Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

[Vipul]

update 2 ghante me....

Waiting bhai

 

[Naik]

Bahot bahot shaandaar update
Last ki aath line kamal ki thi
Thanks for lovely update

 

[Looserr]

Bhai jaldi do

 

[Jamesleon]

Waitig vj bhai

 

[vj4u]

bhai next update ke liye aur kitna time lagega ab aur wair nahi ho raha hain kyoki last time jo brahmastra chhoda hain woh sabse bura asar kar chuka hain aisa kya hain hida main jiske liye raaz itni humdardi rakhti hain kya aisa chhupa rakha hida ke under jo raaz ne itani badi bat kar di

Still Waiting Bhai...

iske baare me aaj ke nahi balki 62nd update me pata chalega...

 

[vj4u]

Bahot bahot shaandaar update
Last ki aath line kamal ki thi
Thanks for lovely update

thanks brother..be along

 

[vj4u]

AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MABBA VIDEOUS KO PUNISH KARNE KI KOSHISH KARTI HAI JISME WO NAAKAMIYAB HOTI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ HIDA SE EK PARABLE KE THROUGH BAAT KARTA HAI...


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)




UPDATE-61




PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-WEAKLING'S STAY







WAISE AAP TEENO KIS PLANET SE HAIN...???

BETA HUM WOOZY PLANET SE HAIN...



SLUNDER ke sawal par BRAWNY ke father SHALTON ne ye jawab diya tha...

shaam ka waqt hai...par jahan STELLARS catagory ke SAVENTS ke paas is PHASE ki duniya me karne ke liye bohot kuch hai, GROOMERS bhi is duniya ko limited way me hi sahi enjoy toh kar hi sakte hain,wahin WEAKLINGS ke paas institution se aane ke baad karne ke liye kuch hota nahi hai aur isiliye ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER BRAWNY ke quarter me chit chat karne ke liye pahunch gaye...

quater me aa ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke khudke intro ke baad BRAWNY ke dad SHALTON aur mom NAOMI ne bhi apna intro diya jiske baad SLUNDER ne unse unke PLANET ke baare me pucha jiska jawab SHALTON ne abhi abhi diya tha...

wahin SHALTON ki baat sun....


ACCHUTA-waise aap log wahan apne PLANET me kya karte the...???

NAOMI-beta hum wahan ke royal family se the...

SLUNDER-arre waah...aap log bhi royal family se belong karte hain..hum dono bhi apne apne PLANETS ke royal family se hain...

NAOMI-wakayi...!!!!....

ACCHUTA-haan aunty.. bhale hi ye shakal se prince dikhta nahi hai par unfortunately yahi iska kadwa sach hai..

SLUNDER-abbe,meri shakal ke baare me bolne se pehle kabhi toh self analysis kar liye kar....

ACCHUTA-haww...uncle aunty baithe hain aur phir bhi tune abbe bola..matlab gaali di...

dekha uncle,dekha aunty,bola naa bhale hi shakal lafango waali ho,baat karte waqt lofaron waali ulti nikalti ho,par fir bhi unfortunately ye ek prince hai...


ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki nok jhonk dekhkar najaane kitne waqt ke baad SHALTON, NAOMI aur BRAWNY ke chehre par muskaan aayi thi jisse dekh ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER bhi apni behes ko rok muskura uthe...

reason...

BRAWNY aur uske parents ke chehre par muskaan laane ke liye hi ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ek dusre ka mazak uda rahe the aur ab jab aisa ho gaya tha toh...


SLUNDER-uncle,aunty....aap dono naa,yunhi muskurate raha kijiye....


SLUNDER ki baat sun apni wo vaastavikta jisse SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA ki behesbaazi ka maza uthate hue SHALTON aur NAOMI bhul se gaye the,wo unhe wapas yaad aa gaya jiske baad unke chehre ke muskaan wapas chali gayi jisse dekh...


SLUNDER-kya hua uncle,aunty...??aap dono firse udaas kyun ho gaye....kya maine kuch galat keh diya...????

ACHHUTA-galat sirf teri shakal hai,aur kuch nahi...uncle,aunty,hum sabhi filhal ek hi catagory me hain..

ek tarah se dekha jaaye toh hum abhi ek family hi hain...toh agar aapko thik lage toh aapki problem aap humse share kar sakte hain...

problem kam ho haa ho,par share karne se shayad aapka dard zaroor kuch kam ho jaayega....!!!


jahan ek taraf ACCHUTA ki baat sun BRAWNY aur uske PARENTS usse ek tak dekhne lage the wahin dusri taraf SLUNDER bhi hairani se ACCHUTA ko dekhe jaa raha tha...

usse vishwas nahi ho raha tha ki wo ACCHUTA jo hamesha har baat ko yunhi mazak me udaa deta hai,wo aaj itni gehri baat kar raha tha...

ACCHUTA ki baat sun wakayi SHALTON aur NAOMI ko wo aur SLUNDER family ki tarah hi lagne lage the...

iske do reasons the..

pehli ye ki filhal ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER dono hi unke bete ki tarah WEAKLINGS the jiska matlab tha ki yahan jo taklif wo mehsoos kar rahe the,waisa hi kuch ye dono bhi kar rahe the aur dusri ye thi ki SHALTON, NAOMI aur BRAWNY ke puri life me unke parwar me kabhi bhi kisine bhi bina apne matlab ke un teeno se hamdardi nahi rakhi thi...

aisa kyun??? aayiye un dono ki zubani hi jaan lijiye...

ACCHUTA ki baat sun SHALTON aur NAOMI ne pehle ek baar ek dusre ki taraf aur fir apne bacche ki taraf dekha jo band zuban aur khamosh aankhen liye un dono ko hi dekh raha tha aur fir....

SHALTON-beta kuch taklif zakhm ban itne purane ho jaate hai jinhe jitna khodo,wo utne gehre hote chale jaate hain....

SLUNDER-aapki taklif toh hum nahi jaante uncle par aapki baat ko sun us taklif ki gehrayi ko zaroor mehsoos kar rahe hain..

agar aapko lagta hai ki hume batane ke baad aapka gum kam naa hokar aur badh jaayega toh rehne dijiye...

hume batane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai...


SLUNDER ki baat par NAOMI ke chehre par ek fiki hasi aa gayi aur fir....


NAOMI-batayen yaa naa batayen,haalat toh same hi rahenge...

ab tak chup rehhna try kiya hai,aaj bata kar dekh lete hain....

darasal hum apne planet me bhale hi royalty the,par ye royalty sirf naam ki thi...

ACCHUTA-matlab...!!!

SHALTON-darasal humare planet WOOZY me ONE KING RULE nahi hai...wahan rule ek CHAIN karti hai..

