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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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"Be The Wrong That Makes Everything Right"....
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MASTER FALLON KE SAAMNE EK BOHOT HI PECHIDA TASK RAKHTE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF VIDEOUS AUR RAAZ APNI ALOUKIK SHAKTIYAN RAAZ KE SWORD ME CHUPPA DETE HAIN.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-71



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-CHOSENS



STELLAR'S CLASS:-






VIDEOUS....TUMNE APNE FIRST REFINER KI AVERAGE POWER KO TRIGGER KAR LIYA HAI..ISILIYE I THINK TUMHARI SPELLS PRACTICE KI CLASS SHURU KAR DENI CHAHIYE...

PURI NAHI TOH KAMSEKAM THODI BOHOT MAGIC TOH TUM KARNA SIKH HI JAAOGE....

class shuru hote hi REGIS ne VIDEOUS se kahi thi ye baat jisse sun...


VIDEOUS-sorry WHIZZDER... par average power borrowing jaisi hoti hai jo sirf loosers ki suit karti hai....

and i like to own things...yaa toh mujhe complete power chahiye yaa fir kuch bhi nahi chahiye...

isiliye, SPELLS aur magic try karne se pehle mai apne first REFINER ki puri power ko activate karna chahunga...


VIDEOUS ki baat sun saare SAVENTS uski baaton ke baare me gossip karne lage the par in SAVENTS me MAHI nahi thi....

aksar jab aap sabse aage hote hain aur aise me koi aur khudko best hone ke liye self nominate kar deta hai toh aise me halka sa ego hurt ho hi jaata hai par MAHI ke case me iska ulta tha..

wo VIDEOUS ki baat sun khush ho gayi thi kyunki uski baat se MAHI ko lagne laga tha ki unlike PHASE 1,is PHASE me usse koi tagda competition dene waala hai...

par is beech jahan VIDEOUS ki baat yaa fir ye kahun ki uska ATTITUDE REGIS aur SAPIUS ko impress nahi kar paaya wahin MABBA VIDEOUS ke jawab se bohot khush hui thi...

aur isiliye...


MABBA-i like what you said VIDEOUS...par dekhna ye hai ki kya tumhari baatein sirf baatein hain yaa fir you can back up your words..


MABBA ki baat yaa fir ye kahun ki unke challenge ko sun VIDEOUS bas halka muskura diya....


SAPIUS-ok then.. REFINER activation process shuru kijiye...


SAPIUS ke bolte hi sabhi SAVENTS ki CEREBRATION process pause ho chuki thi aur aisa hote uccharit hua un sabke man me pehla REFINER SPELL.....

SAMPURN AANANDITAM.....

jiske baad hua sabme pain aur hasi ka samagam....

aur isiliye sirf 10 se 15 seconds ke andar aadhi se zyadi class ki aankhen khul chuki thi.

25 second hote hote VALDIS ki aur 40 seconds ke andar MABEL aur ALFREEN ki bhi aankhen khul gayi...

par MAHI aur VIDEOUS ki ankhen ab bhi band thi....


MAHI....jiska focus aaj kuch zyada hi strong lag raha tha,usne kuch hi seconds me 1 minute ke paused CEREBRATION ka waqt pura kar liya...

jahan ye hota dekh teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS khush ho rahe the, wahin MAHI ki haalat kharab hone lagi thi...

ek minute cross hote hi uske andar ek halki si rosni dikhne lagi thi jiske kareeb usse jaana tha..

wo roshni hi wo REFINER power thi jiske kareeb jaate hi MAHI ki bhi average power ACTIVATE ho jaati par ye achieve karna bohot hard tha...

jaise jaise MAHI us roshni ke kareeb jaa rahi thi,usse aisa lag raha tha jaise koi uske aatma ko hasa hasa kar aur at the same time tadpa tadpa kar maar raha hai aur isiliye.....

aankhen khul gayi MAHI ki jiske baad...SHIT.......

khudpar bhadakte hue kaha MAHI ne ye par fir...


MABBA-congrats MAHI...aaj tume 1 minute 30 seconds tak apne CEREBRATION ko paused rakha...

aur ye bohot badi baat hai...sirf 30 seconds aur and i am sure ki tum ye kar logi....

bohot jald tum bhi VIDEOUS.......


ye naam lete hue MABBA ki gardan class ke aakhir ki taraf ghumi jahan aaj VIDEOUS baitha tha aur aisa hote hi unke aage ki baat unke andar hi reh gayi...

wahin MABBA ko yun achanak chup hota dekh dono WHIZZDERS aur saath hi sabhi SAVENTS bhi MABBA ki jis tara nazar thi,wahan dekhne lage aur aisa hote hi un sabki aankhen bhi badi ho gayi...

reason.....

VIDEOUS ki aankhen abhi bhi band thi aur apne jabde bheenche dard ko sehte hue wo laga hua tha...

MAHI ne dedh minute tak apne CEREBRATION ko pause rakha tha aur uske baad MABBA ki kuch der ki gayi baatein jiska matlab tha ki VIDEOUS apne hi purane record ko todte hue 2 minute cross kar chuka tha.....

wahin VIDEOUS.....jo aaj pehli baar bina apni ALOUKIK shaktiyon ke tha, wo SAVENT ko hone waale aseem dard aur uske andar hone waale har wo manupalation jiski wajah se uska task adhura reh jaata tha,usse feel kar paa raha tha...

and it was damn tough for him....bhale hi human emotions se uthne waale pain par master kar liya tha usne,par at the moment, REFINER jo ki khud ek strong emotion tha,usse uthne waale dard ko sehna bohot mushkil tha uske liye...

baaki SAVENTS ko REFINER aur SOUL se jo pain feel hota tha,usse zyada feel ho raha tha VIDEOUS ko jisse jhelte hue wo laga hua tha par ab ye sab uske liye bhi bohot zyada hone laga tha...

dard ki adhikta se uski band aankhon ke side se paani nikalne laga tha...

jabde ek dusre se itni sakhti ae bhidne lage the maano ek dusre se panja lada rahe hon...

pura chehra tharthara raha tha VIDEOUS ka aur jab ye thartharahat hadh se zyada badhne lagi toh..


UMMMMMMMM...AAAHHHHHHHHH.........


pehle ek lamba groan aur uske baad ek cheekh ke saath aankh khul gayi VIDEOUS ki jiske baad...


CHATAAAKHHH.....


khudke gaal par hi ek tez tamacha maar diya VIDEOUS ne jispar sabhi SAVENTS shocked ho gaye...


REGIS-hey hey hey..relax boy...hota hai...tumne pure 3 minute tak apne CEREBRATION ko paused rakha tha...

itni kam waqt me itni der tak pehle kabhi kisine aisa nahi kiya hai...so you should be proud of yourself....

VIDEOUS-khud se jhuth bolne ki aadat nahi hai mujhe....haar kitne hi kam margin se kyun naa hui ho,haar haar hoti hai...

aur ek request hai WHIZZDER aapse..dobara kabhi mujhe kisi aur ka example mat dijiyega...

pehle kisne kya kiya hai,kitne waqt me kiya hai,kaun kitna laayak hai,kiski hadh kahan tak pahunchi hai,i dont give a shit about it....

aap log jo bhi examples dete hain,wo mujhe ek line ki tarah lagti hai..

wo line jisme SAVENTS khade hote hain but i dont stand in anybody's line...

MY PATH IS RAW AND I OWN MY DESTINATION....


aankhen,kaan aur baaki jo bhi phat sakta tha,wo sab faade sun rahe the sab VIDEOUS ko...

VIDEOUS ki baaton me ek authority thi,ek aisa boldness tha jisne sabhi ko clean bowled kar diya tha...

wahin ye sari baatein VIDEOUS ne REGIS ke aankhon me jhaank kar kahi thi jiski intensity feel kar andar tak hil gaya tha REGIS...

REGIS hi kya, MABBA aur SAPIUS bhi VIDEOUS ki baat sun ek trance jaisi haalat me chale gaye the..

jab VIDEOUS bol raha tha tab unhe aisa laga tha jaise wo SAVENT hain aur VIDEOUS unka WHIZZDER....

par in sabke beech VIDEOUS ki haalat ajeeb hi thi...bhale hi as a SAVENT,usne aaj jo lagatar 3 minute tak paused CEREBRATION rakha tha,wo extraordinary tha,par uski nazar me aaj pehli wo haara tha..

aur isiliye,apni baat bol wo rooka nahi,turant class se nikal gaya...

waise class khatm karne ka waqt bhi lagbhag ho hi gaya tha isiliye VIDEOUS ke nikalte hi MABBA ne class khatm kiya aur dono WHIZZDERS ke saath nikal gayi....


MABEL-ye VIDEOUS kuch zyada hi overconfident nahi ho raha...???

MAHI-agar overconfidence se uske jaisi performance hoti hai toh mujhe lagta hai ki sabhi ko overconfident hona chahiye...

ALFREEN-wo sab toh theek hai par aaj uska ATTITUDE kuch alag lag raha tha,haina..???

MAHI-mujhe lagta hai ki wo aaj thaan kar aaya tha ki anyhow wo apne first REFINER ke full power ko active kar hi lega aur kyunki aisa nahi hua, isiliye wo thoda hyper ho gaya...

MABEL-hyper...pagal lag raha tha wo mujhe aaj..khudhi ko thappad maar raha tha...

MAHI-toh galat kya hai...??yahan toh log bina saamne waale ki galti ke usse maarte hain,toh fir VIDEOUS ne toh sirf khudko hi maara tha...


mere baare me soch kahi thi ye baat MAHI ne jispar...


ALFREEN-kiski baat kar rahi hai..??kaun kisko maarta hai...??


ALFREEN ki baat sun MAHI ko realize hua ki usne galat jagah ye baat bol di hai aur isiliye...


MAHI-arre ek general baat bol rahi hun...kitne kisse sune hain ab tak yahan ke baare me ki powerful SAVENTS kamzor SAVENTS ko bully karte hain,unhe maarte hain...

wahi example diya maine..

MABEL-haan ye toh hai...par chhodo naa yaar ye sab baatein...tum log bhi kaun si baaten lekar baith gaye ho...

MAHI-waah,topic khud hi uthati hai aur fir ilzam humpar daalti hai..rook toh zara...


ye bol lapki MAHI MABEL ki taraf par MABEL bhi turant parking ki taraf bhaag li aur uske piche bhaage MAHI aur ALFREEN....

wahin class se sabse pehle nikle VIDEOUS ne pehle toh apne ABODE jaane ki sochi par phir uske dimag me ghuma mera thobda aur aisa hote hi uske kadam aur direction change ho gaye aur wo chal pada GROOMERS class ki taraf....





