Romance Aur Ek Prem Kahani (COMPLETED)

[Casinar]

Update 29​

Ek din mamool ki tarah sab log dance school mein the. Ek student thi jo Samantha naam se jane jaate the aur jo ek Christian thi to usski dress kaafi sexy huwa karti thi, woh bahot chote chote skirt aur chote chote tops patli patli straps wale pehenti thi upar se bala ki khub surti wali thi. Thoda bahot ek gori mem ki tarah dikhti thi magar thi full desi. Ek sham ko jab woh class se nikli bus stop par jane ko, tab charon Abhay, Anny, Iqbal aur Vinay school ke andar kuch discuss karr rahe the. Achanak Samantha bhaagti huwi wapas class mein aayi hampte aur rote huwe aur usski top phatti huwi thi aur usski bra ki strap tooti huwi thi…. Anny ne ussko gale se lagaatey huwe chup karaya aur poocha kia baat huwi baahar, Samantha bol nahin paa rahi thi, kyun ke woh bahot ro rahi thi….. kuch der ke baad Samantha ne himmat kar ke kaha, “Woh Johnny hai mera ex boyfriend, hamara break up ho chukka hai 4 mahinon se aur woh kuch nashe mein hai, mujhko tang kar raha hai, mujhse zabardasti karna chahta hai, mere kapde paadh diye ussne, mujhko zabardasti apne saath lejana chahta hai…….” Yeh kehkar Samantha zoron se rone lagi. Abhay bahot ghussa huwa usske saath Iqbal aur Vinay bhi laal peele hogaye, Abhay ne Anny se kaha Samantha ko ek dance costume ki top ussko pehene ke liye dede aur Samantha se details mein uss Johnny ke bare mein sab kuch poocha. Samantha ne bataya ke woh playboy hai aur bahot sari ladkiyon ke saath flirt karta hai date par lejata hai aur sab ko wedding ki jhooti promise karke unn ke izat se khelta hai issi liye Samantha ne uss se break up kar liya hai magar woh ab bhi usske piche pada huwa hai usske ghar par bhi ata hai, aur kyunke Samantha ke daddy nahin hai, sirf ek budhi mummy aur ek choti sister hai to Johnny ghar par bhi unn ko tang karne ata rehta hai…..

Thodi der baad sab baahar nikle Samantha ko saath lekar. Raaste mein Johnny khada wait kar raha tha Samantha ki. Samantha ne Abhay ko ishare se dikhaya ke woh kaun hai aur kahan hai to sab milkar usske paas gaye. Abhay bahot serious hokar Johnny ke paas jaakar kaha, “Yeh kia badtamizee hai? Kyun tumne iss ladki ke kapde phade?”

Johnny, ekdum gundon ki tarah, filmi villain ke style mein apne collar ko piche karte huwe seena taan kar Abhay ke saamne khada hokar bola “Tere ko kia problem hai mistar? Yeh apun ka aapas ka maamla hota, apun ke problem mein tere ko nahin padne ka samjha kia?”

Jab Abhay ne dekha ke hero banne ki koshish kar raha hai to ussko hanssi aayi aur mudhkar Iqbal aur Vinay ko dekha aur donon sar jhukaye, enkhon ko upar karke Abhay ko dekh rahe the hanssi ko chupane ki koshish karte huwe. To Abhay ne bhi ishtyle mara, apne kamar par donon haathon ke rakh kar sar upar uthate huwe Johnny ko ussi ke style wale language mein bola, “Tere ko agar iss se problem hai to apun ko farak padta hai bidu jaanta hai kyun? Kyun ke iss waqt yeh ladki, Samantha apun ke zimedari hai, samjha kia bewde?” Johnny do kadam piche chalte huwe, munh ek taraf karke thookta hai phir apne shoulder par apna munh ponchte huwe ek nazar Abhay ko dekhte huwe bakka, “Tu apun se fight karna maangta kia? Tere ko fight karta maangta? Tere ko mujhko hit karna maangta? Abhi apun tere ko chuwega nah, to tere ko hospital ka bed pe lying karna padta suna tu main kia speaking you teacher?” Abhay do kadam usske nazdik badhte huwe apne ungli ko usske gaal tak karte huwe bola, “dekh dekh bidu tu nashe mein hai, apun agar tumko hit karega to main nahin tu hospital ko ambulance mein going hoga, phir kabhi agar tu Samantha ke paas mujhko dikha na to tera woh haal karunga ke ghonsla ka ek tinka nazar ayega, chal phoot yahan se!”

Johnny awaaz ko ooncha karke bola, “hey hey hey kia bola tu? Mere ko ambulance mein send karega, huh! Abhi batata hoon ke apun kia hai- Hey Mario, Stephen, Anthony sab niklo friends toot pado iss idiot par…..” Uss ne itna kaha ke ek 4 by 4 mein se 4/5 log nikle aur chaaron tafar se Abhay ko ghera aur achanak bahot hi jaldi kuch hi pal mein pata hi nahin chala keise Iqbal, aur Vinay ke lapak kar unn logon ko khinch kar laat ghunsse maarne lage aur Abhay bhi dhishum dhishum karne laga bahot rapidly…. Abhay ghunssa, mukka maarta jaa raha tha, Iqbal laat chalaane mein maahir tha aur Vinay comic tha woh, woh sar se maarta tha, sar se peth mein, chaati par, gaand par, usska sar bahot solid tha agar woh sar ko deewaar par maarta to deewaar ko nuksaan hota tha usske sar ko nahin…. Aur Iqbal ka laat bahot ooncha uthta tha, woh apne laat se kissi ke bhi sar par bhi maar sakta tha, double kicks mein specialist tha woh, koyi ussko mukka maarta to woh apne laat se usske mukke ko rokta aur dusre laat se kick karta tha…. Anny ne bhi kuch kiya apne bag se ek do ko dhunna ussne bhi…log jama hogaye no doubts…. Magar kyun ke Johnny nashe mein tha koyi uss par dhyaan nahin de raha tha aur ussne to ek chakku nikala aur Abhay ko piche se hit karne jaa raha tha ke Anny ne dekha aur bahot hi zor se chillaayi , “Abhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii” Abhi ain waqt par mudhkar dekha aur chaku usske shoulder ko halke se touch kiya, magar Abhay ne Johnny ke haath pakar kar ussko khinch kar iss tarah apne baazu mein jakra, ke Johnny ka gardan jeise ek phanssi ke phande mein bandha tha, right hand ko Abhay ne phanssi ka phanda banaya huwa tha aur apne left muthi ko ban karke Abhay ne Johnny ke chehre par woh mara, woh mara ke poocho mat.. Johnny ke honth, naak, dant, gaal sab phat gaye aur bahot khoon behne lage…. Tab tak usske dusre dost bhaag gaye the Iqbal aur Vinay ke maar se…..

Abhay ke kandhe se thoda khoon beh raha tha aur Anny aakar usske baahon mein buss gayi zor se ussko jakre huwe…. Johnny zameen par para huwa tha, aur Abhay ne ussko uthaya aur kachre ka ek dibbe mein ghussa diya yeh kehte huwe, “Ab tere ko kal subha municipality ka truck uthake lejayega, tera yehich hona maangta tha kachra hai tu kachra thhuh!”

Sab milkar Saamantha ko bus stop tak chorrne ko gaye, phir Johnny ke doston ne Johnny ko dibbe se nikal kar legyae apni gadi mein…..

Ab iss Johnny ko bhi aap log yaad raakh lein isska bhi to kuch hoga aaguey chal kar yaaro……

To be continued……………………..

