Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

[vj4u]

The way you wrote, I had anticipated what Videous model would be like and there is no need to guess it, the brain starts creating itself, Everything seemed like a reality. I did not like when Videous's first attack was successful but then I thought in my mind that the lion could pounce even after falling two steps and it happened which made me very happy.
On the other hand, Mahi also took very surprising action, stopping and bending the three of them in one stroke, it is no small matter but Mahi did it. Also Alfreen is no less than anyone, she has also responded to every single attack, the pattern of the fight is getting the same, I have to see how Raaz's plan was successful.
In the end, Mabel expresses love, just a smile on my face. Five different battles are going on simultaneously and I cannot see anyone losing, not knowing why my mind gets nervous thinking about defeat But the hope returns as soon as I think about Raaz. I think the enemy's side is deliberately showing itself weak in front of our eyes.

As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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thanks brother..the battle is going to get more intense..just hold on tight..and be along

 

[vj4u]

Adbhut amazing dhardar jordar update bhai. Kamal ka explanation in simple word. Aisa apke alawa abhi tk kisi writer ne nhi kiya bhai. I m big fan of your. Keep it up. Thank you

thanks for such appreciation brother..yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Surprising update tha ye apne saturday kaha tha aur friday hi update de diya. Hahaha

inform kiya tha bhai

 

[vj4u]

Bahut hi gajab....videous ke 9ratna ko to mahi alfreen and baki achhuta and party ne paralyzed state me pahucha diya beshak ye kuchh waqt ke liye h pr un sab ko samapt krne ka isse bdhiya chance koi nhi ho skta. Unke senses dull ho chuke h apna bachav wo kr nhi skte h to wo sare ke sare ek jhtke me hi khtm ho skte h abhi...jis prakar raaz ki nazar apni fight ke sath sath baki sbhi ki fights aur unke results pr h waise hi videous ki bhi hogi...to dekhte h wo un sab ko bchane ke liye kya krne wala h kyuki itni jldi to wo sabko nhi mrne de skta h videous agr aisa hua to itne varsho ki uski mehnat uhi vifal ho jaani h wo akela ho jaayega pr haan akela bhi wo sb par bhari ho skta h pr bina sena ke raja bhi kaisa raja..
dekhte h kya hota h abhi aage...
Wahi videous aur raaz ki fight gjb chl rhi h...aakhir raaz ne bhi usko apne mukke ka swad chakha hi diya wo bhi khub jordaar ...mja aa rha h...pura...mst khel rhe h ek dusre se dono...aur shadow wale spell me to mja hi aagya,
pura comedy scene tha wo...popat raaz ka hua pr mukka videous kha gyadark warriors ki sankhya bhi tezi se kam hoti ja rhi h bss kuchh waqt aur lgega un sbhi ko purn smapt hone me pr usse phle wo white holders ko achhi khati kshati de jayenge bahut sare log iss yudh me veergati ko prapt ho jayenge...aakhir yudh me yhi to hota h..dono trf se srf laashein hi girti h...ant me haar jeet kisi ki bhi ho..reh jaati h to bss laashein aur khoon se sani bhumi...yhi yudh ki vibhishika h...isi ko dekhkr samrat ashok ne hinsa ka marg tyag ahinsa ka marg apna liya tha...khair yaha aisa kuchh nhi ho rha yaha sabhi apna kartavya nibha rhe h ek aisa yudh lad rhe h jo unka bhavishya sunishchit krega...ab dekhna ye h ki wo kis paksh me jata h aur ant me kya chhod kr jata h...waiting for next part brother...gjb aakhir achhuta and mabel ka bhi ishq-ae-izhaar ho hi gya aur chumban bhibahut khub iss chumban ka asar tha bda tagda valdis and bakiyo ko de gya wo bura jhatka...🗡🗡🗡

brilliant review brother...kuch updates aur..yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Well done vj bahi wonderful interesting dhmakedar update

Very nice action bro
Kia dhoya h vedius ne raaz ko
Alfreen ne viraaz ko
Mahi ne teno ko
Or slander party ne un 5cho ko
Mabel ne achuta ko kiss kr k purpose kr dala esi situation Mai wawoooo really Maza a gia

abhi toh aur maza aayega bhai.. battle toh abhi shuru hi hui hai..yunhi saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Haar se pahlee haar
Aur jeet se pahalee jeet nahi mantee
Ab tandav hoga

aur woh bhi bhayanak...saath bane rahiye

 

[vj4u]

Bohat he lajawab update Bhai is update m to jaisy raaz ki team Jeet rahi hy aisa lag rha hy jaisy vedious ki team or khud wo power k hoty b har rha hy but no simple smjh m aa jay woh VJ Bhai ki Kahani NH is liay waiting for next update

Nice updates bro

Nice update bhai

Fantastic update mitr

Awesome bhai. What a mind blowing update.

Mast shaandar behtreen update

Super fantastic update Bhai

Extraordinary update bro,

Excellent fighting scene.

Awesome update bro

Awesome Update

Lagta hai update ka INTERVAL hogya hai
1st half me to RAAZ and team ka bolbala raha
Ab 2nd half me VIDEOUS apna jalwa bikherga

रोमांच की पराकाष्ठा


बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई

MIND BLOWING UPDATE
TARIFF KE LIYE SABD BHI KAM PADENGE

Mind blowing fantastic update

Wonderfull battle ka first part maza aa gya

Mast

Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next

Wow bhai kafi kamal ka update diya out of performance



Waiting for new update bhai

s

Super fantastic update bhai maza aa gya ab dekhte hai ki aage kya hota hai

Mindblowing update bhai....

