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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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wonderfull update
Super update hai bhai:cowboy1:
Super fabulous update
Ab maza AA rha h normal life ka
Keep posting
Super update hai bhai

thanks brothers..be
Awesome Super Fantastic Mind Blowing Dhanshu Update.
Raaz aur Videous dono Alokik shaktiyon tyagne ke baad aam savets ki trah chunautiyon ka samna kar rahe . Videous jaha sarvshrest banne ke liye koshish kar raha hai wahi Raaz ne poora jor laga fiya ki wo Videous se pichhe na Rah jaye . Par ye sab ek din me sambhaw na hota ki chahe aur pa liya uske nirantar parayash karna padta hai jaise mahi kar rahi aur ye dono ek hi baar me frustrated ho gaye aur frustration ek dusre ko ab neecha sabit karke nikal rahe aapash me .
Last me dono ki baatchit shandar aur Videous ka Dailog to ekdum dhanshu hai .


thanks for the review brother..saath bane rahiye
 

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Fantastic update bhai
Bahut hi khubsurat update bhai ?
Very nice fantastic update waiting for next update
Fabulous update...
Nice update
Behtareen update,
Kahani bahut hi dilchasp hoti jaa rahi hai.
Lagta hai dono jald hi mahi ko bhi peechhe chhod denge.
Fantastic updates bro.
Raaz ko to videous ke nam ka tape recorder apane pas rakh lena chhiye timer ke sath jab bhi celebration process se bahar nikale recorder suru ho jaye and wapas return ho jaye matalab itani nafarat videous se ki sala itana dard se gaya insane update bhai
Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next
bahot shaandaar mazedaar lajawab update dost
Wah kya baat hai maza hi aa gya
super fantastic update bhai maza aa gya ab dekhte hai ki aage kya hota hai
Awesome update
Raaz marega tabhi videous bhi marega matlab ek jaan do jisam right. bas mera manna hai aur mere manne se kuch nhi hoga right:tongue:
NICE UPDATE BHAII BHOT AWALA MAZA AYA GIEA PAR AB NEW UPDATE KA INTAZAR HA BHAII
Mast update bhai waiting for the next update
Lovely update buddy

ye Acchuta aur Sulender original wale nahi lag rahe hain shayad ye videous k chele chapaate hain tabhi Raaz k aankh dikhane se bhi nahi dare.
Keep it up ?
Gazab ek dam jabardast update.
Awesome update
VJ Bhai ur are awesome

mazarat is story ko start thora late kiya

but iam ur fan from part 1

and now this part is brilliant

your way of writing and dialogues are mind blowing
Boht zabardast update
Jabardasttt updates bhai
Fantastic update dear
thanks brothers... be along
 

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Well well welll....aakhir kaar dono chuk hi gye videous ne zindgi me phli dfa haar ka swad chakha ar frustrated bhi hua wahi raaz ke sang bhi waisa hi hua par yaha raaz videous se behtr tha kyuki raaz ko jahan dohri maar pad rhi thi refining ke doran wahi videous ne insaani emotions se bchne ke liye bahut mhnt ki hazaro saal tk pr in insaani emotions se use iske baavjood hila dala...aakhir in emotions se khud bhagwan nhi bch paaye...ye to fir bhi unki urja ek mamuli sa hissa h fir ye kaise un emotions ko uhi control kr skta gha...chliye dekhte h kya hota h aage jahan raaz ko soul amplify ke sath refiner bhi amplify krne h apne andr aayi kamjori ar videous ko aisi aur bhi haare dikhane ke liye wahin videous lead me h iss waqt with avg lvl refiner ke sth....chliye dekhte h kya hoga aage ..maarg bahut kathin h...kaante bichhe hue h...ya to manjil ko bhul rashta bdl do ...pr agr manjil chahiye to kaanto pr chl ke takliff to jhelni hi pdengi na...
So waitng bro :mahboi: :akshay: :cowboy2:
thanks for appreciating brother...saath bane rahiye
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF NORMAL HONE KE BAAD VIDEOUS APNE PEHLE CLASS KE TASK ME FAIL HOTA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ KI KOSHISH BHI FAIL HO JAATI HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-72



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-STELLARS COLONY





HEY MAHI... WHAT'S UP....????


shaam ka waqt hai.... MAHI apne ABODE se kuch door bane ek bohot hi khubsoorat garden me neeche ghaans par baithi uske aas paas jo darjano varieties ke alag alag phool uge hue the,unhe dekh kuch soch hi rahi thi ki tabhi uske piche se awaaz aayi jisse sun jab wo piche palti toh...


