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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF WEAKLINGS CLASS ME GHUS MABBA HIDA AUR BRAWNY KO HUMILIATE KARTI HAI,WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ HIDA KO USKI HIDDEN POWER KI SHAMATA DIKHATA HAI...


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-75



PLANET- ELYSIAN


PLACE- WEAKLING'S STAY








PLEASE BETA..KAB TAK ROTA RAHEGA...?? NAHI DEKH SAKTI MAI TUJHE AISA...

KUCH TOH BATA KI HUA KYA HAI...???KUCH KAHA KYA TUJHE KISINE AAJ INSTITUTION ME...

KYA US RAAZ NE FIR PARESHAN KIYA TUJHE....KUCH TOH BATA MERE BACCHE....


BRAWNY ko apne seene se lagakar khud bhi ussiki tarah roti hui kahi ye saari baat uski maa NAOMI ne...

raat ka waqt hai....aaj INSTITUTION me MABBA ne jo kiya uske baad BRAWNY jo RAAZ ke diye maansik zakhm se dheere dheere ubhar raha tha,uska wo zakhm aaj phir hara ho gaya tha...

INSTITUTION se apne ghar tak ka lamba safar bhi usne bas aansu bahate aur sunya ko ghur chalte hue hi pura kar liya tha....

wo raaste bhar cheekhna chahta tha,chilla chilla kar apne dard ke kaale rango se mahoul ko rang dena chahata tha,par kisi tarah usne apne awaaz ko khudme simtaye rakha....

par apne quater pahunchte hi jaise uske kaano me uski maa ki awaaz padi,toh uske saare emotions ek jhatke me baahar nikal aaye..

wo foot foot kar rone laga jisse dekh uski maa aur uske pitah ghabra gaye...

par naa toh BRAWNY ne koi jawab diya aur naahi uska rona band hua..

aur tab se ab tak yahi haal hai....

khair,apne bete ko seene se laga khud bhi bhari hui aankhon se NAOMI ne SHALTON ki taraf dekha jo ek kinare par khade bas chupchaap apne bete ki haalat ko dekh aansu baha rahe the....

par apni biwi ki khaamosh zubaan aur minnat bhari nazaron ko dekh aur samajh wo apne bete ki taraf aage badhe aur uske sir par apna haath firate hue...


SHALTON-shaant hojaa mere bacche....aur jo bhi baat hai,usse bol de...

jitni der tak apne andar rakhega,taklif utni badhegi....

NAOMI-haan beta...bata kya hua hai..??kya kisine kuch kaha hai INSTITUTION me...


HAA BETA,BATA.... MUMMY PAPA KO BATA...TERE BATATE HI TERE MUMMY PAPA TURANT JAAYENGE AUR TUJHE SATENE WALON KI HAALAT KHARAB KAR DENGE....


ek khilli se bhari awaaz padi BRAWNY aur uske parents ke kaano me jiske baad jab un teeno ki nazar apne quater ke wooden halt par gayi toh...


NAOMI-tummmm.!!!yahan kya karne aaye ho...nikal jaao mere ghar se....

ghusse se bhar saamne ki taraf dekh kahi ye baat NAOMI ne jahan khada tha MAI.....

HIDA ke jaate hi mai turant yahan WEAKLINGS stay ki taraf nikal gaya tha....

reason....

aaj class se nikalte waqt maine BRAWNY ko joki apni class se nikal hi raha tha,dekh liya tha...

uski aankhen nam thi aur chehre par frustration...

WOOGER ke zariye mujhe BRAWNY ke saath aaj jo hua, uske baare me aur saath hi uske baad uske antarman ke bhaav,dono ke baare me hi pata chal gaya tha aur yahi wajah thi ki mai yahan tha...

khair, NAOMI ki baat sun....


MAI-mera ghar..!!ye ghar hai..isse behtar haalat toh bathrooms ke hote hain...


mujhe naa jaata dekh aur meri baat sun NAOMI uthne ko hui par tabhi SHALTON ne uska haath pakad liya..

SHALTON jaante the ki mai NAOMI ke aurat hone ka lihaz nahi karunga
isiliye unhone aisa kiya tha...

par in sabke beech wo BRAWNY ko bhul gaye jisne jaise hi mujhe dekha aur fir uski mom se meri kahi batein suni toh uska control khudse chhut gaya aur turant khade ho meri taraf bhaaga...

wahin apne bete ke reaction se shock ho gaye uske parents par isse pehle ki wo kuch kar paate, BRAWNY mere paas aa chuka tha..

par ladhna toh usse aata tha nahi...

yahi wajah thi ki mere paas pahunch mujhe maarne ke liye bas tezi se haath pair hilane laga wo par isse pehle ki wo mujhe chhuta,maine turant man hi man kuch kaha aur turant ek side hata aur uske piche aate hue uske gardan par apne haath fasa diye..

ab bhale hi mai normal tha,par itna strong toh tha hi ki BRAWNY ko araam se lapet lun...

khair,mere aisa karte hi BRAWNY meri giraft se chhutne ke liye chhatpatane laga par wo kaamiyab ho nahi paaya...

wahin jaise hi BRAWNY mere haathon ke giraft me aaya,uske mom dad ki haalat kharab ho gayi..

SHALTON ke saath maine kya kiya tha, SHALTON ne wo jhela tha aur NAOMI ne usse dekha aur mehsoos kiya tha..

unhe laga ki mai unke bete ki gardan tod dunga...

aur isiliye....


NAOMI-please mere bacche ko kuch mat karna...

MAI-arre waah..badi jaldi sur badal gaye....

aur tu,saale naphunsak,badi himmat aa gayi tujhme...badi garmi hai naa tujhme..

chal check karte hain....


BRAWNY ko dhakka dete hue mai uske mom dad ke paas le gaya aur....


MAI-tod dun tere bete ki gardan..


NAOMI ki aankhon me dekh maine ye baat kahi jisse wi andar tak sihar gayi aur..


NAOMI-nahi please..jo kahoge,karungi.bas dont harm my son...

MAI-..strip yourself.....

NAOMI/SHALTON-WHAT...!!!!!

MAI-i said,strip yourself....aur bina noutanki kiye agle dus second me ye karna hai tumhe or else your son is dead....


jahan meri baat sun NAOMI aur SHALTON ek sadme waali haalat me chale gaye the wahin BRAWNY ghusse se bhar aur tezi se chattpatane laga tha...

par time limit jo maine di thi,uska khayal kar NAOMI ne naa sirf khudko sambhala,balki agle hi second usne jo MAXI jaisi dress khudpar daali hui thi,usne usse khud se alag kar diya aur ab wo sirf undergarments me thi...

wahin NAOMI ke strip karte hi...