Superb update bhai

Fantastic update bhai

Very nice fantastic update waiting for next

Super Duper Hit & Fantastic & Marvelous & Fabulous & Awesome & Gajab & Very Nice Update Bro

Wah wah aakhir izhar e mohbbat ho hi gya dekho iska result b kitna powerful tha isliye me kehna kamino pyar kr lo kuch nhi rakh h hahhahah

Wah wah bro ka fight pehle videous hawi huwa lekin ab raaz kam nhi pad rha h mahi ne apni power acha use kiya alfarin ne apne bhai ki tarh kehar ban tut rhi h



Waiting

Fabulous Fabulous

Filhal tow padla RAAZ & company ka bhari h dekhte h kab tak
Bahot zaberdast shaandaar mazedaar damdaar lajawab update bhai
Bahot khoob superb

Super update hai Bhai

Nice as always

Nice as always

thanks brothers..
be along

 

[vj4u]

AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI EK TARAF RAAZ KI VIDEOUS SE,DUSRI TARAF MAHI KI HEMINE,AROZ AUR TIFER SE, TEESRI TARAF ALFREEN AUR WOOGER KI VIRAAZ SE, CHOWTHI TARAF ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY, HIDA AUR MABEL KI VALDIS, DORIAN, GASTON, UBEL AUR TRISTEN SE AUR PAANCHWI TARAF GRIFFIN,ANZU,PEACE MAKERS, WHIZZES, WHIZZDERS AUR SAVENTS KI DARK WARRIORS SE BATTLE SHURU HO CHUKI HAI..


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3


(THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



MEGA UPDATE-171



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-BATTLE FIELD



PART-2




BACK TO RAAZ & VIDEOUS








VIDEOUS-IMPRESSIVE

MAI-ALWAYS...


maine VIDEOUS ki ek shabd ki baat par apni ek shabd ki baat rakhi hi thi ki tabhi VIDEOUS ki nazar padi apne chaaron taraf..

ek taraf HEMINE,AROZ aur TIFER ki senses MAHI ne dull kar un teeno ko apne apne ghutno par laa diya tha,dusri taraf VIRAAZ ko ALFREEN aur WOOGER ne neeche gira diya tha,teesri taraf ACCHUTA,MABEL aur unke teeno dost death ray ke saath VALDIS aur baaki chaaron ke saamne khade the..

wahin chowthi taraf GRIFFIN aur ANZU ki madad se PEACE MAKERS, WHIZZ, WHIZZDERS aur SAVENTS DARK WARRIORS par bhaari padh rahe the..

ye sab dekh sir ko halka sa shake kiya VIDEOUS ne aur mujhe dekh..


VIDEOUS-socha tha kuch waqt khelunga tere saath magar haalat thode bekabu ho chale hain..

sorry,tere bache waqt ka waqt kaat raha hun mai...


LOGARDHAKARAHAANIYEM...

HOLOCAUST


haath failate hue man hi man is SPELL ko uccharit kiya VIDEOUS ne aur uske waisa karte hi uske sharir se bas ek inch door DARK FLAME se bani ek asadharan urja ne janm liya..

us urja ki shakti itni zyada thi ki pura CHOSENS hilne laga tha..

is beech us urja ko feel karte hue maine bhi VIDEOUS ki taraf apna haath kiya aur...


OGIABHARIKE

QUOSH..


us urja ko jo VIDEOUS ki body ke bahar glow kar rahi thi,usse khatm kar VIDEOUS ke senses ko dull karne ke liye man hi man uccharit kiya maine ye SPELL par tabhi....


SOOBHHHH..

CHATTTTTT...


VIDEOUS ki body se limitless speed ikhtiyar karte hue ek DARK ETERNAL CANE jiski lambai kareeb 6 metre thi,bahar aayi aur sidhe mere haath par jisme SPELL ki urja create ho hi rahi thi,padi aur aisa hote hi naa sirf woh SPELL ki urja gayab ho gayi balki saath hi saath mera haath bhi numb padh gaya..

ye DARK ETARNAL CANE asal me VIDEOUS ki BLOOD AMPLIFICATION ki shakti se bana tha..

isme saamne waale ki har AMPLIFICATION mode me straining aur agony laane ki taakat thi..

saath hi saath iski movement environment ki fluidity ko bhi solid banakar apne pratidwandi ki movement ko slow kar deti thi..

in short, VIDEOUS ka ye astra DARK ITERNAL CANE ek super rare aur incredibly strong weapon tha jisse woh tabhi use me laata jab uske saamne koi uski shakti ko takkar dene waala banda ho joki sirf mai hi tha...

hazaron saalon ki BLOOD AMPLIFICATION nourishment ke baad taiyar hua tha ye DARK ITERNAL CANE aur yahi reason tha ki naa sirf usne mere SPELL ki urja ko supress kar diya balki saath hi saath uski movement se mera woh haath bhi pura numb padh gaya..


aur tabhi..

MUKHARUMARDHATE...

DEFACING.....

apne andar chhupe kaali shakti ki urja ko use me laate hue uccharit kiya is SPELL ko VIDEOUS ne jiske agle hi pal ek kaala dhuen ka ghera sa bana mere face ke paas..


DWAJULE HIMAGUNA..

WHITE AURA CLEANSING


us kaale ghere ko dekh aur usse release ho rahi immense power ko feel karte hi ye spell uccharit kiya maine jiske asar se woh kaale dhuen ka ghera turant hath jaana chahiye tha aur aisa ho hi raha tha ki tabhi..