CHAIN ka matlab hai a group of people...

is chain me kamsekam 3 logon ka hone zaroori hai...

har pidhi me jo us waqt ke current ruler hote hain,unke khandaan me kamsekam 3 waaris hone chahiye jo is CHAIN system ko carry forward kar saken..

agar aisa nahi hai toh fir current royalty ke family members ke kaabil bacchon ko next CHAIN me shaamil kiya jaata hai...

jab mai chota tha toh ek jaanleva bimari jo ki failti bhi thi,uske chalte mere mom dad ki death ho gayi thi...

us waqt mere dad ke saath unke dono bhai hamare PLANET ke rulers the...

waise toh dekhne waalon ko ye lagta tha ki teeno bhaiyon me bohot pyar hai,par andar hi andar mere dono uncles mere dad se nafrat karte the aur wo isiliye kyunki un teeno me mere dad sabse efficient the aur bhale hi PLANET ke har faisle teeno bhai milkar lete the par mere dad ke liye har faisle ko,unki raay ko hamari praja hamesha sabse zyada samman deti thi aur yahi wajah thi jiske kaaran mere dono uncles apne bhai aur mere PITAH se man hi man nafrat karte the...

aur kyunki mai bhi apne pitah par hi gaya tha jis kaaran hamari praja mere pitah ke baad mujhe hi apna shashak manane lagi thi,is wajah se unke man me mere liye krodh bhi prachand hi raha tha...

aise me jab mere MAATA PITAH ki akaal mrtiyu hui toh jaise mere uncles ki man ki murad puri ho gayi thi..

niyam ke mutabik mere dono uncles ne CHAIN ko pura karne ke liye apne ek relative ko jo ki unka chamcha jaisa tha,usse apne saath ruler niyukt kar diya...

aur fir hui mere bure dino ki shuruat...

mujhe apne hi mahal se nikal diya gaya....itna hi nahi,mera naam mere school se bhi katwa diya gaya tha...

par kyunki hamare PLANET ke log mere pitah ka bohot samman karte the, isiliye unhone mere liye apne beech ek chota sa ghar banwa diya jahan mai rehne laga...

par ye bhi mai kuch hi din tak kar paaya.... mere uncles ke aadesh par PALACE ke sainik har din mujhe mock kiya karte the,bewajah mujhpar haath utha diya karte the...

issi beech ek din mere uncles ne sainikon ko mujhe maarne ka aadesh de diya aur ek raat jab mai yunhi raaste par bhatak raha tha toh maine sainikon ko apne ghar ki taraf jaate hue dekha..

unke haav bhaav dekhkar mujhe andesha hua ki wi punah mujhe haani pahunchane ki mansha liye hi mere ghar jaa rahe hain..

maine unka picha kiya aur is dauran unki baat sun mera shak yakin me badal gaya...

unke mooh se ye sun ki mere uncles ne unhe mujhe marne ka aadesh diya hai,ab mera city me rehna khatre se khaali nahi re gaya tha aur isiliye maine turant city chhodne ka nirnay le liya...

mai apne city se bahar nadi ke kinare ek jhopda banakar rehne laga....

khaane aur aag jalane ke liye mai us nadi ke aage bane ek jungle jaaya karta tha..

ussi jungle ke beech ek kasba tha jahan meri mulakat BRAWNY ki maa NAOMI se hui aur isse dekhte hi mujhe isse pyar ho gaya...

humari mulakatein hoti rahi aur isse bhi mujhse pyar ho gaya tha...

parivaar ke naam par NAOMI ki bhi bas ek daadi hi thi jinhone apne aakhri waqt me NAOMI ka haath mere haath me de diya tha....

humne shaadi kar li...par ye baat najane kaise mere uncles ke kaano me pahunch gayi....

mere raaton raat city ko yun chhod dene ka kaaran wahan ke log mere uncles ko hi maan rahe the...

kuch groups ne PALACE aur wahan rehne logon ke khilaf aandolan bhi chhed diya tha...

aur aise me jab mere uncles ko pata chala ki meri shaadi ho gayi hai toh unhe ye dar satane laga ki kahin mere waaris ko hi saare log WOOZY ka naya ruler naa manane lage aur isiliye unhone turant apne sainik bheje taaki mera aur meri patni ka kissa hi khatm kar den..

par ek baar fir mujhe is baare me pata chal gaya aur mai NAOMI ke lekar bhaag nikla...

hum har kuch mahino me apna thikana badalte rahe....aur issi beech paida hua BRAWNY....

pata nahi kyun par BRAWNY paida hone ke baad se hi hamesha kaafi underconfident aur halka dara dara rehta tha..

bachpan me toh sabhi bache rote hain,par BRAWNY kuch zyada hi roya karta tha...

jab ye 3 saal ka hua toh maine jaise taise iske liye kuch books arrange kiya aur isse padhane laga...

par aashcharya mujhe tab hua jab isne utni choti umar me hi mere laaye sabhi books kuch dino me hi padh bhi liye aur puri tarah samajh bhi liye...

ye jab thoda bada hua toh chupchaap schools chale jaaya karta tha aur class ke window se hi jo bhi andar padhaya jaata tha,wo ye padh bhi leta tha aur ek baar me samajh bhi leta tha..

par itna honhar hone ke baawjud ye hamesha underconfident hi raha...aur fir aaya wo din jab hume is jagah CHOSENS ke baare me pata chala...

aur issi ke saath ye bhi pata chala ki kyun hamara baccha itna tez dimag waala hai..

aakhir wo ek SAVENT jo hai...

aur fir hum yahan aa gaye...yahan aakar aur pichle PHASE me us aalishan ABODE me rehkar hume laga ki ab humari saari pareshaani khatm ho jaayegi par aisa kuch khaas toh hua nahi...

is PHASE me hum wapas fir wahi andhere me aa gaye par dekha jaaye toh ye jagah fir bhi thik hi hai..

kamsekam yahan humari jaan ko toh koi khatra nahi....

bas itni si hi hai hamari kahani....


ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER jo bohot dhyan se SHALTON ko sun rahe the,unhe bhi in teeno ke liye bohot bura lag raha tha...


ACCHUTA-itni painful kahani hai aapki...par aakhri me jo positive baat kahi na aapne,hats off uncle..

ATTITUDE aisa hi hona chahiye..negetive se negetive situation me bhi kuch naa kuch positive nikalna...

NAOMI-hume yahan koi shikayat nahi hai..bas BRAWNY ke liye bura lagta hai...

kyunki,isse lagta hai ki iske under perform karne ki wajah se hume ye zindagi jeeni padh rahi hai jabki humne isse kayi baar bataya hai ki aisa kuch bhi nahi hai aur hume ispar naaz hai...


ACCHUTA-toh isiliye din bhar rondhu rehta hai tu...arre yaar,kya milta hai hai tention lekar...

haasil kuch hona nahi,bina matlab bas present kharab karna hai...

bhai,bhale hi tu underperform kar raha hai,ek WEAKLING hai par tu ye kaise bhul gaya ki tu ek SAVENT bhi hai...

SAVENT...matlab samajhta hai naa is word ka...GOD GIFTED hai tu...aur jo GOD ko nazar me ek GIFT ho,usse kis baat ki tention...

bindas reh,dekhna sab kuch thik ho jaayega....


