Fantasy ATTITUDE (KABHI ANGEL KABHI DEVIL) ( Completed )

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"Be The Wrong That Makes Everything Right"....
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Superb update bhai...
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behatrin update bro............kya ab mahi raaz k pass jane wali h.........or uska ye khna ki
hisaab pura hoga,ghabrana mat JAAN,mai tumhare paas AA RAHI HUN.....
se kya mtlb nikalta h............kya eaaz k sath jo hua uska bdla jb raaz lega mahi usme uska sath degi....................
Bahut hi khubsurat update bhai 😊
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Kese bna lete ho last line ko ,shyri ki trh bhut hi bhari bna dete ho shbdo ko ,pathro ki trh πŸ€”πŸ˜Š...,?πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œlajvab
Awesome update bro
Mast update
Behtareen update,
Raaz ke vyaktitva me badlaw dekhane me bahut maza aayega.
bahad hasheen update dost
intjaar rahega dost
Super update hai Bhai
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Very nice update waiting for next
faintastic update bhai jawab nahi hai apka
Behad shaandaar lajawab mazedaar khoobsurat update VJ bhai
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Wah bhai jo bhi kaho aapaki story padhake dil khus ho jata hain aur yeh raaz ka yeh attitude main bohot miss kiya tha bhai ab bhale hi yeh wooger ke character main feeling to raaz wali hi sayo

Waiting for new update bhai
SUPER AWESOME UPDATE BHAI,
Ye wooger ke ander hi itna gussa bhara hua hai to jab Raaz jab waapas lotega to uska gussa to sabki lanka lagayga. Aur ab vo gussa VIDEOUS ke liye na hoker Lord of Angels ke liye hai to Mahi ke liye bi is baar chunaav kafi mushkil hoga kyuki ek taraf uska pyar Raaz hoga aur dusri taraf honge uske dad VIKRAM. Dusri taraf Alfreen alag nafrat liye baithi hai Raaz ke liye jisme shayad VIDEOUS usko aur bhadayega. Ab ladayi dekhne layak hogi.
ALWAYS WAITING FOR MORE.
Wawoooo story to kafi agy nikal choki h

Wese Mai bhi kafi Dino bad Aya ho or sari story read kr dali

Or hamesha ki trha Mera fuse hi urr gia Jo kuch mere dimagh Mai tha is story ko ly k ye sab us se ulat ho gia

Such u r a very genius man
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Behad hi shandar or jabardast update
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Wah to mahi ko raaz ka pta chal hi gya y kya dono k ansh m fight chlo isse fayada b huwa

Abi jo raaz ki masumiyat h vo bad m kitni khofnak hogi



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V.J bahut hi shandar update tha.. har update ke sath curiosity badti ja rahi hai meri.. mahi ke character ko strong dekhna hai bcs jiski woh beti hai usne attitude part 1 mein khub dhamake kiye the.. patience level toh mahi ka apni mom jaisa hai bas dimag uske father jaisa hai ya nahi ye dekhna hai. Rahi alfreen ki baat uski ye new upadhi mujhe bhuVika ke jaise lag rahi hai.. mujhe shock nahi lagega agar kal ko tum usko Beelzebub or Bhuvika ki beti declare kar do.πŸ˜‚πŸ‘πŸ˜‡
zabardast update.... V.j bhai
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Brother awesome writing skills. Kya shandaar story he. Har update k sath maza badhta hi jata he. Waiting for next update
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thanks brothers..be along...
 

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI KI PYSICAL POWER REGAIN HO JAATI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF ERRAPEL EK BACCHE KI JAAN BACHATI HAI.


AB AAGE:-



CHAPTER-3


( THE DEVIL'S HAVEN,THE SACRIFICE &THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



UPDATE-128



PLACE-ASTER





TUM DONO PLEASE LADNA BAND KAROGE AB....!!!!


kisi na kisi baat par lagatar zubani ladh rahe WOOGER aur GRIFFIN se kahi thi ye baat MAHI ne...

apni power regain karte waqt kuch glimpses dikhe the MAHI ko jisse dekh usse aage kya karna hai,ye pata chal chuka tha....

unhi sab chizon ke baare me soch rahi thi MAHI par WOOGER aur GRIFFIN ke beech tu tu mai mai ki wajah se woh theek se concentrate nahi kar paa rahi aur isiliye usne woh kaha jo kaha jisse sun...


GRIFFIN-mai nahi ladh rahi MAHI..ye WOOGER meri har baat ko galat bata raha hai aur lagatar mujhe pinch kar raha hai...

WOOGER-haan sahi kaha...sab mai hi kar raha hun,tum toh doodh ki dhuli hui ho....

bhale meri baaton me joki mujhse aur mere MASTER se related hain,unme apni muft ki raaye aur naak ghusaye jaa rahi ho par phir bhi galat tum nahi ho,galat toh tumhare saath ho raha hai....


WOOGER ke vyang ko sun jahan ek taraf muskura uthi MAHI wahin GRIFFIN ka mooh ban gaya jiske baad..


GRIFFIN-haan toh jab tum aur tumahare MASTER galat baat bologe yaa galat faisle loge toh mai bolungi hi naa..!!!

WOOGER-pata hai woh do key words joki missing hai tumhare sentence se,woh kya hain..???

hamari zindagi...

hamari zindagi ke faisle..ab woh sahi ho ya galat,tum kaun hoti ho unpar comment kar apni raay dene waali...

hum upar aasman se kude ya neeche khaayi me,humari marzi,tumhe apni ye badi si gardan us faisle ke beech daalne ki zaroorat nahi...


WOOGER ki baat sun GRIFFIN kuch kehti ki tabhi MAHI has di jisse sun GRIFFIN ke saath saath WOOGER ka dhyan bhi uski taraf gaya jiske baad GRIFFIN toh shaant hi rahi par WOOGER...


WOOGER-MAHI,jo baat maine GRIFFIN se kahi hai,woh tum par bhi applicable hoti hai...MASTER ke baare me ek baat jaan lo..woh wahi karte hain,jo unka dil karta hai..is baat se fark nahi padta ki woh cheez sahi hai yaa galat..

saath hi saath kabhi bhi unhe kisi bhi cheez me raay mat dena,naa hi unke faisle par comment karna...

isse aise samajhte hain ki maan lo woh kuch karne waale hon par us chiz ko woh karen,usse pehle hi agar tumne ussi chiz ko karne ki baat unse keh di,toh bhale hi woh chiz unke liye kitni hi important kyun naa ho,sirf tumhare kehne ki wajah se woh phir us kaam ko nahi karenge...

GRIFFIN-arre ye kya baat hui..???aisa thodi naa hota hai..

WOOGER-kisne kaha,tumne..sabse pehle toh tum ye jaan lo ki tum kya sochti hi,woh toh matter hi nahi karta..

par agar phir bhi interfere karna hai,toh theek,kar ke dekh lena..galti ko naya aakaar dekar gunah bana denge MASTER jiski zimmedar tum hogi...

MAHI,woh kitne hi galat kyun naa ho,par unhe tokna mat..unhe khud apni galti ka realization ho jaaye,yahi tarika hai unhe us form me pahunchane ka jiske baare me MADDOX ne tumse kaha tha..

yaad rahe,hawa ka rookh moda jaa sakta hai,tufaan ka nahi aur naahi uske beech se nikla jaa sakta hai..

behtari issi me hai ki yaa toh uske raaste se hi hath jaao,yaa phir uski chapet ke aage ya piche bina usse touch kiye badhte jaao...

MAHI-mai samajh rahi hun WOOGER aur fikr mat karo,naa mai RAAZ ke kisi bhi action par chaahe woh kitna hi galat kyun naa ho, retaliate karungi, aur naahi interfere...

mai jaanti hun ki jab tak uska dard,uska ghussa pura bahar nahi aa jaata,woh brainly DEVIL aur heartly ANGEL me convert nahi ho paayega...

but filhal ye batao ki RAAZ ke paas GALEN pahunche kaise...???

WOOGER-naam kaise pata chala tumhe us planet ka jahan is waqt MASTER hain...!!!!

MAHI-thik waise hi jaise mujhe ye maalum hai ki abhi kuch der pehle jo tum aur GRIFFIN ladh rahe the,woh asal ne meri madad ke liye hi tha...

tum dono ko hi pata tha ki mai us waqt pyscically kaafi kamzor thi aur us state me mai apne target tak nahi pahunch sakti...

tum dono ko ye bhi pata tha ki tumhari forced aur opposing powers se bhi woh energy wave release ho sakti thi jisse mere andar chuppe mere dono forms ke power mujhe dikh sakte the aur isiliye to help me,tum dono ek dusre se takraaye the..

am i right or am i right....!!!


muskura kar kahi ye saari baat MAHI ne jispar WOOGER toh shaant hi raha par GRIFFIN MAHI ki analyzation ko sun khush ho gayi...

aur ho bhi kyun naa..aaj usse MAHI me uske pitah ke dimag ki jhalak jo dikhayi di thi aur aisa hona is kahani ek liye behadh zaroori tha..

aakhir,takkar jo VIDEOUS jaise shaatir khiladi se thi jo player ke saath saath khud woh game bhi tha jisme woh sab khel rahe the...

khair,MAHI ke baat ko sun..


WOOGER-apni shakti ke saath GALEN ki chavi tumhare andar isiliye dikhayi thi maine taaki tum us puri jagah ko aur most importantly,us planet ke upar lage kawach ko dekh aur samajh sako..

kyunki MASTER us PLANET ke andar hain isiliye mai toh wahan aaram se jaa sakta hun par tum dono ke liye ye bohot zyada mushkil hone waala hai...

kyunki tumhari dono hi shaktiyon ke forms abhi apni jagah se zara sa bhi nahi hile hain, isiliye directly tum us kawach ko todne me filhal saksham nahi ho...


MAHI-manzil bhale ek ho,par us manzil tak pahunchne ke raaste bohot se hote hain...

GALEN par pahunchne ka sidha raasta bhale hi hamare liye ban hai par woh raasta jahan se universe ke bohot se jagahon ke darwaze khul sakte hain,woh option toh open hi hai...

THE BOULEVARD....

wahan se hum GALEN pahunch sakte hain...


(BOULEVARD...ye naam bhi un cheezon me se ek thi jisse MAHI ne paused CEREBRATION process ke waqt apne ANGEL aur HUMAN form ki taakat dekhne ke baad mehsoos kiya tha...)


MAHI ne jo naam liya tha,uske baare me naa toh GRIFFIN ko kuch pata tha aur naahi WOOGER ko aur isiliye...


GRIFFIN-BOULEVARD..!!!ye kya chiz hai..!!!

MAHI-BOULEVARD ek chuppi hui pathway hai jahan se GALEN pahuncha jaa sakta hai....

GRIFFIN-really...!!par tumhe kaise pata us jagah ke baare me...???

MAHI-bas itna samajh lo ki FALLON ke mujhme samane se jo faayde mujhe hue hain,unme se hi ye bhi ek hai...

WOOGER-touch my head MAHI...mujhe dekhni hai ye jagah...


WOOGER ki baat par bina kuch puche MAHI ne apna haath uske sir par rakh diya aur uske aisa karte hi WOOGER ke dimag me BOULEVARD naam ki jagah ka scene clear ho gaya jiske baad...


WOOGER-human world me jo BOULEVARD hote hain,unse different hai ye jagah...

trees ki jagah kuch magical barriers lage hue hain is jagah....ye route successfully cross kar paana kaafi tough ho sakta hai..

MAHI-aur isiliye hi is route se jaana aur bhi zyada important hai...kyunki mere liye apne dono strengths ko close laate hue unhe ek karne ka sabse acha tarika tough challenges hi hai..

aise situations me hi meri abilities nikhrengi...

WOOGER-thik hai phir...MAHI, GRIFFIN ke upar baith jaao..mai tum dono ko BOULEVARD ke saamne pahuncha deta hun....

GRIFFIN-pahuncha deta hun matlab...???tum bhi toh hamare saath chaloge naa...

WOOGER-mai kyun saath chalun jab mujhe GALEN ne direct entry mil sakti hai...!!!

GRIFFIN-dekha MAHI..kitna selfish ha ye...

WOOGER-apni safety ke baare me sochna selfishness nahi samajhdari hoti hai..par tumhare jaisi emotional fool ko ye baat samajh me aayegi nahi aur naahi tumhe samjhane me mujhe apna time waste karna hai....


WOOGER ki baat par GRIFFIN kuch kehti ki tabhi..


MAHI-ok enough now...thik hai WOOGER,ab mulakat sidhe GALEN me hi hogi...


apni baat bolte hue GRIFFIN par chadh gayi MAHI jiske baad...

FUUUUUU......

ek tez foonk maari WOOGER ne jiske baad MAHI aur GRIFFIN ke chaaron taraf ek chota sa tornado ban gaya

ye tornado asal me ek PATH GUIDE tha jo sirf chuppe hue jagahon par logon ko drop karta tha..

khair,har guzarte pal ke saath woh tornado unke paas aane laga aur phir dekhte hi dekhte MAHI aur GRIFFIN,dono hi us tornado ke giraft me aa gaye jiske baad woh tornado unhe apne andar samate hue gayab ho gaya...

