Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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Super Duper Hit & Fantastic & Awesome & Gajab & Very Nice Update Bro

patak udane m busy tha pta nhi chla kb time nikal gya

Vese update kamaal ka h dono isliye fight kr rhe the ki mahi help ho ske gud job

Ohh videous mahi k samne maja aaya chahe mayavi hi sahi dekho y hoga ab kya kregi mahi



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Khtrnaak...to fallon ke merge hone ke baad mahi ki tark shakti aur jyada badh chuki h beshak ab wo ek ho chuki h pr us ek hone ki process me usne 2 alg life ka experience liya hua h isliye wo aasani se wooger aur Griffin ki fight ka karan smjh gyi ... Aur filhal 2 chunotiyon ko paar krke mahi ka samna ho gya mayavi videous se beshak ho mayavi pr h to videous hi na to aage jo hone wala h wo apratyashit hi hoga ...jaise raaz ko jab agarshen ki talwar milte waqt uske samne videous ka mayavi roop hi tha...usi roop ki shart ke karan ek dfa ek pura planet tabah ho gya tha.. Wo to raaz ne us shart ko pura kr diya tha wrna agli baar aur bhi kuchh ho skta tha ab yaha dekhte h kya hota h...
Khair chalte h raaz ki taraf beshak wo yaddast kho chuka h apni par dil uska kya wo to kuchh bhi nhi bhulta h kbhi jab raaz ne us mahila aur uss bacche ka pyaar dekha tha uss waqt raaz ke deemag ya yaddast se uska koo sambandh nhi tha wo to uska dil tha jo ro rha tha apne mata pita ki yaad me waha ek kami ek khalipan ek bahut bda dukh jo uss yaddast ka aavran odhe hue daba hua tha jo filhal raaz ki smjh se dur h ki kyu uski aankho me aansu the... In sab se anjaan bahari roop se fit pr andr se tuta hua insaan h iss waqt raaz...aur uski jhalak hme yhi dekhne ko mil gyi....

Ab jab mahi galen pahuchne wali h to dekhte h kitna waqt aur lg jata h iss sab me aur raaz yaddast aane ke baad kis trha se react krta h mahi pr jo uska wo gussa hoga jo vikram ke liye hoga pr futega mahi pr...
Dekhte h to kya hota h aage..intzaar rhega brother
thanks for the beautiful review brother...yunhi saath bane rahiye
 

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Wooger and Griffin are arguing like childrens, :lotpot: although according to me, both are correct, The only difference is the viewpoint. Like Mahi and Raaz, they are the same, their thinking and understanding meet with their masters.
Ever since Raaz is back to normal, he has completely changed and I was very sad to see him crying today because I remember the moment when Raaz kill his parents with his hands, Even though they was angel, but it hurts. :angrysad: I think Errapel will fill the gap inside Raaz.
Mahi has found a new path, but after reading today's update it seems that this path is going to be very difficult and in last challenge was Videous , which means very difficult, Well what will be the reaction of Raaz when he sees Mahi?

As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.

Thank You...

๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ–ค
u liked the lines,thanks brother...well,still there's a lot of work that has to be done...

so be along
 

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Nice update
Behtreen.. bhut khub ....๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ
Thank u dost asi amazing story ke liye ...or time pr hm se judne ke liye...bhut 2 ache shbdo ka sangrh krte ho ...๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ
Review vala portion brand or work ki value bda deta he .... isliye achi story hone ke sath 2 review dene vale ki worksheet bhi behtreen ho to jis cheez ko ap dund rhe ho ๐Ÿ’ฏ% unique hoga ...thank u my friend ๐Ÿ˜Š
I agrr
Bro,I agree with u ๐Ÿ˜Škhaskar mahi ko lekar jo kha us pr ...kher last patte to vj bhai hi open karenge .... akhirkar in sare kirdaro ke rachiyta jo he ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜€ ..
Videous ko fir se dekh behad khushi hui.
To pahale hurdle ne usake human form ko active kiya to dusare ne usaki angel from ko active hua.
Nice updates bro
Awesome update bro
Zabardast update
Excellent update bhai

Superb scenes

Superb dialogues

Amazing ....
Nice update
Super update hai Bhai
MAst update hai bhai
Fabulous update
super fantastic update bhai
mind blowing
Nice update bro.
Kia baat h Mahi tumne tow kamal ker dia lekin sabse badi rukawat samne khadi h koyi nahi isko bhi paar ker hi legi Mahi
Bahot shaandaar mazedaar damdaar lajawab update VJ bhai
Thanks for lovely and wonderful update
Fantastic update
Jabardasttt updates bhai
mast update bhai ji
Superb update bhai...
Mindblowing Awsum fabulous superb update.........
keep posting bhai............
waiting for next update...........
Nice update bhai
Kafi maza aayega bhai waiting for new update
Awesome fantabulous extraordinary speechless update
Ati uttam Osadharan bohot khub update
KEEP IT UP AND AS ALWAYS WAITING FOR
Awesome update bro ๐Ÿ‘Œ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘
Superb Update Bro...
Waiting For Next
Super Duper Hit & Fantastic & Awesome & Gajab & Very Nice Update Bro

patak udane m busy tha pta nhi chla kb time nikal gya

Vese update kamaal ka h dono isliye fight kr rhe the ki mahi help ho ske gud job

Ohh videous mahi k samne maja aaya chahe mayavi hi sahi dekho y hoga ab kya kregi mahi



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thanks brothers..be along
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF RAAZ EK BAAR PHIRSE EMOTIONAL HO JAATA HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF MAHI AUR GRIFFIN BOULEVARD KE TEESRI AUR AAKHRI CHUNOUTI JOKI MAYAVI VIDEOUS HAI,USKE SAMNE KHADE HAIN...


