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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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FRNZ FRESH POST BHI READY HAI....THODI DER ME POST KARUNGA...

AAJ KE UPDATE ME PEHLI BAAR MAHI AUR RAAZ AAAMNE SAAMNE AAYENGE...

WAIT KIJIYEGA....
Waiting bhai
 

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V.J Bhai apke pass sayd previous update ka data save tha.. isliye itni jaldi update post ho gya .
Awesome fantastic Mind-blowing update Bhai..
Acchuta or sulander name bada unique hai..
Dono ki bich ki conversation full to funny tha fun ka tarka lgane dono aagya.story Mai iska kiy role hai dekhna dilchasp hoga
 

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"Be The Wrong That Makes Everything Right"....
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF RAAZ KO SLUNDER KI EK BOOK MILTI HAI JISKA NAAM THE FORBIDDEN FOREST HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF ISSI NAAM KI KOI JAGAH KE BAARE ME DO LOG JO KHUDKO VOTARIES BATA RAHE HAIN,BAAT KAR RAHE HOTE HAIN..


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)




UPDATE-15



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-THE CHOSENS




AGAR TUNE APNI BAKWAS BAND NAHI KI NAA,TOH TERE SAAMNE KE DO AADHE DAANTH KA BAAKI BACHA HISSA BHI TOD DUNGA MAI.....


subah ka waqt hai...hum sabhi NEWBORNS apne institution ke ek bade se claas me khade the...aaj bhi hostlers ek group me khade the aur dusra group banaye hamare left side discholars khade the..

but aaj mai apne group ke last me naa khada ho thoda aage aakar khada hua tha jiska reason ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER the...

dono ki nok jhonk se bachne ke liye hi aaj mai un dono se alag khada tha...

aur hua bhi wahi.....jo bhadkila awaaz abhi abhi nikla tha wo SLUNDER ka tha jo ACHHUTA ki bakwas sun sun kar jab pura pak gaya,toh usne ghusse me aakar uspar bhadakte hue apni baat kahi..


ACHHUTA-look who's talking...???saale daanth ki baat tu naa hi kar toh acha hai...mooh se bada daath lekar ghum raha hai aur mere daanth ko kam karne ki baat kar raha hai...

isse acha toh khud ko hi ek mukka maar le...shayad tere daanth tere mooh se chote ho jaayen....

ACHHUTA ki baat sun SLUNDER ko aur ghussa aa gaya...wo aur zyada bhadakte hue ACCHUTA ko kuch kehne hi waala tha ki tabhi usse main door se OPHILIA WHIZZ aati dikhi jiski wajah se wo chup ho gaya....


OPHILIA-good morning SAVENTS......

HUM-good morning WHIZZ....

OPHILIA-so u all are ready for today's class....!!!

SAVENTS-yes WHIZZ.......


sabhi SAVENTS ne badi excitement me jawab diya...(excluding RAAZ)


OPHILIA-par sabse pehle,abhi yahan jo practical hoga,uski theory aap sab se kal maine pata karne ke liye kaha tha...

aur mai dekh rahi hun ki aap sabke haathon me wahi books hain jiski theory aap sab ko janani thi...

iska matlab aap sabhi ko REQUEST,COMMAND aur ATTACH MODE ka matlab pata chal chuka hai...

SAVENTS-yes WHIZZ....


apni nazaren hum sabki taraf ghumate hue OPHILIA WHIZZ ne apni baat kahi thi but fir unki nazaren ek jagah ya fir ye kahun ki ek SAVENT par aakar rook gayi....

ye SAVENT aur koi nahi balki mai hi tha...par kyun????aayiye khud hi jaan lijiye....


OPHILIA-you,kya naam hai aapka????

MAI-RAAZ....


meri awaaz sun sabhi ki nazar mujhpar gayi aur issi dauran in teen dino me pehli baar MAHI ki aankhon ne bhi pehli baar mujhe dekha tha......

patla sa ek ladka,jiski aankhen bhi hamesha sunsaan aur thaki hui si lagti hai,kandhe halke neeche maano race shuru hone se pehle hi unhone haar maan li ho...chehre par halka sa bhi aakarshan nahi aur naahi koi tej jo har SAVENT ke chehre par dikhta tha...

aise me mujhe dekh uspar kaisa impression pada hoga,ye aap sab khud hi samajh lijiye....

waise mere catagory ka mai akela namuna nahi tha...ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER bhi meri hi tarah dabbu dikhte the but un dono ke chehre par bhi SAVENT waali chamak thi...

par phir bhi,mere, ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ko agar chhod den,toh baaki ke sabhi SAVENTS kaafi attractive hain....

khair mere naam batane ke baad...


OPHILIA-RAAZ.....tumhari book kahan hai???