MAHI-VIDEOUS,tum yahan...????


thoda surprise hote hue kahi thi ye baat MAHI ne jispar...


VIDEOUS-haan mai..kyun???kya mai yahan nahi aa sakta....!!!!


apni baat kehte hue VIDEOUS MAHI ke paas aa gaya tha aur fir wo bhi MAHI ki hi tarah neeche ghaans par baith gaya....

wahin uske sawal ko sun...


MAHI-well, logically toh nahi..tumhe yahan aane ki zaroorat nahi padni chahiye kyunki tumne bataya tha ki tumhara ABODE pichle lane me hai jo yahan se kareeb ek kilometer door hai...

aur thik aisa garden wahan bhi moujud hai..infact har lane me ek aisa hi hubahu garden bana hai,fir bhi tum apne ABODE ke paas waale garden ko chhod kar yahan aaye ho,toh logically ye galat hi hai naa...

VIDEOUS-fir is lihaz se toh tumhare logics bhi galat hue...kyunki maine kuch dino pehle tumhe bhi mere lane waale garden me dekha tha...


VIDEOUS ki baat sun muskura uthi MAHI aur...


MAHI-haan..mai tumhare lane ke garden me gayi thi..infact me yahan ke har lane me bane gardens me jaa chuki hun...

VIDEOUS-puch sakta hun kyun??

MAHI-puch toh liya....par pehle tum batao ki tum yahan kya kar rahe ho....???

VIDEOUS- curiousity.... jab mujhe pata chala ki yahan hamare STELLAR'S colony ke har lane me ek ek aisa garden banaya gaya hai jahan universe ke har living PLANET me hone waale phool ugte hain toh mera man kiya ki kyun naa check kiya jaaye sabhi garden ek jaise hain yaa fir kisi garden me kuch aisa bhi hai jo baakiyon me nahi hai...

MAHI-no way...arre mai bhi isiliye hi sabhi gardens ko checkout karti rehti hun.. infact yahan ki har jagah aur un jagahon ki history ke baate me janane ki kosish karti hun mai...

VIDEOUS-now that's a coincidence... mujhe bhi hamesha kuch naya janana aur sikhna acha lagta hai....


VIDEOUS ki baat sunkar MAHI muskura di...usse acha laga ye jaankar ki koi toh hai jo uski hi tarah sochta hai....

warna ALFREEN aur MABEL toh kabhi kabhi uski hadh se zyada curious nature ko lekar usse chhidhati rehti hain...

khair, VIDEOUS ki baat sunane ke baad...


MAHI-ek sawal hai jo kaafi time se mai tumse puchna chahti thi....???puchun...???

VIDEOUS-sure..go ahead...

MAHI-jab SOVEREIGN ne tumhe introduce karwaya tha,tab unhone kaha tha ki kuch personal reasons ki wajah se tum last PHASE join nahi kar paaye the..

can i know the reason...???

VIDEOUS-mai apne PLANET me apne parents ke saath ek forest me rehta tha...aur yahan ke hisaab se pichle saal mere parents lapata ho gaye the...

ussi waqt mujhe yahan aane ka bulawa aaya tha par mujhe apne parents ko dhundna tha isiliye mai yahan nahi aana chahta tha...

isiliye SOVEREIGN mujhse milne aaye aur meri problem ko dekh aur samajh unhone kaha ki agar mai chahun toh wahin apne PLANET me hi yahan ke task ki practice kar sakta hun...

unhone mujhe tasks ke baare me bataya aur unhe karne ka tarika bhi samajhya...

saari cheezon ke baare me jaan mai yahan aane ke liye behad excited feel kar raha tha but mujhe apne parents ko bhi dhundna tha, isiliye mai nahi aa paaya...


jahan VIDEOUS ke parents ka sun MAHI ko bura laga wahin ye jaankar ki VIDEOUS bhi ussiki tarah ek forest me pala badha hai,usse acha bhi laga tha..

MAHI-toh fir kya tumhare parents??