ACCHUTA ki baat sun SHALTON aur NAOMI ke saath saath BRAWNY ke chehre par bhi ek smile aa gayi jisse dekh..


SLUNDER-ab ye hui naa baat..aise hi smile karte raha kar..isse problems ki jalti hai...

ACCHUTA-aur filhal hamare saath chal... PHASE ghoom kar aate hai..

BRAWNY-abhi!!!!

ACCHUTA-nahi..agle saal chalte hain...


ACCHUTA ke sarcasm ko samajh...


BRAWNY-par yaar wahan jaakar bhi kya faayda..??entry toh hume wahan ke kisi jagah par milegi nahi....

wahan toh sirf STELLARS ka hi roll hai...

ACCHUTA-arre mere bhai,jinka pet bhara ho,unhe khaane ki keemat aur swad,dono ka hi sahi andaza nahi hota,sirf bhooko ko hota hai..

STELLAR bhale hi PHASE ki har activity ko explore karne ke liye qualified hain par wo sab wahan ki har jagah ke andar jaakar bhi utna maza nahi utha paayenge jitna hum bahar se hi bas aankhon se sekh kar utha lenge..

isiliye bataon me waqt mat gawa aur chal...


BRAWNY-tum log chalo,mai fresh hokar aata hun...

SLUNDER-ye bhi sahi hai..chal hum bhi fresh ho jaate hain..

ACCHUTA-tu ho..meri handsomeness hamesha ek si hi rehti hai.....


apne baal ko sawarte hue ACCHUTA ne ye baat kahi jispar wahan baithe sabhi has diye...

BRAWNY ko jaldi fresh hone ko bol ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER unke quater se nikal apne quater ki taraf chale diye..

apne quater me ghuste hi,jahan ab andhere ne ghar kar liya tha par kal bole un dono ke SPELL ki wajah se wo us andhere me bhi saaf dekh sakte the,un dono ne dekha khatiye par baithe mujhe,aur meri nazar un dono par hi thi....

mujhe dekh wo dono meri taraf badhe hi the ki tabhi...

achanak unka sir ghoom gaya..

reason...unki aankhon ke aage ek drishyam nachne laga tha....

us drishyam ko dekh un dono ki hi haalat kharab ho gayi thi...

kyun...???aayiye,khud dekh lijiye...


DRISHYAM....:-


ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER dono meri taraf badhe hi the ki...


KHACHH.....KHACHH.....UMMMM.....UMMMMM.....


ek talwar tezi se unki taraf badhi aur agle hi pal un dono ke haath kat chuke the...

aur issi wajah se ek tez chikh nikalne ko hui un dono ke mooh se par isse pehle hi aisa ho paata,un dono ke mooh bhi sil gaye the jis wajah se unki cheekh unke gale ke andar hi reh gayi.....


DRISHYAM ENDS:-


DRISHYAM ko dekh un dono ki ghiggi si bandh gayi thi..halki halki thartharahat ke saath wo meri taraf dekh rahe the...

wahin mai bhi apni jagah se utha aur theek un dono ke saamne jaakar khada ho gaya...


MAI-zyada taklif kisme hoti hai...??jab haath kate hon ya fir jab haath katne se hone waale dard ke baawjud cheekha naa jaa sake..!!!

tum dono ko dikha DRISHYAM tumhara bhavishya bhi ho sakta hai...

maine kal kaha tha naa ki rone do BRAWNY ko fir bhi tum dono usse motivate karne,uska dard baatne chale gaye...

jab khudki zindagi udhaar ki ho toh dusro ko jeene ke falsafe nahi sikhaye jaate...

waqt hai,samajh jaao,kyunki mera samjhana tum dono ko pasand nahi aayega...


meri baat sunane ke baad bhi wo dono jadh hokar hi khade the...

jo DRISHYAM un dono ne dekha tha,wo itna real tha ki wo usse bahar hi nahi aa paaye the..

wahin apni baat keh mai unke baaju se hokar baahar jaane laga aur..


MAI-BRAWNY aa raha hai..jao, PHASE ghumna hai aajao ghumkar...

apni baat keh mai toh aage badh gaya par meri baat sun ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki hairani aur badh gayi..

ek pal pehle ek khatarnaak DRISHYAM ke through maine unhe BRAWNY se ek tarah se door rehne ko kaha tha aur ab mai khud unhe uske saath PHASE ghumne ke kiye keh raha tha..

ab aise me dimag toh ghumega hi....

khair, options toh the nahi becharon ke paas aur isiliye dono chupchaap mere piche ho liye...

SLUNDER jo fresh hone aaya tha,wo baat bhi jaise wo bhul hi gaya tha...

wahin mere quater se bahar niklate hi mujhe dikha BRAWNY aur jab uski nazar mujhpar padi toh...


BRAWNY-hi RAAZ....


aaj pehli baar tha jab BRAWNY ne mujhse baat ki thi aur wo isiliye kyunki yahan aane ke baad aaj pehli baar wo thoda khush tha..

wahin uske greet par maine naa toh kuch kaha aur naahi uski taraf dekha.bas aage badh gaya jisse usse halki hairani toh hui par fir wo mere quater ki taraf badh gaya jahan entrance par hi usse ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER mil gaye...


BRAWNY-chalen...!!!


BRAWNY ki baat par dono ne bas apna sir haan me hilaya aur uske saath aage badh gaye..


BRAWNY-yaar ek baat batao..ye RAAZ kuch weird nahi hai..abhi maine usse dekha toh greet kiya..

par usne kuch kaha bhi nahi aur toh aur mujhe ignore bhi kar diya...


BRAWNY ki baat sun ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki phat gayi..

BRAWNY meri burayi kar raha tha aur unhe maalum tha ki aisa karna uske saath saath un dono ke liye bhi musibat laa sakta tha aur isiliye..


ACCHUTA-usse kisi se zyada baat karna pasand nahi..


ACCHUTA ki baat par BRAWNY fir kuch bolne waala tha ki...


SLUNDER-arre jaldi chalo yaar.. waise bhi PHASE yahan se kaafi door hai..

baat ko palaththe hue SLUNDER ne ye baat kahi jispar wo teeno hi thoda tez chalte hue PHASE ki taraf nikal pade..

par kuch door aage badhne ke baad jab un teeno ko mai dikha toh....


ACCHUTA-ab jaldi jakar bhi kya karna hai..koi time limit toh hai nahi....aaram se hi chalte hain.


BRAWNY ko nahi pata tha ki mere ghusse se bachne aur mujhse jitna ho sake door rehne ki wajah se ACCHUTA ne ye baat kahi thi aur isiliye bina zyada soche un dono ke saath wo bhi slow ho gaya..