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3


( THE DEVIL'S HAVEN,THE SACRIFICE & THE PERFECT EPILOGUE )



UPDATE-129



PLACE-INSIDE BOULEVARD







KAISI HO MAHI....????



us cloud cover se nikle mayavi VIDEOUS ke mooh se nikli ye baat jisse sun chup hi rahi MAHI jispar...


VIDEOUS-kya baat hai..???itni khamosh...!!!jiski wajah se tum is kahani ka hissa ho, ussi se berukhi...!!!

MAHI-tum sach nahi ho...

VIDEOUS-sahi kaha...tumhare hi PITAH dwara rachi ek maaya hun mai..

par saath hi mai woh jhooth hun jiska asar mere is roop ke asli sach ka hai...

mujhe paar karte hi tum SHIELD cross kar paaogii,but trust me,ye asaan nahi hone waala...

jaanti ho kyun..???

tumhare PITAH ki ek baat bohot achi hai...woh bhedbhaav nahi karte...naa hi cheezen asaan karte hain,bhale hi saamne unki beti hi kyun naa hon...???

dekho naa,sirf ek maaya hun mai,par nirman mera waisa hi kiya hai unhone jaisa asli VIDEOUS ka hai...

aur itna toh tum ab tak jaan hi gayi hogi ki VIDEOUS ka dimag kitna tez aur khatarnaak hai...

aur agar nahi samjhi ho, toh ab samajh jaaogi...

toh chalo, apni chunouti sun aur samajh lo...

kyunki tumne abhi tak apni aloukikta haasil nahi ki hai, isiliye tum aur tumhara ye ansh GRIFFIN mujhse ek pyscical battle karoge....

aisa karte waqt mere piche aur tum dono ke saamne lagi ye SHIELD khul jaayegi...

par pura khulne ke baad phir kaafi dheere dheere kisi darwaze ki tarah
ye SHIELD band bhi ho jaayegi...

is SHIELD ke band hone se pehle isse paar kar GALEN pahunchne ke MAHI tumhare paas kul do raaste hain...

pehla,mujhe harao aur aage badh jaao...

dusra tarika kaafi interesting hai aur mera favourite bhi....

agar SHIELD ke band hone se pehle tum mujhe naa bhi hara paayi toh bhi mujhse hokar tum aage badh sakti ho...

par uske liye tumhe apne is ansh GRIFFIN ko maarna hoga...

MAHI-what...???mai aisa kabhi nahi karungi...


shock hote hue kahi ye baat MAHI ne jispar..


VIDEOUS-tumhari marzi... par agar tumne aisa nahi kiya toh phir ye jagah puri tarah nasht ho jaayegi aur tum wapas ASTER pahunch jaaogi..

aur agar aisa ho gaya toh tum RAAZ tak kabhi nahi pahunch paaogi...

iska matlab jaanti ho naa tum...!!!

agar tum RAAZ tak nahi pahunchi toh uski memory kabhi nahi loutegi..

result,woh wahin GALEN me hi hamesha ke liye kaid hokar reh jaayega aur bina lade hi VIDEOUS jeet jaayega...


mayavi VIDEOUS ki baat sun tention me aa gayi thi MAHI jisse feel kar..


GRIFFIN-MAHI..negetive kyun ho rahi hai...???tumhe aage jaakar isse bohot zyada bade imtihaan dene hain...

isiliye panick karna chhodo aur focus karo..tumhe har haal me is chunouti ko paar karte hue GALEN pahunchna hai...


GRIFFIN ki baat sunane ke baad bhi MAHI kuch der yunhi ashaant man se khadi rahi par phir khudko relax kar..


MAHI-mai taiyar hun....

VIDEOUS-great.... toh shuru karte hain...


apni baat bolte bolte apne haathon ko tezi se lehrate hue MAHI aur GRIFFIN ki taraf tezi se aage badha VIDEOUS aur....

DHAAKKK....

VIDEOUS ke apne haathon ko ghumane se ek behadh hi strong push force generate hui jiske asar se piche ki taraf udte hue gire dono MAHI aur GRIFFIN par girte hi woh dono turant khade bhi ho gaye ho aur...


MAHI-tumne toh kaha tha ki ye ek pyscical battle hogi...!!!

VIDEOUS-aur ye wahi hai..jis force se tum dono gire ho,woh mere haathon ki taakat se hi generate hui hai...

ab chote baccho ki tarah complaint karna band karo and get on with it...


VIDEOUS ki baat khatm bhi nahi hui thi ki tabhi GRIFFIN zigzag pattern me chhalang maarti hui uski taraf tezi se badhi..

wahin MAHI bhi tezi se aage badhi..

aage badhte hue MAHI dekh rahi thi ki jaisa us mayavi VIDEOUS ne kaha tha,wahi ho raha hai..

