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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF GRIFFIN MAHI KO BATATI HAI KI AAJ RAAZ KI JAAN KHATRE ME HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ KO PATA CHALTA HAI KI WOH FLORIN AUR MARIA KA BETA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



MEGA DARK UPDATE-120


PART-1



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-RAAZ ABODE






TU FLORIN AUR MARIA KA WOH PUTR HAI JISKA KABHI JANM NAHI HUA....!!!!!!



UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS BOOK me mere baare me likhe is aakhri pankti ke asar se mai bahar aa hi nahi paa raha tha...

mere dhamniyon me behte rakht ka pravah itna tez ho chuka tha ki mai apne har katre khoon ki raftaar ko mehsoos kar paa raha tha...

ek ajeeb si anthin bechaini ne mere andar janm le liya tha jiske ganit ko mai samajh nahi paa raha tha yaa phir ye kahun ki samajhna hi nahi chahata tha....

aankhon me jo paani tha,woh mere human hone ki baat par mohar laga raha tha...

jahan aaj tak apne lakshya ke siwa kuch socha nahi tha maine,wahin aaj,abhi mere dimag me sirf aur sirf do logon ki chavi ghoom rahi thi..

FLORIN aur MARIA joki mere maata pitah the....bachpan se aaj tak unke saath guzra har pal mere dimag me ghumne laga tha aur un palon me jo kuch bhi hua tha,uspar emotions ka tadka mera dil laga raha tha...

achanak se hi mere dono haath kisiko aalingan dete waqt jaise khul kar phir judte hain,us mudra me chale gaye...

reason...

mere aankhon ke aage yahan CHOSENS me apne mom dad ko life me pehli baar hug karna yaad jo aa gaya tha..

par us waqt gale milte samay bhi mujhe koi feeling nahi aayi thi,par abhi jab mai sirf us hug ko yaad bhar kar raha tha,toh mere andar emotions ka sailab sa uthne laga tha..

mere dimag me woh pal bhi dikhne laga tha jab urja se ek navjaat shishu me badalne ke baad mujhe teeno SOVEREIGN'S ne mere hi mom dad ke ORPHANAGE ke bahar chhod diya tha jiske baad jab MARIA ne mujhe dekha aur mujhe apni godh me uthaya tha,tab mere chehre ko kitne pyar se dekh rahi thi unki aankhen..

bachpan me mera akdu behaviour,mera lake ke saamne jaakar baithna aur mujhe kam baat karta dekh yaa apni aankhon se ojhal paa MARIA ka tention me aana, FLORIN ka mujhe har jagah dhundna,woh saare scenes mere dimag me automatically create ho rahe the...

ye sab yaad kar hamesha straight face rakhne waala mai,kab muskurane lag gaya tha,mujhe khud pata nahi chala....

apni asliyat jaante waqt maine woh scene bhi dekha jab mere jaisa hi ek clone body ko mari haalat me paida karne ke baad jaise hi MARIA aur FLORIN ko pata chala tha ki unhe ek mara hua baccha paida hua hai,toh kitne zyada toot gaye the woh dono....

mai unka pehla baccha hone waala tha,laakhon sapne dekhe the un dono ne mujhe lekar jo us mare hue clone body ko dekh toot gaye the..

ye soch kar meri khushi ka thikana nahi tha ki jab un dono ko ye pata chalega ki jo mara baccha MARIA se nikla tha,woh sirf ek clone tha,unka asli bacha,unka khoon mai hun toh kitne khush ho jaayenge woh dono..

jisse hamesha apna bacha hi samjha tha un dono ne,woh wakayi unka hi baccha hai,ye jaankar unhe jo feeling aayegi,mai jeena chahta tha us ehsaas ko.

khushi ki bhaavna kaisi hoti hai,ye aaj pehli baar feel kar raha tha mai par saath is mai is baat se anjaan bhi tha ki mere ye khushi bhare ehsaas temporary hai jo kuch hi pal me ek aise pain me badalne waale hain,jisse sehna mere liye bhi naamumkin hone waala hai...

kyunki khudke revelation ko jaankar do ehem baaton se dhyan hath gaya tha mera....

pehla tha woh SPECULATION SPELL jo VIDEOUS ne is book ke upar chant kiya tha aur jo is waqt mere man ke bhaavon ko achi tarah padh raha tha...

aur dusra tha woh ehsaas jo mujhme aaj aaye sapne ki wajah se jaaga tha aur jiski wajah hi mere HEART aur SOUL ki pure energy channi thi...

us positive chiz ki wajah se ek negetive chiz bhi hui thi aur woh ye ki mere HEART me banti REFINERS powers unstable ho chuki thi..

jo kisi bhi dual thinking se trigger ho jaane waali thi...

khair,apni asliyat un dono ko, apne mata pitah ko batane ke liye betaab ho gaya tha mai isiliye apne haathon me pakde us kitab ko jo filhal khuli hui thi,band kar moodne ko hua mai par........

woh book band hui hi nahi...book ke dono ends tak ek nayi urja joki asal me VIDEOUS ki speculation spell ki shakti thi,faili hui thi aur ussine book ko band hone se roka hua tha...

wahin jab meri nazar us urja par padi toh ek tez vibration hua us urja me jiske baad mere kaano me us urja ke through gunji VIDEOUS ki awaaz....


VIDEOUS-sharth waali baat bhul gaya tu RAAZ...koi naa,mai nahi bhula,aur ab jo hoga,woh tu bhi kabhi nahi bhul paayega...

dhyan se sun aur sharth par amal kar, kyunki iske awala tere paas aur koi chara bhi nahi hai...



meri baat ke baad hi band ye KITAAB HOGI...

ek waada kiya tha tune,jisse nibha kar tere dil ki chita puri RAAKH HOGI.....

apne hi MATA PITAH ko abhi jaakar khud MAAREGA tu,

jo waada toda,tab bhi marenge woh,par tab woh mout behadh DARDNAAKH HOGI......



pathrayi aakhen, saanson ka chalna naa chalna ek saa lagna,dil ki dhadkan ka rook sa jaana,agar ye kahun toh galat nahi hoga ki jeete jee mar jaana kya hota hai,is kahawat ka matlab aaj jaana tha maine...

VIDEOUS ke speculation spell ki urja kaali hokar gayab ho chuki thi jiska matlab tha ki agar maine uski baat nahi maani toh mere mom dad par death curse lag jaayega jisse unki mout hadh se zyada dardnaak ho jaayegi...

ek aisa sach jisse badla nahi jaa sakta tha...

GOD'S GIFT...jo kabhi galat nahi ho sakti..ussi GIFT ke through future death level danger ko sense karne ki abilities mili thi ALFREEN ko aur uski powers ko jab maine garden me uski bina jaankari ke share kiya tha,tab uske dimag me panpe issi dar ko bhi feel kiya tha maine jisse jaan us waqt toh sirf hairan hua tha mai..

seriously nahi kiya tha maine us dar ko aur yahin galat ho gaya mai...

kaise bhul gaya mai ki is bramhaand me sab kuch jhooth ho sakta hai,par jo GOD ke through mila hai,woh kabhi asatya nahi ho sakta...

apne faayde ke liye churaya ALFREEN ka woh GOD GIFT mere liye aaj GOD CURSE me badal chuka tha..


