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Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI VIOLET MAHI KO PHASE 2 KE DO SAVENTS ANWIR AUR MORANA SE MILWATI JINSE MAHI KI BEHES HO JAATI HAI...

AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-31



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-THE CHOSENS


2 MONTHS LATER:-




WELL DONE MABEL...BRILLIANT ALFREEN.....MAHI KE BAAD TUM DONO IS SAAL KE SECOND AUR THIRD SAVENT BAN CHUKE HO JISNE APNE SOUL AMPLIFICATION KO SUCCESSFULLY TRIGGER KAR LIYA HAI...

AND I AM VERY PROUD TO SAY THAT CHOSEN'S KE 25 THOUSAND YEARS KE ITIHAS ME KISI SEASON KE PEHLE 3 MONTHS ME 3 SAVENTS KA YE ACHIEVEMENT PAANA,BOHOT KAM BAAR HUA HAI....


bohot proudly OPHILIA WHIZZ ne ye baat kahi jisse sun MABEL aur ALFREEN khud bhi bohot gourvankik mehsoos kar rahe the.

subah ka waqt hai.... MAHI ki classes toh VIOLET WHIZZ leti thi aur unki SOUL AMPLIFICATION ki class unki jagah baaki teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS lete the...

aaj 2 mahine ho chuke hai MAHI ko apne SOUL AMPLIFICATION ko trigger kiye hue..

2 mahine pehle ANWIR aur MORANA dwara kahi gayi baat jaise MABEL aur ALFREEN ke dimag me chhap si gayi thi...

bhale hi us din last words unki dost MAHI ne kahe the but fir bhi MABEL aur ALFREEN ne pehli baar us din khud ko chota mehsoos kiya tha...

un dono ko us din se MORANA dwara di gayi dhamki bhi hamesha yaad rehti thi jisse usne unhe next PHASE ke liye di thi...

unhe is baat ka ehsaas tha ki agar un dono ne khudko aur sashakth nahi banaya toh iska khaamiyaza unke saath saath MAHI ko bhi uthana padega...

par har champion ki tarah in saari negetive baaton ne MABEL aur ALFREEN ko piche nahi dhakela balki unhe aage push kiya...

unke determination ko aur strong bana diya tha ANWIR aur MORANA ke taunts ne...

aur yahi wajah thi ki us din ke baad se dono pehle se aur zyada focused hokar classes attend karti thi...

in do mahino me un dono ne hi apni puri jaan laga di thi apne apne SOUL ko trigger karne me par ye itna asaan bhi nahi tha but aaj do mahino ke kade aur lagatar prayas ke baad MAHI aur ALFREEN dono hi finally apne maksad me kaamiyab hue aur wo bhi same din me...

OPHILIA WHIZZ ki baat sun in do mahino ki puri mehnet un dono ke aakhon ke saamne ghumne lagi jisse yaad aur mehsoos kar dono hi muskura rahi thi....


NOX-MABEL, ALFREEN....kal se aap dono ki class bhi MAHI ke saath lagegi....hum ummid karte hain ki aap teeno hi bohot jald apne soul ke AMPLIFICATION percentage ko bhi start kar denge...

and SAVENTS,apne confidence level aur focus ko banaye rakhiye...

hume maalum hai ki 3 months se lagatar koshish karne ke baad bhi abhi tak aap sabko thodi bhi kaamiyabi nahi mili hai...

par ye stage har SAVENT ki life me aaya hai...jis dour se aap sab guzar rahe hain,ussi daur se kabhi hum bhi guzre the aur isiliye apne experience se hum bas aap sabko ye yakin dilate hain ki rukawaton ka ye daur bas temporary hai,permanent nahi...

agar aap sab determined rahe toh bohot jald MAHI,ALFREEN aur MABEL ki hi tarah aap sab bhi apne apne SOUL ko trigger karne me kaamiyab ho jaayenge....

OMMIN- aur taaki aap sab apne determination ko strong banaye rakhe aur apne soul ko trigger kar paayen, isiliye ek naya motivation hum aapko dete hain...

aur is motivation ka naam hai SWEEP-STAKE.....

kisi ko matlab pata hai is word ka???

SAVENT-an earnest effort for superiority or victory over other...

OMMIN- absolutely right....ab aap sab soch rahe honge ki is word ka yaa iske maayne ka aapke determination se kya lena dena...

lene dena hai...aur wo ye ki...

aap sabko CHOSENS me aaye 3 mahine guzar chuke hain....aur thik aaj hi ki tarah aaj se 3 mahine baad
jab is saal ke first 6 months guzar jaayenge toh har saal ki tarah is saal bhi CHOSEN'S me SWEEP-STAKE naam ke ek competition ka aayojan hoga....

ye competition pichle 25 thousand years se lagatar har saal CHOSENS me organize hota chala aaya hai jahan is INSTITUTION ke PHASE 3 ke SAVENTS participate karte hain.....

aur PHASE 1 aur PHASE 2 ke SAVENTS is competition ke audience hote hain...pure saal me bas ek baar hi aisa mouka aata hai jab PHASE 1 aur PHASE 2 ke SAVENTS apne last PHASE ke SAVENTS aur unke hunar ko live dekh paate hain...

par....is competition ko aap kaise dekhenge,ye aur koi nahi balki aap sab ya fir ye kahun ki aap sabki positions decide karte hain...

kehne ka matlab hai ki agar in 3 mahino me aapne apne SOUL ko trigger kar liya toh aap sab ko ek achi aur respected jagah provide ki jaati hai,jahan se aap sab us competition ka lutf utha paayenge...

wahin aapmese jitne bhi SAVENT apne soul ko trigger karne ke baad usse 1 percent bhi amplify karne me successful honge,unhe PHASE 2 ke STELLARS group ke saath baith kar is competition ko dekhne ka mouka milega....

par jitne bhi SAVENTS agle teen mahine me apne SOUL ko trigger karne tak me kaamiyab nahi hue,unhe sabse alag aur door khade hokar ek outsider ki tarah is competition ko dekhna padega...

understood.....


OMMIN WHIZZDER ki baat sun sach me sabhi SAVENTS ka moral high ho chuka tha..sabhi andar hi andar ye determine kar chuke the ki aane waale teen mahino me kisi bhi tarah khud ke SOUL ko wo trigger karke hi rahenge wahin in sabke beech ALFREEN aur MABEL jinhone already apne apne soul ko trigger kar liya tha,unhone man hi man thaan liya tha ki wo dono ki bhi tarah apne SOUL ko kamsekam 1 percent tak toh trigger karke hi rahenge...

kyunki yahi ek tarika tha second PHASE ke un do SAVENTS ANWIR aur MORANA ko apne talent ki jhalak dikhane ka....


NOX-aaj ki class yahin khatm karte hain SAVENTS...


ye bol teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS class se nikal gaye...

wahin unke jaate hi MABEL aur ALFREEN bhi turant MAHI ki class ki taraf nikal padi...



SOUL AMPLIFICATION CLASS:-



PRATIBHAVANITA

HOLD



apne CEREBRATION process ko pause kar MAHI ne is spell ko uccharit kiya aur fir apne cerebration process ko wapas shuru kar apni aakhen khol di par bole gaye spell ki wajah se MAHI ka Brain, body aur blood ek dusre ke saath connected hi raha....

aankh khulte hi MAHI ki nazar apne saamne khadi VIOLET WHIZZ par gayi jo usse hi dekh rahi thi...

WHIZZ ko dekh MAHI ko 2 mahine pehle shuru hue apne is naye class ka wo pehla din yaad aa gaya jab usne pehli baar apne SOUL ko amplify karne ke liye ye sab karna shuru kiya tha....

us din VIOLET WHIZZ ke chehre par ek alag hi excitement tha but aaj MAHI ko wo excitement WHIZZ ke chehre par bilkul bhi nahi dikha aur dikhta bhi kaise...???

2 mahine se lagatar koshish karne ke baawjud bhi MAHI apne SOUL ko 1 percent tak bhi AMPLIFY nahi kar paayi thi...

jaisa ki WHIZZ ne bataya tha,soul ko 1 percent tak AMPLIFY karne ke liye second spell bolne ke baad kamsekam 1 minute tak apne CEREBRATION process ko pause rakhna padta tha but abhi tak MAHI ki patience limit 40 seconds tak hi touch kar paayi thi.....

aisa nahi tha ki MAHI slow ho gayi thi..infact MAHI ab bhi baakiyon se bohot aage thi.. VIOLET WHIZZ ko khud bhi lagbhag 7 mahine lage the apne soul ko ek percent amplify karne me..

infact MARILIZA WHIZZ jo ki filhal CHOSEN'S ki incharge thi,unhe bhi 100 dino se upar lage the aisa karne me but MAHI ke ab tak ke record aur performance ko dekhkar VIOLET WHIZZ ko usse kuch zyada hi ummid thi...

ye saare thoughts MAHI ke brain me kuch seconds me hi ghum se gaye the par fir ek lambi saans le aur chhod MAHI ne apni aakhen phir se band kar li aur...