MAI-dekh BRAWNY...ek bete ke liye kya isse zyada sharm ki baat ho sakti hai...!!!

ek anjaan bande ne tere saamne teri maa ke kapde aur izzat dono hi utar di aur tu kuch bhi kar nahi paa raha...

kya jeene ka haq bhi hai tujhe....


ye aakhri line bolte bolte hi maine BRAWNY ko zor se push kiya jiske baad wo lehrata hua neeche gir gaya...

BRAWNY maansik tanaav bardasht naa kar paane ki wajah se behosh ho gaya tha jisse dekh NAOMI jo bas sharm se sir jhukaye khadi thi,wo turant apne bacche ki taraf badhi aur uske saath uske SHALTON bhi..

wahin BRAWNY ko chhodne ke agle hi second mai muda aur tezi se quater ke baahar nikla aur fir bhaagte kuch door aage badh...

DHAMMMMM.....AHHHHHHH....

neeche zamin par ghutno ke bal girte hue ek karah nikal gayi mere mooh se....

reason....

mere right haath aag me tapne se jaise hota hai,waise hi pure laal ho gaya tha...

aur iska reason....

BRAWNY.......

aapko yaad hoga ki jab wo meri taraf badha tha tab maine kuch kaha tha..

darasal maine WOOGER kaha tha jiske baad WOOGER ki shakti se bani ek parat mere us haath ke jisne BRAWNY ko pakad rakha tha,uspar chadh gayi..

aur BRAWNY ko maine nahi, ussi parat ne,us shakti ne lapeta hua tha...

aur itna sab sirf isiliye hua kyunki BRAWNY ka frustration us waqt 25 percent par tha aur aisa hote hi uske sharir se uski energy ke kan nikalne lage jisse filhal mai jis condition me hun,jhel nahi sakta tha aur yahi wajah thi WOOGER se help lene ki...

par har beethete second ke saath BRAWNY ki frustration badhne lagi aur aisa hone par uski energy WOOGER ki parat se hote hue meri skin ko touch karne lagi jisse meri skin garam hone lagi thi..

aur jab NAOMI ne strip kiya tab BRAWNY ki frustration 75 percent par pahunch chuki thi aur kuch ki seconds me wo frustration apni limit todne waali thi par agar aisa ho jaata, toh uske asar se ye puri jagah blast ho jaati...

aur yahi reason tha ki WOOGER ki shakti ne BRAWNY ke senses kheench liye aur BRAWNY behosh ho gaya...

par meri lag gayi thi...haath bhale jale nahi the,par jalan hadh se zyada ho rahi thi...

par is jalan se zyada taklif mujhe apne andar mehsoos ho rahi thi jisse mujhe bhi frustration feel hone lagi thi aur isiliye kaadha peekar mai turant apne bike par baitha aur nikal pada ek direction ki taraf...





PLACE-ASTER





TEJASV OLOKA

AURA SCAN




ASTER ke ussi artificial field me paalthi maar kar baith apne chith ko shunya ki gehrayiyon me daalne ke baad is SPELL ko uccharit kiya tha FALLON ne...

waise ye pehli baar nahi tha jab FALLON ne is SPELL ko uccharit kiya tha...

ek hafte pehle MASTER ki di gayi chunouti ka aaklan kar FALLON is natije par pahunchi ki agar usse ASTER me rehne waale har vyakti ko ek saath hawa me ucchalna hai toh uska ek hi tarika hai..

aur wo hai dhyan me baith sabse pehle is jagah ke har vyakti ke sharir se nikalne vaale AURA ko complete scan kar us power ko khudse jodne ka kyunki bina saare logon ko feel kiye usse diya gaya kaam ho hi nahi sakta tha...

aur isiliye pichle 1 hafte se apne kareeb 12 ghante FALLON ne is kaam ko diye the jisme wo lagbhag aadha percent hi kaamiyab ho paayi thi....

aur wo isiliye kyunki human AURA ko scan kar uske power ko khudse ek chain ki tarah jodna hadh se zyada kathin tha...

kyunki ye kaam apne man ki shakti se ho raha tha bina un logon ke anumati liye jinhe use me laana tha aur aise me jab bhi FALLON AURA scan karne ki koshish karti thi,toh us scan ke jawab me ek reverse force bhi un sabhi logon ke body se release ho raha tha jiski wajah se FALLON ka sampark un AURAS se baar baar toot jaa raha tha..

itne dino se continously ki kayi 12 ghante ki koshish ke baad FALLON ke body ki puri shakti khtam ho gayi thi...

aur aaj bhi same process ko repeat karte hue FALLON ko kuch 4 ghante ho chuke the par result kuch bhi nahi nikla tha...

abhi bhi SPELL ko uccharit karne ke kuch hi minutes baad FALLON ka sampark AURA se toot gaya aur aisa hote hi uski aankhen khul gayi...


FALLON-dammit....ye kaisa task diya hai yaar MASTER ne.....how is this even possible....???

itne dino se se try kar rahi hun par har baar kuch logon se khudko jodte hi ek jhatke se saara connection khatm ho jaata hai...

but mai connection tak jod hi nahi paa rahi hun toh fir sabko hawa me kya khaakh utha paaungi...


AGAR YUNHI FRUSTRATE RAHI TOH KISI AUR KO TOH KYA,TUM KHUDKO BHI HAWA ME UTHANE KI KALA BHOOL JAAOGI....


saamne se aa rahe MASTER ne ye baat kahi thi jisse sun ab bhi dhyan mudra ki position me baithi FALLON khadi ho gayi aur...


FALLON-frustration toh hogi hi naa ek hafte se har din pure 12 ghante practice ki hai maine aur aaj bhi 4 ghante se upar ho chuke hain mujhe ek hi kriya ko baar baar dohrate hue..

par bas kuch logon ke AURA se khudko jodne ke alawa aur kuch success nahi mila hai mujhe..

aur wo connection bhi kuch time baad toot jaata hai...

aise me without touch ek strong push ke saath mai 2 logon ko 2 feet tak bhi shayad uchhal paaungi toh fir aise me ye task complete ho toh bhi kaise...???

MASTER-ab isme toh mai tumhari koi madad nahi kar sakta..you are completely on your own...

par haan,ek choti si kahani hai,sun lo aur sunkar ganit lagao...shayad pata chal jaaye ki kya aur kaise karna chahiye...


MASTER ko baat lar aankhon me sawal liye bas chup chaap unhe dekhti rahi FALLON jispar MASTER ne apni baat yaa fir ye kahun ki kahani shuru ki....