 

[Casinar]

Update 30 ​

Do, teen din tak Iqbal classes attend karne ko nahin aya. Abhay ne Vinay se poocha kia Iqbal bimaar hai to Vinay kuch batane ko hichkicha raha tha. Ab Iqbal ke classes aur students ko Abhay ko hi follow karna pad raha tha. Teesre din ko wait kiya tab bhi Iqbal nahin aye. Abhay ko sab ajeeb lag raha tha kyunke Iqbal ne kabhi weisa nahin kiya tha upar se usska mobile off araha tha. Abhay ne phir Vinay se poocha magar ussne kuch nahin bataya. Jab Anny Abhay ke saath akela tha to ussne Abhay se kaha, “Tum ne kuch Vinay ke ravaye ko strange nahin dekha jab Iqbal ke bare mein poocha to?” Abhay ne jawaab diya, “Han sab bahot ajeeb sa lag raha hai, Vinay kuch chhupa raha hai mujhko lagta hai…. Magar kyun? Kia huwa hoga?” Anny ne kaha, “pata nahin, magar kuch baat to hai, Vinay se thik se poocho nah, lagta hai woh kuch darr raha hai batane ko….” To Abhay ne Anny se kaha, “dekho shayad mujhko batane se ghabra raha hai, magar tumko zaroor batayega, jawo usske class mein tum uss se pooch tab aakar mujhko batana.”

Anny ne Vinay ko usske class mein join kiya aur poocha, “Yaar Vinay kuch to baat hai jo nahin batana chahte Iqbal ke bare mein, kia ussko koyi problem hai ya kuch huwa hai jo tum chhupa rahe ho?” Vinay ne dusre taraf dekha ke kahin Abhay ass paas to nahin, tab Anny se kaha, “Anny main keise Abhi ko yeh baat batawun? Jaante ho Abhi ka sab se bada sapna kia hai? Jaanti ho?” Anny kuch apne aap par sharam karte huwe ke woh Abhi se pyar karti hai magar ussi ko apne pyar ke sab se bade sapne ke bare mein maloom nahin, aur sar jhuka kar Vinay se poocha, “Nahin Vinay mujhko nahin pata Abhi ke sab se bade sapne ke bare mein tumhi batado mujhe aur isska Iqbal se kia lena dena?”

Vinay (apne maathey ko thokte huwe) “Hai Anny Iqbal ka lena dena hai iss baat se…. Abhay ka sab se bada sapna tha film industry ke liye as a choreographer kaam karna, movies mein dance sikhana hero heroines ko…. Yeh usska sab se bada khwab hai….. Ab ek to Amita ne ussko dhoka diya filmi dunya mein jaakar aur ab jaante ho kia huwa, kyun Iqbal 3 din se nahin araha hai? Kyun ke uss din jab hum sab uss film ka choreography karne gaye nah, to yaad hai woh kissi ko pehchaanta tha wahan aur hum ko andar jane ke liye permission mili thi usski vaja se…. to uss aadmi ne Iqbal ko bulaya kyun ke producer ne uss aadmi ko kaha ke ussko bulaye milne ke liye…..”

Anny: “To kia tumhara kehne ka matlab hai ke Iqbal ko filmon mein choreography karne ki job mil gayee?”

Vinay: “yeh to nahin pata magar teenon din Iqbal set par gaya tha, producers se milna tha, kaha tha ke audition bhi huwe aur 5 producers se unn ko milwaya gaya, aur uss dance ko jo Abhi ne direct kiya tha woh ussko dikhaya gaya aur uss se kaha gaya ke uss kissam ke dances chahiye agle movies mein kia woh kar sakta hai…. Main ne Iqbal se kaha ke kia woh bhi Amita ki tarah ab shohrat, dawlat ke liye Abhi ko chorr dega, uss Abhi ko jissne hum bekaar logon ko yahan tak ponchaya ke aaj hum apne peyron par khade huwe hein…..”

Anny: “to kia kaha ussne?...magar dekha jaye to iss mein koyi baat nahin agar ussko chance mil raha hai to ussko jana chahiye….. magar han Abhay ko shayad takliff hoga nah?”

Vinay: “Are yaar kia yeh thik lagta hai ke woh jo ustaad hai hamara, jiss se hum ne sab kuch seekha, aur hum ko pata hai ke usska sapna hai wahan pohonchne ka, woh usska manzil hai, to woh yahin reh jaye aur hum usske manzil tak pohonch jaye?!” Hona yeh chahiye ke woh wahan pohonche aur hum sab ko wahan bulaye…tab sahi hoga!”

Anny: Phir bhi mera khayaal hai ke Abhi ko bata dena chahiye, weise bhi woh aaj Iqbal ke yahan jane wala hai to wahan to ussko pata chal hi jayega, iss se behtar hai ke hum ussko bata dein aur prepare kar dein! Kyun?”

Vinay: “Ussko takliff hoga Anny, usske dil ko thess pohonchega, jiss muqaam tak woh jana chahta hai usske niche kaam karne wala jaye to ussko keisa lagega? Kia huwa tha Amita ke bare mein? Aur ab Iqbal bhi ussi dunya mein jahan Abhay ki manzil hai….. “

Achanak Abhay uss class mein daakhil hote huwe kehta hai, “Main ne sab sunn liya. Iss mein koyi problem nahin agar Iqbal ko film ko choreograph karne ka chance mila hai to. It’s okay with me. Let him have his chance yaar! No problem at all….bus humko uss class ke liye ek teacher dundna hoga that’s all!”

Anny Vinay ko aur Vinay Anny ke chehre mein dekhte rahe aur ekdum khaamosh the…. Aur Vinay aakar Abhay ke gale lagta hai ussko zor se bahon mein bhar kar. Abhay usska peeth thapthape huwe kehta hai, “are choro bhi yaar jane do yaar ki lottery lagi humko khush hona chahiye nah!” Vinay ne kaha, “Nahin ussko nahin jana chahiye tha, main usske jagah hota to nahin jata…” Abhay ne Vinay se kaha, “dane dane pe likha hota hai khane wale ka naam, agar Iqbal ka khana wahan likha hai to iss mein hum kia kar sakte hein. Chalo jane do ussko, hamara yaar hai…. Humko uske liye khush hona chahiye, magar sale ne kuch bataya tak nahin…. Aur phone bhi off kiya huwa hai…sham ko khabar lunga usske ghar jaa kar…. Okay aaj sham ko hum sab Iqbal ke yahan jaa rahe hein right guys?!”

Itna hi kaha tha Abhay ne dekha ke main door khula aur Iqbal ki entry huwi…. Abhay, Vinay aur Anny ke bol chaal bandh… sab ek dusre ko dekh rahe the…… Iqbal andar ayaa aur sab ke chehre mein ek ek karke dekhne ke baad kaha, “Kia huwa yaaro? Bhoot dekh liya tum logon ne kia?” Vinay kabhi Abhay ke chehre ko dekhta to kabhi Iqbal ko….. Anny bhi wohi karti Vinay ki tarah….. phir Abhay ne Iqbal ko gale se lagate huwe kaha, “Mubarak ho yaar, mujhe khushi hai ke tumko chance mili…..” Iqbal ne Abhay se alag hote huwe kaha, “kiss baat ki mubaarak baad de rahe ho Abhi?” Tab Abhay Vinay ko dekhte huwe Anny ko sawaaliyaat nazron se dekha phir Iqbal se kaha, “Are tumko filmon ki choregraphy ke ……” Magar Iqbal ne Abhay ki baat puri nahin hone diya aur kaha, “Yaar tu samajhta hai ke main tujhko chorr kar, tujh se pehle filmon ko choregraph karne ko jawunga? Woh bhi jo tera sapna hai, uss sapne ko tujh se seekh kar khud apne liye saankaar karne jawunga? Huh? Abhi kia main eisa kar sakta hoon? Nahin pehchaanta apne dost ko yaar?”