PRATIBANDHANA

BIND THE POWERS



khudke antarman ke us urja roopi soul ke pahunchne par ussi soul ko apne brain,body aur blood se jodne ke liye MAHI ne is spell ko uccharit kiya jiske baad un chaaron ka aapas me judaaw ho gaya....

aur aisa hote hi.....

ek tez dard ki leher MAHI ke pure sharir me doud gayi jiski wajah se paused CEREBRATION me hone ke baawjud MAHI ke jabde ek dusre se jud gaye...

behad taklif ho rahi thi usse par fir bhi ab tak MAHI ne jaise taise apne CEREBRATION ko pause hi rakha tha...

but dard itna zyada tha ki usse pata tha ki bas kuch hi seconds aur wo us dard ko jhel paayegi...

par itni negetive situation me bhi MAHI ka brain,uski body aur uska blood uski dhamniyon me soul ke saath khichaav karte hue bhi jaise usse prerit kar rahe the....

dard ko zabt karte hue MAHI apne andar ek dusre se Jude apne shakti ke chaaron shrothon ko dekh rahi thi aur saath hi soch rahi thi koi yukti is dard ko zyada der tak jhelne ki......

aur yunhi sochte sochte achanak uske dimag me wo drishya ghum gaya jab wo yahan CHOSENS aane waali thi....

wo drishya jisme usne pehli baar usse dekha tha jisne bachpan se lekar MAHI ke CHOSENS me aane se pehle tak usse gyan dene ka zariya niyukt kiya tha...

aur jaise hi MAHI ke dimag me MAHI ke us madadgaar ki jhalak dikhi,jaise ek chamatkar hua...

MAHI ka dard badhte badhte achanak utne me hi rook gaya....

dard kam ya gayab nahi hua tha,bas jitna tha,utne me hi rook gaya tha...

aur ye wahi waqt tha jab MAHI ne apna purana record 40 seconds ka tod diya tha aur ab seconds ki ghadi us magical minute ki taraf badh chuki thi...

wahin jab VIOLET WHIZZ ne bhi dekha ki 40 seconds cross karne ke baad bhi MAHI ka CEREBRATION process ab tak paused hi hai,toh wo hairan bhi hui aur khush bhi..

unhe phirse lagne laga ki ek baar firse MAHI ek naya record banayegi....

aankhon me utsukta liye wo MAHI ki taraf dekhti rahi aur saath hi seconds ko count karti rahi...

aur in baaton se anjaan MAHI apne madadgaar ke aks ko dekh rahi thi but ye chavi bhi uske dimag me bas kuch hi palon ke liye hi thi...

kuch seconds ke baad MAHI ke dimag me vibrations se hone lage jiske baad wo chavi gaayab ho gayi aur aisa hote hi MAHI ka thehra dard ek baar firse tez hone laga....

apne jabdo ko zor se dabate hue MAHI us dard ko zabt karne ki koshish karne lagi par jab uske liye wo dard asahaniyata ki lakir ko bhi paar gaya,toh usne aankhen kholne ki sochi par tabhi....


SNNNNNNNNN........


MAHI ke sharir se ek behad tez aur shaktishali urja nikal har taraf fail gayi....

jis class me is waqt MAHI thi,usse VIOLET WHIZZ ne ek shield se bandha hua tha,aur jaise hi wo urja us shield se takrayi,wo shield kisi khinche hue rubber ki tarah expand sa ho gaya...

wahin class ke baahar MAHI ka wait kar rahi MABEL aur ALFREEN ne bhi sheild ki expandation se nikalti urja ko mehsoos kiya tha..

unhone turant class ke andar jhaankne ki koshish ki par shield ki wajah se class ka door bhi opaque tha jiski wajah se andar ka kuch bhi dikh nahi raha tha...

khair,jaise hi MAHI ke andar se wo urja release hui,uske agle hi pal MAHI ne apni aakhen khol di...

apne chaaron taraf prakash aur apne andar ek ajeeb si taakat mehsoos kar MAHI ko shock laga...

wahin kuch seconds baad jab roshni kam hui aur class visible hua toh MAHI ne saamne VIOLET WHIZZ ko muskurate hue dekha...

wo unse kuch puchti,usse pehle hi....


VIOLET-congrats MAHI...tumhara soul 1 percent amplify ho chuka hai....


VIOLET WHIZZ ki baat sun MAHI ki khushi ka thikana nahi raha..wo kuch bol toh nahi rahi thi par uske chehre ka glow uske man ki haalat bayan kar rahe the...


VIOLET-aise hi confidence aur focus ke saath aage badhte raho MAHI...ek din tum apne imagination se bhi aage nikal jaaogi...

MAHI-thank you WHIZZ..ye sab aapke guidence ki wajah se hi possible ho paaya hai....


MAHI ki baat sun VIOLET WHIZZ MAHI ko uske rare talent ke baare me bohot kuch batana chahti thi but wo jaanti thi ki MAHI ka grounded rehna bhi zaroori hai aur isiliye...


VIOLET-aaj ki class khatm hui.... I'll see you tomorrow MAHI...


ye bol VIOLET WHIZZ class se nikal gayi...

unke class se nikalte hi unka bichaya shield bhi gayab ho gaya jiske turant baad MABEL aur ALFREEN class ke andar ghus gaye....


MABEL-yaar,ye abhi thodi der pehle kya hua tha..??? humne ek bohot hi strong force feel ki thi...

ALFREEN-haa yaar..aisa laga maano yahan class me kuch dhamaka sa hua ho...

MAHI-dhamaka jaisa kuch nahi tha,wo actually maine apne SOUL ka pehla percent AMPLIFY kar liya hai aur wo force ussi ki wajah se paida hua tha....

ALFREEN-what!!!! itni badi baat aur tu itni casually bata rahi hai....

apni baat keh ALFREEN MAHI ke gale lag gayi wahin uske baad MABEL ne bhi same kiya...

ALFREEN-kya yaar,yahan toh kuch hai hi nahi..agar hum hamare earth me hote toh is mauke par itni badi party karte ki sab dekhte reh jaate....

MAHI-oh hello ms day dreamer..agar hum earth me hote toh yahan jo chizen hoti hain,waisa kuch hota bhi hoga,aisa soch tak nahi paate...

ALFREEN-haan yaar,wo bhi hai....

MAHI-waise aaj tum dono se bhi mujhe ek alag energy feel ho rahi hai...

MABEL-wo toh hogi hi,hum dono ne bhi aaj apne apne soul ko trigger jo kar liya hai....

MAHI-what!!! seriously....!!!!

ALFREEN-ofcourse yaar...aur ab hum dono bhi kal se tere saath class karengi...


ALFREEN aur MABEL ki baat se MAHI itni zyada khush hui ki usse kuch bola hi nahi gaya..

usne bas dono ko hi kas kar gale laga liya....


MAHI-yaar,ye toh wakayi double,double nahi tripple khushi ka mouka hai...

ALFREEN-ofcourse..aur ab kal se hum teeno firse saath honge...

MABEL-hell ye.....

MAHI-haan par wo kal se hoga guyzz.but filhal hume ghar chalna chahiye hum already late hain...

MABEL-haan yaar.... let's go...

yunhi baat karte karte teeno apne ABODES ki taraf nikal gayi...raaste me ALFREEN aur MABEL ne MAHI ko 3 mahine baad hone wali competition aur usse judi saari baatein jo unhe aaj pata chali thi,wo batayi jisse sun MAHI bhi kaafi excited ho gayi...

teeno hi aaj kaafi khush the par un teeno me se koi EK ye nahi jaanta tha ki aaj raat usse ek ajeeb sa par ekdum zor ka jhatka lagne waala hai....


MIDNIGHT..........



YE MAI KAHAN AA GAYI...????AUR YE ITNA ANDHERA KAISA....???KHUDKE HAATH TAK NAHI DIKH RAHE......


apni baat keh wo ladki jo filhal kisi sakht si jagah par baithi hui thi,khadi ho gayi...

dikh toh kuch raha tha nahi aur isiliye andhon ki tarah haathon ko aage kar wo ek disha me dheere dheere aage badh gayi....

jo ho raha hai,wo kya hai aur most importantly kyun hai,usse kuch bhi samajh me nahi aa raha tha...

kaafi der tak yunhi andhon ki taraf haathon se aage ki taraf tatolti hui si wo aage badhi par us anjaan andhere raaste ka usse koi anth dikh hi nahi raha tha....

trasth si hokar woh wahin khadi ho gayi par aakhir kab tak...

kuch der baad wo wapas aage ki taraf badhne lagi..wo lagatar aage badh rahi thi...

andhera toh ab bhi chaaron taraf tha but ab usse dar ya ghabrahat mehsoos nahi ho rahi thi aur isiliye uski chaal tez ho gayi thi..

wo yunhi
aage badh hi rahi thi ki tabhi.....

usse khudse thodi door aage ki taraf ek jagah se niche aur upar ki taraf halki halki roshni dikhi jisse dekh usse ek ummid bandhi aur wo tezi se us roshni ko rays ki taraf badhi aur yunhi aage badhte hue jab wo us roshni waali jagah ke paas pahunchi toh wo chownki...

reason...


wo upri aur nichli roshni darasal ek bade se door ke upar aur niche ke hisse se aa rahi thi....

us ladki ko kuch samajh toh nahi aa raha tha but aage badh us door ko khatkhatne ke alawa uske paas aur koi option bhi nahi tha aur isiliye usne aage badh us door ko knock kiya par lagatar kayi baar knock karne ke baad bhi jab dusri taraf se koi response nahi aaya toh us ladki ne door ke right side par bane knob ko pakda aur jaise hi us ladki he us knob ko ghumaya,toh door khulta chala gaya....

jaise hi door pura khula,us ladki ko apna haath apne aakhon ke aage rakhna pada kyunki wo pura room bohot tez roshni se nahaya sa hua tha....

roshni itni tez thi ki usse kuch dikh hi nahi raha tha but fir bhi usne dheere se apna ek pair room ke andar badhaya aur tabhi.....


