. Raatse mein lawtte waqt Iqbal ne kaha, “Yeh Anny ko kia ho gaya kyun ussne eisa kaha Abhay ke liye? Woh to diwani thi usska?!” Abhay ki mummy boli, “Woh apne pyar ko qurbaan kar rahi hai bête, woh apne papa ke liye apne pyar ka balidaan de rahi hai, usski maa ne andar mujhko sab kuch bataya. Ab woh bhi kia karein bechaari, woh bhi to musibat ki maari hai chalo jane do kehte hai na ke jo hota hai ache ke liye hota hai shaayad iss mein bhi kuch achcha hi ho! Rehne do bhool jawo sab kuch ab bus apne Abhi ka ziada khayaak rakhna hai…..” to donon ne ek hi awaaz mein kaha, “Han maa ji zaroor hum sab Abhi ka ziada khayaal rakheinguey.”

Ghar lawtne par Abhay ki mummy bilkool heyraan rehgayi jab Abhay ne poocha, “Kyun maa apni beizati karwa aayi Anny ke ghar se nah?” Mummy ji ki dil ki dhadkan tez ho gayi aur Abhay ke kareeb jaakar usske paas baith kar poocha, “Tumko keise pata chala ke main wahan se aarahi hoon bête?”

Abhi bola, “Maa main khud nahin jaanta, jo kuch bhi Ananya se juda hota hai mujhko ek ajeeb se kashish si mehsoos hoti hai, usski tarap mujhko yahan feel hoti hai, aap logon ko ussne thukraayi hogi par iss waqt who apne kamre mein badh ro rahi hogi, uss par kia beet rahi hai mujhe achchi tarah se pata hai maa…. Woh khud hi jaanti hai ke kiss tarah ussne apne papa ko han kaha kissi ko naa chahte huwe bhi apne pati maanne ke liye…zara usski jagah hokar sochiye na maa kitni takliff mein hai woh iss waqt!”

Apne bête ke inn baton ko sunkar usski maa ki enkhen bharr aayi aur Abhay ko zor se seene se lagaakar rote huwe kaha, “Tu kiss mitti ka bana hai re Abhay? Tujhpar khud itna kuch beet raha hai aur tu phir bhi usski taklifon ke bare mein soch raha hai? Keisa pyar hai re tera? Bhagwaan eise pyar ko kyun juda kar raha hai bhala?” Aur sar upar uthaakar aasmaan ki taraf dekhte huwe mummy ji ne kaha “Kia baat hai ey upar wale mere bête ko chain aur sukoon de!”

Abhay ek diwane ki tarah zameen par baitha huwa tha deewaar se peeth kiye huwe aur chehra bilkool uthra huwa tha usska, shakal se bilkool paagal dikh raha tha, balke lag raha tha ke ek bewda baitha hai zameen par khayaalon mein dooba huwa.

Raat ke 10 baje Abhay achanak apne kamre se nikla aur maa ke paas aakar kaha, “Maa mujhko har cheez mein sirf Anny dikhaayi de rahi hai, usski bahot yaad aarahi hai maa, pata nahin woh kiss haal mein hogi iss waqt, woh tarap rahi hogi maa…. Mujhse raha nahin jaa raha maa, har taraf usski tasveer dikhaayi de rahi hai, apne kamre ke har cheez mein Anny bassi huwi hai, maa, TV set par, bistar par, farsh par, zameen par, takiye par, chaadar par har jaga sirf Anny dikh rahi hai maa main ussko nahin bhoola pawunga maa main kia karun maa main kia karun…..” yeh kehte kehte woh ek chote bache ki tarah rone laga aur maa ne ussko seene se lagate huwe kaha, “bus bus chup hoja, yeh tera pyar hai usske liye issi liye tujhko eisa lag raha hai, usski fikar chorr aur apne bare mein soch, kia woh khush hogi agar ussko pata chala ke tu itna udaas hai aur ro raha hai? Hmm tumko khushi khushi ussko jane dena chahiye, apne dil se bhi aur dimaagh se bhi….ahiste ahiste sab thik ho jaega bête…bus soja ab, aaj yahin mama ke paas soja mere laal…….”

Maa gehri neendh mein thi jab raat ke 2 baje Abhay ghar se nikla….. din mein Anny ki shaadi hone wali thi…. Abhay ko yeh yaad tha…… ek paisa bhi jeb mein nahin, uss ka switch off mobile jeb mein, ek tshirt, jean aur jacket pehne huwe Abhay chal pada, kidhar ke liye kissi ko pata nahin……..

To be continued………………..

 

[Rowdywa]

one additional for page 45 great ?

 

[Rowdywa]

Update 43​

Udhar Anny ka bhi bura haal tha magar ussko apne Abhay par pura yakeen tha phir bhi woh apne papa ke khilaaf kabhi nahin jaa sakti thi kyunke ussne apne papa ko hamesha se kaha hai ke agar woh kissi din ussko kissi bhi ladke ko naapassand karega to Anny uss ladke ko bhool jaegi. Aur ab Anny ka imtehaan ka ghadi tha woh kia karein apne papa ki baat ko maein ya sab bhool jayein aur apne Abhay ke paas chali jayein sab chor chaar kar? Badi duvida mein thi woh, ussko bhi chain-o-sukoon nahin tha, raat raat bhar jag rahi thi, enkhon mein neend na dil ko chain…..