Sab heyraan huwe aur Abhi ne phir Iqbal se poocha “To kia baat thi? Kyun nahin aya 3 din yahan? Aur kuch bataya bhi nahin!” Iqbal ne kaha, “Han studio gaya tha, producers se mila bhi, ussi producer ne bulwaya tha jiss ke liye uss din hum sab ne dance kiya tha…. Mera ek friend kaam karta hai wahan to ussi se khabar bheja tha mere liye……. Main wahan koyi choregraphy karne nahin gaya tha, magar hamare iss group ke bare mein discuss karne gaya tha, tumhare bare mein batane gaya tha ke tum ache choreographer ho aur ek puri film bana sakte ho….. sab discuss huwa aur main ne tumhare liye samajh lo ke raasta open kar diya hai wahan…..”

Vinay jhoomte huwe aakar Iqbal ko goad mein bachche ki tarah uthakar ghoomne lagta hai aur usske gallon ko chumne lagta hai….. Iqbal, Anny aur Abhay hansste hein, magar kissi ko nahin pata chalne diya Iqbal ne ke assal mein ussko chance mila, break mili ussko film choreograph karne ki, producer ne usski signing amount bhi dene jaa raha tha magar thik ussi waqt Iqbal ne producer se kaha ke woh uss film ko choreograph nahin karega balke Abhay karega… producer ne kaha ke Abhay ka daam ziada hoga aur Iqbal ko producer adhaa daam se bhi kum de raha tha, magar Iqbal ne producer se kaha ke agar Abhi choreograph nahin karega tab to woh kabhi bhi nahin karega uss film ki choreography aur wahan se nikal aya aur producer ne ussko kaha, “You are an emotional fool”

To be continued……………………………

 

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Update 29​

Ek din mamool ki tarah sab log dance school mein the. Ek student thi jo Samantha naam se jane jaate the aur jo ek Christian thi to usski dress kaafi sexy huwa karti thi, woh bahot chote chote skirt aur chote chote tops patli patli straps wale pehenti thi upar se bala ki khub surti wali thi. Thoda bahot ek gori mem ki tarah dikhti thi magar thi full desi. Ek sham ko jab woh class se nikli bus stop par jane ko, tab charon Abhay, Anny, Iqbal aur Vinay school ke andar kuch discuss karr rahe the. Achanak Samantha bhaagti huwi wapas class mein aayi hampte aur rote huwe aur usski top phatti huwi thi aur usski bra ki strap tooti huwi thi…. Anny ne ussko gale se lagaatey huwe chup karaya aur poocha kia baat huwi baahar, Samantha bol nahin paa rahi thi, kyun ke woh bahot ro rahi thi….. kuch der ke baad Samantha ne himmat kar ke kaha, “Woh Johnny hai mera ex boyfriend, hamara break up ho chukka hai 4 mahinon se aur woh kuch nashe mein hai, mujhko tang kar raha hai, mujhse zabardasti karna chahta hai, mere kapde paadh diye ussne, mujhko zabardasti apne saath lejana chahta hai…….” Yeh kehkar Samantha zoron se rone lagi. Abhay bahot ghussa huwa usske saath Iqbal aur Vinay bhi laal peele hogaye, Abhay ne Anny se kaha Samantha ko ek dance costume ki top ussko pehene ke liye dede aur Samantha se details mein uss Johnny ke bare mein sab kuch poocha. Samantha ne bataya ke woh playboy hai aur bahot sari ladkiyon ke saath flirt karta hai date par lejata hai aur sab ko wedding ki jhooti promise karke unn ke izat se khelta hai issi liye Samantha ne uss se break up kar liya hai magar woh ab bhi usske piche pada huwa hai usske ghar par bhi ata hai, aur kyunke Samantha ke daddy nahin hai, sirf ek budhi mummy aur ek choti sister hai to Johnny ghar par bhi unn ko tang karne ata rehta hai…..

Thodi der baad sab baahar nikle Samantha ko saath lekar. Raaste mein Johnny khada wait kar raha tha Samantha ki. Samantha ne Abhay ko ishare se dikhaya ke woh kaun hai aur kahan hai to sab milkar usske paas gaye. Abhay bahot serious hokar Johnny ke paas jaakar kaha, “Yeh kia badtamizee hai? Kyun tumne iss ladki ke kapde phade?”

Johnny, ekdum gundon ki tarah, filmi villain ke style mein apne collar ko piche karte huwe seena taan kar Abhay ke saamne khada hokar bola “Tere ko kia problem hai mistar? Yeh apun ka aapas ka maamla hota, apun ke problem mein tere ko nahin padne ka samjha kia?”

Jab Abhay ne dekha ke hero banne ki koshish kar raha hai to ussko hanssi aayi aur mudhkar Iqbal aur Vinay ko dekha aur donon sar jhukaye, enkhon ko upar karke Abhay ko dekh rahe the hanssi ko chupane ki koshish karte huwe. To Abhay ne bhi ishtyle mara, apne kamar par donon haathon ke rakh kar sar upar uthate huwe Johnny ko ussi ke style wale language mein bola, “Tere ko agar iss se problem hai to apun ko farak padta hai bidu jaanta hai kyun? Kyun ke iss waqt yeh ladki, Samantha apun ke zimedari hai, samjha kia bewde?” Johnny do kadam piche chalte huwe, munh ek taraf karke thookta hai phir apne shoulder par apna munh ponchte huwe ek nazar Abhay ko dekhte huwe bakka, “Tu apun se fight karna maangta kia? Tere ko fight karta maangta? Tere ko mujhko hit karna maangta? Abhi apun tere ko chuwega nah, to tere ko hospital ka bed pe lying karna padta suna tu main kia speaking you teacher?” Abhay do kadam usske nazdik badhte huwe apne ungli ko usske gaal tak karte huwe bola, “dekh dekh bidu tu nashe mein hai, apun agar tumko hit karega to main nahin tu hospital ko ambulance mein going hoga, phir kabhi agar tu Samantha ke paas mujhko dikha na to tera woh haal karunga ke ghonsla ka ek tinka nazar ayega, chal phoot yahan se!”

Johnny awaaz ko ooncha karke bola, “hey hey hey kia bola tu? Mere ko ambulance mein send karega, huh! Abhi batata hoon ke apun kia hai- Hey Mario, Stephen, Anthony sab niklo friends toot pado iss idiot par…..” Uss ne itna kaha ke ek 4 by 4 mein se 4/5 log nikle aur chaaron tafar se Abhay ko ghera aur achanak bahot hi jaldi kuch hi pal mein pata hi nahin chala keise Iqbal, aur Vinay ke lapak kar unn logon ko khinch kar laat ghunsse maarne lage aur Abhay bhi dhishum dhishum karne laga bahot rapidly…. Abhay ghunssa, mukka maarta jaa raha tha, Iqbal laat chalaane mein maahir tha aur Vinay comic tha woh, woh sar se maarta tha, sar se peth mein, chaati par, gaand par, usska sar bahot solid tha agar woh sar ko deewaar par maarta to deewaar ko nuksaan hota tha usske sar ko nahin…. Aur Iqbal ka laat bahot ooncha uthta tha, woh apne laat se kissi ke bhi sar par bhi maar sakta tha, double kicks mein specialist tha woh, koyi ussko mukka maarta to woh apne laat se usske mukke ko rokta aur dusre laat se kick karta tha…. Anny ne bhi kuch kiya apne bag se ek do ko dhunna ussne bhi…log jama hogaye no doubts…. Magar kyun ke Johnny nashe mein tha koyi uss par dhyaan nahin de raha tha aur ussne to ek chakku nikala aur Abhay ko piche se hit karne jaa raha tha ke Anny ne dekha aur bahot hi zor se chillaayi , “Abhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii” Abhi ain waqt par mudhkar dekha aur chaku usske shoulder ko halke se touch kiya, magar Abhay ne Johnny ke haath pakar kar ussko khinch kar iss tarah apne baazu mein jakra, ke Johnny ka gardan jeise ek phanssi ke phande mein bandha tha, right hand ko Abhay ne phanssi ka phanda banaya huwa tha aur apne left muthi ko ban karke Abhay ne Johnny ke chehre par woh mara, woh mara ke poocho mat.. Johnny ke honth, naak, dant, gaal sab phat gaye aur bahot khoon behne lage…. Tab tak usske dusre dost bhaag gaye the Iqbal aur Vinay ke maar se…..