WELCOME ALFREEN....MAI TUMHARA HI INTAZAR KAR RAHA THA....


ek bhaari bharkam awaaz us ladki urf hamari ALFREEN ke kaano me gunji jisse sun wo hadbada si gayi..

abhi wo kuch kehti ki tabhi us room ki roshni madhyam padne lagi aur kuch hi der me wahan ka drishya clear hua jsse dekh ALFREEN fir chownki....

reason...

is waqt uske saamne koi shaksh khada tha par filhal uski peeth ALFREEN ke saamne thi...

saath hi us shaksh ke haath me ek talwar thi jo tez chamak rahi thi...

wahin us shaksh ke saamne do log neeche zamin par baithe hue the par hairani ki baat ye thi ki in dono ka chehra dikh nahi raha tha....

un dono ke chehron ke aage ek dhundh si chayi hui thi....

ALFREEN ye sab dekh hi rahi thi ki tabhi wo shaksh palta aur aisa hote hi ALFREEN ek baar firse shocked ho gayi kyunki us shaksh ka chehra uske saamne hokar bhi nahi tha..

kehne ka matlab hai ki neeche baithe un do logon ki hi tarah us shaksh ke chehre ke aage bhi dhundh thi....


ALFREEN-ye sab kya hai...???ye kaun si jagah hai..???mai yahan tak kaise pahunchi aur tum logon ke chehre kyun nahi dikh rahe...

SHAKSH-jis din maine tumhe dard diya,toh wo dard tumhe apne sharir ke pare bhi mehsoos hoga aur us dard ki koi samay seema bhi nahi hogi....

ALFREEN-RAAZ.......!!!!!


ek tez jhatka laga ALFREEN ko par RAAZ ka naam lene ke baad kuch aur hua jisse dekh uske jhatke ka asar aur badh gaya....

toh hua ye ki ALFREEN ke RAAZ ke naam lete hi RAAZ ke saamne jo do log neeche baithe hue the,unke chehron ke upar se dhundh hath gayi aur aisa hote hi un dono ke chehre dikhne lage jisse dekh...


ALFREEN-MOM......POPS.......


FLORIN aur MARIA jo ki RAAZ ke saamne neeche zamin par baithe hue the,unke chehre aur haath par kaafi cuts the aur jiski wajah se un jagahon se khun rees raha tha...

ye drishya dekh unki beti ka kaleja phat sa gaya...wo tezi se aage badhne ko hui par ye kya...????

uske pair jahan the, wahin jam se gaye the....usne bohot koshish ki,par ek inch bhi aage nahi badh paayi...

apne mom dad ki haalat aur apni bebasi dekh ALFREEN ki aankhen jhalak padi....


RAAZ-aansu bacha kar rakho ALFREEN...kahin aisa naa ho ki jab inke nikalne ka asli waqt aaye,tab ye bache hi naa hon...


ye baat bolte bolte RAAZ chalte hue ALFREEN ke paas pahuncha aur fir usse kuch kaha....

apni baat bol RAAZ wapas ghuma aur aage badhta hua FLORIN aur MARIA ke paas pahuncha...

uske haath ne khudki grip sword par mazboot ki aur.....


KHACHHH.....KHACHHHH......


bas ek flow me ek hi baar chali RAAZ ki sword aur agle hi pal FLORIN aur MARIA,dono ke sir dhad se alag ho chuke the....


ALFREEN-NAHI........................


ek tez cheekh ke saath ALFREEN apne neend se jaagi aur apne bed par uth kar baith gayi..is waqt uski saansen behad tez chal rahi thi...

aankhen jaise pathra si gayi thi...same position me kuch der baithe rehne ke baad wo turant bed se utri aur tezi se apne room ke baahar nikal apne mom dad ke room ki taraf doud padi....

kuch hi der me ALFREEN apne mom dad ke room ke saamne thi..darwaza khula hi tha aur is waqt FLORIN aur MARIA dono hi chain se so rahe the...

dheere dheere chalte hue ALFREEN apne mom dad ke paas pahunchi aur fir dheere se un dono ko hi halka sa chhu kar dekha maano confirm kar rahi ho ki wo dono sach me uske saamne hain...

apne mom dad ko touch karne ke baad ALFREEN kuch der tak wahin khadi un dono ko dekhti rahi aur fir palatkar wapas apne room ki taraf chal padi...

ye jaankar ki jo usne dekha,wo mahaz ek sapna tha,ye dekhkar ki uske mom dad ko kuch nahi hua hai aur wo chain se soye hue hain, ALFREEN ko chain ki saans leni thi par aisa hua nahi tha..

wo ab bhi pehle jitni hi tensed dikh rahi thi aur iska kaaran tha RAAZ ke kahe gaye wo aakhri shabd jo usne sapne me FLORIN aur MARIA ko maarne se pehle kahe the...

wo shabd maano gunj se rahe the ALFREEN ke dimag me...

ek baar,do baar,teen baar,baar baar wo shabd rook rook kar ALFREEN ko sunayi de rahe the...

tang aakar ALFREEN ne apne dono kaano ko apne haathon dwara zor se dhak liya...

par kuch der baad jab usne apne haath hataye toh ek baar firse wo shabd uske kaano me gunj uthe....


RAAZ- bramhaand ka har sach,har tathya JHUTA ho sakta hai,

par RAAZ agar kisi sapne me bhi ho,toh wo SAPNA zaroor SACH hoga....








AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....






AAPKA APNA V.J.....
 

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Apna dil vikram ki soch ke saath apki likhne ki kala or chuturayi se laga hua hai bhai bas vikram ko pichli baar god ko jaise kuch hi role diye the waise mat karna pehle kuch time god the update me fir jab aye tho tab aye jab vikram kisi grah me kaid hua tha

Vikram first part ki yaad hai brother..ye part RAAZ aur VIDEOUS ka hai...aur ye dono hi VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS se alag hain...

inki soch bramhaand ke liye diya gaya inka wo hukm hai,jo sahi ho yaa galat,logon ko manana hi hoga...

sahi aur galat..ye dono hi shabd aur inke matlab is kahani me badal se jaayenge...
 
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Vikram first part ki yaad hai brother..ye part RAAZ aur VIDEOUS ka hai...aur ye dono hi VIKRAM aur ASMODEUS se alag hain...

inki soch bramhaand ke liye diya gaya inka wo hukm hai,jo sahi ho yaa galat,logon ko manana hi hoga...

sahi aur galat..ye dono hi shabd aur inke matlab is kahani me badal se jaayenge...

Kuchh bhi sahi ya galat nahi hota,
Wo to bas hota hai ya nahi hota hai.
Jaise corona manav ke liye galat per prakriti ke liye sahi aur agar bramhand ke nazar se Dekhe to Mahatvahin hai.
 
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Mindblowing update bro.... Maine to kchh bhi sochna hi chhod diya h ab ki aage kya hoga kya nhi hoga. Bss kahani ka lutf utha rha hu...kyuki jo b sochunga hona uska ulta hi h. Gjb brother.. Phla chapter apne climax pr pahuchne lga h ab ..dekhte h aage kya hone wala h...eagerly waiting for the next update... And srry bro ki hr baar story pr reply nhi krta hu kyuki review krne ke liye shabd hi nhi h. Apne paas tariff ke liye har update mind blowing hota h hmesha....great work bro keep going
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI VIOLET MAHI KO PHASE 2 KE DO SAVENTS ANWIR AUR MORANA SE MILWATI JINSE MAHI KI BEHES HO JAATI HAI...

AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-31



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-THE CHOSENS


2 MONTHS LATER:-




WELL DONE MABEL...BRILLIANT ALFREEN.....MAHI KE BAAD TUM DONO IS SAAL KE SECOND AUR THIRD SAVENT BAN CHUKE HO JISNE APNE SOUL AMPLIFICATION KO SUCCESSFULLY TRIGGER KAR LIYA HAI...

AND I AM VERY PROUD TO SAY THAT CHOSEN'S KE 25 THOUSAND YEARS KE ITIHAS ME KISI SEASON KE PEHLE 3 MONTHS ME 3 SAVENTS KA YE ACHIEVEMENT PAANA,BOHOT KAM BAAR HUA HAI....


bohot proudly OPHILIA WHIZZ ne ye baat kahi jisse sun MABEL aur ALFREEN khud bhi bohot gourvankik mehsoos kar rahe the.

subah ka waqt hai.... MAHI ki classes toh VIOLET WHIZZ leti thi aur unki SOUL AMPLIFICATION ki class unki jagah baaki teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS lete the...

aaj 2 mahine ho chuke hai MAHI ko apne SOUL AMPLIFICATION ko trigger kiye hue..