MASTER-ek baar ki baat hai..ek kisaan apne raajya ke maharaj ki darbaar me apni ek shikayat lekar pahuncha...

maharaj ke sammukh ho usne unse kaha,ki maharaj,mujhe aapse ek shikayat hai....

aur wo shikayat ye hai ki ek taraf mai hun jisne din bhar kheton ke apna khoon pasina bahaya hai aur itne kathin parishram ke baad bhi mai bas itna hi kama pata hun ki ledekar mera aur mere pariwar ka guzara bas ho paata hai...

wahin dusri taraf maine dekha hai ki aapke mehel me ek vyakti baiththa hai jo mehel ki shaano shaukat ka lutf uthate hue bas ek jagah baith kar bahi khaate me kuch kuch likhta rehta hai..(ACCOUNTANT,MUNIM)

kabhi kabhar hi wo mehel se bahar nikalta hai aur usme bhi wo koi mehnat waala,pasina nikalne waala kaam nahi karta..

wo bas raajya ke alag alag bhandaron me,udyogon me ghumta hai,baat karta hai, apni bahi me kuch likhta hai aur wapas mehel aa jata hai..

par itne hi kaam ke liye usse dher saara dhan milta hai,rehne ke liye ek behtarin awaas aur saari sukh suvidhayen...

kya ye nainsaafi nahi hai....??


us kisan ki baat sun maharaj halke muskuraye aur...


MAHARAJ-baat toh tumne thik kahi...mehnat tum zyada karte ho, aur fal hamare MUNIM ko zyada milta hai..

thik hai,hum tumhari aamdani,tumhara rehen sehen hamare yahan ke munim se behtar kar denge...


apne maharaj ki baat sun kisaan khush ho gaya..wo unki jayjaykar karne hi wala tha ki tabhi..


MAHARAJ-par usse pehle,kya tum hamara ek kaam karoge....???

KISAAN-agya den maharaj.. zaroor karunga...

MAHARAJ-bohot achhe..kuch der pashchat humare raajya ki seema par ek dusre raajya ki bail gaadi pravesh karegi..

tum us bail gaadi ke chalak se puch kar aao ki wo kahan se aa raha hai...???

apne maharaj ki baat sun kisan turant bhaaga aur fir kuch hi der baad lout kar aaya aur...


KISAN-maine pata laga liya hai maharaj...wo bailgadi sohanpur se aayi hai...

MAHARAJ-acha..aur wo jaa kahan rahi hai...???

KISAN-par maharaj...aapne mujhse ye puchne ke liye toh kaha nahi hi nai tha..

MAHARAJ-koi baat nahi..ek fir se jaao aur pata kar ke aao...

KISAN turant wapas bhaaga aur fir kuch der baad louta aur..

KISAN-maharaj wo bailgadi vilaykaas jaa rahi hai....

MAHARAJ-bohot ache...acha ye batao ki kya wo bail gaadi khaali thi....???

KISAN-nahi maharaj..usme bohot se bore lade hue the...

MAHARAJ-kya tha un boron me...???

KISAN-ye mujhe gyat nahi..aapne bola hi nahi tha uske baare me puchne ke liye...

MAHARAJ-koi baat nahi..ab bol dete hain..jaao aur pata lagakar aao ki kya samaan hai un boron me...


apne maharaj ki baat sun ek baar fir bhaaga kisan aur kuch der baad jab wo louta toh uski saanse halki chaddhi hui thi...

kuch shan apne saanson ko durust kar....


KISAN-maharaj un boron me gehun aur baajre hain...

MAHARAJ-acha..waise kitni maatra me hain wo gehun aur baajre...


maharaj ke sawal par kisaan ka mooh utar gaya kyunki usse toh ye pata karne ke liye maharaj ne kaha hi nahi tha...

par usse pata tha ki ab maharaj usse pata karne ke liye kahenge hi isiliye...


KISAN-mai pata karke aata hun maharaj..


ye bol wo ek baar firse bhaaga aur fir jab kuch der baad wo louta toh is baar uski saanse kuch zyada hi chadhi hui thi aur wo isiliye kyunki wo bailgadi jiske liye wo gaya tha,wo raajya ke aakhri chhor tak pahunch chuka tha aur isiliye uska ye round usse kaafi lamba pada tha....

wo yunhi haafte haafte bola ki...


KISAN-maharaj..us bail gaadi me 1000 kilo gehun aur 800 kilo baajre the...


kisan ki baat par maharaj kuch bolte ki tabhi...


MAHARAJ KI JAY HO....


ye bolte hue unka MUNIM chalte hue unke saamne aakar khada ho gaya...


MAHARAJ-aao munim..waise hum tumhe bulane hi waale the..kuch der pehle hamare raajya me ek dusre raajya ke bailgaadi ne pravesh kiya tha...

hume uski jaankari chahiye..


MUNIM-mai ussi silsile me aapke sammukh upastith hua hun..maine us bailgaaadi ke baare me sab pata laga liya hai maharaj..

wo bailgaaadi sohanpur se aayi thi aur vilaykaas jaa rahi hai..us bailgaadi me 1000 kilo gehun aur 800 kilo baajre ki boriyan ladi hui hain...

aur bailgaadi ke chalak ne hamare raajya me pravesh karte hi upyukt kar chuka diya hai..

MAHARAJ-bohot ache..jaa sakte hain aap...


jahan maharaj ki baat sun munim toh chala gaya par uske saare jawabon ko sun kisan ka sir sharm se jhuk gaya tha jispar...


MAHARAJ-humara udeshya tumhe sharmsaar karna nahi tha...hum toh bas tumhe kuch samjhana chahte the...

ummid hai ki tum samajh gaye hoge..

KISAN-jee maharaj...mai ache se samajh gaya hun..buddhi ke aage bal hamesha chota hi hota hai...

jitna kaam mai apni taakat ke dum par nahi kar paata,usse zyada wo munim apne dimag ke dum par baithe baithe kar leta hai..

aur isiliye uska ohda bada aur aamdani zyada hai...

kahani khatm ho chuki thi aur saath hi FALLON ko lesson bhi mil chuka tha...


FALLON samajh gayi thi ki wo bas kisi tarah apni taakat ka istemal kar forcefully sabse khudko jodne ki koshish kar rahi hai aur ye kaam bina kis neeti ke ho raha tha aur aise me wo kaamiyab nahi ho sakti...


wahin MASTER bhi FALLON ke chehre ko dekh samajh gaye the ki the lesson has been learnt aur isiliye...


MASTER-talwar sui se badi bhi hoti hai aur taakatwar bhi par jahan zaroorat sui ki ho,wahan talwar ka koi kaam nahi...

tumhe bas wo SUI dhundni hai..wo maarg,wo tarika jisse tumhara task apne anjaam tak pahunch sake..


ye bol MASTER mude aur wapas chal diye par fir thoda aage jaakar ruke,palte aur...


