Fantasy ATTITUDE.....( MAGIC + ROMANCE )(Completed)

[Acme]

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[vj4u]

Vj tumne to pure dimaak ki dahi kr di hehehehe

Hahaha...sab clear ho jaayega brother... aap yunhi saath bane rahiye. Agla update kuch hi der me

 

[vj4u]

Vj tumne to pure dimaak ki dahi kr di hehehehe

Mast Update Bhai thanks brothers.... saath bane rahiye . Agla update kuch hi der me

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Bahut hi Shandar aur lajawab update bhai ekdum jhakaas dhamakedar mind blowing update.
Keep going
We will wait for next update

Nice update

Nice update Kamal k writer ho janab ap​

 

[vj4u]

Excellently written... superb update bhai, mind blowing..... keep writing

Nice update

Nice

Big bang update bro waiting for next

Bahut khub

thanks brothers.. saath bane rahiye...

 

[vj4u]

one of the best stories i loved in xf

Thanks 4 appreciating brother.. be along.. agla update kuch hi der me

 

[vj4u]

Jabardast Update bhaiii

VJ ko Analia or Avantika dono ke alag alag scene m sapne aaye
Sapne m kya dekha vo Abii bhii raj h

Nishkalika ki behan h to Abii sarif par kya nishkalika ke devil rupp ka parbhav padega ya ese hii rahegi

Or agar sachaii ki rahh par hii rahegi to nishkalika k khilaf hona hii h

Nishkalika behan k samne to aachii bnii rahti h par kitne din..............

Bavika k important role h matlab kuch bda hone vala h

Modoxx ki power hadd se jayda nhii badd gyii kalchakra se apni rakhsha wa kya bat h

Thanks 4 the review brother... sab clear ho jaayega... aap yunhi saath bane rahiye.... agla update kuch hi der me

 

[vj4u]

AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI VIKRAM KO APNE SAPNE KE EK BHAAG ME AVANTIKA DIKHTI HAI AUR DUSRE BHAAG ME ANALIA.
AB AAGE:-





CHAPTER-2



( CURSE OF THE SWEET POISON )




UPDATE-72





PLANET-EARTH





PLACE- DREAM LAND





ye kaunsi jagah hai????aisa lag raha hai jaise mai yahan pehle bhi aa chuki hun.......!!!!

arre ye toh...!!!!!!!!!

AVANTIKA is waqt apne pichle janam ke yug me apne ghar ke peeche khadi hui thi jisse usse pehchaan ne me thoda waqt laga par usne us jagah ko pehchaan liya....

AVANTIKA- mai yahan kaise?????ye sab ho kya raha hai????

KAISI HO PUTRI.............

ye awaaz AVANTIKA ke piche se aa rahi thi.....awaaz sun AVANTIKA turant palti......

AVANTIKA- BABAAAAAA........

apne saamne apne pita GURU VISHISHT ko dekhkar AVANTIKA ke aakhon se aansu nikalne laga......

BABA......bas ek hi shabd nikal paaya uske mooh se.......

AVANTIKA doud kar gayi aur uske pitah ke gale lag gayi.........

BABA- kya hua putri?????mujhe toh laga tha ki mujhe punah apne saamne dekhkar tum prassan ho jaogi kintu tum toh ro rahi ho????

AVANTIKA- ye khushi ke aansu hai baba.....aapko apne saamne dekhkar mujhe kitna acha lag raha hai ye mai aapko bata nahi sakti.........

mujhe toh ummid hi nahi thi ki mai aapko firse dekh paaungi.......aur ab mai aapko kahin bhi nahi jaane dungi...aap hamesha mere saath hi rahenge....

BABA VISHISHT- putri,kya tumhe yahan kuch bhi ajeeb nahi lag raha????

ab tak AVANTIKA normal ho chuki thi......

AVANTIKA- haan baba,ye jagah toh mere pichle janam ki hai..wo saamne hamara us waqt ka ghar hai......

BABA VISHISHT- haan putri........ye tumhare pichle janam ka hi gaon hai..

AVANTIKA- kintu baba????hum yahan kaise?????

BABA VISHISHT- kisne kaha ki tum yahan aayi ho????

AVANTIKA ko apne pita ki baat ka matlab samajh nahi aaya....

AVANTIKA- mai samjhi nahi baba????

BABA VISHISHT- tum abhi ek swapn me ho putri.......ye jo kuch bhi tum dekh rahi ho,ye sab tumhare mastishk me ho rahi rachna hai....

AVANTIKA apne pita ki baat ko sunkar pehle shocked hui par fir kuch sochkar ekdum udaas ho gayi......

BABA VISHISHT- kya hua putri????tum udaas kyun ho gayi?????

AVANTIKA- agar ye mera sapna hai,iska matlab ye sab bas ek jhooth hai,aap sirf mere sapne ka ek hissa hain aur mere aankh khulte hi sab pehle jaisa ho jaayega....

GURU VISHISHT apni putri ki baat ko sunkar muskarye aur phir kaha.....

GURU VISHISHT- putri,ye sapna zaroor hai kintu satya bhi hai...ye sach hai ki ye saari cheezen tumhare dimag me chal rahi hain par ye bhi utna hi sach hai ki mai tumse milne aaya hun........

AVANTIKA toh bas apne pita ki baat ko theek se samajhne ki koshish kar rahi thi.....

AVANTIKA- aap keh rahe hain ki ye sapna sapna hokar bhi ek haqiqat hai???par ye kaise mumkin hai???

GURU VISHISHT- PARMESHWAR ke liye aur uske PUTR ke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai putri.......

AVANTIKA- mujhe aapki koi bhi baat samajh me nahi aa rahi hai baba........

GURU VISHISHT- dheere dheere sab samajh jaaogi putri....pehle apne gaon toh ghum lo....

tumhe bohot icha ho rahi thi na ek baar apne pichle janam ki maatrubhumi ko phir se dekhne ki...

AVANTIKA- haan baba,par aapko kaise pata????kya isiliye aapne is sapne ko mere dimag me daala hai taaki mai apne gaon ko ek baar fir se dekh sakun!!!!!!