MAI-hostel me....

OPHILIA-hostel me???saath kyun nahi laaye...????

MAI-man nahi kiya...


mere jawab ko sun OPHILIA WHIZZ ke saath saath sabhi SAVENTS shocked ho gaye the...

but OPHILIA WHIZZ shocked hone ke saath hi thodi naraz bhi ho gayi aur isiliye....


OPHILIA-do you even realize ki tum kya aur kisse bol rahe ho...???

MAI-ek passed out student jo ab yahin ka teacher ban gaya ha,usse keh raha hun..aur jo kaha hai,wo aap sun chuki hain...

and i dont like to repeat myself....


mere is jawab ko sun SAVENTS aur shocked par OPHILIA aur ghussa ho gayi thi...


OPHILIA-who the hell do you think you are....???aisa behaviour CHOSENS me tolerate nahi kiya jaayega...

u will have to do each and every thing as u are ordered to....

understand.....

MAI-nope....i dont understand and i never will...aur jahan tak baat apke is so called CHOSENS ki hai,toh yahan mujhe bulaya gaya hai..yahan aane ke liye maine apply nahi kiya tha.....

so the bottom line is this...i am not bound to anything... and as for you,aap puch sakte hain,bata bhi sakte hai par order nahi de sakte....


ab toh OPHILIA WHIZZ ka dimag hi ghum gaya tha...unka bas chalta toh wo abhi issi waqt kisi jaanleva spell se meri haalat bigad deti but as a WHIZZ,wo ye nahi kar sakti thi...

par wo yun is matter ko jaane bhi nahi de sakti thi..aaj tak ke CHOSENS ke history me kabhi kisi student ne kisi WHIZZ se aisi baat toh nahi ki thi...

ye unke liye naakabile bardasht tha aur isiliye bina kuch kahe,wo SOVEREIGN ke office ki taraf badh chali....

wahin unke jaane ke baad ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER turant mere paas aaye aur...


ACCCHUTA-abbe pagal ho gaya hai kya????aag ke upar pichwada nahi seka karte...gaa**d jal jaati hai...

saale,hume yahan teen PHASES nikalne hain..aur tu hai ki shuru me hi khud ki lene par tul gaya hai...

SLUNDER-RAAZ,i didn't expect this from you....mai toh tumhe ek sencere aur serious ladka samajhta tha par tum toh is ACCHUTA se bhi zyada galat ho...

ACHHUTA-abbe,tu shawl me lapetke mujhe hi joota kyun maar raha hai...???

saale,matlab koi bhi kuch galat karega toh tu mujhse compare karkar usse rank dega kya???

SLUNDER-tu chup kar.. tere se kisika koi comparison hi nahi hai..licchadpan ki aakhri hadh hai tu....

MAI-tum dono ki bakwaas nahi sunane ke liye hi mai aaj alag khada hua tha...phir bhi mere paas aakar hi bhownk rahe ho dono....

aur SLUNDER,ek baat bata,tu hai kaun mujhse expectations rakhne waala...

maine kaha tha mere liye raay banane ko....apne kaam se kaam rakhna sikho tum dono aur sabse pehle mere aas paas bhinbhinana band karo....


meri baat sun dono ne ek baar mujhe fir ek baar ek dusre ghura aur apni apni jagah jaakar khade ho gaye...

yahan hamari hostlers ki line me toh meri hi baat chal rahi thi, par same chiz discholars ke line me bhi ho rahi thi...

aakhon me awishwas liye wo sab bhi meri hi taraf dekh rahe the...

aur in aankhon me MAHI ki aankhen bhi thi jo mujhe dekh....


MAHI-who is this guy man????itna ATTITUDE!!!!!

ALFREEN-he's a bloody basterd.....


MAHI ke baaju me hi khadi ALFREEN,jo mujhe ghusse se hi dekh rahi thi,uske mooh se mere liye ye pyar bhare shabd nikle....

wahi ALFREEN ki baat sun jab MAHI ne uski taraf dekha,toh uske chehre ke haaw bhaaw dekh wo samajh gayi ki ALFREEN mujhe pehle se jaanti hai aur isiliye...


MAHI-u know this guy???

ALFREEN-haan..ye bhi EARTH se hai....aur ek number ka ehsaan faramosh ladka hai.... jaisa behaviour isne abhi dikhaya hai,yahi iska character hai...isse kisiki bhi feelings se koi matlab nahi hai...

itna hi nahi,ye wahi hai jiski wajah se mujhe jite ji maar diya gaya tha...

mere mom dad itne saalon tak mujhe mara hua samajh tadpe...

ye unhike orphanage me bada hua hai....par fir bhi mere mom dad ki bilkul bhi respect nahi karta...

jinhone iski zindagi bachayi,isse ek achi khaasi life di,jab ye unka nahi ho paaya toh fir yahan ka kaise hoga????