Abhay ke kandhe se thoda khoon beh raha tha aur Anny aakar usske baahon mein buss gayi zor se ussko jakre huwe…. Johnny zameen par para huwa tha, aur Abhay ne ussko uthaya aur kachre ka ek dibbe mein ghussa diya yeh kehte huwe, “Ab tere ko kal subha municipality ka truck uthake lejayega, tera yehich hona maangta tha kachra hai tu kachra thhuh!”

Sab milkar Saamantha ko bus stop tak chorrne ko gaye, phir Johnny ke doston ne Johnny ko dibbe se nikal kar legyae apni gadi mein…..

Ab iss Johnny ko bhi aap log yaad raakh lein isska bhi to kuch hoga aaguey chal kar yaaro……

To be continued……………………..

Nice update

 

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Update 30 ​

Do, teen din tak Iqbal classes attend karne ko aya. Abhay ne Vinay se poocha kia Iqbal bimaar hai to Vinay kuch batane ko hichkicha raha tha. Ab Iqbal ke classes aur students ko Abhay ko hi follow karna pad raha tha. Teesre din ko wait kiya tab bhi Iqbal nahin aye. Abhay nahin ko sab ajeeb lag raha tha kyunke Iqbal ne kabhi weisa nahin kiya tha upar se usska mobile off araha tha. Abhay ne phir Vinay se poocha magar ussne kuch nahin bataya. Jab Anny Abhay ke saath akela tha to ussne Abhay se kaha, “Tum ne kuch Vinay ke ravaye ko strange nahin dekha jab Iqbal ke bare mein poocha to?” Abhay ne jawaab diya, “Han sab bahot ajeeb sa lag raha hai, Vinay kuch chupa raha hai mujhko lagta hai…. Magar kyun? Kia huwa hoga?” Anny ne kaha, “pata nahin, magar kuch baat to hai, Vinay se thik se poocho nah, lagta hai woh kuch darr raha hai batane ko….” To Abhay ne Anny se kaha, “dekho shayad mujhko batane se ghabra raha hai, magar tumko zaroor batayega, jawo usske class mein tum uss se pooch tab aakar mujhko batana.”

Anny ne Vinay ko usske class mein join kiya aur poocha, “Yaar Vinay kuch to baat hai jo nahin batana chahte Iqbal ke bare mein, kia ussko koyi problem hai ya kuch huwa hai jo tum chhupa rahe ho?” Vinay ne dusre taraf dekha ke kahin Abhay ass paas to nahin, tab Anny se kaha, “Anny main keise Abhi ko yeh baat batawun? Jaante ho Abhi ka sab se bada sapna kia hai? Jaanti ho?” Anny kuch apne aap par sharam karte huwe ke woh Abhi se pyar karti hai magar ussi ko apne pyar ke sab se bade sapne ke bare mein maloom nahin, aur sar jhuka kar Vinay se poocha, “Nahin Vinay mujhko nahin pata Abhi ke sab se bade sapne ke bare mein tumhi batado mujhe aur isska Iqbal se kia lena dena?”

Vinay (apne maathey ko thokte huwe) “Hai Anny Iqbal ka lena dena hai iss baat se…. Abhay ka sab se bada sapna tha film industry ke liye as a choreographer kaam karna, movies mein dance sikhana hero heroines ko…. Yeh usska sab se bada khwab hai….. Ab ek to Amita ne ussko dhoka diya filmi dunya mein jaakar aur ab jaante ho kia huwa, kyun Iqbal 3 din se nahin araha hai? Kyun ke uss din jab hum sab uss film ka choreography karne gaye nah, to yaad hai woh kissi ko pehchaanta tha wahan aur hum ko andar jane ke liye permission mili thi usski vaja se…. to uss aadmi ne Iqbal ko bulaya kyun ke producer ne uss aadmi ko kaha ke ussko bulaye milne ke liye…..”

Anny: “To kia tumhara kehne ka matlab hai ke Iqbal ko filmon mein choreography karne ki job mil gayee?”

Vinay: “yeh to nahin pata magar teenon din Iqbal set par gaya tha, producers se milna tha, kaha tha ke audition bhi huwe aur 5 producers se unn ko milwaya gaya, aur uss dance ko jo Abhi ne direct kiya tha woh ussko dikhaya gaya aur uss se kaha gaya ke uss kissam ke dances chahiye agle movies mein kia woh kar sakta hai…. Main ne Iqbal se kaha ke kia woh bhi Amita ki tarah ab shohrat, dawlat ke liye Abhi ko chorr dega, uss Abhi ko jissne hum bekaar logon ko yahan tak ponchaya ke aaj hum apne peyron par khade huwe hein…..”

Anny: “to kia kaha ussne?...magar dekha jaye to iss mein koyi baat nahin agar ussko chance mil raha hai to ussko jana chahiye….. magar han Abhay ko shayad takliff hoga nah?”

Vinay: “Are yaar kia yeh thik lagta hai ke woh jo ustaad hai hamara, jiss se hum ne sab kuch seekha, aur hum ko pata hai ke usska sapna hai wahan pohonchne ka, woh usska manzil hai, to woh yahin reh jaye aur hum usske manzil tak pohonch jaye?!” Hona yeh chahiye ke woh wahan pohonche aur hum sab ko wahan bulaye…tab sahi hoga!”

Anny: Phir bhi mera khayaal hai ke Abhi ko bata dena chahiye, weise bhi woh aaj Iqbal ke yahan jane wala hai to wahan to ussko pata chal hi jayega, iss se behtar hai ke hum ussko bata dein aur prepare kar dein! Kyun?”

Vinay: “Ussko takliff hoga Anny, usske dil ko thess pohonchega, jiss muqaam tak woh jana chahta hai usske niche kaam karne wala jaye to ussko keisa lagega? Kia huwa tha Amita ke bare mein? Aur ab Iqbal bhi ussi dunya mein jahan Abhay ki manzil hai….. “

Achanak Abhay uss class mein daakhil hote huwe kehta hai, “Main ne sab sunn liya. Iss mein koyi problem nahin agar Iqbal ko film ko choreograph karne ka chance mila hai to. It’s okay with me. Let him have his chance yaar! No problem at all….bus humko uss class ke liye ek teacher dundna hoga that’s all!”

Anny Vinay ko aur Vinay Anny ke chehre mein dekhte rahe aur ekdum khaamosh the…. Aur Vinay aakar Abhay ke gale lagta hai ussko zor se bahon mein bhar kar. Abhay usska peeth thapthape huwe kehta hai, “are choro bhi yaar jane do yaar ki lottery lagi humko khush hona chahiye nah!” Vinay ne kaha, “Nahin ussko nahin jana chahiye tha, main usske jagah hota to nahin jata…” Abhay ne Vinay se kaha, “dane dane pe likha hota hai khane wale ka naam, agar Iqbal ka khana wahan likha hai to iss mein hum kia kar sakte hein. Chalo jane do ussko, hamara yaar hai…. Humko uske liye khush hona chahiye, magar sale ne kuch bataya tak nahin…. Aur phone bhi off kiya huwa hai…sham ko khabar lunga usske ghar jaa kar…. Okay aaj sham ko hum sab Iqbal ke yahan jaa rahe hein right guys?!”