VIDEOUS-nahi...i didn't find them....


MAHI ke sawal ko samajh VIDEOUS ne jawab de diya...


MAHI-ohh..really feeling sorry for your loss....

but kya SOVEREIGN ne tumhare mom dad ko khojne ki koshish nahi ki..unke liye toh ye koi badi baat nahi hai...

VIDEOUS-nahi..unhone kaha ki unhe aisa karne ki ijazat nahi hai....

MAHI-thats rediculous...itni shakti hone ka kya faayda jab wo kisike kaam nahi aa sakti...

VIDEOUS-theek hi hai naa..ye bhi ek lesson hi hai ki khudko itna strong banao ki kisiki help leni hi naa pade...

MAHI-i disagree...koi kitna bhi taakatwar kyun naa ho jaayen,par kabhi naa kabhi help ki zaroorat har kisiko padti hai...

VIDEOUS-help bhi do tarike ka hota hai MAHI..ek jo maanga jaaye,aur dusra jo bina maange mil jaaye..

maangna,iska matlab hai weakness aur bina maange mil jaane ka arth hai to be powerful...

aur ye jo dusra tarika hai naa,iske kaam me laane ke liye strong, bohot strong,sabse strong hona padta hai...

always remember MAHI...agar tum sach dheere se bhi bologe toh koi nahi sunega par agar jhooth chilla chilla kar bhi kahoge toh har koi naa sirf sun bhi lega balki us jhooth ko sach maan kar vishwas bhi kar lega....

MAHI-damn man...apni age se bohot zyada badhkar baatein karte ho tum....i am impressed...

VIDEOUS-well thankyou...waise ab kya mai kuch puch sakta hun...???

MAHI-ab itna acha gyan diya hai tumne,toh mana kaise kar sakti hun mai...???


MAHI ki baat sun halka sa muskuraya VIDEOUS aur...


VIDEOUS-mai jab tumhare paas aa raha tha tab maine gour kiya ki tum ek hi jagah par bina palke jhapkayen dekh rahi thi..

aksar aisa tab hota hai jab hum kuch deep sochte hain...??kya soch rahi thi tum...???

MAHI-hmm...haan soch rahi thi mai....mai us reason ko talash rahi thi jis wajah se last PHASE ke mukable is PHASE me meri ability kam padh gayi hai....


HAHAHAHA.....


MAHI ki baat sun hans diya VIDEOUS jisse sun hairani se uski taraf dekhne lagi MAHI aur jab VIDEOUS ki hasi rooki toh..


MAHI-aisi kaun si hidden code chuppi thi meri baat me jisse sun has diye tum...???

VIDEOUS-code...!!!tumhari puri baat hi mazak thi..

MAHI-matlab...!!!!!

VIDEOUS-ek baat batao..agar bike fuel se chalti ho..bike ki average 50 ho toh ek litre fuel me wo kitni door jaayegi...

MAHI-what kind of a question is this..???50 hi jaayegi,aur kya..???

VIDEOUS-par agar distance 100 km ho par fuel ek litre hi daali gayi ho toh kya bike apni destination tak pahunch jaayegi...

MAHI-nahi...

VIDEOUS-par bike aadhe me hi rook jaaye toh kya iska matlab ye hai ki engine ki shamata kam ho gayi...???

MAHI-bilkul nahi...shamata wahi hai,petrol kam pad gaya hai...but what's the connection...???

VIDEOUS-connection is ki us bike ki hi tarah tumhari efficiency ya shamata kam nahi hui hai,bas tumhe tumhare destination ki doori badh gayi hai...

first PHASE ki doori 50 km ki tarah thi,jahan tumhari bike bina kisi problem ke pahunch gayi par ye PHASE 100 km jitna door hai...

aur isiliye petrol yaani effort zyada lagega madam...


VIDEOUS ki baat sun MAHI ektak uski taraf dekhne lagi....

dekh toh VIDEOUS bhi sakta tha MAHI ko par main baat toh ab karni thi usse aur isiliye...


VIDEOUS-par mujhe nahi lagta ki tum zyada effort laga paaogi...???

MAHI-kyun..???kyun nahi laga paaogi...

VIDEOUS-ek old saying hai ki if u wanna better urself,then be with people who are better than u...

par tum aisa kar paaogi nahi,toh fir growth rate badhne ke chances kahan se honge...???