MASTER-kisi bhi experiment se pehle research hoti hai... tumhe wahi wahi karna chahiye..

pehle sawal ko samjho,uska vishlehsan karo, dhundo, aur fir jab saari kadiyan jud jaayen,tab apna abhyas shuru karo....

aur haan, vishleshan waale bhaag ke samay apni nazaron ko tez rakhna mat bhulna...kaam aur asaan ho jaayega...







PLACE- SHEELA'S ABODE






ARRE KYA BAAT HAI....KAHANI KE MUKHYA KIRDAAR KE CHARAN AAJ HAMARE GHAR PAR PADH GAYE....HUM TOH DHANYA HO GAYE....


SHAILA ka ABODE hi hai wo thikana jahan mai BRAWNY ke ghar se sidhe pahuncha tha..

ABODE mere kadam rakhte hi SHAILA jo saamne hall me hi AKSHAANT ke saath baithi hui thi,usne ye baat kahi thi....

wahin uski baat khtam hote hi..


AKSHAANT-aao RAAZ baitho....


AKSHAANT ki baat sun mai uske aur SHAILA ke saamne couch par baith gaya jiske baad....


SHAILA-haath dikhao...


SHAILA ki baat par maine apne haath aage kiya jispar garmahat ki wajah se aayi laali ab bhi thodi bachi thi jisse dekh.....


SHAILA-hmm..sahi waqt par haath hata liya tumne warna hatane ke liye haath bachta hi nahi....


SHAILA ki baat sun maine usse ghura jispar...


SHAILA-what..!!!ye toh nahi soch rahe ho ki mujhe tumhare condition ke baare me kaise pata chala...???

common man, maana ki ye kahani tumhari hai par jis jagah par tum bathe ho,ye hamari shakti se bani hai..

ye pura PLANET bana hai....

hastakshep nahi kar sakte hum is kahani me toh kya hua...????dekh toh sakte hi hain..

aur sach bataun,mujhe toh bada maza aa raha hai is kahani ko dekhne me....


MAI-sahi kaha hai kisine...

some habbits never die...

manushya yoni chhodkar ANGEL ban gayi tum par insaano jaisi faaltu baatein aur show off karna nahi chhoda tumne...

tumhe kaise pata chala,ye nahi soch raha tha mai...mai bas ye soch raha tha ki tum us mudde par,jiske liye mai yahan aaya hun,kab aaogi..???

AKSHAANT-toh tum hi aa jaao mudde par....batao,kyun aaye ho..???

MAI-tum dono ko hi pata hai ki mai kyun aaya hun...ye human emotion merge nahi ho paa rahe hain meri soul se..

bohot taklif hoti hai mujhe... BRAWNY ke ghar par bhi ho raha tha mujhe ye pain...aur woh bhi unbearable...

aur ye tumhara diya temporary ilaaj nahi pasand mujhe....

mai weak hun,ehaas dilata hai ye mujhe...

is pain ke saath apne first REFINER ke average power tak toh pahunch gaya mai,par complete power tak nahi pahunch paaunga...

wahan pahunchne se pehle hi body fath jaayegi meri...

summary....tell me the permanent way...

AKSHAANT-bata toh sakte hain par uska kuch faayda hoga nahi...

kyunki wo ilaaj sirf batane se toh ho jaayega nahi...

us ilaj tak pahunchne ke liye tumhari body ko aur strong hona padega..

utna jitna SHAILA ne bataya hai...4 percent AMPLIFICATION aur complete power of first REFINER...

itna hone ke baad hi tumhara ilaaj possible hai....

is kahani ke wo kirdar ho tum jo VIDEOUS se takrane waala hai...

itne kamzor toh nahi ho sakte tum jo yunhi haar jaao...

SHAILA-hum bhi toh dekhen ki without your power,how strong are you...!!!

MAI-fir un teen jokaron se (class WHIZZES and WHIZZDERS)keh dena ki meri haalat jo bhi ho, they will not interfere...

SHAILA-done...


apni baat keh,mai utha,palta aur jaane laga par tabhi mujhe AKSHAANT ki kahi baat click hui aur isiliye..


MAI-ilaaj kiya jaata hai,par tumne kaha ki mujhe ilaaj tak pahunchna hai....iska kya matlab...???

AKSHAANT-mai soch hi raha tha ki tumne wo baat catch kaise nahi ki..???

well,mere kehne ka matlab tha ki...

SHAILA-nananana...kya kar rahe ho...???aise nahi AKSHAANT...jo baat batani hai,wo sea off se pehle ki line hai , isiliye usse waise hi boli jaani chahiye jaise aise time par RAAZ bolta hai...

shayri me....

isiliye arz kiya hai ki....




filhal toh ye emotions ka PHAL,
tere andar hi PHALEGA....

ye teri wo ladhayi hai jo tu,
khud se hi LADEGA....

jeet isse,aur mil apne RAICHAITA se.....

kyun thik tujhe sirf VIKRAM hi KAREGA....











AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....











AAPKA APNA V...J.....
Awesome Mindblowing fantastic update.
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF WEAKLINGS CLASS ME GHUS MABBA HIDA AUR BRAWNY KO HUMILIATE KARTI HAI,WAHIN DUSRI TARAF RAAZ HIDA KO USKI HIDDEN POWER KI SHAMATA DIKHATA HAI...


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-2


(UNEARTH THE IMMORTALS)



UPDATE-75



PLANET- ELYSIAN


PLACE- WEAKLING'S STAY








PLEASE BETA..KAB TAK ROTA RAHEGA...?? NAHI DEKH SAKTI MAI TUJHE AISA...

KUCH TOH BATA KI HUA KYA HAI...???KUCH KAHA KYA TUJHE KISINE AAJ INSTITUTION ME...

KYA US RAAZ NE FIR PARESHAN KIYA TUJHE....KUCH TOH BATA MERE BACCHE....


BRAWNY ko apne seene se lagakar khud bhi ussiki tarah roti hui kahi ye saari baat uski maa NAOMI ne...

raat ka waqt hai....aaj INSTITUTION me MABBA ne jo kiya uske baad BRAWNY jo RAAZ ke diye maansik zakhm se dheere dheere ubhar raha tha,uska wo zakhm aaj phir hara ho gaya tha...

INSTITUTION se apne ghar tak ka lamba safar bhi usne bas aansu bahate aur sunya ko ghur chalte hue hi pura kar liya tha....

wo raaste bhar cheekhna chahta tha,chilla chilla kar apne dard ke kaale rango se mahoul ko rang dena chahata tha,par kisi tarah usne apne awaaz ko khudme simtaye rakha....

par apne quater pahunchte hi jaise uske kaano me uski maa ki awaaz padi,toh uske saare emotions ek jhatke me baahar nikal aaye..

wo foot foot kar rone laga jisse dekh uski maa aur uske pitah ghabra gaye...

par naa toh BRAWNY ne koi jawab diya aur naahi uska rona band hua..

aur tab se ab tak yahi haal hai....

khair,apne bete ko seene se laga khud bhi bhari hui aankhon se NAOMI ne SHALTON ki taraf dekha jo ek kinare par khade bas chupchaap apne bete ki haalat ko dekh aansu baha rahe the....

par apni biwi ki khaamosh zubaan aur minnat bhari nazaron ko dekh aur samajh wo apne bete ki taraf aage badhe aur uske sir par apna haath firate hue...