Itna hi kaha tha Abhay ne dekha ke main door khula aur Iqbal ki entry huwi…. Abhay, Vinay aur Anny ke bol chaal bandh… sab ek dusre ko dekh rahe the…… Iqbal andar ayaa aur sab ke chehre mein ek ek karke dekhne ke baad kaha, “Kia huwa yaaro? Bhoot dekh liya tum logon ne kia?” Vinay kabhi Abhay ke chehre ko dekhta to kabhi Iqbal ko….. Anny bhi wohi karti Vinay ki tarah….. phir Abhay ne Iqbal ko gale se lagate huwe kaha, “Mubarak ho yaar, mujhe khushi hai ke tumko chance mili…..” Iqbal ne Abhay se alag hote huwe kaha, “kiss baat ki mubaarak baad de rahe ho Abhi?” Tab Abhay Vinay ko dekhte huwe Anny ko sawaaliyaat nazron se dekha phir Iqbal se kaha, “Are tumko filmon ki choregraphy ke ……” Magar Iqbal ne Abhay ki baar puri nahin hone diya aur kaha, “Yaar tu samajhta hai ke main tujhko chorr kar, tujh se pehle filmon ko choregraph karne ko jawunga? Woh bhi jo tera sapna hai, uss sapne ko tujh se seekh kar khud apne liye saankaar karne jawunga? Huh? Abhi kia main eisa kar sakta hoon? Nahin pehchaanta apne dost ko yaar?”

Sab heyraan huwe aur Abhi ne phir Iqbal se poocha “To kia baat thi? Kyun nahin aya 3 din yahan? Aur kuch bataya bhi nahin!” Iqbal ne kaha, “Han studio gaya tha, producers se mila bhi, ussi producer ne bulwaya tha jiss ke liye uss din hum sab ne dance kiya tha…. Mera ek friend kaam karta hai wahan to ussi se khabar bheja tha mere liye……. Main wahan koyi choregraphy karne nahin gaya tha, magar hamare iss group ke bare mein discuss karne gaya tha, tumhare bare mein batane gaya tha ke tum ache choreographer ho aur ek puri film bana sakte ho….. sab discuss huwa aur main ne tumhare liye samajh lo ke raasta open kar diya hai wahan…..”

Vinay jhoomte huwe aakar Iqbal ko goad mein bachche ki tarah uthakar ghoomne lagta hai aur usske gallon ko chumne lagta hai….. Iqbal, Anny aur Abhay hansste hein, magar kissi ko nahin pata chalne diya Iqbal ne ke assal mein ussko chance mila, break mili ussko film choreograph karne ki, producer ne usski signing amount bhi dene jaa raha tha magar thik ussi waqt Iqbal ne producer se kaha ke woh uss film ko choreograph nahin karega balke Abhay karega… producer ne kaha ke Abhay ka daam ziada hoga aur Iqbal ko producer adhaa daam se bhi kum de raha tha, magar Iqbal ne producer se kaha ke agar Abhi choreograph nahin karega tab to woh kabhi bhi nahin karega uss film ki choreography aur wahan se nikal aya aur producer ne ussko kaha, “You are an emotional fool”

To be continued……………………………

Very nice

 

[Rowdywa]

“Tere ko agar iss se problem hai to apun ko farak padta hai bidu jaanta hai kyun? Kyun ke iss waqt yeh ladki, Samantha apun ke zimedari hai, samjha kia bewde?” Johnny do kadam piche chalte huwe, munh ek taraf karke thookta hai phir apne shoulder par apna munh ponchte huwe ek nazar Abhay ko dekhte huwe bakka, “Tu apun se fight karna maangta kia? Tere ko fight karta maangta? Tere ko mujhko hit karna maangta? Abhi apun tere ko chuwega nah, to tere ko hospital ka bed pe lying karna padta suna tu main kia speaking you teacher?” Abhay do kadam usske nazdik badhte huwe apne ungli ko usske gaal tak karte huwe bola, “dekh dekh bidu tu nashe mein hai, apun agar tumko hit karega to main nahin tu hospital ko ambulance mein going hoga, phir kabhi agar tu Samantha ke paas mujhko dikha na to tera woh haal karunga ke ghonsla ka ek tinka nazar ayega, chal phoot yahan se!”

wow cawi i looved this scene, hpw can you write anything and everything like this man? amazing. you showed a full bolywood style filmi scene here my friend, adorable!

so update 29 is a fight scene, read it, and a nice description of fight scene and dialogues are lively and superb.
very good bro, going to read the next one now

 

[Rowdywa]

Update 30 ​

Do, teen din tak Iqbal classes attend karne ko nahin aya. Abhay ne Vinay se poocha kia Iqbal bimaar hai to Vinay kuch batane ko hichkicha raha tha. Ab Iqbal ke classes aur students ko Abhay ko hi follow karna pad raha tha. Teesre din ko wait kiya tab bhi Iqbal nahin aye. Abhay ko sab ajeeb lag raha tha kyunke Iqbal ne kabhi weisa nahin kiya tha upar se usska mobile off araha tha. Abhay ne phir Vinay se poocha magar ussne kuch nahin bataya. Jab Anny Abhay ke saath akela tha to ussne Abhay se kaha, “Tum ne kuch Vinay ke ravaye ko strange nahin dekha jab Iqbal ke bare mein poocha to?” Abhay ne jawaab diya, “Han sab bahot ajeeb sa lag raha hai, Vinay kuch chhupa raha hai mujhko lagta hai…. Magar kyun? Kia huwa hoga?” Anny ne kaha, “pata nahin, magar kuch baat to hai, Vinay se thik se poocho nah, lagta hai woh kuch darr raha hai batane ko….” To Abhay ne Anny se kaha, “dekho shayad mujhko batane se ghabra raha hai, magar tumko zaroor batayega, jawo usske class mein tum uss se pooch tab aakar mujhko batana.”

Anny ne Vinay ko usske class mein join kiya aur poocha, “Yaar Vinay kuch to baat hai jo nahin batana chahte Iqbal ke bare mein, kia ussko koyi problem hai ya kuch huwa hai jo tum chhupa rahe ho?” Vinay ne dusre taraf dekha ke kahin Abhay ass paas to nahin, tab Anny se kaha, “Anny main keise Abhi ko yeh baat batawun? Jaante ho Abhi ka sab se bada sapna kia hai? Jaanti ho?” Anny kuch apne aap par sharam karte huwe ke woh Abhi se pyar karti hai magar ussi ko apne pyar ke sab se bade sapne ke bare mein maloom nahin, aur sar jhuka kar Vinay se poocha, “Nahin Vinay mujhko nahin pata Abhi ke sab se bade sapne ke bare mein tumhi batado mujhe aur isska Iqbal se kia lena dena?”

Vinay (apne maathey ko thokte huwe) “Hai Anny Iqbal ka lena dena hai iss baat se…. Abhay ka sab se bada sapna tha film industry ke liye as a choreographer kaam karna, movies mein dance sikhana hero heroines ko…. Yeh usska sab se bada khwab hai….. Ab ek to Amita ne ussko dhoka diya filmi dunya mein jaakar aur ab jaante ho kia huwa, kyun Iqbal 3 din se nahin araha hai? Kyun ke uss din jab hum sab uss film ka choreography karne gaye nah, to yaad hai woh kissi ko pehchaanta tha wahan aur hum ko andar jane ke liye permission mili thi usski vaja se…. to uss aadmi ne Iqbal ko bulaya kyun ke producer ne uss aadmi ko kaha ke ussko bulaye milne ke liye…..”

Anny: “To kia tumhara kehne ka matlab hai ke Iqbal ko filmon mein choreography karne ki job mil gayee?”

Vinay: “yeh to nahin pata magar teenon din Iqbal set par gaya tha, producers se milna tha, kaha tha ke audition bhi huwe aur 5 producers se unn ko milwaya gaya, aur uss dance ko jo Abhi ne direct kiya tha woh ussko dikhaya gaya aur uss se kaha gaya ke uss kissam ke dances chahiye agle movies mein kia woh kar sakta hai…. Main ne Iqbal se kaha ke kia woh bhi Amita ki tarah ab shohrat, dawlat ke liye Abhi ko chorr dega, uss Abhi ko jissne hum bekaar logon ko yahan tak ponchaya ke aaj hum apne peyron par khade huwe hein…..”