SOBBBHHHH...

jitna ghera empty hua aur aisa hone se ek khaali spot bana,ussi spot me apne ITERNAL CANE ko ghumaya VIDEOUS ne aur uske waisa karte hi mera face movement slow ho gaya..

jaise hi ye hua toh VIDEOUS ne apne ek hand ko halka sa wave kiya jiske baad BLACK ENERGY se bane us kaale dhuan ka jitna bhi part empty hua tha,woh dobara bhar gaya aur aisa hote hi woh mere face par kisi view block mask ki tarah fail sa gaya jiski wajah se mera view blind ho chuka tha..

mai kuch bhi nahi dekh paa raha tha aur tabhi...

VIDEOUS ne apne chest par haath rakha aur uske waisa karte hi uske peth aur peeth se kul teen aur astra joki ETARNAL CANE ki hi tarah uske kisi na kisi AMPLIFICATION mode ki hi taakat se bane the,prakat hue...


1st-THE DARK CRESCENT BLADE

2nd-SHARUR (the sentient mace)

3rd-FRAKIR (sentient garotte)


ye teen super deadly weapons the jinhe filhal sirf mai hi kaat sakta tha but ek baar me ek hi..

par is waqt ek toh mai khud VIDEOUS ke jaal me fas temporary blind ho chuka tha aur saath hi saath usne ye teeno weapons ek saath nikale the..

khair, jaise hi woh teeno weapons nikle, VIDEOUS ki body se ek baar phirse black energy ke kan chain ki shakal liye bahar aaye aur unhone un teeno weapons ko hold kar liya..

aisa hote hi VIDEOUS ne un teeno weapons ko teen alag alag disha ki taraf badhne ka ishara kiya.

THE DARK CRESCENT BLADE sidhi gayi MAHI aur HEMINE, AROZ aur TIFER ke beech aur jaise hi woh us jagah par pahunchi,woh tez rotate hone lagi...

THE DARK CRESCENT BLADE jaise hi speedily ghumi,usse release hue VIDEOUS ki shakti se bana ek DARK GALE...

par ye DARK GALE sirf MAHI ke direction me hi flow hua..

ye sab bohot zyada sudden hua tha jisse MAHI dekhna toh door ki baat hai,feel bhi nahi kar paayi aur woh DARK GALE usse hit kar gaya.

AHHHH....

ek grunting awaaz ke saath apne unbearable pain ko feel karti hui woh udte hue piche jaakar giri..

MAHI ke girne aur uske sharir me pain ke uthne se woh roots jinme HEMINE,AROZ aur TIFER fase the,woh bhi kamzor padh gayi aur woh teeno usse free ho gaye...

khair,us DARK GALE me sudden PYSICAL power drainage ki bhi shamata thi yahi wajah thi ki MAHI ki puri energy ek pal me hi suck out ho chuki thi aur woh kamzori ki wajah se halki halki thartharane lagi thi..

AHHHHH..

tabhi ek aur dard bhari grunt har taraf gunj uthi joki ALFREEN ki...

REASON...

SHARUR uske aur VIRAAZ ke beech hi jaakar rotate hone laga tha jiske baad usse nikle kuch KAALI paani ke bunde jo sidhe jaakar VIRAAZ ko lapete un HEAVENLY ROPES par pade...

ye black water asal me VIDEOUS ke BRAMHAAND ke liye corrupted iraadon se bane liquid the jo HEAVENLY ROPE jaisi paak cheez ke liye acidic the..

jaise hi woh black water us rope se takraye,toh woh rope puri ashudh ho gayi aur usme DARK FLAMES create ho gaye.

ye dark flames bhi VIDEOUS ki hi shakti ka hissa the jo us rope aur
SHARUR se hote hue ALFREEN aur WOOGER se takraye aur aisa hote hi WOOGER ke senses halke dull hue aur woh neeche baith gaya par ALFREEN ko kuch zyada hi effect kiya us black water ne aur uski body ke kayi bhaag jhulas se gaye..

piche ki taraf palat kar giri woh aur aisa hote waqt hi uske mooh se cheekh nikli thi...

AHHHHHHHHHHH...

par ALFREEN ki cheekh ko 5 nayi cheekhon ne daba diya...

aur ye paanch cheekhen thi ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, HIDA, BRAWNY aur MABEL ki jinhe FRAKIR se nikle INKY PERILOUS ORE ne joki chote chote sui ki tarah thi,usne un paanchon ki body ko pierce kar diya tha.

aisa hote hi un sabke nerves heart valves ki tarah open shut hone lage jiski wajah se sudden blood flow kam hua un sabki bodies me aur woh paanchon ek jhatke me neeche girte chale gaye...



IVASHINAHAM TIGARIHONAM

UNWRAP WITH HELL'S BLAZING FIRE..

AHHHHHHHHHH...


us opaque mask ki wajah se mere face ke saath saath meri brain functioning bhi jaise covered ho gayi thi jiski wajah se mai concentrate karte hue SPELL nahi bol paa raha tha..

kuch seconds khudke SUBCONSCIOUS BRAIN ko control aur relaxed karne ke liye maine aur jab aisa ho gaya tha apne HELL'S BLAZING FIRE ki shakti ke through apne face par fire create kiya maine aur jaise hi woh FIRE CREATE hua,woh OPAQUE MASK gayab ho gaya.

par aisa hote waqt mujhe ek saath kayi hazar cheekhen sunayi di jiske baad jaise hi woh mask hata,meri aankhen us cheekh ki disha me ghum gayi aur aisa hote hi jo drishya meri anakhon ke saamne aaya,usse dekh aankein khun se bhar laal hi gayi meri...