PLACE-CITY





WOWWW.YOU WERE RIGHT AL...THIS PLACE IS ACTUALLY MAGNIFICENT.....


ye shabd nikle the FLORIN ke mooh se...

reason...is waqt FLORIN, MARIA, ALFREEN, MAHI,MABEL, FELLAR aur GRACE ILLUSIONARY OCEANERIUM ke andar khade the aur yahan ke nazare ko dekh kar hi FLORIN ke mooh se ye shabd nikle the...

kal RAAZ se milne ke baad MARIA aur FLORIN ka aur kajin jaane ka man hi nahi kiya aur unke aisa kehne par sabhi ne agle din city explore karne ka plan kiya..

aur aaj sabse pehle ye sab yahan OCEANERIUM me hi pahunche the....

khair,

ILLUSIONARY OCEANERIUM....ek ajeebogarib par adhbhudh OCEANERIUM...

ajeeb isiliye kyunki OCEANERIUM ocean ke andar lipte hue banta hai par yahan aisa kuch tha nahi..ye OCEANERIUM OCEAN ke illusion ko paida karkar banaya gaya tha..

aur adhbhudh isiliye kyunki is OCEANERIUM me bramhaand ke har PLANET ke ocean me rehne waale durlabh jeev moujud the aur unhe hi dekhkar FLORIN aur baaki sab eccited ho gaye the..

itna hi nahi,glass ke us taraf jahan jeev dikh rahe the,wahan har wo jeev jisse dekhkar unke baare me janane ke liye man me jigyasa jage,agar unhe dekh kar point kiya jaaye toh us jeev ki puri detail,uski har khoobi live digital way me ussi jeev ke through dikhti thi aur ye wakayi ek thrilling experience tha...

yahi kaaran tha ki early evening se yahan aaye ye sab pichle 4 ghante se issi jagah par hi atak gaye the...


ALFREEN-guyzzz..ab chale yahan se...dusri jagah check out karte hain...

MARIA-aaj nahi beta..aaj toh yahin itna maza aa gaya..baaki kal karte hain...aur waise next hume shopping karni hai aur uske liye kaafi time chahiye..

ab agar wahan gaye toh hi kaafi late ho jaayega....

MARIA ki baat par FLORIN aur saath hi mr and mrs FELLAR ne bhi haami bhari jiske baad sabhi ne apne apne ABODE jaane ka faisla kiya aur OCEANERIUM se bahar aa gaye...


MARIA-agar RAAZ bhi saath hota toh kitna acha hota naa...!!

FLORIN-haan ye toh hai...par mujhe nahi lagta ki wo hamare saath kisi bhi jagah ke andar chalta....

MARIA-hmm.par mujhe usse dekhne ka man tha...kal pehli baar wo humse jis tarah mila,i wanted that to experience one more time..


ab tak sab OCEANERIUM se bahar aa chuke the...

MARIA ki baat par muskurate hue FLORIN ki nazar saamne ki taraf gayi toh....


FLORIN-lo,GOD ne sun li tumhari...dekho RAAZ aa raha hai...


MARIA ko laga ki FLORIN unse mazak kar rahe hain aur isiliye bina saamne dekhe...


MARIA-haha..very funny...aap mujhe bewakuf bana rahe hain...


GOOD EVENING UNCLE..GOOD EVENING AUNTY....


MARIA ke sawal par FLORIN kuch kehte,ki usse pehle hi un dono ke kaano me ye awaaz padi jisse sun MARIA chownkte hue saamne ki taraf ghumi aur unke aisa karte hi unhone dekha ki mai wakayi unke saamne hun...

mujhe dekh khush ho MARIA aage badhi aur mujhe hug kiya..

aur unke baad FLORIN ne bhi mujhe hug kiya....

wahin hum sab se thodi door halke andhere me jahan par kisiki nazar turant nahi padegi,khada tha VIDEOUS...

aur jab usne MARIA aur FLORIN ko mujhe hug karte hue dekha toh uske mooh se bas itna hi nikla...


VIDEOUS-interesting......



khair,MAHI, ALFREEN,MABEL aur uske parents jo kuch door khade hokar baatein kar rahe the,unhone bhi meri awaaz suni thi aur mujhe saamne dekh wo bhi meri taraf badh gaye...


FELLAR-young man..kal humse toh tumhari mulakat ho hi nahi paayi....

hello,i am FELLAR...

GRACE-and i am GRACE....


mr FELLAR ne apna intro dekar apna haath aage badhaya jisse maine pakad liya tha....

aur aisa hone par..


FELLAR-wooo..you are damn strong my boy..i can feel the strongness of your hands...yakin nahi hota ki tumhari jaisi handsome aur strong personality bhi WEAKLINGS me ho sakti hai...

MAI-uncle,taakatwar bande aksar buddhiman aur hoshiyar logon ke body guards hote hain...

ek tarah se wo bhi WEAKLINGS bhi hue naa...takat toh hai sharir me,par zindagi kisi aur ke sahare chal rahi hai...


mere tark par MARIA, FLORIN, FELLAR aur GRACE thode stunned hue par ALFREEN aur MAHI toh kuch zyada hi stunned ho gaye the..

mere tark un dono ne hi pehle bhi sune hue the,infact jhele hue the par abhi jo maine kaha tha wo ek deep intellectual baat thi, jisse wo dono kaafi impress ho gaye the...


FELLAR-that was really good my boy..aur tumhari is baat ne ye bhi saabit kar diya ki tum sirf strong hi nahi,balki kaafi intelligent bhi ho...

waise hum MABEL ke parents hain...


MABEL-aur MABEL mai hun...pichle PHASE me saath hi padhe the hum par baat kabhi nahi ho paayi thi.. isiliye hi...


muskurati hui MABEL mere paas aayi aur apna haath aage badhaya jisse maine jaise hi thaama,mujhe hua kuch feel jisse mehsoos kar mere chehre par aa gayi ek muskaan..

kyun,ab ye bhi mere naam ki hi tarah hai...RAAZ.....

khair,chehre par muskaan liye mai jhukta chala gaya aur agle hi pal mere honthon ne MABEL ke haathon ko chhu liye,i mean chum liye jisse dekh alag alag reactions aaye...

jahan MABEL halki blush karne lag gayi thi wahin ek normal greeting gesture soch FELLAR aur unki wife normal hi khade rahe...

FLORIN aur MARIA,mujhe aisa kuch karte dekh halke shocked ho gaye the par sabse bada shock laga tha ALFREEN aur MAHI ko jo aankhen faade mujhe hi dekh rahe the...

waise, shock aur uske saath ek aur feeling wahan thode door khade ek bande ke man bhi aayi thi,par wo kaun hai aur wo feeling kya hai,iska khulasa kal hoga....

khair,thodi der chaaron budhaun logon se kuch aur baat karne ke baad...


MAI-okay then..i will take ur leave now... already kaafi late ho chuka hai...mujhe chalna chahiye...

FLORIN-chalo,hum chhod dete hai tumhe..

MAI-nahi wo mere kuch friends bhi yahi aas paas hi hain..mai unke saath chala jaaunga...

FLORIN-are you sure...???

MAI-always uncle....


mere jawab ko sun has diye wo chaaron aur fir wo sab apne apne CHARIOT me baith nikal gaye...

wahin chehre par halki muskaan liye....


MAI-


kise pata tha,mere honthon ki hadh
tere haathon par FISLEGI...

mere ilm ko bhi khabar naa thi,ki tu
mere kaam ki NIKLEGI.....









AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......







AAPKA APNA V...J.....

 

[vj4u]

bhai next update ke liye aur kitna time lagega ab aur wair nahi ho raha hain kyoki last time jo brahmastra chhoda hain woh sabse bura asar kar chuka hain aisa kya hain hida main jiske liye raaz itni humdardi rakhti hain kya aisa chhupa rakha hida ke under jo raaz ne itani badi bat kar di

Still Waiting Bhai...

Besabri se Intzarr rahega

Intejar hai

Intezar hai Bhai jaldi hi update do bhai

Intezar hai Bhai jaldi hi update do bhai

Waiting bhai

Bhai jaldi do

Waitig vj bhai

posted

 

[Neellion]

very nice episode dear friend

 

[Jamesleon]

AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MABBA VIDEOUS KO PUNISH KARNE KI KOSHISH KARTI HAI JISME WO NAAKAMIYAB HOTI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ HIDA SE EK PARABLE KE THROUGH BAAT KARTA HAI...


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)




UPDATE-61




PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-WEAKLING'S STAY







WAISE AAP TEENO KIS PLANET SE HAIN...???

BETA HUM WOOZY PLANET SE HAIN...



SLUNDER ke sawal par BRAWNY ke father SHALTON ne ye jawab diya tha...

shaam ka waqt hai...par jahan STELLARS catagory ke SAVENTS ke paas is PHASE ki duniya me karne ke liye bohot kuch hai, GROOMERS bhi is duniya ko limited way me hi sahi enjoy toh kar hi sakte hain,wahin WEAKLINGS ke paas institution se aane ke baad karne ke liye kuch hota nahi hai aur isiliye ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER BRAWNY ke quarter me chit chat karne ke liye pahunch gaye...

quater me aa ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ke khudke intro ke baad BRAWNY ke dad SHALTON aur mom NAOMI ne bhi apna intro diya jiske baad SLUNDER ne unse unke PLANET ke baare me pucha jiska jawab SHALTON ne abhi abhi diya tha...

wahin SHALTON ki baat sun....


ACCHUTA-waise aap log wahan apne PLANET me kya karte the...???

NAOMI-beta hum wahan ke royal family se the...

SLUNDER-arre waah...aap log bhi royal family se belong karte hain..hum dono bhi apne apne PLANETS ke royal family se hain...

NAOMI-wakayi...!!!!....

ACCHUTA-haan aunty.. bhale hi ye shakal se prince dikhta nahi hai par unfortunately yahi iska kadwa sach hai..

SLUNDER-abbe,meri shakal ke baare me bolne se pehle kabhi toh self analysis kar liye kar....

ACCHUTA-haww...uncle aunty baithe hain aur phir bhi tune abbe bola..matlab gaali di...

dekha uncle,dekha aunty,bola naa bhale hi shakal lafango waali ho,baat karte waqt lofaron waali ulti nikalti ho,par fir bhi unfortunately ye ek prince hai...


ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki nok jhonk dekhkar najaane kitne waqt ke baad SHALTON, NAOMI aur BRAWNY ke chehre par muskaan aayi thi jisse dekh ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER bhi apni behes ko rok muskura uthe...

reason...

BRAWNY aur uske parents ke chehre par muskaan laane ke liye hi ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ek dusre ka mazak uda rahe the aur ab jab aisa ho gaya tha toh...


SLUNDER-uncle,aunty....aap dono naa,yunhi muskurate raha kijiye....


SLUNDER ki baat sun apni wo vaastavikta jisse SLUNDER aur ACCHUTA ki behesbaazi ka maza uthate hue SHALTON aur NAOMI bhul se gaye the,wo unhe wapas yaad aa gaya jiske baad unke chehre ke muskaan wapas chali gayi jisse dekh...


SLUNDER-kya hua uncle,aunty...??aap dono firse udaas kyun ho gaye....kya maine kuch galat keh diya...????

ACHHUTA-galat sirf teri shakal hai,aur kuch nahi...uncle,aunty,hum sabhi filhal ek hi catagory me hain..

ek tarah se dekha jaaye toh hum abhi ek family hi hain...toh agar aapko thik lage toh aapki problem aap humse share kar sakte hain...

problem kam ho haa ho,par share karne se shayad aapka dard zaroor kuch kam ho jaayega....!!!


jahan ek taraf ACCHUTA ki baat sun BRAWNY aur uske PARENTS usse ek tak dekhne lage the wahin dusri taraf SLUNDER bhi hairani se ACCHUTA ko dekhe jaa raha tha...

usse vishwas nahi ho raha tha ki wo ACCHUTA jo hamesha har baat ko yunhi mazak me udaa deta hai,wo aaj itni gehri baat kar raha tha...

ACCHUTA ki baat sun wakayi SHALTON aur NAOMI ko wo aur SLUNDER family ki tarah hi lagne lage the...

iske do reasons the..

pehli ye ki filhal ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER dono hi unke bete ki tarah WEAKLINGS the jiska matlab tha ki yahan jo taklif wo mehsoos kar rahe the,waisa hi kuch ye dono bhi kar rahe the aur dusri ye thi ki SHALTON, NAOMI aur BRAWNY ke puri life me unke parwar me kabhi bhi kisine bhi bina apne matlab ke un teeno se hamdardi nahi rakhi thi...

aisa kyun??? aayiye un dono ki zubani hi jaan lijiye...

ACCHUTA ki baat sun SHALTON aur NAOMI ne pehle ek baar ek dusre ki taraf aur fir apne bacche ki taraf dekha jo band zuban aur khamosh aankhen liye un dono ko hi dekh raha tha aur fir....

SHALTON-beta kuch taklif zakhm ban itne purane ho jaate hai jinhe jitna khodo,wo utne gehre hote chale jaate hain....

SLUNDER-aapki taklif toh hum nahi jaante uncle par aapki baat ko sun us taklif ki gehrayi ko zaroor mehsoos kar rahe hain..

agar aapko lagta hai ki hume batane ke baad aapka gum kam naa hokar aur badh jaayega toh rehne dijiye...

hume batane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai...


SLUNDER ki baat par NAOMI ke chehre par ek fiki hasi aa gayi aur fir....


NAOMI-batayen yaa naa batayen,haalat toh same hi rahenge...

ab tak chup rehhna try kiya hai,aaj bata kar dekh lete hain....

darasal hum apne planet me bhale hi royalty the,par ye royalty sirf naam ki thi...

ACCHUTA-matlab...!!!

SHALTON-darasal humare planet WOOZY me ONE KING RULE nahi hai...wahan rule ek CHAIN karti hai..