MAHI aur GRIFFIN gayab ho chuke the jiske baad WOOGER bhi apni manzil ki taraf jaane ke liye gayab ho gaya....






PLANET-GALEN


PLACE-GALEN MARKET






YE LADKA KAHAN BHATAKTE REHTA HAI....???EK JAGAH PAANV HI NAHI TIKTE ISKE...!!!!


GALEN market se hote hui ek open colony ki taraf badhte hue kahi ye baat ERRAPEL ne...

reason...

RAAZ....kuch der pehle apne cottage aur aas paas ke har jagah par RAAZ ko dhundne ke baad jab woh ERRAPEL ko kahin nahi mila toh aakhirkaar usse ek baar phir apne aur uske connection AURA ke through RAAZ ko dhundna pada aur jab usne aisa kiya toh paaya ki woh is waqt GALEN market ki taraf gaya hua hai..

anjaan jagah thi upar se yaadasht ki batti gul..aise me RAAZ ka yun market me akele ghuma sahi nahi tha aur isiliye ERRAPEL turant jahan woh tha,us disha ki taraf badh chali thi...

market se hote hue jab woh us colony ki taraf badhi jahan RAAZ gaya tha toh kuch door jaate hi naa sirf uske paanv achanak se hi rook gaye balki saath hi usse saamne ka nazara dekh hairani bhi hui...

toh baat darasal ye thi jahan is waqt ERRAPEL thi,uske thode door hi ek tree ki ot liye RAAZ khada apne saamne bane ek garden me kisiko dekh raha tha..

ye kisi aur koi nahi wahi aurat thi do din pehle apne bache ko theek karwane ke liye ERRAPEL ke ghar aayi thi...

is waqt woh aurat apne us chote se bete ke saath khel rahi thi...

us din apne bete ko kho hi diya tha us aurat ne,yahi wajah thi ki is waqt woh apne bacche ke saath khelte hue usse lagatar chume bhi jaa rahi thi..

khair, ERRAPEL ke hairan hone ka reason ye tha ki saamne garden me chal rahe scene ko dekh RAAZ ke aankhon me aansu the..

par kamal ki baat ye thi ki uska chehra bilkul normal tha..rone ki wajah se chehre par aane waala khinchaw,aisa kuch bhi nahi dikh raha tha RAAZ ke face par..

woh normally hi khada tha,bas uski aankhon se paani lagatar nikle jaa raha tha..

kuch der tak ye dekhti rahi ERRAPEL par phir woh RAAZ ki taraf badh gayi aur uske paas pahunchi..


HMM HMM HMM,HMM HMM HMM HMM HMM HMM HMMMMM,HMM HMM HMM HMM HMM HMM M HMMM HMM....


RAAZ ke paas pahunchte hi ERRAPEL ne suni ye dhun jo RAAZ gungunate hue saamne lady aur uske bache ko dekh raha tha...

kaafi sunaapan, khaalipan aur dard tha us dhun me jisse kuch der tak dhyan se sunti aur feel karti rahi ERRAPEL..

par phir kuch der tak us dhun ko sunte rehne ke baad ERRAPEL ne uske kandhe par haath rakha aur aisa hote hi RAAZ jaise ek trance se bahar aaya aur hadbadate hue piche palta..

ERRAPEL ko apne saamne dekh woh shaant bhi ho gaya aur usne apne aansu bhi jhat se saaf kar diye....

par aankhen uski abhi bhi kuch bhari hi thi jisse kuch der tak lagatar dekhne ke baad...


ERRAPEL-kya baat hai..???aankhen kyun bhari hai tumhari...??aur ye chupke us lady aur uske bache ko kyun dekh rahe ho tum...???

MAI-pata nahi kyun apne aap hi aankhen bhar gayi...!!!mai toh market ghumne nikla tha,wahan mujhe us din subah jo tumhare ghar aayi thi, woh lady market me apne bacche ke saath dikhi..

woh apne bache ko toys dila rahi thi..

un dono ko dekh mera dil kiya ki unhe hi dekhta rahun...

isiliye unke piche yahan tak aa gaya aur unhe dekhne laga..

us bacche ko uski mom k saath khelta dekh dil bhaari se ho gaya aur aankhen bhar aayi...

par sach me,aisa hone ka reason mujhe bhi nahi pata...!!!!

ERRAPEL-shayad tumhare dil ko tumhari MAA ki yaad aa gayi..???

MAI-MAA.....


bas itna hi nikal paaya mere mooh se jiske baad mera dil tadap sa gaya..

ERRAPEL mere manobhaav ko ache se samajh rahi thi isiliye usne turant baat ko badla aur..


ERRAPEL-chalen yaa phir din bhar yahin khade rehne ka iraada hai...!!!

MAI-chalo....


ye bol ek baar un maa bete ko dekh mai ERRAPEL ke saath aage badh gaya..


MAI-tumhe kaise pata chala ki mai yahan hun..???

ERRAPEL-kuch kaam se aayi thi mai yahan,tumpar bas nazar padh gayi...

MAI-oh...

ERRAPEL-waise ek baat batao...mai jab tumhare paas aayi toh maine tumhe ek dhun gungunate hue suna...kis gaane ki dhun thi woh...???

MAI-pata nahi...un maa bete ko dekha toh woh dhun apne aap mere dimag me banane lagi....

(NOTE-doston,college me ek gaana likha tha maine...abhi RAAZ ki jo condition hai,usme woh gaana kaafi suit karta hai.. next update me RAAZ ke through us gaane ka mukhda aur first antra aapke saamne hoga)


ERRAPEL-dhun bani hai toh gaana bhi bana hi hoga....

MAI-shayad,par woh bol abhi tak mere dimag aur zuban par nahi chadhe hain...

tumhe ajeeb lag rahi hongi naa meri baatein...!!!saari ki saari aadhi adhuri....

ERRAPEL-baatein dhaage ki tarah hoti hai..shuruat ek sire se hoti hai par kabhi kabhi dusra sira mil nahi paata..

par iska ye matlab toh nahi ki dusra sira hai hi nahi...bas shayad us sire tak pahunchne ka waqt nahi aaya hai..!!!!

MAI-aur agar waqt aane se pehle dhaaga hi toot gaya toh..!!!!

ERRAPEL-toh kya..???toota dhaaga bhi toh ek naya sira banakar hi alag hota hai naa...!!!!

aur ye acha bhi hai, naye sire par pahunchne ka faasla bhi kam jayega..

baat bas dekhne ke NAZARIYE ki hai RAAZ...sab kuch apni sahi jagah par baith hi jaata hai, chahiye toh bas ek sahi aur positive NAZARIYA,ek behtarin ATTITUDE...







PLACE-BOULEVARD







YEH KAISI JAGAH HAI...????


trees ke patle patle branches jaise dikhne waale cloud covers ke beech bane ek tunnel ko dekhte hue kahi thi ye baat GRIFFIN ne....

PATH GUIDE TORNADO ke through MAHI aur GRIFFIN jis jagah par pahunch is waqt khade hue the,woh jagah bhi kaafi alag tarah ki thi...

5 se 6 feet bade pathar joki hawa me float karte hue us tunnel me jaane ke liye joki wahi BOULEVARD tha jiske through woh dono GALEN pahunchne waale the,is waqt khade hue the...

ek aur ajeeb aur kamal ki baat ye thi ki us pure BOULEVARD ka view joki kareeb 2 km lamba tha,puri taraf se clear aur bright tha..

itna lamba tunnel hone ke baawjud us BOULEVARD ka pura view MAHI aur GRIFFIN,un dono ke hi aankhon me aise dikh raha tha maano kisine unki aankhon ke aage invisible binocular glasses laga diye hon..

behatrin MAGIC...khair,

jahan is waqt GRIFFIN sirf us tunnel ko dekh rahi thi,wahin MAHI ki nazar un patle cloud covers aur saath hi jispar woh khade the,aur aage badhte hue bhi khada hona tha,woh floating patthar,unpar tiki hui thi..

woh bade gaur se in dono hi jagahon ko dekh kuch soche jaa rahi thi...

aur kuch der baad jab GRIFFIN ki nazar MAHI par padi toh usne bhi is baat par gaur kiya aur...


GRIFFIN-kya dekh rahi ho MAHI...??

MAHI-un saare cloud covers ko dhyan se dekho GRIFFIN...un sab ka shape toh ek jaisa hi hai par phir bhi unme se teen covers thode alag hain...

baaki saare cloud covers ekdum shaant hain..lekin left ki taraf bicche cloud covers me se third number ka cover dekho,woh halka halka beech me shake kar raha hai..

theek ussiki tarah ussi line me aage ki taraf do aur cloud covers hain,jo waise hi shake kar rahe hain..

aur right ki taraf jo last cloud cover
hai woh bhi halka halka shake kar raha hai...


MAHI ki baat sun GRIFFIN ne bhi dhyan se un cloud covers ko dekha aur aisa karte hi usne paaya ki MAHI bilkul sahi keh rahi hai..

jahan baaki cloud covers stable the,wahin MAHI ke bataye covers halka halka shake kar rahe the...

jahan GRIFFIN ye sab dekh rahi thi, wahin apni baat ko continue karte hue...


MAHI-ab jahan hum khade hain,is patthar ko dekhi..behadh fine aur halki likhawat me ispar 1 likha hua hai jo ek pal ke liye gayab ho raha hai aur phir dheere se ubar raha hai..

theek issiki tarah un dono pattharon ko dekho..unme bhi same halki numbering imprint ho rahi hai..

fark sirf itna hai ki humare waale pathar par 1 likhaya hua aa raha hai,wahin un dono pattharon me 2 aur 3 ke imprints ban rahe hain...


pehle apne patthar aur phir aage bane do pattharon ki taraf ishara karte hue kahi ye baat MAHI ne jisse dekh GRIFFIN samajh gayi ki MAHI sahi keh rahi hai aur isiliye..


GRIFFIN-different cloud covers ki ginti aur waise hi baakiyon se alag pattharon ki counting same hai..

ye koi coincidence nahi ho sakta...???

MAHI-hmm..


aisa kehte hue MAHI neeche ghutno ke bal baithi aur jaise hi patthar par 1 imprint bana, toh usne us imprint par haath rakh diya aur uske aisa karte hi us pure patthar me halki kampan hui jiske baad woh imprint jisse MAHI ne chhua tha,woh choti hote chale gayi jiske baad us area se un cloud covers ka roop liye hi ek chota sa crystal patthar prakat hua jisse MAHI ne utha liya...

GRIFFIN bhi ye sab dekh rahi thi aur isiliye...


GRIFFIN-ab ye kya maya hai...???

MAHI-pata nahi..but jaldi hi pata chal jaayega...


ye bol MAHI ne us chote se crystal patthar ko apni jeb me daal liya aur..


MAHI-chalo,aage badhte hain..


ye bol MAHI aur GRIFFIN challang lagate hue un floating pattharon se hote hue BOULEVARD naam ke tunnel ki taraf badhne lage..

is beech un do pattharon par jisme 2 aur 3 ki marking thi,unhe bhi MAHI ne jhuk ko touch kiya tha aur uske waisa karne par un dono pattharon me bhi wahi hua jo pehle patthar me hua tha..

MAHI ki jeb me is waqt kul 3 crystal patthar the jinhe liye hue woh BOULEVARD tunnel ki sarhad par khadi thi..


MAHI-GRIFFIN...yahan se hume thoda carefully aage badhna hoga...khaas kar un cloud covers ke paas jo halke shake kar rahe hain...


GRIFFIN-theek hai...


bade nape tule andaz se aur puri satarkta banaye hue woh dono aage badhne lagi par jitne bhi normal cloud covers the,unke beech se guzarne ke dauran kuch hua nahi par jaise hi woh first cloud cover jo halka halka shake lar raha tha,MAHI aur GRIFFIN uske kareeb pahunche toh...


BOOM........

ek tez dhamaka hua us cloud cover me jiske baad..


MAHI-HOLY SHIT....


chillate hue kahi ye baat MAHI ne...

reason....

jo dhamaka us cloud cover se hue,usse paida hua tha SOLAR WIND STORM....

ek aisa tornado jo sirf space me hi banta hai...(FACT)


MAHI aur GRIFFIN naa sirf us WINDSTORM ko pehchaan gayi thi balki uski chapet me bhi aa gayi thi...

us WIND STORM ne unhe apni chapet me lete hue tezi se gol gol ghumana shuru kar diya tha..

is WIND STORM ki intensity itni zyada thi ki usse bachna toh door,MAHI usme theek se saans bhi nahi le paa rahi thi..

wahin GRIFFIN joki space me bhi araam se safar kar leti thi,woh bhi us super powerful SOLAR WIND STORM me fas kar khudko bebas feel karne lagi...

har guzarte pal ke saath MAHI ki aankhein bhaari hone lagi thi..agar aisa hi kuch der aur chalta raha toh uska aur GRIFFIN ka bachna impossible ho jaane waala tha..

par in saare negetives me ek positive baat ye thi kyunki MAHI ek SAVENT thi,and that to a very good one isiliye bhale hi uska conscious brain weak padte chale jaa raha tha,par uska subconscious brain completely active tha aur isiliye dimag ke us bhaag ne pura command automatically apne control me le liya aur aisa hote hi MAHI ko diya ek idea...