MAHI, ALFREEN, ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY, HIDA aur MABEL toh VIDEOUS ke teeno astron ke waar se neeche gire pade hi tha but woh FRAKIR shastra jisse ACCHUTA aur baaki chaaron par use kiya tha VIDEOUS ne,woh in paanchon ko ghayal karkar bhi nahi rooka tha.

un paanchon ko zamin par patak woh tezi se aage badha aur badi tezi se PEACE MAKERS, WHIZZ, WHIZZDERS aur SAVENTS ke upar pahunch ghumne laga..

aisa hote hi usse nikle tez dhar BLACK ENERGY ki takaat aur VIDEOUS ki AMPLIFICATION shakti me dube pins..

waise toh GRIFFIN aur ANZU ne dekh liya tha FRAKIR aur usse nikal rahe pins ko aur usse dekh ek strong shield ke saath kisi chaadar ki tarah apne apne shaktiyon ko un dono ne sabhi WHITE ENERGY ke dhaarakon ke upar bicha sa diya tha but VIDEOUS ki shakti se bane shastra ko dhoka dena itna bhi saral toh tha nahi..

FRAKIR se nikle woh pins GRIFFIN aur ANZU ki chadar roopi shield ke paas pahunchte hi intangible ho gaye aur unhe paar karne ke baad wapas tangible..

waise toh is change ko GRIFFIN aur ANZU ne bhi mehsoos kar liya tha par jab tak woh wapas PEACE MAKERS ko jinki taraf woh pins move kar rahe the,cover de paate,woh dono thoda late ho gaye...

ek hi jhatke me 1000's of pins utne hi numbers of PEACE MAKERS ki body me sama chuke the aur aisa hote hi woh hazaron PEACE MAKERS jalkar raakh ho gaye...

jahan is scene ko dekh ek khamoshi si chha gayi thi SAVENTS, WHIZZES, WHIZZDERS aur baaki bache PEACE MAKERS ke beech,wahin sabhi DARK WARRIORS aur VIDEOUS ke khaas numaindon ke faces par smile naach uthi..

is beech jab VIDEOUS ki nazar meri jalti ankhon par gayi toh..


VIDEOUS-arre,ghussa kis baat ka...jung hai,jaan toh jaayegi hi...


VIDEOUS ki baat sun ek pal ke liye dekha maine usse..

is jung ko lamba nahi kheench sakta tha mai..jitna zyada waqt ye sab chalega,utne maasumo ki jaan jaane waali thi..

jo bhi karna tha yaa phir ye kahun ki jo bhi mere saath hona tha,usse jald se jald hona tha taaki mera anth baakiyon ki jaan bacha sake...

but having said that,sabse pehle VIDEOUS ne jo abhi kiya,uska jawab toh dena hi tha mujhe aur isiliye...


MAI-MAHI....


bas itna hi bola maine jisse sun pehle hi ghusse ki aag me jalti MAHI ne apna haath zamin par ek jhatke me dhasa sa diya aur uske waisa karti hi...

AAHHHHHH.....

planet ke mantle aur crust me chippa telluric current 1000 times AMPLIFY hote hue turant activate ho gaya jisne ek hi jhatke me sabhi DARK WARRIORS ko jinki sankhya ab bhi 1.50 lakhs se zyada thi, apni chapet me le liya..

unki bodies us telluric current ki roots ke andar kisi azgar ke shikar ki tarah fas gayi jiske agle hi pal woh sab bhi jo haal PEACE MAKERS ka hua tha,theek ussi tarah jal kar raakh ho chuke the...

ye dekh VIDEOUS ne ek baar phirse apne teeno shastron ko ek saath bache PEACE MAKERS, WHIZZES, WHIZZDERS aur SAVENTS ko khtam karne ke liye istemal me laane ke iraade apna haath un teeno shastron ki taraf kiya par tabhi..


BOOMMM.BOOMMMM.
BOOOMMMM....

mere chest se ek baar phir meri HELL'S BLAZING FIRE ki aag ke teen beams nikle jo sidhe VIDEOUS ke teeno astra,THE DARK CRESCENT BLADE,SHARUR aur FRAKIR se takra gaye..

waise toh kyunki woh teeno hi shashtra kyunki VIDEOUS ki AMPLIFICATION urja se bane the,isiliye HELL'S BLAZING FIRE ke hit karne ke baad bhi unka completely destroy hona impossible tha but haan,woh powerless zaroor ho sakte the aur wahi hua..

jaise hi HELL'S BLAZING FIRE ki beams ne un teeno ko touch kiya,unki shakti nishkriya ho gayi aur woh teeno neeche zamin par gir pade..

pehle apne sabhi DARK WARRIORS ki mout aur phir apne khaas shashtron ka yun powerless hona,ye sab dekh ab baari thi VIDEOUS ke mujhe ghoorne ki...

wahin uske yun ghoorne se mile extra kuch palon ka faayda uthathe hue maine is khel ke antim bhaag ka plan apni behen aur doston ko share karna shuru kiya...


MAI-guyz,its time...

jaise hi mera agla waar VIDEOUS ko hit ho,you all will start implementing the plan...

bohot kam waqt ka window milega jisme pure plan ko execute karna hai tum sabko....

ALFREEN,WOOGER,VIRAAZ ko lekar yahan se,VIDEOUS ki eye sight se door jaao...

yahan rahi toh woh VIRAAZ ko exact time me maarne nahi dega....

he will derail the timing....

SLUNDER..apni SHIELD ke full potential ko realase karega tu aur MAHI ke saath HEMINE, AROZ aur TIFER ko us SHIELD me kaid karega
...and make sure ki the THE SHIELD ki opaque..