2 mahine pehle ANWIR aur MORANA dwara kahi gayi baat jaise MABEL aur ALFREEN ke dimag me chhap si gayi thi...

bhale hi us din last words unki dost MAHI ne kahe the but fir bhi MABEL aur ALFREEN ne pehli baar us din khud ko chota mehsoos kiya tha...

un dono ko us din se MORANA dwara di gayi dhamki bhi hamesha yaad rehti thi jisse usne unhe next PHASE ke liye di thi...

unhe is baat ka ehsaas tha ki agar un dono ne khudko aur sashakth nahi banaya toh iska khaamiyaza unke saath saath MAHI ko bhi uthana padega...

par har champion ki tarah in saari negetive baaton ne MABEL aur ALFREEN ko piche nahi dhakela balki unhe aage push kiya...

unke determination ko aur strong bana diya tha ANWIR aur MORANA ke taunts ne...

aur yahi wajah thi ki us din ke baad se dono pehle se aur zyada focused hokar classes attend karti thi...

in do mahino me un dono ne hi apni puri jaan laga di thi apne apne SOUL ko trigger karne me par ye itna asaan bhi nahi tha but aaj do mahino ke kade aur lagatar prayas ke baad MAHI aur ALFREEN dono hi finally apne maksad me kaamiyab hue aur wo bhi same din me...

OPHILIA WHIZZ ki baat sun in do mahino ki puri mehnet un dono ke aakhon ke saamne ghumne lagi jisse yaad aur mehsoos kar dono hi muskura rahi thi....


NOX-MABEL, ALFREEN....kal se aap dono ki class bhi MAHI ke saath lagegi....hum ummid karte hain ki aap teeno hi bohot jald apne soul ke AMPLIFICATION percentage ko bhi start kar denge...

and SAVENTS,apne confidence level aur focus ko banaye rakhiye...

hume maalum hai ki 3 months se lagatar koshish karne ke baad bhi abhi tak aap sabko thodi bhi kaamiyabi nahi mili hai...

par ye stage har SAVENT ki life me aaya hai...jis dour se aap sab guzar rahe hain,ussi daur se kabhi hum bhi guzre the aur isiliye apne experience se hum bas aap sabko ye yakin dilate hain ki rukawaton ka ye daur bas temporary hai,permanent nahi...

agar aap sab determined rahe toh bohot jald MAHI,ALFREEN aur MABEL ki hi tarah aap sab bhi apne apne SOUL ko trigger karne me kaamiyab ho jaayenge....

OMMIN- aur taaki aap sab apne determination ko strong banaye rakhe aur apne soul ko trigger kar paayen, isiliye ek naya motivation hum aapko dete hain...

aur is motivation ka naam hai SWEEP-STAKE.....

kisi ko matlab pata hai is word ka???

SAVENT-an earnest effort for superiority or victory over other...

OMMIN- absolutely right....ab aap sab soch rahe honge ki is word ka yaa iske maayne ka aapke determination se kya lena dena...

lene dena hai...aur wo ye ki...

aap sabko CHOSENS me aaye 3 mahine guzar chuke hain....aur thik aaj hi ki tarah aaj se 3 mahine baad
jab is saal ke first 6 months guzar jaayenge toh har saal ki tarah is saal bhi CHOSEN'S me SWEEP-STAKE naam ke ek competition ka aayojan hoga....

ye competition pichle 25 thousand years se lagatar har saal CHOSENS me organize hota chala aaya hai jahan is INSTITUTION ke PHASE 3 ke SAVENTS participate karte hain.....

aur PHASE 1 aur PHASE 2 ke SAVENTS is competition ke audience hote hain...pure saal me bas ek baar hi aisa mouka aata hai jab PHASE 1 aur PHASE 2 ke SAVENTS apne last PHASE ke SAVENTS aur unke hunar ko live dekh paate hain...

par....is competition ko aap kaise dekhenge,ye aur koi nahi balki aap sab ya fir ye kahun ki aap sabki positions decide karte hain...

kehne ka matlab hai ki agar in 3 mahino me aapne apne SOUL ko trigger kar liya toh aap sab ko ek achi aur respected jagah provide ki jaati hai,jahan se aap sab us competition ka lutf utha paayenge...

wahin aapmese jitne bhi SAVENT apne soul ko trigger karne ke baad usse 1 percent bhi amplify karne me successful honge,unhe PHASE 2 ke STELLARS group ke saath baith kar is competition ko dekhne ka mouka milega....

par jitne bhi SAVENTS agle teen mahine me apne SOUL ko trigger karne tak me kaamiyab nahi hue,unhe sabse alag aur door khade hokar ek outsider ki tarah is competition ko dekhna padega...

understood.....


OMMIN WHIZZDER ki baat sun sach me sabhi SAVENTS ka moral high ho chuka tha..sabhi andar hi andar ye determine kar chuke the ki aane waale teen mahino me kisi bhi tarah khud ke SOUL ko wo trigger karke hi rahenge wahin in sabke beech ALFREEN aur MABEL jinhone already apne apne soul ko trigger kar liya tha,unhone man hi man thaan liya tha ki wo dono ki bhi tarah apne SOUL ko kamsekam 1 percent tak toh trigger karke hi rahenge...

kyunki yahi ek tarika tha second PHASE ke un do SAVENTS ANWIR aur MORANA ko apne talent ki jhalak dikhane ka....


NOX-aaj ki class yahin khatm karte hain SAVENTS...


ye bol teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS class se nikal gaye...

wahin unke jaate hi MABEL aur ALFREEN bhi turant MAHI ki class ki taraf nikal padi...



SOUL AMPLIFICATION CLASS:-



PRATIBHAVANITA

HOLD



apne CEREBRATION process ko pause kar MAHI ne is spell ko uccharit kiya aur fir apne cerebration process ko wapas shuru kar apni aakhen khol di par bole gaye spell ki wajah se MAHI ka Brain, body aur blood ek dusre ke saath connected hi raha....

aankh khulte hi MAHI ki nazar apne saamne khadi VIOLET WHIZZ par gayi jo usse hi dekh rahi thi...

WHIZZ ko dekh MAHI ko 2 mahine pehle shuru hue apne is naye class ka wo pehla din yaad aa gaya jab usne pehli baar apne SOUL ko amplify karne ke liye ye sab karna shuru kiya tha....

us din VIOLET WHIZZ ke chehre par ek alag hi excitement tha but aaj MAHI ko wo excitement WHIZZ ke chehre par bilkul bhi nahi dikha aur dikhta bhi kaise...???

2 mahine se lagatar koshish karne ke baawjud bhi MAHI apne SOUL ko 1 percent tak bhi AMPLIFY nahi kar paayi thi...

jaisa ki WHIZZ ne bataya tha,soul ko 1 percent tak AMPLIFY karne ke liye second spell bolne ke baad kamsekam 1 minute tak apne CEREBRATION process ko pause rakhna padta tha but abhi tak MAHI ki patience limit 40 seconds tak hi touch kar paayi thi.....

aisa nahi tha ki MAHI slow ho gayi thi..infact MAHI ab bhi baakiyon se bohot aage thi.. VIOLET WHIZZ ko khud bhi lagbhag 7 mahine lage the apne soul ko ek percent amplify karne me..

infact MARILIZA WHIZZ jo ki filhal CHOSEN'S ki incharge thi,unhe bhi 100 dino se upar lage the aisa karne me but MAHI ke ab tak ke record aur performance ko dekhkar VIOLET WHIZZ ko usse kuch zyada hi ummid thi...

ye saare thoughts MAHI ke brain me kuch seconds me hi ghum se gaye the par fir ek lambi saans le aur chhod MAHI ne apni aakhen phir se band kar li aur...



PRATIBANDHANA

BIND THE POWERS



khudke antarman ke us urja roopi soul ke pahunchne par ussi soul ko apne brain,body aur blood se jodne ke liye MAHI ne is spell ko uccharit kiya jiske baad un chaaron ka aapas me judaaw ho gaya....

aur aisa hote hi.....

ek tez dard ki leher MAHI ke pure sharir me doud gayi jiski wajah se paused CEREBRATION me hone ke baawjud MAHI ke jabde ek dusre se jud gaye...

behad taklif ho rahi thi usse par fir bhi ab tak MAHI ne jaise taise apne CEREBRATION ko pause hi rakha tha...

but dard itna zyada tha ki usse pata tha ki bas kuch hi seconds aur wo us dard ko jhel paayegi...

par itni negetive situation me bhi MAHI ka brain,uski body aur uska blood uski dhamniyon me soul ke saath khichaav karte hue bhi jaise usse prerit kar rahe the....

dard ko zabt karte hue MAHI apne andar ek dusre se Jude apne shakti ke chaaron shrothon ko dekh rahi thi aur saath hi soch rahi thi koi yukti is dard ko zyada der tak jhelne ki......

aur yunhi sochte sochte achanak uske dimag me wo drishya ghum gaya jab wo yahan CHOSENS aane waali thi....

wo drishya jisme usne pehli baar usse dekha tha jisne bachpan se lekar MAHI ke CHOSENS me aane se pehle tak usse gyan dene ka zariya niyukt kiya tha...

aur jaise hi MAHI ke dimag me MAHI ke us madadgaar ki jhalak dikhi,jaise ek chamatkar hua...

MAHI ka dard badhte badhte achanak utne me hi rook gaya....

dard kam ya gayab nahi hua tha,bas jitna tha,utne me hi rook gaya tha...

aur ye wahi waqt tha jab MAHI ne apna purana record 40 seconds ka tod diya tha aur ab seconds ki ghadi us magical minute ki taraf badh chuki thi...

wahin jab VIOLET WHIZZ ne bhi dekha ki 40 seconds cross karne ke baad bhi MAHI ka CEREBRATION process ab tak paused hi hai,toh wo hairan bhi hui aur khush bhi..

unhe phirse lagne laga ki ek baar firse MAHI ek naya record banayegi....

aankhon me utsukta liye wo MAHI ki taraf dekhti rahi aur saath hi seconds ko count karti rahi...

aur in baaton se anjaan MAHI apne madadgaar ke aks ko dekh rahi thi but ye chavi bhi uske dimag me bas kuch hi palon ke liye hi thi...

kuch seconds ke baad MAHI ke dimag me vibrations se hone lage jiske baad wo chavi gaayab ho gayi aur aisa hote hi MAHI ka thehra dard ek baar firse tez hone laga....

apne jabdo ko zor se dabate hue MAHI us dard ko zabt karne ki koshish karne lagi par jab uske liye wo dard asahaniyata ki lakir ko bhi paar gaya,toh usne aankhen kholne ki sochi par tabhi....