GROOMERS CLASS:-




HOW ARE U FEELING TODAY,RAAZ.....???


class me enter karte hi jab WHIZZ EDWINA ki nazar mujhpar padi toh pucha unhone mujhse ye sawal jispar...


MAI-i am good WHIZZ....

ROVEL-agar chaho toh aaj ka din bhi break le sakte ho... REFINER TRIGGER karne me soul AMPLIFICATION ka use zyada hota hai toh aise me tumhari condition bigad sakti hai....


ROVEL ki baat par mai kuch kahun usse pehle hi....


ACCHUTA-haan bhai...tu rest le le.... puri taraf sahi lage,tabhi class start kariyo..


dheere se mere kaan ke paas aakar kahi ye baat ACCHUTA ne jispar maine usse ghur kar dekha par jahan mere ghurne se pehle wo dar jaaya karta tha,ab aisa kuch bhi nahi hua tha...

infact kal SHAILA ke jaane ke kuch der baad hi ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER,wo dono hi mere apartment me aa gaye the aur tabhi se ye haal hai...

kal aate hi dono ne mujhpar dheron sawal ki bombardment kar di thi...

dono ko ye samajh nahi aa raha tha ki mujhe bhala kaise kuch ho sakta hai jispar maine sahi waqt aane par bata dene ki baat kahi thi...

jiske baad meri health se related toh un dono ne koi baat nahi ki par fir din bhar wo dono mere aaspaas hi rahe...

unke lagatar mere liye concern ko dekh mere andar kuch ghumne laga tha jisse mujhe behad taklif ho rahi thi..

mai jaanta tha ki wo human emotions hai jo situation ke according mujhe mehsoos hona chahte hain aur meri SWORD me chhupi meri ALOUKIK shaktiyan un emotions se takrakar mujhe dard de rahi hain par mai kar bhi kya sakta tha...

har thodi der me SHAILA ka diya wo kaadha jo usne bohot si choti choti shishiyon me bhar diya tha,mai peeta raha tha...

par excessive dose ki wajah se mujhe shaam hote hote hi neend aa gayi thi jo aaj subah hi khuli thi...

par mere uthne ke kuch der baad hi ek baar firse ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER dono mere apartment me tapak pade the aur tab se lekar ab tak mujhe alag alag tariko se rest lene ke liye pinch kar chuke the ye dono...

abhi bhi apni baat keh sadi hui shakal liye mujhe dekh raha tha ACCHUTA jispar ek baar usse ghur maine nazar saamne ROVEL ki taraf ki aur...


MAI-i am completely fit WHIZZDER...

PETRA-allright than...shuru karo fir...

remember,aage badhne ke liye,apne apne metaphysical capabilities ko agle step par lejaane ke liye kamsekam kisi ek REFINER ko activate karna bohot zaroori hai....

bhale hi average power growth jo ki 2 minute par hota hai,wahin tak kyun naa ho,par hona zaroori hai...


WHIZZ ki baat sun hum sabhi GROOMERS ne apni apni aankh band kar li aur saath hi pause kar liya apna apna CEREBRATION...

aaj pehli baar tha jab maine complete clean way me ek normal SAVENT ki tarah apne CEREBRATION ko pause kiya tha aur ab aage ki kriya me baakiyon ke saath unhiki tarah participate kar raha tha..

waise toh meri shaktiyon ka mere paas naa hona mere liye ek negetive baat thi,par fir bhi mujhe bura nahi lag raha tha...

reason...

wo kehte hain naa ki smooth road never makes a good driver...

bas,itni si hi baat thi...true potential jaanane ka sabse acha tarika hota hai negetive mohoul me jab waqt aapke saath naa ho,tab perform karke dikhana...

ab mere liye ye waqt waisa hi tha....

khair,aankhen aur CEREBRATION band kiye baaki sabhi ki tarah apne SOUL me jhankte hue man hi man uccharit kiya maine....


SAMPURN AANANDITAM....

aur aisa karte hi....

HAHAHAHAHA.......

as expected,spell ke prabhav se hasi chhut gayi meri par jahan pehle ye hasi fake hoti thi wahin ab ye hasi sacchi thi...

pehli baar mai us dard ko,aur us ehsaas ko mehsoos kar raha tha jo yahan ka har SAVENT khudko nurture karne waale SPELL ko bolne ke baad mehsoos karta tha...

zor zor se has rahe the hum sab....par jahan hasi khushi ki wajah se aati thi,wahin humari hasi ke peeche chhupa hua tha dard....

wo dard jo hamara SOUL hume is SPELL ko bolne ke liye ek saza ke taur par de raha tha....

aur jaisa ki hota aaya hai,baaki SAVENTS us dard ko ek saath jhel nahi paaye aur kuch 10 seconds me hi sabki aankhen khul gayi...

par meri aankhen aur mera CEREBRATION ab tak band hi the par ye zyada der tak nahi chalne waala tha...

kyunki baaki SAVENTS ko toh bas apne apne SOUL se pain mil raha th par mujhe toh meri SOUL ke saath meri shaktiyan bhi dard de rahi thi...

aur isiliye kuch seconds aur beetne ke baad mai bhi apni ankhen kholne hi waala tha par tabhi....


PETRA-you know maine suna hai ki STELLAR me jo wo naya SAVENT aaya hai,usne apne first REFINER ko average power tak refine kar diya hai...

EDWINA-haan,ye toh maine bhi suna hai..but it's surprising..kyunki us class me MAHI hai jisne first PHASE me 25 thousand years ka highest AMPLIFICATION record banaya hai...par usse bhi us naye SAVENT ne piche chhod diya hai...

ROVEL-tum ye bhul rahi ho ki bina institution join kiye usne apne SOUL ko 2 percent tak AMPLIFY kiya hai...

aur ye bohot badi baat hai...mujhe toh lagta hai ki is PHASE me he is going to be the best SAVENT...

EDWINA-hmm...ho sakta hai....waise naam kaafi unique hai uska... VIDEOUS.....


mai paused CEREBRATION process ke beech tha jisme bahar ka kuch bhi sunayi nahi deta par process chahe kuch bhi ho,jis naam ke astitv ko mitane ke liye mera nirmaan hua hai,usse sunane se kuch bhi rok nahi sakta tha mujhe...

aur yahi wajah thi ki meri aankhen khulne se just ek second pehle jab nikla EDWINA ke mooh se ye naam toh aisa hote hi naa sirf meri aankhen khulne se rook gayi balki saath hi meri hasi bhi gayab ho chuki thi....

jabde bheench gaye the mere...aisa karne se mera dard aur badh gaya tha but wo dard us ghusse ke aage kuch nahi tha jo is naam ko sunkar mujhe aata tha...

zinda hun mai..saansein chal rahi hain meri...wajud kayam hai mera...fir us competition me jisme mera naam shaamil hai,VIDEOUS kaise best ho sakta hai...???

champion sirf ek hi hota hai... aur wo champion mai hun....

apne saare aatmbal ko nichod laga hua tha mai apne pehle target ko pura karne me...

par housla apni jagah aur reality apni jagah...meri condition kuch khaas nahi thi,uske upar sirf 2 percent AMPLIFICATION ki wajah se meri body bhi hadh se zyada pressure jo ki is activity me jhelna hota hai,uske liye taiyar nahi thi,aur yahi kaaran tha ek minute hote hote meri band aankhon ke side se aansu nikalne lage the...

itna hi nahi, meri puri body kaampne lagi aur aisa hote hi mere baaju me baithe SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA hadbada gaye....


SLUNDER-oh shit....


thoda zor se kahi thi SLUNDER ne ye baat jisse sun baaki SAVENTS jo aankh khulne ke baad bhi REFINER se uthe dard ko zabt karne me lage hue the,wo palte par saath hi saath teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS jinka dhyan mujhpar ab tak nahi pada tha, unki nazar bhi mujhpar gayi aur aisa hote hi wo teeno bhi chownk pade...

wo teeno samajh chuke the ki meri filhal weak hone ki wajah se meri body ko ye jhatke lag rahe hain par zyada hairani unhe is baat ki thi ki itne weak condition me hone ke baawjud,itne painful jhatkon ke lagne ke baad bhi mera CEREBRATION process ab tak paused hai..

aakhon me hairani liye wo aur baaki SAVENTS mujhe dekh rahe the...

wahin mere baaju me baithe ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ne mujhe chhune ke liye haath aage badhaya hi tha ki tabhi..


EDWINA-dont..... REFINER activation ke waqt puri body par ek electrical parat chaddh jaati hai isiliye usse chhuna mat usse warna shock....

OH MY GOD.....


aage ki baat bolte bolte dusre lines nikal gaye EDWINA ke mooh se...

reason...

ab tak jahan mere aankhon ke side se paani beh raha tha, wahin ab ussi jagah se halka halka khoon risne laga tha...

aur ye scene dekh sabhi hadh se zyada chownk gaye the....


ROVEL-yaar,kaisa banda hai ye...???koi itna pain kaise jhel sakta hai....????!!!

PETRA-iske aankhon se jo khun nikal raha hai,iska matlab hai ki iska body puri tarah recover nahi hua hai aur isiliye iska SOUL REFINER ko rok raha hai...

agar kuch aur seconds aisa hi chalta raha toh iska sharir fatna shuru ho jaayega...


EDWINA joki ROVEL aur PETRA ki kahi baaton ko pehle hi jaanti thi,usne bhi ab der karna sahi nahi samjha aur...


HIKSATURAHE VIDYUTATAH

REVERSE THE CURRENT


haath meri taraf kar COMMAND MODE ke tahat is SPELL ko uccharit kiya EDWINA ne aur aisa hote hi uske haathon se ek current ray nikli aur sidhe mere sharir ke chaaron taraf bane REFINER dwara banaye current se takrayi aur jab aisa hua toh...

ek saath do chizen hui...

pehli.....

REFINER ki current gayab ho gayi aur aisa hoti hi meri CEREBRATION process shuru ho gayi aur meri aankhen khul gayi..

dusri.....