DHAMMMM.............

apne ghutno par aa gaya mai...aansu beh rahe the mere..dard kuch yun tha ki pura sharir sunn padte hue jam sa gaya tha...

dimag ne toh kaam karna band hi kar diya tha par is naye uthe vedna bhare bhaav ki wajah se mere REFINER powers ne khudko trigger kar liya tha...

yahi reason tha ki bina mere ijaazat ke hi mere REFINER powers ne mujhe gayab karte hue ek nayi jagah par prakat kiya jisse dekh meri bhar chuki aankhon ke aansu jhalak se uthe...

is waqt mai ek ABODE ke bahar baitha hua tha aur ye ABODE FLORIN aur MARIA ka matlab mere mom dad ka ghar tha....






PLACE-ALFREEN'S ABODE





RAAZ.....aaj subah breakfast par nahi aaye tum...???FLORIN gaye the tumhare ABODE par tumhare ELUSORY ne bataya ki tum institution nikal gaye ho..

AL bhi isiliye abhi thodi der hi pehle institution nikal gayi...


waise toh har kaam yahan ABODES me magic ke through ho jaata tha,par kuch decorations,rakh rakhav ab bhi MARIA apne haathon se manually hi karna pasand karti thi aur abhi bhi woh hall me yahi sab kar rahi thi ki tabhi main door par uski nazar padi jahan mai khada tha..

par dhyan se nahi dekha tha mujhe MARIA ne isiliye bas meri ek jhalak dekhne ke baad wapas kuch pillows ko sofa par thik se rakhte hue kahi thi unhone ye saari baatein par iske baad bhi jab meri taraf se khamoshi hi rahi toh woh meri taraf palti aur unke aisa karte hi jab unki nazar mere aansuon se bheege chehre aur jhuke hue kandhon par gayi toh woh kuch palon ke liye sann si reh gayi...

ek statue ki tarah khadi woh mujhe aaj life me pehli baar rote hue dekh rahi thi...

unhe yaad tha ki bachpan me vaccination milte waqt bhi mai eklouta aisa baccha hua karta tha jo rota nahi tha..

badi se badi durghatna par bhi mere straight face ko dekhne ki aadat thi unhe par aaj bina kuch kahe meri aankhon ko yun bhara hua aur face par chhaaye aseem dard ko dekh unki bechaini har beetathe pal ke saath badhti chali jaa rahi thi...

mujhe rota dekh MARIA ka dil bhi rone laga tha aur isiliye kuch pal jadh si rehne ke baad woh bhaagi meri taraf aur pehle mere chehre ko pakad mere aansuon ko saaf karte hue mujhe naa rone ka ishara kiya unhone par aisa karte hue woh khud bhi rone lagi thi...

unhe samajh nahi aa raha tha ki bhala kyun mere aansu unke dil tak ko bhi cheer rahe the...

kuch pal mere aansuon ko saaf karte rehne ke baad MARIA ne jhat se mujhe apni baahon me bhar liya..

haan mere lambe chowde sharir ke saath aisa karne me woh puri tarah kaamiyab nahi hui par jitni bhi hui,utna mere liye kaafi tha...

kehte hain,maa ke pairon ke jannat hoti hai,mujhe toh apni maa ki baahon me woh swarg naseeb ho gayi thi...

isse bada gift,vardaan kuch bhi naa tha mere liye...

aansu toh ab bhi lagatar chhalak rahe the meri aankhon se,par apni maa ke dil se lag mere jalte hue dil par paani padh gaya tha jaise...

mai is behatarin pal ko apni aankhen band kar puri shiddat se jee hi raha tha ki tabhi...


ARRE,KYA BAAT HAI,AAJ RAAZ PAR BADA PYAAR AA RAHA HAI HAMARI BEGUM KO...!!!


mere kaano me padi ye dusri awaaz...

woh awaaz jinki wajah se mera aadha astitva bana tha...mere pitah FLORIN....

wahin FLORIN ki baat sun MARIA mujhse alag hui aur unki taraf palti aur unke aisa karte hi FLORIN ko unki aur saath hi meri aansuon se bhari aankhen dikhi aur ye dekhunke face par jo smile thi,woh ussi waqt gayab ho gayi aur woh turant hamari taraf badhe..

par hairani ki baat ye hui ki apni biwi ke bajaaye unhohe mera chehra pakda aur mere aansuon ko saaf karte hue..


FLORIN-kya hua beta...???ro kyun raha hai..??kisne rulaya tujhe...bata mujhe...???zinda nahi chhodunga usse mai...


awaaz nahi,ek gurrahat nikli thi FLORIN ke mooh se..mai dekh raha tha woh insaan,jo hamesha hi shaant rehta hai,uske chehre par mere chehre ki taklif dekhkar dard aur beintaha ghhussa chha gaya tha..

unka ATTITUDE completely change ho gaya tha jiska pata unhe tak nahi tha...

wahin unke puchne ke baad bhi jab mai kuch nahi bola toh..


FLORIN-arre tu chup kyun hai..??bata kya hua hai...???

MARIA-beta,AL ne toh kuch nahi kaha tujhe...???


MARIA ki baat sun unki taraf dekha maine..aur mere aisa karne par MARIA aur FLORIN ko laga ki shayad mere rone aur sad hone ke piche ka reason unki beti hai..

aur ye feel karte hi unke face ke expressions badal gaye...

mai dekh taha tha ki dono ke hi aankhon me unki beti ke liye ghussa dikhne laga tha...

us ladke ke liye jo ab tak toh unke liye begaana hi tha,uske liye unki aankhon me apni beti se zyada pyar dikh raha tha mujhe...

wahin aankhon me ghussa liye MARIA apni beti ko confront karne ke baare me sochne lagi par tabhi unhe apne haathon par mere haathon ka ehsaas hua jispar jab unhone meri taraf dekha toh...


MAI-its not ALFREEN...???

MARIA-then what is it son..???


MARIA ki baat par kuch kaha nahi maine balki unke saath FLORIN ka bhi haath pakad un dono ko sofe ke paas le gaya..

woh dono bhi bina kisi hil hujjut ke mere saath chal pade the..sofe ke paas pahunch maine unhe baithne ka ishara kiya aur un dono ke baithne ke baad mai un dono ke pairon ke paas ghutno ke bal baith gaya...

FLORIN aur MARIA,dono hi dekh rahe the mere face ke har pal badalte hue expressions par ab woh bilkul shaant hokar baith chuke the...

wahin kuch der tak khudse ladhte rehne ke baad maine ek lambi saans li aur...


MAI-ALFREEN is not your first child, right..??? usse pehle bhi aapko ek baccha hua tha par woh baccha mara hua paida hua tha...

meri is baat ko sun hadh se zyada shocked ho gaye the MARIA aur FLORIN...

itni purani baat aur saath hi woh RAAZ jo unhone apni beti tak ko nahi bataya tha taaki usse kharab naa lage,maine unke saamne disclose kiya tha...

par saath hi jis condition me mai ye baat kar raha tha,woh bhi sandeh se bhara hua tha aur isiliye...


MARIA-tumhe kaise pata ye baat..??aur us baat ka tumhare rone se kya connection hai beta...???