Aur uss taraf Abhay raat ko mobile ko takte takte ro raha tha Anny ki meethi awaaz ko sunne ka mann kar raha tha ussko aur bahot betaab aur niraash tha. Dil ki dhadkan jeise band ho jaye eisa lag raha tha ussko. Apni maa se ussne kuch bhi nahin kaha aur khaamosh apne kamre mein band kiya huwa tha apne aap ko. Khane ke waqt jab maa ne awaaz di to ussne kaha ke ussko bhook nahin aur maa ko khana khaane ko kaha. Usski maa ne socha ke Anny se baatein kar raha hoga har raat ki tarah aur shaayad kuch khaa pee liya hoga Anny ke saath issi liye nahin khaega to maa ne ziada ghaur nahin kiya usski situation par uss raat ko.


Raat ko 2 ya 3 baje Abhay soya bilkool nahin tha aur usska sar dard kar raha tha. Uss taraf Anny bhi nahin soyi thi. Aur Abhay ko achanak Anny ke ghar jane ko sujha jeise ek baar beech raat mein gaya tha. Ussne socha Anny ke papa to uss waqt neendh mein hoga aur woh Anny ke khirki khatkhatega aur usske kamre mein daakhil ho sakta hai to Anny se baat ho sakti hai at least aakhri baar ke liye….. To ussne gadi nikaali aur chal pada subha ke 3 baje Anny ke ghar ko. Kia who sahi kar raha tha? Kia hoga agar Anny ke papa ne kissi tarah se dekh liya to? Kia Anny ussko andar ane degi? Kia woh Anny se baat kar paega? Yeh sab sochte huwe Abhay drive kiye jaa raha tha Anny ke ghar ke taraf…..


Udhar Anny sochte sochte khud se gambhirta se kaha, “Main apne pyar ko apne papa ke khushi ke liye qurbaan kar dungi. Pyar kia hota hai? Papa ne mujhko paal poskar itna bada kiya, mere bachpan se lekar aaj tak dekh bhaal ki papa ne, Abhay to aaaj meri zindagi mein aaya, papa se tulna kiya jaye to Abhay to kuch bhi nahin papa ke saamne. Main ne papa se hamesha kaha hai ke main kabhi bhi usske khilaaf nahin jawungi, to aaj kyun Abhi ke waja se apne papa ki baat ko thukrawun? Nahin nahin! Eisa nahin ho sakta- papa aakhir papa hai usska ziada haq hai mujhpar, main wohi karungi jo papa kahega. Main ussi ki baat manungi. Jawo Abhi main ne abhi se issi waqt se tumko bhoola diya, nikaaal diya tumko apne dil se, mat yaad awo mujhe ab, main koyi nahin lagti tumhari, ek bura sapna samajh kar bhool jawungi tumko main…. Han jaanti hoon dukh hoga tumko bahot magar main apne papa ke khilaaf nahin jaa sakti Abhi mujhko maaf kardena. Koyi baat nahin dil hi dil mein zindagi bhar tumko pyar karti rahungi magar kissi ko nahin pata chalega, tumko bhi nahin. Main ne pyar sirf tumse kiya magar apne papa ke khaatir main wohi karungi usske khushi ke liye.” Anny khud se badbada rahi thi aur than liya tha ke wohi karegi ab.


Yeh abhi ki budnaseebi dekho yaaro. Agar koyi ek ghante pehle Abhay ghar se nikalta to shaayad Anny ne yeh sab nahin kaha hota apne aap se. Shaayad tab woh khushi khushi Abhi se mil leti. Magar yeh dil mein thaan lene ke baad kia woh Abhi se milegi? Chalo dekhte hein kia hota hai…..


Pichli baar ki tarah, Abhi ne uss bus stop ke paas apne gaadi ko park karke choron ki tarah ahiste ahiste chalkar Anny ke room ke khirki ke paas gaya. Usska dil bahot zoron se dhadak raha tha. Charon taraf andhera to tha hi magar Anny ke kamre mein light on dekh kar Abhi ko tassali huwi ke chalo woh bhi jaag rahi hai. ‘Keise neend ayegi ussko jab main nahin so raha hoon’ Abhi ne socha. Ussko pichli baar itna darr nahin laga tha jitna iss waqt lag raha tha Anny ke khirki khatkhatane ko. Shaayad iss liye ke uss baar Anny ka baap nahin tha yahan; aur ab achaanak Abhi ne socha, ‘kia hoga agar aaj Anny ke papa ne jaan bujh kar Anny ko kissi dusre kamre mein shift kar diya ho aur khud iss kamre mein so raha ho to?!!’ iss khayaal se to Abhi ghabra hi gaya aur socha ke maamla to bahot ziada bigar jaega agar weisa huwa to? Agar Anny ka baap ne raat ko 3 baje ussko usski beti ke kamre ke paas dekh liya tab to kayamat ajayegi!! Yeh sochkar Abhi ka pasina chhuth gaya halaan ke thandi hawa beh rahi thi baahar. Ab Abhi pareshaan ke kia kare! Ghurnon ke bal khirki ke niche pada tha phir chor ki tarah sar ko upar karke kamre ke andar dkhne aur sunne ki koshish kar raha tha. Parda khincha huwa tha kuch bhi dikh to nahin raha tha magar Abhi ne ek lambi saanss liya aur enkhon ko band karke meditate kiya. Apne aap se kaha, “agar mera pyar sacha hai to mujhko apni mehbooba ki iss kamre mein mawjoodgi ka pata chalna hai, agar Anny iss waqt iss kamre mein hai to usski khushbhoo mujh tak zaroor ana chahiye ya usski kadmon ki aahat sunaayi dena chahiye, keise bhi karke mujhko apne pyar ka pata chalna hi chahiye……..”