VIDEOUS ke peeche open ho chuki SHIELD ab dheere dheere wapas band ho rahi hai....

ye dekhte hue MAHI VIDEOUS ke kareeb pahunch chuki thi...wahin GRIFFIN bhi zigzag pattern lete hue VIDEOUS ke upar chhalang laga chuki thi...

aur jab usne aisa kiya toh theek ussi waqt MAHI VIDEOUS ke neeche se slide karti hui uske dusri taraf nikalne lagi..

ye ek sochi samjhi strategy thi jo apas me jude hue hone ki wajah se MAHI aur GRIFFIN ne apne apne dimag me hi bana li thi...

plan unka simple tha.. GRIFFIN VIDEOUS par challang lagate hue upar se attack karne waali thi aur theek ussi waqt MAHI neeche se slide karte hue aage badhne waali thi..

ek hi time me hue is attack numa harkat ki wajah se VIDEOUS kisi ek ko hi dodge de paayega aur ussi waqt dusra usse paar karte hue SHIELD ke paar chala jaayega..

resulting,WIN...

ye plan tha un dono ka par woh dono bhul gayi ki saamne mayavi hi sahi par VIDEOUS khada tha...

jaise hi un dono ne neeche aur upar,dono taraf se ek saath attack kiya toh VIDEOUS muskura utha...

apne pair par pressure daalte hue VIDEOUS ne khudko ek halka sa jhatka diya jiski wajah se uska sharir hawa me tezi se circulate hokar ghum gaya..

yunhi ghumte hue VIDEOUS ne apna ek haath upar aur dusra haath neeche kiya jiske baad uske upar waale haath me GRIFFIN ki lambi si gardan aur neeche waale haath me MAHI ki gardan aa gayi...

aisa hote hi usne un dono ko wapas jahan se dono chale the,us taraf jhatka diye...

MAHI aur GRIFFIN,dono ko kuch samajh aata usse pehle hi woh dono wapas apne pichli position me pahunchkar gir chuke the...


VIDEOUS-koshish achi thi,plan bhi par speed behadh kam...

anyways is baar kuch alag try karte hain..


apni baat bol VIDEOUS ne apna haath aage kiya aur uske aisa karte hi uske haath ke beech se kul do SWORD bahar nikli jisme se ek ko toh usne khud pakad li aur dusri jaakar giri MAHI ke aage jiske baad...


VIDEOUS-uthao talwar MAHI and don't just try to hit me,hit me..aur GRIFFIN,distract me taaki tumhari MISTRESS ka waar mujhe lag paaye...


VIDEOUS ki baat sun MAHI ne ek baar MAHI ki taraf dekha aur phir khudko tedha karte hue side jump maar VIDEOUS ki taraf ucchal padi...

wahin uske aisa karte hie MAHI ki body bhi teer ki tarah aage hawa me ud si gayi..

abhi scene kuch aisa tha ki GRIFFIN ke tedhe hone ko wajah se VIDEOUS ka saamne ka view blocked tha..

wahin VIDEOUS ke paas pahunchte hi GRIFFIN ke pair neeche zamin par gaye jiske baad woh khudko jhatka dete hue upar hawa me uth gayi..

ye sab hote waqt MAHI joki ek teer ka shape liye aur apni talwar aage kiya hawa me aage badh rahi thi,woh GRIFFIN ke behadh paas pahunch chuki thi...

aur jab GRIFFIN upar ucchli toh usse cross karte hue MAHI aur uske aage ki hui talwar VIDEOUS ke just saamne pahunch chuki thi par isse pehle ki woh talwar VIDEOUS ke chest ko bhedh paati, VIDEOUS ne apni talwar apne chest ke beecho beech waale area ke theek aage rakh di aur uske aisa karte hi..

TANNNN...

MAHI ke talwar ki nok VIDEOUS ke talwar ke beecho beech takrayi jiske baad...

VIDEOUS ka haath bijli se bhi tez move kiya aur aisa hote hi usne ek behadh tez attack kiya MAHI ke sword par aur jab aisa hua toh talwar ke saath saath MAHI ka haath tak jhanjhana utha aur woh kuch kadam piche hath gayi..

MAHI ab tak samajh chuki thi ki uske saamne khada mayavi VIDEOUS bhi filhal usse bohot zyada strong hai, pysically bhi aur mentally bhi...

saath hi uske chehre par dar aur pareshani bhi dikhne lagi thi..

reason...

VIDEOUS ke piche laga shield band hone hi waala tha..kuch seconds aur,jiske baad woh raasta hamesha ke liye band ho jaane waala tha..

MAHI ke chehre par aayi pareshani aur uski wajah uske baaju me khadi GRIFFIN se bhi chuppe nahi the aur isiliye kuch faisla kiya usne..


GRIFFIN-MAHI...ek idea hai..apne talwar ko strongly hold karo..waise hi jaise ek strong block me kiya jaata hai..


GRIFFIN ki baat aur idea samajh toh nahi MAHI ko par kyunki abhi waqt bohot kam bacha tha, isiliye bina koi sawal kiye usne waisa hi kaha jaisa GRIFFIN ne kaha..