MARIA mujhse sawal kar rahi thi par us sawal se meri ye ummid ki jo bhi maine dekha,woh jhut ho sakta hai, VIDEOUS ka failaya maayajaal ho sakta hai,toot chuka tha..

ek baar phirse aansuon ki tez pravah nikal padi mere aankhon se jisse dekh FLORIN aur MARIA, dono ka hi dil baithne laga tha par woh ab chup hi the...

wahin kuch der baad khud ko normal kar...


MAI-jo mara hua baccha aapko hua tha,woh bacha aapka nahi tha..woh bas ek cloned child tha jisse aapke garbh me aapke asli bache ki jagah implant kar diya gaya tha..


DHHOOOOMMMMM.....

ek dhamaka sa hua tha MARIA aur FLORIN ke dimag me meri baaton ko sunkar..

pehle toh meri baat ko sun unhe mujhpar behadh ghussa aaya par phir mere aansuon se bheege chehre aur mere ATTITUDE ko joki mazak karne ka tha hi nahi,uska dhyan karte hue un dono ka hi ghussa shaant ho chuka tha..

ghussa bhale hi shaant ho gaya tha un dono ka,par meri baat sun man zaroor puri tarah vyathit ho chuka tha..

kis aur mahoul me,normal world me toh un dono ne meri kahi baat ko fake maan hawa me uda diya hota par ALFREEN ke saath jo hua tha,aur jis duniya me woh the,usse dhyan me rakh woh jaante the ki yahan kuch bhi possible hai...

bechain toh bohot ho gaye the dono par kisi tarah khudko normal rakh..


FLORIN-ye sab kya bol rahe ho RAAZ...???hamare bache ke badle ek cloned bache ko MARIA ke garbh me implant kar diya gaya tha...

par kyun...??aur phir hamare bacche ka kya hua...??


FLORIN ki baat sun maine kuch kaha nahi bas apne dono haathon ko aage kar un dono ke sir par rakh diya aur mere aisa karte hi un dono ke sir par ek roshni chamki jisse unki aankhein band hoti chali gayi..

band aankhon ke beech unhe woh sab kuch dikhne laga jo kuch der pehle maine bhi dekha tha..

saath hi mai kaun hun,mere janm ka uddeshya kya hai,ye bhi un dono ko pata lag chuka tha...

par mai yahin par nahi ruka... UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS books me VIDEOUS ne jo chhal kiya tha, jiski wajah se meri aankhen aur dil,dono hi bhare hue the,woh drishya bhi maine un dono ko dikha diya...

jab woh drishya,woh sach woh dono aankhen band kiye dekh rahe the,tab meri nazar un dono ke face par thi...

par tabhi,vedna se bhare mere chehre par achanak se hi ek pal ke liye hairani ke bhaav dikhne lage...

reason....

VIDEOUS ki sharth ke baare me jaankar jahan un dono ke face par dar dikhna chahiye tha,ye jaankar ki unke apne bete ke haathon marna unki niyati hai,unhe dard hona chahiye tha,aisa kuch bhi nahi hua tha...

balki isse ulat un dono ke face par ek smile naach uthi thi...

aur yunhi smile karte hue kuch der baad jab unhone mujhe dekha toh maine un dono ke hi aankhon me apne liye beintahan mohobbat dikhi...

MARIA ne toh turant wapas mere chehre ko apne haathon ke beech liya aur mere pure chehre ko chumne lagi...

wahin FLORIN ke aankhon me mere prati ek garv tha aur ussi garv ke saath woh mujhe dekh rahe the..

kuch der mere chehre ko chum jab MARIA mujhse alag hui toh...


MARIA-tu mera baccha hai...mera apna baccha..itne saalon se mere hi saamne bada hua tu aur mai tujhe pehchaan bhi naa saki...

RAAZ...mera RAAZ...

FLORIN-hamara....


FLORIN ki baat sun aansu se bhare MARIA ki aankhen chalki aur woh muskura uthi...

wahin apni baat bol FLORIN ne apna ek haath mere sir par rakha yaa phir ye kahun ki firaya aur...


FLORIN-kyun hai tere aankhon me aansu mere bacche.. isiliye kyunki tujhe hum dono ko,apne maata pitah ko maarna padega...

tu hame maarega nahi RAAZ..tere haathon hume moksh milega...hum azaad ho jaayenge..

MARIA-aur hamare jaane ke baad ye ek pal ke liye bhi nahi sochna ki tune hume maara hai aur tu layak beta nahi hai...

jis SHRAAP ko,SHAITAN ko mitane ke liye khud PARMESHWAR PUTRON ne apni URJA ko banaya hai,woh URJA meri kokh se nikla hamara ANSH hai..

isse badi baat humare liye kuch ho hi nahi sakti thi beta...tune toh hamara ye manushya jeevan saarthak bana diya hai...

is CHOSENS ko,yahan rehne waale jaaduyi aur khaas logon ko dekhkar hamesha mai sochti thi ki hum pati patni in khaas logon ke beech me kitne aam hai...

par aaj pata chala ki ye saare khaas mil bhi jaaye naa,toh bhi hamare saamne aam hai..

aur aisa sirf teri wajah se hua hai...jo hua woh niyati thi,jo ho raha hai,woh bhi niyati hai,aur jo aage hoga,woh bhi niyati hi hogi..

FLORIN-mere bachhe, niyati se toh GOD bhi nahi bhaag sakte,hum bhala kya cheez hain...!!!!

isiliye jo hona hi hai, uske viprit sochna samajhdaari nahi...

aur mere bete se zyada toh koi samajhdaar hai hi nahi...


mere sir par phirse apna haath ferte hue kahi ye baat FLORIN ne...

wahin un dono ki baatein sunkar mere aansu behne toh band ho chuke the,par ab bhi meri aankhen bhari hui hi thi,bas unhone aansuon ko chhalakne ki ijazat dena band kar diya tha...

mai ek tak un dono ko dekh raha tha jispar bade pyar se mujhe dekhte hue...


MARIA-jo waada kiya hai,usse nibhao RAAZ...par usse pehle hamari ek KHWAHISH hai..

puri karoge..!!!!


MARIA ki baat par maina kaha toh kuch nahi bas haan me apna sir hila diya jispar...


MARIA/FLORIN-hum chaahte hain ki jab tum apna waada nibhao,hume is duniya se vida karo,toh aisa karne se thik pehle hume mom,dad kehkar bulao...

bas itna kar de,marte waqt hume zara sa bhi dard nahi hoga...

MAI-dard toh mai waise bhi hone bhi nahi dunga...par kya ALFREEN se nahi milna chahte aap dono....???

FLORIN-chahte toh hain..par woh naasamajh hai,jasbaat me sahi galat me fark karna nahi aata usse...

isiliye jaane de...kuch jhatkon ka ehsaas unke lagne ke thodi der baad pata chale toh hi thik hota hai...

tu apna kaam shuru kar...par haan, pehle hume woh kehkar bula jo hum tere lagte hain...


FLORIN ki baat sun maine apne dono haathon ko ek baar phirse un dono ke sir ki taraf badhaya...

par aisa karte waqt mere dono haath buri tarah kaamp rahe the...

wahin meri haalat se bilkul ulat FLORIN aur MARIA bilkul shaant aur khush dikh rahe the...

apna haath un dono ke sir par rakh maine ek baar un dono ke face ko dekha aur phir nikle mere mooh se woh do shabd jo FLORIN aur MARIA sunana chahte the...