MAHI ka haath apne aap hi uske jeb me gaya jisme se usne us chote se patthar ko bahar nikala jispar 1 marking ki hui thi..

par jahan pehle us patthar me sirf one nazar aa raha tha,wahin is SOLAR WIND STORM ke daayre me aane ki wajah se us patthar ke andar is waqt kuch aur bana hua tha jo pura clear nahi tha aur isiliye MAHI ne us crystal ki tarah ke patthar ko press karna shuru kar diya jiske wajah se woh toot gaya aur aisa hote hi us patthar ke andar bani cheez MAHI ke haathon me chipak gayi...

ye cheez aur kuch nahi living PLANET ki mitti thi aur jaise hi is baat ka MAHI ko realization hua toh usse solution bhi mil gaya..

toh baat ye thi ki is waqt MAHI aur GRIFFIN fase the ek SOLAR WIND STORM ke andar jo sirf space me activate hoti hai,PLANET par nahi...

planet jisme human baste the..kehne ka matlab hai ki is problem ka solution tha MAHI ka HUMAN FORM ENERGY SOURCE....

waise toh filhal ye ENERGY SOURCE activate nahi tha,par temporary active karne ka zariya is waqt MAHI ke haathon ne hi tha..woh MITTI ke kan jisme se MAHI ko behadh strong earthly power feel ho rahi thi aur isiliye usne us mitti ko apne heart ke upar rub kiya par aisa karne ke saath hi woh PAUSED CEREBRATION me chali gayi thi...

jaise hi PAUSED CEREBRATION ke waqt usne us MITTI ko khud ke heart ke upar rub kiya toh uske asar se ek pal ke liye MAHI ka HUMAN FORM ENERGY SOURCE activate ho gaya aur aisa hote hi MAHI se ek strong ENERGY BEAM bahar nikli aur aisa hote hi woh SOLAR WIND STORM gayab ho gaya jiske baad MAHI aur GRIFFIN,dono hi neeche zamin par gir gaye...

lambi lambi saanson ke beech khade hote hue khud ko durust kiya
un dono ne jiske baad...


GRIFFIN-thank GOD MAHI ki tumhe sahi waqt par sahi idea click ho gaya...

MAHI-hmm, let's move forward..


is baar beena zyada dar ke MAHI aur GRIFFIN aage badhe the aur woh isiliye kyunki woh dono jaan gaye the ki khatra unhe bas un shaking cloud cover waali jagah par hi hai..

khair,chalte hue woh dono us second cloud cover ke paas pahunche joki unka agla hurdle tha..


MAHI-ready...

GRIFFIN-yup...


khudko taiyar karte hue jaise hi MAHI aur GRIFFIN ne apna agla kadam us cloud cover ke daayre me rakha toh..


SSSSSCHRRRRRRR....


ek ajeeb si awaaz ke saath ek bada sa blockage,ek diwaar ban gaya MAHI aur GRIFFIN ke raaste me..

aur ye diwar bana tha FIRE se,AAG se aur jisme suraj se bhi zyada intensity thi..

haan,MAHI aur GRIFFIN, dono ko hi us aag ki intensity ne jalaya nahi tha par us aag ki garmi se un dono ko ek ajeeb si manhusiyat feel hone lagi thi..

unhe aisa laga raha tha jaise woh dono zindagi me kabhi khush nahi reh paayengi..

aisa lagne ka reason MAHI ko toh samajh me nahi aaya par GRIFFIN..!!!

usse us aag ki aur usse paida hone waali negetive feeling ke baare me pata chal chuka tha aur us reason ko jaan uski aankhen bhi badi ho gayi thi...


GRIFFIN-ye AAG...!!!ye toh HELL'S FIRE HAI....

NARK KI AAG.....

MAHI-WHAT...!!!!

GRIFFIN-haan,par ye yahan kaise..??but most importantly,iske aanch se bacha nahi jaa sakta,par phir bhi hum normally kaise khade reh paa rahe hain...!!!!


GRIFFIN ki baat sun MAHI ke dimag me kuch click kiya aur usne turant apne jeb me haath daal woh dusra crystal rupi patthar nikala aur..


MAHI-shayad iski wajah se...


apni baat bolte hue MAHI ne us crystal stone ko apne haathon me hi crush kar diya aur uske aisa karte hi us patthar ke andar se ek behadh strong ANGEL NIMBI(GLORY RAY) nikal hawa me theher gayi...

par jab aisa hua toh...

AHHHHH....

ye cheekh MAHI aur GRIFFIN,dono ke hi mooh se nikal gaya..

reason...

us ANGEL NIMBI ke bahar aate hi saamne jal raha HELLS FIRE hadh se zyada bhadak gaya jiske baad uski lapte aur zyada badh gayi aur jab aisa hua toh usse ek behadh hi powerful ENERGY DURESS nikli jiske impact ke chapet me aa gaye MAHI aur GRIFFIN..

aisa hone par un dono ko pyscically chot toh nahi aayi par un dono ka saara internal part jadh se hil gaya....

ek tez jhatka sa laga un dono ko jiski wajah se woh dono hi udte hue piche jaakar gire..

par sabse bada impact pada tha MAHI ke heart me base uske ANGEL FORM ENERGY SOURCE ko...

HELLS FIRE ko feel karte hi woh source uncontrollable ho gayi aur jaise hi ye hua toh...

MAHI ka sharir hawa me uth gaya aur tezi se idhar udhar jhatka khaate hue roam karne laga...

GRIFFIN kuch kar sakti thi nahi kyunki woh jaanti thi ki MAHI ke saath ho rahi ghatna uske ANGELS FORM ENERGY SOURCE ki wajah se hai jisse woh control nahi kar sakti...

wahin ENERGY SOURCE ke unstable hone se MAHI apne SOUL tak se distract ho chuki thi..

ek hosh waali coma jaisi state me pahunch chuki thi woh jisse bahar nikalne ka koi tarika usse nazar nahi aa raha tha par tabhi...


APNI TAAKAT BHI APNE HISAAB SE TABHI CHALTI HAI JAB US TAAKAT KA DHAARAK USKE LAAYAK HO...

AUR TUM LAAYAK HO MERI BACCHI....BAS KHUDPAR DOUBT KARNA BAND KARO & OWN YOUR POWER...


VIKRAM JAIRAJ SINGH ki awaaz gunj uthi MAHI ke dil aur dimag me..

pehli baar suni thi apne PITAH ki awaaz MAHI ne par sunkar aisa laga jaise har woh hawa jo aaj tak uske kaano ko chhu kar gayi hai,usme usne is awaaz ko aur is awaaz ke piche chuppe apne liye beinteha pyar ko mehsoos kiya hai usne..


MAHI-DAD......


bas itna hi bol paayi MAHI...dono aankhon ke kinaron se aansu ki ek patli si dhaar nikal padi uski..

situation uski abhi waise hi unstable thi...hawa me uska sharir abhi bhi jhatke khaa raha tha...

uske andar basa uska ANGELS FORM ENERGY SOURCE abhi bhi bhadka hua tha par in saare odds ke baawjud bas uske PITAH ke awaaz bhar ne MAHI ko ek aisa sukoon de diya tha jiske sahare woh ab bade se bade khatre ko bhi araam se jhel bhi sakti thi aur usse nipat bhi sakti thi..

aur yahi wajah thi kuch pal ke emotional feel ke baad MAHI ki aankhon me ek ajeeb sa confidence dikhne laga jiske baad usne apne andar jhaanka aur pure adhikar ke saath..

STOP.....


itna hi bola MAHI ne jiske baad ek obedient bacche ki tarah uske andar bhadka hua ENERGY SOURCE ek second me hi shaant ho gaya aur aisa hote hi MAHI ka sharir behadh araam se niche zamin par aa gaya..

aisa hote hi MAHI aage badhi aur us ANGEL NIMBI ko joki abhi bhi bade araam se hawa me aahiste aahiste float kar raha tha,usse thaama aur zor se saamne ufaan maarte HELL'S FIRE ki taraf phek diya aur jab woh ANGEL NIMBI HELL'S FIRE se takraya toh uske agle hi pal woh FIRE gayab ho gaya...

raasta clear ho chuka tha jiske baad..


MAHI-chalen...!!!


GRIFFIN se kahi ye baat MAHI ne joki is waqt bade garv ke saath MAHI ko dekh rahi thi aur uski baat sun woh uske paas aayi aur apne sir ko MAHI ke chehre par sehlaate hue apne pyaar zaahir kiya...

MAHI ne bhi bade pyar se uski gardan ko sehlaya jiske baad woh dono aage badh gaye..

anyways,do hurdles paar ho gaye the aur ab ek aakhri hurdle baaki tha...

aur jab lagbhag pure tunnel ka raasta paar karte hue MAHI aur GRIFFIN uske aakhri hadh par aaye jahan ek shield numa diwar bani hui thi aur uske theek pehle tha woh cloud cover jo halka halka shake kar raha tha toh us cloud cover ko dekh aakhein sochne waale andaz me choti ho gayi MAHI ki..

aur woh isiliye kyunki jahan ab tak ke saare cloud cover pure white the,wahin ye cloud cover joki uska aakhri hurdle tha,woh bhi waise toh white hi tha par uske beech halki GREYISH colour bhi chamak rahi thi...

ab is naye change ke piche ka RAAZ toh uske saamne aane par hi pata chalna tha aur isiliye MAHI ne apne kadam us cloud cover ke radar ke andar rakh diye aur jab aisa hua toh uski aur uske saath hi khadi GRIFFIN ki aankhen badi bhi ho gayi aur halki nervous bhi..

reason...

jaise hi MAHI aur GRIFFIN ne apne kadam aage badhaye toh us aakhri hurdle roopi cloud cover ne ek naya roop lena shuru kiya aur jab woh roop pura hua toh...




ye aakhri challenge pichle dono challenges se kahin zyada BADA THA....

roop bana tha uska jisne RAAZ ke dil me taklifon ka teer GADA THA....

maza aane waala tha bohot,kyunki

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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI KI PYSICAL POWER REGAIN HO JAATI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF ERRAPEL EK BACCHE KI JAAN BACHATI HAI.


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CHAPTER-3


( THE DEVIL'S HAVEN,THE SACRIFICE &THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



UPDATE-128



PLACE-ASTER





TUM DONO PLEASE LADNA BAND KAROGE AB....!!!!


kisi na kisi baat par lagatar zubani ladh rahe WOOGER aur GRIFFIN se kahi thi ye baat MAHI ne...

apni power regain karte waqt kuch glimpses dikhe the MAHI ko jisse dekh usse aage kya karna hai,ye pata chal chuka tha....

unhi sab chizon ke baare me soch rahi thi MAHI par WOOGER aur GRIFFIN ke beech tu tu mai mai ki wajah se woh theek se concentrate nahi kar paa rahi aur isiliye usne woh kaha jo kaha jisse sun...


GRIFFIN-mai nahi ladh rahi MAHI..ye WOOGER meri har baat ko galat bata raha hai aur lagatar mujhe pinch kar raha hai...

WOOGER-haan sahi kaha...sab mai hi kar raha hun,tum toh doodh ki dhuli hui ho....

bhale meri baaton me joki mujhse aur mere MASTER se related hain,unme apni muft ki raaye aur naak ghusaye jaa rahi ho par phir bhi galat tum nahi ho,galat toh tumhare saath ho raha hai....


WOOGER ke vyang ko sun jahan ek taraf muskura uthi MAHI wahin GRIFFIN ka mooh ban gaya jiske baad..


GRIFFIN-haan toh jab tum aur tumahare MASTER galat baat bologe yaa galat faisle loge toh mai bolungi hi naa..!!!

WOOGER-pata hai woh do key words joki missing hai tumhare sentence se,woh kya hain..???

hamari zindagi...

hamari zindagi ke faisle..ab woh sahi ho ya galat,tum kaun hoti ho unpar comment kar apni raay dene waali...

hum upar aasman se kude ya neeche khaayi me,humari marzi,tumhe apni ye badi si gardan us faisle ke beech daalne ki zaroorat nahi...


WOOGER ki baat sun GRIFFIN kuch kehti ki tabhi MAHI has di jisse sun GRIFFIN ke saath saath WOOGER ka dhyan bhi uski taraf gaya jiske baad GRIFFIN toh shaant hi rahi par WOOGER...