SNNNNNNNNN........


MAHI ke sharir se ek behad tez aur shaktishali urja nikal har taraf fail gayi....

jis class me is waqt MAHI thi,usse VIOLET WHIZZ ne ek shield se bandha hua tha,aur jaise hi wo urja us shield se takrayi,wo shield kisi khinche hue rubber ki tarah expand sa ho gaya...

wahin class ke baahar MAHI ka wait kar rahi MABEL aur ALFREEN ne bhi sheild ki expandation se nikalti urja ko mehsoos kiya tha..

unhone turant class ke andar jhaankne ki koshish ki par shield ki wajah se class ka door bhi opaque tha jiski wajah se andar ka kuch bhi dikh nahi raha tha...

khair,jaise hi MAHI ke andar se wo urja release hui,uske agle hi pal MAHI ne apni aakhen khol di...

apne chaaron taraf prakash aur apne andar ek ajeeb si taakat mehsoos kar MAHI ko shock laga...

wahin kuch seconds baad jab roshni kam hui aur class visible hua toh MAHI ne saamne VIOLET WHIZZ ko muskurate hue dekha...

wo unse kuch puchti,usse pehle hi....


VIOLET-congrats MAHI...tumhara soul 1 percent amplify ho chuka hai....


VIOLET WHIZZ ki baat sun MAHI ki khushi ka thikana nahi raha..wo kuch bol toh nahi rahi thi par uske chehre ka glow uske man ki haalat bayan kar rahe the...


VIOLET-aise hi confidence aur focus ke saath aage badhte raho MAHI...ek din tum apne imagination se bhi aage nikal jaaogi...

MAHI-thank you WHIZZ..ye sab aapke guidence ki wajah se hi possible ho paaya hai....


MAHI ki baat sun VIOLET WHIZZ MAHI ko uske rare talent ke baare me bohot kuch batana chahti thi but wo jaanti thi ki MAHI ka grounded rehna bhi zaroori hai aur isiliye...


VIOLET-aaj ki class khatm hui.... I'll see you tomorrow MAHI...


ye bol VIOLET WHIZZ class se nikal gayi...

unke class se nikalte hi unka bichaya shield bhi gayab ho gaya jiske turant baad MABEL aur ALFREEN class ke andar ghus gaye....


MABEL-yaar,ye abhi thodi der pehle kya hua tha..??? humne ek bohot hi strong force feel ki thi...

ALFREEN-haa yaar..aisa laga maano yahan class me kuch dhamaka sa hua ho...

MAHI-dhamaka jaisa kuch nahi tha,wo actually maine apne SOUL ka pehla percent AMPLIFY kar liya hai aur wo force ussi ki wajah se paida hua tha....

ALFREEN-what!!!! itni badi baat aur tu itni casually bata rahi hai....

apni baat keh ALFREEN MAHI ke gale lag gayi wahin uske baad MABEL ne bhi same kiya...

ALFREEN-kya yaar,yahan toh kuch hai hi nahi..agar hum hamare earth me hote toh is mauke par itni badi party karte ki sab dekhte reh jaate....

MAHI-oh hello ms day dreamer..agar hum earth me hote toh yahan jo chizen hoti hain,waisa kuch hota bhi hoga,aisa soch tak nahi paate...

ALFREEN-haan yaar,wo bhi hai....

MAHI-waise aaj tum dono se bhi mujhe ek alag energy feel ho rahi hai...

MABEL-wo toh hogi hi,hum dono ne bhi aaj apne apne soul ko trigger jo kar liya hai....

MAHI-what!!! seriously....!!!!

ALFREEN-ofcourse yaar...aur ab hum dono bhi kal se tere saath class karengi...


ALFREEN aur MABEL ki baat se MAHI itni zyada khush hui ki usse kuch bola hi nahi gaya..

usne bas dono ko hi kas kar gale laga liya....


MAHI-yaar,ye toh wakayi double,double nahi tripple khushi ka mouka hai...

ALFREEN-ofcourse..aur ab kal se hum teeno firse saath honge...

MABEL-hell ye.....

MAHI-haan par wo kal se hoga guyzz.but filhal hume ghar chalna chahiye hum already late hain...

MABEL-haan yaar.... let's go...

yunhi baat karte karte teeno apne ABODES ki taraf nikal gayi...raaste me ALFREEN aur MABEL ne MAHI ko 3 mahine baad hone wali competition aur usse judi saari baatein jo unhe aaj pata chali thi,wo batayi jisse sun MAHI bhi kaafi excited ho gayi...

teeno hi aaj kaafi khush the par un teeno me se koi EK ye nahi jaanta tha ki aaj raat usse ek ajeeb sa par ekdum zor ka jhatka lagne waala hai....


MIDNIGHT..........



YE MAI KAHAN AA GAYI...????AUR YE ITNA ANDHERA KAISA....???KHUDKE HAATH TAK NAHI DIKH RAHE......


apni baat keh wo ladki jo filhal kisi sakht si jagah par baithi hui thi,khadi ho gayi...

dikh toh kuch raha tha nahi aur isiliye andhon ki tarah haathon ko aage kar wo ek disha me dheere dheere aage badh gayi....

jo ho raha hai,wo kya hai aur most importantly kyun hai,usse kuch bhi samajh me nahi aa raha tha...

kaafi der tak yunhi andhon ki taraf haathon se aage ki taraf tatolti hui si wo aage badhi par us anjaan andhere raaste ka usse koi anth dikh hi nahi raha tha....

trasth si hokar woh wahin khadi ho gayi par aakhir kab tak...

kuch der baad wo wapas aage ki taraf badhne lagi..wo lagatar aage badh rahi thi...

andhera toh ab bhi chaaron taraf tha but ab usse dar ya ghabrahat mehsoos nahi ho rahi thi aur isiliye uski chaal tez ho gayi thi..

wo yunhi
aage badh hi rahi thi ki tabhi.....

usse khudse thodi door aage ki taraf ek jagah se niche aur upar ki taraf halki halki roshni dikhi jisse dekh usse ek ummid bandhi aur wo tezi se us roshni ko rays ki taraf badhi aur yunhi aage badhte hue jab wo us roshni waali jagah ke paas pahunchi toh wo chownki...

reason...


wo upri aur nichli roshni darasal ek bade se door ke upar aur niche ke hisse se aa rahi thi....

us ladki ko kuch samajh toh nahi aa raha tha but aage badh us door ko khatkhatne ke alawa uske paas aur koi option bhi nahi tha aur isiliye usne aage badh us door ko knock kiya par lagatar kayi baar knock karne ke baad bhi jab dusri taraf se koi response nahi aaya toh us ladki ne door ke right side par bane knob ko pakda aur jaise hi us ladki he us knob ko ghumaya,toh door khulta chala gaya....

jaise hi door pura khula,us ladki ko apna haath apne aakhon ke aage rakhna pada kyunki wo pura room bohot tez roshni se nahaya sa hua tha....

roshni itni tez thi ki usse kuch dikh hi nahi raha tha but fir bhi usne dheere se apna ek pair room ke andar badhaya aur tabhi.....


WELCOME ALFREEN....MAI TUMHARA HI INTAZAR KAR RAHA THA....


ek bhaari bharkam awaaz us ladki urf hamari ALFREEN ke kaano me gunji jisse sun wo hadbada si gayi..

abhi wo kuch kehti ki tabhi us room ki roshni madhyam padne lagi aur kuch hi der me wahan ka drishya clear hua jsse dekh ALFREEN fir chownki....

reason...

is waqt uske saamne koi shaksh khada tha par filhal uski peeth ALFREEN ke saamne thi...

saath hi us shaksh ke haath me ek talwar thi jo tez chamak rahi thi...

wahin us shaksh ke saamne do log neeche zamin par baithe hue the par hairani ki baat ye thi ki in dono ka chehra dikh nahi raha tha....

un dono ke chehron ke aage ek dhundh si chayi hui thi....

ALFREEN ye sab dekh hi rahi thi ki tabhi wo shaksh palta aur aisa hote hi ALFREEN ek baar firse shocked ho gayi kyunki us shaksh ka chehra uske saamne hokar bhi nahi tha..

kehne ka matlab hai ki neeche baithe un do logon ki hi tarah us shaksh ke chehre ke aage bhi dhundh thi....


ALFREEN-ye sab kya hai...???ye kaun si jagah hai..???mai yahan tak kaise pahunchi aur tum logon ke chehre kyun nahi dikh rahe...

SHAKSH-jis din maine tumhe dard diya,toh wo dard tumhe apne sharir ke pare bhi mehsoos hoga aur us dard ki koi samay seema bhi nahi hogi....