MAI-MOM,DAD.....i am sorry....

MARIA/FLORIN-dont be son....we are proud of you...

MAI- V.....E....L.....A..........H........

PAINLESS DEATH....


ladkhadati awaaz me apni aankhen band kar is SPELL ko bola tha maine....

ye ek khaas kism ka DEATH SPELL tha...iski khubi ye thi ki is SPELL se jo marta tha,uska sharir turant jal kar raakh ho jaata tha,par is process ke dauran usse bilkul bhi dard nahi hota tha par iska ulat jo is SPELL ko uccharit karta tha,uske haath bhi is SPELL ke asar se jal jaate the,aur saath hi saath jo jalan marne waale ko honi chahiye,woh jalan jalaane waale ko apne haathon me feel hoti thi....

aur abhi bhi wahi hua...mere SPELL bolte hi mere mom dad ke sir se lekar pair tak unka pura sharir jalne laga aur unke saath unke sir par rakha mera haath bhi jalne laga..

par jahan ek taraf pure sir se lekar pair tak aag lagne ke baawjud mere mom dad ko halka sa bhi pain nahi hua,wahin mera haath buri tarah jalne laga aur mujhe asahaniya pain feel hone laga jisse apne mom dad ke muskurate hue face ko dekhte hue mai zabt kar hi raha tha ki tabhi...


NAHI...................

ek zordaar cheekh padi mere kaano me jo front door se aayi thi jahan is waqt MAHI aur ALFREEN khade the..

ye cheekh ALFREEN ke mooh se nikli thi jo cheekhte hue apne mom dad ko jalte dekh pehle toh jadh si ho gayi par phir jo hua,us chiz ko jaise hi uske dimag ne thik se read kiya toh usse laga ek tagda jhatka jiski wajah se woh behosh hokar niche gir padi thi...

wahin uske baaju me khadi MAHI bhi ekdum jadh si hokar reh gayi thi...

GRIFFIN ke kehne par woh lagatar mujhe sense kar rahi thi..aur aisa karte waqt jab usne mujhe ALFREEN ke ghar par sense liya toh uska man hua ki woh yahan aakar mujhe saamne se dekhe..

aur tabhi ALFREEN mujhe dhundte hue wahan garden me uske saamne aa gayi..

aur jab usne mere baare me pucha toh MAHI ne usse bataya ki mai ussike ghar par hun aur phir ussike saath yahan aa gayi..

par usse kahan maalum tha ki yahan aate hi usse kuch aisa dekhne ko milega...

ALFREEN neeche behosh padi thi par MAHI waise hi sthir hokar statue ki tarah khadi hui thi...

uska toh sab kuch blank ho gaya tha....aur shayad aage bhi woh ussi condition me bani rehti ki tabhi....



AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.................



apne aawaz ki aakhri hadh ke saath cheekh pada tha mai jisse sun MAHI ki bhi jaise tandra si tooti thi...

bhari hui aankhon ke saath usne dekha ki mai saamne sofe par pade raakh joki mere mom dad ke the,usse apne dono haathon se pakadte hue apne chehre aur pure sharir par mal raha hun....

do jeete jaaagte insaano ko jalakar raakh maine hi banaya tha,aur ab ek dard se bhari cheekh ke baad un jale hue do logon ki raakh ko khudke upar mal apni taklif bayan kar raha tha mai,ye sab dekh MAHI ki sochne samajhne ki shakti jaise khatm hi ho gayi thi ki tabhi....



ISHQ PE MAREN,YAA ISHQ ME MAREN....

AGAR ISHQ SAATH HAI,TOH BHALA HUM KYUN DAREN....


GRIFFIN aur MAHI ki institution ke garden me hui mulakat ke waqt jab RAAZ ke liye MAHI ne ye baat kahi aur jaane ko hui toh GRIFFIN ne bhi usse kul teen baatein kahi thi jinme se jo pehli baat usne kahi thi,wahi baat is waqt MAHI ke dimag me achanak se gunj uthi..


GRIFFIN-tumhare prem ki pariksha hai aaj MAHI..RAAZ ke liye tumhare man me jitna bhi prem hai,prem ke un saare kano ko nichodte hue apne ragon ke har dhamniyon me aaj lagatar bahate rehna hai tumhe...




chaahe lag rahe uspar kitne hi TOHMAT HO,aaj RAAZ KA SAATH MAT CHHODNA...

uske khaatir agar tumhari bhi ZALAALAT HO,aaj RAAZ KA SAATH MAT CHHODNA...

ilzam lagenge uspar.....

aur agar woh wakayi GALAT HO,tab bhi,...aaj RAAZ KA SAATH MAT CHHODNA.....
















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......
















AAPKA APNA V...J....
Extraordinary ekdam fantastic update VJbhai
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF GRIFFIN MAHI KO BATATI HAI KI AAJ RAAZ KI JAAN KHATRE ME HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ KO PATA CHALTA HAI KI WOH FLORIN AUR MARIA KA BETA HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



MEGA DARK UPDATE-120


PART-1



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-RAAZ ABODE






TU FLORIN AUR MARIA KA WOH PUTR HAI JISKA KABHI JANM NAHI HUA....!!!!!!



UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS BOOK me mere baare me likhe is aakhri pankti ke asar se mai bahar aa hi nahi paa raha tha...

mere dhamniyon me behte rakht ka pravah itna tez ho chuka tha ki mai apne har katre khoon ki raftaar ko mehsoos kar paa raha tha...

ek ajeeb si anthin bechaini ne mere andar janm le liya tha jiske ganit ko mai samajh nahi paa raha tha yaa phir ye kahun ki samajhna hi nahi chahata tha....

aankhon me jo paani tha,woh mere human hone ki baat par mohar laga raha tha...

jahan aaj tak apne lakshya ke siwa kuch socha nahi tha maine,wahin aaj,abhi mere dimag me sirf aur sirf do logon ki chavi ghoom rahi thi..

FLORIN aur MARIA joki mere maata pitah the....bachpan se aaj tak unke saath guzra har pal mere dimag me ghumne laga tha aur un palon me jo kuch bhi hua tha,uspar emotions ka tadka mera dil laga raha tha...

achanak se hi mere dono haath kisiko aalingan dete waqt jaise khul kar phir judte hain,us mudra me chale gaye...

reason...

mere aankhon ke aage yahan CHOSENS me apne mom dad ko life me pehli baar hug karna yaad jo aa gaya tha..

par us waqt gale milte samay bhi mujhe koi feeling nahi aayi thi,par abhi jab mai sirf us hug ko yaad bhar kar raha tha,toh mere andar emotions ka sailab sa uthne laga tha..

mere dimag me woh pal bhi dikhne laga tha jab urja se ek navjaat shishu me badalne ke baad mujhe teeno SOVEREIGN'S ne mere hi mom dad ke ORPHANAGE ke bahar chhod diya tha jiske baad jab MARIA ne mujhe dekha aur mujhe apni godh me uthaya tha,tab mere chehre ko kitne pyar se dekh rahi thi unki aankhen..