MAHI ne strongly apne talwar ko pakad liya par aisa kar woh aage kya karna hai,ye GRIFFIN se puch paati ki tabhi kuch aisa hua jo usne socha nahi tha..


GRIFFIN-sorry MAHI...


GRIFFIN ki baat ka matlab MAHI samajh paati ki tabhi...

KHACCHHHHH....GRIFFINNNN.....

ek tez cheekh nikli MAHI ke mooh se...

reason....

GRIFFIN bijli ki tezi se aage badhi aur usne apne gardan ko MAHI ke strong grip ke beech pakde talwar ki dhaar par push kar diya jiske agle hi pal uski gardan kat chuki thi....

is scene ko dekh naa sirf MAHI ki cheekh nikli aur uski aankhen pathra si gayi, balki saath hi saath kyunki GRIFFIN uska hi ansh tha, isiliye uske is kadam se pyscically bhi MAHI ke sharir ko ek tez jhatka laga jiske prabhav se woh neeche gir gayi...

uske sharir me jaise jaan hi nahi bachi thi aur ussi condition me woh GRIFFIN ke kate hue sir ko dekh rahi thi...

wahin iske saamne khada VIDEOUS is scene ko dekh naa sirf hasne laga balki saath hi saath kyunki MAHI ne sharth puri kar di thi,isiliye uski body bhi spirit form me badalne lagi aur aisa hote waqt...


VIDEOUS-congrats MAHI...tumne apna aakhri hurdle paar kiya...ab maatam manana chhodo aur utho..

dekho, GRIFFIN ki kurbani ki wajah se band hota SHIELD ek baar phirse khul chuka hai...

par BOULEVARD jahan tum ho,ye ek chhupa hua raasta hai aur isiliye ye SHIELD hamesha ke liye khula nahi reh sakta...

ye bohot jald wapas band ho jaayega...isiliye utho...sunya ko ghurna chhodo aur jo beet gaya,usse bhul jaao..

jo dikh raha hai,usse samjho,aur haalat ka saamna karo...

yunhi pathrayi aankhon se VIDEOUS ko joki spirit form me badalne ke baad ab dheere dheere gayab hota jaa raha tha,usse dekhe jaa rahi thi MAHI aur aisa karte waqt uska dimag joki fused haalat me tha, usne bhi dobara kaam karna shuru kar diya tha..

but problem ye thi ki mayavi VIDEOUS ke gayab hone ke baad uske piche laga SHIELD jo filhal toh khula tha,but unlike last time,is baar tezi se band ho raha tha..

infact ab tak wo darwaza 90 percent tak band ho chuka tha aur isiliye ek baar GRIFFIN ke kate sir ko dard bhari nazaron se dekh MAHI SHIELD ki taraf badh gayi par shield tak woh pahunche,isse pehle hi woh SHIELD lagbhag puri band ho chuki thi jisse dekh MAHI ki usse paar karne ki ummid lagbhag khatm ho gayi par tabhi...

MAHI ne dekha ki us 99 percent band ho chuke SHIELD ke beech ek panja aakar tik gaya tha..itna hi nahi,us panje ne us SHIELD ko jhatka sa diya jiske baad woh shield halki si aur khul gayi aur jab aisa hua toh ek bada sa sir us darwaaze numa SHIELD ke beech aakar ek halt ki tarah tik gaya....

ye sir aur kisika nahi balki WOOGER ka tha joki shuruat se hi GALEN ke us area me jahan us BOULEVARD ka exit tha,jisse usne MAHI ke dimag me jhaank kar dekh liya tha,wahan khada tha aur phir jab usne dekha ki woh SHIELD band ho raha hai,toh us shield ko band hone se pehle hi woh uske beech me ek stopper ki tarah aakar khada ho gaya tha..

khair,MAHI WOOGER ko dekh hi rahi thi ki..


WOOGER-jaldi karo MAHI..mai zyada der tak isse rok kar nahi rakh sakta...


WOOGER ki baat sun MAHI tezi se aage badhi aur uske upar se cross forward air summersalt maarte hue SHIELD ke dusri taraf matlab GALEN ki dharti par pahunch gayi aur aisa hote hi WOOGER ne bhi us SHIELD se apni chehre ko piche kheench liya aur uske aisa karte hi SHIELD aur woh BOULEVARD naam ke raasta band hokar ek baar phirse gayab ho gaya...




INSIDE BOULEVARD:-




WOOGER ke sir piche karne se jaise hi shield wapas band hui aur BOULEVARD phirse adrishya hua toh ek baar phirse gayab hue woh MAYAVI VIDEOUS apni pehle waali jagah par prakat hue..

par ye kya,is waqt woh ek naye ROOP me the aur face par thi unki ek behatarin muskaan..

nazar unki shield ki taraf hi thi aur aisa lag raha tha maano unki aankhen us band SHIELD ke dusri taraf bhi araam se dekh paa rahi thi..

khair,kuch der tak muskurate rehne ke baad..


PROUD OF YOU KIDDO...


ye baat bol WOH gayab ho gaye...






PLANET-GALEN


PLACE- THE MYSTIC FOREST





WOOGER-udaas kyun ho..???


apne sir ko bahar nikalne ke baad jab WOOGER palta toh MAHI ko neeche baitha paaya..

is waqt MAHI kaafi udaas dikh rahi thi jisse dekh kahi ye baat WOOGER ne jispar...