SHIELD ke opaque hone ki baat maine isiliye ki thi kyunki VIDEOUS bhale hi un teeno ko tab bhi sense kar lega par sense karne aur dekhne me fark hota hai jo uske action time me jhalkega.. par us moment ke liye bhu kuch khaas socha hua tha maine..

anyways, apni baat ko aage badhate hue...


MAI-and most importantly,get up guyzz...ek waar bhi agar bina pain dikhaye nahi jhel paaye toh matlab hi kya is yudh me bhaag lene ka...


meri planning sunte sunte VIDEOUS ke shastron se mili chot se ubharte hue woh sabhi dheere dheere uth rahe the but meri aankhri baat sun jaise khudke us pain ko hi jhatka un sabne aur ek jhatke me khade ho gaye..

khair, man hi man sabko plan samjha ab mera focus wapas VIDEOUS par gaya aur is baar bina kuch kahe maine bas apna haath aage kiya aur mere aisa karte hi mere haathon me meri sword aa gayi..

wahin mere haathon me SWORD ko dekh VIDEOUS samajh gaya ki ab mai usse aar ya paar waali ladhayi ladhna chahta hun aur isiliye ek pal apni deadly smile dene ke baad..


VIDEOUS-tujhe lagta hai ki tu is SWORD se mujhe beat kar sakta hai..

koi baat nahi..teri saanson ke saath teri ye galatfehmi bhi kuch der me door ho jaayegi...

aaja..pehla waar tu hi kar le...

SOOBHHHH..


VIDEOUS ki baat khtam hui bhi nahi thi ki usse pehle hi SWORD zor se feki maine uski taraf aur theek ussi pal mai bhi gayab hote hue theek VIDEOUS ke piche pahunch gaya..

ye sab ek hi waqt me hua tha aur isse pehle ki VIDEOUS joki limitless speed aur unimaginable force create kar uski taraf aate SWORD ko bhi dekh paa raha tha,woh SWORD ko dodge karta,mai joki uske piche pahunch chuka tha,maine peeche se uski gardan pakad li taaki VIDEOUS hil bhi naa paaye aur SWORD uske seene me sama jaaye...

is waqt mere haath me MAGICAL barrier ki roshni chamak rahi thi jiski wajah se VIDEOUS bhi tab tak koi SPELL nahi bol sakta tha jab tak woh roshni numa barrier uske sharir ke kisi bhi bhaag se connected tha...

par tabhi....

VIDEOUS ne apna haath piche kiya aur khud mere haathon ki grip apni gardan par aur sakht karte hue woh ghum gaya.

VIDEOUS ki pysical taakat bhi itni zyada thi ki meri body bhi uski movement ke saath ghum gayi aur aisa hote hi ab meri peeth SWORD ke raaste par thi..

but SWORD mujhe aur mere body AURA ko pehchanti thi aur isiliye mere paas aate hi woh rook gayi aur tabhi..

maine hold kiya apni SWORD ko aur tezi se VIDEOUS ki taraf ghumta hua uspar SWORD slash kiya jispar..


TANNNN......

VIDEOUS ke haathon me ek baar phirse thi uski DARK ITERNAL CANE jisse takrakar meri SWORD me hui tez kampan aur woh rook gayi..

aur ye dekh mere saath mujhse thoda door khade mere sabhi saathi bhi hairan hue...

wahin unse ulat VIDEOUS ke sabhi saathi jo unpar hue WHITE ENERGY ke humle se ab bhi effected the aur dheere dheere khudko theek kar rahe the,woh sab khush...

WOH DARK ITERNAL CANE bohot shaktishaali thi,ye feel kar liya tha maine par itni shaktishali ki meri SWORD ki dhaar ko bhi araam se bina kisi cut ke jhel jaaye,ye wakayi astonishing baat thi..

mere chehre par uthe bhaavon ko badi asaani se padh liya VIDEOUS ne aur...


VIDEOUS-hahaha...kabhi socha hai tune,tere is SWORD ko laakhon saalon tak apne seene ke aar paar ghusakar rakhne ka maksad kya sirf ZEAL ke VIKRAM ko,LORD OF ANGELS, CREATURE OF JUDGEMENT ke ansh ko chhal dwara khtam karna hi tha..!!!

mujhe maalum tha ki der sawer mere pratidwandi ko koi na koi tarike se,chhal dwara meri nazaron se bachakar dono LORDS is SWORD ko usse sahi salamat soump hi denge..

is SWORD ki taakat jaanta tha mai... mehsoos kiya hai maine iski apaar shakti ko laakhon saalon tak..

ab is SWORD ki replica toh nahi bana sakta tha mai par iski pysical strength ko wield karte hue iske waaron ko jhel sake,aise hathiyar, shashtra ka nirman toh kar hi sakta tha jo maine kiya..


us DARK ITERNAL CANE ko swing karte hue kahi ye baat VIDEOUS ne jiske baad...


VIDEOUS-mai toh teri SWORD ki taakat se waakif hun,par tu meri is DARK ITERNAL CANE ki shakti se aparichit hai..

chal, mehsoos karata hun tujhe mai iski shakti..

TANNNNN.....

apni baat bol badi tezi se ghumaya VIDEOUS ne us cane ko jispar apni SWORD aage ki maine aur mere aisa karte hi CANE aur SWORD aapas me takra gaye jispar VIDEOUS toh apni jagah par hi khada raha par CANE aur SWORD ke takrane se create hue impact se mere pair kuch steps piche chale gaye the.

aur ye dekh smile di VIDEOUS ne aur agle hi pal...


SOOBHHHH...CHHHATTTT.....SOOBHHHH..CHATTTTT......