MAHI-are you mad or what..??tum keh reh ho ki mujhe apne friends ke saath nahi rehna chahiye...???

VIDEOUS-mujhe laga hi tha ki tum aisa hi kuch sochogi..mere bolne ka matlab tha ki jitna waqt tum apne frnz ko,aur apne kareebiyon ko deti ho,tumhe us waqt ko kam karna chahiye...

jitna ho sake utna kam....taaki us waqt ko tum utilize kar sako apne skills ko nikharne me...and if you want any help in that, I'll help you...


VIDEOUS ki kahi baat par MAHI sochne lag gayi thi aur aisa hote dekh...


VIDEOUS-dekho,mujhe nahi lagta ki is baare me zyada sochne ki zaroorat bhi hai..tu achieve something big,we all have to make sacrifices...

haan,agar tum ye soch rahi ho ki agar tumne apne friends ko kam waqt diya toh wo bura maan jayenge toh fir mere hisaab se toh true friends mom dad ki tarah hote hain..

jaise humare ache progress ke liye hamare mom dad hume khudse door boarding tak me bhejne se nahi katrate thik waise hi true friends bhi hamare passion ko aur us passion ke liye hume jo karna hota hai,un saari chizen ko naa sirf samajhte hain balki support bhi karte hain...

example main khud hun....mai jahan se hun,wahan par mera bhi ek jigri dost tha..hum bachpan se hi saath the aur jab usse pata chala ki mai yahan aane waala hun toh woh bohot sad ho gaya tha par phir bhi he supported me...


EXAMPLE.... VIDEOUS ne jo example diya tha,wo us nishane ki tarah tha jo apne spot ko kabhi miss nahi karta,yahi wajah thi ki MAHI ki soch aur gehri hone lagi thi..


MAHI-shaam dhal rahi hai...i think mujhe jaana chahiye..bye....


apni baat keh MAHI uthi aur apni soch ke saath apne ABODE ki taraf nikal gayi...

wahin uske uthkar jaate hi....


VIDEOUS-mai bhale hi tere dimag me jhaank nahi sakta par khel toh sakta hun...

tujhe apne saath mila paaun yaa naa mila paaun,par baakiyon se toh tujhe mai alag kar hi dunga....

teri taakat ki hadh nahi dikhti mujhe par akela kar tujhe mentally kamzor
bana dunga mai....






PLACE-THE BREEZE




WOW MAN....KYA JAGAH HAI YAAR.....


saamne ke scene ko dekh hadh se zyada impressed ho kahi thi ye baat SLUNDER ne....

THE BREEZE....

ye ek arificial SEA SWIMMING POOL zone hai.....

kareeb 20 acre me faila ha ye pool zone...

jisme se 9 acre artificial lehre paida karte sea ne ghera hua hai aur baaki bache 1 acre me snack stalls aur group chill areas bane hue hain...

aur filhal shaam ka waqt hai...unlike STELLARS, GROOMERS ko chaaron LUXURY GATEWAYS milte hain,har gateway ka use wo mahine me sirf do baar hi kar sakte hain...

ETHRIUM ke is mahine ka use ACCHUTA, SLUNDER aur RAAZ bowling club aur poison pub me kar chuke the isiliye aaj unhone BLUE COIN ko use me laane ki sochi aur isiliye hi teeno yahan THE BREEZE naam ke is ARTIFICIAL SEA SWIMMING POOL zone me aaye hain aur yahan ka behatarin nazara dekh SLUNDER ne ye baat kahi thi jispar...


ACCHUTA-bhai,ekdum khari baat boli hai tune.... pehli baar itni khubsoorat machliyon ko paani ke andar nahi,baahar ghumte dekha hai...


chaaron taraf kaafi beautiful girls thi jinhe dekh ACCHUTA ne ye baat kai thi jispar...


SLUNDER-abbe tharki..saale jab dekho ladkiyon ko dekhkar laar tapkata rehta hai..

mai saamne bane us arificial sea pool ki baat kar raha hun...

ACCHUTA-yahi toh fark hai tujhme aur mujhme..

tujhe arificial chizen pasand aati hain aur mujhe,kudrat ki banayi natural khubsoorati bhaati hai...