bachpan me mera akdu behaviour,mera lake ke saamne jaakar baithna aur mujhe kam baat karta dekh yaa apni aankhon se ojhal paa MARIA ka tention me aana, FLORIN ka mujhe har jagah dhundna,woh saare scenes mere dimag me automatically create ho rahe the...

ye sab yaad kar hamesha straight face rakhne waala mai,kab muskurane lag gaya tha,mujhe khud pata nahi chala....

apni asliyat jaante waqt maine woh scene bhi dekha jab mere jaisa hi ek clone body ko mari haalat me paida karne ke baad jaise hi MARIA aur FLORIN ko pata chala tha ki unhe ek mara hua baccha paida hua hai,toh kitne zyada toot gaye the woh dono....

mai unka pehla baccha hone waala tha,laakhon sapne dekhe the un dono ne mujhe lekar jo us mare hue clone body ko dekh toot gaye the..

ye soch kar meri khushi ka thikana nahi tha ki jab un dono ko ye pata chalega ki jo mara baccha MARIA se nikla tha,woh sirf ek clone tha,unka asli bacha,unka khoon mai hun toh kitne khush ho jaayenge woh dono..

jisse hamesha apna bacha hi samjha tha un dono ne,woh wakayi unka hi baccha hai,ye jaankar unhe jo feeling aayegi,mai jeena chahta tha us ehsaas ko.

khushi ki bhaavna kaisi hoti hai,ye aaj pehli baar feel kar raha tha mai par saath is mai is baat se anjaan bhi tha ki mere ye khushi bhare ehsaas temporary hai jo kuch hi pal me ek aise pain me badalne waale hain,jisse sehna mere liye bhi naamumkin hone waala hai...

kyunki khudke revelation ko jaankar do ehem baaton se dhyan hath gaya tha mera....

pehla tha woh SPECULATION SPELL jo VIDEOUS ne is book ke upar chant kiya tha aur jo is waqt mere man ke bhaavon ko achi tarah padh raha tha...

aur dusra tha woh ehsaas jo mujhme aaj aaye sapne ki wajah se jaaga tha aur jiski wajah hi mere HEART aur SOUL ki pure energy channi thi...

us positive chiz ki wajah se ek negetive chiz bhi hui thi aur woh ye ki mere HEART me banti REFINERS powers unstable ho chuki thi..

jo kisi bhi dual thinking se trigger ho jaane waali thi...

khair,apni asliyat un dono ko, apne mata pitah ko batane ke liye betaab ho gaya tha mai isiliye apne haathon me pakde us kitab ko jo filhal khuli hui thi,band kar moodne ko hua mai par........

woh book band hui hi nahi...book ke dono ends tak ek nayi urja joki asal me VIDEOUS ki speculation spell ki shakti thi,faili hui thi aur ussine book ko band hone se roka hua tha...

wahin jab meri nazar us urja par padi toh ek tez vibration hua us urja me jiske baad mere kaano me us urja ke through gunji VIDEOUS ki awaaz....


VIDEOUS-sharth waali baat bhul gaya tu RAAZ...koi naa,mai nahi bhula,aur ab jo hoga,woh tu bhi kabhi nahi bhul paayega...

dhyan se sun aur sharth par amal kar, kyunki iske awala tere paas aur koi chara bhi nahi hai...



meri baat ke baad hi band ye KITAAB HOGI...

ek waada kiya tha tune,jisse nibha kar tere dil ki chita puri RAAKH HOGI.....

apne hi MATA PITAH ko abhi jaakar khud MAAREGA tu,

jo waada toda,tab bhi marenge woh,par tab woh mout behadh DARDNAAKH HOGI......



pathrayi aakhen, saanson ka chalna naa chalna ek saa lagna,dil ki dhadkan ka rook sa jaana,agar ye kahun toh galat nahi hoga ki jeete jee mar jaana kya hota hai,is kahawat ka matlab aaj jaana tha maine...

VIDEOUS ke speculation spell ki urja kaali hokar gayab ho chuki thi jiska matlab tha ki agar maine uski baat nahi maani toh mere mom dad par death curse lag jaayega jisse unki mout hadh se zyada dardnaak ho jaayegi...

ek aisa sach jisse badla nahi jaa sakta tha...

GOD'S GIFT...jo kabhi galat nahi ho sakti..ussi GIFT ke through future death level danger ko sense karne ki abilities mili thi ALFREEN ko aur uski powers ko jab maine garden me uski bina jaankari ke share kiya tha,tab uske dimag me panpe issi dar ko bhi feel kiya tha maine jisse jaan us waqt toh sirf hairan hua tha mai..

seriously nahi kiya tha maine us dar ko aur yahin galat ho gaya mai...

kaise bhul gaya mai ki is bramhaand me sab kuch jhooth ho sakta hai,par jo GOD ke through mila hai,woh kabhi asatya nahi ho sakta...

apne faayde ke liye churaya ALFREEN ka woh GOD GIFT mere liye aaj GOD CURSE me badal chuka tha..


DHAMMMM.............

apne ghutno par aa gaya mai...aansu beh rahe the mere..dard kuch yun tha ki pura sharir sunn padte hue jam sa gaya tha...

dimag ne toh kaam karna band hi kar diya tha par is naye uthe vedna bhare bhaav ki wajah se mere REFINER powers ne khudko trigger kar liya tha...

yahi reason tha ki bina mere ijaazat ke hi mere REFINER powers ne mujhe gayab karte hue ek nayi jagah par prakat kiya jisse dekh meri bhar chuki aankhon ke aansu jhalak se uthe...

is waqt mai ek ABODE ke bahar baitha hua tha aur ye ABODE FLORIN aur MARIA ka matlab mere mom dad ka ghar tha....






PLACE-ALFREEN'S ABODE





RAAZ.....aaj subah breakfast par nahi aaye tum...???FLORIN gaye the tumhare ABODE par tumhare ELUSORY ne bataya ki tum institution nikal gaye ho..

AL bhi isiliye abhi thodi der hi pehle institution nikal gayi...


waise toh har kaam yahan ABODES me magic ke through ho jaata tha,par kuch decorations,rakh rakhav ab bhi MARIA apne haathon se manually hi karna pasand karti thi aur abhi bhi woh hall me yahi sab kar rahi thi ki tabhi main door par uski nazar padi jahan mai khada tha..

par dhyan se nahi dekha tha mujhe MARIA ne isiliye bas meri ek jhalak dekhne ke baad wapas kuch pillows ko sofa par thik se rakhte hue kahi thi unhone ye saari baatein par iske baad bhi jab meri taraf se khamoshi hi rahi toh woh meri taraf palti aur unke aisa karte hi jab unki nazar mere aansuon se bheege chehre aur jhuke hue kandhon par gayi toh woh kuch palon ke liye sann si reh gayi...

ek statue ki tarah khadi woh mujhe aaj life me pehli baar rote hue dekh rahi thi...

unhe yaad tha ki bachpan me vaccination milte waqt bhi mai eklouta aisa baccha hua karta tha jo rota nahi tha..

badi se badi durghatna par bhi mere straight face ko dekhne ki aadat thi unhe par aaj bina kuch kahe meri aankhon ko yun bhara hua aur face par chhaaye aseem dard ko dekh unki bechaini har beetathe pal ke saath badhti chali jaa rahi thi...