Anny: “to kia kaha ussne?...magar dekha jaye to iss mein koyi baat nahin agar ussko chance mil raha hai to ussko jana chahiye….. magar han Abhay ko shayad takliff hoga nah?”

Vinay: “Are yaar kia yeh thik lagta hai ke woh jo ustaad hai hamara, jiss se hum ne sab kuch seekha, aur hum ko pata hai ke usska sapna hai wahan pohonchne ka, woh usska manzil hai, to woh yahin reh jaye aur hum usske manzil tak pohonch jaye?!” Hona yeh chahiye ke woh wahan pohonche aur hum sab ko wahan bulaye…tab sahi hoga!”

Anny: Phir bhi mera khayaal hai ke Abhi ko bata dena chahiye, weise bhi woh aaj Iqbal ke yahan jane wala hai to wahan to ussko pata chal hi jayega, iss se behtar hai ke hum ussko bata dein aur prepare kar dein! Kyun?”

Vinay: “Ussko takliff hoga Anny, usske dil ko thess pohonchega, jiss muqaam tak woh jana chahta hai usske niche kaam karne wala jaye to ussko keisa lagega? Kia huwa tha Amita ke bare mein? Aur ab Iqbal bhi ussi dunya mein jahan Abhay ki manzil hai….. “

Achanak Abhay uss class mein daakhil hote huwe kehta hai, “Main ne sab sunn liya. Iss mein koyi problem nahin agar Iqbal ko film ko choreograph karne ka chance mila hai to. It’s okay with me. Let him have his chance yaar! No problem at all….bus humko uss class ke liye ek teacher dundna hoga that’s all!”

Anny Vinay ko aur Vinay Anny ke chehre mein dekhte rahe aur ekdum khaamosh the…. Aur Vinay aakar Abhay ke gale lagta hai ussko zor se bahon mein bhar kar. Abhay usska peeth thapthape huwe kehta hai, “are choro bhi yaar jane do yaar ki lottery lagi humko khush hona chahiye nah!” Vinay ne kaha, “Nahin ussko nahin jana chahiye tha, main usske jagah hota to nahin jata…” Abhay ne Vinay se kaha, “dane dane pe likha hota hai khane wale ka naam, agar Iqbal ka khana wahan likha hai to iss mein hum kia kar sakte hein. Chalo jane do ussko, hamara yaar hai…. Humko uske liye khush hona chahiye, magar sale ne kuch bataya tak nahin…. Aur phone bhi off kiya huwa hai…sham ko khabar lunga usske ghar jaa kar…. Okay aaj sham ko hum sab Iqbal ke yahan jaa rahe hein right guys?!”

Itna hi kaha tha Abhay ne dekha ke main door khula aur Iqbal ki entry huwi…. Abhay, Vinay aur Anny ke bol chaal bandh… sab ek dusre ko dekh rahe the…… Iqbal andar ayaa aur sab ke chehre mein ek ek karke dekhne ke baad kaha, “Kia huwa yaaro? Bhoot dekh liya tum logon ne kia?” Vinay kabhi Abhay ke chehre ko dekhta to kabhi Iqbal ko….. Anny bhi wohi karti Vinay ki tarah….. phir Abhay ne Iqbal ko gale se lagate huwe kaha, “Mubarak ho yaar, mujhe khushi hai ke tumko chance mili…..” Iqbal ne Abhay se alag hote huwe kaha, “kiss baat ki mubaarak baad de rahe ho Abhi?” Tab Abhay Vinay ko dekhte huwe Anny ko sawaaliyaat nazron se dekha phir Iqbal se kaha, “Are tumko filmon ki choregraphy ke ……” Magar Iqbal ne Abhay ki baat puri nahin hone diya aur kaha, “Yaar tu samajhta hai ke main tujhko chorr kar, tujh se pehle filmon ko choregraph karne ko jawunga? Woh bhi jo tera sapna hai, uss sapne ko tujh se seekh kar khud apne liye saankaar karne jawunga? Huh? Abhi kia main eisa kar sakta hoon? Nahin pehchaanta apne dost ko yaar?”

Sab heyraan huwe aur Abhi ne phir Iqbal se poocha “To kia baat thi? Kyun nahin aya 3 din yahan? Aur kuch bataya bhi nahin!” Iqbal ne kaha, “Han studio gaya tha, producers se mila bhi, ussi producer ne bulwaya tha jiss ke liye uss din hum sab ne dance kiya tha…. Mera ek friend kaam karta hai wahan to ussi se khabar bheja tha mere liye……. Main wahan koyi choregraphy karne nahin gaya tha, magar hamare iss group ke bare mein discuss karne gaya tha, tumhare bare mein batane gaya tha ke tum ache choreographer ho aur ek puri film bana sakte ho….. sab discuss huwa aur main ne tumhare liye samajh lo ke raasta open kar diya hai wahan…..”

Vinay jhoomte huwe aakar Iqbal ko goad mein bachche ki tarah uthakar ghoomne lagta hai aur usske gallon ko chumne lagta hai….. Iqbal, Anny aur Abhay hansste hein, magar kissi ko nahin pata chalne diya Iqbal ne ke assal mein ussko chance mila, break mili ussko film choreograph karne ki, producer ne usski signing amount bhi dene jaa raha tha magar thik ussi waqt Iqbal ne producer se kaha ke woh uss film ko choreograph nahin karega balke Abhay karega… producer ne kaha ke Abhay ka daam ziada hoga aur Iqbal ko producer adhaa daam se bhi kum de raha tha, magar Iqbal ne producer se kaha ke agar Abhi choreograph nahin karega tab to woh kabhi bhi nahin karega uss film ki choreography aur wahan se nikal aya aur producer ne ussko kaha, “You are an emotional fool”

To be continued……………………………

cool great friendship and faithfullness from ikbal towards abhay.
in real life it would have been the contraty.
good update buddy you wrote all perfectly well

 

[Axba]

Update 29​

Ek din mamool ki tarah sab log dance school mein the. Ek student thi jo Samantha naam se jane jaate the aur jo ek Christian thi to usski dress kaafi sexy huwa karti thi, woh bahot chote chote skirt aur chote chote tops patli patli straps wale pehenti thi upar se bala ki khub surti wali thi. Thoda bahot ek gori mem ki tarah dikhti thi magar thi full desi. Ek sham ko jab woh class se nikli bus stop par jane ko, tab charon Abhay, Anny, Iqbal aur Vinay school ke andar kuch discuss karr rahe the. Achanak Samantha bhaagti huwi wapas class mein aayi hampte aur rote huwe aur usski top phatti huwi thi aur usski bra ki strap tooti huwi thi…. Anny ne ussko gale se lagaatey huwe chup karaya aur poocha kia baat huwi baahar, Samantha bol nahin paa rahi thi, kyun ke woh bahot ro rahi thi….. kuch der ke baad Samantha ne himmat kar ke kaha, “Woh Johnny hai mera ex boyfriend, hamara break up ho chukka hai 4 mahinon se aur woh kuch nashe mein hai, mujhko tang kar raha hai, mujhse zabardasti karna chahta hai, mere kapde paadh diye ussne, mujhko zabardasti apne saath lejana chahta hai…….” Yeh kehkar Samantha zoron se rone lagi. Abhay bahot ghussa huwa usske saath Iqbal aur Vinay bhi laal peele hogaye, Abhay ne Anny se kaha Samantha ko ek dance costume ki top ussko pehene ke liye dede aur Samantha se details mein uss Johnny ke bare mein sab kuch poocha. Samantha ne bataya ke woh playboy hai aur bahot sari ladkiyon ke saath flirt karta hai date par lejata hai aur sab ko wedding ki jhooti promise karke unn ke izat se khelta hai issi liye Samantha ne uss se break up kar liya hai magar woh ab bhi usske piche pada huwa hai usske ghar par bhi ata hai, aur kyunke Samantha ke daddy nahin hai, sirf ek budhi mummy aur ek choti sister hai to Johnny ghar par bhi unn ko tang karne ata rehta hai…..