VIDEOUS ki body meri taraf itni tezi se move hui ki ek ILLUSIONISTIC DEFLECTING SHADOW create karte hue VIDEOUS kab mere paas pahunch gaya,ye dekh bhi nahi paaya mai..

aisa laga jaise waqt ko rokte hue mere paas pahucha ho VIDEOUS aur jab tak mai usi moujudgi samajh bhi paata,uski woh CANE chal chuki thi meri body par..

pehle double cross aur phir alag alag zigzag pattern banate hue kayi baar apni cane chalayi usne meri body par aur uske waisa karte hi bohot se gehre cuts meri body par chhap se chuke the..

jabde bheenche sharir par uthe pain ko bina awaaz nikale jhelte hue aage ki taraf mooh ke bal gira mai...

ye scene MAHI mere dost aur meri behen dekh rahe the..

jahan aage jo hone waala hai,usse jaan MAHI bas ek sakth face ke saath ektak mujhe dekhti khadi thi wahin mere doston ki aankhon ne mere liye pain saaf dikh raha tha aur ALFREEN,mere sharir se riste khoon ko dekh uski aankhein bheeg chuki thi but phir bhi naa woh apni jagah se hili thi,naahi MAHI aur naahi mere dost..


REASON....

FARK NAHI PADTA KI VIDEOUS KE KITNE WAAR MERE SHARIR KO CHALNI KAR RAHE HON,KOI BHI MERE AUR USKE BEECH NAHI AAYEGA..

JISKO JO KAAM SOUMPA GAYA HAI,WOH USSI PAR FOCUSED RAHEGA...

mere ye lines is waqt un sabke dimag me gunj rahe the aur isiliye un sabke pair jaise apni apni jagah par bandh se gaye the..

wahin jaise hi mai aage ki taraf hote hue neeche gira toh VIDEOUS bhi araam se chalta hua mere saamne aakar khada hua.

apni CANE ko mere gale me rakh face ko upar kiya usne aur..


VIDEOUS-tututututu....kya RAAZ...!!!!itni jaldi dhul chaatne lag gaya tu...

khair,ye toh hona hi tha...tujhme taakat hai par mai toh khud hi taakat hun..

mere saamne khada rehna shobha bhi nahi deta tujhe...

aur naahi tere saathiyon ka mere logon ke aage...


VIDEOUS ki ye baat puri hui hi thi ki tabhi...

SOOBHHHH....

ek ek behadh shaktishali ONRUSH RAY jisse ki body VAGUE STATE me chali jaati hai, attack kiya VIDEOUS ke pramukh logon ne mere sabhi saathiyon par..

VIRAAZ ki ONRUSH RAY meri behen aur WOOGER jinki aankhein is waqt meri taraf thi,badh chuki thi..

HEMINE, AROZ aur TIFER ki ray MAHI ki taraf aur VALDIS, DORAIN, GASTON, UBEL aur TRISTEN ki ONRUSH RAYS ACCHUTA, SLUNDER, BRAWNY, HIDA aur MABEL ki taraf..

ye sab meri taraf hi dekh rahe the aur issi distraction ka faayda uthathe hue ye attack kiya tha VIDEOUS ke sabhi logon ne par tabhi....

isse pehle ki woh ONRUSH ray meri behen,WOOGER aur mere baaki doston ko touch bhi karte...

woh sab gayab ho chuke the..aur kyunki mere sabhi saathiyon ki nazar meri taraf thi,isiliye un sabki is sudden move ke baare me VIDEOUS ke logon ne socha bhi nahi tha aur isiliye naa sirf unki ONRUSH RAYS nirarthak saabit hui balki unka casual hona un sabpar bhaari bhi pad gaya...

ALFREEN gayab hote hue theek VIRAAZ ke piche pahunchi aur aisa kar usne VIRAAZ ko ek forward push kiya..

aisa hote hi VIRAAZ aage ki taraf ladhkhadate hue badha par jab tak woh sambhal paata, WOOGER uske saamne prakat ho chuka tha jiske baad limitless speed ke saath usne apna panja VIRAAZ ki chest par chala diya..

WOOGER ke bade bade naakhuno me meri ALOUKIK SHAKTIYON ki urja doud rahi thi jiske VIRAAZ ke body ko touch karte hi VIRAAZ ki puri body sunn padh gayi aur woh kate pedh ki tarah neeche gir gaya..

wahin dusri taraf MAHI jiski nazar bhi meri taraf hi thi,par dhyan pura HEMINE, AROZ aur TIFER par tha,jaise hi usne apni taraf badh rahe un ONRUSH RAYS ko feel kiya,gayab hote hue woh theek un teeno ke saamne prakat hui..

MAHI ko yun achanak apne saamne dekh woh sab hadbadaye aur us hadbadahat ko dard me badalne ke liye MAHI ne haath aage kiye aur...


SWAHA SHAKTIYEM BUDIJOTIHA

ADJOIN WITH MY POWERS...


apne dono haathon ko jod unhe halka shrug karte hue uccharit kiya is SPELL ko MAHI ne aur uske waisa karte hi HEMINE, AROZ aur TIFER ke ek ek shoulder par MAHI ki LIFE KEEPER urja create hui jiske agle hi pal un teeno ko apne shoulders par ek magnetic AURA feel hua aur aisa hote hi..