mujhe rota dekh MARIA ka dil bhi rone laga tha aur isiliye kuch pal jadh si rehne ke baad woh bhaagi meri taraf aur pehle mere chehre ko pakad mere aansuon ko saaf karte hue mujhe naa rone ka ishara kiya unhone par aisa karte hue woh khud bhi rone lagi thi...

unhe samajh nahi aa raha tha ki bhala kyun mere aansu unke dil tak ko bhi cheer rahe the...

kuch pal mere aansuon ko saaf karte rehne ke baad MARIA ne jhat se mujhe apni baahon me bhar liya..

haan mere lambe chowde sharir ke saath aisa karne me woh puri tarah kaamiyab nahi hui par jitni bhi hui,utna mere liye kaafi tha...

kehte hain,maa ke pairon ke jannat hoti hai,mujhe toh apni maa ki baahon me woh swarg naseeb ho gayi thi...

isse bada gift,vardaan kuch bhi naa tha mere liye...

aansu toh ab bhi lagatar chhalak rahe the meri aankhon se,par apni maa ke dil se lag mere jalte hue dil par paani padh gaya tha jaise...

mai is behatarin pal ko apni aankhen band kar puri shiddat se jee hi raha tha ki tabhi...


ARRE,KYA BAAT HAI,AAJ RAAZ PAR BADA PYAAR AA RAHA HAI HAMARI BEGUM KO...!!!


mere kaano me padi ye dusri awaaz...

woh awaaz jinki wajah se mera aadha astitva bana tha...mere pitah FLORIN....

wahin FLORIN ki baat sun MARIA mujhse alag hui aur unki taraf palti aur unke aisa karte hi FLORIN ko unki aur saath hi meri aansuon se bhari aankhen dikhi aur ye dekhunke face par jo smile thi,woh ussi waqt gayab ho gayi aur woh turant hamari taraf badhe..

par hairani ki baat ye hui ki apni biwi ke bajaaye unhohe mera chehra pakda aur mere aansuon ko saaf karte hue..


FLORIN-kya hua beta...???ro kyun raha hai..??kisne rulaya tujhe...bata mujhe...???zinda nahi chhodunga usse mai...


awaaz nahi,ek gurrahat nikli thi FLORIN ke mooh se..mai dekh raha tha woh insaan,jo hamesha hi shaant rehta hai,uske chehre par mere chehre ki taklif dekhkar dard aur beintaha ghhussa chha gaya tha..

unka ATTITUDE completely change ho gaya tha jiska pata unhe tak nahi tha...

wahin unke puchne ke baad bhi jab mai kuch nahi bola toh..


FLORIN-arre tu chup kyun hai..??bata kya hua hai...???

MARIA-beta,AL ne toh kuch nahi kaha tujhe...???


MARIA ki baat sun unki taraf dekha maine..aur mere aisa karne par MARIA aur FLORIN ko laga ki shayad mere rone aur sad hone ke piche ka reason unki beti hai..

aur ye feel karte hi unke face ke expressions badal gaye...

mai dekh taha tha ki dono ke hi aankhon me unki beti ke liye ghussa dikhne laga tha...

us ladke ke liye jo ab tak toh unke liye begaana hi tha,uske liye unki aankhon me apni beti se zyada pyar dikh raha tha mujhe...

wahin aankhon me ghussa liye MARIA apni beti ko confront karne ke baare me sochne lagi par tabhi unhe apne haathon par mere haathon ka ehsaas hua jispar jab unhone meri taraf dekha toh...


MAI-its not ALFREEN...???

MARIA-then what is it son..???


MARIA ki baat par kuch kaha nahi maine balki unke saath FLORIN ka bhi haath pakad un dono ko sofe ke paas le gaya..

woh dono bhi bina kisi hil hujjut ke mere saath chal pade the..sofe ke paas pahunch maine unhe baithne ka ishara kiya aur un dono ke baithne ke baad mai un dono ke pairon ke paas ghutno ke bal baith gaya...

FLORIN aur MARIA,dono hi dekh rahe the mere face ke har pal badalte hue expressions par ab woh bilkul shaant hokar baith chuke the...

wahin kuch der tak khudse ladhte rehne ke baad maine ek lambi saans li aur...


MAI-ALFREEN is not your first child, right..??? usse pehle bhi aapko ek baccha hua tha par woh baccha mara hua paida hua tha...

meri is baat ko sun hadh se zyada shocked ho gaye the MARIA aur FLORIN...

itni purani baat aur saath hi woh RAAZ jo unhone apni beti tak ko nahi bataya tha taaki usse kharab naa lage,maine unke saamne disclose kiya tha...

par saath hi jis condition me mai ye baat kar raha tha,woh bhi sandeh se bhara hua tha aur isiliye...


MARIA-tumhe kaise pata ye baat..??aur us baat ka tumhare rone se kya connection hai beta...???


MARIA mujhse sawal kar rahi thi par us sawal se meri ye ummid ki jo bhi maine dekha,woh jhut ho sakta hai, VIDEOUS ka failaya maayajaal ho sakta hai,toot chuka tha..

ek baar phirse aansuon ki tez pravah nikal padi mere aankhon se jisse dekh FLORIN aur MARIA, dono ka hi dil baithne laga tha par woh ab chup hi the...

wahin kuch der baad khud ko normal kar...


MAI-jo mara hua baccha aapko hua tha,woh bacha aapka nahi tha..woh bas ek cloned child tha jisse aapke garbh me aapke asli bache ki jagah implant kar diya gaya tha..


DHHOOOOMMMMM.....

ek dhamaka sa hua tha MARIA aur FLORIN ke dimag me meri baaton ko sunkar..

pehle toh meri baat ko sun unhe mujhpar behadh ghussa aaya par phir mere aansuon se bheege chehre aur mere ATTITUDE ko joki mazak karne ka tha hi nahi,uska dhyan karte hue un dono ka hi ghussa shaant ho chuka tha..

ghussa bhale hi shaant ho gaya tha un dono ka,par meri baat sun man zaroor puri tarah vyathit ho chuka tha..

kis aur mahoul me,normal world me toh un dono ne meri kahi baat ko fake maan hawa me uda diya hota par ALFREEN ke saath jo hua tha,aur jis duniya me woh the,usse dhyan me rakh woh jaante the ki yahan kuch bhi possible hai...

bechain toh bohot ho gaye the dono par kisi tarah khudko normal rakh..


FLORIN-ye sab kya bol rahe ho RAAZ...???hamare bache ke badle ek cloned bache ko MARIA ke garbh me implant kar diya gaya tha...

par kyun...??aur phir hamare bacche ka kya hua...??


FLORIN ki baat sun maine kuch kaha nahi bas apne dono haathon ko aage kar un dono ke sir par rakh diya aur mere aisa karte hi un dono ke sir par ek roshni chamki jisse unki aankhein band hoti chali gayi..

band aankhon ke beech unhe woh sab kuch dikhne laga jo kuch der pehle maine bhi dekha tha..

saath hi mai kaun hun,mere janm ka uddeshya kya hai,ye bhi un dono ko pata lag chuka tha...

par mai yahin par nahi ruka... UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS books me VIDEOUS ne jo chhal kiya tha, jiski wajah se meri aankhen aur dil,dono hi bhare hue the,woh drishya bhi maine un dono ko dikha diya...

jab woh drishya,woh sach woh dono aankhen band kiye dekh rahe the,tab meri nazar un dono ke face par thi...

par tabhi,vedna se bhare mere chehre par achanak se hi ek pal ke liye hairani ke bhaav dikhne lage...

reason....