Thodi der baad sab baahar nikle Samantha ko saath lekar. Raaste mein Johnny khada wait kar raha tha Samantha ki. Samantha ne Abhay ko ishare se dikhaya ke woh kaun hai aur kahan hai to sab milkar usske paas gaye. Abhay bahot serious hokar Johnny ke paas jaakar kaha, “Yeh kia badtamizee hai? Kyun tumne iss ladki ke kapde phade?”

Johnny, ekdum gundon ki tarah, filmi villain ke style mein apne collar ko piche karte huwe seena taan kar Abhay ke saamne khada hokar bola “Tere ko kia problem hai mistar? Yeh apun ka aapas ka maamla hota, apun ke problem mein tere ko nahin padne ka samjha kia?”

Jab Abhay ne dekha ke hero banne ki koshish kar raha hai to ussko hanssi aayi aur mudhkar Iqbal aur Vinay ko dekha aur donon sar jhukaye, enkhon ko upar karke Abhay ko dekh rahe the hanssi ko chupane ki koshish karte huwe. To Abhay ne bhi ishtyle mara, apne kamar par donon haathon ke rakh kar sar upar uthate huwe Johnny ko ussi ke style wale language mein bola, “Tere ko agar iss se problem hai to apun ko farak padta hai bidu jaanta hai kyun? Kyun ke iss waqt yeh ladki, Samantha apun ke zimedari hai, samjha kia bewde?” Johnny do kadam piche chalte huwe, munh ek taraf karke thookta hai phir apne shoulder par apna munh ponchte huwe ek nazar Abhay ko dekhte huwe bakka, “Tu apun se fight karna maangta kia? Tere ko fight karta maangta? Tere ko mujhko hit karna maangta? Abhi apun tere ko chuwega nah, to tere ko hospital ka bed pe lying karna padta suna tu main kia speaking you teacher?” Abhay do kadam usske nazdik badhte huwe apne ungli ko usske gaal tak karte huwe bola, “dekh dekh bidu tu nashe mein hai, apun agar tumko hit karega to main nahin tu hospital ko ambulance mein going hoga, phir kabhi agar tu Samantha ke paas mujhko dikha na to tera woh haal karunga ke ghonsla ka ek tinka nazar ayega, chal phoot yahan se!”

Johnny awaaz ko ooncha karke bola, “hey hey hey kia bola tu? Mere ko ambulance mein send karega, huh! Abhi batata hoon ke apun kia hai- Hey Mario, Stephen, Anthony sab niklo friends toot pado iss idiot par…..” Uss ne itna kaha ke ek 4 by 4 mein se 4/5 log nikle aur chaaron tafar se Abhay ko ghera aur achanak bahot hi jaldi kuch hi pal mein pata hi nahin chala keise Iqbal, aur Vinay ke lapak kar unn logon ko khinch kar laat ghunsse maarne lage aur Abhay bhi dhishum dhishum karne laga bahot rapidly…. Abhay ghunssa, mukka maarta jaa raha tha, Iqbal laat chalaane mein maahir tha aur Vinay comic tha woh, woh sar se maarta tha, sar se peth mein, chaati par, gaand par, usska sar bahot solid tha agar woh sar ko deewaar par maarta to deewaar ko nuksaan hota tha usske sar ko nahin…. Aur Iqbal ka laat bahot ooncha uthta tha, woh apne laat se kissi ke bhi sar par bhi maar sakta tha, double kicks mein specialist tha woh, koyi ussko mukka maarta to woh apne laat se usske mukke ko rokta aur dusre laat se kick karta tha…. Anny ne bhi kuch kiya apne bag se ek do ko dhunna ussne bhi…log jama hogaye no doubts…. Magar kyun ke Johnny nashe mein tha koyi uss par dhyaan nahin de raha tha aur ussne to ek chakku nikala aur Abhay ko piche se hit karne jaa raha tha ke Anny ne dekha aur bahot hi zor se chillaayi , “Abhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii” Abhi ain waqt par mudhkar dekha aur chaku usske shoulder ko halke se touch kiya, magar Abhay ne Johnny ke haath pakar kar ussko khinch kar iss tarah apne baazu mein jakra, ke Johnny ka gardan jeise ek phanssi ke phande mein bandha tha, right hand ko Abhay ne phanssi ka phanda banaya huwa tha aur apne left muthi ko ban karke Abhay ne Johnny ke chehre par woh mara, woh mara ke poocho mat.. Johnny ke honth, naak, dant, gaal sab phat gaye aur bahot khoon behne lage…. Tab tak usske dusre dost bhaag gaye the Iqbal aur Vinay ke maar se…..

Abhay ke kandhe se thoda khoon beh raha tha aur Anny aakar usske baahon mein buss gayi zor se ussko jakre huwe…. Johnny zameen par para huwa tha, aur Abhay ne ussko uthaya aur kachre ka ek dibbe mein ghussa diya yeh kehte huwe, “Ab tere ko kal subha municipality ka truck uthake lejayega, tera yehich hona maangta tha kachra hai tu kachra thhuh!”

Sab milkar Saamantha ko bus stop tak chorrne ko gaye, phir Johnny ke doston ne Johnny ko dibbe se nikal kar legyae apni gadi mein…..

Ab iss Johnny ko bhi aap log yaad raakh lein isska bhi to kuch hoga aaguey chal kar yaaro……

To be continued……………………..

Bahut mast update hai casi bhai. Majedaar. Fulltu dhamaal wala. Action jeise sach mein ho raha ho. Superb.

 

[Axba]

Update 30 ​

Do, teen din tak Iqbal classes attend karne ko nahin aya. Abhay ne Vinay se poocha kia Iqbal bimaar hai to Vinay kuch batane ko hichkicha raha tha. Ab Iqbal ke classes aur students ko Abhay ko hi follow karna pad raha tha. Teesre din ko wait kiya tab bhi Iqbal nahin aye. Abhay ko sab ajeeb lag raha tha kyunke Iqbal ne kabhi weisa nahin kiya tha upar se usska mobile off araha tha. Abhay ne phir Vinay se poocha magar ussne kuch nahin bataya. Jab Anny Abhay ke saath akela tha to ussne Abhay se kaha, “Tum ne kuch Vinay ke ravaye ko strange nahin dekha jab Iqbal ke bare mein poocha to?” Abhay ne jawaab diya, “Han sab bahot ajeeb sa lag raha hai, Vinay kuch chhupa raha hai mujhko lagta hai…. Magar kyun? Kia huwa hoga?” Anny ne kaha, “pata nahin, magar kuch baat to hai, Vinay se thik se poocho nah, lagta hai woh kuch darr raha hai batane ko….” To Abhay ne Anny se kaha, “dekho shayad mujhko batane se ghabra raha hai, magar tumko zaroor batayega, jawo usske class mein tum uss se pooch tab aakar mujhko batana.”

Anny ne Vinay ko usske class mein join kiya aur poocha, “Yaar Vinay kuch to baat hai jo nahin batana chahte Iqbal ke bare mein, kia ussko koyi problem hai ya kuch huwa hai jo tum chhupa rahe ho?” Vinay ne dusre taraf dekha ke kahin Abhay ass paas to nahin, tab Anny se kaha, “Anny main keise Abhi ko yeh baat batawun? Jaante ho Abhi ka sab se bada sapna kia hai? Jaanti ho?” Anny kuch apne aap par sharam karte huwe ke woh Abhi se pyar karti hai magar ussi ko apne pyar ke sab se bade sapne ke bare mein maloom nahin, aur sar jhuka kar Vinay se poocha, “Nahin Vinay mujhko nahin pata Abhi ke sab se bade sapne ke bare mein tumhi batado mujhe aur isska Iqbal se kia lena dena?”