WOOGER-MAHI,jo baat maine GRIFFIN se kahi hai,woh tum par bhi applicable hoti hai...MASTER ke baare me ek baat jaan lo..woh wahi karte hain,jo unka dil karta hai..is baat se fark nahi padta ki woh cheez sahi hai yaa galat..

saath hi saath kabhi bhi unhe kisi bhi cheez me raay mat dena,naa hi unke faisle par comment karna...

isse aise samajhte hain ki maan lo woh kuch karne waale hon par us chiz ko woh karen,usse pehle hi agar tumne ussi chiz ko karne ki baat unse keh di,toh bhale hi woh chiz unke liye kitni hi important kyun naa ho,sirf tumhare kehne ki wajah se woh phir us kaam ko nahi karenge...

GRIFFIN-arre ye kya baat hui..???aisa thodi naa hota hai..

WOOGER-kisne kaha,tumne..sabse pehle toh tum ye jaan lo ki tum kya sochti hi,woh toh matter hi nahi karta..

par agar phir bhi interfere karna hai,toh theek,kar ke dekh lena..galti ko naya aakaar dekar gunah bana denge MASTER jiski zimmedar tum hogi...

MAHI,woh kitne hi galat kyun naa ho,par unhe tokna mat..unhe khud apni galti ka realization ho jaaye,yahi tarika hai unhe us form me pahunchane ka jiske baare me MADDOX ne tumse kaha tha..

yaad rahe,hawa ka rookh moda jaa sakta hai,tufaan ka nahi aur naahi uske beech se nikla jaa sakta hai..

behtari issi me hai ki yaa toh uske raaste se hi hath jaao,yaa phir uski chapet ke aage ya piche bina usse touch kiye badhte jaao...

MAHI-mai samajh rahi hun WOOGER aur fikr mat karo,naa mai RAAZ ke kisi bhi action par chaahe woh kitna hi galat kyun naa ho, retaliate karungi, aur naahi interfere...

mai jaanti hun ki jab tak uska dard,uska ghussa pura bahar nahi aa jaata,woh brainly DEVIL aur heartly ANGEL me convert nahi ho paayega...

but filhal ye batao ki RAAZ ke paas GALEN pahunche kaise...???

WOOGER-naam kaise pata chala tumhe us planet ka jahan is waqt MASTER hain...!!!!

MAHI-thik waise hi jaise mujhe ye maalum hai ki abhi kuch der pehle jo tum aur GRIFFIN ladh rahe the,woh asal ne meri madad ke liye hi tha...

tum dono ko hi pata tha ki mai us waqt pyscically kaafi kamzor thi aur us state me mai apne target tak nahi pahunch sakti...

tum dono ko ye bhi pata tha ki tumhari forced aur opposing powers se bhi woh energy wave release ho sakti thi jisse mere andar chuppe mere dono forms ke power mujhe dikh sakte the aur isiliye to help me,tum dono ek dusre se takraaye the..

am i right or am i right....!!!


muskura kar kahi ye saari baat MAHI ne jispar WOOGER toh shaant hi raha par GRIFFIN MAHI ki analyzation ko sun khush ho gayi...

aur ho bhi kyun naa..aaj usse MAHI me uske pitah ke dimag ki jhalak jo dikhayi di thi aur aisa hona is kahani ek liye behadh zaroori tha..

aakhir,takkar jo VIDEOUS jaise shaatir khiladi se thi jo player ke saath saath khud woh game bhi tha jisme woh sab khel rahe the...

khair,MAHI ke baat ko sun..


WOOGER-apni shakti ke saath GALEN ki chavi tumhare andar isiliye dikhayi thi maine taaki tum us puri jagah ko aur most importantly,us planet ke upar lage kawach ko dekh aur samajh sako..

kyunki MASTER us PLANET ke andar hain isiliye mai toh wahan aaram se jaa sakta hun par tum dono ke liye ye bohot zyada mushkil hone waala hai...

kyunki tumhari dono hi shaktiyon ke forms abhi apni jagah se zara sa bhi nahi hile hain, isiliye directly tum us kawach ko todne me filhal saksham nahi ho...


MAHI-manzil bhale ek ho,par us manzil tak pahunchne ke raaste bohot se hote hain...

GALEN par pahunchne ka sidha raasta bhale hi hamare liye ban hai par woh raasta jahan se universe ke bohot se jagahon ke darwaze khul sakte hain,woh option toh open hi hai...

THE BOULEVARD....

wahan se hum GALEN pahunch sakte hain...


(BOULEVARD...ye naam bhi un cheezon me se ek thi jisse MAHI ne paused CEREBRATION process ke waqt apne ANGEL aur HUMAN form ki taakat dekhne ke baad mehsoos kiya tha...)


MAHI ne jo naam liya tha,uske baare me naa toh GRIFFIN ko kuch pata tha aur naahi WOOGER ko aur isiliye...


GRIFFIN-BOULEVARD..!!!ye kya chiz hai..!!!

MAHI-BOULEVARD ek chuppi hui pathway hai jahan se GALEN pahuncha jaa sakta hai....

GRIFFIN-really...!!par tumhe kaise pata us jagah ke baare me...???

MAHI-bas itna samajh lo ki FALLON ke mujhme samane se jo faayde mujhe hue hain,unme se hi ye bhi ek hai...

WOOGER-touch my head MAHI...mujhe dekhni hai ye jagah...


WOOGER ki baat par bina kuch puche MAHI ne apna haath uske sir par rakh diya aur uske aisa karte hi WOOGER ke dimag me BOULEVARD naam ki jagah ka scene clear ho gaya jiske baad...


WOOGER-human world me jo BOULEVARD hote hain,unse different hai ye jagah...

trees ki jagah kuch magical barriers lage hue hain is jagah....ye route successfully cross kar paana kaafi tough ho sakta hai..

MAHI-aur isiliye hi is route se jaana aur bhi zyada important hai...kyunki mere liye apne dono strengths ko close laate hue unhe ek karne ka sabse acha tarika tough challenges hi hai..

aise situations me hi meri abilities nikhrengi...

WOOGER-thik hai phir...MAHI, GRIFFIN ke upar baith jaao..mai tum dono ko BOULEVARD ke saamne pahuncha deta hun....

GRIFFIN-pahuncha deta hun matlab...???tum bhi toh hamare saath chaloge naa...

WOOGER-mai kyun saath chalun jab mujhe GALEN ne direct entry mil sakti hai...!!!

GRIFFIN-dekha MAHI..kitna selfish ha ye...

WOOGER-apni safety ke baare me sochna selfishness nahi samajhdari hoti hai..par tumhare jaisi emotional fool ko ye baat samajh me aayegi nahi aur naahi tumhe samjhane me mujhe apna time waste karna hai....


WOOGER ki baat par GRIFFIN kuch kehti ki tabhi..


MAHI-ok enough now...thik hai WOOGER,ab mulakat sidhe GALEN me hi hogi...


apni baat bolte hue GRIFFIN par chadh gayi MAHI jiske baad...

FUUUUUU......

ek tez foonk maari WOOGER ne jiske baad MAHI aur GRIFFIN ke chaaron taraf ek chota sa tornado ban gaya

ye tornado asal me ek PATH GUIDE tha jo sirf chuppe hue jagahon par logon ko drop karta tha..

khair,har guzarte pal ke saath woh tornado unke paas aane laga aur phir dekhte hi dekhte MAHI aur GRIFFIN,dono hi us tornado ke giraft me aa gaye jiske baad woh tornado unhe apne andar samate hue gayab ho gaya...

MAHI aur GRIFFIN gayab ho chuke the jiske baad WOOGER bhi apni manzil ki taraf jaane ke liye gayab ho gaya....






PLANET-GALEN


PLACE-GALEN MARKET






YE LADKA KAHAN BHATAKTE REHTA HAI....???EK JAGAH PAANV HI NAHI TIKTE ISKE...!!!!


GALEN market se hote hui ek open colony ki taraf badhte hue kahi ye baat ERRAPEL ne...

reason...

RAAZ....kuch der pehle apne cottage aur aas paas ke har jagah par RAAZ ko dhundne ke baad jab woh ERRAPEL ko kahin nahi mila toh aakhirkaar usse ek baar phir apne aur uske connection AURA ke through RAAZ ko dhundna pada aur jab usne aisa kiya toh paaya ki woh is waqt GALEN market ki taraf gaya hua hai..

anjaan jagah thi upar se yaadasht ki batti gul..aise me RAAZ ka yun market me akele ghuma sahi nahi tha aur isiliye ERRAPEL turant jahan woh tha,us disha ki taraf badh chali thi...

market se hote hue jab woh us colony ki taraf badhi jahan RAAZ gaya tha toh kuch door jaate hi naa sirf uske paanv achanak se hi rook gaye balki saath hi usse saamne ka nazara dekh hairani bhi hui...

toh baat darasal ye thi jahan is waqt ERRAPEL thi,uske thode door hi ek tree ki ot liye RAAZ khada apne saamne bane ek garden me kisiko dekh raha tha..

ye kisi aur koi nahi wahi aurat thi do din pehle apne bache ko theek karwane ke liye ERRAPEL ke ghar aayi thi...

is waqt woh aurat apne us chote se bete ke saath khel rahi thi...

us din apne bete ko kho hi diya tha us aurat ne,yahi wajah thi ki is waqt woh apne bacche ke saath khelte hue usse lagatar chume bhi jaa rahi thi..

khair, ERRAPEL ke hairan hone ka reason ye tha ki saamne garden me chal rahe scene ko dekh RAAZ ke aankhon me aansu the..

par kamal ki baat ye thi ki uska chehra bilkul normal tha..rone ki wajah se chehre par aane waala khinchaw,aisa kuch bhi nahi dikh raha tha RAAZ ke face par..

woh normally hi khada tha,bas uski aankhon se paani lagatar nikle jaa raha tha..

kuch der tak ye dekhti rahi ERRAPEL par phir woh RAAZ ki taraf badh gayi aur uske paas pahunchi..


HMM HMM HMM,HMM HMM HMM HMM HMM HMM HMMMMM,HMM HMM HMM HMM HMM HMM M HMMM HMM....


RAAZ ke paas pahunchte hi ERRAPEL ne suni ye dhun jo RAAZ gungunate hue saamne lady aur uske bache ko dekh raha tha...

kaafi sunaapan, khaalipan aur dard tha us dhun me jisse kuch der tak dhyan se sunti aur feel karti rahi ERRAPEL..

par phir kuch der tak us dhun ko sunte rehne ke baad ERRAPEL ne uske kandhe par haath rakha aur aisa hote hi RAAZ jaise ek trance se bahar aaya aur hadbadate hue piche palta..

ERRAPEL ko apne saamne dekh woh shaant bhi ho gaya aur usne apne aansu bhi jhat se saaf kar diye....

par aankhen uski abhi bhi kuch bhari hi thi jisse kuch der tak lagatar dekhne ke baad...


ERRAPEL-kya baat hai..???aankhen kyun bhari hai tumhari...??aur ye chupke us lady aur uske bache ko kyun dekh rahe ho tum...???

MAI-pata nahi kyun apne aap hi aankhen bhar gayi...!!!mai toh market ghumne nikla tha,wahan mujhe us din subah jo tumhare ghar aayi thi, woh lady market me apne bacche ke saath dikhi..

woh apne bache ko toys dila rahi thi..

un dono ko dekh mera dil kiya ki unhe hi dekhta rahun...

isiliye unke piche yahan tak aa gaya aur unhe dekhne laga..

us bacche ko uski mom k saath khelta dekh dil bhaari se ho gaya aur aankhen bhar aayi...

par sach me,aisa hone ka reason mujhe bhi nahi pata...!!!!

ERRAPEL-shayad tumhare dil ko tumhari MAA ki yaad aa gayi..???

MAI-MAA.....


bas itna hi nikal paaya mere mooh se jiske baad mera dil tadap sa gaya..

ERRAPEL mere manobhaav ko ache se samajh rahi thi isiliye usne turant baat ko badla aur..


ERRAPEL-chalen yaa phir din bhar yahin khade rehne ka iraada hai...!!!

MAI-chalo....


ye bol ek baar un maa bete ko dekh mai ERRAPEL ke saath aage badh gaya..


MAI-tumhe kaise pata chala ki mai yahan hun..???

ERRAPEL-kuch kaam se aayi thi mai yahan,tumpar bas nazar padh gayi...

MAI-oh...

ERRAPEL-waise ek baat batao...mai jab tumhare paas aayi toh maine tumhe ek dhun gungunate hue suna...kis gaane ki dhun thi woh...???

MAI-pata nahi...un maa bete ko dekha toh woh dhun apne aap mere dimag me banane lagi....

(NOTE-doston,college me ek gaana likha tha maine...abhi RAAZ ki jo condition hai,usme woh gaana kaafi suit karta hai.. next update me RAAZ ke through us gaane ka mukhda aur first antra aapke saamne hoga)


ERRAPEL-dhun bani hai toh gaana bhi bana hi hoga....

MAI-shayad,par woh bol abhi tak mere dimag aur zuban par nahi chadhe hain...

tumhe ajeeb lag rahi hongi naa meri baatein...!!!saari ki saari aadhi adhuri....

ERRAPEL-baatein dhaage ki tarah hoti hai..shuruat ek sire se hoti hai par kabhi kabhi dusra sira mil nahi paata..

par iska ye matlab toh nahi ki dusra sira hai hi nahi...bas shayad us sire tak pahunchne ka waqt nahi aaya hai..!!!!