ALFREEN ne MAHI ko abse pehle bas itna bataya tha ki kisi aur GOD GIFTED bacche ki wajah se usse 22 saal pehle yahan laaya gaya tha aur kuch dino pehle hi wo wapas hosh me aayi hai...

isse zyada usne kuch nahi kaha tha..but ab baaki ki baat sun MAHI ko behad hairani hui....par usse ALFREEN ki RAAZ ke uske mom dad ko disrespect karne waali baat hazam nahi hui...

kyunki RAAZ bhi ek SAVENT tha..aur ek SAVENT ki soch normal insaano se kayi guna zyada aage ki hoti hai...

fir aise me RAAZ ka itna negetive hona,usse jach nahi raha tha aur isiliye...


MAHI-yaar baaki sab toh thik hai..but agar RAAZ ko tere mom dad ne bade hone me help ki hai toh wo unse kaise disrespectful ho sakta hai...????

ALFREEN-chal,demo dikhati hun....


ye bol ALFREEN meri taraf badh gayi aur uske piche piche MAHI....




WAHIN SOVEREIGN OFFICE ME:-




YES COME IN WHIZZ OPHILIA....


SOVEREIGN ki office ke darwaze par knock hua jisse sun andar baithe SOVES AKSHAANT ne wahan moujud magical sensors se ye jaan liya ki bahar WHIZZ OPHILIA aayi hui hain...

wahin permission milte hi WHIZZ OPHILIA andar ghussi aur...


OPHILIA-SOVES....mujhe aapse ek SAVENT ke baare me baat karni hai...


OPHILIA ki awaaz me seriousness aur ghussa saaf jhalak raha tha jisse AKSHAANT bhaamp gaye the...


AKSHAANT-okay...kis SAVENT ke baare me???

OPHILIA-RAAZ....


RAAZ ka naam sunte hi AKSHAANT ke kaan khade ho gaye the....


AKSHAANT-bolo,mai sun raha hun???

OPHILIA-sir, CHOSENS ke puri history me itna battamiz SAVENT aaj tak nahi aaya hai...he has no manners..no addicates....

usse baat tak karne ka lihaz nahi hai...he is a complete douchebag....


RAAZ ke baare me aisi baatein sun AKSHAANT man hi man kaafi hairan hue but unhone apne face par bina koi reaction laaye...


AKSHAANT-hua kya hai OPHILIA????


AKSHAANT ke sawal par jawab dene ke bajaye OPHILIA ne....


OPHILIA-DRISHTI VARGHAMAN

SHOW THE SEEN


OPHILIA ne ye spell bola jiske uccharit hote hi uske aankhon se ek roshni nikal uske aur AKSHAANT ke beech rook gayi..

aur agle hi pal wo roshni ek chalchitra me badal gayi jisme wahi scene chal raha tha jo OPHILIA aur RAAZ ke beech ghata tha...

jaise jaise scene aage badhta gaya, AKSHAANT ke chehre par hairani ke bhaav aate gaye..

unhe yakin nahi hua ki jiske baare me janane ke liye wo khud itne utsuk hain,wo RAAZ aisa niklega...

AKSHAANT ko ye toh nahi pata tha ki RAAZ special kyun hai,par RAAZ ki OPHILIA ke saath hui baatein sunkar ab wo sochne lag gaye the ki RAAZ bhala special ho kaise sakta hai????

but saath hi wo ye bhi jaante the ki bhale kuch bhi ho, RAAZ jinki rachna hai,unke faislon par sawal nahi uthaya jaa sakta aur isiliye...


AKSHAANT-OPHILIA....mai chahta hun ki tum RAAZ ko avoid karo aur baaki ki class par dhyan do....

agar RAAZ khud kuch puche ya kisi activity me part lena chahe,toh hi usse involve karo varna let him be.....


AKSHAANT ki baat sun OPHILIA ka toh sir hi ghum gaya tha...

kahan wo ye soch kar aayi thi ki jo hua usse dekh AKSHAANT RAAZ ko punish karenge but yahan toh sab pura ulta hi ho gaya tha...

usse toh jaise AKSHAANT ki baat samajh me hi nahi aayi thi aur isiliye wo kuch kehne ko hui par....


AKSHAANT-mai jaanta hua OPHILIA ki meri baat sunkar tumhe shock bhi laga hai aur bura bhi..

but trust me,maine jo bhi kaha hai,sirf yahi ek option hai...