Yaaro manon ya na manon sacha pyar, sacha iskh mein ek ajeeb si taaqat hoti hai jo tab anumaan lagaya jaa sakta hai agar uss tarah ka pyar kiya jaye. Ishk uss junoon tak pohonch jaati hai jahan khudaayi bhi nahin pohonchti agar ishk sacha aur gehra ho to. Khudaayi bhi karwat badal leta hai jahan sacha aashik apna rukh karta hai eisa suna hai kayi baar. To kia Abhay ki muhabat mein woh taaqat hai ke kuch eisa hota iss waqt? Chalo dekhein kia kudrat Abhay ke dil ka haal sun raha tha aur kia kudrat usska saath deta hai iss waqt?



Yaaro Abhay jeise ibaadat karne laga apne enkhon ko mundhe huwe kissi aur dunya mein pohonch gaya, junoon ki had paar kardi ussne iss tarah ka meditation kiya ussne uss khirki ke niche baithkar… itni gehraayi se Ananya ke soch mein dooba aur iss tarah se usska naam labon par laya ussko sochte huwe aur mehsoos karte huwe unn lamhon ko yaad kar kar ke jo ussne Ananya ke saath guzare hein ke ussko khud laga ke uss waqt woh Ananya ko apne bahon mein bhare huwe hein aur kissi aur dunya mein hai. Usske enkhon se ensoo beh rahe the magar khud ussko pata nahin tha. Uss ke jism tharthara raha tha magar woh anjaan tha, kudrat usske saath tha uss waqt magar woh naawaakif tha, usska message khudaayi Ananya tak kissi bhi zarye se ponhcha raha tha magar kissi ko pata nahin tha…… woh to diwane ki tarah, majnu jeisa apne pyar ko yaad aur mehsoos kar raha tha bus, ussko kia pata ke uss waqt kaenaat usska saath de raha tha…….

Huwa yeh ke kamre ke andar Ananya ko sab sochte sochte, apne papa aur Abhi ke beech tulna karte karte ussko garmi si chaa gayi aur thandi hawa khaane ke liye Ananya ne achanak khirki kholi parde ko hata kar ek lambi saanss lene ke liye apni gardan baahar kiya to Abhay ko saamne paaya kyunke uss waqt, thik ussi waqt Abhay ko usski khusbhoo naak ke naaliyon ke zarye dimaagh mein utar aya aur woh khada hogaya apni muhabat ke saamne…….. Anny ke kamre ka ujala Abhay ke chehre par tha aur Anny ki nazrein usspar yakayak Anny ki sansein thami reh gayi aur woh jeise baraf bankar jam gayi thi wahan…….


To be continued…………………

wooooooooow casi bro this is wonderful, fantastic update.
all lovers must read this kind of update which displays true love
amazingly written casi bro
just loved it
the way you have described the pain and mental torments both are going through on their sides are superb
then the sudden opening of the window from anny's side is marvelous..
i agree with you atht all this truely happens when the love is really true and deep
hats off bro

 

[Rowdywa]

Update 44 ​

Anny ghabra si gayi aur mudkar piche apne kamre ke darwaze ki taraf dekha phir Abhay ko dekhte huwe dhire se kaha, “Tum chale jawo abhi ab hum nahin mil sakte chale jawo please!” Abhay diwane ki tarah ussko dekh rahi thi aur ensoo bhare enkhon se thartharaati awaaz mein kaha, “Chala jawun? Chala jawun jaan meri? Achi tarah se sochkar keh rahi ho nah? Kahin eisa na ho ke mere lawtne ke baad pachtao aur khud se kaho ke kyun mujhko lawta diya khaali haath?!”

Anny ne Abhi ke dard bhare awaaz ko beech mein rokte huwe kaha, “Nahin pachtawungi, bilkool nahin pachtawungi, ab hamara koyi rishta nahin raha woh sirf iss liye ke mere papa nahin razi hai, bus sirf issi liye, mujhe tumse koyi shikwa gila nahin, tum ne to mujhe woh khushi di hai ke zindagi bhar talaashne se kissi kissi ko milti hai dunya mein, main khush kismat hoon ke mein tumhare saath itne dinon tak rahi, ab budkismat hoon ke tumse bicharna par raha hai….mujh mein apne papa ke khilaaf jane ki himmat nahin aur naa hi jana chahti hoon. Abhi please issko hamare taqdeer ka likha maankar sab bhool jawo aur mujhe maaf kardo please aur han apna khayaal rakhna, main nahin chahti hoon ke mere wajah se tum ko kuch huwe.. wada karo ke tum apna khayaal rakhoge…. Wada karo Abhi….” Yeh itna kehte kehte Anny ko khud pata nahin chala ke kab ussne Abhi ke donon haathon ko zor se thaam liya tha…. Hosh sambhala to jhat se apne haathon ko alag kiya……


Abhay usski enkhon ki gehraayi mein doob gaya tha aur sab kuch samajh gaya aur ussko kuch bhi kehne ki zaroorat nahin pari, bus sirf itna kaha, “Thik hai meri jaan, thik hai, aur kuch mat kaho main sab samajh gaya…..bus itna zindagi bhar zaroor yaad rakhna kabhi bhoolna mat ke tum meri ruh mein bassi huwi ho aur bassi rahogi jab tak main iss dharti par para rahunga, koyi aur iss ruh mein nahin ayegi mere aakhri dum tak kabhi bhi mat bhoolna iss baat ko, alvida meri pyari Ananya.” Itna kehkar Abhi wahan se nikla aur mudhkar dobara wapas nahin dekkha, seedha apni gaadi tak pohcha aur ghar chala gaya.