MAHI-GRIFFIN nahi rahi...

WOOGER-accha.. toh phir woh tumhare saamne kaun hai..??? GRIFFIN ka bhoot...!!!


WOOGER ki baat sun MAHI ka sir ek jhatke me upar hua aur aisa hote hi usse laga jhatka..par is baar laga jhatka khushi se bhara hua tha..

REASON....

MAHI ke saamne GRIFFIN jo khadi thi aur woh bhi zinda..


GRIFFIN ko dekh MAHI turant uski taraf badhi aur uske gardan ke ird gird apni baahein lapet li..

kuch der tak yunhi emotional rehne ke baad MAHI GRIFFIN se alag hui aur...


MAHI-tum zinda ho....???kaise..???i mean tumne toh mere saamne hi apni jaan le li thi...

GRIFFIN-woh mai nahi thi MAHI..woh ek maaya tha jisse BOULEVARD me tumhare saath rehne ke liye racha gaya tha...

mai toh ASTER se sidhe yahan GALEN pahunchi thi...

MAHI-mai samjhi nahi...waisa karne ki kya zaroorat padh gayi thi...??aur WOOGER,jab tum GRIFFIN ko directly yahan GALEN me laa sakte the toh mujhe kyun nahi...???

WOOGER-mai GRIFFIN ko yahan nahi laaya..jo PATH GUIDE maine create kiya tha,woh tum dono ko BOULEVARD bhejne ke liye hi tha but kisine GRIFFIN ko directly GALEN me hi entry dilwa di aur uski jagah iske ek CLONE ko tumhare saath bheja...

GRIFFIN-aur ye isiliye kiya gaya MAHI kyunki BOULEVARD ek pure WHITE ENERGY se bani hui jagah hai aur kyunki mai tumhari urja se bani hun, isiliye waisi jagah par automatically meri shaktiyan badh jaati hai..

aise me mujhe BOULEVARD ke saare hurdles aur unse nibatne ke tarike apne aap pata chal jaate..

phir usme challenge kaisa..?? isiliye woh MAYAVI VIDEOUS jinse tum aur mera clone ladh rahe the, unhone pehle hi mujhe yahan bhej diya taaki woh tumhari aakhri rookawat ban tumhe ache se dekh saken...

MAHI-mujhe ache se dekh saken..??kyun..???

GRIFFIN-woh MAYAVI VIDEOUS aur koi nahi balki tumhare PITAH the MAHI...the one & only LORD OF ANGELS....


GRIFFIN ki baat sun trance me chali gayi thi MAHI...

stabdh si chupchaap woh khadi reh gayi thi...jinse dheron shikayat karna,ladhna,gale lag rona, pehli baar milne par ye saari chizen karna chahti thi MAHI,woh aisa kuch bhi kar nahi paayi thi....

woh toh apne PITAH ko pehchan bhi nahi paayi..itna hi nahi,apne pitah se hui pehli mulakat me woh unhi se yudh kar baithi thi...

jahan ye sab soch rahi thi MAHI wahin apni baat ko aage badhate hue..


GRIFFIN-waise ek sawal mera bhi hai tumse WOOGER...kya tum isiliye humare saath nahi aaye the taaki yahan rehkar SHIELD ko bahar se band hone se rok sako...

WOOGER-mere MASTER ki yaadasht ko supress kiya hai tumhari MISTRESS ne...

toh jab tak ye apni energy ke kan mere MASTER se nikal nahi leti,isse bachana majboori hai meri....


kahan ye sochkar khush ho rahi thi GRIFFIN ki WOOGER ne unki dil se madad ki thi par ye bhi usne apne matlab ke liye kiya tha,ye jaankar uska mood off ho gaya..

wahin WOOGER ki baat sun MAHI bhi apni sochon se bahar aa gayi thi isiliye..

MAHI-phir der kis baat ki..?? chalo,tumhare MASTER ke dimag se mere shaktiyon ke particles extract kar unki yaadasht wapas laate hain...

waise hain kahan woh janab abhi...!!!

WOOGER-mere peeche aao...


jahan apni baat bol WOOGER
ek disha ki taraf badh gaya wahin MAHI aur GRIFFIN bhi uske piche ho li...






PLACE-ERRAPEL'S COTTAGE





YE RAAZ PHIR GAYAB HO GAYA HAI...PATA NAHI KYUN ITNA GHUMTA REHTA HAI YE...???

apni baat bol ERRAPEL ne khudko RAAZ se joda aur aisa karne par jab usse RAAZ ki location mili jisse woh halki ghabra si gayi..

reason..

aa toh RAAZ uske ghar ki taraf hi tha par tha woh is waqt ussi area me jahan kuch din pehle NIMRODS ne usse pakda tha..

ye sab jaan ERRAPEL aanan faanan me tezi se apne cottage se nikalte hue sidhiyon se neeche utri par tabhi..