AKHHWKKKKK

aankh khulte hi mere jabde jo bheeche hue the,woh ek jhatke me khul gaye aur aisa hone par mere mooh se bhi khoon ki ek ulti si ho gayi...

mai apne aap ko bilkul sambhal nahi saka aur girne ko hua par isse pehle ki aisa hota, ACCHUTA ne mujhe sambhal liya tha...

is waqt teeno WHIZZES,WHIZZDERS aur unke saath sabhi SAVENTS ne mujhe ghera hua tha..

jahan un sabhi ke ankhon me vismay bhara hua tha wahin ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER bas meri condition par tention liye hue the..

mai lambi lambi saansien le raha tha is waqt aur tabhi...


EDWINA-are you ok RAAZ.....???

MAI-aaj kiya toh kiya...dobara kabhi aisa mat karna...


haafte hue gurra utha mai EDWINA ko dekh jisse sun shock ho gayi EDWINA aur saath hi baaki sab bhi..

par isse pehle ki koi kuch kehta...


MAI-mere liye kya sahi hai,kya galat hai,kya faaydemand hai,kya nuksaan deyi hai,ye mai tay karunga....sirf mai....

isiliye dobara meri chahe jo bhi condition ho,interfere mat karna..


hadh se zyada frustrated tha mai is waqt...kyunki sirf 10 seconds hi bache the un 2 minutes me jiske baad meri REFINER average power ko touch kar jaati..

wahi power jo filhal sirf VIDEOUS ki hi activate hui hai..haan,ye sach tha ki shayad usse pehle hi mere saare sharir ke pores me crack aa jaata aur khoon ke behne se mai behosh ho jaata,par mujhe is baat se fark nahi padta tha...

wahin meri baaton ko sun jahan SAVENTS bas hairan the,wahin WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ko meri baatien sahi nahi lagi aur isiliye...


ROVEL-tumhe pata bhi hai ki tum kya bol rahe ho...??? tumhari aankhon ke side se blood nikal raha tha...

jiska matlab tha ki wo process tumhare soul ke saath tumhare brain par bhi acccesive pressure daal raha tha...

agar kuch seconds bhi aur tum same state me rehte naa,toh tumhara brain block ho jaata...

tum mar bhi sakte the...


MAI-WHILE FACING CHALLENGES,IF YOU CANNOT PUT YOUR LIFE AT STAKE ,YOU ARE JUST AS GOOD AS DEAD....


meri baat sun chownke toh sabhi the par baat pate ki thi isiliye kisise kuch kehte bana nahi....

wahin in sabke mujhe yun gher kar khade hone se meri suffocation me izafa ho raha tha isiliye...


MAI-kya class ab bhi baaki hai...???


mere sawal se jaise ek trance se bahar aaye teeno WHIZZES aur WHIZZDER aur...


PETRA-nahi...its over...

MAI-mujhe akela rehna hai...


meri baat sun kuch der mujhe dekh wo teeno class se nikal gaye aur unke baad baaki sabhi SAVENTS bhi chale gaye the siway ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke....


MAI-tum dono bhi jaao....

ACCHUTA-par bhai teri haalat thik nahi hai...aise me tujhe akela..

MAI-dude...i dont like to repeat myself..bas itna samajh ki akela rahunga toh jaldi recover ho jaaunga..


meri baat sun ACCHUTA ne SLUNDER ko dekha jisne usse aankhon se hi chalne ka ishara kiya jiske baad wo dono bhi class se chale gaye..

wahin in saare ghatnakramo ke dauran VIDEOUS class ke bahar hi khada tha...

aur jab baaki WHIZZES, WHIZZDERS aur SAVENTS class se nikal rahe the,toh wo ek pillar ke piche chala gaya tha aur jaise hi class khaali hua,wo class ke andar aa gaya...


VIDEOUS-aam hona kitni taklif de sakta hai,haina...???


VIDEOUS ki awaaz sun mera neeche jhuka hua sir upar utha..

mere honth aur uske aas paas ki jagahon par ab bhi khoon laga hua tha jisse apne haath se saaf kiya maine aur...


MAI-kaun si taklif...???meri taklif jo is khoon ki shakal liye dikh rahi hai yaa fir teri taklif jo bhale hi dikh nahi rahi,par asar uska mujhse zyada hai...


meri baat sun halka hairan hua VIDEOUS aur...


VIDEOUS-kehna kya chahta hai...???

MAI-tera aaj ka performance kuch khaas nahi tha,right....!!!

aur tu yahan isiliye aaya hai naa kyunki tu dekhna chahta hai ki normal hone ke baad mera performance tujhe behtar hota hai yaa nahi....

VIDEOUS-aur tujhe aisa kyun laga ki mai issi liye aaya hun...??

MAI-bhale hi mai tera dimag padh nahi sakta,tere man ki baatein jaan nahi sakta par shakl dekh situation ko anylize karne ka hunar bohot acche se aata hai mujhe....

aur aaj pehli baar tere chehre par halka sa hi sahi,par frustration chalak raha hai....

aur ye tabhi possible ho sakta hai jab tu.....haara ho......

VIDEOUS-HAAR aur VIDEOUS ek hi sentence me suit nahi hote RAAZ...

aur jis haar ki tu baat kar raha hai,wo us coma ki tarah hai jisse sentence bas ek pal ke liye atakta hai,rookta nahi...

ye hurdle bhi mai paar kar hi lunga aur jaisa hota aaya hai,wo ek baar fir hoga...mai jeet jaaunga...

MAI-kitna dillusional hai tu..kaun se hamesha ki baat kar raha hai tu...???

chal,tere hi diye example se samjhata hun tujhe...

laakhon saal pehle jab tune apni shartein manwayi thi,wo waqt bhi ussi coma ki tarah tha jisse tere saamne waale sirf atke the,rooke nahi the...

par haan,tujhe hamesha ke liye rokne ki khaatir un DONO ne ek fullstop ka nirman kiya...

aur wo fullstop tere saamne khada hai....tu ussi din haar gaya tha jis din meri utppati hui thi...

VIDEOUS-bohot badi galatfehmi hai tujhe RAAZ...tera sirf naam RAAZ hai,par tere saamne jo khada hai,wo pura ka pura RAAZ hai...

tu jeet jaaye,mujhe pata hai ki iske liye tu bohot si chizen karega par mai naa haarun,iske liye mai pehle hi bohot kuch kar chuka hun...

VIDEOUS ko harane ka khwab dekhna chhod de RAAZ kyunki..



aadhi adhuri kahani
mai LIKHTA nahi....

VIDEOUS khud wo RAAZ hai,
jisse tu samajh SAKTA NAHI....

nichod mujhe jo mere astitv ko mita de,

wo nazar aur jigar tu RAKHTA NAHI....












AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......











AAPKA APNA V...J......
 
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MASTER FALLON KE SAAMNE EK BOHOT HI PECHIDA TASK RAKHTE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF VIDEOUS AUR RAAZ APNI ALOUKIK SHAKTIYAN RAAZ KE SWORD ME CHUPPA DETE HAIN.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-71



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-CHOSENS



STELLAR'S CLASS:-






VIDEOUS....TUMNE APNE FIRST REFINER KI AVERAGE POWER KO TRIGGER KAR LIYA HAI..ISILIYE I THINK TUMHARI SPELLS PRACTICE KI CLASS SHURU KAR DENI CHAHIYE...

PURI NAHI TOH KAMSEKAM THODI BOHOT MAGIC TOH TUM KARNA SIKH HI JAAOGE....

class shuru hote hi REGIS ne VIDEOUS se kahi thi ye baat jisse sun...


VIDEOUS-sorry WHIZZDER... par average power borrowing jaisi hoti hai jo sirf loosers ki suit karti hai....

and i like to own things...yaa toh mujhe complete power chahiye yaa fir kuch bhi nahi chahiye...

isiliye, SPELLS aur magic try karne se pehle mai apne first REFINER ki puri power ko activate karna chahunga...


VIDEOUS ki baat sun saare SAVENTS uski baaton ke baare me gossip karne lage the par in SAVENTS me MAHI nahi thi....

aksar jab aap sabse aage hote hain aur aise me koi aur khudko best hone ke liye self nominate kar deta hai toh aise me halka sa ego hurt ho hi jaata hai par MAHI ke case me iska ulta tha..

wo VIDEOUS ki baat sun khush ho gayi thi kyunki uski baat se MAHI ko lagne laga tha ki unlike PHASE 1,is PHASE me usse koi tagda competition dene waala hai...

par is beech jahan VIDEOUS ki baat yaa fir ye kahun ki uska ATTITUDE REGIS aur SAPIUS ko impress nahi kar paaya wahin MABBA VIDEOUS ke jawab se bohot khush hui thi...

aur isiliye...


MABBA-i like what you said VIDEOUS...par dekhna ye hai ki kya tumhari baatein sirf baatein hain yaa fir you can back up your words..


MABBA ki baat yaa fir ye kahun ki unke challenge ko sun VIDEOUS bas halka muskura diya....


SAPIUS-ok then.. REFINER activation process shuru kijiye...


SAPIUS ke bolte hi sabhi SAVENTS ki CEREBRATION process pause ho chuki thi aur aisa hote uccharit hua un sabke man me pehla REFINER SPELL.....

SAMPURN AANANDITAM.....

jiske baad hua sabme pain aur hasi ka samagam....

aur isiliye sirf 10 se 15 seconds ke andar aadhi se zyadi class ki aankhen khul chuki thi.

25 second hote hote VALDIS ki aur 40 seconds ke andar MABEL aur ALFREEN ki bhi aankhen khul gayi...

par MAHI aur VIDEOUS ki ankhen ab bhi band thi....


MAHI....jiska focus aaj kuch zyada hi strong lag raha tha,usne kuch hi seconds me 1 minute ke paused CEREBRATION ka waqt pura kar liya...

jahan ye hota dekh teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS khush ho rahe the, wahin MAHI ki haalat kharab hone lagi thi...

ek minute cross hote hi uske andar ek halki si rosni dikhne lagi thi jiske kareeb usse jaana tha..

wo roshni hi wo REFINER power thi jiske kareeb jaate hi MAHI ki bhi average power ACTIVATE ho jaati par ye achieve karna bohot hard tha...

jaise jaise MAHI us roshni ke kareeb jaa rahi thi,usse aisa lag raha tha jaise koi uske aatma ko hasa hasa kar aur at the same time tadpa tadpa kar maar raha hai aur isiliye.....

aankhen khul gayi MAHI ki jiske baad...SHIT.......

khudpar bhadakte hue kaha MAHI ne ye par fir...