Ananya khirki par khadi ussko mudne ka intezaar karti rahi, street lights ke roshni mein ussko Abhi jate huwe nazar to araha tha aur woh intezaar karti rahi ke Abhi ussko ek aakhri baar mudhkar dekhega magar Abhi nahin muda aur Anny khirki bandh karke apne bistar par lethkar khub royi apne kismat ko koste huwe. Woh apne aap ko bhi koss rahi thi ke ussne kyun Abhi ko itna kuch keh diya kyun ussko wapas jane ko kaha, kyun Abhi ko kuch kehne ka mawka nahin diya ussne…. Woh sochne lagi, ‘pata nahin Abhi kia kehne ko aya tha, shaayad usske paas koyi upaaye tha hum donon ke liye, shaayad woh kuch kar sakta tha, woh mujhe apne seene se lagana chah raha hoga, kyun main ne ussko andar ane ko nahin kaha, kia pata woh akhri baar hi sahi mujhe gale lagana chata tha……’ yeh soch sochkar Anny bahot royi…magar ab rone se kia faeda jab chidya chug gayi khet….


Subha ka pehla kiran jab Anny ke kamre ke andar daakhil huwa to Anny ke takiye bheege huwe the ensoowon se aur uss suraj ki kiran ko Anny ne pranaam karne se inkaar kiya. ‘Jaa, chali jaa, mujhko andhere mein rehne de ab teri zaroorat nahin mujhe, zindagi to meri andheri ho gayi mere abhi ke bina to tera kia kaam ab chali jaa yahan se’ yeh badbadaya Anny ne suraj ke kirnon ke saath…..


Udhar Abhi apne bistar par lete chhath ko taak raha tha dil ki dhadkanon ke tez raftaar ko mehsoos karte huwe, aur enkhon ke nammi ko palkon se jhapakte huwe. Ek lambi saans lene ke baad woh apni maa se milne gaya rasoyi ghar mein. Maa ko taajub huwa ke who itni jaldi keise uth gaya aur kitchen mein kia karne aya, to heyraani se ussko dekhte huwe kaha, “Are aaj suraj uss taraf se uga hai kia?” Abhi apni maa ki enkhon mein dekhte huwe uss ke taraf badh raha tha ahiste ahiste, tab usski maa ne dekha ke usske palko se paani chalane hi wala tha aur usske honth tharthara rahe the, to maa ne jaldi se apne kadam usske taraf badhate huwe heyraani se poocha, “Are Abhi kia huwa? Kia huwa beta?” Tab tak Abhi apni maa ki baahon mein ek chote bachche ki tarah rone laga…..


Maa ne ek haath se ussko sambhala aur ek haath usske sar ke baalon mein pherte huwe dard bhari awaaz mein poochti gayi, “Are bol to huwa kia? Kyun itna ro raha hai, tere aur Anny ke beech kuch huwa kia re?”

Abhay ne bahot zor se rona shuru kiya chilaakar, khulkar bahot zor se rote huwe kaha, “Meri aany kho gayi maa, ab woh mujhe kabhi nahin milne waali, main ne kho diya usse maa, kho gayi meri Anny maa, main kuch nahin kar saka maa aur woh kho gayi, main bebus, laachaar dekhta raha aur meri Anny kho gayi maa…..”


Ek awrat roti hai to roti hai sab ko pata hota hai, magar jab ek mard chilla kar zor se rota hai to kaleja phat jata hai, khaaskar jab woh mard apni maa ke saamne weise rota ho to…… maa se dekha nahin gaya, suna nahin gaya aur woh khud rone lagi puchte huwe ke kia huwa aur keise huwa…..


Kaafi der rone aur bilakne ke baad, naak ko ponchte huwe Abhi ne apni maa ko sab bataya….. maa ne sujhav di, wahan jaakar Anny ke papa se baat karne ki baat ki magar Abhay ne mana kar diya ke jab Anny khud nahin chahti to kyun baap se mila jaaye….. Abhay ne maa se kaha ke ab usski kismat par sab chorr diya jaye….


Maa ko bahot fikar hone lagi kyun ke woh nahin chahti thi woh haadsaa dohraya jaye jo usski pehli muhabat ke lootne ke waqt huwa tha… ussko darr tha ke kahin Abhay sehen naa kar paaye aur apne dimaaghi santulan kho baithe…. To Abhay ki mummy ne Vinay aur Iqbal se phone par kaafi der tak baatein ki magar woh donon bhi laachaar the kyun ke khud Abhi nahin chahta tha ke koyi bhi usske liye koyi bhi kadam aguey badhayein…..