ALFREEN.....

ek awaaz ne uske kadam turant rok diye the...

aur jaise hi woh us pukare gaye naam ke disha me palti toh paaya ki ek khubsurat si ladki usse hi dekh rahi hai...

ye ladki aur koi nahi MAHI thi jisse ERRAPEL dekhte hi pehchaan gayi thi...

kaise..??

kyunki ek toh MAHI ki asli pehchaan...LORD OF ANGELS ka ansh..

aur dusri baat MAHI ka RAAZ ke liye pyar..

ab ERRAPEL toh bani hi RAAZ ke emotions power se thi,toh aise me RAAZ ko jo sabse zyada dil se pasand karta tha,usse jaanana, pehchaanana toh uske liye kaafi asaan tha...

wahin MAHI jo pehle hi ERRAPEL ki asliyat se waakif thi,par us sach ko jaanane ke baad bhi usne usse ALFREEN isiliye kaha tha kyunki ERRAPEL hubahu ALFREEN ki xerox jo thi...

is beech ERRAPEL ke dimag se RAAZ aur uski location jaise gayab hi ho gayi thi...

kuch pal yunhi ek dusre ko dekhte rehne ke baad ERRAPEL aur MAHI, dono ek dusre ke paas aayi aur..


ERRAPEL-mai ALFREEN nahi,

MAHI-ERRAPEL ho..jaanti hun...woh kya hai naa ki itna dino baad apni best friend ke face ko dekha toh ussika ka naam nikal gaya..


MAHI ki baat sun muskurayi ERRAPEL aur...


ERRAPEL-isne bataya mere baare me...!!!


WOOGER ki taraf joki is waqt GRIFFIN ki hi tarah invisible state me tha,uski taraf ishara karte hue kahi ye baat ERRAPEL ne jispar..


MAHI-tum RAAZ ka woh hissa ho(EMOTIONS)jisme mai khudko dekhna chahti hun..phir bhala kaise naa pehchaanu tumhe..!!!!


MAHI ki baat par ERRAPEL muskura di jiske baad...


MAHI-waise tum WOOGER ko iske invisible state me bhi dekh sakti ho....???

ERRAPEL-RAAZ ka hi toh urja hai ye...isse kisi bhi form ne pehchaan sakti hun mai...

waise tum invisible kyun ho..???

WOOGER-MASTER ki memory louti nahi hai.. toh aise me mujhe dekhna unke liye sahi nahi hoga...dar jaayenge woh..

ERRAPEL-arre waah...RAAZ ki urja hone ke baad bhi hoshiyar ho tum...!!!

WOOGER-MASTER ka hissa hone ke baad bhi bewakuf ho tum toh aise me bharpaayi
toh mujhe hi karni padegi naa..


WOOGER ki baat sun jahan MAHI halke se muskura uthi wahin ERRAPEL ne usse ghoor kar dekha par WOOGER ko is baat se naa koi fark padna tha,naahi pada par isse pehle ki koi aur kuch kehta...


WOOGER-MASTER aa rahe hain...


WOOGER ki baat sun kisi aur ko toh zyada kuch laga nahi par MAHI ke dil ki dhadkan badh gayi..

uski nazar bhi us taraf hi thi jahan se is waqt RAAZ usse aata hua dikhayi diya..

aur aisa hote hi uske kadam apne aap RAAZ ki taraf badh gaye...

ERRAPEL, GRIFFIN dono hi MAHI ke dilli haalat se waakif the, isiliye woh apni jagah par shaant hi khade rahe par MAHI ko apne MASTER ki taraf badhta dekh WOOGER halka sa has pada aur...


WOOGER-MAHI ko directly MASTER ke saamne nahi jaana chahiye tha...

ERRAPEL) GRIFFIN-matlab...!!!

WOOGER-khud dekh lo...


saamne MAHI ki taraf ishara karte hue joki RAAZ ke kareeb pahunch hi chuki thi,kahi ye baat WOOGER ne..


wahin jab ghumte hue mai wapas ERRAPEL ke cottage ke kareeb pahuncha toh maine ek anjaani ladki ko apni taraf aata hua dekha...

door thi filhal woh mujhse isiliye chehra uska clear nahi tha par jaise jaise mai aage badhta gaya,uska chehra mujhe saaf dikhne laga...

waise toh anjaan hi tha us ladki ka chehra mere liye par pata nahi kyun,usse dekhte hi mere dimag me ek negetive harkat hone lagi...

us ladki se mere BRAIN ko ek pehchaani si AURA feel hone lagi par jab aisa hua toh mujhe aisa lagne laga jaise mere andar koi aur hai jo mere dimag ko capture kar raha hai...

is beech woh ladki mere behadh kareeb aa gayi thi aur jab aisa hua toh mera brain completely blank ho gaya aur....


DHAKKKHH.... UMMM....UMMMMM...

MAHI ke kareeb aate hi RAAZ ne uski gardan pakad li aur usse hawa me utha liya...

RAAZ ki grip itni strong thi ki MAHI usse chhut nahi paa rahi thi aur saath hi saath uska dum bhi badi tezi se ghutne laga..

wahin jab is scene ko ERRAPEL aur GRIFFIN ne dekha toh woh dono naa sirf WOOGER ki kahi baat ka matlab samjhe balki hadbadate hue tezi se RAAZ aur MAHI ki taraf badh chale...