MAI-aur agar waqt aane se pehle dhaaga hi toot gaya toh..!!!!

ERRAPEL-toh kya..???toota dhaaga bhi toh ek naya sira banakar hi alag hota hai naa...!!!!

aur ye acha bhi hai, naye sire par pahunchne ka faasla bhi kam jayega..

baat bas dekhne ke NAZARIYE ki hai RAAZ...sab kuch apni sahi jagah par baith hi jaata hai, chahiye toh bas ek sahi aur positive NAZARIYA,ek behtarin ATTITUDE...







PLACE-BOULEVARD







YEH KAISI JAGAH HAI...????


trees ke patle patle branches jaise dikhne waale cloud covers ke beech bane ek tunnel ko dekhte hue kahi thi ye baat GRIFFIN ne....

PATH GUIDE TORNADO ke through MAHI aur GRIFFIN jis jagah par pahunch is waqt khade hue the,woh jagah bhi kaafi alag tarah ki thi...

5 se 6 feet bade pathar joki hawa me float karte hue us tunnel me jaane ke liye joki wahi BOULEVARD tha jiske through woh dono GALEN pahunchne waale the,is waqt khade hue the...

ek aur ajeeb aur kamal ki baat ye thi ki us pure BOULEVARD ka view joki kareeb 2 km lamba tha,puri taraf se clear aur bright tha..

itna lamba tunnel hone ke baawjud us BOULEVARD ka pura view MAHI aur GRIFFIN,un dono ke hi aankhon me aise dikh raha tha maano kisine unki aankhon ke aage invisible binocular glasses laga diye hon..

behatrin MAGIC...khair,

jahan is waqt GRIFFIN sirf us tunnel ko dekh rahi thi,wahin MAHI ki nazar un patle cloud covers aur saath hi jispar woh khade the,aur aage badhte hue bhi khada hona tha,woh floating patthar,unpar tiki hui thi..

woh bade gaur se in dono hi jagahon ko dekh kuch soche jaa rahi thi...

aur kuch der baad jab GRIFFIN ki nazar MAHI par padi toh usne bhi is baat par gaur kiya aur...


GRIFFIN-kya dekh rahi ho MAHI...??

MAHI-un saare cloud covers ko dhyan se dekho GRIFFIN...un sab ka shape toh ek jaisa hi hai par phir bhi unme se teen covers thode alag hain...

baaki saare cloud covers ekdum shaant hain..lekin left ki taraf bicche cloud covers me se third number ka cover dekho,woh halka halka beech me shake kar raha hai..

theek ussiki tarah ussi line me aage ki taraf do aur cloud covers hain,jo waise hi shake kar rahe hain..

aur right ki taraf jo last cloud cover
hai woh bhi halka halka shake kar raha hai...


MAHI ki baat sun GRIFFIN ne bhi dhyan se un cloud covers ko dekha aur aisa karte hi usne paaya ki MAHI bilkul sahi keh rahi hai..

jahan baaki cloud covers stable the,wahin MAHI ke bataye covers halka halka shake kar rahe the...

jahan GRIFFIN ye sab dekh rahi thi, wahin apni baat ko continue karte hue...


MAHI-ab jahan hum khade hain,is patthar ko dekhi..behadh fine aur halki likhawat me ispar 1 likha hua hai jo ek pal ke liye gayab ho raha hai aur phir dheere se ubar raha hai..

theek issiki tarah un dono pattharon ko dekho..unme bhi same halki numbering imprint ho rahi hai..

fark sirf itna hai ki humare waale pathar par 1 likhaya hua aa raha hai,wahin un dono pattharon me 2 aur 3 ke imprints ban rahe hain...


pehle apne patthar aur phir aage bane do pattharon ki taraf ishara karte hue kahi ye baat MAHI ne jisse dekh GRIFFIN samajh gayi ki MAHI sahi keh rahi hai aur isiliye..


GRIFFIN-different cloud covers ki ginti aur waise hi baakiyon se alag pattharon ki counting same hai..

ye koi coincidence nahi ho sakta...???

MAHI-hmm..


aisa kehte hue MAHI neeche ghutno ke bal baithi aur jaise hi patthar par 1 imprint bana, toh usne us imprint par haath rakh diya aur uske aisa karte hi us pure patthar me halki kampan hui jiske baad woh imprint jisse MAHI ne chhua tha,woh choti hote chale gayi jiske baad us area se un cloud covers ka roop liye hi ek chota sa crystal patthar prakat hua jisse MAHI ne utha liya...

GRIFFIN bhi ye sab dekh rahi thi aur isiliye...


GRIFFIN-ab ye kya maya hai...???

MAHI-pata nahi..but jaldi hi pata chal jaayega...


ye bol MAHI ne us chote se crystal patthar ko apni jeb me daal liya aur..


MAHI-chalo,aage badhte hain..


ye bol MAHI aur GRIFFIN challang lagate hue un floating pattharon se hote hue BOULEVARD naam ke tunnel ki taraf badhne lage..

is beech un do pattharon par jisme 2 aur 3 ki marking thi,unhe bhi MAHI ne jhuk ko touch kiya tha aur uske waisa karne par un dono pattharon me bhi wahi hua jo pehle patthar me hua tha..

MAHI ki jeb me is waqt kul 3 crystal patthar the jinhe liye hue woh BOULEVARD tunnel ki sarhad par khadi thi..


MAHI-GRIFFIN...yahan se hume thoda carefully aage badhna hoga...khaas kar un cloud covers ke paas jo halke shake kar rahe hain...


GRIFFIN-theek hai...


bade nape tule andaz se aur puri satarkta banaye hue woh dono aage badhne lagi par jitne bhi normal cloud covers the,unke beech se guzarne ke dauran kuch hua nahi par jaise hi woh first cloud cover jo halka halka shake lar raha tha,MAHI aur GRIFFIN uske kareeb pahunche toh...


BOOM........

ek tez dhamaka hua us cloud cover me jiske baad..


MAHI-HOLY SHIT....


chillate hue kahi ye baat MAHI ne...

reason....

jo dhamaka us cloud cover se hue,usse paida hua tha SOLAR WIND STORM....

ek aisa tornado jo sirf space me hi banta hai...(FACT)


MAHI aur GRIFFIN naa sirf us WINDSTORM ko pehchaan gayi thi balki uski chapet me bhi aa gayi thi...

us WIND STORM ne unhe apni chapet me lete hue tezi se gol gol ghumana shuru kar diya tha..

is WIND STORM ki intensity itni zyada thi ki usse bachna toh door,MAHI usme theek se saans bhi nahi le paa rahi thi..

wahin GRIFFIN joki space me bhi araam se safar kar leti thi,woh bhi us super powerful SOLAR WIND STORM me fas kar khudko bebas feel karne lagi...

har guzarte pal ke saath MAHI ki aankhein bhaari hone lagi thi..agar aisa hi kuch der aur chalta raha toh uska aur GRIFFIN ka bachna impossible ho jaane waala tha..

par in saare negetives me ek positive baat ye thi kyunki MAHI ek SAVENT thi,and that to a very good one isiliye bhale hi uska conscious brain weak padte chale jaa raha tha,par uska subconscious brain completely active tha aur isiliye dimag ke us bhaag ne pura command automatically apne control me le liya aur aisa hote hi MAHI ko diya ek idea...

MAHI ka haath apne aap hi uske jeb me gaya jisme se usne us chote se patthar ko bahar nikala jispar 1 marking ki hui thi..

par jahan pehle us patthar me sirf one nazar aa raha tha,wahin is SOLAR WIND STORM ke daayre me aane ki wajah se us patthar ke andar is waqt kuch aur bana hua tha jo pura clear nahi tha aur isiliye MAHI ne us crystal ki tarah ke patthar ko press karna shuru kar diya jiske wajah se woh toot gaya aur aisa hote hi us patthar ke andar bani cheez MAHI ke haathon me chipak gayi...

ye cheez aur kuch nahi living PLANET ki mitti thi aur jaise hi is baat ka MAHI ko realization hua toh usse solution bhi mil gaya..

toh baat ye thi ki is waqt MAHI aur GRIFFIN fase the ek SOLAR WIND STORM ke andar jo sirf space me activate hoti hai,PLANET par nahi...

planet jisme human baste the..kehne ka matlab hai ki is problem ka solution tha MAHI ka HUMAN FORM ENERGY SOURCE....

waise toh filhal ye ENERGY SOURCE activate nahi tha,par temporary active karne ka zariya is waqt MAHI ke haathon ne hi tha..woh MITTI ke kan jisme se MAHI ko behadh strong earthly power feel ho rahi thi aur isiliye usne us mitti ko apne heart ke upar rub kiya par aisa karne ke saath hi woh PAUSED CEREBRATION me chali gayi thi...

jaise hi PAUSED CEREBRATION ke waqt usne us MITTI ko khud ke heart ke upar rub kiya toh uske asar se ek pal ke liye MAHI ka HUMAN FORM ENERGY SOURCE activate ho gaya aur aisa hote hi MAHI se ek strong ENERGY BEAM bahar nikli aur aisa hote hi woh SOLAR WIND STORM gayab ho gaya jiske baad MAHI aur GRIFFIN,dono hi neeche zamin par gir gaye...

lambi lambi saanson ke beech khade hote hue khud ko durust kiya
un dono ne jiske baad...


GRIFFIN-thank GOD MAHI ki tumhe sahi waqt par sahi idea click ho gaya...

MAHI-hmm, let's move forward..


is baar beena zyada dar ke MAHI aur GRIFFIN aage badhe the aur woh isiliye kyunki woh dono jaan gaye the ki khatra unhe bas un shaking cloud cover waali jagah par hi hai..

khair,chalte hue woh dono us second cloud cover ke paas pahunche joki unka agla hurdle tha..


MAHI-ready...

GRIFFIN-yup...


khudko taiyar karte hue jaise hi MAHI aur GRIFFIN ne apna agla kadam us cloud cover ke daayre me rakha toh..


SSSSSCHRRRRRRR....


ek ajeeb si awaaz ke saath ek bada sa blockage,ek diwaar ban gaya MAHI aur GRIFFIN ke raaste me..

aur ye diwar bana tha FIRE se,AAG se aur jisme suraj se bhi zyada intensity thi..

haan,MAHI aur GRIFFIN, dono ko hi us aag ki intensity ne jalaya nahi tha par us aag ki garmi se un dono ko ek ajeeb si manhusiyat feel hone lagi thi..

unhe aisa laga raha tha jaise woh dono zindagi me kabhi khush nahi reh paayengi..

aisa lagne ka reason MAHI ko toh samajh me nahi aaya par GRIFFIN..!!!

usse us aag ki aur usse paida hone waali negetive feeling ke baare me pata chal chuka tha aur us reason ko jaan uski aankhen bhi badi ho gayi thi...


GRIFFIN-ye AAG...!!!ye toh HELL'S FIRE HAI....

NARK KI AAG.....

MAHI-WHAT...!!!!

GRIFFIN-haan,par ye yahan kaise..??but most importantly,iske aanch se bacha nahi jaa sakta,par phir bhi hum normally kaise khade reh paa rahe hain...!!!!


GRIFFIN ki baat sun MAHI ke dimag me kuch click kiya aur usne turant apne jeb me haath daal woh dusra crystal rupi patthar nikala aur..


MAHI-shayad iski wajah se...


apni baat bolte hue MAHI ne us crystal stone ko apne haathon me hi crush kar diya aur uske aisa karte hi us patthar ke andar se ek behadh strong ANGEL NIMBI(GLORY RAY) nikal hawa me theher gayi...

par jab aisa hua toh...

AHHHHH....

ye cheekh MAHI aur GRIFFIN,dono ke hi mooh se nikal gaya..

reason...

us ANGEL NIMBI ke bahar aate hi saamne jal raha HELLS FIRE hadh se zyada bhadak gaya jiske baad uski lapte aur zyada badh gayi aur jab aisa hua toh usse ek behadh hi powerful ENERGY DURESS nikli jiske impact ke chapet me aa gaye MAHI aur GRIFFIN..

aisa hone par un dono ko pyscically chot toh nahi aayi par un dono ka saara internal part jadh se hil gaya....

ek tez jhatka sa laga un dono ko jiski wajah se woh dono hi udte hue piche jaakar gire..

par sabse bada impact pada tha MAHI ke heart me base uske ANGEL FORM ENERGY SOURCE ko...

HELLS FIRE ko feel karte hi woh source uncontrollable ho gayi aur jaise hi ye hua toh...

MAHI ka sharir hawa me uth gaya aur tezi se idhar udhar jhatka khaate hue roam karne laga...

GRIFFIN kuch kar sakti thi nahi kyunki woh jaanti thi ki MAHI ke saath ho rahi ghatna uske ANGELS FORM ENERGY SOURCE ki wajah se hai jisse woh control nahi kar sakti...

wahin ENERGY SOURCE ke unstable hone se MAHI apne SOUL tak se distract ho chuki thi..

ek hosh waali coma jaisi state me pahunch chuki thi woh jisse bahar nikalne ka koi tarika usse nazar nahi aa raha tha par tabhi...