Abhay din bhar ghar par hi raha aur Vinay aur Iqbal ne school sambhaale. Aur Ananya ke yahan usske papa kahin gaye huwe the aur wapas aaye to do aadmi usske saath aaye. Unn mein se ek usska dost tha aur dusra uss dost ka jawaan beta. Ananya ko dikhane ke liye laye gaye the unnko. Anny ke papa ne Anny ko tayaar karwake unn logon ke saamne pesh kiya aur ladke ne ussko passand karli dekhte hi aur kia baatein ki gayi thi ke agle teen din mein shaadi ka din bhi fix kar di gayi.

Woh aadmi ek mashoor business man tha aur woh ladka usska ek lawta suntan tha. Anny ne to usska chehra bhi nahin dekha thik se sirf apne papa ke khatir han kiya aur shaadi ke liye raazi hogayi yeh kehte, “Papa aap jo bhi sahi samjhe kijiye aap mere papa ho aap to mera bhala hi karoge nah?!”


To be continued…………

you made me cry again casi bro
very touching and painful update .
especially near her window when anny opens and finds him and she refuses to talk and asked him to go and forget him
and the part where abhi starts crying in the lap of his mother... too painful yaar
you are such a good writer and can show emotions in such details that the readers gets glued and involved in the story
too good mate too good.
bow to you my friend.

 

[Rowdywa]

Update 45​

Do din baad Abhay ko keise bhi khabar milhi gayi ke Ananya ki shaadi hone jaa rahi hai kissi raizade ke saath. Kia karta woh. Chup raha. Vinay aur Iqbal donon Abhay se ghar par milne ko aye, aur teenon dost ek saath milkar roye magar phir bhi Abhay ke donon dost ab bhi zid kar rahe the ke weh Anny ko utha laaye aur donon ko bhaga de yahan se. Yahan tak ke josh mein aakar Abhi ke maa ne bhi donon doston ka saath diya aur unn donon ko Anny ko uthane ke liye kaha. Faisla yeh bhi huwa ke saleem bhai ka sahara liya jaye Anny ko uthane ke liye.

Magar Abhi ko yeh bilkool manzoor nahin tha. Gham ke haalat mein ussne sab ko samjhaya ke jo usske kismat mein hone ko likha hai wohi hoga kissi ko kuch karne ki zaroorat nahin. Aur ussne dhamki di ke agar unn logon ne usske khilaaf kuch bhi kiya to woh kuch kar baithega. Ussko pata tha ke agar Anny ko uthaya gaya to Anny khud apne papa ko uss sharmindagi ka saamna karna nahin degi, sab aur bhi ulajh jaega. Abhi haalaat se samjhawta karne ki koshish mein laga huwa tha bhale hi who naamumkin tha. Donon dost laachaar apne ghar wapas lawte.

Magar bina Abhi ko kuch bataye donon Anny ke ghar gaye, Anny ko uthane nahin magar uss se ek aakhri baar milne aur baat karne ke liye. Raaste mein se Anny ke ghar pohonchne se pehle donon ne Abhay ki maa ko phone kiya aur ussko bhi saath ane ko kaha. Abhay ki maa ne uss se kaha ke ussko ek dost ke yahan jana hai to woh chali gayi Vinay aur Iqbal ke saath.

Wahan jeise hi pohnche gate par Anny ke papa ne Iqbal aur Vinay ko pehchaan liya aur donon ko gali galoch ke saath dhitkaar kar baahar nikalne ko kaha. Magar Abhay ki maa ko to who kuch nahin keh saka aur woh andar chali gayi Anny ke maa se baatein karne….. ghar ke aangan mein donon doston aur Anny ke papa ke beech oonchi awaaz mein behez ho rahe the. Anny ne andar se suna to jaldi se apne papa ke bagal mein aakar khadi huwi aur Vinay aur Iqbal se wapas laut jaane ke liye binati ki. Anny ke baap ne kaha,

“Gunde mawaali ho tum sab, yeh to shukar hai ke uss raat ko main wahan mawjood tha to tum sab ke kaarnaamein dekhe nahin to main to apni beti ke khushi ke liye iss rishte ko manzoor hi kar leta- Bhagwaan ka shukar hai ke main tum logon ka asliyat pehchaanta hoon kuton kaminon!”

Iqbal ne ghusse mein jawaab diya, “Varma saahab aap ko jiss din asliyat ka pata chalega to khoon ke ensoo rowoge aap, aur naaz karoge hum sab par. Agar uss raat hum wahan nahin hote to ek beti ka baap ho nah, to socho agar aap ki beti ke liye hum wahan gaye hote uss waqt tab kia ap yehi kehte? Kamaal hai bina jane samjhe hum ko gunda mawali keh rahe ho aap, pehle baat ki jarr tak ponhcho phir bakna jo bakna hai, aap ki jagah koyi aur hota to ab tak main ne usska thopda lahu mein rang diya hota abhi!”

Varma saahab bhi ghusse mein laal hokar chillate huwe kaha, “bandh karo apni gandi zubaan. Main police ko phone karun kia? Jate ho yahan se ya dhakka dekar nikalun?”