MABBA-congrats MAHI...aaj tume 1 minute 30 seconds tak apne CEREBRATION ko paused rakha...

aur ye bohot badi baat hai...sirf 30 seconds aur and i am sure ki tum ye kar logi....

bohot jald tum bhi VIDEOUS.......


ye naam lete hue MABBA ki gardan class ke aakhir ki taraf ghumi jahan aaj VIDEOUS baitha tha aur aisa hote hi unke aage ki baat unke andar hi reh gayi...

wahin MABBA ko yun achanak chup hota dekh dono WHIZZDERS aur saath hi sabhi SAVENTS bhi MABBA ki jis tara nazar thi,wahan dekhne lage aur aisa hote hi un sabki aankhen bhi badi ho gayi...

reason.....

VIDEOUS ki aankhen abhi bhi band thi aur apne jabde bheenche dard ko sehte hue wo laga hua tha...

MAHI ne dedh minute tak apne CEREBRATION ko pause rakha tha aur uske baad MABBA ki kuch der ki gayi baatein jiska matlab tha ki VIDEOUS apne hi purane record ko todte hue 2 minute cross kar chuka tha.....

wahin VIDEOUS.....jo aaj pehli baar bina apni ALOUKIK shaktiyon ke tha, wo SAVENT ko hone waale aseem dard aur uske andar hone waale har wo manupalation jiski wajah se uska task adhura reh jaata tha,usse feel kar paa raha tha...

and it was damn tough for him....bhale hi human emotions se uthne waale pain par master kar liya tha usne,par at the moment, REFINER jo ki khud ek strong emotion tha,usse uthne waale dard ko sehna bohot mushkil tha uske liye...

baaki SAVENTS ko REFINER aur SOUL se jo pain feel hota tha,usse zyada feel ho raha tha VIDEOUS ko jisse jhelte hue wo laga hua tha par ab ye sab uske liye bhi bohot zyada hone laga tha...

dard ki adhikta se uski band aankhon ke side se paani nikalne laga tha...

jabde ek dusre se itni sakhti ae bhidne lage the maano ek dusre se panja lada rahe hon...

pura chehra tharthara raha tha VIDEOUS ka aur jab ye thartharahat hadh se zyada badhne lagi toh..


UMMMMMMMM...AAAHHHHHHHHH.........


pehle ek lamba groan aur uske baad ek cheekh ke saath aankh khul gayi VIDEOUS ki jiske baad...


CHATAAAKHHH.....


khudke gaal par hi ek tez tamacha maar diya VIDEOUS ne jispar sabhi SAVENTS shocked ho gaye...


REGIS-hey hey hey..relax boy...hota hai...tumne pure 3 minute tak apne CEREBRATION ko paused rakha tha...

itni kam waqt me itni der tak pehle kabhi kisine aisa nahi kiya hai...so you should be proud of yourself....

VIDEOUS-khud se jhuth bolne ki aadat nahi hai mujhe....haar kitne hi kam margin se kyun naa hui ho,haar haar hoti hai...

aur ek request hai WHIZZDER aapse..dobara kabhi mujhe kisi aur ka example mat dijiyega...

pehle kisne kya kiya hai,kitne waqt me kiya hai,kaun kitna laayak hai,kiski hadh kahan tak pahunchi hai,i dont give a shit about it....

aap log jo bhi examples dete hain,wo mujhe ek line ki tarah lagti hai..

wo line jisme SAVENTS khade hote hain but i dont stand in anybody's line...

MY PATH IS RAW AND I OWN MY DESTINATION....


aankhen,kaan aur baaki jo bhi phat sakta tha,wo sab faade sun rahe the sab VIDEOUS ko...

VIDEOUS ki baaton me ek authority thi,ek aisa boldness tha jisne sabhi ko clean bowled kar diya tha...

wahin ye sari baatein VIDEOUS ne REGIS ke aankhon me jhaank kar kahi thi jiski intensity feel kar andar tak hil gaya tha REGIS...

REGIS hi kya, MABBA aur SAPIUS bhi VIDEOUS ki baat sun ek trance jaisi haalat me chale gaye the..

jab VIDEOUS bol raha tha tab unhe aisa laga tha jaise wo SAVENT hain aur VIDEOUS unka WHIZZDER....

par in sabke beech VIDEOUS ki haalat ajeeb hi thi...bhale hi as a SAVENT,usne aaj jo lagatar 3 minute tak paused CEREBRATION rakha tha,wo extraordinary tha,par uski nazar me aaj pehli wo haara tha..

aur isiliye,apni baat bol wo rooka nahi,turant class se nikal gaya...

waise class khatm karne ka waqt bhi lagbhag ho hi gaya tha isiliye VIDEOUS ke nikalte hi MABBA ne class khatm kiya aur dono WHIZZDERS ke saath nikal gayi....


MABEL-ye VIDEOUS kuch zyada hi overconfident nahi ho raha...???

MAHI-agar overconfidence se uske jaisi performance hoti hai toh mujhe lagta hai ki sabhi ko overconfident hona chahiye...

ALFREEN-wo sab toh theek hai par aaj uska ATTITUDE kuch alag lag raha tha,haina..???

MAHI-mujhe lagta hai ki wo aaj thaan kar aaya tha ki anyhow wo apne first REFINER ke full power ko active kar hi lega aur kyunki aisa nahi hua, isiliye wo thoda hyper ho gaya...

MABEL-hyper...pagal lag raha tha wo mujhe aaj..khudhi ko thappad maar raha tha...

MAHI-toh galat kya hai...??yahan toh log bina saamne waale ki galti ke usse maarte hain,toh fir VIDEOUS ne toh sirf khudko hi maara tha...


mere baare me soch kahi thi ye baat MAHI ne jispar...


ALFREEN-kiski baat kar rahi hai..??kaun kisko maarta hai...??


ALFREEN ki baat sun MAHI ko realize hua ki usne galat jagah ye baat bol di hai aur isiliye...


MAHI-arre ek general baat bol rahi hun...kitne kisse sune hain ab tak yahan ke baare me ki powerful SAVENTS kamzor SAVENTS ko bully karte hain,unhe maarte hain...

wahi example diya maine..

MABEL-haan ye toh hai...par chhodo naa yaar ye sab baatein...tum log bhi kaun si baaten lekar baith gaye ho...

MAHI-waah,topic khud hi uthati hai aur fir ilzam humpar daalti hai..rook toh zara...


ye bol lapki MAHI MABEL ki taraf par MABEL bhi turant parking ki taraf bhaag li aur uske piche bhaage MAHI aur ALFREEN....

wahin class se sabse pehle nikle VIDEOUS ne pehle toh apne ABODE jaane ki sochi par phir uske dimag me ghuma mera thobda aur aisa hote hi uske kadam aur direction change ho gaye aur wo chal pada GROOMERS class ki taraf....





GROOMERS CLASS:-




HOW ARE U FEELING TODAY,RAAZ.....???


class me enter karte hi jab WHIZZ EDWINA ki nazar mujhpar padi toh pucha unhone mujhse ye sawal jispar...


MAI-i am good WHIZZ....

ROVEL-agar chaho toh aaj ka din bhi break le sakte ho... REFINER TRIGGER karne me soul AMPLIFICATION ka use zyada hota hai toh aise me tumhari condition bigad sakti hai....


ROVEL ki baat par mai kuch kahun usse pehle hi....


ACCHUTA-haan bhai...tu rest le le.... puri taraf sahi lage,tabhi class start kariyo..


dheere se mere kaan ke paas aakar kahi ye baat ACCHUTA ne jispar maine usse ghur kar dekha par jahan mere ghurne se pehle wo dar jaaya karta tha,ab aisa kuch bhi nahi hua tha...

infact kal SHAILA ke jaane ke kuch der baad hi ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER,wo dono hi mere apartment me aa gaye the aur tabhi se ye haal hai...

kal aate hi dono ne mujhpar dheron sawal ki bombardment kar di thi...

dono ko ye samajh nahi aa raha tha ki mujhe bhala kaise kuch ho sakta hai jispar maine sahi waqt aane par bata dene ki baat kahi thi...

jiske baad meri health se related toh un dono ne koi baat nahi ki par fir din bhar wo dono mere aaspaas hi rahe...

unke lagatar mere liye concern ko dekh mere andar kuch ghumne laga tha jisse mujhe behad taklif ho rahi thi..

mai jaanta tha ki wo human emotions hai jo situation ke according mujhe mehsoos hona chahte hain aur meri SWORD me chhupi meri ALOUKIK shaktiyan un emotions se takrakar mujhe dard de rahi hain par mai kar bhi kya sakta tha...

har thodi der me SHAILA ka diya wo kaadha jo usne bohot si choti choti shishiyon me bhar diya tha,mai peeta raha tha...

par excessive dose ki wajah se mujhe shaam hote hote hi neend aa gayi thi jo aaj subah hi khuli thi...

par mere uthne ke kuch der baad hi ek baar firse ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER dono mere apartment me tapak pade the aur tab se lekar ab tak mujhe alag alag tariko se rest lene ke liye pinch kar chuke the ye dono...

abhi bhi apni baat keh sadi hui shakal liye mujhe dekh raha tha ACCHUTA jispar ek baar usse ghur maine nazar saamne ROVEL ki taraf ki aur...


MAI-i am completely fit WHIZZDER...

PETRA-allright than...shuru karo fir...

remember,aage badhne ke liye,apne apne metaphysical capabilities ko agle step par lejaane ke liye kamsekam kisi ek REFINER ko activate karna bohot zaroori hai....

bhale hi average power growth jo ki 2 minute par hota hai,wahin tak kyun naa ho,par hona zaroori hai...


WHIZZ ki baat sun hum sabhi GROOMERS ne apni apni aankh band kar li aur saath hi pause kar liya apna apna CEREBRATION...

aaj pehli baar tha jab maine complete clean way me ek normal SAVENT ki tarah apne CEREBRATION ko pause kiya tha aur ab aage ki kriya me baakiyon ke saath unhiki tarah participate kar raha tha..

waise toh meri shaktiyon ka mere paas naa hona mere liye ek negetive baat thi,par fir bhi mujhe bura nahi lag raha tha...

reason...

wo kehte hain naa ki smooth road never makes a good driver...

bas,itni si hi baat thi...true potential jaanane ka sabse acha tarika hota hai negetive mohoul me jab waqt aapke saath naa ho,tab perform karke dikhana...

ab mere liye ye waqt waisa hi tha....

khair,aankhen aur CEREBRATION band kiye baaki sabhi ki tarah apne SOUL me jhankte hue man hi man uccharit kiya maine....