ACCHUTA ki baat par SLUNDER kuch kahe ki usse pehle hi...


MAI-ek ek thappad kaafi hoga shayad tum dono ke dimag ko aur mooh se har waqt nikalne waale bakwas ko thikane lagane ke liye...


waise toh baat maine normally kahi thi,par jo kahi thi,uske sach hone ke baad ke haal ko feel kar...


ACCHUTA-haan naa bhai,ye saala jab dekho bakwas hi pelta rehta hai..

ab jo karne aayen woh karna chhod baaki sab karega ye..


ye bol bina kuch sune sea pool ki taraf bhaaga ACCHUTA aur uske piche rook bolta hua doud pada SLUNDER...

wahin un dono ke piche chalta hua mai bhi pool ke paas pahunch gaya...


ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ne ab tak apna top wear utar diya tha aur kood chuke the sea pool me aur unke piche maine bhi apna t-shirt utara aur paani me utar gaya.....

thik ussi waqt humse thodi door...


WOW...NOW THAT'S WHAT I CALL REAL HOTNESS...


ye shabd dheere se hi sahi,par nikle the MORANA ke mooh se jo pool se thodi door right taraf bane ek group rest me apne group ke saath baithi hui thi...

wahin uske baaju me baithe ANWIR ne uski baat thik se suni nahi isiliye..


ANWIR-hmm, what..???kuch kaha kya tune...???

MORANA-nothing..mai pool se aati hun...

ANWIR-arre,abhi toh aaye hain,fir mood ho gaya kya..???

MORANA-asli mood toh abhi hua hai..tu chill kar,mai aa rahi hun..


apni baat keh MORANA pool ki taraf yaa fir ye kahun ki meri taraf chal padi...

wahin MORANA jis taraf gayi,jab ANWIR ne us taraf dekha toh usse pool ke us area me mai dikha jiske baad wo MORANA ke mood me aane ka reason samajh gaya...

wo bhi uthkar MORANA ki taraf aane hi waala tha ki...


BUDDY,THIS IS THE GUY I WAS TALKING ABOUT...


ANWIR ke ek friend ne kahi thi ye baat usse jisse sun ANWIR ki apne dost ke saath khade ladke par nazar gayi aur..


ANWIR-toh tu hai VALDIS.....




MORANA:-



MAI-what are you doing...???


apne peeth par kisike touch ko feel kar jab mai piche palta toh dekha ki MORANA theek mere piche khadi mujhe dekh rahi hai...

aur isiliye maine ye baat kahi jispar....


MORANA-paani thanda hai toh socha ki kuch HOT touch kar lun...


ab MORANA ka haath mere chest par tha jisse mai hathane hi wala tha ki tabhi meri nazar MORANA ke theek piche thodi door baithe ANWIR par gayi jo hume hi dekh raha tha aur filhal uski aankhon me ghussa tha aur ye dekh..

MAI-hotness sirf tumne chhua hai..mehsoos karna baaki hai...

MORANA-toh karado mehsoos....i would love to feel it...


MORANA ki baat khatm hote hi maine uske waist ko pakda,usse kheecha aur uske agle hi pal hum dono pool ke paani ke andar the...

filhal hum 5 feet paani me hi the par kuch aage paani gehra hone waala tha..

mai filhal ulta tha aur MORANA mujhse chipke mere upar..usse issi position me pakad mai paani ke andar hi andar aage badh gaya tha...

meri body ek saamp ki tarah lachakte hue jisse MORANA ki bhi body judi hui thi,usse ragad khaa aage badh rahi thi..


aapko yaad hoga ki EARTH me apne orphanage ke aage ek lake tha jahan mai ghanto baitha karta tha..

ussi lake me maine ye karna sikha tha...is tarah swim karne se thand me bhi ek garmahat mehsoos hoti hai aur kyunki meri body se MORANA ki body constant ragad khaa rahi thi, isiliye filhal is garmahat ko wo feel kar paa rahi thi...

tairte hue maine ek pura circle cross kar liya tha . kyunki paani crystal clear tha aur iske andar bhi dekha jaa sakta tha,isiliye is pure douran MORANA lagatar mujhe dekh rahi thi...

paani ke andar hi andar tairte hue hum wapas wahin pahunch chuke the jahan se ye swimming humne shuru kiya tha aur isiliye paani k baahar aa...