Tab Vinay ne zara narmi dikhane ki koshish ki aur kaha, “Dekhiye sahab, ghusse mein baat karne se koyi hal nahin nikalta, aap khud apni beti se poochiye kia woh khush hai iss shaadi se jo kal hone wali hai? Itni jaldi hadbadahat mein koyi shaadi hoti hai bhala? Aap please unn donon ko mila dijiye aap ka bahot bhala hoga aur dekhna aap ko khud apni decision par garv hoga…. Magar eise jaldbaazi mein faisla lene se sab bigar bhi sakta hai Sir, please aap Ananya aur Abhay ko juda mat kijiye weh donon ek dusre ke baghair nahin reh sakte, hamara dost bahot kumzor hai ussko kuch ho sakta hai, hum log usske liye bahot fikarmand hein pata nahin kia ho jaye ussko Anny se bicharne par aap zara sochiye kia aap thik kar rahe hein do masoom dilon ko alag karke?”

Anny ke papa ne phir bhi oonchi awaaz mein kaha, “Bhaad mein jaye tumhara dost. Mujhe kia lena dena ussko kuch huwe ya nahin woh tum janon.” Vinay ko yeh sunkar bahot ghussa aya aur ussne bhi chilla kar kaha, “Mister Varma agar aap Ananya ka baap nahin hote to mera haath uth jata abhi aap par, mere dost ke khilaaf ek bhi lavz agar kaha nah to aap ke dant aap ke peth ke andar honge issi waqt!” Tab tak Anny dawd kar Vinay ke paas aayi aur ussko ek thapad maarte huwe kaha, “tum kaun hote ho mere papa ko dhamkane wale? Chale jawo yahan se mera Abhay se koyi naata nahin suna tum logon ne? Get the hell out of here now!”

Tab tak Abhay ki maa Anny ke papa ke piche khadi thi Anny ke maa ke saath aur woh aayi Anny ke paas aur kaha, “Shaabaash beti, shaabaash bahot khub sila diya tumne mere bête ke pyar ka jawo khush raho, chalo tum donon yeh log kuch nahin samajhte pata nahin kyun mere bête ne iss ladki ko apnaya tha!”

Aur niraash hokar weh log Anny ke yahan se nikle. Raatse mein lawtte waqt Iqbal ne kaha, “Yeh Anny ko kia ho gaya kyun ussne eisa kaha Abhay ke liye? Woh to diwani thi usska?!” Abhay ki mummy boli, “Woh apne pyar ko qurbaan kar rahi hai bête, woh apne papa ke liye apne pyar ka balidaan de rahi hai, usski maa ne andar mujhko sab kuch bataya. Ab woh bhi kia karein bechaari, woh bhi to musibat ki maari hai chalo jane do kehte hai na ke jo hota hai ache ke liye hota hai shaayad iss mein bhi kuch achcha hi ho! Rehne do bhool jawo sab kuch ab bus apne Abhi ka ziada khayaak rakhna hai…..” to donon ne ek hi awaaz mein kaha, “Han maa ji zaroor hum sab Abhi ka ziada khayaal rakheinguey.”

Ghar lawtne par Abhay ki mummy bilkool heyraan rehgayi jab Abhay ne poocha, “Kyun maa apni beizati karwa aayi Anny ke ghar se nah?” Mummy ji ki dil ki dhadkan tez ho gayi aur Abhay ke kareeb jaakar usske paas baith kar poocha, “Tumko keise pata chala ke main wahan se aarahi hoon bête?”

Abhi bola, “Maa main khud nahin jaanta, jo kuch bhi Ananya se juda hota hai mujhko ek ajeeb se kashish si mehsoos hoti hai, usski tarap mujhko yahan feel hoti hai, aap logon ko ussne thukraayi hogi par iss waqt who apne kamre mein badh ro rahi hogi, uss par kia beet rahi hai mujhe achchi tarah se pata hai maa…. Woh khud hi jaanti hai ke kiss tarah ussne apne papa ko han kaha kissi ko naa chahte huwe bhi apne pati maanne ke liye…zara usski jagah hokar sochiye na maa kitni takliff mein hai woh iss waqt!”

Apne bête ke inn baton ko sunkar usski maa ki enkhen bharr aayi aur Abhay ko zor se seene se lagaakar rote huwe kaha, “Tu kiss mitti ka bana hai re Abhay? Tujhpar khud itna kuch beet raha hai aur tu phir bhi usski taklifon ke bare mein soch raha hai? Keisa pyar hai re tera? Bhagwaan eise pyar ko kyun juda kar raha hai bhala?” Aur sar upar uthaakar aasmaan ki taraf dekhte huwe mummy ji ne kaha “Kia baat hai ey upar wale mere bête ko chain aur sukoon de!”

Abhay ek diwane ki tarah zameen par baitha huwa tha deewaar se peeth kiye huwe aur chehra bilkool uthra huwa tha usska, shakal se bilkool paagal dikh raha tha, balke lag raha tha ke ek bewda baitha hai zameen par khayaalon mein dooba huwa.