Vinay (apne maathey ko thokte huwe) “Hai Anny Iqbal ka lena dena hai iss baat se…. Abhay ka sab se bada sapna tha film industry ke liye as a choreographer kaam karna, movies mein dance sikhana hero heroines ko…. Yeh usska sab se bada khwab hai….. Ab ek to Amita ne ussko dhoka diya filmi dunya mein jaakar aur ab jaante ho kia huwa, kyun Iqbal 3 din se nahin araha hai? Kyun ke uss din jab hum sab uss film ka choreography karne gaye nah, to yaad hai woh kissi ko pehchaanta tha wahan aur hum ko andar jane ke liye permission mili thi usski vaja se…. to uss aadmi ne Iqbal ko bulaya kyun ke producer ne uss aadmi ko kaha ke ussko bulaye milne ke liye…..”

Anny: “To kia tumhara kehne ka matlab hai ke Iqbal ko filmon mein choreography karne ki job mil gayee?”

Vinay: “yeh to nahin pata magar teenon din Iqbal set par gaya tha, producers se milna tha, kaha tha ke audition bhi huwe aur 5 producers se unn ko milwaya gaya, aur uss dance ko jo Abhi ne direct kiya tha woh ussko dikhaya gaya aur uss se kaha gaya ke uss kissam ke dances chahiye agle movies mein kia woh kar sakta hai…. Main ne Iqbal se kaha ke kia woh bhi Amita ki tarah ab shohrat, dawlat ke liye Abhi ko chorr dega, uss Abhi ko jissne hum bekaar logon ko yahan tak ponchaya ke aaj hum apne peyron par khade huwe hein…..”

Anny: “to kia kaha ussne?...magar dekha jaye to iss mein koyi baat nahin agar ussko chance mil raha hai to ussko jana chahiye….. magar han Abhay ko shayad takliff hoga nah?”

Vinay: “Are yaar kia yeh thik lagta hai ke woh jo ustaad hai hamara, jiss se hum ne sab kuch seekha, aur hum ko pata hai ke usska sapna hai wahan pohonchne ka, woh usska manzil hai, to woh yahin reh jaye aur hum usske manzil tak pohonch jaye?!” Hona yeh chahiye ke woh wahan pohonche aur hum sab ko wahan bulaye…tab sahi hoga!”

Anny: Phir bhi mera khayaal hai ke Abhi ko bata dena chahiye, weise bhi woh aaj Iqbal ke yahan jane wala hai to wahan to ussko pata chal hi jayega, iss se behtar hai ke hum ussko bata dein aur prepare kar dein! Kyun?”

Vinay: “Ussko takliff hoga Anny, usske dil ko thess pohonchega, jiss muqaam tak woh jana chahta hai usske niche kaam karne wala jaye to ussko keisa lagega? Kia huwa tha Amita ke bare mein? Aur ab Iqbal bhi ussi dunya mein jahan Abhay ki manzil hai….. “

Achanak Abhay uss class mein daakhil hote huwe kehta hai, “Main ne sab sunn liya. Iss mein koyi problem nahin agar Iqbal ko film ko choreograph karne ka chance mila hai to. It’s okay with me. Let him have his chance yaar! No problem at all….bus humko uss class ke liye ek teacher dundna hoga that’s all!”

Anny Vinay ko aur Vinay Anny ke chehre mein dekhte rahe aur ekdum khaamosh the…. Aur Vinay aakar Abhay ke gale lagta hai ussko zor se bahon mein bhar kar. Abhay usska peeth thapthape huwe kehta hai, “are choro bhi yaar jane do yaar ki lottery lagi humko khush hona chahiye nah!” Vinay ne kaha, “Nahin ussko nahin jana chahiye tha, main usske jagah hota to nahin jata…” Abhay ne Vinay se kaha, “dane dane pe likha hota hai khane wale ka naam, agar Iqbal ka khana wahan likha hai to iss mein hum kia kar sakte hein. Chalo jane do ussko, hamara yaar hai…. Humko uske liye khush hona chahiye, magar sale ne kuch bataya tak nahin…. Aur phone bhi off kiya huwa hai…sham ko khabar lunga usske ghar jaa kar…. Okay aaj sham ko hum sab Iqbal ke yahan jaa rahe hein right guys?!”

Itna hi kaha tha Abhay ne dekha ke main door khula aur Iqbal ki entry huwi…. Abhay, Vinay aur Anny ke bol chaal bandh… sab ek dusre ko dekh rahe the…… Iqbal andar ayaa aur sab ke chehre mein ek ek karke dekhne ke baad kaha, “Kia huwa yaaro? Bhoot dekh liya tum logon ne kia?” Vinay kabhi Abhay ke chehre ko dekhta to kabhi Iqbal ko….. Anny bhi wohi karti Vinay ki tarah….. phir Abhay ne Iqbal ko gale se lagate huwe kaha, “Mubarak ho yaar, mujhe khushi hai ke tumko chance mili…..” Iqbal ne Abhay se alag hote huwe kaha, “kiss baat ki mubaarak baad de rahe ho Abhi?” Tab Abhay Vinay ko dekhte huwe Anny ko sawaaliyaat nazron se dekha phir Iqbal se kaha, “Are tumko filmon ki choregraphy ke ……” Magar Iqbal ne Abhay ki baat puri nahin hone diya aur kaha, “Yaar tu samajhta hai ke main tujhko chorr kar, tujh se pehle filmon ko choregraph karne ko jawunga? Woh bhi jo tera sapna hai, uss sapne ko tujh se seekh kar khud apne liye saankaar karne jawunga? Huh? Abhi kia main eisa kar sakta hoon? Nahin pehchaanta apne dost ko yaar?”

Sab heyraan huwe aur Abhi ne phir Iqbal se poocha “To kia baat thi? Kyun nahin aya 3 din yahan? Aur kuch bataya bhi nahin!” Iqbal ne kaha, “Han studio gaya tha, producers se mila bhi, ussi producer ne bulwaya tha jiss ke liye uss din hum sab ne dance kiya tha…. Mera ek friend kaam karta hai wahan to ussi se khabar bheja tha mere liye……. Main wahan koyi choregraphy karne nahin gaya tha, magar hamare iss group ke bare mein discuss karne gaya tha, tumhare bare mein batane gaya tha ke tum ache choreographer ho aur ek puri film bana sakte ho….. sab discuss huwa aur main ne tumhare liye samajh lo ke raasta open kar diya hai wahan…..”

Vinay jhoomte huwe aakar Iqbal ko goad mein bachche ki tarah uthakar ghoomne lagta hai aur usske gallon ko chumne lagta hai….. Iqbal, Anny aur Abhay hansste hein, magar kissi ko nahin pata chalne diya Iqbal ne ke assal mein ussko chance mila, break mili ussko film choreograph karne ki, producer ne usski signing amount bhi dene jaa raha tha magar thik ussi waqt Iqbal ne producer se kaha ke woh uss film ko choreograph nahin karega balke Abhay karega… producer ne kaha ke Abhay ka daam ziada hoga aur Iqbal ko producer adhaa daam se bhi kum de raha tha, magar Iqbal ne producer se kaha ke agar Abhi choreograph nahin karega tab to woh kabhi bhi nahin karega uss film ki choreography aur wahan se nikal aya aur producer ne ussko kaha, “You are an emotional fool”

To be continued……………………………

Ye wala thoda emotional aur dosti ki gehrayi dikha diya. Behad mast tarike se likha hai aap ne bhai jhakaas update. Bhut maja aya.

 

[Rahul]

Update 29 bahut maja aya. Eisa laga ek movie dekh raha hoon. Badya fight scene tha bhai

 

[Rahul]

Update 30 masy update dosti ki misal. Bahut ache se likha hai aap ne bhai. Superb.