ERRAPEL toh bas saamne chal rahe scene ko dekh pareshan thi par GRIFFIN ko RAAZ ki harkat par ghussa aa gaya tha aur woh usse sabak sikhane ke liye invisible mode me hi challang lagane waali thi par tabhi...

WOOGER ne GRIFFIN par challang laga di jiske agle hi pal uski lambi gardan WOOGER ke bade se panje ke neeche thi...

wahin ERRAPEL bhi jaise hi RAAZ ke paas pahunchi toh...


WOOGER-agar MASTER ko tune touch kiya toh phir kuch aur touch karne ke liye zinda nahi bachegi tu....

chand saansein bachi hai teri,unhe bache hi rehne de..

aur tu,hilna band kar warna kuch der pehle jaise BOULEVARD me tere clone ka sir dhadh se alag hua tha,ab tera ho jaayega...


WOOGER ki baat sun GRIFFIN ka chattpatana bhi band ho gaya aur ERRAPEL ka aage badhna bhi..

par ERRAPEL ne apni aankhen zaroor band ki aur apne EMOTIONS ki ek strong urja RAAZ ke taraf uda di...

wahin in sabke beech MAHI ki aankhein palatne lagi thi aur usse is haalat me pahunchane waale RAAZ ke face par koi expressions nahi the...

MAHI ki saansein kabhi bhi band ho sakti thi par tabhi...

ERRAPEL ka release kiya EMOTIONS AURA sidhe jaakar RAAZ ke brain se takraya jiske baad RAAZ ko laga jhatka aur uske haathon ki grip dheeli hone lag gayi..

kuch hi seconds me MAHI uske haathon se chhut chuki thi aur RAAZ neeche girkar behosh ho chuka tha...


KHHHONNNN...KHHONNNNN....

kaafi der tak khaanste hue apne saanson ko durust karti rahi MAHI..

ERRAPEL bhi uske peeth ko halke halke sehla rahi thi...

WOOGER ne apna panja GRIFFIN ke gardan se hata diya tha jiska baad woh khadi hokar usse hi ghure jaa rahi thi..

khair, WOOGER aage badha aur apne energy se RAAZ ko hawa me utha usse apne bade se peeth me ladh cottage ke andar usse letane ke liye le gaya aur usse sofe me hi letakar woh wapas aa gaya..

itni der me MAHI kaafi hadh tak theek ho gayi thi aur isiliye...


MAHI-ye kya hua tha RAAZ ko...??usne mujhpar attack kyun kiya..???

WOOGER-PITAH ki jaaydad hi nahi,bacchon ko unke karm ke nateeje bhi virasat me milte hain.

MAHI-matlab..???

WOOGER-tum ye bhul gayi thi ki MASTER ke brain me tumhari ANGEL PARTICLES moujud hain jinhone unke devilish side aur energy ko rok ke rakha hua hai..

par tumhe dekh aur tumse aa rahe tumhare PITAH ke vibe ko MASTER bhuli hui memory ke dabe hue ghusse ne pehchaan liya jiski wajah se woh devilish energy kisi tarah tumhare particles ko dhakka dete hue bahar aa gayi..

nateeja,hum sabne dekha aur tumne mehsoos kiya...


MAHI-toh kya mai jab bhi RAAZ ke saamne jaaungi,toh aisa hi hoga...!!!

WOOGER-short circuit baar baar nahi hota...is ERRAPEL ne jo AURA release kiya tha,uski wajah se MASTER ka negetive aur devilish side wapas supress ho chuka hai aur ab jab tak MASTER ki memory loutkar nahi aati,woh daba hua hi rahega...

GRIFFIN-jo tumhari jaan lene waala tha,tum usse uski yaadasht loutane yahan aayi ho...!!!!


bade negetive andaz me kahi ye baat GRIFFIN ne jispar..


MAHI-uske maa baap mare hain GRIFFIN..woh bhi ussi ke haathon..

aur kahin naa kahin aisa hone ke piche mere pitah ka haath toh hai hi...

wajah bhale hi universe ke liye profitable ho par ek bete ke liye toh uske maa baap hi pure universe hote hain aur RAAZ ka woh universe ussike haathon khatm kiya gaya hai...

agar mujhe taklif dekar hi uski taklif kam hoti hai,toh yahi sahi....


ye bol MAHI palti aur RAAZ ke paas jaane ke liye cottage ki taraf badh gayi...

jahan WOOGER aur GRIFFIN bhi uske saath hi the wahin ERRAPEL MAHI ki baat ko sun kuch der sochti rahi par phir...


ERRAPEL-agar RAAZ baaki sabko taklif pahunchane waala hai toh aisa karne ka result usse bhi chukana hoga...

ERRAPEL tumhe tumhari puri EMOTIONS ki shakti kab tak degi, RAAZ ye tay karega tumhara ATTITUDE..







PLACE-THE FROZEN LAKE





YE RAAZ WAHAN KYA KAR RAHA HAI...????


MAHI ne pucha tha ye sawal ERRAPEL se...

reason....

jame hue LAKE ke kinare ek bade se pedh ka ot liye doobte hue suraj ko dekh raha tha RAAZ...

jab RAAZ ke hosh me aane ka waqt aaya toh WOOGER ne ye baat MAHI ko bata di thi,jiske baad woh woh dusre kamre me chali gayi thi..

tab se lekar abhi tak MAHI dobara RAAZ ke saamne nahi gayi thi...

aur abhi bhi door se RAAZ ko dekhte hue pucha tha ye sawal MAHI ne jispar...