SHALTON-shaant hojaa mere bacche....aur jo bhi baat hai,usse bol de...

jitni der tak apne andar rakhega,taklif utni badhegi....

NAOMI-haan beta...bata kya hua hai..??kya kisine kuch kaha hai INSTITUTION me...


HAA BETA,BATA.... MUMMY PAPA KO BATA...TERE BATATE HI TERE MUMMY PAPA TURANT JAAYENGE AUR TUJHE SATENE WALON KI HAALAT KHARAB KAR DENGE....


ek khilli se bhari awaaz padi BRAWNY aur uske parents ke kaano me jiske baad jab un teeno ki nazar apne quater ke wooden halt par gayi toh...


NAOMI-tummmm.!!!yahan kya karne aaye ho...nikal jaao mere ghar se....

ghusse se bhar saamne ki taraf dekh kahi ye baat NAOMI ne jahan khada tha MAI.....

HIDA ke jaate hi mai turant yahan WEAKLINGS stay ki taraf nikal gaya tha....

reason....

aaj class se nikalte waqt maine BRAWNY ko joki apni class se nikal hi raha tha,dekh liya tha...

uski aankhen nam thi aur chehre par frustration...

WOOGER ke zariye mujhe BRAWNY ke saath aaj jo hua, uske baare me aur saath hi uske baad uske antarman ke bhaav,dono ke baare me hi pata chal gaya tha aur yahi wajah thi ki mai yahan tha...

khair, NAOMI ki baat sun....


MAI-mera ghar..!!ye ghar hai..isse behtar haalat toh bathrooms ke hote hain...


mujhe naa jaata dekh aur meri baat sun NAOMI uthne ko hui par tabhi SHALTON ne uska haath pakad liya..

SHALTON jaante the ki mai NAOMI ke aurat hone ka lihaz nahi karunga
isiliye unhone aisa kiya tha...

par in sabke beech wo BRAWNY ko bhul gaye jisne jaise hi mujhe dekha aur fir uski mom se meri kahi batein suni toh uska control khudse chhut gaya aur turant khade ho meri taraf bhaaga...

wahin apne bete ke reaction se shock ho gaye uske parents par isse pehle ki wo kuch kar paate, BRAWNY mere paas aa chuka tha..

par ladhna toh usse aata tha nahi...

yahi wajah thi ki mere paas pahunch mujhe maarne ke liye bas tezi se haath pair hilane laga wo par isse pehle ki wo mujhe chhuta,maine turant man hi man kuch kaha aur turant ek side hata aur uske piche aate hue uske gardan par apne haath fasa diye..

ab bhale hi mai normal tha,par itna strong toh tha hi ki BRAWNY ko araam se lapet lun...

khair,mere aisa karte hi BRAWNY meri giraft se chhutne ke liye chhatpatane laga par wo kaamiyab ho nahi paaya...

wahin jaise hi BRAWNY mere haathon ke giraft me aaya,uske mom dad ki haalat kharab ho gayi..

SHALTON ke saath maine kya kiya tha, SHALTON ne wo jhela tha aur NAOMI ne usse dekha aur mehsoos kiya tha..

unhe laga ki mai unke bete ki gardan tod dunga...

aur isiliye....


NAOMI-please mere bacche ko kuch mat karna...

MAI-arre waah..badi jaldi sur badal gaye....

aur tu,saale naphunsak,badi himmat aa gayi tujhme...badi garmi hai naa tujhme..

chal check karte hain....


BRAWNY ko dhakka dete hue mai uske mom dad ke paas le gaya aur....


MAI-tod dun tere bete ki gardan..


NAOMI ki aankhon me dekh maine ye baat kahi jisse wi andar tak sihar gayi aur..


NAOMI-nahi please..jo kahoge,karungi.bas dont harm my son...

MAI-..strip yourself.....

NAOMI/SHALTON-WHAT...!!!!!

MAI-i said,strip yourself....aur bina noutanki kiye agle dus second me ye karna hai tumhe or else your son is dead....


jahan meri baat sun NAOMI aur SHALTON ek sadme waali haalat me chale gaye the wahin BRAWNY ghusse se bhar aur tezi se chattpatane laga tha...

par time limit jo maine di thi,uska khayal kar NAOMI ne naa sirf khudko sambhala,balki agle hi second usne jo MAXI jaisi dress khudpar daali hui thi,usne usse khud se alag kar diya aur ab wo sirf undergarments me thi...

wahin NAOMI ke strip karte hi...


MAI-dekh BRAWNY...ek bete ke liye kya isse zyada sharm ki baat ho sakti hai...!!!

ek anjaan bande ne tere saamne teri maa ke kapde aur izzat dono hi utar di aur tu kuch bhi kar nahi paa raha...

kya jeene ka haq bhi hai tujhe....


ye aakhri line bolte bolte hi maine BRAWNY ko zor se push kiya jiske baad wo lehrata hua neeche gir gaya...

BRAWNY maansik tanaav bardasht naa kar paane ki wajah se behosh ho gaya tha jisse dekh NAOMI jo bas sharm se sir jhukaye khadi thi,wo turant apne bacche ki taraf badhi aur uske saath uske SHALTON bhi..

wahin BRAWNY ko chhodne ke agle hi second mai muda aur tezi se quater ke baahar nikla aur fir bhaagte kuch door aage badh...

DHAMMMMM.....AHHHHHHH....

neeche zamin par ghutno ke bal girte hue ek karah nikal gayi mere mooh se....

reason....

mere right haath aag me tapne se jaise hota hai,waise hi pure laal ho gaya tha...

aur iska reason....