SAMPURN AANANDITAM....

aur aisa karte hi....

HAHAHAHAHA.......

as expected,spell ke prabhav se hasi chhut gayi meri par jahan pehle ye hasi fake hoti thi wahin ab ye hasi sacchi thi...

pehli baar mai us dard ko,aur us ehsaas ko mehsoos kar raha tha jo yahan ka har SAVENT khudko nurture karne waale SPELL ko bolne ke baad mehsoos karta tha...

zor zor se has rahe the hum sab....par jahan hasi khushi ki wajah se aati thi,wahin humari hasi ke peeche chhupa hua tha dard....

wo dard jo hamara SOUL hume is SPELL ko bolne ke liye ek saza ke taur par de raha tha....

aur jaisa ki hota aaya hai,baaki SAVENTS us dard ko ek saath jhel nahi paaye aur kuch 10 seconds me hi sabki aankhen khul gayi...

par meri aankhen aur mera CEREBRATION ab tak band hi the par ye zyada der tak nahi chalne waala tha...

kyunki baaki SAVENTS ko toh bas apne apne SOUL se pain mil raha th par mujhe toh meri SOUL ke saath meri shaktiyan bhi dard de rahi thi...

aur isiliye kuch seconds aur beetne ke baad mai bhi apni ankhen kholne hi waala tha par tabhi....


PETRA-you know maine suna hai ki STELLAR me jo wo naya SAVENT aaya hai,usne apne first REFINER ko average power tak refine kar diya hai...

EDWINA-haan,ye toh maine bhi suna hai..but it's surprising..kyunki us class me MAHI hai jisne first PHASE me 25 thousand years ka highest AMPLIFICATION record banaya hai...par usse bhi us naye SAVENT ne piche chhod diya hai...

ROVEL-tum ye bhul rahi ho ki bina institution join kiye usne apne SOUL ko 2 percent tak AMPLIFY kiya hai...

aur ye bohot badi baat hai...mujhe toh lagta hai ki is PHASE me he is going to be the best SAVENT...

EDWINA-hmm...ho sakta hai....waise naam kaafi unique hai uska... VIDEOUS.....


mai paused CEREBRATION process ke beech tha jisme bahar ka kuch bhi sunayi nahi deta par process chahe kuch bhi ho,jis naam ke astitv ko mitane ke liye mera nirmaan hua hai,usse sunane se kuch bhi rok nahi sakta tha mujhe...

aur yahi wajah thi ki meri aankhen khulne se just ek second pehle jab nikla EDWINA ke mooh se ye naam toh aisa hote hi naa sirf meri aankhen khulne se rook gayi balki saath hi meri hasi bhi gayab ho chuki thi....

jabde bheench gaye the mere...aisa karne se mera dard aur badh gaya tha but wo dard us ghusse ke aage kuch nahi tha jo is naam ko sunkar mujhe aata tha...

zinda hun mai..saansein chal rahi hain meri...wajud kayam hai mera...fir us competition me jisme mera naam shaamil hai,VIDEOUS kaise best ho sakta hai...???

champion sirf ek hi hota hai... aur wo champion mai hun....

apne saare aatmbal ko nichod laga hua tha mai apne pehle target ko pura karne me...

par housla apni jagah aur reality apni jagah...meri condition kuch khaas nahi thi,uske upar sirf 2 percent AMPLIFICATION ki wajah se meri body bhi hadh se zyada pressure jo ki is activity me jhelna hota hai,uske liye taiyar nahi thi,aur yahi kaaran tha ek minute hote hote meri band aankhon ke side se aansu nikalne lage the...

itna hi nahi, meri puri body kaampne lagi aur aisa hote hi mere baaju me baithe SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA hadbada gaye....


SLUNDER-oh shit....


thoda zor se kahi thi SLUNDER ne ye baat jisse sun baaki SAVENTS jo aankh khulne ke baad bhi REFINER se uthe dard ko zabt karne me lage hue the,wo palte par saath hi saath teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS jinka dhyan mujhpar ab tak nahi pada tha, unki nazar bhi mujhpar gayi aur aisa hote hi wo teeno bhi chownk pade...

wo teeno samajh chuke the ki meri filhal weak hone ki wajah se meri body ko ye jhatke lag rahe hain par zyada hairani unhe is baat ki thi ki itne weak condition me hone ke baawjud,itne painful jhatkon ke lagne ke baad bhi mera CEREBRATION process ab tak paused hai..

aakhon me hairani liye wo aur baaki SAVENTS mujhe dekh rahe the...

wahin mere baaju me baithe ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ne mujhe chhune ke liye haath aage badhaya hi tha ki tabhi..


EDWINA-dont..... REFINER activation ke waqt puri body par ek electrical parat chaddh jaati hai isiliye usse chhuna mat usse warna shock....

OH MY GOD.....


aage ki baat bolte bolte dusre lines nikal gaye EDWINA ke mooh se...

reason...

ab tak jahan mere aankhon ke side se paani beh raha tha, wahin ab ussi jagah se halka halka khoon risne laga tha...

aur ye scene dekh sabhi hadh se zyada chownk gaye the....


ROVEL-yaar,kaisa banda hai ye...???koi itna pain kaise jhel sakta hai....????!!!

PETRA-iske aankhon se jo khun nikal raha hai,iska matlab hai ki iska body puri tarah recover nahi hua hai aur isiliye iska SOUL REFINER ko rok raha hai...

agar kuch aur seconds aisa hi chalta raha toh iska sharir fatna shuru ho jaayega...


EDWINA joki ROVEL aur PETRA ki kahi baaton ko pehle hi jaanti thi,usne bhi ab der karna sahi nahi samjha aur...


HIKSATURAHE VIDYUTATAH

REVERSE THE CURRENT


haath meri taraf kar COMMAND MODE ke tahat is SPELL ko uccharit kiya EDWINA ne aur aisa hote hi uske haathon se ek current ray nikli aur sidhe mere sharir ke chaaron taraf bane REFINER dwara banaye current se takrayi aur jab aisa hua toh...

ek saath do chizen hui...

pehli.....

REFINER ki current gayab ho gayi aur aisa hoti hi meri CEREBRATION process shuru ho gayi aur meri aankhen khul gayi..

dusri.....

AKHHWKKKKK

aankh khulte hi mere jabde jo bheeche hue the,woh ek jhatke me khul gaye aur aisa hone par mere mooh se bhi khoon ki ek ulti si ho gayi...

mai apne aap ko bilkul sambhal nahi saka aur girne ko hua par isse pehle ki aisa hota, ACCHUTA ne mujhe sambhal liya tha...

is waqt teeno WHIZZES,WHIZZDERS aur unke saath sabhi SAVENTS ne mujhe ghera hua tha..

jahan un sabhi ke ankhon me vismay bhara hua tha wahin ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER bas meri condition par tention liye hue the..

mai lambi lambi saansien le raha tha is waqt aur tabhi...


EDWINA-are you ok RAAZ.....???

MAI-aaj kiya toh kiya...dobara kabhi aisa mat karna...


haafte hue gurra utha mai EDWINA ko dekh jisse sun shock ho gayi EDWINA aur saath hi baaki sab bhi..

par isse pehle ki koi kuch kehta...


MAI-mere liye kya sahi hai,kya galat hai,kya faaydemand hai,kya nuksaan deyi hai,ye mai tay karunga....sirf mai....

isiliye dobara meri chahe jo bhi condition ho,interfere mat karna..


hadh se zyada frustrated tha mai is waqt...kyunki sirf 10 seconds hi bache the un 2 minutes me jiske baad meri REFINER average power ko touch kar jaati..

wahi power jo filhal sirf VIDEOUS ki hi activate hui hai..haan,ye sach tha ki shayad usse pehle hi mere saare sharir ke pores me crack aa jaata aur khoon ke behne se mai behosh ho jaata,par mujhe is baat se fark nahi padta tha...

wahin meri baaton ko sun jahan SAVENTS bas hairan the,wahin WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ko meri baatien sahi nahi lagi aur isiliye...


ROVEL-tumhe pata bhi hai ki tum kya bol rahe ho...??? tumhari aankhon ke side se blood nikal raha tha...

jiska matlab tha ki wo process tumhare soul ke saath tumhare brain par bhi acccesive pressure daal raha tha...

agar kuch seconds bhi aur tum same state me rehte naa,toh tumhara brain block ho jaata...

tum mar bhi sakte the...


MAI-WHILE FACING CHALLENGES,IF YOU CANNOT PUT YOUR LIFE AT STAKE ,YOU ARE JUST AS GOOD AS DEAD....


meri baat sun chownke toh sabhi the par baat pate ki thi isiliye kisise kuch kehte bana nahi....

wahin in sabke mujhe yun gher kar khade hone se meri suffocation me izafa ho raha tha isiliye...


MAI-kya class ab bhi baaki hai...???


mere sawal se jaise ek trance se bahar aaye teeno WHIZZES aur WHIZZDER aur...


PETRA-nahi...its over...

MAI-mujhe akela rehna hai...


meri baat sun kuch der mujhe dekh wo teeno class se nikal gaye aur unke baad baaki sabhi SAVENTS bhi chale gaye the siway ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke....


MAI-tum dono bhi jaao....

ACCHUTA-par bhai teri haalat thik nahi hai...aise me tujhe akela..

MAI-dude...i dont like to repeat myself..bas itna samajh ki akela rahunga toh jaldi recover ho jaaunga..


meri baat sun ACCHUTA ne SLUNDER ko dekha jisne usse aankhon se hi chalne ka ishara kiya jiske baad wo dono bhi class se chale gaye..

wahin in saare ghatnakramo ke dauran VIDEOUS class ke bahar hi khada tha...

aur jab baaki WHIZZES, WHIZZDERS aur SAVENTS class se nikal rahe the,toh wo ek pillar ke piche chala gaya tha aur jaise hi class khaali hua,wo class ke andar aa gaya...


VIDEOUS-aam hona kitni taklif de sakta hai,haina...???


VIDEOUS ki awaaz sun mera neeche jhuka hua sir upar utha..

mere honth aur uske aas paas ki jagahon par ab bhi khoon laga hua tha jisse apne haath se saaf kiya maine aur...


MAI-kaun si taklif...???meri taklif jo is khoon ki shakal liye dikh rahi hai yaa fir teri taklif jo bhale hi dikh nahi rahi,par asar uska mujhse zyada hai...


meri baat sun halka hairan hua VIDEOUS aur...