CHAIN ka matlab hai a group of people...

is chain me kamsekam 3 logon ka hone zaroori hai...

har pidhi me jo us waqt ke current ruler hote hain,unke khandaan me kamsekam 3 waaris hone chahiye jo is CHAIN system ko carry forward kar saken..

agar aisa nahi hai toh fir current royalty ke family members ke kaabil bacchon ko next CHAIN me shaamil kiya jaata hai...

jab mai chota tha toh ek jaanleva bimari jo ki failti bhi thi,uske chalte mere mom dad ki death ho gayi thi...

us waqt mere dad ke saath unke dono bhai hamare PLANET ke rulers the...

waise toh dekhne waalon ko ye lagta tha ki teeno bhaiyon me bohot pyar hai,par andar hi andar mere dono uncles mere dad se nafrat karte the aur wo isiliye kyunki un teeno me mere dad sabse efficient the aur bhale hi PLANET ke har faisle teeno bhai milkar lete the par mere dad ke liye har faisle ko,unki raay ko hamari praja hamesha sabse zyada samman deti thi aur yahi wajah thi jiske kaaran mere dono uncles apne bhai aur mere PITAH se man hi man nafrat karte the...

aur kyunki mai bhi apne pitah par hi gaya tha jis kaaran hamari praja mere pitah ke baad mujhe hi apna shashak manane lagi thi,is wajah se unke man me mere liye krodh bhi prachand hi raha tha...

aise me jab mere MAATA PITAH ki akaal mrtiyu hui toh jaise mere uncles ki man ki murad puri ho gayi thi..

niyam ke mutabik mere dono uncles ne CHAIN ko pura karne ke liye apne ek relative ko jo ki unka chamcha jaisa tha,usse apne saath ruler niyukt kar diya...

aur fir hui mere bure dino ki shuruat...

mujhe apne hi mahal se nikal diya gaya....itna hi nahi,mera naam mere school se bhi katwa diya gaya tha...

par kyunki hamare PLANET ke log mere pitah ka bohot samman karte the, isiliye unhone mere liye apne beech ek chota sa ghar banwa diya jahan mai rehne laga...

par ye bhi mai kuch hi din tak kar paaya.... mere uncles ke aadesh par PALACE ke sainik har din mujhe mock kiya karte the,bewajah mujhpar haath utha diya karte the...

issi beech ek din mere uncles ne sainikon ko mujhe maarne ka aadesh de diya aur ek raat jab mai yunhi raaste par bhatak raha tha toh maine sainikon ko apne ghar ki taraf jaate hue dekha..

unke haav bhaav dekhkar mujhe andesha hua ki wi punah mujhe haani pahunchane ki mansha liye hi mere ghar jaa rahe hain..

maine unka picha kiya aur is dauran unki baat sun mera shak yakin me badal gaya...

unke mooh se ye sun ki mere uncles ne unhe mujhe marne ka aadesh diya hai,ab mera city me rehna khatre se khaali nahi re gaya tha aur isiliye maine turant city chhodne ka nirnay le liya...

mai apne city se bahar nadi ke kinare ek jhopda banakar rehne laga....

khaane aur aag jalane ke liye mai us nadi ke aage bane ek jungle jaaya karta tha..

ussi jungle ke beech ek kasba tha jahan meri mulakat BRAWNY ki maa NAOMI se hui aur isse dekhte hi mujhe isse pyar ho gaya...

humari mulakatein hoti rahi aur isse bhi mujhse pyar ho gaya tha...

parivaar ke naam par NAOMI ki bhi bas ek daadi hi thi jinhone apne aakhri waqt me NAOMI ka haath mere haath me de diya tha....

humne shaadi kar li...par ye baat najane kaise mere uncles ke kaano me pahunch gayi....

mere raaton raat city ko yun chhod dene ka kaaran wahan ke log mere uncles ko hi maan rahe the...

kuch groups ne PALACE aur wahan rehne logon ke khilaf aandolan bhi chhed diya tha...

aur aise me jab mere uncles ko pata chala ki meri shaadi ho gayi hai toh unhe ye dar satane laga ki kahin mere waaris ko hi saare log WOOZY ka naya ruler naa manane lage aur isiliye unhone turant apne sainik bheje taaki mera aur meri patni ka kissa hi khatm kar den..

par ek baar fir mujhe is baare me pata chal gaya aur mai NAOMI ke lekar bhaag nikla...

hum har kuch mahino me apna thikana badalte rahe....aur issi beech paida hua BRAWNY....

pata nahi kyun par BRAWNY paida hone ke baad se hi hamesha kaafi underconfident aur halka dara dara rehta tha..

bachpan me toh sabhi bache rote hain,par BRAWNY kuch zyada hi roya karta tha...

jab ye 3 saal ka hua toh maine jaise taise iske liye kuch books arrange kiya aur isse padhane laga...

par aashcharya mujhe tab hua jab isne utni choti umar me hi mere laaye sabhi books kuch dino me hi padh bhi liye aur puri tarah samajh bhi liye...

ye jab thoda bada hua toh chupchaap schools chale jaaya karta tha aur class ke window se hi jo bhi andar padhaya jaata tha,wo ye padh bhi leta tha aur ek baar me samajh bhi leta tha..

par itna honhar hone ke baawjud ye hamesha underconfident hi raha...aur fir aaya wo din jab hume is jagah CHOSENS ke baare me pata chala...

aur issi ke saath ye bhi pata chala ki kyun hamara baccha itna tez dimag waala hai..

aakhir wo ek SAVENT jo hai...

aur fir hum yahan aa gaye...yahan aakar aur pichle PHASE me us aalishan ABODE me rehkar hume laga ki ab humari saari pareshaani khatm ho jaayegi par aisa kuch khaas toh hua nahi...

is PHASE me hum wapas fir wahi andhere me aa gaye par dekha jaaye toh ye jagah fir bhi thik hi hai..

kamsekam yahan humari jaan ko toh koi khatra nahi....

bas itni si hi hai hamari kahani....


ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER jo bohot dhyan se SHALTON ko sun rahe the,unhe bhi in teeno ke liye bohot bura lag raha tha...


ACCHUTA-itni painful kahani hai aapki...par aakhri me jo positive baat kahi na aapne,hats off uncle..

ATTITUDE aisa hi hona chahiye..negetive se negetive situation me bhi kuch naa kuch positive nikalna...

NAOMI-hume yahan koi shikayat nahi hai..bas BRAWNY ke liye bura lagta hai...

kyunki,isse lagta hai ki iske under perform karne ki wajah se hume ye zindagi jeeni padh rahi hai jabki humne isse kayi baar bataya hai ki aisa kuch bhi nahi hai aur hume ispar naaz hai...


ACCHUTA-toh isiliye din bhar rondhu rehta hai tu...arre yaar,kya milta hai hai tention lekar...

haasil kuch hona nahi,bina matlab bas present kharab karna hai...

bhai,bhale hi tu underperform kar raha hai,ek WEAKLING hai par tu ye kaise bhul gaya ki tu ek SAVENT bhi hai...

SAVENT...matlab samajhta hai naa is word ka...GOD GIFTED hai tu...aur jo GOD ko nazar me ek GIFT ho,usse kis baat ki tention...

bindas reh,dekhna sab kuch thik ho jaayega....


ACCHUTA ki baat sun SHALTON aur NAOMI ke saath saath BRAWNY ke chehre par bhi ek smile aa gayi jisse dekh..