GURU VISHISHT- putri,mera jeevan kaal samapt ho chuka hai..ab mujhme itni shakti ya saamartya nahi hai ki mai aisa kuch kar sakun......

tumhari iccha ko pura karne me kisi aur ka haath hai aur mai swayam bhi ussi ke aadesh ke kaaran mrtyu ke paschat bhi tumse punah mil paaya hun.....l

waise toh AVANTIKA ko abhi tak kaafi jhatke lag chuke the,par ye baat uske liye sabse bada jhatka tha.....

AVANTIKA- kaun baba???kaun hai wo jisne ye sab kiya hai aur wo bhi mere liye....

GURU VISHISHT- maine kaha na putri...dheere dheere sab samajh jaaogi....

chalo,apni icha puri kar lo.........

AVANTIKA- ji baba....

AVANTIKA apne pita ke saath apne gaon ko ek aur baar dekhne nikal padi.....

apne gaon ko punah ek baar apne sapne me hi sahi,par apne aakhon ke saamne dekhkar AVANTIKA bohot khush ho gayi thi......

aur wahin GURU VISHISHT apni putri ko khush dekhkar khush ho rahe the.....

idhar udhar dekhte hue AVANTIKA apne pichle janam me kiye gaye saare shararate,saare khele gaye khel apne pitah ko batati jaa rahi thi......

fir ek jagah aakar AVANTIKA rook gayi....uske saamne jo tha usse dekhkar uske chehre par khushi,excitement aur nirasha, teeno bhaav ek saath aa gaye the....

AVANTIKA ke chehre ke in badalte bhaavon ko uske pita ne dekh liya......

GURU VISHISHT- kya hua putri???kya soch rahi ho???

AVANTIKA ne kuch kaha nahi balki apni ek ungli saamne kar di...

AVANTIKA ke saamne ghaas ke borders ke beech RETH rakhi hui thi jiske taraf usne apni ungli point ki thi....

GURU VISHISHT- MAL MITTI...........

AVANTIKA- haan baba,MAL MITTI....ek aisi chamatkarik MITTI jisse bane ghade ya katori ke andar agar ganda paani bhi rakha jaaye toh wo paani bhi saaf ho jaaya karta hai....

jisse bane bartan ya kadhayi me agar ganda ya sadaa hua khaana bhi rakha jaaye toh wo bhi swach ho jaata hai....

GURU VISHISHT- hame ye baaten gyat hain putri....

AVANTIKA- pata hai baba,mai hamesha se is MAL MITTI ke raaz ko suljhana chahti thi...

mujhe pura yakeen tha ki isse aur bhi bohot kuch kiya jaa sakta hai par mai is haqiqat ko be parda karne se pehle hi mar gayi.....

GURU VISHISHT- pichle janam ke adhure karmo ko yaad karke afsos karne se kuch prapt nahi hoga putri......

AVANTIKA ne bas apni mundi haan me hila di,par tabhi usse kuch yaad aaya....

AVANTIKA- baba,aapne kaha tha ki ye sab mera sapna hone ke baawajud bhi ek haqiqat hai.......!!!!!

GURU VISHISHT- haan putri....

ye kehte waqt GURU VISHISHT ke honton par ek samjhane aur santushti bhari muskurahat aa gayi jaise ki wo jaante hon ki unki putri aage kya kehne waali hai.....

AVANTIKA- toh kya mai is MAL MITTI ko ek baar chuu sakti hun..........??????

GURU VISHISHT- awashya putri......

AVANTIKA aage badhi aur usne ek haath me us MAL MIITI ko utha liya

par tabhi..............

AVANTIKA- arre,ye kya hua?????aur ye kaun si jagah hai??????

hua ye ki AVANTIKA ke MAL MITTI ko uthate hi AVANTIKA ke haath me ek roshni hui aur wo MITTI gayab ho gayi....

itna hi nahi,mitti ke gayab hote hi ek aur baar har taraf tez roshni hui aur AVANTIKA aur uske baba jahan khade the,wo jagah bhi badal gayi......

ab wo dono ek anthin roshni se bhari jagah ke beech khade the....

GURU VISHISHT- tum tumhare swapn ki duniya ke sarhad par hain putri...kisi bhi waqt tum apni neend se jaag sakti ho..

apne baba ki baat sunkar AVANTIKA ki aankhon me ek baar firse aansu aa gaye....

AVANTIKA- kuch kijiye na baba...mai aapse firse alag nahi hona chahti hun.......

GURU VISHISHT- putri,mai toh kabka sansaar tyag chuka hun.tumhe toh khush hona chahiye ki mere marne ke baad bhi tum mujhse mil paayi......

AVANTIKA- toh kya aap firse mujhse milne nahi aayenge...

GURU VISHISHT- maine pehle bhi kaha tha putri ki mujhme itna saamarthya nahi hai ki khud yahan tumse milne aa sakun..

GURU VISHISHT ki baat sunkar achanak AVANTIKA ko kuch yaad aaya......

AVANTIKA- baba,agar aap apni marzi se yahan mere paas nahi aa sakte toh fir us din DIGVIJAY ke ghar me aapne mujhe kaise bachaya?????

apni beti ki baat sunkar GURU VISHISHT ke chehre par ek muskaan aa gayi....

GURU VISHISHT- tumhe kisne kaha ki maine tumhe DIGVIJAY se bachaya tha???

AVANTIKA ko toh abhi tak yahi lag raha tha ki us din usse uske
pita ne hi bachaya tha..

par apne pita ki baat sunkar AVANTIKA ko ek jhatka laga.....

AVANTIKA- kya????toh kya aapne mujhe nahi bachaya????toh fir kisne????

GURU VISHISHT aage badhe aur unhone apni putri ke sir ke upar haath rakh diya....AVANTIKA ke dimag ke andar ek jagah ki photo dikhne lagi...

AVANTIKA- ye jagah toh!!!!!!