ALFREEN-RAAZ.......!!!!!


ek tez jhatka laga ALFREEN ko par RAAZ ka naam lene ke baad kuch aur hua jisse dekh uske jhatke ka asar aur badh gaya....

toh hua ye ki ALFREEN ke RAAZ ke naam lete hi RAAZ ke saamne jo do log neeche baithe hue the,unke chehron ke upar se dhundh hath gayi aur aisa hote hi un dono ke chehre dikhne lage jisse dekh...


ALFREEN-MOM......POPS.......


FLORIN aur MARIA jo ki RAAZ ke saamne neeche zamin par baithe hue the,unke chehre aur haath par kaafi cuts the aur jiski wajah se un jagahon se khun rees raha tha...

ye drishya dekh unki beti ka kaleja phat sa gaya...wo tezi se aage badhne ko hui par ye kya...????

uske pair jahan the, wahin jam se gaye the....usne bohot koshish ki,par ek inch bhi aage nahi badh paayi...

apne mom dad ki haalat aur apni bebasi dekh ALFREEN ki aankhen jhalak padi....


RAAZ-aansu bacha kar rakho ALFREEN...kahin aisa naa ho ki jab inke nikalne ka asli waqt aaye,tab ye bache hi naa hon...


ye baat bolte bolte RAAZ chalte hue ALFREEN ke paas pahuncha aur fir usse kuch kaha....

apni baat bol RAAZ wapas ghuma aur aage badhta hua FLORIN aur MARIA ke paas pahuncha...

uske haath ne khudki grip sword par mazboot ki aur.....


KHACHHH.....KHACHHHH......


bas ek flow me ek hi baar chali RAAZ ki sword aur agle hi pal FLORIN aur MARIA,dono ke sir dhad se alag ho chuke the....


ALFREEN-NAHI........................


ek tez cheekh ke saath ALFREEN apne neend se jaagi aur apne bed par uth kar baith gayi..is waqt uski saansen behad tez chal rahi thi...

aankhen jaise pathra si gayi thi...same position me kuch der baithe rehne ke baad wo turant bed se utri aur tezi se apne room ke baahar nikal apne mom dad ke room ki taraf doud padi....

kuch hi der me ALFREEN apne mom dad ke room ke saamne thi..darwaza khula hi tha aur is waqt FLORIN aur MARIA dono hi chain se so rahe the...

dheere dheere chalte hue ALFREEN apne mom dad ke paas pahunchi aur fir dheere se un dono ko hi halka sa chhu kar dekha maano confirm kar rahi ho ki wo dono sach me uske saamne hain...

apne mom dad ko touch karne ke baad ALFREEN kuch der tak wahin khadi un dono ko dekhti rahi aur fir palatkar wapas apne room ki taraf chal padi...

ye jaankar ki jo usne dekha,wo mahaz ek sapna tha,ye dekhkar ki uske mom dad ko kuch nahi hua hai aur wo chain se soye hue hain, ALFREEN ko chain ki saans leni thi par aisa hua nahi tha..

wo ab bhi pehle jitni hi tensed dikh rahi thi aur iska kaaran tha RAAZ ke kahe gaye wo aakhri shabd jo usne sapne me FLORIN aur MARIA ko maarne se pehle kahe the...

wo shabd maano gunj se rahe the ALFREEN ke dimag me...

ek baar,do baar,teen baar,baar baar wo shabd rook rook kar ALFREEN ko sunayi de rahe the...

tang aakar ALFREEN ne apne dono kaano ko apne haathon dwara zor se dhak liya...

par kuch der baad jab usne apne haath hataye toh ek baar firse wo shabd uske kaano me gunj uthe....



RAAZ- bramhaand ka har sach,har tathya JHUTA ho sakta hai,

par RAAZ agar kisi sapne me bhi ho,toh wo SAPNA zaroor SACH hoga....








AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....






AAPKA APNA V.J.....
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI VIOLET MAHI KO PHASE 2 KE DO SAVENTS ANWIR AUR MORANA SE MILWATI JINSE MAHI KI BEHES HO JAATI HAI...

AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-1


(UNFOLD THE RAAZ)



UPDATE-31



PLANET-ELYSIAN


PLACE-THE CHOSENS


2 MONTHS LATER:-




WELL DONE MABEL...BRILLIANT ALFREEN.....MAHI KE BAAD TUM DONO IS SAAL KE SECOND AUR THIRD SAVENT BAN CHUKE HO JISNE APNE SOUL AMPLIFICATION KO SUCCESSFULLY TRIGGER KAR LIYA HAI...

AND I AM VERY PROUD TO SAY THAT CHOSEN'S KE 25 THOUSAND YEARS KE ITIHAS ME KISI SEASON KE PEHLE 3 MONTHS ME 3 SAVENTS KA YE ACHIEVEMENT PAANA,BOHOT KAM BAAR HUA HAI....


bohot proudly OPHILIA WHIZZ ne ye baat kahi jisse sun MABEL aur ALFREEN khud bhi bohot gourvankik mehsoos kar rahe the.

subah ka waqt hai.... MAHI ki classes toh VIOLET WHIZZ leti thi aur unki SOUL AMPLIFICATION ki class unki jagah baaki teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS lete the...

aaj 2 mahine ho chuke hai MAHI ko apne SOUL AMPLIFICATION ko trigger kiye hue..

2 mahine pehle ANWIR aur MORANA dwara kahi gayi baat jaise MABEL aur ALFREEN ke dimag me chhap si gayi thi...

bhale hi us din last words unki dost MAHI ne kahe the but fir bhi MABEL aur ALFREEN ne pehli baar us din khud ko chota mehsoos kiya tha...

un dono ko us din se MORANA dwara di gayi dhamki bhi hamesha yaad rehti thi jisse usne unhe next PHASE ke liye di thi...

unhe is baat ka ehsaas tha ki agar un dono ne khudko aur sashakth nahi banaya toh iska khaamiyaza unke saath saath MAHI ko bhi uthana padega...

par har champion ki tarah in saari negetive baaton ne MABEL aur ALFREEN ko piche nahi dhakela balki unhe aage push kiya...

unke determination ko aur strong bana diya tha ANWIR aur MORANA ke taunts ne...

aur yahi wajah thi ki us din ke baad se dono pehle se aur zyada focused hokar classes attend karti thi...

in do mahino me un dono ne hi apni puri jaan laga di thi apne apne SOUL ko trigger karne me par ye itna asaan bhi nahi tha but aaj do mahino ke kade aur lagatar prayas ke baad MAHI aur ALFREEN dono hi finally apne maksad me kaamiyab hue aur wo bhi same din me...

OPHILIA WHIZZ ki baat sun in do mahino ki puri mehnet un dono ke aakhon ke saamne ghumne lagi jisse yaad aur mehsoos kar dono hi muskura rahi thi....


NOX-MABEL, ALFREEN....kal se aap dono ki class bhi MAHI ke saath lagegi....hum ummid karte hain ki aap teeno hi bohot jald apne soul ke AMPLIFICATION percentage ko bhi start kar denge...

and SAVENTS,apne confidence level aur focus ko banaye rakhiye...

hume maalum hai ki 3 months se lagatar koshish karne ke baad bhi abhi tak aap sabko thodi bhi kaamiyabi nahi mili hai...

par ye stage har SAVENT ki life me aaya hai...jis dour se aap sab guzar rahe hain,ussi daur se kabhi hum bhi guzre the aur isiliye apne experience se hum bas aap sabko ye yakin dilate hain ki rukawaton ka ye daur bas temporary hai,permanent nahi...

agar aap sab determined rahe toh bohot jald MAHI,ALFREEN aur MABEL ki hi tarah aap sab bhi apne apne SOUL ko trigger karne me kaamiyab ho jaayenge....

OMMIN- aur taaki aap sab apne determination ko strong banaye rakhe aur apne soul ko trigger kar paayen, isiliye ek naya motivation hum aapko dete hain...

aur is motivation ka naam hai SWEEP-STAKE.....

kisi ko matlab pata hai is word ka???

SAVENT-an earnest effort for superiority or victory over other...

OMMIN- absolutely right....ab aap sab soch rahe honge ki is word ka yaa iske maayne ka aapke determination se kya lena dena...

lene dena hai...aur wo ye ki...

aap sabko CHOSENS me aaye 3 mahine guzar chuke hain....aur thik aaj hi ki tarah aaj se 3 mahine baad
jab is saal ke first 6 months guzar jaayenge toh har saal ki tarah is saal bhi CHOSEN'S me SWEEP-STAKE naam ke ek competition ka aayojan hoga....

ye competition pichle 25 thousand years se lagatar har saal CHOSENS me organize hota chala aaya hai jahan is INSTITUTION ke PHASE 3 ke SAVENTS participate karte hain.....

aur PHASE 1 aur PHASE 2 ke SAVENTS is competition ke audience hote hain...pure saal me bas ek baar hi aisa mouka aata hai jab PHASE 1 aur PHASE 2 ke SAVENTS apne last PHASE ke SAVENTS aur unke hunar ko live dekh paate hain...

par....is competition ko aap kaise dekhenge,ye aur koi nahi balki aap sab ya fir ye kahun ki aap sabki positions decide karte hain...

kehne ka matlab hai ki agar in 3 mahino me aapne apne SOUL ko trigger kar liya toh aap sab ko ek achi aur respected jagah provide ki jaati hai,jahan se aap sab us competition ka lutf utha paayenge...

wahin aapmese jitne bhi SAVENT apne soul ko trigger karne ke baad usse 1 percent bhi amplify karne me successful honge,unhe PHASE 2 ke STELLARS group ke saath baith kar is competition ko dekhne ka mouka milega....

par jitne bhi SAVENTS agle teen mahine me apne SOUL ko trigger karne tak me kaamiyab nahi hue,unhe sabse alag aur door khade hokar ek outsider ki tarah is competition ko dekhna padega...

understood.....