VIDEOUS ki sharth ke baare me jaankar jahan un dono ke face par dar dikhna chahiye tha,ye jaankar ki unke apne bete ke haathon marna unki niyati hai,unhe dard hona chahiye tha,aisa kuch bhi nahi hua tha...

balki isse ulat un dono ke face par ek smile naach uthi thi...

aur yunhi smile karte hue kuch der baad jab unhone mujhe dekha toh maine un dono ke hi aankhon me apne liye beintahan mohobbat dikhi...

MARIA ne toh turant wapas mere chehre ko apne haathon ke beech liya aur mere pure chehre ko chumne lagi...

wahin FLORIN ke aankhon me mere prati ek garv tha aur ussi garv ke saath woh mujhe dekh rahe the..

kuch der mere chehre ko chum jab MARIA mujhse alag hui toh...


MARIA-tu mera baccha hai...mera apna baccha..itne saalon se mere hi saamne bada hua tu aur mai tujhe pehchaan bhi naa saki...

RAAZ...mera RAAZ...

FLORIN-hamara....


FLORIN ki baat sun aansu se bhare MARIA ki aankhen chalki aur woh muskura uthi...

wahin apni baat bol FLORIN ne apna ek haath mere sir par rakha yaa phir ye kahun ki firaya aur...


FLORIN-kyun hai tere aankhon me aansu mere bacche.. isiliye kyunki tujhe hum dono ko,apne maata pitah ko maarna padega...

tu hame maarega nahi RAAZ..tere haathon hume moksh milega...hum azaad ho jaayenge..

MARIA-aur hamare jaane ke baad ye ek pal ke liye bhi nahi sochna ki tune hume maara hai aur tu layak beta nahi hai...

jis SHRAAP ko,SHAITAN ko mitane ke liye khud PARMESHWAR PUTRON ne apni URJA ko banaya hai,woh URJA meri kokh se nikla hamara ANSH hai..

isse badi baat humare liye kuch ho hi nahi sakti thi beta...tune toh hamara ye manushya jeevan saarthak bana diya hai...

is CHOSENS ko,yahan rehne waale jaaduyi aur khaas logon ko dekhkar hamesha mai sochti thi ki hum pati patni in khaas logon ke beech me kitne aam hai...

par aaj pata chala ki ye saare khaas mil bhi jaaye naa,toh bhi hamare saamne aam hai..

aur aisa sirf teri wajah se hua hai...jo hua woh niyati thi,jo ho raha hai,woh bhi niyati hai,aur jo aage hoga,woh bhi niyati hi hogi..

FLORIN-mere bachhe, niyati se toh GOD bhi nahi bhaag sakte,hum bhala kya cheez hain...!!!!

isiliye jo hona hi hai, uske viprit sochna samajhdaari nahi...

aur mere bete se zyada toh koi samajhdaar hai hi nahi...


mere sir par phirse apna haath ferte hue kahi ye baat FLORIN ne...

wahin un dono ki baatein sunkar mere aansu behne toh band ho chuke the,par ab bhi meri aankhen bhari hui hi thi,bas unhone aansuon ko chhalakne ki ijazat dena band kar diya tha...

mai ek tak un dono ko dekh raha tha jispar bade pyar se mujhe dekhte hue...


MARIA-jo waada kiya hai,usse nibhao RAAZ...par usse pehle hamari ek KHWAHISH hai..

puri karoge..!!!!


MARIA ki baat par maina kaha toh kuch nahi bas haan me apna sir hila diya jispar...


MARIA/FLORIN-hum chaahte hain ki jab tum apna waada nibhao,hume is duniya se vida karo,toh aisa karne se thik pehle hume mom,dad kehkar bulao...

bas itna kar de,marte waqt hume zara sa bhi dard nahi hoga...

MAI-dard toh mai waise bhi hone bhi nahi dunga...par kya ALFREEN se nahi milna chahte aap dono....???

FLORIN-chahte toh hain..par woh naasamajh hai,jasbaat me sahi galat me fark karna nahi aata usse...

isiliye jaane de...kuch jhatkon ka ehsaas unke lagne ke thodi der baad pata chale toh hi thik hota hai...

tu apna kaam shuru kar...par haan, pehle hume woh kehkar bula jo hum tere lagte hain...


FLORIN ki baat sun maine apne dono haathon ko ek baar phirse un dono ke sir ki taraf badhaya...

par aisa karte waqt mere dono haath buri tarah kaamp rahe the...

wahin meri haalat se bilkul ulat FLORIN aur MARIA bilkul shaant aur khush dikh rahe the...

apna haath un dono ke sir par rakh maine ek baar un dono ke face ko dekha aur phir nikle mere mooh se woh do shabd jo FLORIN aur MARIA sunana chahte the...


MAI-MOM,DAD.....i am sorry....

MARIA/FLORIN-dont be son....we are proud of you...

MAI- V.....E....L.....A..........H........

PAINLESS DEATH....


ladkhadati awaaz me apni aankhen band kar is SPELL ko bola tha maine....

ye ek khaas kism ka DEATH SPELL tha...iski khubi ye thi ki is SPELL se jo marta tha,uska sharir turant jal kar raakh ho jaata tha,par is process ke dauran usse bilkul bhi dard nahi hota tha par iska ulat jo is SPELL ko uccharit karta tha,uske haath bhi is SPELL ke asar se jal jaate the,aur saath hi saath jo jalan marne waale ko honi chahiye,woh jalan jalaane waale ko apne haathon me feel hoti thi....

aur abhi bhi wahi hua...mere SPELL bolte hi mere mom dad ke sir se lekar pair tak unka pura sharir jalne laga aur unke saath unke sir par rakha mera haath bhi jalne laga..

par jahan ek taraf pure sir se lekar pair tak aag lagne ke baawjud mere mom dad ko halka sa bhi pain nahi hua,wahin mera haath buri tarah jalne laga aur mujhe asahaniya pain feel hone laga jisse apne mom dad ke muskurate hue face ko dekhte hue mai zabt kar hi raha tha ki tabhi...


NAHI...................

ek zordaar cheekh padi mere kaano me jo front door se aayi thi jahan is waqt MAHI aur ALFREEN khade the..

ye cheekh ALFREEN ke mooh se nikli thi jo cheekhte hue apne mom dad ko jalte dekh pehle toh jadh si ho gayi par phir jo hua,us chiz ko jaise hi uske dimag ne thik se read kiya toh usse laga ek tagda jhatka jiski wajah se woh behosh hokar niche gir padi thi...

wahin uske baaju me khadi MAHI bhi ekdum jadh si hokar reh gayi thi...