GURU VISHISHT- abhi jab tumhari neend khulegi toh tum is jagah par chale jaana.tumhe sab pata chal jaayega......

aur jaise hi AVANTIKA ne haan me apna sir hilaya,us jagah par ek tez roshni chamki jisse AVANTIKA ki aankhen band ho gayi.....

aur agle hi pal jaise hi AVANTIKA ki aanken khuli,toh wo apne room me thi.....iska matlab is baar uski aankhen uske sapne me nahi balki haqiqat me khuli thi...

AVANTIKA jhat se uthkar baith gayi aur abhi abhi jo bhi hua,uske baare me sochne lagi....

apne pitah ko ek baar firse milkar kabhi uske chehre par muskaan aa jaati toh kabhi apne baba se firse bicchadne ka ehsaas hote hi wo maayus ho jaati......

ki tabhi usse apne pita ki aakhri kahi hui baat yaad aayi ki neend khulte hi usse ek jagah par jaana hai.....

AVANTIKA jhat se apne bed se koodi aur fresh hokar apne pita ki batayi jagah par nikal gayi........





PLANET- EARTH







PLACE- MAGICAL DIMENSION





saale ek number ke dheeth hain....hum jo bhi sochte hain,inhe pehle se hi pata chal jaata hai......

CLONE COMBAT.......pichle 10 dino se ANJALI aur RONIT har din 12 ghante lagatar CLONE COMBAT FIGHTING ki TRAINING kar rahe hain par abhi tak apne CLONES ko harane me dono hi kaamiyab nahi ho paaye hain....

mai dono se thodi hi door baitha unki haalat ko dekh kar muskura raha tha.....

ANJALI- haa yaar.samajh hi nahi aa raha hai ki inpe kaun sa daav aazmaayen.....

ye V.J bhi naa,najaane iske dimag me kaise kaise ideas aate rehte hain jinka use ye hamare upar hi karta hai...

RONIT- aur uske upar baith kar has raha hai kamina..........

MAI- abbe asli fight me bhi itna time loge kya?????tumhara dushman tumhare soch ko idea me badalne tak ka wait toh karega nahi...

asli fight me har cheez REFLEX hoti hai.....har ek second jisse tum sochne ke liye use kar rahe ho,asli ladhayi me utne hi baar tum dono hi mar chuke hoge.....

RONIT- bhai,bolna jitna aasan hai,karna utna hi mushkil.....hume khud se hi ladna pad raha hai,aise me hum apne clone par kaise koi bhi vaar succesfully kar sakte hain???

uske paas toh hamare har waar ka jawab toh hoga hi naa....

RONIT ki baat sunkar me muskuraya aur khade ho gaya.....

MAI- ye baat tu nahi tere andar ka wo yodha bol raha hai jisne haar maan li hai...

yudh sharirik ho,ya maansik,ATTITUDE hona zaroori hai kyunki issi se hamare liye gaye har faisle me nikhaar aata hai......




SWAYAM PRATIKRATI......

SELF CLONING...........




maine apne sir se ek baal toda aur SPELL bolkar baal ko fek diya.......

wo baal hawa me lehrata hua zamin ki taraf jaane laga aur jaise hi wo baal zamin se takraya,us jagah par dhua chaa gaya aur jab dhua chatta toh wahan mera CLONE khada tha....

aisa hi ek CLONE maine 1ST CHAPTER me GURU VISHAKHT ke saath bheja tha..is CLONE ke dimag me wo saare daav pench hote hain jinka use mai karta hun....

MAI- tum sab thoda side ho jaao...

mere kehte hi ORIGINAL aur FAKE RONIT aur ANJALI charon ek side me ho gaye.....




MAI- PRAVAHA AVIDHYATI.......

CURRENT SWING......



SPANDOLIKA..........

SPIN BACKWARDS & FORWARD......



JALAM PARIGRAH.........

WATER FORCE........



PRATILOMAKA ABHISARA.....

REVERSE ATTACK.......




maine ye chaar mantra ek ke baad ek lagatar bole the...par pehle do mantra ka uccharit hona ek sa tha wahin teesre aur chouthe mantron ka uccharit hona alag...

wo isiliye kyunki pehle do mantra maine soch kar bole the par teesre aur chouthe mantra mere mooh se apne aap nikle the...

unhe uccharit karne se pehle mere dimag me bas yahi khayal aaya tha ki mujhe apne CLONE ko nuksaan pahunchana hai.....

mere pehle mantra ke bolte hi mere sharir se current ki rays nikalkar mere saame khade CLONE ki taraf jaane lagi...

mere CLONE ne apne haath aage kiye taaki uske paas aane se pehle hi rays khatm ho jaayen par tabhi mere dusre SPELL ke prabhav me aakar wo CURRENT RAYS aage aur piche dono taraf se float karte hue mere CLONE ki taraf jaane lage....

mera humla aur ghatak ho chuka tha par mere CLONE ke liye isse handle karna koi badi baat toh thi nahi...

mere CLONE ne apni hi jagah par gol gol ghumna shuru kar diya jiski wajaa se uske har taraf hawa ka ek bawandar uth gaya...

aur jaise hi mere dwara chhode gaye DURRENT RAYS us bawandar ke paas pahunche,us bawandar ne CURRENT RAYS ko apne andar kheench liya....