AHHHHH...

woh teeno ek dusre se apne shoulder ke through chipak chuke the...

aur MAHI ki WORLD TREE waali power ki wajah se jo un teeno ke liye painful thi,un teeno ko apne shoulders ke through puri body me ek tez pain gush feel hua aur unke mooh se ek cheekh nikal gayi..

ye pain un teeno ke brain cells ko bhi dull kar chuka tha jiski wajah se woh sab sirf half conscious state me jaa chuke the...

aur bache VALDIS, DORIAN, GASTON, UBEL aur TRISTEN toh jaise hi unke chhode ONRUSH RAYS mere baaki paanchon saathiyon ke paas pahunche aur woh sab gayab hue toh theek ussi pal wahan prakat hue GRIFFIN aur ANZU jinhone badi tezi ae apne apne wings ko lehraya..

unke waisa karte hi un ONRUSH RAYS ki forward movement naa sirf rook gayi balki woh rays wapas moodte hue double tezi aur saath hi saath tripple shakti ikhtiyar kar sidhe jaakar VALDIS aur uske saathiyon ko hi hit ho gaye..

aisa hote hi woh paanchon piche udte hue gire par girte hi woh sab wapas khade bhi ho gaye the lekin tabhi..

ACCHUTA aur uske chaaron saathi ek baar phirse unke saamne prakat ho chuke the aur is waqt ACCHUTA ke haathon me uski GOD GIFTED BOW and ARROW chamak rahi thi jiske baad..


ACCHUTA-DORAIN,GASTON, UBEL, TRISTEN...good bye...

SOOBHHHH...

apni baat bol ACCHUTA ne apne dhanush ka pratyancha kaan tak kheench chhod diya..

WHITE FIRE se chamakta hua woh ARROW aage badh chuka tha aur aadhe raaste tak pahunch woh sab kul 4 ARROWS me divide ho chuke the..

waise toh ACCHUTA ki ARROW me pehle se hi bohot zyada vidhwanshak shakti thi par us shakti ko aur ghaaatak banaya uske chaaron saathiyon ne..

BRAWNY ne apne external pyscical force ki shakti us ARROW me mila di thi.

SLUNDER ki SHIELD power ke asar ko ulta kar diya tha usne jiski wajah se ab koi bhi SHIELD us ARROW ka rasta nahi rok sakti thi..

HIDA ke paas thi uski healing ability jisse woh reverse bhi kar sakti thi aur usne kar bhi diya tha...

us SWORD me usne REVERSE HEALING WAVE jod diya jiski wajah se ab us ARROW se mila koi bhi wound death LESION me convert ho jaane waala tha..

aur bachi MABEL..usne toh BOW ki shakti ko 10 times AMPLIFY kar diya tha...

saath hi saath itne saare GOD GIFTED powers ke judne ki wajah se ARROW ki gati itni zyada tez ho chuki thi ki DORIAN, GASTON, UBEL, TRISTEN aur VALDIS bhi usse dekh tak nahi paa rahe the..

ye saara kuch chand palon me hi ho chuka tha..

HEMINE, AROZ, TIFER aur VIRAAZ ke maamle me toh kuch nahi kar paaya VIDEOUS yaa phir ye kahun ki usne try hi nahi kiya kyunki un par sirf normal hits hue the but abki baar jo hit uske khaad logon par hua tha,woh jaanleva tha aur isiliye ARROW ko jisse uski taraf se sirf wohi dekh paa raha tha,rokne ke liye haath aage kiya usne aur ek HOIST gush ray release kiya par tabhi...

ek haath aur utha tha VIDEOUS ke haath ke saath joki mera tha aur mere aisa karte hi mere haath se bhi ek LANCINATE GUSH RAY nikal VIDEOUS ke ray ke saath hi aage badha aur jis waqt VIDEOUS ki ray ARROWS ko hit hui aur aisa hote hi uski movement rookne ko hui toh theek ussi pal meri ray bhi us ARROWS ko hit ho gayi jiske baad uski theherti movement ko ek dhakka sa laga aur wapas speed pakadte woh chaaron ARROWS DORIAN, GASTON, UBEL aur TRISTEN ke chest ko bhedh chuke the..

awaaz bhi naa nikal paayi un chaaron ki aur woh neeche gir chuke the...

haan, VIDEOUS ke rays ki wajah se naa sirf ARROWS ki movement kuch micro seconds ke liye kam hue the balki unme ghum rahi mere paanchon doston ki shakti bhi kam hone lagi thi..

yahi wajah thi ki ARROWS hit ke baad bhi DORIAN, GASTON, UBEL aur TRISTEN ab bhi zinda the but unki ye zindagi mout se badtar thi..

REASON...

mere ray me bhi sirf ek forward movement ki shakti nahi thi balki ek poisoned gush bhi tha joki ab un chaaron ke brains me sama chuka tha..

aur isiliye filhal woh chaaron pahunch chuke the THE PERSISTENT VEGETATIVE STATE me..

wahi state jisme kabhi DORIAN aur GASTON ne ACCHUTA,SLUNDER aur un dono ke MOM DAD ko pahunchaya tha..

aaj un dono ko unke dono saathiyon ke saath apne hi medicine ka taste mil chuka tha...

ACCHUTA aur SLUNDER ko bhi un chaaron ki condition ka pata chal chuka tha aur isiliye is waqt un dono ki aankhon me mere liye thanks ke bhaav the..

aur smile karte hue hi ACCHUTA ki nazar wapas VALDIS ki taraf gayi jo aankhon me halka dar liye apne neeche gire pade chaaron saathiyon ko dekh raha tha jispar...


ACCHUTA-ye mat sochna ki bach gaya tu...tune meri jaan par galat nigaah daali hai..

beta teri toh woh haalat karunga mai ki mout bhi tujhe lene se pehle teri haalat dekh tujhpar mutegi....


ACCHUTA ki baat par VALDIS ne toh dara hua hi raha but do aankhein aisi thi jinme chingaari dikh rahi thi..

ye aankhein thi VIDEOUS ki jo ACCHUTA ki baat sun usse khatm karne ke iraade se DEATH SPELL bolne hi waala tha ki tabhi...