OMMIN WHIZZDER ki baat sun sach me sabhi SAVENTS ka moral high ho chuka tha..sabhi andar hi andar ye determine kar chuke the ki aane waale teen mahino me kisi bhi tarah khud ke SOUL ko wo trigger karke hi rahenge wahin in sabke beech ALFREEN aur MABEL jinhone already apne apne soul ko trigger kar liya tha,unhone man hi man thaan liya tha ki wo dono ki bhi tarah apne SOUL ko kamsekam 1 percent tak toh trigger karke hi rahenge...

kyunki yahi ek tarika tha second PHASE ke un do SAVENTS ANWIR aur MORANA ko apne talent ki jhalak dikhane ka....


NOX-aaj ki class yahin khatm karte hain SAVENTS...


ye bol teeno WHIZZ aur WHIZZDERS class se nikal gaye...

wahin unke jaate hi MABEL aur ALFREEN bhi turant MAHI ki class ki taraf nikal padi...



SOUL AMPLIFICATION CLASS:-



PRATIBHAVANITA

HOLD



apne CEREBRATION process ko pause kar MAHI ne is spell ko uccharit kiya aur fir apne cerebration process ko wapas shuru kar apni aakhen khol di par bole gaye spell ki wajah se MAHI ka Brain, body aur blood ek dusre ke saath connected hi raha....

aankh khulte hi MAHI ki nazar apne saamne khadi VIOLET WHIZZ par gayi jo usse hi dekh rahi thi...

WHIZZ ko dekh MAHI ko 2 mahine pehle shuru hue apne is naye class ka wo pehla din yaad aa gaya jab usne pehli baar apne SOUL ko amplify karne ke liye ye sab karna shuru kiya tha....

us din VIOLET WHIZZ ke chehre par ek alag hi excitement tha but aaj MAHI ko wo excitement WHIZZ ke chehre par bilkul bhi nahi dikha aur dikhta bhi kaise...???

2 mahine se lagatar koshish karne ke baawjud bhi MAHI apne SOUL ko 1 percent tak bhi AMPLIFY nahi kar paayi thi...

jaisa ki WHIZZ ne bataya tha,soul ko 1 percent tak AMPLIFY karne ke liye second spell bolne ke baad kamsekam 1 minute tak apne CEREBRATION process ko pause rakhna padta tha but abhi tak MAHI ki patience limit 40 seconds tak hi touch kar paayi thi.....

aisa nahi tha ki MAHI slow ho gayi thi..infact MAHI ab bhi baakiyon se bohot aage thi.. VIOLET WHIZZ ko khud bhi lagbhag 7 mahine lage the apne soul ko ek percent amplify karne me..

infact MARILIZA WHIZZ jo ki filhal CHOSEN'S ki incharge thi,unhe bhi 100 dino se upar lage the aisa karne me but MAHI ke ab tak ke record aur performance ko dekhkar VIOLET WHIZZ ko usse kuch zyada hi ummid thi...

ye saare thoughts MAHI ke brain me kuch seconds me hi ghum se gaye the par fir ek lambi saans le aur chhod MAHI ne apni aakhen phir se band kar li aur...



PRATIBANDHANA

BIND THE POWERS



khudke antarman ke us urja roopi soul ke pahunchne par ussi soul ko apne brain,body aur blood se jodne ke liye MAHI ne is spell ko uccharit kiya jiske baad un chaaron ka aapas me judaaw ho gaya....

aur aisa hote hi.....

ek tez dard ki leher MAHI ke pure sharir me doud gayi jiski wajah se paused CEREBRATION me hone ke baawjud MAHI ke jabde ek dusre se jud gaye...

behad taklif ho rahi thi usse par fir bhi ab tak MAHI ne jaise taise apne CEREBRATION ko pause hi rakha tha...

but dard itna zyada tha ki usse pata tha ki bas kuch hi seconds aur wo us dard ko jhel paayegi...

par itni negetive situation me bhi MAHI ka brain,uski body aur uska blood uski dhamniyon me soul ke saath khichaav karte hue bhi jaise usse prerit kar rahe the....

dard ko zabt karte hue MAHI apne andar ek dusre se Jude apne shakti ke chaaron shrothon ko dekh rahi thi aur saath hi soch rahi thi koi yukti is dard ko zyada der tak jhelne ki......

aur yunhi sochte sochte achanak uske dimag me wo drishya ghum gaya jab wo yahan CHOSENS aane waali thi....

wo drishya jisme usne pehli baar usse dekha tha jisne bachpan se lekar MAHI ke CHOSENS me aane se pehle tak usse gyan dene ka zariya niyukt kiya tha...

aur jaise hi MAHI ke dimag me MAHI ke us madadgaar ki jhalak dikhi,jaise ek chamatkar hua...

MAHI ka dard badhte badhte achanak utne me hi rook gaya....

dard kam ya gayab nahi hua tha,bas jitna tha,utne me hi rook gaya tha...

aur ye wahi waqt tha jab MAHI ne apna purana record 40 seconds ka tod diya tha aur ab seconds ki ghadi us magical minute ki taraf badh chuki thi...

wahin jab VIOLET WHIZZ ne bhi dekha ki 40 seconds cross karne ke baad bhi MAHI ka CEREBRATION process ab tak paused hi hai,toh wo hairan bhi hui aur khush bhi..

unhe phirse lagne laga ki ek baar firse MAHI ek naya record banayegi....

aankhon me utsukta liye wo MAHI ki taraf dekhti rahi aur saath hi seconds ko count karti rahi...

aur in baaton se anjaan MAHI apne madadgaar ke aks ko dekh rahi thi but ye chavi bhi uske dimag me bas kuch hi palon ke liye hi thi...

kuch seconds ke baad MAHI ke dimag me vibrations se hone lage jiske baad wo chavi gaayab ho gayi aur aisa hote hi MAHI ka thehra dard ek baar firse tez hone laga....

apne jabdo ko zor se dabate hue MAHI us dard ko zabt karne ki koshish karne lagi par jab uske liye wo dard asahaniyata ki lakir ko bhi paar gaya,toh usne aankhen kholne ki sochi par tabhi....


SNNNNNNNNN........


MAHI ke sharir se ek behad tez aur shaktishali urja nikal har taraf fail gayi....

jis class me is waqt MAHI thi,usse VIOLET WHIZZ ne ek shield se bandha hua tha,aur jaise hi wo urja us shield se takrayi,wo shield kisi khinche hue rubber ki tarah expand sa ho gaya...

wahin class ke baahar MAHI ka wait kar rahi MABEL aur ALFREEN ne bhi sheild ki expandation se nikalti urja ko mehsoos kiya tha..

unhone turant class ke andar jhaankne ki koshish ki par shield ki wajah se class ka door bhi opaque tha jiski wajah se andar ka kuch bhi dikh nahi raha tha...

khair,jaise hi MAHI ke andar se wo urja release hui,uske agle hi pal MAHI ne apni aakhen khol di...

apne chaaron taraf prakash aur apne andar ek ajeeb si taakat mehsoos kar MAHI ko shock laga...

wahin kuch seconds baad jab roshni kam hui aur class visible hua toh MAHI ne saamne VIOLET WHIZZ ko muskurate hue dekha...

wo unse kuch puchti,usse pehle hi....


VIOLET-congrats MAHI...tumhara soul 1 percent amplify ho chuka hai....


VIOLET WHIZZ ki baat sun MAHI ki khushi ka thikana nahi raha..wo kuch bol toh nahi rahi thi par uske chehre ka glow uske man ki haalat bayan kar rahe the...


VIOLET-aise hi confidence aur focus ke saath aage badhte raho MAHI...ek din tum apne imagination se bhi aage nikal jaaogi...

MAHI-thank you WHIZZ..ye sab aapke guidence ki wajah se hi possible ho paaya hai....


MAHI ki baat sun VIOLET WHIZZ MAHI ko uske rare talent ke baare me bohot kuch batana chahti thi but wo jaanti thi ki MAHI ka grounded rehna bhi zaroori hai aur isiliye...


VIOLET-aaj ki class khatm hui.... I'll see you tomorrow MAHI...


ye bol VIOLET WHIZZ class se nikal gayi...

unke class se nikalte hi unka bichaya shield bhi gayab ho gaya jiske turant baad MABEL aur ALFREEN class ke andar ghus gaye....


MABEL-yaar,ye abhi thodi der pehle kya hua tha..??? humne ek bohot hi strong force feel ki thi...

ALFREEN-haa yaar..aisa laga maano yahan class me kuch dhamaka sa hua ho...

MAHI-dhamaka jaisa kuch nahi tha,wo actually maine apne SOUL ka pehla percent AMPLIFY kar liya hai aur wo force ussi ki wajah se paida hua tha....

ALFREEN-what!!!! itni badi baat aur tu itni casually bata rahi hai....

apni baat keh ALFREEN MAHI ke gale lag gayi wahin uske baad MABEL ne bhi same kiya...

ALFREEN-kya yaar,yahan toh kuch hai hi nahi..agar hum hamare earth me hote toh is mauke par itni badi party karte ki sab dekhte reh jaate....