CURRENT RAYS ke bawandar ke andar jaate hi bawandar ke ghumne ki speed aur badh gayi aur kuch hi palon me us bawandar ne CURRENT ki saari urja nichod li.....

par tabhi............

mere dwara bole gaye teesre SPELL ne apna aadhe se zyada kaam kar diya tha......

jaisa ki maine bataya ki maine aakhri ke dono mantra ko bina soche bola tha isiliye mera teesra SPELL jo ki WATER FORCE ka tha,usne us bawandar ko jo ki lagbhag khatm ho hi gaya tha,uske beech se hote hue mere CLONE ke body se takraya....

ye humla bohot ghaatak tha,par kyunki mere CLONE ka body bhi meri hi tarah tha isiliye usse zyada kuch hua nahi...

bas usse apne sharir me halka dhakka sa laga aur wo thoda piche ho gaya...

par mai itna hi chahta tha..mere SPELL ko naa rok paane aur peeche ki taraf hatne ki wajah se mere CLONE ka dimag ghuma aur tabhi mere 4th SPELL ne apna kaam kar diya.....

mera choutha SPELL mere CLONE ke bole gaye SPELL ko wapas ussi ki taraf ghumane ka tha......

piche hatehthe hi mere CLONE ne mujhpar ek energy ray se humla kiya par uska chodda gaya ray thoda aage jaakar wapas ghum gaya aur jaakar usse hi takra gaya...

kyunki ye ray uski khud ki shakti ka ek roop tha isiliye us ray ke takraate hi mera CLONE door jaakar gira...

wahin maine jaise hi mere CLONE ke chhode gaye energy ray ko wapas ghumte hue dekha,mere haathon me ek talwar chamak gayi....

mai apne sthaan se saamne ki taraf kuda aur ray ke prabhav se mera clone jahan just gira tha,mai ussi jagah par pahunch gaya aur agle hi pal meri talwar bijli ki speed se chali....

mera CLONE jo abhi tak ye samajh nahi paaya tha ki hua kya hai,wo mere is humle ko sambhal nahi paaya aur mere mera TALWAR uske aar paar ho gaya....

uske sharir par talwar ka sparsh hote hi wo dhuan ban kar gaayab ho gaya tha aur mera talwar ussi dhuen ke aar paar hua tha...

mere CLONE ke gaayab hone ka matlab tha ki mai jeet gaya hun.....

apne CLONE ko harakar maine apni talwar gayab ki aur jaise hi palta toh mujhe hasi aa gayi....

mujhse kuch hi door mere dono dost mujhe aankhen faade dekh rahe the.....

mai chalte hue unke saamne pahunch gaya...

ANJALI- tune ye kaise kiya????

MAI- nazariya babes,ATTITUDE.jab tak ye nahi badloge,kuch bhi haasil nahi kar paaoge.....

apne dimag se is baat ko nikal do ki ye nahi ho sakta,sab kuch apne aap ho jaayega...

maine jo bhi kiya,bina soche samjhe kiya....

isse REFLEX ATTACK kehte hain...isme bas hume itna hi pata hota hai ki hume saamne waale par humla karna hai par last moment tak ye nahi pata hota ki hum kaisa humla karne waale hain....

jab hume hi nahi maalum hoga ki hum kya karne waale hain,toh hamare dushmano ko kaise kuch pata hoga????

usne jitna bhi hamare upar home work kiya hoga,wo sab fail ho jaayega......

RONIT- AMAZING DUDE..............aur ab mai bhi sab samajh gaya hun.........ab dekh,mai bhi kaise isse harata hun...

RONIT ne apne side me khade apne CLONE ko dekhkar kaha.........

ANJALI- mai nahi,hum.....

MAI- bilkul,par aaj nahi kal........aaj ke liye mera tum dono ko diya gaya ye demonstration hi kaafi hai.....

ghar jao aur aaj maine jo bhi kiya,uske baare me thik se socho....

fir kal tum dono aakar apni practice aage badhana....

RONIT- ye bhi thik hai.par ek second!!!!hum dono matlab?????tu nahi aayega kya kal???

MAI- nahi...........mujhe kahin jaana hai.......

DONO- kyun????aur kahan?????

aur jaise hi maine dono ko kal mere naa aane ka kaaran bataya,dono mere upar kud gaye....

RONIT- saale,aaj tujhe nahi chhodenge.....

ANJALI- aur nahi toh kya...tu bhul gaya,tune kya kaha tha hum dono se???

MAI- abbe,meri baat toh suno..........

RONIT- nahi sunana teri koi baat.tu fir hum dono ko apni baaton me lapet lega.....

MAI- nahi bhai,aisa kuch nahi hoga..ek baar sun toh le....

ANJALI- acha bol...par koi dialouge maara na toh tujhe chhodenge nahi...

ye bolkar ANJALI ne mujhe chhod diya.ab G.F ne kuch bola ho aur B.F na sune,aisa toh hoga nahi,isliye ANJALI ke mujhe chhodte hi RONIT ne bhi mujhe chhod diya...

fir mai un dono ko aage ke baare me kuch kuch batata chala gaya.....meri baat sunkar dono khush ho gaye.......

RONIT- tu sach bol raha hai naa..kahin goli toh nahi de raha hai......

MAI- nahi bhai........

ANJALI- par abhi hi kyu nahi........

MAI- wahi batane jaa raha hun......

maine apna haath aage kiya,mere haathon se ek roshni nikli aur ek baar firse hamare saamne mera CLONE aa gaya...

ANJALI- ab iski kya zaroorat hai....

MAI- meri jagah ye tum dono ek saath jaayega......

isse pehle ki un dono me se koi iski wajah puchta,mai unhe kuch baatein batane laga jisse sunkar wo shocked ho gaye...

RONIT- par tune aisa kyun kiya???

MAI- har baat mai tum dono ko abhi nahi bata sakta yaar.par bharosa rakho,ye zaroori hai......aur sahi waqt aane par tum dono ko apne aap pata chal jaayega.....

RONIT fir bhi mujhese kuch puchna chaahta tha par ANJALI ne usse aisa karne se rok diya...

ANJALI- thik hai......toh ab kya????

MAI- aur kuch nahi..bas isse lekar jahan se maine bola hai,wahan se hi baahar nikalna aur fir tumhe kya karna hai,ye toh tumhe bata hi chuka hun....

RONIT- thik hai.par hum intazaar karenge.......

MAINE- PATA HAI.......

aur agle hi pal mai gayab ho gaya......

RONIT aur ANJALI ne ek lambi saans chhodi aur mere CLONE ke saath milkar ek jagah unhone MAGIC DOOR banayi aur gayab ho gaye.....

RONIT ne ek sunsaan jagah chuni thi us MAGICAL DIMENSION se baahar aane ke liye....

par jaise hi teeno bahar aaye,unke saamne koi khada tha jo un teeno ko aankhen fade dekh raha tha.....

par RONIT,ANJALI aur mere CLONE ko apne saamne waale ko dekhkar normal hi rahe maano unhe pehle se pata tha ki yahi hone waala hai......