Raat ke 10 baje Abhay achanak apne kamre se nikla aur maa ke paas aakar kaha, “Maa mujhko har cheez mein sirf Anny dikhaayi de rahi hai, usski bahot yaad aarahi hai maa, pata nahin woh kiss haal mein hogi iss waqt, woh tarap rahi hogi maa…. Mujhse raha nahin jaa raha maa, har taraf usski tasveer dikhaayi de rahi hai, apne kamre ke har cheez mein Anny bassi huwi hai, maa, TV set par, bistar par, farsh par, zameen par, takiye par, chaadar par har jaga sirf Anny dikh rahi hai maa main ussko nahin bhoola pawunga maa main kia karun maa main kia karun…..” yeh kehte kehte woh ek chote bache ki tarah rone laga aur maa ne ussko seene se lagate huwe kaha, “bus bus chup hoja, yeh tera pyar hai usske liye issi liye tujhko eisa lag raha hai, usski fikar chorr aur apne bare mein soch, kia woh khush hogi agar ussko pata chala ke tu itna udaas hai aur ro raha hai? Hmm tumko khushi khushi ussko jane dena chahiye, apne dil se bhi aur dimaagh se bhi….ahiste ahiste sab thik ho jaega bête…bus soja ab, aaj yahin mama ke paas soja mere laal…….”

Maa gehri neendh mein thi jab raat ke 2 baje Abhay ghar se nikla….. din mein Anny ki shaadi hone wali thi…. Abhay ko yeh yaad tha…… ek paisa bhi jeb mein nahin, uss ka switch off mobile jeb mein, ek tshirt, jean aur jacket pehne huwe Abhay chal pada, kidhar ke liye kissi ko pata nahin……..

To be continued………………..

another very emotional update bro
you excel in writing such emotional ones i see
so both friends were unsuccessful to stop anny father and change his mind
abhai got a shock and lefts home in the eary morning
what else bro
hope all will be fine i feel worried for abhi and can feel his pain deeply truely

hats of and thanks for these lovely update casi bro

 

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Update 43​

Udhar Anny ka bhi bura haal tha magar ussko apne Abhay par pura yakeen tha phir bhi woh apne papa ke khilaaf kabhi nahin jaa sakti thi kyunke ussne apne papa ko hamesha se kaha hai ke agar woh kissi din ussko kissi bhi ladke ko naapassand karega to Anny uss ladke ko bhool jaegi. Aur ab Anny ka imtehaan ka ghadi tha woh kia karein apne papa ki baat ko maein ya sab bhool jayein aur apne Abhay ke paas chali jayein sab chor chaar kar? Badi duvida mein thi woh, ussko bhi chain-o-sukoon nahin tha, raat raat bhar jag rahi thi, enkhon mein neend na dil ko chain…..


Aur uss taraf Abhay raat ko mobile ko takte takte ro raha tha Anny ki meethi awaaz ko sunne ka mann kar raha tha ussko aur bahot betaab aur niraash tha. Dil ki dhadkan jeise band ho jaye eisa lag raha tha ussko. Apni maa se ussne kuch bhi nahin kaha aur khaamosh apne kamre mein band kiya huwa tha apne aap ko. Khane ke waqt jab maa ne awaaz di to ussne kaha ke ussko bhook nahin aur maa ko khana khaane ko kaha. Usski maa ne socha ke Anny se baatein kar raha hoga har raat ki tarah aur shaayad kuch khaa pee liya hoga Anny ke saath issi liye nahin khaega to maa ne ziada ghaur nahin kiya usski situation par uss raat ko.


Raat ko 2 ya 3 baje Abhay soya bilkool nahin tha aur usska sar dard kar raha tha. Uss taraf Anny bhi nahin soyi thi. Aur Abhay ko achanak Anny ke ghar jane ko sujha jeise ek baar beech raat mein gaya tha. Ussne socha Anny ke papa to uss waqt neendh mein hoga aur woh Anny ke khirki khatkhatega aur usske kamre mein daakhil ho sakta hai to Anny se baat ho sakti hai at least aakhri baar ke liye….. To ussne gadi nikaali aur chal pada subha ke 3 baje Anny ke ghar ko. Kia who sahi kar raha tha? Kia hoga agar Anny ke papa ne kissi tarah se dekh liya to? Kia Anny ussko andar ane degi? Kia woh Anny se baat kar paega? Yeh sab sochte huwe Abhay drive kiye jaa raha tha Anny ke ghar ke taraf…..


Udhar Anny sochte sochte khud se gambhirta se kaha, “Main apne pyar ko apne papa ke khushi ke liye qurbaan kar dungi. Pyar kia hota hai? Papa ne mujhko paal poskar itna bada kiya, mere bachpan se lekar aaj tak dekh bhaal ki papa ne, Abhay to aaaj meri zindagi mein aaya, papa se tulna kiya jaye to Abhay to kuch bhi nahin papa ke saamne. Main ne papa se hamesha kaha hai ke main kabhi bhi usske khilaaf nahin jawungi, to aaj kyun Abhi ke waja se apne papa ki baat ko thukrawun? Nahin nahin! Eisa nahin ho sakta- papa aakhir papa hai usska ziada haq hai mujhpar, main wohi karungi jo papa kahega. Main ussi ki baat manungi. Jawo Abhi main ne abhi se issi waqt se tumko bhoola diya, nikaaal diya tumko apne dil se, mat yaad awo mujhe ab, main koyi nahin lagti tumhari, ek bura sapna samajh kar bhool jawungi tumko main…. Han jaanti hoon dukh hoga tumko bahot magar main apne papa ke khilaaf nahin jaa sakti Abhi mujhko maaf kardena. Koyi baat nahin dil hi dil mein zindagi bhar tumko pyar karti rahungi magar kissi ko nahin pata chalega, tumko bhi nahin. Main ne pyar sirf tumse kiya magar apne papa ke khaatir main wohi karungi usske khushi ke liye.” Anny khud se badbada rahi thi aur than liya tha ke wohi karegi ab.