MAHI-oh hello ms day dreamer..agar hum earth me hote toh yahan jo chizen hoti hain,waisa kuch hota bhi hoga,aisa soch tak nahi paate...

ALFREEN-haan yaar,wo bhi hai....

MAHI-waise aaj tum dono se bhi mujhe ek alag energy feel ho rahi hai...

MABEL-wo toh hogi hi,hum dono ne bhi aaj apne apne soul ko trigger jo kar liya hai....

MAHI-what!!! seriously....!!!!

ALFREEN-ofcourse yaar...aur ab hum dono bhi kal se tere saath class karengi...


ALFREEN aur MABEL ki baat se MAHI itni zyada khush hui ki usse kuch bola hi nahi gaya..

usne bas dono ko hi kas kar gale laga liya....


MAHI-yaar,ye toh wakayi double,double nahi tripple khushi ka mouka hai...

ALFREEN-ofcourse..aur ab kal se hum teeno firse saath honge...

MABEL-hell ye.....

MAHI-haan par wo kal se hoga guyzz.but filhal hume ghar chalna chahiye hum already late hain...

MABEL-haan yaar.... let's go...

yunhi baat karte karte teeno apne ABODES ki taraf nikal gayi...raaste me ALFREEN aur MABEL ne MAHI ko 3 mahine baad hone wali competition aur usse judi saari baatein jo unhe aaj pata chali thi,wo batayi jisse sun MAHI bhi kaafi excited ho gayi...

teeno hi aaj kaafi khush the par un teeno me se koi EK ye nahi jaanta tha ki aaj raat usse ek ajeeb sa par ekdum zor ka jhatka lagne waala hai....


MIDNIGHT..........



YE MAI KAHAN AA GAYI...????AUR YE ITNA ANDHERA KAISA....???KHUDKE HAATH TAK NAHI DIKH RAHE......


apni baat keh wo ladki jo filhal kisi sakht si jagah par baithi hui thi,khadi ho gayi...

dikh toh kuch raha tha nahi aur isiliye andhon ki tarah haathon ko aage kar wo ek disha me dheere dheere aage badh gayi....

jo ho raha hai,wo kya hai aur most importantly kyun hai,usse kuch bhi samajh me nahi aa raha tha...

kaafi der tak yunhi andhon ki taraf haathon se aage ki taraf tatolti hui si wo aage badhi par us anjaan andhere raaste ka usse koi anth dikh hi nahi raha tha....

trasth si hokar woh wahin khadi ho gayi par aakhir kab tak...

kuch der baad wo wapas aage ki taraf badhne lagi..wo lagatar aage badh rahi thi...

andhera toh ab bhi chaaron taraf tha but ab usse dar ya ghabrahat mehsoos nahi ho rahi thi aur isiliye uski chaal tez ho gayi thi..

wo yunhi
aage badh hi rahi thi ki tabhi.....

usse khudse thodi door aage ki taraf ek jagah se niche aur upar ki taraf halki halki roshni dikhi jisse dekh usse ek ummid bandhi aur wo tezi se us roshni ko rays ki taraf badhi aur yunhi aage badhte hue jab wo us roshni waali jagah ke paas pahunchi toh wo chownki...

reason...


wo upri aur nichli roshni darasal ek bade se door ke upar aur niche ke hisse se aa rahi thi....

us ladki ko kuch samajh toh nahi aa raha tha but aage badh us door ko khatkhatne ke alawa uske paas aur koi option bhi nahi tha aur isiliye usne aage badh us door ko knock kiya par lagatar kayi baar knock karne ke baad bhi jab dusri taraf se koi response nahi aaya toh us ladki ne door ke right side par bane knob ko pakda aur jaise hi us ladki he us knob ko ghumaya,toh door khulta chala gaya....

jaise hi door pura khula,us ladki ko apna haath apne aakhon ke aage rakhna pada kyunki wo pura room bohot tez roshni se nahaya sa hua tha....

roshni itni tez thi ki usse kuch dikh hi nahi raha tha but fir bhi usne dheere se apna ek pair room ke andar badhaya aur tabhi.....


WELCOME ALFREEN....MAI TUMHARA HI INTAZAR KAR RAHA THA....


ek bhaari bharkam awaaz us ladki urf hamari ALFREEN ke kaano me gunji jisse sun wo hadbada si gayi..

abhi wo kuch kehti ki tabhi us room ki roshni madhyam padne lagi aur kuch hi der me wahan ka drishya clear hua jsse dekh ALFREEN fir chownki....

reason...

is waqt uske saamne koi shaksh khada tha par filhal uski peeth ALFREEN ke saamne thi...

saath hi us shaksh ke haath me ek talwar thi jo tez chamak rahi thi...

wahin us shaksh ke saamne do log neeche zamin par baithe hue the par hairani ki baat ye thi ki in dono ka chehra dikh nahi raha tha....

un dono ke chehron ke aage ek dhundh si chayi hui thi....

ALFREEN ye sab dekh hi rahi thi ki tabhi wo shaksh palta aur aisa hote hi ALFREEN ek baar firse shocked ho gayi kyunki us shaksh ka chehra uske saamne hokar bhi nahi tha..

kehne ka matlab hai ki neeche baithe un do logon ki hi tarah us shaksh ke chehre ke aage bhi dhundh thi....


ALFREEN-ye sab kya hai...???ye kaun si jagah hai..???mai yahan tak kaise pahunchi aur tum logon ke chehre kyun nahi dikh rahe...

SHAKSH-jis din maine tumhe dard diya,toh wo dard tumhe apne sharir ke pare bhi mehsoos hoga aur us dard ki koi samay seema bhi nahi hogi....

ALFREEN-RAAZ.......!!!!!


ek tez jhatka laga ALFREEN ko par RAAZ ka naam lene ke baad kuch aur hua jisse dekh uske jhatke ka asar aur badh gaya....

toh hua ye ki ALFREEN ke RAAZ ke naam lete hi RAAZ ke saamne jo do log neeche baithe hue the,unke chehron ke upar se dhundh hath gayi aur aisa hote hi un dono ke chehre dikhne lage jisse dekh...


ALFREEN-MOM......POPS.......


FLORIN aur MARIA jo ki RAAZ ke saamne neeche zamin par baithe hue the,unke chehre aur haath par kaafi cuts the aur jiski wajah se un jagahon se khun rees raha tha...

ye drishya dekh unki beti ka kaleja phat sa gaya...wo tezi se aage badhne ko hui par ye kya...????

uske pair jahan the, wahin jam se gaye the....usne bohot koshish ki,par ek inch bhi aage nahi badh paayi...

apne mom dad ki haalat aur apni bebasi dekh ALFREEN ki aankhen jhalak padi....


RAAZ-aansu bacha kar rakho ALFREEN...kahin aisa naa ho ki jab inke nikalne ka asli waqt aaye,tab ye bache hi naa hon...


ye baat bolte bolte RAAZ chalte hue ALFREEN ke paas pahuncha aur fir usse kuch kaha....

apni baat bol RAAZ wapas ghuma aur aage badhta hua FLORIN aur MARIA ke paas pahuncha...

uske haath ne khudki grip sword par mazboot ki aur.....


KHACHHH.....KHACHHHH......


bas ek flow me ek hi baar chali RAAZ ki sword aur agle hi pal FLORIN aur MARIA,dono ke sir dhad se alag ho chuke the....


ALFREEN-NAHI........................


ek tez cheekh ke saath ALFREEN apne neend se jaagi aur apne bed par uth kar baith gayi..is waqt uski saansen behad tez chal rahi thi...

aankhen jaise pathra si gayi thi...same position me kuch der baithe rehne ke baad wo turant bed se utri aur tezi se apne room ke baahar nikal apne mom dad ke room ki taraf doud padi....

kuch hi der me ALFREEN apne mom dad ke room ke saamne thi..darwaza khula hi tha aur is waqt FLORIN aur MARIA dono hi chain se so rahe the...

dheere dheere chalte hue ALFREEN apne mom dad ke paas pahunchi aur fir dheere se un dono ko hi halka sa chhu kar dekha maano confirm kar rahi ho ki wo dono sach me uske saamne hain...

apne mom dad ko touch karne ke baad ALFREEN kuch der tak wahin khadi un dono ko dekhti rahi aur fir palatkar wapas apne room ki taraf chal padi...

ye jaankar ki jo usne dekha,wo mahaz ek sapna tha,ye dekhkar ki uske mom dad ko kuch nahi hua hai aur wo chain se soye hue hain, ALFREEN ko chain ki saans leni thi par aisa hua nahi tha..

wo ab bhi pehle jitni hi tensed dikh rahi thi aur iska kaaran tha RAAZ ke kahe gaye wo aakhri shabd jo usne sapne me FLORIN aur MARIA ko maarne se pehle kahe the...

wo shabd maano gunj se rahe the ALFREEN ke dimag me...

ek baar,do baar,teen baar,baar baar wo shabd rook rook kar ALFREEN ko sunayi de rahe the...

tang aakar ALFREEN ne apne dono kaano ko apne haathon dwara zor se dhak liya...

par kuch der baad jab usne apne haath hataye toh ek baar firse wo shabd uske kaano me gunj uthe....



RAAZ- bramhaand ka har sach,har tathya JHUTA ho sakta hai,

par RAAZ agar kisi sapne me bhi ho,toh wo SAPNA zaroor SACH hoga....








AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI....






AAPKA APNA V.J.....
Wonderful fantastic update bhai
 
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