RONIT ne apne piche khule MAGIC DOOR ko band kar diya........

ANJALI- what's up AVANTIKA.......????????









PLANET- ************




PLACE- ************




MAI- uth jaiye.............

mere saamne jo apne ghutno ke bal baitha hua tha,mere bolne par wo khada ho gaya par ab bhi uska sir neeche hi tha........

maine ek lambi saans chodi aur apne saamne ke nazare ko dekhne laga........



MAI- TOH FINALLY MERA SAFAR SHURU HO GAYA.....AUR MERE SAAMNE HAI MERE SAFAR KA PEHLA PADHAV........



THE WORLD OF WARRIORS.......






AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI........





AAPKA APNA V..J.......

 

[John Cena]

Superb yar ab apne hero ko vo mani mil jaeygi jo defender ko safe rakh rahi thi

 

[Raja thakur]

Nice update

 

[Dark Devil]

AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI VIKRAM KO APNE SAPNE KE EK BHAAG ME AVANTIKA DIKHTI HAI AUR DUSRE BHAAG ME ANALIA.
AB AAGE:-





CHAPTER-2



( CURSE OF THE SWEET POISON )




UPDATE-72





PLANET-EARTH





PLACE- DREAM LAND





ye kaunsi jagah hai????aisa lag raha hai jaise mai yahan pehle bhi aa chuki hun.......!!!!

arre ye toh...!!!!!!!!!

AVANTIKA is waqt apne pichle janam ke yug me apne ghar ke peeche khadi hui thi jisse usse pehchaan ne me thoda waqt laga par usne us jagah ko pehchaan liya....

AVANTIKA- mai yahan kaise?????ye sab ho kya raha hai????

KAISI HO PUTRI.............

ye awaaz AVANTIKA ke piche se aa rahi thi.....awaaz sun AVANTIKA turant palti......

AVANTIKA- BABAAAAAA........

apne saamne apne pita GURU VISHISHT ko dekhkar AVANTIKA ke aakhon se aansu nikalne laga......

BABA......bas ek hi shabd nikal paaya uske mooh se.......

AVANTIKA doud kar gayi aur uske pitah ke gale lag gayi.........

BABA- kya hua putri?????mujhe toh laga tha ki mujhe punah apne saamne dekhkar tum prassan ho jaogi kintu tum toh ro rahi ho????

AVANTIKA- ye khushi ke aansu hai baba.....aapko apne saamne dekhkar mujhe kitna acha lag raha hai ye mai aapko bata nahi sakti.........

mujhe toh ummid hi nahi thi ki mai aapko firse dekh paaungi.......aur ab mai aapko kahin bhi nahi jaane dungi...aap hamesha mere saath hi rahenge....

BABA VISHISHT- putri,kya tumhe yahan kuch bhi ajeeb nahi lag raha????

ab tak AVANTIKA normal ho chuki thi......

AVANTIKA- haan baba,ye jagah toh mere pichle janam ki hai..wo saamne hamara us waqt ka ghar hai......

BABA VISHISHT- haan putri........ye tumhare pichle janam ka hi gaon hai..

AVANTIKA- kintu baba????hum yahan kaise?????

BABA VISHISHT- kisne kaha ki tum yahan aayi ho????

AVANTIKA ko apne pita ki baat ka matlab samajh nahi aaya....

AVANTIKA- mai samjhi nahi baba????

BABA VISHISHT- tum abhi ek swapn me ho putri.......ye jo kuch bhi tum dekh rahi ho,ye sab tumhare mastishk me ho rahi rachna hai....

AVANTIKA apne pita ki baat ko sunkar pehle shocked hui par fir kuch sochkar ekdum udaas ho gayi......

BABA VISHISHT- kya hua putri????tum udaas kyun ho gayi?????

AVANTIKA- agar ye mera sapna hai,iska matlab ye sab bas ek jhooth hai,aap sirf mere sapne ka ek hissa hain aur mere aankh khulte hi sab pehle jaisa ho jaayega....

GURU VISHISHT apni putri ki baat ko sunkar muskarye aur phir kaha.....

GURU VISHISHT- putri,ye sapna zaroor hai kintu satya bhi hai...ye sach hai ki ye saari cheezen tumhare dimag me chal rahi hain par ye bhi utna hi sach hai ki mai tumse milne aaya hun........

AVANTIKA toh bas apne pita ki baat ko theek se samajhne ki koshish kar rahi thi.....

AVANTIKA- aap keh rahe hain ki ye sapna sapna hokar bhi ek haqiqat hai???par ye kaise mumkin hai???

GURU VISHISHT- PARMESHWAR ke liye aur uske PUTR ke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai putri.......

AVANTIKA- mujhe aapki koi bhi baat samajh me nahi aa rahi hai baba........

GURU VISHISHT- dheere dheere sab samajh jaaogi putri....pehle apne gaon toh ghum lo....

tumhe bohot icha ho rahi thi na ek baar apne pichle janam ki maatrubhumi ko phir se dekhne ki...

AVANTIKA- haan baba,par aapko kaise pata????kya isiliye aapne is sapne ko mere dimag me daala hai taaki mai apne gaon ko ek baar fir se dekh sakun!!!!!!

GURU VISHISHT- putri,mera jeevan kaal samapt ho chuka hai..ab mujhme itni shakti ya saamartya nahi hai ki mai aisa kuch kar sakun......

tumhari iccha ko pura karne me kisi aur ka haath hai aur mai swayam bhi ussi ke aadesh ke kaaran mrtyu ke paschat bhi tumse punah mil paaya hun.....l

waise toh AVANTIKA ko abhi tak kaafi jhatke lag chuke the,par ye baat uske liye sabse bada jhatka tha.....

AVANTIKA- kaun baba???kaun hai wo jisne ye sab kiya hai aur wo bhi mere liye....

GURU VISHISHT- maine kaha na putri...dheere dheere sab samajh jaaogi....

chalo,apni icha puri kar lo.........