MAI-garmi....mehsoos hui......

MORANA-bohot ache se..par thoda sa aur mehsoos karna reh gaya hai...

MAI-so once more...

MORANA-zaroorat nahi hai..bacha part yahin pura ho jayega..


ye bol apne honth mere honthon ki taraf badha diye MORANA ne....




BACK TO ANWIR:-




VIDEOUS-us raat tune jo un dono
WEAKLINGS looser ke saath kiya tha,wo bataya mujhe isne...

and i like it...wo baat bhi mujhe pasand aayi aur tu bhi.. isiliye aaj se tu hamare group me...the strongest and the most powerful group of CHOSENS...

so welcome to the gang...

VALDIS-thanks brother..maine bhi bohot suna hai aapke group ke baare me and it's an honor to join you guyzz...

ANWIR-aa baith..have a drink...


VALDIS turant ANWIR ke baaju me baith gaya jiske baad ek ek drink ke saath wo apni baaton me lag gaye..

par un baaton ke dauran VALDIS ne gaur kiya ki ANWIR baar baar pool ki taraf dekh raha hai aur jab us direction me uski bhi nazar gayi toh wo chownka kyunki wahan khada tha RAAZ MORANA ke saath aur uske thode aage apne me hi khoye masti kar rahe the ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER....


VALDIS-ye toh wo looser RAAZ hai..ye MORANA ke saath kya kar raha hai...???

ANWIR-tu jaanta hai isse...???

VALDIS-ofcourse..isse hi maarna chahta tha mai us raat par ye nahi aaya toh iske dono doston ko,jo uske thode aage khade hain,unhe maara maine...

ANWIR-toh isse kyun chhod diya..baat me mouka dekh isse bhi baja deta...


ab ANWIR ko VALDIS ye toh bata nahi sakta tha ki wo RAAZ ko maarna toh door,hila bhi nai paaya tha.. impression down ho jaani thi lounde ki toh isiliye....


ANWIR-bohot baar try kiya maine par ye saala kabhi akele me mila hi nahi..har waqt kuch log hote hi the iske saath...

ANWIR-aaj toh akela hi hai...bas wo dono looser dost hi hain saath me...aaj iski bhi marmmat kar de...

VALDIS-karna toh chahta hun brother par ek problem hai..wo kya hai naa ki i like a girl aur wo ladki iski achi friend hai toh agar maine isse maara toh ye usse bata dega aur agar aisa hua toh meri love story shuru hone se pehle hi khatm ho jaayegi....

brother,kya tum ye kar sakte ho..isse mai saamne bhi nahi aaunga aur meri khwahish bhi puri ho jaayegi...

ANWIR-bilkul chote..ab tu hamare group me hain...itna toh banta hai...




BACK TO MORANA:-




MAI-itni bhi kya jaldi hai...honth mile,isse pehle hum thik se mil len toh behtar hoga...


isse pehle ki MORANA ke honth mere honthon ko chhute,maine apne honth ke aage ek ungli rakh di jisse takraye MORANA ke honth..


wahin meri baat sun MORANA ne meri us ungli ko hi chum liya aur...


MORANA-MORANA ko mana kar rahe ho tum...waise toh ye meri khubsoorati ki insult hai par i like tough guyzz...

intezar rahega agli mulakat ka...


ye bol meri wo ungli jo ab bhi mere aur MORANA ke darmayan thi,usse halka sa lick kar palat gayi MORANA....

aur aisa hote hi..


MAI-chalo guyzzz...kaafi late ho gaya hai..


meri baat sun ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER jinhone mere aur MORANA ka pura action miss kiya tha,wo meri taraf palte aur fir we were out of the pool....




GROOMERS PARKING:-



ACCHUTA-bhai,maza aa gaya yaar.....

SLUNDER-haan,mujhe toh laga tha ki tu pura time ladkiyon ko taadne me hi nikal dega..

par thank god aisa nahi hua...

ACCHUTA-saale,mai kya bol raha hun aur tu kya bol raha hai...???maza aaya ki nahi,ye bata...

SLUNDER-arre puch mat bhai..bohot maza aaya...


ABHI TOH AUR MAZA AAYEGA LOOSERS....


hamare piche se aayi thi ye awaaz jisse sun jab hum piche palte toh dekha ki kuch 10 bande hamare paas aa rahe the...