VIDEOUS-kehna kya chahta hai...???

MAI-tera aaj ka performance kuch khaas nahi tha,right....!!!

aur tu yahan isiliye aaya hai naa kyunki tu dekhna chahta hai ki normal hone ke baad mera performance tujhe behtar hota hai yaa nahi....

VIDEOUS-aur tujhe aisa kyun laga ki mai issi liye aaya hun...??

MAI-bhale hi mai tera dimag padh nahi sakta,tere man ki baatein jaan nahi sakta par shakl dekh situation ko anylize karne ka hunar bohot acche se aata hai mujhe....

aur aaj pehli baar tere chehre par halka sa hi sahi,par frustration chalak raha hai....

aur ye tabhi possible ho sakta hai jab tu.....haara ho......

VIDEOUS-HAAR aur VIDEOUS ek hi sentence me suit nahi hote RAAZ...

aur jis haar ki tu baat kar raha hai,wo us coma ki tarah hai jisse sentence bas ek pal ke liye atakta hai,rookta nahi...

ye hurdle bhi mai paar kar hi lunga aur jaisa hota aaya hai,wo ek baar fir hoga...mai jeet jaaunga...

MAI-kitna dillusional hai tu..kaun se hamesha ki baat kar raha hai tu...???

chal,tere hi diye example se samjhata hun tujhe...

laakhon saal pehle jab tune apni shartein manwayi thi,wo waqt bhi ussi coma ki tarah tha jisse tere saamne waale sirf atke the,rooke nahi the...

par haan,tujhe hamesha ke liye rokne ki khaatir un DONO ne ek fullstop ka nirman kiya...

aur wo fullstop tere saamne khada hai....tu ussi din haar gaya tha jis din meri utppati hui thi...

VIDEOUS-bohot badi galatfehmi hai tujhe RAAZ...tera sirf naam RAAZ hai,par tere saamne jo khada hai,wo pura ka pura RAAZ hai...

tu jeet jaaye,mujhe pata hai ki iske liye tu bohot si chizen karega par mai naa haarun,iske liye mai pehle hi bohot kuch kar chuka hun...

VIDEOUS ko harane ka khwab dekhna chhod de RAAZ kyunki..



aadhi adhuri kahani
mai LIKHTA nahi....

VIDEOUS khud wo RAAZ hai,
jisse tu samajh SAKTA NAHI....

nichod mujhe jo mere astitv ko mita de,

wo nazar aur jigar tu RAKHTA NAHI....












AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......











AAPKA APNA V...J......
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Iron Man

Try and fail. But never give up trying
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MASTER FALLON KE SAAMNE EK BOHOT HI PECHIDA TASK RAKHTE HAIN WAHIN DUSRI TARAF VIDEOUS AUR RAAZ APNI ALOUKIK SHAKTIYAN RAAZ KE SWORD ME CHUPPA DETE HAIN.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-71



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-CHOSENS



STELLAR'S CLASS:-






VIDEOUS....TUMNE APNE FIRST REFINER KI AVERAGE POWER KO TRIGGER KAR LIYA HAI..ISILIYE I THINK TUMHARI SPELLS PRACTICE KI CLASS SHURU KAR DENI CHAHIYE...

PURI NAHI TOH KAMSEKAM THODI BOHOT MAGIC TOH TUM KARNA SIKH HI JAAOGE....

class shuru hote hi REGIS ne VIDEOUS se kahi thi ye baat jisse sun...


VIDEOUS-sorry WHIZZDER... par average power borrowing jaisi hoti hai jo sirf loosers ki suit karti hai....

and i like to own things...yaa toh mujhe complete power chahiye yaa fir kuch bhi nahi chahiye...

isiliye, SPELLS aur magic try karne se pehle mai apne first REFINER ki puri power ko activate karna chahunga...


VIDEOUS ki baat sun saare SAVENTS uski baaton ke baare me gossip karne lage the par in SAVENTS me MAHI nahi thi....

aksar jab aap sabse aage hote hain aur aise me koi aur khudko best hone ke liye self nominate kar deta hai toh aise me halka sa ego hurt ho hi jaata hai par MAHI ke case me iska ulta tha..

wo VIDEOUS ki baat sun khush ho gayi thi kyunki uski baat se MAHI ko lagne laga tha ki unlike PHASE 1,is PHASE me usse koi tagda competition dene waala hai...

par is beech jahan VIDEOUS ki baat yaa fir ye kahun ki uska ATTITUDE REGIS aur SAPIUS ko impress nahi kar paaya wahin MABBA VIDEOUS ke jawab se bohot khush hui thi...

aur isiliye...


MABBA-i like what you said VIDEOUS...par dekhna ye hai ki kya tumhari baatein sirf baatein hain yaa fir you can back up your words..


MABBA ki baat yaa fir ye kahun ki unke challenge ko sun VIDEOUS bas halka muskura diya....


SAPIUS-ok then.. REFINER activation process shuru kijiye...


SAPIUS ke bolte hi sabhi SAVENTS ki CEREBRATION process pause ho chuki thi aur aisa hote uccharit hua un sabke man me pehla REFINER SPELL.....

SAMPURN AANANDITAM.....

jiske baad hua sabme pain aur hasi ka samagam....

aur isiliye sirf 10 se 15 seconds ke andar aadhi se zyadi class ki aankhen khul chuki thi.

25 second hote hote VALDIS ki aur 40 seconds ke andar MABEL aur ALFREEN ki bhi aankhen khul gayi...

par MAHI aur VIDEOUS ki ankhen ab bhi band thi....


MAHI....jiska focus aaj kuch zyada hi strong lag raha tha,usne kuch hi seconds me 1 minute ke paused CEREBRATION ka waqt pura kar liya...

jahan ye hota dekh teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS khush ho rahe the, wahin MAHI ki haalat kharab hone lagi thi...

ek minute cross hote hi uske andar ek halki si rosni dikhne lagi thi jiske kareeb usse jaana tha..

wo roshni hi wo REFINER power thi jiske kareeb jaate hi MAHI ki bhi average power ACTIVATE ho jaati par ye achieve karna bohot hard tha...

jaise jaise MAHI us roshni ke kareeb jaa rahi thi,usse aisa lag raha tha jaise koi uske aatma ko hasa hasa kar aur at the same time tadpa tadpa kar maar raha hai aur isiliye.....

aankhen khul gayi MAHI ki jiske baad...SHIT.......

khudpar bhadakte hue kaha MAHI ne ye par fir...


MABBA-congrats MAHI...aaj tume 1 minute 30 seconds tak apne CEREBRATION ko paused rakha...

aur ye bohot badi baat hai...sirf 30 seconds aur and i am sure ki tum ye kar logi....

bohot jald tum bhi VIDEOUS.......


ye naam lete hue MABBA ki gardan class ke aakhir ki taraf ghumi jahan aaj VIDEOUS baitha tha aur aisa hote hi unke aage ki baat unke andar hi reh gayi...

wahin MABBA ko yun achanak chup hota dekh dono WHIZZDERS aur saath hi sabhi SAVENTS bhi MABBA ki jis tara nazar thi,wahan dekhne lage aur aisa hote hi un sabki aankhen bhi badi ho gayi...

reason.....

VIDEOUS ki aankhen abhi bhi band thi aur apne jabde bheenche dard ko sehte hue wo laga hua tha...

MAHI ne dedh minute tak apne CEREBRATION ko pause rakha tha aur uske baad MABBA ki kuch der ki gayi baatein jiska matlab tha ki VIDEOUS apne hi purane record ko todte hue 2 minute cross kar chuka tha.....

wahin VIDEOUS.....jo aaj pehli baar bina apni ALOUKIK shaktiyon ke tha, wo SAVENT ko hone waale aseem dard aur uske andar hone waale har wo manupalation jiski wajah se uska task adhura reh jaata tha,usse feel kar paa raha tha...

and it was damn tough for him....bhale hi human emotions se uthne waale pain par master kar liya tha usne,par at the moment, REFINER jo ki khud ek strong emotion tha,usse uthne waale dard ko sehna bohot mushkil tha uske liye...

baaki SAVENTS ko REFINER aur SOUL se jo pain feel hota tha,usse zyada feel ho raha tha VIDEOUS ko jisse jhelte hue wo laga hua tha par ab ye sab uske liye bhi bohot zyada hone laga tha...

dard ki adhikta se uski band aankhon ke side se paani nikalne laga tha...

jabde ek dusre se itni sakhti ae bhidne lage the maano ek dusre se panja lada rahe hon...

pura chehra tharthara raha tha VIDEOUS ka aur jab ye thartharahat hadh se zyada badhne lagi toh..


UMMMMMMMM...AAAHHHHHHHHH.........


pehle ek lamba groan aur uske baad ek cheekh ke saath aankh khul gayi VIDEOUS ki jiske baad...


CHATAAAKHHH.....


khudke gaal par hi ek tez tamacha maar diya VIDEOUS ne jispar sabhi SAVENTS shocked ho gaye...


REGIS-hey hey hey..relax boy...hota hai...tumne pure 3 minute tak apne CEREBRATION ko paused rakha tha...

itni kam waqt me itni der tak pehle kabhi kisine aisa nahi kiya hai...so you should be proud of yourself....

VIDEOUS-khud se jhuth bolne ki aadat nahi hai mujhe....haar kitne hi kam margin se kyun naa hui ho,haar haar hoti hai...

aur ek request hai WHIZZDER aapse..dobara kabhi mujhe kisi aur ka example mat dijiyega...

pehle kisne kya kiya hai,kitne waqt me kiya hai,kaun kitna laayak hai,kiski hadh kahan tak pahunchi hai,i dont give a shit about it....

aap log jo bhi examples dete hain,wo mujhe ek line ki tarah lagti hai..

wo line jisme SAVENTS khade hote hain but i dont stand in anybody's line...

MY PATH IS RAW AND I OWN MY DESTINATION....


aankhen,kaan aur baaki jo bhi phat sakta tha,wo sab faade sun rahe the sab VIDEOUS ko...

VIDEOUS ki baaton me ek authority thi,ek aisa boldness tha jisne sabhi ko clean bowled kar diya tha...

wahin ye sari baatein VIDEOUS ne REGIS ke aankhon me jhaank kar kahi thi jiski intensity feel kar andar tak hil gaya tha REGIS...