AVANTIKA- ji baba....

AVANTIKA apne pita ke saath apne gaon ko ek aur baar dekhne nikal padi.....

apne gaon ko punah ek baar apne sapne me hi sahi,par apne aakhon ke saamne dekhkar AVANTIKA bohot khush ho gayi thi......

aur wahin GURU VISHISHT apni putri ko khush dekhkar khush ho rahe the.....

idhar udhar dekhte hue AVANTIKA apne pichle janam me kiye gaye saare shararate,saare khele gaye khel apne pitah ko batati jaa rahi thi......

fir ek jagah aakar AVANTIKA rook gayi....uske saamne jo tha usse dekhkar uske chehre par khushi,excitement aur nirasha, teeno bhaav ek saath aa gaye the....

AVANTIKA ke chehre ke in badalte bhaavon ko uske pita ne dekh liya......

GURU VISHISHT- kya hua putri???kya soch rahi ho???

AVANTIKA ne kuch kaha nahi balki apni ek ungli saamne kar di...

AVANTIKA ke saamne ghaas ke borders ke beech RETH rakhi hui thi jiske taraf usne apni ungli point ki thi....

GURU VISHISHT- MAL MITTI...........

AVANTIKA- haan baba,MAL MITTI....ek aisi chamatkarik MITTI jisse bane ghade ya katori ke andar agar ganda paani bhi rakha jaaye toh wo paani bhi saaf ho jaaya karta hai....

jisse bane bartan ya kadhayi me agar ganda ya sadaa hua khaana bhi rakha jaaye toh wo bhi swach ho jaata hai....

GURU VISHISHT- hame ye baaten gyat hain putri....

AVANTIKA- pata hai baba,mai hamesha se is MAL MITTI ke raaz ko suljhana chahti thi...

mujhe pura yakeen tha ki isse aur bhi bohot kuch kiya jaa sakta hai par mai is haqiqat ko be parda karne se pehle hi mar gayi.....

GURU VISHISHT- pichle janam ke adhure karmo ko yaad karke afsos karne se kuch prapt nahi hoga putri......

AVANTIKA ne bas apni mundi haan me hila di,par tabhi usse kuch yaad aaya....

AVANTIKA- baba,aapne kaha tha ki ye sab mera sapna hone ke baawajud bhi ek haqiqat hai.......!!!!!

GURU VISHISHT- haan putri....

ye kehte waqt GURU VISHISHT ke honton par ek samjhane aur santushti bhari muskurahat aa gayi jaise ki wo jaante hon ki unki putri aage kya kehne waali hai.....

AVANTIKA- toh kya mai is MAL MITTI ko ek baar chuu sakti hun..........??????

GURU VISHISHT- awashya putri......

AVANTIKA aage badhi aur usne ek haath me us MAL MIITI ko utha liya

par tabhi..............

AVANTIKA- arre,ye kya hua?????aur ye kaun si jagah hai??????

hua ye ki AVANTIKA ke MAL MITTI ko uthate hi AVANTIKA ke haath me ek roshni hui aur wo MITTI gayab ho gayi....

itna hi nahi,mitti ke gayab hote hi ek aur baar har taraf tez roshni hui aur AVANTIKA aur uske baba jahan khade the,wo jagah bhi badal gayi......

ab wo dono ek anthin roshni se bhari jagah ke beech khade the....

GURU VISHISHT- tum tumhare swapn ki duniya ke sarhad par hain putri...kisi bhi waqt tum apni neend se jaag sakti ho..

apne baba ki baat sunkar AVANTIKA ki aankhon me ek baar firse aansu aa gaye....

AVANTIKA- kuch kijiye na baba...mai aapse firse alag nahi hona chahti hun.......

GURU VISHISHT- putri,mai toh kabka sansaar tyag chuka hun.tumhe toh khush hona chahiye ki mere marne ke baad bhi tum mujhse mil paayi......

AVANTIKA- toh kya aap firse mujhse milne nahi aayenge...

GURU VISHISHT- maine pehle bhi kaha tha putri ki mujhme itna saamarthya nahi hai ki khud yahan tumse milne aa sakun..

GURU VISHISHT ki baat sunkar achanak AVANTIKA ko kuch yaad aaya......

AVANTIKA- baba,agar aap apni marzi se yahan mere paas nahi aa sakte toh fir us din DIGVIJAY ke ghar me aapne mujhe kaise bachaya?????

apni beti ki baat sunkar GURU VISHISHT ke chehre par ek muskaan aa gayi....

GURU VISHISHT- tumhe kisne kaha ki maine tumhe DIGVIJAY se bachaya tha???

AVANTIKA ko toh abhi tak yahi lag raha tha ki us din usse uske
pita ne hi bachaya tha..

par apne pita ki baat sunkar AVANTIKA ko ek jhatka laga.....

AVANTIKA- kya????toh kya aapne mujhe nahi bachaya????toh fir kisne????

GURU VISHISHT aage badhe aur unhone apni putri ke sir ke upar haath rakh diya....AVANTIKA ke dimag ke andar ek jagah ki photo dikhne lagi...

AVANTIKA- ye jagah toh!!!!!!

GURU VISHISHT- abhi jab tumhari neend khulegi toh tum is jagah par chale jaana.tumhe sab pata chal jaayega......

aur jaise hi AVANTIKA ne haan me apna sir hilaya,us jagah par ek tez roshni chamki jisse AVANTIKA ki aankhen band ho gayi.....

aur agle hi pal jaise hi AVANTIKA ki aanken khuli,toh wo apne room me thi.....iska matlab is baar uski aankhen uske sapne me nahi balki haqiqat me khuli thi...

AVANTIKA jhat se uthkar baith gayi aur abhi abhi jo bhi hua,uske baare me sochne lagi....

apne pitah ko ek baar firse milkar kabhi uske chehre par muskaan aa jaati toh kabhi apne baba se firse bicchadne ka ehsaas hote hi wo maayus ho jaati......

ki tabhi usse apne pita ki aakhri kahi hui baat yaad aayi ki neend khulte hi usse ek jagah par jaana hai.....