SLUNDER-ab ye hui naa baat..aise hi smile karte raha kar..isse problems ki jalti hai...

ACCHUTA-aur filhal hamare saath chal... PHASE ghoom kar aate hai..

BRAWNY-abhi!!!!

ACCHUTA-nahi..agle saal chalte hain...


ACCHUTA ke sarcasm ko samajh...


BRAWNY-par yaar wahan jaakar bhi kya faayda..??entry toh hume wahan ke kisi jagah par milegi nahi....

wahan toh sirf STELLARS ka hi roll hai...

ACCHUTA-arre mere bhai,jinka pet bhara ho,unhe khaane ki keemat aur swad,dono ka hi sahi andaza nahi hota,sirf bhooko ko hota hai..

STELLAR bhale hi PHASE ki har activity ko explore karne ke liye qualified hain par wo sab wahan ki har jagah ke andar jaakar bhi utna maza nahi utha paayenge jitna hum bahar se hi bas aankhon se sekh kar utha lenge..

isiliye bataon me waqt mat gawa aur chal...


BRAWNY-tum log chalo,mai fresh hokar aata hun...

SLUNDER-ye bhi sahi hai..chal hum bhi fresh ho jaate hain..

ACCHUTA-tu ho..meri handsomeness hamesha ek si hi rehti hai.....


apne baal ko sawarte hue ACCHUTA ne ye baat kahi jispar wahan baithe sabhi has diye...

BRAWNY ko jaldi fresh hone ko bol ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER unke quater se nikal apne quater ki taraf chale diye..

apne quater me ghuste hi,jahan ab andhere ne ghar kar liya tha par kal bole un dono ke SPELL ki wajah se wo us andhere me bhi saaf dekh sakte the,un dono ne dekha khatiye par baithe mujhe,aur meri nazar un dono par hi thi....

mujhe dekh wo dono meri taraf badhe hi the ki tabhi...

achanak unka sir ghoom gaya..

reason...unki aankhon ke aage ek drishyam nachne laga tha....

us drishyam ko dekh un dono ki hi haalat kharab ho gayi thi...

kyun...???aayiye,khud dekh lijiye...


DRISHYAM....:-


ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER dono meri taraf badhe hi the ki...


KHACHH.....KHACHH.....UMMMM.....UMMMMM.....


ek talwar tezi se unki taraf badhi aur agle hi pal un dono ke haath kat chuke the...

aur issi wajah se ek tez chikh nikalne ko hui un dono ke mooh se par isse pehle hi aisa ho paata,un dono ke mooh bhi sil gaye the jis wajah se unki cheekh unke gale ke andar hi reh gayi.....


DRISHYAM ENDS:-


DRISHYAM ko dekh un dono ki ghiggi si bandh gayi thi..halki halki thartharahat ke saath wo meri taraf dekh rahe the...

wahin mai bhi apni jagah se utha aur theek un dono ke saamne jaakar khada ho gaya...


MAI-zyada taklif kisme hoti hai...??jab haath kate hon ya fir jab haath katne se hone waale dard ke baawjud cheekha naa jaa sake..!!!

tum dono ko dikha DRISHYAM tumhara bhavishya bhi ho sakta hai...

maine kal kaha tha naa ki rone do BRAWNY ko fir bhi tum dono usse motivate karne,uska dard baatne chale gaye...

jab khudki zindagi udhaar ki ho toh dusro ko jeene ke falsafe nahi sikhaye jaate...

waqt hai,samajh jaao,kyunki mera samjhana tum dono ko pasand nahi aayega...


meri baat sunane ke baad bhi wo dono jadh hokar hi khade the...

jo DRISHYAM un dono ne dekha tha,wo itna real tha ki wo usse bahar hi nahi aa paaye the..

wahin apni baat keh mai unke baaju se hokar baahar jaane laga aur..


MAI-BRAWNY aa raha hai..jao, PHASE ghumna hai aajao ghumkar...

apni baat keh mai toh aage badh gaya par meri baat sun ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki hairani aur badh gayi..

ek pal pehle ek khatarnaak DRISHYAM ke through maine unhe BRAWNY se ek tarah se door rehne ko kaha tha aur ab mai khud unhe uske saath PHASE ghumne ke kiye keh raha tha..

ab aise me dimag toh ghumega hi....

khair, options toh the nahi becharon ke paas aur isiliye dono chupchaap mere piche ho liye...

SLUNDER jo fresh hone aaya tha,wo baat bhi jaise wo bhul hi gaya tha...

wahin mere quater se bahar niklate hi mujhe dikha BRAWNY aur jab uski nazar mujhpar padi toh...


BRAWNY-hi RAAZ....


aaj pehli baar tha jab BRAWNY ne mujhse baat ki thi aur wo isiliye kyunki yahan aane ke baad aaj pehli baar wo thoda khush tha..

wahin uske greet par maine naa toh kuch kaha aur naahi uski taraf dekha.bas aage badh gaya jisse usse halki hairani toh hui par fir wo mere quater ki taraf badh gaya jahan entrance par hi usse ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER mil gaye...


BRAWNY-chalen...!!!


BRAWNY ki baat par dono ne bas apna sir haan me hilaya aur uske saath aage badh gaye..


BRAWNY-yaar ek baat batao..ye RAAZ kuch weird nahi hai..abhi maine usse dekha toh greet kiya..

par usne kuch kaha bhi nahi aur toh aur mujhe ignore bhi kar diya...


BRAWNY ki baat sun ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ki phat gayi..

BRAWNY meri burayi kar raha tha aur unhe maalum tha ki aisa karna uske saath saath un dono ke liye bhi musibat laa sakta tha aur isiliye..


ACCHUTA-usse kisi se zyada baat karna pasand nahi..


ACCHUTA ki baat par BRAWNY fir kuch bolne waala tha ki...


SLUNDER-arre jaldi chalo yaar.. waise bhi PHASE yahan se kaafi door hai..

baat ko palaththe hue SLUNDER ne ye baat kahi jispar wo teeno hi thoda tez chalte hue PHASE ki taraf nikal pade..

par kuch door aage badhne ke baad jab un teeno ko mai dikha toh....


ACCHUTA-ab jaldi jakar bhi kya karna hai..koi time limit toh hai nahi....aaram se hi chalte hain.


BRAWNY ko nahi pata tha ki mere ghusse se bachne aur mujhse jitna ho sake door rehne ki wajah se ACCHUTA ne ye baat kahi thi aur isiliye bina zyada soche un dono ke saath wo bhi slow ho gaya..