ACCHUTA-ab ye kaun hai yaar.saalon ki aankhon me humare liye khunnas dikh raha hai...

SLUNDER-abbe ye PHASE 3 ke WICKEDS hain..pure CHOSENS ke sabse bad group ke bande hain ye...

maine bohot suna hai in logon ke baare me..

ACCHUTA-par humne inka kya bigada hai bhai jo hume aise ghoor rahe hain ye....???

SLUNDER-abbe WICKEDS hain ye..inhe reason nahi chahiye hota kisika kuch bigadne ke liye..

par fir bhi, right side ke dono teeno bando ko dekh..ye teeno wahin hain jinhone us raat VALDIS ka saath diya tha hume maarne ke liye...

ACCHUTA-abbe haan...saalon ne us din gher kar marwaya tha hume..par koi nahi,aaj RAAZ hai humare saath..aaj pelenge inhe...


yahan ye dono baat kar rahe the aur wahan ANWIR aur uske chele chalte hue thik humare saamne aakar khade ho chuke the...

ANWIR thik mere saamne khada meri aankhon me jhaank mujhe ghoor raha tha par jab usse meri aankhon me naa dar dikha naa pareshani toh...


ANWIR-kya baat hai...mujhe toh laga tha ki jab mai tere saamne aaunga toh meri aankhon me dekh teri aankhon me khouf aa jaayega par tu toh bilkul dara nahi....

ACCHUTA-beta dar kya hota hai,ye abhi jaanta nahi tu..abhi tu isse ghur raha hai, agar ye tujhe ghoorne lag gaya naa toh apna lu**d apni hi ga**d me ghusa baithega tu..


ACCHUTA ki baat sun ANWIR kuch kahe ki usse pehle un teeno me se ek jinhone VALDIS ki us raat madad ki thi,wo bol utha...


LADKA-bhai,iski zuban bohot zyada chalti hai..us din bhi ye iske baare me aisi hi baatein kar raha tha ki agar ye wahan hota toh hum kuch nahi kar paate...

ANWIR-acha..itni badi top hai ye...zara dekhen toh....


CHATTAKKHHH......


apni soul ki taakat se maara tha ye thappad ANWIR ne mujhe jiske baad mai ghumte hue piche jaa gira...

thappad ke impact se mere gaal phat chuke the,itna hi nahi mujhe chakkar bhi aa gaya tha jiski wajah se niche girne ke baad mai uth bhi nahi paa raha tha..

wahin ANWIR ke thappad se meri haalat dekh shocked ho gaye ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER..

unhe waise bhi kuch dino se meri haalat dekh mujhpar shak ho raha tha aur abhi jo hua tha,usse dekh inhe yakin ho gaya tha ki something is wrong with me...

khair,wo dono turant mere paas aaye aur..


ACCHUTA-RAAZ...tu thik hai bhai..yaar tujhe ho kya gaya hai..aise aire gaire bhi maar de rahe hain tujhe...


ACHHUTA ki baat sun bhadak gaye ANWIR aur uske saathi...


LADKA 2 -saale teri zubaan bohot chalti hai..teri toh aaj special marramat karunga mai..

ANWIR-ye dono tum sabke. bas is RAAZ ko koi haath nahi lagayega...ye mera shikar hai....

ye bol ANWIR ne apna haath meri taraf kiya aur apne ANGRY REFINER ke tahat SAMPURN KRODHAM spell ke saath ASUKA spell ko merge kar man hi man uccharit kiya ANWIR ne jiske baad uske haathon se ray nikal meri hody par padi aur....

meri puri body dard ki adhikta se vibrate karne lagi....pura sharir kaamp raha tha mera par ANWIR lagatar is pain spell ko mujhpar use karta raha...

wahin ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER par toh ANWIR ke saathiyon ne spell bola hi nahi tha...

wo sab un dono par laath aur ghusse barsane lage the..

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ne retaliate karne ki koshish ki par WICKEDS jaise strong bando ke aage unki chalne toh wali thi nahi isiliye kuch hi seconds me unka retaliation kham ho gaya aur aisa hote hi wo dono bhi un sabke punching bags ban chuke the...

pure lahun luhan ho chuke the ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER aur unki haakat dekh..