AVANTIKA jhat se apne bed se koodi aur fresh hokar apne pita ki batayi jagah par nikal gayi........





PLANET- EARTH







PLACE- MAGICAL DIMENSION





saale ek number ke dheeth hain....hum jo bhi sochte hain,inhe pehle se hi pata chal jaata hai......

CLONE COMBAT.......pichle 10 dino se ANJALI aur RONIT har din 12 ghante lagatar CLONE COMBAT FIGHTING ki TRAINING kar rahe hain par abhi tak apne CLONES ko harane me dono hi kaamiyab nahi ho paaye hain....

mai dono se thodi hi door baitha unki haalat ko dekh kar muskura raha tha.....

ANJALI- haa yaar.samajh hi nahi aa raha hai ki inpe kaun sa daav aazmaayen.....

ye V.J bhi naa,najaane iske dimag me kaise kaise ideas aate rehte hain jinka use ye hamare upar hi karta hai...

RONIT- aur uske upar baith kar has raha hai kamina..........

MAI- abbe asli fight me bhi itna time loge kya?????tumhara dushman tumhare soch ko idea me badalne tak ka wait toh karega nahi...

asli fight me har cheez REFLEX hoti hai.....har ek second jisse tum sochne ke liye use kar rahe ho,asli ladhayi me utne hi baar tum dono hi mar chuke hoge.....

RONIT- bhai,bolna jitna aasan hai,karna utna hi mushkil.....hume khud se hi ladna pad raha hai,aise me hum apne clone par kaise koi bhi vaar succesfully kar sakte hain???

uske paas toh hamare har waar ka jawab toh hoga hi naa....

RONIT ki baat sunkar me muskuraya aur khade ho gaya.....

MAI- ye baat tu nahi tere andar ka wo yodha bol raha hai jisne haar maan li hai...

yudh sharirik ho,ya maansik,ATTITUDE hona zaroori hai kyunki issi se hamare liye gaye har faisle me nikhaar aata hai......




SWAYAM PRATIKRATI......

SELF CLONING...........




maine apne sir se ek baal toda aur SPELL bolkar baal ko fek diya.......

wo baal hawa me lehrata hua zamin ki taraf jaane laga aur jaise hi wo baal zamin se takraya,us jagah par dhua chaa gaya aur jab dhua chatta toh wahan mera CLONE khada tha....

aisa hi ek CLONE maine 1ST CHAPTER me GURU VISHAKHT ke saath bheja tha..is CLONE ke dimag me wo saare daav pench hote hain jinka use mai karta hun....

MAI- tum sab thoda side ho jaao...

mere kehte hi ORIGINAL aur FAKE RONIT aur ANJALI charon ek side me ho gaye.....




MAI- PRAVAHA AVIDHYATI.......

CURRENT SWING......



SPANDOLIKA..........

SPIN BACKWARDS & FORWARD......



JALAM PARIGRAH.........

WATER FORCE........



PRATILOMAKA ABHISARA.....

REVERSE ATTACK.......




maine ye chaar mantra ek ke baad ek lagatar bole the...par pehle do mantra ka uccharit hona ek sa tha wahin teesre aur chouthe mantron ka uccharit hona alag...

wo isiliye kyunki pehle do mantra maine soch kar bole the par teesre aur chouthe mantra mere mooh se apne aap nikle the...

unhe uccharit karne se pehle mere dimag me bas yahi khayal aaya tha ki mujhe apne CLONE ko nuksaan pahunchana hai.....

mere pehle mantra ke bolte hi mere sharir se current ki rays nikalkar mere saame khade CLONE ki taraf jaane lagi...

mere CLONE ne apne haath aage kiye taaki uske paas aane se pehle hi rays khatm ho jaayen par tabhi mere dusre SPELL ke prabhav me aakar wo CURRENT RAYS aage aur piche dono taraf se float karte hue mere CLONE ki taraf jaane lage....

mera humla aur ghatak ho chuka tha par mere CLONE ke liye isse handle karna koi badi baat toh thi nahi...

mere CLONE ne apni hi jagah par gol gol ghumna shuru kar diya jiski wajaa se uske har taraf hawa ka ek bawandar uth gaya...

aur jaise hi mere dwara chhode gaye DURRENT RAYS us bawandar ke paas pahunche,us bawandar ne CURRENT RAYS ko apne andar kheench liya....

CURRENT RAYS ke bawandar ke andar jaate hi bawandar ke ghumne ki speed aur badh gayi aur kuch hi palon me us bawandar ne CURRENT ki saari urja nichod li.....

par tabhi............

mere dwara bole gaye teesre SPELL ne apna aadhe se zyada kaam kar diya tha......

jaisa ki maine bataya ki maine aakhri ke dono mantra ko bina soche bola tha isiliye mera teesra SPELL jo ki WATER FORCE ka tha,usne us bawandar ko jo ki lagbhag khatm ho hi gaya tha,uske beech se hote hue mere CLONE ke body se takraya....

ye humla bohot ghaatak tha,par kyunki mere CLONE ka body bhi meri hi tarah tha isiliye usse zyada kuch hua nahi...

bas usse apne sharir me halka dhakka sa laga aur wo thoda piche ho gaya...

par mai itna hi chahta tha..mere SPELL ko naa rok paane aur peeche ki taraf hatne ki wajah se mere CLONE ka dimag ghuma aur tabhi mere 4th SPELL ne apna kaam kar diya.....

mera choutha SPELL mere CLONE ke bole gaye SPELL ko wapas ussi ki taraf ghumane ka tha......

piche hatehthe hi mere CLONE ne mujhpar ek energy ray se humla kiya par uska chodda gaya ray thoda aage jaakar wapas ghum gaya aur jaakar usse hi takra gaya...

kyunki ye ray uski khud ki shakti ka ek roop tha isiliye us ray ke takraate hi mera CLONE door jaakar gira...

wahin maine jaise hi mere CLONE ke chhode gaye energy ray ko wapas ghumte hue dekha,mere haathon me ek talwar chamak gayi....