Yeh abhi ki budnaseebi dekho yaaro. Agar koyi ek ghante pehle Abhay ghar se nikalta to shaayad Anny ne yeh sab nahin kaha hota apne aap se. Shaayad tab woh khushi khushi Abhi se mil leti. Magar yeh dil mein thaan lene ke baad kia woh Abhi se milegi? Chalo dekhte hein kia hota hai…..


Pichli baar ki tarah, Abhi ne uss bus stop ke paas apne gaadi ko park karke choron ki tarah ahiste ahiste chalkar Anny ke room ke khirki ke paas gaya. Usska dil bahot zoron se dhadak raha tha. Charon taraf andhera to tha hi magar Anny ke kamre mein light on dekh kar Abhi ko tassali huwi ke chalo woh bhi jaag rahi hai. ‘Keise neend ayegi ussko jab main nahin so raha hoon’ Abhi ne socha. Ussko pichli baar itna darr nahin laga tha jitna iss waqt lag raha tha Anny ke khirki khatkhatane ko. Shaayad iss liye ke uss baar Anny ka baap nahin tha yahan; aur ab achaanak Abhi ne socha, ‘kia hoga agar aaj Anny ke papa ne jaan bujh kar Anny ko kissi dusre kamre mein shift kar diya ho aur khud iss kamre mein so raha ho to?!!’ iss khayaal se to Abhi ghabra hi gaya aur socha ke maamla to bahot ziada bigar jaega agar weisa huwa to? Agar Anny ka baap ne raat ko 3 baje ussko usski beti ke kamre ke paas dekh liya tab to kayamat ajayegi!! Yeh sochkar Abhi ka pasina chhuth gaya halaan ke thandi hawa beh rahi thi baahar. Ab Abhi pareshaan ke kia kare! Ghurnon ke bal khirki ke niche pada tha phir chor ki tarah sar ko upar karke kamre ke andar dkhne aur sunne ki koshish kar raha tha. Parda khincha huwa tha kuch bhi dikh to nahin raha tha magar Abhi ne ek lambi saanss liya aur enkhon ko band karke meditate kiya. Apne aap se kaha, “agar mera pyar sacha hai to mujhko apni mehbooba ki iss kamre mein mawjoodgi ka pata chalna hai, agar Anny iss waqt iss kamre mein hai to usski khushbhoo mujh tak zaroor ana chahiye ya usski kadmon ki aahat sunaayi dena chahiye, keise bhi karke mujhko apne pyar ka pata chalna hi chahiye……..”


Yaaro manon ya na manon sacha pyar, sacha iskh mein ek ajeeb si taaqat hoti hai jo tab anumaan lagaya jaa sakta hai agar uss tarah ka pyar kiya jaye. Ishk uss junoon tak pohonch jaati hai jahan khudaayi bhi nahin pohonchti agar ishk sacha aur gehra ho to. Khudaayi bhi karwat badal leta hai jahan sacha aashik apna rukh karta hai eisa suna hai kayi baar. To kia Abhay ki muhabat mein woh taaqat hai ke kuch eisa hota iss waqt? Chalo dekhein kia kudrat Abhay ke dil ka haal sun raha tha aur kia kudrat usska saath deta hai iss waqt?



Yaaro Abhay jeise ibaadat karne laga apne enkhon ko mundhe huwe kissi aur dunya mein pohonch gaya, junoon ki had paar kardi ussne iss tarah ka meditation kiya ussne uss khirki ke niche baithkar… itni gehraayi se Ananya ke soch mein dooba aur iss tarah se usska naam labon par laya ussko sochte huwe aur mehsoos karte huwe unn lamhon ko yaad kar kar ke jo ussne Ananya ke saath guzare hein ke ussko khud laga ke uss waqt woh Ananya ko apne bahon mein bhare huwe hein aur kissi aur dunya mein hai. Usske enkhon se ensoo beh rahe the magar khud ussko pata nahin tha. Uss ke jism tharthara raha tha magar woh anjaan tha, kudrat usske saath tha uss waqt magar woh naawaakif tha, usska message khudaayi Ananya tak kissi bhi zarye se ponhcha raha tha magar kissi ko pata nahin tha…… woh to diwane ki tarah, majnu jeisa apne pyar ko yaad aur mehsoos kar raha tha bus, ussko kia pata ke uss waqt kaenaat usska saath de raha tha…….

Huwa yeh ke kamre ke andar Ananya ko sab sochte sochte, apne papa aur Abhi ke beech tulna karte karte ussko garmi si chaa gayi aur thandi hawa khaane ke liye Ananya ne achanak khirki kholi parde ko hata kar ek lambi saanss lene ke liye apni gardan baahar kiya to Abhay ko saamne paaya kyunke uss waqt, thik ussi waqt Abhay ko usski khusbhoo naak ke naaliyon ke zarye dimaagh mein utar aya aur woh khada hogaya apni muhabat ke saamne…….. Anny ke kamre ka ujala Abhay ke chehre par tha aur Anny ki nazrein usspar yakayak Anny ki sansein thami reh gayi aur woh jeise baraf bankar jam gayi thi wahan…….


To be continued…………………

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