BRAWNY.......

aapko yaad hoga ki jab wo meri taraf badha tha tab maine kuch kaha tha..

darasal maine WOOGER kaha tha jiske baad WOOGER ki shakti se bani ek parat mere us haath ke jisne BRAWNY ko pakad rakha tha,uspar chadh gayi..

aur BRAWNY ko maine nahi, ussi parat ne,us shakti ne lapeta hua tha...

aur itna sab sirf isiliye hua kyunki BRAWNY ka frustration us waqt 25 percent par tha aur aisa hote hi uske sharir se uski energy ke kan nikalne lage jisse filhal mai jis condition me hun,jhel nahi sakta tha aur yahi wajah thi WOOGER se help lene ki...

par har beethete second ke saath BRAWNY ki frustration badhne lagi aur aisa hone par uski energy WOOGER ki parat se hote hue meri skin ko touch karne lagi jisse meri skin garam hone lagi thi..

aur jab NAOMI ne strip kiya tab BRAWNY ki frustration 75 percent par pahunch chuki thi aur kuch ki seconds me wo frustration apni limit todne waali thi par agar aisa ho jaata, toh uske asar se ye puri jagah blast ho jaati...

aur yahi reason tha ki WOOGER ki shakti ne BRAWNY ke senses kheench liye aur BRAWNY behosh ho gaya...

par meri lag gayi thi...haath bhale jale nahi the,par jalan hadh se zyada ho rahi thi...

par is jalan se zyada taklif mujhe apne andar mehsoos ho rahi thi jisse mujhe bhi frustration feel hone lagi thi aur isiliye kaadha peekar mai turant apne bike par baitha aur nikal pada ek direction ki taraf...





PLACE-ASTER





TEJASV OLOKA

AURA SCAN




ASTER ke ussi artificial field me paalthi maar kar baith apne chith ko shunya ki gehrayiyon me daalne ke baad is SPELL ko uccharit kiya tha FALLON ne...

waise ye pehli baar nahi tha jab FALLON ne is SPELL ko uccharit kiya tha...

ek hafte pehle MASTER ki di gayi chunouti ka aaklan kar FALLON is natije par pahunchi ki agar usse ASTER me rehne waale har vyakti ko ek saath hawa me ucchalna hai toh uska ek hi tarika hai..

aur wo hai dhyan me baith sabse pehle is jagah ke har vyakti ke sharir se nikalne vaale AURA ko complete scan kar us power ko khudse jodne ka kyunki bina saare logon ko feel kiye usse diya gaya kaam ho hi nahi sakta tha...

aur isiliye pichle 1 hafte se apne kareeb 12 ghante FALLON ne is kaam ko diye the jisme wo lagbhag aadha percent hi kaamiyab ho paayi thi....

aur wo isiliye kyunki human AURA ko scan kar uske power ko khudse ek chain ki tarah jodna hadh se zyada kathin tha...

kyunki ye kaam apne man ki shakti se ho raha tha bina un logon ke anumati liye jinhe use me laana tha aur aise me jab bhi FALLON AURA scan karne ki koshish karti thi,toh us scan ke jawab me ek reverse force bhi un sabhi logon ke body se release ho raha tha jiski wajah se FALLON ka sampark un AURAS se baar baar toot jaa raha tha..

itne dino se continously ki kayi 12 ghante ki koshish ke baad FALLON ke body ki puri shakti khtam ho gayi thi...

aur aaj bhi same process ko repeat karte hue FALLON ko kuch 4 ghante ho chuke the par result kuch bhi nahi nikla tha...

abhi bhi SPELL ko uccharit karne ke kuch hi minutes baad FALLON ka sampark AURA se toot gaya aur aisa hote hi uski aankhen khul gayi...


FALLON-dammit....ye kaisa task diya hai yaar MASTER ne.....how is this even possible....???

itne dino se se try kar rahi hun par har baar kuch logon se khudko jodte hi ek jhatke se saara connection khatm ho jaata hai...

but mai connection tak jod hi nahi paa rahi hun toh fir sabko hawa me kya khaakh utha paaungi...


AGAR YUNHI FRUSTRATE RAHI TOH KISI AUR KO TOH KYA,TUM KHUDKO BHI HAWA ME UTHANE KI KALA BHOOL JAAOGI....


saamne se aa rahe MASTER ne ye baat kahi thi jisse sun ab bhi dhyan mudra ki position me baithi FALLON khadi ho gayi aur...


FALLON-frustration toh hogi hi naa ek hafte se har din pure 12 ghante practice ki hai maine aur aaj bhi 4 ghante se upar ho chuke hain mujhe ek hi kriya ko baar baar dohrate hue..

par bas kuch logon ke AURA se khudko jodne ke alawa aur kuch success nahi mila hai mujhe..

aur wo connection bhi kuch time baad toot jaata hai...

aise me without touch ek strong push ke saath mai 2 logon ko 2 feet tak bhi shayad uchhal paaungi toh fir aise me ye task complete ho toh bhi kaise...???

MASTER-ab isme toh mai tumhari koi madad nahi kar sakta..you are completely on your own...

par haan,ek choti si kahani hai,sun lo aur sunkar ganit lagao...shayad pata chal jaaye ki kya aur kaise karna chahiye...


MASTER ko baat lar aankhon me sawal liye bas chup chaap unhe dekhti rahi FALLON jispar MASTER ne apni baat yaa fir ye kahun ki kahani shuru ki....


MASTER-ek baar ki baat hai..ek kisaan apne raajya ke maharaj ki darbaar me apni ek shikayat lekar pahuncha...

maharaj ke sammukh ho usne unse kaha,ki maharaj,mujhe aapse ek shikayat hai....

aur wo shikayat ye hai ki ek taraf mai hun jisne din bhar kheton ke apna khoon pasina bahaya hai aur itne kathin parishram ke baad bhi mai bas itna hi kama pata hun ki ledekar mera aur mere pariwar ka guzara bas ho paata hai...

wahin dusri taraf maine dekha hai ki aapke mehel me ek vyakti baiththa hai jo mehel ki shaano shaukat ka lutf uthate hue bas ek jagah baith kar bahi khaate me kuch kuch likhta rehta hai..(ACCOUNTANT,MUNIM)

kabhi kabhar hi wo mehel se bahar nikalta hai aur usme bhi wo koi mehnat waala,pasina nikalne waala kaam nahi karta..

wo bas raajya ke alag alag bhandaron me,udyogon me ghumta hai,baat karta hai, apni bahi me kuch likhta hai aur wapas mehel aa jata hai..

par itne hi kaam ke liye usse dher saara dhan milta hai,rehne ke liye ek behtarin awaas aur saari sukh suvidhayen...

kya ye nainsaafi nahi hai....??


us kisan ki baat sun maharaj halke muskuraye aur...


MAHARAJ-baat toh tumne thik kahi...mehnat tum zyada karte ho, aur fal hamare MUNIM ko zyada milta hai..

thik hai,hum tumhari aamdani,tumhara rehen sehen hamare yahan ke munim se behtar kar denge...


apne maharaj ki baat sun kisaan khush ho gaya..wo unki jayjaykar karne hi wala tha ki tabhi..


MAHARAJ-par usse pehle,kya tum hamara ek kaam karoge....???

KISAAN-agya den maharaj.. zaroor karunga...