REGIS hi kya, MABBA aur SAPIUS bhi VIDEOUS ki baat sun ek trance jaisi haalat me chale gaye the..

jab VIDEOUS bol raha tha tab unhe aisa laga tha jaise wo SAVENT hain aur VIDEOUS unka WHIZZDER....

par in sabke beech VIDEOUS ki haalat ajeeb hi thi...bhale hi as a SAVENT,usne aaj jo lagatar 3 minute tak paused CEREBRATION rakha tha,wo extraordinary tha,par uski nazar me aaj pehli wo haara tha..

aur isiliye,apni baat bol wo rooka nahi,turant class se nikal gaya...

waise class khatm karne ka waqt bhi lagbhag ho hi gaya tha isiliye VIDEOUS ke nikalte hi MABBA ne class khatm kiya aur dono WHIZZDERS ke saath nikal gayi....


MABEL-ye VIDEOUS kuch zyada hi overconfident nahi ho raha...???

MAHI-agar overconfidence se uske jaisi performance hoti hai toh mujhe lagta hai ki sabhi ko overconfident hona chahiye...

ALFREEN-wo sab toh theek hai par aaj uska ATTITUDE kuch alag lag raha tha,haina..???

MAHI-mujhe lagta hai ki wo aaj thaan kar aaya tha ki anyhow wo apne first REFINER ke full power ko active kar hi lega aur kyunki aisa nahi hua, isiliye wo thoda hyper ho gaya...

MABEL-hyper...pagal lag raha tha wo mujhe aaj..khudhi ko thappad maar raha tha...

MAHI-toh galat kya hai...??yahan toh log bina saamne waale ki galti ke usse maarte hain,toh fir VIDEOUS ne toh sirf khudko hi maara tha...


mere baare me soch kahi thi ye baat MAHI ne jispar...


ALFREEN-kiski baat kar rahi hai..??kaun kisko maarta hai...??


ALFREEN ki baat sun MAHI ko realize hua ki usne galat jagah ye baat bol di hai aur isiliye...


MAHI-arre ek general baat bol rahi hun...kitne kisse sune hain ab tak yahan ke baare me ki powerful SAVENTS kamzor SAVENTS ko bully karte hain,unhe maarte hain...

wahi example diya maine..

MABEL-haan ye toh hai...par chhodo naa yaar ye sab baatein...tum log bhi kaun si baaten lekar baith gaye ho...

MAHI-waah,topic khud hi uthati hai aur fir ilzam humpar daalti hai..rook toh zara...


ye bol lapki MAHI MABEL ki taraf par MABEL bhi turant parking ki taraf bhaag li aur uske piche bhaage MAHI aur ALFREEN....

wahin class se sabse pehle nikle VIDEOUS ne pehle toh apne ABODE jaane ki sochi par phir uske dimag me ghuma mera thobda aur aisa hote hi uske kadam aur direction change ho gaye aur wo chal pada GROOMERS class ki taraf....





GROOMERS CLASS:-




HOW ARE U FEELING TODAY,RAAZ.....???


class me enter karte hi jab WHIZZ EDWINA ki nazar mujhpar padi toh pucha unhone mujhse ye sawal jispar...


MAI-i am good WHIZZ....

ROVEL-agar chaho toh aaj ka din bhi break le sakte ho... REFINER TRIGGER karne me soul AMPLIFICATION ka use zyada hota hai toh aise me tumhari condition bigad sakti hai....


ROVEL ki baat par mai kuch kahun usse pehle hi....


ACCHUTA-haan bhai...tu rest le le.... puri taraf sahi lage,tabhi class start kariyo..


dheere se mere kaan ke paas aakar kahi ye baat ACCHUTA ne jispar maine usse ghur kar dekha par jahan mere ghurne se pehle wo dar jaaya karta tha,ab aisa kuch bhi nahi hua tha...

infact kal SHAILA ke jaane ke kuch der baad hi ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER,wo dono hi mere apartment me aa gaye the aur tabhi se ye haal hai...

kal aate hi dono ne mujhpar dheron sawal ki bombardment kar di thi...

dono ko ye samajh nahi aa raha tha ki mujhe bhala kaise kuch ho sakta hai jispar maine sahi waqt aane par bata dene ki baat kahi thi...

jiske baad meri health se related toh un dono ne koi baat nahi ki par fir din bhar wo dono mere aaspaas hi rahe...

unke lagatar mere liye concern ko dekh mere andar kuch ghumne laga tha jisse mujhe behad taklif ho rahi thi..

mai jaanta tha ki wo human emotions hai jo situation ke according mujhe mehsoos hona chahte hain aur meri SWORD me chhupi meri ALOUKIK shaktiyan un emotions se takrakar mujhe dard de rahi hain par mai kar bhi kya sakta tha...

har thodi der me SHAILA ka diya wo kaadha jo usne bohot si choti choti shishiyon me bhar diya tha,mai peeta raha tha...

par excessive dose ki wajah se mujhe shaam hote hote hi neend aa gayi thi jo aaj subah hi khuli thi...

par mere uthne ke kuch der baad hi ek baar firse ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER dono mere apartment me tapak pade the aur tab se lekar ab tak mujhe alag alag tariko se rest lene ke liye pinch kar chuke the ye dono...

abhi bhi apni baat keh sadi hui shakal liye mujhe dekh raha tha ACCHUTA jispar ek baar usse ghur maine nazar saamne ROVEL ki taraf ki aur...


MAI-i am completely fit WHIZZDER...

PETRA-allright than...shuru karo fir...

remember,aage badhne ke liye,apne apne metaphysical capabilities ko agle step par lejaane ke liye kamsekam kisi ek REFINER ko activate karna bohot zaroori hai....

bhale hi average power growth jo ki 2 minute par hota hai,wahin tak kyun naa ho,par hona zaroori hai...


WHIZZ ki baat sun hum sabhi GROOMERS ne apni apni aankh band kar li aur saath hi pause kar liya apna apna CEREBRATION...

aaj pehli baar tha jab maine complete clean way me ek normal SAVENT ki tarah apne CEREBRATION ko pause kiya tha aur ab aage ki kriya me baakiyon ke saath unhiki tarah participate kar raha tha..

waise toh meri shaktiyon ka mere paas naa hona mere liye ek negetive baat thi,par fir bhi mujhe bura nahi lag raha tha...

reason...

wo kehte hain naa ki smooth road never makes a good driver...

bas,itni si hi baat thi...true potential jaanane ka sabse acha tarika hota hai negetive mohoul me jab waqt aapke saath naa ho,tab perform karke dikhana...

ab mere liye ye waqt waisa hi tha....

khair,aankhen aur CEREBRATION band kiye baaki sabhi ki tarah apne SOUL me jhankte hue man hi man uccharit kiya maine....


SAMPURN AANANDITAM....

aur aisa karte hi....

HAHAHAHAHA.......

as expected,spell ke prabhav se hasi chhut gayi meri par jahan pehle ye hasi fake hoti thi wahin ab ye hasi sacchi thi...

pehli baar mai us dard ko,aur us ehsaas ko mehsoos kar raha tha jo yahan ka har SAVENT khudko nurture karne waale SPELL ko bolne ke baad mehsoos karta tha...

zor zor se has rahe the hum sab....par jahan hasi khushi ki wajah se aati thi,wahin humari hasi ke peeche chhupa hua tha dard....

wo dard jo hamara SOUL hume is SPELL ko bolne ke liye ek saza ke taur par de raha tha....

aur jaisa ki hota aaya hai,baaki SAVENTS us dard ko ek saath jhel nahi paaye aur kuch 10 seconds me hi sabki aankhen khul gayi...

par meri aankhen aur mera CEREBRATION ab tak band hi the par ye zyada der tak nahi chalne waala tha...

kyunki baaki SAVENTS ko toh bas apne apne SOUL se pain mil raha th par mujhe toh meri SOUL ke saath meri shaktiyan bhi dard de rahi thi...

aur isiliye kuch seconds aur beetne ke baad mai bhi apni ankhen kholne hi waala tha par tabhi....


PETRA-you know maine suna hai ki STELLAR me jo wo naya SAVENT aaya hai,usne apne first REFINER ko average power tak refine kar diya hai...

EDWINA-haan,ye toh maine bhi suna hai..but it's surprising..kyunki us class me MAHI hai jisne first PHASE me 25 thousand years ka highest AMPLIFICATION record banaya hai...par usse bhi us naye SAVENT ne piche chhod diya hai...

ROVEL-tum ye bhul rahi ho ki bina institution join kiye usne apne SOUL ko 2 percent tak AMPLIFY kiya hai...

aur ye bohot badi baat hai...mujhe toh lagta hai ki is PHASE me he is going to be the best SAVENT...

EDWINA-hmm...ho sakta hai....waise naam kaafi unique hai uska... VIDEOUS.....


mai paused CEREBRATION process ke beech tha jisme bahar ka kuch bhi sunayi nahi deta par process chahe kuch bhi ho,jis naam ke astitv ko mitane ke liye mera nirmaan hua hai,usse sunane se kuch bhi rok nahi sakta tha mujhe...

aur yahi wajah thi ki meri aankhen khulne se just ek second pehle jab nikla EDWINA ke mooh se ye naam toh aisa hote hi naa sirf meri aankhen khulne se rook gayi balki saath hi meri hasi bhi gayab ho chuki thi....

jabde bheench gaye the mere...aisa karne se mera dard aur badh gaya tha but wo dard us ghusse ke aage kuch nahi tha jo is naam ko sunkar mujhe aata tha...

zinda hun mai..saansein chal rahi hain meri...wajud kayam hai mera...fir us competition me jisme mera naam shaamil hai,VIDEOUS kaise best ho sakta hai...???

champion sirf ek hi hota hai... aur wo champion mai hun....

apne saare aatmbal ko nichod laga hua tha mai apne pehle target ko pura karne me...

par housla apni jagah aur reality apni jagah...meri condition kuch khaas nahi thi,uske upar sirf 2 percent AMPLIFICATION ki wajah se meri body bhi hadh se zyada pressure jo ki is activity me jhelna hota hai,uske liye taiyar nahi thi,aur yahi kaaran tha ek minute hote hote meri band aankhon ke side se aansu nikalne lage the...

itna hi nahi, meri puri body kaampne lagi aur aisa hote hi mere baaju me baithe SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA hadbada gaye....