AKSHAANT ki baat toh ab bhi OPHILIA samajh nahi paayi par AKSHAANT ke chehre ke bhaav ko dekh wo samajh gayi thi ki unhone jo bhi bola hai,bhale hi kadwa hai but sach hai...

par phir bhi OPHILIA ke andar chal rahe uthal puthal ne usse chain naa aane diya aur isiliye uske mooh se chota but important sawal nikal hi gaya...


OPHILIA-why SOVS???kyun????

AKSHAANT-filhal iska jawab mere paas bhi nahi hai OPHILIA...aur naahi mai is layak hun jo khud is jawab ka kaaran dhundu...

tumhe bas wahi keh sakta hun jo khud se kaha hai...

intazar karo sahi waqt ka....is naye RAAZ ke UNFOLD hone ka....


ab koi topic bacha nahi tha conversation ka,isiliye OPHILIA chupchaap SOVEREIGN office se baahar nikal gayi....



BACK TO HERO:-


RAAZ,APNE TEACHER SE AISE BAAT KARTE HAIN KYA????


mujhe ye gyan diya tha ALFREEN ne jo MAHI ke saath mere paas apne point ko proove karne ke liye aayi thi...

ab jab wo yahi chahti hai toh yahi sahi.......isiliye......


MAI-us raat jab tumhe first time dekha tha toh laga tha ki tum bhi mere aur baaki orphanage ke bacchon ki hi tarah adopted ho...

but ab tumne proove kar diya ki tum FLORIN sir ki real genetically produced beti ho...

ALFREEN-matlab???

MAI-tumhare andar bhi tumhare baap ki khubiyan jo hain...dusro ke kaam me ungli karne ki....


meri baat sun ALFREEN ka dimag kharab ho chuka tha but usse zyada bura MAHI ko laga tha....uski eklouti dost aur saath hi uske pitaji ki beizatti jo ki thi maine...aur isiliye.....


MAHI-mind your tounge...

MAI-and you guyzzz,mind ur own business.....ye ek behatrin tarika hai khud ki insult naa karwane kaa....

itna kuch sikhoge yahan,lage haathon ye hunar bhi sikh lena....

ALFREEN-beta,3 phases nikalne hain tujhe yahan....tu soch bhi nahi sakta ki kya haal karungi mai tera itne waqt me...

MAI-BETA!!!haan,tum aisa keh sakti ho...16 saal ki dikhne me aur 16 saal ke hone me fark toh hota hi hai...

22 saal se mari padi thi tu yahan,toh is lihaz se toh tu meri maa ki umr ki hi hui....

ALFREEN-MAA....is shabd ka matlab bhi pata hai tujhe....kaise pata hoga,hoti toh jaanta naa....

MAI-teri toh MAA hai naa...tune kya ukhad liya...22 saalon se ek anath ki hi zindagi toh jee rahi thi tu...oops,correction..so rahi thi tu....

umr ke lihaz se dekhen,toh tu mujhse bhi high ranked anath hai...

MAHI-bas.. bohot hua..sirf isiliye kyunki tu is prestigious institution ka anchaha hi sahi but ek part hai,teri ye saari bakwaas sun rahi hun mai...

warna sirf 2 minute lagenge,mujhe tere is shakal aur AKAD ko todne me....

MAI-AKAD???jisse tu akad keh rahi hai,wo mera sach hai..aur itihas gawah hai,sach taklif hi deta hai...

aur rahi baat teri,toh khol apna magaj aur bas itna samajh,ki teri soch se baahar hai meri AKAD,

aur teri aukaad se baahar hai mera ......ATTITUDE......





AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....




AAPKA APNA V..J....
 

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Oh my God .I can't believe ..fast impression Mahi ko acha lga ya na lga mujhe ghanta Fark nhi padta. .mujhe to bahut acha lga.
AKAD???jisse tu akad keh rahi hai,wo mera sach hai..aur itihas gawah hai,sach taklif hi deta hai...
aur rahi baat teri,toh khol apna magaj aur bas itna samajh,ki teri soch se baahar hai meri AKAD,
aur teri aukaad se baahar hai mera ......ATTITUDE........
fabulous dialogue bro. Mjaa aagya ..RAAZ.. V.J see aage hai iska Attitude...
mujhe aisi hi koi ummid thi aaj RAAZ se Ophila ko Kiya replay Mila. Gjbb ..
nope....i dont understand and i never will...aur jahan tak baat apke is so called CHOSENS ki hai,toh yahan mujhe bulaya gaya hai..yahan aane ke liye maine apply nahi kiya tha.....

so the bottom line is this...i am not bound to anything... and as for you,aap puch sakte hain,bata bhi sakte hai par order nahi de sakte...kahnn se sochte ho Bhai..smjh Mai nhi aarha hai tarif Mai kiy likhu Kiya na likhu. ..sorry bro speechless hu aaj
 
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