MAHARAJ-bohot achhe..kuch der pashchat humare raajya ki seema par ek dusre raajya ki bail gaadi pravesh karegi..

tum us bail gaadi ke chalak se puch kar aao ki wo kahan se aa raha hai...???

apne maharaj ki baat sun kisan turant bhaaga aur fir kuch hi der baad lout kar aaya aur...


KISAN-maine pata laga liya hai maharaj...wo bailgadi sohanpur se aayi hai...

MAHARAJ-acha..aur wo jaa kahan rahi hai...???

KISAN-par maharaj...aapne mujhse ye puchne ke liye toh kaha nahi hi nai tha..

MAHARAJ-koi baat nahi..ek fir se jaao aur pata kar ke aao...

KISAN turant wapas bhaaga aur fir kuch der baad louta aur..

KISAN-maharaj wo bailgadi vilaykaas jaa rahi hai....

MAHARAJ-bohot ache...acha ye batao ki kya wo bail gaadi khaali thi....???

KISAN-nahi maharaj..usme bohot se bore lade hue the...

MAHARAJ-kya tha un boron me...???

KISAN-ye mujhe gyat nahi..aapne bola hi nahi tha uske baare me puchne ke liye...

MAHARAJ-koi baat nahi..ab bol dete hain..jaao aur pata lagakar aao ki kya samaan hai un boron me...


apne maharaj ki baat sun ek baar fir bhaaga kisan aur kuch der baad jab wo louta toh uski saanse halki chaddhi hui thi...

kuch shan apne saanson ko durust kar....


KISAN-maharaj un boron me gehun aur baajre hain...

MAHARAJ-acha..waise kitni maatra me hain wo gehun aur baajre...


maharaj ke sawal par kisaan ka mooh utar gaya kyunki usse toh ye pata karne ke liye maharaj ne kaha hi nahi tha...

par usse pata tha ki ab maharaj usse pata karne ke liye kahenge hi isiliye...


KISAN-mai pata karke aata hun maharaj..


ye bol wo ek baar firse bhaaga aur fir jab kuch der baad wo louta toh is baar uski saanse kuch zyada hi chadhi hui thi aur wo isiliye kyunki wo bailgadi jiske liye wo gaya tha,wo raajya ke aakhri chhor tak pahunch chuka tha aur isiliye uska ye round usse kaafi lamba pada tha....

wo yunhi haafte haafte bola ki...


KISAN-maharaj..us bail gaadi me 1000 kilo gehun aur 800 kilo baajre the...


kisan ki baat par maharaj kuch bolte ki tabhi...


MAHARAJ KI JAY HO....


ye bolte hue unka MUNIM chalte hue unke saamne aakar khada ho gaya...


MAHARAJ-aao munim..waise hum tumhe bulane hi waale the..kuch der pehle hamare raajya me ek dusre raajya ke bailgaadi ne pravesh kiya tha...

hume uski jaankari chahiye..


MUNIM-mai ussi silsile me aapke sammukh upastith hua hun..maine us bailgaaadi ke baare me sab pata laga liya hai maharaj..

wo bailgaaadi sohanpur se aayi thi aur vilaykaas jaa rahi hai..us bailgaadi me 1000 kilo gehun aur 800 kilo baajre ki boriyan ladi hui hain...

aur bailgaadi ke chalak ne hamare raajya me pravesh karte hi upyukt kar chuka diya hai..

MAHARAJ-bohot ache..jaa sakte hain aap...


jahan maharaj ki baat sun munim toh chala gaya par uske saare jawabon ko sun kisan ka sir sharm se jhuk gaya tha jispar...


MAHARAJ-humara udeshya tumhe sharmsaar karna nahi tha...hum toh bas tumhe kuch samjhana chahte the...

ummid hai ki tum samajh gaye hoge..

KISAN-jee maharaj...mai ache se samajh gaya hun..buddhi ke aage bal hamesha chota hi hota hai...

jitna kaam mai apni taakat ke dum par nahi kar paata,usse zyada wo munim apne dimag ke dum par baithe baithe kar leta hai..

aur isiliye uska ohda bada aur aamdani zyada hai...

kahani khatm ho chuki thi aur saath hi FALLON ko lesson bhi mil chuka tha...


FALLON samajh gayi thi ki wo bas kisi tarah apni taakat ka istemal kar forcefully sabse khudko jodne ki koshish kar rahi hai aur ye kaam bina kis neeti ke ho raha tha aur aise me wo kaamiyab nahi ho sakti...


wahin MASTER bhi FALLON ke chehre ko dekh samajh gaye the ki the lesson has been learnt aur isiliye...


MASTER-talwar sui se badi bhi hoti hai aur taakatwar bhi par jahan zaroorat sui ki ho,wahan talwar ka koi kaam nahi...

tumhe bas wo SUI dhundni hai..wo maarg,wo tarika jisse tumhara task apne anjaam tak pahunch sake..


ye bol MASTER mude aur wapas chal diye par fir thoda aage jaakar ruke,palte aur...


MASTER-kisi bhi experiment se pehle research hoti hai... tumhe wahi wahi karna chahiye..

pehle sawal ko samjho,uska vishlehsan karo, dhundo, aur fir jab saari kadiyan jud jaayen,tab apna abhyas shuru karo....

aur haan, vishleshan waale bhaag ke samay apni nazaron ko tez rakhna mat bhulna...kaam aur asaan ho jaayega...







PLACE- SHEELA'S ABODE






ARRE KYA BAAT HAI....KAHANI KE MUKHYA KIRDAAR KE CHARAN AAJ HAMARE GHAR PAR PADH GAYE....HUM TOH DHANYA HO GAYE....


SHAILA ka ABODE hi hai wo thikana jahan mai BRAWNY ke ghar se sidhe pahuncha tha..

ABODE mere kadam rakhte hi SHAILA jo saamne hall me hi AKSHAANT ke saath baithi hui thi,usne ye baat kahi thi....

wahin uski baat khtam hote hi..


AKSHAANT-aao RAAZ baitho....


AKSHAANT ki baat sun mai uske aur SHAILA ke saamne couch par baith gaya jiske baad....


SHAILA-haath dikhao...


SHAILA ki baat par maine apne haath aage kiya jispar garmahat ki wajah se aayi laali ab bhi thodi bachi thi jisse dekh.....


SHAILA-hmm..sahi waqt par haath hata liya tumne warna hatane ke liye haath bachta hi nahi....


SHAILA ki baat sun maine usse ghura jispar...


SHAILA-what..!!!ye toh nahi soch rahe ho ki mujhe tumhare condition ke baare me kaise pata chala...???

common man, maana ki ye kahani tumhari hai par jis jagah par tum bathe ho,ye hamari shakti se bani hai..

ye pura PLANET bana hai....

hastakshep nahi kar sakte hum is kahani me toh kya hua...????dekh toh sakte hi hain..

aur sach bataun,mujhe toh bada maza aa raha hai is kahani ko dekhne me....