PLACE-CITY





WOWWW.YOU WERE RIGHT AL...THIS PLACE IS ACTUALLY MAGNIFICENT.....


ye shabd nikle the FLORIN ke mooh se...

reason...is waqt FLORIN, MARIA, ALFREEN, MAHI,MABEL, FELLAR aur GRACE ILLUSIONARY OCEANERIUM ke andar khade the aur yahan ke nazare ko dekh kar hi FLORIN ke mooh se ye shabd nikle the...

kal RAAZ se milne ke baad MARIA aur FLORIN ka aur kajin jaane ka man hi nahi kiya aur unke aisa kehne par sabhi ne agle din city explore karne ka plan kiya..

aur aaj sabse pehle ye sab yahan OCEANERIUM me hi pahunche the....

khair,

ILLUSIONARY OCEANERIUM....ek ajeebogarib par adhbhudh OCEANERIUM...

ajeeb isiliye kyunki OCEANERIUM ocean ke andar lipte hue banta hai par yahan aisa kuch tha nahi..ye OCEANERIUM OCEAN ke illusion ko paida karkar banaya gaya tha..

aur adhbhudh isiliye kyunki is OCEANERIUM me bramhaand ke har PLANET ke ocean me rehne waale durlabh jeev moujud the aur unhe hi dekhkar FLORIN aur baaki sab eccited ho gaye the..

itna hi nahi,glass ke us taraf jahan jeev dikh rahe the,wahan har wo jeev jisse dekhkar unke baare me janane ke liye man me jigyasa jage,agar unhe dekh kar point kiya jaaye toh us jeev ki puri detail,uski har khoobi live digital way me ussi jeev ke through dikhti thi aur ye wakayi ek thrilling experience tha...

yahi kaaran tha ki early evening se yahan aaye ye sab pichle 4 ghante se issi jagah par hi atak gaye the...


ALFREEN-guyzzz..ab chale yahan se...dusri jagah check out karte hain...

MARIA-aaj nahi beta..aaj toh yahin itna maza aa gaya..baaki kal karte hain...aur waise next hume shopping karni hai aur uske liye kaafi time chahiye..

ab agar wahan gaye toh hi kaafi late ho jaayega....

MARIA ki baat par FLORIN aur saath hi mr and mrs FELLAR ne bhi haami bhari jiske baad sabhi ne apne apne ABODE jaane ka faisla kiya aur OCEANERIUM se bahar aa gaye...


MARIA-agar RAAZ bhi saath hota toh kitna acha hota naa...!!

FLORIN-haan ye toh hai...par mujhe nahi lagta ki wo hamare saath kisi bhi jagah ke andar chalta....

MARIA-hmm.par mujhe usse dekhne ka man tha...kal pehli baar wo humse jis tarah mila,i wanted that to experience one more time..


ab tak sab OCEANERIUM se bahar aa chuke the...

MARIA ki baat par muskurate hue FLORIN ki nazar saamne ki taraf gayi toh....


FLORIN-lo,GOD ne sun li tumhari...dekho RAAZ aa raha hai...


MARIA ko laga ki FLORIN unse mazak kar rahe hain aur isiliye bina saamne dekhe...


MARIA-haha..very funny...aap mujhe bewakuf bana rahe hain...


GOOD EVENING UNCLE..GOOD EVENING AUNTY....


MARIA ke sawal par FLORIN kuch kehte,ki usse pehle hi un dono ke kaano me ye awaaz padi jisse sun MARIA chownkte hue saamne ki taraf ghumi aur unke aisa karte hi unhone dekha ki mai wakayi unke saamne hun...

mujhe dekh khush ho MARIA aage badhi aur mujhe hug kiya..

aur unke baad FLORIN ne bhi mujhe hug kiya....

wahin hum sab se thodi door halke andhere me jahan par kisiki nazar turant nahi padegi,khada tha VIDEOUS...

aur jab usne MARIA aur FLORIN ko mujhe hug karte hue dekha toh uske mooh se bas itna hi nikla...


VIDEOUS-interesting......



khair,MAHI, ALFREEN,MABEL aur uske parents jo kuch door khade hokar baatein kar rahe the,unhone bhi meri awaaz suni thi aur mujhe saamne dekh wo bhi meri taraf badh gaye...


FELLAR-young man..kal humse toh tumhari mulakat ho hi nahi paayi....

hello,i am FELLAR...

GRACE-and i am GRACE....


mr FELLAR ne apna intro dekar apna haath aage badhaya jisse maine pakad liya tha....

aur aisa hone par..


FELLAR-wooo..you are damn strong my boy..i can feel the strongness of your hands...yakin nahi hota ki tumhari jaisi handsome aur strong personality bhi WEAKLINGS me ho sakti hai...

MAI-uncle,taakatwar bande aksar buddhiman aur hoshiyar logon ke body guards hote hain...

ek tarah se wo bhi WEAKLINGS bhi hue naa...takat toh hai sharir me,par zindagi kisi aur ke sahare chal rahi hai...


mere tark par MARIA, FLORIN, FELLAR aur GRACE thode stunned hue par ALFREEN aur MAHI toh kuch zyada hi stunned ho gaye the..

mere tark un dono ne hi pehle bhi sune hue the,infact jhele hue the par abhi jo maine kaha tha wo ek deep intellectual baat thi, jisse wo dono kaafi impress ho gaye the...


FELLAR-that was really good my boy..aur tumhari is baat ne ye bhi saabit kar diya ki tum sirf strong hi nahi,balki kaafi intelligent bhi ho...

waise hum MABEL ke parents hain...


MABEL-aur MABEL mai hun...pichle PHASE me saath hi padhe the hum par baat kabhi nahi ho paayi thi.. isiliye hi...


muskurati hui MABEL mere paas aayi aur apna haath aage badhaya jisse maine jaise hi thaama,mujhe hua kuch feel jisse mehsoos kar mere chehre par aa gayi ek muskaan..

kyun,ab ye bhi mere naam ki hi tarah hai...RAAZ.....

khair,chehre par muskaan liye mai jhukta chala gaya aur agle hi pal mere honthon ne MABEL ke haathon ko chhu liye,i mean chum liye jisse dekh alag alag reactions aaye...

jahan MABEL halki blush karne lag gayi thi wahin ek normal greeting gesture soch FELLAR aur unki wife normal hi khade rahe...

FLORIN aur MARIA,mujhe aisa kuch karte dekh halke shocked ho gaye the par sabse bada shock laga tha ALFREEN aur MAHI ko jo aankhen faade mujhe hi dekh rahe the...

waise, shock aur uske saath ek aur feeling wahan thode door khade ek bande ke man bhi aayi thi,par wo kaun hai aur wo feeling kya hai,iska khulasa kal hoga....

khair,thodi der chaaron budhaun logon se kuch aur baat karne ke baad...


MAI-okay then..i will take ur leave now... already kaafi late ho chuka hai...mujhe chalna chahiye...

FLORIN-chalo,hum chhod dete hai tumhe..

MAI-nahi wo mere kuch friends bhi yahi aas paas hi hain..mai unke saath chala jaaunga...

FLORIN-are you sure...???

MAI-always uncle....


mere jawab ko sun has diye wo chaaron aur fir wo sab apne apne CHARIOT me baith nikal gaye...

wahin chehre par halki muskaan liye....


MAI-


kise pata tha,mere honthon ki hadh
tere haathon par FISLEGI...

mere ilm ko bhi khabar naa thi,ki tu
mere kaam ki NIKLEGI.....









AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......







AAPKA APNA V...J.....

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