APNI TAAKAT BHI APNE HISAAB SE TABHI CHALTI HAI JAB US TAAKAT KA DHAARAK USKE LAAYAK HO...

AUR TUM LAAYAK HO MERI BACCHI....BAS KHUDPAR DOUBT KARNA BAND KARO & OWN YOUR POWER...


VIKRAM JAIRAJ SINGH ki awaaz gunj uthi MAHI ke dil aur dimag me..

pehli baar suni thi apne PITAH ki awaaz MAHI ne par sunkar aisa laga jaise har woh hawa jo aaj tak uske kaano ko chhu kar gayi hai,usme usne is awaaz ko aur is awaaz ke piche chuppe apne liye beinteha pyar ko mehsoos kiya hai usne..


MAHI-DAD......


bas itna hi bol paayi MAHI...dono aankhon ke kinaron se aansu ki ek patli si dhaar nikal padi uski..

situation uski abhi waise hi unstable thi...hawa me uska sharir abhi bhi jhatke khaa raha tha...

uske andar basa uska ANGELS FORM ENERGY SOURCE abhi bhi bhadka hua tha par in saare odds ke baawjud bas uske PITAH ke awaaz bhar ne MAHI ko ek aisa sukoon de diya tha jiske sahare woh ab bade se bade khatre ko bhi araam se jhel bhi sakti thi aur usse nipat bhi sakti thi..

aur yahi wajah thi kuch pal ke emotional feel ke baad MAHI ki aankhon me ek ajeeb sa confidence dikhne laga jiske baad usne apne andar jhaanka aur pure adhikar ke saath..

STOP.....


itna hi bola MAHI ne jiske baad ek obedient bacche ki tarah uske andar bhadka hua ENERGY SOURCE ek second me hi shaant ho gaya aur aisa hote hi MAHI ka sharir behadh araam se niche zamin par aa gaya..

aisa hote hi MAHI aage badhi aur us ANGEL NIMBI ko joki abhi bhi bade araam se hawa me aahiste aahiste float kar raha tha,usse thaama aur zor se saamne ufaan maarte HELL'S FIRE ki taraf phek diya aur jab woh ANGEL NIMBI HELL'S FIRE se takraya toh uske agle hi pal woh FIRE gayab ho gaya...

raasta clear ho chuka tha jiske baad..


MAHI-chalen...!!!


GRIFFIN se kahi ye baat MAHI ne joki is waqt bade garv ke saath MAHI ko dekh rahi thi aur uski baat sun woh uske paas aayi aur apne sir ko MAHI ke chehre par sehlaate hue apne pyaar zaahir kiya...

MAHI ne bhi bade pyar se uski gardan ko sehlaya jiske baad woh dono aage badh gaye..

anyways,do hurdles paar ho gaye the aur ab ek aakhri hurdle baaki tha...

aur jab lagbhag pure tunnel ka raasta paar karte hue MAHI aur GRIFFIN uske aakhri hadh par aaye jahan ek shield numa diwar bani hui thi aur uske theek pehle tha woh cloud cover jo halka halka shake kar raha tha toh us cloud cover ko dekh aakhein sochne waale andaz me choti ho gayi MAHI ki..

aur woh isiliye kyunki jahan ab tak ke saare cloud cover pure white the,wahin ye cloud cover joki uska aakhri hurdle tha,woh bhi waise toh white hi tha par uske beech halki GREYISH colour bhi chamak rahi thi...

ab is naye change ke piche ka RAAZ toh uske saamne aane par hi pata chalna tha aur isiliye MAHI ne apne kadam us cloud cover ke radar ke andar rakh diye aur jab aisa hua toh uski aur uske saath hi khadi GRIFFIN ki aankhen badi bhi ho gayi aur halki nervous bhi..

reason...

jaise hi MAHI aur GRIFFIN ne apne kadam aage badhaye toh us aakhri hurdle roopi cloud cover ne ek naya roop lena shuru kiya aur jab woh roop pura hua toh...




ye aakhri challenge pichle dono challenges se kahin zyada BADA THA....

roop bana tha uska jisne RAAZ ke dil me taklifon ka teer GADA THA....

maza aane waala tha bohot,kyunki

ANGEL'S LORD ki BETI ke saamne is waqt,mayavi hi sahi par VIDEOUS KHADA THA...
















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......















AAPKA APNA V....J....
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AB TAK AAPNE PADHA KI JAHAN EK TARAF MAHI KI PYSICAL POWER REGAIN HO JAATI HAI WAHIN DUSRI TARAF ERRAPEL EK BACCHE KI JAAN BACHATI HAI.


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CHAPTER-3


( THE DEVIL'S HAVEN,THE SACRIFICE &THE PERFECT EPILOGUE)



UPDATE-128



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TUM DONO PLEASE LADNA BAND KAROGE AB....!!!!


kisi na kisi baat par lagatar zubani ladh rahe WOOGER aur GRIFFIN se kahi thi ye baat MAHI ne...

apni power regain karte waqt kuch glimpses dikhe the MAHI ko jisse dekh usse aage kya karna hai,ye pata chal chuka tha....

unhi sab chizon ke baare me soch rahi thi MAHI par WOOGER aur GRIFFIN ke beech tu tu mai mai ki wajah se woh theek se concentrate nahi kar paa rahi aur isiliye usne woh kaha jo kaha jisse sun...


GRIFFIN-mai nahi ladh rahi MAHI..ye WOOGER meri har baat ko galat bata raha hai aur lagatar mujhe pinch kar raha hai...

WOOGER-haan sahi kaha...sab mai hi kar raha hun,tum toh doodh ki dhuli hui ho....

bhale meri baaton me joki mujhse aur mere MASTER se related hain,unme apni muft ki raaye aur naak ghusaye jaa rahi ho par phir bhi galat tum nahi ho,galat toh tumhare saath ho raha hai....


WOOGER ke vyang ko sun jahan ek taraf muskura uthi MAHI wahin GRIFFIN ka mooh ban gaya jiske baad..


GRIFFIN-haan toh jab tum aur tumahare MASTER galat baat bologe yaa galat faisle loge toh mai bolungi hi naa..!!!

WOOGER-pata hai woh do key words joki missing hai tumhare sentence se,woh kya hain..???

hamari zindagi...

hamari zindagi ke faisle..ab woh sahi ho ya galat,tum kaun hoti ho unpar comment kar apni raay dene waali...

hum upar aasman se kude ya neeche khaayi me,humari marzi,tumhe apni ye badi si gardan us faisle ke beech daalne ki zaroorat nahi...


WOOGER ki baat sun GRIFFIN kuch kehti ki tabhi MAHI has di jisse sun GRIFFIN ke saath saath WOOGER ka dhyan bhi uski taraf gaya jiske baad GRIFFIN toh shaant hi rahi par WOOGER...


WOOGER-MAHI,jo baat maine GRIFFIN se kahi hai,woh tum par bhi applicable hoti hai...MASTER ke baare me ek baat jaan lo..woh wahi karte hain,jo unka dil karta hai..is baat se fark nahi padta ki woh cheez sahi hai yaa galat..

saath hi saath kabhi bhi unhe kisi bhi cheez me raay mat dena,naa hi unke faisle par comment karna...

isse aise samajhte hain ki maan lo woh kuch karne waale hon par us chiz ko woh karen,usse pehle hi agar tumne ussi chiz ko karne ki baat unse keh di,toh bhale hi woh chiz unke liye kitni hi important kyun naa ho,sirf tumhare kehne ki wajah se woh phir us kaam ko nahi karenge...

GRIFFIN-arre ye kya baat hui..???aisa thodi naa hota hai..

WOOGER-kisne kaha,tumne..sabse pehle toh tum ye jaan lo ki tum kya sochti hi,woh toh matter hi nahi karta..

par agar phir bhi interfere karna hai,toh theek,kar ke dekh lena..galti ko naya aakaar dekar gunah bana denge MASTER jiski zimmedar tum hogi...

MAHI,woh kitne hi galat kyun naa ho,par unhe tokna mat..unhe khud apni galti ka realization ho jaaye,yahi tarika hai unhe us form me pahunchane ka jiske baare me MADDOX ne tumse kaha tha..

yaad rahe,hawa ka rookh moda jaa sakta hai,tufaan ka nahi aur naahi uske beech se nikla jaa sakta hai..

behtari issi me hai ki yaa toh uske raaste se hi hath jaao,yaa phir uski chapet ke aage ya piche bina usse touch kiye badhte jaao...

MAHI-mai samajh rahi hun WOOGER aur fikr mat karo,naa mai RAAZ ke kisi bhi action par chaahe woh kitna hi galat kyun naa ho, retaliate karungi, aur naahi interfere...

mai jaanti hun ki jab tak uska dard,uska ghussa pura bahar nahi aa jaata,woh brainly DEVIL aur heartly ANGEL me convert nahi ho paayega...

but filhal ye batao ki RAAZ ke paas GALEN pahunche kaise...???

WOOGER-naam kaise pata chala tumhe us planet ka jahan is waqt MASTER hain...!!!!

MAHI-thik waise hi jaise mujhe ye maalum hai ki abhi kuch der pehle jo tum aur GRIFFIN ladh rahe the,woh asal ne meri madad ke liye hi tha...

tum dono ko hi pata tha ki mai us waqt pyscically kaafi kamzor thi aur us state me mai apne target tak nahi pahunch sakti...

tum dono ko ye bhi pata tha ki tumhari forced aur opposing powers se bhi woh energy wave release ho sakti thi jisse mere andar chuppe mere dono forms ke power mujhe dikh sakte the aur isiliye to help me,tum dono ek dusre se takraaye the..

am i right or am i right....!!!


muskura kar kahi ye saari baat MAHI ne jispar WOOGER toh shaant hi raha par GRIFFIN MAHI ki analyzation ko sun khush ho gayi...

aur ho bhi kyun naa..aaj usse MAHI me uske pitah ke dimag ki jhalak jo dikhayi di thi aur aisa hona is kahani ek liye behadh zaroori tha..

aakhir,takkar jo VIDEOUS jaise shaatir khiladi se thi jo player ke saath saath khud woh game bhi tha jisme woh sab khel rahe the...

khair,MAHI ke baat ko sun..


WOOGER-apni shakti ke saath GALEN ki chavi tumhare andar isiliye dikhayi thi maine taaki tum us puri jagah ko aur most importantly,us planet ke upar lage kawach ko dekh aur samajh sako..

kyunki MASTER us PLANET ke andar hain isiliye mai toh wahan aaram se jaa sakta hun par tum dono ke liye ye bohot zyada mushkil hone waala hai...

kyunki tumhari dono hi shaktiyon ke forms abhi apni jagah se zara sa bhi nahi hile hain, isiliye directly tum us kawach ko todne me filhal saksham nahi ho...


MAHI-manzil bhale ek ho,par us manzil tak pahunchne ke raaste bohot se hote hain...

GALEN par pahunchne ka sidha raasta bhale hi hamare liye ban hai par woh raasta jahan se universe ke bohot se jagahon ke darwaze khul sakte hain,woh option toh open hi hai...

THE BOULEVARD....

wahan se hum GALEN pahunch sakte hain...


(BOULEVARD...ye naam bhi un cheezon me se ek thi jisse MAHI ne paused CEREBRATION process ke waqt apne ANGEL aur HUMAN form ki taakat dekhne ke baad mehsoos kiya tha...)


MAHI ne jo naam liya tha,uske baare me naa toh GRIFFIN ko kuch pata tha aur naahi WOOGER ko aur isiliye...


GRIFFIN-BOULEVARD..!!!ye kya chiz hai..!!!

MAHI-BOULEVARD ek chuppi hui pathway hai jahan se GALEN pahuncha jaa sakta hai....

GRIFFIN-really...!!par tumhe kaise pata us jagah ke baare me...???

MAHI-bas itna samajh lo ki FALLON ke mujhme samane se jo faayde mujhe hue hain,unme se hi ye bhi ek hai...

WOOGER-touch my head MAHI...mujhe dekhni hai ye jagah...


WOOGER ki baat par bina kuch puche MAHI ne apna haath uske sir par rakh diya aur uske aisa karte hi WOOGER ke dimag me BOULEVARD naam ki jagah ka scene clear ho gaya jiske baad...


WOOGER-human world me jo BOULEVARD hote hain,unse different hai ye jagah...

trees ki jagah kuch magical barriers lage hue hain is jagah....ye route successfully cross kar paana kaafi tough ho sakta hai..

MAHI-aur isiliye hi is route se jaana aur bhi zyada important hai...kyunki mere liye apne dono strengths ko close laate hue unhe ek karne ka sabse acha tarika tough challenges hi hai..

aise situations me hi meri abilities nikhrengi...

WOOGER-thik hai phir...MAHI, GRIFFIN ke upar baith jaao..mai tum dono ko BOULEVARD ke saamne pahuncha deta hun....