MAI-sahi kaha hai kisine...

some habbits never die...

manushya yoni chhodkar ANGEL ban gayi tum par insaano jaisi faaltu baatein aur show off karna nahi chhoda tumne...

tumhe kaise pata chala,ye nahi soch raha tha mai...mai bas ye soch raha tha ki tum us mudde par,jiske liye mai yahan aaya hun,kab aaogi..???

AKSHAANT-toh tum hi aa jaao mudde par....batao,kyun aaye ho..???

MAI-tum dono ko hi pata hai ki mai kyun aaya hun...ye human emotion merge nahi ho paa rahe hain meri soul se..

bohot taklif hoti hai mujhe... BRAWNY ke ghar par bhi ho raha tha mujhe ye pain...aur woh bhi unbearable...

aur ye tumhara diya temporary ilaaj nahi pasand mujhe....

mai weak hun,ehaas dilata hai ye mujhe...

is pain ke saath apne first REFINER ke average power tak toh pahunch gaya mai,par complete power tak nahi pahunch paaunga...

wahan pahunchne se pehle hi body fath jaayegi meri...

summary....tell me the permanent way...

AKSHAANT-bata toh sakte hain par uska kuch faayda hoga nahi...

kyunki wo ilaaj sirf batane se toh ho jaayega nahi...

us ilaj tak pahunchne ke liye tumhari body ko aur strong hona padega..

utna jitna SHAILA ne bataya hai...4 percent AMPLIFICATION aur complete power of first REFINER...

itna hone ke baad hi tumhara ilaaj possible hai....

is kahani ke wo kirdar ho tum jo VIDEOUS se takrane waala hai...

itne kamzor toh nahi ho sakte tum jo yunhi haar jaao...

SHAILA-hum bhi toh dekhen ki without your power,how strong are you...!!!

MAI-fir un teen jokaron se (class WHIZZES and WHIZZDERS)keh dena ki meri haalat jo bhi ho, they will not interfere...

SHAILA-done...


apni baat keh,mai utha,palta aur jaane laga par tabhi mujhe AKSHAANT ki kahi baat click hui aur isiliye..


MAI-ilaaj kiya jaata hai,par tumne kaha ki mujhe ilaaj tak pahunchna hai....iska kya matlab...???

AKSHAANT-mai soch hi raha tha ki tumne wo baat catch kaise nahi ki..???

well,mere kehne ka matlab tha ki...

SHAILA-nananana...kya kar rahe ho...???aise nahi AKSHAANT...jo baat batani hai,wo sea off se pehle ki line hai , isiliye usse waise hi boli jaani chahiye jaise aise time par RAAZ bolta hai...

shayri me....

isiliye arz kiya hai ki....




filhal toh ye emotions ka PHAL,
tere andar hi PHALEGA....

ye teri wo ladhayi hai jo tu,
khud se hi LADEGA....

jeet isse,aur mil apne RAICHAITA se.....

kyun thik tujhe sirf VIKRAM hi KAREGA....











AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....











AAPKA APNA V...J.....
waah bhai yeh last wali line hi hamesha kamal ki thi ki uska raichaita hi use milega aur ise thik karega sabse bada sawal yahi hain kaise milega vikram Raaz se matalab raaz ko ab 1 refiner aur 4% soul amplification karna hoga tab hi kuchh ho sakta hain aur ab to brawny ki power ka bhi thoda sa andaza ho chuka hain aur raaz isiliye hi uske ghar gaya tha maybe usase nikalane wali energy ko shayad sense kar liya tha raaz ne isiliye woh waha gaya tha shayad
 

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ek minute

me yaha jo bi batavunga sabse pehle v.j bhai bura nahi maanenge or dusra koi dusronki kehnepe me nahi likh raha yaha ye meri apni khudki soch hai shayad ye galat bi ho sakta hai yaa sahi bi per v.j bhai isko positive way me lange ye aasha hai

villan

yaha v.j bhai ne kaha ki story villan based hai

jaise ki film haina rakthcharitha raamgopal varmaka teek vaise

matlub mahabharath jaise mahaghatha ko hum duryodhan ki drishtikon se dekha jaaye tho kaise lagegi yahi point hai yaha ki villan ki attitude se story chalegi

attitude matlub jaise ki v.j bhai ne btaya DRISHTIKON

rahi baat raaz ki tho

yaha bi v.j bhai raaz ko villan ko ghoshith kiya kyu?

kya raaz ka karm uchith nahi tha?

kya raaz ki rachna anuchith tha?

kya raaz ki uddeshya anuchith tha?


sabse pehle v.j bhai ne raaz ko villan gosith kiya iska vajah hai ham readers ki DRISTIKON ko badalna jisse hum raaz jo bi kare ek villan ki hasiyat se hame sahi lage waah waah bhai kya khel khel rahe ho hamare saath waha chosans me bi or hamare man se bi lakin ye galat uddeshy se nahi ye me jaanta hu per apki iss move se me apki khyal hogaya hu


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raaz ki karm uchit hi hai lakin us karm ko karne ki tarika hame anuchit kahi kahi hi lagta hai kuch logonko kyunki v.j bhai ki raaz ko villan kehne se readers me 80% log vilaan samjke chup reh jaate hai jo bacha baaki ke 20% log jo abhi bhi raaz ko hero hi mante hai unko kahi kahi raaz ki ye kriya anuchit lagta hai jaise ki kal ki update me naomi ki strip your self bolatha

ye kehne ko tho bahut galat tha lakin iske andar chupi uddeshy jyadatar log samaj nahi paye or me usse yaha batana nahi chahta jinko pata chala wo pls chup rahe kuch mat kahe jinko nahi pata chala wo thoda wait kare iska jawaab apko update me mil jayega me batakar story ki ras ko feeka nahi karna chahta khair


raaz ki rachna

lord of judgement or lord of angel ye dono milke 5 longonki utpatti ki jo videos se takra sake jinme 4 fail hue bacha raaz akhri

lakin raaz kaise bacha yaha iska jawaab sabko pata hai uska attitude or ye attitude usme aaya kaha se iska pata tho is story se jude har kisi ko pata hai ki ye asmodeos ki yogdaan hai

par yaha raaz ki attitude asmodeos ki attitude se bahut bahut upar hai

or uska rachna videos ki ant ke liye hua hai jo black energy se labrege hai jo poori bramhaand ke liye ghatak siddh hai tho uska rachna anuchith kaise ho sakta hai


raaz ka uddeshy

jaise ki pehle maine kaha ki browny ki mamle me uska uddeshy uchit hi tha karm ka marg anuchit hai bas

uddeshy kya hai ye pata chal jayega haina v.j bhai ha.....ha...ha....selute yaar selute
 
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