mai apne sthaan se saamne ki taraf kuda aur ray ke prabhav se mera clone jahan just gira tha,mai ussi jagah par pahunch gaya aur agle hi pal meri talwar bijli ki speed se chali....

mera CLONE jo abhi tak ye samajh nahi paaya tha ki hua kya hai,wo mere is humle ko sambhal nahi paaya aur mere mera TALWAR uske aar paar ho gaya....

uske sharir par talwar ka sparsh hote hi wo dhuan ban kar gaayab ho gaya tha aur mera talwar ussi dhuen ke aar paar hua tha...

mere CLONE ke gaayab hone ka matlab tha ki mai jeet gaya hun.....

apne CLONE ko harakar maine apni talwar gayab ki aur jaise hi palta toh mujhe hasi aa gayi....

mujhse kuch hi door mere dono dost mujhe aankhen faade dekh rahe the.....

mai chalte hue unke saamne pahunch gaya...

ANJALI- tune ye kaise kiya????

MAI- nazariya babes,ATTITUDE.jab tak ye nahi badloge,kuch bhi haasil nahi kar paaoge.....

apne dimag se is baat ko nikal do ki ye nahi ho sakta,sab kuch apne aap ho jaayega...

maine jo bhi kiya,bina soche samjhe kiya....

isse REFLEX ATTACK kehte hain...isme bas hume itna hi pata hota hai ki hume saamne waale par humla karna hai par last moment tak ye nahi pata hota ki hum kaisa humla karne waale hain....

jab hume hi nahi maalum hoga ki hum kya karne waale hain,toh hamare dushmano ko kaise kuch pata hoga????

usne jitna bhi hamare upar home work kiya hoga,wo sab fail ho jaayega......

RONIT- AMAZING DUDE..............aur ab mai bhi sab samajh gaya hun.........ab dekh,mai bhi kaise isse harata hun...

RONIT ne apne side me khade apne CLONE ko dekhkar kaha.........

ANJALI- mai nahi,hum.....

MAI- bilkul,par aaj nahi kal........aaj ke liye mera tum dono ko diya gaya ye demonstration hi kaafi hai.....

ghar jao aur aaj maine jo bhi kiya,uske baare me thik se socho....

fir kal tum dono aakar apni practice aage badhana....

RONIT- ye bhi thik hai.par ek second!!!!hum dono matlab?????tu nahi aayega kya kal???

MAI- nahi...........mujhe kahin jaana hai.......

DONO- kyun????aur kahan?????

aur jaise hi maine dono ko kal mere naa aane ka kaaran bataya,dono mere upar kud gaye....

RONIT- saale,aaj tujhe nahi chhodenge.....

ANJALI- aur nahi toh kya...tu bhul gaya,tune kya kaha tha hum dono se???

MAI- abbe,meri baat toh suno..........

RONIT- nahi sunana teri koi baat.tu fir hum dono ko apni baaton me lapet lega.....

MAI- nahi bhai,aisa kuch nahi hoga..ek baar sun toh le....

ANJALI- acha bol...par koi dialouge maara na toh tujhe chhodenge nahi...

ye bolkar ANJALI ne mujhe chhod diya.ab G.F ne kuch bola ho aur B.F na sune,aisa toh hoga nahi,isliye ANJALI ke mujhe chhodte hi RONIT ne bhi mujhe chhod diya...

fir mai un dono ko aage ke baare me kuch kuch batata chala gaya.....meri baat sunkar dono khush ho gaye.......

RONIT- tu sach bol raha hai naa..kahin goli toh nahi de raha hai......

MAI- nahi bhai........

ANJALI- par abhi hi kyu nahi........

MAI- wahi batane jaa raha hun......

maine apna haath aage kiya,mere haathon se ek roshni nikli aur ek baar firse hamare saamne mera CLONE aa gaya...

ANJALI- ab iski kya zaroorat hai....

MAI- meri jagah ye tum dono ek saath jaayega......

isse pehle ki un dono me se koi iski wajah puchta,mai unhe kuch baatein batane laga jisse sunkar wo shocked ho gaye...

RONIT- par tune aisa kyun kiya???

MAI- har baat mai tum dono ko abhi nahi bata sakta yaar.par bharosa rakho,ye zaroori hai......aur sahi waqt aane par tum dono ko apne aap pata chal jaayega.....

RONIT fir bhi mujhese kuch puchna chaahta tha par ANJALI ne usse aisa karne se rok diya...

ANJALI- thik hai......toh ab kya????

MAI- aur kuch nahi..bas isse lekar jahan se maine bola hai,wahan se hi baahar nikalna aur fir tumhe kya karna hai,ye toh tumhe bata hi chuka hun....

RONIT- thik hai.par hum intazaar karenge.......

MAINE- PATA HAI.......

aur agle hi pal mai gayab ho gaya......

RONIT aur ANJALI ne ek lambi saans chhodi aur mere CLONE ke saath milkar ek jagah unhone MAGIC DOOR banayi aur gayab ho gaye.....

RONIT ne ek sunsaan jagah chuni thi us MAGICAL DIMENSION se baahar aane ke liye....

par jaise hi teeno bahar aaye,unke saamne koi khada tha jo un teeno ko aankhen fade dekh raha tha.....

par RONIT,ANJALI aur mere CLONE ko apne saamne waale ko dekhkar normal hi rahe maano unhe pehle se pata tha ki yahi hone waala hai......

RONIT ne apne piche khule MAGIC DOOR ko band kar diya........

ANJALI- what's up AVANTIKA.......????????









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MAI- uth jaiye.............

mere saamne jo apne ghutno ke bal baitha hua tha,mere bolne par wo khada ho gaya par ab bhi uska sir neeche hi tha........

maine ek lambi saans chodi aur apne saamne ke nazare ko dekhne laga........



MAI- TOH FINALLY MERA SAFAR SHURU HO GAYA.....AUR MERE SAAMNE HAI MERE SAFAR KA PEHLA PADHAV........



THE WORLD OF WARRIORS.......






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AAPKA APNA V..J.......

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