GRIFFIN-pahuncha deta hun matlab...???tum bhi toh hamare saath chaloge naa...

WOOGER-mai kyun saath chalun jab mujhe GALEN ne direct entry mil sakti hai...!!!

GRIFFIN-dekha MAHI..kitna selfish ha ye...

WOOGER-apni safety ke baare me sochna selfishness nahi samajhdari hoti hai..par tumhare jaisi emotional fool ko ye baat samajh me aayegi nahi aur naahi tumhe samjhane me mujhe apna time waste karna hai....


WOOGER ki baat par GRIFFIN kuch kehti ki tabhi..


MAHI-ok enough now...thik hai WOOGER,ab mulakat sidhe GALEN me hi hogi...


apni baat bolte hue GRIFFIN par chadh gayi MAHI jiske baad...

FUUUUUU......

ek tez foonk maari WOOGER ne jiske baad MAHI aur GRIFFIN ke chaaron taraf ek chota sa tornado ban gaya

ye tornado asal me ek PATH GUIDE tha jo sirf chuppe hue jagahon par logon ko drop karta tha..

khair,har guzarte pal ke saath woh tornado unke paas aane laga aur phir dekhte hi dekhte MAHI aur GRIFFIN,dono hi us tornado ke giraft me aa gaye jiske baad woh tornado unhe apne andar samate hue gayab ho gaya...

MAHI aur GRIFFIN gayab ho chuke the jiske baad WOOGER bhi apni manzil ki taraf jaane ke liye gayab ho gaya....






PLANET-GALEN


PLACE-GALEN MARKET






YE LADKA KAHAN BHATAKTE REHTA HAI....???EK JAGAH PAANV HI NAHI TIKTE ISKE...!!!!


GALEN market se hote hui ek open colony ki taraf badhte hue kahi ye baat ERRAPEL ne...

reason...

RAAZ....kuch der pehle apne cottage aur aas paas ke har jagah par RAAZ ko dhundne ke baad jab woh ERRAPEL ko kahin nahi mila toh aakhirkaar usse ek baar phir apne aur uske connection AURA ke through RAAZ ko dhundna pada aur jab usne aisa kiya toh paaya ki woh is waqt GALEN market ki taraf gaya hua hai..

anjaan jagah thi upar se yaadasht ki batti gul..aise me RAAZ ka yun market me akele ghuma sahi nahi tha aur isiliye ERRAPEL turant jahan woh tha,us disha ki taraf badh chali thi...

market se hote hue jab woh us colony ki taraf badhi jahan RAAZ gaya tha toh kuch door jaate hi naa sirf uske paanv achanak se hi rook gaye balki saath hi usse saamne ka nazara dekh hairani bhi hui...

toh baat darasal ye thi jahan is waqt ERRAPEL thi,uske thode door hi ek tree ki ot liye RAAZ khada apne saamne bane ek garden me kisiko dekh raha tha..

ye kisi aur koi nahi wahi aurat thi do din pehle apne bache ko theek karwane ke liye ERRAPEL ke ghar aayi thi...

is waqt woh aurat apne us chote se bete ke saath khel rahi thi...

us din apne bete ko kho hi diya tha us aurat ne,yahi wajah thi ki is waqt woh apne bacche ke saath khelte hue usse lagatar chume bhi jaa rahi thi..

khair, ERRAPEL ke hairan hone ka reason ye tha ki saamne garden me chal rahe scene ko dekh RAAZ ke aankhon me aansu the..

par kamal ki baat ye thi ki uska chehra bilkul normal tha..rone ki wajah se chehre par aane waala khinchaw,aisa kuch bhi nahi dikh raha tha RAAZ ke face par..

woh normally hi khada tha,bas uski aankhon se paani lagatar nikle jaa raha tha..

kuch der tak ye dekhti rahi ERRAPEL par phir woh RAAZ ki taraf badh gayi aur uske paas pahunchi..


HMM HMM HMM,HMM HMM HMM HMM HMM HMM HMMMMM,HMM HMM HMM HMM HMM HMM M HMMM HMM....


RAAZ ke paas pahunchte hi ERRAPEL ne suni ye dhun jo RAAZ gungunate hue saamne lady aur uske bache ko dekh raha tha...

kaafi sunaapan, khaalipan aur dard tha us dhun me jisse kuch der tak dhyan se sunti aur feel karti rahi ERRAPEL..

par phir kuch der tak us dhun ko sunte rehne ke baad ERRAPEL ne uske kandhe par haath rakha aur aisa hote hi RAAZ jaise ek trance se bahar aaya aur hadbadate hue piche palta..

ERRAPEL ko apne saamne dekh woh shaant bhi ho gaya aur usne apne aansu bhi jhat se saaf kar diye....

par aankhen uski abhi bhi kuch bhari hi thi jisse kuch der tak lagatar dekhne ke baad...


ERRAPEL-kya baat hai..???aankhen kyun bhari hai tumhari...??aur ye chupke us lady aur uske bache ko kyun dekh rahe ho tum...???

MAI-pata nahi kyun apne aap hi aankhen bhar gayi...!!!mai toh market ghumne nikla tha,wahan mujhe us din subah jo tumhare ghar aayi thi, woh lady market me apne bacche ke saath dikhi..

woh apne bache ko toys dila rahi thi..

un dono ko dekh mera dil kiya ki unhe hi dekhta rahun...

isiliye unke piche yahan tak aa gaya aur unhe dekhne laga..

us bacche ko uski mom k saath khelta dekh dil bhaari se ho gaya aur aankhen bhar aayi...

par sach me,aisa hone ka reason mujhe bhi nahi pata...!!!!

ERRAPEL-shayad tumhare dil ko tumhari MAA ki yaad aa gayi..???

MAI-MAA.....


bas itna hi nikal paaya mere mooh se jiske baad mera dil tadap sa gaya..

ERRAPEL mere manobhaav ko ache se samajh rahi thi isiliye usne turant baat ko badla aur..


ERRAPEL-chalen yaa phir din bhar yahin khade rehne ka iraada hai...!!!

MAI-chalo....


ye bol ek baar un maa bete ko dekh mai ERRAPEL ke saath aage badh gaya..


MAI-tumhe kaise pata chala ki mai yahan hun..???

ERRAPEL-kuch kaam se aayi thi mai yahan,tumpar bas nazar padh gayi...

MAI-oh...

ERRAPEL-waise ek baat batao...mai jab tumhare paas aayi toh maine tumhe ek dhun gungunate hue suna...kis gaane ki dhun thi woh...???

MAI-pata nahi...un maa bete ko dekha toh woh dhun apne aap mere dimag me banane lagi....

(NOTE-doston,college me ek gaana likha tha maine...abhi RAAZ ki jo condition hai,usme woh gaana kaafi suit karta hai.. next update me RAAZ ke through us gaane ka mukhda aur first antra aapke saamne hoga)


ERRAPEL-dhun bani hai toh gaana bhi bana hi hoga....

MAI-shayad,par woh bol abhi tak mere dimag aur zuban par nahi chadhe hain...

tumhe ajeeb lag rahi hongi naa meri baatein...!!!saari ki saari aadhi adhuri....

ERRAPEL-baatein dhaage ki tarah hoti hai..shuruat ek sire se hoti hai par kabhi kabhi dusra sira mil nahi paata..

par iska ye matlab toh nahi ki dusra sira hai hi nahi...bas shayad us sire tak pahunchne ka waqt nahi aaya hai..!!!!

MAI-aur agar waqt aane se pehle dhaaga hi toot gaya toh..!!!!

ERRAPEL-toh kya..???toota dhaaga bhi toh ek naya sira banakar hi alag hota hai naa...!!!!

aur ye acha bhi hai, naye sire par pahunchne ka faasla bhi kam jayega..

baat bas dekhne ke NAZARIYE ki hai RAAZ...sab kuch apni sahi jagah par baith hi jaata hai, chahiye toh bas ek sahi aur positive NAZARIYA,ek behtarin ATTITUDE...







PLACE-BOULEVARD







YEH KAISI JAGAH HAI...????


trees ke patle patle branches jaise dikhne waale cloud covers ke beech bane ek tunnel ko dekhte hue kahi thi ye baat GRIFFIN ne....

PATH GUIDE TORNADO ke through MAHI aur GRIFFIN jis jagah par pahunch is waqt khade hue the,woh jagah bhi kaafi alag tarah ki thi...

5 se 6 feet bade pathar joki hawa me float karte hue us tunnel me jaane ke liye joki wahi BOULEVARD tha jiske through woh dono GALEN pahunchne waale the,is waqt khade hue the...

ek aur ajeeb aur kamal ki baat ye thi ki us pure BOULEVARD ka view joki kareeb 2 km lamba tha,puri taraf se clear aur bright tha..

itna lamba tunnel hone ke baawjud us BOULEVARD ka pura view MAHI aur GRIFFIN,un dono ke hi aankhon me aise dikh raha tha maano kisine unki aankhon ke aage invisible binocular glasses laga diye hon..

behatrin MAGIC...khair,

jahan is waqt GRIFFIN sirf us tunnel ko dekh rahi thi,wahin MAHI ki nazar un patle cloud covers aur saath hi jispar woh khade the,aur aage badhte hue bhi khada hona tha,woh floating patthar,unpar tiki hui thi..

woh bade gaur se in dono hi jagahon ko dekh kuch soche jaa rahi thi...

aur kuch der baad jab GRIFFIN ki nazar MAHI par padi toh usne bhi is baat par gaur kiya aur...


GRIFFIN-kya dekh rahi ho MAHI...??

MAHI-un saare cloud covers ko dhyan se dekho GRIFFIN...un sab ka shape toh ek jaisa hi hai par phir bhi unme se teen covers thode alag hain...

baaki saare cloud covers ekdum shaant hain..lekin left ki taraf bicche cloud covers me se third number ka cover dekho,woh halka halka beech me shake kar raha hai..

theek ussiki tarah ussi line me aage ki taraf do aur cloud covers hain,jo waise hi shake kar rahe hain..

aur right ki taraf jo last cloud cover
hai woh bhi halka halka shake kar raha hai...


MAHI ki baat sun GRIFFIN ne bhi dhyan se un cloud covers ko dekha aur aisa karte hi usne paaya ki MAHI bilkul sahi keh rahi hai..

jahan baaki cloud covers stable the,wahin MAHI ke bataye covers halka halka shake kar rahe the...

jahan GRIFFIN ye sab dekh rahi thi, wahin apni baat ko continue karte hue...


MAHI-ab jahan hum khade hain,is patthar ko dekhi..behadh fine aur halki likhawat me ispar 1 likha hua hai jo ek pal ke liye gayab ho raha hai aur phir dheere se ubar raha hai..

theek issiki tarah un dono pattharon ko dekho..unme bhi same halki numbering imprint ho rahi hai..

fark sirf itna hai ki humare waale pathar par 1 likhaya hua aa raha hai,wahin un dono pattharon me 2 aur 3 ke imprints ban rahe hain...


pehle apne patthar aur phir aage bane do pattharon ki taraf ishara karte hue kahi ye baat MAHI ne jisse dekh GRIFFIN samajh gayi ki MAHI sahi keh rahi hai aur isiliye..


GRIFFIN-different cloud covers ki ginti aur waise hi baakiyon se alag pattharon ki counting same hai..

ye koi coincidence nahi ho sakta...???

MAHI-hmm..


aisa kehte hue MAHI neeche ghutno ke bal baithi aur jaise hi patthar par 1 imprint bana, toh usne us imprint par haath rakh diya aur uske aisa karte hi us pure patthar me halki kampan hui jiske baad woh imprint jisse MAHI ne chhua tha,woh choti hote chale gayi jiske baad us area se un cloud covers ka roop liye hi ek chota sa crystal patthar prakat hua jisse MAHI ne utha liya...

GRIFFIN bhi ye sab dekh rahi thi aur isiliye...


GRIFFIN-ab ye kya maya hai...???

MAHI-pata nahi..but jaldi hi pata chal jaayega...


ye bol MAHI ne us chote se crystal patthar ko apni jeb me daal liya aur..


MAHI-chalo,aage badhte hain..


ye bol MAHI aur GRIFFIN challang lagate hue un floating pattharon se hote hue BOULEVARD naam ke tunnel ki taraf badhne lage..

is beech un do pattharon par jisme 2 aur 3 ki marking thi,unhe bhi MAHI ne jhuk ko touch kiya tha aur uske waisa karne par un dono pattharon me bhi wahi hua jo pehle patthar me hua tha..

MAHI ki jeb me is waqt kul 3 crystal patthar the jinhe liye hue woh BOULEVARD tunnel ki sarhad par khadi thi..


MAHI-GRIFFIN...yahan se hume thoda carefully aage badhna hoga...khaas kar un cloud covers ke paas jo halke shake kar rahe hain...


GRIFFIN-theek hai...


bade nape tule andaz se aur puri satarkta banaye hue woh dono aage badhne lagi par jitne bhi normal cloud covers the,unke beech se guzarne ke dauran kuch hua nahi par jaise hi woh first cloud cover jo halka halka shake lar raha tha,MAHI aur GRIFFIN uske kareeb pahunche toh...