GRIFFIN ke kehne par woh lagatar mujhe sense kar rahi thi..aur aisa karte waqt jab usne mujhe ALFREEN ke ghar par sense liya toh uska man hua ki woh yahan aakar mujhe saamne se dekhe..

aur tabhi ALFREEN mujhe dhundte hue wahan garden me uske saamne aa gayi..

aur jab usne mere baare me pucha toh MAHI ne usse bataya ki mai ussike ghar par hun aur phir ussike saath yahan aa gayi..

par usse kahan maalum tha ki yahan aate hi usse kuch aisa dekhne ko milega...

ALFREEN neeche behosh padi thi par MAHI waise hi sthir hokar statue ki tarah khadi hui thi...

uska toh sab kuch blank ho gaya tha....aur shayad aage bhi woh ussi condition me bani rehti ki tabhi....



AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.................



apne aawaz ki aakhri hadh ke saath cheekh pada tha mai jisse sun MAHI ki bhi jaise tandra si tooti thi...

bhari hui aankhon ke saath usne dekha ki mai saamne sofe par pade raakh joki mere mom dad ke the,usse apne dono haathon se pakadte hue apne chehre aur pure sharir par mal raha hun....

do jeete jaaagte insaano ko jalakar raakh maine hi banaya tha,aur ab ek dard se bhari cheekh ke baad un jale hue do logon ki raakh ko khudke upar mal apni taklif bayan kar raha tha mai,ye sab dekh MAHI ki sochne samajhne ki shakti jaise khatm hi ho gayi thi ki tabhi....



ISHQ PE MAREN,YAA ISHQ ME MAREN....

AGAR ISHQ SAATH HAI,TOH BHALA HUM KYUN DAREN....


GRIFFIN aur MAHI ki institution ke garden me hui mulakat ke waqt jab RAAZ ke liye MAHI ne ye baat kahi aur jaane ko hui toh GRIFFIN ne bhi usse kul teen baatein kahi thi jinme se jo pehli baat usne kahi thi,wahi baat is waqt MAHI ke dimag me achanak se gunj uthi..


GRIFFIN-tumhare prem ki pariksha hai aaj MAHI..RAAZ ke liye tumhare man me jitna bhi prem hai,prem ke un saare kano ko nichodte hue apne ragon ke har dhamniyon me aaj lagatar bahate rehna hai tumhe...




chaahe lag rahe uspar kitne hi TOHMAT HO,aaj RAAZ KA SAATH MAT CHHODNA...

uske khaatir agar tumhari bhi ZALAALAT HO,aaj RAAZ KA SAATH MAT CHHODNA...

ilzam lagenge uspar.....

aur agar woh wakayi GALAT HO,tab bhi,...aaj RAAZ KA SAATH MAT CHHODNA.....
















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......
















AAPKA APNA V...J....
Bahot bad dhamaka tha VIDEOUS tow bahot bada game khel gaya
Dekhte aage kia sach m FLORIN AUR MARIA mar gaye ya kuch
Intizar rehega aapke agle update ka bhai
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Rudrathakur

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speechless...bahut hi jyada maarmik part tha ye....sach me kya kahun kya nhi smjh hi nhi aa rha h...ek baccha jo apne astitva se anjaan tha jab usko uska bhaan hua to uski puri duniya hi badal gyi ek dum se usme ek umang bhr gyi usne emotions ka sailab aagya aur agle hi pal usse wo khussiyaan wo pal chheen bhi liye gye shadyantrakari videous ke dwara wo bhi usi ke hatho isse bda dukh drd ya ahsahniya kya hoga ki ek baccha apne hi mata pita ki hatya krne ko majbur ho jaaye ho khussiyaan usse hmesha se dur thi wo ab uske liye ek chubhan bn jaayegi...iske natiza to yhi ho skta h ki wo iss dukh me agr pagal ho jaaye to sb kuchh tabah kr dega aur agr kuchh krne ki isthati me na ho to khud ko hi tabah kr lega sb se virakt bhi ho skta h ...khair dekhte h kya hona h aage ...kyuki ek taraf alfreen ka bhay bhi satya ho chuka h jo vision usne sapne me dekhe the apne wo sach me ghatit ho chuke h dusra jb use malum pdega ki raaz uska hi bhai h tb wo kaise react kregi kya wo usse bdla legi ya uss niyati ko koshegi jiski bhet uske maa baap chadhe jiske karan usko apne bhai se itne varsho tk alg rhna pda wahi mahi aane wali ghatnao se kaise raaz ko bcha paayegi kya wo apni jgha adig rhegi kya wo raaz ka ant tk sudhradhta se sath de payegi jb hr koi apna uske khilaf hoga aur mahi ke uske sath hone pr usko bhi jalalat shni hogi kya wo seh payegi..dekhte h aane wale palo me aur kya kya hone wala h aur kaise hone wala h....itna to pkka h hmari batti gul hogi hi hogi...
so waiting brother...ye adhyaay smapti pr h next adhyaay kya rang lata h aur ye adhhyaay kya jakhm dekr jata h un sbhi ka intzaar rhega hmko...
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vj4u

"Be The Wrong That Makes Everything Right"....
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speechless...bahut hi jyada maarmik part tha ye....sach me kya kahun kya nhi smjh hi nhi aa rha h...ek baccha jo apne astitva se anjaan tha jab usko uska bhaan hua to uski puri duniya hi badal gyi ek dum se usme ek umang bhr gyi usne emotions ka sailab aagya aur agle hi pal usse wo khussiyaan wo pal chheen bhi liye gye shadyantrakari videous ke dwara wo bhi usi ke hatho isse bda dukh drd ya ahsahniya kya hoga ki ek baccha apne hi mata pita ki hatya krne ko majbur ho jaaye ho khussiyaan usse hmesha se dur thi wo ab uske liye ek chubhan bn jaayegi...iske natiza to yhi ho skta h ki wo iss dukh me agr pagal ho jaaye to sb kuchh tabah kr dega aur agr kuchh krne ki isthati me na ho to khud ko hi tabah kr lega sb se virakt bhi ho skta h ...khair dekhte h kya hona h aage ...kyuki ek taraf alfreen ka bhay bhi satya ho chuka h jo vision usne sapne me dekhe the apne wo sach me ghatit ho chuke h dusra jb use malum pdega ki raaz uska hi bhai h tb wo kaise react kregi kya wo usse bdla legi ya uss niyati ko koshegi jiski bhet uske maa baap chadhe jiske karan usko apne bhai se itne varsho tk alg rhna pda wahi mahi aane wali ghatnao se kaise raaz ko bcha paayegi kya wo apni jgha adig rhegi kya wo raaz ka ant tk sudhradhta se sath de payegi jb hr koi apna uske khilaf hoga aur mahi ke uske sath hone pr usko bhi jalalat shni hogi kya wo seh payegi..dekhte h aane wale palo me aur kya kya hone wala h aur kaise hone wala h....itna to pkka h hmari batti gul hogi hi hogi...
so waiting brother...ye adhyaay smapti pr h next adhyaay kya rang lata h aur ye adhhyaay kya jakhm dekr jata h un sbhi ka intzaar rhega hmko...
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bohot umda review diya hai aapne brother..jaan kar acha laga ki aap update ke har pehlu ko sirf padh hi nahi rahe,balki feel bhi kar rahe ho..

ek writer ke taur par ye meri lekhni ko milne waala sabse bada prize hai..

so thanks aur yunhi saath bane rahiye..
 
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