ANWIR-yaar, taklif bhale tujhe zyada ho rahi hai par jo haalat tere in dono doston ki hain naa,mujhe tujhe bhi us haalat me dekhna hai...


apni baat keh mujhe apne magic se khada kiya ANWIR ne aur aisa hote hi..

DHOOB,DHOOB,DHOOB......


ek ke baad ek kamsekam 50 punches maare mere chehre,chest aur pet me ANWIR ne jiske baad meri haalat ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER se bhi kharab ho chuki thi..

par in sabke beech ek chiz thi jisne ANWIR ko hairani me daala hua tha aur wo ye ki itni maar aur punishment ke baad bhi mere mooh se ek awaaz nahi nikli thi..

ye pura torture maine chupchaap saha tha....khair, ANWIR ke punch se dil bharte hi usne apna magic hata diya jiske baad meri body lehrate hue niche gir gayi...


ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER,wo dono toh pehle hi behosh ho chuke the,aur ab neeche girte hi meri aankhen bhi band ho gayi jiske baad ek baar meri haalat par has ANWIR aur uske saathi wapas jaane ke liye palat gaye....

par un sabne kuch kadam hi aage badhaye the ki tabhi....


MAI-A...N....W.....I......R.......


apni bachi saari taakat batorkar cheekha tha mai jiske baad jab ANWIR palta toh hairan ho gaya...

reason...

mai apni jagah par khade hone ki kohish kar raha tha jisme baar baar mai ladkhada jaa raha tha par finally mai khada ho gaya aur....


MAI-itna toh maar ki mai kamsekam behosh toh ho jaaun....

taaki tujhe jaan se maarte waqt mujhe ye yaad rahe ki kamsekam tune kuch bura kiya tha mere saath...

kyunki abhi tak jo tune kiya hai,wo toh mere liye bas training thi....ab iske liye tujhe jaan se maar dun,toh maza nahi aayega mujhe...


bohot simple way me kahi thi maine ye saari baat par intensity ab bhi meri baaton me pehle jaisi hi thi jisse sun ek pal ke liye hi sahi, ANWIR aur uske saath uske saathi boukhla se gaye the..


ANWIR-kya bakwas kar raha hai tu...training....!!!kaisi training...????

MAI- REFINER activation ke waqt bohot taklif hoti hai...sehen nahi hota wo pain aur task adhure me hi reh jaata hai...

tere spell se jo pain hua tha mujhe,fir tere physical hone se mila pain,wo pain bhi kuch kuch waisa hi tha par dekh bina mooh khole bina behosh hue jhel liya maine sab...

LADKA 2-abbe kya bakwas kiye jaa raha hai...rook teri toh mai...

MAI-na na na na... tujhe ye dono maarenge..meri maar tu seh nahi paayega...

mujhe isne maara hai,aage bhi haath yahi lagayega....mool kisi aur ko,aur byaj kisi aur ko nahi diya jaata..

mool tune diya hai,byaj bhi tu hi de.....waada raha,ek naa ek din sudh samet chuka dunga mai....


hakke halke lehrate hue bol raha tha mai ye saari baatien jisse sun behad ghusse se aage badha ANWIR aur...

ek ke baad kayi punches diye usne mujhe aur fir finally mere sir ko usne apne knee par maara aur aisa hote hi kisi kate ped ki tarah jhoomta hua gira mai...

firse mujhe laath maarne ke liye usne pair aage badhaye hi the ki tabhi.....


LADKA 1-rehne de yaar..aur maara toh mar jaayega...


apne dost ki baat sun ANWIR apne pair wapas kheenchne ko hua par tabhi maine uske pair ko hawa me hi pakad liya...

aankhen bhaari ho chuki thi meri, behoshi mujhpar sawar hone hi waali thi par behosh hote hote mere mooh se nikle aakhri lines...


MAI- mai toh zinda hun par.....



galatfehmi mat paalna ki tujhe,
zinda CHHOD DUNGA MAI....

wo hawa jisse tu saans leta hai,
uska rookh bhi MOD DUNGA MAI...

sharir toh teri kategi hi par itna kaafi nahi,


jism ke saath saath teri rooh ko bhi,
NICHOD DUNGA MAI.....











AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......










AAPKA APNA V...J......
 
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