BOOM........

ek tez dhamaka hua us cloud cover me jiske baad..


MAHI-HOLY SHIT....


chillate hue kahi ye baat MAHI ne...

reason....

jo dhamaka us cloud cover se hue,usse paida hua tha SOLAR WIND STORM....

ek aisa tornado jo sirf space me hi banta hai...(FACT)


MAHI aur GRIFFIN naa sirf us WINDSTORM ko pehchaan gayi thi balki uski chapet me bhi aa gayi thi...

us WIND STORM ne unhe apni chapet me lete hue tezi se gol gol ghumana shuru kar diya tha..

is WIND STORM ki intensity itni zyada thi ki usse bachna toh door,MAHI usme theek se saans bhi nahi le paa rahi thi..

wahin GRIFFIN joki space me bhi araam se safar kar leti thi,woh bhi us super powerful SOLAR WIND STORM me fas kar khudko bebas feel karne lagi...

har guzarte pal ke saath MAHI ki aankhein bhaari hone lagi thi..agar aisa hi kuch der aur chalta raha toh uska aur GRIFFIN ka bachna impossible ho jaane waala tha..

par in saare negetives me ek positive baat ye thi kyunki MAHI ek SAVENT thi,and that to a very good one isiliye bhale hi uska conscious brain weak padte chale jaa raha tha,par uska subconscious brain completely active tha aur isiliye dimag ke us bhaag ne pura command automatically apne control me le liya aur aisa hote hi MAHI ko diya ek idea...

MAHI ka haath apne aap hi uske jeb me gaya jisme se usne us chote se patthar ko bahar nikala jispar 1 marking ki hui thi..

par jahan pehle us patthar me sirf one nazar aa raha tha,wahin is SOLAR WIND STORM ke daayre me aane ki wajah se us patthar ke andar is waqt kuch aur bana hua tha jo pura clear nahi tha aur isiliye MAHI ne us crystal ki tarah ke patthar ko press karna shuru kar diya jiske wajah se woh toot gaya aur aisa hote hi us patthar ke andar bani cheez MAHI ke haathon me chipak gayi...

ye cheez aur kuch nahi living PLANET ki mitti thi aur jaise hi is baat ka MAHI ko realization hua toh usse solution bhi mil gaya..

toh baat ye thi ki is waqt MAHI aur GRIFFIN fase the ek SOLAR WIND STORM ke andar jo sirf space me activate hoti hai,PLANET par nahi...

planet jisme human baste the..kehne ka matlab hai ki is problem ka solution tha MAHI ka HUMAN FORM ENERGY SOURCE....

waise toh filhal ye ENERGY SOURCE activate nahi tha,par temporary active karne ka zariya is waqt MAHI ke haathon ne hi tha..woh MITTI ke kan jisme se MAHI ko behadh strong earthly power feel ho rahi thi aur isiliye usne us mitti ko apne heart ke upar rub kiya par aisa karne ke saath hi woh PAUSED CEREBRATION me chali gayi thi...

jaise hi PAUSED CEREBRATION ke waqt usne us MITTI ko khud ke heart ke upar rub kiya toh uske asar se ek pal ke liye MAHI ka HUMAN FORM ENERGY SOURCE activate ho gaya aur aisa hote hi MAHI se ek strong ENERGY BEAM bahar nikli aur aisa hote hi woh SOLAR WIND STORM gayab ho gaya jiske baad MAHI aur GRIFFIN,dono hi neeche zamin par gir gaye...

lambi lambi saanson ke beech khade hote hue khud ko durust kiya
un dono ne jiske baad...


GRIFFIN-thank GOD MAHI ki tumhe sahi waqt par sahi idea click ho gaya...

MAHI-hmm, let's move forward..


is baar beena zyada dar ke MAHI aur GRIFFIN aage badhe the aur woh isiliye kyunki woh dono jaan gaye the ki khatra unhe bas un shaking cloud cover waali jagah par hi hai..

khair,chalte hue woh dono us second cloud cover ke paas pahunche joki unka agla hurdle tha..


MAHI-ready...

GRIFFIN-yup...


khudko taiyar karte hue jaise hi MAHI aur GRIFFIN ne apna agla kadam us cloud cover ke daayre me rakha toh..


SSSSSCHRRRRRRR....


ek ajeeb si awaaz ke saath ek bada sa blockage,ek diwaar ban gaya MAHI aur GRIFFIN ke raaste me..

aur ye diwar bana tha FIRE se,AAG se aur jisme suraj se bhi zyada intensity thi..

haan,MAHI aur GRIFFIN, dono ko hi us aag ki intensity ne jalaya nahi tha par us aag ki garmi se un dono ko ek ajeeb si manhusiyat feel hone lagi thi..

unhe aisa laga raha tha jaise woh dono zindagi me kabhi khush nahi reh paayengi..

aisa lagne ka reason MAHI ko toh samajh me nahi aaya par GRIFFIN..!!!

usse us aag ki aur usse paida hone waali negetive feeling ke baare me pata chal chuka tha aur us reason ko jaan uski aankhen bhi badi ho gayi thi...


GRIFFIN-ye AAG...!!!ye toh HELL'S FIRE HAI....

NARK KI AAG.....

MAHI-WHAT...!!!!

GRIFFIN-haan,par ye yahan kaise..??but most importantly,iske aanch se bacha nahi jaa sakta,par phir bhi hum normally kaise khade reh paa rahe hain...!!!!


GRIFFIN ki baat sun MAHI ke dimag me kuch click kiya aur usne turant apne jeb me haath daal woh dusra crystal rupi patthar nikala aur..


MAHI-shayad iski wajah se...


apni baat bolte hue MAHI ne us crystal stone ko apne haathon me hi crush kar diya aur uske aisa karte hi us patthar ke andar se ek behadh strong ANGEL NIMBI(GLORY RAY) nikal hawa me theher gayi...

par jab aisa hua toh...

AHHHHH....

ye cheekh MAHI aur GRIFFIN,dono ke hi mooh se nikal gaya..

reason...

us ANGEL NIMBI ke bahar aate hi saamne jal raha HELLS FIRE hadh se zyada bhadak gaya jiske baad uski lapte aur zyada badh gayi aur jab aisa hua toh usse ek behadh hi powerful ENERGY DURESS nikli jiske impact ke chapet me aa gaye MAHI aur GRIFFIN..

aisa hone par un dono ko pyscically chot toh nahi aayi par un dono ka saara internal part jadh se hil gaya....

ek tez jhatka sa laga un dono ko jiski wajah se woh dono hi udte hue piche jaakar gire..

par sabse bada impact pada tha MAHI ke heart me base uske ANGEL FORM ENERGY SOURCE ko...

HELLS FIRE ko feel karte hi woh source uncontrollable ho gayi aur jaise hi ye hua toh...

MAHI ka sharir hawa me uth gaya aur tezi se idhar udhar jhatka khaate hue roam karne laga...

GRIFFIN kuch kar sakti thi nahi kyunki woh jaanti thi ki MAHI ke saath ho rahi ghatna uske ANGELS FORM ENERGY SOURCE ki wajah se hai jisse woh control nahi kar sakti...

wahin ENERGY SOURCE ke unstable hone se MAHI apne SOUL tak se distract ho chuki thi..

ek hosh waali coma jaisi state me pahunch chuki thi woh jisse bahar nikalne ka koi tarika usse nazar nahi aa raha tha par tabhi...


APNI TAAKAT BHI APNE HISAAB SE TABHI CHALTI HAI JAB US TAAKAT KA DHAARAK USKE LAAYAK HO...

AUR TUM LAAYAK HO MERI BACCHI....BAS KHUDPAR DOUBT KARNA BAND KARO & OWN YOUR POWER...


VIKRAM JAIRAJ SINGH ki awaaz gunj uthi MAHI ke dil aur dimag me..

pehli baar suni thi apne PITAH ki awaaz MAHI ne par sunkar aisa laga jaise har woh hawa jo aaj tak uske kaano ko chhu kar gayi hai,usme usne is awaaz ko aur is awaaz ke piche chuppe apne liye beinteha pyar ko mehsoos kiya hai usne..


MAHI-DAD......


bas itna hi bol paayi MAHI...dono aankhon ke kinaron se aansu ki ek patli si dhaar nikal padi uski..

situation uski abhi waise hi unstable thi...hawa me uska sharir abhi bhi jhatke khaa raha tha...

uske andar basa uska ANGELS FORM ENERGY SOURCE abhi bhi bhadka hua tha par in saare odds ke baawjud bas uske PITAH ke awaaz bhar ne MAHI ko ek aisa sukoon de diya tha jiske sahare woh ab bade se bade khatre ko bhi araam se jhel bhi sakti thi aur usse nipat bhi sakti thi..

aur yahi wajah thi kuch pal ke emotional feel ke baad MAHI ki aankhon me ek ajeeb sa confidence dikhne laga jiske baad usne apne andar jhaanka aur pure adhikar ke saath..

STOP.....


itna hi bola MAHI ne jiske baad ek obedient bacche ki tarah uske andar bhadka hua ENERGY SOURCE ek second me hi shaant ho gaya aur aisa hote hi MAHI ka sharir behadh araam se niche zamin par aa gaya..

aisa hote hi MAHI aage badhi aur us ANGEL NIMBI ko joki abhi bhi bade araam se hawa me aahiste aahiste float kar raha tha,usse thaama aur zor se saamne ufaan maarte HELL'S FIRE ki taraf phek diya aur jab woh ANGEL NIMBI HELL'S FIRE se takraya toh uske agle hi pal woh FIRE gayab ho gaya...

raasta clear ho chuka tha jiske baad..


MAHI-chalen...!!!


GRIFFIN se kahi ye baat MAHI ne joki is waqt bade garv ke saath MAHI ko dekh rahi thi aur uski baat sun woh uske paas aayi aur apne sir ko MAHI ke chehre par sehlaate hue apne pyaar zaahir kiya...

MAHI ne bhi bade pyar se uski gardan ko sehlaya jiske baad woh dono aage badh gaye..

anyways,do hurdles paar ho gaye the aur ab ek aakhri hurdle baaki tha...

aur jab lagbhag pure tunnel ka raasta paar karte hue MAHI aur GRIFFIN uske aakhri hadh par aaye jahan ek shield numa diwar bani hui thi aur uske theek pehle tha woh cloud cover jo halka halka shake kar raha tha toh us cloud cover ko dekh aakhein sochne waale andaz me choti ho gayi MAHI ki..

aur woh isiliye kyunki jahan ab tak ke saare cloud cover pure white the,wahin ye cloud cover joki uska aakhri hurdle tha,woh bhi waise toh white hi tha par uske beech halki GREYISH colour bhi chamak rahi thi...

ab is naye change ke piche ka RAAZ toh uske saamne aane par hi pata chalna tha aur isiliye MAHI ne apne kadam us cloud cover ke radar ke andar rakh diye aur jab aisa hua toh uski aur uske saath hi khadi GRIFFIN ki aankhen badi bhi ho gayi aur halki nervous bhi..

reason...

jaise hi MAHI aur GRIFFIN ne apne kadam aage badhaye toh us aakhri hurdle roopi cloud cover ne ek naya roop lena shuru kiya aur jab woh roop pura hua toh...




ye aakhri challenge pichle dono challenges se kahin zyada BADA THA....

roop bana tha uska jisne RAAZ ke dil me taklifon ka teer GADA THA....

maza aane waala tha bohot,kyunki

ANGEL'S LORD ki BETI ke saamne is waqt,mayavi hi sahi par VIDEOUS KHADA THA...
















AAJ KE LIYE ITNA HI......















AAPKA APNA V....J....
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Errapel is very good and lovely, once she rescued an animal in the forest and today saved a young child, her caring nature towards others makes my heart happy and maybe when the two are united, Raaz becomes like this. Everything Raaz said was true and correct, even when Raaz was not like that, he used to say it right but people could not understand his words, this thing is different, I missing his attitude.
Love is very difficult to understand and explain, it is just a feeling that has to be felt. I don't know what tomorrow's future will be like, but there will definitely be something incredible.

As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.

Thank You...

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Saddemon

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I agrr
V.J bahut hi shandar update tha.. har update ke sath curiosity badti ja rahi hai meri.. mahi ke character ko strong dekhna hai bcs jiski woh beti hai usne attitude part 1 mein khub dhamake kiye the.. patience level toh mahi ka apni mom jaisa hai bas dimag uske father jaisa hai ya nahi ye dekhna hai. Rahi alfreen ki baat uski ye new upadhi mujhe bhuVika ke jaise lag rahi hai.. mujhe shock nahi lagega agar kal ko tum usko Beelzebub or Bhuvika ki beti declare kar do.πŸ˜‚πŸ‘πŸ˜‡
Bro,I agree with u 😊khaskar mahi ko lekar jo kha us pr ...kher last patte to vj bhai hi open karenge .... akhirkar in sare kirdaro ke rachiyta jo he πŸ˜‰πŸ˜€ ..
 
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