ERRAPEL-ye har shaam wahan jaakar baith jaata hai aur us jame hue jheel aur doobte suraj ko dekh koi dhun gungunaate rehta hai..

MAHI-dhun..as in song k tune.. really...!!!wow..!!!mai sunana chahti hun...par uske saamne jaana..!!!!

WOOGER-jaa sakti ho unke saamne..jo hona tha,woh ho chuka..ab waisa kuch nahi hoga..

infact, filhal toh jo kuch ghante pehle hua,uske liye MASTER sharminda bhi hain...


WOOGER ki baat sun MAHI RAAZ ki taraf badh chali aur kuch hi der me woh theek uske peeche thi aur jab aisa hua toh...



HM HMM HM,HM HMM HM,HMM HM HMM HM...

HM HMM HM,HM,HM,HMMHM HMM HM.....


ye dhun padi MAHI ke kaano me jisse sun..


MAHI-nice tune...


is naye awaaz ko sun mai piche palta aur aisa karte hi mere saamne wahi chehra tha jiske gale ko najaane kyun par kuch der pehle daba diya tha maine aur jiski wajah se mujhe andar hi andar bohot zyada guilt feel ho raha tha...

aur ab jab woh ladki saamne thi,toh mai usse nazarein nahi mila paa raha tha..

shayad woh ladki bhi mere manobhaav samajh gayi thi isiliye..


MAHI-relax RAAZ..jo tumne kiya,woh ek flow of the moment tha...

aur waisa hone ka ek valid reason bhi tha...

MAI-kya tum mere bhule hue past ka koi galat pehlu ho jiski wajah se maine woh kiya jo kiya...

MAHI-mai us ped ka phal hun jisne tumse tumhari chhaya chhin li...

RAAZ-mai samjha nahi...

MAHI-samjhi toh mai bhi nahi hun..par shayad kuch naa samajh paana hi hum dono ki niyati hai..

MAI-par bina samjhe tark ka koi arth nahi hota..

MAHI-aur kabhi kabhi arth toh hota hai par usse darshaane ke liye tark nahi hota...

hum dono ka case kuch waisa hi hai...

MAI-kya hum dost hain...????

MAHI-shayad haan...

MAI-yaa shayad nahi...

MAHI-aur woh bhala kyun...???

MAI-agar rishton me bhi exclamation mark lagne lage toh woh rishte hote hi nahi...

MAHI-rishte do tarfa hote hai RAAZ...ek maane aur dusra nahi toh aise me full stop nahi, exclamation hi lagana padta hai....


MAHI ki baat par mai halka sa muskura diya jisse dekh...

MAHI-kya hua..??

MAI-tumhari baaton ko sun aisa lagta hai jaise humare case me exclamation mark maine hi lagaya hai...


meri baat sun MAHI bhi muskura uthi jiske baad...


MAHI-waise jab tumne mujhe dekha tha toh guilt mehsoos kiya tha par abhi tak tumne sorry nahi kaha...

MAI-sorry....

MAHI-apology not excepted..


us ladki ke yun kehne par maine kuch kaha nahi,bas nazarein saamne kar li jispar...


MAHI-waise ek tarika hai jisse mai tumhe maaf kar sakti hun...

MAI-batao phir...

MAHI-mai jab aayi toh tum koi dhun gunguna rahe the..us dhun ke bol gaado,mai maaf kar dungi....

MAI-ajeeb baat hai...subah dimag shaant tha mera, par tumhe dekhte hi bechaini hone lag gayi thi par abhi dil bechain tha,par tumhe dekha toh shaant ho gaya...

MAHI-is baat ka meri farmaish se kya lena dena..???

MAI-dil ko jab sukoon aata hai naa,toh har dhun ko alfaaz mil hi jaate hain...

mujhe bhi mil gaya...

MAHI-really...???toh sunao phir....

MAI-rehne do..udaas ho jaaogi...

MAHI-kabhi kabhi udaasi khushi se zyada sukoon deti hai..

MAI-naam kya hai tumhara...???

MAHI-MAHI....

MAI-sach kaha tha tumne... aakhen tumhari udaas hai par naam sukoon se bhara hai...

MAHI-compliment ho gayi ho toh gaana ho jaaye...

MAI-

aaj phir shaame tanhaayi jaagi....
aaj phir ek aansu GIRA GIRA HAI...(2)

baarish naa bhigaayi zamee ko,(2)
ek aansu se aaj ye GILA HAI...
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dard itni uthi hai SEENE ME...
mushkil ho rahi hai JEENE ME...

ro rokar magar JEE RAHA HUN...
khudke aansu me aaj PEE RAHA HUN...

dil me aaj uth raha ek NASHA HAI,
tujhko chaah ke bas gum hi MILA HAI....
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aaj phir, aaj phir,haan aaj phir shaame tanhaayi jaagi....
aaj phir ek aansu GIRA HAI.....

baarish naa bhigaayi zamee ko,(2)
ek aansu se aaj ye GILA HAI...

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