SOOOBHHHH...

meri body tezi se aage badhi aur agle hi pal mai VIDEOUS ke saamne tha..

mujhe apne saamne dekh VIDEOUS kuch bolne ki hua par tabhi...


MAI-nanananana... apne kote ki bakwas kar chuka tu...ab meri baari...

ye sach hai ki buddhi bohot hai tujhme...par dimag ka stock mera bhi hamesha full hi hota hai...

aur jab mere dimag ke ghode doudte hain toh bina race jeete woh rookte nahi...

aur rahi baat taakat ki toh yaad hai kuch der pehle kuch kaha tha maine..

mera 1 tere dus ke barabar hoga..but eventually,tune ab tak 12 waar kar diye hain mujhpar...

matlab soodh ke saath byaaj bhi loutana hai mujhe tera...

shuruat byaj se karte hain...


SOOBHHHH..TANNNN.KRRRR....

apni baat bolte hue apni SWORD ke POMMEL ko pakad tezi se usse slash kiya maine usse VIDEOUS par.

lekin VIDEOUS jo pehle se hi satark tha, mere SWORD slash karte hi usne turant usse block karne ke liye apni DARK ITERNAL CANE apne saamne kar di jisse takrate hue TANN ki awaaz ke saath SWORD rook gayi..

SWORD slash ke rookte hi ek halki si smile taiyar hone lagi thi VIDEOUS ke face par lekin woh muskaan puri ban hi nahi paayi..

REASON...

jaise hi meri SWORD aur VIDEOUS ki DARK ITERNAL CANE aapas me takraye toh aisa hote hi meri SWORD ki blade me halka sa vibration hua aur us slightest of the vibration me itni taakat thi ki usne VIDEOUS ki DARK ITERNAL CANE ko makkhan ki tarah beech se kaat diya...

KRRR ki awaaz ke saath woh DARK ITERNAL CANE beech se kaththe hue toot chuka tha...

aankhon me hairani ke samandar ko laate hue VIDEOUS ne apne us damaged DARK ITERNAL ko dekha aur phir mujhe aur jaise hi uski aankhein mujhpar tiki toh...


MAI-ye tha BYAAJ....waise kya bola tha tune,tu is SWORD ki shakti ko jaanta hai...

VIDEOUS, VIDEOUS, VIDEOUS...ye kisi aag ki bhatti me tapi hui aur insaan ,ya phir kisi ANGEL ke haathon bani SWORD nahi hai...

iski taakat ka andaza tu laga hi nahi sakta..tune iski utni hi taakat mehsoos ki,jitni ye tujhe mehsoos karana chahati thi...

anyways,as i said,BYAAJ ho gaya,ab baari hai SOODH ki...

ye bolte hue hi mera left haath mutthi ki shakl liye VIDEOUS ki taraf badha aur aisa hote hi VIDEOUS ki hairangi thodi aur badh gayi..

REASON..

mere haath ki movement lagbhagh utni hi tez thi jitni thodi der pehle VIDEOUS ki mujhpar ki gayi attacks ke waqt thi..

it was like waqt rook sa gaya hai aur us paused samay me hi mera haath VIDEOUS ke peth ke paas pahunch chuka tha..

but VIDEOUS bhi toh tha hi super sharp aur utni hi sharp thi uski nazarein...

yahi wajah thi ki barely hi sahi,usne mere left haath ko uske peth ke paas mehsoos kar hi liya aur aisa hote hi usne ye bhi calculation kar liya tha ki woh mere left fist ke daayre se apni body hata nahi paayega.

he has to block it...

aur isiliye apni lightning se bhi hazar guna zyada speed ka parichay dete hue usne apne left hand ko modte hue block ki shakal di aur mere fist ke uske peth ko hit karne ne just pehle hi usne mere fist ko apne moode hue hatheliyon se pakad liya par tabhi...

ek hi pal me teen cheezen hui...

pehli...

mere fist ki overwhelming power ko feel kiya VIDEOUS ke haathon ne..

mere fist ko bhale hi VIDEOUS block karne me kaamiyab ho gaya tha but mere us punch me itni zyada taakat thi ki uska woh haath jisne mere left fist ko roka tha,woh jaakar uske peth par padi jiske baad VIDEOUS thoda piche sarak gaya..

dusri...

aisa hone ke kaaran VIDEOUS ko apna dusra haath bhi use me laana pada aur usne apne right hand se mere left hand ko hold karna pada jiski strength ab bhi itni zyada thi ki usse ho rahi kampan se VIDEOUS ka left haath jhanjhana gaya tha..

aur lastly jaise hi VIDEOUS ke dono haath mere left haath par kaam me lage,theek ussi pal mere right hand me hold kiya hua SWORD badla ek puncher ke roop me aur aisa hote hi..

left hand se bhi tez ghuma mera right hand jisse jab tak VIDEOUS samajh bhi paata..

BHAAKKKKKK...

ek aisa punch uske face par lag chuka tha jiske hit karte hi VIDEOUS kareeb 50 metre piche udta hua jaakar gira..

honth side se fath gaye the uske aur most importantly,hit ke impact ki wajah se sir pura bhanna gaya tha..

yahi reason tha ki ek second,sirf ek second ka open window mila hum sabko jisme socha hua sab kuch implement karna tha hume kyunki ab mera...



waqt pura ho chuka tha is zindagi ke MAHAL ME....

apne saath apne mrityu ke kaaran ko bhi dubana tha ussike banaye DALDAL ME....

yudh ka ek ehem mod aa chuka tha ab....

khudko aur VIDEOUS ko khatm karne ka intazam karna tha mujhe,mile hue is ek PAL ME....




















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