SLUNDER-oh shit....


thoda zor se kahi thi SLUNDER ne ye baat jisse sun baaki SAVENTS jo aankh khulne ke baad bhi REFINER se uthe dard ko zabt karne me lage hue the,wo palte par saath hi saath teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS jinka dhyan mujhpar ab tak nahi pada tha, unki nazar bhi mujhpar gayi aur aisa hote hi wo teeno bhi chownk pade...

wo teeno samajh chuke the ki meri filhal weak hone ki wajah se meri body ko ye jhatke lag rahe hain par zyada hairani unhe is baat ki thi ki itne weak condition me hone ke baawjud,itne painful jhatkon ke lagne ke baad bhi mera CEREBRATION process ab tak paused hai..

aakhon me hairani liye wo aur baaki SAVENTS mujhe dekh rahe the...

wahin mere baaju me baithe ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ne mujhe chhune ke liye haath aage badhaya hi tha ki tabhi..


EDWINA-dont..... REFINER activation ke waqt puri body par ek electrical parat chaddh jaati hai isiliye usse chhuna mat usse warna shock....

OH MY GOD.....


aage ki baat bolte bolte dusre lines nikal gaye EDWINA ke mooh se...

reason...

ab tak jahan mere aankhon ke side se paani beh raha tha, wahin ab ussi jagah se halka halka khoon risne laga tha...

aur ye scene dekh sabhi hadh se zyada chownk gaye the....


ROVEL-yaar,kaisa banda hai ye...???koi itna pain kaise jhel sakta hai....????!!!

PETRA-iske aankhon se jo khun nikal raha hai,iska matlab hai ki iska body puri tarah recover nahi hua hai aur isiliye iska SOUL REFINER ko rok raha hai...

agar kuch aur seconds aisa hi chalta raha toh iska sharir fatna shuru ho jaayega...


EDWINA joki ROVEL aur PETRA ki kahi baaton ko pehle hi jaanti thi,usne bhi ab der karna sahi nahi samjha aur...


HIKSATURAHE VIDYUTATAH

REVERSE THE CURRENT


haath meri taraf kar COMMAND MODE ke tahat is SPELL ko uccharit kiya EDWINA ne aur aisa hote hi uske haathon se ek current ray nikli aur sidhe mere sharir ke chaaron taraf bane REFINER dwara banaye current se takrayi aur jab aisa hua toh...

ek saath do chizen hui...

pehli.....

REFINER ki current gayab ho gayi aur aisa hoti hi meri CEREBRATION process shuru ho gayi aur meri aankhen khul gayi..

dusri.....

AKHHWKKKKK

aankh khulte hi mere jabde jo bheeche hue the,woh ek jhatke me khul gaye aur aisa hone par mere mooh se bhi khoon ki ek ulti si ho gayi...

mai apne aap ko bilkul sambhal nahi saka aur girne ko hua par isse pehle ki aisa hota, ACCHUTA ne mujhe sambhal liya tha...

is waqt teeno WHIZZES,WHIZZDERS aur unke saath sabhi SAVENTS ne mujhe ghera hua tha..

jahan un sabhi ke ankhon me vismay bhara hua tha wahin ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER bas meri condition par tention liye hue the..

mai lambi lambi saansien le raha tha is waqt aur tabhi...


EDWINA-are you ok RAAZ.....???

MAI-aaj kiya toh kiya...dobara kabhi aisa mat karna...


haafte hue gurra utha mai EDWINA ko dekh jisse sun shock ho gayi EDWINA aur saath hi baaki sab bhi..

par isse pehle ki koi kuch kehta...


MAI-mere liye kya sahi hai,kya galat hai,kya faaydemand hai,kya nuksaan deyi hai,ye mai tay karunga....sirf mai....

isiliye dobara meri chahe jo bhi condition ho,interfere mat karna..


hadh se zyada frustrated tha mai is waqt...kyunki sirf 10 seconds hi bache the un 2 minutes me jiske baad meri REFINER average power ko touch kar jaati..

wahi power jo filhal sirf VIDEOUS ki hi activate hui hai..haan,ye sach tha ki shayad usse pehle hi mere saare sharir ke pores me crack aa jaata aur khoon ke behne se mai behosh ho jaata,par mujhe is baat se fark nahi padta tha...

wahin meri baaton ko sun jahan SAVENTS bas hairan the,wahin WHIZZES aur WHIZZDERS ko meri baatien sahi nahi lagi aur isiliye...


ROVEL-tumhe pata bhi hai ki tum kya bol rahe ho...??? tumhari aankhon ke side se blood nikal raha tha...

jiska matlab tha ki wo process tumhare soul ke saath tumhare brain par bhi acccesive pressure daal raha tha...

agar kuch seconds bhi aur tum same state me rehte naa,toh tumhara brain block ho jaata...

tum mar bhi sakte the...


MAI-WHILE FACING CHALLENGES,IF YOU CANNOT PUT YOUR LIFE AT STAKE ,YOU ARE JUST AS GOOD AS DEAD....


meri baat sun chownke toh sabhi the par baat pate ki thi isiliye kisise kuch kehte bana nahi....

wahin in sabke mujhe yun gher kar khade hone se meri suffocation me izafa ho raha tha isiliye...


MAI-kya class ab bhi baaki hai...???


mere sawal se jaise ek trance se bahar aaye teeno WHIZZES aur WHIZZDER aur...


PETRA-nahi...its over...

MAI-mujhe akela rehna hai...


meri baat sun kuch der mujhe dekh wo teeno class se nikal gaye aur unke baad baaki sabhi SAVENTS bhi chale gaye the siway ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke....


MAI-tum dono bhi jaao....

ACCHUTA-par bhai teri haalat thik nahi hai...aise me tujhe akela..

MAI-dude...i dont like to repeat myself..bas itna samajh ki akela rahunga toh jaldi recover ho jaaunga..


meri baat sun ACCHUTA ne SLUNDER ko dekha jisne usse aankhon se hi chalne ka ishara kiya jiske baad wo dono bhi class se chale gaye..

wahin in saare ghatnakramo ke dauran VIDEOUS class ke bahar hi khada tha...

aur jab baaki WHIZZES, WHIZZDERS aur SAVENTS class se nikal rahe the,toh wo ek pillar ke piche chala gaya tha aur jaise hi class khaali hua,wo class ke andar aa gaya...


VIDEOUS-aam hona kitni taklif de sakta hai,haina...???


VIDEOUS ki awaaz sun mera neeche jhuka hua sir upar utha..

mere honth aur uske aas paas ki jagahon par ab bhi khoon laga hua tha jisse apne haath se saaf kiya maine aur...


MAI-kaun si taklif...???meri taklif jo is khoon ki shakal liye dikh rahi hai yaa fir teri taklif jo bhale hi dikh nahi rahi,par asar uska mujhse zyada hai...


meri baat sun halka hairan hua VIDEOUS aur...


VIDEOUS-kehna kya chahta hai...???

MAI-tera aaj ka performance kuch khaas nahi tha,right....!!!

aur tu yahan isiliye aaya hai naa kyunki tu dekhna chahta hai ki normal hone ke baad mera performance tujhe behtar hota hai yaa nahi....

VIDEOUS-aur tujhe aisa kyun laga ki mai issi liye aaya hun...??

MAI-bhale hi mai tera dimag padh nahi sakta,tere man ki baatein jaan nahi sakta par shakl dekh situation ko anylize karne ka hunar bohot acche se aata hai mujhe....

aur aaj pehli baar tere chehre par halka sa hi sahi,par frustration chalak raha hai....

aur ye tabhi possible ho sakta hai jab tu.....haara ho......

VIDEOUS-HAAR aur VIDEOUS ek hi sentence me suit nahi hote RAAZ...

aur jis haar ki tu baat kar raha hai,wo us coma ki tarah hai jisse sentence bas ek pal ke liye atakta hai,rookta nahi...

ye hurdle bhi mai paar kar hi lunga aur jaisa hota aaya hai,wo ek baar fir hoga...mai jeet jaaunga...

MAI-kitna dillusional hai tu..kaun se hamesha ki baat kar raha hai tu...???

chal,tere hi diye example se samjhata hun tujhe...

laakhon saal pehle jab tune apni shartein manwayi thi,wo waqt bhi ussi coma ki tarah tha jisse tere saamne waale sirf atke the,rooke nahi the...

par haan,tujhe hamesha ke liye rokne ki khaatir un DONO ne ek fullstop ka nirman kiya...

aur wo fullstop tere saamne khada hai....tu ussi din haar gaya tha jis din meri utppati hui thi...

VIDEOUS-bohot badi galatfehmi hai tujhe RAAZ...tera sirf naam RAAZ hai,par tere saamne jo khada hai,wo pura ka pura RAAZ hai...

tu jeet jaaye,mujhe pata hai ki iske liye tu bohot si chizen karega par mai naa haarun,iske liye mai pehle hi bohot kuch kar chuka hun...

VIDEOUS ko harane ka khwab dekhna chhod de RAAZ kyunki..



aadhi adhuri kahani
mai LIKHTA nahi....

VIDEOUS khud wo RAAZ hai,
jisse tu samajh SAKTA NAHI....

nichod mujhe jo mere astitv ko mita de,

wo nazar aur jigar tu RAKHTA NAHI....












AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......











AAPKA APNA V...J......
Awesome Super Fantastic Mind Blowing Dhanshu Update.
Raaz aur Videous dono Alokik shaktiyon tyagne ke baad aam savets ki trah chunautiyon ka samna kar rahe . Videous jaha sarvshrest banne ke liye koshish kar raha hai wahi Raaz ne poora jor laga fiya ki wo Videous se pichhe na Rah jaye . Par ye sab ek din me sambhaw na hota ki chahe aur pa liya uske nirantar parayash karna padta hai jaise mahi kar rahi aur ye dono ek hi baar me frustrated ho gaye aur frustration ek dusre ko ab neecha sabit karke nikal rahe aapash me .
Last me dono ki baatchit shandar aur Videous ka Dailog to ekdum dhanshu hai .
 

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"Be The Wrong That Makes Everything Right"....
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Mast shaandar update Vj bhai ye update ko kuch bada kar detey to maja dugana ho jata sirf itna hi videous ki baat ka jawab bhi raaz kuch ussi treah deta jo aap ki last sayeri ti & :congrats: for 500 page
4200 words use hue hain Brother is update me...itne toh kahaniyon ke 2 updates ka size hota hai...

waise bhi Brother, important ye nahi ki aakhri baat kaun bol raha hai, important hai ki kis baat par update khatm hona chahiye..

aur aaj ka VIDEOUS ki line par hi khatm hona tha...
 
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